1. Oni (4.87 stars, 4249 notes)

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1. d is don note
2. k is kat note
3. D is Finish don note
4. K is Finish kat note
   
   
5. Purple is UnRankable , Please change
6. Green is I would strongly recommend
7. black is Pointed out that

1. Vol cgange 100% => 80% ?
   
2. 04:19:165 - ~ 04:27:915 - Vol 70 or 60% :3
   
   
   
3. 00:26:821 (176) - Change k ? ( follow melody )
   
   
4. 00:28:227 (187) - move 00:28:149 (187) -
   
   
5. 00:28:852 (192) - move 00:28:774 (192) - & 00:28:930 (193) - add d here ?
   
   
6. 00:50:336 (314) - delete & 00:50:415 (315) - add Finish ? :3
   
   
7. 01:21:821 (512) - add d here ?
   
   
8. 01:30:727 - ~ 01:31:665 -
   
   :3

   
   
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   Try this ?
   
   
9. 01:55:571 - & 01:55:649 - add d here ? ( Don't turn the flow )
   
   
10. 01:56:821 - ^
    
    
11. 02:00:571 - ^
    
    
12. 02:10:571 - & 02:10:571 - ^
    
    
13. 02:14:399 (877) - move 02:14:086 (874) - ? ( 02:14:008 (873,874,875) - ddk is better _(:3JL
    
    
14. 02:35:415 - ~ 02:36:665 -
    
    :3

    
    
    ↓
    
    
    
    try this :3 ? & 02:36:821 - add d here
    
    
15. 02:39:946 - 02:40:180 - 02:40:258 - Change k :3 ? ( high pitch )
    
    
16. 02:42:915 (1098) - Change k ( 02:40:415 (1080) - some )
    
    
17. 02:55:727 (1172) - add note here :3
    
    
18. 03:04:946 (1241,1242) - swap :3
    
    
19. 03:35:571 (1475,1476) - swap :3
    
    
20. 04:05:883 (1690) - Change d & 04:06:040 (1691) - add k here ? ( 04:05:102 (1686,1687,1688) - this )
    
    
21. 04:08:227 (1706,1707) - ^
    
    
22. 04:33:540 (1882,1883) - Change k ( high pitch :3 )
    
    
23. 05:38:227 (2338,2339,2340,2341) - swap :3
    
    
24. 05:48:540 (2420) - change k & 05:48:852 (2424,2425,2426,2427,2428) - kkkkd
    
    
25. 05:49:321 (2429) - 05:49:399 (2430) - add d here ? ( Don't turn the flow )
    
    
26. 06:15:649 (2615) - add d here ?
    
    
27. 06:29:321 (2719) - 06:29:399 (2720) - add d here ? ( Don't turn the flow )
    
    
28. 06:44:086 (2828) - change d :3 ? ( pitch down )
    
    
29. 06:54:321 (2908) - 06:54:399 (2909) - add d here ? ( Don't turn the flow )
    
    
30. 07:37:290 - ~ 07:38:383 -
    
    :3

    
    
    ↓
    
    
    
    & 07:39:165 - ~ 07:41:040 - too :3
    
    
31. 07:53:540 (3314,3315,3316,3317) - kdk d => kkdkd ?
    
    
32. 08:55:415 (3767) - add Finish :3
    
    
33. 09:43:227 (4107) - 09:43:696 (4109) - add d here ?
    
    
34. 09:53:852 (4173) - add k here :3
    
    
35. 09:55:102 (4179) - ^

toara_fict wrote:

Rondom Mod & short check :3

[ about]

1. d is don note
2. k is kat note
3. D is Finish don note
4. K is Finish kat note
   
   
5. Purple is UnRankable , Please change
6. Green is I would strongly recommend
7. black is Pointed out that

[ Oni]

1. Vol cgange 100% => 80% ? ok!
   
2. 04:19:165 - ~ 04:27:915 - Vol 70 or 60% :3 I like 60% ok!
   
   
   
3. 00:26:821 (176) - Change k ? ( follow melody ) ok!
   
   
4. 00:28:227 (187) - move 00:28:149 (187) - ok!
   
   
5. 00:28:852 (192) - move 00:28:774 (192) - & 00:28:930 (193) - add d here ? ok!
   
