1. Ascension - 4Key (4,35 stars, 2425 notes)

-[ AmiShici ]- wrote:

Hiii Rinz o/

irc

19:46 Rinzler: mi
19:48 -[ AmiShici ]-: ya?
19:49 Rinzler: bisa mod ga ?
19:49 Rinzler: irc deh
19:49 -[ AmiShici ]-: mod apa?
19:49 -[ AmiShici ]-: ==a
19:50 *Rinzler is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/846927 kors k feat.RIRE - Nirvana(Camellia's "BinaryHeaven" Remix)]
19:51 -[ AmiShici ]-: ga marathon dong?
19:51 Rinzler: marathon
19:51 -[ AmiShici ]-: dling
19:51 Rinzler: di ingamenya 5:01 kok
19:52 -[ AmiShici ]-: ==a
19:52 Rinzler: masih bisa diapprove
19:52 Rinzler: nanti gw tanya blocko deh wkwkwk
19:52 -[ AmiShici ]-: 4:49 doang
19:52 -[ AmiShici ]-: drainnya
19:53 Rinzler: ya itu pan di web
19:53 Rinzler: banyak map yang approve tapi dibawah 5 menit
19:53 Rinzler: tapi di ingamenya 5 menit lebih
19:53 -[ AmiShici ]-: ok ok
19:53 -[ AmiShici ]-: lemot nak
19:53 -[ AmiShici ]-: wkwkwk
19:54 Rinzler: wkwkwkw
19:55 *-[ AmiShici ]- is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/846927 kors k feat.RIRE - Nirvana(Camellia's "BinaryHeaven" Remix) [Legacy]] <osu!mania> |4K|
19:55 -[ AmiShici ]-: nyoba ah
19:56 -[ AmiShici ]-: paling jg fail
19:56 Rinzler: gw spec deh
19:56 -[ AmiShici ]-: wkwkkw
19:56 Rinzler: gampang ini
20:00 Rinzler: gg
20:01 -[ AmiShici ]-: lel
20:01 -[ AmiShici ]-: GG darimana -_-
20:01 -[ AmiShici ]-: bnyk amet 1/8s,a
20:01 Rinzler: seengganya pass wkwkwk
20:01 -[ AmiShici ]-: lel
20:01 Rinzler: ya emagn begitu
20:01 -[ AmiShici ]-: blm panas ane
20:01 -[ AmiShici ]-: wkakakak
20:01 Rinzler: itu buat ekspresiin noisenya
20:02 -[ AmiShici ]-: >w<)b
20:02 *-[ AmiShici ]- is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/846927 kors k feat.RIRE - Nirvana(Camellia's "BinaryHeaven" Remix) [Legacy]]
20:02 -[ AmiShici ]-: 00:24:375 (24375|0,24719|1,25237|2) - ini LN ikut apa sih?
20:02 -[ AmiShici ]-: ane bingung tadi pas main
20:02 -[ AmiShici ]-: wkwkwkw
20:02 Rinzler: apa ya
20:02 Rinzler: kaya suara air
20:02 Rinzler: apalah WKWKWKW
20:03 Rinzler: dengerin aja backsoundnya
20:03 -[ AmiShici ]-: ooh itu
20:03 -[ AmiShici ]-: tp kek bnyk yg ditinggalin
20:03 -[ AmiShici ]-: wkwkwk
20:03 Rinzler: ya masa gw map semuanya
20:04 -[ AmiShici ]-: wkakakakak
20:04 -[ AmiShici ]-: disini missing dong 00:27:995 (27995|0) - 
20:04 -[ AmiShici ]-: sorry 00:33:168 - 
20:04 -[ AmiShici ]-: ini
20:04 Rinzler: cuma 1/2 ini
20:04 -[ AmiShici ]-: 00:33:340 (33340|0) - sebelum"nya kan ini turun 1/2s 
20:05 Rinzler: gw enak jadinya
20:05 Rinzler: iya tau
20:05 Rinzler: ga enak*
20:05 Rinzler: orz
20:05 -[ AmiShici ]-: ==a
20:05 Rinzler: 00:32:478 (32478|2,32478|1,32823|3,32995|2,32995|1) - dan ini gw bingung gimana arrangenya biar enak
20:06 -[ AmiShici ]-: lel
20:06 -[ AmiShici ]-: gw jg bingung :v
20:06 Rinzler: nunggu saran orang aja deh gw
20:06 -[ AmiShici ]-: ini dipendekin? 00:32:823 (32823|3) - jadi segini 00:33:168 -  trus add LN baru?
20:06 -[ AmiShici ]-: sip
20:08 Rinzler: 00:41:616 - disini juga ada
20:08 -[ AmiShici ]-:  wkakakak nasib
20:09 -[ AmiShici ]-: ini asik. 00:44:030 (44030|0,44073|1,44116|3,44159|2,44202|0,44245|1,44288|3,44332|2,44375|0,44418|1,44461|3,44504|2,44547|0,44590|1,44633|3,44676|2,44719|0,44719|1) - 
20:09 -[ AmiShici ]-: wkwkwkwk
20:09 -[ AmiShici ]-: abaikan ane ga ada ide
20:09 Rinzler: :^)
20:09 -[ AmiShici ]-: lagi butek ni otak :v
20:09 Rinzler: udah gw bilang tadi buat ekspresiin noisenya itu
20:11 -[ AmiShici ]-: lel
20:12 Rinzler: tinggal ngasih SV ini
20:12 Rinzler: how to make a smooth SV
20:12 Rinzler: .-.
20:12 -[ AmiShici ]-: nanya/ ini yg ginian ga didouble 01:12:823 - kan sama kek ini 01:13:168 (73168|1,73168|0) - 
20:12 -[ AmiShici ]-: lel
20:12 -[ AmiShici ]-: ane ga jago SV
20:12 Rinzler: darisana emang udah diignore
20:12 -[ AmiShici ]-: eh ada kicknya deng
20:12 -[ AmiShici ]-: lupa
20:12 -[ AmiShici ]-: wkwkwk
20:12 Rinzler: karena suara kick sama snarenya lebih neken
20:13 -[ AmiShici ]-: hooh i see
20:16 -[ AmiShici ]-: wasem lemot
20:16 -[ AmiShici ]-: wkwkkw
20:17 -[ AmiShici ]-: post aja gmn?
20:17 -[ AmiShici ]-: upload ga kelar" -_-
20:18 -[ AmiShici ]-: wkwkwk DC
20:18 -[ AmiShici ]-: lemot nak
20:18 -[ AmiShici ]-: klo post aja gmn?
20:22 Rinzler: yah mod queue pada tutup
20:22 -[ AmiShici ]-: wkwkwk sabar
20:22 -[ AmiShici ]-: gmn? gw post aja?
20:22 -[ AmiShici ]-: klo gini lama :v
20:22 -[ AmiShici ]-: kasian ente nunggunya :v
20:23 -[ AmiShici ]-: 01:37:823 (97823|3,97823|2,97909|0,97995|3,97995|1,98082|2,98168|0,98168|3,98254|1,98340|2,98340|0,98426|3,98513|1,98513|0) - change to http://puu.sh/lQjt6/07825c9876.jpg
20:23 -[ AmiShici ]-: biar gw bisa baca patternnnya
20:23 *-[ AmiShici ]- runs
20:26 -[ AmiShici ]-: lel
20:26 -[ AmiShici ]-: koneksi ccd
20:34 Rinzler: mau dipost aja ?

little sugestion

4k = 1~4

Click me!

