1. Hard (3.53 stars, 264 notes)
2. Insane (4.99 stars, 335 notes)
3. Jumping Heart (5.43 stars, 332 notes)
4. Normal (2.39 stars, 167 notes)

Planecakes wrote:

My first mod...
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Meep

This diff looks pretty good btw

00:26:075 (7) - NC [/color]
00:26:150 (1) - REMOVE NC fixed
00:34:625 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Most boring / ugliest thing i have seen in my entire osu life fixed
00:44:525 (3) - Looks bad fixed
00:26:675 (2,3,4) - This part is unrakableI'll leave this be till I get more complaints on that one,sorry.
You should rename Meep to something love live-ish

Insane

00:07:025 (2) - Ugly slider somewhat fixed
00:54:275 (4,5,6) - too close fixed

Hard

00:54:275 (4,5,6) - Beginners can't singletap https://osu.ppy.sh/s/85040 <-- they can here though

Normal

00:05:975 (4) - Ugly [/color]
I can't mod, lol

Gl with ranking.

[ R e i m u ] wrote:

Here to mod your two highest difficulties ♥

Insane

00:01:175 (1) - spacing of this slider is very SLIGHTLY too close to the next slider, comparative to the rest

00:13:475 (3) - this is closer to the 1 than the 2, not sure if intentional or not

00:21:575 (1) - if you were completing the box with this slider, it could be more to the left and slightly down

00:25:175 (4) - consider remapping this 4 somewhere else, the phrase after works really well if the 4 was in a more closely resembling spacing to them

00:25:175 - also, nc here, and keep it through reverse slider, and then nc here 00:26:375 (2)

00:35:675 (7) - again, if you were making a shape, this 7 could be more to the right and down slightly

00:53:825 (2) - this overlap is awkward, as this is the only time you do a 1/2 snap overlap in this section particularly, move it out from underneath the slider

00:59:375 (3,4,5,6) - the 3 is very slightly too far away from the rest of the combo

01:13:775 (2,3,4) - really awkward pattern (mainly the 4 spacing). Maybe move the 2 closer to the 1 to make a stair pattern jump?

Other than that, some personal choices I don't agree with, but it doesn't detract from the map
Fixed 'em all.

Jumping Heart

00:10:325 (4) - preferably, fit this into a more symmetrical triangle towards the slider, helps cursor flow

00:16:400 (1) - nc here is awkward, you should nc here instead 00:16:775 (3)

00:26:075 (1,2,3,4) - consider bring this stacked stream from a slightly more horizontal level, looks awkward against the curve of the slider

00:34:625 (1,2) - spacing here is really uncharacteristic of the big jumps so far, consider moving the 1 back a bit to make it less suffocating

00:34:625 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - overall this pattern is pretty weird to play and to look at, not sure what could fix it, but some remapping away from the bottom of the screen could help Im seriously running out of ideas for this one so idk x3

01:07:925 (4) - this pattern could flow better if the 4 was more downwards (more in shape I suppose)

01:19:325 (1) - ctrl + g this slider


Tricky difficulty, but I could tell you put a lot more spacing effort in this map, it looks pretty great thanks

Hopefully this helps ♥

Ankanogradiel wrote:

SPOILER

Insane
00:15:500 (1) - spinner should end at 00:16:175 - i believe it sounds better and is more confortable overall
00:25:175 (1) - add clap on these object
00:46:025 (4) - remove clap on these objects
00:45:575 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - clap:no,yes,yes,no,yes,yes,yes,no,yes,no,yes,yes
merge the two kiai time into one

Jumping Heart dif
00:25:175 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - maybe move this pattern a little to the right and down
00:40:475 (5) - remove clap at the end of this slider i believve it sounds better
00:47:825 (3) - lower this one a bit

Fixed em all,nice mod c;

Troll wrote:

hi from #modreqs!

Normal

In general, I feel like you need to space things more (or less) depending on how far they are time-wise. Just my personal philosophy, but easy/normal maps should follow the most obvious rhythm so a beginner can easily read it and retain focus on the music. Of course, you don't have to agree with me, but right now I don't know if this normal is playable unless you focus on the approach circles.
00:21:575 (1) - This combo needs to be broken up (maybe at 8?), and in general I think its a bit too difficult rhythmically for a 2 star map. If you plan on keeping the rhythm, I would just remap it and adjust the spacing, especially the distance between 3-4, 7-8-9, 10-11. Also, I don't really feel 11 and 12 in the music
00:31:625 (2,3) - Move these further apart.
01:02:375 (1,2,3) - Spacing here makes 2-3 hard to read.
01:07:175 (1,2) - Maybe make these just repeat once.
01:20:225 (6) - Move closer to 5.
01:22:025 (10) - Should be closer to 9 and further from 11.
01:23:375 (12) - New combo, here or somewhere else in this combo.