   
6. 00:50:336 (314) - delete & 00:50:415 (315) - add Finish ? :3 ok!
   
   
7. 01:21:821 (512) - add d here ? ok!
   
   
8. 01:30:727 - ~ 01:31:665 -
   
   :3

   
   
   ↓
   
   
   
   Try this ?
   hohoho I like this!
   
   
9. 01:55:571 - & 01:55:649 - add d here ? ( Don't turn the flow ) ok!
   
   
10. 01:56:821 - ^ ok!
    
    
11. 02:00:571 - ^ ok!
    
    
12. 02:10:571 - & 02:10:571 - ^ is this the same thing o.o
    
    
13. 02:14:399 (877) - move 02:14:086 (874) - ? ( 02:14:008 (873,874,875) - ddk is better _(:3JL hahahaha ok!
    
    
    
14. 02:35:415 - ~ 02:36:665 -
    
    :3

    
    
    ↓
    
    
    
    try this :3 ? & 02:36:821 - add d here
    hohoho I like this too!
    
    
15. 02:39:946 - 02:40:180 - 02:40:258 - Change k :3 ? ( high pitch ) ok!
    
    
16. 02:42:915 (1098) - Change k ( 02:40:415 (1080) - some ) ok!
    
    
17. 02:55:727 (1172) - add note here :3 ok!
    
    
18. 03:04:946 (1241,1242) - swap :3 ok!
    
    
19. 03:35:571 (1475,1476) - swap :3 ok!
    
    
20. 04:05:883 (1690) - Change d & 04:06:040 (1691) - add k here ? ( 04:05:102 (1686,1687,1688) - this ) ok!
    
    
21. 04:08:227 (1706,1707) - ^
    
    
22. 04:33:540 (1882,1883) - Change k ( high pitch :3 ) ok! changed the following stream to k as well
    
    
23. 05:38:227 (2338,2339,2340,2341) - swap :3 ok! i like this
    
    
24. 05:48:540 (2420) - change k & 05:48:852 (2424,2425,2426,2427,2428) - kkkkd ok!
    
    
25. 05:49:321 (2429) - 05:49:399 (2430) - add d here ? ( Don't turn the flow ) ok!
    
    
26. 06:15:649 (2615) - add d here ? ok!
    
    
27. 06:29:321 (2719) - 06:29:399 (2720) - add d here ? ( Don't turn the flow ) ok!
    
    
28. 06:44:086 (2828) - change d :3 ? ( pitch down ) ok! made it d stream with k at the end
    
    
29. 06:54:321 (2908) - 06:54:399 (2909) - add d here ? ( Don't turn the flow ) ok! i put a ddk in 06:54:321
    
    
30. 07:37:290 - ~ 07:38:383 -
    
    :3

    
    
    ↓
    
    
    
    & 07:39:165 - ~ 07:41:040 - too :3
    hohoho I like this also!
    
    
31. 07:53:540 (3314,3315,3316,3317) - kdk d => kkdkd ? ok!
    
    
32. 08:55:415 (3767) - add Finish :3 ok! K finish~
    
    
33. 09:43:227 (4107) - 09:43:696 (4109) - add d here ? ok! I placed it at 09:44:165 also~
    
    
34. 09:53:852 (4173) - add k here :3 ok!
    
    
35. 09:55:102 (4179) - ^

ok!

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_(:3JL

Good Luck :3

bbj0920 wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue.

Oni

SPOILER

00:05:415 (17) - D that sounds nice
00:09:165 (49,50,51,52,53) - K K D K D ok!
00:35:727 (233,234,235,236,237,238) - Big notes don't fit in this part. ok!
01:08:540 (426) - k ok!
01:12:758 (453) - K ok!
01:22:133 -, 01:22:211 - dk ok!
02:14:633 (886) - d ok!
02:43:540 (1108) - ^ - Inappropriate. at first I thought you wanted me to delete it lol
03:27:133 (1425) - k ok!
03:47:758 (1576,1577,1578) - kkd ok!
04:23:227 (1828) - k - Identical pitch with the next note. ok!
04:33:852 (1902,1903,1904,1905,1906) - ddddk ok!
04:59:321 (2069,2070,2071,2072,2073,2074) - d k d k d k ok!
05:46:665 (2424,2425,2426,2427) - d d k k - Kinda quiet part, so yeah. ok!
06:48:540 (2877,2878,2879,2880,2881,2882) - Try ddkkddk, it fits better ok!
07:06:508 (3002) - d ok!
07:16:352 (3070) - k ok!
07:51:508 (3330,3331,3332) - kkk - Following the melody. ok!
09:04:946 (3867) - k ok!
09:23:071 (4000,4001,4002,4003,4004,4005,4006) - D: is this a sad face D:
09:44:946 (4150,4152) - k ok!

