AYUMIKURIKAMAKI - Honey Honey Honey(TV size) · forum

Pata-Mon

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

Pata-Mon 2016-01-12T19:03:17+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年9月27日 at 0:45:05

Artist: AYUMIKURIKAMAKI
Title: Honey Honey Honey(TV size)
Source: パンチライン
Tags: Lily Bread Misure ZZHBOY anime ending ED Punch Line ハニーハニーハニー
BPM: 153
Filesize: 15586kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:

Honey (4.15 stars, 297 notes)
Lily Bread's Easy (1.33 stars, 88 notes)
Misure's Normal (1.88 stars, 147 notes)
ZZH's Hard (3.13 stars, 234 notes)

Download: AYUMIKURIKAMAKI - Honey Honey Honey(TV size)
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あゆみくりかまき - 蜜蜜蜜(TV size)
（パンチライン）

GD Information

Lily Bread's Easy：Lily Bread

Misure's Normal：Misure

ZZH's Hard：ZZHBOY

SB Information
Storyboard is copied from Mei Ayakura - Puzzle Maker (moonlightleaf) with permission.

Last edited by Pata-Mon 2024-02-04T07:06:34+00:00, edited 69 times in total.

Lily Bread

1,228 posts

Joined December 2014

Lily Bread 2016-01-13T05:59:08+00:00

~~先标记，回来再摸~~

[Lily Bread's Easy]
跳过=w=

[Normal]
00:23:317 (5,1,4,5) - 其实没必要刻意去做对称。比如你这些都在一个位置上，玩起来会感觉都在一个地方打转，这样其实就很不好，不过既然已经这样做了那就先这样吧

00:44:101 (4,5,6,7) - Normal里跟1/3而且还有单独的圈应该是不会过的。做成往复滑条应该就没什么问题了

00:52:533 (2) - 这有点强行对称，而且这种滑条在normal里有点太难读

[Hard]
00:09:199 (2) - 这个弯一点flow更好

嗯？我注意到一个很不对的地方，怎么你hard里有些部分的DS比N还小？
00:14:297 (1,2) -你看，Normal里，这个你都没碰到，Hard里反而碰到了。这样很不好。前后一段都有这种问题

00:50:964 (2) - 这个滑条是弱起，而且是在鼓点起，落在人声上。按我的经验来看，这种滑条听起来很违和。拆开就好很多

01:06:062 (1,2) - 这里常见的节奏是这样，光标在 - 01:06:454 -

[Insane]

1.6*0.75=1.2
1.8*0.6=1.08
所以，
00:08:023 - 00:20:572 - 你这一段的SV比hard还低

00:04:297 (4,5,6,1) - 碰到了，移开点

00:51:552 (3,4,1) - 这个1/4 DS太大了。一般要摆的跟串的间距差不多大

01:01:356 (1) - 这个重音叠在下面，有点不够突出

[Honey]
00:06:846 (4,9) - 不要把折返滑条尾叠在任何东西下面..虽然现在这样还算看得见

good luck!

Pata-Mon

1,489 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

Pata-Mon 2016-01-15T12:13:01+00:00

Lily Bread wrote:
~~先标记，回来再摸~~

[Lily Bread's Easy]
跳过=w=

[Normal]
00:23:317 (5,1,4,5) - 其实没必要刻意去做对称。比如你这些都在一个位置上，玩起来会感觉都在一个地方打转，这样其实就很不好，不过既然已经这样做了那就先这样吧

00:44:101 (4,5,6,7) - Normal里跟1/3而且还有单独的圈应该是不会过的。做成往复滑条应该就没什么问题了好

00:52:533 (2) - 这有点强行对称，而且这种滑条在normal里有点太难读改

[Hard]
00:09:199 (2) - 这个弯一点flow更好好

嗯？我注意到一个很不对的地方，怎么你hard里有些部分的DS比N还小？关于这个问题，似乎在音乐的比较缓的段落，高难度中使用更低的ds也是可以的，主要是希望体现出音乐舒缓的感觉，但是在低难度中不能太大幅度地变化ds。Insane同。如果实在不行将来再大改吧。不过hard里半拍间隔的还是拉开了点，因为碰到确实没必要
00:14:297 (1,2) -你看，Normal里，这个你都没碰到，Hard里反而碰到了。这样很不好。前后一段都有这种问题

00:50:964 (2) - 这个滑条是弱起，而且是在鼓点起，落在人声上。按我的经验来看，这种滑条听起来很违和。拆开就好很多直接不跟那个鼓了，就单点跟后面的人声

01:06:062 (1,2) - 这里常见的节奏是这样，光标在 - 01:06:454 - 唔，先不改。其实那个折返点也跟到了贝斯，虽然声很小

[Insane]

1.6*0.75=1.2
1.8*0.6=1.08
所以，
00:08:023 - 00:20:572 - 你这一段的SV比hard还低

00:04:297 (4,5,6,1) - 碰到了，移开点好

00:51:552 (3,4,1) - 这个1/4 DS太大了。一般要摆的跟串的间距差不多大只有一个的话摆远点也ok吧。因为对称和blanket不太想改

01:01:356 (1) - 这个重音叠在下面，有点不够突出好

[Honey]
00:06:846 (4,9) - 不要把折返滑条尾叠在任何东西下面..虽然现在这样还算看得见嗯……因为看得见所以先这样，要确实不行再改吧

good luck!

谢谢~

ceLy

148 posts

Joined November 2014

ceLy 2016-01-15T16:04:43+00:00

M4M

[General]

看到AiMod有说SB的闪光警告，不懂SB，稍微提下
诶？BG最右边那是个妹子

[Easy]

看起来没什么

[Normal]

00:07:631 (4,1) - 感觉这个blanket有点强行了...个人感觉顺flow拉开更好点..
00:14:297 (1,2) - 这里也是
00:26:846 (1,2) - 这里也是..包的太紧了看起来有点奇怪...
00:26:846 (1,2,3,4,5) - 好挤
00:58:219 (1,3) - 这种不清楚好不好..看看别人怎么说吧

嘛...总的来说就是感觉note有点太挤了...
[Hard]

00:57:042 (1,2,3,4) - 13 24 好像有蹭到，拉开比较好
01:14:493 (2,3) - 这里也有点蹭到
01:15:474 (1,2,3) - 好像有点不太顺？

[Insane]

00:00:180 (1,2,3,4) - 我建议是这里可以小间距稍微拉大... 这个拉的感觉有点太开了...

