Feerum wrote:

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Hello -BANGKE-
Normally i don't accept any "Non-Bubbled" Mania Map for BN Check but i saw
how much effort you and sherrysina put into this Mapset.
You Improved this Map really a lot since my last Mod so i'm here for a Nomination Check.
Should everything be fine i can give you the 1st Bubble
Let's beginn

General

Artist: Right
Title: Right // Actually i checked this already last time xd
Source: Right
Tags: Please add Konami & Bemani into tags. // They are the right owner of the music and should be mentioned in tags //allright added
AiMod: Right
Background: Right
BPM/Offset: After recheck it over and over i think offset should be 2661 // Change it AFTER Apply my Mod //changed
Other:
Please Delete following Greenlines: From 00:58:291 - to 00:59:382 - and 01:24:473 - to 01:25:564 -
You keysounded these Parts with the Sample Option. This Volume you used in the Sample Option overwrites the Volume of the Greenlines
Please use the Sample Option to reduce the Volume of these Notes in all dificultys.
Also reduce the Volume of all Sampled Notes to 40% because you use'd 40% overall here and some notes have 70% //allright, applied in all diff

NOVICE Lv.8

00:19:291 (19291|3) - Move to 3 so that this isn't too hard to hit for Novice player. //ah sure
00:23:927 (23927|0) - Make this to LN? To be consitent with other Difficultys and it actually would fit good to the vocal //thats good, applied
Also rearrange a little bit the previous notes and make it like this for balance:

Screen

00:52:564 (52564|0) - To be consistent i recommend to make this to a LN. For the fast drums. //allright
00:56:927 (56927|3,57609|2) - CTRL + G and 00:58:155 (58155|3) - to 3 for pitch. //allright
01:15:336 (75336|3) - Move to 2 and 01:15:473 (75473|1,75609|2,75745|3) - CTRL + G to avoid repeating pattern see 01:06:473 (66473|0,66609|3,66745|1,66882|2,67018|3) - //fixed
01:23:382 (83382|0) - to 2 different pitch to 01:22:836 (82836|0) - //allright, moved
01:47:109 - Add 1/1 Beat LN? I mean the Space is not bad for a little rest but i think a LN would fit here very good. //niceee

EXHAUST Lv.14

00:08:109 (8109|1,8245|0) - CTRL + G here, 00:08:109 (8109|1) - this note belongs not to the 2-3-2-3 burts you create here. //allright
00:19:836 - i'm not sure about these SV's. they seems not very clean and since this is really the only place & only diff where you use SV's i recommend to delete them. //ah i like this sv's ;w; allright deleted then
00:26:655 - You burst here is really hart to hit and kinda uncomfortable to play. I recommend to change it to something like this: //changed

Screen

00:40:836 (40836|3,41109|1) - These LN's have no Sound. Anyways not this Sound you follow here with your LN and i recommend to delete it, //allright, but im changed into normal note
For this you should make one of these 00:41:382 (41382|1,41382|0) - to a 1/2 beat LN. Of yours rearrange this Part then //allright
00:41:655 (41655|3) - Also you could make this to LN, you have used a LN to the Burst also here 00:37:291 (37291|0) - //okay
00:49:564 (49564|3,49836|0) - Same thing with LN's. They have no sound thats why they are bad to play. //allright
00:50:109 (50109|0,50109|3,50382|1,50382|0) - Same like above with Adding LN's. //added
01:05:177 - Missing Note, heres still 1/4 sound //added
01:09:541 - Missing Note. The 1/4 Sound is also here. //added
01:13:905 - Same like above, missing note. //added
01:21:064 - Add here at 2 to continue the sound of 01:20:382 (80382|0,80518|2,80655|0,80791|2) - //allright fixed

Okay thats all.
Please Reduce the Volume of all Sampled Notes to 40% in all difficultys.
Also recheck your Hitsounds if they are right placed.
Don't forget to resnapp everything after Change the Offset
Delete the unnecessary Greenlines and the most important Point:
Reply every Point i sayed. If Accepted or Rejected but i need to know this!

