1. Hard (3.2 stars, 177 notes)
2. Insane (4.5 stars, 228 notes)
3. Normal (1.94 stars, 105 notes)
4. Stream timing (7.88 stars, 913 notes)
5. Timing (1.15 stars, 229 notes)

Stjpa wrote:

[Normal]
• You should definitely turn down the SV. 1.4 is REALLY high for a Normal diff. Fixed

• • The volume you chose doesn't fit. Make them overall quieter. Especially 100% in the Kiai is too loud. This counts for every difficulty. Fixed

• 00:05:267 (1,3) - Bad overlap Fixed

• 00:06:300 (3,1) - ^ I don't know. It doesn't look that bad and the flow is pretty good. I'll wait to see if other people agree with you.

• 00:18:696 (3,1) - ^ Fixed

• 00:19:729 (1,2) - ^ Fixed

• 00:58:027 (3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - This complete part looks kinda strange. You should consider remapping this whole diff since you have to change a lot anyway due the high SV. I changed it up a bit.


[Hard]
• 00:18:008 (1,2) - Fix blanket. Fixed

• 00:19:041 (4,5) - ^ Fixed

• 00:19:041 (4,1) - Bad Overlap. I think it's fixed

• 00:53:027 - 00:55:096 - Consider mapping something here too. Leaving it open is boring. Fixed

• 01:01:618 (2,3,4) - Not really good for a Hard imo. I'll keep it for now, but if it ends up getting a lot of hate later on, I'll remove it.



[Insane]
• 00:04:579 (5,6) - These jumps are too huge imo. Fixed

• 00:10:605 (2,3,4) - There's nothing that allows you to use a triplet. I hear a triplet, but that may just be me. I'll wait for others to see if they have a problem with it, too.

• 00:13:015 (6,7) - Bad transition. Fixed

• 00:17:836 (2,3,4) - Same as above. Fixed, but I don't know if it got better or worse 0-o

• 00:23:861 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I'm not sure if this is a good choice of pattern for this part. I'll leave it for now, but if others also say to change it, I will.

• 00:43:488 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Actually it should start without spacing and then go on with bigger spacing. Select them all and use the CTRL + G function. That's what I mean. The music gets louder, so the jumps have an emphasis then. Feels slightly weird (maybe it's just me), but I fixed it

Thanks for the mod! Great points! It definitely helped.

Kalibe wrote:

Hey, Ori is amazing ;w; Heck Yeah

[Metadata]

add in tags : Moon Studios Aeralie Brighton Rachel Mellis Tom Boyd Fixed


[Normal]

AR - 4 Fixed
HP - 3Fixed

00:04:234 (3) - do smth similar like this : http://puu.sh/kSP8Y/3199a37a86.jpg Fixed
00:08:366 (2) - more pretty plz : http://puu.sh/kSPy2/18332be68f.jpg I made it more wavy :3
00:17:663 (1) - finish don't work here. Replace it with Whistle Fixed
00:35:569 (3) - change this slider. No retreating sliders on Normal Fixed
00:35:569 (3) - on sliderend remove Finish and add Whitstle Fixed
00:51:820 (2,3,4,5) - use DS. try this : http://puu.sh/kSPTt/8b507f02d7.jpg Fixed
00:59:045 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - circle spam, please don't do that Fixed
01:00:061 (1) - remove Whistle, add Finish I don't hear a finish at all 0-o
01:03:198 (1) - stack on 01:01:100 (1) - Fixed

[Hard]

definitly no AR 8 on 2.95 and ~175 BPM decrease to 7 Fixed

Ok, just check Normal and metadata, so i think it's good

Thanks so much for the mod! It really helped out my normal mode !

• 00:13:531 (1,2) - DS，make sure open the distance most time
  00:06:300 (3,4,1) - make the pattern more simple
  00:40:734 (1) - to 00:46:587 (3) - this part notes and sliders are all in the bottom half. make them spread out?
  00:50:700 (1) - reduce the volume of the finish sound, so noisy in such a soft song.
  00:51:820 (1) - i think u can remove the slidersound , its too noisy for the song.
  01:09:404 (1) - i think u should finish the kiai, but not placed a spinner for end
  01:17:680 i'd like to keep mapping until this time

• 00:09:055 (1,2) - cant think of a better pattern?
  00:30:748 (2) - mb change this reverse slider to a note + 1/2 slider? coz 00:31:092 has a heavy piano sound.
  00:48:786 (1) - .. mb remove the finish sound is better
  00:48:786 (1) - usually not put the tail of slider on white tick. its usually a start of every little snap
  00:53:027 (4) - same
  01:01:100 (1,2,3,4) - i feel not suit the music here,and the whistle seems not fine
  01:01:964 here 1/4, hard can put 1/4 snap, unless you spam 1/4 snap
  01:01:100 (1,2,3,4) - any good idea?
  01:09:491 (1) - the spinner's tail not on the tick

• 00:07:420 (1) - there's a lot of sounds to map, instead of put a spinner
  00:35:655 make a 1/2slider from here?
  00:42:455 (5) - NC
  00:43:488 (1) - remove NC
  00:50:786 (1) - reduce the volume
  01:03:174 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - not on tick
  i highly suggest to keep placing notes until 01:17:680

pinataman wrote:

Hello. Here for M4M from your queue. This song is beautiful, thank you for making a map of it. Hope this helps

[Blinded]

00:38:323 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) – While this is a nice pattern, I'm not sure how the repetition and rhythm of this fits the music. Try making a rhythm that matches the melody more like http://puu.sh/kTgpA/c2a33c2d7d.jpg. Assuming you go with this rhythm, one way to emphasize the strong piano notes at 00:39:701 (7,8,9) – is to use a different flow than what you used at 00:38:323 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - . For example, you could use a zig-zag flow like http://puu.sh/kTgAf/a710b9b168.jpg and then use a simple curve like http://puu.sh/kTgB7/a754658552.jpg. Fixed. I didn't do a zig-zag, but I did change it. I did more of a star formation.

00:44:349 (6,1) – I think the blanket is a trap. The spacing into 1 just feels too small since 1 is on a strong downbeat and linear flow into 1 doesn't feel to nice to me. Experiment with some different flows like http://puu.sh/kThen/b50043a577.jpg (make the 5,6,1 pattern symmetric, ask me in game if you need help with that, though you're design is pretty good so I think you can get it) or like http://puu.sh/kThgM/61200be9fb.jpg. 00:44:004 (4,5,6) – also feels a little funny to me, so try experimenting with breaking the zig-zag flow there with something like http://puu.sh/kTiMA/d43863a5e2.jpg. Fixed

00:47:104 (3) – Rhythms like these make me think we have different ideas on how we should make rhythm in maps. Feel free to explain your decision for this rhythm like if there's some instrument you're following that I can't hear or whatnot, but to me, 00:47:276 – is a pretty strong piano note. I like following this melody, so making the strong note clickable by having a slider start here or have a circle here plays better to me. It also makes your hitsound make more sense since the player will hear how he/she is doing with their rhythm in game instead of being automatically perfect on a slider end. Yeah, I don't hear strong points of a song very well. It's why I'm terrible at hit sounds.


00:35:397 (1,2,3,4,5) – Another example of where I think you can go with the melody more like above^ Fixed


00:53:372 (3,6) – This overlap looks a little poor to me. I'm guessing you wanted a specific flow, but you can get most of what you were going for by nudging/rotating things around. Maybe something like http://puu.sh/kTgP3/b36c996e19.jpg. The ideas behind this is to create a square looking thing using the slider end of 3, 4, the head of 5, and the end of 6 while also blanketing the end of 6 in 5 (but not necessarily a perfect blanket). The curvature of the sliders is also a bit challenging since 3 and 5 are different, but I think using the curvature of 3 for the 6 slider could yield a nicer result than using the 5 curvature, so play with that. Fixed.


00:56:303 (6,1) – I'm picky about overlaps . Try something stacking the slider ends of these, example: http://puu.sh/kThuU/0a1273b47b.jpg I've tried to find different patterns. Everything else ruins the flow if I stack them.

00:59:045 (1,1) – Since the curvature of these sliders are different, they make the two combos not symmetrical. I like having the jump into 01:00:061 (1) - , but try to set up the 00:59:045 (1,2,3,4,5) – pattern so that you can get more of a symmetrical feel to the next one (the flow is very nice though). I don't know if it's better or worse now 0-o

01:01:100 (1,2,3) – and 01:01:964 (4,5,6,7,8) – feel completely different to me in the music, so I don't agree with the repetition you use. Try a different flow starting at 01:01:964 (4) – to contrast these parts of the music more. Also 01:02:656 (7) – could be two circles instead so try that out. Fixed.

01:05:266 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) – This is a fine pattern.... but it doesn't quite express the music in a way that makes sense to me (the spacing and repetitive flow get to me, but that's subjective). Try doing Ctrl + G on 7 and moving it to 200, 292 (http://puu.sh/kTicn/59083c7c2d.jpg). The high spacing takes away some of the emphasis that 01:07:335 (1) – and 01:08:370 (4,5) – have in the music, so calming it down here instead could allow more focus to those parts (which I find more exciting but again, my opinion). I'll keep it for now. I'll see if others have a problem with it too.

01:08:715 (5,6) – So as mentioned above, the pitch changes here and these feel more intense to me. To reflect this change in intensity, try making the spacing a little bigger by moving 5 to around 420, 120 and making 6 a mirror of that. Fixed.

01:09:491 (1) – Why is this not snapped? *looks at timing points for the first time* Oh is this not a single bpm song? I guess that explains some of the instances where the offset felt off. Well that's gonna be annoying. I know right? :L

01:11:560 (1) – You REALLY should map what comes after this. If you take any suggestion from this mod, please let it be this one. This section gives much needed resolution to the song and mapping this will make the map so much nicer. This might mean deleting the spinner at 01:09:491 (1) – could be better.
Fixed, but I made it harder XD
[Hard]

00:07:678 – This break is dead air, and you generally don't want that. Try filling it with a calm rhythm like http://puu.sh/kTjGj/1b590c0c4d.jpg Fixed.