关灯了..就摸这些吧....

GL~

Pata-Mon

1,489 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

Pata-Mon 2016-01-15T17:15:38+00:00

cHelli wrote:
M4M

[General]
看到AiMod有说SB的闪光警告，不懂SB，稍微提下我想应该没事
诶？BG最右边那是个妹子是的
[Easy]
看起来没什么
[Normal]
00:07:631 (4,1) - 感觉这个blanket有点强行了...个人感觉顺flow拉开更好点.. 好
00:14:297 (1,2) - 这里也是好
00:26:846 (1,2) - 这里也是..包的太紧了看起来有点奇怪... 好
00:26:846 (1,2,3,4,5) - 好挤好
00:58:219 (1,3) - 这种不清楚好不好..看看别人怎么说吧
嘛...总的来说就是感觉note有点太挤了... 看来以后是得注意
[Hard]
00:57:042 (1,2,3,4) - 13 24 好像有蹭到，拉开比较好我看了下……真彻底拉开如果不改排列的话ds要飞了，暂时先这样吧……
01:14:493 (2,3) - 这里也有点蹭到改了
01:15:474 (1,2,3) - 好像有点不太顺？唔，感觉还好，不过稍微调整了一下
[Insane]
00:00:180 (1,2,3,4) - 我建议是这里可以小间距稍微拉大... 这个拉的感觉有点太开了... 这个我慢慢想，反正在开头好改www
关灯了..就摸这些吧....

GL~

谢谢~

Deppyforce

1,981 posts

Joined November 2014

Deppyforce 2016-01-21T09:33:00+00:00

m4m from ur queue

this is my 420th post btw

[General]
i think storyboard should start at 00:45:670

[Lily Bread]
00:36:258 (1,2) - kinda flow bad maybe change (1) to straight slider
00:38:807 - maybe add note

[Normal]
should be cs 3.5

00:00:180 (1,2,3,4) - shouldnt stack these notes
00:03:905 (3,4,5,1) - flows bad, maybe change pattern

fine

[Hard]
00:03:317 - strong; should be clickable
01:14:493 (2,1) - overlap looks weird, try stack (1) on (2)'s tail
01:21:748 (1,2,3) - flow could be better here, try forming a triangle

[Insane]
00:00:180 (1,2,3,4) - should keep ds here
00:01:748 (1,2) - shouldnt stack
00:35:866 (3,4,5) - ^ these are strong you even put clap on these
00:43:121 (2) - point to 00:42:533 (1) would be cleaner
01:00:768 (4,5,6) - this spike doesnt make much sense, theyre not even that strong; this is overmapped
01:26:062 (2,3,4,5,1) - make these straight flows better

[Honey]
00:08:023 to 00:20:572 - this part is way too undermapped, make the jumps bigger

gl

Lily Bread

1,228 posts

Joined December 2014

Lily Bread 2016-01-22T02:05:10+00:00

/*
red = nope.
orange = in consideration.
no comment or pink = fixed.
*/
Lily Bread
00:36:258 (1,2) - kinda flow bad maybe change (1) to straight slider
//not bad imo

00:38:807 - maybe add note
//nope

/*
thanks for mod!
*/

also, added hitsound.

code

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 1820
PreviewTime: 44689
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: None
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:Honey Honey Honey (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:蜜蜜蜜 (TV Size)
Artist:Ayumikurikamaki
ArtistUnicode:あゆみくりかまき
Creator:Pata-Mon
Version:Lily Bread's Easy
Source:パンチライン
Tags:Lily Bread anime ending ed Punch Line ハニーハニーハニー
BeatmapID:878313
BeatmapSetID:403924

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:1
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.9
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Frey

1,205 posts

Joined February 2011

Frey 2016-01-23T14:25:24+00:00

From M4M queue

Lily Bread's Easy

基本没有音效？（我知道最后有一个finish，但是这不能算作加了音效。）如果是故意的，那则是违规的，你必须设置一套完整的并且能经常听到的音效效果。
00:51:944 (1) - 这里也像00:52:729 (2) - 弯曲如何？这样的话00:51:944 (1,2,3,4) - 整体就会更美观一些。
01:00:572 (4) - 这里也是，朝上拱或许会更好看

Normal
00:44:101 (4) - 加NC提醒玩家这里变了节奏？
01:04:493 (1,4) - 这里选择蓝线节奏明显是不合适的。不管是从人声还是乐器这里皆没有相关的音乐来支持你这样的节奏下法。我建议还是直接跟1/2的节奏最为妥当。
01:09:199 (3) - 这里突然变成1/3了，为了给玩家提醒，我建议这里加NC

Hard
01:23:317 (1) - 建议结尾跟Insane或者最高难度一样，做一点什么东西出来，当然不要是连打。

大概来说没什么问题，好运。

Pata-Mon

1,489 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

Pata-Mon 2016-01-24T07:18:31+00:00

Deppyforce wrote:
m4m from ur queue

this is my 420th post btw

[General]
i think storyboard should start at 00:45:670 The hearts need a little time rising to top, so I think it's OK.

