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Hey! I am back! Your mapset realy was better, but I have what say:
Hey! I am back! Your mapset realy was better, but I have what say:
SPOILER
Add video to all diffs! TO ALL! It is realy critic.
Add Normal diff (If you need GD you can ask me).
I thing your combo colors is not good. Try change it
Now about diffs:
00:02:500 (2) - Try not use blue lines in Easy/Normal diffs. Make it longer to 00:03:250
00:05:500 (4,1) - Make better blanket
00:22:811 (1,2) - Is it flow? Or not? Move (2) to x=348 y=132, for making better flow
00:26:078 (3,4,5,6) - Move (3) to x=213 y=349, and move (4,5,6) via using DS
00:34:477 (4,5) - This blanket is good but I thing you can make it some better
00:42:877 (4) - Click Ctrl+H,Ctrl+J,Ctrl+G, and move to x=368 y=176
00:48:476 (1) - I thing better move it to x=63, y=56
01:18:341 (1) - Move to x=48 y=288 for better blanket
01:28:607 (2) - Make it longer to 01:29:073
00:01:000 - Make volume husher. 15% for example
00:02:500 (2) - I thing flow will be better. Try move it to x=216 y=296
00:04:000 (3) - Make it straight and move to x=256y=232
00:04:750 (4,5,6) - Move it via DS
00:11:500 (3) - Remove whistle sound from centre (double click center of slider, and remove like default hitsound)
00:12:062 - WHAT?! Why? Why u make volume 85% here. I thing better delete this line
00:15:403 (2) - Move for make flow
00:15:695 (3,4) - Same
00:17:678 (8,9) - Better make slider. It's more comfortable for playing
00:19:078 (3) - Awful slider. Try make it better
00:20:011 - Maybe circle?
00:20:478 (1) - Move to x=309 y=268
00:20:945 (2) - x=448 y=264
00:14:879 - Make volume ~70%
00:22:578 (1,2,3,4,5) - Remap this part. Try make it more beautiful
00:24:211 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same
00:26:078 (1) - Make it straight
00:28:178 (6) - Same, but move it to x=104 y=136
00:29:578 (1) - x=400 y=240
00:30:044 (2) - x=376 y=152
00:30:744 (4,5,6) - Make flow
00:33:777 (3) - x=120 y=256
00:34:944 (6) - Make it straight
00:35:410 (7) - x=174 y=176
00:36:110 (8) - x=311 y=271
00:36:110 (8) - x=395 y=271
00:37:044 (1) - x=256 y=352
00:37:160 (2) - x=216 y=336
00:37:277 (3) - x=184 y=312
00:37:977 (4) - x=184 y=216
00:38:910 (6) - x=288 y=136
00:40:777 (2) - x=72 y=792 for making flow
00:41:710 (4) - x=296 y=320
00:42:877 (7) - Change slider
00:43:577 (8) - Straight
00:44:743 (4) - I don't like this slider. Change it
00:46:143 (1,2,3) - Fix flow
00:48:010 (7,9) - Fix overlap
00:48:243 (8,9) - Make blanket better
00:52:443 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This part is good and bad. I don't know how make it better. Try do it self
00:55:942 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same
00:57:809 (1,2,3,4) - Make like this
00:59:676 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - It's not beauty. Try remap
01:07:142 (3) - NC
01:08:075 (2) - Make straight
01:09:008 (3) - Move end some down
01:14:025 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I don't sure about stream. It is Hard diff, not Insane
01:15:774 (2) - x=184 y=232
01:16:008 (3) - x=256 y=224
01:16:708 (4) - x=408 y=120
01:16:941 (5) - Straight
01:17:641 (7) - Change slider
01:19:274 (2) - Same. It's awful
01:19:974 (3,4,5,6,7) - Square pattern. I thing it's not good
01:22:074 (3) - x=304 y=80
01:23:707 (6,7,8,9,10) - I don't like this pattern.
