Hi Sherry-nyan~ mod requested via pm~
just a suggestion here~feel free to reject!
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1 2 3 4
NOVICE
00:52:623 - add a note for drum here, since u decided to follow these sound like u do at 00:55:218 (55218|1) - it won't make hard for novice diff :3
00:56:596 (56596|2,56758|1,56921|2,57083|3,57245|2,57407|1,57569|2,57731|3,57894|1,57894|2) - just a bit suggestion here, instead of following those drum sound how about follow those loud one only? like
http://puu.sh/ldIOm/ace908e125.png it could be nice for novice diff :v
01:25:785 - add a note at 3? here should be double like 01:24:488 (84488|2,84488|1) -
01:27:245 (87245|1) - wrong column?xD move up to the blue line , i think u are trying to catch those drum sound at there and remove this 01:27:407 (87407|2) - since there isn't any main drum sound there that u are catching here :3
01:31:191 (91191|1) - whoops wrong snap! should be at the blue line~
01:46:218 (106218|0,106380|2,106542|3) - to make it easy i would suggest to use a hold note to emphysize those drum roll, something like
http://puu.sh/ldJhl/ea0655d75f.pngADVANCED
00:09:245 (9245|0) - this LN should end 00:10:461 - like in BANGKE diff~
00:09:894 - make double here? in Novice here u put double for this sound
00:42:326 - here should be double for crash, add a note at 2?
01:01:785 (61785|0,61867|1,61948|3,62029|2,62110|1,62272|0,62353|1,62434|2,62515|3,62596|2,62677|1,62758|0,62840|1,62921|2,63002|3) - hmm, how about something like
http://puu.sh/ldK5Y/75b7f886d4.png ?
01:13:461 (73461|0,73542|3,73623|1,73704|2,73785|0,73867|3,73948|1,74029|2,74110|0,74191|3,74272|1,74353|2,74434|0,74515|3,74596|1,74677|2,74758|0,74840|3,74921|1,75002|2,75083|0) - it could be a little boring just only use 1-4-2-3 pattern for 1/4 stream maybe u can try to think out some other pattern~
01:25:785 (85785|3,85785|1,86029|3,86029|1) - these both double should be in different column between them since they are not the same sound~
BANGKE's EXHAUST
00:14:110 - missing piano note?
00:19:299 - here too ^
00:30:731 (30731|3,30731|2) - remove? there isn't any drum sound there lol
00:41:353 - missing note for guitar sound? :s
01:46:218 (106218|1,106218|3,106299|2,106380|1,106380|3,106461|2,106542|1) - aren't all these have the same drum sound? will suggest to make it all single note
01:49:785 (109785|1,109785|0,109948|3,109948|0,110110|3,110110|2,110218|1,110272|2,110434|3) - it kinda little confuse here @@ i think the best is follow those 1/6 drum sound but if u want to keep it then u should add note for drum at 01:50:326 - too
hope these could help~good luck!