Aqua Timez - Alones · forum

Avishay

Joined April 2013

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Avishay 2015-11-10T19:58:27+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on יום ראשון 30 ספטמבר 2018 at 20:07:42

Artist: Aqua Timez
Title: Alones
Source: Bleach
Tags: Bara- CaffeAmericano Kyle Y Kon
BPM: 186.18
Filesize: 3303kb
Play Time: 01:40
Difficulties Available:

Bara's Hard (3.4 stars, 254 notes)
Caffe's Insane (4.69 stars, 325 notes)
Ky's Normal (2 stars, 151 notes)
O"(Q*)c==")*c 912839017238912389 hello how are you /////(((((((())))))))) yiha (5.54 stars, 438 notes)

Download: Aqua Timez - Alones
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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redownload if downloaded before 26/09/18
ready for modz

Yes, this is the full ver song cut because all of the tv size mp3 are crap. (and this is not any better lol)
can someone tell how to fix mp3 TYY

diff name courtesy of Irreverisble

Last edited by Avishay 2018-09-30T17:07:58+00:00, edited 36 times in total.

Bara-

11,978 posts

Joined April 2013

Bara- 2015-12-27T12:56:42+00:00

I had to nerf this sooo badly
It was 4.2* (how I could pass it with DT is a miracle
Now only 3.5*

SPOILER

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 502
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:Alones
TitleUnicode:Alones
Artist:Aqua Timez
ArtistUnicode:Aqua Timez
Creator:Avishay
Version:Baraatje123's Hard
Source:Bleach
Tags:
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5.9
CircleSize:3.9
OverallDifficulty:6.9
ApproachRate:7.9
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:2

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219,75,79343,2,0,P|119:142|138:253,1,207.999990478516,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
181,304,79827,1,8,0:0:0:0:
181,304,79907,1,8,0:0:0:0:
181,304,79988,6,0,B|184:344|184:344|212:179,1,207.999990478516,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
219,75,80471,1,0,0:0:0:0:
305,133,80632,2,0,L|322:23,1,103.999995239258
425,21,80955,2,8,L|409:123,1,103.999995239258
362,216,81277,2,0,B|355:241|355:241|362:267|362:267|307:234|270:277|205:244,1,207.999990478516
107,248,81760,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,313,81921,2,0,B|229:330|273:327|273:327|300:325|320:323|324:309|332:350|364:340|374:340|408:322,1,207.999990478516,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,253,82405,1,8,0:0:0:0:
362,215,82566,6,0,B|355:163|355:163|354:96,1,103.999995239258,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
269,50,82888,2,0,B|276:102|276:102|277:169,1,103.999995239258,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
371,195,83210,6,0,B|364:143|364:143|363:76,1,103.999995239258,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
278,30,83532,2,8,B|285:82|285:82|286:149,1,103.999995239258
208,204,83855,5,12,0:0:0:0:
208,204,84177,1,12,0:0:0:0:
208,204,84500,5,12,0:0:0:0:
208,204,84661,1,8,0:0:0:0:
147,289,84822,5,12,0:0:0:0:
48,256,84983,1,8,0:0:0:0:
48,152,85144,6,0,P|47:86|148:14,1,160,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
147,120,85628,1,0,0:0:0:0:
186,20,85789,2,0,P|243:73|246:151,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,240,86272,2,0,B|167:283|167:283|204:302|255:289|291:262,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
354,209,86755,2,0,P|378:256|354:307,2,80,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,170,87239,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,79,87400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
308,79,87561,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,170,87722,6,0,B|143:182|143:182|188:165,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,79,88206,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,79,88367,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,0,88528,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,79,88689,1,8,0:0:0:0:
400,29,88850,1,8,0:0:0:0:
492,79,89011,6,0,B|483:106|447:126|447:126|452:147|445:168|445:168|449:190|449:190|441:212|442:253,1,180.000006866455,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
450,322,89656,1,8,0:0:0:0:
361,228,89817,1,8,0:0:0:0:
324,356,89978,2,8,L|316:384,2,30.0000011444092
361,228,90300,6,0,B|372:177|372:177|270:299,1,176.000005371094,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,162,90784,1,0,0:0:0:0:
219,271,90945,2,0,B|140:177|140:177|151:228,1,176.000005371094,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
143,342,91428,1,8,0:0:0:0:
76,249,91589,6,0,L|55:142,1,88.000002685547,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
117,63,91912,2,0,L|138:170,1,88.000002685547,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
57,234,92234,6,0,L|36:127,1,88.000002685547,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
98,48,92557,2,8,L|119:155,1,88.000002685547
229,132,92879,5,0,0:0:0:0:
405,189,93201,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,39,93523,5,0,0:0:0:0:
297,225,93845,1,8,0:0:0:0:
405,75,94168,6,8,L|453:62,3,44.0000013427735
468,128,94490,2,8,L|516:115,3,44.0000013427735
420,184,94812,6,8,L|416:228,3,44.0000013427735
346,177,95134,2,8,L|351:125,3,44.0000013427735
296,225,95457,6,0,L|288:321,1,80,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
398,262,95779,1,0,0:0:0:0:
346,177,95940,2,0,B|361:60|361:60|331:106,1,160
264,139,96424,2,0,P|220:147|173:138,1,80,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
222,61,96746,2,0,L|218:256,1,160
155,285,97229,1,0,0:0:0:0:
110,214,97390,2,0,L|113:107,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
42,73,97713,2,0,L|40:165,1,80
29,237,98035,6,0,P|79:295|155:285,1,160,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,196,98518,2,0,B|220:168|220:144|256:140|256:140|292:144|292:168|304:196,1,160
357,285,99001,2,0,P|432:295|482:237,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
402,214,99485,2,0,L|399:107,2,80
357,285,99968,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,214,100130,2,0,L|315:107,2,80
256,272,100613,5,0,0:0:0:0:

Avishay

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Topic Starter

Avishay 2015-12-27T13:57:13+00:00

Alright, I guess I will ~~make a ligher Hard / Normal or whatever it is,~~ hitsound and search for mods.

tbh I think the spread between the normal and hard is just fine, tho the SR is not, whatever if it's necessary I will get an other diff.

Bara-

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Joined April 2013

Bara- 2015-12-27T14:24:55+00:00

If people say it's needed I'll nerf it, but I don't think it's neccessary

just click

245 posts

Joined May 2014

just click 2016-01-06T20:53:18+00:00

Hey, M4M!

Ky's Normal

00:11:620 (1) - You could maybe do a more interesting slider shape since the other sliders are just curves and straight sliders.

00:28:539 (1,2) - It might be me, but these two sliders sound very weird when playing for some reason.

00:32:251 (1) - You could move this a bit closer since the previous sliders are connected with lower spacing.

00:34:829 (1) - Maybe curve this slightly so it flows into the next note?

01:18:699 (4) - In my opinion, the blanket this has seems to be too close to the slider, and doesn't really look too good. If possible, you can adjust something to make the blankets the same distance like the other ones?

01:33:523 (2) - Curve this slightly to match the previous slider more.

Nothing else I could really find, the difficulty is already well made. Good job!

Baraatje123's Hard

00:02:274 (2) - Fix the blanket a little, you can very slightly see from the approach circle that it doesn't perfectly fit the curve with (1).

00:05:175 (3,4) - Make these have the same curvature?

00:20:966 - In my opinion, it sounds strange to leave this empty but I understand your intention of doing so.

00:21:933 (1) - You could adjust this to the left more since it kind of overlaps the edge of grid map, but if it's allowed then don't worry about it.

00:21:933 (1,3) - You can see very closely that these don't have the same slope.

00:26:754 (9) - You could adjust this slider so that the ticks form a perfect V-shape.

00:43:208 (3) - This blanket doesn't really look that good because of how it nearly touches the slider. Maybe move it a further apart if possible?

01:13:221 (7) - Maybe add a NC here since the combo gets quite high here compared to the rest of the map?

01:26:755 (5) - You could curve this slightly less so the curve doesn't look too sharp and because you can form a better looking blanket with the previous slider.

01:34:490 (2) - You could CTRL + G because this reverse slider ends facing away from the next note.

01:35:134 (2) - ^

This is all I could find, it's a well-made difficulty! Good job!

Caffe's Insane

00:10:976 (2) - You could try having this go directly through the middle of the slider instead of slightly to the side.

00:13:876 (5) - Have this directly in-between the (2) and (3).

00:20:644 (1) - You could blanket (1)'s tail with (7) better.

00:25:948 (3) - Kind of awkward having this next note off to the side like that after the slider. Maybe you could find a more reachable position for this note?

00:31:117 (1) - You could improve the curve for this slider so it's not as sharp. Having a smoother curve accounts for a better blanket.

00:53:381 (3) - I think stacking this on 00:54:026 (2) looks and plays better.

01:03:714 (3) - I think this would look better if moved slightly upwards.

01:05:145 (5) - Stack this on 01:04:186 (1) ?

01:11:287 (3) - Tilt this slightly so it doesn't touch the (5) ? It kind of looks messy this way.

01:14:832 (5) - Would a NC work here?

01:34:973 (4) - Maybe curve this stream for better aesthetics?

01:35:457 (10) - Maybe add a NC since it's the last note?

That's all I could find here, good job with your map! It's well made!

Hardest difficulty (name is too long xd)

00:29:500 (3) - This double sounds out of place to me in my opinion, but you probably heard something in the song that this follows?

00:39:179 (2,3,4,5) - In my opinion, I think the stream looks better without the rapid rise in DS changes. Maybe have the stream look similar to this? 00:41:757(4,5,6,7)

00:49:492 (4,5,6,7) - You could do the same with this stream as the above example ^

00:54:026 (2) - I think this slider looks better slightly adjusted down instead of stacked in order to stay consistent with the other notes.

00:57:975 (1,2,3) - This line of notes looks sort of bland to me, maybe do something more interesting with this since you did it with 00:59:667 (1,2,3,4)

01:08:856 (1) - The placement of this note is kind of awkward, I would place it somewhere where it's more reachable.

01:10:145 (5) - CTRL + G so that this reverse slider ends facing the next note?

01:13:865 - I think having a note here would play better.

01:19:263 (3,4) - The shape of these doesn't look too good, I would just have these both go vertically up instead of the way it is right now.

01:21:841 (2,3) - This one could be angled downwards slightly to the left instead of this current shape.

01:30:623 (1) - Not sure why the NC is here.

01:31:912 (1) - ^

01:34:973 (8) - You could move this closer so that the distance is equal among these jumps.

01:38:035 (1) - Not a huge difference, but I think this note looks nicer around X:0/Y:264

Overall, this is all I found here. Good job with the map!

It's a nice mapset, good luck getting this ranked!

Slayed_old_1

Slayed_old_1 2016-01-06T21:22:26+00:00

!!

general

timing seems to be inconsistent

make smth with HS in your diff in kiai. i miss some clapx there

change bg size to 1366x768

экстра

00:02:918 (2) - 00:03:563 (4) - 00:05:818 (2) - 00:06:141 (3) - 00:08:075 (2) - 00:08:396 (3) - 00:08:720 (4) 00:15:809 (2) - 00:20:966 (2) - NC everythere to indicate the SV change

00:23:048 (6,3) - maybe a blanket here?

00:39:260 - i dont hear a sound here, and you? probably this overmap is not needed

00:42:563 - i want to see this note clickable, because bit here is pretty strong

00:59:183 (6) - dont like this shape, maybe you will make this slider similar to this 00:58:539 (4) -?

