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Histoire

Joined December 2013

Histoire 2015-11-15T09:15:51+00:00

Rave-up wrote:
Just fixed blankets and made minor changes to patterns for flow. If you want, I can change it back. Sorry about that.

dude u should never do that

emilia

893 posts

Joined October 2012

emilia 2015-11-15T09:16:16+00:00

change it back lmao I'll look at the mods myself

ceLy

148 posts

Joined November 2014

ceLy 2015-11-15T11:29:02+00:00

I wonder if you still need an insane GD?

Rave-up

302 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Rave-up 2015-11-15T15:56:00+00:00

cHelli wrote:
I wonder if you still need an insane GD?

nah but mod would help

emilia

893 posts

Joined October 2012

emilia 2015-11-16T05:26:53+00:00

Hanczer wrote:
From our modding queue~

[Estellia-'s Hikari]

00:29:883 (3) - blanket fix
00:32:883 (1) - ^ ^
00:53:383 (2,3,4) - unreadable spacing, ^
00:58:383 (5,6,7,1) - ^ ^
00:55:758 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - this sudden change of tempo is unreadable ^
00:48:508 (3,4,5) - ^ ^
00:02:258 (4) - blanket is a bit off ^
01:00:383 (5) - blanket ^
01:00:383 (5) - I dont like this flow, especially with overlap at 01:03:383 (2,5) - i dont understand this sentence, but i fixed the 2nd and kept the first, because flow similar to first is consistent in my map

tq xd

dude fix your metadata please jesus

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Rave-up

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Rave-up 2015-11-16T05:42:58+00:00

estellia- wrote:

Hanczer wrote:
From our modding queue~

[Estellia-'s Hikari]

00:29:883 (3) - blanket fix
00:32:883 (1) - ^ ^
00:53:383 (2,3,4) - unreadable spacing, ^
00:58:383 (5,6,7,1) - ^ ^
00:55:758 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - this sudden change of tempo is unreadable ^
00:48:508 (3,4,5) - ^ ^
00:02:258 (4) - blanket is a bit off ^
01:00:383 (5) - blanket ^
01:00:383 (5) - I dont like this flow, especially with overlap at 01:03:383 (2,5) - i dont understand this sentence, but i fixed the 2nd and kept the first, because flow similar to first is consistent in my map

tq xd

dude fix your metadata please jesus

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done bih

Originality

102 posts

Joined October 2014

Originality 2015-11-17T04:23:54+00:00

A lot of these changes are personal preference things, across the board the timing on these look nearly perfect, and I didn't find anything that would cause these maps to be disqualified. That being said, here you go!

[Easy]

This difficulty looks great, these are a few little things I'd change to mix it up a little bit (given the difficulty is easy)...

01:00:883 (1,2,3,4) - It'd be neat if you put a single in there instead of just 4 consecutive sliders, maybe singles on 2 and 4?

01:06:883 (3) - I like that a LOT.

01:12:883 (1,2,3,4) - Same thing as first one, some way you could mix this up, maybe? Or add singles to one of these but leave the other the same?

[Normal]

00:07:883 (2) - I think this slider would sound better if you ended earlier, it's kind of weird where it's ending right now.

00:21:883 (2) - There's an offbeat note here that doesn't match up with the end of the slider, I'd change this to two singles, one for each beat.

00:24:883 (2) - Same thing with this one.

Okay, this happens a couple of times. It's not something that absolutely needs changed, but I think you should look into it. Turn your speed down to 50% and listen to the background drumbeat on those two times. If you like it as you can leave it, it's just a personal thing.

01:15:133 (1,2,3) - Mmm. I like this section.

01:06:883 (1) - It'd be kind of cool if you ended this a little earlier, and then made single notes for the end of that phrase.

01:25:883 (3) - That slider just doesn't feel right at the end. A shorter slider with more hits in-between might sound neat. Experiment around with it.

[Hard]

Wow. This looks really good, the streams are super clean too. This was really nice to play and read through.

00:35:383 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This series of notes was the only part I though was a little wacky. I slowed it down and the beat was on, but something just doesn't sound right. Maybe doing the first 4 (or 6) as a pattern and then last bit as a slider? Mess around with it.

[Hikari]

AR 9 seems a little fast, when I turned down to AR 8 and played through it felt a LOT better for the difficulty it's at.

00:05:633 (2,3) - I really like this kickslider setup -- along with the other ones you have placed later on.

00:06:633 (4,1) - 1
00:10:258 (5,6) - 2
00:11:258 (2,3) - 3
00:12:258 (5,6) - 4
00:17:258 (2,3) - 5

While playing, I felt like the patterning was fairly repetitive, specifically the pattern I've highlighted above, and not just in that particular section.
Possible ways to mix this up?
-stack the notes next to each other instead of directly on top
http://postimg.org/image/9fdrt0c65/4362e9d2/
-change up the pattern and make it into a triple <--- personal recommendation
-use your imagination!

00:48:508 (3,4) - I like this double, but it's the only one like it in the song, and there are a lot of single kick sliders -- some more would be interesting! (just kidding I found one more, this might be fine since you're in Kiai at this point, it makes a nice emphasis)

01:06:883 (1) - I feel like this note comes too fast after this spinner -- although that could just be AR9.

01:18:883 (1,2,3,4,5) - This section seemed really difficult for this difficulty -- but that could be how it's meant to be!

A spinner at the end would fit nicely, I think.

Rave-up

302 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Rave-up 2015-11-17T04:56:41+00:00

Originality wrote:
A lot of these changes are personal preference things, across the board the timing on these look nearly perfect, and I didn't find anything that would cause these maps to be disqualified. That being said, here you go!

[Easy]

This difficulty looks great, these are a few little things I'd change to mix it up a little bit (given the difficulty is easy)...

01:00:883 (1,2,3,4) - It'd be neat if you put a single in there instead of just 4 consecutive sliders, maybe singles on 2 and 4?

01:06:883 (3) - I like that a LOT.

01:12:883 (1,2,3,4) - Same thing as first one, some way you could mix this up, maybe? Or add singles to one of these but leave the other the same?

[Normal]

00:07:883 (2) - I think this slider would sound better if you ended earlier, it's kind of weird where it's ending right now.

00:21:883 (2) - There's an offbeat note here that doesn't match up with the end of the slider, I'd change this to two singles, one for each beat.

00:24:883 (2) - Same thing with this one.

Okay, this happens a couple of times. It's not something that absolutely needs changed, but I think you should look into it. Turn your speed down to 50% and listen to the background drumbeat on those two times. If you like it as you can leave it, it's just a personal thing.

01:15:133 (1,2,3) - Mmm. I like this section.

01:06:883 (1) - It'd be kind of cool if you ended this a little earlier, and then made single notes for the end of that phrase.

01:25:883 (3) - That slider just doesn't feel right at the end. A shorter slider with more hits in-between might sound neat. Experiment around with it.

[Hard]

Wow. This looks really good, the streams are super clean too. This was really nice to play and read through.

00:35:383 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This series of notes was the only part I though was a little wacky. I slowed it down and the beat was on, but something just doesn't sound right. Maybe doing the first 4 (or 6) as a pattern and then last bit as a slider? Mess around with it.

[Hikari]

AR 9 seems a little fast, when I turned down to AR 8 and played through it felt a LOT better for the difficulty it's at.

00:05:633 (2,3) - I really like this kickslider setup -- along with the other ones you have placed later on.

00:06:633 (4,1) - 1
00:10:258 (5,6) - 2
00:11:258 (2,3) - 3
00:12:258 (5,6) - 4
00:17:258 (2,3) - 5

While playing, I felt like the patterning was fairly repetitive, specifically the pattern I've highlighted above, and not just in that particular section.
Possible ways to mix this up?
-stack the notes next to each other instead of directly on top
http://postimg.org/image/9fdrt0c65/4362e9d2/
-change up the pattern and make it into a triple <--- personal recommendation
-use your imagination!

