DakeDekaane wrote:

;w;

eeezzzeee wrote:

Hi, from your m4m request

LEGEND
BLUE = Suggestions/comments
BLACK = Real problems

FORMAT
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00:00:00 - change - reason
If there is a reason, please read that before trying the changes!
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Total time spent on mod

Final comments

[Nardo's Inner Oni]
Played it a few times and it was fun! Just one part I have a suggestion
01:01:086 (353) - change to k The pitch of the instrument decreases, so d would be fine imo.
01:01:288 (354,355,356,357,358,359,360) - kdkkddk - mainly because i think it should end with k Similar reason as ^ . Also, kkddkkd could follow the drums in a way better.

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Total time spent on mod: 2:00 ~ 2:15

K and F are ok, focus on M and O.
Remember try to keep the note density similar on parts of the song that are similar intensity..
Also when mapping the vocal its probably a good idea to put in some drums where you can
That's all, good luck!

eeezzzeee wrote:

Hi, from your m4m request

LEGEND
BLUE = Suggestions/comments
BLACK = Real problems

FORMAT
Diff Name
Comments

00:00:00 - change - reason
If there is a reason, please read that before trying the changes!
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Total time spent on mod

Final comments

[Kantan]
Fine.

00:29:667 (13,14,15) - did you mean to use ddk here? it should sound the same as 00:23:180 (3,4,5) Fixed

[Futsuu]
I think this is the best diff on the set. Good map! Nothing

[Muzukashii]
I think it should be a little harder. Some parts are too easy for the song

00:27:234 (16,17) - add 2 notes between these at 00:27:538 - 00:27:842 - can use k or d, just need to have sounds here Added
00:32:910 (31) - change to k Fixed
00:34:937 - 00:35:140 - add a note here - sounds empty Added a d
00:36:153 (38,39,40,41,42,43) - change to kdk dkd - reverse of these fixed
00:38:180 - same as 00:34:937 added a d
00:40:207 (50,51,52) - change to kdk - need k on 00:40:207 fixed
00:41:423 - same as 00:34:937 added a d
00:43:451 (60) - change to k fixed
01:02:505 - add a note here - i think you made a mistake? the other verses have note here oops, forgot to add
01:08:586 (28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35) - try a pattern like this http://puu.sh/hTRz1/8d731aa3a3.jpg OR like this http://puu.sh/hTREb/35c0fd60f5.jpg - It was ok in futsuu but muzu this part needs more notes. What are you mapping here? First example is how to map drum, second is how to map vocal used the first pattern
01:15:883 (43) - change to k - another consistency mistake fixed
01:21:559 (75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82) - see 01:08:586 same llike above

[Oni]
Some of the triples are misplaced imo. Also watch out for the note density, theres a few parts where it suddenly becomes really easy even though the music is not

