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Doyak

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Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Doyak 2016-02-02T02:32:36+00:00

Beomsan wrote:
[Hard]
00:38:299 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4447083 아하하하하하하하 1도 돌림요
ㅈㅅ합니다.....
[Insane]
도약님 저만의 븐이 되어주세요
최근 모딩 중 가장 길었네요........
굿럭!

모딩 감사합니다~

Dailycare

Beatmap Nominator

1,074 posts

Joined May 2012

Dailycare 2016-02-02T07:01:02+00:00

Beomsan wrote:
쓰레기모딩왔슴다

[Dailycare's Light Hard]
00:10:782 (1) - 블랭킷 봐주세요
00:13:264 (4) - 저는 보컬따라가는거라고 생각했는데 갑자기 배경음을 따라가는걸 보니 어색하단 생각이 팍 들었습니다. 고려만 해주세요. // 00:12:437 - 여기로 슬라이더 시작을 한번 당겨와봤는데..
00:41:215 (3) - 00:40:802 (1) - 슬라끝에 빈박자에 노트 한개두고 블랭킷 맞춰주세요
00:56:112 (2,3) - 음.......... 뭔가 의도가 어떤건지 잘 모르겠다고 해야하나... 00:58:802 - 여기 노트를 추가하던지 아님 앞부분에서 수정을 하던지 택1 하셔야 할 것 같습니다..? // 의도는 있는데 이게 좀 말하기가 애매한.. 만약 여기가 어색하다고 다른 분들도 말하면 노트 추가보단 수정하는 방향으로 고쳐볼게요
01:34:194 (2) - 블랭킷좀안맞아요
제가 보기엔 들쑥날쑥한 박자였던 거 같은데 큰 상관은 없을 듯 합니다.

최근 모딩 중 가장 길었네요........
굿럭!

최근 모딩들이 다 박자를 지적하네요.. 앞으로 박자 감각좀 키워보겠습니다 ㅠㅠ..

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Artist:eufonius
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Tags:[C_u_r_i] [_Zzz_] Dailycare Mag Mell Key Sounds Label Riya Kiku Original Soundtrack Disc 3
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256,192,126987,12,0,130194,0:0:0:0:

Doyak

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Doyak 2016-02-02T10:31:54+00:00

제 맵이라 쿠도스는 안 나오지만 겟난 모딩 한 차례 가겠습니다.

[Curi's Easy]
* 00:01:678 - 00:04:989 - 00:08:299 - 00:11:609 - 제일 조용한 부분인데 휘슬이 너무 많아서 좀 거슬리네요. 이 부분들이라도 하나씩 빼주면 훨씬 나을 것 같습니다.
* 00:01:058 - 00:14:299 - 두 부분을 비교해보면 후자가 더 분위기가 올라온 부분인데 박자가 도리어 더 단순해져서 더 가라앉히는 거 같아요. 오히려 앞부분을 http://puu.sh/mSTKd/b5e5d8bb2a.jpg 이 정도로 단순화하고, 뒤에가 조금 더 복잡했으면 하는 바람이네요.
* 00:28:989 (2,2,2) - 반 박자씩 줄였으면 좋겠네요. 물론 뒷소리도 강력하기는 하지만, 나머지 소리들이 전부 드럼소리에 걸쳐져 있는 데에 비해서 저 소리들만 어긋나서 개인적으론 어색한 느낌입니다.
* 00:47:422 - 00:54:043 - 01:33:781 - 01:53:643 - 02:00:263 - 피니시 추가
* 아무리 이지이긴 합니다만, 키아이 전체를 통틀어 서클이 1개 (끝에 걸린 것까지 봐주면 2개)라는 건 좀 걸리네요. 서클로 변환할 수 있는 것들: 00:46:595 (3) - 00:53:215 (3) - 01:32:953 (3) - 01:39:574 (3) - 01:46:194 (3) - 01:52:815 (3) - 01:59:436 (3) - 다음 부분으로 넘어가기 전에 드럼이 달라지면서 텐션이 오르는 부분들입니다. 지금 상태는 키아이가 처음부터 끝까지 너무 단순해서 모든 부분이 다 똑같아 보입니다. 한 번 고려해보시고, 저런 곳은 드럼 샘플셋 써서 좀 다른 소리를 내보는 것도 고려해보세요.
* 이 노래도 조용한 곳과 강한 곳의 차이가 꽤 극명한 곡이니까, 볼륨이나 힛사의 사용에 있어서도 좀 더 차이를 뒀으면 좋겠네요. 40%에서 60%는 좀 작은 거 같고, 키아이는 한 70% 이상 추천해요. 그리고 01:13:919 - 이 구간처럼 이렇게 휘슬 소리를 많이 쓰실 거면 조금 더 줄이셨으면 좋겠고, 그대로 두실 거라면 휘슬 빈도를 더 낮췄으면 좋겠네요. 그리고 01:00:664 - 02:06:987 - 스피너들 볼륨 위에서 통일하라고 이야기 나왔었는데, 40% 통일시킵시다. 스피너 시작부터요.

[Zzz's Normal]
* 전체적으로 볼륨 조절좀요... (스피너 볼륨 40%로 통일도 좀)
* 00:10:989 - 휘슬?
* 00:11:506 (1) - 제안이지만, 개인적으로 이런 박자일 경우 저는 앞쪽 비트에 더 초점을 둡니다. 즉 스피너를 00:13:058 - 에서 끝내겠다는 건데, 저 스피너가 저 소리들을 다 표현해주고 있는 것도 아니고 지금 상태는 엇박에서 끝나는지라 리듬이 약간 흐트러지는 것 같아요.
* 00:24:023 (6,1) - 지금까지 모든 보컬을 다 잡아주면서 오셨는데, 갑자기 여기서 빠지니까 어색하네요... 정말 갑작스럽게 드럼으로 전향하셨다는 느낌을 지울 수가 없습니다.
* 00:27:954 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 여긴 정말 소리 하나하나가 다 강조해줄만한 부분들인데 힛사가 너무 부족한 것 같습니다... 다른 난이도들 보시고 그 정도로 맞춰주셨으면...
* 00:40:802 - 00:47:422 - 00:54:043 - 01:27:160 - 01:33:781 - 01:40:401 - 01:47:022 - 01:53:643 - 피니시를...
* 00:48:043 (2) - 의도를 모르겠습니다. 여기에 뭔가 강력한 소리가 있나요? 00:41:629 (2) - 처럼 쓰시는 게 좋을 거 같은데 왜 굳이 엇박으로...
* 00:47:836 - 클랩
* 00:49:491 (6) - 이거랑 01:35:850 (4) - 01:49:091 (5) - 일관성좀요. 3/4 슬라이더 어려운 박자인데 앞에선 안 썼다가 뒤에만 쓰는 건...
* 01:00:043 (5) - 여기다가 힛사 다 몰아넣는 것보단 00:59:836 - 01:00:250 - 처럼 정박에 넣어주는 게 더 깔끔하다고 생각합니다.
* 00:46:181 (4,5) - 01:32:953 (5,6) - 01:45:781 (4,5) - 01:52:402 (4,5,6) - 01:58:402 (5,6,7,8) - 02:05:229 (4,5,6) - 드럼 소리가 달라지면서 텐션이 변하는 곳인데, 힛사는 매~우 규칙적으로 계속 똑같이 넣으셨네요. 좀 더 다양화를 줘보시길 바랍니다.
* 01:24:470 (3,4,5) - 쭉 보컬에만 맞춰서 해오셨기 때문에 여기도 01:24:470 (3,4) - 박자가 뒤집히는 게 보컬을 더 잘 나타내준다고 봅니다.

