1. Advanced (2.62 stars, 225 notes)
2. Extra (5.54 stars, 414 notes)
3. Hard (3.56 stars, 277 notes)
4. hmr's Normal (1.88 stars, 129 notes)
5. Insane (4.96 stars, 395 notes)
6. Light Insane (4.09 stars, 312 notes)

• 
  なし

1. Insane二つともHP Drain6だし これ7に上げてもいいんじゃない？
2. 00:00:125 (1) - 終点にもwhistle入れてみたらどう？
3. 00:01:828 (1,3) - 両方とも終点のSamplesetをDrumにしてみてもいいかも
4. 00:03:192 (3) - 終点のclapを削除
5. 00:03:874 (6) - 始点のSamplesetをNormal　AdditionsはAuto
6. 00:04:215 (7) - ^
7. 00:05:067 (6) - ^
8. 00:05:237 (1,2,3,4) - ^
9. 00:07:453 (6) - 終点にwhistle追加
10. 00:07:794 (7) - whistle削除
11. 00:08:646 (1) - AdditionsをNormalにしてclapを追加
12. 00:08:987 (2) - 始点終点どちらもwhistle
13. 00:09:328 (3) - 終点にwhistle
14. 00:09:840 (1) - whistle追加
15. 00:10:010 (3,4) - whistle追加
16. 00:10:521 (5) - AdditionsをNormalに
17. 00:10:862 (7) - SamplesetをNormalに
18. 00:11:203 (9) - 始点にwhistle追加
19. 00:12:055 (2,3) - whistle追加
20. 00:12:396 (1) - whistle削除
21. 00:12:567 (2) - whistle追加
22. 00:13:419 (1) - ^
23. 00:14:612 (1) - ^
24. 00:14:953 (3,5) - ^
25. 00:15:124 (4) - whistle削除
26. 00:15:465 (1) - ^
27. 00:15:635 (2) - 始点にwhistle追加
28. 00:16:146 (1) - whistle追加
29. 00:17:340 (1) - ^
30. 00:17:680 (3) - 00:18:021 (2) - ^
31. 00:17:851 (1) - 00:18:192 (1) - whistle削除
32. 00:18:362 (2) - 始点にwhistle追加
33. 00:18:874 (4) - whistle追加
34. 00:20:067 (5) - 始点にwhistle追加
35. 00:20:408 (6,8) - whistle追加
36. 00:20:578 (7) - whistle削除
37. 00:21:260 (2) - 終点にwhistle追加
38. 00:21:601 (1) - whistle削除
39. 00:15:124 (4) - SamplesetをNormal
40. 00:17:340 (1) - 00:17:851 (1) - 00:20:578 (7) - AdditionsをNormalにしてclapを追加
41. 00:17:510 (2) - clap削除
42. 00:21:601 (1,3) - AdditionsをNormalにしてclapを追加
43. 00:22:283 (1) - 始点^
44. 00:23:476 (5) - 始点にwhistle追加　(00:29:271 (5) - これにはあったので)
45. 00:29:782 (6) - 終点にwhistle追加
46. 00:42:055 (4) - whistle追加
47. 00:43:759 (4,5) - 始点にwhistle追加
48. 00:51:771 (2) - 始点　AdditionsをNormalにしてclap追加
49. 00:52:623 (1) - ^
50. 00:52:964 (4) - 始点にwhistle追加
51. 00:53:987 (1) - 00:55:350 (1) - 始点　AdditionsをNormalにしてclap追加
52. 00:57:225 (1) - SamplesetをNormal AdditionsをSoftに　　用はこの単発だけ音量上げませんか？って話　次の連打より大きくしたほうがイイ感じ
53. 00:59:271 (6) - 始点終点　AdditionsをNormalにしてclap追加
54. 01:00:805 (5) - ^
55. 01:01:998 (3) - 始点^
56. 01:03:532 (3) - ^
57. 01:10:180 (1) - 終点^
58. 01:11:714 (1) - ^
59. 01:12:907 (1) - 始点^
60. 01:13:759 (4) - 01:14:441 (1) - ^
61. 01:24:839 (2) - 終点のclap削除　か　キックスライダーじゃなくて単発に変えるか　　ここ3連打の音なんだけど・・・
    
