This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 30 July 2016 at 20:59:37

Artist: Chata
Title: Nocte of desperatio
Source: 魔法少女まどか☆マギカ
Tags: agedum! puella magi madoka magica magical girl mahou shoujo hir kajiura yuki visual work station Theme of Walpurgisnacht Surgam identidem
BPM: 98
Filesize: 8204kb
Play Time: 05:19
Difficulties Available:

1. Oni of Despair (4.36 stars, 1514 notes)

Download: Chata - Nocte of desperatio
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#5 Ranked, #1 for Approval

Oni... 100%

#1 - tasuke912
#2 - Nardoxyribonucleic
- Raiden

omg I love this song <3 I want to make my own ctb map but no time xD, hope to see this ranked in a near future~~ take some stars :3

woa that's unexpected xD thanks shini~

Is it.. from Madoka? ;w;

I have one question. Why in your song folder there is bg.png containing a reference to characters in Madoka? xD

[Oni of Despair]

Great map~! Keep it up!

Acrith wrote:

Is it.. from Madoka? ;w; yeah madokaa ;w;

I have one question. Why in your song folder there is bg.png containing a reference to characters in Madoka? xD woops. i was searching for some bgs before. maybe some weren't deleted

[Oni of Despair]

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01:25:490 (56) - Maybe kat? To fit rhythm from 01:23:041 (42,43,44,45,46,47,48) - i prefer d for simple triplet in first kiai
02:32:222 (137,138,1,2,3,4,5) - Maybe rearrange it to k k d d k d d due to 02:29:776 (121,122,123) - only changed (137) to k. others are retained for coherency with next pattern
03:10:183 (21,22,23) - Personally I'd switch colors to emphatize 03:10:490 (24,25,26) - .doesn't flow nicely to me.
03:26:714 (124,125,126) - Would switch it to k d d or k k d retained to emphasis snare drum at (126)
03:28:857 (137) - Switch to kat? keep as d because low drum sound
03:29:163 (138,139,140) - Same as two lines above same
03:38:959 (32,33,34) - Would switch that to k d d or k d k retained for consistency with 03:19:367 (81,82,83) -
03:46:306 (33,34,35) - k d d maybe? doesn't feels connected with next pattern. also k at (35) fits the snare drum
03:51:357 (63,64) - Switch colors? no?

also did some slight changes by myself

Great map~! Keep it up!

thnaks for mod

Hello!


This is a good map. Good luck getting it ranked

Aloda wrote:

Hello!

Oni of Despair

00:00:695 - 4x SV -> 2.5x i intend to make a missing spot in the beginning and the end to make player 'desperate'.

00:20:132 (30) - Removve why? there is drum sound here

02:36:663 (11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - I think this sounds better no, the guitar sound start at (13) so the k will start there.

03:15:311 (58) - k -> d This sounds a little better to me that can also work. saved for future reference if i get same feedback

04:13:857 (116,117,118,119,120,121,122,123,124) - Try this

04:33:449 (58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66) - Try this i tried both, but the flow is horrible and didn't cohere with surrounding pattern.

05:19:850 (1) - The SV for this note is far too high. I'd suggest changing it to no higher than 2.5x for this timing section same as 1st