Call me Back when you are done
Starred

Feerum wrote:

Nomination Check


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Red means Unrankable stuff
Big means Important stuff
Normal are Suggestions
// means comments
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Hello -BANGKE-
Normally i don't accept any "Non-Bubbled" Mania Map for BN Check but i saw
how much effort you and sherrysina put into this Mapset.
You Improved this Map really a lot since my last Mod so i'm here for a Nomination Check.
Should everything be fine i can give you the 1st Bubble
Let's beginn

General

Artist: Right
Title: Right // Actually i checked this already last time xd
Source: Right
Tags: Please add Konami & Bemani into tags. // They are the right owner of the music and should be mentioned in tags
AiMod: Right
Background: Right
BPM/Offset: After recheck it over and over i think offset should be 2661 // Change it AFTER Apply my Mod
Other:
Please Delete following Greenlines: From 00:58:291 - to 00:59:382 - and 01:24:473 - to 01:25:564 -
You keysounded these Parts with the Sample Option. This Volume you used in the Sample Option overwrites the Volume of the Greenlines
Please use the Sample Option to reduce the Volume of these Notes in all dificultys.
Also reduce the Volume of all Sampled Notes to 40% because you use'd 40% overall here and some notes have 70%

sherrysina's ADVANCED Lv.11

00:26:655 - These 1/4 are kinda Hard to hit because its really high BPM here. I recommend to change it to something like this applied!
(Also Changed LN Pattern before):

Screen

00:30:473 (30473|3,30745|3,31018|3,31291|3,31564|3) - Can you try to arrange here a bit? already
00:56:927 (56927|3,57609|2) - CTRL + G for Pitch. i make it to 1-4 instead. still following the pitch
01:11:382 (71382|3) - move to 3, 01:11:655 (71655|2,71655|1) - one to the left, 01:11:927 (71927|0) - to 3. Add with this some variation to your Pattern. don't use always the same kind of chords. re-arranged
01:16:564 - ShouldnÄt be here a extra note? All your 1/4 Stairs/Bursts starts with a Chord, here not. added in 4

Okay thats all.
Please Reduce the Volume of all Sampled Notes to 40% in all difficultys.
Also recheck your Hitsounds if they are right placed.
Don't forget to resnapp everything after Change the Offset
Delete the unnecessary Greenlines and the most important Point:
Reply every Point i sayed. If Accepted or Rejected but i need to know this!

Call me Back when you are done
Starred

Surono wrote:

we te ef parti harb,.

Draftnell wrote:

ayyy :v

cie cieeee xD

gratsss ngke o/

Harbyter wrote:

where are the sv DDDDDDD:

Lina Sintyadewi wrote:

eh belum kekuali juga?
padahal aku tunggu lho mapnya bang jay, enak dan asik dimainin

-BANGKE- wrote:

Lina Sintyadewi wrote:

eh belum kekuali juga?
padahal aku tunggu lho mapnya bang jay, enak dan asik dimainin

rip bn

Let's goo~

[General]

Ok so for the timing at 01:02:661 - to 01:03:479 - , like I told you it does sound nice by ears the current one, but I doubt the song actually use some unconsistent 1/12. Except if you have some kind of really good program to prove it xD.
The rank mania map is 1/6, but is an old map and timing is way more strict now.
The taiko rank one, they didn't map this part, just put a spinner lolol.
And the newest standard rank one, is mapped on 1/8, 1/4.
Which one to choose? Personnaly I would go with the official chat for this part, but it might make it more relax but shouldn't lower your star rating.
Also it shouldn't be a problem in game play, since this part should feel a bit more relax so that player can ready up for the hype part on kiai .
SDVX chart :
2 FX(LN) start at 01:02:661 - to 01:02:797 - with 2 normal notes.
2 FX(LN) start at 01:02:933 - to 01:03:070 - with 2 normal notes.
2 FX(LN) start at 01:03:206 - to 01:03:342 - with 2 normal notes.

[sherrysina's ADVANCED Lv.11]

00:26:729 (26729|0,26797|1,26865|3,26933|2,27001|1,27070|0,27138|2,27206|3,27274|0,27342|1,27411|2,27479|3) - There is many stream that is nearly the same level of difficulty as EXH, you can put some break on this stream. Since NOV = 1/1 LN, ADV and EXH = stream.
Here my suggestion : delete 00:27:001 (27001|1) - , since the sound you map here stop there. Instead of putting a stream, how about 1/2 LN : 00:27:070 - to 00:27:206 - with a normal note here 00:27:206 - , and 00:27:342 - to 00:27:479 - .