[Normal]
should be cs 3.5 Then notes will contact together

00:00:180 (1,2,3,4) - shouldnt stack these notes √
00:03:905 (3,4,5,1) - flows bad, maybe change pattern I think it's ok

fine

[Hard]
00:03:317 - strong; should be clickable √
01:14:493 (2,1) - overlap looks weird, try stack (1) on (2)'s tail √
01:21:748 (1,2,3) - flow could be better here, try forming a triangle make a change

[Insane]
00:00:180 (1,2,3,4) - should keep ds here make a change
00:01:748 (1,2) - shouldnt stack I think it's ok
00:35:866 (3,4,5) - ^ these are strong you even put clap on these ^
00:43:121 (2) - point to 00:42:533 (1) would be cleaner ^
01:00:768 (4,5,6) - this spike doesnt make much sense, theyre not even that strong; this is overmapped make a change
01:26:062 (2,3,4,5,1) - make these straight flows better √

[Honey]
00:08:023 to 00:20:572 - this part is way too undermapped, make the jumps bigger I think it's ok

gl

Frey wrote:
From M4M queue

Lily Bread's Easy
基本没有音效？（我知道最后有一个finish，但是这不能算作加了音效。）如果是故意的，那则是违规的，你必须设置一套完整的并且能经常听到的音效效果。话说这个难度我我这儿的图有音效啊……是什么情况？

Normal
00:44:101 (4) - 加NC提醒玩家这里变了节奏？好
01:04:493 (1,4) - 这里选择蓝线节奏明显是不合适的。不管是从人声还是乐器这里皆没有相关的音乐来支持你这样的节奏下法。我建议还是直接跟1/2的节奏最为妥当。 噫，其实有贝斯的声音。不过确实有点不清楚，我再考虑一下吧
01:09:199 (3) - 这里突然变成1/3了，为了给玩家提醒，我建议这里加NC 好

Hard
01:23:317 (1) - 建议结尾跟Insane或者最高难度一样，做一点什么东西出来，当然不要是连打。感觉转盘之后的东西蛮坑的才没加……嘛总之先放俩折返滑条吧

大概来说没什么问题，好运。

Thanks~

Lily Bread

1,228 posts

Joined December 2014

Lily Bread 2016-01-24T13:53:02+00:00

Frey wrote:
From M4M queue

[notice][list]
Lily Bread's Easy
[*]基本没有音效？（我知道最后有一个finish，但是这不能算作加了音效。）如果是故意的，那则是违规的，你必须设置一套完整的并且能经常听到的音效效果。
[*]00:51:944 (1) - 这里也像00:52:729 (2) - 弯曲如何？这样的话00:51:944 (1,2,3,4) - 整体就会更美观一些。
//00:51:944 (1,2,3,4) - 这几个是一对

[*]01:00:572 (4) - 这里也是，朝上拱或许会更好看
//这里..特别是easy里做对称还要兼顾前后的DS，这种不是很必要的地方我就不改了..改这点我至少得改5分钟吧

其实我本来想让patamon帮我copy一下音效..不过他好像忘了，所以后来我自己加了一下..可能是因为没提交所以没音效吧？

Last edited by Lily Bread 2016-01-25T14:50:04+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Pata-Mon

1,489 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

Pata-Mon 2016-01-24T15:54:46+00:00

Lily Bread wrote:
Frey wrote:
From M4M queue

[notice][list]
Lily Bread's Easy
[*]基本没有音效？（我知道最后有一个finish，但是这不能算作加了音效。）如果是故意的，那则是违规的，你必须设置一套完整的并且能经常听到的音效效果。
[*]00:51:944 (1) - 这里也像00:52:729 (2) - 弯曲如何？这样的话00:51:944 (1,2,3,4) - 整体就会更美观一些。
[*]01:00:572 (4) - 这里也是，朝上拱或许会更好看

其实我本来想让patamon帮我copy一下音效..不过他好像忘了，所以后来我自己加了一下..可能是因为没提交所以没音效吧？

总之这很奇怪……我记得我把谱子传上去的时候已经加了音效啊T_T反正现在的图似乎应该是有音效的吧，有就没问题了

Mijii

106 posts

Joined July 2015

Mijii 2016-06-03T18:39:22+00:00

Can I make a Begginer diff for this map?

Pata-Mon

1,489 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

Pata-Mon 2016-06-03T18:45:14+00:00

Mijii wrote:
Can I make a Begginer diff for this map?

sry, I think this mapset needn't have a Begginer diff

ZZHBOY

1,649 posts

Joined April 2012

ZZHBOY 2016-06-04T11:54:26+00:00

服务器拒绝了您发送离线文件“Ayumikurikamaki - Honey Honey Honey (TV size ver.) (Pata-Mon) zzhard.osu”的请求。

osu file format v14

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Misure

952 posts

Joined September 2012

Misure 2016-06-04T15:29:12+00:00

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Tags:Lily Bread Misure ZZHBOY anime ending ED Punch Line ハニーハニーハニー size
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Pata-Mon

1,489 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

Pata-Mon 2016-06-04T16:29:16+00:00

remap - done
all updated
let's go again!

Gust

Beatmap Nominator

522 posts

Joined December 2011

Gust 2016-06-04T17:14:19+00:00

no mo no play

[Honey]
00:19:591 (4,5,6) - 我更倾向于位置ctrl+g，然后和00:18:807 (3,4,1) - 叠以达到更坑的效果
00:19:983 (7,8,9,1,2) - 打起来怪怪的。。不知道是不是和7-8与1-2 DS的迷之变化有关
00:27:238 (3,4) - 感觉节奏ctrl+g更好一些
00:30:964 (4,5) - 同
00:47:827 (3,4) - 我觉得位置ctrl+g打起来更顺手点..也合你这个00:48:023 (4,6,1) - 的梗

[ZZHard]
00:19:787 (5) - 红线那么重的音怎么就一个1/1slider带过了。。

低难度没问题，液

Pata-Mon

1,489 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

Pata-Mon 2016-06-04T17:22:28+00:00

Frost Moon wrote:
no mo no play jiu shi yao mo

[Honey]
00:19:591 (4,5,6) - 我更倾向于位置ctrl+g，然后和00:18:807 (3,4,1) - 叠以达到更坑的效果 hmm 坑人不是目的
00:19:983 (7,8,9,1,2) - 打起来怪怪的。。不知道是不是和7-8与1-2 DS的迷之变化有关感觉还好。感觉怪或许还是因为读图不算特别简单？
00:27:238 (3,4) - 感觉节奏ctrl+g更好一些突出人声
00:30:964 (4,5) - 同
00:47:827 (3,4) - 我觉得位置ctrl+g打起来更顺手点..也合你这个00:48:023 (4,6,1) - 的梗我觉得保持更好

[ZZHard]
00:19:787 (5) - 红线那么重的音怎么就一个1/1slider带过了。。改

低难度没问题，液

谢摸~

Hanazawa Kana

727 posts

Joined February 2013

Hanazawa Kana 2016-06-05T03:17:50+00:00

怎么感觉这音质有点糊呢.

