1. Hard (2.73 stars, 273 notes)
2. Insane (3.89 stars, 384 notes)
3. Normal (1.71 stars, 159 notes)

• 
  [Noraml]

1. 00:37:625 (5) - DS
   
2. 01:29:517 (1) - stack ?
   
   [Hard]
   
3. try CS 3.5 and ar-od ≤ Normal ??
   
4. 00:32:152 (3,4) - avoid overlap ? merge into revers slider ?
   
5. 01:11:274 (4) - same as 01:14:517 (3,4) - i think 2*1/4note + 1/2slider better follow voice
   
6. 01:59:112 - here is downbeat , i prefer add "click" and NC here
   
   [Insane]
   
7. 00:13:504 (5,1) - too far imo , slider back is bad stuff
   
8. 00:21:004 (1,2,3,4) - too far according your other part …… and i think jump should here 00:21:409 (4,1) -
   
9. 00:24:145 - need‘t clap ?
   
10. 00:25:463 (1,2) - you never separate 1/4 except here ……
    

1. w akan pake Grid: Tiny aja dehh untuk ini
2. 00:16:544 (5) - 106|105
3. 00:37:625 (5) - DS
4. 00:59:922 (4) - kek ny ini g perlu whistle deh
5. 01:22:828 (1) - remove NC, 01:23:233 (2) - NC

1. Grid: Tiny aja deh w pake
2. 01:06:814 (1) - ummm, remove NC?
3. 01:10:058 (1) - remove NC, 01:10:058 (1) - NC
4. 01:23:233 (1) - preferny ada NC aja sih imo
5. 01:30:835 (5,6) - lebih baik ini stack aja sama (4)

1. offset sound a little bit off imo , use the one that Narcissu suggested (+24 offset) sound a bit better imo

1. 00:04:787 (2,3) - somehow rhythm here might play a bit awkward for new player due to the sudden switch to vocal there , I guess try this rhythm instead ? it might work better
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:11:071 (1,2) - spacing is a bit inconsistent here , should be 1.0x spacing imo
3. 00:37:017 (4,5) - ^same
4. 00:50:598 (5,1) - ^

1. 00:56:983 (4) - rhythm kinda a bit weird here , the slidertail for strong snare is not play good here imo , you can try this rhythm ?
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:11:274 (4) - curve like this ? so it might make flow here 01:10:463 (3,4,1) - nice imo
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:47:963 (5) - missing nc?

1. 00:21:004 (1,2,3,4,1) - I think if you make the spacing here 00:21:004 (1,2,3) - equal with 00:21:409 (4,1) - it might make flow here a bit better , try move 00:21:308 (3,4) - to around x204 y184 ?
2. 00:56:679 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - similiar to what I said above , try move 00:56:679 (3,4) - to around x136 y48?
3. 01:18:368 (3,4) - I think increase the spacing here will make the momentum to jumps to next note 01:19:179 (5) - better imo , try move (4) to around x396 y228 ?
4. 01:47:152 - sound a bit empty here , map this beat ? might make rhythm sound better

Peachtrees wrote:

M4M

c:

Normal

00:13:706 (1) - could shorten this by 1/2 and then add a circle on 00:14:314 (2) - for the REALLY strong sound on this, would be really intuitive too I think so using 1/2 is kay even for the easiest Diff..I think :c
i want the rhyhm to be simple
00:15:733 (4,5,6) - nothing major, but fix the triangle here?

00:35:801 (2,3) - could curve this in a little to make it play a little smoother https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3393992 also looks a bit nicer I think ;w; this one was on purpose

00:41:274 (1) - would cut this by 1/2 and then add another circle, would allow you to map the drumsound on 00:41:679 (3) -

00:49:990 (4) - hmm not sure if not mapping the piano here is the way to go :/ with the tail landing on the first piano sound, I was really expecting to click the second one too good one ~

01:00:733 (1) - you probably don't care about this, but not touchin the hp bar is neater I think i cant keep blanket TwT

01:19:787 (6) - add a circle? I htink having the circle a little bit denser for this doesn't hurt, + it would feel very intuitive to follow I think yea ikr.. but i cant help it

01:29:517 (1,2) - messed up stack?