00:19:385 (5,1,2) – This is confusing rhythm since the strong note is at 00:19:729 - . By using a slider end to end on a strong note, you weaken the the feeling of the map, so I expected you to use 1/1 rhythm (which goes with the restful background music). I like this feeling, so try that rhythm out http://puu.sh/kTj2a/daac8119b1.jpg. Fixed.

00:21:451 (5,1,2) – This is also confusing. The break makes you slow down the rhythm so much I didn't like it then speeding up so fast. Try making 00:21:451 (5) – a 1/1 slider to fill in that break and set up the following notes a little more nicely.Fixed.

00:45:899 (1,2,3) – This looks sloppy since the distance from 1 to 3 and the distance from 2 to 3 is not the same. It also plays weird since you have slider leniency making the spacing from 2 to 3 small. Try cleaning it up, like maybe http://puu.sh/kTjjQ/db5cb2053b.jpg Fixed.

00:52:510 (3) – This ending on the downbeat is weird. Try making this a ½ slider and add a circle at 00:52:854 - Fixed.

01:11:560 (1) – You REALLY should map what comes after this. If you take any suggestion from this mod, please let it be this one. This section gives much needed resolution to the song and mapping this will make the map so much nicer. This might mean deleting the spinner at 01:09:491 (1) – could be better. Fixed.

[Normal]

00:05:267 (1,2) – Some blankets are off like this one Fixed. I think

00:06:300 (3,1) – Why not overlap so that the slider end is completely over the other slider like so? http://puu.sh/kTjUD/7254137481.jpg It's so hard to perfectly do that ;-; I can't

00:23:861 (1,2) – The different curvatures of these sliders don't look nice to me. Try making 2 more curvy to fit more with 1 like http://puu.sh/kTjZJ/bd32941721.jpg Fixed.

00:31:092 (2,4) – Same kind of thing as above^. Try to work some symmetry into here. For example, http://puu.sh/kTk7W/0e3fb7ad9a.jpg is starting to make the two sliders symmetrical along that imaginary line I'm sorry. I don't understand what you mean at all 0-o

00:55:958 (1) – Y U no hitsound? Fixed.

01:11:560 (1) – You REALLY should map what comes after this. If you take any suggestion from this mod, please let it be this one. This section gives much needed resolution to the song and mapping this will make the map so much nicer. This might mean deleting the spinner at 01:09:491 (1) – could be better. Fixed.

And that's all I got. Good luck!

Thanks!

Hi Im Nathan wrote:

from my modding queue

[Normal]
00:50:700 (1) - Shouldnt this note be on 00:50:786 ? Fixed.
01:09:404 - I think this part should be mapped instead of a spinner. However if you do want to leave it as a spinner finish it at 01:11:473 oh and dont forget to change the timing point too Fixed.

[Hard]
00:07:333 (7) - what do you think about turning this into a slider? its not necessary though but I thought it spruces things up a bit

like this

I was updating this while you were modding it. It's different now.
00:46:587 (3) - move to 84x, 176y ^
01:09:491 (1) - Same as easy diff Fixed.

[blinded]
01:01:100 - this part is tricky to read Once again, I was updating this with Pinataman's mod while you were gone. Changed
01:09:491 (1) - again so as the other 2 diffs Removed the entire slider. Recheck to see what I did.

I think this song should only have 1 bpm throughout the whole song. Like at 01:03:198 it goes from 173 bpm to 174, I cant anyone making a song and intentionally making bars 1 bpm apart This is because the music slows down at certain parts slightly. Listen to the song with a constant BPM. it will never perfectly fit.

Anways I hope you like this mod, GL

Thanks!

rs_fadeaway wrote:

hi, as M4M req.
[General]
you should try put 2&4 snap whistle， but not all time on 1 snap I don't know what you mean 0-o I'm going to get lordRaika to help me soon enough.
Seems no sence to name as Blinded, change back to Insane mb Fixed.
[normal]

• 00:13:531 (1,2) - DS，make sure open the distance most time That's what makes this part special ;-; But if one of the BMN say to do so, then I will.
  00:06:300 (3,4,1) - make the pattern more simple I don't see how it could get simpler 0-o
  00:40:734 (1) - to 00:46:587 (3) - this part notes and sliders are all in the bottom half. make them spread out? Fixed.
  00:50:700 (1) - reduce the volume of the finish sound, so noisy in such a soft song. Fixed.
  00:51:820 (1) - i think u can remove the slidersound , its too noisy for the song. There is no sound on the slider...
  01:09:404 (1) - i think u should finish the kiai, but not placed a spinner for end Since it's normal, I think a spinner would be best.
  01:17:680 i'd like to keep mapping until this time Fixed.

[Hard]

• 00:09:055 (1,2) - cant think of a better pattern? I think it's pretty good ;-;
  00:30:748 (2) - mb change this reverse slider to a note + 1/2 slider? coz 00:31:092 has a heavy piano sound. Fixed.
  00:48:786 (1) - .. mb remove the finish sound is better Sorry, the song DEFINITELY has a finish in it.
  00:48:786 (1) - usually not put the tail of slider on white tick. its usually a start of every little snap But thats when the spinner ends 0-o
  00:53:027 (4) - same Fixed.
  01:01:100 (1,2,3,4) - i feel not suit the music here,and the whistle seems not fine I removed some of the whistles, but I'm keeping the pattern.
  01:01:964 here 1/4, hard can put 1/4 snap, unless you spam 1/4 snap I don't understand what you mean.
  01:01:100 (1,2,3,4) - any good idea? Nope XD
  01:09:491 (1) - the spinner's tail not on the tick Fixed.