[Honey]
00:03:317 - 尽量让这里clickable,所以这个滑条00:02:925 (3) - 可以和00:06:062 (3) - 这个一样处理然后后面我说的那个地方加个note
00:09:199 (2) - 感觉flow不是太好,我建议这个滑条改成向下滑
然后我觉得这部分你可以note跟鼓滑条跟那个bass还是吉他啥的自创节奏可能打起来难受一些这个你看着改我只是提一下
00:22:336 (2,3,4,5) - 这个flow感觉有点难受考虑把4的尾巴向左歪点大概是这样
00:30:964 (4,5,1,2,3) - 讲道理这里flow不太好 12 ctrl+g我感觉会好一点
kiai没什么可挑的
01:16:846 (6,7,1) - 放平一点吧

[ZZHard]
~~真的是全程ds 是在下输了~~
00:05:670 (3) - 感觉这个不是很必要吧我听了几遍都没听出来声音和前后一样的1/1滑条可能会好一点
没什么问题

[Misure's Normal]
米苏高德
00:19:003 - 这里别空了吧前面那么轻的音都跟了这么重的鼓点没必要空啊

easy实在摸不出什么

pata god!
GL

Misure

952 posts

Joined September 2012

Misure 2016-06-05T05:03:49+00:00

Hanazawa Kana wrote:
怎么感觉这音质有点糊呢.

[Misure's Normal]
米苏高德 卡娜高德
00:19:003 - 这里别空了吧前面那么轻的音都跟了这么重的鼓点没必要空啊 啊这里是想跟vocal做个停顿的感觉感觉上应该没啥问题OwO

pata god!
GL

Thanks for your modding!

KaedekaShizuru

625 posts

Joined January 2013

KaedekaShizuru 2016-06-05T09:39:41+00:00

服务器也拒绝了你的水摸请求

[Honey]
00:35:866 (3,4,5) - 个人认为没必要三连一个短折返即可
真没啥可说的

[纸张Hard]
00:07:238 (5) - 你这样反而比连打难读
01:19:788 (4,5,6,1) - 强迫症
01:21:748 (1,2,3,4) - 感觉会很难读

Momizi

275 posts

Joined June 2013

Momizi 2016-06-05T10:55:28+00:00

简单的还债咯
[General]
BG露胖次了，算是性暗示吧..可能会被干死
文件里用的是soft-slideslide,你用的却是drum custom，那个就等于没用了，改个名字
[Honey]
00:04:885 (1,2,3) - 这三个和前面的00:01:748 (1,2,3) - 是一样的吧，为什么这里就用短滑条了，我觉得还是和前面一样弄120度旋转的长滑条看着比较好
00:10:180 (4,5,1) - 距离突然变大的感觉有，我感觉柔和段，而且你的SV已经调到了0.6那么低，1分拍以外的note（1/2那些）还是DS比较好
00:18:807 (3,4,1,4,5,6) - 怎么说呢，这种直线的连打的flow 总给我感觉怪怪的，不是很好的样子，而且 00:19:199 (2,3) - ctrl+G 的话flow会更加好
00:20:376 (8,9,1) - 比如这个，我感觉向左边就会好点，因为接下来往那个方向走了
00:29:003 (4) - 滑条更加平一点，合一下3过来的flow https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5319378
00:34:689 (1) - 复制00:33:905 (3) - 来旋转过来，这个看着就不是一样的slider，虽然我不知道你这里想体现怎么样的。。
01:16:846 (6,7) - 这个连打横着比较好，从左往右（不一定要完全水平
01:19:395 (4) - 这个箭头你小心点吧。。打完后的300那些东西在这里箭头出现的时候还没完全消失可能要死
看着还行，就是这些直线的三连，是比较老的风格了
[智障蛤的]
00:05:474 (2,3) - 合成一个滑条吧，拆开听着不好，和前面一样用长滑条吧00:02:336 (2) -
00:07:042 (3,4,5) - hard要不要stack啊，这样子会不会有点难
01:25:670 (2,3) - 不是很喜欢，换成直线就对到口味了，不过这东西看个人喜好
AR8会不会太高了，对noraml的5而言跳的有点快。不错，没什么好说的
[Normal]
00:07:238 (3,4) - 这里用一个1/1滑条吧
00:34:689 (5) - 折返点去掉clap，听着有点怪怪的

easy过一遍没什么好说的也
GL

JJburstOwO

183 posts

Joined July 2012

JJburstOwO 2016-06-05T12:34:41+00:00

[Honey]
00:02:925 (3) - 这个尾部最好是个note，不然00:03:611 (1,2) - 不容易读
00:19:199 (2,3) - Ctrl+G
00:25:278 (1,3,5) - 这三个角度应该渐变吧
00:29:003 (4) - 这是全图唯一的短滑条吧，感觉挺突兀的换连打比较好
00:37:827 (1) - 其实我觉得这种折叠不在正中挺不好看的
00:39:984 (5) - ^
挺好的，就是直线连打的梗不太喜欢

[zzb]
00:07:238 (5) - 你就不能放连打吗我不会打这种所以我要喷你..
00:51:846 - 漏了个
00:58:121 - 漏了个
01:19:788 (4,5,6,1) - 包好
01:22:271 (2,3,4) - 统统NC
全程贪吃蛇