01:04:197 (4) - even if u dont have a SV change here, u have BPM change here, so SV is changing anyway lol, so NC pls here

01:21:599 (1,2,3) - maybe smth like this for a better flow?

01:24:500 (1,2,3,4,5) - oraoraoraoops wrong meme

01:30:300 (1,1) - do something with this useless nc spam

01:31:589 (1,1) - ^

caffe инсейн

• Concurent volume value for red-green line(s):
00:01:308 {1308} ms

00:01:308 (1) - maybe u will make this slider similar to 00:03:886 (1) - ? it will fit better as for me or conversely, as you like

00:22:738 (4,1) - maybe transform this slider into a curve and make a blanket with this note

00:46:430 (1,1) - maybe u will avoid this overlap? looks messy imo

00:53:044 (2,3) - this is the first time u are mapping on vocal, so it looks awkward a bit

01:05:145 (5) - NC here instead of NC here 01:05:467 (1) -

01:27:722 (1,3) - maybe a blanket here instead or overlap? will look better

harд

• Concurent volume value for red-green line(s):
00:01:308 {1308} ms

• Objects are not snapped:
00:27:398 {27398} Slider end
00:32:577 {32577} Slider end

00:05:175 (3,4) - maybe u will make them similar? as you were using some symmetry before

00:18:065 (3) - move to x=321 y=101 for a better flow

00:27:088 (1) - nazi stacking suggestions with 00:26:593 (8) - this note

00:49:331 (5) - this blanket looks bad, correct it

01:21:277 (5,7) - wow this blanket is so fucking cool

01:27:561 (8,2,5) - nazi stacking suggestions

overall nice diff. i like your sliders, probably ill use some of them in my map hehe

normal

• Objects are not snapped:
00:27:559 {27559} Slider repeat
00:28:042 {28042} Slider end
00:31:600 {31600} Slider end
00:56:455 {56455} Slider end
01:09:006 {69006} Slider repeat
01:09:651 {69651} Slider end

00:52:876 (1,2) - nazi, spacing here is a bit different from other places

00:54:864 (2,3) - ^

01:04:217 (2,3) - probably nc these due to rhytm changes

01:08:373 (2,1) - this blanket can be improved

good luck

Avishay

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Avishay 2016-01-06T21:33:05+00:00

um yeah the unsnaps are probably my fault, I'll fix and update everything tomorrow.

Seto Kousuke

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Seto Kousuke 2016-01-07T01:48:08+00:00

~~fuck my pc restarted and lost previous mod...let's do it again~~

Heya buddy c:

[Overall]

~~Timing:~~ discussed in-game
Combo colours: The standard ones don't fit imo....Suggestion of colours. These colours are based on Kon's body, Kon's Hair ( ''hair'' ), Kon's glasses, Kon's tongue and sky.
Spread: I'll list below, after the mods the reason why I think there should be a 2* diff
Hitsounds: Please...use hitsounds xD

[Ky's Normal]

00:09:686 (2) - This would look better if you put a little curve Like this
00:11:620 (1) - I think this section could play better and look nicer if you adjust it to something Like this because it helps a lot in the flow and you could also stack 00:14:198 (1) - with the tail to look consistent.....and well, if you do this, I also suggest you a little curve on 00:13:554 (4) - to make the flow even better
00:16:132 (4) - I think it would play a little better if you place this slider more to the left
00:21:933 (1,2) - huh....volumes? xD
00:52:876 (1,2,3) - I don't like this ;w; The idea was good, but i think it's really ugly and a bit random like this....you could make 1 have a better shape/curve and make 3 symmetrical to it
01:15:476 (2,5) - Since this is the kiai, I highly suggest you use more curved sliders in patterns like this, so you give the player a better flow and also make the kiai look more epic
01:27:078 (4) - a sexy little curve to the left here would make this little overlap look way better

[baraatje123's Hard]

00:07:753 (3,4) - Since you're making them interact, you could make the blanket a little better don't you think? The entire map is based on blankets, flow and aesthetic...so these 2 are a bit off-theme
01:10:965 (1,2) - imo this overlap is weird too...everytime you overlaped something, they had a big visible reason, but this time looks a bit random, it's good at is already, but still a bit ''off'' from the entire structure
01:15:799 (4) - Maybe rotate it's tail a bit to the right so the blanket with 01:16:121 (5) - is more visible?

[coffee]

00:08:075 (4,5,6) - This have a waaaay bigger distance than everything else, consider lowering this
00:35:795 (4) - I think a clap will land on it's tail...you can leave this if you want....but it's a 1/2 slider, claps are usually way better if you place a click on them like it will happen 00:36:440 (2) - here
00:43:530 (5) - ^
01:17:087 (6,7) - sudden decrease on spacing...this will play a bit awkward, I highly suggest you increase this
01:23:855 (1) - This have a weird flow...by sightread it should be played like ctrl + G, so i suggest you do it xD (in this case you need to ajust other patterns)

[lol...]

00:04:529 (2,3,1) - this distance are inconsistent, in a similar moment later they were the same...so I think you should make 3->1 the same as 2->3
00:23:048 (6,1) - I think the single note would play better if you place it a bit higher, so it has a better flow with the slider
00:24:176 (3) - hmm...I'm not a fan of this slider like this in this position in a jump because it's too ''aim intensive and forced-flow''...but if you want to keep it, you should place it just a bit to the left and align the red point with the curve from 00:23:048 (6) - so it has a better meaning in the entire pattern
00:29:505 (3,1) - This have a higher distance than 00:27:893 (5,6) - which is supposed to be ''a long jump''...so i think you should place them closer
00:33:378 (5,1,2,3,4) - So...this part here it's ok as it is already...but i'll give you 2 different options that imo would make it better: First one Is this, in this case you have a jumpy flow from 5->1 and also get a cleaner look on the overall structure and still kinda ''blankets'' with the single note 2+slider.....Second option Is this, you don't get that jumpy flow from 5->1, but you have a ''aim friendly'' flow which also looks nice because of the position of 1 and you kinda overlaps the single note 2 with the previous location of 00:33:217 (4) -
00:35:634 (3,4,5) - make the same distanc maybe?
01:04:358 (5) - hmmm...I didn't really like this overlap...maybe blanket it with 01:03:882 (3) - ?

[Reasons why I think there should be a 2 stars diff]

Although in gameplay the diffs look ''balanced'', there are severall aspects in Baraatje's diff that i think that are too forced to ''feed'' the necessity of a diff between them....for example:

Ky's difficulty is ''clean'' in patterns because it's an 1.98 star, so it's ok....although Baraatje's diff is ''simple'' too...the problem is not the ''overall difficulty'' but moments like: 00:03:563 (4,1) - , 00:51:264 (3,4) - , 01:05:467 (6,1) - , 01:29:817 (3,1) - , 01:14:671 (12,1) - , where you clearly have a more advanced overlap that aren't stacked notes, and that makes the player use a higher reading and aim.
This difficulty utilizes 1/4 triplets and notes, like : 00:32:039 (7,8,1) - , 00:52:715 (7,8,1) - ,01:07:234 (4,5,6) - , 01:19:827 (8,9,1) - , 01:34:168 (1,2,1,2) - , this last one being sliders with reverse, and that is indeed something hard
01:28:206 (2,3,4,5,6) - this is hard, it have lots of movements on aim and constant singletapping...

Yes, I saw baraatje's comment about ''nerfing the diff if needed'', but I personally don't agree with this being nerfed...the difficulty have an overall really fun and good look, nerfing this would ''kill'' the entire essence of it...but if it stays like this...newer players have only 2 options: 1- play a boring diff in case they're already a little bit more experienced or 2 - play something that will confuse them a lot.

So that's why I highly suggest you add 1 more 2 stars diff to be the ''level'' that helps players with this spread

And that's it...I hope it helps you, nice idea of mapset and fun diffs, good luck man

Avishay

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Topic Starter

Avishay 2016-01-08T09:58:39+00:00

Breezy wrote:

Hardest difficulty (name is too long xd)

00:29:500 (3) - This double sounds out of place to me in my opinion, but you probably heard something in the song that this follows? Not really lol, I just wanted to be able to press 3, eitherway, muted the sliderend.

00:39:179 (2,3,4,5) - In my opinion, I think the stream looks better without the rapid rise in DS changes. Maybe have the stream look similar to this? 00:41:757(4,5,6,7) But they're both rising in ds :s I'll leave it as it is for now

00:49:492 (4,5,6,7) - You could do the same with this stream as the above example ^

00:54:026 (2) - I think this slider looks better slightly adjusted down instead of stacked in order to stay consistent with the other notes. I hope I understood you correctly, changed.

00:57:975 (1,2,3) - This line of notes looks sort of bland to me, maybe do something more interesting with this since you did it with 00:59:667 (1,2,3,4) Alright.

01:08:856 (1) - The placement of this note is kind of awkward, I would place it somewhere where it's more reachable. Repositioned.

01:10:145 (5) - CTRL + G so that this reverse slider ends facing the next note? Nope, that's on purpose, the movement is cool here.

01:13:865 - I think having a note here would play better. One beat gap is not that big, and the note there is not that significant, I don't think it's the correct choice for now.

01:19:263 (3,4) - The shape of these doesn't look too good, I would just have these both go vertically up instead of the way it is right now. I don't think it looks that bad, but the point was the gimmicky movement rather than the looks here.

01:21:841 (2,3) - This one could be angled downwards slightly to the left instead of this current shape. ^

01:30:623 (1) - Not sure why the NC is here.

01:31:912 (1) - ^ Oops, both fixed.

01:34:973 (8) - You could move this closer so that the distance is equal among these jumps. Okay.

01:38:035 (1) - Not a huge difference, but I think this note looks nicer around X:0/Y:264 Respotioned to something similar.

Overall, this is all I found here. Good job with the map!

It's a nice mapset, good luck getting this ranked!

Avishay

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Topic Starter

Avishay 2016-01-08T10:07:55+00:00

Slayed wrote:
!!
general

timing seems to be inconsistent saying where would be nice ._.

make smth with HS in your diff in kiai. i miss some clapx there yeah it's just not done yet

change bg size to 1366x768 okay

экстра

00:02:918 (2) - 00:03:563 (4) - 00:05:818 (2) - 00:06:141 (3) - 00:08:075 (2) - 00:08:396 (3) - 00:08:720 (4) 00:15:809 (2) - 00:20:966 (2) - NC everythere to indicate the SV change Alright, hopefully not too spammy.

00:23:048 (6,3) - maybe a blanket here?

00:39:260 - i dont hear a sound here, and you? probably this overmap is not needed Actually there's a drum here, delete the note and listen closely on 25% playback rate.

00:42:563 - i want to see this note clickable, because bit here is pretty strong Sure.

00:59:183 (6) - dont like this shape, maybe you will make this slider similar to this 00:58:539 (4) -? Well I like it, might change it later on.

01:04:197 (4) - even if u dont have a SV change here, u have BPM change here, so SV is changing anyway lol, so NC pls here Done.

01:21:599 (1,2,3) - maybe smth like this for a better flow? On purpose, look at the previous' mod response.