[Legacy]01:37:823 (97823|3,97823|2,97909|0,97995|3,97995|1,98082|2,98168|0,98168|3,98254|1,98340|2,98340|0,98426|3,98513|1,98513|0) - change to http://puu.sh/lQjt6/07825c9876.jpg ? for variation biar gw bisa baca patternnya pas main /me runs // naaah
02:04:288 (124288|2,124288|3,124375|1,124375|0) suggest - ctrl + H // sengaja begitu
02:11:271 (131271|1,131271|3,131357|0,131444|3,131444|2,131530|1,131616|3,131616|2,131702|0,131788|3,131788|1,131875|2,131961|0,131961|1,132047|2,132133|0,132133|1,132219|2,132306|0,132306|3) - ini ganti gini? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4106421 . untuk menghindari jack // perasaan ga ada jack @@, dan itu emang intentional sih02:11:271 (131271|3,131444|3,131616|3,131788|3,131961|0,132133|0,132306|0,132478|0,132650|0,132823|0) -
04:27:478 - 04:27:823 - 04:28:168 - add note for cymbal kek sebelumnya? // nah ini, sebenernya kalo didengerin dari lagunya, pas part sana itu suaranya mulai ngefade out, makanya gw cuma naro 2 note disana, but gw tunggu masukan dari modder lain, kalo sekiranya banyak yang komplen, nanti bakalan gw ganti

Kyousuke- wrote:

IRC Mod

16:32 Rinzler: aleeeek
16:32 Kyousuke-: watt
16:38 Rinzler: yah dc
16:39 Kyousuke-: wkwk knp :v
16:41 Rinzler: bisa mod ga ?
16:41 Rinzler: irc gpp deh
16:41 Kyousuke-: map apa
16:41 *Rinzler is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/846927 kors k feat.RIRE - Nirvana(Camellia's "BinaryHeaven" Remix)]
16:43 Kyousuke-: wew
16:43 Kyousuke-: marathon
16:43 Kyousuke-: wait testplei dulu
16:44 Rinzler: bisa ya DDDDDD
16:44 Rinzler: bentar gw spec
16:49 Kyousuke-: wow keren
16:49 Kyousuke-: sorry ad miss :v
16:49 Rinzler: gg
16:49 Rinzler: gpp v:
16:52 Kyousuke-: klo gw irc agak lama loh mod nya :v
16:52 Rinzler: gpp dah
16:54 Kyousuke-: 00:44:892 (44892|1,45064|2) - pindah ke 3 4?
16:54 Kyousuke-: biar kyk 00:46:271 (46271|0,46271|1,46444|2,46616|3,46788|1,46788|0,46961|3) - ini? wkwk
16:54 Rinzler: ok
16:54 Rinzler: iya udah
16:56 Kyousuke-: 00:50:926 (50926|1,51099|0) - ctrl + j
16:56 Kyousuke-: lbh pas sama musik nya menurut gw
16:56 Rinzler: k
16:57 Rinzler: ini drain 5:01, tapi di web 4:49
16:57 Rinzler: fk
16:57 Rinzler: takutnya jadi masalah
16:57 Kyousuke-: lol
16:57 Kyousuke-: di web ga akurat emg
16:57 Kyousuke-: patokannya sih di gamenya menurut gw
16:58 Rinzler: iya sih
16:58 Rinzler: kaya std
16:58 Rinzler: dia ga itung spinner
16:59 Kyousuke-: 00:59:202 (59202|3,59375|2) - sama ctrl + j jga
17:00 Kyousuke-: 00:59:719 (59719|3,59892|2) - eh yg ini deng
17:00 Rinzler: ok
17:00 Rinzler: sianjeg
17:00 Kyousuke-: 01:04:719 (64719|1,64892|0) - yg ini jga wkwk
17:01 Rinzler: dah
17:02 Kyousuke-: 01:07:306 (67306|2,67478|3) - gmn klo pindah ke 2 3?
17:02 Kyousuke-: lbh cocok sama pattern selanjutnya?
17:03 Rinzler: ok deh
17:04 Kyousuke-: 01:12:478 (72478|2,72650|3) - ctrl + j, 01:12:995 (72995|2) - pindah ke 4
17:05 Kyousuke-: biar ga ngulang sama 01:12:133 (72133|2,72306|1) - ini
17:06 Rinzler: ok
17:06 Rinzler: asal naro aja itu gw
17:06 Rinzler: WKWKWKWK
17:06 Kyousuke-: pattern selanjutnya jga kyk gtu :v
17:06 Kyousuke-: pantes lu accept trus ``
17:07 Kyousuke-: 01:24:030 (84030|3,84030|1,84202|2,84202|0) - bukannya harusnya sama kyk01:23:340 (83340|0,83340|2,83513|0,83513|2) -
17:07 Kyousuke-: lumayan repetif wkwk
17:08 Rinzler: gpp
17:08 Rinzler: justru sengaja gw gituin
17:09 Kyousuke-: 01:30:409 (90409|1) - ke 3
17:10 Kyousuke-: 01:30:495 - add di 2
17:10 Rinzler: ok
17:11 Rinzler: nunggu pendapat modder lain dulu
17:11 Rinzler: sengaja gw kasih space disana
17:11 Kyousuke-: 01:33:254 - eh iya ya di add semua dong :v
17:11 Kyousuke-: tpi sama sih suaranya
17:12 Rinzler: iya emang
17:14 Kyousuke-: http://puu.sh/lV3DA/32259f1cd4.jpg
17:15 Kyousuke-: disana pitchnya salah
17:16 Rinzler: keep ah
17:16 Rinzler: rearrange pake cara gw
17:17 Rinzler: wkwkwk
17:17 Kyousuke-: wkw okela
17:17 Kyousuke-: 01:40:064 (100064|2) - move ke 2? why not wkwk
17:17 Rinzler: why not ?
17:17 Rinzler: :p
17:17 Rinzler: moved
17:19 Kyousuke-: 01:45:409 - 01:48:168 - pdhl bsa 1/4 awkwk
17:20 Kyousuke-: bisa dipersusah sbenernya tpi serah lu jga awkwk
17:21 Rinzler: dem dc
17:21 Kyousuke-: lel
17:25 Kyousuke-: 02:01:616 (121616|0) - pendekin sampe 02:01:788 - sini
17:25 Rinzler: sampe mana tadi
17:26 Kyousuke-: 02:01:616 (121616|0) - pendekin sampe 02:01:788 - sini
17:26 Kyousuke-: lel lama gw mod nya :v
17:26 Rinzler: aneh rasanya kalo dipendekin
17:30 Kyousuke-: wait puush lama
17:31 Kyousuke-: http://puu.sh/lV4dl/afea53b1c2.jpg
17:31 Kyousuke-: 02:15:582 - yg ln ini harus nya tinggi, jdi gtu deh :v
17:33 Rinzler: 02:15:409 (135409|1) - justru LN ini yang tinggi
17:33 Rinzler: dan gw sebenernya males baut rearrange semua section LN
17:33 Rinzler: buat
17:34 Kyousuke-: wait
17:34 Kyousuke-: gw rearrange lgi, abisnya cuma itu yg kurang bgs menurut gw wkwk
17:35 Rinzler: entar gw liat lagi + rearrange
17:35 Rinzler: entar aja dah itu wkwkwkwk
17:35 Kyousuke-: http://puu.sh/lV4me/12a3549138.jpg nih sama yg kyk yg tdi
17:35 Kyousuke-: pusing dgn snapnya
17:36 Kyousuke-: tpi uda bgs pas maen yauda wkwk
17:37 Rinzler: kalo dipasin sama snap yang seharusnya sih malah aneh
17:37 Rinzler: asli deh
17:45 Kyousuke-: 04:00:064 (240064|1,240064|2,240150|3,240237|0,240237|2,240409|3,240409|1,240582|2,240582|0,240582|1) - entah knp ini ga enak
17:48 Kyousuke-: rinz are u there
17:48 Rinzler: ye
17:48 Rinzler: gw sambil baca berita
17:48 Kyousuke-: lol
17:48 Kyousuke-: lama kan <(")
17:48 Rinzler: lumayan wkwkwk
17:48 Rinzler: lagunya 5 menit juga
17:48 Kyousuke-: tuh ln yg gw mention gw saranin rearrange
17:49 Kyousuke-: gatau knp dpt 200 mulu wkwk
17:50 Rinzler: udah"
17:50 Kyousuke-: 04:11:616 (251616|0,251788|0) - ini jga jack nya bkin ga balance abis stream
17:50 Kyousuke-: *burst
17:52 Rinzler: gw pindahin aja deh
17:53 Kyousuke-: 04:25:926 (265926|1,266099|1,266271|1) - dibagian sini susah wkwk
17:54 Rinzler: bingung arrangenya gimana
17:55 Kyousuke-: 04:25:754 - o iya lupa finish?
17:56 Kyousuke-: maksudnya add note
17:56 Rinzler: udah deh
17:57 Kyousuke-: last nih gw kasi ss
17:58 Kyousuke-: http://puu.sh/lV57Z/960970c769.jpg
18:00 Rinzler: dah
18:00 Kyousuke-: oke done
18:00 Rinzler: post gih