00:48:508 (3,4) - I like this double, but it's the only one like it in the song, and there are a lot of single kick sliders -- some more would be interesting! (just kidding I found one more, this might be fine since you're in Kiai at this point, it makes a nice emphasis)

01:06:883 (1) - I feel like this note comes too fast after this spinner -- although that could just be AR9.

01:18:883 (1,2,3,4,5) - This section seemed really difficult for this difficulty -- but that could be how it's meant to be!

A spinner at the end would fit nicely, I think.

Thanks for the mod! Will update tmrw cuz sleep n stuff

EDIT: Fixed but couldn't really find anything better for the offbeat problem on normal sorry

Last edited by Rave-up 2015-11-17T22:15:21+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

emilia

893 posts

Joined October 2012

emilia 2015-11-17T05:05:59+00:00

Originality wrote:
[Hikari]

AR 9 seems a little fast, when I turned down to AR 8 and played through it felt a LOT better for the difficulty it's at. fix

00:05:633 (2,3) - I really like this kickslider setup -- along with the other ones you have placed later on. thanks! i liked it too~

00:06:633 (4,1) - 1
00:10:258 (5,6) - 2
00:11:258 (2,3) - 3
00:12:258 (5,6) - 4
00:17:258 (2,3) - 5

While playing, I felt like the patterning was fairly repetitive, specifically the pattern I've highlighted above, and not just in that particular section.
Possible ways to mix this up?
-stack the notes next to each other instead of directly on top
http://postimg.org/image/9fdrt0c65/4362e9d2/
-change up the pattern and make it into a triple <--- personal recommendation
-use your imagination!
preferred the idea of having this pattern as the core structure of my map, will think about changing up if i get more mods about this

00:48:508 (3,4) - I like this double, but it's the only one like it in the song, and there are a lot of single kick sliders -- some more would be interesting! (just kidding I found one more, this might be fine since you're in Kiai at this point, it makes a nice emphasis) will think about this, but i can't really find opportunities to add more kicks

01:06:883 (1) - I feel like this note comes too fast after this spinner -- although that could just be AR9. shortened spinner

01:18:883 (1,2,3,4,5) - This section seemed really difficult for this difficulty -- but that could be how it's meant to be! its kinda the structure of the rap to have kicks everywhere, will think about changing

A spinner at the end would fit nicely, I think. i didnt replace the slider, just added a spinner at the back

thanks for the mod!

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Dailycare

Beatmap Nominator

1,072 posts

Joined May 2012

Dailycare 2015-11-17T09:19:35+00:00

Hoen's Easy

00:49:383 (1) - How about NC here?

Easy is fine

Normal

00:27:883 (3) - Fix blanket

01:02:883 (3) - x160 y160

01:17:883 (3) - Decrease the distance
01:21:383 (1,2,3) - Rhythm looks oddly. please consider for change
01:25:883 (3) - x264 y332

Hard

00:29:633 (2) - Stack this on 00:27:883 (4)
00:30:883 (1) - Fix blacket
00:34:258 (5) - Copy/paste 00:33:883 (4)

00:53:383 (1,2) - I recommend you fix flow
00:55:758 (7) - Is DS right? I suggest you increase note's distance
00:59:383 (2) - copy/paste and ctrl+HJ 00:58:883 (1)

Estellia-'s Hikari

I think AR is little fast. I recommend AR8~AR8.5

00:14:133 (4) - Stack this on 00:12:383 (6)'s tail
00:29:883 (3) - How about ctrl+G here
00:46:883 (1) - Fix blanket

i love this song~

Rave-up

302 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Rave-up 2015-11-17T22:14:56+00:00

Dailycare wrote:
Hoen's Easy
00:49:383 (1) - How about NC here?

Easy is fine

Normal
00:27:883 (3) - Fix blanket

01:02:883 (3) - x160 y160

01:17:883 (3) - Decrease the distance
01:21:383 (1,2,3) - Rhythm looks oddly. please consider for change
01:25:883 (3) - x264 y332

Hard
00:29:633 (2) - Stack this on 00:27:883 (4)
00:30:883 (1) - Fix blacket
00:34:258 (5) - Copy/paste 00:33:883 (4)

00:53:383 (1,2) - I recommend you fix flow
00:55:758 (7) - Is DS right? I suggest you increase note's distance
00:59:383 (2) - copy/paste and ctrl+HJ 00:58:883 (1)

Estellia-'s Hikari
I think AR is little fast. I recommend AR8~AR8.5

00:14:133 (4) - Stack this on 00:12:383 (6)'s tail
00:29:883 (3) - How about ctrl+G here
00:46:883 (1) - Fix blanket

i love this song~

Thanks for the mod! Will try for BN check soon

emilia

893 posts

Joined October 2012

emilia 2015-11-18T02:22:09+00:00

Dailycare wrote:
I think AR is little fast. I recommend AR8~AR8.5 sry i think raveup didnt update the map i swear i swapped it to ar 8

00:14:133 (4) - Stack this on 00:12:383 (6)'s tail no reason to
00:29:883 (3) - How about ctrl+G here then the distance change is too great
00:46:883 (1) - Fix blanket fix

pls update regularly thanks

thank

osu file format v14

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Electoz

1,887 posts

Joined May 2015

Electoz 2015-11-18T09:01:23+00:00

Hi, from my modding queue~

General

- Please remove [www.MP3Fiber.com] from your mp3. file name.
- You should set here as a preview point 00:48:883

Easy

00:02:883 (3) - Rotate this a bit? So it will become blanket with 00:01:883 (2)
00:21:883 (2) - Feels weird to end this slider on a downbeat imo.
00:46:883 (1) - ^

Normal

- OD should be at least 4.
00:12:883 (4) - Make this stack with the end of 00:11:383 (2) ,maybe?
00:34:383 (4,1) - These don't look symmetrical somehow.
01:16:883 (4) - Maybe add some hitsound here?

Hard

00:01:883 (2) - This slider looks weird since the reverse is on the blue tick.
00:28:883 (1) - Maybe curve the end of this slider a bit more so it will become more symmetrical with 00:29:633 (2) ?
00:34:633 (6) - You can stack the end of this slider on 00:36:133 (4)
01:26:883 (4) - I would put an NC here but it's up to you.

That's all, I hope my mod is useful!
Good luck!

Rave-up

302 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Rave-up 2015-11-18T22:34:52+00:00

Electoz wrote:
Hi, from my modding queue~

General
- Please remove [www.MP3Fiber.com] from your mp3. file name.doing so messes with the song so meh
- You should set here as a preview point 00:48:883i like the one i got now
idk about easy, i like it how it is now
Easy
00:02:883 (3) - Rotate this a bit? So it will become blanket with 00:01:883 (2)
00:21:883 (2) - Feels weird to end this slider on a downbeat imo.
00:46:883 (1) - ^

Normal
- OD should be at least 4. done
00:12:883 (4) - Make this stack with the end of 00:11:383 (2) ,maybe? done
00:34:383 (4,1) - These don't look symmetrical somehow. they are now
01:16:883 (4) - Maybe add some hitsound here? oops forgot to add finish here (done)

Hard
00:01:883 (2) - This slider looks weird since the reverse is on the blue tick. couldnt really find anything better but made some positional changes
00:28:883 (1) - Maybe curve the end of this slider a bit more so it will become more symmetrical with 00:29:633 (2) ? done
00:34:633 (6) - You can stack the end of this slider on 00:36:133 (4) done
01:26:883 (4) - I would put an NC here but it's up to you. sure i guess

That's all, I hope my mod is useful!
Good luck!