01:24:500 (1,2,3,4,5) - oraoraoraoops wrong meme dakasa new meme incoming

01:30:300 (1,1) - do something with this useless nc spam oops lol

01:31:589 (1,1) - ^

good luck

fixed also the wrong snaps or whatever I could in the other diffs

Avishay

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Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

Avishay 2016-01-08T11:23:09+00:00

Seto Kousuke wrote:
[Overall]
~~Timing:~~ discussed in-game
Combo colours: The standard ones don't fit imo....Suggestion of colours. These colours are based on Kon's body, Kon's Hair ( ''hair'' ), Kon's glasses, Kon's tongue and sky. Oh I know they don't fit, I was just lazy to think of some, could you please post the RGB codes of those?
Spread: I'll list below, after the mods the reason why I think there should be a 2* diff I'll let baraa comment on it first
Hitsounds: Please...use hitsounds xD Need to finish them first heh
[lol...]
00:04:529 (2,3,1) - this distance are inconsistent, in a similar moment later they were the same...so I think you should make 3->1 the same as 2->3 Oh, fixed.
00:23:048 (6,1) - I think the single note would play better if you place it a bit higher, so it has a better flow with the slider VV
00:24:176 (3) - hmm...I'm not a fan of this slider like this in this position in a jump because it's too ''aim intensive and forced-flow''...but if you want to keep it, you should place it just a bit to the left and align the red point with the curve from 00:23:048 (6) - so it has a better meaning in the entire pattern That's what I did, thanks
00:29:505 (3,1) - This have a higher distance than 00:27:893 (5,6) - which is supposed to be ''a long jump''...so i think you should place them closer How is that bigger? I don't think I understood the thing you tried to mention.
00:33:378 (5,1,2,3,4) - So...this part here it's ok as it is already...but i'll give you 2 different options that imo would make it better: First one Is this, in this case you have a jumpy flow from 5->1 and also get a cleaner look on the overall structure and still kinda ''blankets'' with the single note 2+slider.....Second option Is this, you don't get that jumpy flow from 5->1, but you have a ''aim friendly'' flow which also looks nice because of the position of 1 and you kinda overlaps the single note 2 with the previous location of 00:33:217 (4) - Cool, I took the first option.
00:35:634 (3,4,5) - make the same distanc maybe? But there's a clap on 5 :\
01:04:358 (5) - hmmm...I didn't really like this overlap...maybe blanket it with 01:03:882 (3) - ? Alright
[Reasons why I think there should be a 2 stars diff]

Although in gameplay the diffs look ''balanced'', there are severall aspects in Baraatje's diff that i think that are too forced to ''feed'' the necessity of a diff between them....for example:
Ky's difficulty is ''clean'' in patterns because it's an 1.98 star, so it's ok....although Baraatje's diff is ''simple'' too...the problem is not the ''overall difficulty'' but moments like: 00:03:563 (4,1) - , 00:51:264 (3,4) - , 01:05:467 (6,1) - , 01:29:817 (3,1) - , 01:14:671 (12,1) - , where you clearly have a more advanced overlap that aren't stacked notes, and that makes the player use a higher reading and aim.
This difficulty utilizes 1/4 triplets and notes, like : 00:32:039 (7,8,1) - , 00:52:715 (7,8,1) - ,01:07:234 (4,5,6) - , 01:19:827 (8,9,1) - , 01:34:168 (1,2,1,2) - , this last one being sliders with reverse, and that is indeed something hard
01:28:206 (2,3,4,5,6) - this is hard, it have lots of movements on aim and constant singletapping...

Yes, I saw baraatje's comment about ''nerfing the diff if needed'', but I personally don't agree with this being nerfed...the difficulty have an overall really fun and good look, nerfing this would ''kill'' the entire essence of it...but if it stays like this...newer players have only 2 options: 1- play a boring diff in case they're already a little bit more experienced or 2 - play something that will confuse them a lot.

So that's why I highly suggest you add 1 more 2 stars diff to be the ''level'' that helps players with this spread

And that's it...I hope it helps you, nice idea of mapset and fun diffs, good luck man

Thanks everyone!

Bara-

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Joined April 2013

Bara- 2016-01-08T13:24:05+00:00

Breezy wrote:
Hey, M4M!
Baraatje123's Hard

00:02:274 (2) - Fix the blanket a little, you can very slightly see from the approach circle that it doesn't perfectly fit the curve with (1).

00:05:175 (3,4) - Make these have the same curvature?

00:20:966 - In my opinion, it sounds strange to leave this empty but I understand your intention of doing so. Kept

00:21:933 (1) - You could adjust this to the left more since it kind of overlaps the edge of grid map, but if it's allowed then don't worry about it. it is fine

00:21:933 (1,3) - You can see very closely that these don't have the same slope.

00:26:754 (9) - You could adjust this slider so that the ticks form a perfect V-shape. what do you mean?

00:43:208 (3) - This blanket doesn't really look that good because of how it nearly touches the slider. Maybe move it a further apart if possible?

01:13:221 (7) - Maybe add a NC here since the combo gets quite high here compared to the rest of the map?

01:26:755 (5) - You could curve this slightly less so the curve doesn't look too sharp and because you can form a better looking blanket with the previous slider.

01:34:490 (2) - You could CTRL + G because this reverse slider ends facing away from the next note.

01:35:134 (2) - ^ Leniency

This is all I could find, it's a well-made difficulty! Good job!

Slayed wrote:
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harд

• Concurent volume value for red-green line(s):
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• Objects are not snapped:
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00:05:175 (3,4) - maybe u will make them similar? as you were using some symmetry before

00:18:065 (3) - move to x=321 y=101 for a better flow It;s a blanket

00:27:088 (1) - nazi stacking suggestions with 00:26:593 (8) - this note

00:49:331 (5) - this blanket looks bad, correct it

01:21:277 (5,7) - wow this blanket is so fucking cool

01:27:561 (8,2,5) - nazi stacking suggestions

overall nice diff. i like your sliders, probably ill use some of them in my map hehe

Seto Kousuke wrote:
[[baraatje123's Hard]
00:07:753 (3,4) - Since you're making them interact, you could make the blanket a little better don't you think? The entire map is based on blankets, flow and aesthetic...so these 2 are a bit off-theme They're symmetrical
01:10:965 (1,2) - imo this overlap is weird too...everytime you overlaped something, they had a big visible reason, but this time looks a bit random, it's good at is already, but still a bit ''off'' from the entire structure IT's a blanket
01:15:799 (4) - Maybe rotate it's tail a bit to the right so the blanket with 01:16:121 (5) - is more visible?
[Reasons why I think there should be a 2 stars diff]

Although in gameplay the diffs look ''balanced'', there are severall aspects in Baraatje's diff that i think that are too forced to ''feed'' the necessity of a diff between them....for example:
Ky's difficulty is ''clean'' in patterns because it's an 1.98 star, so it's ok....although Baraatje's diff is ''simple'' too...the problem is not the ''overall difficulty'' but moments like: 00:03:563 (4,1) - , 00:51:264 (3,4) - , 01:05:467 (6,1) - , 01:29:817 (3,1) - , 01:14:671 (12,1) - , where you clearly have a more advanced overlap that aren't stacked notes, and that makes the player use a higher reading and aim.
This difficulty utilizes 1/4 triplets and notes, like : 00:32:039 (7,8,1) - , 00:52:715 (7,8,1) - ,01:07:234 (4,5,6) - , 01:19:827 (8,9,1) - , 01:34:168 (1,2,1,2) - , this last one being sliders with reverse, and that is indeed something hard
01:28:206 (2,3,4,5,6) - this is hard, it have lots of movements on aim and constant singletapping...

Yes, I saw baraatje's comment about ''nerfing the diff if needed'', but I personally don't agree with this being nerfed...the difficulty have an overall really fun and good look, nerfing this would ''kill'' the entire essence of it...but if it stays like this...newer players have only 2 options: 1- play a boring diff in case they're already a little bit more experienced or 2 - play something that will confuse them a lot.

So that's why I highly suggest you add 1 more 2 stars diff to be the ''level'' that helps players with this spread

And that's it...I hope it helps you, nice idea of mapset and fun diffs, good luck man

Thanks! Fixed all unmentioned

About the spread, just fixing the single tap part should be enough now

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Seto Kousuke

osu! Alumni

610 posts

Joined June 2013

Seto Kousuke 2016-01-08T21:56:49+00:00

Avishay wrote:
could you please post the RGB codes of those?

Sure thing:

Assuming you didn't put any yet

Kyle Y

1,210 posts

Joined November 2013

Kyle Y 2016-01-09T04:12:30+00:00

Breezy wrote:
Ky's Normal

00:11:620 (1) - You could maybe do a more interesting slider shape since the other sliders are just curves and straight sliders. fixed
00:28:539 (1,2) - It might be me, but these two sliders sound very weird when playing for some reason. The timing for this song is weird also.
00:32:251 (1) - You could move this a bit closer since the previous sliders are connected with lower spacing. no, I need to have constand distance spacing for Normal.
00:34:829 (1) - Maybe curve this slightly so it flows into the next note?okay....
01:18:699 (4) - In my opinion, the blanket this has seems to be too close to the slider, and doesn't really look too good. If possible, you can adjust something to make the blankets the same distance like the other ones?okay...
01:33:523 (2) - Curve this slightly to match the previous slider more. both are okay.
Nothing else I could really find, the difficulty is already well made. Good job!

It's a nice mapset, good luck getting this ranked!

Seto Kousuke wrote:
[Ky's Normal]

00:09:686 (2) - This would look better if you put a little curve Like this I think it is not that important if I curve or not, becasue the flowing is not affected
00:11:620 (1) - I think this section could play better and look nicer if you adjust it to something Like this because it helps a lot in the flow and you could also stack 00:14:198 (1) - with the tail to look consistent.....and well, if you do this, I also suggest you a little curve on 00:13:554 (4) - to make the flow even better fixed
00:16:132 (4) - I think it would play a little better if you place this slider more to the left remain, if I change to left, the pattern will be weird, you can try it on your own, second, this song is not high bpm, even if I use right slider, even new players can play it.
00:21:933 (1,2) - huh....volumes? xD I agree, but I have not hitsound it.
00:52:876 (1,2,3) - I don't like this ;w; The idea was good, but i think it's really ugly and a bit random like this....you could make 1 have a better shape/curve and make 3 symmetrical to it any suggestion?
01:15:476 (2,5) - Since this is the kiai, I highly suggest you use more curved sliders in patterns like this, so you give the player a better flow and also make the kiai look more epic um... for me, I think normal diff and easy diff do not need to have so many pattern, as it is mainly for new players, rhythm is more important than pattern for them.
01:27:078 (4) - a sexy little curve to the left here would make this little overlap look way better remain, just weird in look, and the flowing here is good that not need to intend to map a right slider.
And that's it...I hope it helps you, nice idea of mapset and fun diffs, good luck man

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CaffeAmericano

615 posts

Joined January 2015

CaffeAmericano 2016-01-09T04:28:27+00:00

Breezy wrote:
Hey, M4M!
Caffe's Insane

00:10:976 (2) - You could try having this go directly through the middle of the slider instead of slightly to the side. I prefer to keep as is.

