1. Hard (2,77 stars, 92 notes)
2. Hoen's Easy (1,4 stars, 43 notes)
3. Normal (1,62 stars, 61 notes)
4. Unbreakable (3,29 stars, 117 notes)

1. 00:31:070 (1) - add clap to tail
2. 00:31:927 (2) - remove clap from head, add clap to tail
3. 00:34:498 (1,3) - this stack is actually kinda hard to read imo
4. 00:53:355 (3) - consider shortening this to a 2/1 and placing notes on the following red and white tick to emphasize the drums
5. 01:02:784 (2) - add finish to head
6. 01:03:427 (3,4,5,6) - oh god this is so cluttered, there's so much room elsewhere, utilize it
7. 01:08:784 - this definitely needs a note, such a powerful beat and it feels awkward not clicking anything
   ^ applies to all diffs

1. 00:35:998 (3) - pretty minor but this can be moved more to the right to avoid an overlap with 00:36:641 (2) -
2. 00:54:641 (5) - ctrl+J and rotate it so that it flows into the next slider better, also 5% volume on the end

1. 00:28:498 (3) - add whistle on head
2. 00:30:213 (3,4,5) - emphasis here is a little odd...too much is being put on 4 while very little is put on 5, adjust the spacing here accordingly
3. 00:39:213 (4,5) - ctrl+G makes this flow a bit smoother into the next slider
4. 00:41:355 (1) - maybe add finish on 20% volume? (do this on every diff if you decide to)
5. 00:48:427 (2,3,4) - this triple is just so random and thrown out there, there's not a single other triple in the map, so why is there one here
6. 00:54:641 (5) - this should end on the blue tick, snapping it to 1/8 will have so many people getting 100 on this slider (and mute the end)
7. 00:57:213 (2,3,4,5) - flow here is pretty bad compared to the rest of the map, i suggest ctrl+G on 3 & 4 and placing 5 something like below:
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 01:00:105 - if you're gonna place a triple in this map, place one here
9. 01:00:213 - from here onwards you seem to skip out (or some finishes are actually randomly placed) on the finishes that you've been placing on every 1st and 3rd beat of the measure, I suggest keeping consistency and placing the missing hitsounds
10. 01:05:248 - this can use a note as well

Lumael wrote:

~Applied almost everything from Synpoo's mod
denied everything from iYiyo though... sorry D:

Thank you guys for the mod!

iYiyo wrote:

Lumael wrote:

~Applied almost everything from Synpoo's mod
denied everything from iYiyo though... sorry D:

Thank you guys for the mod!

Oh I see.. sorry

Lumael wrote:

iYiyo wrote:

~Applied almost everything from Synpoo's mod
denied everything from iYiyo though... sorry D:

Thank you guys for the mod!

Oh I see.. sorry

Sorry, please don't be sad!!!!!!!!!!!!! This will make me feel bad..