Thanks for the mod! Helped me fix some mistakes I probably wouldn't have found myself

Narcissu

1,744 posts

Joined August 2012

Narcissu 2015-11-19T02:04:25+00:00

[general]

add 1000 AudioLeadIn ? open the xxx.osu file , the second

[Normal]

00:01:883 (1) - remove NC

[Estellia-'s Hikari]
01:26:883 - other diff end here , are you like ?
the diff too hard to read for 3.8 star lol , as far as i'm concerned …… comfort and PP is necessary
you should be add Hitsound , if you wish rank …… simple example ↓↓↓

00:49:383 - 00:50:383 - 00:51:383 - 00:52:383 - clap , follow drum

00:48:883 - 00:56:883 - finish , every 4bar

00:49:133 - 00:49:383 - 00:49:633 - 00:49:758 - 00:50:008 - whistle , follow vocla

i had intended to write more …… since there are already 12sp + , you need BN not me lol

good song , good luck

Rave-up

302 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Rave-up 2015-11-19T02:10:27+00:00

Narcissu wrote:
[general]
add 1000 AudioLeadIn ? open the xxx.osu file , the second

[Normal]

00:01:883 (1) - remove NC

[Estellia-'s Hikari]
01:26:883 - other diff end here , are you like ?
the diff too hard to read for 3.8 star lol , as far as i'm concerned …… comfort and PP is necessary
you should be add Hitsound , if you wish rank …… simple example ↓↓↓

00:49:383 - 00:50:383 - 00:51:383 - 00:52:383 - clap , follow drum

00:48:883 - 00:56:883 - finish , every 4bar

00:49:133 - 00:49:383 - 00:49:633 - 00:49:758 - 00:50:008 - whistle , follow vocla
i had intended to write more …… since there are already 12sp + , you need BN not me lol

good song , good luck

you already know finding one is the struggle. meh

Last edited by Rave-up 2015-11-20T01:41:10+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

emilia

893 posts

Joined October 2012

emilia 2015-11-19T02:25:42+00:00

Narcissu wrote:
[general]

[Estellia-'s Hikari]
01:26:883 - other diff end here , are you like ? so?
the diff too hard to read for 3.8 star lol , as far as i'm concerned …… comfort and PP is necessary pp isn't necessary, and i can read it just fine
you should be add Hitsound , if you wish rank …… simple example ↓↓↓

00:49:383 - 00:50:383 - 00:51:383 - 00:52:383 - clap , follow drum

00:48:883 - 00:56:883 - finish , every 4bar

00:49:133 - 00:49:383 - 00:49:633 - 00:49:758 - 00:50:008 - whistle , follow vocla
sry i'll get raveup to copy

i had intended to write more …… since there are already 12sp + , you need BN not me lol

good song , good luck

no fix

raveup can u copy hitsounds thank

https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/131540

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: World_Trigger_OP_2[www.MP3Fiber.com] (1).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 32750
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.7
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 0.9999992

[Metadata]
Title:Ashita no Hikari
TitleUnicode:アシタノヒカリ
Artist:AAA
ArtistUnicode:AAA
Creator:Rave-up
Version:Estellia-'s Hikari
Source:ワールドトリガー
Tags:World Trigger Mikumo Osamu Kuga Yuma OP 2 Opening Replica Hoen estellia
BeatmapID:823437
BeatmapSetID:372157

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.9
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"world-trigger-characters-anime-fall-2014-yuichi-jin-chika-amatori-yuma-kuga-osamu-mikumo-1366x768.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
883,500,4,2,0,5,1,0
883,-100,4,2,0,5,0,0
8883,-90.9090909090909,4,2,0,30,0,0
16883,-100,4,2,0,20,0,0
32883,-90.9090909090909,4,2,0,45,0,0
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47883,-90.9090909090909,4,2,0,45,0,0
48883,-83.3333333333333,4,2,0,60,0,1
68883,-90.9090909090909,4,2,0,60,0,0
86383,-90.9090909090909,4,2,0,60,0,0
89883,-90.9090909090909,4,2,0,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 0,255,0
Combo2 : 0,255,255
Combo3 : 255,51,51
Combo4 : 128,0,255
Combo5 : 255,128,0
Combo6 : 64,128,128

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Rave-up

302 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Rave-up 2015-11-19T02:39:02+00:00

estellia- wrote:

Narcissu wrote:
[general]

[Estellia-'s Hikari]
01:26:883 - other diff end here , are you like ? so?
the diff too hard to read for 3.8 star lol , as far as i'm concerned …… comfort and PP is necessary pp isn't necessary, and i can read it just fine
you should be add Hitsound , if you wish rank …… simple example ↓↓↓

00:49:383 - 00:50:383 - 00:51:383 - 00:52:383 - clap , follow drum

00:48:883 - 00:56:883 - finish , every 4bar

00:49:133 - 00:49:383 - 00:49:633 - 00:49:758 - 00:50:008 - whistle , follow vocla
sry i'll get raveup to copy

i had intended to write more …… since there are already 12sp + , you need BN not me lol

good song , good luck

no fix

raveup can u copy hitsounds thank

https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/131540

osu file format v14

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Countdown: 0
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Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:Ashita no Hikari
TitleUnicode:アシタノヒカリ
Artist:AAA
ArtistUnicode:AAA
Creator:Rave-up
Version:Estellia-'s Hikari
Source:ワールドトリガー
Tags:World Trigger Mikumo Osamu Kuga Yuma OP 2 Opening Replica Hoen estellia
BeatmapID:823437
BeatmapSetID:372157

