TERRASPEX - AMAZING BREAK (TV-size) · forum

kunka

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kunka 2016-03-09T02:09:07+00:00

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iyasine wrote:
こんにちはkunkaさん marukさんリクエストありです o/

[Easy]
00:46:596 ~ 00:51:302 - 3小節 hit soundがありませんので少し寂しいかなと思いました。
ギターのカッティングに合わせてS:C 2のwhistleとかどうでしょう？悩みました。そこだけwhistle付くと個人的になんか不自然さを感じました。なので、この静かなパートの全てを2に変更で目立つpianoの音にwhistle付けました。また、前奏からAパート入る所のpianoも2に変更しました。（all diff）
[Normal]
00:51:302 (1,2) - 音取りの提案。ギターの音が大きいのでそちらを優先的にフォローしてみませんか？imgをお試しください。 okです。
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[Hard]
looks nice thanks
[Insane]
00:07:034 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ここも前後同様1/3リズムで刻んだほうが叩きやすいと思いました。行進曲的なイメージそういう音が自分には聞こえないんですが面白そうなんで変更ｗ
01:16:988 (4) - distance 0.8x が好み streamのDSはほぼ1.0で統一してるのでそれで修正しました。
[Extra]
00:07:034 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - insane 同様。ok.
文句なしです！青線をいろいろな場面で踏んでいて踏み方も様々でとても好みなdiffですありがとです

QF らいなう～( ˘ω˘ ) すいません。何言ってるかわかりませんｗ　modありがとでした!

-Maruk-

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Joined December 2012

-Maruk- 2016-03-09T12:17:20+00:00

iyasine wrote:
[Maruk's Insane]
01:16:400 (1,2,3,4) - light insaneという立ち位置だと思いますので1/8 sliderの連続はあまり好ましくないかもしれません。
BNの方と要相談ここは自分でもやりすぎた感あって直すか迷ってた所でした。　修正しました
とても好きなデザイン(*˘ω˘*) (˘ω˘)

Modありがとうございました！

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kunka

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Topic Starter

kunka 2016-03-09T13:24:55+00:00

UPDATED

CrystilonZ

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Joined January 2013

CrystilonZ 2016-03-10T07:27:44+00:00

omg the favs

from my queue

[Easy]
Solid -- gonna be nazi and picky on this one lol
00:08:689 (3) - blanket is really really off
00:18:360 (4,1) - nazi, try making the short straight section there parallel
00:34:047 (1,3) - if you make these v and ^ shape respectively, it should improve the flow
00:40:321 (1,3) - rather than making them like this, try rotating 00:40:321 (1) - by 90 degrees to make 3
00:45:027 (3,1) - idk, making both of them straight or curved gives more sense of symmetry

[Normal]
The DS doesn't have to be same throughout the diff, so it'd fit the song better if you used lower DS in the beginning section-- just saying
really great diff! skipping this lol

[Hard]
00:16:792 (1,4) - you should make the reverses of each slider equal
00:39:341 (4) - why this slider is extended?
00:58:164 (2,3) - finishes maybe? especially on 00:58:360 (3) -
01:05:321 (5) - I think this should be 1.6x apart
01:17:184 (1,2,1) - make the distance between them equal. This might be a little bit hard to do with that changing SV

[Maruk's Insane]
There're lots of weird DS lowering here and there like 00:43:458 (1) - but that's probably your style
01:17:968 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - whole thing here. I prefer them not being stacked. 5 circles stacked aren't really... great.
01:05:027 (2,3,4,5) - same here

Gl~

-Maruk-

322 posts

Joined December 2012

-Maruk- 2016-03-10T12:29:11+00:00

CrystilonZ wrote:
[Maruk's Insane]
There're lots of weird DS lowering here and there like 00:43:458 (1) - but that's probably your style fix
01:17:968 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - whole thing here. I prefer them not being stacked. 5 circles stacked aren't really... great. keep it. sorry it's my mapping style lol
01:05:027 (2,3,4,5) - same here ^

Thank you~

@くんか君
さっき気付いたけどAudioLeadIn 1500か2000ぐらい入れたほうが良いと思います

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kunka

1,566 posts

Joined July 2012

Topic Starter

kunka 2016-03-10T12:49:09+00:00

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Orange : change a little.
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Blue : comment

CrystilonZ wrote:
omg the favs

from my queue

[Easy]
Solid -- gonna be nazi and picky on this one lol k lol
00:08:689 (3) - blanket is really really off fixed.
00:18:360 (4,1) - nazi, try making the short straight section there parallel I bend it to the nuance of the sound of the (1). Because it is a point kinda worried, I make modifications in symmetry of the 00:23:066 (1) - .
00:34:047 (1,3) - if you make these v and ^ shape respectively, it should improve the flow I changed a curve point.
00:40:321 (1,3) - rather than making them like this, try rotating 00:40:321 (1) - by 90 degrees to make 3 Because it is not the flow that I think about, I don't change it. I made modifications such as the above.
00:45:027 (3,1) - idk, making both of them straight or curved gives more sense of symmetry The both sides are really different sounds. Rather I have a sense of incongruity in the symmetry.

[Normal]
The DS doesn't have to be same throughout the diff, so it'd fit the song better if you used lower DS in the beginning section-- just saying
really great diff! skipping this lol DS is the foundation which is the most important in mapping-style of me. In addition, it is easy to receive indication by BN when I add a change in easy and normal diff.

[Hard]
00:16:792 (1,4) - you should make the reverses of each slider equal okay.
00:39:341 (4) - why this slider is extended? It is vocal follow. Because it was a point worried a little personally, I made a change.
00:58:164 (2,3) - finishes maybe? especially on 00:58:360 (3) - It is not necessary. The sound of cymbals does not exist here.
01:05:321 (5) - I think this should be 1.6x apart fixed.
01:17:184 (1,2,1) - make the distance between them equal. This might be a little bit hard to do with that changing SV hmm,,I keep it now. Because it is the last point of the climax, I think that it is most suitable personally.
Gl~ Thank you for modding!

-Maruk- wrote:
@くんか君
さっき気付いたけどAudioLeadIn 1500か2000ぐらい入れたほうが良いと思いますあんま必要ないかなって、、ｗ　offsetが414なんで1000だけ入れときます。

Factorial

691 posts

Joined August 2013

Factorial 2016-03-11T05:15:05+00:00

Hi, M4M from my modding queue:

Overall

The first beat starts very immediately, so you must set audio lead-in on your map. 1500 to 2000 ms would be fine here.
01:04:243 - Finish should be removed on this point as there is not much beat emphasis here.

Easy

00:19:929 (1) - blanketing here with reverse arrow of 00:18:360 (4)
00:32:478 (1,2) - For Easy, this seems overmapped. This could be reduced to a single slider.

Normal

00:48:164 (1,2) - This could be a 3/4 slider, as it fills the vocal at 00:48:458
01:14:635 - There should be a space on this part, vocal reason.

Hard

00:16:400 (5) - Remove the middle point on this slider? Although the music allows for a wiggle, this is way too short.
00:10:448 (1) - You should allow 1 beat space after spinner on Hard.

Insane

00:06:000 - I hear a beat here, maybe add circle here?
01:11:694 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 01:14:831 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - with very long streams, this is beyond Insane. o:

Ouch, I can't mod much from the other difficulties
Tbh, this is well-mapped. Take a star anyways.

kunka

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Topic Starter

kunka 2016-03-11T14:14:14+00:00

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Neil Leo wrote:
Hi, M4M from my modding queue:

Overall
The first beat starts very immediately, so you must set audio lead-in on your map. 1500 to 2000 ms would be fine here. It's an opinion same as maruk-san lol. okay. I switch from 1000 to 1500.
01:04:243 - Finish should be removed on this point as there is not much beat emphasis here. hmm,,I removed it. However, I felt a sense of incongruity very much. I keep it now.
Easy
00:19:929 (1) - blanketing here with reverse arrow of 00:18:360 (4) hmm..I switched to slightly different form and flow.
00:32:478 (1,2) - For Easy, this seems overmapped. This could be reduced to a single slider. I removed 00:33:655 (2) -
Normal
00:48:164 (1,2) - This could be a 3/4 slider, as it fills the vocal at 00:48:458 The rhythm of the suggestion is the type that added current rhythm. I didn't feel need to change it.
01:14:635 - There should be a space on this part, vocal reason. This part does not take the rhythm of the vocal. I pick it up here because a bass drum is outstanding very much.
Hard
00:16:400 (5) - Remove the middle point on this slider? Although the music allows for a wiggle, this is way too short. I make it to match sound. i keep it now.
00:10:448 (1) - You should allow 1 beat space after spinner on Hard. It doesn't have any problem. This is admitted. Please refer to my map
Insane
00:06:000 - I hear a beat here, maybe add circle here? okay.
01:11:694 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 01:14:831 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - with very long streams, this is beyond Insane. o: It doesn't have any problem. I think with the range of the Insane diff.
Ouch, I can't mod much from the other difficulties
Tbh, this is well-mapped. Take a star anyways. Thank you for modding and kds star!!

