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CHiCO with HoneyWorks - Wolf

posted 2016-09-28T14:55:59+00:00

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Irohas

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Topic Starter

Irohas 2016-09-28T14:55:59+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on mercredi 9 août 2017 at 00:56:05

Artist: CHiCO with HoneyWorks
Title: Wolf
Tags: mugiwarasekai pkhg janpai sotarks kantokun カヌレと canelé to album cut version gom oji 海賊王 shito cake atsyuk! ヤマコ
BPM: 190
Filesize: 4006kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:

Easy (1,52 stars, 106 notes)
Hard (3,44 stars, 269 notes)
Janpai's Insane (4,9 stars, 354 notes)
Kanto's Memories (5,34 stars, 381 notes)
Normal (2,17 stars, 175 notes)
pkhg's Insane (4,48 stars, 381 notes)
Sotarks' Expert (5,2 stars, 381 notes)

Download: CHiCO with HoneyWorks - Wolf
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Easy - irohas

Normal - irohas

Hard - irohas

Insane 1 - pkhg

Insane 2 - janpai

Expert - sotarks

Memories - kantokun

Last edited by Irohas 2020-09-20T14:33:51+00:00, edited 59 times in total.

Sotarks

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Joined May 2014

Sotarks 2016-10-22T21:23:14+00:00

M A S U G U

_koinuri

451 posts

Joined June 2012

_koinuri 2016-10-27T01:59:22+00:00

Hello, requesting m4m
p/5568618

[General]

海賊王
Add "Canelé Canele to" to tag for album romanization
Add "Yamako" to tag for illustrator's romanization

[Easy]

Considering the map seems generally incomplete right now (no hitsound on some difficulty), will you be mapping the end of the Easy?

00:03:216 (1) - I personally think this slider will look better if it kind of blanketed the previous slider
00:08:268 (1) - I feel rhythm like this kind of rhythm capture the vocal better. It also misses the end of the strong drum build up at 00:09:374 - and feels kind of empty
00:28:479 (6) - Same as above

Consistent Easy, nothing to say tbh

[Normal]

00:15:847 (1,3) - You should curve 00:15:847 (1) a bit more so the blanket on 00:16:953 (3) is clearer and look more appealing. I thought this was 2 straight lines being too close to each other.
idk
00:16:953 (3) - Inconsistent rhythm, should have a note at the end. It's the only instance that's like this
00:26:584 (2,3,4) - This feels better if you mapped it similarly to the majority of the map. By that I mean rhythm like this:
It follows the music better imo and it's a good consistency
00:58:795 (1) - I would move this back half a beat and add a circle at 00:59:111 because the vocal is pretty strong here. You also did that on similar section at 01:08:742 (1,2). Though the pitch is pretty different, the two sections share the similar rhythm due to both being at the beginning of a section in kiai.

[Hard]

Nothing to say here, nicely mapped hard

[pkhg's Insane]

00:03:690 (4,5) - You've mapped all the static noises in the beginning with active hitsounds except for this one at 00:03:847. imo this part can be better mapped using this kind of rhythm to accomodate the static
00:15:847 (1,2,3) - feels weird to play because the long guitar is suddenly ignored only on this part
00:49:637 (4) - The movement required is really sharp here, maybe ctrl+g work nicer. Or a bit more spacing works too

[Janpai's Insane]

Nothing

[Sotarks' Expert]

00:00:690 ~ 00:09:374 - this whole beginning section feels weird to play because the instrument followed changes every measure
00:07:479 - I like what you did with the static noise thing at 00:06:690 (5,6), would prefer this one mapped similarly too
00:15:690 (6,7,8) - I find these pauses found in the map uncomfortable because the music keeps going and I don't really hear any notable pause in the music.
00:37:874 (3) - This jump is really unexpected. I got 100s in all of my testplays :/. I think the reason why I get confused on this note is because the slider 00:37:163 (1) separates 00:37:637 (2) and 00:37:874 (3,4), which visually gives an impression that they're on a separate pattern and therefore not 1/4 apart. I don't have any problem expecting 00:47:111 (3,4,5) to be 1/4 beat apart so just a guess.

Great mapset, good luck!

Nakano Itsuki

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Joined July 2014

Nakano Itsuki 2016-10-27T09:13:01+00:00

m4m

[Sotarks]
00:03:216 (1,2) - It just seems to me that you're following the vocals so I'd suggest a 1/2 slider instead
00:15:847 (8,1) - Spacing seems weird for a 1/1 gap, when you've got the same spacing for your triple before. Consider stacking these 2, plays nicer than having to move that extra space for the next slider
00:19:163 (4,5,1) - I suggest moving 1 a bit towards the right so the angle of movement wouldn't be too sharp and uncomfortable to aim
00:23:426 (1) - (personal opinion) ctrl g for smoother flow
00:32:584 (3) - same thing as suggested above for 00:19:163 (4,5,1) -
00:46:163 (1) - ctrl g feels less awkward to aim
00:52:479 (3) - nc for consistency with other ncs
01:21:374 (6,7,8,1) - same thing as with 00:15:847 (8,1) -

[Janpai]
00:22:953 - 00:25:795 - 00:28:005 - i wouldnt suggest making these blank tbh
00:49:953 (1,3) - just personal opnion, ctrl g these 2 would be better to play
really nice diff

can't really find much in the other diffs
gl!

Irohas

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Topic Starter

Irohas 2016-10-27T10:18:50+00:00

Sotarks wrote:
M A S U G U

-[Koinuri] wrote:
Hello, requesting m4m
p/5568618

[General]
海賊王 なるおとこだ
Add "Canelé Canele to" to tag for album romanization yus
Add "Yamako" to tag for illustrator's romanization yamako is already added

[Easy]
Considering the map seems generally incomplete right now (no hitsound on some difficulty), will you be mapping the end of the Easy? sure of course
00:03:216 (1) - I personally think this slider will look better if it kind of blanketed the previous slider
okay
00:08:268 (1) - I feel rhythm like this kind of rhythm capture the vocal better. It also misses the end of the strong drum build up at 00:09:374 - and feels kind of empty
okay why not
00:28:479 (6) - Same as above fixed
Consistent Easy, nothing to say tbh

[Normal]
00:15:847 (1,3) - You should curve 00:15:847 (1) a bit more so the blanket on 00:16:953 (3) is clearer and look more appealing. I thought this was 2 straight lines being too close to each other.
idk
okay
00:16:953 (3) - Inconsistent rhythm, should have a note at the end. It's the only instance that's like this fixed
00:26:584 (2,3,4) - This feels better if you mapped it similarly to the majority of the map. By that I mean rhythm like this:
It follows the music better imo and it's a good consistency both suits too since i'm following this kind of whistles or something like that behind
00:58:795 (1) - I would move this back half a beat and add a circle at 00:59:111 because the vocal is pretty strong here. You also did that on similar section at 01:08:742 (1,2). Though the pitch is pretty different, the two sections share the similar rhythm due to both being at the beginning of a section in kiai. i'm not following the vocals here

[Hard]
Nothing to say here, nicely mapped hard thank you!

Great mapset, good luck!

thanks!

Garden

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Joined June 2013

Garden 2016-10-29T13:23:28+00:00

nice mapset, just some minor suggestions

General

somehow i feel ur volume settings are kinda low overall to provide enough feedback..
consider hp4 & hp5 for ur normal & hard, hard+insanes having same hp drain just looks weird to me

Easy

00:24:690 (3,1) - this minor overlap is pretty uhh, can u modify it a bit?
00:43:637 (5) - should nc here instead of 00:44:900 (1) - according to previous nc pattern

Normal

00:24:058 (2,1) - maybe do a blanket idk
00:55:479 (4) - turn it into a slider to follow the drum doesnt make the diff any harder imo

Hard

00:15:532 (5,1,2) - 01:11:111 (5,6,1) - try same nc pattern?
00:41:584 - 00:41:663 - bit wonder why u dont follow such drums in this section while u mapped 00:32:584 (2,3,4) - etc. which sounds less obvious to me
01:26:111 (4,1) - feels too far tbh.. u almost double the spacing

pkhg

dont forget hitsoundin a
00:28:479 (1,3) - 00:37:163 (1,4) - make some minor difference like 00:23:426 (1,4) - ?

Janpai

00:10:163 (2,3,4) - 00:55:637 (5,6,7) - since u did a quite individual pattern to follow the guitar maybe u can also try some hitsounds like drumsample here
01:26:268 (6,1) - use bit larger spacing than 01:25:953 (3,4) - ?

Irohas

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Topic Starter

Irohas 2016-10-29T17:25:31+00:00

Garden wrote:
nice mapset, just some minor suggestions

General
somehow i feel ur volume settings are kinda low overall to provide enough feedback.. okay i'll increase
consider hp4 & hp5 for ur normal & hard, hard+insanes having same hp drain just looks weird to me okay
Easy
00:24:690 (3,1) - this minor overlap is pretty uhh, can u modify it a bit? okay fixed
00:43:637 (5) - should nc here instead of 00:44:900 (1) - according to previous nc pattern oh yeah sure
Normal
00:24:058 (2,1) - maybe do a blanket idk not really necessary
00:55:479 (4) - turn it into a slider to follow the drum doesnt make the diff any harder imo okay
Hard
00:15:532 (5,1,2) - 01:11:111 (5,6,1) - try same nc pattern? sure
00:41:584 - 00:41:663 - bit wonder why u dont follow such drums in this section while u mapped 00:32:584 (2,3,4) - etc. which sounds less obvious to me triplets sucks in calm parts ):
01:26:111 (4,1) - feels too far tbh.. u almost double the spacing reduced a bit

thanks Garden, feel free to ask if you need a mod :3

Janpai

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Joined March 2015

Janpai 2016-10-30T06:22:56+00:00

StarrStyx wrote:
[Janpai]
00:22:953 - 00:25:795 - 00:28:005 - i wouldnt suggest making these blank tbh My main focus here is the vocal xD
00:49:953 (1,3) - just personal opnion, ctrl g these 2 would be better to play sure
really nice diff Thanks c:

Garden wrote:
Janpai
00:10:163 (2,3,4) - 00:55:637 (5,6,7) - since u did a quite individual pattern to follow the guitar maybe u can also try some hitsounds like drumsample here use drum hitwhistle instead
01:26:268 (6,1) - use bit larger spacing than 01:25:953 (3,4) - ? okay

thank you!

zuttttoooo mamoru kara nante

osu file format v14

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Sotarks

3,524 posts

Joined May 2014

Sotarks 2016-10-31T20:08:01+00:00

heya! check mods here, fixed some stuff, and i actually remapped some parts:

masugu?

osu file format v14

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[Editor]
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[Metadata]
Title:Wolf
TitleUnicode:ウルフ
Artist:CHiCO with HoneyWorks
ArtistUnicode:CHiCO with HoneyWorks
Creator:MugiwaraSekai
Version:Sotarks' Expert
Source:
Tags:pkhg janpai sotarks カヌレと canelé to album cut version gom oji 海賊王 shito atsyuk! ヤマコ
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Lasse