简单难度不看啦，摸水了一点

goodluck

Pata-Mon

1,489 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

Pata-Mon 2016-06-05T15:20:59+00:00

@gders
音效组从D1改成D了，因为并没用到自定义音效，最好先更新一下

@misure
然而你的难度开头用到了，另外把我上次说的空白音效改成d组的

@Momizi
其实有用到，之前normal开头我是左上角点成了s组。但是后来想到好像其他地方根本没用到自定义音效，所以不用那么麻烦。那以外的部分滑条没必要静音了

Pata-Mon

1,489 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

Pata-Mon 2016-06-05T15:28:12+00:00

@gders

我纸张，我强迫症，我把mp3文件名改了，你们可以自己改成audio或者重新下载

Pata-Mon

1,489 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

Pata-Mon 2016-06-05T15:46:27+00:00

Hanazawa Kana wrote:
怎么感觉这音质有点糊呢.

[Honey]
00:03:317 - 尽量让这里clickable,所以这个滑条00:02:925 (3) - 可以和00:06:062 (3) - 这个一样处理然后后面我说的那个地方加个note 前面拆成俩note了
00:09:199 (2) - 感觉flow不是太好,我建议这个滑条改成向下滑慢速段我更在意别的事情，flow怎样其实都很简单……
然后我觉得这部分你可以note跟鼓滑条跟那个bass还是吉他啥的自创节奏可能打起来难受一些这个你看着改我只是提一下唔，我觉得我没自创节奏，是在跟vocal啊……
00:22:336 (2,3,4,5) - 这个flow感觉有点难受考虑把4的尾巴向左歪点大概是感觉还好这样
00:30:964 (4,5,1,2,3) - 讲道理这里flow不太好 12 ctrl+g我感觉会好一点 ok
kiai没什么可挑的
01:16:846 (6,7,1) - 放平一点吧好

[ZZHard]
~~真的是全程ds 是在下输了~~
00:05:670 (3) - 感觉这个不是很必要吧我听了几遍都没听出来声音和前后一样的1/1滑条可能会好一点改
没什么问题

pata god!
GL

KaedekaShizuru wrote:
[Honey]
00:35:866 (3,4,5) - 个人认为没必要三连一个短折返即可感觉没差……keep
真没啥可说的

[纸张Hard]
00:07:238 (5) - 你这样反而比连打难读改
01:19:788 (4,5,6,1) - 强迫症改
01:21:748 (1,2,3,4) - 感觉会很难读之前有过两次1/3节奏了，这里第三次，感觉应该没问题了

Momizi wrote:
简单的还债咯
[General]
BG露胖次了，算是性暗示吧..可能会被干死鬼知道……等bn和qat ~~要是这都能被搞出事那那帮人就太tm闲的蛋疼了~~
文件里用的是soft-slideslide,你用的却是drum custom，那个就等于没用了，改个名字
[Honey]
00:04:885 (1,2,3) - 这三个和前面的00:01:748 (1,2,3) - 是一样的吧，为什么这里就用短滑条了，我觉得还是和前面一样弄120度旋转的长滑条看着比较好改了前面
00:10:180 (4,5,1) - 距离突然变大的感觉有，我感觉柔和段，而且你的SV已经调到了0.6那么低，1分拍以外的note（1/2那些）还是DS比较好这里视觉ds是有的
00:18:807 (3,4,1,4,5,6) - 怎么说呢，这种直线的连打的flow 总给我感觉怪怪的，不是很好的样子，而且 00:19:199 (2,3) - ctrl+G 的话flow会更加好整图都这style ctrl+G改了
00:20:376 (8,9,1) - 比如这个，我感觉向左边就会好点，因为接下来往那个方向走了感觉不用
00:29:003 (4) - 滑条更加平一点，合一下3过来的flow 我要包 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5319378
00:34:689 (1) - 复制00:33:905 (3) - 来旋转过来，这个看着就不是一样的slider，虽然我不知道你这里想体现怎么样的。。确实不是一个，没想要一个，就这样吧
01:16:846 (6,7) - 这个连打横着比较好，从左往右（不一定要完全水平改
01:19:395 (4) - 这个箭头你小心点吧。。打完后的300那些东西在这里箭头出现的时候还没完全消失可能要死 唔，这里应该没挡……你是不是看反了
看着还行，就是这些直线的三连，是比较老的风格了
[智障蛤的]
00:05:474 (2,3) - 合成一个滑条吧，拆开听着不好，和前面一样用长滑条吧00:02:336 (2) - 改
00:07:042 (3,4,5) - hard要不要stack啊，这样子会不会有点难改多次折返
01:25:670 (2,3) - 不是很喜欢，换成直线就对到口味了，不过这东西看个人喜好无所谓的事情他既然这么放就不动了
AR8会不会太高了，对noraml的5而言跳的有点快。不错，没什么好说的改
GL

JJburstOwO wrote:
[Honey]
00:02:925 (3) - 这个尾部最好是个note，不然00:03:611 (1,2) - 不容易读改
00:19:199 (2,3) - Ctrl+G 改
00:25:278 (1,3,5) - 这三个角度应该渐变吧不用
00:29:003 (4) - 这是全图唯一的短滑条吧，感觉挺突兀的换连打比较好感觉挺合曲的，而且不难打
00:37:827 (1) - 其实我觉得这种折叠不在正中挺不好看的我觉得还好
00:39:984 (5) - ^
挺好的，就是直线连打的梗不太喜欢因为这图的遮挡全都是每组一直线而且ds跟连打一样，那连打也应该是直线

[zzb]
00:07:238 (5) - 你就不能放连打吗我不会打这种所以我要喷你.. 感觉5连在hard还是偏难啊，我会觉得折返更好打
00:51:846 - 漏了个这种hard里可跟可不跟的他没跟就不改了
00:58:121 - 漏了个
01:19:788 (4,5,6,1) - 包好好
01:22:271 (2,3,4) - 统统NC 因为前面有两次1/3了，感觉这里就不用了
全程贪吃蛇

