DominikWW wrote:

Update:

Easy

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: A Cruel Angels Thesis.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 66208
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Zankoku na Tenshi no These
TitleUnicode:残酷な天使のテーゼ
Artist:Yoko Takahashi
ArtistUnicode:高橋 洋子
Creator:LittlePigRMX
Version:DominikWW's Easy
Source:Neon Genesis Evangelion
Tags:mecha, anime, project, a, cruel, angels, thesis, DominikWW, A r M i N
BeatmapID:815132
BeatmapSetID:365014

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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Please check the description in this thread: change "DominikWW's Normal" into "..Easy"

Hi Im Nathan wrote:

hi from my modding queue

[hard]
Use DS 1.1 to avoid circles touching each other, it will make all your patterns through out the map look prettier e.g. 00:09:250 (4,5)
00:02:500 (2) - This plays along better to the music imo

00:05:500 (6) -

00:07:000 (7) - NC
00:10:000 - NC
00:07:000 (1,2,3) - having the 3 patterns in a pattern would look a lot better imo. how about this?

00:10:750 (2) - turn into slider and curve it like this

00:11:500 (3) - since this is a held note I thought it would be better to make this into a slider. If you use this add a timing point to make the end of the slider silent. (change the timeline to 1/8)

I think your map would benefit alot from remapping sliders like this 00:14:879 (1) and 00:19:078 (3) etc. Try t make curve sliders with 3 points only, they look a lot better
00:21:411 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Wouldnt recommend this in a hard diff. Its too hard
00:23:978 (5) - delete NC
00:24:211 (1) - NC
00:28:411 - add clap
00:28:878 (14) - delete clap
00:26:078 (6) - NC
00:34:011 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - try to avoid patterns like this where everything overlaps.
00:39:144 (7) - looks weird when played, the visual effect of slider doesnt go with the low bpm of the song fixed
00:39:844 (8) - finish at 00:40:310
00:52:443 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - patterns like these use the DS like you used in the beginning which was 1.0 (even though I recommended 1.1)
00:55:942 (1) - NC
00:59:676 - you might as well keep the soft hitsounds for the rest of the verse changed
01:12:741 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - way too hard and tricky to play. Highly recommend to change to something else
01:22:774 (4,5,6) - no reason for these to touch. Even the tiniest of touches can make patterns a bit less appealing. (3) and (4) use 1.1 DS but these use 1.0
01:23:707 (6,7) - A jump here could play alright but not one this big.
01:23:707 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - try not to make patterns so rectangular
01:25:224 (12) - finish at 01:25:574

I could mention other parts but I dont want to repeat myself too much as I would just sound negative and daunting. read through what I've said about certain patterns and apply them to others where applicable

One last thing dont have combos going into double digits unless theres a stream or something

Well thats all from me, I hope this mod was helpful, GL!

shmiklak wrote:

Zankoku na Tenshi no These


Hey! I am back! Your mapset realy was better, but I have what say:

SPOILER

General

Check AiMod. You have problem with timing.
Add video to all diffs! TO ALL! It is realy critic.
Add Normal diff (If you need GD you can ask me).
I thing your combo colors is not good. Try change it

Now about diffs:

DominikWW's Easy

Check AiMod. DS in Easy/Normal diffs must be fixed (ranking criteria)
00:02:500 (2) - Try not use blue lines in Easy/Normal diffs. Make it longer to 00:03:250
00:05:500 (4,1) - Make better blanket
00:22:811 (1,2) - Is it flow? Or not? Move (2) to x=348 y=132, for making better flow
00:26:078 (3,4,5,6) - Move (3) to x=213 y=349, and move (4,5,6) via using DS
00:34:477 (4,5) - This blanket is good but I thing you can make it some better
00:42:877 (4) - Click Ctrl+H,Ctrl+J,Ctrl+G, and move to x=368 y=176
00:48:476 (1) - I thing better move it to x=63, y=56
01:18:341 (1) - Move to x=48 y=288 for better blanket
01:28:607 (2) - Make it longer to 01:29:073

Hard

I thing 1/8 is not need, but it's your choose
00:01:000 - Make volume husher. 15% for example
00:02:500 (2) - I thing flow will be better. Try move it to x=216 y=296
00:04:000 (3) - Make it straight and move to x=256y=232
00:04:750 (4,5,6) - Move it via DS
00:11:500 (3) - Remove whistle sound from centre (double click center of slider, and remove like default hitsound)
00:12:062 - WHAT?! Why? Why u make volume 85% here. I thing better delete this line
00:15:403 (2) - Move for make flow
00:15:695 (3,4) - Same
00:17:678 (8,9) - Better make slider. It's more comfortable for playing
00:19:078 (3) - Awful slider. Try make it better
00:20:011 - Maybe circle?
00:20:478 (1) - Move to x=309 y=268
00:20:945 (2) - x=448 y=264
00:14:879 - Make volume ~70%
00:22:578 (1,2,3,4,5) - Remap this part. Try make it more beautiful
00:24:211 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same
00:26:078 (1) - Make it straight
00:28:178 (6) - Same, but move it to x=104 y=136
00:29:578 (1) - x=400 y=240
00:30:044 (2) - x=376 y=152
00:30:744 (4,5,6) - Make flow
00:33:777 (3) - x=120 y=256
00:34:944 (6) - Make it straight
00:35:410 (7) - x=174 y=176
00:36:110 (8) - x=311 y=271
00:36:110 (8) - x=395 y=271
00:37:044 (1) - x=256 y=352
00:37:160 (2) - x=216 y=336
00:37:277 (3) - x=184 y=312
00:37:977 (4) - x=184 y=216
00:38:910 (6) - x=288 y=136
00:40:777 (2) - x=72 y=792 for making flow
00:41:710 (4) - x=296 y=320
00:42:877 (7) - Change slider
00:43:577 (8) - Straight
00:44:743 (4) - I don't like this slider. Change it
00:46:143 (1,2,3) - Fix flow
00:48:010 (7,9) - Fix overlap
00:48:243 (8,9) - Make blanket better
00:52:443 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This part is good and bad. I don't know how make it better. Try do it self
00:55:942 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same
00:57:809 (1,2,3,4) - Make like this
00:59:676 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - It's not beauty. Try remap
01:07:142 (3) - NC
01:08:075 (2) - Make straight
01:09:008 (3) - Move end some down
01:14:025 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I don't sure about stream. It is Hard diff, not Insane
01:15:774 (2) - x=184 y=232
01:16:008 (3) - x=256 y=224
01:16:708 (4) - x=408 y=120
01:16:941 (5) - Straight
01:17:641 (7) - Change slider
01:19:274 (2) - Same. It's awful
01:19:974 (3,4,5,6,7) - Square pattern. I thing it's not good
01:22:074 (3) - x=304 y=80
01:23:707 (6,7,8,9,10) - I don't like this pattern.
Sorry if I very harmful XD

A r M i N's Insane

Sorry but it's most awful diff in mapset. You don't aloved music. Need remap. And it's not joke. Sorry

LittlePigRMX wrote:

shmiklak wrote:

Zankoku na Tenshi no These


Hey! I am back! Your mapset realy was better, but I have what say:

SPOILER

General

Check AiMod. You have problem with timing.
Add video to all diffs! TO ALL! It is realy critic.
Add Normal diff (If you need GD you can ask me).
I thing your combo colors is not good. Try change it

Now about diffs:

DominikWW's Easy

Check AiMod. DS in Easy/Normal diffs must be fixed (ranking criteria)
00:02:500 (2) - Try not use blue lines in Easy/Normal diffs. Make it longer to 00:03:250
00:05:500 (4,1) - Make better blanket
00:22:811 (1,2) - Is it flow? Or not? Move (2) to x=348 y=132, for making better flow
00:26:078 (3,4,5,6) - Move (3) to x=213 y=349, and move (4,5,6) via using DS
00:34:477 (4,5) - This blanket is good but I thing you can make it some better
00:42:877 (4) - Click Ctrl+H,Ctrl+J,Ctrl+G, and move to x=368 y=176
00:48:476 (1) - I thing better move it to x=63, y=56
01:18:341 (1) - Move to x=48 y=288 for better blanket
01:28:607 (2) - Make it longer to 01:29:073

Hard

I thing 1/8 is not need, but it's your choose
00:01:000 - Make volume husher. 15% for example
00:02:500 (2) - I thing flow will be better. Try move it to x=216 y=296
00:04:000 (3) - Make it straight and move to x=256y=232
00:04:750 (4,5,6) - Move it via DS
00:11:500 (3) - Remove whistle sound from centre (double click center of slider, and remove like default hitsound)
00:12:062 - WHAT?! Why? Why u make volume 85% here. I thing better delete this line
00:15:403 (2) - Move for make flow
00:15:695 (3,4) - Same
00:17:678 (8,9) - Better make slider. It's more comfortable for playing
00:19:078 (3) - Awful slider. Try make it better
00:20:011 - Maybe circle?
00:20:478 (1) - Move to x=309 y=268
00:20:945 (2) - x=448 y=264
00:14:879 - Make volume ~70%
00:22:578 (1,2,3,4,5) - Remap this part. Try make it more beautiful
00:24:211 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same
00:26:078 (1) - Make it straight
00:28:178 (6) - Same, but move it to x=104 y=136
00:29:578 (1) - x=400 y=240
00:30:044 (2) - x=376 y=152
00:30:744 (4,5,6) - Make flow
00:33:777 (3) - x=120 y=256
00:34:944 (6) - Make it straight
00:35:410 (7) - x=174 y=176
00:36:110 (8) - x=311 y=271
00:36:110 (8) - x=395 y=271
00:37:044 (1) - x=256 y=352
00:37:160 (2) - x=216 y=336
00:37:277 (3) - x=184 y=312
00:37:977 (4) - x=184 y=216
00:38:910 (6) - x=288 y=136
00:40:777 (2) - x=72 y=792 for making flow
00:41:710 (4) - x=296 y=320
00:42:877 (7) - Change slider
00:43:577 (8) - Straight
00:44:743 (4) - I don't like this slider. Change it
00:46:143 (1,2,3) - Fix flow
00:48:010 (7,9) - Fix overlap
00:48:243 (8,9) - Make blanket better
00:52:443 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This part is good and bad. I don't know how make it better. Try do it self
00:55:942 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same
00:57:809 (1,2,3,4) - Make like this
00:59:676 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - It's not beauty. Try remap
01:07:142 (3) - NC
01:08:075 (2) - Make straight
01:09:008 (3) - Move end some down
01:14:025 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I don't sure about stream. It is Hard diff, not Insane
01:15:774 (2) - x=184 y=232
01:16:008 (3) - x=256 y=224
01:16:708 (4) - x=408 y=120
01:16:941 (5) - Straight
01:17:641 (7) - Change slider
01:19:274 (2) - Same. It's awful
01:19:974 (3,4,5,6,7) - Square pattern. I thing it's not good
01:22:074 (3) - x=304 y=80
01:23:707 (6,7,8,9,10) - I don't like this pattern.
Sorry if I very harmful XD

A r M i N's Insane

Sorry but it's most awful diff in mapset. You don't aloved music. Need remap. And it's not joke. Sorry

Gonna taje a look at this now, though I should mention that the link I sent you is without the video if you remwmber.

I remember but i checked .osu files, and video code has not in all diffs

LittlePigRMX wrote:

shmiklak wrote:

Zankoku na Tenshi no These


Hey! I am back! Your mapset realy was better, but I have what say:

SPOILER

General

Check AiMod. You have problem with timing.
Add video to all diffs! TO ALL! It is realy critic.
Add Normal diff (If you need GD you can ask me).
I thing your combo colors is not good. Try change it I'll leave them the way they are for now.

Now about diffs:

Hard

I thing 1/8 is not need, but it's your choose The entire map uses 1/4, however theres one part that needed it 00:11:500 (3,4) -
00:01:000 - Make volume husher. 15% for example I Lowered it, but I think 15% was too low, so I did 41%
00:02:500 (2) - I thing flow will be better. Try move it to x=216 y=296 moved
00:04:000 (3) - Make it straight and move to x=256y=232 done
00:04:750 (4,5,6) - Move it via DS done
00:11:500 (3) - Remove whistle sound from centre (double click center of slider, and remove like default hitsound) removed
00:12:062 - WHAT?! Why? Why u make volume 85% here. I thing better delete this line It kinda goes with the vocal, so I'll keep this
00:15:403 (2) - Move for make flow ?
00:15:695 (3,4) - Same done, made a small spacing
00:17:678 (8,9) - Better make slider. It's more comfortable for playing done
00:19:078 (3) - Awful slider. Try make it better changed it slightly
00:20:011 - Maybe circle? It looks better with another circle there, added
00:20:478 (1) - Move to x=309 y=268 moved
00:20:945 (2) - x=448 y=264 changed
00:14:879 - Make volume ~70% putted it exactly 70
00:22:578 (1,2,3,4,5) - Remap this part. Try make it more beautiful I think it's good the way it is. I don't have any other ideas
00:24:211 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same Same
00:26:078 (1) - Make it straight done
00:28:178 (6) - Same, but move it to x=104 y=136 It made it for me when I made it straight :O
00:29:578 (1) - x=400 y=240 done
00:30:044 (2) - x=376 y=152 done
00:30:744 (4,5,6) - Make flow done
00:33:777 (3) - x=120 y=256 done
00:34:944 (6) - Make it straight Done all the way going down
00:35:410 (7) - x=174 y=176
00:36:110 (8) - x=311 y=271 I'm sure you ment this and not the one under
00:36:110 (8) - x=395 y=271
00:37:044 (1) - x=256 y=352 Done going all the way doen
00:37:160 (2) - x=216 y=336
00:37:277 (3) - x=184 y=312
00:37:977 (4) - x=184 y=216
00:38:910 (6) - x=288 y=136
00:40:777 (2) - x=72 y=792 for making flow Corrected over chat, Y=192
00:41:710 (4) - x=296 y=320 done
00:42:877 (7) - Change slider changed
00:43:577 (8) - Straight done
00:44:743 (4) - I don't like this slider. Change it I think it's good the way it is
00:46:143 (1,2,3) - Fix flow fixed slightly
00:48:010 (7,9) - Fix overlap fixed
00:48:243 (8,9) - Make blanket better fixed slightly
00:52:443 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This part is good and bad. I don't know how make it better. Try do it self I don't really see any problems with this
00:55:942 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same same
00:57:809 (1,2,3,4) - Make like this done with a slight change
00:59:676 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - It's not beauty. Try remap remapped
01:07:142 (3) - NC done
01:08:075 (2) - Make straight done
01:09:008 (3) - Move end some down I don't know what you mean by this
01:14:025 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I don't sure about stream. It is Hard diff, not Insane it's short and simple, So I think it's ok the way it is
01:15:774 (2) - x=184 y=232 done all the way down
01:16:008 (3) - x=256 y=224
01:16:708 (4) - x=408 y=120
01:16:941 (5) - Straight done
01:17:641 (7) - Change slider changed slightly
01:19:274 (2) - Same. It's awful changed
01:19:974 (3,4,5,6,7) - Square pattern. I thing it's not good Unless I'm told this has to be changed again, I'll leave it the way it is.
01:22:074 (3) - x=304 y=80 done
01:23:707 (6,7,8,9,10) - I don't like this pattern. I decided to keep it but slightly change it
Sorry if I very harmful XD harmful? this is all helpful