00:13:876 (5) - Have this directly in-between the (2) and (3). moved

00:20:644 (1) - You could blanket (1)'s tail with (7) better. looks good to me

00:25:948 (3) - Kind of awkward having this next note off to the side like that after the slider. Maybe you could find a more reachable position for this note? I think that's not an uncommon place

00:31:117 (1) - You could improve the curve for this slider so it's not as sharp. Having a smoother curve accounts for a better blanket. Changed

00:53:381 (3) - I think stacking this on 00:54:026 (2) looks and plays better. I prefer to not stack them for reason purpose

01:03:714 (3) - I think this would look better if moved slightly upwards. tilt slightly increased

01:05:145 (5) - Stack this on 01:04:186 (1) ? I prefer not to

01:11:287 (3) - Tilt this slightly so it doesn't touch the (5) ? It kind of looks messy this way. fixed

01:14:832 (5) - Would a NC work here? I think so

01:34:973 (4) - Maybe curve this stream for better aesthetics?Done

01:35:457 (10) - Maybe add a NC since it's the last note? Done

That's all I could find here, good job with your map! It's well made! Thanks!

It's a nice mapset, good luck getting this ranked!

Slayed wrote:
caffe инсейн

• Concurent volume value for red-green line(s):
00:01:308 {1308} ms Sorry, is this a problem ?:3

00:01:308 (1) - maybe u will make this slider similar to 00:03:886 (1) - ? it will fit better as for me or conversely, as you like I'm not sure how that will be better

00:22:738 (4,1) - maybe transform this slider into a curve and make a blanket with this note changed

00:46:430 (1,1) - maybe u will avoid this overlap? looks messy imo changed

00:53:044 (2,3) - this is the first time u are mapping on vocal, so it looks awkward a bit looks fine to me

01:05:145 (5) - NC here instead of NC here 01:05:467 (1) - changed

01:27:722 (1,3) - maybe a blanket here instead or overlap? will look better changed, but not as suggested.

Seto Kousuke wrote:
[coffee]
00:08:075 (4,5,6) - This have a waaaay bigger distance than everything else, consider lowering this I don't think it is a problem. It helps distinguish them from 1/2 clicking at 00:06:464 (1,2,3) - .
00:35:795 (4) - I think a clap will land on it's tail...you can leave this if you want....but it's a 1/2 slider, claps are usually way better if you place a click on them like it will happen 00:36:440 (2) - here agreed, but I think it it follows vocal better as is.
00:43:530 (5) - ^ ^
01:17:087 (6,7) - sudden decrease on spacing...this will play a bit awkward, I highly suggest you increase this slightly increased
01:23:855 (1) - This have a weird flow...by sightread it should be played like ctrl + G, so i suggest you do it xD (in this case you need to ajust other patterns) I don't think ctrl+G will give me better flow :3

Thanks for the mod!

note: KY gave me few suggestions and I will post another update based on his mod soon.

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Avishay

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Avishay 2016-01-09T11:08:59+00:00

Kyle Y wrote:

Breezy wrote:
Ky's Normal

00:11:620 (1) - You could maybe do a more interesting slider shape since the other sliders are just curves and straight sliders. fixed
00:28:539 (1,2) - It might be me, but these two sliders sound very weird when playing for some reason. The timing for this song is weird also.
00:32:251 (1) - You could move this a bit closer since the previous sliders are connected with lower spacing. no, I need to have constand distance spacing for Normal.
00:34:829 (1) - Maybe curve this slightly so it flows into the next note?okay....
01:18:699 (4) - In my opinion, the blanket this has seems to be too close to the slider, and doesn't really look too good. If possible, you can adjust something to make the blankets the same distance like the other ones?okay...
01:33:523 (2) - Curve this slightly to match the previous slider more. both are okay.
Nothing else I could really find, the difficulty is already well made. Good job!

It's a nice mapset, good luck getting this ranked!

Seto Kousuke wrote:
[Ky's Normal]

00:09:686 (2) - This would look better if you put a little curve Like this I think it is not that important if I curve or not, becasue the flowing is not affected
00:11:620 (1) - I think this section could play better and look nicer if you adjust it to something Like this because it helps a lot in the flow and you could also stack 00:14:198 (1) - with the tail to look consistent.....and well, if you do this, I also suggest you a little curve on 00:13:554 (4) - to make the flow even better fixed
00:16:132 (4) - I think it would play a little better if you place this slider more to the left remain, if I change to left, the pattern will be weird, you can try it on your own, second, this song is not high bpm, even if I use right slider, even new players can play it.
00:21:933 (1,2) - huh....volumes? xD I agree, but I have not hitsound it.
00:52:876 (1,2,3) - I don't like this ;w; The idea was good, but i think it's really ugly and a bit random like this....you could make 1 have a better shape/curve and make 3 symmetrical to it any suggestion?
01:15:476 (2,5) - Since this is the kiai, I highly suggest you use more curved sliders in patterns like this, so you give the player a better flow and also make the kiai look more epic um... for me, I think normal diff and easy diff do not need to have so many pattern, as it is mainly for new players, rhythm is more important than pattern for them.
01:27:078 (4) - a sexy little curve to the left here would make this little overlap look way better remain, just weird in look, and the flowing here is good that not need to intend to map a right slider.
And that's it...I hope it helps you, nice idea of mapset and fun diffs, good luck man

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You should probably respond to Slayed as well, he did the first mod and he did mod your diff as well.

SnowNiNo_

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

2,108 posts

Joined April 2013

SnowNiNo_ 2016-01-13T15:12:48+00:00

From my queue

1pc test play
[Caffe's Insane]
00:15:971 (3) - unnecessery note...
00:19:355 (6) - NC
00:20:644 (1) - match the vocal here ? this slider sound very weird...
00:45:141 (1,4) - overlap or dont... choose one
01:14:187 (6) - NC here and 01:14:510 (1) - NC off
01:30:300 (1) - not good flow, should be → or ↘

1pc test play
[O"(Q*)c==")*c 912839017238912389 hello how are you /////(((((((())))))))) yiha]
00:01:790 (2,3,4) - the triplet here is really weird, cause 00:02:273 - 00:20:884 - are all slider..
00:06:785 (2,1) - dont overlap?
00:09:686 (3,4) - ^
00:18:065 (1,2) - ^
00:39:179 (2,3,4,5,6) - is these really necessary = =? why dont make the DS same
00:39:502 (6,7) - flow is not good
00:44:416 (4) - move to 188 256?
00:56:445 (3,1,2) - why 1>2 DS is smaller then 3>1, one is 1/1 and another is 1/2
01:00:875 (2,3) - crtl + G ?
01:10:145 (7) - ^
01:17:329 (6) - unnecessary note, no music fit here ...
01:34:168 (1) - stick to end of 01:32:879 (2)

tried my best XD
GL ~

Avishay

1,250 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

Avishay 2016-01-13T21:07:19+00:00

SnowNiNo_ wrote:
1pc test play
[O"(Q*)c==")*c 912839017238912389 hello how are you /////(((((((())))))))) yiha]
00:01:790 (2,3,4) - the triplet here is really weird, cause 00:02:273 - 00:20:884 - are all slider.. Uhm yeah when I mapped that I had something different in my mind and as for now it doesn't go very well, changed.
00:06:785 (2,1) - dont overlap? Hm, okay.
00:09:686 (3,4) - ^ Seems fine/
00:18:065 (1,2) - ^^
00:39:179 (2,3,4,5,6) - is these really necessary = =? why dont make the DS same Because it's cool and it plays nicely
00:39:502 (6,7) - flow is not good Okay, perhaps you are right, changed.
00:44:416 (4) - move to 188 256? Made something more basic.
00:56:445 (3,1,2) - why 1>2 DS is smaller then 3>1, one is 1/1 and another is 1/2 Rhythm difference, and I didn't really want to visually increase the DS here.
01:00:875 (2,3) - crtl + G ? Intentional
01:10:145 (7) - ^^
01:17:329 (6) - unnecessary note, no music fit here ... Yeah, removed.
01:34:168 (1) - stick to end of 01:32:879 (2) Took me a while to understand what you meant, but sure lol.

tried my best XD
GL ~

thanks

CaffeAmericano

615 posts

Joined January 2015

CaffeAmericano 2016-01-13T23:14:25+00:00

SnowNiNo_ wrote:
From my queue

1pc test play
[Caffe's Insane]
00:15:971 (3) - unnecessery note... consistant with 00:06:947 (2) - I think... Maybe I should delete borth, but I think it fits
00:19:355 (6) - NC fixed
00:20:644 (1) - match the vocal here ? this slider sound very weird... sounds good to me
00:45:141 (1,4) - overlap or dont... choose one changed, but not as suggested
01:14:187 (6) - NC here and 01:14:510 (1) - NC off I prefer to keep NC at downbeat
01:30:300 (1) - not good flow, should be → or ↘ intentional flow break at downbeat

tried my best XD
GL ~

Thank you for the mod!

~~I will post update after making few more changes.~~

I will try to finish hitsounding this week

osu file format v14

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trancemegamix

205 posts

Joined January 2013

trancemegamix 2016-01-19T15:47:30+00:00

Hi. I came from your M4M q

asdoasdajsdaljsdaskjddiff

00:04:529 (2,3) - I would like to change these circles. Suggestion: http://prntscr.com/9s3xzq
00:06:785 (2,3) - These are fine i guess. The vocal is short and quite fast so these circles can stay.
00:12:183 - Same as 2 lines above.
00:14:922 - Same
00:17:339 - Same
00:29:182 (2) - Something like this: http://prntscr.com/9s40kt
01:01:762 (6) - Make simple slider like this one: http://prntscr.com/9s41o0
01:20:310 (2) - Flip it upside down.

Insane

I find this diff funny enough.
01:34:409 - Did you try to make something like this: http://prntscr.com/9s4532 ?
01:36:343 - Vocal goes on, so you can add spinner at the end.

Hard

I could say it's more like Light Insane or so. It has a lot strange sliders (It may look nice, but damn its tough to play)
00:48:847 (4) - Change it.
01:04:186 (3,4) - Strange flow.
01:08:040 (8) - Delete this circle and make (7) one tick longer.
01:14:187 (3,4,5,6) - Maybe square?
01:28:206 (2,3,4,5) - Hard to read for the first time

Normal

00:31:731 (2) - Something like this: http://prntscr.com/9s4dxl
00:37:729 (2,3,4,5,6) - I dont feel like clicking this in normal is good. I would like to change (2) and (3) for slider, or make one circle on white tick.
00:48:847 (3,4) - A bit tough aswell.
01:31:428 (3) - Delete circle?
00:51:264 (3) - Delete circle? Move next slider to white tick so the gap between sliders will be 1/2. Maybe make him longer.

Good luck

Avishay

1,250 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

Avishay 2016-01-19T16:08:14+00:00

HKrecords_ wrote:
Hi. I came from your M4M q

asdoasdajsdaljsdaskjddiff
00:04:529 (2,3) - I would like to change these circles. Suggestion: http://prntscr.com/9s3xzq Why? the vocal ends and there are those 1/2 instruments.
00:06:785 (2,3) - These are fine i guess. The vocal is short and quite fast so these circles can stay.
00:12:183 - Same as 2 lines above.
00:14:922 - Same
00:17:339 - Same
00:29:182 (2) - Something like this: http://prntscr.com/9s40kt Why?
01:01:762 (6) - Make simple slider like this one: http://prntscr.com/9s41o0 Why?
01:20:310 (2) - Flip it upside down. Why?

Good luck

I can't really understand why are you suggesting those stuff, if you could add and say why, I'll appreciate it.

- HellBird -

170 posts

Joined August 2014

- HellBird - 2016-01-24T22:21:45+00:00

Hai

Caffe's Insane

Open

• 00:10:976 (2,1) - The overlap here could have been way better. Try making the slider (2) overlapped at half of the slider (1)

• 00:44:819 (2) - This note would look better if it was placed in a blanket with 00:43:852 (1). Right now it looks plain.