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Lasse 2016-10-31T20:19:14+00:00

edit: lots of points for sotarks' diff are probably invalid because of ^ lol

from m4m

I think you compressed your bg a bit too much when converting to png becasue it's full of artifacts (and also extremely low filesize)

[sotarks]
00:01:953 (1,2,3) - rhythm you mapped here seems kinda weird, mainly 00:02:426 (3) - cause guitar is focusing on white ticks
how about something like http://i.imgur.com/t7Z7db7.jpg or http://i.imgur.com/jy4JuPC.jpg at least consider the 1/4 repeats as they fit the song so well and add a bit more depth
00:05:742 (1,2,3,4) - here this type of rhythm fits way better bec of vocals!
00:06:690 (5) - mapping 1/4 here feels a bit random as you skip it right after00:07:558 - and other spots like 00:05:032 -
00:14:426 (1,2,3,4,5) - whole pattern makes really circular flow, so movement into 00:15:690 (6,7,8) - feels really harsh for no apparent reason. something like http://i.imgur.com/phkjoJx.jpg might work better, but kills your slider pattern so idk
=> 01:21:058 (4,5,6,7,8) - this one plays much better because of the angle leading into the triple supporting it better
00:20:900 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - all focusing so much on a small area of the playfield, makes it feel kinda boring
00:47:347 (4) - should really reduce spacing for 3-4 since you never utilized such passive 1/4 jumps before and the first one is so huge already and way too similar to your 1/2 spacing before
00:53:742 (1,2,3,4) - did you consider making these 3/4 already? think that would work really well with the song and make an interesting pattern
00:56:111 (1) - should have normal or soft additions so you get an actual cymbal sound from the finish
01:06:374 (1,2) - the idea is good and it looks nice, but spacing to 2 feels really overdone, especially after such a spaced stream since it's a really weak beat

[janpai]
00:05:426 (6,7) - this feels really overdone, 7 is one of the weakest beats but has the most spacing by far, triplet already does a fine job at emphasizing 00:05:742 (1) - so you could really tone down spacing here
something like 00:07:953 (4,5,6,1) - seems more reasonable
00:08:742 (2,3,4,5) - drums do a pretty distinct buildup pattern, so doing something like gradually increasing spacing feels more fitting than starting high ds and keeping it pretty constant
00:09:374 (1) - should be 1/2 shorter if you intended to make it follow vocals
00:10:163 (2,3,4) - all the same sound, so either make them all kicksliders or all circles
00:15:532 (5,6) - similar to first point
00:23:426 (1) - 00:25:321 - things like these would be great with soft whistles, but since you replaced them with kicks...
00:29:584 - very distinct change in music, so how about doing a slight sv increase here already?
00:39:690 (1,4,5,6) -

00:46:321 (2) - really weird rhythm cause you suddenly skip vocal completely with this
00:47:111 (4,1) - 00:48:374 (4,1) - why do you suddenly go back to skipping the 1/4s?
00:53:742 - drums get way louder here, so vol increase + sv would fit really well. also there is such a big change in the song, mapping this just like before is not really the best option to reflect that
00:55:321 (3) - might looks nice, but suddenly such low spacing doesn't fit this part consideing how much you spaced all surrounding objects
01:00:374 (2) - with the movement from before, how about doing something like http://i.imgur.com/NNpmVGW.jpg would fit that better
01:15:058 (1,2) - how about http://i.imgur.com/P6hHrZv.jpg so the stream actually start on the drums it's mapped to?

[pkhg]
copy hitsounds or something _ -
00:00:690 (1,2) - focuses so much on vocals but then 00:00:690 (1,2) - suddenly has none on the head but on tail and it seems really unfitting, how about http://i.imgur.com/mATH3Yh.jpg makes much more sense with all other sliders for the intro
00:30:532 (6) - so different from the part before, using lower sv would fit well and make 00:30:847 (1) - feel more impactful
the custom stacking you use for triples looks so weird to me as it's just a little more spaced than usual 3x3/4x4 custom stacks, but not enough to not feel stacked (if that makes sense) lol
01:21:374 (7,8,1) - these look so much nicer
00:55:005 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - this is great!

gl!

Janpai

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Joined March 2015

Janpai 2016-11-01T00:28:28+00:00

Lasse wrote:
[janpai]
00:05:426 (6,7) - this feels really overdone, 7 is one of the weakest beats but has the most spacing by far, triplet already does a fine job at emphasizing 00:05:742 (1) - so you could really tone down spacing here
something like 00:07:953 (4,5,6,1) - seems more reasonable agreed fixed
00:08:742 (2,3,4,5) - drums do a pretty distinct buildup pattern, so doing something like gradually increasing spacing feels more fitting than starting high ds and keeping it pretty constant okay re-arrange some circles
00:09:374 (1) - should be 1/2 shorter if you intended to make it follow vocals that was following that scratchy sound there xD but will consider for now
00:10:163 (2,3,4) - all the same sound, so either make them all kicksliders or all circles okay fixed
00:15:532 (5,6) - similar to first point fixed
00:23:426 (1) - 00:25:321 - things like these would be great with soft whistles, but since you replaced them with kicks... The kick sounds is pretty obvious here xD
00:29:584 - very distinct change in music, so how about doing a slight sv increase here already? sure
00:39:690 (1,4,5,6) - I think it's stacked properly o-o
00:46:321 (2) - really weird rhythm cause you suddenly skip vocal completely with this I intended to follow the guitar here
00:47:111 (4,1) - 00:48:374 (4,1) - why do you suddenly go back to skipping the 1/4s? what 1/4s ? xD
00:53:742 - drums get way louder here, so vol increase + sv would fit really well. also there is such a big change in the song, mapping this just like before is not really the best option to reflect that okay
00:55:321 (3) - might looks nice, but suddenly such low spacing doesn't fit this part consideing how much you spaced all surrounding objects I'll see for more opinions, keeping for now
01:00:374 (2) - with the movement from before, how about doing something like http://i.imgur.com/NNpmVGW.jpg would fit that better same^^
01:15:058 (1,2) - how about http://i.imgur.com/P6hHrZv.jpg so the stream actually start on the drums it's mapped to? sure

thank you so much

please remind pkhg to change his OD lol xD

CHiCO is luv

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pkhg

2,507 posts

Joined May 2010

pkhg 2016-11-01T20:46:35+00:00

-[Koinuri] wrote:
[pkhg's Insane]
00:03:690 (4,5) - You've mapped all the static noises in the beginning with active hitsounds except for this one at 00:03:847. imo this part can be better mapped using this kind of rhythm to accomodate the static im following vocals
00:15:847 (1,2,3) - feels weird to play because the long guitar is suddenly ignored only on this part drums
00:49:637 (4) - The movement required is really sharp here, maybe ctrl+g work nicer. Or a bit more spacing works too ok

Great mapset, good luck!

Garden wrote:
nice mapset, just some minor suggestions

pkhg
dont forget hitsoundin a ye XD
00:28:479 (1,3) - 00:37:163 (1,4) - make some minor difference like 00:23:426 (1,4) - ? i tried

Lasse wrote:
edit: lots of points for sotarks' diff are probably invalid because of ^ lol

[pkhg]
copy hitsounds or something _ - something
00:00:690 (1,2) - focuses so much on vocals but then 00:00:690 (1,2) - suddenly has none on the head but on tail and it seems really unfitting, how about http://i.imgur.com/mATH3Yh.jpg makes much more sense with all other sliders for the intro sure
00:30:532 (6) - so different from the part before, using lower sv would fit well and make 00:30:847 (1) - feel more impactful i want to have the same sv as the prev section cuz voice is still strong
the custom stacking you use for triples looks so weird to me as it's just a little more spaced than usual 3x3/4x4 custom stacks, but not enough to not feel stacked (if that makes sense) lol reworked some
01:21:374 (7,8,1) - these look so much nicer ye
00:55:005 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - this is great! yey

gl!

diff+hitsounds http://puu.sh/s3dzR/67139d2279.zip

Affirmation

2,548 posts

Joined March 2015

Affirmation 2016-11-02T10:56:49+00:00

Q

[Easy]
00:07:637 (3) - ctrl HJ for flow
01:26:268 (3) - It is the only one 1/2 slider, I recommend changing just circle, Its BPM is too high and looks awkward

[Normal]
00:22:163 (1) - 00:24:690 (1) - Delete NC

[Hard]
00:03:690 (2,3) - swap rhythm.
00:20:426 (4) - How about this pattern?
01:03:532 (5) - ctrl HJ for flow
01:16:005 - add a beat

Good luck

Irohas

1,353 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Irohas 2016-11-02T15:19:01+00:00

Neoskylove wrote:
Q

[Easy]
00:07:637 (3) - ctrl HJ for flow It's fine I think
01:26:268 (3) - It is the only one 1/2 slider, I recommend changing just circle, Its BPM is too high and looks awkward it feels empty with only a circle, but I understand. I'll wait more opinons about that

[Normal]
00:22:163 (1) - 00:24:690 (1) - Delete NC sure

[Hard]
00:03:690 (2,3) - swap rhythm. I'm not following the vocal
00:20:426 (4) - How about this pattern? both suits imo
01:03:532 (5) - ctrl HJ for flow it's not really an issue imo
01:16:005 - add a beat I think it's fine if I skip that in hard diff

Good luck

thanks!

+ added Kanto's diff xd

Kensuke

1,856 posts

Joined April 2014

Kensuke 2016-11-04T13:43:40+00:00

request from kanto

19:27 KantoKun: ว่างป้ะ
19:27 KantoKun: ดูแมพให้หน่อย
19:27 *KantoKun is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1121032 CHiCO with HoneyWorks - Wolf]
19:27 - Frontier -: ว่า
19:27 - Frontier -: ง
19:27 - Frontier -: ครับ
19:30 KantoKun: ;-;
19:30 - Frontier -: ;-;
19:30 KantoKun: ;-;
19:30 - Frontier -: ;-;
19:31 KantoKun: :9
19:31 - Frontier -: :8
19:31 KantoKun: พออออว์

[General]

The album's name is "Canele to Wolf (カヌレとウルフ)" not "canelé to (カヌレと)"

metadata source

https://itunes.apple.com/us/album/canele-wolf-ep/id1147995719
https://www.amazon.co.jp/dp/B01JYIVUUW

[Easy]

00:19:479 (2) - This slider looks pretty weird. Maybe curve slider better? :D
01:06:374 (3) - NC this? the song emphasize here

[Normal]

00:08:900 (2,3) - Too far

[Hard]

00:15:768 (1,2) - remove nc from (1) and put on (2)

[pkhg's Insane]

00:16:163 (2) - IMO ctrl+g this gives better flow. you could try it

[Janpai's Insane]

00:10:163 (2,3,4) - maybe put 5% vol green line at the end of sliders
00:42:532 (2,3) - These aren't parallel
00:55:637 (5,6,7) - maybe put 5% vol green line at the end of sliders
01:00:374 (2) - maybe ctrl+g this for better flow?

