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newyams99
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on April 18, 2016 at 11:34:04 AM

Artist: Taneda Risa, Chihara Minori & Yamaoka Yuri
Title: Yakusoku no Kizuna (TV Size)
Source: 境界の彼方
Tags: 境界の彼方 妖夢討伐隊 Beyond the boundary youmu toubatsutai nardoxyribonucleic
BPM: 120
Filesize: 4574kb
Play Time: 02:48
Difficulties Available:
  1. Futsuu (2.11 stars, 304 notes)
  2. Inner Oni (3.89 stars, 778 notes)
  3. Kantan (1.18 stars, 194 notes)
  4. Muzukashii (2.77 stars, 464 notes)
  5. Nardo's Oni (3.02 stars, 652 notes)
Download: Taneda Risa, Chihara Minori & Yamaoka Yuri - Yakusoku no Kizuna (TV Size)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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この書き込み欄は自分の譜面の紹介をする所です。更新する時に詳細などを含むと何が違うか分かりやすくなります。
Thanks to Nardoxyribonucleic for the Oni difficulty :D

Nardoxyribonucleic
Hi, here is the Oni as requested~ :3

http://puu.sh/mPaIi.zip

Please add my name to tags, thanks~
Topic Starter
newyams99

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Hi, here is the Oni as requested~ :3

http://puu.sh/mPaIi.zip

Please add my name to tags, thanks~
Updated and added the tags :D
Dino99
yo yo~ n.n/

<General>

  1. Open AiMod, the SV is not 1.4 in some Diffs... Fix it in notepad!
  2. End at 02:48:617 - is more correct IMO (Like Nardo's Oni)

<Kantan>

  1. 00:28:867 (22) - Add a finish on this slider~
  2. 01:50:367 (1) - Delete this k? I think it's not really necessary~
  3. 02:02:867 (22) - I see you add a finish here, hmm if you wanna it be "Big Slider", you need to add on the whole slider instead of only adding on head lol
  4. 02:21:367 - Add a D here?
  5. 02:27:367 (45,46,47,48) - The whole map only here have three 1/2 beats~ maybe replace them to another rhythm? :3
  6. 02:46:617 (108) - D fits better to me
  7. 02:46:867 - The Spinner start at here? Because it's too close now IMO as a Kantan~

<Futsuu>

  1. 00:19:867 - Add a d here~
  2. 00:20:367 - Add a k here~
  3. 00:28:867 (25) - Add finish on it!
  4. 01:15:617 (3,4) - 1/4 in Futsuu owo"... But conisder to the low BPM, I think it would be fine~
  5. 01:58:617 (25,26) - Ctrl + G (Swap)...? Becasue I think 01:58:867 (26) - sounds highest here, k fits better.
  6. 02:02:867 (33) - Same as Kantan~ finish the WHOLE Slider
  7. 02:05:742 (35) - Delete finish? I don't hear cynmbal here @@
  8. 02:21:367 - Add a D, Same as Kantan~
  9. 02:46:617 (108) - D fits better to me



<Muzukashii>

  1. 00:03:242 - Add a k here to follow the piano sound~
  2. 00:03:617 - Add a d here too
  3. 00:28:867 (51) - ya finish~
  4. 00:35:617 (65) - Deleie it, and add k at 00:35:992 - and then add another d at 00:36:117 - It sounds much better to me! ^^b
  5. 00:39:992 - Maybe add a k??
  6. 00:47:617 - Add two d here and at 00:47:742 - It is too repetitive now IMO~ also I can hear the small drum sounds here!
  7. 01:03:992 - Add a k here and add a d at 01:04:117 - sounds cool~
  8. 02:05:242 (55,56,57) - Maybe remove finish?
  9. 02:22:367 (94) - Move it to 02:22:242 - and add finsh sounds nicely! Then add finish at 02:22:617 (95) - too to follow the Cymbal~
  10. 02:41:992 - Add a k here?
  11. 02:46:617 (176) - Should be D :3

<Nardo's Oni>

  1. 01:13:367 (171) - k to follow the piano sound?
  2. Hmm Solid Diff, well done! owo

<Inner Oni>

  1. 00:22:117 (57) - k fits better here?
  2. 00:28:867 (80) - Finish again~ lol
  3. 00:32:617 (86,87,88) - Should be 1/6~ (kkkd)
  4. 01:47:117 (192) - Delete it for a short break is better IMO~ Also it is the trans-point to the "Guitar?" solo part!
  5. 01:54:742 (243) - Move it to 01:54:617 - and maybe change to d, then you can add a finish on 01:54:617 -
  6. 02:02:617 (293) - Hmm change it to k and remove 02:02:742 (294) - And then change 02:02:867 (295) - to D~~
  7. 02:04:742 (306) - Remove it and add a finish on 02:04:867 (307) - ? I think it should be a D, because the Cymbal is clear here~
  8. 02:05:242 (308,309,310) - Remvoe finish?
  9. 02:43:617 (492,493,494,495) - How about dkdk? Sounds cool!
  10. 02:46:617 (513) - D plz~ xD
  11. Not bad~
That's all

Star for the sweet?? map and nice song! owo

Good Luck newsyam99!! ;) 8-)
Topic Starter
newyams99

Dino99 wrote:

yo yo~ n.n/

<General>

  1. Open AiMod, the SV is not 1.4 in some Diffs... Fix it in notepad! Fixed.
  2. End at 02:48:617 - is more correct IMO (Like Nardo's Oni) idk what I was doing lol. fixed

<Kantan>

  1. 00:28:867 (22) - Add a finish on this slider~ Sure.
  2. 01:50:367 (1) - Delete this k? I think it's not really necessary~ Sure.
  3. 02:02:867 (22) - I see you add a finish here, hmm if you wanna it be "Big Slider", you need to add on the whole slider instead of only adding on head lol
  4. 02:21:367 - Add a D here? Done in Futsuu for difficulty curve.
  5. 02:27:367 (45,46,47,48) - The whole map only here have three 1/2 beats~ maybe replace them to another rhythm? :3
  6. 02:46:617 (108) - D fits better to me Done in all diffs.
  7. 02:46:867 - The Spinner start at here? Because it's too close now IMO as a Kantan~ Oh yea.