A r M i N's Insane

Sorry but it's most awful diff in mapset. You don't aloved music. Need remap. And it's not joke. Sorry

Hi Im Nathan wrote:

hi from my modding queue

[easy]
00:02:500 (2) - finish at 00:03:250
00:10:000 (3) - shorten DS
00:22:811 (1) - change to this pattern for a lot better flow

well I don't like it with a repetition here.
00:34:477 (4) - fix DS
00:37:744 (1) - same pattern I stated ealier ^
00:42:410 (4) - add a note here
00:47:543 (3) - delete clap
00:58:742 (2) - add note
01:01:075 - ^
01:06:675 (5) - ^and add a clap too
The other points I agree. Changed them ^^

shmiklak wrote:

Zankoku na Tenshi no These

Now about diffs:

DominikWW's Easy

Check AiMod. DS in Easy/Normal diffs must be fixed (ranking criteria) fixed
00:02:500 (2) - Try not use blue lines in Easy/Normal diffs. Make it longer to 00:03:250 ^
00:05:500 (4,1) - Make better blanket ^
00:22:811 (1,2) - Is it flow? Or not? Move (2) to x=348 y=132, for making better flowallready changed
00:26:078 (3,4,5,6) - Move (3) to x=213 y=349, and move (4,5,6) via using DS fixed
00:34:477 (4,5) - This blanket is good but I thing you can make it some better fixed
00:42:877 (4) - Click Ctrl+H,Ctrl+J,Ctrl+G, and move to x=368 y=176 allready changed
00:48:476 (1) - I thing better move it to x=63, y=56 allready changed
01:18:341 (1) - Move to x=48 y=288 for better blanket k
01:28:607 (2) - Make it longer to 01:29:073 sounds really awkward If I use a full tact here.

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DominikWW wrote:

Hi Im Nathan wrote:

hi from my modding queue

[easy]
00:02:500 (2) - finish at 00:03:250
00:10:000 (3) - shorten DS
00:22:811 (1) - change to this pattern for a lot better flow

well I don't like it with a repetition here.
00:34:477 (4) - fix DS
00:37:744 (1) - same pattern I stated ealier ^
00:42:410 (4) - add a note here
00:47:543 (3) - delete clap
00:58:742 (2) - add note
01:01:075 - ^
01:06:675 (5) - ^and add a clap too
The other points I agree. Changed them ^^

shmiklak wrote:

Zankoku na Tenshi no These

Now about diffs:

DominikWW's Easy

Check AiMod. DS in Easy/Normal diffs must be fixed (ranking criteria) fixed
00:02:500 (2) - Try not use blue lines in Easy/Normal diffs. Make it longer to 00:03:250 ^
00:05:500 (4,1) - Make better blanket ^
00:22:811 (1,2) - Is it flow? Or not? Move (2) to x=348 y=132, for making better flowallready changed
00:26:078 (3,4,5,6) - Move (3) to x=213 y=349, and move (4,5,6) via using DS fixed
00:34:477 (4,5) - This blanket is good but I thing you can make it some better fixed
00:42:877 (4) - Click Ctrl+H,Ctrl+J,Ctrl+G, and move to x=368 y=176 allready changed
00:48:476 (1) - I thing better move it to x=63, y=56 allready changed
01:18:341 (1) - Move to x=48 y=288 for better blanket k
01:28:607 (2) - Make it longer to 01:29:073 sounds really awkward If I use a full tact here.

Thanks for the mods =)
Here is the Upadete:

Easy

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XxSeonxX wrote:

Shimiklak's Normal .-.
00:22:345 (1,2,3) - blanket fixed
01:13:675 (4,1) - blanket fixed

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TitleUnicode:残酷な天使のテーゼ
Artist:Yoko Takahashi
ArtistUnicode:高橋 洋子
Creator:LittlePigRMX
Version:Shmiklak's Normal
Source:Neon Genesis Evangelion
Tags:mecha, anime, project, a, cruel, angels, thesis, DominikWW, A r M i N
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Hi Im Nathan wrote:

I saw this I dont think I've modded the normal diff
here goes

[Normal]

1. 00:16:512 (3) - Double reverse sliders play well for certain rhythms in music and because of the down beat at 00:16:745 I dont think this is the case here.
   Try this. Circle (5) is optional but I think it sounds well with this here
   
2. 00:21:411 (4) - This reverse slider doesnt fit the song. Use this rhythm
   
3. 00:24:211 (3) - blanket this around 00:23:278 (2) for prettiness?
   00:27:011 (2) - Curve this a little? Your call
   
   00:27:944 (3) - Curve this aswell if you do the above
4. 00:31:444 (3) - add note
5. 00:33:311 (6) - ^
6. 00:35:177 (3) - Delete note
7. 00:56:642 (2) - add note
8. 01:13:441 (4) - ^
9. 01:20:207 (1,2,3) - how about this rhythm? seems to be less confusing and fits the rhythm a lot more imo
   
10. 01:27:674 (1,2,3) - Same as above. Turn (3) into a 1/1 slider

Minus some red ticks this does play a lot like an easy diff imho. Try adding some more rhythm by moving sliders on red ticks.


Thats all from me, I hope this mod was helpful, GL!

Try to keep osz files under 10MB, or 30MB if you include a video/storyboard. Videos and storyboards can generally be decreased in size by lowering the quality of the video or trimming/resizing storyboard elements.

The Mp4 still stucks even i download the no video ver. Are you made 2 video file? Check it please
Quote:
Try to keep osz files under 10MB, or 30MB if you include a video/storyboard. Videos and storyboards can generally be decreased in size by lowering the quality of the video or trimming/resizing storyboard elements.

00:57:342 - Add a circle
01:13:441 - ^

00:21:411 (5) - Reduce 1/4 beat
01:09:941 (5) - ^
01:17:408 (6) - ^
01:24:874 (6) - ^
01:28:607 (3) - ^
Change beat snap advisor to 1/4

Rendyindo wrote:

Hyper

Timing Section
14031 or 00:14:031 - please check the "Inherit previous timing settings" changed
67141 or 01:07:141 - ^ moved this timing point to 00:57:809 since it changes by 1/8th

osu file format v14

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PreviewTime: 66208
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Title:Zankoku na Tenshi no These
TitleUnicode:残酷な天使のテーゼ
Artist:Yoko Takahashi
ArtistUnicode:高橋 洋子
Creator:LittlePigRMX
Version:Flanchan's Hyper
Source:Neon Genesis Evangelion
Tags:mecha, anime, project, a, cruel, angels, thesis, DominikWW, Flanchan
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Flanchan wrote:

Rendyindo wrote:

Hyper

Timing Section
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67141 or 01:07:141 - ^ moved this timing point to 00:57:809 since it changes by 1/8th