[Blinded]

• 00:07:420 (1) - there's a lot of sounds to map, instead of put a spinner Good idea, but I'm going to wait for others to agree with you.
  00:35:655 make a 1/2slider from here? Fixed.
  00:42:455 (5) - NC Fixed.
  00:43:488 (1) - remove NC I made this part harder so I'm keeping the NC.
  00:50:786 (1) - reduce the volume Fixed.
  01:03:174 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - not on tick Fixed.
  i highly suggest to keep placing notes until 01:17:680 Fixed.

hope it helps, GL

Thanks! It did

votex09 wrote:

Insane

00:10:605 - I feel as though while you CAN get away with having a triplet here, it's a bit jarring. The music suggests a sorta of lazy legato triplet that isn't as on beat as you'd expect to hear from an orchestra. While it's difficult to map, to provide that extra oomph you'll need to change this bit. Fixed


00:17:663 - I believe 6 should start the new combo here, and also stay with the "Jumpy nature of the map" Placing it atop slider "1" here I believe is a bit awkward. Fixed

00:59:045 - Notes here are a bit late, especially the one at 01:03:198 - Maybe a tempo change will be necessary here. I've been having trouble here. ALOT. But I think I fixed it SORTOF

I would like to note that 01:05:266 - 01:11:531 is the apex of this map to me, and don't let anyone make you change it or I'll be mad. Its awesome to play and feels good. ^.^ Noice!

Hard

00:50:786 - This blank space IMO should have something here and is awkward to be empty for me. It's to give hard mode players a second to recover from the spinner.

00:15:425 - This note is unneeded. While you might be able to keep this note I feel as if it would flow better without it.IDK. This note is rather important. Take it out and hear how weird it sounds without that beat.

Normal

00:51:820 - 1&2 here could be copied and Horizontally and vertically flipped rather than made anew for the following combo. The 3rd combo follows this though. Fixed! I think 0-o

Thanks for the mod! It helped a lot more than I expected!

Zectro wrote:

hi, hopefully this will be good enough for m4m It is, don't worry

[Normal]
Can't really find anything at all, maybe start this spinner 01:17:826 (1) - at the red tick and adjust the spinner end accordingly K

[Hard]
Also incredibly hard to find something.
01:12:198 (1,2,3,4) - instead of slightly overlapping these you could make them just barely touch eachother, would look better imo. (http://puu.sh/kWdvQ/f1475d716b.jpg) Fixed

[Insane]
00:43:488 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this star pattern feels a bit too big and forced/overmapped, consider scaling it down (yep it will be some work adjusting the overlaps and blankets) Fixed
00:45:554 (1,2,3) - imo ctrl g'ing each one of these feels a bit less ham, which is better i think, increase the spacing between them a bit if you decide to do so I'm going to keep the current pattern since it makes 3 lead to the next slider better.
00:59:025 (1,2,3,4,5) - could be a cooler pattern instead like http://puu.sh/kWeGw/910aec17be.jpg, http://puu.sh/kWeEC/67d975eaf6.jpg since that's where stuff actually goes down in the song I think I have enough patterns like this already, and also it doesn't flow as well.
01:00:041 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ ^
01:01:964 (4,5) - i feel like they would fit better if they were a bit closer to 01:02:137 (6) - Fixed
01:04:212 (4) - this feels a bit over the top, the length really catches my eye since it's just a simple straight slider, and it doesn't perfectly point towards 01:04:731 (5) While I"m keeping the slider shape, I am adjusting it to point at 5 better
01:06:287 - the melody changes a bit here, maybe use some other pattern instead of continuing the repeating pattern? the repeating one feels a bit overdone i think Fixed
01:10:293 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - could maybe use some polishing I don't know how to polish it better it though 0-o
01:12:891 (3) - should end at 01:13:237 - and add a note between 01:12:891 (3) - and 01:13:583 (4) - at 01:13:410 - instead If others agree, I'll change it, but for now I think it's good.
01:15:661 (1,2) - maybe some slider art on these? would be a nicer ending IDK what slider art is, but I made different shapes :3[/list]

• 
  You might need an easy I dunno
  
  Normal

1. So fast zoom zoom
2. 00:19:729 (1,2) - I would make this a bit cleaner, looks like they aren't mirror'd (I typed Miiro like 3 times trying to type mirror)
3. 00:21:795 (3) - Make use of that cute hole you made by doing this http://puu.sh/kWOBS/32d5b6f97b.jpg
4. 00:38:323 (1) - Either make the elbow in the dead center or make it more on one side, http://puu.sh/kWOED/87bd1200f5.jpg or http://puu.sh/kWOFn/d58af0a2fe.jpg
5. 00:40:734 (1,3) - You can make this a little nicer of a blanket
6. 00:58:021 (3) - NC?
7. 01:01:100 (1,2) - Same as the last ones you did, also same with making use of the hole you make
   