This is a good map. Good luck getting it ranked

ty for mod

platternya ala tAyiCOSSS., tacobell. tinggal lep~

22:23 Surono: map anjieg
22:23 Surono: menggila. chata bezt
22:27 Volta: mod dong
22:27 Volta: gausah panjang2
22:27 Surono: ntar juga gw mod.
22:27 Surono: ez, gw tau lu males sama minor things. gw juga rada males buat sok2an beri yg bagus :U
22:27 Surono: nih gw DT!1!!? keren
22:28 Surono: map pepes. ibarat platter di ctb
22:28 Surono: nanggung susah, naggung gampang :U
22:28 Volta: :V
22:29 Volta: emang kyk gitu lagunya..
22:29 Surono: hedset ccd
22:29 Surono: ya emang lagunya gitu. ccd
22:30 Volta: ccd
22:30 Surono: :U good mapper, good cchoice song. oke kemap ya gini
22:30 Surono: menggila.
22:32 Surono: koe pasti nemu lagu yg akhiraannya gini
22:32 Surono: wes di HD bikin puyeng kawkwa
22:33 Surono: mantab.
22:36 Volta: dem connection
22:36 Surono: mendC
22:37 Surono: menggila, irc mod wae. malesss, huruf s ku jebol ccd.
22:37 Surono: 00:15:388 - spinner for instead? cieg nada2 flow panjang gini sblumnya slider. sini spinner. flownya dalem.
22:38 Volta: woke
22:38 Surono: cecete.
22:38 Surono: dari pada mencet DOn gede. malah ngapain :U
22:39 Surono: 00:20:285 - dari sini woke, pola2nya sudah keren :U
22:39 Volta: enakan diem
22:39 Volta: ntar di DQ lagi ama dake gara2 spinner wkwk
22:39 Surono: ccd.
22:39 Surono: dq gara2 spinner aaaaaa.
22:39 Volta: lupakan masa lalu
22:40 Surono: 00:59:010 (148,149) - cieg penekanan menggila, swap ae. 149 nadanya itu nadanya :U
22:40 Surono: 00:58:398 - ini ganti kat kalau mau ngikut si 143, 145 udah jlas trun
22:41 Volta: oh, bagus jg
22:42 Surono: ih ah ih ah.
22:43 Surono: 01:16:306 - keren nih buat sv trun dkit. trus naik pas masuk stream dowo. weh mah ngapa gw :U
22:43 Volta: 00:59:316 - kalo diganti, ini mending k juga ga?
22:43 Surono: 149 aja, ada instrument sendiri. 150 cuma drum biasa.
22:44 Volta: ok, sv nya gausah aneh2 lagi lah
22:44 Volta: yg skrg udah cukup
22:44 Surono: kawkawakwkawkwkawkaw
22:44 Surono: biar mantab. bkin orang ksel, setauku orang jepun benci banget namanya sv kawkaw.
22:44 Surono: kek diamond smile. pattern sv dibenci semua umat~
22:45 Surono: 01:23:500 (45,46) - swap gimana? 45 ada nada yg penting buat di kat, 46 cuma "du~" doang.
22:46 Surono: 01:26:255 - pindah tick merah kiri? biar sama kek note 45, jadinya ntar dsini kosong. wong cuma flow
22:47 Volta: ada vokalnya sih
22:47 Volta: keep
22:47 Surono: 01:37:505 - kat ini? biar ada kontras di 31 sama 33
22:48 Volta: lebih sneng 4d disitu buat ngikutin drumnya
22:48 Surono: 01:57:020 - nice sv. ampir gw kira ini nyambung :U keknya aman, cuma jarak 1/2. btw 01:55:796 (1) - unsnap nih
22:49 Surono: wew... slidernya kok ga di tick merah.. jangan2 pake 1/3?!?!?!?
22:50 Surono: 02:15:081 (40,41) - swap atau kat 41?
22:50 Volta: sengaja dipanjangin 1/16 karena tick terakhir ilang
22:50 Surono: :U mantab cieggggg
22:50 Volta: k 41
22:51 Surono: btw yg 4don tadi. ikr biar gampang :U kalau kena kontras mah ya sama aja gampang2nya. ga ka- dem ngetik paan meneh ki
22:51 Volta: ngetik apaan maneh
22:51 Surono: 02:28:705 (114) - kat trus swap 115 sama 116 ??? :UUU
22:51 Surono: cieg enak gitarnya buat di teken kat. "net net~"
22:53 Volta: cuman ganti kat
22:53 Surono: otje.
22:53 Surono: 03:11:408 - cieg monotone, teken ga vocalnya?
22:54 Surono: 03:15:617 (62,63) - kd, sblumnya dk. noice variasi swap. noiec swag mamen~ akwkwk
22:54 Surono: 03:26:867 - keknya ini perlu kat biar ga boring polanya. ddk buat nada sblumnya, disini tinggi. gimana?
22:55 Surono: 03:28:857 - sama ke di atas.
22:55 Surono: 03:46:459 - a
22:55 Volta: 03:11:408 (32) - drumnya rendah, agak gak pas
22:56 Surono: cieg. drum cecede
22:56 Surono: 03:51:816 (65,1,2,3,4,5) - d d d kkd enak nih, ngikut drum snarenya si kat.
22:56 Surono: 04:26:102 - nice meme, hear that voisss~
22:57 Volta: 03:26:867 - biar konsisten aja
22:57 Surono: 04:29:699 - mau kat?
22:57 Surono: 04:34:061 - this time for kat this? sblumnya kan kd ( yah increasing swag variasi. dk kd kk )
22:57 Surono: 04:34:979 - kat.. please kat this :U
22:58 Volta: 03:51:816 (65,1,2,3,4,5) - cuman ganti kkd nya, soalnya di (2) rhytmnya lebih enak kat
22:58 Surono: 05:19:849 - svnya om tolong om, 2 kek biar ga kaget2 amat...
22:58 Volta: 04:29:775 - ga mau
22:59 Surono: oh ya 2 ada ritimnya
22:59 Surono: cieg 2 cieg, please. ngaggetin, ah mboh biar si tinja atau merah2 bisul yg notis/lotis :U oke savelug
22:59 Volta: 04:34:061 - oooo nice varriation
22:59 Surono: katkat, vocal fit yussssssssssssssssssss. ,
22:59 Surono: /savelog
22:59 Volta: 04:34:979 - no
23:00 Surono: ccd, harus. suaranya. ccd 70 ke 1, trus masuk dondonnya.
23:00 Surono: alah biar ga terlalu monoton polane :U
23:00 Volta: bodo
23:00 Volta: wkwk
23:00 Surono: ccd amat
23:00 Surono: uyyy. alesannya dung. cecedes
23:00 Volta: drumnya udah dung disitu
23:00 Surono: wah ini, terjangkit virusnya raidun. :U dah ah,. post.
23:01 Surono: anjir ngikut drum, ritimnya di notis sand pie
23:01 Volta: mangga