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Hard
I'll say this first. This map needs a lot of work. I already PMed you about this, you should remap it when you're more improved on mapping.
What's the biggest problem here? This map neglects the basic principle of mapping: Distance is proportional to the beat. I'll tell you what this means soon. Another big problem is, the placement of notes is too random and doesn't have its structure. The sliders being ugly is one of them. Also let's try to follow the music better.
* 00:07:562 (2,4) - I'll show you two different problems here. 1. It's overmapped. Do you hear any sounds at those points? No, there's no sound and that means you shouldn't put notes there. Sometimes people uses a bit of overmapping for emphasizing stuffs but in this case it's just out of the music and doesn't make sense. 2. The distance on 1/4 is inconsistent. Select 00:07:562 (2) - this note and see the distance with the previous note and the next one. 1.11x and 1.14x. Now select 00:08:312 (4) - and see those. 0.88x and 0.94x. Is there a specific reason you need to make them different? I don't think so. It's just being inconsistent which drops the quality. Try to keep the same distance between notes. That's why there is "Distance Snap" function on the editor.
* 00:04:750 (4,5,6) - this may seem to be minor, but this is just for an example. You can already notice that 00:05:125 (5,6) - is clearly further than 00:04:750 (4,5) - . Does that look tidy? Probably not. Just use distance snap, and it'll look much better. Also I don't recommend to use grid snap because it makes some errors.
* 00:08:500 (5) - So now, what's with this note? It totally neglects the vocal on 00:09:062 - while 00:08:875 - 00:09:250 - doesn't represent any sound on the song. Change it like 00:02:500 (2) -
* 00:14:879 (1) - It's better to not use 'many-dots' sliders when you don't know how they work. I'm not also good at those, so you might want to learn from other good ranked maps. Right now, don't just abuse those and use simple 3-dot curves because they're generally clean. That's one thing, and the bigger problem is that, why does that end on 00:15:170 - this weird 1/8? The strong spot should be at 00:15:112 - so make it end there.
* 00:15:403 (2) - Also doesn't make any sense. This song doesn't have 1/8s. It's just wrongly snapped.
* 00:15:695 (3,4) - Now what's wrong with this, you wanted to represent 00:15:695 (3) - this sound. Yeah, that's good, but now there is a problem. you followed 'that' sound, then why not 00:16:162 - instead of 00:16:045 - ? What this means is that, you need to select a major instrument, or vocal to follow for each parts. Just representing this sound, then that sound, then a 3rd sound, isn't a good idea. Players would be confused about what this mappers wants to represent. You need to use rhythms consistently, following the music.
* 00:17:678 (8,9) - This can be hardly read as a 1/2 gap. It's a bad idea to use different distances while the time gap is still same as 00:16:512 (5,6,7) - and such. Just use 1.1x.
* 00:18:378 (1) - Another issue here. An important principle of mapping is, that "Clicks are stronger than slider tails", because clicks require an action while slider tails don't. So let's apply it to this. 00:18:378 - is relatively much much weaker than 00:18:612 - (which is called 'downbeat', which is generally really strong because it's the start beat of the section). So if you made 00:18:378 - clickable, you should make 00:18:612 - clickable as well.
* 00:19:545 (4,5,6) - The rhythm is good, if it's the highest difficulty. But hey, you wouldn't want to make it this complicated while you have a Hyper difficulty. That's one issue, and another one is still the DS issue. Why the distance after and before 00:19:662 (5) - are different? It doesn't really make any sense. Just use same distance for same rhythm gaps unless you're going to represent something special there.
* 00:20:011 (6,7,1,2) - Also here, all the distances are so inconsistent. Big distances are used for emphasizing those beats. But rather 00:20:011 (6,7) - is bigger here. That beat is nothing to be emphasized. If you used big distance for 00:20:245 (7,1,2) - then it makes sense, because 00:20:478 - 00:20:945 - are strong. Also I want to suggest another thing. 00:20:478 - 00:20:711 - 00:20:945 - 00:21:178 - All these are almost equally strong, and the part itself is strong. So you put some emphasis on this part, by using more circles. As I said, circles are stronger (and harder) than slider tails.
* 00:22:578 (1) - Same problem here as well. 00:22:578 - This beat is definitely much much weaker than 00:22:811 - so 00:22:811 - should be clickable while 00:22:578 - can be on slider tail.
* 00:23:745 (4,5,1) - You didn't use distance snap here, did you?
* 00:22:578 - Also I'm sad that you decided to just spam 1/2s without any structured patterns. As you know, there are a LOT of 3/4 vocal sounds on the song. Try to make them more fun. Spamming 1/2s is not this song is meant to be. Also when you spam 1/2s, you still should think that which beat is stronger therefore needs to be emphasized with clicks. Here's an exmaple: 00:26:078 - Good, a strong vocal is represented with a click. but 00:27:011 - BAD. It's not only about the strong vocal sound is on the slider end, but also, the song repeats itself on 00:26:078 (1,2,3) - and 00:27:244 (4,5) - (including 00:27:011 - ) but the pattern you used is totally different. This is what we call as inconsistent.
* Some more example: 00:29:811 - strong but on the slider tail, 00:29:578 (1,2,3) - suddenly increased distance without specific reason, 00:30:161 - no notes here but at 00:32:027 - which is inconsistent, 00:33:544 - strong but on the slider tail and so on. You see all these problems gets repeated. That's why I say you should remap when you learn more things and are improved at mapping. You can't just fix all these one by one.
* So I'll only point out some different things from now. 00:40:077 - You missed this strong beat. Any reason to this? An important thing on mapping is that you should be able to explain why you used such pattern there.
* 00:40:543 (1) - Also you need to explain why there is an NC here and why it is closer to 00:40:777 (2,3) - and act as if they're a single pattern. Actually I don't think that makes sense anyway. That one should be closer to 00:39:844 (8) - instead and the NC should be at 00:40:777 (2) - or 00:41:010 (3) - because that's how the song is organized.
* 00:42:643 (6,7,8) - Please don't tell me you intentionally make it look similar while the time gap is actually different.
* 00:44:510 (2,3,4) - You used a triple here, then you should do the same for 00:46:376 (2,3) - . Also that distance change doesn't make any sense too. Also 00:45:093 - 00:46:960 - Why are they different?
* 00:48:476 (9,10) - Do you really think this is the best way to represent this part? You gotta make it more fun, please listen to the song carefully and find what you can do. I mean, why not http://puu.sh/mmROS/66d0b24b2c.jpg this?
* 01:09:008 (3,4) - A kind of a consistency applies here too. When they're in one small part and deemed to be similar, it's better if you make the slider shape same too.
* 01:12:741 (3,4,5) - There exist 1/4s. Yeah, it's not overmapped. But, I say again, consistency. What's different between that and 01:09:008 (3,4) - ? You can't just put something here and not there and so on. Be consistent on using rhythms, patterns, difficulties.
* 01:17:408 (6,7) - Compare this with 01:09:941 (5,6) -
* 01:28:607 (6,7) - Yup, overmapped too.
Now let's talk about the slider shapes. They're mostly too randomly made. You can just use the simple 3-dot curved sliders all over the map and that's still fine. It's better than making random shaped sliders. A basic method to make multiple dots sliders is that, you need to make the distance between dots SAME, to maintain the weight on the slider. If you put many on specific point, it's very weighted to that point, and it usually gets ugly. I'm not good at those too, so you would better open other ranked maps and learn how others made good shaped sliders.
One another tip is that it's better when the curves are not too tight. Loosen the curves and let them go around the map widely. You put notes too much gathered on the center, and it makes it feel very shrinked. This is also something you could just learn by looking into other maps.
And let's keep the consistent NC term as well. As I said, downbeats! The big white ticks are generally good choice to put every NCs. It's because they're usually very strong and are good points that divides a part from other parts. Also it's good when the term is consistent. Just look how Normal did that.
So yeah, I've not mentioned all issues on the map, as the same problem is getting repeated over and over again all over the map. Also there are many minor issues I didn't even pointed out, but those can be fixed later, when you can map generally better.

XxSeonxX wrote:

DominikWW's Easy
00:16:745 (1,2) - blanket fixed
00:21:411 (6,1) - ^[/box]

That's all I can find, good luck

Rendyindo wrote:

Easy

00:37:277 (1) - Uncheck new combo channged
01:09:008 (1) - ^ ^
01:12:274 (1) - ^^^
Change the beat Snap advisor to 1/4 becouse 01:28:607 (2) and 01:21:141 (2) are 3/4 slider well ok

Doyak wrote:

Hi, as you requested, a normal mod.