<Futsuu>

  1. 00:19:867 - Add a d here~
  2. 00:20:367 - Add a k here~
  3. 00:28:867 (25) - Add finish on it!
  4. 01:15:617 (3,4) - 1/4 in Futsuu owo"... But conisder to the low BPM, I think it would be fine~
  5. 01:58:617 (25,26) - Ctrl + G (Swap)...? Becasue I think 01:58:867 (26) - sounds highest here, k fits better.
  6. 02:02:867 (33) - Same as Kantan~ finish the WHOLE Slider
  7. 02:05:742 (35) - Delete finish? I don't hear cynmbal here @@
  8. 02:21:367 - Add a D, Same as Kantan~
  9. 02:46:617 (108) - D fits better to me Done everything else :D



<Muzukashii>

  1. 00:03:242 - Add a k here to follow the piano sound~
  2. 00:03:617 - Add a d here too I'd like to keep these two for a better difficulty curve with the Inner Oni.
  3. 00:28:867 (51) - ya finish~ Yep.
  4. 00:35:617 (65) - Deleie it, and add k at 00:35:992 - and then add another d at 00:36:117 - It sounds much better to me! ^^b Yeah, I wasn't sure about the limitations on Muzukashii mapping involving two hit 1/4 rhythms.
  5. 00:39:992 - Maybe add a k?? Sure.
  6. 00:47:617 - Add two d here and at 00:47:742 - It is too repetitive now IMO~ also I can hear the small drum sounds here! Yeah, made some variety.
  7. 01:03:992 - Add a k here and add a d at 01:04:117 - sounds cool~ Sounds good, but perhaps it's a bit too hard if I do that.
  8. 02:05:242 (55,56,57) - Maybe remove finish?
  9. 02:22:367 (94) - Move it to 02:22:242 - and add finsh sounds nicely! Then add finish at 02:22:617 (95) - too to follow the Cymbal~ I think I'd like to keep this linear 1/1.
  10. 02:41:992 - Add a k here?
  11. 02:46:617 (176) - Should be D :3 Fixed everything else.

<Nardo's Oni>

  1. 01:13:367 (171) - k to follow the piano sound?
  2. Hmm Solid Diff, well done! owo

<Inner Oni>

  1. 00:22:117 (57) - k fits better here? I think d matches the vocal pitch better.
  2. 00:28:867 (80) - Finish again~ lol
  3. 00:32:617 (86,87,88) - Should be 1/6~ (kkkd) Yep.
  4. 01:47:117 (192) - Delete it for a short break is better IMO~ Also it is the trans-point to the "Guitar?" solo part! Definitely worth consideration. However, I'd like to keep this for now because this hit is matched to the guitar, so having it not there interrupts the transition imo. Also, the break time issue isn't too necessary as this is an Inner Oni and it's at a very low BPM.
  5. 01:54:742 (243) - Move it to 01:54:617 - and maybe change to d, then you can add a finish on 01:54:617 - Did a variation of this.
  6. 02:02:617 (293) - Hmm change it to k and remove 02:02:742 (294) - And then change 02:02:867 (295) - to D~~ Why not.
  7. 02:04:742 (306) - Remove it and add a finish on 02:04:867 (307) - ? I think it should be a D, because the Cymbal is clear here~ Sure.
  8. 02:05:242 (308,309,310) - Remvoe finish?
  9. 02:43:617 (492,493,494,495) - How about dkdk? Sounds cool! Nothing wrong with that. Done in both the start and here.
  10. 02:46:617 (513) - D plz~ xD kk.
  11. Not bad~
That's all

Star for the sweet?? map and nice song! owo

Good Luck newsyam99!! ;) 8-)
Thanks for your mod :D

I'm bad at mapping lel xD
Nardoxyribonucleic

Dino99 wrote:

yo yo~ n.n/

<Nardo's Oni>

  1. 01:13:367 (171) - k to follow the piano sound? As the main melody here is lower-pitched than 01:13:867 (173) - , I think d would be fine.
  2. Hmm Solid Diff, well done! owo
That's all

Star for the sweet?? map and nice song! owo

Good Luck newsyam99!! ;) 8-)
Thanks for the mod~ :)
Volta
from Q~

[General]
i love mirai
try to use same kiai time between you and nardo? personally feels Nardo's is more proper
hear at 00:40:867 - the tick is too early. try offset: 899. pls check mod first before changing offset or timestamp might go wrong

[Kantan]
00:04:867 - consider start the slider at 00:06:867 - it can represent the piano better. instead put note there and at 00:05:867 -
00:10:867 - i think this worth a finisher

00:28:867 (18) - change to k? you haven't done 1/1 before so simplicity is better for introduction

00:45:867 - it's fine to put note here imo, the break is enough
00:56:367 - move to 00:55:367 - and make them d-k-d? newbie have tendencies to follow vocal (and i see you've been following it, e.g: 00:46:867 (35,36,37) - ). i also think its nice to give a rest moment before the finisher at 00:56:867 -

01:09:367 - not needed imo. just follow vocal is fine
01:10:867 (66) - consider end the slider at 01:12:867 - and remove the next spinner to give 4/1 break (spinner and slider doesn't count as rest moment imo)

also find some spot at kiai to make longer break. maybe delete 01:27:367 (20,21) - and 01:43:367

02:27:367 (44,45,46,47) - oh shit i think this pattern is too hard for new player. unified with 1st kiai if possible?
02:39:867 (65,66) - and consider delete this to give break after the kiai
02:46:367 - delete

[Futsuu]
00:04:867 (4) - same thing with kantan

00:12:867 ~ 00:28:367 - consider add some notes in this section for better spread with muzu. only has 5 notes more than kantan, but 20 notes less than muzu.

00:56:367 - move to 00:55:367 -
00:44:367 - move to 00:43:367 - ?
00:52:367 - to 00:51:367 - ?

01:10:867 (70) - i'd map the slider coz muzu has some notes

01:16:367 - it's fine to add note here. actually i think it is too empty
01:24:367 - ^
01:30:367 - delete, a break here sounds more nice so 01:30:867 - would feel stronger as the start of next sequence
01:32:367 - add note
01:40:367 - ^

01:55:367 (14,15) - i'd delete this to give a rest moment
01:57:117 - deleting this would result better emphasize to 01:57:367 -

02:39:367 - may delete this, need 2/1 break

[Muzukashii]
it's good, but it has big gap with futsuu. probably can remove 20~30 notes, for example reducing the usage of triplet such as 00:47:617 (90,91,92) - and 01:11:617 (162,163,164) - or cutting some sequence such as 00:58:617 - and 01:02:617 -

good luck~
Topic Starter
newyams99

Volta wrote:

from Q~

[General]
i love mirai High five 8-)
try to use same kiai time between you and nardo? personally feels Nardo's is more proper This is my personal style (very different), and I really like kiai times after the chorus. I'll change it for consistency tho.
hear at 00:40:867 - the tick is too early. try offset: 899. pls check mod first before changing offset or timestamp might go wrong Changed to 887, which is the ranked map's offset. I'm bad at timing lel

[Kantan]
00:04:867 - consider start the slider at 00:06:867 - it can represent the piano better. instead put note there and at 00:05:867 - Yeah, you're right. However, I think the slider placement atm works very well in the Inner Oni, to show the very different piano rhythm. I will consider shortening the slider to start at 00:05:367 and having a hit where it used to start tho.
00:10:867 - i think this worth a finisher I personally like to have this without a finisher.

