1. Easy (1.34 stars, 71 notes)
2. Hard (3.06 stars, 222 notes)
3. Normal (1.91 stars, 128 notes)
4. SnowWhite (4.38 stars, 294 notes)

-GUMI wrote:

Easy

00:49:008 (1,2) - Maybe change to something like this? As it stands it doesnt flow well which will make it better to play for our 1.3* friends good suggestion! fixed!

Normal

01:10:895 (2) - Too far down, approach circle is partly off screen totally off but i think it's still fine
01:26:556 (3) - ^

Hard

00:10:140 (5,6) - Too far down, approach circle is partly off screen totally off but i think it's still fine
01:07:122 (1) - ^

00:25:990 (3) - NC
00:33:537 (3) - NC
00:48:631 (5) - NC
00:56:367 (3) - NC
00:58:820 (2) - Maybe move this slider a bit so that it's not directly underneath the end of the previous slider changed some pattern here

Insane

00:09:763 (1) - Keep in the previous combo, with 00:09:952 (2) - as NC
01:16:744 (1) - Same as above, 01:16:744 (1) - as NC, or 01:15:990 (8) - as NC
01:22:216 (9) - ^ 01:22:593 (1) - as NC

00:44:291 (1) - This slider is too far down and part of the approach circle appears off screen

In regards to new combos, personally I feel like having different combo colours on one stack looks ugly good point xd, already fixed all nc

Very nice maps, good luck with ranking!

1. I think good.

1. 00:22:593 (4) - move at 00:22:405 - or slider 1/1slider?
   The sound of the piano is strong, so i think fitting this
   
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2. 00:42:971 (2) - i think end at 00:43:537 -
3. 01:25:235 (4) - add NC

1. 00:13:348 (2) - I think that you may bend it a little more
   
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2. 00:42:971 (1,2,3) - try this Rhythm
   
   00:43:725 (2) - move at 00:43:537 -

1. 00:03:725 (1,2) - add whistle
2. 00:04:103 (3) - add whistle at tail
   i thought not hitsound is lonely

1. 00:03:725 - 00:03:914 - 00:04:291 - add whistle
   same as hard diff
   
   pro.

Mackenzie wrote:

b4bm4m

General

1. Song setup design

Hard

1. 00:27:876 (1,2,3) - 直线liner flow卡手，建议折 這個我覺得不錯 暫時先保留
2. 01:25:046 (1,2) - 取消nc，后面白线nc stack nc有點醜 正如上面有個mod說的

Insane

1. 00:57:876 (6) - 等距啊 這裡想做個跳
2. 01:28:254 - 其实我一直觉得这个结尾不自然 我也覺得 所以我等第2集出了看看會不會換

根本摸不动

1. looks fine

1. 00:13:537 (2) - if you curve this the another way it would make flow here 00:12:782 (1,2,3) - nice imo
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2. 00:18:820 (1) - I think it make rhythm sound better if you end this slider here 00:19:386 - instead
3. 00:26:367 (2) - I think this rhythm sound better
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4. 00:27:876 (1,2) - try this rhythm ? sound better imo
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5. 00:35:235 - it looks weird when you don't map this cymbal but you map it here 00:33:725 - so I think it would be better to make thing more consistent
   you can try this rhythm
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6. 00:43:914 - rhythm would be better if you map this beat imo
7. 01:25:235 (1,2) - the 1/2 spacing here might be a bit too hard for beginner to react to it so maybe you can try this rhythm ?
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• maybe you can increase od to 4 here , that would make od gap from easy to hard nice imo

1. 00:17:122 (3,4) - try this rhythm ? I think it play better imo
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1. 00:03:159 (4,1,2,3) - shuoldn't spacing around here 1.5x too like the previous rhythm for consistent spacing ?
2. 01:01:084 (1,2,3) - maybe you can lower 1/4 spacing here a bit , current one might be a bit too much

1. 00:10:895 (7) - try move this to x144 y344 ? it might make flow here 00:10:329 (6,7,1) - better imo
2. 00:32:782 (2,3) - I feel like spacing here should be a bit bigger than 00:32:405 (1,2) - so it would make spacing here more consistent with the song since I feel like this beat 00:32:971 - sound more emphasized than 00:32:782 -
3. 00:40:707 - if you map this beat , it might make rhythm sound better imo
4. 01:00:895 (5,1) - flow would be a bit better if you increase spacing here a bit , it would help player react to the next sapcing which lead tp stream imo , try move 01:00:895 (5,1) - to around x276 y200
5. 01:11:461 (1) - if you curve this the another way it would make flow here 01:11:461 (1,2,3) - better imo
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6. 01:19:763 (4) - nazi , can move this to the right a bit so the tail would not be so close to 01:19:386 (2) - which will make pattern looks more better imo
7. 01:21:178 (3) - is there a beat sound here ? idk this triplet sound weird lollolo xD
8. 01:22:782 (5) - try curve this the another way so it would make flow here 01:22:593 (4,5,6) - nice imo
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9. 01:26:556 (1,2,3) - I think adjust angle a bit here would make flow nice , try move 01:26:933 (2) - to around x112 y92

