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AYUMIKURIKAMAKI - Honey Honey Honey(TV size)

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Pata-Mon
1,489 posts
Joined March 2015
Topic Starter
Pata-Mon
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年9月27日 at 0:45:05

Artist: AYUMIKURIKAMAKI
Title: Honey Honey Honey(TV size)
Source: パンチライン
Tags: Lily Bread Misure ZZHBOY anime ending ED Punch Line ハニーハニーハニー
BPM: 153
Filesize: 15586kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Honey (4.15 stars, 297 notes)
  2. Lily Bread's Easy (1.33 stars, 88 notes)
  3. Misure's Normal (1.88 stars, 147 notes)
  4. ZZH's Hard (3.13 stars, 234 notes)
Download: AYUMIKURIKAMAKI - Honey Honey Honey(TV size)
Download: AYUMIKURIKAMAKI - Honey Honey Honey(TV size) (no video)
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あゆみくりかまき - 蜜蜜蜜(TV size)
（パンチライン）

GD Information
Lily Bread's Easy：Lily Bread
Misure's Normal：Misure
ZZH's Hard：ZZHBOY

SB Information
Storyboard is copied from Mei Ayakura - Puzzle Maker (moonlightleaf) with permission.
Last edited by Pata-Mon , edited 69 times in total.
Lily Bread
1,228 posts
Joined December 2014
Lily Bread
先标记，回来再摸

[Lily Bread's Easy]
跳过=w=

[Normal]
00:23:317 (5,1,4,5) - 其实没必要刻意去做对称。比如你这些都在一个位置上，玩起来会感觉都在一个地方打转，这样其实就很不好，不过既然已经这样做了那就先这样吧

00:44:101 (4,5,6,7) - Normal里跟1/3而且还有单独的圈应该是不会过的。做成往复滑条应该就没什么问题了

00:52:533 (2) - 这有点强行对称，而且这种滑条在normal里有点太难读

[Hard]
00:09:199 (2) - 这个弯一点flow更好

嗯？我注意到一个很不对的地方，怎么你hard里有些部分的DS比N还小？
00:14:297 (1,2) -你看，Normal里， 这个你都没碰到，Hard里反而碰到了。这样很不好。前后一段都有这种问题

00:50:964 (2) - 这个滑条是弱起，而且是在鼓点起，落在人声上。按我的经验来看，这种滑条听起来很违和。拆开就好很多

01:06:062 (1,2) - 这里常见的节奏是这样 ，光标在 - 01:06:454 -

[Insane]

1.6*0.75=1.2
1.8*0.6=1.08
所以，
00:08:023 - 00:20:572 - 你这一段的SV比hard还低


00:04:297 (4,5,6,1) - 碰到了，移开点

00:51:552 (3,4,1) - 这个1/4 DS太大了。一般要摆的跟串的间距差不多大

01:01:356 (1) - 这个重音叠在下面，有点不够突出

[Honey]
00:06:846 (4,9) - 不要把折返滑条尾叠在任何东西下面..虽然现在这样还算看得见

good luck!
Pata-Mon
1,489 posts
Joined March 2015
Topic Starter
Pata-Mon

Lily Bread wrote:

先标记，回来再摸

[Lily Bread's Easy]
跳过=w=

[Normal]
00:23:317 (5,1,4,5) - 其实没必要刻意去做对称。比如你这些都在一个位置上，玩起来会感觉都在一个地方打转，这样其实就很不好，不过既然已经这样做了那就先这样吧

00:44:101 (4,5,6,7) - Normal里跟1/3而且还有单独的圈应该是不会过的。做成往复滑条应该就没什么问题了 好

00:52:533 (2) - 这有点强行对称，而且这种滑条在normal里有点太难读 改

[Hard]
00:09:199 (2) - 这个弯一点flow更好 好

嗯？我注意到一个很不对的地方，怎么你hard里有些部分的DS比N还小？ 关于这个问题，似乎在音乐的比较缓的段落，高难度中使用更低的ds也是可以的，主要是希望体现出音乐舒缓的感觉，但是在低难度中不能太大幅度地变化ds。Insane同。如果实在不行将来再大改吧。不过hard里半拍间隔的还是拉开了点，因为碰到确实没必要
00:14:297 (1,2) -你看，Normal里， 这个你都没碰到，Hard里反而碰到了。这样很不好。前后一段都有这种问题

