올픽스~ : )Doyak wrote:
제 맵이라 쿠도스는 안 나오지만 겟난 모딩 한 차례 가겠습니다.
[Zzz's Normal]
* 전체적으로 볼륨 조절좀요... (스피너 볼륨 40%로 통일도 좀)
* 00:10:989 - 휘슬?
* 00:11:506 (1) - 제안이지만, 개인적으로 이런 박자일 경우 저는 앞쪽 비트에 더 초점을 둡니다. 즉 스피너를 00:13:058 - 에서 끝내겠다는 건데, 저 스피너가 저 소리들을 다 표현해주고 있는 것도 아니고 지금 상태는 엇박에서 끝나는지라 리듬이 약간 흐트러지는 것 같아요.
* 00:24:023 (6,1) - 지금까지 모든 보컬을 다 잡아주면서 오셨는데, 갑자기 여기서 빠지니까 어색하네요... 정말 갑작스럽게 드럼으로 전향하셨다는 느낌을 지울 수가 없습니다.
* 00:27:954 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 여긴 정말 소리 하나하나가 다 강조해줄만한 부분들인데 힛사가 너무 부족한 것 같습니다... 다른 난이도들 보시고 그 정도로 맞춰주셨으면...
* 00:40:802 - 00:47:422 - 00:54:043 - 01:27:160 - 01:33:781 - 01:40:401 - 01:47:022 - 01:53:643 - 피니시를...
* 00:48:043 (2) - 의도를 모르겠습니다. 여기에 뭔가 강력한 소리가 있나요? 00:41:629 (2) - 처럼 쓰시는 게 좋을 거 같은데 왜 굳이 엇박으로...
* 00:47:836 - 클랩
* 00:49:491 (6) - 이거랑 01:35:850 (4) - 01:49:091 (5) - 일관성좀요. 3/4 슬라이더 어려운 박자인데 앞에선 안 썼다가 뒤에만 쓰는 건...
* 01:00:043 (5) - 여기다가 힛사 다 몰아넣는 것보단 00:59:836 - 01:00:250 - 처럼 정박에 넣어주는 게 더 깔끔하다고 생각합니다.
* 00:46:181 (4,5) - 01:32:953 (5,6) - 01:45:781 (4,5) - 01:52:402 (4,5,6) - 01:58:402 (5,6,7,8) - 02:05:229 (4,5,6) - 드럼 소리가 달라지면서 텐션이 변하는 곳인데, 힛사는 매~우 규칙적으로 계속 똑같이 넣으셨네요. 좀 더 다양화를 줘보시길 바랍니다.
* 01:24:470 (3,4,5) - 쭉 보컬에만 맞춰서 해오셨기 때문에 여기도 01:24:470 (3,4) - 박자가 뒤집히는 게 보컬을 더 잘 나타내준다고 봅니다.
Done!
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