00:28:867 (18) - change to k? you haven't done 1/1 before so simplicity is better for introduction I think sliders make the rhythm simpler, but idk lel

00:45:867 - it's fine to put note here imo, the break is enough Yea, noticed that while listening.
00:56:367 - move to 00:55:367 - and make them d-k-d? newbie have tendencies to follow vocal (and i see you've been following it, e.g: 00:46:867 Yep, my pattern was inconsistent here too.(35,36,37) - ). i also think its nice to give a rest moment before the finisher at 00:56:867 -

01:09:367 - not needed imo. just follow vocal is fine Yep, would help with the diff curve too.
01:10:867 (66) - consider end the slider at 01:12:867 - and remove the next spinner to give 4/1 break (spinner and slider doesn't count as rest moment imo) Good idea.

also find some spot at kiai to make longer break. maybe delete 01:27:367 (20,21) - and 01:43:367 It's definitely worth consideration, but this song is 120 BPM, which is extremely slow compared to most songs.

02:27:367 (44,45,46,47) - oh shit i think this pattern is too hard for new player. unified with 1st kiai if possible? Again, since it's 120 BPM. However, this one is definitely better to consider since it's true that it's pretty difficult. Will ask for Nardo's opinion for both of these.
02:39:867 (65,66) - and consider delete this to give break after the kiai Same for the rest of the mod as above.
02:46:367 - delete

[Futsuu]
00:04:867 (4) - same thing with kantan As mentioned before.

00:12:867 ~ 00:28:367 - consider add some notes in this section for better spread with muzu. only has 5 notes more than kantan, but 20 notes less than muzu. Yep, will see what I can do.

00:56:367 - move to 00:55:367 - Done.
00:44:367 - move to 00:43:367 - ?
00:52:367 - to 00:51:367 - ? I kept these two since I wasn't focusing too much on vocals here.

01:10:867 (70) - i'd map the slider coz muzu has some notes I'll see what I can do.

01:16:367 - it's fine to add note here. actually i think it is too empty All these additions are to consider. I thought that having a difficulty curve from the first to the second kiai would be better. Also, I think it'd just give preparation time to hit the next hit because 1/4 is quite difficult.
01:24:367 - ^
01:30:367 - delete, a break here sounds more nice so 01:30:867 - would feel stronger as the start of next sequence I personally like what I have now.
01:32:367 - add note
01:40:367 - ^

01:55:367 (14,15) - i'd delete this to give a rest moment 120 BPM, so I think this is fine.
01:57:117 - deleting this would result better emphasize to 01:57:367 - Will consider for making the Muzu easier.

02:39:367 - may delete this, need 2/1 break Again, I'll consult Nardo, but I think it's fine.

[Muzukashii]
it's good, but it has big gap with futsuu. probably can remove 20~30 notes, for example reducing the usage of triplet such as 00:47:617 (90,91,92) - and 01:11:617 (162,163,164) - or cutting some sequence such as 00:58:617 - and 01:02:617 - Yep, will do.

good luck~
Thanks for your mod :D
Surono
oh heh

>Inner Oni
* 00:04:887 (12) - legit to DT ty ty.. hahahah :'D please mapping de song as Inner Oni, its nonsense
* 00:11:137 - spinner? actually is fit with that flow *clink, clink clink* >:U
* 00:20:262 - I think don more works on contrast
* 00:20:887 (53,54) - ctrl g? I no have reason.. or I like to not typing my rip engrish XD
* 00:28:887 - not long? XD plis is not like others mode. spinner actually.. taiko people will (y).png that if changed spinner
* 00:32:637 (86,87,88,89) - how about dddk? more emphasize. 00:32:637 (86,87,88) - don for this bold sounds. so kat for 00:32:887 - stronk emphasize
* 00:56:262 - I think is not snare drum, change don for 00:56:137 - consistent this
* 01:09:762 - change don? 01:09:887 - stronk vocal emphasize imo and dkkddkk too monotone
* 01:17:012 - don? 01:16:887 (13,15) - you block this contrast
* 01:17:762 - change kat? for variety with previous pattern and also is fit with vocal
* 01:19:262 - change to kat? if you like to follow vocal flow than lyric, also 01:19:637 - you should emphasize this with kat
* 01:20:637 - kat? if you like variety with next ddk ( cuz kdk its clearly fit with vocal lyric )
* 01:23:012 - you can keep this for variety, also its goes up vocal
* 01:23:637 - kat? 01:23:762 - nice emphasize piano with this don
* 01:30:012 - kat? both instrument and vocal
* 01:33:637 - kat? 01:33:387 - for follow this vocal
* 01:40:512 - I think this need emphasize, don?
* 02:25:137 - don?
and well nice mapped, overall pattern fine for me. just mentioned on coloring

>Nardo's Oni
idk must to do @w@
already nice and good variety, basic pattern nice like usual and friendly :3

>Muzukashii
* 00:33:762 - I think is should don.. 00:33:387 (54,55) - up to down, and its simple pattern as muzu
* 00:35:387 (60,61) - ctrl g? I think is better emphasize, 00:35:762 - high pitch
* 01:39:637 - for variety, kat?
* 01:41:137 (92,93) - ctrl g and 01:41:637 - change don? ^
* 01:57:137 - delete, for mini rest also guitar emphasize
* 02:22:262 - not make dd? its fit imo~ but okay spred,
nice on last with finisher and simple 1/2 pattern

>Futsuu
* 00:04:887 - " Hi mapper, I am footshoes player " XD ayy this, for instead 00:04:887 - kat, 00:05:887 - kat, 00:07:887 - don? if you like it to follow it :^)
* 00:28:887 - spinner, no futsuu its singletapping / slow alternating.. dont to smash keyburd lol, until here 00:31:387 - ? if you care about kdkdkdkdkdkdkdkd with spinner lol XD
* 00:36:887 - you want this for rest? *forrest > forest > okok*enrish
* wow nice idea with 1/4 xx XD for learning hit douplet :^)
* 02:03:887 - slider end, 02:04:387 - add note?
yeah nice inovation diff :^)

