hello again o/
nothing "wrong", but there were a few things that bothered me (maybe it's just personal taste but idk)
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nothing "wrong", but there were a few things that bothered me (maybe it's just personal taste but idk)
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- 00:09:934 (1,2,3,4) - I think the flow here can be improved more because it feels a little sharp. Consider this?
- 00:40:522 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - about this pattern, it just feels a little boring because it's just circle, repeat slider from left right, slider, circle, repeat slide from left right, slider, etc etc... literally all of the repeat sliders mentioned here start from left to right and are horizontal. Try using more variation
- 01:04:640 (2) - something something this is the only elbow slider in the diff (not really a problem)
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14:46 *Rizen is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/865693 Matsushita Nao - Koi ni Ochitara image version [Normal]]
14:49 Rizen: ah yeah
14:49 Rizen: the middle line in sb
14:50 Rizen: must of gotten through because you can't see it in editor mode :c
14:50 Mako Sakata: I did it wrong?
14:50 Rizen: there's a line in the middle
14:50 Rizen: hold on
14:51 Rizen: http://puu.sh/ml8cK/dc762ba23e.jpg
14:51 Rizen: don't know if intentional or not
14:55 Rizen: 00:38:170 (1) - I would of moved this to 276//147 but that's just for [http://puu.sh/ml8qE/f025d084f7.jpg personal taste]
14:55 Mako Sakata: Hmm have you redownload and delete the previous version?
14:55 Mako Sakata: Because mine don't have that middle line XD
14:55 Mako Sakata: http://puu.sh/ml8pR/a310760076.jpg
14:55 Rizen: ah
14:55 Mako Sakata: http://puu.sh/ml8mg/acd84ac42a.jpg
14:56 Rizen: i swear i downloaded it 5 mins ago
14:56 Rizen: hold on, lemme try agian
14:56 Rizen: still there after redownload o.o
14:57 Mako Sakata: What's wrong -_-
14:57 Mako Sakata: Is that a bug perhaps
14:57 Rizen: i'm using widescreen
14:58 Mako Sakata: Fix this 00:38:170 (1) -
14:58 Rizen: hold on, i need to stamp out the bug or I'll feel eh
14:58 Rizen: what screen resolution are you using?
14:58 Mako Sakata: Me too 1366x768 fullscreen
14:59 Rizen: ah, it's not there in 1366x768
14:59 Rizen: but it's there on 1920x1090
14:59 Rizen: 1920x1080*
14:59 Mako Sakata: Ah so thats why;;
15:01 Rizen: mm
15:02 Rizen: this is just a personal thing but
15:02 Rizen: 01:00:522 (2) -
15:02 Rizen: I don't think that slider does the violin thingy justice
15:03 Rizen: but the alternative i have in mind doesn't fit with the rest of your sliders
15:03 Rizen: so i'll just let that slide
15:04 Rizen: 01:02:875 (5) - I would of ctrl+g'd that so 01:02:287 (3,4,5) - flows better
15:04 Rizen: it'll also fit the music better
15:04 Rizen: as in 01:01:699 (1,2,3,4,5) - it goes note 1, lower tone, slightly higher tone, higher tone, lower tone
15:05 Mako Sakata: 01:00:522 (2) - I leave it as is, because I love that XD and fix this 01:02:875 (5) -
15:05 Rizen: so a down up up down motion would fit the music pretty great
15:05 Rizen: ok
15:06 Rizen: about 01:00:522 (2) - , what about [http://puu.sh/ml944/1e8616d078.jpg this?]
15:07 Mako Sakata: Been try that before and not really like :(
15:07 Rizen: ah ok
15:07 Mako Sakata: The inner slider border not visible enough
15:09 Rizen: 01:06:405 (1) - maybe x:100 y:184?
15:09 Rizen: for the zig zag flow
15:09 Rizen: the current zig zag flow seems a little off for me
15:10 Mako Sakata: Fix this 01:06:405 (1) -
15:11 Rizen: 01:08:758 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think this can be made more fun
15:12 Rizen: hold on, i'll post a picture of the flow of what I think an alternative can be
15:12 Mako Sakata: Honestly I'm bad at making jumps :(
15:13 Rizen: http://puu.sh/ml9tw/e4489021db.jpg
15:13 Mako Sakata: This one also 00:28:170 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - lol
15:13 Rizen: I wonder if u can follow that o.o
15:13 Mako Sakata: Is the jump fine? I mean too far?