Kei

1,797 posts

Joined May 2010

Kei 2016-03-15T00:37:20+00:00

I won't mod the extra diff because I'm bad at modding these. Hope that's ok with you

[Insane]

00:19:537 (3) - This slider curve kinda breaks the flow so I suggest you to change it like this:
SPOILER
00:48:949 (9) - How about adding a NC here to follow the piano? it'd also help to shorten that 13 notes' combo. I think it's too long.
00:49:047 (10) - You can spread this slider a bit so it doesnt overlap itself so much?
SPOILER
00:56:007 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - You can add some hitfinishes here to emphasize this part since the kiai is about to begin. You can add hitfinish to 00:56:302 (3)'s start, 00:56:792 (1) and 00:57:086 (3).
01:08:851 (3) - Spread this slider a little as well?
SPOILER
01:12:184 (6) - Align this circle with the other circles? feels misplaced here.
01:16:400 (1) - Add a hitfinish here?
01:27:380 (1,2,3,4,5) - Perhaps make this pattern a perfect "flower" shape?
SPOILER
01:28:360 (8,1) - This feels weird because you're ignoring a beat at 01:28:458. I think you should add a circle there.

[Maruk's Insane]

I played this difficulty and liked it. I can FC it

But there's something that feels lacking and it's 00:56:007 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3). It lacks hitfinishes. I think it's an epic part right before the chorus that needs more emphasis. You can add hitfinish to 00:56:007 (1) and 00:57:576 (1). I wouldn't add normal hitfinishes though. You will need to add green lines and change the sample set like you did at 01:03:851 (1).

[Hard]

00:06:517 - I think you could add a note here. Sounds a bit empty like this.
00:10:448 (1) - This spinner is overextended imo. It sounds better if it ends at 00:13:241.
00:32:478 (1,2,3,4,5) - Too many whistles imo. It think it sounds much better if you remove whistle at 00:32:478 (1) and 00:32:870 (2)'s end and also to 00:33:458 (4).
00:53:458 (3) - This slider feels and sounds kinda off tbh. I suggest you to replace it with two 1/2 notes instead, or a triplet with circles.
00:55:419 (5) - I don't think this should be a slider. Circles seem more fitting imo.
00:56:792 (4) - Add a hitfinish here for more emphasis? You can also add a NC here.
01:23:851 (6) - Hmm I don't really see why did you increase the spacing here.
01:28:360 (5,6,1) - This sounds a bit weird because a note is missing at 01:28:458. Adding a circle would make this part too difficult, I know. But I can't think of anything else so I guess you'll have to leave it like this. xD

[Normal]

00:19:929 (1) - Add a hitfinish here?
01:01:694 (3) - I fear that the kiai might be too intense, talking about difficulty increase so I thought that deleting this note would be good.
01:11:694 (1) - Hitfinish?
01:13:262 (1) - And here?
01:14:831 (1) - And also here?
01:16:400 (1) - Hifinish here as well? :p
01:16:400 (1) - And finally another one here?
01:28:556 (3,4) - Hmm this shouldn't end like this. The final guitar sound is clearly at 01:28:851. Better use a slider instead that ends there?
SPOILER

[Easy]

00:10:551 (1) - This spinner starts too early after 00:10:345 (5). Better drag it to 00:11:172 so beginners can see it coming and spin properly.
01:11:694 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1) - Same hitfinish suggestions as in Normal.
01:28:360 (2,3) - Same problem as seen in normal diff. Why not better replace them with a slider that ends at 01:28:851? I think it doesn't really matter that it's 1/4 because the only thing snapped like that will be the end.
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I'm in love with this song so take a star as well. <3

Good luck.

kunka

1,566 posts

Joined July 2012

Topic Starter

kunka 2016-03-15T03:53:57+00:00

Green : change
Orange : change a little.
Red : no change
Blue : comment

Kei wrote:
I won't mod the extra diff because I'm bad at modding these. Hope that's ok with you It doesn't have any problem. Thank you

[Insane]
00:19:537 (3) - This slider curve kinda breaks the flow so I suggest you to change it like this: fixed.
SPOILER
00:48:949 (9) - How about adding a NC here to follow the piano? it'd also help to shorten that 13 notes' combo. I think it's too long. hm,,okay.
00:49:047 (10) - You can spread this slider a bit so it doesnt overlap itself so much? I don't like right angles. I revised it little a bit gentle.
SPOILER
00:56:007 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - You can add some hitfinishes here to emphasize this part since the kiai is about to begin. You can add hitfinish to 00:56:302 (3)'s start, 00:56:792 (1) and 00:57:086 (3). 00:56:302 (3) - ok 00:56:792 (1) - ok 00:57:086 (3) - keep (all diff)
01:08:851 (3) - Spread this slider a little as well? The flow makes 01:09:635 (3) - and symmetry. I can't change this..
SPOILER
01:12:184 (6) - Align this circle with the other circles? feels misplaced here. lol okay. I moved it a little bit.
01:16:400 (1) - Add a hitfinish here? cool!
01:27:380 (1,2,3,4,5) - Perhaps make this pattern a perfect "flower" shape? Yeah,I got it. In addition, I changed it clockwise to improve the flow.
SPOILER
01:28:360 (8,1) - This feels weird because you're ignoring a beat at 01:28:458. I think you should add a circle there. It becomes the small stream when I do it. I want to place 01:28:556 (1,2,3,4) - and the 01:28:360 (8,9) - in different snap. Therefore, I change the 01:28:360 (8) to the 1/4 slider.
[Hard]
00:06:517 - I think you could add a note here. Sounds a bit empty like this. There was a circle at the time of the making. However, I removed it. There is a sound of the 1/6 rhythm here. The 1/6 placement does not want to it in hard diff. In addition, the 00:06:517 - is 1/4 rhythm. There is no sound there. I keep it now.
00:10:448 (1) - This spinner is overextended imo. It sounds better if it ends at 00:13:241. hmm,,This does not have any problem in a rule. However, I revise it because it is the point that it had also pointed out by Leo-san.
00:32:478 (1,2,3,4,5) - Too many whistles imo. It think it sounds much better if you remove whistle at 00:32:478 (1) and 00:32:870 (2)'s end and also to 00:33:458 (4). I add it to emphasize the sound of the piano.
00:53:458 (3) - This slider feels and sounds kinda off tbh. I suggest you to replace it with two 1/2 notes instead, or a triplet with circles. fmm,,I changed some rhythm.
00:55:419 (5) - I don't think this should be a slider. Circles seem more fitting imo. fixed.
00:56:792 (4) - Add a hitfinish here for more emphasis? You can also add a NC here. okay.
01:23:851 (6) - Hmm I don't really see why did you increase the spacing here. A very strong sound exists here. I enlarge the space to emphasize it.
01:28:360 (5,6,1) - This sounds a bit weird because a note is missing at 01:28:458. Adding a circle would make this part too difficult, I know. But I can't think of anything else so I guess you'll have to leave it like this. xD I changed to it 1/4 slider.......It's very difficult imao. I keep it now.
[Normal]
00:19:929 (1) - Add a hitfinish here? fixed. (all diff)
01:01:694 (3) - I fear that the kiai might be too intense, talking about difficulty increase so I thought that deleting this note would be good. I understand. However, cymbals and the strong sound of the snare exist here. I don't want to remove it as possible. I keep it now.
01:11:694 (1) - Hitfinish? ok
01:13:262 (1) - And here? I think that it is not necessary here
01:14:831 (1) - And also here? ok
01:16:400 (1) - Hifinish here as well? :p I have already added it^^;
01:16:400 (1) - And finally another one here? ↑Time is the same ^^;;
01:28:556 (3,4) - Hmm this shouldn't end like this. The final guitar sound is clearly at 01:28:851. Better use a slider instead that ends there? Nice idea.
SPOILER
[Easy]
00:10:551 (1) - This spinner starts too early after 00:10:345 (5). Better drag it to 00:11:172 so beginners can see it coming and spin properly. fm,,okay.
01:11:694 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1) - Same hitfinish suggestions as in Normal. k.
01:28:360 (2,3) - Same problem as seen in normal diff. Why not better replace them with a slider that ends at 01:28:851? I think it doesn't really matter that it's 1/4 because the only thing snapped like that will be the end. fm,,I revise it because it is the point that it had also pointed out by Feb-san.
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I'm in love with this song so take a star as well. <3

Good luck. It was very helpful. Thank you for modding and kds starrrrr!