2015-08-16 19:17 Lumael: lol
2015-08-16 20:31 Lumael: new map
2015-08-16 20:31 Lumael: ACTION is listening to Three Days Grace - Unbreakable Heart
2015-08-16 20:31 HappyRocket88: New? :o
2015-08-16 20:31 HappyRocket88: Wasn't it the graveryard?
2015-08-16 20:31 Lumael: 100% done
2015-08-16 20:31 Lumael: idk if I'll submit though
2015-08-16 20:31 Lumael: never submitted this song
2015-08-16 20:31 HappyRocket88: Have ever checked if someone has already mapped?
2015-08-16 20:32 Lumael: no, let me see
2015-08-16 20:32 Lumael: theres just 3 songs of that pending
2015-08-16 20:32 Lumael: of three dasy grace*
2015-08-16 20:33 Lumael: nobody mapped this
2015-08-16 20:33 Lumael: yeah
2015-08-16 20:33 Lumael: normal, hard insane spread done
2015-08-16 20:34 Lumael: should I submit?
2015-08-16 20:35 HappyRocket88: The normal is...
2015-08-16 20:35 HappyRocket88: under 2 stars?
2015-08-16 20:35 Lumael: yes
2015-08-16 20:35 HappyRocket88: BPM is timed properly?
2015-08-16 20:35 Lumael: 1.6 stars
2015-08-16 20:35 Lumael: hard 2.7
2015-08-16 20:35 Lumael: insadne 3.4
2015-08-16 20:35 Lumael: yes
2015-08-16 20:35 Lumael: hitsoundd done
2015-08-16 20:36 HappyRocket88: BG file meet the requirements of the ranking criteria.
2015-08-16 20:36 HappyRocket88: ?
2015-08-16 20:36 Lumael: yes '-'
2015-08-16 20:36 Lumael: lol
2015-08-16 20:36 HappyRocket88: The mapset has storyboard?
2015-08-16 20:38 Lumael: no
2015-08-16 20:38 Lumael: I can make though..
2015-08-16 20:38 Lumael: wont take too long
2015-08-16 20:38 HappyRocket88: So, if it doesn't have, uncheck widescreen support option and letterbox during breaks.
2015-08-16 20:39 Lumael: ah good point
2015-08-16 20:39 Lumael: unticked
2015-08-16 20:39 HappyRocket88: Stack leniency is good among the diffs
2015-08-16 20:39 HappyRocket88: ?
2015-08-16 20:40 Lumael: yep
2015-08-16 20:40 Lumael: but I just noticed that the combo colour is very no sense
2015-08-16 20:41 Lumael: I created this beatmap when I was very noob at mapping
2015-08-16 20:41 Lumael: I just remapped
2015-08-16 20:41 HappyRocket88: Well combo colors is important to lead players among the objects.
2015-08-16 20:41 HappyRocket88: A good point could be two dark and two bright colors.
2015-08-16 20:41 HappyRocket88: Based on the bg image
2015-08-16 20:42 Lumael: I'm looking for
2015-08-16 20:43 Lumael: ok found some good ones
2015-08-16 20:43 Lumael: this looks like a BN check
2015-08-16 20:43 Lumael: aosdijasiodjasiod
2015-08-16 20:43 HappyRocket88: What about the tags?
2015-08-16 20:43 HappyRocket88: are they palced correctly?
2015-08-16 20:43 HappyRocket88: *placed
2015-08-16 20:43 Lumael: they're good
2015-08-16 20:43 HappyRocket88: I hope so.
2015-08-16 20:43 HappyRocket88: Ummm...
2015-08-16 20:44 Lumael: I added as many words I could asdioasiod
2015-08-16 20:44 HappyRocket88: W8
2015-08-16 20:44 HappyRocket88: Is there any unnecessary green line?
2015-08-16 20:44 Lumael: nop
2015-08-16 20:45 HappyRocket88: Are there two green lines at the same point?
2015-08-16 20:45 Lumael: nop
2015-08-16 20:46 Lumael: there's not too much
2015-08-16 20:46 Lumael: lines
2015-08-16 20:46 HappyRocket88: Did you use the default hitsounds?
2015-08-16 20:46 Lumael: custom
2015-08-16 20:46 HappyRocket88: do they sound good?
2015-08-16 20:46 HappyRocket88: I mean the bitrate
2015-08-16 20:46 Lumael: yeah
2015-08-16 20:47 Lumael: post this after as a mod to get kds ijasdjaisdj
2015-08-16 20:47 HappyRocket88: OFC! XDDDD
2015-08-16 20:47 HappyRocket88: Ummm... 
2015-08-16 20:47 HappyRocket88: UMMMMMM....
2015-08-16 20:47 Lumael: hehehe
2015-08-16 20:47 Lumael: let me check aimod
2015-08-16 20:48 HappyRocket88: I think it's enough. I'll complain about DS on the Normal.
2015-08-16 20:48 Lumael: lol
2015-08-16 20:48 Lumael: its perfect :3
2015-08-16 20:48 HappyRocket88: All the green lines are snaped?
2015-08-16 20:48 Lumael: yes
2015-08-16 20:48 HappyRocket88: That's all
2015-08-16 20:48 HappyRocket88: REady for be bubbled
2015-08-16 20:48 HappyRocket88: XD
2015-08-16 20:48 Lumael: ok ^^ I'll submit so
2015-08-16 20:49 Lumael: asjdioajsdijasiodaiosd I wish
2015-08-16 20:49 HappyRocket88: Good job with the mapset, then.
2015-08-16 20:50 Lumael: lol mapset is bugged, I hate that
2015-08-16 20:50 Lumael: it takes quite a long time to show all difs and circles
2015-08-16 20:50 Lumael: on the website
2015-08-16 20:51 HappyRocket88: yeah
2015-08-16 20:51 HappyRocket88: Let's wait then
2015-08-16 20:51 HappyRocket88: C:
2015-08-16 20:52 Lumael: the diff spread appeared but the bg stills bugged
2015-08-16 20:54 Lumael: ok
2015-08-16 20:54 Lumael: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/764518 Three Days Grace - Unbreakable Heart]
2015-08-16 20:56 HappyRocket88: Deserve my star, mr. lumael.
2015-08-16 20:57 HappyRocket88: I'll post this conversation later.
2015-08-16 20:57 Lumael: :OOOO thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!