15:13 Mako Sakata: Or not
15:14 Mako Sakata: Oh god what's that XD
15:14 Rizen: mm I'll get back to 00:28:758 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - afterwards
15:15 Rizen: aa
15:15 Rizen: should I send code?
15:15 Mako Sakata: You can?
15:15 Rizen: like in the .osu file
15:15 Mako Sakata: That would be great :p
15:15 Rizen: but u need to back up the file just in case
15:16 Rizen: actually
15:16 Rizen: I'll just send to you as a seperate diff
15:16 Mako Sakata: Thanks :D
15:17 Rizen: http://puu.sh/ml9J6/4f906ad7ac.osu
15:17 Rizen: regarding 01:08:758 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
15:24 Mako Sakata: And fix thaaat
15:24 Rizen: ok regarding 00:28:758 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
15:25 Rizen: 00:29:934 (5,6) - that jump is a little otp
15:25 Rizen: whoops
15:25 Rizen: i mean
15:25 Rizen: over the top
15:25 Mako Sakata: You think so?
15:26 Mako Sakata: But I aim for the triangel XD
15:27 Rizen: could move say 00:30:228 (6) - to where (2) is
15:28 Rizen: and 00:30:817 (8) - to where (3) is
15:28 Rizen: it'll fit the 00:29:934 (5,6,7,8) - descending notes in this part of the music
15:28 Mako Sakata: Alright will try
15:29 Rizen: and provides a "kick-like" flow to indicate a transition
15:30 Rizen: now that I think about it, 00:49:934 (1,2,3,4) - the slider 2 and slider 4 are slightly different than slider 1 and slider 2 regarding the music at those parts
15:31 Rizen: maybe this http://puu.sh/mlay0/ea90c607e6.jpg but that could just be me nitpicking
15:32 Rizen: and at 00:52:875 (2) - maybe two circle would work better?
15:32 Mako Sakata: 00:30:228 (6) - Only fix that, moving this 00:30:817 (8) - to (3) make the jump on less natural
15:32 Rizen: one at 288/164 and the second at 384//76
15:32 Rizen: ah ok
15:35 Rizen: and 00:59:346 (1) - move to 312//220? the flow there isn't a perfect line (I used a ruler on the screen to check this)
15:35 Mako Sakata: Lol
15:36 Mako Sakata: Really you use a ruler? XD
15:36 Rizen: yeah so I don't go crazy :s
15:36 Mako Sakata: Fixed that
15:37 Rizen: which one?
15:37 Rizen: there are like 3 points I mentioned .-.
15:37 Mako Sakata: This one 00:59:346 (1) -
15:37 Mako Sakata: Still checking
15:37 Rizen: ok
15:40 Rizen: last thing about this diff, 01:22:875 (1) - the heart isn't perfect :(
15:41 Rizen: [http://puu.sh/mlb5q/208a17384c.jpg the tops have different y co-ordinates]
15:41 Mako Sakata: Regarding this 00:49:934 (1,2,3,4) - it supposed to be a circular flow, since I run out the space that not looks so well haha XD
15:41 Rizen: ok
15:42 Mako Sakata: And about your rhythm sugestion, I feel not comfortable with the reverse slider
15:42 Rizen: ok, that's understandable
15:43 Mako Sakata: And about this slider 00:52:875 (2) - it supposed a build up jump before we reach out this 00:53:464 (3) -
15:43 Mako Sakata: So not change that into two circles ><
15:43 Rizen: ok
15:43 Mako Sakata: About the heart I did my best;;
15:44 Mako Sakata: I can't math
15:44 Rizen: just move the end point a little lower ;_;
15:45 Mako Sakata: Done, make the reverse node on 320 176
15:45 Rizen: ok one more thing about SB
15:45 Rizen: the cherry blossoms/sakura in the chorus
15:46 Rizen: is it possible to make them turn?
15:46 Rizen: having them move like that seems a little unnatural
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