[Difficulty]
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SliderMultiplier:1.9
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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370,149,52758,1,0,0:0:0:0:
270,272,52883,6,0,P|202:272|139:207,1,113.999996520996
239,179,53383,1,0,0:0:0:0:
499,356,53633,1,0,0:0:0:0:
359,325,53758,1,0,0:0:0:0:
484,262,53883,2,0,L|494:140,1,113.999996520996
298,19,54383,2,0,P|324:67|341:143,1,113.999996520996
231,242,54758,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,116,54883,6,0,L|249:105,1,113.999996520996
147,249,55258,1,0,0:0:0:0:
147,249,55383,2,0,L|18:238,1,113.999996520996
220,297,55758,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,297,55883,2,0,P|229:257|231:223,1,56.9999982604981
333,142,56133,2,0,L|345:222,1,56.9999982604981
180,155,56383,2,0,L|196:43,1,113.999996520996
436,19,56883,6,0,L|281:35,1,113.999996520996
398,221,57383,2,0,L|511:232,1,113.999996520996
427,312,57758,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,284,57883,2,0,P|247:324|206:373,1,113.999996520996
79,290,58383,1,0,0:0:0:0:
33,20,58633,1,0,0:0:0:0:
105,121,58758,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,40,58883,6,0,L|273:50,1,113.999996520996
373,260,59383,2,0,P|402:208|449:156,1,113.999996520996
476,287,59758,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,361,59883,2,0,L|218:350,1,113.999996520996
20,240,60383,2,0,P|88:236|143:194,1,113.999996520996
60,30,60758,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,30,60883,6,0,L|54:143,1,113.999996520996
262,105,61383,2,0,L|267:218,1,113.999996520996
323,348,61758,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,323,61883,2,0,P|139:307|79:298,1,113.999996520996
352,251,62383,1,0,0:0:0:0:
386,40,62633,1,0,0:0:0:0:
285,92,62758,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,82,62883,6,0,P|93:75|25:57,1,113.999996520996
248,247,63383,2,0,P|279:306|294:355,1,113.999996520996
75,346,63758,1,0,0:0:0:0:
75,346,63883,2,0,L|203:338,1,113.999996520996
248,247,64258,1,0,0:0:0:0:
115,141,64383,2,0,P|127:209|165:273,1,113.999996520996
191,48,64758,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,31,64883,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,65008,12,0,66383,0:0:0:0:
284,97,66883,5,0,0:0:0:0:
289,352,67258,1,0,0:0:0:0:
435,142,67633,1,0,0:0:0:0:
193,226,68008,1,0,0:0:0:0:
193,226,68133,1,0,0:0:0:0:
438,301,68383,1,0,0:0:0:0:
223,121,68883,6,0,L|102:107,1,104.500003189087
187,262,69258,1,0,0:0:0:0:
187,262,69383,2,0,L|308:248,1,104.500003189087
445,174,69883,2,0,L|434:234,1,52.2500015945435
430,156,70258,2,0,L|419:216,1,52.2500015945435
314,55,70633,1,0,0:0:0:0:
314,55,70758,1,0,0:0:0:0:
314,55,70883,6,0,P|372:27|425:26,1,104.500003189087
248,156,71258,2,0,P|205:147|171:139,2,52.2500015945435
398,149,71633,1,0,0:0:0:0:
135,320,71883,2,0,L|141:264,1,52.2500015945435
118,326,72258,2,0,L|124:270,1,52.2500015945435
105,114,72633,1,0,0:0:0:0:
105,114,72883,6,0,L|216:103,1,104.500003189087
130,220,73258,1,0,0:0:0:0:
130,220,73383,2,0,P|59:200|5:196,1,104.500003189087
66,357,73758,1,0,0:0:0:0:
66,357,73883,2,0,P|71:302|76:273,1,52.2500015945435
235,141,74133,2,0,P|237:166|239:193,1,52.2500015945435
231,360,74383,2,0,L|346:348,1,104.500003189087
441,240,74883,6,0,P|375:231|318:206,1,104.500003189087
402,96,75258,1,0,0:0:0:0:
402,96,75383,2,0,L|409:178,1,52.2500015945435
238,272,75633,2,0,L|242:219,1,52.2500015945435
158,120,75883,2,0,L|94:127,1,52.2500015945435
137,142,76258,2,0,L|73:149,1,52.2500015945435
184,349,76633,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,349,76883,6,0,P|168:307|163:284,1,52.2500015945435
263,160,77133,2,0,L|256:301,1,104.500003189087
359,222,77508,1,0,0:0:0:0:
359,222,77633,2,0,L|371:151,1,52.2500015945435
429,41,77883,2,0,P|436:81|443:110,2,52.2500015945435
249,74,78383,2,0,L|187:67,1,52.2500015945435
79,188,78633,2,0,L|17:181,1,52.2500015945435
130,317,78883,6,0,P|164:301|192:293,1,52.2500015945435
317,352,79133,2,0,L|249:345,1,52.2500015945435
265,174,79383,2,0,L|276:243,1,52.2500015945435
422,339,79633,2,0,P|430:300|438:278,1,52.2500015945435
481,185,79883,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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285,40,80383,2,0,L|408:24,1,104.500003189087
325,185,80883,6,0,L|247:174,1,52.2500015945435
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21,264,81633,2,0,L|97:270,1,52.2500015945435
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222,84,82133,2,0,L|214:23,1,52.2500015945435
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465,137,82633,2,0,L|458:75,1,52.2500015945435
381,280,82883,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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330,367,83383,2,0,P|273:358|241:353,1,52.2500015945435
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201,168,83883,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,93,84133,2,0,L|89:155,1,52.2500015945435
183,247,84383,2,0,P|241:238|283:177,1,104.500003189087
207,63,84758,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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364,122,85258,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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444,261,85633,2,0,L|514:253,1,52.2500015945435
282,259,85883,2,0,P|257:284|242:306,1,52.2500015945435
134,359,86133,1,0,0:0:0:0:
134,359,86383,6,0,B|167:248|88:258|126:150,1,209.000006378174
256,192,87008,12,0,89883,0:0:0:0:

Hitsounds fixed

pkhg

2,507 posts

Joined May 2010

pkhg 2015-11-19T03:08:48+00:00

yo

[General]

the volume is so low that it doesnt give enough feedback to the players, use 20% at least (5% is kinda unrankable)

[Hoen's Easy]

00:09:883 (2,4) - its much better if they dont overlap
00:15:883 (5,1) - wheres the flow. having a more flowy path between notes will make everything easier for beginners
00:23:883 (4,1) - ^
01:06:883 (3) - pls not on an easy, more than 1 repeat is confusing for beginners so make it a 3/2 with 1 repeat

[Normal]

00:07:883 (2,1) - spacing
00:32:383 (5) - i think 1/4 is too much for this diff, also the head and tail overlap a lot so its hard to see the reverse arrow, kinda risky so better to not use it
01:13:383 (2,3) - spacing
01:17:883 (3,1) - ^
01:24:883 (1,2) - ^
i guess youre using 1.2 spacing so keep it around 1.18 ~ 1.22
sometimes you reach 1.13 and even 1.3 so check the spacing~

Hard's spacing seems too high but maybe its just me

gl

Rave-up

302 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Rave-up 2015-11-19T04:26:08+00:00

pkhg wrote:
yo

[General]

the volume is so low that it doesnt give enough feedback to the players, use 20% at least (5% is kinda unrankable)

[Hoen's Easy]
00:09:883 (2,4) - its much better if they dont overlap
00:15:883 (5,1) - wheres the flow. having a more flowy path between notes will make everything easier for beginners
00:23:883 (4,1) - ^
01:06:883 (3) - pls not on an easy, more than 1 repeat is confusing for beginners so make it a 3/2 with 1 repeat
[Normal]
00:07:883 (2,1) - spacing
00:32:383 (5) - i think 1/4 is too much for this diff, also the head and tail overlap a lot so its hard to see the reverse arrow, kinda risky so better to not use it
01:13:383 (2,3) - spacing
01:17:883 (3,1) - ^
01:24:883 (1,2) - ^
i guess youre using 1.2 spacing so keep it around 1.18 ~ 1.22
sometimes you reach 1.13 and even 1.3 so check the spacing~
Hard's spacing seems too high but maybe its just me

gl

Thanks for the mod! Fixed volume on all diffs and fixed spacing issue on normal.

pishifat

osu! Paragon

3,802 posts

Joined August 2013

pishifat 2015-11-19T21:39:32+00:00

the volume changes on insane and hard diffs seem to make more sense than what the others are using. increasing at 00:08:883 - then decreasing at 00:16:883 - matches what the song does more than what you've got (which is the opposite)

estellia is missing video

your only hitsound file is unused lol

hoen
00:32:883 (1,1) - start of a new section doesnt really justify the double new combo thing too well
00:40:883 (5) - and um assuming you forgot a new combo here
01:06:383 (2,3,1) - rip aesthetics. considering the rest of the diff looks good and this is the only place that's gross you probably know what would work to make this better
01:10:883 (3,1) - spacing tho

normal
i dont wanna point out blankets but like take a look at 00:28:633 (1,2) - if there's no chance a blanket will work, don't even try. similar stuff happens a few other places. choose something that works better instead of forcing weird placement lolz
00:09:383 - dunno what you were thinking with this gap, but it's pretty weird. melody is the guitar on white ticks so this whole 3/2 gap is what
00:43:883 (4,2) - avoid these sort of crowded object placements. 2 is fading in as you're finishing 4 so like having them on top of each otehr = woah lots of objects on screen scary
01:04:133 (1,1) - gonna need at least 2 beats between the spinner and the next object. that's just a rule for normals p much
01:09:883 (3) - 01:11:883 (3) - not exactly sure what you're trying to follow with the blue tick stuff here. sure, there are sounds on them, but white ticks are being prioritized way more in the section
for spread reasons you'll probably need to include some 1/1 gaps in your long 1/2 object chains. like your last chain of objects is 4 measures long, 2 of which are constant 1/2 sliders. try to at least get one 1/1 gap in every 2 measures and you'll be fine

hard
your kiai should start 1/2 beat later
00:02:883 (1,2) - if you're gonna introduce 00:00:883 (1,2) - as using large spacing, making this repetition of it an antijump is kind of nonsense. keep things consistent to some degree
00:22:883 (1,2) - for the entire section you prioritized the vocal thing, but this one instance you decided nope and ignored it. not understanding what's making it stand out over the other stuff and if it's nothing, should just continue with mapping the 3/4 thing
00:29:633 (2) - yea vocal and instrumental emphasis on the tail while there's nothing on the head isn't a good thing to do. converting it to 2 circles would work
00:32:633 (1,2,3) - and for any other stuff like this, new combos on the beat the triple is leading into works way better. you managed to do it right with 00:42:633 (4,5,1) - so i probably don't have to explain why
01:05:133 (1,1) - gonna need at least 1 beat between these. similar to the spinner to object gap on normal, there isn't really a workaround for it
the way you lower spacing for your streams like 00:52:383 (1,2,3,4,5) - is good, but it would be even better if you did the same for stuff like 00:54:383 (3,4,5) - and other places with multiple consecutive 1/4. would be nice on stuff like 00:20:883 (1,2) - too, but it's not quite as necessary because of sliderleniency stuff