iYiyo wrote:

Hi! From your M4M queue

[Normal]
00:36:213 (3,4) - maybe blanket those? they're blanketed
00:44:784 (1,2) - improve blanket the pattern symmetry is the focus here
01:00:213 (4) - maybe move this a little bit upwards for better flow. flow isn't bad here
01:01:713 (7,5) - maybe delete those notes since it feels a little bit overmapped. You did it right 00:55:927 (3,4) - here and 01:06:213 (3,4) - here imo. they're not overmapped, I can hear a sound there

[Hard]
00:34:498 (1) - slight detail, move the last grey node to x:181 y:142 this blanket is good
00:38:784 (3,1) - I think you should remove this overlap because it's a little bit tricky to read, specially for beginners. this overlap is fine, I've seen worst ranked
00:41:998 (2) - maybe move where the 3 is. I like it more under 1

[Insane]
00:30:641 (5) - Maybe ctrl+h + rotate in -15° for better flow? doesn't seen necessary
00:34:498 (1,2) - I found this pattern a little bit weird, maybe try something like this for better flow imo.
00:38:784 (3,4) - Maybe try with a 1/1 slider here since u used them 00:37:927 (1) - here and 00:39:641 (1) - here. If not, I think you shouldn't make a jump i really don't understand consistency
00:38:784 (3,4) - here, since the strong-beat is 00:39:641 - here and it doesn't make sense at all why ;-;
00:54:641 (5) - maybe you should do this slider a 3/4 and not a 7/8 sorry? xD
01:00:213 (1,2,3) - Just a suggestion, but here would be cool if you use 3/4 sliders current is good

Hope it helped

1. 00:31:927 (2,3) - i think flow is a little weird here
2. 00:48:213 (1,2) - ^

1. 00:32:570 - I would add a note here
2. 00:37:713 - ^
3. 00:41:141 - ^
4. 00:41:355 (1,2) -i would transform these two into a slider
5. 00:49:713 - maybe add a note here?
6. 00:58:713 (2) - i would delete this note
7. 01:04:284 (5) - ^

1. 00:32:141 - I would add a note here
2. 00:33:427 - ^
3. 00:37:713 - ^
4. 00:38:784 (3,1) - i'm not sure if this is rankable because these two are entirely overlapped
5. 00:42:427 - note
6. 00:42:641 (4) - i would extend this slider up to this point 00:43:070 -
7. 00:43:070 (1) - i would delete this and add a note here 00:43:070 (1) -
8. 00:53:355 (1,2) - flow is a little weird here imo

[-Deemo-] wrote:

Just sayin, I'm real bad at modding lower diffs but w/e

From q:

[Hard]
00:08:270 (1,2) - maybe align 2 right under 1?

wow that mod is sad

but this map is pretty good so ya

1. Fine

1. 00:09:984 (1) - nice slider, but make flow weird
2. 00:28:413 (5) - nc to notice slow down

1. 00:28:413 (5) - same as insane

1. 00:05:699 (2) - missing clap at the tail

1. recommend add more Finish in kiai time, like other diff
2. disable Widescreen Support

Rizia wrote:

[General]

1. Fine

[Unbreakable]

1. 00:09:984 (1) - nice slider, but make flow weird Fixed, RIP slider
2. 00:28:413 (5) - nc to notice slow down I think I forgot here

[Hard]

1. 00:28:413 (5) - same as insane Here too xD

[Normal]

1. 00:05:699 (2) - missing clap at the tail oops xD

[Hoen's Easy]
He allowed me to apply the mod this time

1. recommend add more Finish in kiai time, like other diff Added just like my diffs
2. disable Widescreen Support Fixed

nice mappset! Thank you!!
call me back if you need recheck

McLaren12 wrote:

Hi from your m4m queue~

My mod

SPOILER

Easy

Didn't notice anything, nice work

Normal

^

Hard

00:24:985 (2) - Move to x:224 y:192 I think this is fine how it is
00:30:127 (4) - May be a bit tricky, but maybe you can flip horizontally, then move to x:452 y:64 ^
00:38:270 (4) (5) - Maybe make these two circles a single slider instead? aw sorry

Unbreakable

00:26:698 (4) (1) - Doesn't really flow that well, you should consider remapping Flow is very good here
00:27:770 (2) (3) (4) - ^^ same :3

Sorry if it was small, didn't notice much else. Nice job on this beatmap

TheOnlyLeon wrote:

Hey, Looking to M4M if you can. https://osu.ppy.sh/s/348711

General - Just to match the picture, I think it'd be a nice touch to add a light shade of pink to combo colour 1 in your customs, Make it look like the broken stone in the background. pink uhhh sorry

NORMAL

00:27:127 - (3) This slider shape is a little off-putting to the flow, I'd suggest making it a little straighter than it is. flow is fine here

Pretty short and clearly has already been worked on quite a bit, Nice job.

HARD

00:12:555 - (3,4,1) This is some awkward overlap, maybe move the 3 combo slider up more? I like this overlap, overlaps aren't Always a problem, they're fancy also

00:35:270 - (5,6) These two would be better off moved further out so that they don't have an almost overlap with the combo 2 and 3 circles but it's supposed to overlap

UNBREAKABLE

00:23:055 - (4) This placement feels quite random, maybe stack it with the combo 2 circle? Not random, DS was mesured

Well I don't have too much to say to this map, it's quite well done imo. GL getting this ranked.

1. 00:13:413 (3) - I find the wiggle on this slider unnecessary, IMO it doesn't emphasize anything. Not sure about this, is this intentional?
2. 00:29:699 (2,3,4) - Imperfect triangular pattern, (4) should be at x=372 y=216.
3. 00:36:556 (1) - Missing finish at the repeat of this slider.
4. 00:32:270 (4,1) - NC should go on (4) instead of (1).
5. 00:35:699 (4,1) - ^^
6. Other than that, looks totally fine

1. 00:01:413 (1,2) - The flow here it awkward, since (1) is a straight slider which doesn't 'leads' into (2). Try to copy (2) for (1)'s slider shape.
   
