Matsushita Nao - Koi ni Ochitara image version · forum

FCL

1,478 posts

Joined July 2014

FCL 2016-01-21T21:50:23+00:00

Hi

[Hard]

00:29:346 (3) - you should to put nc here because piano tone changes, also u use clap here. Spacing should be increased too
00:39:346 (5) - try use flow like this http://puu.sh/mEwqo/c9bc2a95cf.jpg. It's better in my options
00:59:052 (5) - probably it's hard for read, also stack not looks good. I recommend to move it to 332 64
01:04:640 (3,4) - u can improve this blanket, yay
01:09:346 (3) - ~~same things as 00:29:346 (3), it's not right imo~~ ah, okay it's fine, but 00:29:346 (3) not right, i am sure
01:10:228 (3) - nc and more spacing since it has reasonable grounds as before. If u accept it fix 01:10:522 (4) - spacing
01:10:817 (5) - replace it to kickslider or triple since blue tick have evident sound
01:11:699 (3) - nc and more spacing

[Normal]

00:28:758 (1,2,3) - circles here looks really "depleted". You could be use 1/2 sliders, will better
01:08:758 (1,2,3) - ^
01:12:287 (3,4) - u can improve this blanket

[Riziaen]

00:29:934 (2,1) - blanket
00:55:817 (2,1) - ^
01:20:522 (1) - move to 312 328
nazi mod - best mod (false)

Shiranai

2,186 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Shiranai 2016-02-01T07:04:36+00:00

Replying mod,

1

fuyuyu- wrote:
M4M
my english is bad pls forgive me;w;

Normal
00:31:111 -same as rizen's I think that not really fit and sound too louder imo
00:57:287 - add whistle? Same
00:59:346 (1,2) - nazi... tbh these similar shape slider is looks same length for beginner imo... can you change 01:00:522 (2) -'s shape? Not really, they are diffrent imo the (2) is longer, fixed blanket anyway
01:19:934 (3,1) - umm... can you use 1/2+1/1? I think following 01:20:522 - 's violin(and piano) sounds is better I try to follow piano only there and it sounded well on that red tick
01:29:934 - same as rizen's Fixed
Hard
00:16:111 (4,5) - can you use rhythm just like 00:13:464 (4,5) - or 00:16:111 (5) - change to circle+1/1?
00:16:405 - this violin sound's volume is much the same as 00:14:052 - , I felt a bit unnaturally for you didn't use like same rhythm as 00:14:052 - , Because I feel like (4,5) is long violin sound, so thats why not use 1/2 rhythm there
00:29:640 (1,2) -I don't think here's sound is 3-5, I think it's 4-4 or 2-2-4, switch NC? Fixed
00:31:111 - same as rizen's I think that not really fit and sound too louder imo
00:44:346 - there's violin is enough conspicuous for follow, can you use 1/2 rhythm? Try to follow piano sound only there;;
00:48:758 (4) - ^ Try to follow piano sound only there;;
00:57:287 - same as Normal I think that not really fit and sound too louder imo
01:19:052 (2) - nazi, but that overlap isn't that visually appealing imo Fixed
01:29:934 - same as rizen's Fixed
tbh nearly neat
GL!
SPOILER
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/297698

2

CrystilonZ wrote:
Nice and relexing
I love it <3

From your queue, M4M

You really should increase normal's AR or decrease Hard's AR to smoothen the AR difference Use 4.5 on Normal

[Hard]
oooh, CS 3.5. That's new Yayy
00:28:170 (4,5) - I would rather make the flow go upwards, so as to match with 00:26:111 (1,2,3) - The piano sound is changing, so not doing upward movement like previous
00:31:111 (1) - blanket error Fixed
00:42:287 (6) - here too Fixed
00:51:699 (4) - you should turn this into 2 circles. It match better with the piano imo I keep that as is to keep consistency with previous circular flow
01:07:875 (3) - I think if you flip this vertically, it will improve the flow Fixed
01:12:287 (5) - blanket error Fixed
01:21:258 (4) - I know that this hook slider is nice but it kind of ruins the flow Fixed

[Normal]
00:28:170 (4) - curving this slider a bit should improve the flow Fixed
00:59:346 (1,2) - blanket error. It's little but noticeable Fixed
01:04:640 (2) - this wave slider is a little bit weird to me. Try moving the second anchor point a bit upwards and forth downwards Fixed
01:18:170 (1) - this slider is a little bit awkward comparing to other sliders in this diff. try smoothening the curve It's fine, I love the way its flow

That's all from me
Good luck !

