First time modding :/
01:30:932 (7,1) - Considering SV is high here, this 2 feels weird to me. Add a 1/4 slider and continue with the flow of the squared jumps.
01:43:253 (1,2,3,4) - You made this pattern because of 01:43:253 (1,2) because of the quick voice, but 01:44:018 (4) don't support it.
02:16:314 (4) drags along with the voice but 02:16:620 (5) doesn't. Since it's together, change 02:16:620 (5) to 2 hit circles.
02:16:926 (6,7) - Simple blanket?
02:19:988 (1) - overlapping quite a bit, bring up and to the right that it perfectly fits.
02:22:437 (1,2,3) - try a triple blanket
02:34:069 (2,3,4) - this 1/3 jumps placement looks weird to me. You can try using small distance snap while 02:34:681 (1) can overlap either of the circles.
02:42:488 (2) - blanket?
03:04:069 (5) - NC?
03:16:620 (2,3) - Try replacing with a slider with low velocity as the music abruptly stops.
03:36:824 (5) - Voice continues to drag, you can consider change the slider shape and repeat it, or create 1/4 slider and another 1/2 to support continuation.
since you love overlapping, you can consider 03:45:243 (6) to overlap with the slider's end 03:45:702 (1)
03:51:518 (4,1) - A gap, but there's a dragging voice. Consider a weird slider shape to support it.
04:15:013 (4) - I don't hear any sounds that can support this triplet.
04:27:334 (1) - Voice starts at the end of slider. You can replace this with a hit circle then continue with a slider for the voice.
04:40:804 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Greatly focusing on the lower part of the screen. Consider 04:42:028 (1) - going upwards.
04:57:181 (2,4) - Overlap?
Beautiful song, beautiful map! Hope my mod isn't too bad, this are all my opinions! Good luck for approval!