First of all, keep in mind this: I'll be honest here. This may hurt you a little

[DominikWW's Easy]
I found this diff actually pretty well-made. Let me point out some things you can improve.thx =)
* You know how to make blankets, but some of them are a bit ruined, because you used grid snap. It also ruins some distances like 1.03x or 0.97x. So it's better not to use grid snap and try to make them more perfect. I've tired to fix some blanket. I'm not sure if there are still a bit strange
* 00:02:500 (2) - 00:05:500 (4) - 00:08:500 (2) - You know there are no sounds at the end of those sliders. Since the bpm is really low, you don't need to hesitate using some 1/2 gaps. Use 3/4 reverse sliders for 00:02:500 (2) - 00:08:500 (2) - and just 3/4 slider for 00:05:500 (4) - and it'll fit to the music much better. I t think you're. Ishould be no problem to use at this slow BPM some 1/4 tacts and yes sounds much better! =P
* 00:54:076 (3,4,5,6,1) - Successive circles are very hard, which doesn't really fit with this part's intensity. Consider putting some sliders between them.k changed: I've put a slider there
* 00:58:742 - 01:06:208 - Even for Easy, these kind of long breaks feel really empty. The instruments are still making sounds, but the flow is disconnected. I suggest to fill them out in some way. Yeah I think you're right. Flows much better with something in there
* 01:12:274 (1) - This NC should go to 01:12:741 (2) - to be consistent. But before that, I wanna say that the NC term on the kiai is too short in general. I'd suggest to expand it to 2 downbeats. I have no idea why I've chosen the NC's like that. I've changed them ^^
* 00:37:744 (1) - Remove NC here. Of course. Maybe I thought that this is one combo because they are both blue =P
* 00:48:476 (1) - From here, I don't know if you're trying to use 2 downbeat NCs or 4 downbeat NCs like before this. I highly suggest to use just one of them. Also only 01:03:409 (6) - is inconsisent. I have changed them a litte bit. I think it's fine now

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Doyak wrote:

[Flanchan's Hyper]
Please read my mod on Hard diff before you start reading this. Many of the things there apply to this diff as well. What's more on this diff, this diff is barely readable. Let's see what we can do about them.
* 00:05:500 (1,2) - I would definitely not suggest this. I know you're unsure about the exact point the sound is and you found that those spots fits quite well. But in this kind of case, you'd better not do that. The vocal is always incorrect by few ms and in this case, she intentionally said it a little slowly. More important thing is, that which beat is "intended". It's kinda clear that they're 00:05:687 - and 00:06:062 - because it's just how this song generally is. So would be better to snap there. Same for 00:07:000 (1) - 00:08:500 (2) - , snap those at 00:07:750 - 00:09:062 - changed, thanks
* 00:17:736 (8,9) - This may be hard to read. Why? because the distance looks similar with 00:16:803 (4,5,6,7,8) - so most players would think that the slider starts at 00:18:203 - because it's a white tick, which is generally strong. changed
* 00:21:236 (9,1) - Having smaller distance than 00:20:536 (6,7,8,9) - doesn't make sense while it's the strongest one. changed
* 00:21:469 (1,2,3,1) - This overlap really looks bad imo. changed
* 00:28:352 (5,6,7) - Generally a bad idea. Because it has all same distance visually, but the rhythm is not. Would be better to give them a difference. changed
* 00:35:468 (1,2,3,1) - A slowdown doesn't really make sense too. It's the strongest of the whole part but gets smaller scale? I don't think it's a good idea. changed
* 00:37:685 (2,3) - Is hard to read too and doesn't really need to do this. I know the vocal 'kinda' starts at 00:37:685 - but it's just your interpretation. The distance there is making it confusing as well. Who would expect a 3/4 gap right there while the distance is small? removed
* 00:38:968 (4,6) - This kind of random-overlapping is generally a bad idea. Rotate 6 to clockwise to perfectly stack to it. changed
* 00:41:068 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - This spacing here is really bad. I mean, it's just mostly random. Actually, just compare the scale you used back at 00:24:269 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - . Why it went this smaller? If you're using some complicated rhythms like those 3/4s, just fix the distance and make it more readable. And don't change the scale of notes while the song is pretty much same. changed
* 00:47:309 (3) - Yup don't interpert sounds on your own. This note is definitely intended to be 00:47:368 - and you need to follow that. Also it doesn't make sense to having bigger distance on 00:47:309 (3,4) - as well. changed
* 00:48:534 (1) - This NC isn't needed, considering how you used NCs before. changed
* 00:48:534 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - This is why I say this map is unreadable. Do you think players can read only from approach circles on this low AR? No, and that's why you need to use distances properly. As I mentioned on Hard's mod, this is a basic principle of mapping: Distances are proportional to the rhythm. Say, 00:48:534 (1,2) - 00:49:234 (2,3) - Would you expect them to have different time gap while the distance is almost same? Also any reason why it gets different again on 00:49:818 (4,5,1) - ? changed
* 00:50:401 (1,2,3,4) - It's sad. Those are specially really strong beats but the distance is very small still. At least it would be much better if you did that like 00:57:809 (1,2,3,4) - changed
* 00:55:300 (7,8,1,2,3) - Some things that don't make sense: 1. Why did you suddenly stop following 3/4 sounds like 00:55:417 - 00:56:350 - while you followed rest of them? 2. 00:56:000 (1,2,3) - Why suddenly big distance while I don't find anything to emphasize there? 3. 00:56:000 (1,3) - This overlap looks bad as well. changed
* 00:59:676 (1,2,3) - You know what I would say here. changed
* 01:01:309 (4,5,6) - Same for this. I have 2 things to say. Different distance for same time gap, bad overlapping. changed
* 01:07:491 (1) - Also this note doesn't make much sense removed
* 01:13:673 (8,9,1,2,3,4,1) - Really, really hard to read. Just assume that you're playing this map. is it really that bad? i can read it alright but maybe thats just because i made it, i'm not really sure what to replace it with but ill see what i can do
* 01:21:140 (5,6,7,8) - lol same ^
* 01:20:206 (1,2,3,4) - Why is this harder than 01:27:672 (1,2,3,4) - ? changed
A general problem with this map is that the distance is too random. Try to maintain same distance between notes, when the time gap is same. But make them different from different time gaps.
Also try to make better blankets as I mentioned on Normal's mod. This would make the map look clean, and it also maintains the distance between notes, so that's cool.
And I didn't mention there, but please make your NC term consistent. If you're going for 1 downbeat NC then keep that. Don't change it to 2 downbeats randomly, unless you're going to emphasize something or because of readability issues. will do, thanks

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Doyak wrote:

The point is not remapping. It's about improving your skills and how much you can apply them into new maps. Remapping is just a method to make an advanced map, which is better than fixing all things one by one. I hope you've learned a lot from my mod.

Nathan Kiss wrote:

Also looking at the size of Doyak's mod it must have took him at least an hour, most likely more.