   Hard
8. 00:23:948 (1,1) - Skipping the downbeat inbetween these two notes seems off to me but I can see what you were going for
9. 00:44:177 (3) - http://puu.sh/kWOQC/0ce38496a8.jpg Maybe?
10. pretty gud jawb
    
    Insane
11. 00:16:630 (5) - Since there isn't a whole lot of emphasis on this jump, you could maybe just put it in the previous slider for cute stuff http://puu.sh/kWOUf/b729bb68fa.jpg
12. 01:10:293 (5,6,7) - The way that this leads into the airman jumps (01:10:640 (8,9,10,11,12,13) - These here) feels really off to me, I think you should have it be somewhere or just change the airman jumps

-Lemons wrote:

one time I stuck my finger in a light socket and it hurt real bad Oh noez. That's turrible D:

• 
  You might need an easy I dunno I dunno if I need an easy
  
  Normal

1. So fast zoom zoom Swagga speed for dappa newbies
2. 00:19:729 (1,2) - I would make this a bit cleaner, looks like they aren't mirror'd (I typed Miiro like 3 times trying to type mirror) Fixed
3. 00:21:795 (3) - Make use of that cute hole you made by doing this http://puu.sh/kWOBS/32d5b6f97b.jpg DS won't allow me to, and even then it doesn't flow well. ;-;
4. 00:38:323 (1) - Either make the elbow in the dead center or make it more on one side, http://puu.sh/kWOED/87bd1200f5.jpg or http://puu.sh/kWOFn/d58af0a2fe.jpg Centered because I'm a boss.
5. 00:40:734 (1,3) - You can make this a little nicer of a blanket Fixed. I think.
6. 00:58:021 (3) - NC? Fixed
7. 01:01:100 (1,2) - Same as the last ones you did, also same with making use of the hole you make Same problems as before, except this time I know the sliders are the same.
   
   Hard
8. 00:23:948 (1,1) - Skipping the downbeat inbetween these two notes seems off to me but I can see what you were going for Yeah it's to allow hard mode players some time to adjust after the spinner.
9. 00:44:177 (3) - http://puu.sh/kWOQC/0ce38496a8.jpg Maybe? Fixed
10. pretty gud jawb Thx, m8
    
    Insane
11. 00:16:630 (5) - Since there isn't a whole lot of emphasis on this jump, you could maybe just put it in the previous slider for cute stuff http://puu.sh/kWOUf/b729bb68fa.jpg Changed, but I might change it back if someone complains.
12. 01:10:293 (5,6,7) - The way that this leads into the airman jumps (01:10:640 (8,9,10,11,12,13) - These here) feels really off to me, I think you should have it be somewhere or just change the airman jumps I'll change this if others agree with you

Sweet mapset d00d Thnx DooD :3

Sweet mod, Dude.

Lily Bread wrote:

hi,m4m from your queue.

[Normal]
check AImod.(about DS) AImod says everything is fine for me.

how to have a AI DScheck

http://image17-c.poco.cn/mypoco/myphoto/20150909/20/17820113020150909202428053.png?638x715_130

01:17:826 (1) - start at - 01:17:912 - is much better imo.now it looks like start before - 01:15:661 (1) - ends. Fixed

[Hard]
SV 1.7 for a 170+BPM's Hard?
00:25:927 - you missed a piano hit there.i suggest you add a circle. That is to give hard mode players a second to re-adjust after the spinner. Only insane modes and above are allowed to have notes quickly after sliders.
00:34:191 - ^ I will consider this, but not yet.
00:42:455 - ^ Same reason as the last one.
00:45:038 (5) - a slider here?there is no music at - 00:45:038 -.please use a single circle at - 00:45:210 - ,or use a slider from - 00:45:210 - to - 00:45:554 -. Mmmm, I will consider this as well. If someone else agrees, I'll change it.

[Insane]
sorry i can't mod insane.only found some small problems.
NCs: i noticed that your NCs are not very good.usually we NC every bar line(long white line) in insane diff. I set combos by how the song goes.
01:12:891 (3,4) - stack. Fixed

gl!

Thanks for the mod! I'll be modding your map soon.

votex09 wrote:

Insane:
D: what happened to 01:05:249 - you changed it? Don't worry. I only changed a few parts, and the star is still the same
also at 00:44:349 (6) - 6 this star is super elongated vertically. Technically might work but its a bit niche as it isn't aesthetically pleasing. I'll consider this, but I was told it was a bit too hard.

Btw, expect me to continue dropping in here and commenting on your map haha . Great! :3

bigjoe97 wrote:

ayyy

Normal

Don't think you need an Easy, this is under 2 stars so it should be fine.

I really liked how you were able to keep the difficulty down while incorporating interesting rhythms. Very nice normal. Thanks!