00:50:964 (2) - 这个滑条是弱起，而且是在鼓点起，落在人声上。按我的经验来看，这种滑条听起来很违和。拆开就好很多直接不跟那个鼓了，就单点跟后面的人声

01:06:062 (1,2) - 这里常见的节奏是这样 ，光标在 - 01:06:454 - 唔，先不改。其实那个折返点也跟到了贝斯，虽然声很小

[Insane]

1.6*0.75=1.2
1.8*0.6=1.08
所以，
00:08:023 - 00:20:572 - 你这一段的SV比hard还低


00:04:297 (4,5,6,1) - 碰到了，移开点 好

00:51:552 (3,4,1) - 这个1/4 DS太大了。一般要摆的跟串的间距差不多大 只有一个的话摆远点也ok吧。因为对称和blanket不太想改

01:01:356 (1) - 这个重音叠在下面，有点不够突出 好

[Honey]
00:06:846 (4,9) - 不要把折返滑条尾叠在任何东西下面..虽然现在这样还算看得见 嗯……因为看得见所以先这样，要确实不行再改吧

good luck!
谢谢~
ceLy
148 posts
Joined November 2014
ceLy
M4M

[General]
  1. 看到AiMod有说SB的闪光警告，不懂SB，稍微提下
  2. 诶？BG最右边那是个妹子 :shock:
[Easy]
  1. 看起来没什么
[Normal]
  1. 00:07:631 (4,1) - 感觉这个blanket有点强行了...个人感觉顺flow拉开更好点..
  2. 00:14:297 (1,2) - 这里也是
  3. 00:26:846 (1,2) - 这里也是..包的太紧了看起来有点奇怪...
  4. 00:26:846 (1,2,3,4,5) - 好挤 :o
  5. 00:58:219 (1,3) - 这种不清楚好不好..看看别人怎么说吧
嘛...总的来说就是感觉note有点太挤了...
[Hard]
  1. 00:57:042 (1,2,3,4) - 13 24 好像有蹭到，拉开比较好
  2. 01:14:493 (2,3) - 这里也有点蹭到
  3. 01:15:474 (1,2,3) - 好像有点不太顺？
[Insane]
  1. 00:00:180 (1,2,3,4) - 我建议是这里可以小间距稍微拉大... 这个拉的感觉有点太开了...
:roll: 关灯了..就摸这些吧....

GL~
Pata-Mon
1,489 posts
Joined March 2015
Topic Starter
Pata-Mon

cHelli wrote:

M4M

[General]
  1. 看到AiMod有说SB的闪光警告，不懂SB，稍微提下 我想应该没事
  2. 诶？BG最右边那是个妹子 :shock: 是的
[Easy]
  1. 看起来没什么
[Normal]
  1. 00:07:631 (4,1) - 感觉这个blanket有点强行了...个人感觉顺flow拉开更好点.. 好
  2. 00:14:297 (1,2) - 这里也是 好
  3. 00:26:846 (1,2) - 这里也是..包的太紧了看起来有点奇怪... 好
  4. 00:26:846 (1,2,3,4,5) - 好挤 :o 好
  5. 00:58:219 (1,3) - 这种不清楚好不好..看看别人怎么说吧
嘛...总的来说就是感觉note有点太挤了... 看来以后是得注意
[Hard]
  1. 00:57:042 (1,2,3,4) - 13 24 好像有蹭到，拉开比较好我看了下……真彻底拉开如果不改排列的话ds要飞了，暂时先这样吧……
  2. 01:14:493 (2,3) - 这里也有点蹭到 改了
  3. 01:15:474 (1,2,3) - 好像有点不太顺？ 唔，感觉还好，不过稍微调整了一下
[Insane]
  1. 00:00:180 (1,2,3,4) - 我建议是这里可以小间距稍微拉大... 这个拉的感觉有点太开了... 这个我慢慢想，反正在开头好改www
:roll: 关灯了..就摸这些吧....