Hard

Overall, I like this diff a lot, so not much to say here.
00:09:725 (1) - What's this new combo for?
00:15:500 (1) - I'd end this at 00:16:475.
00:19:775 (1) - Remove new combo

Insane

The following are just suggestions, feel free to ignore anything I say about this diff. Also, AR 8.8 might be slow.
00:14:600 (2,3,4) - This thing is hard to read.
00:39:575 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Seems kinda overmapped to me.
01:06:050 (1,2,3) - This is kinda awkward to play. I'd have 1 end at 01:05:825 and move 2,3 back so 3 starts at 01:05:975 and make 3 longer.
01:09:575 (1,2,3) - I would make this just a longer slider starting at 1.
01:26:375 (1,2) - It's hard to tell which direction these go if the end isn't visible.

Jumping Heart

AR 9 might be a bit too slow for this map.
00:27:275 (3,4) -
00:37:625 (4,1) - This jump is pretty big, considering its the slow section.
00:46:475 (1,2) - Shouldn't this jump be shorter than 00:46:925 (1,2) ? I would make them progressively farther apart.
00:54:875 (8,9,1) - I'd either delete the 9 or reverse 8.
01:23:375 (1) - Remove new combo, add new combo at 01:23:975 (4), then maybe remove new combo at 01:25:025 (1).
01:26:375 (1,2) - Same as in Insane diff.

Good luck!
Thanks for the mod,fixed most of the stuff,I like the suggestions as well, have made changes

MikasaSerket wrote:

Hard:
On 00:56:375 (5) - move the slider to x:352 and y:96 so the it doesn't underlap the slider previous to it. fixed
Isn't 00:47:975 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - a little bit hard to play for a hard difficulty. The small doubles themselves aren't the problem, it's just how the doubles are placed directly underneath the sliders which sort of blocks the view. Either change the way they are structured or I would just go for a rhythm like this but just make bigger jumps.fixed

Toy around with the spacing on 00:50:975 - because of how each of the sliders underlap each other looks awkward visually but plays fine. fixed
The way the sliders of 01:08:675 (6,7,8) - are going up vertically all in a linear line plays poorly and looks visually bad. Try something similar to this;
fixed
Make 01:10:175 (3) - more even;
fixed
01:28:625 - Don't start the spinner on here because you missed a note that would fit the vocals fine. Instead, put a hitcircle on 01:28:625 - and move the spinner to start on 01:28:775 -fixed

Normal:
00:07:175 (1) - The spinner begins too early for a normal and is too close to 00:07:025 (7) - . The player (In this case, new player) cannot react fast enough to spin the slider right after the hitcircle. However the player may be able to reach a bonus because of how the spinner is long enough.fixed
For 00:22:025 (2,3) - it's hard to read for a newer player in this case. Newer players might think that 00:22:475 (3) - is supposed to play right after 00:22:025 (2) - because of the underlap between them. Change the pattern so that this does not happen.fixed
Same problems occur with 00:23:225 (5,1) - ^fixed
New combo for 00:32:375 (8) - The combos go up too long (Seriously, it goes up to 12)fixed x3
Don't start the slider for 00:34:100 (1) - on a blue tick, the blue tick isn't the problem, it just starts too early for a normal.fixed
Fix blanket for 00:53:375 (2) - Around the end of the slider it starts to get uneven.fixed
This doesn't even start on the vocals, 00:59:075 (1) - what is it mapped to? The newer players can't really determine that. The reverse slider should begin on 00:59:225 - because that is where the vocals start.aaaand fixed

Weriko wrote:

:p

Jumping Hearth

00:03:875 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - I think you should keep the distance snap here
00:12:425 (2,3,4) - distance fixed
00:19:475 (2) - maybe move this a bit so it flows betterfixed
00:20:825 (7) - maybe add a note herefixed
00:25:775 (5,6,1) - not sure but maybe distancefixed
00:30:275 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this distance change was well made I thinkthx
00:34:625 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - you already know.. distance :cfixed
00:45:575 (2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I kinda like this, but I think it would be better if you put all the double circles in one side and the single ones in the other sideI didnt fix this so that the players would have an easier time doign the jumps
00:49:475 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - maybe make this change a bit lowerfixed
00:59:225 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think its better if you put the closest circle first, and then the one that is far (change 00:59:675 (4) - with 00:59:375 (2) - better imho)fixed