62. 00:11:374 - から00:22:283 - 誰かにNCのこと言われるかもね？

1. 00:19:555 (1) - 00:17:510 (2) - こいつの頭部分blanketできたら綺麗
2. 00:49:896 (1) - 特に理由なければ00:50:918 (2) - の方にslider曲げた方がいいか、な。。

1. 00:10:010 (6) - add NC
   00:10:010 (6,7,8) - で１patternみたいな気がする
2. 00:18:874 (4,5) - どっちかにNC
   前部分と比べると曲調変わってないのにここだけ長くなるのは少し気になりました。
3. 00:25:011 (3) - add NC
   理由は大体上とおんなじ
4. 00:40:691 (2) - 自分なら単発一個だけ置くけどどう？
   
5. 00:52:623 (1) - 曲げませんか？
   直線slider激多だったからどこかしら曲げたい
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:43:759 (3,4) - もうすこし間隔とったほうが。
   すこし窮屈な感じがするのと離しても問題なさそうな感じの音してる

1. 00:27:396 (3) - 00:27:908 (4) - 全部つなげてもいいと思う
   
2. 00:59:953 (3,4,5) - 自分なら↓のように音取りするんですがどうでしょ
   

1. 01:05:237 (4,5) - 01:04:896 (2,3) - と同じもの使ってみませんカ?
   01:05:237 (4,5) - けして01:04:896 (2,3) - コピーして01:05:237 (4) - の位置にペースト
2. 01:13:418 (2,3,4,7) - ここ綺麗に四角形にしたほうがよくないですか！？
3. 01:21:259 (1,2,3,4) - 01:21:599 (3,4) - 01:21:259 (1,2) - コピってctrl+Rで60°回転させて01:21:089 (4) - とStack
   その後01:20:918 (3) - がずれると思うから合うやつとStack。
   01:19:896 - ~01:21:771 - までのcode置いときます
   
   SPOILER

   140,184,79896,5,8,0:0:0:0:
   236,240,80066,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   140,296,80237,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   140,184,80407,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   236,240,80578,5,8,0:0:0:0:
   140,296,80748,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   46,244,80918,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   140,184,81089,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   240,352,81259,5,8,0:0:0:0:
   236,240,81430,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   140,184,81600,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   46,244,81771,1,8,0:0:0:0:

1. 01:00:123 (5,6) - ゆれな～い?まげな～～い？
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:05:748 (7) - 01:05:237 (3) - より外側において01:04:896 (1,2,3) - より飛ばしたほうがって思う

litoluna wrote:

a a a a
Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Bold : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.

[HMR's Normal]

1. 00:19:555 (1) - 00:17:510 (2) - こいつの頭部分blanketできたら綺麗
   頭をblanketさせつつお尻合いさせました　(5がちょっと被っちゃったけど)
   
2. 00:49:896 (1) - 特に理由なければ00:50:918 (2) - の方にslider曲げた方がいいか、な。。
   割と気に入ってるのでkeepさせてください

Homura- wrote:

始めまして！ M4Mありです

青文字で指摘してあるところはどっちでもいいかな～って感じです
ただ黒文字で書いてることも好みなんで絶対なんてことはないです　嫌なら変えないでいいです

[General]

• 
  なし

[Extra]