00:05:342 (25,26,27) - either delete 26 OR add notes on 00:05:748 - 00:06:559 - Its fine for the lower difficulties but on oni we shouldn't be having spacing like this. It feels really random to play. Are you mapping vocal? then add the other 2 notes there. Are you mapping drums? then delete this note because no drums here Added k between d
00:07:673 - add k here added. Also I added d before it
00:09:903 (41) - move this note to 00:09:498 - the triple sound is here Fixed
00:10:917 - add ksame like 00:07:673
00:14:160 - add k^
00:17:403 - add k^
00:19:329 (88,89,90,91,92,93) - change to kkd kkd - the problem is that these two triples and 00:18:518 (83,84,85) - sounds different music but you use the same ddk notes to map it Fixed
00:20:038 - delete the spinner and try a pattern like this http://puu.sh/hTPxK/33f784e38e.jpg - don't enjoy this spinner here. If you really want to keep it at least move it to 00:20:140 - so it doesn't start instantly after the stream. Removed the spinner and make it like Inner Oni's Pattern
00:34:532 (55,56,57,58,59) - try a pattern like this http://puu.sh/hTPGz/ed08ac9bd9.jpg - theres a lot going on in the music I noticed the map is so empty here! compare the music to earlier at 00:21:559 (1,2,3,4) - now it is much more intense but the density of the map is the same used a little different pattern
00:36:356 (60,61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69) - try a pattern like this http://puu.sh/hTPQB/fe739c95fc.jpg - this part just doesn't sound right to me. I think you need a triple at 00:36:457changed
00:37:775 (69,70,71,72,73) - same as 00:34:532 fixed
00:39:599 (74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83) - same as 00:36:356 - again needs triple at that spot. But this should be a different pattern than the previous suggestion changed
00:41:018 (84,85,86,87,88) - same as 00:34:532 fixed
00:42:842 (89,90,91,92,93,94,95,96,97,98) - same as 00:36:356changed
00:44:261 (104,105,106,107,108,109,110,111) - try a pattern like this http://puu.sh/hTQbT/71f4a495bc.jpg - sounds like we keep having the triple on the wrong spot fixed
01:02:099 (1,2,3,4) - it feels weird to play when so much is happening in the song but map is empty again. I know you are mapping the vocal but you can still put notes in the gaps between added some notes
01:04:937 (15,16,17,18) - same as 01:02:099 ^
01:09:802 (38) - change to d fixed
01:10:207 (40) - move this note to 01:10:410 - the vocal is actually here fixed
01:15:072 (68,69,70,71) - same as 01:02:099 added some notes
01:18:315 (83,84,85,86) - same as 01:02:099 ^
01:22:775 (105) - change to d fixed
01:23:180 (107) - move this note to 01:23:383 fixed
01:32:910 (156,157,158) - same as 00:05:342 added k between d

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Total time spent on mod: 2:00 ~ 2:15

K and F are ok, focus on M and O.
Remember try to keep the note density similar on parts of the song that are similar intensity..
Also when mapping the vocal its probably a good idea to put in some drums where you can
That's all, good luck!

newyams99 wrote:

I thought this mapset was very well made and I have few suggestions.

Nardo's Inner Oni
This diff was super good too.

Optional:
01:01:998 - There could be another hit here, but to not conflict with the finisher hit 361, it will have to be a k, and you also would have to change hit 360 to a k. If it doesn't sound good, just ignore. The flow will not be good if finish is used at the end of 1/4 notes imo.

01:27:234 (531,532,533,534,535,536) - Remove hits 532, 533, and 535, then switch the colours of hits 531 and 534, then add a finisher to hit 334. It'll put emphasis on the SO! RE! I would prefer following both the vocal and the drums there.

To be honest, I wasn't too fond of this song at first, but I really started to get into it once I played the Oni and Inner Oni. Great map! Good luck on rank

newyams99 wrote:

I thought this mapset was very well made and I have few suggestions.
Kantan

Optional:
00:06:964 (5) - Change to a big slider (one with a finisher) until 00:08:180. Honestly, doesn't really matter, so do it if you want to. No change. d notes are fit better in here

00:33:721 - You could add a k here. It'll fill up that empty space, and make it slightly harder. No change

00:34:126 - You could also add a d here. This one is more optional. Same reasons as above. No change

00:46:694 - Add a k here. No change

00:47:099 - Add a d here. No change


Futsuu

Suggestions:
00:33:721 - You could add a k here. It'll fill up that empty space, and make it slightly harder. Added

00:34:126 - You could also add a d here. Same reasons as above. Added

00:46:694 - Add a k here. Added

00:47:099 - Add a d here. Added

Optional:
00:06:964 (8) - You could change this into a slider. Look at my Kantan suggestion. No change. Same reason as above

00:00:478 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - There's no harm in moving hits 2, 4 and 6 to where the guy says OH! If you want to do this also change hits 2, 4 and 6 to finishers. No change. I'll keep it on the beginning of backing vocal

01:28:045 (53,54,55,56,57,58,59) - Same thing here. You could move hits 54, 56 and 58 and add finishers on them. Same reason as above

Muzukashii

Suggestions:
00:00:478 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - As a Muzukashii, I think you should definitely move some hits to match the OH! Move hits 2, 6 and 10, and put finishers on them. I added d on the OH! part then changed 2, 6 and 10 to k