3

Slayed wrote:
m4m from ur q (triple post lol)

general
very qute song xd
uncheck widescreen support in easy diff Fixed

norml

00:26:993 (2,3) - nazi. spacing here is a bit different from other places Fixed

00:38:170 (1) - maybe ctrl+J this slider for a better flow? Fixed

01:12:287 (3,4) - probably this blanket can be improved a bit Fixed

01:23:022 (1) - 6 sec spinner for newbies? are you sure about this? also, as i told in previous diff, dont u want to map this part? kinda up to 01:29:934 - this point and after put a spinner with damping? it would be a better idea They are fine, that not really long to spin on normal. Also intentional not map this 01:29:934 - so player can see the bg fade out on sb

hard

uhhh.. ar 7.. i HIGHLY suggest you to put 6 or 6.5 at least. high ar (for 2.5* hard 7 is pretty high) for 100 bpm isnt a cool idea at all Ar 7 is great :p

00:29:934 (2) - strong beat is here, not here 00:29:640 (1) -. so nc should be on 00:29:934 (2) - this circle. also spaced jumps? should start here 00:29:934 (2) - aswell, cuz there is no reason to start them not from strong beat Fixed

00:48:758 (4,5) - nazi suggestions about the spacing here Fixed

00:57:875 (3,5) - i think u can stack this better caz u never used such pattern before Fixed

01:00:522 (2,1) - ^ Fixed

01:05:522 (5,6) - ? idk actually, maybe this is your idea or smth xd Yeahh

01:09:934 (2) - same thing about the jumps and etc (i mentioned it above), so nc should be here instead of 01:09:640 (1) -. also here 01:10:817 (5,1) - you got my thoughts xd. if you will do that way, think about squares instead of triangles hehe Fixed, I did make both triangle and square :p

01:19:052 (2) - i know this overlap (also i like it too xd) but as u never used it before, maybe move this to x=123 y=305? will fit your style muche better imo I did make both triangle and square :p

01:22:875 (1) - aww <3

01:29:934 - put here a lower volume. 15-20% imo will be ok, caz this way is too loud for this place. Fixed
(also if u will reject my thoughts about this part in previous diff, also put lower volumes there)

ur style is very neat, i like it vm

gl and take a star

4

FCL wrote:
Hi
[Hard]
00:29:346 (3) - you should to put nc here because piano tone changes, also u use clap here. Spacing should be increased too Fixed
00:39:346 (5) - try use flow like this http://puu.sh/mEwqo/c9bc2a95cf.jpg. It's better in my options Fixed
00:59:052 (5) - probably it's hard for read, also stack not looks good. I recommend to move it to 332 64 It's fine, I have that pattern on my previous map and they plays good
01:04:640 (3,4) - u can improve this blanket, yay Fixed
01:09:346 (3) - ~~same things as 00:29:346 (3), it's not right imo~~ ah, okay it's fine, but 00:29:346 (3) not right, i am sure
01:10:228 (3) - nc and more spacing since it has reasonable grounds as before. If u accept it fix 01:10:522 (4) - spacing 01:10:817 (5) - replace it to kickslider or triple since blue tick have evident sound Fixed
01:11:699 (3) - nc and more spacing Not this one

[Normal]
00:28:758 (1,2,3) - circles here looks really "depleted". You could be use 1/2 sliders, will better After several playing I think they are fine
01:08:758 (1,2,3) - ^ Same
01:12:287 (3,4) - u can improve this blanket Fixed

Done all, tired typing lol

Last edited by Shiranai 2016-02-01T08:04:48+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Rizen

1,662 posts

Joined August 2013

Rizen 2016-02-01T07:49:26+00:00

fuyuyu-

fuyuyu- wrote:
Rizen
00:31:111 - why didn't use whistle just like 00:21:699 - ? i don't think these have different except low tone-piano in sound the whistle pattern is following a specific piano sound
00:37:581 (2) - add whistle? that piano sound is enough volume to add whistle imo. ^
00:46:405 (2) - tbh this reverse is really weird to me... I don't think this sound isn't suitable for using reverse...
if you want use 1/1 reverse at the environs, use from 00:47:581 -. changed it
01:29:934 - lower volume? (about -20%?) there's piano sounds smaller than 01:22:875 - sure

CrystilonZ

CrystilonZ wrote:
[Rizen's Easy]
00:38:170 (1) - the flow is quite weird here. Try curving it a bit more downwards changed pattern in this part
00:56:993 (1) - blanket error ok
00:35:817 (1) - change this slider into 3/2 with a reverse fit the music better; I guess yes, it does! thanks!
This diff is good and solid, but I think it's too... monotonous and generic.. I guess? easy diffs are very generic
It's good for beginners but it can also be boring. Try adding some beginner-friendly variations I hope I did :<

