hey, from my queue three weeks ago. just started getting back into modding, so please excuse the quality-
[Erujazz]
[Erujazz]
- 00:15:689 - maybe a circle here? there's a pretty distinct chiptune note here i think you should add. not really a big deal though
- 00:16:913 - add a note here? the same ticking sound at 00:12:015 (3) - is here as well
- 00:23:036 - same as the first point about adding a circle her to highlight the chiptune note here, but not really a big deal
- that's it lol
- 00:10:791 (2) - what are with the hitsounds here? it makes the notes stand out when they shouldn't be standing out because there's nothing in the music that emphasizes them; it ends up feeling out of place. similar things happen at 00:12:628 (2,3,5) - , 00:15:383 (2,4) - , and 00:17:832 (2). 00:19:668 (1) - is a good place to start including hitsounds, but don't use the claps/whistles before this point because they really stand out and feel out of place. the finishes are fine i guess
- 00:52:117 (1) - slider feels too long in my opinion; from what i can gather, the kiai is following the vocals, but this goes over the vocals. just make it a 1/2 slider (end it on the red tick at 00:52:423)
- 01:10:332 (2) - slider here doesn't really make sense; it feels too short because there's no distinct sound at 01:10:485 and you end up ignoring the stronger beat at 01:10:638. why not just have two circles at 01:10:332 - and at 01:10:638?
- 01:19:668 (3) - again, slider feels too short because it's not really ending on a distinct note; the red tick at 01:19:974 has a more distinct beat than the blue tick here.
- 01:26:556 (1) - not really a big deal, but i think if you started the spinner at 01:27:015 there'd be more impact because there's a very distinct "whee" sound that starts here
- 01:42:321 (6) - this doesn't really make sense as a repeat slider; there's no distinct beat in the middle here; a regular 1/2 slider works just fine
- and there are also some distance snap issues that you should address; snap distance should usually be maintained for Easies and Normals to help beginners ease into the game, so when you use changing distance snaps, e.g. put two notes closer or farther together than what you usually did, its inconsistency may cause beginners to break combos. some examples of where you broke distance snap include 00:24:566 (6) - , 00:27:015 (1) -, and 01:08:342 (4) - to name a few. breaking distance snap is okay when you have a large time in between notes though, such as at 00:27:015 (1,1) -
- 00:11:097 (1,2,3) - just my opinion here, but the claps on the slider end and following two circles are really loud and feel out of place. at least remove the claps on the (2) and (3); maybe use a whistle for the (3)
- 00:24:260 (4) - mm idk how i feel about this being a circle because you skipped over a distinct sound at 00:24:413; maybe make this a 1/4 slider?
- 00:38:036 (1,4) - idk how i feel about this overlap because you can barely make out the (4) and it might cause some readability problems. similar issues occur at 01:13:240 (1,2) - (this one isn't as bad) and at 01:19:209 (4,2) -, 01:56:403 (1,3) -, etc.
- similar comment about the spinner starting at 01:27:015 instead that i suggested in Normal because of the "whee" sound
- 02:00:077 (1) - slider feels kind of too long in my opinion; you're already following vocals, so why not just make it a 1/2 slider and have a circle at 02:00:536? this way you capture the vocals more nicely
- and finally, just a few minor blanketing fixes. not going to list them all because i don't want to bloat the mod with blanket fixes, but some examples include 00:26:709 (2,1) -, 00:29:311 (2,1) -, 00:30:689 (1,2) - (this one is almost perfect, just move the (2) to the right by like one pixel), 00:39:260 (1,2) -, and 01:00:077 (1,2) -
- 00:06:811 (1) - clap on the slider end isn't really necessary; feels too loud and out of place
- 00:11:403 (2,3,4) - similar comment to the Hard; if you're going to keep a clap here, keep the one on (2); take the claps off of (3) and (4). maybe put a whistle on the (4). remove the clap at 00:16:760 (4) - as well
- 00:47:219 (4) - noticed that the circles are following the vocals, but this slider isn't? maybe you should make it into a 1/2 slider and have a circle at 00:47:679
- 01:19:056 (4) - slider feels kind of too long in my opinion; you skipped over a pretty emphasized beat at 01:19:209. maybe you should just make this into a 1/4 slider
- 02:06:964 (4,5,6) - feels kind of like circle spam because there's no distinct sound at the (5); in other words, the (5) shouldn't be clickable. maybe just ust a 1/2 slider at the (4)
- regarding the kiai, some of the sliders felt a little too short in my opinion such as the ones at 01:03:444 (4) -, 02:21:811 (5) -, and 02:24:260 (1) -. not really a big deal because they play fine, but it feels a bit inconsistent with the sliders at the end, e.g. 02:29:158 (4) - and 02:31:607 (4) -
- inb4 dirty jokes regarding difficulty name but chances are this has already been done already lmao
- 00:12:015 (6) - and 00:14:464 (6) - remove clap; place whistle if you want
- 00:58:852 (1) - slider feels too short imo 'cause the red tick after it has a more distinct beat; make it a 1/2 slider instead
- 01:19:515 (1,2) - reverse the order of these notes (1/4 slider at 01:19:515 - and circle at 01:19:821 -). the beat at 01:19:821 is more pronounced and should be clickable, whereas the beat on 01:19:668 isn't as pronounced
- 01:26:480 (1) - spinner thing i mentioned in Normal can apply here as well; alternatively you could do what you did in the Insane because that works pretty nice too
- 01:46:454 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - please don't place streams where they shouldn't belong. there's no stream anywhere in the music here, so why include a stream? i can excuse the triples, but this clearly doesn't belong
- similar comment to the Insane about some of the kiai sliders being too short compared to the sliders at the end when it's pretty much the same composition/melody. pretty sure you can figure out which ones i'm talking about based on the examples i gave you from before