01:28:045 (95,96,97,98,99,100,101,102,103,104,105,106,107) - Same Thing. Change the position of hits 96, 100, and 104 and put finishers. Same reason as above

Optional:
00:46:694 (77,78) - This part could be harder. I'd put two hits after hit 47 to make a ddd triplet, then put 2 more 1/2 hits to fill up the rest of the space. Added notes on this part

01:13:451 (43,44,45,46,47,48) - This part could be harder too. I'd change hits 45 and 46 to a d, then put two hits before hit 46 to make it a ddd triplet. Added notes on this part

01:26:423 (90,91,92,93,94,95) - Same Thing. ^

Oni
Holy crap this diff was good.

Optional:
00:22:167 - Add a d to match the vocals. added

00:25:410 - Same Thing. added

00:28:653 - Same Thing. added

00:31:896 - Same Thing. added


To be honest, I wasn't too fond of this song at first, but I really started to get into it once I played the Oni and Inner Oni. Great map! Good luck on rank

1. 00:39:396 (27,28,29,30,31) - Personally, it would be more fit the music that changing to d d k k d.
2. 01:14:261 (18) - Add finish for emphasis.
3. 01:27:234 (38) - Same as above.

1. 00:23:180 (4,5,6) - I think these is similar melody(?) as 00:29:667 (16,17,18). how about change anyone for consistency?
2. 00:32:910 (22) - How about k that follow vocal melody?
3. 00:34:126 (24) - k?
4. 00:36:964 (29,30,31) - How about swapping this for 00:40:207 (36,37,38)? it would be more fit the music in my opinion.

1. 00:18:518 (63) - Change to k because this is high pitch.
2. 00:28:045 (21) - It is not bad to add finish in my opinion.
3. 00:43:248 (67) - Remove this for consistency.
4. 00:45:376 (76) - It is no problem but k would be easy to play in my opinion.
5. 01:04:329 (10) - k that follow vocal.
6. 01:07:572 (24) - Same as above.
7. 01:14:667 (51) - k that follow the melody.
8. 01:11:829 (41,42) - this part sounds empty. how about adding note more?
9. 01:17:302 (62) - k that follow vocal.
10. 01:20:545 (76) - Same as above.
11. 01:24:802 (93,94) - Same as above.
12. 01:27:640 (103) - k that follow the melody.

1. 00:05:342 (25) - Persnal opinion, this finisher looks not good. how about removing finish?
2. 00:52:673 (157) - k is not bad feeling in my opinion.
3. 01:09:802 (48) - k?
4. 01:12:640 (62,63) - It would be fit more vocal to swap these in my opinion.
5. 01:14:261 (73) - k for emphasis?
6. 01:22:775 (125) - k?
7. 01:25:410 (137,138,139,140,141) - Same as 01:12:640. How about changing to dkkdk or dkkdd?
8. 01:27:234 (150) - Same as 01:14:261.

1. 00:10:005 (52) - I think it should change to k because this is same sound as 00:09:802 (51).
2. 01:00:680 (349,350,351,352,353,354,355,356,357,358,359,360) - Personally, it seems to be more fit the music that changing to follows:
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:27:133 - How about adding d?

Ploenar wrote:

Hi, Meow2.

[Kantan]

1. 00:39:396 (27,28,29,30,31) - Personally, it would be more fit the music that changing to d d k k d. No change for now
2. 01:14:261 (18) - Add finish for emphasis. Added
3. 01:27:234 (38) - Same as above. Added

[Futsuu]

1. 00:23:180 (4,5,6) - I think these is similar melody(?) as 00:29:667 (16,17,18). how about change anyone for consistency? changed the notes on 00:29:667 to dd k d
2. 00:32:910 (22) - How about k that follow vocal melody? changed
3. 00:34:126 (24) - k? changed
4. 00:36:964 (29,30,31) - How about swapping this for 00:40:207 (36,37,38)? it would be more fit the music in my opinion. no change for now