Nyan wrote:

[General]

Hitsound volume is too low. Make it 100% except 60% part. toara said that it should 80%, but now that I think about it, I can barely hear the Taiko hitsounds, so ok!

[Oni]

00:12:680 (77) - can be k ok!
00:30:415 (201) - add Finish ok!
01:27:055 (549) - can be k ok!
02:10:961 - can add a don ok!
02:19:555 - add a kat it fits the drum, but I was following the music here
02:51:040 (1152) - remove Finish ok!
03:04:790 (1257) - don ok!
03:14:633 (1331,1332,1333) - can be dkdkd ok!
03:29:477 (1444,1445,1446,1447) - k ddk instead of kdd k ok!
03:46:665 - add a don ok!
03:51:352 (1606) - can be don ok!
03:57:758 (1645) - Finish ok!
03:58:227 (1647) - Finish ok!
04:01:040 (1669) - delete ok!
04:02:915 (1684) - delete ok!
04:03:540 (1689) - Finish ok!
04:57:758 (2063) - Finish ok!
05:03:383 - add a don ok!
05:19:633 (2211,2212,2213,2214) - dddkd or dkdkd ok! dddkd
05:20:258 (2216,2217,2218,2219) - dkdkd or dddkd ok! dkdkd
05:25:258 (2255,2256,2257,2258) - dkkkd or ddkkd ok! dkkkd
06:25:883 (2710,2711,2712,2713) - ddd d ok!
07:46:665 (3295) - d ok!
08:30:883 (3625) - Finish ok!
08:34:633 (3644) - Finish ok!
08:41:743 - add a kat ok!
08:44:633 (3722) - Finish ok!
09:49:477 (4192,4193,4194,4195,4196,4197) - remove Finish ok!
09:56:977 (4229) - small d ok!
09:57:446 (4231) - big K ok!

Skeuddy wrote:

Hi, Sonata, from my queue

Oni

1. 00:19:633 (126,127,128,129,130,131) - This. On rhythm ok!
2. 00:24:711 - Some note (d) ok!
3. 00:26:586 - ^ ok!
4. 00:38:071 - ^ it doesn't feel like there was something there, but it does sound good, so ok!
5. 04:27:993 - ^ (k) ok!
6. 05:01:352 - ^ at first I didn't understand this note, but then I noticed it was a snare drum sound, so ok!
7. 08:10:571 - ^ ok!
8. 00:44:790 (276,278) - Swap ok!
9. 03:34:477 (1492,1493) - ^ ok!
10. 04:37:602 (1940,1941) - ^ following the music here
11. 05:57:290 (2520,2521) - ^ it didn't feel right, but it seems okay no that I think about it, so ok!
12. 06:06:977 (2585,2587) - ^ ok!
13. 06:12:758 (2623,2624) - ^ ok!
14. 06:58:618 (2975,2977) - ^ ok!
15. 07:09:790 (3038,3042) - ^ ok!
16. 07:22:758 (3128,3131) - ^ the second note doesn't fit right, but the first does
17. 07:51:430 (3344,3347) - ^ (!) it doesn't go with the cymbal (which was my original intention), but it does fit the music, so ok!
18. 08:24:165 (3600,3601) - ^ ok!
19. 09:17:290 (3978,3979) - ^ doesn't seem to match the music, but I did change it a bit due to it being mentioned
20. 09:17:290 (3978,3979) - ^
21. 09:50:415 (4210,4211) - ^ ok!
22. 00:46:743 (289) to 00:46:586. And 00:47:524 (295) to 00:47:368 ok to both!
23. 00:59:555 (371) - k ok!
24. 01:09:790 (435) - ^ ok!
25. 02:00:805 (772) - ^ ok!
26. 02:34:633 (1041) - ^ ok!
27. 02:43:540 (1111) - ^ sounds better with a d note
28. 03:01:118 (1229) - ^ (!) (03:00:649 (1223,1224) - Swap, if not denied) first is ok, second not really
29. 05:18:618 (2211) - ^ ok!
30. 07:28:540 (3161) - ^ok!
31. 01:14:633 (461,462) - d ok!
32. 03:37:133 (1508) - ^ ok!
33. 03:37:133 (1508) - ^ ^
34. 08:06:586 (3467,3468) - ^ my original intent was for the cymbal sound, but this works too
35. 08:20:415 (3570,3571,3572) - ^ sounds like a high note, so I'll stay with k
36. 01:11:196 (443) to 01:11:040 ok!
37. 01:24:009 (526) - K and 01:24:165 (527) to 01:24:477. (01:24:633 - Some note) first ok. second, I like the D in the current position. last one is ok.
38. 01:59:321 (758,759,760,761,762,763,764,765,766,767,768,769) - d kdkdkdkdddk ok!
39. 04:21:430 (1827) to 04:21:586 ok!
40. 08:02:915 (3435,3436,3437,3438,3439) - ddddd or kkkkk ok!