-Maruk-

322 posts

Joined December 2012

-Maruk- 2016-03-15T11:05:17+00:00

Kei wrote:
[Maruk's Insane]
I played this difficulty and liked it. I can FC it 　Thanks~

But there's something that feels lacking and it's 00:56:007 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3). It lacks hitfinishes. I think it's an epic part right before the chorus that needs more emphasis. You can add hitfinish to 00:56:007 (1) and 00:57:576 (1). I wouldn't add normal hitfinishes though. You will need to add green lines and change the sample set like you did at 01:03:851 (1). okey~ fix it~

Thanks~

SPOILER

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Xinying

559 posts

Joined July 2013

Xinying 2016-03-15T11:32:20+00:00

Hi! From my queue's M4M

General

BPM and Offset : ✓
Aimod : ✓
Kiai : ✓
Metadata : ✓
Hitsound : ✓
Video : ✓ , cool video ^^

Easy

01:27:380 (1,2) - Try this rhythm instead , the current one feels weird to play , and I think 01:28:164 should be clickable , and it's just easy diff , make is short and sweet .

Normal

00:55:027 (2,3) - Slightly off blanket. Sorry I'm nazi. ;_;

Hard

00:51:302 (1,2,3,4) - 4 of these heads seem like good Finish hitsounds. But Finishing all of them would be too loud. Maybe try just Finish 1 and 3 , sounds good to me.
01:28:556 (6,1) - I feel that clicking 1 would be too hard , try using symmetry sliders with this rhythm. Plays better to me imo.

Maruk's Insane

00:07:655 - I feel that you should add a circle here.
00:10:345 (1) - I kind of understand why you made this slider , but it's a bad idea imo. If you insist of keeping it , I'd rather you snap it 1/8 , since most sliders that follow this type of sounds are 1/8. 1/6 is just too wrong.
00:19:929 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Messy hitsound. Just hitsound clap every white tick.
00:32:086 (7,8,9,10,1) - Seems like a weird flow to stream. Try this flow.
01:28:164 (1,2,3,4,5) - For this , try a rhythm like this.About how to map it , maybe just continue the stream like this?

Insane

00:03:310 (3) - Instead of mapping this slider , try mapping a 1/6 rebound , since the 1/6 sound is present there.
00:30:909 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - I feel that these 'curvy' streams are better as just curve streams like this 00:22:576 (7,8,9,10) .
00:33:066 (4) - Shift this triangle to x:336 , y:203 , it looks neater.
01:12:184 (6) - Is there a reason for an increase in DS for the stream here? Just map it to 1X DS.
01:28:066 (7) - This can be mapped to 1/6 rebound instead. This is the rhythm and this is the example you can use.

Overall

Pretty streamy map imo. I can tell it's a pain to map it haha. Good mapset imo , all diffs are well polished. Good luck!!

kunka

1,566 posts

Joined July 2012

Topic Starter

kunka 2016-03-15T14:27:00+00:00

Green : change
Orange : change a little.
Red : no change
Blue : comment

Chocox wrote:
Hi! From my queue's M4M

General
BPM and Offset : ✓
Aimod : ✓
Kiai : ✓
Metadata : ✓
Hitsound : ✓
Video : ✓ , cool video ^^ Yes!

Easy
01:27:380 (1,2) - Try this rhythm instead , the current one feels weird to play , and I think 01:28:164 should be clickable , and it's just easy diff , make is short and sweet . ok.

Normal
00:55:027 (2,3) - Slightly off blanket. Sorry I'm nazi. ;_; lol okay.

Hard
00:51:302 (1,2,3,4) - 4 of these heads seem like good Finish hitsounds. But Finishing all of them would be too loud. Maybe try just Finish 1 and 3 , sounds good to me. fixed. (all maps)
01:28:556 (6,1) - I feel that clicking 1 would be too hard , try using symmetry sliders with this rhythm. Plays better to me imo. okkk

Insane
00:03:310 (3) - Instead of mapping this slider , try mapping a 1/6 rebound , since the 1/6 sound is present there. fixed.
00:30:909 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - I feel that these 'curvy' streams are better as just curve streams like this 00:22:576 (7,8,9,10) . This unevenness is intentional. Because I want to make a violent feeling, I keep it now.
00:33:066 (4) - Shift this triangle to x:336 , y:203 , it looks neater. fixed.
01:12:184 (6) - Is there a reason for an increase in DS for the stream here? Just map it to 1X DS. I made modifications in mod of the last kei-san.
01:28:066 (7) - This can be mapped to 1/6 rebound instead. This is the rhythm and this is the example you can use. I confirmed it. I can't agree to it. I don't like it personally because it is high-speed 2 reverse slider. sorry.

Overall
Pretty streamy map imo. I can tell it's a pain to map it haha. Good mapset imo , all diffs are well polished. Good luck!! I love this map very much. And I am tired at the same time lol. Thank you for modding!

-Maruk-

322 posts

Joined December 2012

-Maruk- 2016-03-16T12:25:33+00:00

Chocox wrote:
Maruk's Insane
00:07:655 - I feel that you should add a circle here. umm...keep it
00:10:345 (1) - I kind of understand why you made this slider , but it's a bad idea imo. If you insist of keeping it , I'd rather you snap it 1/8 , since most sliders that follow this type of sounds are 1/8. 1/6 is just too wrong. fix. Change the circle
00:19:929 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Messy hitsound. Just hitsound clap every white tick.
00:32:086 (7,8,9,10,1) - Seems like a weird flow to stream. Try this flow. keep it
01:28:164 (1,2,3,4,5) - For this , try a rhythm like this.About how to map it , maybe just continue the stream like this? fix.

Thanks~

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kunka

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kunka 2016-03-16T14:00:19+00:00

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Setz

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Setz 2016-03-23T10:10:08+00:00

m4m

[Easy]

1.2 distance snap with 1.0 SV seems very high for easy.... 1.0 for both at eleast would ahve been much better

00:18:360 (4) - maybe give this slider a slight curve, so the flow to the next object doesnt feel so stiff. somehting like this
SPOILER
00:19:929 (1) - not really sure what you are mapping with these sliders. if you used white tick sliders, it would follow the music better. like this
SPOILER

[Normal]

00:35:027 (3,4) - inconsistent spacing
00:39:537 (3) - pretty confusing, because if you listen closely, the rhythm starts on the blue tick, you can do this instead
SPOILER
00:44:243 (3) - ^
01:24:243 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - maybe try to make a gap here, this seems like alot of objects in a row for normal

[Hard]

01:25:811 (1,2,3) - kinda sudden, you should continue to use the previous rhythm instead, since you conditioned the player to it for this whole section. it makes little sense to suddenly change it.
00:48:164 (1,2,3,4) - I wouldnt do this, not even the insane mapped this
Diff looks fine to me otherwise, good job

[Maruk]

this is a big difficulty jump from hard with the long stream sections, I dont think this difficulty spread is fine

00:21:007 (7) - the rhythm here is backwards, by listening to the music, you hear the strong beat at 00:21:105 - so you want to click here on instinct, but it is on a slider end this makes much more sense
SPOILER
00:25:811 (10) - seems like bad flow, you should move this something like this
SPOILER
01:04:635 (1) - move down a little to avoid overlap with 01:03:851 (1) -

[Insane]

00:46:007 (6) - move to avoid overlap
01:25:419 (5) - i feel like starting here, if you are following the guitar 1/4 snap is incorrect, some parts sound like they should be 1/6. for example 01:24:929 - so I wouldnt try to follow this guitar, it seems too complex
diff seems OK to me, just concerned with the note snapping in the point above.