[Dailycare's Light Hard]
* 전반적으로 '라이트' 하드라고 해서 리듬을 많이 억누르신 것 같이 보이는데... 노말도 쓸 박자 다 쓰고 있으니 그렇게까지 하실 필요는 없었어요. 아래 제안한대로 조금만 더 채워넣어봤으면 좋겠네요.
* 00:10:782 (1) - 일본어를 몰라서 정확히는 모르겠지만, 00:10:989 - 에 보컬이 하나 더 있는 거라고 생각합니다. 휘슬 소리 빠진 것도 채울겸 노트를 추가해 보시는 게?
* 00:14:299 - 이쪽 부근에서 디스턴스 스냅을 안 쓰신 건지는 모르겠는데, 00:24:851 (2,3,4) - 이렇게 좀 많이 왔다갔다하는 거리들이 종종 보여서, 좀 더 정밀하게 고정하실 수 없을지 여쭤봅니다.
* 그리고 거기서부터 휘슬 소리가 다 사라지고 드럼만 남는데, 힛사의 분위기가 180도 바뀌어서 좀 아쉽네요. 휘슬도 적절하게 같이 쓸 수 있는 방법이 있지 않을까요? 제 난이도에선 휘슬이 주기가 뒤바뀌어서 전환점에서 좀 어색하다는 느낌이 있긴 한데, 더 좋은 방법이 있으면 좋겠네요.
* 00:50:733 (1) - 전반적으로 보컬 따라가고 계신데 여기선 너무 단순화하느라 보컬이 씹혔네요. 전반적으로 저 부근이 밀도가 상당히 낮기도 하고, http://puu.sh/mSVGm/1c114908af.jpg 이렇게 해보시는 게 어떨까 싶네요.
* 00:52:181 (1,2,1) - 여기도 텐션이 높은 구간인데 박자 밀도가 너무 낮아요. 00:53:836 - 여기라도 서클 하나 추가하는 게 어떨까요?
* 00:55:491 - 00:58:802 - 여기도 서클 하나씩 추가해도 좋아요.
* 01:13:919 - 여기도 노말이 어떻게 했는지 보셨다면 이렇게 억제할 필요가 없었다는 걸 보셨을텐데 ㅠㅠ 01:14:125 - 01:14:539 - 01:17:436 - 01:17:850 - 01:20:332 - 01:20:746 - 01:21:160 - 다 추가하실 필요는 없고 쓰고 싶으신 만큼 넣어주세요! 노말보단 어려워지게...
* 01:37:091 (1,2,3) - 01:50:332 (1,2) - 앞부분과 마찬가지
* 01:39:160 (2,3) - 이건 약간 쓸데없이 어려운 박자랄까... 제 하드에서 한 것처럼 1/4 왕복 슬라 하나만 넣어주셔도 괜찮아요. 01:39:367 - 에도 드럼 다 있으니 굳이 거길 빼놓고 파란 선을 채우는 어려운 박자를 쓸 필요는 없을 것 같네요.
* 01:45:781 (2,3) - 앞부분에 00:45:560 (1,2,3) - 01:31:919 (1,2,3) - 와 일관성이 있으면 좋을 것 같아요. 다 01:45:781 (2,3) - 처럼 해도 괜찮아요.
* 01:52:505 (3,4) - 앞에서 써왔던 1/4 간격 보고 그와 같게 맞춰주세요.
* 01:55:091 - 01:58:401 - 02:01:712 - 02:05:022 - 다 제법 임팩트 있는 소리들이니 쓰고 싶으시면 주저하지 말고 노트 추가해주세요.

셀프 모딩은 여기까지~ 굿럭! ~~(왜 나 자신한테)~~

Dailycare

Beatmap Nominator

1,074 posts

Joined May 2012

Dailycare 2016-02-02T12:09:57+00:00

Doyak wrote:
제 맵이라 쿠도스는 안 나오지만 겟난 모딩 한 차례 가겠습니다.

[Dailycare's Light Hard]
* 전반적으로 '라이트' 하드라고 해서 리듬을 많이 억누르신 것 같이 보이는데... 노말도 쓸 박자 다 쓰고 있으니 그렇게까지 하실 필요는 없었어요. 아래 제안한대로 조금만 더 채워넣어봤으면 좋겠네요.
* 00:10:782 (1) - 일본어를 몰라서 정확히는 모르겠지만, 00:10:989 - 에 보컬이 하나 더 있는 거라고 생각합니다. 휘슬 소리 빠진 것도 채울겸 노트를 추가해 보시는 게? // 앞부분은 전반적으로 1/1슬라이더를 많이 써서 여기서도 굳이 쓰긴 좀 꺼려지네요..
* 00:14:299 - 이쪽 부근에서 디스턴스 스냅을 안 쓰신 건지는 모르겠는데, 00:24:851 (2,3,4) - 이렇게 좀 많이 왔다갔다하는 거리들이 종종 보여서, 좀 더 정밀하게 고정하실 수 없을지 여쭤봅니다.
* 그리고 거기서부터 휘슬 소리가 다 사라지고 드럼만 남는데, 힛사의 분위기가 180도 바뀌어서 좀 아쉽네요. 휘슬도 적절하게 같이 쓸 수 있는 방법이 있지 않을까요? 제 난이도에선 휘슬이 주기가 뒤바뀌어서 전환점에서 좀 어색하다는 느낌이 있긴 한데, 더 좋은 방법이 있으면 좋겠네요. // 두 번 정도 고쳐보긴 했는데 만족할만한 결과가 나오지 않아서 우선은 이대로..
* 00:50:733 (1) - 전반적으로 보컬 따라가고 계신데 여기선 너무 단순화하느라 보컬이 씹혔네요. 전반적으로 저 부근이 밀도가 상당히 낮기도 하고, http://puu.sh/mSVGm/1c114908af.jpg 이렇게 해보시는 게 어떨까 싶네요.
* 00:52:181 (1,2,1) - 여기도 텐션이 높은 구간인데 박자 밀도가 너무 낮아요. 00:53:836 - 여기라도 서클 하나 추가하는 게 어떨까요?
* 00:55:491 - 00:58:802 - 여기도 서클 하나씩 추가해도 좋아요.
* 01:13:919 - 여기도 노말이 어떻게 했는지 보셨다면 이렇게 억제할 필요가 없었다는 걸 보셨을텐데 ㅠㅠ 01:14:125 - 01:14:539 - 01:17:436 - 01:17:850 - 01:20:332 - 01:20:746 - 01:21:160 - 다 추가하실 필요는 없고 쓰고 싶으신 만큼 넣어주세요! 노말보단 어려워지게... // 고친것도 있고 안 고친 것도 있는 것 같은데.. 우선은 다 체크해 봤어요
* 01:37:091 (1,2,3) - 01:50:332 (1,2) - 앞부분과 마찬가지
* 01:39:160 (2,3) - 이건 약간 쓸데없이 어려운 박자랄까... 제 하드에서 한 것처럼 1/4 왕복 슬라 하나만 넣어주셔도 괜찮아요. 01:39:367 - 에도 드럼 다 있으니 굳이 거길 빼놓고 파란 선을 채우는 어려운 박자를 쓸 필요는 없을 것 같네요.
* 01:45:781 (2,3) - 앞부분에 00:45:560 (1,2,3) - 01:31:919 (1,2,3) - 와 일관성이 있으면 좋을 것 같아요. 다 01:45:781 (2,3) - 처럼 해도 괜찮아요. // 앞부분처럼 바꿔봤어요. 지금보니까 뒷부분은 왠지 쓸데없이 박자를 쪼갠 느낌이 들어서..
* 01:52:505 (3,4) - 앞에서 써왔던 1/4 간격 보고 그와 같게 맞춰주세요.
* 01:55:091 - 01:58:401 - 02:01:712 - 02:05:022 - 다 제법 임팩트 있는 소리들이니 쓰고 싶으시면 주저하지 말고 노트 추가해주세요.