>Kantan
* 00:04:887 - " Hi mapper, i am foo
* 00:28:887 (22) - make spinner short for beginner
* 01:11:887 - end slider, to long for beginner
* 02:03:887 - like futsuu
and well rest fine, and inovation 1/2 pattern for learning next step lol, but for slider is too long imo, you can make short or instead spinner.. you should think low diff is for learning, dont think is for sparring/challenger things XD. wat my word lol

nice map >:U finale grandpa sur nub. Bye!1!!! :3
Topic Starter
newyams99

Surono wrote:

oh heh

>Inner Oni
* 00:04:887 (12) - legit to DT ty ty.. hahahah :'D please mapping de song as Inner Oni, its nonsense
* 00:11:137 - spinner? actually is fit with that flow *clink, clink clink* >:U
* 00:20:262 - I think don more works on contrast Wanted to match to the twinkle sound pitch going up.
* 00:20:887 (53,54) - ctrl g? I no have reason.. or I like to not typing my rip engrish XD I think the way I have it matches the vocals better.
* 00:28:887 - not long? XD plis is not like others mode. spinner actually.. taiko people will (y).png that if changed spinner Uh, idk what you mean x.x
* 00:32:637 (86,87,88,89) - how about dddk? more emphasize. 00:32:637 (86,87,88) - don for this bold sounds. so kat for 00:32:887 - stronk emphasize Possible, but I think I'd like to keep it for now because d k works better at 00:32:887 (89,90).
* 00:56:262 - I think is not snare drum, change don for 00:56:137 - consistent this Yeah, I see what you mean. Changed to ddd.
* 01:09:762 - change don? 01:09:887 - stronk vocal emphasize imo and dkkddkk too monotone Sure.
* 01:17:012 - don? 01:16:887 (13,15) - you block this contrast I think I'd really like to focus on the vocal pitch here, no changed.
* 01:17:762 - change kat? for variety with previous pattern and also is fit with vocal Sure.
* 01:19:262 - change to kat? if you like to follow vocal flow than lyric, also 01:19:637 - you should emphasize this with kat Yeah.
* 01:20:637 - kat? if you like variety with next ddk ( cuz kdk its clearly fit with vocal lyric ) I don't think this needs variety; the two should feel similar imo.
* 01:23:012 - you can keep this for variety, also its goes up vocal Same as before.
* 01:23:637 - kat? 01:23:762 - nice emphasize piano with this don I'd like to keep consistency with 01:15:637 (4,5,6,7).
* 01:30:012 - kat? both instrument and vocal I think the rhythm is fine rn.
* 01:33:637 - kat? 01:33:387 - for follow this vocal I think it works well as it's matched to the lower vocals from the previous hit.
* 01:40:512 - I think this need emphasize, don? I personally like it as is.
* 02:25:137 - don? Same as before.
and well nice mapped, overall pattern fine for me. just mentioned on coloring

>Nardo's Oni
idk must to do @w@
already nice and good variety, basic pattern nice like usual and friendly :3

>Muzukashii
* 00:33:762 - I think is should don.. 00:33:387 (54,55) - up to down, and its simple pattern as muzu Ok.
* 00:35:387 (60,61) - ctrl g? I think is better emphasize, 00:35:762 - high pitch I think this hit has a higher pitch than the next.
* 01:39:637 - for variety, kat? I'd like to refrain from making dks or kds after using dd so often.
* 01:41:137 (92,93) - ctrl g and 01:41:637 - change don? ^ Cool.
* 01:57:137 - delete, for mini rest also guitar emphasize Yeah.
* 02:22:262 - not make dd? its fit imo~ but okay spred, I'd like to keep finishers here.
nice on last with finisher and simple 1/2 pattern

>Futsuu
* 00:04:887 - " Hi mapper, I am footshoes player " XD ayy this, for instead 00:04:887 - kat, 00:05:887 - kat, 00:07:887 - don? if you like it to follow it :^) It'd be inconsistent with the other diffs, and I think this slider works to fill the irregular piano rhythm.
* 00:28:887 - spinner, no futsuu its singletapping / slow alternating.. dont to smash keyburd lol, until here 00:31:387 - ? if you care about kdkdkdkdkdkdkdkd with spinner lol XD I like sliders more than spinners :3
* 00:36:887 - you want this for rest? *forrest > forest > okok*enrish xD Rest moments are ok since it's 120 BPM imo.
* wow nice idea with 1/4 xx XD for learning hit douplet :^)
* 02:03:887 - slider end, 02:04:387 - add note? Nice idea, but I'd like to keep it consistent with the Kantan.
yeah nice inovation diff :^)

>Kantan
* 00:04:887 - " Hi mapper, i am foo xD
* 00:28:887 (22) - make spinner short for beginner Again, I like sliders better, and people can simply stop tapping if they can't react fast enough.
* 01:11:887 - end slider, to long for beginner ^
* 02:03:887 - like futsuu Perhaps this is worth consideration.
and well rest fine, and inovation 1/2 pattern for learning next step lol, but for slider is too long imo, you can make short or instead spinner.. you should think low diff is for learning, dont think is for sparring/challenger things XD. wat my word lol

nice map >:U finale grandpa sur nub. Bye!1!!! :3
Thanks for the mod 8-)
Topic Starter
newyams99
Honestly, Nardo's a god at mapping =_=

Must worship (All hail)
Surono
5kbps was take me :') DLing and Post.. I lost my word and not posted, thanks lyf

/me get laugh wtf #TrazhModderHasBegin red rerd red red lololol, but green okay my fav. color, but red is more nice
ye Spinner is boring, actually I just wonder with haters jepen with slider.. but idk, people is differ taste not like cloning things lol
and I forget ur style like consistening.. I just tried with that wtf suggestion cuz vocal mapper like to variety with lyric.. like sir Nardo.. and u forget "o", he is human.. cant make krabby patty with trisula.

GLuck! I realise is slow bpm... blame2overkindMe.com ( to suggest rest or changed spinner D: D:D D:D:D )
Maya Tendo
こんにちは、遅くなりましたがModding Queueから。
しかし、譜面の中身がout of my skillって感じなのでno kdsでお願いします。

[General]
難易度間のコンボ数差が心配ですが、許容範囲内なのでしょうか?
192-292-459-649
(100)-(167)-(190)

正直、Kantanに1/2や1/1の7連はBPMが遅くて一応Spreadが整っていればOKって事なんでしょうか…そこらへんは別の有識者にお願いします。

譜面自体は良いと思うので、尚更何も言えなくて申し訳ないです。

[Kantan]
・02:22:887~
ここからのパートが相対的に見ても難しいと思います。
02:27:387 (44,45,46,47) - で初めて1/2が出てくるのでKantanプレイヤーには厳しいものなのではないでしょうか?