Flanchan wrote:

Doyak wrote:

[Flanchan's Hyper]
Please read my mod on Hard diff before you start reading this. Many of the things there apply to this diff as well. What's more on this diff, this diff is barely readable. Let's see what we can do about them.
* 00:05:500 (1,2) - I would definitely not suggest this. I know you're unsure about the exact point the sound is and you found that those spots fits quite well. But in this kind of case, you'd better not do that. The vocal is always incorrect by few ms and in this case, she intentionally said it a little slowly. More important thing is, that which beat is "intended". It's kinda clear that they're 00:05:687 - and 00:06:062 - because it's just how this song generally is. So would be better to snap there. Same for 00:07:000 (1) - 00:08:500 (2) - , snap those at 00:07:750 - 00:09:062 - changed, thanks
* 00:17:736 (8,9) - This may be hard to read. Why? because the distance looks similar with 00:16:803 (4,5,6,7,8) - so most players would think that the slider starts at 00:18:203 - because it's a white tick, which is generally strong. changed
* 00:21:236 (9,1) - Having smaller distance than 00:20:536 (6,7,8,9) - doesn't make sense while it's the strongest one. changed
* 00:21:469 (1,2,3,1) - This overlap really looks bad imo. changed
* 00:28:352 (5,6,7) - Generally a bad idea. Because it has all same distance visually, but the rhythm is not. Would be better to give them a difference. changed
* 00:35:468 (1,2,3,1) - A slowdown doesn't really make sense too. It's the strongest of the whole part but gets smaller scale? I don't think it's a good idea. changed
* 00:37:685 (2,3) - Is hard to read too and doesn't really need to do this. I know the vocal 'kinda' starts at 00:37:685 - but it's just your interpretation. The distance there is making it confusing as well. Who would expect a 3/4 gap right there while the distance is small? removed
* 00:38:968 (4,6) - This kind of random-overlapping is generally a bad idea. Rotate 6 to clockwise to perfectly stack to it. changed
* 00:41:068 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - This spacing here is really bad. I mean, it's just mostly random. Actually, just compare the scale you used back at 00:24:269 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - . Why it went this smaller? If you're using some complicated rhythms like those 3/4s, just fix the distance and make it more readable. And don't change the scale of notes while the song is pretty much same. changed
* 00:47:309 (3) - Yup don't interpert sounds on your own. This note is definitely intended to be 00:47:368 - and you need to follow that. Also it doesn't make sense to having bigger distance on 00:47:309 (3,4) - as well. changed
* 00:48:534 (1) - This NC isn't needed, considering how you used NCs before. changed
* 00:48:534 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - This is why I say this map is unreadable. Do you think players can read only from approach circles on this low AR? No, and that's why you need to use distances properly. As I mentioned on Hard's mod, this is a basic principle of mapping: Distances are proportional to the rhythm. Say, 00:48:534 (1,2) - 00:49:234 (2,3) - Would you expect them to have different time gap while the distance is almost same? Also any reason why it gets different again on 00:49:818 (4,5,1) - ? changed
* 00:50:401 (1,2,3,4) - It's sad. Those are specially really strong beats but the distance is very small still. At least it would be much better if you did that like 00:57:809 (1,2,3,4) - changed
* 00:55:300 (7,8,1,2,3) - Some things that don't make sense: 1. Why did you suddenly stop following 3/4 sounds like 00:55:417 - 00:56:350 - while you followed rest of them? 2. 00:56:000 (1,2,3) - Why suddenly big distance while I don't find anything to emphasize there? 3. 00:56:000 (1,3) - This overlap looks bad as well. changed
* 00:59:676 (1,2,3) - You know what I would say here. changed
* 01:01:309 (4,5,6) - Same for this. I have 2 things to say. Different distance for same time gap, bad overlapping. changed
* 01:07:491 (1) - Also this note doesn't make much sense removed
* 01:13:673 (8,9,1,2,3,4,1) - Really, really hard to read. Just assume that you're playing this map. is it really that bad? i can read it alright but maybe thats just because i made it, i'm not really sure what to replace it with but ill see what i can do
* 01:21:140 (5,6,7,8) - lol same ^
* 01:20:206 (1,2,3,4) - Why is this harder than 01:27:672 (1,2,3,4) - ? changed
A general problem with this map is that the distance is too random. Try to maintain same distance between notes, when the time gap is same. But make them different from different time gaps.
Also try to make better blankets as I mentioned on Normal's mod. This would make the map look clean, and it also maintains the distance between notes, so that's cool.
And I didn't mention there, but please make your NC term consistent. If you're going for 1 downbeat NC then keep that. Don't change it to 2 downbeats randomly, unless you're going to emphasize something or because of readability issues. will do, thanks

thanks for the mod, that was very in depth!

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DominikWW wrote:

XxSeonxX wrote:

DominikWW's Easy
00:16:745 (1,2) - blanket fixed
00:21:411 (6,1) - ^[/box]

That's all I can find, good luck

Rendyindo wrote:

Easy

00:37:277 (1) - Uncheck new combo channged
01:09:008 (1) - ^ ^
01:12:274 (1) - ^^^
Change the beat Snap advisor to 1/4 becouse 01:28:607 (2) and 01:21:141 (2) are 3/4 slider well ok

Doyak wrote:

Hi, as you requested, a normal mod.

First of all, keep in mind this: I'll be honest here. This may hurt you a little

[DominikWW's Easy]
I found this diff actually pretty well-made. Let me point out some things you can improve.thx =)
* You know how to make blankets, but some of them are a bit ruined, because you used grid snap. It also ruins some distances like 1.03x or 0.97x. So it's better not to use grid snap and try to make them more perfect. I've tired to fix some blanket. I'm not sure if there are still a bit strange
* 00:02:500 (2) - 00:05:500 (4) - 00:08:500 (2) - You know there are no sounds at the end of those sliders. Since the bpm is really low, you don't need to hesitate using some 1/2 gaps. Use 3/4 reverse sliders for 00:02:500 (2) - 00:08:500 (2) - and just 3/4 slider for 00:05:500 (4) - and it'll fit to the music much better. I t think you're. Ishould be no problem to use at this slow BPM some 1/4 tacts and yes sounds much better! =P
* 00:54:076 (3,4,5,6,1) - Successive circles are very hard, which doesn't really fit with this part's intensity. Consider putting some sliders between them.k changed: I've put a slider there
* 00:58:742 - 01:06:208 - Even for Easy, these kind of long breaks feel really empty. The instruments are still making sounds, but the flow is disconnected. I suggest to fill them out in some way. Yeah I think you're right. Flows much better with something in there
* 01:12:274 (1) - This NC should go to 01:12:741 (2) - to be consistent. But before that, I wanna say that the NC term on the kiai is too short in general. I'd suggest to expand it to 2 downbeats. I have no idea why I've chosen the NC's like that. I've changed them ^^
* 00:37:744 (1) - Remove NC here. Of course. Maybe I thought that this is one combo because they are both blue =P
* 00:48:476 (1) - From here, I don't know if you're trying to use 2 downbeat NCs or 4 downbeat NCs like before this. I highly suggest to use just one of them. Also only 01:03:409 (6) - is inconsisent. I have changed them a litte bit. I think it's fine now

Thanks for the mod =)

Here is the Update:

Update

osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:残酷な天使のテーゼ
Artist:Yoko Takahashi
ArtistUnicode:高橋 洋子
Creator:LittlePigRMX
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One thing I that can help you get better is to reply to mods like the 2 gd'ers above have

Cerulean Veyron wrote:

Hello! Picked up this map from #modreqs some time ago

Just some suggestions that might keep you up for this map, although the mapping doesn't fit my level, but helping could do the thing!
[> General <]

1. - I gotta admit, I downloaded this map with a video being it's file type mp4, which most likely would appear an error and may not be playable on background... Then, it happened on mine. Many people recommend videos either .avi or .flv format due high compression rate. It might not be the absolute best quality, but it suffices like any other ranked anime OP/ED maps that uses this kind of method. Yours is fine overall, but the file type is the problem I'm concerned with. You may keep it, or convert another one to the mentioned format at first.

bigfrog wrote:

hmm...so is my mod still needed??