셀프 모딩은 여기까지~ 굿럭! ~~(왜 나 자신한테)~~

모딩 감사합니다 ㅋㅋㅋㅋ

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Title:Megumeru (short ver.)
TitleUnicode:メグメル (short ver.)
Artist:eufonius
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Creator:Doyak
Version:Dailycare's Light Hard
Source:CLANNAD
Tags:[C_u_r_i] [_Zzz_] Dailycare Mag Mell Key Sounds Label Riya Kiku Original Soundtrack Disc 3
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Taeyang

Elite Mapper

1,209 posts

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Taeyang 2016-02-02T12:44:01+00:00

모딩들 다고쳐지면(정리되면) 다시오겠 :3

[ Zzz ]

1,296 posts

Joined June 2011

[ Zzz ] 2016-02-02T13:35:52+00:00

Doyak wrote:
제 맵이라 쿠도스는 안 나오지만 겟난 모딩 한 차례 가겠습니다.

[Zzz's Normal]
* 전체적으로 볼륨 조절좀요... (스피너 볼륨 40%로 통일도 좀)
* 00:10:989 - 휘슬?
* 00:11:506 (1) - 제안이지만, 개인적으로 이런 박자일 경우 저는 앞쪽 비트에 더 초점을 둡니다. 즉 스피너를 00:13:058 - 에서 끝내겠다는 건데, 저 스피너가 저 소리들을 다 표현해주고 있는 것도 아니고 지금 상태는 엇박에서 끝나는지라 리듬이 약간 흐트러지는 것 같아요.
* 00:24:023 (6,1) - 지금까지 모든 보컬을 다 잡아주면서 오셨는데, 갑자기 여기서 빠지니까 어색하네요... 정말 갑작스럽게 드럼으로 전향하셨다는 느낌을 지울 수가 없습니다.
* 00:27:954 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 여긴 정말 소리 하나하나가 다 강조해줄만한 부분들인데 힛사가 너무 부족한 것 같습니다... 다른 난이도들 보시고 그 정도로 맞춰주셨으면...
* 00:40:802 - 00:47:422 - 00:54:043 - 01:27:160 - 01:33:781 - 01:40:401 - 01:47:022 - 01:53:643 - 피니시를...
* 00:48:043 (2) - 의도를 모르겠습니다. 여기에 뭔가 강력한 소리가 있나요? 00:41:629 (2) - 처럼 쓰시는 게 좋을 거 같은데 왜 굳이 엇박으로...
* 00:47:836 - 클랩
* 00:49:491 (6) - 이거랑 01:35:850 (4) - 01:49:091 (5) - 일관성좀요. 3/4 슬라이더 어려운 박자인데 앞에선 안 썼다가 뒤에만 쓰는 건...
* 01:00:043 (5) - 여기다가 힛사 다 몰아넣는 것보단 00:59:836 - 01:00:250 - 처럼 정박에 넣어주는 게 더 깔끔하다고 생각합니다.
* 00:46:181 (4,5) - 01:32:953 (5,6) - 01:45:781 (4,5) - 01:52:402 (4,5,6) - 01:58:402 (5,6,7,8) - 02:05:229 (4,5,6) - 드럼 소리가 달라지면서 텐션이 변하는 곳인데, 힛사는 매~우 규칙적으로 계속 똑같이 넣으셨네요. 좀 더 다양화를 줘보시길 바랍니다.
* 01:24:470 (3,4,5) - 쭉 보컬에만 맞춰서 해오셨기 때문에 여기도 01:24:470 (3,4) - 박자가 뒤집히는 게 보컬을 더 잘 나타내준다고 봅니다.

올픽스~ : )

Done!

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Rizen

1,663 posts

Joined August 2013

Rizen 2016-02-03T11:51:59+00:00

hi

try +7 to offset, it currently sounds a little too early

Easy
00:40:802 (1) - unrankable issue! You can't have a red and green timing point at different volume levels! Better to make them both 60%
00:59:836 (3) - I would clap the end of the slider to emphasize the drum hit
02:06:884 (4) - Maybe NC this to keep NC consistency

Nothing much to say, it's an easy

Normal
00:14:920 (2) - unsnapped slider end...?
00:24:230 (1) - missing whistle at slider head?
00:25:471 (3) - ^ but at slider tail?
00:26:092 (4) - I don't think a clap fits this part here, it should really be no additional hitsound imo because the sound at that sound doesn't sound intense enough to warrant a clap
00:40:802 (1) - unrankable issue! You can't have a red and green timing point at different volume levels! Better to make them both 60%
01:25:091 (5,1) - I would keep spacing here the same as the spacing before it. This is because it looks quite inordinary compared to the previous spacing, potentially confusing new players. Also, the music getting more intense and result of increase of spacing happens AFTER 01:25:505 (1) -
02:06:884 (6) - NC maybe

Daily Hard
01:13:919 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - I've noticed how there are no hitsounds for this part of the difficulty. I would consider adding whistles at the apparent downbeats to flavour this part up a little eg. slider head at 01:13:919 (1) - , slider tail at 01:14:953 (4) - , slider head at 01:17:229 (1) - , slider tail at 01:18:263 (4) - , etc etc.

why can't I see anythingggggg am I too noob

Hard
First, I want to talk about the jumps at 00:43:077 (2,3,4,5,1) - , 01:29:643 (4,5,6,1) - , and at 01:42:884 (4,5,6,1) - . All of these parts of the music are basically the same in regards to how much to space yet, the first part is spaced differently to the next two parts. Imo, the second two parts should be spaced like the first part as the first part, the spacing is based on the claps(?) and the downbeat. just a thought second third
00:50:319 (5) - maybe same spacing? like move to x:278 // y:336. I think this would make it both neater and easier to read
01:36:677 (5) - spacing again, maybe move to x:152 // y:27?
01:49:919 (6) - spacing once more..
01:59:436 (4) - just straighten this one up a little bit so the flow at 01:59:022 (2,3,4) - is a straight line?