[Sotarks' Expert]

00:15:690 (6,7,8) - this part is exactly same as 00:10:637 (1,2,3) but map so different.
So pro

[Kanto's Memories]

Thai for faster
00:30:216 (1,2) - ผมว่า ctrl+g ก็ดีนะพี่
00:30:551 - เอิ่มม เส้นเขียวๆ
00:44:111 (3,4) - อันนี้ 00:41:584 (3,4,5) ก็ rhythm เดียวกันแต่อันนั้นพี่ทำเป็น triplet อันนี้พี่ทำเป็น 1/4 slider อ่ะครับ consistency
01:05:742 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - ส่วนตัว ถ้าเป็นผม ผมจะใส่เส้นเขียวตรงสตรีม แล้วก็เรียง vol จากน้อยไปมากนะครับ

I am not good at modding honeyworks songs sry.

no star if this useless
GL~

Irohas

1,353 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Irohas 2016-11-04T18:50:50+00:00

- Frontier - wrote:
request from kanto
19:27 KantoKun: ว่างป้ะ
19:27 KantoKun: ดูแมพให้หน่อย
19:27 *KantoKun is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1121032 CHiCO with HoneyWorks - Wolf]
19:27 - Frontier -: ว่า
19:27 - Frontier -: ง
19:27 - Frontier -: ครับ
19:30 KantoKun: ;-;
19:30 - Frontier -: ;-;
19:30 KantoKun: ;-;
19:30 - Frontier -: ;-;
19:31 KantoKun: :9
19:31 - Frontier -: :8
19:31 KantoKun: พออออว์
[General]
The album's name is "Canele to Wolf (カヌレとウルフ)" not "canelé to (カヌレと)" but ウルフ is already the title of the song not necessary to put it in tags
metadata source
https://itunes.apple.com/us/album/canele-wolf-ep/id1147995719
https://www.amazon.co.jp/dp/B01JYIVUUW

[Easy]
00:19:479 (2) - This slider looks pretty weird. Maybe curve slider better? :D pretty love this kind of sliders ):
01:06:374 (3) - NC this? the song emphasize here arf, sure
[Normal]
00:08:900 (2,3) - Too far oops
[Hard]
00:15:768 (1,2) - remove nc from (1) and put on (2) I think it's not really an issue

I am not good at modding honeyworks songs sry. no star if this useless
GL~

thanks Frontier, and Kanto then xd

KantoKun

1,114 posts

Joined December 2011

KantoKun 2016-11-05T08:19:31+00:00

- Frontier - wrote:
request from kanto
19:27 KantoKun: ว่างป้ะ
19:27 KantoKun: ดูแมพให้หน่อย
19:27 *KantoKun is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1121032 CHiCO with HoneyWorks - Wolf]
19:27 - Frontier -: ว่า
19:27 - Frontier -: ง
19:27 - Frontier -: ครับ
19:30 KantoKun: ;-;
19:30 - Frontier -: ;-;
19:30 KantoKun: ;-;
19:30 - Frontier -: ;-;
19:31 KantoKun: :9
19:31 - Frontier -: :8
19:31 KantoKun: พออออว์
[Kanto's Memories]
Thai for faster sure :3
00:30:216 (1,2) - ผมว่า ctrl+g ก็ดีนะพี่ แบบนั้นก็ง่ายไปสิ
00:30:551 - เอิ่มม เส้นเขียวๆ เส้นเขียวเพราะเสียง sliderslide
00:44:111 (3,4) - อันนี้ 00:41:584 (3,4,5) ก็ rhythm เดียวกันแต่อันนั้นพี่ทำเป็น triplet อันนี้พี่ทำเป็น 1/4 slider อ่ะครับ consistency triple อันแรก โน็ตต่อไปเป็นริทึมธรรมดาๆ แต่ triple รั้งที่ 2 เนี่ย กลองมี jump ไปที่ kat พี่เลยใช้ triple แบบตัวสุดท้ายเป็นโน็ตเปล่าๆ เพื่อให้ทำ jump ได้ ไม่เกี่ยวกับ consistency เพราะจังหวะมันไม่ consistency อิอิ
01:05:742 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - ส่วนตัว ถ้าเป็นผม ผมจะใส่เส้นเขียวตรงสตรีม แล้วก็เรียง vol จากน้อยไปมากนะครับ อ่าห้ะ
[/notice]

I am not good at modding honeyworks songs sry. no star if this useless
GL~

no fix

but thank you for modding, bro

Janpai

1,288 posts

Joined March 2015

Janpai 2016-11-06T06:48:02+00:00

- Frontier - wrote:
[Janpai's Insane]
00:10:163 (2,3,4) - maybe put 5% vol green line at the end of sliders I think it's fine xD
00:42:532 (2,3) - These aren't parallel okie I fixed
00:55:637 (5,6,7) - maybe put 5% vol green line at the end of sliders ^^
01:00:374 (2) - maybe ctrl+g this for better flow? did sth

thank you!

updeto

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Rizen

1,663 posts

Joined August 2013

Rizen 2016-11-08T05:34:15+00:00

Easy

so many unused inherited timing points x_x
00:05:111 (3) - something about these angle sliders are bleh. You could try adjusting it so the angle (red anchor point) is at the middle of the slider. Applies to future occurances too like 00:15:216 (3) - , 00:40:479 (3) - , etc.
00:15:216 (3,1) - I can hear cymbals on the slider tail of slider 3 but not the head of slider 1. Perhaps move the finish hitsound back?
00:24:058 (2,3) - too close for comfort imo, try moving it a bit higher

Normal

00:15:532 (6,1) - same thing I said about the finish hitsound in the easy
00:55:479 (4,5,1) - perhaps you can tidy up this pattern here a little bit so it looks more aesthetically pleasing, example.
00:58:637 - maybe you can add a circle here as the vocals start here (kokoro)
00:52:479 (2) - NC here seems a bit excessive
01:21:847 - don't find the finish here fitting as there are no cymbal hits at this part of the song

Hard

00:18:058 (5,1) - the slider tails are just a tad too close for comfort ;_; try moving them further apart like this
01:02:268 (4,1) - ^ but this time it's the circle and slider tail
01:26:426 (5) - perhaps NC this as you have done with the normal difficulty
nice

only own diffs this time so if you don't find this mod helpful, don't kd it. sorry

Reillia

1,164 posts

Joined August 2014

Reillia 2016-11-08T14:53:35+00:00

from queue sry for loooong delay xd

[Easy]
00:02:584 (3,1) - you can try make more perfect blanket
01:08:900 (1,3) - avoid overlap plz!!

[Normal]
00:07:953 (4,1) - make parallel plz!

[pkhg's Insane]
00:10:479 (3,1) - how about increase ds for catch cymbal sound?
00:48:058 (3) - slider end unsnapped!
01:09:847 (6,4) - avoid overlap plz!!

[Janpai's Insane]
00:07:637 (3,5) - how about stack this?

aaaaaaahhhh i can't mod this mapset anymore ;w; sorry for short mod.. GL! give star!

Janpai

1,288 posts

Joined March 2015

Janpai 2016-11-09T10:57:40+00:00

@[C u r i] I don't think it fits xD did some HS fix stuffs

sona fu ni ikiteru

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 55953
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

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DistanceSpacing: 0.8
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GridSize: 4
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TitleUnicode:ウルフ
Artist:CHiCO with HoneyWorks
ArtistUnicode:CHiCO with HoneyWorks
Creator:MugiwaraSekai
Version:Janpai's Insane
Source:
Tags:pkhg janpai sotarks kantokun カヌレと canelé to album cut version gom oji 海賊王 shito cake atsyuk! ヤマコ
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OverallDifficulty:8
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Irohas

1,353 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Irohas 2016-11-09T17:41:24+00:00

Rizen wrote:
Easy
so many unused inherited timing points x_x not really unused
00:05:111 (3) - something about these angle sliders are bleh. You could try adjusting it so the angle (red anchor point) is at the middle of the slider. Applies to future occurances too like 00:15:216 (3) - , 00:40:479 (3) - , etc. okay
00:15:216 (3,1) - I can hear cymbals on the slider tail of slider 3 but not the head of slider 1. Perhaps move the finish hitsound back? fixed for (3) but (1)'s head needs a finish imo
00:24:058 (2,3) - too close for comfort imo, try moving it a bit higher okay
Normal
00:15:532 (6,1) - same thing I said about the finish hitsound in the easy sure
00:55:479 (4,5,1) - perhaps you can tidy up this pattern here a little bit so it looks more aesthetically pleasing, example. it looks cool, fixed
00:58:637 - maybe you can add a circle here as the vocals start here (kokoro) I'm following drums here
00:52:479 (2) - NC here seems a bit excessive okay removed
01:21:847 - don't find the finish here fitting as there are no cymbal hits at this part of the song to emphasize the loud clap above
Hard
00:18:058 (5,1) - the slider tails are just a tad too close for comfort ;_; try moving them further apart like this okay fixed
01:02:268 (4,1) - ^ but this time it's the circle and slider tail It's fine imo
01:26:426 (5) - perhaps NC this as you have done with the normal difficulty I think I shouldn't NC according to my last NC pattern imo
nice thanks :d
only own diffs this time so if you don't find this mod helpful, don't kd it. sorry

[C u r i] wrote:
from queue sry for loooong delay xd

[Easy]
00:02:584 (3,1) - you can try make more perfect blanket fixed
01:08:900 (1,3) - avoid overlap plz!! okay

[Normal]
00:07:953 (4,1) - make parallel plz! it looks cool to me

aaaaaaahhhh i can't mod this mapset anymore ;w; sorry for short mod.. GL! give star! thanks :d

thanks both!

Beomsan

Beatmap Nominator

1,890 posts

Joined November 2013

Beomsan 2016-11-10T04:42:22+00:00

hello m4m

[General]

http://www.chicoxxx.com/artist/chico/discography/SMCL-446 official site here because I think metadata was not confirmed yet.
but seems using correct metadata and tags are overall suitable.

[Easy]

01:03:847 (1) - I think this slider can be improve by changing the way you place points https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6532036 like this

fine

[Normal]

n0thing

[Hard]

00:17:426 (2,3,4,5) - I felt weird from this part. 'cause maybe movement. I'd recommend a little more dynamic movement here. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6532057
01:08:111 (3,4,5,1) - hmm same as above. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6532065 these things also helps to play imo.

super solid

[pkhg's I]

00:01:795 - I'd recommend change to a note and 00:01:953 - add a note for more playable and enjoyable pattern. also make consistent with 00:02:900 (10,11,12) - however, 00:05:032 (4,5) - it's have more strong impression as bgm so fine imo.
00:29:111 (3) - really hard to read. I think you should replace it. at least use manual stack like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6532091

this diff seems harder than janpai's Insane 'cause overall using gimmick pattern.
but why not

[Janpai's I]

00:14:426 (1,2) - umm actually unfamiliar flow imo. just I'd recommend 00:14:900 (2) - ctrl+g and replace it.
00:34:637 (1) - this S slider can be improve. current one is~~so ugly~~ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6532112
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[Sotarks' E]

really hard to mod ;_;

[Kanto's]

seems cool

I also did short mod lol
of course, cuz this mapset is really solid.
good luck!!