cool song, cool map. goodluck owo

KcHecKa wrote:

Legacy (4k): ohh. a marathon are we?
Nice map!. The utilization of hit sounds in this map was amazing. It was
a pleasant experience playing this map. Now, the beginning of the map
could've been more "intuitive". Try adding some jumps or something, and
mix up whats going on at 00:44:741 - 00:52:323
The ending also feels a bit drawn out. I get that you were trying to map
the entire song, but I'm sure you could add more notes in between, or at
least use jumps around this part. Something would make it a bit better.
--------------------
Sorry I couldn't give many advice on what to do, the map was that good.


That's all I have to say.

Abraxos wrote:

HOLY FUCKING SHIT THIS SONG IS AMAZING wtf

wtfwtfwtfwtf all hail lord kors k

General

1. BPM and Offset : ( ✓ )
2. Aimod : ( ✓ )
3. Kiai : ( ✓ )
4. Metadata : ( ✓ )
5. Hitsound : ( ✓ )
6. Video : ( ✓ )

idk if legacy is a proper name doe, this song is all about attaining that peaceful state of mind and therefore Nirvana

was thinking of Tranquility or Serenity, but idk. just use a thesaurus for it // ye i was thinking a proper diffname for this song, since idk what is this song about, Legacy was just a random diffname blame me

before you start i wanna warn you about the HS, cuz i edited some parts and im too lazy to point them out lol so yeah plz be aware thx no kds jk plz give kds // There you go :^)

heh

Legacy

1. 00:24:719 (24719|1,24719|2) - move to this. yeah its a rough sketch but it follows 00:23:685 // keep it, since the pitch are goes up (23685|2,23685|3,24202|2,24202|3) btw if you move that longer ln please take note of 00:27:133 (27133|1) -
2. 00:27:047 (27047|2) - idk man, i take issue with the missing beats here. maybe have a note here or smth, same goes for 00:29:806 (29806|2) - btw the LNs are hell to find what are they following /:( // well idk what the sound is, its something like dropped water
3. 00:33:168 (33168|1) - rinzler plz you followed the beat here 00:32:823 (32823|3) but didnt for there i sad
4. 00:37:995 (37995|0,38168|1) - ok i idk mang why the space between these two LNs when i cant hear the lns ending anywhr this song hard to follow i sad // i also can't hear where the LN should end, i will ask other later then
5. kors k troll master at snapping 00:43:340 (43340|3,43398|2,43455|1,43513|0,43570|3,43627|2,43685|1) - correct snapping should be this // lol ok
6. 00:43:944 (43944|3) - missingno? // noep
7. 01:06:013 (66013|1) - missingno // ^
8. 01:24:030 (84030|3,84030|1,84202|0,84202|2,84375|1,84375|3,84547|2) - fix plz // fix in other way
9. 01:28:383 (88383|1) - missingno? on 1/8 snap // nope
10. 01:53:168 (113168|0,113340|3) - dunno if its supposed to be this // that is intentional actually
11. 01:55:926 (115926|0) - supposed to be here? theres a beat on 01:56:013 (116013|1) - also. dont think its the background sounds like in 01:57:564 (117564|1) - and 01:58:082 (118082|0) - // its something like "deep" sound
12. 01:59:547 (119547|2,119633|1) - ctrl-j, remove 3 note stack // oh yeah fixed
13. 02:01:616 (121616|0) -i think it should be this. a 1/2 note stack wouldnt hurt that much would it // ikr
14. 02:06:961 (126961|0,127133|3) - ye this is weird. suggestion // intentional
15. 02:10:926 (130926|3,131013|2) - crtl-j remove 3 note stack // alright
16. 02:11:444 (131444|3,131616|3,131788|3) - remove, suggestion // nah i love its current pattern
17. 02:12:306 (132306|0,132478|0,132650|0) - balance stack,
    02:12:478 (132478|0,132478|2,132564|1,132650|0,132650|3,132737|1,132823|2,132823|0,132909|3,132995|2,132995|1) - take this and crtl-h it // fixed in other way
18. 02:22:306 (142306|3,142363|2,142421|1,142478|0,142536|3,142593|2,142650|1,142650|0) - seems off, heres what i suggest. on 1/8 // fixed
19. 02:54:375 (174375|2,174892|2,175409|2,175926|2,176444|2) - move to 2, im sure the stacking here is sparse enough to enable this // ok
20. 02:59:202 (179202|1) - hey you copypaster />:( move to 4, same as above // lol
21. yup everything here ive mentioned before, the missing links and stuff // waiting other modders opinion about this
22. 03:07:306 (187306|3) - interestingly enough this is fine, doesnt have missed beats // \:D/
23. oh and btw 02:54:375 (174375|2,174892|2,175409|2,175926|2,176444|2) - move to 2 also applies for 00:19:892 (19892|2,20409|2,20926|2,21444|2,21961|2) - // ye, fixed
24. 03:38:857 (218857|3,218944|2) - crtl-j // done
25. 03:39:030 (219030|0,219030|1,219116|2,219202|1,219202|3,219288|0,219375|2,219375|1,219461|3,219547|0,219547|2,219633|1,219719|3,219719|2,219806|1,219892|3,219892|0) - idk man i just realised after i screenshotted that yours is fine but nvm heres my suggestion // nice
26. woah you went absolute ham on this one // get rekt :^)
27. 03:41:185 (221185|2,221271|2) - ahhhh plz no after 1/8 streams // ikr, removed then
28. 03:43:426 (223426|1,223426|0) - dont think this should be double, since 03:43:340 (223340|3) - is single // fixed
29. 03:43:857 (223857|2,223857|0) - this too, looks nice when deleted one note for both. // k
30. 03:54:461 (234461|3,234547|3) - ?????, suggestion 1, suggestion 2 // :^)
31. 03:58:082 (238082|1) - missingno // nah
32. 04:01:013 (241013|1) - missingno? // nah
33. 04:14:030 (254030|0,254030|3,254030|2,254087|1,254145|2,254202|3,254260|1,254317|2,254375|0,254375|1,254375|3) - smells like teen spirit i mean 1/8 // keep it
34. 04:15:409 (255409|3,255452|2,255495|0,255538|1,255582|3,255625|2,255668|0,255711|1) - this is 1/16 if you wanted to know, but 1/8 is fine, dont have to go so far // ye leave it like that
35. 04:17:306 (257306|2,257478|1) - crtl-j // alright
36. 04:27:650 (267650|2) - move to 1
37. 04:39:202 (279202|0,279719|0,280237|0,280754|0,281271|0) - move to 3
38. 04:44:719 (284719|2,285237|2,285754|2,286271|2,286788|2) - move to 1
39. 04:50:237 (290237|0) - hi i did this part for you, following the harp sound in the music. from 04:50:237 (290237|1)- 1st, from 04:51:788 (291788|1)- 2nd, from 04:53:426 (293426|3)- 3rd, from 04:54:547 (294547|2)- 4th, from 04:55:754 (295754|3)- 5th, from 04:56:875 (296875|2)- 6th, from 04:58:168 (298168|2)- 7th, from 04:59:418 (299418|3)- 8th, from 05:00:711 (300711|3)- 9th // i will consider this later, since i can't decide where the snapping should be
40. btw above some might be off by 1/8 or so idk cuz the music is so soft you should check the snapping of them