01:17:826 (1) - I'd end this at 01:20:337 instead, since this feels like 6/8 to me and that would be 'on beat' and match up with the peak of the wash noise in the background. Same thing for the other diffs with this spinner. Fixed

Hard

00:15:425 (3,4) - This flows kinda weirdly. Maybe rotate 00:15:597 (4) clockwise 45 degrees. I'll consider it

There are a lot of spinners for such a short song. I'd map out more of the song, like at 00:23:948 (1) you could do some mapping, and have a bit less spinning, but it's up to you. Fixed

Insane

00:23:861 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - These flow very awkwardly. The side-to-side/back-and-forth motion required feels really unnatural, especially with how well the rest of your map flows. I'd straighten these out, and if you want to add difficulty maybe have jumps between each set of 3. Fixed
00:31:092 (1) - Move this farther away from 00:30:748 (4) to emphasize the greater time between the two. Fixed
00:45:038 (2) - This jump is unnatural. Ctrl+G, add jumps where they feel like they should be but there's no emphasis in the music required here. Fixed
00:57:504 (2) - I like this better Ctrl+G'd but it's up to you here. I'm going to keep this because I feel a loop motion feels better.
01:03:866 (3) - Same as earlier, you can still have a jump to 01:04:212 (4) but Ctrl+G this to remove the jump from 2 to 3, there's no emphasis and it feels weird. I'll consider this as well.


Loved this map and the music as well. Nice work!

Thanks for the mod!

RVMathew wrote:

Hi there. You posted in my modding queue t/336458/start=165 3 months ago. Here I am 3 months later with a mod. And here I am, responding to your comment three months later! XD

Note that whatever I say is my own opinion so you do not have to follow everything I say.

Normal
Rhythm wise, it is good.

1) 00:07:333 (1) - Avoid overlapping this with 00:06:300 (3) as it does not look good. Try and reduce overlaps in normal. There may be times where you have to sacrifice a certain pattern, but for a normal difficulty you should make it clean for newer players to enjoy. I think it's fine for now, but that may change.

2) 00:16:630 (4) - Perhaps change the direction of the slider. Make use of the playfield; do not put a lot of notes in a short amount of time in a small area of the playfield as it makes it look cramped. Same as above

3) 00:40:734 (1,3) - Have this the same shape because right now the pattern looks weird. Fixed!

4) 01:06:287 (2) - Shift this to (304,222). Fixed!

5) 01:07:350 (1,3) - I assume you need to put hitfinish here, as you did that in other difficulties. I would recommend using hitsound copier to copy hitsounds from 1 difficulty to another; saves time. Fixed!

Hard
1) 00:09:055 (1,2) - Sliders are not parallel. Fixed! I think...

2) 00:16:630 (5) - Here I would remove the red points and add more points to have a smoother curve.Fixed!

3) 01:01:100 (1,2,3,4) - This bit looks a little bit clustered but I could play this without any problem. :3

4) 01:05:249 (1,2,3,4) - Have the same distance snap of 1.4x I'll see if that becomes a problem later.

Insane
1) 00:26:960 (4,5,6) - Make them the same shape. It looks a lot better that way.I can't do that but I attempted to fix them.

2) 00:43:488 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Use ctrl+shift+d as a guide to create a better star pattern. Fixed!

Final Thoughts
The mapset was certainly refreshing. There are some refinements that need to be made but overall a very good mapset.

Good luck and sorry for replying 3 months later.

Thanks for modding!

1. Big gap between Normal and Hard: The Slider velocity isn't intuitive when players scale from Normal to Hard due how fast the slider-ball goes in comparison with both difficulties. I heavily suggest to manage a the SV with 1.50x on the Hard difficulty to manage intuitively the spread.
2. High Jump based on the Insane difficulty. While it's allowed to use jumps over this difficulty, it's not good to place them in spots when the song isn't aiming for jumps. for example: 00:45:390 (3,1) - 00:51:113 (2,3) - 00:01:824 (3,4) - etc. It really feels out of place when some parts have big jumps and other follow DS for the whole pattern.

1. Red lines must be consistent throughout all the difficulties of the mapset. This is for ensuring all the difficulties end at the same spot and timing changes don't no vary among them. Hence, make the timing points of the Insane the same as the Normal and the Hard difficulty. Then, snapping all the objects which correspond to the new timing. Aimod should help in case you can be confused.

1. Spacing should be consistent among all the object When talking about Normal difficulties, the spacing becomes a very important hint due beginners aren't used to have different spacing since they base the movement of the cursor with the rhythms of the objects. Therefore, there are a few list of objects which present incosnsistent spacing and should be fixed as soon as possible before proceeding. You can find the list in the below box:
   
   ^

   1. 00:12:498 (19,20) -
   2. 00:13:531 (20,21) -
   3. 00:50:780 (76,77) -
   4. 00:54:917 (80,81) -
   5. 01:13:583 (2,3) -
   6. 01:14:622 (3,4) -
   7. 01:15:661 (4,5) -
2. 00:15:597 (3) - This should be with NC to keep consistency with the way you managed the New Combo over this difficulty.
3. 00:25:927 (3,1) - Swap NC.
4. 00:47:276 (4,1,2,3,4) - The way this pattern is managed could mislead players because they're not used to click a row of circles as often as this patterns does. It would be way better if you could change some of them to 1/1 slider or 1/1 slider with a reverse to simply the density of objects here.
5. 01:12:544 (1,1,1) - This pattern of NC might confuse players because if they're not aware what the strong beats are in this pattern, they could click faster the circles which aren't supposed to be. For this reason, managing the same combo with these three circles would improve significantly the readability of this section.