CelsiusLK wrote:

as requested

[general]

1. looks fine

[easy]

1. 00:13:537 (2) - if you curve this the another way it would make flow here 00:12:782 (1,2,3) - nice imo
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:18:820 (1) - I think it make rhythm sound better if you end this slider here 00:19:386 - instead
3. 00:26:367 (2) - I think this rhythm sound better
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:27:876 (1,2) - try this rhythm ? sound better imo
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:35:235 - it looks weird when you don't map this cymbal but you map it here 00:33:725 - so I think it would be better to make thing more consistent
   you can try this rhythm
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:43:914 - rhythm would be better if you map this beat imo
7. 01:25:235 (1,2) - the 1/2 spacing here might be a bit too hard for beginner to react to it so maybe you can try this rhythm ?
   SPOILER

   

[normal]

• maybe you can increase od to 4 here , that would make od gap from easy to hard nice imo

1. 00:17:122 (3,4) - try this rhythm ? I think it play better imo
   SPOILER

   

[hard]

1. 00:03:159 (4,1,2,3) - shuoldn't spacing around here 1.5x too like the previous rhythm for consistent spacing ? ?
2. 01:01:084 (1,2,3) - maybe you can lower 1/4 spacing here a bit , current one might be a bit too much

[snowwhite]

1. 00:10:895 (7) - try move this to x144 y344 ? it might make flow here 00:10:329 (6,7,1) - better imo i want blanket
2. 00:32:782 (2,3) - I feel like spacing here should be a bit bigger than 00:32:405 (1,2) - so it would make spacing here more consistent with the song since I feel like this beat 00:32:971 - sound more emphasized than 00:32:782 - i choose the bigger ds on 00:33:537 (4,1) -
3. 00:40:707 - if you map this beat , it might make rhythm sound better imo i don't follow that beat
4. 01:00:895 (5,1) - flow would be a bit better if you increase spacing here a bit , it would help player react to the next sapcing which lead tp stream imo , try move 01:00:895 (5,1) - to around x276 y200 flow is ok imo
5. 01:11:461 (1) - if you curve this the another way it would make flow here 01:11:461 (1,2,3) - better imo i love this kind of slider xd
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6. 01:19:763 (4) - nazi , can move this to the right a bit so the tail would not be so close to 01:19:386 (2) - which will make pattern looks more better imo
7. 01:21:178 (3) - is there a beat sound here ? idk this triplet sound weird lollolo xD it's ok xd
8. 01:22:782 (5) - try curve this the another way so it would make flow here 01:22:593 (4,5,6) - nice imo
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9. 01:26:556 (1,2,3) - I think adjust angle a bit here would make flow nice , try move 01:26:933 (2) - to around x112 y92

nice map

good luck

1. 01:28:254 - 放點東西嘛

1. 00:11:084 (1,2) - 感覺可以再擺遠點 總之就是別小spacing呀
   
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2. 00:23:725 (4) - drumfinish? 主要是00:23:537 (2,3,4) - 這個串打起來微 空虛 你也考慮全部都加drumfinish
3. 00:24:480 (6,7) - 我討厭這個疊(因為沒理由)所以你可以考慮把他放在不同位置
   其實是我感覺鼓跟沒鼓應該分開
   
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1. 00:24:857 (1,2) - 是不是不用跳
2. 00:44:857 (5) - ^
   其實也可以不用改

1. 00:26:178 (4) - 太擦邊

yf_bmp wrote:

[G]
默认softclap建议替换

[hvick225]
00:05:046 (1) - 或许ctrl+G风味更佳, 特别是与后面几个物件
00:11:084 (1,2) - 我感觉这个(2)可以放的远点
01:15:423 (5,6) - drumclap
01:16:084 (2) - clap
01:22:122 (2) - ^
01:25:235 (3) - ^
01:17:499 (1) - maybe ctrl+g 這個想有點距離 所以不改

[H]
音效漏了几个 参考hvick

[N,E]
shenmapo

Flask wrote:

[General]

1. 01:28:254 - 放點東西嘛 放了東西很怪 加上那邊的音是在1/8上的

[Insane]

1. 00:11:084 (1,2) - 感覺可以再擺遠點 總之就是別小spacing呀
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:23:725 (4) - drumfinish? 主要是00:23:537 (2,3,4) - 這個串打起來微 空虛 你也考慮全部都加drumfinish
3. 00:24:480 (6,7) - 我討厭這個疊(因為沒理由)所以你可以考慮把他放在不同位置
   其實是我感覺鼓跟沒鼓應該分開
   
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[Hard]

1. 00:24:857 (1,2) - 是不是不用跳 但是低ds的話這裡的梗就很醜了
2. 00:44:857 (5) - ^
   其實也可以不用改

[Normal]

1. 00:26:178 (4) - 太擦邊

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