简单难度不看啦，摸水了一点
goodluck

谢谢各位~

Last edited by Pata-Mon 2016-06-06T06:50:24+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

moonlightleaf

2,157 posts

Joined September 2011

moonlightleaf 2016-06-06T06:12:29+00:00

M4M

[Easy]

HP2 ,没啥,挑刺↓

00:50:376 (3,4) - 这个3好像没和其他对称,那么请blanket

01:18:611 (2,3) - ^

[米修儿]

00:00:180 (1) - 我觉得避免overlap 可以移动到(124,240)

00:03:317 (2) - F5我血条比较细,碰不到,试试ctrl+j 放(254,23)

00:41:552 (5,6,7) - 这一串太长了FL很累的,试试缓和下

SPOILER

01:06:062 (4,5) - ^

SPOILER

[zz波]
00:07:042 (3) - 不建议折5次,换换

SPOILER

00:19:199 (5) - 重音被你滑条尾吃了

00:21:748 (4,1,2) - 不喜欢这样的flow,试试

SPOILER

01:08:023 (2,3,4) - 3号蓝线部分是没音的,试试节奏这样

SPOILER

01:19:886 (5) - 删

01:21:748 (1,2,3,4) - 我觉得还是用1/4跟人声比较友好,现在这个,特别是4很奇怪

[Honey]

00:07:532 - 其实你这里漏了个,插根0.75x绿线这样 ,像00:33:023 (12)就加了

SPOILER

[General]

sb 整体平移量: 1961ms , 下载页面 creator's word 最好是写被允许使用sb-code就可以了,你现在这句很容易误导,然后别人让你加我ID...麻烦

比如 SB (copied from Mei Ayakura - Puzzle Maker) used-allowed by moonlightleaf 这样

Pata-Mon

1,489 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

Pata-Mon 2016-06-06T06:33:27+00:00

moonlightleaf wrote:
M4M

[zz波]
00:07:042 (3) - 不建议折5次,换换好
SPOILER

00:19:199 (5) - 重音被你滑条尾吃了 hard吃一点就吃一点吧，毕竟滑条头也是重音感觉就没问题了

00:21:748 (4,1,2) - 不喜欢这样的flow,试试节奏保留，flow改了
SPOILER

01:08:023 (2,3,4) - 3号蓝线部分是没音的,试试节奏这样感觉之前那样挺顺手，overmap就over吧
SPOILER

01:19:886 (5) - 删好

01:21:748 (1,2,3,4) - 我觉得还是用1/4跟人声比较友好,现在这个,特别是4很奇怪前几个人声其实也是1/3来着

[Honey]

00:07:532 - 其实你这里漏了个,插根0.75x绿线这样 ,像00:33:023 (12)就加了后面那里没绿线啊……这里我觉得可以不着急变sv，到下小节再变没问题
SPOILER

[General]

sb 整体平移量: 1961ms , 下载页面 creator's word 最好是写被允许使用sb-code就可以了,你现在这句很容易误导,然后别人让你加我ID...麻烦

比如 SB (copied from Mei Ayakura - Puzzle Maker) used by moonlightleaf 这样好。不过那个offset的话不改，因为副歌开始的时候我希望最早出现的心已经升到上面了

谢摸~

Misure

952 posts

Joined September 2012

Misure 2016-06-06T16:44:45+00:00

Momizi wrote:
简单的还债咯
[General]
BG露胖次了，算是性暗示吧..可能会被干死 心诚则灵
[Normal]
00:07:238 (3,4) - 这里用一个1/1滑条吧 前面一个折返这里用1/1可能没啥打击感就过渡了不了
00:34:689 (5) - 折返点去掉clap，听着有点怪怪的 嗯其实是跟人声的锅..改了一下节奏

GL

moonlightleaf wrote:
M4M

[米修儿]

00:00:180 (1) - 我觉得避免overlap 可以移动到(124,240) 感觉开头这里overlap一下也没啥问题？唔

00:03:317 (2) - F5我血条比较细,碰不到,试试ctrl+j 放(254,23) 其实感觉差不多...嗯改了

00:41:552 (5,6,7) - 这一串太长了FL很累的,试试缓和下
SPOILER

01:06:062 (4,5) - ^
SPOILER

这两组的话前面那组感觉鼓点比较重又是kiai前面就稍微难一些吧(以后可能考虑改) 后面改了√

Thanks for your modding!

顺便改了一点点细节和kiai开始处附近的排列

Codesu

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1820
PreviewTime: 44689
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: None
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.5

[Metadata]
Title:Honey Honey Honey (TV size ver.)
TitleUnicode:蜜蜜蜜 (TV size ver.)
Artist:Ayumikurikamaki
ArtistUnicode:あゆみくりかまき
Creator:Pata-Mon
Version:Misure's Normal
Source:パンチライン
Tags:Lily Bread Misure ZZHBOY anime ending ED Punch Line ハニーハニーハニー size
BeatmapID:993534
BeatmapSetID:403924

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3.2
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
Video,-425,"video.flv"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
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1748,-100,4,3,0,50,0,0
8023,-100,4,3,0,40,0,0
19003,-100,4,3,0,45,0,0
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70572,-100,4,3,0,50,0,0
70768,-100,4,3,0,55,0,1
83317,-100,4,3,0,50,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,128,0
Combo2 : 255,0,0
Combo3 : 255,128,0
Combo4 : 255,215,0

[HitObjects]
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Lily Bread

1,228 posts

Joined December 2014

Lily Bread 2016-06-08T13:48:18+00:00

lazy to reply anything related to blanket.
no change.

Pata-Mon

1,489 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

Pata-Mon 2016-06-08T13:59:29+00:00

Lily Bread wrote:
lazy to reply anything related to blanket.
no change.