Insane
00:18:644 (4) - maybe something like this? imo, that will play better
00:19:885 (3) - ctrl+g'ing this slider seems to improve flow for me
00:49:698 (3,4,5,6,7) - imo this sounds very loud and noisy... you can try normalise it by adding claps to 00:49:802 (4,6,7) - but I'm not an expert at this so mmm.... same can be applied to 01:36:056 (3,4,5,6,7) - and 01:49:298 (3,4,5,6,7) - .
01:59:850 (4,5) - consider swapping placements of the circles. It will improve flow after circle 5, and it will also add to the emphasis of circle 4 being a clap
02:06:056 (3,4,1) - can u do something like this? http://puu.sh/mUdap/c828404fe2.jpg

Sorry, I'm still no good at modding higher difficulty maps

Reillia

1,164 posts

Joined August 2014

Reillia 2016-02-03T12:08:52+00:00

ㅂㅅ

Beomsan wrote:
쓰레기모딩왔슴다

[Curi's Easy]
00:55:905 (3) - 부랭큇
01:16:401 (3) - ^
01:23:022 (3) - ^
01:37:091 (1) - ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
01:40:401 (1) - 왜이렇게 약간씩 안맞는기분?
01:44:539 (2) - 이것도진짜조금
01:56:953 (1) - 01:54:470 (2) - 슬라끝에 노트두고 맞춰보니 x146 y351정도 ? 무슨 의민지 모르겠음
오랜만에 5줄 이상 써서 기분좋았음 ㄳ 그게 전부 담요라는점;

최근 모딩 중 가장 길었네요........
굿럭!

도약

Doyak wrote:
제 맵이라 쿠도스는 안 나오지만 겟난 모딩 한 차례 가겠습니다.

[Curi's Easy]
* 00:01:678 - 00:04:989 - 00:08:299 - 00:11:609 - 제일 조용한 부분인데 휘슬이 너무 많아서 좀 거슬리네요. 이 부분들이라도 하나씩 빼주면 훨씬 나을 것 같습니다.
* 00:01:058 - 00:14:299 - 두 부분을 비교해보면 후자가 더 분위기가 올라온 부분인데 박자가 도리어 더 단순해져서 더 가라앉히는 거 같아요. 오히려 앞부분을 http://puu.sh/mSTKd/b5e5d8bb2a.jpg 이 정도로 단순화하고, 뒤에가 조금 더 복잡했으면 하는 바람이네요.
* 00:28:989 (2,2,2) - 반 박자씩 줄였으면 좋겠네요. 물론 뒷소리도 강력하기는 하지만, 나머지 소리들이 전부 드럼소리에 걸쳐져 있는 데에 비해서 저 소리들만 어긋나서 개인적으론 어색한 느낌입니다.
* 00:47:422 - 00:54:043 - 01:33:781 - 01:53:643 - 02:00:263 - 피니시 추가
* 아무리 이지이긴 합니다만, 키아이 전체를 통틀어 서클이 1개 (끝에 걸린 것까지 봐주면 2개)라는 건 좀 걸리네요. 서클로 변환할 수 있는 것들: 00:46:595 (3) - 00:53:215 (3) - 01:32:953 (3) - 01:39:574 (3) - 01:46:194 (3) - 01:52:815 (3) - 01:59:436 (3) - 다음 부분으로 넘어가기 전에 드럼이 달라지면서 텐션이 오르는 부분들입니다. 지금 상태는 키아이가 처음부터 끝까지 너무 단순해서 모든 부분이 다 똑같아 보입니다. 한 번 고려해보시고, 저런 곳은 드럼 샘플셋 써서 좀 다른 소리를 내보는 것도 고려해보세요.
* 이 노래도 조용한 곳과 강한 곳의 차이가 꽤 극명한 곡이니까, 볼륨이나 힛사의 사용에 있어서도 좀 더 차이를 뒀으면 좋겠네요. 40%에서 60%는 좀 작은 거 같고, 키아이는 한 70% 이상 추천해요. 그리고 01:13:919 - 이 구간처럼 이렇게 휘슬 소리를 많이 쓰실 거면 조금 더 줄이셨으면 좋겠고, 그대로 두실 거라면 휘슬 빈도를 더 낮췄으면 좋겠네요. 그리고 01:00:664 - 02:06:987 - 스피너들 볼륨 위에서 통일하라고 이야기 나왔었는데, 40% 통일시킵시다. 스피너 시작부터요.

박자 부분은 현재 고칠생각이없고 나머지는 싹다 고쳤습니다!

셀프 모딩은 여기까지~ 굿럭! ~~(왜 나 자신한테)~~

Rizen

Rizen wrote:
hi

try +7 to offset, it currently sounds a little too early

Easy
00:40:802 (1) - unrankable issue! You can't have a red and green timing point at different volume levels! Better to make them both 60%
00:59:836 (3) - I would clap the end of the slider to emphasize the drum hit
02:06:884 (4) - Maybe NC this to keep NC consistency

Nothing much to say, it's an easy All Fixed! Thanks for your mod!

Sorry, I'm still no good at modding higher difficulty maps

asdsad

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Taeyang

Elite Mapper

1,209 posts

Joined June 2013

Taeyang 2016-02-03T14:00:21+00:00

Bold : Fix quickly/unrankable issues
blue : Highly recommend

General

02:33:367 - ~ 02:39:987 - mp3 이부분 잘라서 용량 더 가볍게
데일리케어님 라이트 인센을 Normal+로 표기 하는건 어떨까요? 난이도상에 표기도 노말로 표기되어있기도하고
하드라 하기엔 약간 부족한 감이 있어서 노말+ 난이도 맵 참고해가시면서 판단~!
키아이에서 심벌소리 넣으면 좋은곳
00:40:802 - 00:47:422 - 00:54:043 - 01:27:162 - 01:00:664 - 01:33:781 - 01:40:401 - 01:47:022 - 01:53:643 - 02:00:263 - 02:06:884 -
넣은맵셋도 있고 안넣은맵셋도있어서 그냥 일단 다 표시해봄
02:06:884 (1) - 이부분 뉴콤 다른맵셋과 같게

Curi's Easy

Useless green line(s) over red (no SV changes): 00:40:802 {40802} ms
Concurent volume value for red-green line(s): 00:40:802 {40802} ms
꺽는 슬라는 적당히 꺽기보단 레드앵커를 슬라틱에 맞춰서 꺾으면 더 깔끔하게 꺽어집니다.(지금도 괜찮으니 나중에 매핑하실때 참고)
00:09:126 (3) - 맵에 스타일에 맞지 않는거 같은데 펴서 1슬라에 담요?
02:03:574 (1,2) - DS 0.94 1.0에 가깝게 ㅇㅇ
00:48:250 (2) - 이런부분은 꺽어주는게 좋음; 00:48:664 - 00:49:077 - 리듬을 캐피해주기 위해
SPOILER

Zzz's Normal

Objects are not snapped: 언스냅
00:15:287 {15287} Slider end
00:43:698 (5) - 세로로 가능 동선이 더 좋아보입니다.
SPOILER
02:06:987 - 스핀 다른난이도처럼 여기서 부터 시작

Dailycare's Light Hard

00:38:299 (2,3) - 00:38:299 -00:38:713 - 00:38:920 - 드럼 에디션 피니시 00:40:368 (3) - 드럼 에디션 클랍-클랍- 피니시
로박으면 더 느낌이 좋아보이네요
00:48:664 - 꼬리에 휘슬소리 잘못들어간걸지도?
01:17:642 (2) - 언스냅 노트

Hard

00:27:333 - 노트추가; 라이트 하드에선 추가 되어 있는부분있네요
01:00:664 - 노트 추가 이유는 위와같음

Insane

00:09:747 (2,3) - 이정도로 내리면 더 치기 편할것 같습니다.
SPOILER
00:27:954 (2) -00:31:264 (2) -00:34:575 (2) - 힛사 추가
00:34:471 - 앞처럼 볼륨조절

굳럭~!