[Futsuu]
・02:25:137 delete
1/2パターンからの1/4はコレまでに無かったですし、なしでいいかと。
Topic Starter
newyams99

Mrriichi wrote:

こんにちは、遅くなりましたがModding Queueから。大丈夫です。
しかし、譜面の中身がout of my skillって感じなのでno kdsでお願いします。ええと、まあ一応 Futsuu 譜面で少し修正はしたので kd を差し上げます。と言いながら、kd をあげるのは提案の数やその提案がどれぐらい役立ったかのことで決めちゃいけないと思います。もちろん、提案がもっとあれば良かったのですが、kd を与えるのはmodder の努力で判断するべきだと思います。SP が上がるメリットもあるし ^^

[General]
難易度間のコンボ数差が心配ですが、許容範囲内なのでしょうか?
192-292-459-649
(100)-(167)-(190)
確かにコンボ数差がますます増加していくけれど、spread が整っていれば特に問題はないでしょう。どんなマップセットを見ても、ほとんどの場合は難易度が上がるにつれてコンボ数差も自然に広がっていきます。その上、Oni 譜面は GD なので Muzukashii 譜面と Oni 譜面のコンボ数差はあまりしなくていいと思います。

正直、Kantanに1/2や1/1の7連はBPMが遅くて一応Spreadが整っていればOKって事なんでしょうか…そこらへんは別の有識者にお願いします。この件は Nardo さんにお尋ねします。Kantan, Futsuu 譜面で使用してる 1/2 リズム、 1/4 リズムはこのマップセット(ここをクリックしてください)を参考にして作成したリズムです。参考になった Kantan 譜面は 1/2 リズムは使用されていないが、Futsuu 譜面で紹介する 1/4 リズムと良い difficulty curve を作るために少し難しいリズムを作りました。

譜面自体は良いと思うので、尚更何も言えなくて申し訳ないです。いいえ、見てくれるだけでもありがたいです。

[Kantan]
・02:22:887~
ここからのパートが相対的に見ても難しいと思います。
02:27:387 (44,45,46,47) - で初めて1/2が出てくるのでKantanプレイヤーには厳しいものなのではないでしょうか?上記で説明した通り。

[Futsuu]
・02:25:137 delete
1/2パターンからの1/4はコレまでに無かったですし、なしでいいかと。削除しました。
Mod ありがとうございます。 :D
Backfire
General
Fine, lower diffs are good but higher diffs need work. I will allow you the freedom to decide, rather than lecturing you what to do however.
In the future, Whistle tends to be skinned out of modder's skin. Try to use clap :) It's ok if you don't though.

Kantan
01:38:887 - This right here, to me, feels awkward. I don't really like K k d, for me, this pattern should be like D k d. The pattern after is k d k so it would mirror itself quite well.
02:22:887 - Do you think maybe this could be a K? The previous is like D D D D, with a K, it brings it to like a build up point or something. It flows a little better with the next parts going k d d k k.
02:46:637 - I think this note is un-necessary. The spinner should start here instead.

Futsuu
00:50:887 - I definitely don't like this as a kat. Should be a don for simplicity and smoothness sake. Too many kat's in the section, in my opinion.
01:14:887 - This entire kiai feels like a disjointed mess. The 1/4 with nothing else in front of it for an entire 1/1 section seems so awkward to me. Clearly you have no problem with the density in this map anyways, so I would consider adding things to the 01:16:387 - section in the kiai's or reworking the kiai to be like something like this. Starting here 01:15:387 - put a note, then here 01:15:762 - then here and here 01:16:137 - 01:16:387 -. This has futsuu level difficulty and leaves a lot less open space.
No further comments, I suppose. I just don't much like the kiai patterns.

Muzu
02:30:887 - Entire sections with finishers is definitely awkward feeling to me, the k k D does not sound or look right. Consider other options, eliminating the finishers at hand either way. I don't like the finishers in all difficulties, but it's my personal preference.

Nardo
01:00:887 - This could use a finisher to go in line with the other part with a finisher.
02:30:887 - Ah, this finisher part in all the maps...I don't like it. I would think it does not need any finishers in this part.
Very dense, it's ok, some parts where I feel you were mapping to vocals so I didn't say anything about it. Doesn't need much work, but I can't say it is my favorite way of mapping these types of songs.

Inner Oni
00:56:262 - clap maybe, this doesn't sound like a ddd to me.
01:05:387 - Overmapped section a lot, please tone it down. Just because it is inner oni, does not mean random overmap sections.
02:00:387 - Probably needs to be kddkddk not what you have.
I don't even know how to mod this. There is nothing technically wrong, but I feel abject to the idea there even needs to be inner oni on this song at all. Inner Oni with this density, at this bpm, is a disaster, and I don't think you mapped it badly, but the way it plays and looks, is so ugly in comparison. So nothing technically wrong, but on a level, I think the map itself should be fixed. Oni is fine by itself, Inner Oni maybe overkill.
xtrem3x
Request via ... no have idea (Lazy time)


  • General:

    don = d
    kat = k
    Big Don = D
    Big Kat = K

  • Futsuu:

    notes in 1/2 all time (?) <<< for 01:03:762-

    00:04:887 - Same situation about slider - Change for spinner
    00:28:887 - Same but change spinner with length until 00:31:887-

    00:33:887 - is possible change these triple for ddk for consistence with other diffs (?)


  • Muzukashii:

    00:04:887 - a slider? please with these points in stream format seems hard ._. , can be a sequence or change for a spinner ... My suggest

    00:28:887 - Same situation ... Change slider for a spinner but until 00:31:887- why here change the tone for drum sounds.


    00:34:137 (5,6) - is possible a ctrl+g in these 2 notes for consistence (?).

    01:05:637 (99,100) - ctrl+g
    01:07:637 (105,106) - ^ Same ... is rare starts with kd and finish in inverse....

    01:20:137 - This -> This ... is for follow vocal pitch.

    01:36:137 - This -> This ... ^ Same reason

    02:13:637 (71,72) - can be ctrl+g for follow vocal again (?)

    02:28:137 - This -> This ... ^ Same reason as 01:20:137- is a bit different.

    02:40:137 (152,153) - ctrl+g for sequence.

    Spinner can end in 02:48:387- ... take the fade-out as spinner sounds a little weird.

  • Oni:

    00:39:887 - Is possible change to k this note why don't follow emphasis in BG Sound, with your 5-note sequence sound some empty and with gap imo.

    00:54:672 - can add k in this part, have vocal sound for other triple as previous parts (00:53:637- , 00:54:137- ).

    01:16:137 - Is possible move this note to 01:16:262- more than anything for consistency with the sequence in 01:17:637- can be the same (?).

