00:02:598 - add note on here for cymbal, since the sound is more louder than others, recommended like
http://puu.sh/mdr7o/6a4f9fb12f.jpg00:04:832 (4832|5,5071|5,5310|5) - this jack make a bit uncomfortable, suggest to 00:05:071 (5071|5) - move this to 5
00:07:544 - add note at 3, it's for cymbal too, like you did it on 00:28:128 -
00:08:022 - since you making this into 3 notes (that's right to make it 3 notes), why don't you make 00:08:661 - 00:09:299 - this into 3 notes too? xD
also add note for 00:09:937 - this too! (since the sound is the same, you know that). so this is the pattern suggestion
http://puu.sh/mdrtV/6f84d92fd6.jpg00:09:458 (9458|4) - delete this, i know you make it for the pattern, but there's no any notable instrument except the melody
00:11:852 - hmm this sound is should be 3 notes, you know the instrument is more louder like the before. so
http://puu.sh/mdrUE/cbb3306f30.jpg00:14:405 - recommended you to make it like this
http://puu.sh/mds0f/2a7e1f43ce.jpg it's more better for the pitch and pattern xD
00:15:841 (15841|2) - move this to 5 so it would be more balance and not too heavy on the left side
00:17:437 (17437|2) - whoops delete lol, i know you want to emphasize that sound, but the loudness is the same with 00:17:278 - 00:11:373 - so make it the same with the others xD
from 00:17:916 - here to 00:27:490 - it's actually not worth to put it all for 2 notes, since that part is sooo calm, recommended to make it all to 1 note only. like you did on 00:28:288 (28288|4,28607|5,28926|4,29245|0,29564|4,29884|6,30203|0,30522|3) - etc (it's the same with the calm part, but only 1 note, so that's why)
also don't forget to 00:27:650 (27650|3) - delete this too! since it's only one note 'w'
00:30:681 (30681|1) - move this to 1, it's better i think
00:38:660 - 00:38:979 - 00:39:298 - 00:39:937 - 00:40:256 - 00:40:575 - 00:41:213 - 00:41:533 - 00:41:852 - 00:42:490 - 00:42:809 - 00:43:128 - you can't leave this blank, since there's a notable sound. please add a doubles on the places that i pointed.
it's actually like what you did on 00:49:192 (49192|1,49192|5,50469|6,50469|3,51745|6,51745|2,53022|2,53022|6) -
00:55:894 - add note at 3, it's same like 00:55:096 - 00:55:575 - 00:54:139 - 00:54:618 - so you must consistent xD
00:57:490 - lol you can't make this 6 notes :/ make it like
http://puu.sh/mdtET/2445a45ac3.jpg00:59:405 (59405|3,60043|3,60043|6,60681|6,61958|6,61958|3,63235|0,63235|2,64511|2,64511|4,65788|5) - i actually confused why it sometimes 2 notes and 1 note. make it all consistent, also in the others part
01:06:745 (66745|2) - recommended to move it to 1. it feels weird when you press the same col with 01:07:064 - this
01:07:703 (67703|6) - move this to 01:07:384 - here, so it's consistent with the others (all 3 notes)
01:08:341 - add note at here, this is must 3 notes too. suggestion
http://puu.sh/mdu84/1e75bbbaf9.jpg01:09:618 (69618|6) - delete, i know you want to emphasize the melody, but 2 notes is enough. because if you make it 3 notes it will be same with the others, so it's not fair lol
01:10:575 (70575|3) - move this to 1, it's more comfortable :3 (it's weird to press with space)
01:13:128 (73128|1) - delete, just make it 3 notes D: the loudness is the same with the others 01:12:011 - 01:14:724 -
01:15:043 (75043|2) - delete, bcs it's same with 01:15:362 - 01:15:681 - 01:16:320 - etc
01:16:001 - add note at 5, like 01:14:724 -
01:19:830 (79830|1,79830|3,79830|4,79830|6,80150|4,80150|6,80150|1,80150|2,80469|3,80469|1,80469|6,80469|2,80788|5,80788|2,80788|0,80788|4,81107|1,81107|6,81107|5,81107|3) - make this into 3 notes, like 00:56:533 (56533|0,56533|3,56533|5,56692|0,56692|5,56692|3,56852|0,56852|3,56852|5,57011|1,57011|4,57011|2,57171|3,57171|6,57171|0,57330|4,57330|5,57330|2) -
also 01:19:511 - make this into 2 notes, since the sound is smaller
01:21:426 - 01:23:022 - make this into 4 notes only ;w; like 01:21:745 -
01:26:692 (86692|1) - move this to 01:26:533 - here. since 01:26:533 - here is supposed to be 3 notes, and 01:26:692 - here one note only
01:29:245 (89245|5) - move this to 01:29:086 - here on 7, it's same like above ^
01:29:724 - 01:30:362 - 01:31:001 - isn't here 3 notes like the others? ._. make it consistent
01:30:043 - also this sould be 2 notes like the others
01:33:394 (93394|6) - delete, this sound is not loud enough compared with 01:33:554 - 01:33:713 - this. so remove one :3
01:34:192 - add note at 1, this sound is should be 3 notes
from 01:34:511 - here to 01:39:618 - this is hard to read lol xd you can't do that noodles, it's too over tbh hehe. just make it like 01:39:618 - ~ 01:44:724 - this. so it will more easy and consistent
01:44:325 - 01:44:405 - you can add notes on here, to emphasize the strings. like
http://puu.sh/mdvcV/1d602ff2a1.jpg01:45:522 - add note at 3, this should be 4 notes (finish sound)
01:47:277 (107277|4,107277|2,107916|1,107916|5,111745|6,111745|3) - why you suddenly make it into 2 LNs? ._. it's same like the others