Hard

00:23:233 (4,1) - hmm might just be me, but I don't really like how you suddenly switch to the drums in the background here. I was really really expecting the sound on 4 to be a slider, like 00:25:058 (1) - 00:26:476 (1) - etc its fine imo

00:31:747 (2,4) - hmm kinda ugly I think when they're overlapping THIS MUCH, especially when clearly visible in-game
changed to another pattern
00:38:943 (3,4,5,1) - plays a little bit clumsy I think >< could probably just stack 5 and 1, though I'm not sure if that'll leave 1 with enough emphasize nope

00:49:990 (3,4,5) - try http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3394054 for the rythm here? feels like this catches the 1/4 in the song more accurately. u-unless that's to much 1/4 for you ;w;
yea lol
00:55:463 (3,1) - perhaps do 1.5 spacing for these like you did with 00:54:247 (1) - ? works well with the downbeat here I think

01:11:274 (4,1) - minor but easy to fix: would play a bit nicer if 4 was moved below 1 like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3394065

01:33:571 (2) - could shorten this by one repeat and then add a circle if you want to map the high pitched sound at the end, that might be nice! [/color]

01:58:706 (4,5) - ^similar idea with this one, to have the downbeat mapped c:

Insane

00:07:625 (2,3,4) - could try ctrl+h on this for something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3394090 works well I think ;w; [/color]

00:14:922 (4,5) - isn't 3.06 a liiitttle much? eh that might just be me ><

00:34:585 (6) - move this down a little like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3394103 for a slightly smoother flow?

00:44:517 (1,2) - aren't these a liiiiitttle close?

00:52:220 (5,1) - could create a slight drop here for more emphasize on the downbeat like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3394111 hmm keeping

01:18:166 (2,3) - would be smoother I think if 3 was moved up and to the left a bit to make it smoother to catch the sliders movement

01:29:112 (3,1) - blanket actually does look sloppy, so I hope I'm not being too nazi with this one ><

01:44:922 (2,3) - jump here honestly feel a liitle to big, kinda ruins the flow a bit I think

Good Luck!

Narcissu wrote:

m4m : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/332103 , i see your queue , one diff ok

offest early obviously , i suggest +24

• 
  [Noraml]

1. 00:37:625 (5) - DS
   
2. 01:29:517 (1) - stack ?
   
   [Hard]
   
3. try CS 3.5 and ar-od ≤ Normal ?? keeping CS, but changed AR !
   
4. 00:32:152 (3,4) - avoid overlap ? merge into revers slider ?
   
5. 01:11:274 (4) - same as 01:14:517 (3,4) - i think 2*1/4note + 1/2slider better follow voice hmm its fine
   
6. 01:59:112 - here is downbeat , i prefer add "click" and NC here
   
   [Insane]
   
7. 00:13:504 (5,1) - too far imo , slider back is bad stuff
   
8. 00:21:004 (1,2,3,4) - too far according your other part …… and i think jump should here 00:21:409 (4,1) - its easy though
   
9. 00:24:145 - need‘t clap ? [/color]
   
10. 00:25:463 (1,2) - you never separate 1/4 except here ……

good luck

-Hakurei- wrote:

waduhhh, mantap kali lagunya niiii =w=

[Normal]

1. w akan pake Grid: Tiny aja dehh untuk ini
2. 00:16:544 (5) - 106|105
3. 00:37:625 (5) - DS fixedd
4. 00:59:922 (4) - kek ny ini g perlu whistle deh [/color]
5. 01:22:828 (1) - remove NC, 01:23:233 (2) - NC

[Insane]

1. Grid: Tiny aja deh w pake
2. 01:06:814 (1) - ummm, remove NC? nope ;w;
3. 01:10:058 (1) - remove NC, 01:10:058 (1) - NC
4. 01:23:233 (1) - preferny ada NC aja sih imo
5. 01:30:835 (5,6) - lebih baik ini stack aja sama (4)

GL!

CelsiusLK wrote:

as requested

[general]

1. offset sound a little bit off imo , use the one that Narcissu suggested (+24 offset) sound a bit better imo

[normal]

1. 00:04:787 (2,3) - somehow rhythm here might play a bit awkward for new player due to the sudden switch to vocal there , I guess try this rhythm instead ? it might work better
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:11:071 (1,2) - spacing is a bit inconsistent here , should be 1.0x spacing imo
3. 00:37:017 (4,5) - ^same fixed 3 of them
4. 00:50:598 (5,1) - ^ it became 0,94 because the stack

[hard]

1. 00:56:983 (4) - rhythm kinda a bit weird here , the slidertail for strong snare is not play good here imo , you can try this rhythm ?[/color]
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:11:274 (4) - curve like this ? so it might make flow here 01:10:463 (3,4,1) - nice imo
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:47:963 (5) - missing nc? ah fix !/color]