    01:24:137 - Move to 01:24:262- for same reason as above.
    01:32:137 - Move to 01:37:262- ... Same ^
    01:40:137 - It can be the same here but the intonation of the BG sound is different so it is best to leave it.
    02:24:137 - Move to 02:24:262- ... Same ^

    Spinner can end in 02:48:387- ... take the fade-out as spinner sounds a little weird.

  • Inner:

    00:04:887 - Same reason about slider ... can be a sequence or simple other spinner.

    00:13:512 (22,23) - ctrl+g in this part for follow vocal variation.
    00:21:637 (55,56) - same ^

    00:22:137 - Change to k for complementary above point.

    00:28:887 - Same as 00:04:887-

    02:31:012 - is possible move this note to 02:31:262- for consistence with 02:33:137-
Nardoxyribonucleic

Backfire wrote:

General
Fine, lower diffs are good but higher diffs need work. I will allow you the freedom to decide, rather than lecturing you what to do however.
In the future, Whistle tends to be skinned out of modder's skin. Try to use clap :) It's ok if you don't though.

Nardo
01:00:887 - This could use a finisher to go in line with the other part with a finisher. It is less stressed than 00:56:887 (99) and 01:04:887 (133) - , so it would be fine to keep it without finish.
02:30:887 - Ah, this finisher part in all the maps...I don't like it. I would think it does not need any finishers in this part. Retained for the prominent snares every 2/1.
Very dense, it's ok, some parts where I feel you were mapping to vocals so I didn't say anything about it. Doesn't need much work, but I can't say it is my favorite way of mapping these types of songs.

xtrem3x wrote:

Request via ... no have idea (Lazy time)


  • General:

    don = d
    kat = k
    Big Don = D
    Big Kat = K
  • Oni:

    00:39:887 - Is possible change to k this note why don't follow emphasis in BG Sound, with your 5-note sequence sound some empty and with gap imo. I would prefer following the low-pitched main rhythm there.

    00:54:672 - can add k in this part, have vocal sound for other triple as previous parts (00:53:637- , 00:54:137- ). Remain unchanged for a better spread with Inner Oni.

    01:16:137 - Is possible move this note to 01:16:262- more than anything for consistency with the sequence in 01:17:637- can be the same (?). No change here to maintain possible variety. This would be quite monotonous if the same pattern is used for too many times.

    01:24:137 - Move to 01:24:262- for same reason as above. same as ^
    01:32:137 - Move to 01:37:262- ... Same ^ ^
    01:40:137 - It can be the same here but the intonation of the BG sound is different so it is best to leave it.
    02:24:137 - Move to 02:24:262- ... Same ^ same as 01:16:137 -

    Spinner can end in 02:48:387- ... take the fade-out as spinner sounds a little weird. Hmm, it would be better to end the spinner as the music stops.
Thanks for the mods~ :)
Topic Starter
newyams99

Backfire wrote:

General
Fine, lower diffs are good but higher diffs need work. I will allow you the freedom to decide, rather than lecturing you what to do however.
In the future, Whistle tends to be skinned out of modder's skin. Try to use clap :) It's ok if you don't though. lol I'm too used to whistle now xD

Kantan
01:38:887 - This right here, to me, feels awkward. I don't really like K k d, for me, this pattern should be like D k d. The pattern after is k d k so it would mirror itself quite well. I see what you mean. I mainly did this thinking to show the difference of pitch in the vocals compared to the rest of the finishers in the section. I'd like to keep this for now, but I'll definitely change it if it's mentioned a couple more times.
02:22:887 - Do you think maybe this could be a K? The previous is like D D D D, with a K, it brings it to like a build up point or something. It flows a little better with the next parts going k d d k k. Changed.
02:46:637 - I think this note is un-necessary. The spinner should start here instead. Yeah.

Futsuu
00:50:887 - I definitely don't like this as a kat. Should be a don for simplicity and smoothness sake. Too many kat's in the section, in my opinion. lol that was me being dumb.
01:14:887 - This entire kiai feels like a disjointed mess. The 1/4 with nothing else in front of it for an entire 1/1 section seems so awkward to me. Clearly you have no problem with the density in this map anyways, so I would consider adding things to the 01:16:387 - section in the kiai's or reworking the kiai to be like something like this. Starting here 01:15:387 - put a note, then here 01:15:762 - then here and here 01:16:137 - 01:16:387 -. This has futsuu level difficulty and leaves a lot less open space. Oh, I just thought to remove these for a difficulty increase from the next kiai, and having a long break would allow players to react to the next hit. I realized it was pretty awkward :P Changed.
No further comments, I suppose. I just don't much like the kiai patterns.

Muzu
02:30:887 - Entire sections with finishers is definitely awkward feeling to me, the k k D does not sound or look right. Consider other options, eliminating the finishers at hand either way. I don't like the finishers in all difficulties, but it's my personal preference. I understand, I felt it a bit weird with the finishers when I mapped it as well, but I didn't really want to take out the finishers either. I'll see what I can do in all the diffs.

Nardo
01:00:887 - This could use a finisher to go in line with the other part with a finisher.
02:30:887 - Ah, this finisher part in all the maps...I don't like it. I would think it does not need any finishers in this part.
Very dense, it's ok, some parts where I feel you were mapping to vocals so I didn't say anything about it. Doesn't need much work, but I can't say it is my favorite way of mapping these types of songs.

Inner Oni
00:56:262 - clap maybe, this doesn't sound like a ddd to me. Changed to dkk.
01:05:387 - Overmapped section a lot, please tone it down. Just because it is inner oni, does not mean random overmap sections. tbh, I wasn't even trying to overmap this. I originally planned this to be the Oni but it became way too difficult, so that's where Nardo comes in to fill in the difficulty gap. Perhaps it's a bit too dense in some areas still, so I'll try to take out what I think is possible.
02:00:387 - Probably needs to be kddkddk not what you have. Sure.
I don't even know how to mod this. There is nothing technically wrong, but I feel abject to the idea there even needs to be inner oni on this song at all. Inner Oni with this density, at this bpm, is a disaster, and I don't think you mapped it badly, but the way it plays and looks, is so ugly in comparison. So nothing technically wrong, but on a level, I think the map itself should be fixed. Oni is fine by itself, Inner Oni maybe overkill. Well, ok ._. As said before, I'll try to get rid of some stuff.
Thanks for the mod and quick reply :D

xtrem3x wrote:

Request via ... no have idea (Lazy time)


  • General:

    don = d
    kat = k
    Big Don = D
    Big Kat = K

  • Futsuu:

    notes in 1/2 all time (?) <<< for 01:03:762-

    00:04:887 - Same situation about slider - Change for spinner I'd really like to keep these as sliders; I just really like them, probably because they're good for covering a long amount of time, which spinners can only do for a certain length (depending on how fast the person spins)
    00:28:887 - Same but change spinner with length until 00:31:887- ^

    00:33:887 - is possible change these triple for ddk for consistence with other diffs (?) I was trying to match to the melody here, unlike the higher diffs.