I cant really mod the extra, too difficult for me. sorry

good luck!

-Maruk-

322 posts

Joined December 2012

-Maruk- 2016-03-23T12:31:07+00:00

Setz wrote:
[Maruk]
this is a big difficulty jump from hard with the long stream sections, I dont think this difficulty spread is fine You're right...lol
00:21:007 (7) - the rhythm here is backwards, by listening to the music, you hear the strong beat at 00:21:105 - so you want to click here on instinct, but it is on a slider end this makes much more sense fix it
SPOILER
00:25:811 (10) - seems like bad flow, you should move this something like this fix
SPOILER
01:04:635 (1) - move down a little to avoid overlap with 01:03:851 (1) - move it

Thanks~

SPOILER

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kunka

1,566 posts

Joined July 2012

Topic Starter

kunka 2016-03-23T20:00:30+00:00

Green : change
Orange : change a little.
Red : no change
Blue : comment

Setz wrote:
m4m

[Easy]
1.2 distance snap with 1.0 SV seems very high for easy.... 1.0 for both at eleast would ahve been much better Because BPM is not high, I think that I don't have any problem. When there is an opinion from other modder, I reexamine it.
00:18:360 (4) - maybe give this slider a slight curve, so the flow to the next object doesnt feel so stiff. somehting like this fixed.
SPOILER
00:19:929 (1) - not really sure what you are mapping with these sliders. if you used white tick sliders, it would follow the music better. like this Please confirm other diff. All diff doesn't go snap in 00:26:988 - . I make map by drum sound mainly. The sound of the guitar is good, too, but picks up a drum here.
SPOILER
[Normal]
00:35:027 (3,4) - inconsistent spacing Eh!? It's normal stack^^; http://puu.sh/nQVVJ.jpg
00:39:537 (3) - pretty confusing, because if you listen closely, the rhythm starts on the blue tick, you can do this instead fmm,,I think the white line to be strong sound than blue tick. I can't ignore the white line 00:39:929 -
SPOILER
00:44:243 (3) - ^ ^
01:24:243 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - maybe try to make a gap here, this seems like alot of objects in a row for normal There is the pattern of 1/1 slider and the a circle, too. However, I think that the as possible present pattern is good...When there is an opinion from other modder, I revise it.
[Hard]
01:25:811 (1,2,3) - kinda sudden, you should continue to use the previous rhythm instead, since you conditioned the player to it for this whole section. it makes little sense to suddenly change it. okay.
00:48:164 (1,2,3,4) - I wouldnt do this, not even the insane mapped this I surely think that it is difficult lol However, I maintain it daringly. As for it, 3/4 slider is one of the plans. When this has many opinions of the change, I change it.
Diff looks fine to me otherwise, good job Thank you～
[Insane]
00:46:007 (6) - move to avoid overlap fixed.
01:25:419 (5) - i feel like starting here, if you are following the guitar 1/4 snap is incorrect, some parts sound like they should be 1/6. for example 01:24:929 - so I wouldnt try to follow this guitar, it seems too complex Nice catch! However, only this point feels a sense of incongruity in making a change to 1/6. this phrase is all 1/6? It becomes very difficult if so...I was troubled very much, i fixed all it by 1/6. (and ex diff)
diff seems OK to me, just concerned with the note snapping in the point above. yes^^
I cant really mod the extra, too difficult for me. sorry ok. It doesn't have any problem

good luck! Thank you for modding!

lit120

3,251 posts

Joined August 2013

lit120 2016-03-24T17:26:07+00:00

yo

[Insane]

00:00:414 (1) - soft sampleset + normal additions

nothing that much. looks good to me imo

GL!

kunka

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kunka 2016-03-24T18:01:06+00:00

lit120 wrote:
yo

[Insane]
00:00:414 (1) - soft sampleset + normal additions It does not have a change with the present setting so much. I keep it now.
nothing that much. looks good to me imo ok. thank you～

GL!

_handholding

3,109 posts

Joined April 2014

_handholding 2016-04-10T13:12:27+00:00

hi m4m

[Easy]

00:21:498 (2) - I think it would flwo better if you did something like this http://puu.sh/od1NV/87b83623d8.jpg
00:43:458 (1) - ctrl + j
00:57:576 (3,4,5) - the beat at 00:57:870 is a lot stronger than the beat at 00:57:968. I suggest using this rhythm http://puu.sh/od1XI/abf605e821.jpg
01:02:282 (1,2) - I dont think these sliders are pretty they're too small to do this kinda of shapes

[Normal]

00:26:204 (1) - curve this like 00:26:792 (2) . This is the only slider in the section that has a red anchor point, it looks weird that way
01:01:694 (3) - move this circle to 01:01:694 . It matches the rhythm at 01:02:870 (2,3) . Also there is no sound at 01:01:694
01:08:556 (1,2) - ctrl + g?
01:17:968 (1,2,3,4) - I think you can make prettier sliders

[Hard]

00:48:949 (3) - Make the slider start here? you mapped the vocals at 00:49:537 (5,6,1) so I think you should stick to the vocals here too and not the piano
00:54:439 (1,2,3,4) - I think this rhythm would fit better http://puu.sh/od2JC/cb6be69c5f.jpg It matches 00:53:655 (4,5,6) -
00:57:870 - Make this note clickable? http://puu.sh/od2PL/5d3eda3e1f.jpg or http://puu.sh/od3lm/9b6c1f6ff3.jpg
01:28:556 (2,3) - Increase DS? plays nicely imo http://puu.sh/od2TR/3ea283485f.jpg

[Maruk's Insane]

01:05:027 (2,3,4,5) - I think this would play better if you spaced them. Having them stacked stops the flow

[Insane]

00:06:000 (2,3) - Increase DS for emphasis. Maybe like this? http://puu.sh/od3gQ/880a4cc532.jpg
00:49:047 (2) - This would look better as a normal curve without the red anchor point. Like 00:52:870 (1) -
01:17:184 (1,2) - Extending this to the blue ticks feels good to play imo. Plus the red ticks are weak beats so you can get away with it http://puu.sh/od3CS/7a2ba99e1b.jpg

Thats all I could find, I hope this mod was helpful. I'll shoot a few stars, GL!

kunka

1,566 posts

Joined July 2012

Topic Starter

kunka 2016-04-11T10:39:40+00:00

Green : change
Orange : change a little.
Red : no change
Blue : comment
[quote="Kisses"]hi m4m

[Easy]

00:21:498 (2) - I think it would flwo better if you did something like this http://puu.sh/od1NV/87b83623d8.jpg Two times in vertical movement continues. first time 00:19:929 (1) - . I choose horizontal movement.
00:43:458 (1) - ctrl + j The flow from 00:43:066 (4) - improves. However, A flow to00:44:635 (2) - is not good. Because I follow with 00:44:635 (2,3) - neatly, I keep it now.
00:57:576 (3,4,5) - the beat at 00:57:870 is a lot stronger than the beat at 00:57:968. I suggest using this rhythm http://puu.sh/od1XI/abf605e821.jpg I want to change it. However, 1/2 rhythm is included. It is pointed out surely by BN.
01:02:282 (1,2) - I dont think these sliders are pretty they're too small to do this kinda of shapes I think that I do not have any problem.

[Normal]

00:26:204 (1) - curve this like 00:26:792 (2) . This is the only slider in the section that has a red anchor point, it looks weird that way ok
01:01:694 (3) - move this circle to 01:01:694 . It matches the rhythm at 01:02:870 (2,3) . Also there is no sound at 01:01:694 The 01:01:694 (3) - is a very strong sound. It is a sound same with 01:02:086 (4) - . I keep it now.
01:08:556 (1,2) - ctrl + g? It is vocal follow. It will ignore the sound of the snare of the 01:08:753 - .
01:17:968 (1,2,3,4) - I think you can make prettier sliders I think this to be the most suitable slider to rhythm. There is no plan of the change.