yay im done

nice song, nice map. good luck with rank (should be easy for you :^)))))) // thanks for the memes :^)))

Frim4503 wrote:

Col : 1,2,3,4,5,6,7


[General]
-BG : ok
-Mp3 : ok
-Hitsound : ok
-Difficulty : ok
-AI Mod : ok

Tranquility

02:04:116 - can't you caange with something diference over than dat, the current is hard for me. example: http://puu.sh/m3zNA/6a114e9a3c.png // naah that is just a simple pattern, if i change it like that, it feels more weird and broke its pattern
02:09:978 - suggest adding note // no
02:10:150 - ^ // no
02:26:444 (146444|0) - make double ? for dat loud sound // that's basically a snare sound
02:30:237 (150237|3,150409|3) - actually thid is different sound from 02:30:582 (150582|3,150754|3) - rearange pls // waiting other opinion about this
03:27:306 - http://puu.sh/m3A6n/16cc10d18a.png // nah
03:28:513 - http://puu.sh/m3A9V/15d56dbbb8.png // no
^also you add note in 03:28:599 - for gitar sound (tbh idk waht sound it is) // i don't map that sound

03:41:444 - add note. the current pattern is break the flow // wat do you mean about current pattern break the flow, i don't get it >_>
03:41:530 - ^

mod done

Paradoxq13 wrote:

Hey! This is for your request in our Modding Queue

[General]

- Metadata is fine (OK!)

- Personally I would LOVE to see some SV's in this map. Consider adding some? I mean, it's fine as it is without SV but it would just add that little extra :3 (HMM...) // i will add some SVs later maybe not

- Timing is fine (OK!)

0 | 1 | 2 | 3

[Tranquility]

• 
  (WARNING) Extremely nit-picky modding ahead!

1. 00:00:582 - 00:10:926 - At the moment you have the notes go columns 1 -> 2 -> 3 -> 0. Maybe I'm hearing it incorrectly, but it seems to work as 2 -> 3 -> 1 -> 0. Or even possibly 1 -> 3 -> 2 -> 0. // lol yeah ok, i'm actually ignoring pitch, fixed in other way
2. If you followed the suggestion above. 00:11:616 (11616|1,12133|1,12650|1,13168|1,13685|1) - to |2| // since i don't followed that suggestion, yeah nope
3. 00:14:375 (14375|2,14892|2,15409|2,15926|2,16444|2) - to |3| // same
   
4. 00:24:202 (24202|2,24202|3) - and 00:24:719 (24719|1,24719|2) - don't match up, and everything afterwards does. I suggest moving 00:22:650 (22650|2,23168|2,23685|2,24202|2) - to |1| and 00:24:719 (24719|2) - to |3| // yep i got it, but no
5. Same with 00:38:513 (38513|0,38513|2) - which uses column |0| and |2|, whereas the notes before use |0| and |3|. But honestly it's almost unnoticeable so don't worry about it if there's no way to fix it. // same
6. 00:33:685 - There's another "ping" noise here (the one you're mapping the LN's to). So maybe cut the one in |0| short here and start one in |2|. // there are a lot of "ping" noises on that section actually, but i ignoring them, that's fine
   
7. 02:03:685 - If you don't mind having some little jacks in there, this pattern works well: http://prntscr.com/9hivq5 // nah keep
   
8. To match the beginning pitch relevancy, move 02:43:340 (163340|2,163857|2,164375|2,164892|2,165409|2) - to |0| and 02:46:099 (166099|3,166616|3,167133|3,167650|3,168168|3) - to |2| and possibly 02:48:857 (168857|2,169375|2,169892|2,170409|2,170926|2) - to |3| if you followed my suggestion about the first section. // fixed in other way
9. 02:57:133 - 02:59:202 - See what I put in my 4th dot-point. The same applies here.
10. It feels kind of odd to go from mapping to the beat from 03:19:202 - to suddenly adding more notes from 03:20:582 -. I suggest mapping 03:19:202 - like you did 03:20:582 -
11. Give this a go: Swap the columns of 03:29:633 (209633|3,209633|2,209719|1,209719|0) - So that the first two are in |01| and the next in |23|. It just adds some nice variation. Again, I'm not sure whether you like having those little jacked notes in there // doesn't need to make it jacking :p
    
12. 04:16:444 (256444|0,256444|1,256530|2,256530|3) - Ctrl+H. I think it plays just a liiiiitle better. In that case maybe move 04:16:271 (256271|2) - to |0| as well? // ok
13. If you follow that suggestion then I suggest taking a look at the other drum-roll-ish parts to add some variation. I'm not too much of a fan of ending them with a 3-note chord, but that's up to your mapping style
    
14. 04:21:271 - 04:22:478 - Mapping all of these as double notes might transition nicer, seeing as the section before (with the LN) is all double notes.
    