Doyak

osu! Alumni

2,621 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Doyak 2016-02-03T18:27:33+00:00

Rizen wrote:
hi

try +7 to offset, it currently sounds a little too early You mean the first red line only, right? Applied.

Hard
First, I want to talk about the jumps at 00:43:077 (2,3,4,5,1) - , 01:29:643 (4,5,6,1) - , and at 01:42:884 (4,5,6,1) - . All of these parts of the music are basically the same in regards to how much to space yet, the first part is spaced differently to the next two parts. Imo, the second two parts should be spaced like the first part as the first part, the spacing is based on the claps(?) and the downbeat. just a thought second third That makes sense, fixed.
00:50:319 (5) - maybe same spacing? like move to x:278 // y:336. I think this would make it both neater and easier to read It's basically for emphasizing like the jumps at 00:43:491 (3,4) - but with different pattern. I think that part is pretty much emphasizeable?
01:36:677 (5) - spacing again, maybe move to x:152 // y:27? Same
01:49:919 (6) - spacing once more.. Same
01:59:436 (4) - just straighten this one up a little bit so the flow at 01:59:022 (2,3,4) - is a straight line? Well alright xD

Insane
00:18:644 (4) - maybe something like this? imo, that will play better Thanks for your suggestion! I was wondering how I could make it better
00:19:885 (3) - ctrl+g'ing this slider seems to improve flow for me Thanks again
00:49:698 (3,4,5,6,7) - imo this sounds very loud and noisy... you can try normalise it by adding claps to 00:49:802 (4,6,7) - but I'm not an expert at this so mmm.... same can be applied to 01:36:056 (3,4,5,6,7) - and 01:49:298 (3,4,5,6,7) - . Nice one too, applied.
01:59:850 (4,5) - consider swapping placements of the circles. It will improve flow after circle 5, and it will also add to the emphasis of circle 4 being a clap Also fixed
02:06:056 (3,4,1) - can u do something like this? http://puu.sh/mUdap/c828404fe2.jpg I don't really feel like putting mutiple 1/12 sliders in a row in this diff. If you ask me why not 1/8, I checked how intense that sound is with Goldwave and I concluded that they're actually 1/12, so I should use it. But 1/12 to 1/12 is pretty harsh imo. The bigger 1/12 sounds end at 02:06:677 - and it's good for emphasizing 02:06:884 - anyway, so imma just keep it atm.

Sorry, I'm still no good at modding higher difficulty maps

Thanks for your helpful mod~

Taeyang wrote:
Bold : Fix quickly/unrankable issues
blue : Highly recommend

General
02:33:367 - ~ 02:39:987 - mp3 이부분 잘라서 용량 더 가볍게 용량상으론 좋긴 하겠지만 소리가 완전히 사라진 게 아닌데 잘라내기는 좀 그런 듯? 규칙상으론 Outro가 20%만 안 넘으면 되니까 일단 괜찮
데일리케어님 라이트 ~~인센을~~하드를 Normal+로 표기 하는건 어떨까요? 난이도상에 표기도 노말로 표기되어있기도하고
하드라 하기엔 약간 부족한 감이 있어서 노말+ 난이도 맵 참고해가시면서 판단~! 상의는 해보겠는데 일단은 데일리케어님이 선택하신 이름이고 1/4 클릭이라던가 점프라던가 등이 좀 있어서 노말 계열은 이미 아니지 않나 싶기도 하네요. 사실 스프레드 관점에서 볼 땐 조금 더 버프가 됐으면 하긴 하지만 별로 상관도 없겠고... 그리고 근 1주일간 홈페이지 스타레이팅 오류 때문에 노말 표기 됐던거지 CS 올리면서 별도 2.3으로 늘어나서 이젠 하드 표시가 되는 게 맞고 이제 업뎃하니까 재계산됐네요.
키아이에서 심벌소리 넣으면 좋은곳
00:40:802 - 00:47:422 - 00:54:043 - 01:27:162 - 01:00:664 - 01:33:781 - 01:40:401 - 01:47:022 - 01:53:643 - 02:00:263 - 02:06:884 -
넣은맵셋도 있고 안넣은맵셋도있어서 그냥 일단 다 표시해봄 에 대부분은 제 난이도엔 넣은 곳이고 안 넣은 곳은 음악상 그렇게 큰 소리가 나는 곳이 아니라서 전 패스
02:06:884 (1) - 이부분 뉴콤 다른맵셋과 같게 상의해보겠

Dailycare's Light Hard
01:17:642 (2) - 언스냅 노트 이건 제가 타이밍 고치면서 직접 함

Hard
00:27:333 - 노트추가; 라이트 하드에선 추가 되어 있는부분있네요 라이트 하드에서 있다는 게 이유는 아니지만 넣는 게 좋을 것 같아서 넣음
01:00:664 - 노트 추가 이유는 위와같음 여긴 예전부터 자꾸 지적받아서 이제 노트 넣어줌

Insane
00:09:747 (2,3) - 이정도로 내리면 더 치기 편할것 같습니다. 수정
SPOILER
00:27:954 (2) -00:31:264 (2) -00:34:575 (2) - 힛사 추가 다 클랩 넣음
00:34:471 - 앞처럼 볼륨조절 ㅇㅋ

굳럭~!

모딩 감사합니다~

경 ☆ 축 1000포스트 돌파

Last edited by Doyak 2016-02-04T13:32:31+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Reillia

1,164 posts

Joined August 2014

Reillia 2016-02-03T21:55:15+00:00

Taeyang wrote:
Bold : Fix quickly/unrankable issues
blue : Highly recommend

General
02:33:367 - ~ 02:39:987 - mp3 이부분 잘라서 용량 더 가볍게
데일리케어님 라이트 인센을 Normal+로 표기 하는건 어떨까요? 난이도상에 표기도 노말로 표기되어있기도하고
하드라 하기엔 약간 부족한 감이 있어서 노말+ 난이도 맵 참고해가시면서 판단~!
키아이에서 심벌소리 넣으면 좋은곳
00:40:802 - 00:47:422 - 00:54:043 - 01:27:162 - 01:00:664 - 01:33:781 - 01:40:401 - 01:47:022 - 01:53:643 - 02:00:263 - 02:06:884 -
넣은맵셋도 있고 안넣은맵셋도있어서 그냥 일단 다 표시해봄
02:06:884 (1) - 이부분 뉴콤 다른맵셋과 같게

Curi's Easy
Useless green line(s) over red (no SV changes): 00:40:802 {40802} ms
Concurent volume value for red-green line(s): 00:40:802 {40802} ms
꺽는 슬라는 적당히 꺽기보단 레드앵커를 슬라틱에 맞춰서 꺾으면 더 깔끔하게 꺽어집니다.(지금도 괜찮으니 나중에 매핑하실때 참고)
00:09:126 (3) - 맵에 스타일에 맞지 않는거 같은데 펴서 1슬라에 담요?
02:03:574 (1,2) - DS 0.94 1.0에 가깝게 ㅇㅇ
00:48:250 (2) - 이런부분은 꺽어주는게 좋음; 00:48:664 - 00:49:077 - 리듬을 캐피해주기 위해
SPOILER

굿 다고침!

굳럭~!