   
2. 00:15:127 (1,2,3) - Transition here seems bit too straight, maybe make it bit zig-zagged.
3. 00:27:984 - 00:28:413 - Honestly these 2 snares shouldn't be left out, since this is Normal you may want to use circles to emphasize them.
4. Nice difficulty

1. 00:12:556 (3,1) - Personally I'm not a fan of this idea, the number gets blocked, as well as the approach circle. So I think these should be not overlapped.
2. 00:15:127 (1,2) - I think it is unnecessary to stop the players' movement here, you didn't do it for all other parts. Would flow better if you didn't stop players' movement. I would go for this instead :
   

1. 00:07:198 (2,3,4) - (3) seems bit weaker than (4). While (3)'s distance from (2) is smaller compared to (4) from (3), it feels like the beat is not 'too' strong for it to be 1.88x (close to 1.9x), which is pretty similar of a distance from (4) to (3), 1.97x. I would suggest you to reduce the distance from (2) to (3), preferably to 1.5x - 1.6x.
2. 00:23:055 (4) - I think you've made a mistake here, the distance is unnecessary reduced.
3. 00:42:127 (5) - This should have a bigger distance value, since it has a similar strength of a beat like 00:42:341 (6) - .

• placeholder will for the M4Ming
  
  will mod once I'm done with dinner
  
  from Q c:
  
  Hoen's Easy

1. 00:08:270 (1) - a rythm like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3582411 would do a much better job of catching what feels strong in the song, I think the current slider covers alot of peaks :/
2. 00:16:842 (3) - would consider removing the repeat on this to put something clickable on 00:18:555 (4) - , feels like a waste not to have it mapped
3. 00:36:555 (1) - missing hitsound on the repeat
4. 00:41:270 (3) - remove NC
   
   Normal
   
5. 00:33:985 (3,4,5) - try http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3582449 feels like this rythm goes along with the song alot nicer
6. 00:38:270 (6) - both hard and unbreakable have no whistle on the head here
7. 00:39:985 (3) - would move this up a little for a more round-ish movement between 00:39:127 (1,2,3) - like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3582456
8. 00:41:699 (6) - whistle on the tail sounds nice
   
   Hard
   
9. 00:02:699 (3,1) - perhaps try not having these tails overlap here?:/
10. 00:27:985 (3,4) - 253/291? evens out the spacing between 00:27:556 (2,3,4,1) - , which is currently a little messed up due to auto stacking
11. 00:41:913 (4) - same as Normal, whistle would sound neat here I think
    
    Unbreakable
    
12. 00:12:555 (4) - would probably do something like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3582506 instead, alot easier to catch I think
13. 00:21:770 (6) - 244/315 lets you keep the momentum from the previous jumps, would be alot nicer I think
14. 00:22:841 (3,4) - try and alteast use 1.0 spacing between these?
15. 00:41:913 (4) - whistle333
    
    neat set
    
    Good Luck!

[Taiga] wrote:

Greetings Lumael,

Here is requested M4M, wish it will help! If you have truble with image links, contact me please, thank you.

General

Everything looks fine for me, timing sections checked also.

Unbreakable

00:23:270 (5) - change into circles, fits more pattern from 00:20:270 (1,2,3,4,5,6) Well I think the current is fine
00:34:841 (3,4,5,1) - i would change it into http://puu.sh/jLNvM.jpg - fits song, makes it more interesting to play (free idea) Don't want to make triplets

Nothing more from my side, nice job!

Hard

00:09:127 (2,3,1,2,3) - You can make nice blanked with (2) and (3), ex. http://puu.sh/jLNZQ.jpg, then fit next (1), (2), (3) sliders into another blanket, ex. http://puu.sh/jLO53.jpg not really necessary

I am not sure about one thing, you can ignore it if you want, for me it played well like this:
00:35:484 (6) - remove circle

Everything else is ok for me, good job!

Normal

00:34:627 (4,6) - consider removing / changing stacks, in my opinion a bit too much for a normal difficulty It's following guitas, and normal is supposed to be a little more harder
00:37:199 (3,5) - ^ same

That's all from me, nice one!