15. If you followed my pitch relevancy suggestion the last two times, then do it again here. 04:28:168 (268168|1,268685|1,269202|1,269719|1,270237|1) - to column |2| and 04:30:926 (270926|2,271444|2,271961|2,272478|2,272995|2) - to column |3| and 04:33:685 (273685|0,274202|0,274719|0,275237|0,275754|0) - to column |1| and 04:36:444 (276444|3,276961|3,277478|3,277995|3,278513|3) - to column |0|
16. Repeat for 04:39:202 - 04:49:547 // fixed in other way

Overall, it's a really fun and enjoyable map! Apologies if my suggestions weren't amazingly significant, but the map is already really well made. I wish you luck with getting it ranked

Verniy_Chan wrote:

IRC bersama Rinzler

>w<)b

20:07 Rinzler: verniiy
20:07 Verniy_Chan: ya.. rinzler
20:08 Rinzler: bisa mod ga ? irc gpp deh
20:09 Verniy_Chan: iya boleh~
20:09 Verniy_Chan: mapnya?
20:10 *Rinzler is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/846927 kors k feat.RIRE - Nirvana(Camellia's "BinaryHeaven" Remix)]
20:10 Verniy_Chan: tumbenan gak Nanahira?
20:11 *Verniy_Chan is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/846927 kors k feat.RIRE - Nirvana(Camellia's "BinaryHeaven" Remix) [Tranquility]]
20:11 Rinzler: iya wkwkwkwkwk
20:13 Rinzler: also bisa cari BG yang pas buat lagunya ga ?
20:13 Rinzler: bingung
20:13 Verniy_Chan: nanti sy usahakan
20:14 Verniy_Chan: 00:43:944 - msih dnger suara disini? intentional kah?
20:15 Rinzler: iya emang
20:16 Rinzler: rasanya aneh kalo mulainya disana
20:17 Verniy_Chan: wah.. bnayk HS difolder
20:17 Rinzler: hooh wkwkwkwk
20:17 Verniy_Chan: F kick ya
20:18 Rinzler: hooh
20:19 Verniy_Chan: 01:25:754 - disini C bukan F
20:19 Verniy_Chan: dnger snare beat disini
20:19 Rinzler: masa ?
20:19 Verniy_Chan: 01:25:754 (85754|2) - 
20:19 Rinzler: oh iya wkwkwkwkw
20:19 Rinzler: fixed
20:22 Verniy_Chan: spertinya dr 01:29:202 - smpai sterusnya sperti slah HSnya
20:22 Verniy_Chan: lebih cnderung Kick (F)
20:22 Verniy_Chan: tiap white tick 1/4
20:22 Rinzler: justru lebih ke C
20:22 Rinzler: hhe
20:22 Verniy_Chan: masa..
20:23 Rinzler: iya emang ada kicknya kok
20:24 Verniy_Chan: 01:38:685 (98685|2,99030|2,99375|1,99719|3) - klu ini sih memang C
20:24 Rinzler: iya
20:25 Rinzler: nunggu pendapat modder lain deh
20:25 Verniy_Chan: wah rapi patternmu
20:26 Verniy_Chan: 02:01:616 (121616|0) - spertinya ini berhentinya di red tick
20:26 Rinzler: yap, orang lain juga bilang begitu wkwkwkwk
20:26 Verniy_Chan: 02:04:202 (124202|2,124202|3,124288|2,124288|3) - legit xD
20:27 Rinzler: oke lah, berhubung udah banyak juga yang bilang
20:27 Rinzler: lol
20:27 Verniy_Chan: lel
20:29 Verniy_Chan: 02:11:616 - smpai 02:12:219 - agak keras kicknya, mungkin dibuat msing 2 note
20:30 Verniy_Chan: 02:21:875 - gak dnger kick disni
20:30 Rinzler: nice idea
20:31 Verniy_Chan: 02:22:607 (142607|1) - salah penempatan
20:31 Verniy_Chan: hrusnya disni 02:22:650 - 
20:31 Verniy_Chan: HS maksudku
20:31 Rinzler: lah kenapa ada disana ya
20:31 Rinzler: fixed anyway
20:31 Verniy_Chan: 02:28:513 - miss C here
20:32 Verniy_Chan: 02:29:202 - disni jg
20:32 Rinzler: ah iya
20:32 Rinzler: itu habis rearrange lupa kasih HS
20:32 Verniy_Chan: wkwk
20:34 Verniy_Chan: 03:30:582 - 03:31:271 - 03:31:961 - mestinya C
20:34 Verniy_Chan: 03:32:650 - rasanya dnger snare disini?
20:34 Rinzler: oh
20:34 Rinzler: fixed
20:35 Rinzler: denger kok
20:35 Rinzler: sengaja di ignore
20:35 Verniy_Chan: 03:33:340 - 03:34:030 - 03:34:719 - sama.. C disini
20:35 Rinzler: udah semua
20:35 Verniy_Chan: oh ok
20:36 Verniy_Chan: 03:37:823 - yakin ini?
20:36 Rinzler: yakin
20:36 Verniy_Chan: 03:43:426 - miss F
20:37 Rinzler: fixed
20:37 Verniy_Chan: 03:51:788 (231788|1,232133|3) - add F untk kick
20:38 Rinzler: lol banyak yang miss
20:38 Verniy_Chan: 04:04:719 - disini jg
20:39 Rinzler: okay
20:39 Verniy_Chan: 04:11:271 (251271|1,251444|1,251616|1) - klu bisa avoid ini
20:40 Verniy_Chan: 04:13:426 - add note?
20:40 Rinzler: bingung sebenernya mau digimanain
20:40 Rinzler: but nvm, itu relatif gampang buat di hit
20:40 Rinzler: keep
20:40 Verniy_Chan: 04:15:409 (255409|3,255452|2,255495|0,255538|1,255582|3,255625|2,255668|0,255711|1,255754|2,255754|3) - pattern andalan
20:41 Rinzler: yee
20:41 Rinzler: \:D/
20:41 Verniy_Chan: sering sy temukan sperti ini xD
20:41 Rinzler: kalo dijadiin burst 1234 ga enak
20:42 Verniy_Chan: 04:22:650 - smpai 04:23:254 - ganti F
20:42 Verniy_Chan: 04:24:030 - disini jg
20:42 Rinzler: done
20:42 Rinzler: udah
20:42 Verniy_Chan: karena anda psang F disni 04:25:495 - 04:25:926 - 
20:43 Rinzler: blame me
20:43 Verniy_Chan: 04:50:237 (290237|3,290237|0) - kurang panjang xD, NVM abaikan
20:43 Verniy_Chan: btw done, lebih cek HS aja nih

Good Luck Rinzler

kors k feat.RIRE - Nirvana(Camellia's BinaryHeaven Remix)

MEGAtive wrote:

Okay~ I really forgotting about this. Going to mod this today.

kors k feat.RIRE - Nirvana(Camellia's BinaryHeaven Remix)

Column
|1|2|3|4|

[Tranquility]

Mods

1. 00:11:616 - Okay, I'm really suggesting you to start using doubles here. With 4/4 measure, this is a new measure. While 00:14:375 aren't a start of new measure. Start mapping double from 00:11:616 should help player determining what pattern they're going to face. Moreover, the intensity of the instruments increases from here.
2. 00:24:978 - You missed the instruments like 00:24:375 (24375|0,24719|1,25237|2) here.
3. 00:30:582 - 00:36:013 - 00:41:616 - This too^
4. 00:43:771 - 00:43:944 - Missing instruments that sounds like 00:43:513 (43513|1,43570|0,43627|3,43685|2)
5. 00:58:340 (58340|3) - Should be in |3| according to your pattern in 00:46:788
6. 01:28:383 - Missing vocal cut here.
7. 01:53:168 - This is not how you map the bassdrop on 01:55:926 - 01:58:685 even though they sounds same.
8. 02:01:702 - 02:01:788 - Missing instruments that you cover with 1/4 stream notes.
9. 02:06:961 - Okay, this is not how you map the bassdrops back there and ahead. Make it consistent since they sounds same except the pitch.
10. 02:19:719 - 02:20:064 - Missing instruments like 02:19:892 (139892|0)
11. 02:23:685 (143685|0) - Missing instruments like 02:28:857 (148857|2,148944|1,149288|2,149375|1)
12. 02:29:375 - It's using 1/6 snapes if you hear it more carefully.
13. 02:32:478 - The noise-like sound's starting from 02:32:478 so you should start you stream there.
14. 02:46:099 - Start map the double from here. That way, the measures aren't getting weird.
15. 02:59:461 - You missed the instrument that sounds like 02:59:202 (179202|1,179719|2)
16. 03:02:133 - You missed the instruments that sounds like 03:02:478 (182478|0)
17. 03:32:650 - Missed snare
    Okay, check some missed instruments since I can't point them all.