[Hard]

00:48:949 (3) - Make the slider start here? you mapped the vocals at 00:49:537 (5,6,1) so I think you should stick to the vocals here too and not the piano Because there are many opinions of the change, I change it.
00:54:439 (1,2,3,4) - I think this rhythm would fit better http://puu.sh/od2JC/cb6be69c5f.jpg It matches 00:53:655 (4,5,6) - It will ignore the sound of the snare of the 00:55:027 - . The vocal follow is surely good. However, I think that it is not a thing to perform ignoring the sound of the snare.
00:57:870 - Make this note clickable? http://puu.sh/od2PL/5d3eda3e1f.jpg or http://puu.sh/od3lm/9b6c1f6ff3.jpg ok. I adopt the second. I use the first in insane diff (It's the same as extra diff)
01:28:556 (2,3) - Increase DS? plays nicely imo http://puu.sh/od2TR/3ea283485f.jpg

It's 2.0 now. 2.0 is only here. It has resistance that I increase them further. I keep it now.

[Insane]

00:06:000 (2,3) - Increase DS for emphasis. Maybe like this? http://puu.sh/od3gQ/880a4cc532.jpg I don't feel the need.
00:49:047 (2) - This would look better as a normal curve without the red anchor point. Like 00:52:870 (1) - ok
01:17:184 (1,2) - Extending this to the blue ticks feels good to play imo. Plus the red ticks are weak beats so you can get away with it fixed. http://puu.sh/od3CS/7a2ba99e1b.jpg

Thats all I could find, I hope this mod was helpful. I'll shoot a few stars, GL!

Thank you for modding and kds star!!

-Maruk-

322 posts

Joined December 2012

-Maruk- 2016-04-11T11:39:41+00:00

Kisses wrote:
[Maruk's Insane]

01:05:027 (2,3,4,5) - I think this would play better if you spaced them. Having them stacked stops the flow ok~

Thanks~

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kunka

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Topic Starter

kunka 2016-04-11T12:07:21+00:00

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Kagetsu

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Joined March 2015

Kagetsu 2016-04-11T20:13:41+00:00

yo, kunka... you already requested two times in my queue so i decided to take a look to your map!
i hope this help

[General]

consider using drum additions instead of normal sampleset to hitsound the snares on 00:16:792 - ... it's really hard to follow the rhythm as it is now.
Wave hitsounds with possible delay >5ms: soft-hitfinish10.wav

[Extra]

00:07:034 (1,2,3,4) - this is really confusing to play, because the change between 1/3 to 1/4... i think works much better, it follows the guitar in a better way and also is less complicated (same goes to 00:07:862 (1,2,3,4) - )
00:17:772 (4) - there's a drum sound so i think you should add hitsounds here
00:47:772 (5) - voice clearly ends on red tick so extend the slider to blue tick makes no sense
00:49:537 (9,10) - maybe stack those 2 with 00:49:733 (1) - so it emphasises the voice
00:50:909 (5) - this is too close to 00:50:517 (3) - ... it looks messy in someway, maybe space it more?
suggestion
00:59:929 (1) - i think that red anchor is needless... it just makes it look messier so would be better if you remove it
01:03:066 (1) - ^ same... it could look better
01:02:282 (1,2,3,4) - isn't this spacing a bit extreme? it's very easy to misread here D:
01:08:164 (3,4,5,6,1) - stream shape could be improved
01:11:302 (5,6) - i would replace those 2 circles with a slider, it fits the voice and also makes the start of the stream on 01:11:694 - be more noticeable
01:16:792 (3,4,5) - really hard to read, you're making a sudden change from 1/4 to 1/6 kicksliders, would be better if you use reverse arrow sliders here
01:24:635 (7,8) - dunno about these sliders... they kinda breaks the music... maybe consider this? same goes to all this part

good luck :')

kunka

1,566 posts

Joined July 2012

Topic Starter

kunka 2016-04-12T06:15:53+00:00

Green : change
Orange : change a little.
Red : no change
Blue : comment

Kagetsu wrote:
yo, kunka... you already requested two times in my queue so i decided to take a look to your map!
i hope this help Thank you^^

[General]
consider using drum additions instead of normal sampleset to hitsound the snares on 00:16:792 - ... it's really hard to follow the rhythm as it is now. fmm,,ok.
Wave hitsounds with possible delay >5ms: soft-hitfinish10.wav It is the .wave which a guest uses. I tell a guest.

[Extra]
00:07:034 (1,2,3,4) - this is really confusing to play, because the change between 1/3 to 1/4... i think works much better, it follows the guitar in a better way and also is less complicated (same goes to 00:07:862 (1,2,3,4) - ) I did position it at the start by 1/4. however, The prelude part is constructed mainly in 1/3 (00:01:241 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 00:03:310 (3,4,5) - 00:04:551 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - etc). Because there was suggestion of 1/3 in mod in before, I adopted it.
00:17:772 (4) - there's a drum sound so i think you should add hitsounds here added whistle
00:47:772 (5) - voice clearly ends on red tick so extend the slider to blue tick makes no sense ok
00:49:537 (9,10) - maybe stack those 2 with 00:49:733 (1) - so it emphasises the voice I don't like stack in the last of the stream. A flow stops.
00:50:909 (5) - this is too close to 00:50:517 (3) - ... it looks messy in someway, maybe space it more? fixed.
suggestion
00:59:929 (1) - i think that red anchor is needless... it just makes it look messier so would be better if you remove it removed
01:03:066 (1) - ^ same... it could look better ok
01:02:282 (1,2,3,4) - isn't this spacing a bit extreme? it's very easy to misread here D: It is DS2.0 comprised of this diff. Nothing has any problem.
01:08:164 (3,4,5,6,1) - stream shape could be improved ok
01:11:302 (5,6) - i would replace those 2 circles with a slider, it fits the voice and also makes the start of the stream on 01:11:694 - be more noticeable fixed.
01:16:792 (3,4,5) - really hard to read, you're making a sudden change from 1/4 to 1/6 kicksliders, would be better if you use reverse arrow sliders here Because it wants to make differentiation with the insane diff, i keep it now.
01:24:635 (7,8) - dunno about these sliders... they kinda breaks the music... maybe consider this? same goes to all this part
fmm,, sorry. I maintain also it. I already used that pattern (01:21:497 (7) - 01:22:282 (7) - 01:23:066 (7) - ) I don't use the same pattern.

good luck :') Thank you for modding! It was useful

Kagetsu

796 posts

Joined March 2015

Kagetsu 2016-04-12T14:21:05+00:00

kunkakunkakunkakunka wrote:
[General]
consider using drum additions instead of normal sampleset to hitsound the snares on 00:16:792 - ... it's really hard to follow the rhythm as it is now. fmm,,ok.

just to clarify this point... I was suggesting to use the default normal-hitnormal file, but in drum additions instead, i'll leave the file here so you can use it.
it's better to use additions because most of players have a custom normal hitsound in their skins xd

good luck again!

-Maruk-

322 posts

Joined December 2012

-Maruk- 2016-04-12T14:37:09+00:00

Kagetsu wrote:
[General]
Wave hitsounds with possible delay >5ms: soft-hitfinish10.wav ok~ fix it

　　　　　　　　　　↓

Thanks!

kunka

1,566 posts

Joined July 2012

Topic Starter

kunka 2016-04-12T14:47:12+00:00

Kagetsu wrote:
just to clarify this point... I was suggesting to use the default normal-hitnormal file, but in drum additions instead, i'll leave the file here so you can use it.
it's better to use additions because most of players have a custom normal hitsound in their skins xd

good luck again!