[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:

Hello~ M4M from your queue~ Apologies, this is pretty late ;-;
Man if I was a BN I would possibly give this map a star icon lol In my dreams

1. Unrankable issues
2. My opinion which I highly recommend changing it
3. Just small suggestions/nazi

[Normal]

1. 00:01:413 (1,2) - The flow here it awkward, since (1) is a straight slider which doesn't 'leads' into (2). Try to copy (2) for (1)'s slider shape.
   good idea
   
2. 00:15:127 (1,2,3) - Transition here seems bit too straight, maybe make it bit zig-zagged. I like it, makes it a bit harder
3. 00:27:984 - 00:28:413 - Honestly these 2 snares shouldn't be left out, since this is Normal you may want to use circles to emphasize them. [b]Well if bn complain of that I will change because you're not the first[/b]
4. Nice difficulty

[Hard]

1. 00:12:556 (3,1) - Personally I'm not a fan of this idea, the number gets blocked, as well as the approach circle. So I think these should be not overlapped. D:
2. 00:15:127 (1,2) - I think it is unnecessary to stop the players' movement here, you didn't do it for all other parts. Would flow better if you didn't stop players' movement. I would go for this instead :
   hey I don't like consistency I'm sorry, makes map boring

[Unbreakable]

1. 00:07:198 (2,3,4) - (3) seems bit weaker than (4). While (3)'s distance from (2) is smaller compared to (4) from (3), it feels like the beat is not 'too' strong for it to be 1.88x (close to 1.9x), which is pretty similar of a distance from (4) to (3), 1.97x. I would suggest you to reduce the distance from (2) to (3), preferably to 1.5x - 1.6x. but in fact it isnt
2. 00:23:055 (4) - I think you've made a mistake here, the distance is unnecessary reduced. there's no sence in increasing Ds here, this beat is already overmapped
3. 00:42:127 (5) - This should have a bigger distance value, since it has a similar strength of a beat like 00:42:341 (6) - . its good how it is

Well, pretty nice map with a short duration, couldn't mod much...
GL!

Peachtrees wrote:

• placeholder will for the M4Ming
  
  will mod once I'm done with dinner
  
  from Q c:
  
  Normal

1. 00:33:985 (3,4,5) - try http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3582449 feels like this rythm goes along with the song alot nicer nice catch
2. 00:38:270 (6) - both hard and unbreakable have no whistle on the head here I did whistles apart from the rest of the diffs
3. 00:39:985 (3) - would move this up a little for a more round-ish movement between 00:39:127 (1,2,3) - like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3582456 fixed
4. 00:41:699 (6) - whistle on the tail sounds nice ah no :3
   
   Hard
   
5. 00:02:699 (3,1) - perhaps try not having these tails overlap here?:/ upps fixed
6. 00:27:985 (3,4) - 253/291? evens out the spacing between 00:27:556 (2,3,4,1) - , which is currently a little messed up due to auto stacking fixed even not understanding
7. 00:41:913 (4) - same as Normal, whistle would sound neat here I think no :3
   
   Unbreakable
   
8. 00:12:555 (4) - would probably do something like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3582506 instead, alot easier to catch I think changed
9. 00:21:770 (6) - 244/315 lets you keep the momentum from the previous jumps, would be alot nicer I think applied but at another similar location
10. 00:22:841 (3,4) - try and alteast use 1.0 spacing between these? fixed
11. 00:41:913 (4) - whistle333 aJSUIADSUASHD sorry
    
    neat set
    
    Good Luck!

HappyRocket88 wrote:

*HappyRocket88 slaps Lumael*

As requested on my queue, a quick re-check of your mapset. No kudosu, otherwise I'll have to slap you again. c:
[General]
Increase Audio LeadIn over all the diffs. I think you know how to to this *go to osu. file, look for audio leadin line, write it down 2000* added 1500
Not really a big issue but you can rename the bg. file., the current broken-heart-wallpaper-1920-1080-6501-1366x768.jpg is a bit odd. XD am kind too lazy to fix that xD

Please put the red timing point with the same vol as the inherited timing points in all the diffs. removed the inherited that was together with the red timing point

[Normal]