*eidt:
si Kucigggg, gw ga terkena kadas.. wah ini siasat antek antek kunlaw!! D:

edit:
ccd tanpa i dan singkat. pp takos = sr, dasar alayers ala AXIS. ccd anda harus mendapatkan hukuman!1!! pandang avatar saya selama 69detik agar anda selamat, tank

di spoilerbox aja njeg.

yang awal2 gak jadi diganti karena pas dimainin rasanya lebih enak ngikutin suara drum yang makin turun dibanding nekenin vokalnya. thnks sr!


edit: surono don't be crazy here ._. mata gw bengkak setelah memandang avatar anda selama 69 detik O_O
edit2: ye changed ava!

Hi, NM from my kuehue
Indo aja ya :v
Hope it help!
Lagunya mantap! (y)
Good luck, semoga ranked!

Yoratama wrote:

Hi, NM from my kuehue
Indo aja ya :v

Oni of Despair

00:47:224 (93) - kat lebih enak imo, soalnya pas suaranya neken, karena Keliatanya follow drum sama vocal, sengaja biar 00:47:224 (93,94,95,96,97,98) - variativ dd-dk-kd. tapi jadi sadar kalo 00:53:041 - ini beda sendiri, changed that to k instead.
00:57:939 - 00:58:398 - ubah jadi triplet? tapi kyaknya bakal ngacauin timing nya. jadi kacau SV changenya. awal2nya bikin gampang aja trus yang kedua lebih susah
01:26:102 (60,61,62) - ddk atau kdk, alasanya sama kek mod pertama. karena (62) itu downbeat, gak pas kalo dikasih k. dibuat agar koheren dengan upbeat di 01:27:020 - ddd-ddk . changed 03:04:061 - to k instead for variation in 2nd kiai
01:31:306 (91,92) - CTRL+G lebih enak imo. pas sama vocalnya juga.downbeat di 91
01:32:837 (100) - kat ^^ ^^
02:04:673 (30) - don? Nada nya sam kyk 00:46:306 (89) - . kalo follow ini 02:14:469 (37) - biarin gitu aja di sesi yang ini emang polanya emang dibikin beda dari yang pertama. musicnya juga beda.
02:25:184 (94) - kat lebih enak imo, sama kyk mod pertama. tidak diganti karena lebih enak konsisten dengan 02:20:286 (73,74,75,76) -
02:49:673 (92,93) - CTRL+G? kyk 02:49:673 (92,93) - rip same timestamp lol. dipertahankan untuk downbeat rhytm
03:10:260 (24) - kyaknya pindah kat kesini 03:10:413 - engga, triplet yang sekarang lebih pas untuk menekankan 03:10:337 - setelah sedikit pause di vokal pada (22)
02:51:204 (102) - kat? keep for coherency with the drum
03:15:617 (62,63) - CTRL+G? agak weird imo buat variasi, di bagian kedua kiai kedua ini emang patternnya agak sedikit beda. dan pattern kayak gini udah dikasih hint di 03:10:183 (23,24,25) - lower level player biasanya emang bakal miss disini kalo gak terbiasa alternatenya hehe
04:08:806 (84) - kat? lebih pas diakhiri dengan d supaya konsisten dengan 04:10:183 -
04:39:877 (23) - Remove finisher? the guitar sound is more pressed
04:44:775 (14) - ^^ ^