Thank you for advice!!
However, I'm satisfied with the present state after the correction.
I use it when there is those suggestion by future mod. (I did DL and keep it.)
sorry

Milan-

1,473 posts

Joined August 2011

Milan- 2016-04-20T05:44:28+00:00

Maruk's Insane
-00:06:069 (2) - Snapping doesn't sound right, i think you should use the same snapping that others diffs use (1/2).
-00:06:482 (3) - same here. I'd go with 1/8 like others diffs. Maybe if timing were more precise it'd be different but i guess 1/8 would be better for the sake of constancy
-00:16:792 (1,2,3,4,5) - not sure if you're mapping to the guitar strings or not but if you are, 00:17:968 (5) - should be 1/2 instead. It'll fit to the strings much better
-00:18:753 (2) - you're missing 00:18:949 - this way. I'd try something like http://puu.sh/ooWsL/697f7c9118.jpg maybe.
-00:24:145 (7,8) - 00:27:282 (7,8) - etc. On these kind of patterns, you should space them way more please. Because of leniency you'll go to (8) way faster than you should, which is quite awkward while playing.
-00:30:321 (8) - Probably as a pair of 1/4s would sound better because how loud 00:30:517 - is.
-01:03:851 (1,1,1) - you could use a more 'fun' flow instead of a lineal one. Even soemthing like http://puu.sh/ooWTx/77dfd7b6c0.jpg could work. Same after 01:10:125 -
-01:06:988 (1,3) - There's lot of emphasis in the music for these notes but distance and flow is the same as 01:06:596 (6,7) - , which is kinda underwhelming. You could try making 01:06:596 (6,7) - just a slider so circles are placed in strong beats, or you could increase the distance used on 01:06:988 (1,3) - ?
-01:23:655 (3) - sounds more like 1/6 than 1/8 tbh. Regardless of how off beats are, 1/6 seems more correct i think
-Didn't like much how far 1/2 notes are in this section 01:17:968 - . It's like the triple of distance that the whole map uses, which isn't too right.

Extra
-00:28:458 (6,7,8) - flow could be better with sharper angle tbh. Like this ugly example http://puu.sh/ooXlS/056eaf55c4.jpg
-00:40:125 - Don't you think that mapping vocals/guitar here will sound better? Maybe 00:39:929 (7) - use 1/2 instead?
-01:04:831 (2,1) - not sure why it triggers me, but try http://puu.sh/ooXvF/e261a4b781.jpg xd
-01:11:302 (5,6,1) - Spacing doesn't seem right to me. It makes more sense to do the other way around, low spacing between sliders and higher on the crash. But i'd try equal spacing for aesthetics. And same after 01:14:439 (3,4,1) -
-01:16:792 (3,4,5) - You sure about 1/3? Like i can hear just 2 beat between red and white tick, besides the timing being off.
-01:28:556 (1,2,3,4) - This is just too overkill xd I think something like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4970209 is more acceptable. You have a sudden 306 bpm jumps please.
-Not a big fan of slow section being mapped with similar spacing as faster sections. From 00:13:655 - to 00:16:792 - , the music is just building up but you use similar spacing as 00:21:105 (8,9) - , that isn't too cool.
-Also at the beginning you use these sliders 00:20:125 (3) - 00:23:262 (3) - that end on clear snares, which doesn't sound good.. Try usiing 2 circles or 1/4 slider+circle, that would sound much better, also it's a extra so I don't think you need to care too much about rhythms being hard or something.
-Also also in this kind of song, where snapping is so weird, you should try to make the whole set consistent in this matter. You map this section 01:21:105 - as 1/6 while Maruk uses 1/4, try to be consistent about i'd say

Lots of personal preference because just 2 diffs xd hope it helps a bit and good luck!

Gaia

2,808 posts

Joined May 2013

Gaia 2016-04-20T06:52:00+00:00

[easy]
hmm DS is a bit high imo, 1/1s are pretty far apart

00:18:360 (4) - what you have is great mapping but imo lacks because the hard snare beats are both missed .. even though you end up using a 3/2 gap u might wanna consider this rhythm?

01:17:968 (1,2,3) - nice pattern o:
01:27:380 (1) - nothing big but these anchors make the slider look shorter and may confuse new players

[Normal]
ya again i feel ds is a bit high but i guess as long its consistent its fine lol
00:16:792 (1,2,3,4,1) - especially with this high ds a train like this is kinda challenging for this diff imo
00:24:243 (3) - just circle is good
00:30:517 (3) - ^ this is way too long here
00:49:537 (4) - delete this //train too long
00:51:302 (1,2) - dont do this it's terrible polarity. if you're insisting on keeping this rhythm tho switch them in the timeline so at least the players have heard the blue tick and can kinda guess the next note
00:55:811 (4) - delete cuz this one is longer than all the others
00:59:537 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this rhythm gets really confusing especially because you suddenly switched from following mainly vocals to instrumentals. especially 01:01:694 (3,4) - because this has zero coordination with the vocals at all
01:24:243 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - holy this 1/2 spam.. u should tone it down more

the rhythm gets really confusing after the kiai imo, before it followed the vocals and was intuitive but kiai it followed even the slightest of sounds so was kinda hard to grasp in my opinion
also watch out for the 1/2 spam cuz i think there are way too much.. SR might not show it but i think there's an issue with the spread from E>N

[Hard]
something is wrong when your 1/2 spacing is the same in your normal and ur hard .-.
00:10:448 (1) - end 1/2 earlier / u need 1 beat of rest in hard after a spinner
00:38:753 (1) -

00:39:341 (4) - might wanna make this double too cuz snare
00:49:733 (1) -

00:59:929 (4,5,1,2,3) - this flow is really weird lol

[insane]
00:17:086 (2,3) - omg this is really hard u should stack these 2 at least
00:16:792 (1,2,3,4) - or actually i recommend using 2 1/4 repeats instead, that makes the stream a lot more sense tbh
00:21:792 (2,3,4,5,6) - these linear patterns are really hard to play especially when you dont stack the 1/4 circle -> sliders together.. u gotta remember that circles and sliders play differently and spacing should differ between the two, but here it's not the case and hence the playability is really weak
00:23:655 - there's a strong beat here idk why u skipped it

idk how to map this tbh, the rest of the map is pretty much the same things over and over. i honestly think the 1/4 jumps are a bit much
also why is the rhythming in the chorus so much simpler than in the other places? it should really be the other way around lol.

anyways glhf!

-Maruk-

322 posts

Joined December 2012

-Maruk- 2016-04-20T12:03:14+00:00

Milan- wrote:
Maruk's Insane
-00:06:069 (2) - Snapping doesn't sound right, i think you should use the same snapping that others diffs use (1/2). fix
-00:06:482 (3) - same here. I'd go with 1/8 like others diffs. Maybe if timing were more precise it'd be different but i guess 1/8 would be better for the sake of constancy fix
-00:16:792 (1,2,3,4,5) - not sure if you're mapping to the guitar strings or not but if you are, 00:17:968 (5) - should be 1/2 instead. It'll fit to the strings much better wow nice!
-00:18:753 (2) - you're missing 00:18:949 - this way. I'd try something like http://puu.sh/ooWsL/697f7c9118.jpg maybe. it's cool!
-00:24:145 (7,8) - 00:27:282 (7,8) - etc. On these kind of patterns, you should space them way more please. Because of leniency you'll go to (8) way faster than you should, which is quite awkward while playing.
-00:30:321 (8) - Probably as a pair of 1/4s would sound better because how loud 00:30:517 - is. keep it. the same as this part 00:24:439 (8,9) - etc...
-01:03:851 (1,1,1) - you could use a more 'fun' flow instead of a lineal one. Even soemthing like http://puu.sh/ooWTx/77dfd7b6c0.jpg could work. Same after 01:10:125 - nice lol it's very cool
-01:06:988 (1,3) - There's lot of emphasis in the music for these notes but distance and flow is the same as 01:06:596 (6,7) - , which is kinda underwhelming. You could try making 01:06:596 (6,7) - just a slider so circles are placed in strong beats, or you could increase the distance used on 01:06:988 (1,3) - ? fix
-01:23:655 (3) - sounds more like 1/6 than 1/8 tbh. Regardless of how off beats are, 1/6 seems more correct i think fix
-Didn't like much how far 1/2 notes are in this section 01:17:968 - . It's like the triple of distance that the whole map uses, which isn't too right. keep