1. 00:15:556 (2) Nazi suggestion: Put it here 292|68 to keep the same grade of inclination. fixed
2. 00:16:842 (4) Why this slider doesn't have the two green points as the other 2/1 sliders? ;w; opps fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:12:127 (2) Ctrl + J maybe? the overlap looks weird imo. ik, fixed

[Unbreakable] Pretty well done! Remap pls. asdjashduiahduiashdu

HappyRocket88 wrote:

@Lumael: I don't want to bother but you could have avoided the spam-posts by answering each mod on box tags. o.o

Raiden wrote:

Hey there! You asked me for a mod in my queue, but I seriously don't find anything here (considering I'm still unexperienced at Standard)

I just found something in Hard: 00:34:627 (2,3,4,5,6) - these look a bit too linear and not flowing as good as in the rest of the song, maybe reconsider that part?


No kd, this was just a glance. After hours and hours of trying to find anything I failed miserably, lol.

1. 00:21:127 (3,6) - Space them out more from 00:21:555 (5) - (Something like this)
2. 00:23:055 (4) - Same with this circle, moar spacinguh
3. 00:27:127 (1) - Consider curving this slider a bit so it looks better (Like this maybe?)
4. 00:36:555 (4) - I just feel like this should be curved

1. 00:04:413 (3) - Should be a bit lower IMO. Feels a lot better to play. ---> Liek dis
2. 00:19:842 (4,1) - A rotate it a bit to the LEFT

Really well-done map, good luck on getting it ranked

FCL wrote:

Congratulations with first bubble. Good luck with ranking

• General

1. I'd like to add to tags Transit Of Venus because this is the album from where the song was released
2. Both soft-slidertick2.wav and soft-hitclap.wav have delay http://puu.sh/jTIZT/70820f244b.png.I fixed the hitsounds for you soft-slidertick2.wav soft-hitclap.wav
3. Metadata seems alright https://itunes.apple.com/us/album/transit-of-venus/id551032244
   
   

• Hoen's Easy

1. 00:08:270(1)- I'd like to snap this slider from a 4/1 slider to a 3/1 slider and then I'd put a note on 00:09:984- to make the beat from there clickable.Honestly,ending 00:08:270(1)- on 00:09:555- feels more natural to me because it ends on a beat and it really fits that beat in my opinion
2. 00:18:984(1,2,3)- This rhythm doesn't look so good to me because it doesn't follow the beatsand the vocal properly. I suggest to replace 00:19:841(2)- with a 2/1 slider and 00:21:127(3)- with a note because I hear a beat which could be clickable like here http://puu.sh/jTcPp/290a271651.jpg.With this kind of rhythm from this picture the vocal and the beats will be followed properly
3. 00:21:984(1,2)- I know you made a straight sliders pattern to make an intentional overlap with 00:23:699(3)- but I found the flow weird here during testplay.I'd like to make a curved sliders pattern like here http://puu.sh/jTczs/6064274c52.jpg to improve the flow much better

• Normal

1. 00:12:985(2)- Minor spacing error
   Nothing to say more about this diff. Good Job!

• Hard

1. 00:13:413(1)- The pattern seems fine and readable but on this point the vocal becomes stronger and it doesn't seems to be emphasized.I'd like to move 00:13:413(1)- to 132|222 to emphasize the stronger vocal
2. 00:15:127(1,2)- Did you stack them intentionally? If not,I suggest to unstack them because on 00:15:770(2)- the music is going to be intensive here and emphasizing the intensify of the music wouldn't hurt at all
3. 00:25:842(2)- Honestly a straight slider here would make the flow weird.I suggest to add an anchor on the middle of the slider like this http://puu.sh/jTdYn/250438d9c3.jpg to make the slider curve which will give a better flow between this slider and the next slider
   I really enjoyed this diff while I played it.Great job here!

