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Mafumafu

Beatmap Nominator

3,367 posts

Joined August 2013

Mafumafu 2016-08-05T01:20:48+00:00

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Mafumafu

Beatmap Nominator

3,367 posts

Joined August 2013

Mafumafu 2016-08-08T05:27:21+00:00

[Lily Bread's Easy]
整体上：非Kiai部分节奏有点乱
00:32:729 (3,1) - Blanket

[Misure's Normal]
01:25:670 (1,2) - Normal不要搞这种重叠的
整体上：
非Kiai部分不要vocal和乐器都跟，建议只跟vocal
1/3最好不要用

[ZZhard]
00:06:552 (1) - 不要搞这种节奏，前面的滑条尾巴应该Clickable
00:32:631 (6) - 同理，不要用滑条尾巴做1/4节奏的起点
01:21:748 (1,2,3,4) - 最好不要1/3单独拿来做note，尤其是穿插着滑条，player不知所措
最后一个note NC下和Insane统一比较好

[Insane]
0.6x有点太慢了不过还好
00:44:886 (2) - Insane就没必要1/3了吧，还是1/2跟vocal更好，还可以放跳
~~3/4滑条们~~反正就是Kiai里那几个感觉有点不好，1/2保险一点

Pata-Mon

1,489 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

Pata-Mon 2016-08-08T13:36:43+00:00

Regraz wrote:
[ZZhard]
00:06:552 (1) - 不要搞这种节奏，前面的滑条尾巴应该Clickable
00:32:631 (6) - 同理，不要用滑条尾巴做1/4节奏的起点
01:21:748 (1,2,3,4) - 最好不要1/3单独拿来做note，尤其是穿插着滑条，player不知所措
最后一个note NC下和Insane统一比较好
都改了

[Insane]
0.6x有点太慢了不过还好嗯，这段和其他部分区别明显，连鼓点都完全没有，我认为0.6是能够接受的；而且后面还有一段0.7我觉得挺合适，那么这段应该要比0.7更慢一点才对
00:44:886 (2) - Insane就没必要1/3了吧，还是1/2跟vocal更好，还可以放跳这里对我来说，伴奏里的1/3远远比人声明显很多，而且先出伴奏后出人声，这几个地方跟人声对我来说会非常奇怪，所以保留
~~3/4滑条们~~反正就是Kiai里那几个感觉有点不好，1/2保险一点 kiai部分的3/4是这样，有大量的3/4滑条尾的位置是原曲中有声的，就拿kiai的第一段来说，只有00:45:670 (1) - 00:56:650 (1) - 这两个3/4滑条结尾是原曲没有声的，其他的都有还算清楚的贝斯声，于此同时，1/2的位置上是没有声音的。对于原曲有声音的地方，3/4显然是更为合适的，而没有声音的地方（占少数），为了一致性，用3/4滑条也应该是没有问题的，所以保持

谢摸~

Misure

951 posts

Joined September 2012

Misure 2016-08-09T11:47:57+00:00

重叠改了
节奏有点头疼...暂时是把安静的那部分改成跟vocal了还不行的话就re一下
1/3修了第一个kiai前面那个后面两个鼓和vocal都是1/3改1/2感觉别扭orz
先这样不行我就re掉
谢谢瓜子的摸！

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...diff名忘改了抱歉

sahuang

2,294 posts

Joined December 2014

sahuang 2016-08-12T06:20:29+00:00

怕她神天天fly map羡慕

Lily Bread

1,228 posts

Joined December 2014

Lily Bread 2016-08-14T15:43:04+00:00

这...基本是1/1塞满，不乱呀...

Rizia

3,114 posts

Joined January 2012

Rizia 2016-09-18T09:54:45+00:00

圖現在看上去沒太大問題主要想提出一下關於音效的一些意見

honey
drum的音效整體較無聊不太能突出這歌特別是副歌段用soft/normal和default whistle的配搭的話會好更多 (kiai裡可以把所以drum clap換成normal的hitnormal)
很多重音的地方用soft finish會比drum finish好
kiai的音量可以提高現在比較低
例如00:44:101 (1,2) - 這裡用normal音效會更有感覺

有東西想問的話可以找我(QQ/ingame都行)

Pata-Mon

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Pata-Mon 2016-09-18T15:13:02+00:00

ok整个音效都改了不少，谢谢柚子

[Easy]
00:14:297 (1,2,3,4) - 这整段你主要都跟的人声，而且因为没啥鼓点背景音乐也不突出，我也觉得跟人声好，所以这里最好也跟人声。试一下这个节奏：

SPOILER

等Lily先看一下这个~

Lily Bread

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Lily Bread 2016-09-19T11:13:53+00:00

Pata-Mon wrote:
ok整个音效都改了不少，谢谢柚子

[Easy]
00:14:297 (1,2,3,4) - 这整段你主要都跟的人声，而且因为没啥鼓点背景音乐也不突出，我也觉得跟人声好，所以这里最好也跟人声。试一下这个节奏：
SPOILER

等Lily先看一下这个~

工作量有点大，如果一定要帮我改的话就用这个节奏吧
http://puu.sh/rgtDC/f41e2981f3.jpg
做完再去调对称太麻烦了...