GL~
谢谢~
Deppyforce
1,961 posts
Joined November 2014
Deppyforce
m4m from ur queue

this is my 420th post btw

[General]
i think storyboard should start at 00:45:670

[Lily Bread]
00:36:258 (1,2) - kinda flow bad maybe change (1) to straight slider
00:38:807 - maybe add note

[Normal]
should be cs 3.5

00:00:180 (1,2,3,4) - shouldnt stack these notes
00:03:905 (3,4,5,1) - flows bad, maybe change pattern

fine

[Hard]
00:03:317 - strong; should be clickable
01:14:493 (2,1) - overlap looks weird, try stack (1) on (2)'s tail
01:21:748 (1,2,3) - flow could be better here, try forming a triangle

[Insane]
00:00:180 (1,2,3,4) - should keep ds here
00:01:748 (1,2) - shouldnt stack
00:35:866 (3,4,5) - ^ these are strong you even put clap on these
00:43:121 (2) - point to 00:42:533 (1) would be cleaner
01:00:768 (4,5,6) - this spike doesnt make much sense, theyre not even that strong; this is overmapped
01:26:062 (2,3,4,5,1) - make these straight flows better

[Honey]
00:08:023 to 00:20:572 - this part is way too undermapped, make the jumps bigger

gl
Lily Bread
1,228 posts
Joined December 2014
Lily Bread
/*
red = nope.
orange = in consideration.
no comment or pink = fixed.
*/
Lily Bread
00:36:258 (1,2) - kinda flow bad maybe change (1) to straight slider
//not bad imo

00:38:807 - maybe add note
//nope

/*
thanks for mod!
*/


also, added hitsound.
code
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Honey Honey Honey.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1820
PreviewTime: 44689
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: None
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 3.1

[Metadata]
Title:Honey Honey Honey (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:蜜蜜蜜 (TV Size)
Artist:Ayumikurikamaki
ArtistUnicode:あゆみくりかまき
Creator:Pata-Mon
Version:Lily Bread's Easy
Source:パンチライン
Tags:Lily Bread anime ending ed Punch Line ハニーハニーハニー
BeatmapID:878313
BeatmapSetID:403924

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:1
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.9
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Frey
1,205 posts
Joined February 2011
Frey
From M4M queue

  • Lily Bread's Easy
  1. 基本没有音效？（我知道最后有一个finish，但是这不能算作加了音效。）如果是故意的，那则是违规的，你必须设置一套完整的并且能经常听到的音效效果。
  2. 00:51:944 (1) - 这里也像00:52:729 (2) - 弯曲如何？这样的话00:51:944 (1,2,3,4) - 整体就会更美观一些。
  3. 01:00:572 (4) - 这里也是，朝上拱或许会更好看

    Normal
  4. 00:44:101 (4) - 加NC提醒玩家这里变了节奏？
  5. 01:04:493 (1,4) - 这里选择蓝线节奏明显是不合适的。不管是从人声还是乐器这里皆没有相关的音乐来支持你这样的节奏下法。我建议还是直接跟1/2的节奏最为妥当。
  6. 01:09:199 (3) - 这里突然变成1/3了，为了给玩家提醒，我建议这里加NC

    Hard
  7. 01:23:317 (1) - 建议结尾跟Insane或者最高难度一样，做一点什么东西出来，当然不要是连打。

大概来说没什么问题，好运。 :)
Pata-Mon
1,489 posts
Joined March 2015
Topic Starter
Pata-Mon

Deppyforce wrote:

m4m from ur queue

this is my 420th post btw

[General]
i think storyboard should start at 00:45:670 The hearts need a little time rising to top, so I think it's OK.