Hope it help!
Lagunya mantap! (y)
Good luck, semoga ranked!

thanks for mod and star Yoratama
your queue rule that i didn't read, i did it here lol

[Oni]
01:55:796 (1,2) - adjust slider ends


no kds

fixed 2nd slider. the 1st slider intentionally extended by 1/16 because the last tick is missing. need to consult bn/qat about this issue.

edit: talked to dake and fixed slider and sv issue

sempet ngakak ngecek ada file beginian di foldernya @@

entahlah request dari jaman kapan :v
[Oni]
00:19:826 - maybe triplet bisa pindah ke belakang
00:56:102 - kat mungkin untuk variasi
01:05:745 (178) - change to kat, terlalu banyak dd di pattern ini
01:16:306 (12,1) - coba bikin ddd or kkd, itu bagian kosong ditengah ada suara
02:49:826 - doba dibikin triplet, vokalnya barlanjut disini
02:51:357 - delete ini ? kayak terasa berlebih patternnya, biar enak mukul finishernya juga

GL panci

[R] wrote:

sempet ngakak ngecek ada file beginian di foldernya @@ lol that was supposed to be the bg for this map. idk why it can be there....

entahlah request dari jaman kapan :v
[Oni]
00:19:826 - maybe triplet bisa pindah ke belakang lebih noticable disini kok
00:56:102 - kat mungkin untuk variasi hmm variasinya di part kedua aja, karena gitarnya lebih aktif disana
01:05:745 (178) - change to kat, terlalu banyak dd di pattern ini sengaja banyak d biar kesannya lebih dalem dan menegangkan i
01:16:306 (12,1) - coba bikin ddd or kkd, itu bagian kosong ditengah ada suara added k between the notes.
02:49:826 - doba dibikin triplet, vokalnya barlanjut disini ehm dimana?
02:51:357 - delete ini ? kayak terasa berlebih patternnya, biar enak mukul finishernya juga keep supaya panjang patternnya gak beda jauh sama yang lain-lainnya disini.

GL panci

thanks ron!

[General]

[Oni]

I'm soooo late, sorry!!

Some little suggestion, map has almost no flaws to me.

[Oni something]
omg that ended up being the shortest mod ever, no kudosu please :3

Good luck ranking it

Backfire wrote:

[General]

If it were up to me, I would rank this ASAP. I don't think there is anything else to say, this just needs to be ranked. I saw almost no flaws.

[Oni]

01:22:428 - I have an idea little different than what you have currently, I feel like what you had did not fit so well. Try d d k ddd d k d k k d, that should fit better than what is there currently imo, for flow and sound, I suppose. And perhaps do it in the second kiai and third kiai as well with this repeating pattern? hmm it's a bit monotonous because i put d d k at 01:21:816 (34,35,36) - and the suggestion also start with same pattern. i'll keep it for now
03:10:260 - this kat should be here 03:10:413 - i think current placement is fine because can give more emphasis to 03:10:337 -

-Tenshi- wrote:

I'm soooo late, sorry!!

Some little suggestion, map has almost no flaws to me.

[Oni something]

00:29:163 I would put a don here, i feel like a long pattern fit more the end of a section. leaving it empty can represent the guitar better here.
02:07:581 Same here, also i think it sounds better than having no note here. the pattern will be too long imo, and the break here can give emphasis to chata's voice at 02:07:428 -

omg that ended up being the shortest mod ever, no kudosu please :3

Good luck ranking it

thanks for both mods :3 kd'd to appreciate the effort
is it really flawless?

Removing my laziness ...


General:

don = d
kat = k
Big Don = D
Big Kat = K



is good, a bit repetitive but good .. 2 stars (owo)/*

xtrem3x wrote:

Removing my laziness ...


General:

don = d
kat = k
Big Don = D
Big Kat = K

Oni of DesperaVolta

• 
  00:03:143 - Reduce this slider until 00:04:980- and add 3 d notes in ... 00:05:286- , 00:05:439- . 00:05:592- ... in first place a slider because why this sound is long (with no other sound). the long sound ends at 00:05:592 - so current slider is fine
  
  00:10:184 - Add d note here and ...
  00:10:337 - Here ...
  00:12:633 - Here ...
  00:12:786 - Here too ... complementary with above point. i don't think i want to make the intro denser.
  