莉莉懒懒的样子也好可爱我要揉揉揉揉揉

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,631 posts

Joined December 2011

yf_bmp 2016-06-09T04:00:59+00:00

BG目测不行没必要冒这个险

[Honey]
00:08:023 (1,2,3) - 不是很懂这里的摆放依据，挤成一团
00:26:454 (5) - 我是认为这里应该放开，而不是与前面的滑条相叠，如00:23:317 (6) -
00:43:317 (2) - 换个形状？单独的一个出现没前后照应真的不怎么样
00:55:082 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - kiai基本上都长一个样..这里做点不同的梗以示区别？

[ZZHard]
00:46:454 (3,4,5,1) - 很微妙的间距差异

[Lily Bread's Easy]
00:32:729 (3,1) - 略微没包好

Pata-Mon

1,489 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

Pata-Mon 2016-06-09T11:53:28+00:00

yf_bmp wrote:
BG目测不行没必要冒这个险处理了

[Honey]
00:08:023 (1,2,3) - 不是很懂这里的摆放依据，挤成一团唔，感觉如果不是ez的话并不会有挤在一起的感觉啊0.0
00:26:454 (5) - 我是认为这里应该放开，而不是与前面的滑条相叠，如00:23:317 (6) - 把前面的滑条位置改了
00:43:317 (2) - 换个形状？单独的一个出现没前后照应真的不怎么样没有太好的想法，感觉这个形状并不比单锚点滑条难看，保留吧
00:55:082 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - kiai基本上都长一个样..这里做点不同的梗以示区别？ tv size这么短，kiai更短，感觉一个梗到底也没什么问题，而且这里前后是同样位置相反走一遍，其他地方也没有这样的了

[ZZHard]
00:46:454 (3,4,5,1) - 很微妙的间距差异调整了一下

谢摸~

Lily Bread

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Joined December 2014

Lily Bread 2016-06-09T11:54:07+00:00

Lily Bread wrote:
lazy to reply anything related to blanket.
no change.

Mafumafu

Nomination Assessment Team

3,372 posts

Joined August 2013

Mafumafu 2016-08-05T01:20:48+00:00

Mark
Check later.

Mafumafu

Nomination Assessment Team

3,372 posts

Joined August 2013

Mafumafu 2016-08-08T05:27:21+00:00

[Lily Bread's Easy]
整体上：非Kiai部分节奏有点乱
00:32:729 (3,1) - Blanket

[Misure's Normal]
01:25:670 (1,2) - Normal不要搞这种重叠的
整体上：
非Kiai部分不要vocal和乐器都跟，建议只跟vocal
1/3最好不要用

[ZZhard]
00:06:552 (1) - 不要搞这种节奏，前面的滑条尾巴应该Clickable
00:32:631 (6) - 同理，不要用滑条尾巴做1/4节奏的起点
01:21:748 (1,2,3,4) - 最好不要1/3单独拿来做note，尤其是穿插着滑条，player不知所措
最后一个note NC下和Insane统一比较好

[Insane]
0.6x有点太慢了不过还好
00:44:886 (2) - Insane就没必要1/3了吧，还是1/2跟vocal更好，还可以放跳
~~3/4滑条们~~反正就是Kiai里那几个感觉有点不好，1/2保险一点

Pata-Mon

1,489 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

Pata-Mon 2016-08-08T13:36:43+00:00

Regraz wrote:
[ZZhard]
00:06:552 (1) - 不要搞这种节奏，前面的滑条尾巴应该Clickable
00:32:631 (6) - 同理，不要用滑条尾巴做1/4节奏的起点
01:21:748 (1,2,3,4) - 最好不要1/3单独拿来做note，尤其是穿插着滑条，player不知所措
最后一个note NC下和Insane统一比较好
都改了

[Insane]
0.6x有点太慢了不过还好嗯，这段和其他部分区别明显，连鼓点都完全没有，我认为0.6是能够接受的；而且后面还有一段0.7我觉得挺合适，那么这段应该要比0.7更慢一点才对
00:44:886 (2) - Insane就没必要1/3了吧，还是1/2跟vocal更好，还可以放跳这里对我来说，伴奏里的1/3远远比人声明显很多，而且先出伴奏后出人声，这几个地方跟人声对我来说会非常奇怪，所以保留
~~3/4滑条们~~反正就是Kiai里那几个感觉有点不好，1/2保险一点 kiai部分的3/4是这样，有大量的3/4滑条尾的位置是原曲中有声的，就拿kiai的第一段来说，只有00:45:670 (1) - 00:56:650 (1) - 这两个3/4滑条结尾是原曲没有声的，其他的都有还算清楚的贝斯声，于此同时，1/2的位置上是没有声音的。对于原曲有声音的地方，3/4显然是更为合适的，而没有声音的地方（占少数），为了一致性，用3/4滑条也应该是没有问题的，所以保持

谢摸~

Misure

952 posts

Joined September 2012

Misure 2016-08-09T11:47:57+00:00

重叠改了
节奏有点头疼...暂时是把安静的那部分改成跟vocal了还不行的话就re一下
1/3修了第一个kiai前面那个后面两个鼓和vocal都是1/3改1/2感觉别扭orz
先这样不行我就re掉
谢谢瓜子的摸！

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...diff名忘改了抱歉

sahuang

2,294 posts

Joined December 2014

sahuang 2016-08-12T06:20:29+00:00

怕她神天天fly map羡慕

Lily Bread

1,228 posts

Joined December 2014

Lily Bread 2016-08-14T15:43:04+00:00

这...基本是1/1塞满，不乱呀...