1. 01:03:174 (1) - Unsnapped slider-tail It should be snapped to the wite tick respectively as the rest of objects where it should go over here 01:03:520 -
2. 00:05:956 (3,4) - 00:20:074 (2,3) - Why the jump? If you placed a jump here, you should do it as well as the other parts which are the same for consistency. Otherwise consider to use the same DS as the rest of objects do.
3. -0.5 on the HP Drain to keep a balance on how this value increases among the difficulties.
4. 00:09:055 (1) - Remove NC there and add NC here 00:09:399 (2) - for consistency.
5. 00:14:564 (2,3,4) - The flow of this sections is somehow boring due the motion of the circle (3) doesn't redirect intuitively to the next object. Hence, it would be better if it (4) followed the flow in an anti clock-wise to improve slightly the smoother flow you managed here. I do believe trying something like this could work:
   
   ^

   
6. 00:51:814 (1,2,3) - If you compare this movement with the fluent ones you did in the upcoming cases, you can realize the case I pointed out doesn't follow like a smooth flow. It would be better if you tried to make something similar on that pattern like 00:53:883 (1,2,3) - 00:55:952 (1,2,3) - etc to improve significantly the flow here.
7. 01:01:618 (2,3,4) - While the motion of these sliders do flow well, the rhythm is really off in therms where the strong beats are. It would improve the rhythm if you tried out the same 1/2 that you did here 01:07:350 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - to highlight nicely and perceptively the instruments here.

1. Let's star with a comparison between two patterns which are really similar but the spacing is really different: 00:01:136 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - vs 00:05:268 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Why one sections manages such as high accurate spacing and the other ones uses a rather small DS if both sections are similar? Here it where the spacing becomes a really important hint because it's not good to have differnt spacing in segments which don't claim for jumps at all.
2. 00:10:951 (8) - This slider creates a very weird flow because frankly saying it's not following the instruments here. Placing slider-head over red ticks plays always as offbeat because the upbeats should be the ones emphasized to increase the experience of players regarding rhythm. That's why trying a rhythm like this will improve significantly the way how instruments are highlighted in this segment.
   
3. 00:15:600 (4) - NC for consistency.
4. 00:15:600 (4,5) - I guess this is only a personal suggestion, but I really dislike anti-jumps where the song doesn't aim for it. It woudl be way better if it were placed somewhere else to don't kill the motion you gave on the previous patterns.
5. 01:05:265 (1,2,3) - This sections feels really overmapped because there are no instruments to highlight here except the wave sound of the flute. It would be better if you tried out something like this to simply the rhythm here:
   
   ^

   
6. 01:08:733 (5,6) - Ctrl + G here to manage a better flow. As it is now, flows rather uncomfortable in therms of fluency.

HappyRocket88 wrote:

Hai hai!

Your mapset is overall good. The hitsounding is decent and all the difficulties play quite fun despite being this your first mapset. Good job! However, I would like to know two points which worries before nominating this map.

1. Big gap between Normal and Hard: The Slider velocity isn't intuitive when players scale from Normal to Hard due how fast the slider-ball goes in comparison with both difficulties. I heavily suggest to manage a the SV with 1.50x on the Hard difficulty to manage intuitively the spread. Fixed!
2. High Jump based on the Insane difficulty. While it's allowed to use jumps over this difficulty, it's not good to place them in spots when the song isn't aiming for jumps. for example: 00:45:390 (3,1) - 00:51:113 (2,3) - 00:01:824 (3,4) - etc. It really feels out of place when some parts have big jumps and other follow DS for the whole pattern.Fixed to the best of my ability

Aside from that, I'll do the mod I promised like a year ago and couldn't do it due timing problems. But now I am here so, let's start! \:D/

Legend

1. asdf must fix!
2. asdf should fix.
3. asdf suggestions

[ General] Here in General things there are some few issues you should work on to let the quality of the mapset meets the Ranking Criteria for osu! standard.

1. Red lines must be consistent throughout all the difficulties of the mapset. This is for ensuring all the difficulties end at the same spot and timing changes don't no vary among them. Hence, make the timing points of the Insane the same as the Normal and the Hard difficulty. Then, snapping all the objects which correspond to the new timing. Aimod should help in case you can be confused. Fixed!

[ Normal] Really well made Normal difficulty you did here. No big issues to highlight since it's quite good after all, only some minor complains about spacing and aesthetics.

1. Spacing should be consistent among all the object When talking about Normal difficulties, the spacing becomes a very important hint due beginners aren't used to have different spacing since they base the movement of the cursor with the rhythms of the objects. Therefore, there are a few list of objects which present incosnsistent spacing and should be fixed as soon as possible before proceeding. You can find the list in the below box: Fixed!
   
   ^

   1. 00:12:498 (19,20) -
   2. 00:13:531 (20,21) -
   3. 00:50:780 (76,77) -
   4. 00:54:917 (80,81) -
   5. 01:13:583 (2,3) -
   6. 01:14:622 (3,4) -
   7. 01:15:661 (4,5) -
2. 00:15:597 (3) - This should be with NC to keep consistency with the way you managed the New Combo over this difficulty. Fixed!
3. 00:25:927 (3,1) - Swap NC. Fixed!
4. 00:47:276 (4,1,2,3,4) - The way this pattern is managed could mislead players because they're not used to click a row of circles as often as this patterns does. It would be way better if you could change some of them to 1/1 slider or 1/1 slider with a reverse to simply the density of objects here. Fixed!
5. 01:12:544 (1,1,1) - This pattern of NC might confuse players because if they're not aware what the strong beats are in this pattern, they could click faster the circles which aren't supposed to be. For this reason, managing the same combo with these three circles would improve significantly the readability of this section. Fixed!