Irohas

1,353 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Irohas 2016-11-10T16:44:59+00:00

Beomsan wrote:
hello m4m

[General]
http://www.chicoxxx.com/artist/chico/discography/SMCL-446 official site here because I think metadata was not confirmed yet.
but seems using correct metadata and tags are overall suitable. I'll quote this if necessary
[Easy]
01:03:847 (1) - I think this slider can be improve by changing the way you place points https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6532036 like this okay fixed

fine
[Normal]
n0thing
[Hard]
00:17:426 (2,3,4,5) - I felt weird from this part. 'cause maybe movement. I'd recommend a little more dynamic movement here. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6532057 it looks cool for me
01:08:111 (3,4,5,1) - hmm same as above. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6532065 these things also helps to play imo. ^

super solid
I also did short mod lol
of course, cuz this mapset is really solid.
good luck!!

thanks!

William K

704 posts

Joined January 2013

William K 2016-11-12T05:08:12+00:00

Hi~

[Janpai's Insane]

00:13:321 (1) - Maybe add Finish here?
00:38:111 (4) - Could've used the same spacing as 00:33:058 (4) - since they sound the same.
00:59:268 (3) - How about making this a 1/2 slider and a single note to follow the vocals better? 00:59:426 - Feels empty if you just pass it.
01:19:005 (1) - Blanket's off
01:26:426 (1) - Finish seems out of place imo.
00:41:268 (2,3) - How about CTRL+G here to emphasize the drum at 00:41:268 - better?

That's all I think, GL~

pkhg

2,507 posts

Joined May 2010

pkhg 2016-11-12T07:52:26+00:00

- Frontier - wrote:
[pkhg's Insane]
00:16:163 (2) - IMO ctrl+g this gives better flow. you could try it i broke flow cuz snare and cymbal
GL~

[C u r i] wrote:
[pkhg's Insane]
00:10:479 (3,1) - how about increase ds for catch cymbal sound? squares are cute
00:48:058 (3) - slider end unsnapped! lol
01:09:847 (6,4) - avoid overlap plz!! they are really far from each other on the timeline lol

Beomsan wrote:
[pkhg's I]
00:01:795 - I'd recommend change to a note and 00:01:953 - add a note for more playable and enjoyable pattern. also make consistent with 00:02:900 (10,11,12) - however, 00:05:032 (4,5) - it's have more strong impression as bgm so fine imo. slider is cool on vocals
00:29:111 (3) - really hard to read. I think you should replace it. at least use manual stack like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6532091 ill change it later if more ppl point it out

this diff seems harder than janpai's Insane 'cause overall using gimmick pattern. xd
but why not

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Janpai

1,288 posts

Joined March 2015

Janpai 2016-11-13T07:52:02+00:00

Beomsan wrote:
[Janpai's I]
00:14:426 (1,2) - umm actually unfamiliar flow imo. just I'd recommend 00:14:900 (2) - ctrl+g and replace it. I'll see for more opinions
00:34:637 (1) - this S slider can be improve. current one is~~so ugly~~ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6532112 I prefer this one
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William K wrote:
Hi~

[Janpai's Insane]

00:13:321 (1) - Maybe add Finish here? no xD
00:38:111 (4) - Could've used the same spacing as 00:33:058 (4) - since they sound the same. fixed
00:59:268 (3) - How about making this a 1/2 slider and a single note to follow the vocals better? 00:59:426 - Feels empty if you just pass it. well I'll see for more opinions
01:19:005 (1) - Blanket's off fixed
01:26:426 (1) - Finish seems out of place imo. replaced with drum hitswhistle
00:41:268 (2,3) - How about CTRL+G here to emphasize the drum at 00:41:268 - better? okay

That's all I think, GL~

thank you so much!

kono kizuato wa

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-Nya-

2,133 posts

Joined December 2011

-Nya- 2016-11-13T15:02:40+00:00

Hey~ For M4M.
I haven't modded for quite some time so please pardon if the mod looks bad.

General:

It would be nice if the BG’s quality can be topnotch. But it’s not too bad I guess. Just a bit pixelly.

Kanto’s Memories:

00:10:163 (1,2,3) – Unsnapped slider ends.
00:06:847 (5,6) –I can’t really hear anything in the music or beat that would support this triple.
00:11:900 (1) –Lift this tail upwards a bit to overlap the tail of 00:11:111 (3) – It’ll just look neater.
00:13:321 (1) –Perhaps move this slider a bit to the left to avoid the slight overlap with 00:12:532 (3) – Nazi, but meh.
00:18:058 (5,6,1) –Try making the distance here similar to 00:15:532 (5,6,1) – for consistency. Check previous similar patterns as well to make sure they are consistent.
00:32:584 (3,4,5) – and 00:37:637 (2,3,4) – Keep these distances similar as well since they are the same pattern.
01:16:084 –Listen to this at 25%.The second vocal doesn’t start there. It starts here: 01:16:045 -. Change the beat snap divisor to 1/8 and you’ll hear it. You can also maybe change 01:15:847 (1) – into a short slider since the vocal there is long and not abrupt.

Sotarks’ Expert:

Your OD is much higher than Kanto’s and his diff is the hardest in the set. It just looks unbalanced to me.
00:02:426 (3,2) –Stack the (2) better on the tail of (3). Will look neater.
00:10:637 (1,4) -^, >.<
00:12:690 (4,2) - ^, you probably don’t have to stack each and every one, but some of these will look better stacked imo.
00:22:163 (1,2) –You can try blanketing this. Pointing this out since almost everyone loves pointing stuff like this out to me as well.
00:40:163 (3) –There’s a cymbal sound in the background so perhaps rather place a finish sound on the head to emphasize that.
Perhaps try comboing like this: Place new combo here: 00:42:532 (4) – then remove new combo here: 00:42:847 (1) – and then place new combo here: 00:43:005 (2) –
00:45:374 (1) –Unnecessary combo imo. Rather remove so it fits in with the previous combo.
01:25:163 (4) –Perhaps add new combo here and remove new combo here: 01:25:479 (1) – The beat just sounds stronger on (4).

There were so many other stacks and unnecessary overlappings that I wanted to point out but realized that it’s probably just your mapping style. Not mine though. I love everything to be neat and try to keep my overlappings to a minimum. Still nice diff~

Janpai's Insane:

I suggest lowering the OD cause right now it’s higher than the hardest diff in the set (perhaps talk to Kanto about this). And also cause I think it’s too high for an Insane.
00:13:321 (1) –Also add a finish hitsound on the head of this slider. Kanto and Sotarks did it.
00:40:163 (2) –There’s a cymbal sound in the background so it will be better to place a finish on the head to emphasize that.
01:16:045 (2) –I also mentioned this to Kanto. The vocal starts 01:16:045 – and not here 01:16:005 – Change the beat snap divisor to 1/8 and listen at 25% to hear it.

pkhg's Insane:

HP drain looks high. The other harder diffs’ drains aren’t even that high. Perhaps lower it a bit to 6 or 6.2 or something for a better balanced spread.
00:10:637 (1) –I suggest placing a jump here to emphasize that strong cymbal.
00:29:584 (5) -^, just a wee bit bigger for more emphasis.
01:15:847 (7) –Perhaps place a new combo here to emphasize that strong vocal and beat.
01:26:426 (8) -^

Hard:

00:12:690 (3,4,5) –This current placement makes flow a bit weird. Rather try something like this instead:
Picture
00:40:953 –Place a circle here or map it out since there’s clearly a vocal. Right now it feels a bit empty and mapping it out will be better imo.
00:43:321 (6) –Perhaps this?
Picture
Looks neater imo.
01:17:111 (3,2) –This overlap looks a bit meh. Perhaps rather try something like this:
Picture
Plus the flow will also be improved imo.
01:26:426 (5) –You can add new combo here to emphasize that strong cymbal.

Normal:

00:04:953 (4,5,6,1) –Imo stacks are a bit too hard for a Normal, so I usually unstack them and place them like this:
Picture
This goes for all similar situations.
00:55:479 (4,5,1) –This pattern looks a bit crammed and crowded because of the hump of the slider that goes inward. Rather something like this:
Picture
01:26:426 (6) –New combo?

Easy:

00:44:900 (3) –This is just a general warning, since I remember Bakari pointing this out to me as well. Be careful not to hide the tail of the slider too much especially in an Easy since it’s hard to see the path of the slider then and it may confuse beginner players. I don’t think this slider will be a problem but it’s close.
01:22:637 (2) –I can hear a cymbal in the background of the music. I suggest placing a finish on the head of the slider to emphasize that.
01:25:163 (2) –Hmm, the tail is overlapping the body of the slider and that may be a problem.. not sure, lol.

Nice diff. Nothing else to point out.

Overall this is a really nice set and almost ready for rank imo. Good Luck~!

KantoKun

1,114 posts

Joined December 2011

KantoKun 2016-11-14T07:52:47+00:00

-Nya- wrote:
Hey~ For M4M.
I haven't modded for quite some time so please pardon if the mod looks bad.

General:
It would be nice if the BG’s quality can be topnotch. But it’s not too bad I guess. Just a bit pixelly.

Kanto’s Memories:
00:10:163 (1,2,3) – Unsnapped slider ends. [/color]
00:06:847 (5,6) –I can’t really hear anything in the music or beat that would support this triple. okay
00:11:900 (1) –Lift this tail upwards a bit to overlap the tail of 00:11:111 (3) – It’ll just look neater. okay
00:13:321 (1) –Perhaps move this slider a bit to the left to avoid the slight overlap with 00:12:532 (3) – Nazi, but meh. it's unseen with AR 9.3 in game
00:18:058 (5,6,1) –Try making the distance here similar to 00:15:532 (5,6,1) – for consistency. Check previous similar patterns as well to make sure they are consistent. good idea
00:32:584 (3,4,5) – and 00:37:637 (2,3,4) – Keep these distances similar as well since they are the same pattern. aha
01:16:084 –Listen to this at 25%.The second vocal doesn’t start there. It starts here: 01:16:045 -. Change the beat snap divisor to 1/8 and you’ll hear it. You can also maybe change 01:15:847 (1) – into a short slider since the vocal there is long and not abrupt. sure it's correct! , but it isn't make sense to change

Overall this is a really nice set and almost ready for rank imo. Good Luck~!