Rizia

3,114 posts

Joined January 2012

Rizia 2016-09-18T09:54:45+00:00

圖現在看上去沒太大問題主要想提出一下關於音效的一些意見

honey
drum的音效整體較無聊不太能突出這歌特別是副歌段用soft/normal和default whistle的配搭的話會好更多 (kiai裡可以把所以drum clap換成normal的hitnormal)
很多重音的地方用soft finish會比drum finish好
kiai的音量可以提高現在比較低
例如00:44:101 (1,2) - 這裡用normal音效會更有感覺

有東西想問的話可以找我(QQ/ingame都行)

Pata-Mon

1,489 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

Pata-Mon 2016-09-18T15:13:02+00:00

ok整个音效都改了不少，谢谢柚子

[Easy]
00:14:297 (1,2,3,4) - 这整段你主要都跟的人声，而且因为没啥鼓点背景音乐也不突出，我也觉得跟人声好，所以这里最好也跟人声。试一下这个节奏：

SPOILER

等Lily先看一下这个~

Lily Bread

1,228 posts

Joined December 2014

Lily Bread 2016-09-19T11:13:53+00:00

Pata-Mon wrote:
ok整个音效都改了不少，谢谢柚子

[Easy]
00:14:297 (1,2,3,4) - 这整段你主要都跟的人声，而且因为没啥鼓点背景音乐也不突出，我也觉得跟人声好，所以这里最好也跟人声。试一下这个节奏：
SPOILER

等Lily先看一下这个~

工作量有点大，如果一定要帮我改的话就用这个节奏吧
http://puu.sh/rgtDC/f41e2981f3.jpg
做完再去调对称太麻烦了...

Pata-Mon

1,489 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

Pata-Mon 2016-09-19T12:52:08+00:00

k updated

Pentori

1,157 posts

Joined November 2015

Pentori 2016-09-19T14:07:25+00:00

Rizia wrote:
圖現在看上去沒太大問題主要想提出一下關於音效的一些意見

honey
drum的音效整體較無聊不太能突出這歌特別是副歌段用soft/normal和default whistle的配搭的話會好更多 (kiai裡可以把所以drum clap換成normal的hitnormal)
很多重音的地方用soft finish會比drum finish好
kiai的音量可以提高現在比較低
例如00:44:101 (1,2) - 這裡用normal音效會更有感覺

有東西想問的話可以找我(QQ/ingame都行)

can someone translate for me? ;w;

[General]
you don't need "size" in tags because title already has tv size
also when you update this can you move it to the pending section instead of WIP/Help
why not have the volume increase at kiai? since you have 80% at 00:44:101 - it makes it sound really loud and the transition to kiai isn't really noticeable

[Lily Bread's Easy]
00:55:082 (1) - not to sure about this slider because the claps are ignored for a less important beat on 00:55:670 - this slider here 00:56:650 (2) - has a clap on 00:57:239 - so it works well. maybe try a rhythm like http://puu.sh/rgzJh/76e894a4ef.jpg to include the clap and kick
01:23:317 - 01:23:709 (1,2) - seem to be missing hitsounds. u should hitsound similar to 00:20:572 (1,2)

[Misure's Normal]
00:15:866 (4,5) - distance error
00:39:395 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - quite a long rhythm chain, i'd make 00:40:572 (3) - into just a circle because the beat on 00:40:768 - isn't really important

[ZZH's Hard]
01:04:101 (4,5,6,1) - with stacking enabled this looks closer than usual, perhaps you could make it the same distance visually

[Honey]
01:22:533 (2) - could u move this up a little so it doesnt overlap score hit meter

poke me if you need an icon

Lily Bread

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Joined December 2014

Lily Bread 2016-09-19T14:38:39+00:00

[Lily Bread's Easy]
00:55:082 (1) - not to sure about this slider because the claps are ignored for a less important beat on 00:55:670 - this slider here 00:56:650 (2) - has a clap on 00:57:239 - so it works well. maybe try a rhythm like http://puu.sh/rgzJh/76e894a4ef.jpg to include the clap and kick
//there are many claps in music, and some of them are 1/2 gap, i can't map it in easy diff, so i choose to map vocal.

01:23:317 - 01:23:709 (1,2) - seem to be missing hitsounds. u should hitsound similar to 00:20:572 (1,2)
//uh, will let pata-mon to add hitsound

//thanks.

Misure

952 posts

Joined September 2012

Misure 2016-09-19T15:14:00+00:00

ok all fixed, thanks a lot!
besides I straightened 00:19:787 (3) - and curved 00:47:238 (4) - 01:00:572 (5,6) - 01:16:650 (6) - and 01:17:827 (2) - , and add a finish hs on 00:32:140 - ,which will be better imo

Codesu

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OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
Video,-425,"video.flv"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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btw, I'll reply your mods on my map in several days cautz a GDer is really busy irl

Pata-Mon

1,489 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

Pata-Mon 2016-09-19T15:25:11+00:00

Pentori wrote:
Rizia wrote:
圖現在看上去沒太大問題主要想提出一下關於音效的一些意見

honey
drum的音效整體較無聊不太能突出這歌特別是副歌段用soft/normal和default whistle的配搭的話會好更多 (kiai裡可以把所以drum clap換成normal的hitnormal)
很多重音的地方用soft finish會比drum finish好
kiai的音量可以提高現在比較低
例如00:44:101 (1,2) - 這裡用normal音效會更有感覺

有東西想問的話可以找我(QQ/ingame都行)
can someone translate for me? ;w; he said there are few issue in this map, so he just gave me some suggestion about hitsound.

[General]
you don't need "size" in tags because title already has tv size yeah, i think i forgot to delete it when i changed title
also when you update this can you move it to the pending section instead of WIP/Help sure
why not have the volume increase at kiai? since you have 80% at 00:44:101 - it makes it sound really loud and the transition to kiai isn't really noticeable change 00:44:101 - to 70%

[Lily Bread's Easy]
01:23:317 - 01:23:709 (1,2) - seem to be missing hitsounds. u should hitsound similar to 00:20:572 (1,2) k

[ZZH's Hard]
01:04:101 (4,5,6,1) - with stacking enabled this looks closer than usual, perhaps you could make it the same distance visually k

[Honey]
01:22:533 (2) - could u move this up a little so it doesnt overlap score hit meter k

poke me if you need an icon