Okay... I think you need to work on the distance between circles.... it feels a bit random tbh (always remember that I'm a newb :p and I don't know if it was intentional or something, or I might just be wrong with those things I said ;-;)

Insane

00:10:925 (5,6,7,8,9) - was this a progressive distancing?yes
00:14:975 (4) - this might be a bit confusing, maybe a .5 snap fixed
00:16:625 (2) - maybe a note here?fixed
00:25:175 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - changes... specially for the diff

somewhat fixed

I repeat... there are some distance changes that don't make sense at all... imo.... but I'm not sure :p
rhythm is good overall :p
Its kk c; thanks for modding



hope this helps!!!

Good luck!

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  Jumping Heart:
  
  00:02:975 (1) - suggestion- rotate this -55° and make the shape equal to 00:02:075 (3) - ? so you don't overlap it with 00:03:875 (4) - and looks better imo
  00:04:025 (5,9) - pls avoid overlaping these, I played this map before and I think this triplet 00:04:175 (6,7,8) - was stacked, I think it looks better and cleaner, but if you want to keep it like this, avoid the overlap with the 9
  00:05:975 (1,2) - move them further, considering the spacing of the other circles, these are too close
  00:10:700 (6,1) - maybe.. ctrl+h and move to its actual position (just moving it a bit to the left?) and make these shapes equal (use the same shape in the slider I mean xd) 00:10:775 (1,2,3,4) -
  00:11:900 (5,1) - move them a bit to the left?
  00:10:025 (2,3,4) - look at the spacing here and then look at the spacing here 00:12:425 (2,3,4) - is not the same, both shoukd have the same spacing because the song doesnt really changes, or it does?
  00:17:825 (3) - ctrl+g on this and make a blanket with 00:18:275 (4) - ? actually, it breaks the flow, if this is not reaaally intentional, change it
  00:21:575 (1,2) - also this breaks the flow, and again, if it is not totally intentional, change :p
  00:29:825 (4) - fix the blanket
  00:31:175 (1,2) - look at the spacing here and here 00:32:375 (1,2) - fix it, I mean.. 00:32:375 (1,2) - move this further or 00:31:175 (1,2) - move this closer, use the same spacing
  00:33:575 (6) - this slider doesn't look the best imo
  00:34:025 (8) - ctrl+g?
  00:40:775 (1,2,3) - uhuhh, the spacing
  00:47:375 (1) - ctrl+g
  01:08:675 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I don't know if.. maybe its just me.. but I feel like the largest jump should be placed on the 4-5-6 and 1-2-3 should be placed more closely
  01:23:075 (1,2,3) - spacing
  
  Insane:
  
  00:01:175 (1,2,3,4,5) - why not using just 3 sliders like in the "Jumping Heart"? this sounds a bit overmapped imo
  00:04:775 (1) - make this shape like http://prntscr.com/bztvdl because your movement is going down, coming from 00:04:625 (5) - , making the shape like (like I say) it will play better
  00:06:125 (6,7) - I don't really think you need this jump here, also 00:06:425 (8,1) - fix spacing here
  00:07:775 (3,4) - both sliders should have the same shape I think
  00:17:225 - I think you should add a circle here and start the slider after it, because beats like this 00:17:675 - should be clickable, strong beats like this should not be in a slider end
  00:22:025 (2,3) - Here, I suggest using something like http://prntscr.com/bztx1e ? the actual overlap doesnt look really good imo, and this way plays better
  00:23:675 (6,7,1) - spacing
  00:50:825 (2) - move this to x:260 y:20 (or somewhere there) it plays better considering the shape of 00:50:375 (1) - and using a proper spacing with the next slider
  01:06:050 (2) - delete this?
  01:06:875 (5,6,1) - fix Ds ( 01:07:175 (1) - )
  01:10:025 (2) - move this to the left, like.. x:200, It will play better
  01:10:625 (4) - move this down and to the left, like ehmm.. x:184 y:376 ?
  01:11:375 (3) - move this up and to the right, use the same distance
  01:11:825 (4,1) - fix ds of 01:11:975 (1) -
  01:14:375 (1,2,3,4,5) - here the spacing is shorter than the previous section mapped like this.. You should use the same distance in both sections
  
  Hard:
  I don't know how to mods hards or normals but I think hard should have Ar 7..