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pkhg

2,507 posts

Joined May 2010

pkhg 2016-11-17T15:59:04+00:00

-Nya- wrote:
Hey~ For M4M.

pkhg's Insane:
HP drain looks high. The other harder diffs’ drains aren’t even that high. Perhaps lower it a bit to 6 or 6.2 or something for a better balanced spread.k
00:10:637 (1) –I suggest placing a jump here to emphasize that strong cymbal. square
00:29:584 (5) -^, just a wee bit bigger for more emphasis. mayb
01:15:847 (7) –Perhaps place a new combo here to emphasize that strong vocal and beat. no
01:26:426 (8) -^ no
[/notice]

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Tags:pkhg janpai sotarks kantokun カヌレと canelé to album cut version gom oji 海賊王 shito cake atsyuk! ヤマコ
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Irohas

1,353 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Irohas 2016-11-17T16:51:44+00:00

-Nya- wrote:
Hey~ For M4M.
I haven't modded for quite some time so please pardon if the mod looks bad.

General:
It would be nice if the BG’s quality can be topnotch. But it’s not too bad I guess. Just a bit pixelly. I'll see if I can arrange that

Hard:
00:12:690 (3,4,5) –This current placement makes flow a bit weird. Rather try something like this instead:
Picture
mmh, it looks good to me, I think I'll keep
00:40:953 –Place a circle here or map it out since there’s clearly a vocal. Right now it feels a bit empty and mapping it out will be better imo. but I followed drums just before, so I think it's fine if I skip the vocal
00:43:321 (6) –Perhaps this?
Picture
Looks neater imo. okay
01:17:111 (3,2) –This overlap looks a bit meh. Perhaps rather try something like this:
Picture

Plus the flow will also be improved imo. overlap looks good to me ):
01:26:426 (5) –You can add new combo here to emphasize that strong cymbal. okay

Normal:
00:04:953 (4,5,6,1) –Imo stacks are a bit too hard for a Normal, so I usually unstack them and place them like this:
Picture
This goes for all similar situations. I think it's as hard as I made
00:55:479 (4,5,1) –This pattern looks a bit crammed and crowded because of the hump of the slider that goes inward. Rather something like this:
Picture
I'll see if it really bother with more opinons
01:26:426 (6) –New combo? okay

Easy:
00:44:900 (3) –This is just a general warning, since I remember Bakari pointing this out to me as well. Be careful not to hide the tail of the slider too much especially in an Easy since it’s hard to see the path of the slider then and it may confuse beginner players. I don’t think this slider will be a problem but it’s close. okay applied
01:22:637 (2) –I can hear a cymbal in the background of the music. I suggest placing a finish on the head of the slider to emphasize that. okay
01:25:163 (2) –Hmm, the tail is overlapping the body of the slider and that may be a problem.. not sure, lol. changed a bit if ever
Nice diff. Nothing else to point out.

Overall this is a really nice set and almost ready for rank imo. Good Luck~!

thanks!
+updated kanto and pkhg's diffs

Janpai

1,288 posts

Joined March 2015

Janpai 2016-11-19T01:31:12+00:00

-Nya- wrote:
Janpai's Insane:
I suggest lowering the OD cause right now it’s higher than the hardest diff in the set (perhaps talk to Kanto about this). And also cause I think it’s too high for an Insane. bumped to 7.5
00:13:321 (1) –Also add a finish hitsound on the head of this slider. Kanto and Sotarks did it. sure
00:40:163 (2) –There’s a cymbal sound in the background so it will be better to place a finish on the head to emphasize that. okay
01:16:045 (2) –I also mentioned this to Kanto. The vocal starts 01:16:045 – and not here 01:16:005 – Change the beat snap divisor to 1/8 and listen at 25% to hear it. This might be tricky to play but applied. When someone will point this out, I will revert it back to the 1/4 snap since there's not so much difference between them

thank you so much!

mou aitakunai yo

osu file format v14

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Kuron-kun

Kuron-kun 2016-11-26T12:57:09+00:00

Hey! M4M.

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General

If you have a higher resolution available of this background it would be nice to add it there, since 1920x1200 BGs are now accepted.

Easy

You have a lot of inherited points in this diff and they're pretty much useless. You're using them on sliderticks but there's no selected sample to use it there. Consider removing them if you aren't going to use in the future.

00:09:058 (2) - Don't you want to make this slider two clickable circles instead? The song is getting pretty strong there, would be a nice spot to do it. Plus, ending sliders on strong beats isn't a really good thing, specially if you have the change to make it clickable, where you do here.

01:08:900 (1) - This is the only slider on this section you didn't use to emphasize the vocal, and you emphasized the rest really well. Would be really bad to change the consistency. Wouldn't you prefer to do something like this?

Normal
00:58:637 - The "kokoro" is really strong there and you left the beat/vocal empty. Wouldn't it be better to add a circle there? Or you can move the next slider to the red tick and add a circle after it, like this.

Hard
00:39:058 (2) - I feel like a Ctrl + G here would flow better. Plus, would add a jump between this slider and the next one, emphasizing the stronger beat on the next slider's end.

00:55:479 (3) - This slider's end is where the guitar starts and by leaving it on the slider's end would feel a bit inconsistent and bad to follow. Would be a nice idea to make something like you did with the same guitar sound on the beginning by adding a repeat slider exactly where the sound starts. If you feel it wouldn't be a good a idea, placing a slider where the guitar sound starts exactly like this would be a great idea too.

pkhg's Insane
00:50:584 (3,4) - It would be a nice idea to add a NC on (3) to indicate changes of rhythm. Could be kinda confusing to some players.

00:52:163 - Aw, I probably see what you tried to do here but leaving these empty isn't really a good ideia. It's inconsistent since you were following every sound on the song. Same would apply for the next blank white tick.

01:05:900 (6,7,8,9) - Isn't the normal samples a bit too... loud here, considering the rest of the song? Try adding an inherited point with lower volume. Feels much better to play, hear and to follow.

Janpai's Insane
00:50:584 (5,6) - Consider adding a NC on (5) due to the change of rhythm and spacing. You haven't using any 1/4 sliders so some players could think they're acutally 1/4 sliders, so New Combos would indicate a change of rhythm.

01:04:953 (1) - The flow between this slider and the previous notes doesn't feel really good. The circles are all going to a right flow but then this slider shows up with a left flow and makes it awkward to follow. You can either move the slider to the right or it's beginning to fix it. Would feel muuuuch better.

Sotarks' Expert
00:06:690 (5,6) - Considering that you only did these with that high spacing when the song was about 1/4 strong triplets, this might feel unnecessary. The song isn't strong enough to add this spacing between them. Why don't you try a 1/4 repeat slider instead? Or you can decrease the spacing between them. Your choice!

01:08:742 (6,1) - Since you were adding a long slider every time the vocal got emphasized would be nice to do it here as well, for consistency reasons (plus, it's really cool)! A nice solution to this would be deleting (6), moving (1) to (6)'s place and Ctrl + G it. Then you just add a circle on the next tick.

I am in love with the flow you did on this diff.

Kanto's Memories
00:51:216 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - These squares are starting with a high spacing and ending with a lower spacing, but as I can hear through the song it is increasing its emphasis, not decreasing it. Wouldn't you prefer to start with lower-spaced squares and end with high-spaced instead? Would make much more sense!

00:55:637 (2) - Since the guitar's sound starts here you should add a 1/4 slider here as well, so it would be consistent with the next two.

01:08:742 (8,1) - You were adding sliders on the red tick to emphasize the vocal on this kiai, but you didn't do it here. Consider adding this slider on the red tick instead of white tick. Emphasizing the vocal is really cool there!

Really cool mapset!

Irohas

1,353 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Irohas 2016-11-26T17:53:35+00:00

Kuron-kun wrote:
Hey! M4M.

bold = highly recommended
red = unrankable

General
If you have a higher resolution available of this background it would be nice to add it there, since 1920x1200 BGs are now accepted. I'll consider
Easy
You have a lot of inherited points in this diff and they're pretty much useless. You're using them on sliderticks but there's no selected sample to use it there. Consider removing them if you aren't going to use in the future.
00:09:058 (2) - Don't you want to make this slider two clickable circles instead? The song is getting pretty strong there, would be a nice spot to do it. Plus, ending sliders on strong beats isn't a really good thing, specially if you have the change to make it clickable, where you do here. slider is better than circles for beginners imo

01:08:900 (1) - This is the only slider on this section you didn't use to emphasize the vocal, and you emphasized the rest really well. Would be really bad to change the consistency. Wouldn't you prefer to do something like this? consistency with 01:03:216 (4,1) -

Normal
00:58:637 - The "kokoro" is really strong there and you left the beat/vocal empty. Wouldn't it be better to add a circle there? Or you can move the next slider to the red tick and add a circle after it, like this. there's a sound that I don't want to skip on the downbeat but since you're not the one who tell me that, I keep in mind

Hard
00:39:058 (2) - I feel like a Ctrl + G here would flow better. Plus, would add a jump between this slider and the next one, emphasizing the stronger beat on the next slider's end. it's not really a bad flow imo

00:55:479 (3) - This slider's end is where the guitar starts and by leaving it on the slider's end would feel a bit inconsistent and bad to follow. Would be a nice idea to make something like you did with the same guitar sound on the beginning by adding a repeat slider exactly where the sound starts. If you feel it wouldn't be a good a idea, placing a slider where the guitar sound starts exactly like this would be a great idea too. both suits too imo, I just wanted to emphasize this loud finish sound

Really cool mapset!

thanks!

Janpai

1,288 posts

Joined March 2015

Janpai 2016-11-27T00:34:21+00:00

Kuron-kun wrote:
Janpai's Insane
00:50:584 (5,6) - Consider adding a NC on (5) due to the change of rhythm and spacing. You haven't using any 1/4 sliders so some players could think they're acutally 1/4 sliders, so New Combos would indicate a change of rhythm. actually it's 1/3 not 1/4 but fixed

01:04:953 (1) - The flow between this slider and the previous notes doesn't feel really good. The circles are all going to a right flow but then this slider shows up with a left flow and makes it awkward to follow. You can either move the slider to the right or it's beginning to fix it. Would feel muuuuch better. will see for more opinions xD

thank you!