> Shmiklak's Normal <
00:11:875 - Well, you aren't using this green inherited point, only the next one for the spinner. So, better delete this unused point.
00:27:011 (2,3) - Optional objective: If you can do a bit much curve on the second slider, it can be more cleanse and symmetric in a whole. It's pretty minor and not necessary, but I probably think making a symmetry pattern here can improve aesthetics of the diff. You can delete the second slider and copy-paste Ctrl+G/H it as usual, or in another way.
00:41:010 (1,2,3,4) - For hitsound consistency's sake, you may need to turn this into drum sampleset to keep up it's equal emphasis with 00:26:078 (1,2,3,4) -
00:49:876 - I feel that this tick should really have a circle for the vocals or so, seems pretty intense for one imo.
00:51:976 (5,2) - Not really sure, but this overlap in-between doesn't look very nice, well... to me. I might wanted it a bit more further to avoid deeper overlaps and for visibility. But if you made this intentionally, I won't stop you.
00:59:676 (1) - You would've continued to add more whistles here to follow some melody in the song track, but not too much because it goes like over a gap of 3/2 to 1/4 and 1/1. No need to add it all over.
01:07:142 (1) - Maybe add a finish hitsound on the head of the slider? It's one of the strongest beat in the music and set~
01:08:075 (2) - Optional objective: The spacing is here quite smaller than your default use of spacing (which is 1.2x), likely away by 0.03x so it's not a big deal. But just to improve a little more of it, you might need to move it nearby x:266|y:347 or around it. It's okay if you want to keep this for some reason ;p
01:11:808 (2) - Same as above, x:212|y:122 or nearby.
01:14:608 (1) - And this, the same as 01:07:142 (1) -
01:21:374 (3) - Here, for rhythm theories... it starts to be offbeat and the song almost takes a full emphasis from the notes here. So maybe remaking this part into following some vocals will make it's rhythm much more better.

LittlePigRMX wrote:

bigfrog wrote:

hmm...so is my mod still needed??

because of a bn, could you put me on hold for a week?

00:01:000 (1) - You may wanna try curving this on the other side in order to slide the flow through the next one more smoothly, sth like this would do:
ss
00:08:500 (3,4,5) - The spacing here differs too much despite the rhythm has it's gap only away by 1/4 division, equal in-between circle (4) on the timeline. So, try to balance the spacing by 1.1x as used on some previous notes. Or either moving circle (4) on x:179|y:335 or nearby this grid should suffice.
00:11:500 (3,4) - The vocals sounds absolutely that kind of rhythm, but it's hardly noticeable unless you're hearing it in-depth. But in common sense, it isn't. Maybe it's best to try out 1/4 instead of 1/8 division on this one. I know you're trying to do sth that we do not see yet, but this doesn't seem to work at it's state.
00:14:879 (1,2,3) - Almost the same issue as 00:08:500 (3,4,5) - about the spacing.
00:19:078 (4) - You could've done a better curve on this slider, rather than adding another slider point just to compromise flow. So, might wanna remake this one for sure.
- Well, I can see there are a lot more of these issues above mentioned are also being used further. I wouldn't mention them all just to enlarge the mod post bigger and consuming your time for keeping you occupied. So, to not make it repetitive... I've just scaled up with these ones, and you can check others later at anytime.
00:33:544 (1,2) - Optional objective: Well, I'm assuming this is the only blanket I'm pretty concerned with. So you may recorrect it with a little curve by moving the tail a bit further to cover up the next circle. This should do! It's really minor, and not necessary.
00:35:410 (1,1) - I kinda dislike notes appearing too quick/sudden after a spinner especially if the difficulty has a high approach rate, and this shows an example. Adding a triplet after spinner by 1/2 just for the hi-hats, doesn't sound reasonable imo. You can keep it if you have a clear reason, it's just my opinion. I'm not that fussy :3
00:49:176 (3,4,5) - Probably the same issues for the spacings, but I wanted to show you sth pretty much... uhh... "worse"? Like this for example. This time, sliders.
00:55:942 (7) - I may think you're trying to do some anchoring here, so I might be able to help here. If you may try a slider shape, like below for example, can improve aesthetics pretty much more:
ss
01:09:008 (3,4) - This likely has the same issue for the symmetric patterning from the previous diff.
01:21:841 (1,2) - Whistles here could sound a bit noisy, since the hi-hats in the song track's background doesn't drop off that much. So maybe replacing it to claps can make it sound better.

00:33:544 (1,2) - Optional objective: Well, I'm assuming this is the only blanket I'm pretty concerned with. So you may recorrect it with a little curve by moving the tail a bit further to cover up the next circle. This should do! It's really minor, and not necessary.

00:35:410 (1,1) - I kinda dislike notes appearing too quick/sudden after a spinner especially if the difficulty has a high approach rate, and this shows an example. Adding a triplet after spinner by 1/2 just for the hi-hats, doesn't sound reasonable imo. You can keep it if you have a clear reason, it's just my opinion. I'm not that fussy :3

There are some issues I couldn't mention because I might sound very rude, like to see about hitsounds and obvious issues I mentioned. But I tried my best to be clear and understandle~ Try to get a few more mods for the basics and the usual things, might be able to go in-depth if you process it throughtly.

If there's sth not clear or you have questions about the mod, don't hesitate to ask! And good luck!

- I gotta admit, I downloaded this map with a video being it's file type mp4, which most likely would appear an error and may not be playable on background... Then, it happened on mine. Many people recommend videos either .avi or .flv format due high compression rate. It might not be the absolute best quality, but it suffices like any other ranked anime OP/ED maps that uses this kind of method. Yours is fine overall, but the file type is the problem I'm concerned with. You may keep it, or convert another one to the mentioned format at first.

bigfrog wrote:

Flanchan's Hyper
00:11:687 (1) - i think this spinner should start at 00:12:250 changed
00:15:695 (2) - this circle seems a little not necessary...i can't hear any sound here, maybe remove it? removed
00:18:028 (10) - this slider should end at 00:18:378 i think its fine here
00:21:878 (3,4) - these slider may make player confused and they seems a little unpredictable, use another way instead? i dont think they're that hard to read
some object can be put more neatly i know what you mean but i'm not sure how to change it at the moment, ill play around with it

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TitleUnicode:残酷な天使のテーゼ
Artist:Yoko Takahashi
ArtistUnicode:高橋 洋子
Creator:LittlePigRMX
Version:Flanchan's Hyper
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Cerulean Veyron wrote:

Hello! Picked up this map from #modreqs some time ago

[> DominikWW's Easy <]

1. - I kinda didn't like the hitsounding choice in this diff... Well, only a half of it. Starting on 00:52:209 (1) - , where there are whistles only following the snares. It doesn't should a bit of "indication" to the music, which won't sound very fine imo. Maybe adding some claps on the second and fourth tick on this part would fill up it's sounding rhythm, that'd improve much more to keep the notice for players that the chorus is near. So, I guess you should check it out yourself in comparison ;p I have changed the hitsounds a bit and I put some timing points to increase the audio volume
2. 00:01:000 - I bet you should remove the green inherited point here, you aren't using it on anything but only the offset. No SV change, volume change, hitsounding, just... nothing at all. Best you delete it for good. ok
3. 00:14:879 - Same as above.
4. 00:21:411 (6,1) - Speaking of rhythm theories, I do not think that ignoring this downbeat is a good idea (which possibly landing slider's tail on the long tick) as the new track of the music is quite strong here. Besides, it feels more like a random 1/1 gap, at least for me. You may just have to do a Ctrl + G on these two, It will swap them on the timeline and give you more matching rhythm. If you're going to apply this, make sure you recheck it's spacing and placements. yeah you're right it sounds a bit awkward like this. changed.
5. 00:26:078 (3,4,5) - Somehow I'm not a fan of these straight sliders flowing up too linear. So soothing it's structure can make it flow much smoother and better, at least curving one of the slider would do the work. I also dont like a straight pattern. I changed these you mentioned but not all straight sliders
6. 00:48:476 (4) - Maybe adding a clap on the repeat tail could sound much greater. yep you're right
7. 00:58:276 (7,1) - This would seriously be a little tricky over beginner players. This overlap is the only pattern in the whole diff, and it looks a bit untidy imo. I recommend to make patterns clear on any Easy diffs for visibility and readiability. But this, it's best you reconsider this. I have no idea why I've made it like this. Changed.
8. 01:20:207 (3,4,1) - Almost the same issue as 00:26:078 (3,4,5) - ^
9. 01:25:807 (1,2,3,4) - I would why you're ending the set with spamming claps on each white tick here, doesn't sound least but it's probably odd to it's consistency. yeah it sounds like just spaming claps here. I changed it a litte bit.