1. Insane二つともHP Drain6だし これ7に上げてもいいんじゃない？
2. 00:00:125 (1) - 終点にもwhistle入れてみたらどう？
3. 00:01:828 (1,3) - 両方とも終点のSamplesetをDrumにしてみてもいいかも
4. 00:03:192 (3) - 終点のclapを削除
5. 00:03:874 (6) - 始点のSamplesetをNormal　AdditionsはAuto
6. 00:04:215 (7) - ^
7. 00:05:067 (6) - ^
8. 00:05:237 (1,2,3,4) - ^
9. 00:07:453 (6) - 終点にwhistle追加
10. 00:07:794 (7) - whistle削除
11. 00:08:646 (1) - AdditionsをNormalにしてclapを追加
12. 00:08:987 (2) - 始点終点どちらもwhistle
13. 00:09:328 (3) - 終点にwhistle
14. 00:09:840 (1) - whistle追加
15. 00:10:010 (3,4) - whistle追加
16. 00:10:521 (5) - AdditionsをNormalに
17. 00:10:862 (7) - SamplesetをNormalに
18. 00:11:203 (9) - 始点にwhistle追加
19. 00:12:055 (2,3) - whistle追加
20. 00:12:396 (1) - whistle削除
21. 00:12:567 (2) - whistle追加
22. 00:13:419 (1) - ^
23. 00:14:612 (1) - ^
24. 00:14:953 (3,5) - ^
25. 00:15:124 (4) - whistle削除
26. 00:15:465 (1) - ^
27. 00:15:635 (2) - 始点にwhistle追加
28. 00:16:146 (1) - whistle追加
29. 00:17:340 (1) - ^
30. 00:17:680 (3) - 00:18:021 (2) - ^
31. 00:17:851 (1) - 00:18:192 (1) - whistle削除
32. 00:18:362 (2) - 始点にwhistle追加
33. 00:18:874 (4) - whistle追加
34. 00:20:067 (5) - 始点にwhistle追加
35. 00:20:408 (6,8) - whistle追加
36. 00:20:578 (7) - whistle削除
37. 00:21:260 (2) - 終点にwhistle追加
38. 00:21:601 (1) - whistle削除
39. 00:15:124 (4) - SamplesetをNormal
40. 00:17:340 (1) - 00:17:851 (1) - 00:20:578 (7) - AdditionsをNormalにしてclapを追加
41. 00:17:510 (2) - clap削除
42. 00:21:601 (1,3) - AdditionsをNormalにしてclapを追加
43. 00:22:283 (1) - 始点^
44. 00:23:476 (5) - 始点にwhistle追加　(00:29:271 (5) - これにはあったので)
45. 00:29:782 (6) - 終点にwhistle追加
46. 00:42:055 (4) - whistle追加
47. 00:43:759 (4,5) - 始点にwhistle追加
48. 00:51:771 (2) - 始点　AdditionsをNormalにしてclap追加
49. 00:52:623 (1) - ^
50. 00:52:964 (4) - 始点にwhistle追加
51. 00:53:987 (1) - 00:55:350 (1) - 始点　AdditionsをNormalにしてclap追加
52. 00:57:225 (1) - SamplesetをNormal AdditionsをSoftに　　用はこの単発だけ音量上げませんか？って話　次の連打より大きくしたほうがイイ感じ
53. 00:59:271 (6) - 始点終点　AdditionsをNormalにしてclap追加
54. 01:00:805 (5) - ^
55. 01:01:998 (3) - 始点^
56. 01:03:532 (3) - ^
57. 01:10:180 (1) - 終点^
58. 01:11:714 (1) - ^
59. 01:12:907 (1) - 始点^
60. 01:13:759 (4) - 01:14:441 (1) - ^
61. 01:24:839 (2) - 終点のclap削除　か　キックスライダーじゃなくて単発に変えるか　　ここ3連打の音なんだけど・・・
    
62. 00:11:374 - から00:22:283 - 誰かにNCのこと言われるかもね？

全diffヒットサウンド同じらしいのでExtraだけModしました

litoluna wrote:

a a a a
Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Bold : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.

[HMR's Normal]

1. 00:19:555 (1) - 00:17:510 (2) - こいつの頭部分blanketできたら綺麗
2. 00:49:896 (1) - 特に理由なければ00:50:918 (2) - の方にslider曲げた方がいいか、な。。

[Hard]

1. 00:10:010 (6) - add NC
   00:10:010 (6,7,8) - で１patternみたいな気がする
2. 00:18:874 (4,5) - どっちかにNC
   前部分と比べると曲調変わってないのにここだけ長くなるのは少し気になりました。
3. 00:25:011 (3) - add NC
   理由は大体上とおんなじ
4. 00:40:691 (2) - 自分なら単発一個だけ置くけどどう？
   
5. 00:52:623 (1) - 曲げませんか？
   直線slider激多だったからどこかしら曲げたい
   
   SPOILER

   

[Very Hard]