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pkhg

2,507 posts

Joined May 2010

pkhg 2016-11-27T07:06:36+00:00

Kuron-kun wrote:
pkhg's Insane
00:50:584 (3,4) - It would be a nice idea to add a NC on (3) to indicate changes of rhythm. Could be kinda confusing to some players. no

00:52:163 - Aw, I probably see what you tried to do here but leaving these empty isn't really a good ideia. It's inconsistent since you were following every sound on the song. Same would apply for the next blank white tick. no

01:05:900 (6,7,8,9) - Isn't the normal samples a bit too... loud here, considering the rest of the song? Try adding an inherited point with lower volume. Feels much better to play, hear and to follow. no

Iceskulls

1,612 posts

Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2016-12-01T15:59:12+00:00

[easy]

00:57:374 (3,4) - little spacing inconsistent

[normal]

00:00:690 (1) - finish
00:07:953 (4,1) - try to make them looks symmetry for aesthetic ?
00:13:005 (6,1) - spacing inconsistent , should be 1.1x
00:35:742 (6,1) - same
00:41:111 (1) - having the sliderend for the emphasized snare here make the rhythm sound weird imo , try something like this ? I think it will emphasis the instrument here better
SPOILER
00:43:637 (1) - same
00:43:005 (7) - also weird rhythm for me , i don't think the red tick there need to be mapped in the this diff somehow , a simple 1/1 slider here make this feel a bit go with the rhythm around it better
00:44:900 (3) - same ^
00:45:847 (5,1) - spacing inconsistent , should be 1.1x
01:17:111 (2,3) - same e
00:57:847 (4,5) - very weird switch here imo , here 00:57:374 (3,4) - you start switching back to instrument and then suddenly here 00:58:321 - you map to the vocal so I was expecting the beat to be here 00:58:637 - too since it's also a vocal but it's not so that make it feel weird , would be better to just use 1/1 slider on 00:58:163 (5) - to stick to instrument here and not switch to vocal suddenly like that to make rhythm feel more smooth
01:08:268 (5) - similiar ^

feeling pretty weird with most of the 1/2 slider you use in this diff they kinda make the rhythm sound random cus of the mixed in the rhythm switching here imo , it better to just try to simplify a rhythm here more to make the all the rhythm feel like they are belong to each other , tbh some 1/2 doesn't really need to be mapped here lol imo well like example 00:26:742 (3) - i know you want to emphasis the guitar there but mix this wiith how you map the 1/1 here so simple is just just feel off , simplify it to this http://puu.sh/syooD/8c0fbc5fe4.jpg will surely make the each rhythm here feel smooth like they are belong to each other or something idk how to explain x:

[hard]

00:09:374 (1) - can be extended to blue tick , i think that will help emphasis 00:10:163 (1) - better and make rhythm sound better
00:20:111 (3) - using this near something that looks the same (00:20:426 (4) - ) can make player a bit confused when playing this cus they will have a hard time to figure out when the slider with end , a triplet instead for 00:20:111 (3) - would be fine imo
00:50:584 (3,4) - I think this suppose to be 1/6 , the others also use 1/6 tho

[pkhg]

00:21:847 (4) - can move to around x320 y32 to make the aesthetic of the pattern here 00:21:216 (2,3,4) - looks better
00:24:216 (4) - i think ctlr+g would make the flow here a bit better and help emphasis the change of pitch of the vocal too

[janpai]

00:01:795 (3) - you can nc this to try to distinguish the 1/1 spacing here from the previous 1/2 , that will make this a bit easier to read and it sound like the new vocal line tho
00:10:637 (1,1) - try to adjust them a bit so both tail and head are stacked better for aesthetic ?
00:41:584 (4,5,6) - imo i think move this to around x348 y200 would improve the angle flow here 00:41:426 (3,4,5,6) - a bit
00:43:795 (2,3) - would better to try to make spacing here consistent with 00:41:268 (2,3) - they sound same to each other , you can move (2) to around x80 y148
00:45:058 (2,3) - kinda weird flow here cus how (2) play here and with the rhythm there it make it looks like (2) will flow directly to (2) but it's not so maybe i think it would be better to try to make (2) flow to (3) directly instead that would make flow a bit bettter here imo , try move 3 to around x279 y269 ? or like try something like this for patter lol ( just my preference tho )
SPOILER
01:09:532 (4) - can move to around x488 y240 imo for better aesthetic
01:14:268 - pretty weird to see that this is the only snare that get skipped here , it malke the rhythm a bit inconsistent so would be better to try to map that snare to make thing more consistent , you can try this rhythm
SPOILER
01:16:005 (2) - shouldn't this vocal snap to 1/2 ?

[sotarks]

00:06:690 (5,6) - play a bit weird here somehow this rhythm just feel like it come so suddenly , this kind of rhythm in the music occur here 00:02:900 (5) - but that one you use 1/2 there so why change the rhythm here 00:06:690 (5,6) - so suddenly , it kinda make the rhythm feel off imo , a 1/2 slider would be ok now
00:13:321 (1,2,3) - this pattern idea is a bit inconsistent with 00:10:637 (1,2,3) - and maybe this too 00:18:374 (1,2,3) - , was expected the spacing for (3) to be a bit bigger cus the guitar sound pretty strong here tho lol so perheps maybe you can move 3 to around x172 y56
00:17:268 (2,3) - similiar to above , maybe move 3 to around x388 y136 ? or adjust pattern to your preference lol if you decide to fix
00:43:953 (3) - pretty surprised here imo , 00:41:111 (1,2,1,2,3) - right here you didn't add the note on white tick which is vocal but then you add it here 00:43:953 - which is also vocal if the rhythm in music same i think the rhythm you try to make should be the same too the inconsistent there will just make it feel awkward imo
01:24:532 (1) - i think it better to not nc here to stay consistent with the similiar rhythm and pattern here 01:22:637 (1,2,3) - where you don't nc the slider but nc the circle after that instead

[kanto]

00:04:479 (1,2) - this sound similiar to 00:03:216 (1,2) - so try to make the pattern here similiar too ? would make thing feel a bit more consistent and make thing play more smooth
00:19:479 (1) - can use higher spacing imo cus the cymbal at 1 there sound really strong there so higher spacing should help emphasis it better , try to move 1 to around x212 y152 ?
00:41:268 (2,3,4,5) - 00:43:795 (2,3) - those two pattern are a bit inconsistent to each others , one use stack another one doesn't ,I think make them consistent a bit which will help make the flow better
01:03:532 (6,7) - a bit weird to see the spaing here so high , 7 doesn't sound that strong so it sound weird to use high spacing on that imo so would be better to decrease spacing a bit here , try move 7 to around x157 y232 ?

good luck

Irohas

1,353 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Irohas 2016-12-01T17:07:39+00:00

CelsiusLK wrote:
[easy]
00:57:374 (3,4) - little spacing inconsistent okay
[normal]
00:00:690 (1) - finish okay
00:07:953 (4,1) - try to make them looks symmetry for aesthetic ? both suits, I keep for preferance
00:13:005 (6,1) - spacing inconsistent , should be 1.1x fixed
00:35:742 (6,1) - same ^
00:41:111 (1) - having the sliderend for the emphasized snare here make the rhythm sound weird imo , try something like this ? I think it will emphasis the instrument here better
SPOILER
I think it's fine, cause here we have 2 loud sounds at 00:41:268 - and 00:41:111 - and it fits correctly imo. Also I think this flow is more "accessible" for beginners
00:43:637 (1) - same ^
00:43:005 (7) - also weird rhythm for me , i don't think the red tick there need to be mapped in the this diff somehow , a simple 1/1 slider here make this feel a bit go with the rhythm around it better okay sure
00:44:900 (3) - same ^ we clearly hear a sound on the red here
00:45:847 (5,1) - spacing inconsistent , should be 1.1x fixed
01:17:111 (2,3) - same e ^
00:57:847 (4,5) - very weird switch here imo , here 00:57:374 (3,4) - you start switching back to instrument and then suddenly here 00:58:321 - you map to the vocal so I was expecting the beat to be here 00:58:637 - too since it's also a vocal but it's not so that make it feel weird , would be better to just use 1/1 slider on 00:58:163 (5) - to stick to instrument here and not switch to vocal suddenly like that to make rhythm feel more smooth after 5 or more suggestions about this I think I should fix that lol
01:08:268 (5) - similiar ^ I think here it's fine, and I didn't follow the vocal but rather drums that's why these 1/2 reverse

feeling pretty weird with most of the 1/2 slider you use in this diff they kinda make the rhythm sound random cus of the mixed in the rhythm switching here imo , it better to just try to simplify a rhythm here more to make the all the rhythm feel like they are belong to each other , tbh some 1/2 doesn't really need to be mapped here lol imo well like example 00:26:742 (3) - i know you want to emphasis the guitar there but mix this wiith how you map the 1/1 here so simple is just just feel off , simplify it to this http://puu.sh/syooD/8c0fbc5fe4.jpg will surely make the each rhythm here feel smooth like they are belong to each other or something idk how to explain x: I emphasized those because I used 1/2 at 00:27:847 (5,6) - for the same reasons, so It's better to keep for consistency
[hard]
00:09:374 (1) - can be extended to blue tick , i think that will help emphasis 00:10:163 (1) - better and make rhythm sound better okay
00:20:111 (3) - using this near something that looks the same (00:20:426 (4) - ) can make player a bit confused when playing this cus they will have a hard time to figure out when the slider with end , a triplet instead for 00:20:111 (3) - would be fine imo triplets I don't really want to make a triplet cause it'll surely be too hard to me, and I think spacing 00:19:953 (2,3) - and 00:20:426 (4,1) - will notice the player that they will not be the same lol
00:50:584 (3,4) - I think this suppose to be 1/6 , the others also use 1/6 tho sure
good luck

thanks!

pkhg

2,507 posts

Joined May 2010

pkhg 2016-12-02T06:45:31+00:00

all done

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KantoKun

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KantoKun 2016-12-06T13:20:06+00:00

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Ujimatsu Chiya

2,480 posts

Joined December 2013

Ujimatsu Chiya 2016-12-09T06:40:58+00:00

Kanto, I can't stop playing yours
cool work xD

Irohas

1,353 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Irohas 2016-12-09T14:14:06+00:00

eINess wrote:
Kanto, I can't stop playing yours
cool work xD

same

KantoKun

1,114 posts

Joined December 2011

KantoKun 2016-12-10T22:44:07+00:00

eINess wrote:
Kanto, I can't stop playing yours
cool work xD

wow , thanks so much XD

Janpai

1,288 posts

Joined March 2015

Janpai 2016-12-11T03:14:12+00:00

CelsiusLK wrote:
[janpai]
00:01:795 (3) - you can nc this to try to distinguish the 1/1 spacing here from the previous 1/2 , that will make this a bit easier to read and it sound like the new vocal line tho I think the spacing did the thing here so no need for NC
00:10:637 (1,1) - try to adjust them a bit so both tail and head are stacked better for aesthetic ? it's hard though I tried but I can't xD
00:41:584 (4,5,6) - imo i think move this to around x348 y200 would improve the angle flow here 00:41:426 (3,4,5,6) - a bit sure
00:43:795 (2,3) - would better to try to make spacing here consistent with 00:41:268 (2,3) - they sound same to each other , you can move (2) to around x80 y148 okay
00:45:058 (2,3) - kinda weird flow here cus how (2) play here and with the rhythm there it make it looks like (2) will flow directly to (2) but it's not so maybe i think it would be better to try to make (2) flow to (3) directly instead that would make flow a bit bettter here imo , try move 3 to around x279 y269 ? or like try something like this for patter lol ( just my preference tho )
SPOILER
did sth on my own
01:09:532 (4) - can move to around x488 y240 imo for better aesthetic okay
01:14:268 - pretty weird to see that this is the only snare that get skipped here , it malke the rhythm a bit inconsistent so would be better to try to map that snare to make thing more consistent , you can try this rhythm
SPOILER
fixed
01:16:005 (2) - shouldn't this vocal snap to 1/2 ? yeah, Nya convince me to change this but well it is more easier to play on 1/2

thank you so much! and sorry for late reply xD too busy irl

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SkinnyJommy

788 posts

Joined January 2014

SkinnyJommy 2016-12-24T04:20:01+00:00

i like

iYiyo

1,107 posts

Joined January 2014

iYiyo 2017-01-12T17:42:16+00:00

c'mon, less good luck and more call me back >.<

don't take it seriously tho xd

Seijiro

osu! Alumni

3,438 posts

Joined April 2013

Seijiro 2017-01-17T10:12:42+00:00

5 mod project, from the past

General

why do you have storyboard hitsounds? You should really not use them. Just no
You should find an alternative rhythm if you can't use the one you used on the diffs above, you know...