Sorry if I very harmful XD
General
Check AiMod. You have problem with timing.Add video to all diffs! TO ALL! It is realy critic.
Add Normal diff (If you need GD you can ask me).
I thing your combo colors is not good. Try change it
Now about diffs:
DominikWW's Easy
Check AiMod. DS in Easy/Normal diffs must be fixed (ranking criteria)00:02:500 (2) - Try not use blue lines in Easy/Normal diffs. Make it longer to 00:03:250
00:05:500 (4,1) - Make better blanket
00:22:811 (1,2) - Is it flow? Or not? Move (2) to x=348 y=132, for making better flow
00:26:078 (3,4,5,6) - Move (3) to x=213 y=349, and move (4,5,6) via using DS
00:34:477 (4,5) - This blanket is good but I thing you can make it some better
00:42:877 (4) - Click Ctrl+H,Ctrl+J,Ctrl+G, and move to x=368 y=176
00:48:476 (1) - I thing better move it to x=63, y=56
01:18:341 (1) - Move to x=48 y=288 for better blanket
01:28:607 (2) - Make it longer to 01:29:073
Hard
I thing 1/8 is not need, but it's your choose00:01:000 - Make volume husher. 15% for example
00:02:500 (2) - I thing flow will be better. Try move it to x=216 y=296
00:04:000 (3) - Make it straight and move to x=256y=232
00:04:750 (4,5,6) - Move it via DS
00:11:500 (3) - Remove whistle sound from centre (double click center of slider, and remove like default hitsound)
00:12:062 - WHAT?! Why? Why u make volume 85% here. I thing better delete this line
00:15:403 (2) - Move for make flow
00:15:695 (3,4) - Same
00:17:678 (8,9) - Better make slider. It's more comfortable for playing
00:19:078 (3) - Awful slider. Try make it better
00:20:011 - Maybe circle?
00:20:478 (1) - Move to x=309 y=268
00:20:945 (2) - x=448 y=264
00:14:879 - Make volume ~70%
00:22:578 (1,2,3,4,5) - Remap this part. Try make it more beautiful
00:24:211 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same
00:26:078 (1) - Make it straight
00:28:178 (6) - Same, but move it to x=104 y=136
00:29:578 (1) - x=400 y=240
00:30:044 (2) - x=376 y=152
00:30:744 (4,5,6) - Make flow
00:33:777 (3) - x=120 y=256
00:34:944 (6) - Make it straight
00:35:410 (7) - x=174 y=176
00:36:110 (8) - x=311 y=271
00:36:110 (8) - x=395 y=271
00:37:044 (1) - x=256 y=352
00:37:160 (2) - x=216 y=336
00:37:277 (3) - x=184 y=312
00:37:977 (4) - x=184 y=216
00:38:910 (6) - x=288 y=136
00:40:777 (2) - x=72 y=792 for making flow
00:41:710 (4) - x=296 y=320
00:42:877 (7) - Change slider
00:43:577 (8) - Straight
00:44:743 (4) - I don't like this slider. Change it
00:46:143 (1,2,3) - Fix flow
00:48:010 (7,9) - Fix overlap
00:48:243 (8,9) - Make blanket better
00:52:443 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This part is good and bad. I don't know how make it better. Try do it self
00:55:942 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same
00:57:809 (1,2,3,4) - Make like this
00:59:676 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - It's not beauty. Try remap
01:07:142 (3) - NC
01:08:075 (2) - Make straight
01:09:008 (3) - Move end some down
01:14:025 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I don't sure about stream. It is Hard diff, not Insane
01:15:774 (2) - x=184 y=232
01:16:008 (3) - x=256 y=224
01:16:708 (4) - x=408 y=120
01:16:941 (5) - Straight
01:17:641 (7) - Change slider
01:19:274 (2) - Same. It's awful
01:19:974 (3,4,5,6,7) - Square pattern. I thing it's not good
01:22:074 (3) - x=304 y=80
01:23:707 (6,7,8,9,10) - I don't like this pattern.
Sorry if I very harmful XD