[Normal]
should be cs 3.5 Then notes will contact together

00:00:180 (1,2,3,4) - shouldnt stack these notes √
00:03:905 (3,4,5,1) - flows bad, maybe change pattern I think it's ok

fine

[Hard]
00:03:317 - strong; should be clickable √
01:14:493 (2,1) - overlap looks weird, try stack (1) on (2)'s tail √
01:21:748 (1,2,3) - flow could be better here, try forming a triangle make a change

[Insane]
00:00:180 (1,2,3,4) - should keep ds here make a change
00:01:748 (1,2) - shouldnt stack I think it's ok
00:35:866 (3,4,5) - ^ these are strong you even put clap on these ^
00:43:121 (2) - point to 00:42:533 (1) would be cleaner ^
01:00:768 (4,5,6) - this spike doesnt make much sense, theyre not even that strong; this is overmapped make a change
01:26:062 (2,3,4,5,1) - make these straight flows better √

[Honey]
00:08:023 to 00:20:572 - this part is way too undermapped, make the jumps bigger I think it's ok

gl

Frey wrote:

From M4M queue

  • Lily Bread's Easy
  1. 基本没有音效？（我知道最后有一个finish，但是这不能算作加了音效。）如果是故意的，那则是违规的，你必须设置一套完整的并且能经常听到的音效效果。 话说这个难度我我这儿的图有音效啊……是什么情况？

    Normal
  2. 00:44:101 (4) - 加NC提醒玩家这里变了节奏？ 好
  3. 01:04:493 (1,4) - 这里选择蓝线节奏明显是不合适的。不管是从人声还是乐器这里皆没有相关的音乐来支持你这样的节奏下法。我建议还是直接跟1/2的节奏最为妥当。 噫，其实有贝斯的声音。不过确实有点不清楚，我再考虑一下吧
  4. 01:09:199 (3) - 这里突然变成1/3了，为了给玩家提醒，我建议这里加NC 好

    Hard
  5. 01:23:317 (1) - 建议结尾跟Insane或者最高难度一样，做一点什么东西出来，当然不要是连打。 感觉转盘之后的东西蛮坑的才没加……嘛总之先放俩折返滑条吧

大概来说没什么问题，好运。 :)
Thanks~
Lily Bread
1,228 posts
Joined December 2014
Lily Bread

Frey wrote:

From M4M queue

[notice][list]

Lily Bread's Easy

[*]基本没有音效？（我知道最后有一个finish，但是这不能算作加了音效。）如果是故意的，那则是违规的，你必须设置一套完整的并且能经常听到的音效效果。
[*]00:51:944 (1) - 这里也像00:52:729 (2) - 弯曲如何？这样的话00:51:944 (1,2,3,4) - 整体就会更美观一些。
//00:51:944 (1,2,3,4) - 这几个是一对

[*]01:00:572 (4) - 这里也是，朝上拱或许会更好看
//这里..特别是easy里做对称还要兼顾前后的DS，这种不是很必要的地方我就不改了..改这点我至少得改5分钟吧

其实我本来想让patamon帮我copy一下音效..不过他好像忘了，所以后来我自己加了一下..可能是因为没提交所以没音效吧？
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Pata-Mon
1,489 posts
Joined March 2015
Topic Starter
Pata-Mon

Lily Bread wrote:

Frey wrote:

From M4M queue

[notice][list]

Lily Bread's Easy

[*]基本没有音效？（我知道最后有一个finish，但是这不能算作加了音效。）如果是故意的，那则是违规的，你必须设置一套完整的并且能经常听到的音效效果。
[*]00:51:944 (1) - 这里也像00:52:729 (2) - 弯曲如何？这样的话00:51:944 (1,2,3,4) - 整体就会更美观一些。
[*]01:00:572 (4) - 这里也是，朝上拱或许会更好看

其实我本来想让patamon帮我copy一下音效..不过他好像忘了，所以后来我自己加了一下..可能是因为没提交所以没音效吧？
总之这很奇怪……我记得我把谱子传上去的时候已经加了音效啊T_T反正现在的图似乎应该是有音效的吧，有就没问题了
Mijii
93 posts
Joined July 2015
Mijii
Can I make a Begginer diff for this map?
Pata-Mon
1,489 posts
Joined March 2015
Topic Starter
Pata-Mon

Mijii wrote:

Can I make a Begginer diff for this map?
sry, I think this mapset needn't have a Begginer diff :?
ZZHBOY
1,649 posts
Joined April 2012
ZZHBOY
服务器拒绝了您发送离线文件“Ayumikurikamaki - Honey Honey Honey (TV size ver.) (Pata-Mon) zzhard.osu”的请求。
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Misure
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Misure
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Pata-Mon
1,489 posts
Joined March 2015
Topic Starter
Pata-Mon
remap - done
all updated
let's go again!
Gust
516 posts
Joined December 2011
Gust
no mo no play

[Honey]
00:19:591 (4,5,6) - 我更倾向于位置ctrl+g，然后和00:18:807 (3,4,1) - 叠以达到更坑的效果
00:19:983 (7,8,9,1,2) - 打起来怪怪的。。不知道是不是和7-8与1-2 DS的迷之变化有关
00:27:238 (3,4) - 感觉节奏ctrl+g更好一些
00:30:964 (4,5) - 同
00:47:827 (3,4) - 我觉得位置ctrl+g打起来更顺手点..也合你这个00:48:023 (4,6,1) - 的梗

[ZZHard]
00:19:787 (5) - 红线那么重的音怎么就一个1/1slider带过了。。

低难度没问题，液
Pata-Mon
1,489 posts
Joined March 2015
Topic Starter
Pata-Mon

Frost Moon wrote:

no mo no play jiu shi yao mo

[Honey]
00:19:591 (4,5,6) - 我更倾向于位置ctrl+g，然后和00:18:807 (3,4,1) - 叠以达到更坑的效果 hmm 坑人不是目的
00:19:983 (7,8,9,1,2) - 打起来怪怪的。。不知道是不是和7-8与1-2 DS的迷之变化有关 感觉还好。感觉怪或许还是因为读图不算特别简单？
00:27:238 (3,4) - 感觉节奏ctrl+g更好一些 突出人声
00:30:964 (4,5) - 同
00:47:827 (3,4) - 我觉得位置ctrl+g打起来更顺手点..也合你这个00:48:023 (4,6,1) - 的梗 我觉得保持更好

[ZZHard]
00:19:787 (5) - 红线那么重的音怎么就一个1/1slider带过了。。 改

低难度没问题，液
谢摸~
Hanazawa Kana
727 posts
Joined February 2013
Hanazawa Kana
怎么感觉这音质有点糊呢.

[Honey]
00:03:317 - 尽量让这里clickable,所以这个滑条00:02:925 (3) - 可以和00:06:062 (3) - 这个一样处理 然后后面我说的那个地方加个note
00:09:199 (2) - 感觉flow不是太好,我建议这个滑条改成向下滑
然后我觉得这部分你可以note跟鼓 滑条跟那个bass还是吉他啥的 自创节奏可能打起来难受一些 这个你看着改 我只是提一下
00:22:336 (2,3,4,5) - 这个flow感觉有点难受 考虑把4的尾巴向左歪点 大概是这样
00:30:964 (4,5,1,2,3) - 讲道理这里flow不太好 12 ctrl+g我感觉会好一点
kiai没什么可挑的
01:16:846 (6,7,1) - 放平一点吧

[ZZHard]
真的是全程ds 是在下输了
00:05:670 (3) - 感觉这个不是很必要吧 我听了几遍都没听出来声音 和前后一样的1/1滑条可能会好一点
没什么问题

[Misure's Normal]
米苏高德
00:19:003 - 这里别空了吧 前面那么轻的音都跟了 这么重的鼓点没必要空啊

easy实在摸不出什么

pata god!
GL
Misure
951 posts
Joined September 2012
Misure

Hanazawa Kana wrote:

怎么感觉这音质有点糊呢.