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Kanto's Memories

00:03:216 (1,2,3,4) - the way you spaced these beats make it so that the strong beats on 1,2 become less important and kind of fade out into the map. Even just a stack between 3,4 can work, but the best option is surely to reduce spacing between 2 and 3, like this
00:05:742 (1,2) - please be consistent in your way to place 1/4 snaps after sliders. It's inconsistent with 00:04:795 (3,4,5) - so I can easily read that one as a 1/2 beat once I see it. (no, 00:05:426 (7,8,1) - the fact you did a different thing here is another matter, since this is different: it's circle + slider, while the other one is just a circle)
00:20:900 - well, I appreciate that you reduced SV from here on, but when I see spacings like 00:22:953 (3,4) - it's just no. If you do that you changed SV for nothing in the end. For proper expression you should also work with a smaller DS
00:26:347 (2) - I'd rather remove this beat, it feels heavily overmapped or in any case, it is not similar to 00:28:084 (6) - for sure.
If you DO delete that make sure to not leave 00:25:953 (1,3) - as they are, because they will be misleading (spacing is the same as 00:15:847 (1,2) - on the playfield for example), so add a bit more of spacing
00:37:637 (2,3,4) - go check 00:04:795 (3,4,5) -
00:41:111 - you missed again the slight change into overall emphasis of the song here. You should be reducing spacing and SV again. As it is now this part is way too similar to other parts where the rhythm was truly more intense
00:45:847 (4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - ok... it plays fine, but you're ignoring the song. You previously mapped the drum quite well, but in this section you seem to be following vocals too. That's totally fine, but the way you do it feels not so convincing, I mean, you keep circling ccw with the same angle (00:46:163 (1,2) - ) over and over for this section. Is that it all? You should put more thought in what you do imo, but that's up to you I guess =3=
00:53:742 (1,2,3,4) - this is way stronger than the other 2 squares so consider increasing spacing even more (twice as much as you think)
01:07:795 (2,3) - 3 is way stronger than 2 in the song (notice vocals and drum there) but you use the same spacing on both. What happens is that 3 loses emphasis thanks to the jump on 2 and that feels not so right to me. Maybe stack 2 where you have 01:07:163 (5) - but the whole pattern could receive a general cleaning imo (aka, more thinking and planning)
I lost the count of how many times I saw 01:18:374 (3,4,5) - this sort of angle and movement.
This sort of thing is like fast food: you can eat it anytime and it won't bore you that much since it's tasty, the problem is that it feels like recently I see only fast food around =w=
Where are my vegetables??? it's actually not a joke. Let's see if you get the reference :p

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Sotarks' Expert

heh... rhythm and emphasis are pretty good. I could just say that aesthehtic choices could have been better (stuff like 00:51:216 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - doesn't look so nice for me, but that's just personal)
Maybe make Kanto take a look at this to see how rhythm and emphasis of the song is done in a more appropriate way (above all the things I pointed out) :v

01:26:426 (1) - ah, maybe remove that whistle from there, it's a bit too noisy considering the ending =3= (some drum whistles are not the best choice imo but they work fine so it's not such a big problem)

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Janpai's Insane

00:01:795 (3,4) - maybe move these 2 a bit more to the right. The current spacing feels like the passage 2,3 is actually a 1/2. Reference
00:08:742 (2,3,4,5,1) - I checked many times to be sure and it looks like this diff too is lacking visual/aesthetic structure. Seriously guys, just because you know how to manage flow and rhythm well it doesn't mean you can throw objects to the screen =w= (this partly goes for Sotarks too)
00:22:005 (1,2,3) - similar spacing problem I mentioned in the first point of this mod. Using a bit more of DS between 2 and 3 would help to not create a "still" part
00:30:532 (4) - what do you think about a couple of circles instead? Something like this maybe
00:41:426 (3) - if you remove beats like this from this section it will feel more insane-ish, trust me. You're using too much note density here, the song is calm too
01:04:953 (1) - this shape triggers me every time tbh
00:51:216 (1,2,3,4) - just to point out one more reference regarding that comment on aesthetic structure. That tells me nothing =3=
01:10:005 (1,2,3,4) - I noticed that in this last part of the map you use one combo to follow well vocals, while the other starts on drums but overall it is dull because later on vocals come in play again and it feels like you ignore them (because you actually DO ignore them). Small change of life: 01:10:795 (3) - circles work better
01:13:321 (3) - kinda teh same ^, this time it is to better follow drums instead: circles instead

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pkhg's Insane

00:02:032 (2) - maybe remove the whistle from this, so you let the player hear the actual guitar sound behind it, otherwise it feels a bit random
00:10:321 (2,3) - minor flow improvement: ctrl + G ?
00:48:374 (4) - well, considering the vocals there it feels a bit strange to have a slider imo. Pattern reference
01:21:216 (6,7) - ah, this angle is really large so the emphasis on 6 is a bit poor. Maybe something like this might help a bit
if you slightly reduce 01:25:953 (4,5) - and slightly increase 01:26:268 (7,8) - spacing-wise, you create a better effect imo

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Hard

00:00:690 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - hitsounding here is a bit overdoing it. Those drum whistles are sort of a pain to hear so frequently.
00:02:584 - 00:03:532 - 00:04:163 - remove them all (they're all slider tails)
00:04:479 (1,3) - you could have worked a bit more here and made a better expression of the song by using circles imo. The other option would be to delete 00:04:795 (2,4) - and re-arrange the rest a bit
00:20:426 (4) - since you have also 00:20:111 (3) - nearby it might be strange to have two different lengths one near each other. Maybe use 2 circles on 4 first and then use the slider: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7080288
00:22:479 (4,5,6) - this rhythm feels quite intense for this part, not to mention it sorts of ignore vocals completely (which was the main instrument till now in this part). Suggestion
00:28:005 (5) - if you fix above make sure to delete this one too for consistency
00:32:584 (2) - maybe remove that clap from tail, it's pretty loud imo. Well, it's not that it doesn't fit into the music, but rather that it feels too much // 00:35:111 (2) - 00:37:637 (2) -
00:43:005 (5,6) - converting one of these into circles would help creating contrast with 00:43:637 (1) - . The way it is now it feels like 00:43:637 (1) - is a bit faded out in the rhythm. 00:41:111 (1) - this one felt way better thanks to the break before it (which created indeed contrast)
00:47:426 (5) - I guess you need to keep under control your hitsounding :p Once again it feels too much. Maybe remove whistles from repeat and tail
00:53:742 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - let's tackle down a few problems here:
00:53:742 (1,2,3) - I do understand you wanted to create more emphasis here by placing more beats, but 2 is not there at all, it just ruins the rhythm. Instead you should be trying out something like this, this way you make it consistent for all beats in the measure.
00:55:005 (1,2,3,4) - this one instead should create some contrast with what happened in the previous pattern. The easiest fix is turning 00:55:795 (4) - into circles, but you should also mind the visual pattern and the structure, which might increase expression by a lot if you work on it.
00:58:321 (4) - even your hitsounding is saying "here's an important beat", but you wasted it by placing a slider tail on the white tick. The best option here would be to convert 00:57:847 (2,3) - into a 1/1 slider and 00:58:321 (4) - into circles
00:57:847 (2) - btw, the drum whistle is not necessary here // 01:00:374 (2) - 01:02:900 (2) - 01:10:479 (2) - 01:13:005 (2) - 01:22:005 (2,3) -
After checking a second time I came to the conclusion that the drum clap should be a normal hitnormal too
01:03:216 (3,4) - holy, too loud. These are not necessary either, unless you want to totally cover the song and don't let me hear the song :p // 01:13:321 (3,4) - 01:18:374 (3,4) - 01:20:900 (3,4) - 01:23:426 (3,4) -
01:18:690 (5) - remove everything you got on this one and just place a normal hitnormal on the head // 01:21:216 (5) - same, but leave the clap you have on tail // 01:23:742 (5) -
01:24:532 (2) - normal hitnormal on tail
01:07:953 - heh... rhythm is again a little mess. Were you listening to the song properly? x)
You have a couple options here: option1 option2
Notice how the first white tick is using a slider in both, that's because that's a strong beat that you previously ignored via contrast: you had a circle on 01:07:953 - and a slider on 01:08:111 - . This last one is a weak beat and by using a slider on it you stole emphasis from both the previous and next white tick, that's why it didn't work so well
01:25:637 (2,3) - same sort of thing is happening here. The best rhythm is actually to ctrl + g these, like this

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Normal

00:27:847 (5,6) - you might consider do keep consistency by using a 1/1 slider instead to cover the drum beats you mapped till now
00:51:216 (1,2) - clean shapes but they look random tbh. Idk what theme might be good for this song, but try to think up one and fix shapes accordingly please
00:55:005 (3,4,5,1,2) - idk if you noticed the huge difference in note density between those 2 combos.
Converting 00:55:795 (5) - into a circle only and adding a circle at 00:56:742 - might fix this inconsistency but the pattern itself could be better for sure
01:00:690 (6,7) - if you follow vocals you shouldn't be overmapping those slider tails like that imo. Just circles is enough (hitsounding is also at blame here, holy those claps) // 01:05:742 (5,6) - 01:10:795 (6,7) -
copy hitsounds from the Hard once you fix it

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Easy

00:29:268 (2) - I really don't like how the white tick is ignored here. I know it's for the sake of simplifying the rhythm, but oh god. I'd rather have a 1/2 slider from 00:29:426 - instead, at lest it will follow rhythm better
00:29:268 (2,1) - and no, these overlaps are horrible for beginner diffs. Please avoid them

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Ok, generally speaking every diff, more or less, could really have a better visual structure.
I refer to how aesthetics (slider shapes, pattern shapes, slider art) should match across the map and not feel so random at times.
I would say "do not present slider arts if you're not good at them" but it is also true that unless you practice you can't make them properly, that's why you should sometimes take a song at random and try to experiment with this stuff, because as it is now it surely is not so "up to standards" (not for me at least)

References:
00:51:216 (1,2) - normal
00:00:690 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - hard
pkhg's diff doesn't have heavy points in which I can see any particular visual structure lack, but in general the map might gain more structure if you wanted
00:23:426 (1,2,3,1) - Janpai
00:08:900 (1,2,3,4) - Sotarks (+ what I mentioned in your mod)
00:01:953 (1,2,3,4) - Kanto

Irohas

1,353 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Irohas 2017-01-17T13:53:15+00:00

MrSergio wrote:
5 mod project, from the past

General

why do you have storyboard hitsounds? You should really not use them. Just no ok removed
You should find an alternative rhythm if you can't use the one you used on the diffs above, you know...

