1. Getting on the plane (1.93 stars, 34 notes)
2. Packing to travel (1.52 stars, 171 notes)

Kaivu wrote:

Hi, M4M!

Packing to travel

Since this is an Easy diff, I would suggest using the same distance snap for all of your notes! A lot of your notes overlap each other quite ungracefully, so distance snap would definitely make it look better. Pick a value and stick with it -- you start off at 0.8x, which looks great, but then it looks like you just stop using it.
00:50:158 (1,2) - Fix blanket.
00:56:824 (7,8) - Make this a blanket?
01:26:824 (11,12) - I would avoid stacks in Easy diffs.
01:44:004 - Start kiai here. Also, start a new note here to emphasize the large white tick (instead of having it end on a repeat slider).
01:44:517 (1,2) - Fix blanket.
01:54:260 (4,5) - I think it would look better if you mirrored them like this:

-->

02:00:414 - Start kiai and add a note here.
02:04:517 (6,7,8) - Line these up perfectly by holding Shift while snapping them into place.

-->
02:16:824 - Start kiai here.

It looks like you're not done with the other diff yet, so I guess that's it! Good luck on this map!

SuperSander wrote:

Hello from M4M!

I've never modded before but hey, i do what i can
The offset feels weird, it's not starting at the first "Note". Maybe try starting it at 00:11:696
01:17:337 Kai isnt starting on the note itself?
01:26:055 Not ending on the note aswell.
01:44:004 Same thing what Kaivu said.
01:54:260 Feels weird. Also what Kaivu said.
02:00:414 Kai not starting on the note itself.
02:16:824 Kai.
02:25:030 Again kai. You could also add a circle here.
02:45:542 Kai slightly off
03:01:953 Kai. Not sure if you should end the kai here or end it 03:18:363 , If you end it here it might be a too long kai so yea, not sure.

Other then that, not a bad map c: Hope this is any helpfull.