00:36:479 - Add one more note here, one hitnote really doesn't give much impact for that woosh, should follow these 00:36:751 (36751|2,36751|3,37024|0,37024|1,37297|2,37297|3) - ~

01:06:479 (66479|1) - and 01:15:206 (75206|1) - Delete, these 3 01:05:797 (65797|1,65797|2,66070|2,66070|0,66342|2,66342|0) - should have the same feeling.

01:37:092 (97092|1) - Same reason as EXH : I think I know why you put it here 01:37:092 - due to a new sound that is supose to follow this 01:37:024 - , but I'm pretty sure you were trying to match the knobs. Knobs in crack traxxx on the kiai are all supose to be 1/2 timing judging from the real chart in the arcade.

[EXHAUST]

01:37:092 (97092|1) - Wrong snap, I think I know why you put it here 01:37:092 - due to a new sound that is supose to follow this 01:37:024 - , but I'm pretty sure you were trying to match the knobs like your NOVICE. Knobs in crack traxxx on the kiai are all supose to be 1/2 timing judging from the real chart in the arcade.

01:40:842 - Add one more note to keep the bass consistent and also because you are still mapping for the drum in that part (example : 01:41:933 - ).

01:53:388 (113388|0,113388|2,113524|3,113524|1,113661|2,113661|0) - Hmm I kinda disagree with these LN, since your LN are usually for knobs or continue sound, while these sound you are mapping for are just normal sound, like example this 01:53:388 - doesn't even continune to here 01:53:456 - . Also because you didn't put these one 01:53:797 (113797|1,113797|3) - LN because of the 3 notes after that, it make it even more unconsistent.
Conclusion : I really suggest turning these into normal note (won't lower the star rating xP).

Rizqy wrote:

little things
[EXHAUST]

1. 01:03:751 - http://puu.sh/nr6Gv/cd0d0a00bf.png // coba deh LN ny kaya gini, lebih match sama suara tet tenonetnya (main melody) lho
2. 01:08:388 - http://puu.sh/nr6MH/38d971f78d.png // jadikan normal note jadi LN seperti yg di biruin
3. 01:53:797 - http://puu.sh/nr785/37203ef38e.png // flownya lebih enak gini imo, karena ini udah mau akhir dan suasananya gak agak relax kan, jadi jacksnya yhagitude

kbye.

Julie wrote:

Julie got ressurect owo

Let's goo~

[General]

Ok so for the timing at 01:02:661 - to 01:03:479 - , like I told you it does sound nice by ears the current one, but I doubt the song actually use some unconsistent 1/12. Except if you have some kind of really good program to prove it xD.
The rank mania map is 1/6, but is an old map and timing is way more strict now.
The taiko rank one, they didn't map this part, just put a spinner lolol.
And the newest standard rank one, is mapped on 1/8, 1/4.
Which one to choose? Personnaly I would go with the official chat for this part, but it might make it more relax but shouldn't lower your star rating.
Also it shouldn't be a problem in game play, since this part should feel a bit more relax so that player can ready up for the hype part on kiai .
SDVX chart :
2 FX(LN) start at 01:02:661 - to 01:02:797 - with 2 normal notes.
2 FX(LN) start at 01:02:933 - to 01:03:070 - with 2 normal notes.
2 FX(LN) start at 01:03:206 - to 01:03:342 - with 2 normal notes.

[EXHAUST]

01:37:092 (97092|1) - Wrong snap, I think I know why you put it here 01:37:092 - due to a new sound that is supose to follow this 01:37:024 - , but I'm pretty sure you were trying to match the knobs like your NOVICE. Knobs in crack traxxx on the kiai are all supose to be 1/2 timing judging from the real chart in the arcade.

01:40:842 - Add one more note to keep the bass consistent and also because you are still mapping for the drum in that part (example : 01:41:933 - ).

01:53:388 (113388|0,113388|2,113524|3,113524|1,113661|2,113661|0) - Hmm I kinda disagree with these LN, since your LN are usually for knobs or continue sound, while these sound you are mapping for are just normal sound, like example this 01:53:388 - doesn't even continune to here 01:53:456 - . Also because you didn't put these one 01:53:797 (113797|1,113797|3) - LN because of the 3 notes after that, it make it even more unconsistent.
Conclusion : I really suggest turning these into normal note (won't lower the star rating xP).