ㅇㅁㄴㅇㄴㅁ

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 1000
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Countdown: 0
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StackLeniency: 0.5
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ArtistUnicode:eufonius
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Beomsan

Beatmap Nominator

1,890 posts

Joined November 2013

Beomsan 2016-02-03T22:49:22+00:00

[C u r i] wrote:
Beomsan wrote:
쓰레기모딩왔슴다

[*]01:56:953 (1) - 01:54:470 (2) - 슬라끝에 노트두고 맞춰보니 x146 y351정도 ? 무슨 의민지 모르겠음

54:470의 슬라이더 테일위치에 아무 빈박자에 노트를 하나 찍고 블랭킷을 맞춰보니 56:953의 노트를 저 좌표로 옮겨야 맞다는 얘기

Dailycare

Beatmap Nominator

1,074 posts

Joined May 2012

Dailycare 2016-02-04T02:56:30+00:00

Rizen wrote:
hi

try +7 to offset, it currently sounds a little too early

Daily Hard
01:13:919 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - I've noticed how there are no hitsounds for this part of the difficulty. I would consider adding whistles at the apparent downbeats to flavour this part up a little eg. slider head at 01:13:919 (1) - , slider tail at 01:14:953 (4) - , slider head at 01:17:229 (1) - , slider tail at 01:18:263 (4) - , etc etc. // I didnt add whistles at slider's tail

why can't I see anythingggggg am I too noob

Sorry, I'm still no good at modding higher difficulty maps

Taeyang wrote:
Bold : Fix quickly/unrankable issues
blue : Highly recommend

Dailycare's Light Hard
00:38:299 (2,3) - 00:38:299 -00:38:713 - 00:38:920 - 드럼 에디션 피니시 00:40:368 (3) - 드럼 에디션 클랍-클랍- 피니시
로박으면 더 느낌이 좋아보이네요
00:48:664 - 꼬리에 휘슬소리 잘못들어간걸지도?
01:17:642 (2) - 언스냅 노트

굳럭~!

Fixed all, Thanks for mod~

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[ Zzz ]

1,296 posts

Joined June 2011

[ Zzz ] 2016-02-04T22:45:23+00:00

Rizen wrote:
hi

Normal
00:14:920 (2) - unsnapped slider end...?
00:24:230 (1) - missing whistle at slider head?
00:25:471 (3) - ^ but at slider tail?
00:26:092 (4) - I don't think a clap fits this part here, it should really be no additional hitsound imo because the sound at that sound doesn't sound intense enough to warrant a clap
00:40:802 (1) - unrankable issue! You can't have a red and green timing point at different volume levels! Better to make them both 60%
01:25:091 (5,1) - I would keep spacing here the same as the spacing before it. This is because it looks quite inordinary compared to the previous spacing, potentially confusing new players. Also, the music getting more intense and result of increase of spacing happens AFTER 01:25:505 (1) - No problem
02:06:884 (6) - NC maybe

Thanks mod : )

Taeyang wrote:
Zzz's Normal
Objects are not snapped: 언스냅
00:15:287 {15287} Slider end
00:43:698 (5) - 세로로 가능 동선이 더 좋아보입니다.
SPOILER
02:06:987 - 스핀 다른난이도처럼 여기서 부터 시작

올픽스!

Done!

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: meg-mell-short-ver.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 40734
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.199999

[Metadata]
Title:Megumeru (short ver.)
TitleUnicode:メグメル (short ver.)
Artist:eufonius
ArtistUnicode:eufonius
Creator:Doyak
Version:Zzz's Normal
Source:CLANNAD
Tags:[C_u_r_i] [_Zzz_] Dailycare Mag Mell Key Sounds Label Riya Kiku Original Soundtrack Disc 3
BeatmapID:864076
BeatmapSetID:393727

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:4.5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"31352-clannad-1366x768-anime-wallpaper.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,64174,72659
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
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Combo2 : 101,234,2
Combo3 : 249,81,236
Combo4 : 240,85,26

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Moa

461 posts

Joined December 2012

Moa 2016-02-05T04:18:15+00:00

맵둘러보다가 클라나드가있길래 모딩해봅니다
발모딩 주의
[insane]
00:03:961 (4,5) - http://puu.sh/mWl4J/b27c7ef4e9.jpg 이렇게 해보는건 어떨까요
00:33:754 (4) - 이거 빼고 앞이랑 똑같은 리듬으로해서 간격넓게 두는게좋을거같음 보컬에맞춘게아닌거같은데 보컬소리밖에없는곳에 서클들어가서 이상한느낌 더타치다가 갑자기 좁아지는느낌들어서 별로였음
02:06:470 (4) - 이거길이를02:06:781 - 여기까지늘리는건어떨까요?
[Dailycare's light hard]
00:17:202 (6,2) - 스택미스
00:38:306 (2,1) - 스택미스
00:47:008 (4,3) - 이거두개 스택미스난거같은데
01:31:919 (1,2) - 슬라 굴곡을이용해서 http://puu.sh/mWlSY/13d5ca084a.jpg 이런식의 배치도 괜찮을거같음
뀨리릿 뀨릿뀨릿 이지잘찍음
하드는 뭔가 좀어려운거같은데 괜찮은거같음
노말은 제가 볼줄을몰라서 ㅠㅠㅠㅠ 죄송해요

Doyak

osu! Alumni

2,621 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Doyak 2016-02-05T06:12:51+00:00

[Cupid] wrote:
맵둘러보다가 클라나드가있길래 모딩해봅니다
발모딩 주의
[insane]
00:03:961 (4,5) - http://puu.sh/mWl4J/b27c7ef4e9.jpg 이렇게 해보는건 어떨까요 저 부분 통째로 거리 올고정이라... 흐름상으론 저게 좋아도 일관성이 없어질 것 같네요.
00:33:754 (4) - 이거 빼고 앞이랑 똑같은 리듬으로해서 간격넓게 두는게좋을거같음 보컬에맞춘게아닌거같은데 보컬소리밖에없는곳에 서클들어가서 이상한느낌 더타치다가 갑자기 좁아지는느낌들어서 별로였음 에 글쎄요 전 저 부분에서 소리를 "빼놓지 않고" 다 표현한 거라 보컬만 있다고 해도 무조건 노트를 넣는 게 원칙이었고 (예: 00:29:823 - 00:33:133 - ) 그래서 여기도 빼놓을 이유는 없을 것 같고요... 그리고 강한 소리가 아니기 때문에 거리는 기본 디스턴스인 1.2를 유지해서 찍은 거에요. 00:29:616 (2,3,4,1) - 00:34:582 (2,3) - 랑 똑같이요.
02:06:470 (4) - 이거길이를02:06:781 - 여기까지늘리는건어떨까요? 저 부분이 멋지게 표현하기가 애매하긴 한데, 잘 들어보면 진동 소리가 02:06:677 - 를 기점으로 작아지기 때문에 그에 맞춰서 끊어준 거에요. 그 자리에 보컬도 있고요. 1/12 진동슬라를 연속으로 쓰는 건 이 맵에선 하고 싶지 않네요.