DominikWW's Easy
00:15:812 - add a slider here and end at 00:16:278? It must have a certain break in easy after spinner (at least 2-3 ful tacts. I'm not sure right now) or it is not a rankable easy diff.
00:59:676 (1) - it's not suggest to avoid overlap in Easy fixed

nice diff, but the hit sound can be set louder i think yup I also think so^^ I've put some timing points with higher volume

osu file format v14

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Title:Zankoku na Tenshi no These
TitleUnicode:残酷な天使のテーゼ
Artist:Yoko Takahashi
ArtistUnicode:高橋 洋子
Creator:LittlePigRMX
Version:DominikWW's Easy
Source:Neon Genesis Evangelion
Tags:mecha, anime, project, a, cruel, angels, thesis, DominikWW, Flanchan
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hi, from queue~

General
your combos colors 1 and 4 are almost same color, plz make them seems obviously different.

Flanchan's Hyper
00:11:687 (1) - i think this spinner should start at 00:12:250
00:15:695 (2) - this circle seems a little not necessary...i can't hear any sound here, maybe remove it?
00:18:028 (10) - this slider should end at 00:18:378
00:21:878 (3,4) - these slider may make player confused and they seems a little unpredictable, use another way instead?

some object can be put more neatly

Hard
00:02:500 (2) - i think clap sound not fit here...
00:05:500 (6) - ^same as above
00:07:000 (1,2) - make them symmetry?
00:18:378 (1) - remove this circle, there is no sound here
00:22:811 (1) - should end at 00:23:278
00:33:544 (1,2) - blanket? like this :

00:37:744 (1) - end at 00:38:210

the distance between the objects can be set more regularly.

Shmiklak's Normal
01:05:275~01:07:142 - i think can add something between, it seems a little pity to make a blank here

DominikWW's Easy
00:15:812 - add a slider here and end at 00:16:278?
00:59:676 (1) - it's not suggest to avoid overlap in Easy

nice diff, but the hit sound can be set louder i think

that all, good luck~~

Flanchan wrote:

bigfrog wrote:

Flanchan's Hyper
00:11:687 (1) - i think this spinner should start at 00:12:250 changed
00:15:695 (2) - this circle seems a little not necessary...i can't hear any sound here, maybe remove it? removed
00:18:028 (10) - this slider should end at 00:18:378 i think its fine here
00:21:878 (3,4) - these slider may make player confused and they seems a little unpredictable, use another way instead? i dont think they're that hard to read
some object can be put more neatly i know what you mean but i'm not sure how to change it at the moment, ill play around with it

thank you for the mod!

updated .osu

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: A Cruel Angels Thesis.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 66208
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 7843,8500,9156,36168,67200,81606,81840,88373
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 0.9999999

[Metadata]
Title:Zankoku na Tenshi no These
TitleUnicode:残酷な天使のテーゼ
Artist:Yoko Takahashi
ArtistUnicode:高橋 洋子
Creator:LittlePigRMX
Version:Flanchan's Hyper
Source:Neon Genesis Evangelion
Tags:mecha, anime, project, a, cruel, angels, thesis, DominikWW, Flanchan
BeatmapID:863301
BeatmapSetID:365014

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"nge.mp4"
0,0,"evaimage.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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59676,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0
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88957,-100,4,1,0,100,0,0


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Combo2 : 48,34,221
Combo3 : 205,145,238
Combo4 : 238,233,248

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DominikWW wrote:

Cerulean Veyron wrote:

Hello! Picked up this map from #modreqs some time ago

[> DominikWW's Easy <]

1. - I kinda didn't like the hitsounding choice in this diff... Well, only a half of it. Starting on 00:52:209 (1) - , where there are whistles only following the snares. It doesn't should a bit of "indication" to the music, which won't sound very fine imo. Maybe adding some claps on the second and fourth tick on this part would fill up it's sounding rhythm, that'd improve much more to keep the notice for players that the chorus is near. So, I guess you should check it out yourself in comparison ;p I have changed the hitsounds a bit and I put some timing points to increase the audio volume
2. 00:01:000 - I bet you should remove the green inherited point here, you aren't using it on anything but only the offset. No SV change, volume change, hitsounding, just... nothing at all. Best you delete it for good. ok
3. 00:14:879 - Same as above.
4. 00:21:411 (6,1) - Speaking of rhythm theories, I do not think that ignoring this downbeat is a good idea (which possibly landing slider's tail on the long tick) as the new track of the music is quite strong here. Besides, it feels more like a random 1/1 gap, at least for me. You may just have to do a Ctrl + G on these two, It will swap them on the timeline and give you more matching rhythm. If you're going to apply this, make sure you recheck it's spacing and placements. yeah you're right it sounds a bit awkward like this. changed.
5. 00:26:078 (3,4,5) - Somehow I'm not a fan of these straight sliders flowing up too linear. So soothing it's structure can make it flow much smoother and better, at least curving one of the slider would do the work. I also dont like a straight pattern. I changed these you mentioned but not all straight sliders
6. 00:48:476 (4) - Maybe adding a clap on the repeat tail could sound much greater. yep you're right
7. 00:58:276 (7,1) - This would seriously be a little tricky over beginner players. This overlap is the only pattern in the whole diff, and it looks a bit untidy imo. I recommend to make patterns clear on any Easy diffs for visibility and readiability. But this, it's best you reconsider this. I have no idea why I've made it like this. Changed.
8. 01:20:207 (3,4,1) - Almost the same issue as 00:26:078 (3,4,5) - ^
9. 01:25:807 (1,2,3,4) - I would why you're ending the set with spamming claps on each white tick here, doesn't sound least but it's probably odd to it's consistency. yeah it sounds like just spaming claps here. I changed it a litte bit.

Thanks for the mod

DominikWW's Easy
00:15:812 - add a slider here and end at 00:16:278? It must have a certain break in easy after spinner (at least 2-3 ful tacts. I'm not sure right now) or it is not a rankable easy diff.
00:59:676 (1) - it's not suggest to avoid overlap in Easy fixed

nice diff, but the hit sound can be set louder i think yup I also think so^^ I've put some timing points with higher volume

thx for the mod

Here is the Update:

Easy

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: A Cruel Angels Thesis.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 66208
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 0.6999999

[Metadata]
Title:Zankoku na Tenshi no These
TitleUnicode:残酷な天使のテーゼ
Artist:Yoko Takahashi
ArtistUnicode:高橋 洋子
Creator:LittlePigRMX
Version:DominikWW's Easy
Source:Neon Genesis Evangelion
Tags:mecha, anime, project, a, cruel, angels, thesis, DominikWW, Flanchan
BeatmapID:815132
BeatmapSetID:365014

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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