[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

Bubble Check

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  [General]

1. Song Setup & Metadata
   Song setup is fine and also metadata is fine too http://manbow.nothing.sh/event/event.cg ... 2&event=96
2. Audio & Hitsounds
   192kbps audio is good . . . and not contains any delayed hitsound (+5ms) and all of hitsound is above 100ms
3. BPM & Timing
   all fine owo
4. Background
   1366x768 background (16:9) screen, fine
   
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   Since i already modded this long ago and the pattern itself has well-made, so i wiill only point out some issues here
   
   [Stars]
5. 00:03:610 - not going too add LN here ? actually it have same feelings like 00:01:002 - >w<
6. 00:32:306 (32306|0,32469|0,32632|0) - this might be a little confuse to press imo, you can reduce a note on this 00:32:306 - since they're not really have a big instrument impact like 00:31:328 -
7. 00:40:621 (40621|2,40947|1) - hmm it just an echoes from previous impact, maybe you can delete that . . . up to you btw, the sound is still clear too >w<)b ///// 00:41:273 (41273|1,41600|1) - here same sound, keep
8. 00:42:985 (42985|2) - this note come too late from current piano sound, it should be snapped on 1/12 for more accurate 00:42:958 - put in on here
9. 01:42:904 (102904|3,103067|3,103230|3) - i feel this part should be have a different taste imo . . . try to move 01:42:904 (102904|3) - into the second column
10. 01:44:045 (104045|3,104208|3,104371|3) - owo same reason as above, please try my suggestion http://puu.sh/qg4hX/ebb217969e.jpg ><)/
11. 02:00:023 (120023|2) - you can end that LN on here 02:02:469 - yea the long sound was physically end on that, like on Leah's diff
12. 02:11:763 (131763|3) - and 02:13:067 (133067|0) - you can end at this time on each 02:12:904 - 02:14:208 - same reason as above ^
13. 02:27:089 (147089|3,147252|3) - same as my mod on 00:32:306 -
14. 02:37:768 (157768|1) - this note come too late it should be snapped on 1/12 again this time 02:37:741 -
15. 03:37:687 - hmm, maybe you already know what the issue on here XD yea it's actually same as my previous mod here
16. 03:53:176 - add LN here, it have same feelings like 03:50:567 -

waaa beautiful song and map here
also

Critical_Star wrote:

beautiful mapper here

>///< ) /

call me back ~

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

Bubble Check

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• 
  [General]

1. Song Setup & Metadata
   Song setup is fine and also metadata is fine too http://manbow.nothing.sh/event/event.cg ... 2&event=96
2. Audio & Hitsounds
   192kbps audio is good . . . and not contains any delayed hitsound (+5ms) and all of hitsound is above 100ms
3. BPM & Timing
   all fine owo
4. Background
   1366x768 background (16:9) screen, fine
   
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   Since i already modded this long ago and the pattern itself has well-made, so i wiill only point out some issues here
   [Leah's Night]
5. Maybe you need to change this diffname ==> Leah's Night to Leah's Normal . . . idk your current diffname is still acceptable or not, according to this newest issue https://osu.ppy.sh/s/226552
6. 01:26:600 (86600|2,86763|3,87089|2,87252|3) - i feel that section have different sound/pitch right now . . . then it should be different coloumn this time, it just similar like 01:26:110 (86110|3,86273|2) -
7. 01:32:632 (92632|3,92958|3) - same reason as above ^ you can try my suggestion here http://puu.sh/qg3ab/f1b01b816e.jpg
8. 01:36:545 - add LN like on this part ? 01:26:110 (86110|0) - it's similar phase and also please keep it consistent
9. 01:58:719 (118719|0,120023|1) - swap this column for better pitch, and also 02:02:632 - you can try this http://puu.sh/qg3pL/ac35753548.jpg it feels more better imo
10. 02:33:937 (153937|3,154263|2) - please convert this single note into LN, because that part is still have same sound like 02:33:284 (153284|1,154589|1,155241|3) - it's more better if you put that on same feelings too
11. 02:45:676 (165676|3) - i can't understand this LN . . . it's not contains any same sound like 02:46:980 (166980|0) - and even the background music doesn't show the long sound too in this part, you've better to delete that LN
12. 03:05:241 (185241|0) - end this LN on this timing 03:06:545 - to focusing the piano sound . . . btw, it's actually same as you did in this part 01:11:763 -
13. 03:20:893 (200893|1,201056|2,201382|1,201545|2) - remember they're have different sound, consider to arrange that into different column too

waaa beautiful song and map here
also

Critical_Star wrote:

beautiful mapper here

>///< ) /

call me back ~

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

Bubbled congratulations !

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

Bubbled congratulations !

genkicho wrote:

FastMod
OMG Nice song... this reminds me when first time i play unturned in winter PEI

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IamKwaN wrote:

Source has to be there, similar to full version anime openings/endings having the anime name as Source.

KittyAdventure wrote:

Why you not add BMS to source like this map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/458456

IamKwaN wrote:

Source has to be there, similar to full version anime openings/endings having the anime name as Source.

Source link: p/5160397#p5160397

IamKwaN wrote:

Yea, please have BMS as the Source. Poke me when you are done o/

Or1g1n wrote:

Guys, why full version should have source, if it doesn't?