[Misure's Normal]
米苏高德 卡娜高德
00:19:003 - 这里别空了吧 前面那么轻的音都跟了 这么重的鼓点没必要空啊 啊这里是想跟vocal做个停顿的感觉 感觉上应该没啥问题OwO

pata god!
GL
Thanks for your modding! :)
KaedekaShizuru
625 posts
Joined January 2013
KaedekaShizuru
服务器也拒绝了你的水摸请求
[Honey]
00:35:866 (3,4,5) - 个人认为没必要三连 一个短折返即可
真没啥可说的

[纸张Hard]
00:07:238 (5) - 你这样反而比连打难读
01:19:788 (4,5,6,1) - 强迫症
01:21:748 (1,2,3,4) - 感觉会很难读
Momizi
275 posts
Joined June 2013
Momizi
简单的还债咯
[General]
BG露胖次了，算是性暗示吧..可能会被干死
文件里用的是soft-slideslide,你用的却是drum custom，那个就等于没用了，改个名字
[Honey]
00:04:885 (1,2,3) - 这三个和前面的00:01:748 (1,2,3) - 是一样的吧，为什么这里就用短滑条了，我觉得还是和前面一样弄120度旋转的长滑条看着比较好
00:10:180 (4,5,1) - 距离突然变大的感觉有，我感觉 柔和段，而且你的SV已经调到了0.6那么低，1分拍以外的note（1/2那些）还是DS比较好
00:18:807 (3,4,1,4,5,6) - 怎么说呢，这种直线的连打的flow 总给我感觉怪怪的，不是很好的样子，而且 00:19:199 (2,3) - ctrl+G 的话flow会更加好
00:20:376 (8,9,1) - 比如这个，我感觉向左边就会好点，因为接下来往那个方向走了
00:29:003 (4) - 滑条更加平一点，合一下3过来的flow https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5319378
00:34:689 (1) - 复制00:33:905 (3) - 来旋转过来，这个看着就不是一样的slider，虽然我不知道你这里想体现怎么样的。。
01:16:846 (6,7) - 这个连打横着比较好，从左往右（不一定要完全水平
01:19:395 (4) - 这个箭头你小心点吧。。打完后的300那些东西在这里箭头出现的时候还没完全消失可能要死
看着还行，就是这些直线的三连，是比较老的风格了
[智障蛤的]
00:05:474 (2,3) - 合成一个滑条吧，拆开听着不好，和前面一样用长滑条吧00:02:336 (2) -
00:07:042 (3,4,5) - hard要不要stack啊，这样子会不会有点难
01:25:670 (2,3) - 不是很喜欢，换成直线就对到口味了，不过这东西看个人喜好
AR8会不会太高了，对noraml的5而言跳的有点快。不错，没什么好说的
[Normal]
00:07:238 (3,4) - 这里用一个1/1滑条吧
00:34:689 (5) - 折返点去掉clap，听着有点怪怪的

easy过一遍没什么好说的也
GL
JJburstOwO
183 posts
Joined July 2012
JJburstOwO
[Honey]
00:02:925 (3) - 这个尾部最好是个note，不然00:03:611 (1,2) - 不容易读
00:19:199 (2,3) - Ctrl+G
00:25:278 (1,3,5) - 这三个角度应该渐变吧
00:29:003 (4) - 这是全图唯一的短滑条吧，感觉挺突兀的 换连打比较好
00:37:827 (1) - 其实我觉得这种折叠不在正中 挺不好看的
00:39:984 (5) - ^
挺好的，就是直线连打的梗不太喜欢

[zzb]
00:07:238 (5) - 你就不能放连打吗 我不会打这种所以我要喷你..
00:51:846 - 漏了个
00:58:121 - 漏了个
01:19:788 (4,5,6,1) - 包好
01:22:271 (2,3,4) - 统统NC
全程贪吃蛇

简单难度不看啦，摸水了一点 :)
goodluck
Pata-Mon
1,489 posts
Joined March 2015
Topic Starter
Pata-Mon
@gders
音效组从D1改成D了，因为并没用到自定义音效，最好先更新一下

@misure
然而你的难度开头用到了，另外把我上次说的空白音效改成d组的

@Momizi
其实有用到，之前normal开头我是左上角点成了s组。但是后来想到好像其他地方根本没用到自定义音效，所以不用那么麻烦。那以外的部分滑条没必要静音了
Pata-Mon
1,489 posts
Joined March 2015
Topic Starter
Pata-Mon
@gders

我纸张，我强迫症，我把mp3文件名改了，你们可以自己改成audio或者重新下载
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