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:18:518 (63) - Change to k because this is high pitch. changed
2. 00:28:045 (21) - It is not bad to add finish in my opinion. added finish
3. 00:43:248 (67) - Remove this for consistency. Okay
4. 00:45:376 (76) - It is no problem but k would be easy to play in my opinion. No change
5. 01:04:329 (10) - k that follow vocal. changed
6. 01:07:572 (24) - Same as above. ^
7. 01:14:667 (51) - k that follow the melody. No change for now
8. 01:11:829 (41,42) - this part sounds empty. how about adding note more? Okay
9. 01:17:302 (62) - k that follow vocal. changed
10. 01:20:545 (76) - Same as above. ^
11. 01:24:802 (93,94) - Same as above. Okay
12. 01:27:640 (103) - k that follow the melody. No change

[Oni]

1. 00:05:342 (25) - Persnal opinion, this finisher looks not good. how about removing finish? The finisher is fine. It's allowed
2. 00:52:673 (157) - k is not bad feeling in my opinion. No change
3. 01:09:802 (48) - k? Changed
4. 01:12:640 (62,63) - It would be fit more vocal to swap these in my opinion. Changed
5. 01:14:261 (73) - k for emphasis? Changed
6. 01:22:775 (125) - k? Changed
7. 01:25:410 (137,138,139,140,141) - Same as 01:12:640. How about changing to dkkdk or dkkdd? Changed
8. 01:27:234 (150) - Same as 01:14:261. Changed

1. set this.
   Kantan~Futsuu
   [Events]
   //Background and Video events
   0,0,"74d42e92aaf0ad8f3447b3fa30a69b0a-d6w7cyi.jpg",0,60
   
   Muzukashii~Inner Oni
   [Events]
   //Background and Video events
   0,0,"alt bg.jpg",0,90
   BG

   

1. 00:28:045 (11) I think Finish is not needed.
2. 00:42:640 (33,34,35,36,37) change to ddkkd to unify with 00:36:153 (21,22,23,24,25).
3. 00:45:883 Why don't you put slider here? I think it fits.

1. 00:05:342 (7) K will be good accent because D are so continuous.
2. 01:32:910 (59) K. ^
3. 00:28:045 (13) Remove Finish. same as kantan.

1. 00:09:599 (29) Delete. This pattern is bit haed for Muzu Players.
2. 00:12:842 ^
3. 00:28:045 (21) Remove Finish. same as kantan.
4. 00:32:403 (32,33) delete 32 or 33. 1/4 dd is not needed cuz this part is so quiet.
5. 00:45:072 kk dk is too hard on Muzukashii. change to easier pattern. I think delete 00:45:173 (72) is better.
6. 00:58:451 (118,189,190) Idk is this kkk patern really needed.
7. 01:04:633 (12,13) Delete these. 1/2+1/4 pattern is so long and hard.
8. 01:07:876 (26,27) ^
9. 01:13:451 it's too hard x_x change to easier pattern.

1. 00:05:342 (25) Finish is not needed here. if you want to keep this, I think it's better to delete 00:05:241 (24).
2. 00:13:248 (62) I hear k is more beautiful.
3. 01:10:207 Why don't you put note here? drum sounds here.
4. 01:23:180 ^

1. 00:40:511 (247,248) I hear kd is more beautiful.
2. 01:13:653 kkd is so many. try other pattern. I think it's better to unify with from 01:27:234.

tasuke912 wrote:

Hi. from my Q.
[ General]

1. set this.
   Kantan~Futsuu
   [Events]
   //Background and Video events
   0,0,"74d42e92aaf0ad8f3447b3fa30a69b0a-d6w7cyi.jpg",0,60
   
   Muzukashii~Inner Oni
   [Events]
   //Background and Video events
   0,0,"alt bg.jpg",0,90
   BG

   

Okay

[ Kantan]

1. 00:28:045 (11) I think Finish is not needed. Fixed
2. 00:42:640 (33,34,35,36,37) change to ddkkd to unify with 00:36:153 (21,22,23,24,25). Changed
3. 00:45:883 Why don't you put slider here? I think it fits.Well, I think it's better to leave some space here

[ Futsuu]