• 00:47:075 (3) - Fix Blanket

• 00:49:653 (4,1) - Bad overlap

• 01:06:831 - Add a note here for a triple. I think a triple sounds right here.

• 01:10:965 (2,3) - Spacing between these sliders should match the spacing between 01:10:643 (1,2)

Rest is fine.

[O"(Q*)c==")*c 912839017238912389 hello how are you /////(((((((())))))))) yiha]

Open

• 00:20:965 (1) - I think you should NC this

• 00:32:193 (8) - Add a finish (Along with the clap ofc)

• 00:34:184 (3,4) - This part completely ruins the flow of this part of the song imo

• 01:05:789 (3) - NC here (Because the vocalist starts a new part here)

• 01:16:685 (3) - Move to x:464, y:112 for better spacing

• 01:19:263 (3,4) - I can't explain these doubles they are just wrong imo.

And that's it!

Really nice map. Good luck on rank!

CaffeAmericano

615 posts

Joined January 2015

CaffeAmericano 2016-01-24T23:01:19+00:00

HKrecords_ wrote:
Hi. I came from your M4M q

Insane
I find this diff funny enough.
01:34:409 - Did you try to make something like this: http://prntscr.com/9s4532 ? 01:34:570 - I don't think there's drum beat at this location
01:36:343 - Vocal goes on, so you can add spinner at the end. I prefer not to map this part, since I think 01:35:457 - is good place to cut. but if I decided to, I think it'll be better to map it with circles and sliders :^)

Good luck

Scebtile wrote:
Hai

Caffe's Insane

Open
• 00:10:976 (2,1) - The overlap here could have been way better. Try making the slider (2) overlapped at half of the slider (1) I'm not sure what you mean

• 00:44:819 (2) - This note would look better if it was placed in a blanket with 00:43:852 (1). Right now it looks plain. I prefer to keep it this way

• 00:47:075 (3) - Fix Blanket fixed

• 00:49:653 (4,1) - Bad overlap fixed

• 01:06:831 - Add a note here for a triple. I think a triple sounds right here. I think it would work, but I prefer not to add it.

• 01:10:965 (2,3) - Spacing between these sliders should match the spacing between 01:10:643 (1,2) I disagree

Rest is fine.

Thanks for the mod, modders!

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Last edited by CaffeAmericano 2016-01-24T23:20:53+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Avishay

1,250 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

Avishay 2016-01-24T23:08:01+00:00

@Scebtile, changed / fixed everything accept for the last thingy, look at previous mods if you wanna know why.

Smokeman

463 posts

Joined November 2012

Smokeman 2016-01-25T19:56:39+00:00

M4M

[O"(Q*)c==")*c 912839017238912389 hello how are you /////(((((((())))))))) yiha]

00:01:629 (1,2,3,4) - this doesn rly follow anything. The guitar isnt going with the vocals here. 00:02:072 - guitar note 00:01:951 (3,4) - arent rly on anything. If you did this intentionally i would recommend you lower the spacing (scale it down) since its confusing to play (confused me 5 timesi tried till i decided to look wtf was going on) smth that isnt in the music.
00:03:562 (1) - having a slider this cramped in itself makes it look edgy (no pun intended). You could "unfold" it a bit more
00:03:562 (1,1) - space this out a bit more so there is some space between them. Looks betetr imo. i mean you have this space between all the other sliders aswell
thing
http://puu.sh/mJkkV/d588fbcc59.jpg
00:04:529 (2,3) - rly wierd since they play on nothing...

What are the green lines following? Vocal range? Actual notes sung? Intensity of said vocals? I wont tell you to not do this but it plays wierd when you 0.8 on this 00:05:818 - and this 00:06:463 (1) - when they feel so much different.
00:07:752 (1,1,1,1) - why gradually reduce the speed but increase the spacing between them? Are you trying to enhance the song by slowing things down or making it harder by having sharper drops from 3/4 to 3/4 sliders?
00:10:330 - you should add some of those sv changes around here aswell.

00:12:264 (2,3) - wierd again (at this point i wouls suggest you atleast use some propper hitsounds so they dont feel so out of place :/ )
00:14:842 (2,3) - ^
00:15:486 (1) - did you intend the wistle on the slider body? This whistle sound while dragging the slider is annoying
00:21:287 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ok now whis rly takes the cake... You cant just start adding rythms they dont exist just because you want there to be this rythm. Not following the music is worse than overmapping imo, but adding an 8 note stream is quite a strech. Its like you want to run into trouble..
00:26:754 (5,6,1) - it would be better not to have these three one one circular 3 note pattern since 00:27:088 (1) - changes the timing by quite a bit dont you think? I would suggest you change this 00:26:431 (4) - to 2 notes and 00:26:754 (5,6) - to a 1/2 slider
example
http://puu.sh/mJmzW/6f3101e221.jpg
00:29:988 (3) - move this to 324|296 so the pattern has more space and looks better overall
00:39:260 (3) - this is overmapped but it doesnt hurt that much since its barely noticeable
00:43:127 (4) - do this like you did those 01:00:634 (1,2,3) -
00:50:620 (2) - you think you can put this infornt of the slider. It looks kinda meh
00:58:056 (1,2,3) - change 1 and 2 for a slider since the intensity drops almost instantly after 00:57:895 (5) - . It played very wierd...
01:01:762 (6) - cant you do smth more visualy apealing ? Like... atleast the other sliders looked kinda ok and cool
01:03:212 (1,2) - Can you atleast put a 1/2 slider so 01:03:714 - can be made clickable. You did this rythm other times aswell but this time it even felt off-putting in all my plays.
01:04:197 (1,2,3,4) - less off-putting since you get used to it... but if ou change the above than change this aswell.
01:13:865 - its kinda wierd to ignore the strong guitar for the overmapped stream + kickslider
01:21:277 - This should be clickable. A new verse starts here. 01:21:116 (6) - this doesnt look or play good (prolly the akward flow) so you can replace it by a circle and then add a sldier for the verse.
01:27:400 (2,1) - move either of the two away so that 01:27:722 (1) - gets more emphasis.
01:27:722 (1) - you could aslo reduce the sv back to 1 here so the transition happens more smoothly (creating stress through emphasis is more dinamic than relative speed slider speed changes. (or just reduce the sv to 1.0x)
01:31:912 (2,3,4) - this is rly hard to hit considering its the only patern spaced like this in the whole map
01:34:973 (8) - it woul fit better if these two kicks were with the others together 01:35:134 (1,2,3,4,1) - .

01:35:457 - Since the song is cut you wont be able to map the next section in the song... so why start it. It feels wierd to end in the middle of a new section.
01:36:934 - this kinda off, the fuck timing?

sry i dont think i can mod the other difs, this already took long enough and i didnt even write down all my thoughts. (it just got tiring after 4 mods today...)

Its cool to hit those sliders, but man is it off-putting when you have to play an 8-note (9 with slider) while the song is still in its chill phase :/

you should get some more professional modders on this
this dog tho wtf it that thing...

Avishay

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Avishay 2016-01-25T21:26:18+00:00

Smokeman wrote:
M4M

[O"(Q*)c==")*c 912839017238912389 hello how are you /////(((((((())))))))) yiha]

00:01:629 (1,2,3,4) - this doesn rly follow anything. The guitar isnt going with the vocals here. 00:02:072 - guitar note 00:01:951 (3,4) - arent rly on anything. If you did this intentionally i would recommend you lower the spacing (scale it down) since its confusing to play (confused me 5 timesi tried till i decided to look wtf was going on) smth that isnt in the music. The mp3 is crap so that's why the guitar is slightly off, the guitar does clearly land on 00:01:790 but it is supposed to land on 00:02:112 as well, but it is just slightly off. I made something else that's more friendly but it doesn't leave the rhythm empty.
00:03:562 (1) - having a slider this cramped in itself makes it look edgy (no pun intended). You could "unfold" it a bit more I agree that it might look a bit cramped with the current shape, but I like it and it goes really really well with the pattern.
00:03:562 (1,1) - space this out a bit more so there is some space between them. Looks betetr imo. i mean you have this space between all the other sliders aswell Spaced it out a bit.
thing
http://puu.sh/mJkkV/d588fbcc59.jpg
00:04:529 (2,3) - rly wierd since they play on nothing... Please listen closely, I know the second note is slightly off but they clearly exist, the mp3 is crap but the notes are snapped fine at 00:06:785 (2,3) - for example, that's the same

What are the green lines following? Vocal range? Actual notes sung? Intensity of said vocals? I wont tell you to not do this but it plays wierd when you 0.8 on this 00:05:818 - and this 00:06:463 (1) - when they feel so much different. Intensity and range, whatever feels right to me. The first slider is fine so I guess I should slow down the second one a bit more, so I'll do that.
00:07:752 (1,1,1,1) - why gradually reduce the speed but increase the spacing between them? Are you trying to enhance the song by slowing things down or making it harder by having sharper drops from 3/4 to 3/4 sliders? I felt like the vocals become slighlty weaker over time in this stanza so I reduced the SVs, spacing are like that are for asthetics and they play pretty well too.
00:10:330 - you should add some of those sv changes around here aswell. I guess I will.

00:12:264 (2,3) - wierd again (at this point i wouls suggest you atleast use some propper hitsounds so they dont feel so out of place :/ )
00:14:842 (2,3) - ^ Weird, no one mentioned those as weird so far, I might find some different hitsound for them.
00:15:486 (1) - did you intend the wistle on the slider body? This whistle sound while dragging the slider is annoying Not intended, removed.
00:21:287 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ok now whis rly takes the cake... You cant just start adding rythms they dont exist just because you want there to be this rythm. Not following the music is worse than overmapping imo, but adding an 8 note stream is quite a strech. Its like you want to run into trouble.. It has a purpose, although overmapped, it works really really well with the song, creates intensity right into the strong section and whatnot, the hitsound help it to blend with the song and it creates something even better.
00:26:754 (5,6,1) - it would be better not to have these three one one circular 3 note pattern since 00:27:088 (1) - changes the timing by quite a bit dont you think? I would suggest you change this 00:26:431 (4) - to 2 notes and 00:26:754 (5,6) - to a 1/2 slider Oh shit I knew I forgot something I wanted to change after I played the map, changed.
example
http://puu.sh/mJmzW/6f3101e221.jpg
00:29:988 (3) - move this to 324|296 so the pattern has more space and looks better overall Nice, I like it.
00:39:260 (3) - this is overmapped but it doesnt hurt that much since its barely noticeable It's not, delete the note and listen closely
00:43:127 (4) - do this like you did those 01:00:634 (1,2,3) - It's fine as it is.
00:50:620 (2) - you think you can put this infornt of the slider. It looks kinda meh
00:58:056 (1,2,3) - change 1 and 2 for a slider since the intensity drops almost instantly after 00:57:895 (5) - . It played very wierd... Repositioned them so it should be better.
01:01:762 (6) - cant you do smth more visualy apealing ? Like... atleast the other sliders looked kinda ok and cool But I like it :< Slighty changed, might overhaul later.
01:03:212 (1,2) - Can you atleast put a 1/2 slider so 01:03:714 - can be made clickable. You did this rythm other times aswell but this time it even felt off-putting in all my plays.
01:04:197 (1,2,3,4) - less off-putting since you get used to it... but if ou change the above than change this aswell. Chagned both ^ Including some nearby patterns.
01:13:865 - its kinda wierd to ignore the strong guitar for the overmapped stream + kickslider Changed pattern around a bit.
01:21:277 - This should be clickable. A new verse starts here. 01:21:116 (6) - this doesnt look or play good (prolly the akward flow) so you can replace it by a circle and then add a sldier for the verse. Yeah I agree, changed.
01:27:400 (2,1) - move either of the two away so that 01:27:722 (1) - gets more emphasis. Repositioned.
01:27:722 (1) - you could aslo reduce the sv back to 1 here so the transition happens more smoothly (creating stress through emphasis is more dinamic than relative speed slider speed changes. (or just reduce the sv to 1.0x) But I reduced it already.. It is 0.8 here.
01:31:912 (2,3,4) - this is rly hard to hit considering its the only patern spaced like this in the whole map That's not really hard, 01:16:443 (2,3,4) - is siimlar.
01:34:973 (8) - it woul fit better if these two kicks were with the others together 01:35:134 (1,2,3,4,1) - . I can't really agree on that.