모딩 감사합니다~

Dailycare

Beatmap Nominator

1,074 posts

Joined May 2012

Dailycare 2016-02-05T07:39:50+00:00

[Cupid] wrote:
맵둘러보다가 클라나드가있길래 모딩해봅니다
발모딩 주의
[Dailycare's light hard]
00:17:202 (6,2) - 스택미스
00:38:306 (2,1) - 스택미스
00:47:008 (4,3) - 이거두개 스택미스난거같은데 // 전 스택미스 같진 않은데..
01:31:919 (1,2) - 슬라 굴곡을이용해서 http://puu.sh/mWlSY/13d5ca084a.jpg 이런식의 배치도 괜찮을거같음

헉.. 스택 안된거 집어주셔서 감사~

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Sonnyc

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Sonnyc 2016-02-05T20:58:04+00:00

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01:00:250 (4) - 여기도 02:06:470 (4) 처럼 홀드 슬라 처리하는건 어떤가요? 음악에 비해 노트 하나는 조금 밍밍하게 느껴졌습니다. 01:00:250 - 01:00:457 - 의 드럼들만을 표현하는게 원래 의도였다면 (4,5) 스택 처리하셔서 드럼들끼리만 더 호응이 잘 되게 하는게 좋을 것 같습니다. 지금의 배치는 (4,5) 뿐 아니라 (3) 까지 관여하고 있어서 드럼 소리들이 차별화되고 있지 않았습니다.
01:18:056 (3,4) - 다른 유사 패턴 01:14:746 (3,4,5) - 01:21:367 (3,4,5) - 은 보조하는 노트들이 있는 ctrl+G 점프라서 시각적으로 안정적이었는데, 이 패턴은 깡 점프라서 비교적 불안해 보였습니다.

Beomsan

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Beomsan 2016-02-08T18:20:46+00:00

https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/4879364/
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Doyak

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Doyak 2016-02-08T18:23:22+00:00

Beomsan wrote:
https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/4879364/
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나츠가 알려줘서 알았네요 ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ 에고 감사합니다~

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Doyak

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Doyak 2016-02-08T18:34:37+00:00

Sonnyc wrote:
[Insane]
01:00:250 (4) - 여기도 02:06:470 (4) 처럼 홀드 슬라 처리하는건 어떤가요? 음악에 비해 노트 하나는 조금 밍밍하게 느껴졌습니다. 01:00:250 - 01:00:457 - 의 드럼들만을 표현하는게 원래 의도였다면 (4,5) 스택 처리하셔서 드럼들끼리만 더 호응이 잘 되게 하는게 좋을 것 같습니다. 지금의 배치는 (4,5) 뿐 아니라 (3) 까지 관여하고 있어서 드럼 소리들이 차별화되고 있지 않았습니다. 글쎄요? 무슨 의미인지 잘 모르겠는데... 00:59:008 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 가 전부 다 드럼인데 굳이 거기만 차별화를 해야 할 이유가 있나요?
01:18:056 (3,4) - 다른 유사 패턴 01:14:746 (3,4,5) - 01:21:367 (3,4,5) - 은 보조하는 노트들이 있는 ctrl+G 점프라서 시각적으로 안정적이었는데, 이 패턴은 깡 점프라서 비교적 불안해 보였습니다. 무슨 뜻인지는 이해했지만, 뾰족한 수가 잘 떠오르지 않네요. 01:17:229 (1) - 의 잔상이 조금이라도 완화시켜주기를 바라야겠네요.

모딩 감사합니다~

Reillia

1,164 posts

Joined August 2014

Reillia 2016-02-28T17:13:26+00:00

맵이 주거써

Doyak

osu! Alumni

2,621 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Doyak 2016-02-28T17:28:46+00:00

[C u r i] wrote:
맵이 주거써

ㄴㄴㄴㄴㄴㄴㄴㄴㄴ
븡 3명 기다리고 있음

HappyRocket88

4,322 posts

Joined May 2014

HappyRocket88 2016-03-05T13:34:44+00:00

[Curi's Easy]

Unsnapped green lines that might interfere with the over hitsounding. 00:14:306 - 00:27:540
Remove this green line 00:40:802 - and place the kiai effect over the red line.
From 00:01:065 - to 00:14:306 - the rhythm is really monotonous. There are a lot of alternatives you can try to give the idea of variety to players. Like this over these objects 00:01:065 (1,2,3,4) -
or this that relates these objects 00:10:996 (1,2,3,4) -
00:36:858 (3) - slightly offscreen. Consider move it a bit to up to avoid possible issues which concerns this slider.
Both kiai are really similar which really makes a boring style difficulty for an Easy. The fact is the lowest diff doesn't imply you should use the same rhythm over and over. Consider adding more variety with long sliders or circles for them.
00:38:306 (2) - This 2/1 slider is skipping prominet beats which should be emphasized as well as the patterning itself was built. It would be better if it were 1/1 slider with a reverse to give emphasis to this beat 00:38:720 -
01:59:436 (3,1) - This flow is rather forced for an Easy difficulty because of the angle players have to do to follow this pattern. Please, try something less straight but fluent to this section which goes deeply clam.
02:06:056 (3,1) - Ctrl + H for a better anc catchy flow. There's no need to force players to do sucha s weird movements when there's an upcoming spinner here.

[Zzz's Normal]

00:11:409 (3,1) - The rhythm here is somehow forced because the "Mmmm" sound of the singer suggests the spinner should rather start at the white tick to give players the idea there's a slight sound which its covering for the whole spinner section.
00:26:927 (1) - Remove NC here to keep consistency with the way the NC is handled in this segment.
00:40:802 - Remove this green line and place the kiai effect to the red line.
00:40:802 (1) - Ctrl + H here to develop a neater flow to the upcoming slider-position.
01:00:664 (6) - Perhaps you can NC this one to give idea the kiai time has just ended and a new section is coming. Consider applying the same here 02:06:884 (6) -

Meow

[ Zzz ]

1,296 posts

Joined June 2011

[ Zzz ] 2016-03-07T05:20:35+00:00

HappyRocket88 wrote:
[Zzz's Normal]
00:11:409 (3,1) - The rhythm here is somehow forced because the "Mmmm" sound of the singer suggests the spinner should rather start at the white tick to give players the idea there's a slight sound which its covering for the whole spinner section.
00:26:927 (1) - Remove NC here to keep consistency with the way the NC is handled in this segment.
00:40:802 - Remove this green line and place the kiai effect to the red line.
00:40:802 (1) - Ctrl + H here to develop a neater flow to the upcoming slider-position.
01:00:664 (6) - Perhaps you can NC this one to give idea the kiai time has just ended and a new section is coming. Consider applying the same here 02:06:884 (6) -
Meow

Good mod : 3 Thanks~

Done!

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 40734
Countdown: 0
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TitleUnicode:メグメル (short ver.)
Artist:eufonius
ArtistUnicode:eufonius
Creator:Doyak
Version:Zzz's Normal
Source:CLANNAD
Tags:[C_u_r_i] [_Zzz_] Dailycare Mag Mell Key Sounds Label Riya Kiku Original Soundtrack Disc 3
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Doyak

osu! Alumni

2,621 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Doyak 2016-03-07T07:56:33+00:00

쿨쿨님 난이도 업뎃 완료~

롤충 쳐갸님 지각

Reillia

1,164 posts

Joined August 2014

Reillia 2016-03-07T09:27:59+00:00

HappyRocket88 wrote:

[Curi's Easy]
Unsnapped green lines that might interfere with the over hitsounding. 00:14:306 - 00:27:540
Remove this green line 00:40:802 - and place the kiai effect over the red line.
From 00:01:065 - to 00:14:306 - the rhythm is really monotonous. There are a lot of alternatives you can try to give the idea of variety to players. Like this over these objects 00:01:065 (1,2,3,4) -
or this that relates these objects 00:10:996 (1,2,3,4) -

00:36:858 (3) - slightly offscreen. Consider move it a bit to up to avoid possible issues which concerns this slider.
Both kiai are really similar which really makes a boring style difficulty for an Easy. The fact is the lowest diff doesn't imply you should use the same rhythm over and over. Consider adding more variety with long sliders or circles for them.
00:38:306 (2) - This 2/1 slider is skipping prominet beats which should be emphasized as well as the patterning itself was built. It would be better if it were 1/1 slider with a reverse to give emphasis to this beat 00:38:720 -
01:59:436 (3,1) - This flow is rather forced for an Easy difficulty because of the angle players have to do to follow this pattern. Please, try something less straight but fluent to this section which goes deeply clam.
02:06:056 (3,1) - Ctrl + H for a better anc catchy flow. There's no need to force players to do sucha s weird movements when there's an upcoming spinner here.