Slayed

Slayed wrote:
general
very qute song xd
uncheck widescreen support in easy diff WHOOOOOPS

easy

00:15:817 (2) - finishing the slider on the big white tick (since there is pretty strong beat) isnt really a good idea, caz it can be a problem for the rhytm ok, removed the repeat and added a circle
00:37:581 (2) - flow after previous slider should go left, not right tudududu, also stacking notes that way in easy isnt really cool thing redid that part so should play smoother
00:59:346 (1) - move this to x=264 y=229 for a better flow, also i dont really like the curve, but as you like should be fine, easies don't have to always be flowy all the time
01:22:875 (1,1) - idk why did u put it here lol, this places can be mapped normally, not like this it should be ok, I just want to keep the consistencies of the diffs

FCL

FCL wrote:
[Riziaen] I am triggered.
00:29:934 (2,1) - blanket okkk
00:55:817 (2,1) - ^ ^
01:20:522 (1) - move to 312 328 moved to 313 328 instead
nazi mod - best mod (false) need em aesthetics

Thanks for the mods, guys!

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Shiranai

2,186 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Shiranai 2016-02-01T08:17:52+00:00

Thank you for mod fuyuyu-, CrystilonZ, Slayed, FCL ><
Updated! also adding more tags

Mint

1,607 posts

Joined February 2013

Mint 2016-02-09T19:57:55+00:00

Hi Mako! from my queue :3

Really sorry for short mod.. couldn't find anything major x_x (feel free to not give KD if not helpful)

General

* 恋におちたら in the tags can be removed. Already in title field.
* 00:05:228 (1) - 'till 00:09:934 (1) - no SB effect?

Rizen

* Maybe a future reference, or maybe something you can apply now, up to you. But NC setting is done consistently in this diff, good, but it's way too often. Many times you literally have a note or a slider which is a combo out of itself... feels so spammed. Feel free to do it every x measures instead (especially in easier diffs / with calm songs like this)

Normal

* 00:12:287 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - You used the same rhythm again and again... I think this is rather boring tbh ;w; - would take advantage of the violin and create something more interesting too play.

Hard

* Only thing that bugged me a bit, were things like 01:20:522 (1,2,3,4) - . Two stacks right after each other, but different snaps. I think you could be more creative with this and it'd also help a bit with readability... but overall it's not a big problem.

Such a well done map... the SB concept makes me think a bit of Blue Amber ww.

I really love these kind of calm maps \w/

Feel free to call me back!

Rizen

1,662 posts

Joined August 2013

Rizen 2016-02-10T09:43:32+00:00

redid combos, hopefully they are better (please double check them

)

about the no SB thingy, I'm not Mako but I do believe she said something about the windows xp movie maker title and artist thingy being on a blacked out background

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Shiranai

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Shiranai 2016-02-11T12:30:35+00:00

appleeaterx wrote:
Hi Mako! from my queue :3

Really sorry for short mod.. couldn't find anything major x_x (feel free to not give KD if not helpful)

:idea: General

* 恋におちたら in the tags can be removed. Already in title field. Keep, that was taken from the dorama name http://wiki.d-addicts.com/Koi_ni_Ochitara , but since this song is not really performed on the series, so I put the dorama name on tags instead. I think it'll still be fine to put that anyway
* 00:05:228 (1) - 'till 00:09:934 (1) - no SB effect? Yeah, like rizen said. I'm gonna ask qat to set white artist and pink title to be occured around here 00:05:228 - so that part won't blank at all

Normal

* 00:12:287 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - You used the same rhythm again and again... I think this is rather boring tbh ;w; - would take advantage of the violin and create something more interesting too play. Fixed, add 1/2 slider around here 00:13:464 - so it'll be more variative

Hard

* Only thing that bugged me a bit, were things like 01:20:522 (1,2,3,4) - . Two stacks right after each other, but different snaps. I think you could be more creative with this and it'd also help a bit with readability... but overall it's not a big problem. Hmm I don't really have a problem imo about those stacking since it was intentional, as you can clearly hear there are bass sound around here 01:20:522 - so I think it would be more fit if I use Normal hit and to emphsized the bass more I make stacked on 01:20:522 (1,2) - then followed with next bass sound on 01:21:111 (3,4) - unfortunate the next bass stacking is fall on 1/4, but I think that still readable imo and not really confusing during the testplay. Oh also I fixed stacking on this 01:21:111 (3,4) - and did color haxing so the love slider have pink color xD

Such a well done map... the SB concept makes me think a bit of Blue Amber ww.

I really love these kind of calm maps \w/

Feel free to call me back!