01:35:457 - Since the song is cut you wont be able to map the next section in the song... so why start it. It feels wierd to end in the middle of a new section. Because it's still part of the song and it's not low enough to be the outro.
01:36:934 - this kinda off, the fuck timing? Yeah.. blame the mp3, best I could get, there's no point in adding a timing point there because it immediately gets fixed, but it is not really noticeable so I'd say that's fine.
sry i dont think i can mod the other difs, this already took long enough and i didnt even write down all my thoughts. (it just got tiring after 4 mods today...)

Its cool to hit those sliders, but man is it off-putting when you have to play an 8-note (9 with slider) while the song is still in its chill phase :/

you should get some more professional modders on this
this dog tho wtf it that thing...

The stream is the gate between the slow part and the new section, it does its' job well >.>

The 'dog' (lion zz) is Kon from Bleach http://bleach.wikia.com/wiki/Kon

Mod was very helpful, thanks, I'll finish mine now.

I should note that I added a new clap, and it is much betta, so redl.

trancemegamix

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trancemegamix 2016-01-29T17:10:10+00:00

Avishay wrote:
HKrecords_ wrote:
Hi. I came from your M4M q

asdoasdajsdaljsdaskjddiff
00:04:529 (2,3) - I would like to change these circles. Suggestion: http://prntscr.com/9s3xzq Why? the vocal ends and there are those 1/2 instruments. ~1) Barely hearable instruments. 2) Vocal is longer 3) You ve done the whole section follows vocal (except these).
00:06:785 (2,3) - These are fine i guess. The vocal is short and quite fast so these circles can stay.
00:12:183 - Same as 2 lines above.
00:14:922 - Same
00:17:339 - Same
00:29:182 (2) - Something like this: http://prntscr.com/9s40kt Why? ~Nvm, I rechecked this.
01:01:762 (6) - Make simple slider like this one: http://prntscr.com/9s41o0 Why? ~Looks nicer
01:20:310 (2) - Flip it upside down. Why? ~Flows better

Good luck
I can't really understand why are you suggesting those stuff, if you could add and say why, I'll appreciate it.

Please dont hurt me.

Bara-

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Bara- 2016-02-10T09:37:29+00:00

Hi. Can you please change my diffname from "Baraatje123's ..." to "Bara's ..."?
I had a namechange, and would like it if you can change it. Make sure to add my new name to tags (and keep the old one as well)
Thanks!
I need to check my GD's thread more often >_>
Give me some time to fix

Avishay

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Topic Starter

Avishay 2016-02-11T10:16:55+00:00

done, resolved some inconsistencies as well, I'll get this set back to track after RS

Avishay

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Avishay 2016-03-05T22:39:24+00:00

alright, I fixed some timings issues, I made it much nicer with the use of additional timing points so the beatmap wouldn't just switch its' offset drastically, I have done minor changes to the GD so there won't be any unrankable issues, I honsetly think I should just tidy up my diff and this is ready for rank.

Underforest

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Underforest 2016-03-06T21:34:42+00:00

Hi! From your M4M queue

Red = Unrankable
Blue = Strongly recommendated
Black = Normal suggestion

General

BG size is unrankable (1228x767), needs to be 1366x768 or 1024x768 at least
Wave hitsounds with possible delay >5ms: normal-hitclap2.wav

Ky's Normal

Your diff has 2 stars, according to the Ranking Criteria needs to be less than 2
Put AR as 4 or 4.5
01:05:804 (1,2) - Not a good overlap

Bara's Hard

RIP 10k posts ayy :'v
00:09:041 (1) - Better this imo
SPOILER
00:20:965 - 00:21:610 - This from this are clickable beats
00:44:175 (4) - Slider tail border is off for 4:3 screens, fix it
SPOILER
00:48:204 (2) - Same as 00:09:041
00:51:265 (3,4) - Intentional?
01:06:287 (2) - Same as 00:09:041
01:12:573 (5,1) - Not a nice stack
01:29:009 (1) - This?
SPOILER
01:34:165 (1,2,1,2) - Fix claps
01:38:516 (2) - Same as 00:09:041

Caffe's Insane

00:00:662 - 00:00:984 - Every diff have mapped this part except yours, try this
SPOILER
00:31:731 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - This?
SPOILER
Very clear diff thought

O"(Q*)c==")*c 912839017238912389 hello how are you /////(((((((())))))))) yiha

00:01:307 (3,4,5,6,1,1,2,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,1,2,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,1,2) - So many stacks on blue tick, please avoid that
So clear thought too!

GL!
p/4946727

Avishay

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Avishay 2016-03-06T22:25:03+00:00

@BG, ahh I hate those, I'll try to find someone to fix that.
@Hitsounds, I can't really feel it, if it is a delay for certain I'll use something else or try to fix that.
@Mod on my diff, that's the whole point of the section :\

Thanks.

Underforest

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Underforest 2016-03-07T00:38:14+00:00

About the BG, I resized it for you http://puu.sh/nxrEA.jpg

Above, the delay it has the hitsound (0.10 seconds), I also fixed it http://puu.sh/nxrOX.wav

Avishay

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Avishay 2016-03-07T06:11:17+00:00

Holy, thanks!!

Battle

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Battle 2016-03-07T22:38:48+00:00

m4m from q right? i dunno im messaging you right now lol

[Normal]
00:07:752 (3,4) - Feels kinda off, here I don't think there really should be a sort of cut off to the current flow. Although the vocal for 00:05:174 (3,4) - is pretty significantly different, and deserves emphasis, it follows the current flow whereas this doesn't really go along with flow
00:23:531 (4) - Try considering making two single taps instead, that was the strong drum on 00:23:853 - is at least pressed instead of on a slider end
01:23:208 (2,3) - Flow can improve lol

[Hard]
00:19:354 (1,2,3,4,1) - It would feel a bit better if you made it so the spacing is large at the start the gradually going down than low -> high -> low since it'll make it so the transition for the vocals getting quieter is a bit smoother
00:38:697 (4,5) - Stack is kinda outta place since previous stack was done with vocals and this one is with vocals then drum but it's structured, still something to keep in mind tho
01:14:507 (5,6) - I dunno, spacing for 5 -> 6 could be a little bigger imo so it goes along with the song starting to pick up into the kiai

[Insane]
00:24:176 (1,2) - Lacks emphasis compared to other drums
00:26:915 (7,1,2) - Weird how 2 has emphasis comparable to 1 when 1 is the stronger note
01:14:749 (4,1) - tbh there's times where it's pretty understandable to have a jump at the end of the stream for emphasis, but it kinda just looks like since the inherited point was there the ds changed lol

[long diff name]
Isn't a bit mroe than ar9 kinda overkill
00:25:626 (2,3,4) - The harsh directional change of 2 -> 3 really takes the emphasis away from the drum on 4
01:14:829 (1,2) - I don't think it would hurt to not have them right next to each other, it's a high difficulty anyways with high ar

z

btw the bg size isn't unrankable with that other dimension but w/e

Avishay

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Avishay 2016-03-08T00:29:13+00:00

Battle wrote:
m4m from q right? i dunno im messaging you right now lol

[long diff name]
Isn't a bit mroe than ar9 kinda overkill hard to read with ar9
00:25:626 (2,3,4) - The harsh directional change of 2 -> 3 really takes the emphasis away from the drum on 4 gave it more emphasization
01:14:829 (1,2) - I don't think it would hurt to not have them right next to each other, it's a high difficulty anyways with high ar sure

z

btw the bg size isn't unrankable with that other dimension but w/e

Thanks!

Lasse

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Lasse 2016-03-08T15:31:38+00:00

hi avishay
m4m thing, even a bit earlier than evening

General

looks good, mp3 is kinda weird but seems to be the best avaiable. so whatever
offset for the first part until 00:21:932 - felt a bit late to me ~10ms maybe
00:24:498 - shouldn't this have another timing point with the same setting to reset the downbeat? + on some other spots too, mostly after those short bpm changes, idk migh only be a minor problem

yiha

00:01:307 (3) - finish feels unfitting here due it being way louder than aynthing in the music and no c rash or anything in the music, guitaris stronger here, I agree with that, but hitnormal or sth should be enough
00:01:629 (4) - gives the guitar strum on the red tick same emphasis as 00:01:951 - which feels bit weird even if it fits kinda with the vocals, how about http://i.imgur.com/OcM9O2K.jpg or maybe http://i.imgur.com/uG7bQLB.jpg ?
00:03:562 (1) - minor visual suggestion: curving this slider a bit less and/or increasing sv a bit would look nicer imo as it makes it less "blocky"
00:10:652 (1,1,1,1) - vocals are really calm here, so lowering the ds on those would be fitting, adding to that, 00:12:908 (1,2,3) - could use a bit more
Spacing for this reasoning
00:28:699 (8,2,3) - autostacking makes this look kinda weird, move 00:29:505 (3) - to 118/254 to fix
00:29:505 (3,1,2) - huge momentum change on such a wide angle is a bit awkward, maybe try sth like http://i.imgur.com/tJpDXjl.jpg ?
00:34:185 (3,4) - triple or 1/4 rep. slider would fit better imo since currently having only the 1/2 ticks clickable puts much emphasis on the vocals, but then 00:34:507 (5) - basically says "instruments are more important here" since it hast he vocal on a sliderend. and since this whole parts seems to be more instrument than vocal focused it would feel better that way
00:42:080 (8) - +70* clockwise would look nice and play the same
00:44:820 (1) - why the nc here? somehow made me expect a change in sv or anything
00:46:431 (7,1) - swapping nc here would fit the music better and be consistent with your nc pattern I think
01:14:185 (6) - nc to go with the music and all?
01:24:497 (1,2,3,4,5) - while the star looks nice, having 5 which has the strong cymbal and all spaced equally with before seems a bit unfitting