  • Muzukashii:

    00:04:887 - a slider? please with these points in stream format seems hard ._. , can be a sequence or change for a spinner ... My suggest Yeah, I was considering this, but if I wanted to make a good difficulty curve this would become a 1/3 stream in the Inner, which I didn't think was a good option for a quiet section.

    00:28:887 - Same situation ... Change slider for a spinner but until 00:31:887- why here change the tone for drum sounds. Possible, but perhaps keeping it simple might be good for now.


    00:34:137 (5,6) - is possible a ctrl+g in these 2 notes for consistence (?). As mentioned in Futsuu.

    01:05:637 (99,100) - ctrl+g I see that it's kinda weird, but I think matching to the vocals is fine here. No change for now.
    01:07:637 (105,106) - ^ Same ... is rare starts with kd and finish in inverse.... ^

    01:20:137 - This -> This ... is for follow vocal pitch. Perhaps I could add variety, but I'd like to keep this relatively the same. Same for the below.

    01:36:137 - This -> This ... ^ Same reason

    02:13:637 (71,72) - can be ctrl+g for follow vocal again (?) Done.

    02:28:137 - This -> This ... ^ Same reason as 01:20:137- is a bit different.

    02:40:137 (152,153) - ctrl+g for sequence. As mentioned above.

    Spinner can end in 02:48:387- ... take the fade-out as spinner sounds a little weird. I'd like to keep this consistent with Nardo's diff.

  • Oni:

    00:39:887 - Is possible change to k this note why don't follow emphasis in BG Sound, with your 5-note sequence sound some empty and with gap imo.

    00:54:672 - can add k in this part, have vocal sound for other triple as previous parts (00:53:637- , 00:54:137- ).

    01:16:137 - Is possible move this note to 01:16:262- more than anything for consistency with the sequence in 01:17:637- can be the same (?).

    01:24:137 - Move to 01:24:262- for same reason as above.
    01:32:137 - Move to 01:37:262- ... Same ^
    01:40:137 - It can be the same here but the intonation of the BG sound is different so it is best to leave it.
    02:24:137 - Move to 02:24:262- ... Same ^

    Spinner can end in 02:48:387- ... take the fade-out as spinner sounds a little weird.

  • Inner:

    00:04:887 - Same reason about slider ... can be a sequence or simple other spinner. See above.

    00:13:512 (22,23) - ctrl+g in this part for follow vocal variation. Sure.
    00:21:637 (55,56) - same ^ Not this one, I think kd matches the pitch better.

    00:22:137 - Change to k for complementary above point. The pitch is lower than the previous imo.

    00:28:887 - Same as 00:04:887- See above.

    02:31:012 - is possible move this note to 02:31:262- for consistence with 02:33:137-
I tweaked this section a bit, so I might be changing it.
Thanks for accepting my request :D
- Frontier -

from shit queue

d | k
D | K

[Kantan]
00:01:887 (2,3) - ctrl+g
00:54:887 (48) - k
01:30:887 (25) - K
02:24:387 (39) - delete
02:31:887 (50) - k

[Futsuu]
00:10:887 (6) - k
00:16:387 (13,14) - ctrl+g
00:34:137 (36) - d
00:34:887 (38) - ^
00:37:387 (43) - k
00:57:387 (80) - d
01:20:887 (16) - k
01:24:387 (25,26) - ctrl+g
01:30:387 (40) - d
01:57:137 (20) - delete
02:37:887 (90,92) - ctrl+g
02:40:137 (95,96) - ^
02:40:887 (97) - d
02:43:387 (102) - k

[Muzukashii]
00:27:887 (50) - d
00:33:887 (56) - delete
00:35:637 - k
00:40:262 (76,77) - ctrl+g
00:45:887 (91) - d
00:46:637 (94,95) - ctrl+g
00:57:637 (126) - delete
01:37:137 (78,79) - ctrl+g
02:28:637 (116) - k
02:29:637 (120,121) - ctrl+g
02:29:637 (120,121) - d

[Nardo's Oni]
00:49:887 (67) - d
00:58:262 (103,104) - ctrl+g
01:00:262 (113) - delete
01:25:262 (223) - ^
01:28:762 (238) - k
01:29:637 (242,243) - ctrl+g
02:39:762 (547) - d

[Inner Oni]
00:18:887 (45) - k
00:27:137 (75,76) - ^
00:27:887 (78) - d
00:56:637 (201) - k
00:56:887 (202) - D
01:24:887 (60,61) - d
01:36:387 (122,123) - ctrl+g
01:41:387 (150) - k
02:08:387 (298) - ^
02:09:387 (301) - ^
02:11:137 (306) - ^
02:12:137 (309,310) - ctrl+g
02:12:637 (311) - k

Good Mapp ^^ Good luck :) :)
Shoot Starss ~
Nardoxyribonucleic

- Frontier - wrote:


from shit queue

d | k
D | K

[Nardo's Oni]
00:49:887 (67) - d Nope, the pitch of vocal becomes higher.
00:58:262 (103,104) - ctrl+g same as ^
01:00:262 (113) - delete Remain unchanged for the clear beat.
01:25:262 (223) - ^ Retained the pentaplet in contrast to 01:16:637 (184,185,186,187,188) -
01:28:762 (238) - k Hmm, there is no high-pitched sound to map with.
01:29:637 (242,243) - ctrl+g d k would fit the pitch increase there.
02:39:762 (547) - d No change for pattern consistency as 00:33:762 (3) -

Good Mapp ^^ Good luck :) :)
Shoot Starss ~
Thanks for the mod~
Topic Starter
newyams99

- Frontier - wrote:


from shit queue

d | k
D | K

[Kantan]
00:01:887 (2,3) - ctrl+g Matching to the piano.
00:54:887 (48) - k Too many k's in a row if I do that and the vocal pitch is similar to the next hit.
01:30:887 (25) - K Better emphasis on the finisher if I keep this.
02:24:387 (39) - delete I kept this, but it did sound weird so I changed 02:24:887 (40) to d.
02:31:887 (50) - k I'd like to keep consistency with the finishers in the other difficulties.