1. 00:43:759 (3,4) - もうすこし間隔とったほうが。
   すこし窮屈な感じがするのと離しても問題なさそうな感じの音してる

[Light Insane]

1. 00:27:396 (3) - 00:27:908 (4) - 全部つなげてもいいと思う
   
2. 00:59:953 (3,4,5) - 自分なら↓のように音取りするんですがどうでしょ
   

[Insane]

1. 01:05:237 (4,5) - 01:04:896 (2,3) - と同じもの使ってみませんカ?
   01:05:237 (4,5) - けして01:04:896 (2,3) - コピーして01:05:237 (4) - の位置にペースト
2. 01:13:418 (2,3,4,7) - ここ綺麗に四角形にしたほうがよくないですか！？
3. 01:21:259 (1,2,3,4) - 01:21:599 (3,4) - 01:21:259 (1,2) - コピってctrl+Rで60°回転させて01:21:089 (4) - とStack
   その後01:20:918 (3) - がずれると思うから合うやつとStack。
   01:19:896 - ~01:21:771 - までのcode置いときます
   
   SPOILER

   140,184,79896,5,8,0:0:0:0:
   236,240,80066,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   140,296,80237,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   140,184,80407,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   236,240,80578,5,8,0:0:0:0:
   140,296,80748,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   46,244,80918,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   140,184,81089,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   240,352,81259,5,8,0:0:0:0:
   236,240,81430,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   140,184,81600,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   46,244,81771,1,8,0:0:0:0:

Remap しました

[Extra]

1. 01:00:123 (5,6) - ゆれな～い?まげな～～い？
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:05:748 (7) - 01:05:237 (3) - より外側において01:04:896 (1,2,3) - より飛ばしたほうがって思う

all fix

ikorza wrote:

from #modreqs good map overall btw

General
there are some red ticks in some diffs that aren't found in others so i assume they are pointless delete them


Light Hard
00:56:714 (1,2) - stack ok
00:45:464 (2) - try placing at x:40 y:40 keep it

Hard
00:57:225 (1,2) - sounds too loud to me i do not think so

ikorza wrote:

hmr's Normal
00:10:010 (3) - make straight slider bump doesn't hit anything on way back
00:51:259 (3) - ^
sorry all no change

[ Shark ] wrote:

[hmr's Normal]
00:55:350 (5) - NC
fixed

It does not change where I do not write

[ Shark ] wrote:

Hello! My mod for your map since you modded mine ~
let's go

[General]
Very good mapset, but the difference between Light Insane and Insane is rather massive.. Not sure about that but it's all just my talk don't take it personally ~


[hmr's Normal]
00:07:965 (5) - Try it like this
00:28:759 (2) - Imho, right click on this middle point of this slider so that it's vertical and parallel with the one above it
00:41:714 (5) - NC here not 00:42:055 (1) - here
00:45:464 (2,3) - Blanket these but adjust so that they don't overlap
00:55:350 (5) - NC
00:57:396 to 00:57:737 If you listen carefully a slider would be perfect here, adjusting the Slider velocity for it would be great. Just a suggestion though, feel free to ignore if you don't like the idea of it

[Light Hard]
00:19:555 (1,2) - Maybe here you can use 00:20:067 (2) - to blanket this 00:19:555 (1) - Slider's end, better aesthetics imo
01:23:987 (5) - NC

[Hard]
00:00:465 (1) - Not sure about this NC so early..
00:07:112 (4) - Add NC
00:07:965 (3) - Remove NC
00:27:396 (3) - "Don't map with your thoughts.. map with the music" This doesn't really fit here imho
01:05:492 (5) - Just a suggestion, delete this note and play it for yourself and see if it feels better or not
01:07:793 (4) - Add NC
01:08:305 (1) - Remove NC
01:23:987 (5) - NC

[Light Insane]
00:00:465 (1) - Same opinion as before, too early to NC?
01:23:987 (5) - NC
Very good diff overall, didn't find much to correct here D:

[Insane]
00:01:828 (1,2) - Unecessary overlap
00:14:101 (1,2,3) - Imho these should be reversed in order. What I mean is, the jump should be on 1 and 2, not on 2 and 3. Listen to the music and you'll get my point
01:24:754 (6) - Delete this, feels much better tbh

[Extra]
00:03:533 (2,3) - Overmapped, consider deleting note 2 and extending the slider till the white tick, feels better
01:18:191 (6) - Add NC
01:18:532 (1) - Remove NC
Very good diff ~

Good luck with getting this ranked, hope I've helped!

iedesu wrote:

From m4m:D

hmr's normal

00:02:169: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3447560Like this?