Pata-Mon

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Pata-Mon 2016-09-19T12:52:08+00:00

k updated

Pentori

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Pentori 2016-09-19T14:07:25+00:00

Rizia wrote:
圖現在看上去沒太大問題主要想提出一下關於音效的一些意見

honey
drum的音效整體較無聊不太能突出這歌特別是副歌段用soft/normal和default whistle的配搭的話會好更多 (kiai裡可以把所以drum clap換成normal的hitnormal)
很多重音的地方用soft finish會比drum finish好
kiai的音量可以提高現在比較低
例如00:44:101 (1,2) - 這裡用normal音效會更有感覺

有東西想問的話可以找我(QQ/ingame都行)

can someone translate for me? ;w;

[General]
you don't need "size" in tags because title already has tv size
also when you update this can you move it to the pending section instead of WIP/Help
why not have the volume increase at kiai? since you have 80% at 00:44:101 - it makes it sound really loud and the transition to kiai isn't really noticeable

[Lily Bread's Easy]
00:55:082 (1) - not to sure about this slider because the claps are ignored for a less important beat on 00:55:670 - this slider here 00:56:650 (2) - has a clap on 00:57:239 - so it works well. maybe try a rhythm like http://puu.sh/rgzJh/76e894a4ef.jpg to include the clap and kick
01:23:317 - 01:23:709 (1,2) - seem to be missing hitsounds. u should hitsound similar to 00:20:572 (1,2)

[Misure's Normal]
00:15:866 (4,5) - distance error
00:39:395 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - quite a long rhythm chain, i'd make 00:40:572 (3) - into just a circle because the beat on 00:40:768 - isn't really important

[ZZH's Hard]
01:04:101 (4,5,6,1) - with stacking enabled this looks closer than usual, perhaps you could make it the same distance visually

[Honey]
01:22:533 (2) - could u move this up a little so it doesnt overlap score hit meter

poke me if you need an icon

Lily Bread

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Lily Bread 2016-09-19T14:38:39+00:00

[Lily Bread's Easy]
00:55:082 (1) - not to sure about this slider because the claps are ignored for a less important beat on 00:55:670 - this slider here 00:56:650 (2) - has a clap on 00:57:239 - so it works well. maybe try a rhythm like http://puu.sh/rgzJh/76e894a4ef.jpg to include the clap and kick
//there are many claps in music, and some of them are 1/2 gap, i can't map it in easy diff, so i choose to map vocal.

01:23:317 - 01:23:709 (1,2) - seem to be missing hitsounds. u should hitsound similar to 00:20:572 (1,2)
//uh, will let pata-mon to add hitsound

//thanks.

Misure

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Misure 2016-09-19T15:14:00+00:00

ok all fixed, thanks a lot!
besides I straightened 00:19:787 (3) - and curved 00:47:238 (4) - 01:00:572 (5,6) - 01:16:650 (6) - and 01:17:827 (2) - , and add a finish hs on 00:32:140 - ,which will be better imo

Codesu

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btw, I'll reply your mods on my map in several days cautz a GDer is really busy irl

Pata-Mon

1,489 posts

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Pata-Mon 2016-09-19T15:25:11+00:00

Pentori wrote:
Rizia wrote:
圖現在看上去沒太大問題主要想提出一下關於音效的一些意見

honey
drum的音效整體較無聊不太能突出這歌特別是副歌段用soft/normal和default whistle的配搭的話會好更多 (kiai裡可以把所以drum clap換成normal的hitnormal)
很多重音的地方用soft finish會比drum finish好
kiai的音量可以提高現在比較低
例如00:44:101 (1,2) - 這裡用normal音效會更有感覺

有東西想問的話可以找我(QQ/ingame都行)
can someone translate for me? ;w; he said there are few issue in this map, so he just gave me some suggestion about hitsound.

[General]
you don't need "size" in tags because title already has tv size yeah, i think i forgot to delete it when i changed title
also when you update this can you move it to the pending section instead of WIP/Help sure
why not have the volume increase at kiai? since you have 80% at 00:44:101 - it makes it sound really loud and the transition to kiai isn't really noticeable change 00:44:101 - to 70%

[Lily Bread's Easy]
01:23:317 - 01:23:709 (1,2) - seem to be missing hitsounds. u should hitsound similar to 00:20:572 (1,2) k

[ZZH's Hard]
01:04:101 (4,5,6,1) - with stacking enabled this looks closer than usual, perhaps you could make it the same distance visually k

[Honey]
01:22:533 (2) - could u move this up a little so it doesnt overlap score hit meter k

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