[Futsuu]
00:10:887 (6) - k The piano pitch is lower than the previous hit.
00:16:387 (13,14) - ctrl+g The instrumental pitch is going down from 00:15:887 (12,13) and I'd like to bring out the vocals with a k at 00:16:887 (14).
00:34:137 (36) - d Wanted to emphasize the pitch difference between 00:34:137 (36,37).
00:34:887 (38) - ^ ^
00:37:387 (43) - k I think d fits the pitch better.
00:57:387 (80) - d The pitch difference is the same between the two surrounding hits, but now there's a kick in the instrumentals that's worth following.
01:20:887 (16) - k Makes sense, but there'd be two many k's in a row which doesn't play the best imo.
01:24:387 (25,26) - ctrl+g Wanted to keep my kick-matching structure by having 01:24:387 a k.
01:30:387 (40) - d ^ Also matches the background instrumental pitch.
01:57:137 (20) - delete Deleted for a better difficulty curve and consistency with the Muzukashii.
02:37:887 (90,92) - ctrl+g Wanted to do a buildup of vocal pitch at 02:37:387 (89,90,91) but emphasize the end by having the last hit as a D.
02:40:137 (95,96) - ^ Made consistent with the beginning.
02:40:887 (97) - d Pitch of the background instrumentals is higher than the previous hit.
02:43:387 (102) - k I like d better for the high pitch at 02:43:637 (103).

[Muzukashii]
00:27:887 (50) - d Don't wanna ruin the pattern I had going at 00:24:887 (41,42,43,44,45,46,47).
00:33:887 (56) - delete Kept for difficulty curve purposes.
00:35:637 - k Didn't want to add a hit because I could curve the difficulty with the ending.
00:40:262 (76,77) - ctrl+g Wanted to get the kick on 77 with the k on that one.
00:45:887 (91) - d Wanted to get the high vocal pitch.
00:46:637 (94,95) - ctrl+g I need 95 to be a d so I can emphasize the pitch difference with the next hit.
00:57:637 (126) - delete Sure.
01:37:137 (78,79) - ctrl+g Wanted to get the kick at 01:37:387.
02:28:637 (116) - k Thought I could emphasize the pitch difference with the next hit with a d.
02:29:637 (120,121) - ctrl+g Wanted to contrast the kick at 02:30:387 (121).
02:29:637 (120,121) - d ^

[Inner Oni]
00:18:887 (45) - k Fits the vocal pitch as it is now.
00:27:137 (75,76) - ^ ^
00:27:887 (78) - d ^ Refer to Muzukashii too.
00:56:637 (201) - k Changed 00:56:137 (198,199,200) to kdd instead.
00:56:887 (202) - D Kept since I changed the above.
01:24:887 (60,61) - dFits vocal pitch as it is now.
01:36:387 (122,123) - ctrl+g ^ The pitch difference at 01:36:637 (123,124) was more important imo.
01:41:387 (150) - k Fixed.
02:08:387 (298) - ^ The piano pitch is the same for 02:07:762 (296,297,298).
02:09:387 (301) - ^ Again, matching to the piano.
02:11:137 (306) - ^ Sure.
02:12:137 (309,310) - ctrl+g Personally like what I have better rn.
02:12:637 (311) - k ^

Good Mapp ^^ Good luck :) :)
Shoot Starss ~
Thanks for the mod and star, and thanks for accepting my request despite the confusion. Sorry for the late reply too.

:D
[R]
;-;

[Muzukashii]
00:34:887 - change to d, no pitch change (if applied 00:35:762 - this can be k)
01:12:387 - delete this ? you do in 01:10:387 -
01:21:137 - i guess you must give break, instead you can add a triplet here 01:21:887 -
01:26:637 - add note ?
01:52:387 - delete, flow

[Oni]
01:49:887 - add note ?
02:12:137 - can be k , match with vocal
02:21:762 - all note , stream still continous

GL
Nardoxyribonucleic

[R] wrote:

;-;

[Oni]
01:49:887 - add note ? Remain unchanged to balance the pattern at 01:48:012 (325,326,327) -
02:12:137 - can be k , match with vocal changed 02:12:637 (430) - to k instead.
02:21:762 - all note , stream still continous I would prefer preserving the K at 02:21:887 (467) - for proper emphasis.

GL
Thanks for the mod~ :)

Update: http://puu.sh/o9Fh0.rar
Topic Starter
newyams99

[R] wrote:

;-;

[Muzukashii]
00:34:887 - change to d, no pitch change (if applied 00:35:762 - this can be k) Wanted to contrast the drum sound at 00:34:887 (59) and I thought there was a pitch change here.
01:12:387 - delete this ? you do in 01:10:387 - Was matching to the vocals earlier.
01:21:137 - i guess you must give break, instead you can add a triplet here 01:21:887 - I'd prefer to keep it simpler for longer patterns.
01:26:637 - add note ? Changed.
01:52:387 - delete, flow This is possible, but I felt like I was missing a significant drum hit.

GL
Thanks for the mod :D
Topic Starter
newyams99
Updated Nardo's diff. Sorry for being late despite you messaging me on discord D:
SKSalt
Hi, Taiko mod request from my queue. Sorry for late.

[Muzu]
  1. 00:36:012 (62) - k? 電子音をフォローしたほうがより良さそうです。
  2. 00:37:762 (69) - d?同上。MuzuなのでアレかもしれませんがBPMが120なので問題ないかと思います!
  3. 00:41:887 (81) - k? ボーカル音をfollowして00:43:887 (86,87,88) - と違うパターンを作ってみてはどうですか?
  4. 00:49:887 (104) - ^ (00:51:887 (109,110,111) - )
  5. 01:35:137 (73) - ^ これもボーカル拾ったほうがよさそうかなー
  6. 01:40:762 (92) - same as 00:37:762 (69) -
[Oni]
  1. 00:13:512 - Add a note. When I played, I felt that strong sense of incongruity. This part has vocal sound. So I think you should add a note. If I put it, I choose kd (include 00:13:637 (10) - )
But only a one thing, other parts are fine lol

[Inner Oni]
  1. 01:25:137 (61) - d? ボーカル音をフォローしているということで別に構わないのですが、個人的にkの3つの単音が続くのはちょっと違和感がありました。
Kantan and Futsuu are fine I think. Good luck. がんばってちょ~
Nardoxyribonucleic

SKSalt wrote:

Hi, Taiko mod request from my queue. Sorry for late.

[Oni]
  1. 00:13:512 - Add a note. When I played, I felt that strong sense of incongruity. This part has vocal sound. So I think you should add a note. If I put it, I choose kd (include 00:13:637 (10) - ) Retained to keep the break consistent with 00:17:512 -
But only a one thing, other parts are fine lol

Kantan and Futsuu are fine I think. Good luck. がんばってちょ~
Thanks for your mod SKSalt~ :)
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