caffe

why the many "missing" finishes? like all the crashes every stanza on 01:04:196 (1) - etc. ?
00:01:307 (1) - cant really understand what this slider is supposed to follow, shortening it by 1/2 and adding a note after it should be better http://i.imgur.com/q72QZKl.jpg
00:14:197 (1,2) - when making a pattern like this, try to have the distance between both sliders the same for the whole red area: http://i.imgur.com/da1nNr1.png or at least close to the same, since it looks way cleaner
00:30:632 (7) - repeating 1/2 slider would keeo the same clicking but fit music better
00:31:116 (1,4,5,6) - autostacking makes pattern like this look really weird: http://i.imgur.com/vLkspWl.jpg
manually stacking it to look "normal" would look way better: http://i.imgur.com/AmXLmDo.jpg
or 01:06:913 (2,5,6,1) - 01:08:863 (1,6,7) - more, going through the map with stacking enabled in the editor and fixing the ones that mess up your patterns/are noticeable during gameplay would be nice
same happpens on spots like 00:40:630 (3,3,4,5) -, but there it'S not visible during gameplay anyways (but it ruins the blanket you intended there)
00:36:763 (3) - skipping 1/4 at this bpm, like here when you're mapping an insane? at least using a 1/4 repeat slider for the same tapping would work
01:25:142 (1) - is so strong, it really would be better with more spacing than the pattern before (Even it says the ds is higher already due to the sv change here, it actually is lower)
01:34:327 (2,3) - 1x repeat directly follow by 2x repeat is really awkward, removing one repeat from 01:34:649 (3) - or splitting it into two kicklsiders would work better

bara

od should be lower to fit fit with the rest of the spread, ~6 maybe
00:27:088 (1) - small jump or sth to emphasize cymbal etc. ? goes for pretty much all the cymbals here, since having a hard that is
00:30:632 (3) - can you move the sliderend upwards a bit to make it overlap itself less?
same for 01:19:986 (1) - those just feel so starnge during gameplay
01:23:853 (1,2,1,2) - is this really necessary? bit confusing for a hard, considering everything is pretty much distance snapped and now sth like this
happens
01:34:165 (1,2) - could the sldierends not slightly overlap each other?
well, I guess the pretty much consistent ds is needed for the spread and all, but not having those strong cymbals etc. emphasized on a hard feels a little bit underwhelming :/

ky

why is the hitsounding ignoring so much stuff like the cymbals on 00:54:839 (3) - (+many more) etc.?
00:24:176 (1) - and all those other "kicksliders" and also stacks like 00:30:471 (3,4) - make it feel kinda unfitting for the lowest difficulty this spread, also it is exactly 2.00*, even though it has to be less than 2*
if you delete 00:51:265 (3) - and 01:31:426 (3) - it goes down to 1,99*, so you could also try that

good luck!

Avishay

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Topic Starter

Avishay 2016-03-09T15:36:56+00:00

Lasse wrote:
hi avishay
m4m thing, even a bit earlier than evening

General
looks good, mp3 is kinda weird but seems to be the best avaiable. so whatever
offset for the first part until 00:21:932 - felt a bit late to me ~10ms maybe I can't really feel it >.>
00:24:498 - shouldn't this have another timing point with the same setting to reset the downbeat? + on some other spots too, mostly after those short bpm changes, idk migh only be a minor problem changed time signature to 5/4 and it's fine now

yiha
00:01:307 (3) - finish feels unfitting here due it being way louder than aynthing in the music and no c rash or anything in the music, guitaris stronger here, I agree with that, but hitnormal or sth should be enough na hitsound audio is low enough and it sounds cool
00:01:629 (4) - gives the guitar strum on the red tick same emphasis as 00:01:951 - which feels bit weird even if it fits kinda with the vocals, how about http://i.imgur.com/OcM9O2K.jpg or maybe http://i.imgur.com/uG7bQLB.jpg ? I did something slightly different as your concern was valid.
00:03:562 (1) - minor visual suggestion: curving this slider a bit less and/or increasing sv a bit would look nicer imo as it makes it less "blocky" sure.
00:10:652 (1,1,1,1) - vocals are really calm here, so lowering the ds on those would be fitting, adding to that, 00:12:908 (1,2,3) - could use a bit more
Spacing for this reasoning The lower SV goes with the vocals, as for the next section, increased spacings.
00:28:699 (8,2,3) - autostacking makes this look kinda weird, move 00:29:505 (3) - to 118/254 to fix vv
00:29:505 (3,1,2) - huge momentum change on such a wide angle is a bit awkward, maybe try sth like http://i.imgur.com/tJpDXjl.jpg ? made something similar
00:34:185 (3,4) - triple or 1/4 rep. slider would fit better imo since currently having only the 1/2 ticks clickable puts much emphasis on the vocals, but then 00:34:507 (5) - basically says "instruments are more important here" since it hast he vocal on a sliderend. and since this whole parts seems to be more instrument than vocal focused it would feel better that way nah lol you actually made me notice some parts where I could have done the vocals better since I want to focus them
00:42:080 (8) - +70* clockwise would look nice and play the same sure
00:44:820 (1) - why the nc here? somehow made me expect a change in sv or anything
00:46:431 (7,1) - swapping nc here would fit the music better and be consistent with your nc pattern I think
01:14:185 (6) - nc to go with the music and all? fixed ncs probs at other places too
01:24:497 (1,2,3,4,5) - while the star looks nice, having 5 which has the strong cymbal and all spaced equally with before seems a bit unfitting the strong cymbal is emphasized with the pause, the movements are really sharp and it is the peak of those.

good luck!

thanks!

Bara-

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Joined April 2013

Bara- 2016-03-11T12:21:10+00:00

Fixed most things
Thanks!

SPOILER

osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 52876
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 8075,11620,97993
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.299999

[Metadata]
Title:Alones
TitleUnicode:Alones
Artist:Aqua Timez
ArtistUnicode:Aqua Timez
Creator:Avishay
Version:Bara's Hard
Source:Bleach
Tags:Bara- CaffeAmericano Kyle Y Kon
BeatmapID:864201
BeatmapSetID:375484

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5.9
CircleSize:3.9
OverallDifficulty:6.2
ApproachRate:7.9
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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FCL

1,497 posts

Joined July 2014

FCL 2016-03-12T20:10:01+00:00

Bleach is one of my favorite Shounen

[Probably if you will keep this diffname when you get rank, you will have a some problems]

00:01:307 (3) - Finish doesn't supported by song here. Normal is fine, but I think that soft whistle as before should fit better imo
00:01:307 (3) - Also I am sure that you should add NC here because structure of song had changed here (added instrumels I mean)
00:20:643 (1) - emm, blanket? http://puu.sh/nDULk/af70ed21e3.jpg . Pretty aesthetical than before
00:21:287 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - What the, it's obviously overmapped, I can't hear drums or something here, it really is the most insolent overmapping what I see in my life o_o
00:22:737 (4,5) - Pretty overdone spacing between imo. (5) doesn't supported so much how you done the distance here. 209 36 fit much better plus you will do emphasis on the 00:23:048 (6) - , what is more true
00:23:853 (1,2,3) - The instrumentals is pretty strong here, you could make a more spacing between, it's fits I guess
00:24:498 (1,3) - http://puu.sh/nDVTU/96b5dd58df.jpg
00:26:431 (4) - NC here much better fit with song I guess. Due to more stronger instrumentals. Also you added NC at same position before. If you will apply remove NC from 00:25:465 (1) -
00:28:054 (6) - Flow here is not so bad, but I think you could improve him. 108 52 or something similar placement should fit and work better imo. Probably I just don't like this place haha. Anyway, my option it seems to me will better.
00:39:501 (7) - The end of kick hasn't some sounds. You had used similar slider before (00:34:184 (3) - ) but their tails had correspondet to song. Just a circle will better or you can just delete whistle to end because it's not match. Same for similar sliders
00:40:629 (3) - Fully stacked looks a bit confusing, you could unstack them a bit for more readable
00:42:724 (2,3,4) - I can't find sounds here, it's overmapped I guess
00:49:814 (8) - Too curved for me, it's not looks nice imo
00:51:425 (7,1) - obtuse angle between circles doesn't do a good flow imo. It's should play good, but for better readable you could make more acute angle between circles
00:52:553 (8,9) - btw same ^
00:52:553 (8,9,1) - ^, Yea, flow is should be improved in this section I guess
00:56:609 (1,2) - Idk why, but I can't hear drums samplesets, its pretty quiet lol
00:57:898 (5,1) - flow stuff again, Jump to NC is close to linear flow what is not good to play. Although if you want to keep linear flow, you could move (5) to 87 39, linear flow with similar spacing playing fine
01:03:215 (1,2,3,4) - I really don't know what happened with your D:C3, but I can't head threir, maybe should increase the volume
01:07:394 (3) - dirty flow imo, the player should unpleasant move cursor across slider after jump from circle. CTrl+g to slider work better
01:13:055 (5) - blanket
01:14:827 (1) - The end sounds like overmapped, you could add soft to sliderend to fix that
01:18:533 (7) - flow stuff, I think on 285 19 it's created a better flow
01:24:173 (2) - yea, it's will work for other 3/4 sliders I guess
01:33:197 (3,4,5) - Vocal on these sliders it pretty strong, so I am not agree with that spacing between. He's should be much more
01:34:969 (8,1) - I just don't like this placement (spacing is pretty far plus not the best flow), so I suggest this placement http://puu.sh/nE53Q/4baf40d0c9.jpg
Idk, I think you could improve the highest diff a bit, sometimle flow can be better, also some aestetic things could be improved

[Caffe]

00:01:307 (1) - Don't like these sliderwawe form, try something like this http://puu.sh/nE5gR/a69000c31c.jpg
00:24:498 (2) - obviously that nc should be started at bit white tick, since we have new cycle here. But you also can add nc on 00:23:853 (8) - , it will work too
00:45:786 (5,7) - nazi blanket pls
01:18:697 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I am not agree with that circle spam here. Circle spam looks fine if it's supported by music (01:16:441 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - for example, we have a strong guitar beats) but here it's not true. Also 01:19:341 (1) - not needed to nc imo
01:19:986 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Pretty much sliders in this section what look boring imo. You could add circles instead 01:20:630 (3) - , 01:20:952 (4) - or 01:22:242 (4) - to make this section more interesting
01:34:327 (2,3) - Claps here sound pretty loudly. Please change to Normal sampleset, they sounded pleasant

[barathrum]

00:40:630 (3) - pls blanket
00:51:265 (3,4) - I am not sure that stacks like this looks fine for read with low AR. Yea, it's looks pretty confusing and should be fixed imo
00:52:393 (6) - Repeat hasn't some sounds here, but if you want to map triplet you have missed him on 00:52:070. Also 00:52:795 (8) - overmapped too, it hasn't sounds
01:12:573 (5) - when I did testplay I had noticed that this form of slider is pretty confused because player don't expecting that he should during short period of time keep coursor on head and he will move it forward, what causing sliderbreak. Pls try more readable form here
01:14:668 (6) - should have 1.07 spacing like 01:14:346 (4) - to fit I guess
01:34:165 (1,2,1,2) - Same as caffe diff, claps sounds loudly, I think you should change to Normal samplesets imo

[ky]

haha http://puu.sh/nE96Y/5b85178e68.png
00:10:975 (4) - sliderspam looks boring imo, I think you should follow to circle-slider balance. Here you could change slider to 2 circles. is's fine given that you use 2/1 slider further
00:24:176 (1) - Not think that 1/2 so needed, just a cirlce looks better imo. Also nc should be started from 00:24:498 (2) - . since big white tick
00:30:632 (4,5) - weird flow lol. rather sharply for Normal, 251 185 or something similar should work better
00:54:362 - too big gap here, you could map this beat to break the gap
00:55:241 - same ^ feels empty. 1/1 slider instead 00:54:839 (4) - looks perfect
00:56:933 - ,aaaaa map pls, it's really feels empty and should be mapped
01:03:217 (1,2,3) - ^
Idk I think if you don't will do map these section you can get some problems with ranking lol