It was a very nice mod. Thank you~

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kunka

1,566 posts

Joined July 2012

Topic Starter

kunka 2016-04-20T19:56:19+00:00

Green : change
Orange : change a little.
Red : no change
Blue : comment

Milan- wrote:
Extra
-00:28:458 (6,7,8) - flow could be better with sharper angle tbh. Like this ugly example http://puu.sh/ooXlS/056eaf55c4.jpg ok
-00:40:125 - Don't you think that mapping vocals/guitar here will sound better? Maybe 00:39:929 (7) - use 1/2 instead? fixed.
-01:04:831 (2,1) - not sure why it triggers me, but try http://puu.sh/ooXvF/e261a4b781.jpg xd fixed.
-01:11:302 (5,6,1) - Spacing doesn't seem right to me. It makes more sense to do the other way around, low spacing between sliders and higher on the crash. But i'd try equal spacing for aesthetics. And same after 01:14:439 (3,4,1) - ok
-01:16:792 (3,4,5) - You sure about 1/3? Like i can hear just 2 beat between red and white tick, besides the timing being off. fmm,,I confirmed it again and made modifications. Probably I think that I do not have any problem in it.
-01:28:556 (1,2,3,4) - This is just too overkill xd I think something like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4970209 is more acceptable. You have a sudden 306 bpm jumps please. lol ok. I unified it in 2.86x.
-Not a big fan of slow section being mapped with similar spacing as faster sections. From 00:13:655 - to 00:16:792 - , the music is just building up but you use similar spacing as 00:21:105 (8,9) - , that isn't too cool. fmm,,ok. This part changed it to 1.7x
-Also at the beginning you use these sliders 00:20:125 (3) - 00:23:262 (3) - that end on clear snares, which doesn't sound good.. Try usiing 2 circles or 1/4 slider+circle, that would sound much better, also it's a extra so I don't think you need to care too much about rhythms being hard or something. fixed. (1/4 slider+circle)
-Also also in this kind of song, where snapping is so weird, you should try to make the whole set consistent in this matter. You map this section 01:21:105 - as 1/6 while Maruk uses 1/4, try to be consistent about i'd say Oh,,I located them first by 1/4. However, Because I got a hint of 1/6 in many mod, I made modifications...I put it back orz

Lots of personal preference because just 2 diffs xd hope it helps a bit and good luck! There is nothing a problem. You met my request. Thank you～

Gaia wrote:
[easy]
hmm DS is a bit high imo, 1/1s are pretty far apart I think that it is not a big problem. I keep it now.

00:18:360 (4) - what you have is great mapping but imo lacks because the hard snare beats are both missed .. even though you end up using a 3/2 gap u might wanna consider this rhythm? Its place troubled with mapping. I thought that a point of the 00:19:145 - was necessary. I can't locate it there when I pick up the double of the snare....ok! fixed!!
01:17:968 (1,2,3) - nice pattern o: Thank you^^
01:27:380 (1) - nothing big but these anchors make the slider look shorter and may confuse new players I removed a red anchor two. (=wave slider)

[Normal]
ya again i feel ds is a bit high but i guess as long its consistent its fine lol It may be slightly high, but I think that it is not a big problem.
00:16:792 (1,2,3,4,1) - especially with this high ds a train like this is kinda challenging for this diff imo I changed placement.
00:24:243 (3) - just circle is good ok
00:30:517 (3) - ^ this is way too long here fixed
00:49:537 (4) - delete this //train too long removed
00:51:302 (1,2) - dont do this it's terrible polarity. if you're insisting on keeping this rhythm tho switch them in the timeline so at least the players have heard the blue tick and can kinda guess the next note I changed it by ctrl+G. I hear suggestion of other modder by this change. Anyway, I want to make rhythm to pick it up by all means because there is a very strong sound in 3/4.
00:55:811 (4) - delete cuz this one is longer than all the others fmm,,ok.
00:59:537 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this rhythm gets really confusing especially because you suddenly switched from following mainly vocals to instrumentals. especially 01:01:694 (3,4) - because this has zero coordination with the vocals at all I changed some rhythm.
01:24:243 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - holy this 1/2 spam.. u should tone it down more Because there was the suggestion of the change also in former mod, I make modifications.

the rhythm gets really confusing after the kiai imo, before it followed the vocals and was intuitive but kiai it followed even the slightest of sounds so was kinda hard to grasp in my opinion
also watch out for the 1/2 spam cuz i think there are way too much.. SR might not show it but i think there's an issue with the spread from E>N I revised it in addition to your suggestion. It is deletion of notes and a change of the rhythm mainly. Probably I think that it became easy to play^^

[Hard]
something is wrong when your 1/2 spacing is the same in your normal and ur hard .-. I did an overall review. I made some modifications. However, I think that there are not many problems. (Basic DS:1.4 , Storong souds (finish):1.6)
00:10:448 (1) - end 1/2 earlier / u need 1 beat of rest in hard after a spinner fixed.
00:38:753 (1) - You're right.
00:39:341 (4) - might wanna make this double too cuz snare I switched to the rhythm of the snare. (circle + 1/2 slider)
00:49:733 (1) - ok
00:59:929 (4,5,1,2,3) - this flow is really weird lol I reviewed it how many times, but don't think that I have a problem. I changed rhythm to a snare, but I think to be it oddly...Because I received the suggestion with this point for the first time, I keep it now.

[insane]
00:17:086 (2,3) - omg this is really hard u should stack these 2 at least I don't think that I'm hard.
00:16:792 (1,2,3,4) - or actually i recommend using 2 1/4 repeats instead, that makes the stream a lot more sense tbh ok. fixed.
00:21:792 (2,3,4,5,6) - these linear patterns are really hard to play especially when you dont stack the 1/4 circle -> sliders together.. u gotta remember that circles and sliders play differently and spacing should differ between the two, but here it's not the case and hence the playability is really weak I removed (4) and changed (3) to the 1/2 slider. Probably I think it to have become easy by this change. 00:28:164 (3,4) - same changed.
00:23:655 - there's a strong beat here idk why u skipped it ok. 00:20:517 - 00:26:792 - 00:29:733 - same changed

idk how to map this tbh, the rest of the map is pretty much the same things over and over. i honestly think the 1/4 jumps are a bit much
also why is the rhythming in the chorus so much simpler than in the other places? it should really be the other way around lol. I'm always troubled with a fix of chorus part lol. It is caused by 1/4 rhythm (drum) and 1/6 rhythm (guitar). I revised them at suggestion of the milan. (It returned to rhythm of one year ago lol)

anyways glhf! Thank you for modding!!

Suimya

6,374 posts

Joined February 2011

Suimya 2016-05-18T03:23:20+00:00

M4M from my Q owo/

General:

How about adding "テラフォーマーズ" since it's the also the title of this anime o.o/

Easy:

00:07:034 (1,2) - I don't think these two sliders looks okay tbh, it's a bit boring right now, as liner sliders ></ how about making them something like curve sliders, or something like this instead o.o
SPOILER
00:19:929 (1,1) - These slider's repeat sounds a bit off tbh, I really think it would fit better with something like this:
00:26:204 (1) - ^ same thing imo
00:29:341 (1) - ^
00:50:517 (2) - how about adding a whistle to this slider's head? I think it'll follow the piano nicely o.o
01:09:733 (2) - missing a clap or a whistle here? o3o

Normal:

00:08:689 (5,1) - how about switching the nc? i think it would fit much better on the (5) instead the (1) imo
00:26:792 (2) - how about making this slider like this? i think it'll play much better and it'll also play smoothly as well o.o
SPOILER
00:29:341 (1) - ^
SPOILER
00:55:027 (2,3) - Fix the blanket a bit, it looks a bit bad imo ></

Hard:

00:28:458 (5) - I don't think i like this slider's shape tbh, how about c/p this slider 00:27:870 (2) - so it'll look better imo o.o/

Maruk's Insane:
I really think AR 8.5 or 8.7 would fit much better for this diff, since AR 9 is just too much now orz. Also it'll be good for the spread, since Hard has 7.5, so yeah =3=/

00:22:870 (7,8,1,2,3,4) - I don't like how you shaped these notes/stream it looks kinda bad imo, I really think you should redo the stream here ></
00:32:086 (7,8,9,10,1) - ^

I really think this diff, needs more work on streams, they kinda shaped badly tbh, specially the stream on the intro, but besides that. This diff looks good imo o.o/