Rave-up

302 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Rave-up 2015-11-19T22:54:56+00:00

Honestly, some of these mistakes were a dead tired me trying some new shit at 2 in the morn (As you can see, it didn't work)

pishifat wrote:
the volume changes on insane and hard diffs seem to make more sense than what the others are using. increasing at 00:08:883 - then decreasing at 00:16:883 - matches what the song does more than what you've got (which is the opposite) idk why i didnt change that lol

estellia is missing video its always missing video somehow (fixed tho)

your only hitsound file is unused lol was trying some new shit, not anymore (deleted)

hoen
00:32:883 (1,1) - start of a new section doesnt really justify the double new combo thing too well
00:40:883 (5) - and um assuming you forgot a new combo here
01:06:383 (2,3,1) - rip aesthetics. considering the rest of the diff looks good and this is the only place that's gross you probably know what would work to make this better
01:10:883 (3,1) - spacing tho
bruh i fell asleep doing the easy diff and left it unfinished smh (fixed all tho)
normal
i dont wanna point out blankets but like take a look at 00:28:633 (1,2) - if there's no chance a blanket will work, don't even try. similar stuff happens a few other places. choose something that works better instead of forcing weird placement lolz changed dat
00:09:383 - dunno what you were thinking with this gap, but it's pretty weird. melody is the guitar on white ticks so this whole 3/2 gap is what was supposed to be 2 ticks longer lol (My tired self could not comprehend that apparently)
00:43:883 (4,2) - avoid these sort of crowded object placements. 2 is fading in as you're finishing 4 so like having them on top of each otehr = woah lots of objects on screen scary fixed and it looks more spacious
01:04:133 (1,1) - gonna need at least 2 beats between the spinner and the next object. that's just a rule for normals p much done
01:09:883 (3) - 01:11:883 (3) - not exactly sure what you're trying to follow with the blue tick stuff here. sure, there are sounds on them, but white ticks are being prioritized way more in the section i guess i was trying to make some next beat, but ending off on the white tick is way better as you said
for spread reasons you'll probably need to include some 1/1 gaps in your long 1/2 object chains. like your last chain of objects is 4 measures long, 2 of which are constant 1/2 sliders. try to at least get one 1/1 gap in every 2 measures and you'll be fine fixed that last part (bless the 1/1 sliders)

hard
your kiai should start 1/2 beat later done
00:02:883 (1,2) - if you're gonna introduce 00:00:883 (1,2) - as using large spacing, making this repetition of it an antijump is kind of nonsense. keep things consistent to some degree fixed
00:22:883 (1,2) - for the entire section you prioritized the vocal thing, but this one instance you decided nope and ignored it. not understanding what's making it stand out over the other stuff and if it's nothing, should just continue with mapping the 3/4 thing i actually had this fixed in an earlier update but forgot to save fixed now
00:29:633 (2) - yea vocal and instrumental emphasis on the tail while there's nothing on the head isn't a good thing to do. converting it to 2 circles would work done
00:32:633 (1,2,3) - and for any other stuff like this, new combos on the beat the triple is leading into works way better. you managed to do it right with 00:42:633 (4,5,1) - so i probably don't have to explain why i prob just overlooked it
01:05:133 (1,1) - gonna need at least 1 beat between these. similar to the spinner to object gap on normal, there isn't really a workaround for it done
the way you lower spacing for your streams like 00:52:383 (1,2,3,4,5) - is good, but it would be even better if you did the same for stuff like 00:54:383 (3,4,5) - and other places with multiple consecutive 1/4. would be nice on stuff like 00:20:883 (1,2) - too, but it's not quite as necessary because of sliderleniency stuff fixed

Thanks for the mod! Really helped to clean up and fix stupid mistakes on the map

ayylmaoz

Last edited by Rave-up 2015-11-21T06:03:18+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

voynich

273 posts

Joined July 2014

voynich 2015-11-20T06:43:48+00:00

Everyone else has a funky thing to their mod thing so I wanted to fit in.
Easy Difficulty

SPOILER

Hoen's Easy
00:02:883 - SLOW DOWN THERE PARTNER!Avoid going that far down at all costs!That's not easy to click,and a difficulty like EASY having that is bad.Avoid it.
00:32:383 - I've said this before,remember,especially with easier difficulties.
00:52:383 - I'd line this circle up with the slider after it.
00:56:383 - Another one.
01:20:383 - Maybe put that circle to match it up with either the slider before it or after.

Normal Difficulty

SPOILER

Normal
WHOA WITH THE SUPER FAST TIMELINE!
00:04:883 - Eh,maybe remove this repeat.
00:11:383 and 00:11:883 - BEGONE BEAST!This is something to watch out for.Just move it up a bit.
00:34:383 - Again,don't like these.
* 00:47:383 - I'd make it gradually faster.Not necessary,but cool nevertheless.
01:19:883 - More...
01:23:883 - A little better,but still not good.

Hard Difficulty

SPOILER

Hard
00:22:883 and 00:23:258 - Still not hard enough to be passable.Move a bit.

Insane Difficulty

SPOILER

Estellia-'s Hikari
00:02:883 - Almost passable,just too high up.You don't have to lower it down all the way,just a bit would do.Like at 00:04:258.
00:07:258 - Jesus,dude.Move quite a bit.
00:11:383 - Move a bit as well.
00:12:883 and 00:13:258 - Okay,and right next to each other.Move these.
00:18:758 - Change this to the first new combo instead of 00:18:383.
Speaking of 00:18:883... - Move a bit again.
00:24:383 - Move.
00:44:758 - This needs the same thing done as 00:18:758.
00:46:883 - This dude needs to move.
00:56:883 - Pls.
00:57:383 - No.
00:58:663 - Move again.
01:00:758 - Same combo issue as the other ones.
* 01:27:133 - Maybe add a timing stick here at Soft 5%

Good luck!

PM me on Saturday and I'll make a guest diff.