Interlude- wrote:

Interlude's 4K Mania Modding Queue
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

Mod

01:15:926 - I would do a Ctrl + G, and adjust other notes to avoid jacks. I see a lot of 1-2 and 3-4 around here. // that's the point
01:56:444 - No long notes like 01:54:202 - here? Seems legit :p // there is no reason to put a LN in there
02:01:788 - I hear a low effecter sound here, so you can add a long note too, i guess. // no
02:23:857 - Same here, i hear a effecter here ! // actually i will put a SV for emphasizing the 02:23:685 - sound
02:30:409 - Add a note here? // no
02:31:099 (151099|0) - I didn't here a sound here. I think its better to give off a stronger impact on snare/base here, leaving those alone // it's kinda weird to remove that note, and it's bad to play, but i will consider this later
03:19:202 - 03:20:582 - Why not add intervening notes too? Its like the prelude for the highlight section // the sound that you mentioned is inaudible for me, that's why i started to put a note in there

Wow, such a nice song ) I'll feedback anything else during the testplay.
Btw, I got lots of Nanahira maps by you, and loved them all !
Are you a fan of Nanahira? I hope we can make a collaboration map of Nanahira song! *Like new songs from new albums last december ! // nanahira is my waifu, sure

Rivals_7 wrote:

Modded before it was updated :d

Hi There, From my queue
1|2|3|4

[Tranquilty]

00:52:650 (52650|2,52995|0,53168|3) - 1|4|1 respectively. if you see this - 00:52:306 (52306|2,52650|2,52995|2) - is the only triple stack from the rest of this section. quite weird to see this // it's fine

01:00:754 (60754|3) - move to 3? // no

01:34:633 - extend that LN until here. // no, that LN sound is exactly stopped in here 01:34:547 - pls, it would make it difficult

01:37:478 (97478|2,97650|3) - ctrl+g this. reduce the anchor a little bit // ok

01:37:650 (97650|3,97823|3,97995|3,98168|3) - this hurts :c // nah

02:28:857 (148857|2,148944|1,149030|3,149030|0,149202|0,149202|3,149260|2,149317|1,149375|0,149432|2,149490|3,149547|1,149604|2,149662|3,149719|0,149777|1,149806|3,149806|2,149892|0,149892|1) - I was expecting this could be ctrl+h-ed due to the Pitch relevancy // i will consider this later

02:34:288 (154288|0) - should be double. it have the same loudness like other doubles nearby // the 'emphasize' of kick sound is going up after 2/1 beat, that is why i don't put double in there, as you can see i put a green lines that change the volume

03:05:064 - 03:05:237 - 03:05:409 - these having the different BG sound. this could be mapped in 4 Different LN. somewhat like this
(is the img working?) // no change

Screen

03:16:099 - something similar also happening here // no change

03:54:719 - quite uncomfortable LN here. I suggest you to follow the voice voxes here, not the vocal. It giving quite weird emphasis. so start the LN there. // other people also noticing this weird pattern lmao, change it anyway

04:05:409 - add 1/2 LN in col 3? to represent vocal // that's intentional, i put a little break after burst

I was Mindblocked due to the song having so many voxes sfx and else uh...... This is a good song btw xD
Good luck

DkAngelS wrote:

I like this song, a good warm up (I got 98.87% at first try). Anyway..

Tranquility

01:21:961 (81961|1,82133|2,82133|0,82306|3,82306|1,82478|2,82650|1,82650|0,82823|1,82823|0,82995|3,82995|2) - ctrl+h ? // no
01:35:150 (95150|0) - move to 2? // no, it will break the flow
01:35:237 (95237|2,95323|1) - ctrl+h // no
01:54:547 (114547|0) - move to 2? // no
02:12:909 (132909|3,132995|2) - change to 2,3 // okay since it's something like roll sound, i will make it trill
02:23:254 (143254|0,143297|1,143340|3,143383|2,143426|1) - I don't know what say about this. // what's wrong with that pattern
03:40:150 (220150|3,220194|2,220409|1,220452|0,220840|3,220883|2,221099|1,221142|0) - this pattern changes, I suggest to change it into a full 1/8 note stair, but If you keep it like that, is okay. // it's more sexy than just an ordinary stair burst

P.S Sorry for the short mod, I'm not fully recovered yet. Feel free to reject it if you won't use this.

MrCrussader wrote:

Big sorry for a quite long time delay because of my real life tasks.

Based on your NM Request Here.

I'm focusing in:

1. Note Consistencies
2. Situational Changings
3. Note Balancing (Mainly for < 3.00 star diff)
4. I won't change some patterns, mainly in unique patterns

| 0 | 1 | 2 | 3 |

[Tranquility]

Sorry for short mod because I quite hard to know the non-'warm up' patterns completely.
A nice 'warm up' session, nice try.

1. 01:28:426 (88426|3,88513|2) - Jacks can be performed in |1| each for same hitsounds. // it will break the flow
2. 01:35:150 (95150|0) - Quite dangerous if after LN, there's a note in 1/4 beat spaces.
   Could be like this, // no, that is not a problem at all, every tesplayers (ranged from #5000 ~ #300) doesn't have a problem in this section
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 04:27:392 - For finalizing with 3 simultaneous notes looks better.
   Could be like this, // fixed in other way
   
   SPOILER

   

by-ad wrote:

hasil test beatmap ^^ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5096339

hanya nyesal dibagian:

03:36:444 - padahal combo udah banyak hiks... (bakal banyak bagian itu yang miss jika dimainkan player rank 3000)
(NO KODOSU? NOT PROBLEM JUST TESTING ^_^! )

mz rinz, ada problem di digambar.... ehh ehh :V

doykyoto wrote:

dipaksa mod... kay

SPOILER

19:39 *doykyoto is listening to Tia - Nirvana
19:39 doykyoto: eh salah
19:40 *Rinzler is away: Please Try Again Later
19:40 *doykyoto is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/846927 kors k feat.RIRE - Nirvana(Camellia's "BinaryHeaven" Remix)]
19:40 doykyoto: shi
19:40 Rinzler: gobloo
19:40 *doykyoto is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/846927 kors k feat.RIRE - Nirvana(Camellia's "BinaryHeaven" Remix) [Tranquility]]
19:40 doykyoto: si bangke ternyata bikin ini juga lo
19:40 Rinzler: bruh
19:40 Rinzler: gw dari desember 2015
19:40 Rinzler: mau gw rank
19:41 doykyoto: bruh
19:41 doykyoto: yauda
19:41 doykyoto: habis w mod lgsg rank
19:41 Rinzler: lo donlotnya kapan dot ?
19:41 doykyoto: 00:22:650 dari sini ada suara lagi.. gamau ngasih beberapa  not?
19:41 doykyoto: 00:22:650 -
19:41 Rinzler: ada HS yang gw tambahin soalnya
19:41 doykyoto: ow
19:41 doykyoto: w apdet ntar
19:41 doykyoto: dah uptodate
19:41 Rinzler: suara apaan ?
19:42 doykyoto: hs 
19:42 doykyoto: dah update
19:42 doykyoto: ini kan w donlot kmrn pas mabar
19:42 doykyoto: btw
19:42 doykyoto: itu 00:22:650 ada synth lagi to
19:42 doykyoto: 00:22:650 -
19:42 doykyoto: AAA
19:42 doykyoto: slalu lupa kasih -
19:43 doykyoto: di lanjutanya 00:22:650 - ituloo
19:43 doykyoto: ah kamu gapeka banget si
19:43 Rinzler: oh
19:43 doykyoto: headset w nyetrum gabisa maksimal modding --
19:43 Rinzler: OH
19:43 Rinzler: ga ah dot
19:43 doykyoto: iya mala mess nt
19:43 Rinzler: ignore part situ aja ya
19:43 Rinzler: 00:43:340 - dari sini aja
19:44 Rinzler: mau gw remap tadinya
19:45 doykyoto: 00:45:150 dari sini sampe lanjut kalo pake playback 25% kan ada suara piano tuh
19:45 doykyoto: 00:45:150 -
19:45 doykyoto: ah lupa kasih - zzz
19:45 doykyoto: bisa ditambahin ... tp sepertinya krg menonjol si
19:45 doykyoto: lagian ni kan maraton
19:46 doykyoto: 00:45:495 - 00:45:668 - bisa jadi stair
19:46 Rinzler: 00:45:150 - wat
19:46 Rinzler: i don't even map piano
19:46 doykyoto: gatau itu suara apaan 
19:46 doykyoto: synth?
19:46 doykyoto: au ah
19:46 Rinzler: keep it for consistency tho
19:46 doykyoto: pokoknya ada yg ngikutin sblm drum
19:46 doykyoto: okla
19:47 doykyoto: 00:59:892 di sini ada drum knapa ga dobel/
19:47 doykyoto: 00:59:892 -
19:47 Rinzler: lu itu ketik manual dot ?
19:48 Rinzler: timestampnya
19:48 doykyoto: gak la
19:48 doykyoto: copas
19:48 doykyoto: cuma heranya kdg gaada - kdg ada
19:48 doykyoto: sial kan
19:48 Rinzler: kok cacat
19:48 Rinzler: drum
19:48 Rinzler: wat
19:48 doykyoto: gpp lah ignot
19:48 doykyoto: pake 25%
19:48 Rinzler: entar patternnya malah jelek
19:48 doykyoto: konsistensi suara?
19:48 Rinzler: kalo gw taro note disana, 01:02:650 - disini juga seharusnya ada
19:48 Rinzler: tapi gw ga map
19:49 Rinzler: gw ngerti kok dot
19:49 doykyoto: oh lu fokus sama suara di 01:03:340 -
19:49 doykyoto: wakatta
19:50 doykyoto: 01:26:185 - ini sambungin ama not lain dong.. kasian menjomblo...
19:51 Rinzler: pindah ke 2 gitu ?
19:51 doykyoto: jadi gini https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5098263 ?? saran aja
19:51 doykyoto: ya direarrange
19:52 doykyoto: 01:35:150 ampun reverse shieldnya 
19:52 doykyoto: 01:35:150 -
19:52 Rinzler: gw rearrange dikit lah
19:52 Rinzler: gw ga suka ada anchor
19:52 doykyoto: sebelumnya dah shield.. jd saran direarrange ;a
19:52 doykyoto: yauda
19:53 Rinzler: ga susah lah dot
19:53 Rinzler: ha
19:53 doykyoto: nvm
19:53 doykyoto: w bdmd sbnrnya
19:53 doykyoto: hdst nyetrum
19:53 doykyoto: mls :v
19:53 Rinzler: nyetrum gimana si
19:53 Rinzler: cabut lah
19:53 doykyoto: gabisa
19:53 doykyoto: berisik
19:53 doykyoto: dpn rumah w jalan rame
19:54 doykyoto: nanggung amat 02:11:530 -
19:54 doykyoto: dobel emang knapa?
19:55 doykyoto: eh mksd w di single knapa emangnya?
19:55 doykyoto: itu kan bunyi drum semua sampe 02:12:306 -
19:55 Rinzler: kenapa gw mulai dobelnya disini 02:11:616 -  gitu ?
19:55 doykyoto: ngga
19:55 Rinzler: iya
19:55 doykyoto: tuh single notenya
19:55 Rinzler: oh di awal single, terus kesana dobel ?
19:55 Rinzler: 2-1-2-1-2-2-2-2-2-2
19:55 Rinzler: begitu ?
19:56 doykyoto: ini lo [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5098300 mas bru]
19:56 doykyoto: kenapa harus single kalo bisa didobel? itu kan ikut ngetrill juga seharusnya
19:56 Rinzler: lah 02:10:840 (130840|1,131185|2,131357|0) - ini kan single juga
19:56 Rinzler: ooh
19:57 Rinzler: suara drumnya gradually increase mulai dari sini 02:11:616 -
19:57 Rinzler: makanya dari sana gw pake 2-2-2-2-2-2
19:57 Rinzler: instead of 2-1-2-1-2
19:58 doykyoto: 02:25:754 ini kok ga dobel?
19:58 doykyoto: 02:25:754 -
19:58 Rinzler: suara drumnya makin kuat maksud gw
19:58 doykyoto: ya tau paham ko
19:59 Rinzler: oh itu
19:59 Rinzler: fixed
19:59 Rinzler: abis remap
20:01 doykyoto: dah
20:01 doykyoto: dah good
20:02 doykyoto: lu minta mod ama w -- 
20:02 doykyoto: ini dah polished
20:02 doykyoto: tinggal minta BN 
20:02 doykyoto: ato kalo gak minta pro mapper lain buat ngemod

good chart
must give a star here

Rizqy wrote:

first bub

peuting peuting

20:28 Rizqy: nirvana
20:28 Rinzler: cek ?
20:28 Rinzler: kuy
20:29 Rizqy: kela multi
20:30 Rinzler: sarua
20:30 Rinzler: WKWKWKWKW
20:30 Rinzler: IEU AING NGAKAK KEUR NGAROASTED
20:30 Rizqy: gandeng
20:30 Rizqy: inv room coba
20:31 Rinzler: Come join my multiplayer match: "[osump://18816/1 James Ong's game]"
20:36 Rinzler: dieu
20:39 Rizqy: np keun
20:40 *Rinzler is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/846927 kors k feat.RIRE - Nirvana(Camellia's "BinaryHeaven" Remix)]
20:40 Rinzler: eta urang poho baheula teh pernah rek diupdate
20:40 Rinzler: tapi leungit WKWKWKWKWK
20:42 Rizqy: gblk
20:43 Rinzler: ngan HS hungkul asana mah
20:43 Rizqy: tay
20:43 Rinzler: oh inget urang
20:43 Rizqy: sugan geus siap
20:43 Rinzler: enggeus jan
20:44 Rinzler: 01:52:995 (112995|1,113168|2,113340|1,113513|2) -
20:44 Rinzler: ngaleungitkeun suara ieu tah
20:44 Rinzler: eta hungkul
20:44 Rizqy: kela sakali deui
20:44 Rizqy: ngeunah lagu na
20:44 Rinzler: sok
20:44 Rinzler: patternna jan
20:44 Rinzler: rapihkeun
20:46 *Rizqy is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/846927 kors k feat.RIRE - Nirvana(Camellia's "BinaryHeaven" Remix) [Tranquility]]
20:47 *Rinzler is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/846927 kors k feat.RIRE - Nirvana(Camellia's "BinaryHeaven" Remix) [Tranquility]]
20:48 Rizqy: 01:30:495 - add di 2, ikutin flow
20:48 Rizqy: 1 2 3 4
20:49 Rinzler: zeeb
20:49 Rizqy: 01:33:254 - add di [3] tapi 01:33:340 (93340|2) - pindahkeun ka [4]
20:50 Rinzler: done
20:50 Rizqy: 01:36:013 - add di [1]
20:50 Rizqy: 01:37:392 - [3]
20:52 Rinzler: done
20:52 Rizqy: 01:50:582 - http://puu.sh/sgMGX/641f5328de.jpg || leuwih karasa
20:53 Rinzler: oh nya
20:53 Rinzler: kade HS na maneh
20:53 Rinzler: wkwkwkwkw
20:54 Rizqy: belakangan hs mah
20:54 Rizqy: 02:01:616 - http://puu.sh/sgMMX/54c35f9260.jpg
20:55 Rinzler: diganti LN jan ?
20:55 Rinzler: done
20:55 Rizqy: LN na tambah
20:55 Rizqy: 02:17:737 (137737|2) - pindah ka 02:17:564 -
20:56 Rinzler: done
20:56 Rizqy: 02:17:823 - http://puu.sh/sgMQX/f60a7aef76.jpg
20:56 Rizqy: 02:17:737 - oh tambah deui di [1]
20:56 Rinzler: done
20:56 Rinzler: naha kudu 2 ?
20:57 Rinzler: oh ngarti
20:57 Rizqy: sora kos mencret na asa alus mun 2 LN
20:58 Rizqy: 02:29:547 (149547|1,149604|2) - ka kiri 1 kolom
20:59 Rizqy: leuwih rapih da sok
20:59 Rizqy: 02:28:857 - oh sebelumna ubah ieu http://puu.sh/sgN0j/5e23860732.jpg
20:59 Rinzler: moal kagok eta ?
21:00 Rizqy: moal ah
21:00 Rinzler: geus
21:00 Rizqy: aing 300 kabeh
21:00 Rinzler: anjir gaya
21:00 Rinzler: wkwkwkwkwkw
21:03 Rizqy: 04:13:857 (253857|3) - ka [4]
21:03 Rizqy: eh [1]
21:03 Rinzler: eta geus di 4 gblk
21:04 Rizqy: nyaeta ralat ka hiji tll
21:04 Rinzler: geus
21:04 Rizqy: geus weh kitu hungkul da
21:04 Rizqy: coba recek hs na
21:04 Rizqy: update hela
21:05 Rinzler: kela atuh
21:05 Rinzler: kedap
21:05 *Rizqy is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/173567 Sakaue Nachi - Crazy Hot [Lunatic]]
21:05 Rizqy: ketagihan bgst
21:07 Rinzler: kela poho aing wkwkwkw
21:09 Rizqy: naon pho
21:09 Rizqy: poho
21:09 Rinzler: revive heula
21:11 Rinzler: geus
21:13 Rizqy: bentar re dl
21:16 Rizqy: anjir hs na teu cocok
21:16 Rizqy: cari hit-normal gih
21:16 Rinzler: hit-normalna urang default nya ?
21:17 Rizqy: heeuh
21:17 Rizqy: garandeng
21:17 Rinzler: wkwkwkwkwkw
21:17 Rinzler: make naon atuh
21:17 Rizqy: nu kick kick weh lah
21:17 Rizqy: teang
21:19 Rinzler: bingung aing
21:20 Rinzler: geus
21:20 Rinzler: update ?>
21:21 Rizqy: sok
21:21 Rinzler: http://puu.sh/sgNPF/fe4c5d0a94.wav
21:21 Rinzler: yeuh
21:21 Rizqy: ke urang re dl weh
21:21 Rinzler: meh teu kudu redl
21:21 Rizqy: bae
21:21 Rinzler: sok
21:21 Rinzler: geus
21:27 Rinzler: Rizqy Fauzan
21:27 Rizqy: aha
21:31 Rizqy: 01:59:030 (119030|1) - beep nya pindahin ke LN
21:32 Rinzler: dah
21:36 Rizqy: geus beres
21:36 Rizqy: gancang pan wkwk

AchsanLovers wrote:

uhh, really nice song also fun pattern, idk why a bn didn't notice this map

Asherz007 wrote:

The snapping concern raised by Maxus are valid, so I'll DQ this mapset for now so that those can be fixed.

As far as I know, if Protastic has enough free time, she has the intention of modding this set, so that might happen at some point as well.

Maxus wrote:

Well kinda unsure about the snap, so will mention it here.

01:28:340 (88340|0) - really sure its supposed to be 1/8 at 01:28:383 - , if the rapid sound between 01:28:340 (88340|0,88426|3) - is faster than the ordinary 1/4 stream, then it proves that the former is supposed to have closer snap. a faster stream doesn't mean it should be 1/8, if you are really strict about snapping you can hear it on 50% or even 25%, it's clearly a 1/6, but whatever i'm gonna fix it
01:28:627 (88627|1) - Supposed to be 1/8 at 01:28:642 -

01:39:547 - Supposed to be 1/8 burst, it's similar sound with 02:22:392 - .

Protastic101 wrote:

00:11:616 - I think it would have been better to start the jumps here with the repeat of the first four measures. The sound doesn't really change that much from 00:14:375 - so it's just a more natural break to increase the layering.

00:38:168 (38168|1,38513|2,38513|0) - I think it'd be ok to be a little inaccurate with pitch relevancy here and control J this so that there's a bigger gap between the note in 00:38:513 (38513|2) - and 00:39:030 (39030|3) - since the pitch goes up 4(?) wholesteps as opposed to the regular 1 (G -> A is the normal, but in this case the pitch jumps from G -> D) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10243654

01:28:469 (88469|3) - This is a ghost note. The vocal stutter is only a triplet.
01:28:340 (88340|0,88383|2,88426|1) - If above is accepted, I'd control H this to avoid having these two transitional beats be too left hand heavy.

02:22:823 (142823|3,142823|2) - The vocal here is a different pitch from 02:22:650 (142650|3,142650|2) - , so I might move this to be [23] so that it still has a note stacked with the previous jump at 02:22:650 (142650|2,142650|3) - to show they're the same sound, but also has one note that isn't to represent a different pitch.

03:29:978 - 03:30:064 - 03:30:150 - Think it might be cool to add some single notes here for the synth since it's a rather prominent sound once everything else drops out of the music, and the drop in density will reflect that.

04:03:513 - 04:03:857 - The synth has a delay here which makes it 1/8, and I think it's kind of easy to hear in the music, so adding the burst would be nice and also keep the player alert while playing since they tend to lose focus a bit on the transitional sections https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10243705

04:14:087 (254087|1,254145|2,254202|3,254260|1,254317|2) - Snapped incorrectly. Should be 1/6 -> 1/8, like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10243713


Regarding hitsounds, you'll probably want to increase the volume at places like 00:44:719 - to 30% or so, and then 01:26:185 - to 50% ish and kiais should be closer to 60% for the hitnormal to be kind of audible. Or just like, increase the volume of the hitnormal.

02:29:892 (149892|0) - Missing clap
02:29:806 (149806|1) - Missing finish

Protastic101 wrote:

Can I have a response? At least to the first point since that seems to not have been applied which I'm fine with, but I'd like to know why.