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Hard

00:00:690 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - hitsounding here is a bit overdoing it. Those drum whistles are sort of a pain to hear so frequently.
00:02:584 - 00:03:532 - 00:04:163 - remove them all (they're all slider tails) I don't think that is really overdoing, since we heard clearly whisltes sound behind
00:04:479 (1,3) - you could have worked a bit more here and made a better expression of the song by using circles imo. The other option would be to delete 00:04:795 (2,4) - and re-arrange the rest a bit I don't really want to use circles in this kind of "calm" part, I find that "overdoing" imo
00:20:426 (4) - since you have also 00:20:111 (3) - nearby it might be strange to have two different lengths one near each other. Maybe use 2 circles on 4 first and then use the slider: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7080288 okay
00:22:479 (4,5,6) - this rhythm feels quite intense for this part, not to mention it sorts of ignore vocals completely (which was the main instrument till now in this part). Suggestion okay
00:28:005 (5) - if you fix above make sure to delete this one too for consistency okay
00:32:584 (2) - maybe remove that clap from tail, it's pretty loud imo. Well, it's not that it doesn't fit into the music, but rather that it feels too much // 00:35:111 (2) - 00:37:637 (2) - okay sure
00:43:005 (5,6) - converting one of these into circles would help creating contrast with 00:43:637 (1) - . The way it is now it feels like 00:43:637 (1) - is a bit faded out in the rhythm. 00:41:111 (1) - this one felt way better thanks to the break before it (which created indeed contrast) a bit as 00:04:479 (1,3)
00:47:426 (5) - I guess you need to keep under control your hitsounding :p Once again it feels too much. Maybe remove whistles from repeat and tail okay
00:53:742 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - let's tackle down a few problems here:
00:53:742 (1,2,3) - I do understand you wanted to create more emphasis here by placing more beats, but 2 is not there at all, it just ruins the rhythm. Instead you should be trying out something like this, this way you make it consistent for all beats in the measure.
00:55:005 (1,2,3,4) - this one instead should create some contrast with what happened in the previous pattern. The easiest fix is turning 00:55:795 (4) - into circles, but you should also mind the visual pattern and the structure, which might increase expression by a lot if you work on it. actually, first of all I voluntary made a easier rhythm at 00:53:742 (1,2,3) - to emphasize better, the part from 00:55:005 (1,2,3,4) - cause I think the density of the song is not totally the same and deserves to have a more complicated rhythm, I hope you understand
00:58:321 (4) - even your hitsounding is saying "here's an important beat", but you wasted it by placing a slider tail on the white tick. The best option here would be to convert 00:57:847 (2,3) - into a 1/1 slider and 00:58:321 (4) - into circles okay sure
00:57:847 (2) - btw, the drum whistle is not necessary here // 01:00:374 (2) - 01:02:900 (2) - 01:10:479 (2) - 01:13:005 (2) - 01:22:005 (2,3) - there's whistles sounds D:
After checking a second time I came to the conclusion that the drum clap should be a normal hitnormal too
01:03:216 (3,4) - holy, too loud. These are not necessary either, unless you want to totally cover the song and don't let me hear the song :p // 01:13:321 (3,4) - 01:18:374 (3,4) - 01:20:900 (3,4) - 01:23:426 (3,4) - but there is clearly whistles sounds here D:
01:18:690 (5) - remove everything you got on this one and just place a normal hitnormal on the head // 01:21:216 (5) - same, but leave the clap you have on tail // 01:23:742 (5) - soft-hitclap would fit better
01:24:532 (2) - normal hitnormal on tail ^ but hitwhistle
01:07:953 - heh... rhythm is again a little mess. Were you listening to the song properly? x)
You have a couple options here: option1 option2
Notice how the first white tick is using a slider in both, that's because that's a strong beat that you previously ignored via contrast: you had a circle on 01:07:953 - and a slider on 01:08:111 - . This last one is a weak beat and by using a slider on it you stole emphasis from both the previous and next white tick, that's why it didn't work so well tried to follow vocals making a rhythm a bit as 01:06:374 (1,2,3,4) -, and I think both suits because we clearly heard vocals at 01:07:953 (2) -
01:25:637 (2,3) - same sort of thing is happening here. The best rhythm is actually to ctrl + g these, like this fixed this one

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Normal

00:27:847 (5,6) - you might consider do keep consistency by using a 1/1 slider instead to cover the drum beats you mapped till now okay
00:51:216 (1,2) - clean shapes but they look random tbh. Idk what theme might be good for this song, but try to think up one and fix shapes accordingly please did
00:55:005 (3,4,5,1,2) - idk if you noticed the huge difference in note density between those 2 combos.
Converting 00:55:795 (5) - into a circle only and adding a circle at 00:56:742 - might fix this inconsistency but the pattern itself could be better for sure sound at 00:55:953 - is too strong being skipped imo, I think my current rhythm is better
01:00:690 (6,7) - if you follow vocals you shouldn't be overmapping those slider tails like that imo. Just circles is enough (hitsounding is also at blame here, holy those claps) // 01:05:742 (5,6) - 01:10:795 (6,7) - b]i'm not following vocals here[/b]
copy hitsounds from the Hard once you fix it okay

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Easy

00:29:268 (2) - I really don't like how the white tick is ignored here. I know it's for the sake of simplifying the rhythm, but oh god. I'd rather have a 1/2 slider from 00:29:426 - instead, at lest it will follow rhythm better mmh, I don't really think, since the sound at 00:29:584 - is far more important than 00:29:742 -. Skip this sound would engender a kind of confusing and i guess, beginners should find that more readable and more fun to play.
00:29:268 (2,1) - and no, these overlaps are horrible for beginner diffs. Please avoid them only discussed with Chaoslitz about that, and no change

________________

Ok, generally speaking every diff, more or less, could really have a better visual structure.
I refer to how aesthetics (slider shapes, pattern shapes, slider art) should match across the map and not feel so random at times.
I would say "do not present slider arts if you're not good at them" but it is also true that unless you practice you can't make them properly, that's why you should sometimes take a song at random and try to experiment with this stuff, because as it is now it surely is not so "up to standards" (not for me at least)

References:
00:51:216 (1,2) - normal
00:00:690 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - hard
pkhg's diff doesn't have heavy points in which I can see any particular visual structure lack, but in general the map might gain more structure if you wanted
00:23:426 (1,2,3,1) - Janpai
00:08:900 (1,2,3,4) - Sotarks (+ what I mentioned in your mod)
00:01:953 (1,2,3,4) - Kanto

thanks Sergio!

Janpai

1,288 posts

Joined March 2015

Janpai 2017-01-20T10:37:07+00:00

MrSergio wrote:
Janpai's Insane

00:01:795 (3,4) - maybe move these 2 a bit more to the right. The current spacing feels like the passage 2,3 is actually a 1/2. Reference okay
00:08:742 (2,3,4,5,1) - I checked many times to be sure and it looks like this diff too is lacking visual/aesthetic structure. Seriously guys, just because you know how to manage flow and rhythm well it doesn't mean you can throw objects to the screen =w= (this partly goes for Sotarks too) Maybe you're right but this diff is mapped a long time ago and was supposed to be a bonus diff, for this section I think this is the best structure I can make unless you can suggest one which seems better than this and I'll try to improve stuffs
00:22:005 (1,2,3) - similar spacing problem I mentioned in the first point of this mod. Using a bit more of DS between 2 and 3 would help to not create a "still" part I don't understand what you mean here, these rhythms don't have 1/2 gap like the other one and it emphasizes the vocals there and I wanna maintain the shorter distance since it's calm
00:30:532 (4) - what do you think about a couple of circles instead? Something like this maybe yep, but did different on placement
00:41:426 (3) - if you remove beats like this from this section it will feel more insane-ish, trust me. You're using too much note density here, the song is calm too It's not like I don't place that for nothing, it;s for vocals and that's why it have smaller DS and also I think there's no problem since this is higher-tier insane
01:04:953 (1) - this shape triggers me every time tbh did sth, I'm really bad at shapes
00:51:216 (1,2,3,4) - just to point out one more reference regarding that comment on aesthetic structure. That tells me nothing =3= changed but idk if it'll satisfy you
01:10:005 (1,2,3,4) - I noticed that in this last part of the map you use one combo to follow well vocals, while the other starts on drums but overall it is dull because later on vocals come in play again and it feels like you ignore them (because you actually DO ignore them). Small change of life: 01:10:795 (3) - circles work better If you're pertaining to sections like 01:08:742 (7,1) - (well it's the only one) 1/1 slider would be really awkward for me because that piano sound being ignored would be a lot of triggered feeling so I better choose being snappy on this part cuz why not, vocals are strong enough to make it one. and yeah change to circle
01:13:321 (3) - kinda teh same ^, this time it is to better follow drums instead: circles instead okay

feel free to delete my diff if it's a bother and find another ppl to do since I'm not really confident with it now

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Irohas

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Topic Starter

Irohas 2017-01-20T14:00:44+00:00

Janpai wrote:
feel free to delete my diff if it's a bother and find another ppl to do since I'm not really confident with it now

it's as you want

KantoKun

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KantoKun 2017-01-20T16:30:05+00:00

littie busy, i will fix soon

Koiyuki

Beatmap Nominator

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Koiyuki 2017-01-21T16:09:44+00:00

Just some complaints.
My personal suggestions.
Highly recommended.
Unrankable, you have to fix it.

Hard

00:25:321 (5) - add drum addition on the head?

pkhg's Insane

00:28:479 (1,3) - the only overlap slider I think I have to mention in the diff because it totally covers the other, stagger a bit like others(such as 00:24:690 (1,2,1,2) - )?

Janpai's Insane

00:55:637 (5) - nc?
00:49:321 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - testplayed and this part makes me feel a bit weird, well it's just a feeling
01:26:426 (1) - would be better if stack at the end of 01:25:637 (2) - imo

Sotarks' Expert

sry i cant understand your logic of placing circles, maybe it's cool and flows well for you but it really dazzles my eye.

Kanto's Memories

00:29:584 (6) - i think drum clap may fit better
00:45:847 (4,3) - nazi stack
01:15:847 (1,2) - place them here? it's more fun imo. also you may do some small changes for the following notes.
SPOILER

gl with the set

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