Rave-up

302 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Rave-up 2015-11-20T14:02:25+00:00

AlchanyMan wrote:
Everyone else has a funky thing to their mod thing so I wanted to fit in.
Easy Difficulty
SPOILER
Hoen's Easy
00:02:883 - SLOW DOWN THERE PARTNER!Avoid going that far down at all costs!That's not easy to click,and a difficulty like EASY having that is bad.Avoid it. it's fine
00:32:383 - I've said this before,remember,especially with easier difficulties. ^
00:52:383 - I'd line this circle up with the slider after it. nah
00:56:383 - Another one. ^
01:20:383 - Maybe put that circle to match it up with either the slider before it or after. ^

Normal Difficulty
SPOILER
Normal
WHOA WITH THE SUPER FAST TIMELINE!
00:04:883 - Eh,maybe remove this repeat. It's fine
00:11:383 and 00:11:883 - BEGONE BEAST!This is something to watch out for.Just move it up a bit. Noted, fixed the overlap
00:34:383 - Again,don't like these. I do lol
* 00:47:383 - I'd make it gradually faster.Not necessary,but cool nevertheless. It's ok
01:19:883 - More... nah
01:23:883 - A little better,but still not good. seems ok to me
Hard Difficulty
SPOILER
Hard
00:22:883 and 00:23:258 - Still not hard enough to be passable.Move a bit. its ok
Insane Difficulty
SPOILER
Estellia-'s Hikari
00:02:883 - Almost passable,just too high up.You don't have to lower it down all the way,just a bit would do.Like at 00:04:258.
00:07:258 - Jesus,dude.Move quite a bit.
00:11:383 - Move a bit as well.
00:12:883 and 00:13:258 - Okay,and right next to each other.Move these.
00:18:758 - Change this to the first new combo instead of 00:18:383.
Speaking of 00:18:883... - Move a bit again.
00:24:383 - Move.
00:44:758 - This needs the same thing done as 00:18:758.
00:46:883 - This dude needs to move.
00:56:883 - Pls.
00:57:383 - No.
00:58:663 - Move again.
01:00:758 - Same combo issue as the other ones.
* 01:27:133 - Maybe add a timing stick here at Soft 5%
Good luck!
PM me on Saturday and I'll make a guest diff.

Thanks for mod!

Rizen

1,662 posts

Joined August 2013

Rizen 2015-11-22T02:23:36+00:00

Hello o/ From my modding queue (and Kiwi Queue ;_;)

General

Metadata, video file, audio file, background are all looking good!
Can probably add tags such as "tv size". Also, change "Estellia" to "Estellia-"
The video looks like it's lagging slightly from the music. Maybe set the video offset to +250ms? (I might be wrong though)
I feel as thought the AudioLeadIn is too short, maybe make it 1500 instead of 1000?

Hoen's Easy

Nice diff! I was only able to pick up a few things

00:05:383 (1) - spacing inconsistent (0.90x instead of 1.00x), it wasn't picked up in AIMod for some reason .-.
00:05:383 (1) - forgot a whistle at the end of this slider
00:16:383 (6) - remove whistle and add whistle to 00:16:883 (1) - ?
00:27:883 (2) - accidental whistle at slider end? If not, why isn't the slider end of 00:23:883 (4) - whistled
00:33:883 (2) - missing clap at slider end? This is from me comparing it to 00:37:883 (2) -
00:50:883 (3) - tbh, I think this slider looks kinda ugly because of the corner bump caused by the red anchor point. This slider design doesn't really fit in with the rest of the sliders in the difficulty
01:04:883 (1) - the slider end, is the finish intentional? Otherwise, change to a whistle
01:20:883 (1) - finish at slider start? to keep consistency with the other finishes in this section of the song
01:24:883 (1) - only a slight spacing issue, but it exceeds the +- 0.05 limit

Normal

Ok, so tbh, the hitsounding on this difficuty are in a mess... for example, the first couple of objects in the difficulty aren't hitsounded at all but objects in the next measure are hitsounded, even though the song intensity in both sections are the same... The whistles seem to be placed randomly, eg. 00:04:883 (1) - why whistle at slider end? wouldn't it make sense to whistle the slider head of 00:05:883 (2) - (not the tail?) I would suggest looking at the hitsounds of the GD insane and GD esay so you can get a grasp on what the hitsounding should be like
The comboing also appears to be messy.. you've almost got it right however. You NC on the parts of the song that sound strong, but NCs are typically on the downbeat i.e. large white tick. eg. 00:12:883 (4,1) - these NCs should be switched around due to a. the sound at 00:12:883 (4) - being stronger, and b. 00:12:883 (4) - being on a large white tick (downbeat)
00:01:883 (2) - whistle at slider head?
00:27:883 (3,1,2) - won't it look/play better if you straighten out the flow here? image
00:41:883 (5,1,2) - I really don't like how the flow is an acute angle.. the flow should be reasonably linear at this part of the song as nothing in the song signifies for a change in flow. (also, normal diffs should still be reasonably easy for players to read)
00:51:133 (4) - maybe delete this circle? no important beat at that time
00:58:633 (1,2) - maybe something like this?
01:09:383 (2) - consider copy and pasting 01:08:883 (1) - , rotate 180 degrees, then ctrl+G?
01:22:633 (4) - this sudden spacing is not allowed in normal diffs. keep consistent spacing throughout the entire diff
01:25:883 (1,2,3) - something like this?

Hard

When it reaches the chorus, the NC pattern gets a bit funky.. like you have combos like 00:48:883 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - which go on for just under 7/4 of a measure and then u have combos like 00:52:383 (1,2,3,4,5) - which go for under a measure. I would suggest going through the comboing again
00:06:883 (1) - the whistles on this slider don't really make any sense... before, you had whistles on the 2/1 tick like at 00:01:883 (2) - and 00:03:883 (2) - , but now you've suddenly brought it up on the first tick and 3/4 tick... I don't see much point in this tbh
00:07:883 (2) - no point in spacing this slider out by this much... spacing should be used to emphasise strong beats in songs in Hard+ difficulties. But the beat here isn't even that strong. It would make more sense to space something like 00:06:883 (1) - more
00:09:758 (3) - overmapped circle, there no beat at this point of time to justify a circle placement. This is a pretty common error within new mappers, they overmap with triples to "add difficuty to the map"
00:11:633 (3) - again with the overmap... I suggest going through the entire diff and only placed triples where the music provides for it
00:42:633 (4,5,1) - this is correct triple object usage, the first circle is justified by the piano, second circle by the vocals, and third slider by drums/vocals
00:46:883 (1) - end at 00:48:383 - instead? so the player has a breather after the spinner
00:50:758 (5) - circle then 1/2 slider like what you did at 00:51:758 (7,8) - ?

Estellia-'s Hikari

00:03:883 (3) - might just be me but maybe curve it the other way? so it would flow better from 00:03:383 (2) - ?
00:07:883 (3) - I think two circles would fit the rhythm better; comparing this to 00:08:383 (4) - , 00:07:883 (3) - has guitar sounds at both the slider head and tail while 00:08:383 (4) - only has guitar sounds at the slider head.
00:13:258 (2) - I don't like how this slider skips out on the drum beat at 00:13:383 - ... maybe making a corner like this? or replace rhythm with circle then 1/4 slider?
00:15:258 (2) - basically the same thing as above ^
00:48:008 (2) - maybe make this a 1/4 slider repeat? there's a loud sound at 00:48:133 -
01:19:883 (5,6) - difficult for people to tell it is spaced 1/2 when there are a lot of similar looking placements which are spaced 1/4. Maybe do the same thing as you did at 00:40:133 (4,5) -
01:26:133 (6,1) - same thing as ^
To be honest, I'm not a very big fan of this type of style

General Comments

NC could use some touch-ups in Hard/Normal, refer to Estellia-'s GD and Hoen's GD to see their NC usage (Hoen's for Normal and Estellia-'s for Hard)
Also consider listening to hitsounds in Estellia-'s GD, and adjusting the Normal/Hard GDs to it
A few overmapped triples in Hard, although it adds to the difficulty of the Hard diff, it doesn't fit the song. I would suggest reviewing each triple and checking if it does fit the song, and not the difficulty

Good luck!