Good luck on rank. Bye

1. don't you have a larger bg ? 1366x768 is best

1. 00:18:227 - delete or move to 00:18:305 - ? the music is stopped at 00:18:149
2. 01:16:196 - change to k ? it's similar as (479)
3. 03:09:790 - delete or move to 03:09:868 - ? the music is stopped at 03:09:711
4. 03:11:040 - move to 03:10:961 - ? same as above
5. 03:12:290 - move to 03:12:211 - ? same as above
6. 03:18:071 (1369,1370) - delete them ? the note actually here 03:18:149 - imo
7. 03:21:977 (1397,1398) - delete ? there is no sound to follow the note
8. 03:24:321 (1416,1417) - same as 03:18:071 - the note actually 03:24:399
9. 04:15:415 - move to 04:15:336 - ? i think the music is stopped here
10. 04:24:946 (1846) - change to k ? i think the pitch is same as (1844,1845)
11. 04:27:915 - remove finish ?
12. 04:44:711 - add note here ? make a triplet is seems better imo
13. 09:11:665 - delete ? to make a little space
14. 09:12:915 - if you do above, maybe you must do it here ?
15. 09:17:290 - same as above

Nishizumi wrote:

Hi there o/ as you requested via my queue

[General]

1. don't you have a larger bg ? 1366x768 is best got a really big one this time lmao

[Oni]

1. 00:18:227 - delete or move to 00:18:305 - ? the music is stopped at 00:18:149 ok!
2. 01:16:196 - change to k ? it's similar as (479) ok!
3. 03:09:790 - delete or move to 03:09:868 - ? the music is stopped at 03:09:711 ok!
4. 03:11:040 - move to 03:10:961 - ? same as above ok!
5. 03:12:290 - move to 03:12:211 - ? same as above ok!
6. 03:18:071 (1369,1370) - delete them ? the note actually here 03:18:149 - imo ok! not sure if I did it correctly though.
7. 03:21:977 (1397,1398) - delete ? there is no sound to follow the note ok!
8. 03:24:321 (1416,1417) - same as 03:18:071 - the note actually 03:24:399 ok! not sure if I did it correctly though.
9. 04:15:415 - move to 04:15:336 - ? i think the music is stopped here ok!
10. 04:24:946 (1846) - change to k ? i think the pitch is same as (1844,1845) ok!
11. 04:27:915 - remove finish ? oh ship, I forgot to do so. ok!
12. 04:44:711 - add note here ? make a triplet is seems better imo ok!
13. 09:11:665 - delete ? to make a little space seems a bit to the right imo, but nevertheless, deleted a note.
14. 09:12:915 - if you do above, maybe you must do it here ? seems a bit to the right imo, but nevertheless, deleted a note.
15. 09:17:290 - same as above ok!

that's all, hopefully it would help you. good luck for approved