[insane]

1. 00:21:004 (1,2,3,4,1) - I think if you make the spacing here 00:21:004 (1,2,3) - equal with 00:21:409 (4,1) - it might make flow here a bit better , try move 00:21:308 (3,4) - to around x204 y184 ?
2. 00:56:679 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - similiar to what I said above , try move 00:56:679 (3,4) - to around x136 y48?
3. 01:18:368 (3,4) - I think increase the spacing here will make the momentum to jumps to next note 01:19:179 (5) - better imo , try move (4) to around x396 y228 ?
4. 01:47:152 - sound a bit empty here , map this beat ? might make rhythm sound better but no sound there lol

nice map

good luck

alacat wrote:

:3~

1. Maybe AR is a bit harsh for the easiest difficulty of this mapset . Reduce it to 4?
2. 00:21:635 (2) - NC for better emphasis the cymbal sound
3. 00:24:878 (1,2) - Swap NC? There's nothing to emphasis with NC on current (1)
4. 01:10:486 - Better to map this out besides a slider end . It sounded bad to place slider end on a downbeat such like this imo
5. 01:23:256 (2) - NC for better emphasis the cymbal sound
6. 01:29:540 (1,2) - Swap NC
7. 01:41:905 (4,1) - These overlaps is a little tricky for the easiest difficulty in the mapset, even though it has a nice flow transition here . I suggest you to change it, maybe place (1) on 472|288 and bend the slider to the opposite side so the following flow will looks like this
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 02:02:783 - Add a anchor point at this section to the 02:02:378 (2) - slider body? It may helps to emphasis the big sound on 02:02:783 -

1. 00:21:027 (1,2) - I'm sure that you map this out by following the drum sound . Mapped out 00:21:331 - could help to avoid any misread because this section still on the same rhythm with 00:21:027 (1) - . Even if you didn't follow the drum, they're still connected
2. 00:57:209 - The reason is same like above, still connected with 00:57:006 (4) - . This is increasingly difficult because there is only the sound of the drums that stand there, and you did not follow the vocal
3. 01:08:662 (5) - NC
4. 01:10:081 (1,3) - Swap NC
5. 01:23:257 (2) - NC

1. 00:21:229 - Still connected to each 1/4 beat around this section . Mapped this out could be improve the patterns
2. 01:07:648 (2) - It's not good to map out cymbal sound by a slider end even if the sound appears on red tick imo
3. 01:23:256 (3) - NC
4. 01:59:439 (3,4) - The transition between these note seems a bit forced . 01:59:743 (4) - appears on the lower side while 01:59:439 (3) - clearly indicate that the next object should be appears more higher than this note . I suggest you to Ctrl+G 01:59:439 (3) - to make a better transition

Rakuen wrote:

For M4M!

My map: Samantha Jade - Soldier (7th Heaven Remix)

Legend

Default = Normal mods
Blue = Strongly recommended
Red = Unrankable issue
Pink = Will be discussed if not changed

Normal

1. 00:08:662 (1) - Hey hey~ changee~
2. 01:18:797 (4) - Minor, move this a little down for straight?
3. 01:45:959 (5,1) - Looks hard to aim XD, change to slider with NC? (lead out KIAI) fixed both

Hard

1. 00:22:851 (3) - Personally prefer not to stack i like it stacked
2. 00:27:716 (3) - Ctrl+G looks better for me, ignore the DS k
3. 00:38:966 (3,4) - A bit sudden in a slow part, maybe try to put 1 or 2 trips at the start? changed to 1/4
4. 00:47:378 (4) - Slow part seems more jumpy than what should be fast part~
5. 01:10:486 (3) - Unstack looks nicer imo ok

Insane

1. 00:59:945 - Prefer to make this hittable, sounds weird with the space here 01:00:148 -i prefer it like this

Opinions

1. Make another diff between Normal and Hard, if, you don't mind. Normal seems to have a lot long sliders, somemore with reverses, and very less red tick taps, which is kinda slow. i asked Bakari for this and he said it's safe ~
   
2. Hard diff, put more triplets for maybe like 00:27:716 (3) - , triplets + reverse slider. Insanes have a lot trips and jumps, might make a very big difference (not to me). added more triplets, but keep normal so it wouldn't be too hard
   
3. Video? there're no video for this T-T

Call me back when you feel ready! and dont forget my map :c