Rave-up

302 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Rave-up 2015-11-22T03:51:54+00:00

Rizen wrote:
Hello o/ From my modding queue (and Kiwi Queue ;_;)

General
Metadata, video file, audio file, background are all looking good! ty
Can probably add tags such as "tv size". Also, change "Estellia" to "Estellia-" done
The video looks like it's lagging slightly from the music. Maybe set the video offset to +250ms? (I might be wrong though) idk about this one
I feel as thought the AudioLeadIn is too short, maybe make it 1500 instead of 1000? done

Hoen's Easy

Nice diff! I was only able to pick up a few things
00:05:383 (1) - spacing inconsistent (0.90x instead of 1.00x), it wasn't picked up in AIMod for some reason .-.yeah that's weird lol (Fixed tho)
00:05:383 (1) - forgot a whistle at the end of this slider fixed
00:16:383 (6) - remove whistle and add whistle to 00:16:883 (1) - ? done
00:27:883 (2) - accidental whistle at slider end? If not, why isn't the slider end of 00:23:883 (4) - whistled forgot to put the whistle there
00:33:883 (2) - missing clap at slider end? This is from me comparing it to 00:37:883 (2) - yes it was
00:50:883 (3) - tbh, I think this slider looks kinda ugly because of the corner bump caused by the red anchor point. This slider design doesn't really fit in with the rest of the sliders in the difficulty changed
01:04:883 (1) - the slider end, is the finish intentional? Otherwise, change to a whistle oops accidental finish lol
01:20:883 (1) - finish at slider start? to keep consistency with the other finishes in this section of the song fixed
01:24:883 (1) - only a slight spacing issue, but it exceeds the +- 0.05 limit fixed

Normal
Ok, so tbh, the hitsounding on this difficuty are in a mess... yeeeeepfor example, the first couple of objects in the difficulty aren't hitsounded at all but objects in the next measure are hitsounded, even though the song intensity in both sections are the same... The whistles seem to be placed randomly, eg. 00:04:883 (1) - why whistle at slider end? wouldn't it make sense to whistle the slider head of 00:05:883 (2) - (not the tail?) I would suggest looking at the hitsounds of the GD insane and GD esay so you can get a grasp on what the hitsounding should be like the insane hitsounds were copied from the hard tho...lol
The comboing also appears to be messy.. you've almost got it right however. You NC on the parts of the song that sound strong, but NCs are typically on the downbeat i.e. large white tick. eg. 00:12:883 (4,1) - these NCs should be switched around due to a. the sound at 00:12:883 (4) - being stronger, and b. 00:12:883 (4) - being on a large white tick (downbeat) fixed combos for all diffs
00:01:883 (2) - whistle at slider head? done
00:27:883 (3,1,2) - won't it look/play better if you straighten out the flow here? image yes
00:41:883 (5,1,2) - I really don't like how the flow is an acute angle.. the flow should be reasonably linear at this part of the song as nothing in the song signifies for a change in flow. (also, normal diffs should still be reasonably easy for players to read) made the flow more linear
00:51:133 (4) - maybe delete this circle? no important beat at that time i guess
00:58:633 (1,2) - maybe something like this? yes
01:09:383 (2) - consider copy and pasting 01:08:883 (1) - , rotate 180 degrees, then ctrl+G? done
01:22:633 (4) - this sudden spacing is not allowed in normal diffs. keep consistent spacing throughout the entire diff fixed spacing
01:25:883 (1,2,3) - something like this? done

Hard
When it reaches the chorus, the NC pattern gets a bit funky.. like you have combos like 00:48:883 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - which go on for just under 7/4 of a measure and then u have combos like 00:52:383 (1,2,3,4,5) - which go for under a measure. I would suggest going through the comboing again fixed combos
00:06:883 (1) - the whistles on this slider don't really make any sense... before, you had whistles on the 2/1 tick like at 00:01:883 (2) - and 00:03:883 (2) - , but now you've suddenly brought it up on the first tick and 3/4 tick... I don't see much point in this tbh fixed
00:07:883 (2) - no point in spacing this slider out by this much... spacing should be used to emphasise strong beats in songs in Hard+ difficulties. But the beat here isn't even that strong. It would make more sense to space something like 00:06:883 (1) - more didnt really space out 1 but fixed the spacing for 2
00:09:758 (3) - overmapped circle, there no beat at this point of time to justify a circle placement. This is a pretty common error within new mappers, they overmap with triples to "add difficuty to the map" fixerino
00:11:633 (3) - again with the overmap... I suggest going through the entire diff and only placed triples where the music provides for it looked over triples and fixed
00:42:633 (4,5,1) - this is correct triple object usage, the first circle is justified by the piano, second circle by the vocals, and third slider by drums/vocals ayylmao
00:46:883 (1) - end at 00:48:383 - instead? so the player has a breather after the spinner fixed
00:50:758 (5) - circle then 1/2 slider like what you did at 00:51:758 (7,8) - ? sure

Estellia-'s Hikari
00:03:883 (3) - might just be me but maybe curve it the other way? so it would flow better from 00:03:383 (2) - ?
00:07:883 (3) - I think two circles would fit the rhythm better; comparing this to 00:08:383 (4) - , 00:07:883 (3) - has guitar sounds at both the slider head and tail while 00:08:383 (4) - only has guitar sounds at the slider head.
00:13:258 (2) - I don't like how this slider skips out on the drum beat at 00:13:383 - ... maybe making a corner like this? or replace rhythm with circle then 1/4 slider?
00:15:258 (2) - basically the same thing as above ^
00:48:008 (2) - maybe make this a 1/4 slider repeat? there's a loud sound at 00:48:133 -
01:19:883 (5,6) - difficult for people to tell it is spaced 1/2 when there are a lot of similar looking placements which are spaced 1/4. Maybe do the same thing as you did at 00:40:133 (4,5) -
01:26:133 (6,1) - same thing as ^
To be honest, I'm not a very big fan of this type of style

General Comments
NC could use some touch-ups in Hard/Normal, refer to Estellia-'s GD and Hoen's GD to see their NC usage (Hoen's for Normal and Estellia-'s for Hard)
Also consider listening to hitsounds in Estellia-'s GD, and adjusting the Normal/Hard GDs to it
A few overmapped triples in Hard, although it adds to the difficulty of the Hard diff, it doesn't fit the song. I would suggest reviewing each triple and checking if it does fit the song, and not the difficulty

Good luck!

Thanks!

snz

877 posts

Joined February 2015

snz 2015-11-22T04:34:19+00:00

Hi Take My Random Mod

[Hoen's Easy]
00:09:883 (2) - Swap To One Blanket Like This

00:14:883 (4) - Try This

00:40:883 (1) - This Like Good

[Normal]
00:04:633 (3) - Try This

00:45:883 (3) - Try This

Sorry For Little Mod But Good Luck With Rank

Don't Take A Kudosu If I Dont Helped You.

Rave-up

302 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Rave-up 2015-11-22T04:49:51+00:00

Ppuskalin wrote:
Hi Take My Random Mod

[Hoen's Easy]
00:09:883 (2) - Swap To One Blanket Like This

00:14:883 (4) - Try This

00:40:883 (1) - This Like Good

[Normal]
00:04:633 (3) - Try This

00:45:883 (3) - Try This changed to something similar

Sorry For Little Mod But Good Luck With Rank

Don't Take A Kudosu If I Dont Helped You.

Don't think this is worth kudos >< but thanks!

Rizen

1,662 posts

Joined August 2013

Rizen 2015-11-22T05:29:22+00:00

Isn't it meant to be Hoen replying to mods to their diff? .-.

Rave-up

302 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Rave-up 2015-11-22T05:44:02+00:00

Rizen wrote:
Isn't it meant to be Hoen replying to mods to their diff? .-.