so make it one LNs only to be consistent
01:46:958 - 01:47:596 - 01:48:235 - 01:48:873 - 01:49:511 - 01:50:788 - 01:52:064 - 01:53:341 - this all is should be 3 notes, you can't make it unconsistent. just like 01:46:320 - 01:50:150 - 01:51:426 - 01:52:703 - 01:53:979 - 01:54:618 -
01:58:447 - 01:58:607 - add notes, this should be 3 notes since it's loud
02:00:043 - add note at 2, for finish sound
02:00:681 - add note on here too, since it's loud sound
02:01:639 (121639|6) - move this to 02:01:798 - here. i think you know why
02:02:118 - add note for the kick, like 02:02:437 - etc
02:02:916 - add note, like 02:03:873 - 02:04:352 -
02:03:235 (123235|3) - delete, make it 3 notes like the others
02:04:671 (124671|1) - move to 02:04:511 - here, the kick should be one note only (actually you should know it already)
02:05:150 - add note for cymbal
02:05:150 - ~ 02:10:256 - hmm i don't too sure about this, better to ask BN or QAT to make sure. but to be safe i'm suggest to make it simple lol
02:14:724 (134724|4) - delete pls, i think you know why :/
02:16:320 - 02:16:958 - 02:18:873 - 02:20:150 - this is should be 3 notes, so add note. like the others (i don't need to mention it again)
02:17:916 (137916|3) - delete, it's should be one note only
02:19:033 - delete one note, it's should be one note only
02:20:389 - add note, there's a drum roll, you follow it before and shouldn't ignore it
02:23:501 - 02:23:820 - 02:24:777 - 02:25:096 - pls add note for the kick, you follow it before
don't skip it lol
02:25:416 - 02:25:495 - add note for the drum roll~
02:26:373 - delete one note, you know why
from 02:27:809 - here to 02:29:405 - follow this
http://puu.sh/mdxfc/f230a5857e.jpg02:30:043 (150043|3) - move this to 02:30:203 - here, so it's consistent for the sound
02:31:160 - add note
02:31:958 (151958|1) - delete, 2 notes is enough
02:33:873 - 02:34:511 - 02:37:703 - 02:40:256 - i think you should make this 3 notes, because the others did. like 02:35:150 - 02:35:788 - 02:36:426 - 02:37:064 - 02:38:979 - etc
02:36:586 - 02:37:862 - 02:39:139 - shouldn't this one note only ?_? like the others...
02:40:096 - make this into 2 notes, since there's just melody and no any notable instrument
02:43:447 - just make this 3 notes please, the sound not that loud to be 4 notes
02:44:086 (164086|4) - move to 6, don't make it jack
02:45:203 (165203|3) - move this to 02:45:043 - here
^ there's still many problem like that..., so follow this instead
http://puu.sh/mdxEv/56050067e1.jpg02:46:001 (166001|2) - delete, 3 notes is enough
02:47:118 - 02:46:639 - 02:46:958 - add note (4 notes for finish sound, and you know why about the others)
02:47:437 - 02:47:517 - you skipped this, please add note for drum roll
02:47:596 - 02:47:916 - 02:48:235 - add note~
from 02:48:554 - here to 02:55:416 - please make it easier, especially at the stream part (02:48:554 - ~ 02:50:150 - and 02:50:788 - ~ 02:52:224 - ) it's absolutely many of that is ghost note
(it's actually no sound but you put the note in there), suggesting to make the whole part on 1/2. also please reduce the notes amount at there, because the sound is not that loud. example : 02:48:873 - 02:49:192 - 02:49:830 - the kick should be one note only
02:57:809 (177809|1) - delete, the others only 3 notes
from 02:58:128 - here to 03:08:341 - lmao dat noodles, please reduce the LN. make it simple :^)
03:13:766 - add note at 7
03:16:319 - 03:16:638 - 03:16:958 - make this into 3 notes, like 03:16:000 -
03:17:277 (197277|5,197277|2,197436|5,197436|2,197596|6,197596|0,197596|4,197596|2,197755|4,197755|2,197755|6,197755|0,197915|1,197915|4,197915|2,197915|5,198075|5,198075|2,198075|1,198075|4,198234|0,198234|6,198234|3,198234|2,198234|4,198394|0,198394|4,198394|6,198394|3,198394|2) - oh no make all into 3 notes, you know why... consistent :^)
03:26:532 - 03:26:851 - add notes like the others
03:27:330 (207330|1,207330|5,207410|4,207410|2) - isn't this one note only on the before? .w.
03:27:809 - ~ 03:28:766 - recommended to make it like this
http://puu.sh/mdyFj/c14c734253.jpg the current LN is weird and this is better xD
03:30:521 - add 2 note like the before?
03:34:192 (214192|2) - delete
03:35:149 (215149|2,215149|4,216426|5,216426|1) - actually dunno about your purpose to make it into 2 LNs, since the pitch isn't high as the others
03:35:787 (215787|3) - delete, it should be 2 notes only and for preventing jack
03:38:819 - make it one note only please, like 03:31:160 -
03:39:777 (219777|3,220096|5) - delete, should be one note only like the before
03:44:404 - add note? there's a piano sound
03:44:883 (224883|2) - move to 03:44:723 - here at 1
03:47:755 - add note, like 03:49:032 -
03:49:192 - add note at 1
03:51:426 (231426|4) - delete, 4 notes is enough
from 03:56:952 - here to 04:06:366 - it's the same with my mods on 01:24:298 - ~ 01:33:713 - this part