  00:18:755- to 00:20:285 - in this section all notes have same percussion tone ... all in d to complement with the guitar sound too, i put some k in it
  
  00:38:347 - in this section is more fit a combination as ... ddd d kkk d k ddk k D ... is more compactible with percussion sound. can work too, but it prefer using various pattern here
  
  00:46:153 - why this note is different? ... have same sound as 00:41:255- and 00:43:704- ... (yeah I know, variety bla bla bla, but not here .-. ) fixed
  00:48:602 - Same ...
  00:55:949 - Same ...
  
  00:57:939 - this section sounds better with kkddkdkdkdD ... (yeah have percussion to have pure d note) but is nessesary have variety specifically to combine with vocal sound. considering i followed percussion+guitar in previous section, it would be awkward if suddenly change to vocal
  
  01:43:551 - in this Break can fill with pure d note following percussion ... (?) no
  
  02:27:530 - if your focus is in vocal sound and "possible" high sounds is here... change notes to k... umm..wrong timestamp? it leads to empty note
  
  03:15:617 - ctrl+g with next note ... have bad position these notes ... if you hear carefully this fits with the drum well
  
  03:16:459 - is good a variation here ... Change this note to k d is more fits as the percussion sound going lower
  
  04:22:734 - this part is better with ... ddkdk ... is rare a focus in 3rd note but is nessesary a combination with 2 blue notes ... hmm no change
  
  05:19:850 - oh please, ninja note in a literally slow (really slow) part? .. NO!! ... is better maintain this focus with this = inherited point with 0.40x velocity

this ninja is to make you feel the despair..

is good, a bit repetitive but good .. 2 stars (owo)/*

thank you for mods

Hi.
[ Oni]

1. 00:57:938 (141,142) - Triplet would fit to the drums well.
2. 00:59:469 - why is SV keeping 0.89x? 0.90x works good enough.
3. 01:38:806 (1) - Hitsound seems bit too loud. I'd recommend 60~50%
4. 02:55:795 (133,134,135,136,137) - I don't think this color is the best, because drums sounds like d-kkd. I suggest d-dkd, it makes good pattern with 03:15:388 (59,60,61,62,63) -
5. 01:37:428 (131,132,133,134,135) - same. d-kkd?
   
   
6. 03:32:683 (3,1,2) - kkd for consistency with 03:52:275 (3,4,5) - ?
   
7. 04:14:163 (120,121,122,123,124) - see above. (d-dkk) 04:33:755 (62,63,64,65,66) -
   
   
8. In outro part, hitsound seems loud. should be lower. (70%-80%, spinner 50%)
9. 05:19:850 (1) - No Ninja please

call me back

tasuke912 wrote:

Hi.
[ Oni]

1. 00:57:938 (141,142) - Triplet would fit to the drums well. keep to a long 1/2 pattern in this section and to retain smooth slow down
2. 00:59:469 - why is SV keeping 0.89x? 0.90x works good enough. fixed
3. 01:38:806 (1) - Hitsound seems bit too loud. I'd recommend 60~50% added green line with 70% at 01:38:806 - and constantly lowering volume till spinner end
4. 02:55:795 (133,134,135,136,137) - I don't think this color is the best, because drums sounds like d-kkd. I suggest d-dkd, it makes good pattern with 03:15:388 (59,60,61,62,63) - oo fixed
5. 01:37:428 (131,132,133,134,135) - same. d-kkd? ddk instead to complement the vocal
   
   
6. 03:32:683 (3,1,2) - kkd for consistency with 03:52:275 (3,4,5) - ? fixed
   
7. 04:14:163 (120,121,122,123,124) - see above. (d-dkk) 04:33:755 (62,63,64,65,66) - fixed
   
   
8. In outro part, hitsound seems loud. should be lower. (70%-80%, spinner 50%) alright
9. 05:19:850 (1) - No Ninja please everyone seems doesn't like ninja reduced the speed by half (3.00x --> 1.5x) i hope this give enough time to react even if player finish spinner too early and think the song's ended

call me back

thanks tasuke

beatmap looks good.

Bubbled!

omg dem, felaTiTOD. GO GO XD

Despaironi

Hi, here is the M4M as requested.

