[Matryoshka]
00:00:014 to 00:05:347 - Ok, right from the start there things that i don't like too much. I think there's a issue with the layering that you are using: every instrument, have different pattern; |
Well, it's very good that you had make out these mistakes. lol I really don't now why I did something like thisExample:
00:00:014 (14|1,14|0) - Is a kick. Using Chords. (Well, btw using chords for kicks or snares is a bit too much for me in EZ.)
00:00:681 (681|3) - Clap. Using one note.
00:02:014 (2014|3,2014|0) - Clap again. Using chords??
00:02:681 (2681|3,2681|2) - Kick. Chords...
00:03:347 (3347|0) - Clap. One note?
I saw that the notes right now are placed well between the distance, if you ask me now (not before lol): Playability > Layering. So... At the end depends on you. Yes, complicated. xD
Anyway, In my opinion is preferable that you use Layering and Playability together whenever is possible. Let's continue...
00:05:347 (5347|1,5347|0) - Here you are using two notes btw.
00:06:681 (6681|2,6847|1) - Hmm. I doubt about this but 90 BPM is good enough to do this. In my opinion, erase 00:06:847 (6847|1).
00:09:347 (9347|3,9514|0,9681|2,10014|0,10347|1,10681|3) - You can use LongNotes to replace drumrolls and other instruments:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/749981700:20:347 (20347|0,20681|2,20847|1,21014|3,21181|0,21347|2) -
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7499848 |
Brilliantly.. It's not a sarcasm. Sometimes I forget about LNs like a drumrolls.I will skip the Layering issue from now on. Since the rest of the map doesn't follow a right layering. There Claps that use chords, but at the end not...for example.
00:39:681 (39681|1) - Erase this note if you want. The rest are good.
00:42:347 (42347|3,42514|2,42681|1,42847|0) - B u r s t s
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/749992200:50:347 (50347|1) - Erase this note if you want.
00:55:847 (55847|3) - ^
01:01:181 (61181|2) - ^
01:03:847 (63847|1) - ^
01:09:181 (69181|3) - ^
[Balalaika]
Same issue here about the layering here too?
Please, if you are using chords for kicks and claps, be consistent. (With LongNotes pressed is an exception.)
About the patterns, I don't see anymore problems. Seems good.
[Vodka]
Remember Layering. I don't see problems here btw. lol?
Advice about the Jacks with LongNotes pressed:
Try to put the jacks in the left side (0|1) if you are pressing the LongNote in the right side (2|3) Or,
Try to put the jacks in the right side (2|3) if you are pressing the LongNote in the left side (0|1).
Pressing LongNote and doing jacks with the same hand is a lot more hard.
00:20:181 (20181|1,20181|0,20347|2,20347|3,20514|0,20514|3,20681|1,20681|2,20847|2,20847|3,21014|0,21014|1,21181|3,21181|1,21347|2,21347|0) -
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7500070 Seems a bit repetitive but more easier. Depends on you.
00:41:347 (41347|3,41514|3,41681|2,41847|2) - Another thing about the jacks, These two jacks are pressed by the same hand. Try to change of hands between jacks, like |0|->|2|->|1|->|3| or something like that. Skipping this from now on...
01:01:014 (61014|2,61181|3) - Move 01:01:181 (61181|3) - to |0|, is more easier.
01:01:514 (61514|1) - Move to |2|
01:11:347 (71347|3,71347|2,71514|1,71681|3,71681|0,71847|1,72014|3,72014|1) -
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7500130[Bear]
Well...Right from the start, i can think that is a bit overmapped. I don't think that follows any layering at all.
Like i said before: Layering. Maybe you can use: 3-notes for claps, chords for kicks, and 4-notes for Cymbals. Is just a suggestion.
^Also, you can use doublejacks for kicks, example: 00:09:514 (9514|3,9514|1,9514|2,9681|0,9681|1,9681|2,9847|0,9847|3,9847|2,10014|1,10014|0,10014|3,10181|3,10181|1,10181|2,10347|2,10347|1,10347|0,10514|3,10514|2,10514|0,10681|0,10681|3,10681|1) -
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7500206 (maximum three!)
The 1/8 notes used are good! Also, if you use 4-notes for cymbals, you need to cut some LongNotes, example: 00:39:347 (39347|1) -
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7500243 But be careful of those 1/8 jacks... but for 90 BPM seems possible.
Nothing more to say, everything is above. ...And Playability? Well, that depends on you not me.
lol! Because depends of what is possible to every player. Nobody is good in all, so you need take that in mind each pattern that you use... even regardless of the Layering used.