Bleach is good anime

Yales

827 posts

Joined February 2013

Yales 2016-03-12T22:23:01+00:00

Hello, M4M (1) https://osu.ppy.sh/s/342030
[General]

Check AiMod there's a timing point conflict.
Would be cool if all diffs would finish at the same point. There's 4 diffs and the map finish on 3 different points... ^^" (I personally think Bara found a nice point to finish on).
00:21:932 (1) - What about a kiai fountain on this point?
00:52:874 (1) - Kiai fountain on this point as well? It's even your preview point, it's supposed to be epic or something e.e
01:03:215 (1) - Then here too

[Ky's Normal]

00:00:662 (1) - Considering the calm music in this whole section you could put the hitsounds on soft sampleset? And it would actually be cool if the map was hitsounded XD
00:55:483 (4) - What about creating a blanket with 00:56:450 (5) - this single note would look a bit less randomly placed! http://puu.sh/nEePF/5c2dcf6a05.jpg
01:33:521 (2) - Curve it a little bit to the top to recall 01:32:876 (1) - ? would flow just great with the next slider imo

[Bara's Hard]

I find your first section a bit empty on hitsounds (not it calls for some finish/claps lol) so I'd add juste a whistle at those points: 00:03:885 (1) - 00:09:041 (1) - 00:14:197 (1) - 00:19:354 (1) - 00:20:643 (1) - (?)
00:50:298 (1) - Fix stack with 00:49:331 (5) -
00:58:061 (1) - I'd put a whistle instead of a clap here since the music seems to suddenly calm down a bit.
01:14:185 (3,5) - Add NC? First off I think it's really hard to read, and seems you used that pair comboing after that. (01:23:853 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 01:32:876 (1,2,1,2) - )
01:23:853 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Talking about this one, I think the stacks are really hard to read here (not to mention there's not a single one on Normal diff)
01:29:009 (1) - It's not I dislike it or something, but I'm not sure to get why there's a slow down here? Also, it isn't constant with the previous (combo+nc+sv) 01:18:697 (5) -
01:38:999 (3) - Reduce volume a bit from here? It's a bit disproportionate with the music going down right now. You can clearly hear it with this last note 01:40:611 (1) - The clap feels really loud, change it for whistle at least maybe :p

Nice slider shapes :O Really original diff
[Caffe's Insane]

00:24:498 (2) - Wouldn't it be more logic, consering the music to add the NC here instead of here 00:24:176 (1) - ? I mean you did this way here besides 00:29:666 (1) -
00:28:054 (5) - NC here instead of 00:28:538 (1) - (you did it here 00:25:465 (1) - )
00:30:632 (7) - ^ Instead of 00:31:116 (1) - (^)
00:46:269 (7) - Fix blanket with 00:45:786 (5) -
00:48:364 (2) - Stack properly maybe?
01:06:126 (6) - Add NC to stay constant
00:53:044 (2) - I think you'd better go for a 1/1 slider, it would sound better to me and you did it here 00:54:362 (4) - so on would recall to the other I don't think that's a bad idea!
01:06:752 (1) - Slider would be way more catchy if you put it there instead of there 01:06:913 (2) -
01:03:384 (2) - ^
01:31:587 (1) - Fix stack
00:57:739 (1) - I'd put the NC here instead 00:58:061 (3) the rhythm is the same, and you don't put the NC in the obvious new section

[O"(Q*)c==")*c 912839017238912389 hello how are you /////(((((((())))))))) yiha]

00:01:790 (5) - I'd put on the red ticks soft as sampleset, to let the normal hitsound on stronger points such as white ticks (which usually follow the vocal imo)
00:03:885 (1) - ^ (I'd add soft sampleset at the end)
00:04:690 (3) - ^ 00:06:946 (3) - here too 00:12:425 (3) - here too 00:15:003 (3) - ^ 00:17:581 (3) - ^ After those points (that I think the music is a bit too calm to make full normal samplset) I find your idea of hitsounds and patterns really cool.
00:28:054 (6) - I'd put NC here instead of here 00:29:021 (1) -
00:39:501 (7) - Fix spaing? I mean, you did respect the spacing here 00:49:814 (8) - and I think that's better this way :c
00:42:080 (7) - Fix spacing? ^
01:05:158 (1) - Stack properly?
01:09:510 (5) - The flow is cool, but since you tend to emphasize lots of sound on this diff, I'm pretty surprised you didn't do something like that http://puu.sh/nEigL/7e4cbee481.jpg or something, to go along with the vocal
01:12:330 - Pretty sad that on the highest diff you didn't put a triple here to go along with the vocal.
01:16:680 (3) - A clap sounds better to me than whistle?
01:19:259 (3) - ^
01:21:837 (3) - ^
01:32:149 (3) - ^
01:27:074 (1,2,1) - Really cool flow with those SVs

Nice use of 3/4 sliders :O !

Avishay

1,250 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

Avishay 2016-03-13T13:07:07+00:00

FCL wrote:
Bleach is one of my favorite Shounen

[Probably if you will keep this diffname when you get rank, you will have a some problems]
00:01:307 (3) - Finish doesn't supported by song here. Normal is fine, but I think that soft whistle as before should fit better imo
00:01:307 (3) - Also I am sure that you should add NC here because structure of song had changed here (added instrumels I mean)
00:20:643 (1) - emm, blanket? http://puu.sh/nDULk/af70ed21e3.jpg . Pretty aesthetical than before
00:21:287 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - What the, it's obviously overmapped, I can't hear drums or something here, it really is the most insolent overmapping what I see in my life o_o It is, hitsounds compensate for it and the buildup it gives it too good to omit.
00:22:737 (4,5) - Pretty overdone spacing between imo. (5) doesn't supported so much how you done the distance here. 209 36 fit much better plus you will do emphasis on the 00:23:048 (6) - , what is more true It's done right, I want the emphasize on 5 rather than 6 in terms of spacing because of the instuments, however the sharp movement change gives the slider the right momentum and it plays well.
00:23:853 (1,2,3) - The instrumentals is pretty strong here, you could make a more spacing between, it's fits I guess
00:24:498 (1,3) - http://puu.sh/nDVTU/96b5dd58df.jpg
00:26:431 (4) - NC here much better fit with song I guess. Due to more stronger instrumentals. Also you added NC at same position before. If you will apply remove NC from 00:25:465 (1) - Not really, however I rearranged the NCs a bit in this section.
00:28:054 (6) - Flow here is not so bad, but I think you could improve him. 108 52 or something similar placement should fit and work better imo. Probably I just don't like this place haha. Anyway, my option it seems to me will better. Spacing was a bit extreme, used your suggestion and nerfed it a bit.
00:39:501 (7) - The end of kick hasn't some sounds. You had used similar slider before (00:34:184 (3) - ) but their tails had correspondet to song. Just a circle will better or you can just delete whistle to end because it's not match. Same for similar sliders
00:40:629 (3) - Fully stacked looks a bit confusing, you could unstack them a bit for more readable
00:42:724 (2,3,4) - I can't find sounds here, it's overmapped I guess Listen closely.
00:49:814 (8) - Too curved for me, it's not looks nice imo
00:51:425 (7,1) - obtuse angle between circles doesn't do a good flow imo. It's should play good, but for better readable you could make more acute angle between circles
00:52:553 (8,9) - btw same ^ On purpose, circlish movement.
00:52:553 (8,9,1) - ^, Yea, flow is should be improved in this section I guess
00:56:609 (1,2) - Idk why, but I can't hear drums samplesets, its pretty quiet lol
00:57:898 (5,1) - flow stuff again, Jump to NC is close to linear flow what is not good to play. Although if you want to keep linear flow, you could move (5) to 87 39, linear flow with similar spacing playing fine
01:03:215 (1,2,3,4) - I really don't know what happened with your D:C3, but I can't head threir, maybe should increase the volume
01:07:394 (3) - dirty flow imo, the player should unpleasant move cursor across slider after jump from circle. CTrl+g to slider work better
01:13:055 (5) - blanket
01:14:827 (1) - The end sounds like overmapped, you could add soft to sliderend to fix that
01:18:533 (7) - flow stuff, I think on 285 19 it's created a better flow
01:24:173 (2) - yea, it's will work for other 3/4 sliders I guess
01:33:197 (3,4,5) - Vocal on these sliders it pretty strong, so I am not agree with that spacing between. He's should be much more
01:34:969 (8,1) - I just don't like this placement (spacing is pretty far plus not the best flow), so I suggest this placement http://puu.sh/nE53Q/4baf40d0c9.jpg
Idk, I think you could improve the highest diff a bit, sometimle flow can be better, also some aestetic things could be improved that's what I'm trying to do, I purposely don't map in that certain way so problems might arise easily.

Bleach is good anime

Yales wrote:
Hello, M4M (1) https://osu.ppy.sh/s/342030
[General]
Check AiMod there's a timing point conflict.
Would be cool if all diffs would finish at the same point. There's 4 diffs and the map finish on 3 different points... ^^" (I personally think Bara found a nice point to finish on). naa, it's not like the diffs are made by the same mapper, everyone picked their favorite point.
00:21:932 (1) - What about a kiai fountain on this point? Don't really want too many kiais, yes, there are many intense parts but the chorus is clear.
00:52:874 (1) - Kiai fountain on this point as well? It's even your preview point, it's supposed to be epic or something e.e
01:03:215 (1) - Then here too
[O"(Q*)c==")*c 912839017238912389 hello how are you /////(((((((())))))))) yiha]
00:01:790 (5) - I'd put on the red ticks soft as sampleset, to let the normal hitsound on stronger points such as white ticks (which usually follow the vocal imo)
00:03:885 (1) - ^ (I'd add soft sampleset at the end)
00:04:690 (3) - ^ 00:06:946 (3) - here too 00:12:425 (3) - here too 00:15:003 (3) - ^ 00:17:581 (3) - ^ After those points (that I think the music is a bit too calm to make full normal samplset) I find your idea of hitsounds and patterns really cool.
00:28:054 (6) - I'd put NC here instead of here 00:29:021 (1) -
00:39:501 (7) - Fix spaing? I mean, you did respect the spacing here 00:49:814 (8) - and I think that's better this way :c
00:42:080 (7) - Fix spacing? ^
01:05:158 (1) - Stack properly?
01:09:510 (5) - The flow is cool, but since you tend to emphasize lots of sound on this diff, I'm pretty surprised you didn't do something like that http://puu.sh/nEigL/7e4cbee481.jpg or something, to go along with the vocal
01:12:330 - Pretty sad that on the highest diff you didn't put a triple here to go along with the vocal.
01:16:680 (3) - A clap sounds better to me than whistle?
01:19:259 (3) - ^
01:21:837 (3) - ^
01:32:149 (3) - ^
01:27:074 (1,2,1) - Really cool flow with those SVs
Nice use of 3/4 sliders :O !

Thanks both! I will note that if I didn't respond it means that I did change something in accordance to your mod, perhaps not exactly what you said but I did change one or two.

Bara-

11,978 posts

Joined April 2013

Bara- 2016-03-13T17:02:44+00:00

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Avishay

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Avishay 2016-03-14T06:59:01+00:00

As Caffe is busy and unavailable to respond to the mods, I'll respond and apply them, just need Kyle to see them too.

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