00:34:896: move to x:448,y:84

00:51:259: delete red slider curve(?) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3447573 Like this

01:14:441: move to x:368, y:168

Light Hard

00:00:465:Like this?https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3447591

01:24:839:Just one reverse arrow is better

This diff is Generally Nice

Hard

00:05:749: keeping note distance will better:D

00:32:850:1/3 stream beat will be fit more,https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3447609

01:18:987:To give some different, remove slider to add a stream

01:24:839:Just one reverse arrow is better,too

Light Insane

01:19:043: change silders to streams

Insane

00:00:125:https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3447650
00:14:101:https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3447658
00:49:896: move to x:348,y:384

Post Script

Extra diff was perfect

iedesu wrote:

From m4m:D


[hmr's normal]
00:02:169: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3447560Like this?
no
00:34:896: move to x:448,y:84
fixed
00:51:259: delete red slider curve(?) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3447573 Like this
no
01:14:441: move to x:368, y:168
no

Silky wrote:

source : ソーサリージョーカーズじゃないですか?

appleeaterx wrote:

Really amazing map, especially for you first *-* pro mapper marry me pls

Will be here soon!

appleeaterx wrote:

hmr's Normal

* 00:00:125 (1,2) - Since it's the easiest difficulty of the set, try to avoid stacks? This one should be passable, so won't force you to change it.
* 00:10:010 (3) - 00:51:259 (3) - Please change to regular slider, it's quite confusing to have a slider like this in the easiest diff of the set, as the red dots in the middle are quite unexpected.

all fixed

appleeaterx wrote:

Recheck!

:idea: General

* Forgot to mention this earlier, but the background image size is really large, please replace it with this .jpg file. Readd BG in all diffs and don't forget to remove the old file.
* 'opning' in tags -> 'opening'

Insane

* 01:03:362 (1) - I think this makes more sense http://puu.sh/joZxo/ee4c9502f0.jpg or http://puu.sh/joZzG/97ae89e72f.jpg

Extra

* 00:53:646 (7,8,1,2,3) - I won't say anything about the other 3/4 patterns, but you should definitely change this one, this won't pass for me as the 1/4 spacing is even larger than the 1/2 spacing (check 1,2,3)

Make the 1/4 gaps shorter than 1/2

Increasing 1/2 spacing afterwards by a relatively large amount

Find me again

ok

all fiix!

thanks!

appleeaterx wrote:

Looking good! Good luck
Bubbled!

litoluna wrote:

go go go~

Satellite wrote:

irc

00:53 Satellite: normal 
00:53 Satellite: 00:34:214 (2) - ds
00:53 Satellite: 00:37:623 (3) - ds
00:56 Satellite: adv
00:56 Satellite: 00:34:555 (3) - ds
00:56 Satellite: 00:40:180 (1) - ds
00:57 Satellite: 01:16:487 (3) - remo
00:58 Satellite: hard
00:58 Satellite: 00:00:125 (1) - ctrl g
01:01 Satellite: li
01:01 Satellite: 00:07:965 (1,2,3) - 
01:02 Satellite: http://puu.sh/jqo8y/04dfe7477b.jpg
01:03 Satellite: 00:57:737 (3) - ctrl g
01:03 Satellite: 00:59:953 (3,4,5) - 
01:05 Satellite: 01:08:305 (1,2,3,4) - 
01:06 Satellite: 01:11:032 (4) - aka
01:07 Satellite: 01:19:043 (3,4,5,6,7) - 
01:07 Satellite: 01:24:668 (3) - 1/6
01:07 Satellite: 01:24:668 (3) - rev

too many qualified maps over the last 24 hours! (6 max)

Edit : congrats 1st rank o/

Asahina Momoko wrote:

:)

Aka wrote:

grats on passing the qualified section