[ Hard] This hard is well mapped too but the only problem is that the slider-velocity is rather unaware with the media of SV used for Hard difficulties. Nonetheless, I found some issues that might develop the quality of the difficulty:

1. 01:03:174 (1) - Unsnapped slider-tail It should be snapped to the wite tick respectively as the rest of objects where it should go over here 01:03:520 - Fixed!
2. 00:05:956 (3,4) - 00:20:074 (2,3) - Why the jump? If you placed a jump here, you should do it as well as the other parts which are the same for consistency. Otherwise consider to use the same DS as the rest of objects do. Fixed!
3. -0.5 on the HP Drain to keep a balance on how this value increases among the difficulties. Fixed!
4. 00:09:055 (1) - Remove NC there and add NC here 00:09:399 (2) - for consistency.Fixed!
5. 00:14:564 (2,3,4) - The flow of this sections is somehow boring due the motion of the circle (3) doesn't redirect intuitively to the next object. Hence, it would be better if it (4) followed the flow in an anti clock-wise to improve slightly the smoother flow you managed here. I do believe trying something like this could work: Fixed!
   
   ^

   
6. 00:51:814 (1,2,3) - If you compare this movement with the fluent ones you did in the upcoming cases, you can realize the case I pointed out doesn't follow like a smooth flow. It would be better if you tried to make something similar on that pattern like 00:53:883 (1,2,3) - 00:55:952 (1,2,3) - etc to improve significantly the flow here. Fixed!
7. 01:01:618 (2,3,4) - While the motion of these sliders do flow well, the rhythm is really off in therms where the strong beats are. It would improve the rhythm if you tried out the same 1/2 that you did here 01:07:350 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - to highlight nicely and perceptively the instruments here.Fixed!

[ Insane] Well, this difficulty isn't that bad, but there are a lot of parts where ther flow and the rhythm is questionable because the overall difficulty seems an overuse of jumps on 1/2 with reverses. Hence, it really flows awkwardly and don't suit the difficulty at all. I'm only going to highlight some few of them since this difficulty needs more work in my opinion:

1. Let's star with a comparison between two patterns which are really similar but the spacing is really different: 00:01:136 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - vs 00:05:268 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Why one sections manages such as high accurate spacing and the other ones uses a rather small DS if both sections are similar? Here it where the spacing becomes a really important hint because it's not good to have differnt spacing in segments which don't claim for jumps at all. Fixed to the best of my ability.
2. 00:10:951 (8) - This slider creates a very weird flow because frankly saying it's not following the instruments here. Placing slider-head over red ticks plays always as offbeat because the upbeats should be the ones emphasized to increase the experience of players regarding rhythm. That's why trying a rhythm like this will improve significantly the way how instruments are highlighted in this segment. Fixed!
   
3. 00:15:600 (4) - NC for consistency. Fixed!
4. 00:15:600 (4,5) - I guess this is only a personal suggestion, but I really dislike anti-jumps where the song doesn't aim for it. It woudl be way better if it were placed somewhere else to don't kill the motion you gave on the previous patterns. Fixed!
5. 01:05:265 (1,2,3) - This sections feels really overmapped because there are no instruments to highlight here except the wave sound of the flute. It would be better if you tried out something like this to simply the rhythm here: Fixed!
   
   ^

   
6. 01:08:733 (5,6) - Ctrl + G here to manage a better flow. As it is now, flows rather uncomfortable in therms of fluency. Fixed!

[]

That should be all! Good luck with the map. Poke me if you need further help if I wasn't clear about something.

Thank you for modding it!

1. 00:50:767 - This section before the kiai seems a little early to me, noticeable mostly on the flute/pipe sounds e.g. 00:52:501 - 00:53:204 - etc. The chimes such as 00:52:847 - 00:53:368 - are a tricky one, since they currently sound alright, but the "peak" or most prominent part of this sound could also be argued slightly later as well. For a decent compromise without the map descending into timing point hell, I suggest moving this forward 11ms to 00:50:778 - with 00:50:415 - at 165BPM
2. 00:59:025 - 00:59:369 - Kiai start is definitely too early, I don't hear that strong cymbal sound until around 00:59:045 - around 20ms later than the current offset
3. 01:00:083 - Here things start to get a little weird, since the pipes/flute seem noticeably earlier than the piano in places, most obvious to me at 01:03:898 - 01:04:938 - and 01:07:346 and following. Depending on what you want to follow here, you could move everything in the kiai forward, or just points after 01:07:346 - ... The second option will require a new timing point with 173BPM at 01:07:360 - The first... well I'd get some more opinions on this xD
4. From 01:12:201 - to the end you're fine with the current timing as far as I can tell, though if you make any changes prior to this, you'll need a new timing point here to reset this, obviously (173BPM)

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