And while checking my mods, answer zan mods as well if accept or decline, you don't need a rebub, I'll be your answer for his mods. (So please answer it in english hahaha xD)

DixonBlackwing wrote:

Wah Bangke jg quali mapnya
congratulations ya, after so long

indonesian mapper lgi rusuh2ny di qualify section

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XvicX wrote:

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puxtu wrote:

01:02:661 - I think the snapping here doesn't flow really well with 1/2, it's a lil bit faster than that

puxtu wrote:

01:02:661 - I think the snapping here doesn't flow really well with 1/2, it's a lil bit faster than that

had a lil talk with gw about it

16:27 GoldenWolf: I think I said it in like 3 map's thread of this song
16:27 GoldenWolf: it actually needs a redline
16:27 puxtu: i agree
16:31 GoldenWolf: 01:02:661 - 01:03:479 - between these I count this sound happening 8 times
16:31 GoldenWolf: can't really call it a beat
16:32 puxtu: ranked version used 1/3 snaps there
16:32 GoldenWolf: still sucks
16:32 GoldenWolf: if you use a 195.5 bpm red line at 01:02:661 -
16:32 puxtu: lol ya
16:33 GoldenWolf: you can snap everything on 1/3
16:33 GoldenWolf: and it's perfect
16:33 GoldenWolf: idk why they haven't done that in all the other ranked version of this song
16:33 GoldenWolf: took me 5 minutes to figure out

Fullerene wrote:

https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/5115603 this is the cleanest snapping for 01:02:661 - in the song


3/8 rhythm
the second note after the 1/1 is actually a 1/16 after, but this is best if you want to avoid the rhythms looking janky
technically goldenwolf is right, but 1/3 isn't the correct rhythm either so ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
the reason why that effect has an odd offset is because of the nature that all sdvx FX audio files originate from: recorded live plays

the effect is a wobble at 3/8 rhythm, but the player pressed it about 3/16ths too late so the whole thing is late by that much

if it was pressed perfectly on time you would get something like this (notice how the notes don't match with the waveform)

Harbyter wrote:

using the 3/8 should be the best option

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

As the result, this map's creator was banned, we can't do anything until he gets unbanned

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

As the result, this map's creator was banned, we can't do anything until he gets unbanned

Draftnell wrote:

Yeahh, RIP Bangke 2k16 :v

puxtu wrote:

01:02:661 - I think the snapping here doesn't flow really well with 1/2, it's a lil bit faster than that

had a lil talk with gw about it

16:27 GoldenWolf: I think I said it in like 3 map's thread of this song
16:27 GoldenWolf: it actually needs a redline
16:27 puxtu: i agree
16:31 GoldenWolf: 01:02:661 - 01:03:479 - between these I count this sound happening 8 times
16:31 GoldenWolf: can't really call it a beat
16:32 puxtu: ranked version used 1/3 snaps there
16:32 GoldenWolf: still sucks
16:32 GoldenWolf: if you use a 195.5 bpm red line at 01:02:661 -
16:32 puxtu: lol ya
16:33 GoldenWolf: you can snap everything on 1/3
16:33 GoldenWolf: and it's perfect
16:33 GoldenWolf: idk why they haven't done that in all the other ranked version of this song
16:33 GoldenWolf: took me 5 minutes to figure out

puxtu wrote:

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

As the result, this map's creator was banned, we can't do anything until he gets unbanned

not really. someone can adopt this set if they willing to, sherrysina maybe?

sherrysina wrote:

uh.. ;w;


if that's the case, i am willing to.
but do bangke agree? he is mad now. by that, i know he might be really unsure if this map is being adopted by me. it is not that easy to let someone take care 100% of your map while you had your biggest effort there.

Harbyter wrote:

if you have any way to contact him let the bn know

if he disagree then rip ,waiting for him to come back

sherrysina wrote:

Harbyter wrote:

if you have any way to contact him let the bn know

if he disagree then rip ,waiting for him to come back

we're talking about it right now and,
he's strongly disagree.