He allowed it. Sent estellia~ the mod tho

emilia

893 posts

Joined October 2012

emilia 2015-11-22T17:36:12+00:00

AlchanyMan wrote:
Insane Difficulty
SPOILER
Estellia-'s Hikari
00:02:883 - Almost passable,just too high up.You don't have to lower it down all the way,just a bit would do.Like at 00:04:258.
00:07:258 - Jesus,dude.Move quite a bit.
00:11:383 - Move a bit as well.
00:12:883 and 00:13:258 - Okay,and right next to each other.Move these.
00:18:758 - Change this to the first new combo instead of 00:18:383.
Speaking of 00:18:883... - Move a bit again.
00:24:383 - Move.
00:44:758 - This needs the same thing done as 00:18:758.
00:46:883 - This dude needs to move.
00:56:883 - Pls.
00:57:383 - No.
00:58:663 - Move again.
01:00:758 - Same combo issue as the other ones.
* 01:27:133 - Maybe add a timing stick here at Soft 5%

i literally have no idea what you meant when you said "move", no combo issues found, the notes aren't outside the grid, and the sound at the spinner is fine. barely fixed anything after this mod

Rizen wrote:
Estellia-'s Hikari
00:03:883 (3) - might just be me but maybe curve it the other way? so it would flow better from 00:03:383 (2) - ? na, then it wont flow into next note
00:07:883 (3) - I think two circles would fit the rhythm better; comparing this to 00:08:383 (4) - , 00:07:883 (3) - has guitar sounds at both the slider head and tail while 00:08:383 (4) - only has guitar sounds at the slider head. they actually both have guitars on both head and tail, and since its just the beginning part of the song i didn't want it too hard
00:13:258 (2) - I don't like how this slider skips out on the drum beat at 00:13:383 - ... maybe making a corner like this? or replace rhythm with circle then 1/4 slider? fix in my own way
00:15:258 (2) - basically the same thing as above ^ ^
00:48:008 (2) - maybe make this a 1/4 slider repeat? there's a loud sound at 00:48:133 - fix
01:19:883 (5,6) - difficult for people to tell it is spaced 1/2 when there are a lot of similar looking placements which are spaced 1/4. Maybe do the same thing as you did at 00:40:133 (4,5) - ^
01:26:133 (6,1) - same thing as ^^
To be honest, I'm not a very big fan of this type of style thanks for the encouragement appreciated xd

diff

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 32750
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.7
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 0.9999992

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Title:Ashita no Hikari
TitleUnicode:アシタノヒカリ
Artist:AAA
ArtistUnicode:AAA
Creator:Rave-up
Version:Estellia-'s Hikari
Source:ワールドトリガー
Tags:World Trigger Mikumo Osamu Kuga Yuma OP 2 Opening Replica Hoen estellia
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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Rave-up

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Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Rave-up 2015-11-22T18:02:10+00:00

estellia- wrote:

AlchanyMan wrote:
Insane Difficulty
SPOILER
Estellia-'s Hikari
00:02:883 - Almost passable,just too high up.You don't have to lower it down all the way,just a bit would do.Like at 00:04:258.
00:07:258 - Jesus,dude.Move quite a bit.
00:11:383 - Move a bit as well.
00:12:883 and 00:13:258 - Okay,and right next to each other.Move these.
00:18:758 - Change this to the first new combo instead of 00:18:383.
Speaking of 00:18:883... - Move a bit again.
00:24:383 - Move.
00:44:758 - This needs the same thing done as 00:18:758.
00:46:883 - This dude needs to move.
00:56:883 - Pls.
00:57:383 - No.
00:58:663 - Move again.
01:00:758 - Same combo issue as the other ones.
* 01:27:133 - Maybe add a timing stick here at Soft 5%

i literally have no idea what you meant when you said "move", no combo issues found, the notes aren't outside the grid, and the sound at the spinner is fine. barely fixed anything after this mod

Rizen wrote:
Estellia-'s Hikari
00:03:883 (3) - might just be me but maybe curve it the other way? so it would flow better from 00:03:383 (2) - ? na, then it wont flow into next note
00:07:883 (3) - I think two circles would fit the rhythm better; comparing this to 00:08:383 (4) - , 00:07:883 (3) - has guitar sounds at both the slider head and tail while 00:08:383 (4) - only has guitar sounds at the slider head. they actually both have guitars on both head and tail, and since its just the beginning part of the song i didn't want it too hard
00:13:258 (2) - I don't like how this slider skips out on the drum beat at 00:13:383 - ... maybe making a corner like this? or replace rhythm with circle then 1/4 slider? fix in my own way
00:15:258 (2) - basically the same thing as above ^ ^
00:48:008 (2) - maybe make this a 1/4 slider repeat? there's a loud sound at 00:48:133 - fix
01:19:883 (5,6) - difficult for people to tell it is spaced 1/2 when there are a lot of similar looking placements which are spaced 1/4. Maybe do the same thing as you did at 00:40:133 (4,5) - ^
01:26:133 (6,1) - same thing as ^^
To be honest, I'm not a very big fan of this type of style thanks for the encouragement appreciated xd

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TitleUnicode:アシタノヒカリ
Artist:AAA
ArtistUnicode:AAA
Creator:Rave-up
Version:Estellia-'s Hikari
Source:ワールドトリガー
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499,356,53633,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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33,20,58633,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,87008,12,0,89883,0:0:0:0:

done

_handholding

3,109 posts

Joined April 2014

_handholding 2015-11-23T04:25:28+00:00

from my modding queue

[Hoen's easy]
00:37:883 (2) - would look better curved imo as it contrasts slider (1)

like so

It even blankets with slider (3) (sort of)

00:50:883 (3) - I feel like this could use some slider art to it and its just a long slider wasting its potential

[Normal]
00:15:883 (2) - I feel like the rhythm should be changed as soon in da box. I get that you would have to remap the section for it to work so up to you I guess.

da box

00:21:883 (2,1) - Nazi mod inc - Blanket could do with tweaking
00:44:633 (5) - stack this on top of 00:44:883 (1) to make it easier to read
00:45:383 (2,3) - these would look good blanket. Youre choice
01:11:383 (2) - Add clap on head
01:26:383 (3) - ^ This one is optional though
01:23:883 (2) - Would look better curved imo

Skipping Hard cos its a nm and im lazy ごめんね
[Insane]
for the first part increase audio from 5% to 20%
01:13:883 (5,6) - Reduce DS
01:14:133 (6,7) - Increase DS
The Jump should be emphasized between (6) & (7) not (5) & (6)
Hitsounds are extremely quiet. Increase them a bit plserino. Also, I know you odnt have to cos its a GD but why not add claps in the chorus like the other diffs?

I can see this map getting ranked so GL and have a star

Rave-up

302 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Rave-up 2015-11-23T05:20:31+00:00

Hi Im Nathan wrote:
from my modding queue

[Hoen's easy]
00:37:883 (2) - would look better curved imo as it contrasts slider (1)
like so
It even blankets with slider (3) (sort of)
00:50:883 (3) - I feel like this could use some slider art to it and its just a long slider wasting its potential

[Normal]
00:15:883 (2) - I feel like the rhythm should be changed as soon in da box. I get that you would have to remap the section for it to work so up to you I guess.
da box
nah i think this one is fine
00:21:883 (2,1) - Nazi mod inc - Blanket could do with tweaking fixed!
00:44:633 (5) - stack this on top of 00:44:883 (1) to make it easier to read done
00:45:383 (2,3) - these would look good blanket. Youre choice yes they would
01:11:383 (2) - Add clap on head done
01:26:383 (3) - ^ This one is optional though nah
01:23:883 (2) - Would look better curved imo done

Skipping Hard cos its a nm and im lazy ごめんね
[Insane]
for the first part increase audio from 5% to 20%
01:13:883 (5,6) - Reduce DS
01:14:133 (6,7) - Increase DS
The Jump should be emphasized between (6) & (7) not (5) & (6)
Hitsounds are extremely quiet. Increase them a bit plserino. Also, I know you odnt have to cos its a GD but why not add claps in the chorus like the other diffs?

I can see this map getting ranked so GL and have a star

Thanks for the mod!

Last edited by Rave-up 2015-11-23T23:39:50+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

searchingfor

89 posts

Joined January 2015

searchingfor 2015-11-23T08:10:34+00:00

Sorry for my wrong input.
I'm coming without your invite ~~because I'm asking for M4M.~~

Marianna

1,392 posts

Joined July 2015

Marianna 2015-11-27T23:20:38+00:00

I changed my nick, please put Marianna's or Mari's. Thanks!

Rave-up

302 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Rave-up 2015-11-27T23:54:36+00:00

No Problem! Done.

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