• [Oni of Despair]

1. 00:24:877 (56) - consider changing this note to d ? This would help emphasize the next kat at 00:25:183 -
2. 00:34:673 (29) - same as ^
3. 01:10:337 (201) - maybe k to accompany the pitch increase of vocal there ?
4. 01:12:785 (215) - same as ^
5. 01:20:439 (27,28,29,30,31,32) - try k d d k d k instead of d k d k k d to vary the 1/2 notes a bit ? The vocal pattern here is in fact quite different from 01:22:734 -
6. 01:33:449 (105) - same as 01:10:337 (201) -
7. 02:18:296 - you may want to use 0.9x SV here to keep the same speed as the session from 00:59:928 to 01:07:734 -
8. 02:26:102 - this timing point could be removed if you apply ^
9. 02:28:704 (114) and 02:31:153 (130) - same as 01:10:337 (201) -
10. 02:38:806 (28,29,30,31,32,33) - same pattern suggestion as 01:20:439 (27,28,29,30,31,32) -
11. 03:05:515 (192) - you can add d here and change 03:05:898 (196) - to d in order to give more power to the 2nd half of the second kiai. Moreover, this would avoid using the same 1/2 structure (i.e. k d k d k k d) consecutively.
12. 03:21:663 (98) - move to 03:21:816 - and change to k to keep it consistent with 03:16:918 - ?
13. 03:41:255 (4) - same as ^
14. From 04:27:939 to 04:29:163 - consider reforming the pattern like this for a smoother flow ? (cursor at 04:28:551 - )
15. 04:32:531 (52) - I think you may have missed the finish here ?
16. 04:39:724 (22) and 04:44:622 (13) - maybe delete these notes ? They sound a bit unnecessary at this pace of music.
17. 04:51:969 - 0.85x SV would be much better as the current slider covers the next note substantially. Readjust the slider end back to 04:53:500 - afterwards.

You may call me back after that~

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Hi, here is the M4M as requested.

• [Oni of Despair]

1. 00:24:877 (56) - consider changing this note to d ? This would help emphasize the next kat at 00:25:183 - k is also fine to reflect the same guitar sound with previous note (00:24:571 - )
2. 00:34:673 (29) - same as ^ same as ^
3. 01:10:337 (201) - maybe k to accompany the pitch increase of vocal there ? keep, but changed next point as the pitch is higher
4. 01:12:785 (215) - same as ^ changed ^
5. 01:20:439 (27,28,29,30,31,32) - try k d d k d k instead of d k d k k d to vary the 1/2 notes a bit ? The vocal pattern here is in fact quite different from 01:22:734 - i think it's fine to have coherency in drumming
6. 01:33:449 (105) - same as 01:10:337 (201) - retained the note as d can give more eerie feeling and more fits with the drum imo
7. 02:18:296 - you may want to use 0.9x SV here to keep the same speed as the session from 00:59:928 to 01:07:734 - fixed
8. 02:26:102 - this timing point could be removed if you apply ^ fixed
9. 02:28:704 (114) and 02:31:153 (130) - same as 01:10:337 (201) - changed 02:31:153 - to k
10. 02:38:806 (28,29,30,31,32,33) - same pattern suggestion as 01:20:439 (27,28,29,30,31,32) - same as before
11. 03:05:515 (192) - you can add d here and change 03:05:898 (196) - to d in order to give more power to the 2nd half of the second kiai. Moreover, this would avoid using the same 1/2 structure (i.e. k d k d k k d) consecutively. seems good. changed :3
12. 03:21:663 (98) - move to 03:21:816 - and change to k to keep it consistent with 03:16:918 - ? dd dk can follow the drum and give nice variation imo,
13. 03:41:255 (4) - same as ^ same as ^
14. From 04:27:939 to 04:29:163 - consider reforming the pattern like this for a smoother flow ? (cursor at 04:28:551 - )changed in alternative way, i prefer to end the sequence with d to cohere with the drum
15. 04:32:531 (52) - I think you may have missed the finish here ? right, fixed
16. 04:39:724 (22) and 04:44:622 (13) - maybe delete these notes ? They sound a bit unnecessary at this pace of music.good idea
17. 04:51:969 - 0.85x SV would be much better as the current slider covers the next note substantially. Readjust the slider end back to 04:53:500 - afterwards. fixed

You may call me back after that~

thanks nardo~

Alright, the map looks good now.

Bubble #2~

[Oni of Despair]00:58:015 - missing 1/4 note
05:19:850 (1) - you should probably lower like a lot the volume of this note

Raiden wrote:

[Oni of Despair]00:58:015 - missing 1/4 note intentional because i mostly use 1/2 pattern in this section, and get denser in the same part in next section
05:19:850 (1) - you should probably lower like a lot the volume of this note fixed

thank you raiden
is this finally will be qualified?

When I said a lot I meant to like 30-20%

ok, changed to 30% :3

selamat mas panci, felatiyo happend :V