• Unbreakable

1. 00:03:984(3,4)- Why you not use the same spacing as you did at 00:05:270(2,3)- I mean 1.0x DS? Here the instruments are not really stronger as I can listen here and increasing the spacing here a bit will not emphasize nothing in my opinion.
2. 00:24:555(3,4)- I don't hear any stronger instruments/vocal between those 2 sliders.I suggest to decrease the spacing here to 1.7x DS like here http://puu.sh/jTIfl/65d267e41e.jpg for example since there's nothing stronger to emphasize
3. 00:27:127(1)- Incorrect usage of the slider. As I can see it feels forced and also unpleasant in my opinion.I noticed that while I testplayed it.I'd like to suggest to change this slider with this one http://puu.sh/jTC60/6fa522764f.jpg.This one will feel much pleasant and it will not be forced
4. 00:31:413(3,4)- I see that you increased the spacing here in comparison to 00:30:127(4,5)- where you used 1.4x spacing.I suggest to use here 1.4x spacing aswell because the instruments are same like 00:30:127(4,5)- and you don't need to increase more the spacing here

Lumael wrote:

We fixed everything, thank you for your mod!!

Also, should I pop bubble myself? I don't understand how this Works..

Lumael wrote:

Ok. Popped, will find someone to rebubble

Rizia wrote:

rebubbled

Rizia wrote:

rebubble x2

ByBy13 wrote:

We fixed a lot of jumps in Unbreakable diff.

Rebubbled!

1. soft-hitclap.wav is corrupted. The file is too short and does not provide any audible feedback that would make sense with the song. image. Apparently, someone gave you the corrupted file. You can just replace it with a copy of soft-slidertick2, I guess.

1. 00:16:842 (3,2) - minor - as the overlap is quite visible it might appear untidy/unpleasant. Try to avoid it to improve appearance of the difficulty?
2. 00:16:842 (3,2) - try to make the slider 1/1 shorter (finish it at 00:20:698). So, we can focus on following the vocals closer. Afterwards add a slider from 00:21:127 to 00:21:555 - the slider will reflect "listentoyour" in the vocals.
   Note: you'll have to reove the circle from 00:21:555 - and get rid of a couple of unused green lines.
3. 00:22:841 (2,3) - please avoid stacking sliderbody and slidertail completely, this is the easiest difficulty, it might confuse beginners. Same happens to a few more sliders, be sure to check out out all of them!
   Note: you can simplify it like this or maybe like that. Either way is fine.
4. 00:27:127 (3,2) - minor - you can avoid the stack here by re-shaping 00:29:699 (2) -
   
   The difficulty is quite fine, although I'm not really happy with the overlaps.

1. Is there any reason to keep HP Drain low? THe song is short and it allows you to use HP4 here, so let's go for it! Average players want some challenge, too.
2. 00:39:127 (1,2,3) - this is the only stack in the whole difficulty and it sort of breaks the intense way your flow goes here. Consider unstacking?
   
   In general, this difficulty is pretty well-done. Although I would cosider adding a few 1/2 sliders to th non-kiai parts just to even the spread a bit.

1. If you did increase HP on Normal, do the same here for the balance. If you think 6 is too high, try 5,5.
2. 00:22:627 (2,4) - minor - is the overlap here intentional? YIf not, you can easily avoid it by using a stack like this.
   
   I feel like the kiai part could emphasize the claps in the music with some soft jumps to make the difficulty itself more enjoyable and to improve the spread, but everything else was quite cool.

1. Probably HP can be a little higher. Increase it by 0,5 or even 1, I guess.
2. 00:28:841 (1,2) - once the players finish the slider they will be ready for some spacious patterns, give them a jump between thewse two objects.
   
   Get somebody to testplay the difficulty and see f all the jumps work exactly in a way you intended them to. Everything else is fine with me.

1. 00:32:270 (1,2) - I am pretty sure that this is confusing for a low-ranked player and should be avoided in the easiest difficulty.

Bakari wrote:

[Hoen's Easy]

1. 00:32:270 (1,2) - I am pretty sure that this is confusing for a low-ranked player and should be avoided in the easiest difficulty.

Call me back.