Good map overall, and i really liked how you mapped Extra/Insane <3 Good luck with rank owo/

kunka

1,566 posts

Joined July 2012

Topic Starter

kunka 2016-05-18T05:00:47+00:00

Green : change
Orange : change a little.
Red : no change
Blue : comment

Sekaii wrote:
M4M from my Q owo/

General:
How about adding "テラフォーマーズ" since it's the also the title of this anime o.o/ I add it to tag.
Easy:
00:07:034 (1,2) - I don't think these two sliders looks okay tbh, it's a bit boring right now, as liner sliders ></ how about making them something like curve sliders, or something like this instead o.o I changed them to the curve.
SPOILER
00:19:929 (1,1) - These slider's repeat sounds a bit off tbh, I really think it would fit better with something like this: Because it is the point that was suggested before, I adopt it.
00:26:204 (1) - ^ same thing imo ^
00:29:341 (1) - ^ ^
00:50:517 (2) - how about adding a whistle to this slider's head? I think it'll follow the piano nicely o.o added (all diff)
01:09:733 (2) - missing a clap or a whistle here? o3o A vocal exists here. However, the sound doesn't exist. Instead, I added a whistle to a tail of the 01:08:556 (1) -
Normal:
00:08:689 (5,1) - how about switching the nc? i think it would fit much better on the (5) instead the (1) imo I maintain it according to consistency. I adopt nc each 4beat after bpm changes.
00:26:792 (2) - how about making this slider like this? i think it'll play much better and it'll also play smoothly as well o.o fmm,,,okay.
SPOILER
00:29:341 (1) - ^ I can't change this. Because, A flow from 00:28:949 (4) - worsens.
SPOILER
00:55:027 (2,3) - Fix the blanket a bit, it looks a bit bad imo ></ fixed.
Hard:
00:28:458 (5) - I don't think i like this slider's shape tbh, how about c/p this slider 00:27:870 (2) - so it'll look better imo o.o/ ok.
Good map overall, and i really liked how you mapped Extra/Insane <3 Good luck with rank owo/ Thank you for modding! I’ll try my best

-Maruk-

322 posts

Joined December 2012

-Maruk- 2016-05-18T13:39:37+00:00

Sekaii wrote:
Maruk's Insane:
I really think AR 8.5 or 8.7 would fit much better for this diff, since AR 9 is just too much now orz. Also it'll be good for the spread, since Hard has 7.5, so yeah =3=/ ok~ use 8.5!
00:22:870 (7,8,1,2,3,4) - I don't like how you shaped these notes/stream it looks kinda bad imo, I really think you should redo the stream here ></
00:32:086 (7,8,9,10,1) - ^ some fix~
I really think this diff, needs more work on streams, they kinda shaped badly tbh, specially the stream on the intro, but besides that. This diff looks good imo o.o/

Thank you~~

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kunka

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kunka 2016-06-25T15:05:08+00:00

名前変えました
修正が必要だったので再dlオナシャス

I changed username.
Because a correction was necessary, pls re-DL.

-Maruk-

322 posts

Joined December 2012

-Maruk- 2016-06-25T18:40:55+00:00

申し訳ないけど修正お願い

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Natsu

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Natsu 2016-06-27T02:21:57+00:00

Extra

00:04:827 (4,5) - this is super confused, I tho it was 1/2 when testing, but is 1/3, transitions from slider to circle are cool, but when you them from circle to circle it becomes a pain to read, try to make this pattern more readable.
00:10:345 (1) - so why suddenly 1/4 when the music and vocals are still in 1/3?
00:20:713 - why suddenly ignoring this important beat when it is part of the main melody in the song? in fact a new melody is starting on that beat
00:21:694 - you're ignoring this beat here, but you mapped it at 00:20:125 (3) - consistency is good when mapping
both previous suggestions happen alot in this diff, so check them careful
00:33:949 (5) - I don't think this beat is necessary at all, since the music have a slowdown, that's why I think it's better to follow only the vocals, or atleast make 00:33:851 (4,5) - a slider
00:48:164 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this doesn't sounds cool, try to delete and listen again, I believe you can do a better rhythm there.
00:59:145 (1,2,3) - this really need to have high spacing? also I think the triplet sounds better from 00:59:341 (3) - to 00:59:537 (4) -
01:16:743 (3,4) - sudenly 1/8 circle, this doesn't play nice and will cause so much slider breaks, just try this:
01:16:988 (5,6) - same, use a repeat slider instead, using such different snap without warning is always a pain to play
01:28:556 (1,2,3,4) - this is too much btw, you can space the streams, but this is literally huge jumps that never happen in the map before, I'm sure every player would break, hit 100s or even miss at this part.

Insane

00:33:949 (5) - basically same as the insane diff, you don't need to map this, is really weird to click, since isn't a main beat, it feels out of place
00:13:655 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - this is basically the same as your extra diff, placement and rhtyhm, I think you can do some variations of it, for the sake of better spread, since right now a player that comes from insane to extra will find the same pattern ;x
00:48:164 (1,2,3,4,5) - the stream curve is bad, try to improve it? you can use the convert slider to stream tool!

Maruk's Insane

00:16:400 (8) - this is really a combo break thing, even the two hardest diff didn't do this, can you using a long slider instead? as the other diffs do
00:37:870 (3,4) - such short spacing looks like 1/4 jump, similar as your previous ones which are even bigger, use more spacing here plls.
00:39:341 (5,6,7) - same spacing for 1/2 and 1/4s? make the snapping changes more noticeables.
01:10:419 (1,1,2) - ugly overlap, try to avoid it, since its noticeable in game and doesn't looks nice.

Hard

I have mixed feelings about this diff, anyways it looks nice, just try to be more consistent with the spacing? ohhh and I wouldn't use the 1/4 slider jump at the end, will be hard to do for a hard diff lvl player.

Normal

AR 5,5 maybe is better, since the spaced 1/2s .

Easy

seems fine

I wouldn't say that the hardest diffs need alot of work, just they aren't my style, anyways GL with this

kunka

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kunka 2016-06-27T07:06:08+00:00

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Natsu wrote:
Extra

00:04:827 (4,5) - this is super confused, I tho it was 1/2 when testing, but is 1/3, transitions from slider to circle are cool, but when you them from circle to circle it becomes a pain to read, try to make this pattern more readable. I examined the possibility of the correction. However, I don't change the snapping. It's because a sound sounds like that. I changed the placement.
00:10:345 (1) - so why suddenly 1/4 when the music and vocals are still in 1/3? I think that it is not 1/3. I tried the 1/3, but I feel a sense of incongruity.
00:20:713 - why suddenly ignoring this important beat when it is part of the main melody in the song? in fact a new melody is starting on that beat ok. This pattern revised it.
00:21:694 - you're ignoring this beat here, but you mapped it at 00:20:125 (3) - consistency is good when mapping fmm,,fixed.
both previous suggestions happen alot in this diff, so check them careful ok
00:33:949 (5) - I don't think this beat is necessary at all, since the music have a slowdown, that's why I think it's better to follow only the vocals, or atleast make 00:33:851 (4,5) - a slider I switched to slider.
00:48:164 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this doesn't sounds cool, try to delete and listen again, I believe you can do a better rhythm there. fixed
00:59:145 (1,2,3) - this really need to have high spacing? also I think the triplet sounds better from 00:59:341 (3) - to 00:59:537 (4) - You are right about the 00:59:243 (2) - . However, I don't think that DS1.0 is big.
01:16:743 (3,4) - sudenly 1/8 circle, this doesn't play nice and will cause so much slider breaks, just try this: fixed[/color]
01:16:988 (5,6) - same, use a repeat slider instead, using such different snap without warning is always a pain to play fixed
01:28:556 (1,2,3,4) - this is too much btw, you can space the streams, but this is literally huge jumps that never happen in the map before, I'm sure every player would break, hit 100s or even miss at this part. hmm,,,,ok. fixed
Insane

00:33:949 (5) - basically same as the insane diff, you don't need to map this, is really weird to click, since isn't a main beat, it feels out of place I removed it.
00:13:655 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - this is basically the same as your extra diff, placement and rhtyhm, I think you can do some variations of it, for the sake of better spread, since right now a player that comes from insane to extra will find the same pattern ;x I changed a pattern.
00:48:164 (1,2,3,4,5) - the stream curve is bad, try to improve it? you can use the convert slider to stream tool! fixed
Hard

I have mixed feelings about this diff, anyways it looks nice, just try to be more consistent with the spacing? ohhh and I wouldn't use the 1/4 slider jump at the end, will be hard to do for a hard diff lvl player. I made some modifications.
Normal

AR 5,5 maybe is better, since the spaced 1/2s .ok
Easy

seems fine ＼(^o^)／
I wouldn't say that the hardest diffs need alot of work, just they aren't my style, anyways GL with this ok. Thank you for modding!

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