Meow

maybe All Fixed* Thanks for your mod!

지갹

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Mint

1,611 posts

Joined February 2013

Mint 2016-03-07T15:03:22+00:00

Hey Doyak!

Sorry for the delay.

General

* I prefer this version of the song over the anime/cuckool one..

Curi's Easy

* 00:07:685 (1,2,3) - A little nazi, but this pattern would look a tad better with consistent spacing (would fix that .94 as well while you're at it).
* 01:17:229 (1,2) - It seems that in this section you wanted to vo

Zzz's Normal

* 02:00:264 (1) - Missing finish?
* 01:00:767 (1) - Would use a 1/2 gap here instead, to keep consistent with 00:10:996 (2,1) - 02:06:884 (1,1) - .
* Good job on this one, liked thhat you used stuff like 00:49:491 (5) - as well!.

Dailycare's Light Hard

* Will get to one of your maps soon as well, sorry!
* 00:10:789 (1) - Don't recommend skipping the downbeat + vocal here at all.
* 00:11:409 (2) - Perhaps, it's because of the previous slider before this, but this sounds really off as the normal synth sounds on the red tick are completely left out now.
* Right now, this is the first time there are clickable 1/4s, with a -rather complicated- rhythm to top that off. Would this rhythm at 00:52:181 (1) - as well, for consistency with 01:52:401 (2,3) - , and to introduce the rhythm before just randomly using it after half of the song has already passed.

Hard

* 00:40:802 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Something I noticed, but if you compare the first half of the KIAI with the second, there's a quite a difficulty increase (and sudden) when it comes to note density. As the song continues, suddenly a lot of 1/4 comes up and the rhythm becomes almost identical to the Insane difficulty. Found this a little imbalanced. Would hope you'd either reduce the 1/4 a bit (not too much, need to keep spread ofc), or make the 1/4 usage consistent by increasing the amount of 1/4 in the first section.
* 01:27:160 (1) - Everything after this seems to be more consistent with each other tho, so this is good.

Insane

* Even though it does fit the song fine, I wasn't a big fan of the 1/12 sliders to be really honest. Especially considering many players will play with DT (I know you shouldn't base on mods, but still), slider breaks can still happen easily. 1/6 does the job perfectly fine, but if you want to keep it I won't stop you from that.
* 00:30:651 (4,1) - While the player can still rely on AR, I found it a bit more comfortable if these were a bit closer to make it clear this has a 1/2 gap instead.
* Already testplay'd and IRC'd this a couple of times, overall good to me.

Just a few points to discuss a bit before iconing this. Feel free to call me back!

Doyak

osu! Alumni

2,621 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Doyak 2016-03-07T18:02:00+00:00

appleeaterx wrote:
Hey Doyak!

Sorry for the delay. Ahhhh it's okay, glad you came finally!

:idea: General

* I prefer this version of the song over the anime/cuckool one.. Me too!!!!! that cuckool one feels too... stiff? xD

Hard

* 00:40:802 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Something I noticed, but if you compare the first half of the KIAI with the second, there's a quite a difficulty increase (and sudden) when it comes to note density. As the song continues, suddenly a lot of 1/4 comes up and the rhythm becomes almost identical to the Insane difficulty. Found this a little imbalanced. Would hope you'd either reduce the 1/4 a bit (not too much, need to keep spread ofc), or make the 1/4 usage consistent by increasing the amount of 1/4 in the first section. The rhythm is identical to the 2nd/3rd kiai's first half, it looks like I only used 1 less triplet and used a repeat 1/4 instead though? And the 1st kiai's second half is almost identical to the 3rd kiai's second half. So I don't think it's that horribly gapped. Well you selected notes, literally from the very start of the kiai but 00:40:375 (4,5,6,1) - is quite hard already, so a triplet on 00:41:422 (2) - would be harsh, and 00:43:077 (2) - makes 00:43:491 (3,4,5) - to click more times in a row so it's still good for the difficulty consistency. Anyway, it's just that I represented most of the prominent drums so I don't feel like reducing any of the 1/4s, as their strength are pretty much same. And yeah, this Hard is 'hard', and that's why I invited a Light Hard GD to keep this rhythm.
* 01:27:160 (1) - Everything after this seems to be more consistent with each other tho, so this is good.

Insane

* Even though it does fit the song fine, I wasn't a big fan of the 1/12 sliders to be really honest. Especially considering many players will play with DT (I know you shouldn't base on mods, but still), slider breaks can still happen easily. 1/6 does the job perfectly fine, but if you want to keep it I won't stop you from that. Allllright, reduced them to 1/6s
* 00:30:651 (4,1) - While the player can still rely on AR, I found it a bit more comfortable if these were a bit closer to make it clear this has a 1/2 gap instead. I already have similar distance for those on 00:28:582 (3,1) - and 00:31:892 (3,1) - (and it's even a little smaller) and I have an NC on it too, so I think it's fine to read.
* Already testplay'd and IRC'd this a couple of times, overall good to me.

Just a few points to discuss a bit before iconing this. Feel free to call me back!

Thanks! I'll call you back asap after the GDers fix their diffs~

Reillia

1,164 posts

Joined August 2014

Reillia 2016-03-08T08:38:52+00:00

appleeaterx wrote:
Hey Doyak!

Sorry for the delay.

:idea: General

* I prefer this version of the song over the anime/cuckool one..

Curi's Easy

* 00:07:685 (1,2,3) - A little nazi, but this pattern would look a tad better with consistent spacing (would fix that .94 as well while you're at it). Fixed*
* 01:17:229 (1,2) - It seems that in this section you wanted to vo ??

Just a few points to discuss a bit before iconing this. Feel free to call me back!

Thanks for mod apple!

sad

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Dailycare

Beatmap Nominator

1,074 posts

Joined May 2012

Dailycare 2016-03-08T10:00:18+00:00

@appleeaterx
FIXED ALL XD

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Mint

1,611 posts

Joined February 2013

Mint 2016-03-08T14:55:52+00:00

LOL, Curi you can ignore that one. Forgot to remove that <_<

[ Zzz ]

1,296 posts

Joined June 2011

[ Zzz ] 2016-03-09T05:40:55+00:00

appleeaterx wrote:
Hey Doyak!

Zzz's Normal

* 02:00:264 (1) - Missing finish?
* 01:00:767 (1) - Would use a 1/2 gap here instead, to keep consistent with 00:10:996 (2,1) - 02:06:884 (1,1) - .
* Good job on this one, liked thhat you used stuff like 00:49:491 (5) - as well!.

All fix~ :3
Thanks~appleeaterx!

Done!

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