1. 00:05:342 (7) K will be good accent because D are so continuous. No change for now
2. 01:32:910 (59) K. ^ ^
3. 00:28:045 (13) Remove Finish. same as kantan. Fixed

[ Muzukashii]

1. 00:09:599 (29) Delete. This pattern is bit haed for Muzu Players. No change for now
2. 00:12:842 ^ ^
3. 00:28:045 (21) Remove Finish. same as kantan. Fixed
4. 00:32:403 (32,33) delete 32 or 33. 1/4 dd is not needed cuz this part is so quiet. Deleted 33 and moved 32
5. 00:45:072 kk dk is too hard on Muzukashii. change to easier pattern. I think delete 00:45:173 (72) is better. Changed to k...k.d.d.
6. 00:58:451 (118,189,190) Idk is this kkk patern really needed. removed k
7. 01:04:633 (12,13) Delete these. 1/2+1/4 pattern is so long and hard. Deleted
8. 01:07:876 (26,27) ^ ^
9. 01:13:451 it's too hard x_x change to easier pattern. Okay

[ Oni]

1. 00:05:342 (25) Finish is not needed here. if you want to keep this, I think it's better to delete 00:05:241 (24). Okay, I removed the finish
2. 00:13:248 (62) I hear k is more beautiful. Changed
3. 01:10:207 Why don't you put note here? drum sounds here. Added d
4. 01:23:180 ^ ^

Nice mapset. good luck.

Ploenar wrote:

Hi, Meow2.

[Nardo's Inner Oni]

1. 00:10:005 (52) - I think it should change to k because this is same sound as 00:09:802 (51). They are different because of the snare at 00:09:802 -
2. 01:00:680 (349,350,351,352,353,354,355,356,357,358,359,360) - Personally, it seems to be more fit the music that changing to follows:
   SPOILER

   
   I think the current pattern could follow the snares better.
3. 01:27:133 - How about adding d? Nope, 01:27:234 (531) - is a big note.

tasuke912 wrote:

Hi. from my Q.

[ Nardo's Inner Oni]

1. 00:40:511 (247,248) I hear kd is more beautiful. dk could fit both the snare and the pitch well imo.
2. 01:13:653 kkd is so many. try other pattern. I think it's better to unify with from 01:27:234. The kkd patterns would result in a better impact before proceeding to the second part of the kiai.

Nice mapset. good luck.

infr4 wrote:

From queue

[Kantan]
HP 4 is high to kantan
fix it less than 3 I set it to 3

00:21:559 - d Keep it for now

note
00:41:108 - d k d k D deleted the k, so it became d....d k D
01:04:532 - d K D Keep it for now

it's difficult to beginners, my suggestion : 00:41:108 - d k d k d / 01:04:532 - d K d

[Futsuu]

00:08:991 - k
00:15:478 - ^
00:21:559 - d, same as katan
No change in this diff


[Muzukashii]

00:01:694 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3265652 how about this No change

other diffs well done

gl for rank

xtrem3x wrote:

Mod request via ...Queue

________________________________________________________________________

General:


Don: d
Kat: k
Big don: D
Big kat: K

________________________________________________________________________

Kantan:

GOOD

________________________________________________________________________

Futsuu:

01:05:342 - Remove finish (not nessesary)
01:08:586 - ^
01:11:829 - ^
01:18:315 - ^
01:21:559 - ^
01:24:802 - ^
[b]No change


________________________________________________________________________

Muzukashii:

00:12:640 - Change to k (sequence) fixed

00:33:721 (36,37,38) - Change to k (Consistent with 00:27:234- ) fixed

00:57:133 - d ... added
00:57:234 - Change to d the note is already d (is possible a triple here)

00:57:538 - k (have snare sound) added

________________________________________________________________________

Oni:

00:27:336 - Move to 00:27:437- ... kk kk sounds better
00:27:640 - Delete (is rare but is better imo) No change


01:11:018 - Move to 01:10:917- (for a bit consistence with 01:09:194- ) Okay
01:23:991 - Move to 01:23:890- (Same reason about consistence with 01:22:167- ) Okay

________________________________________________________________________

Nardo's Inner:

GOOD D:

________________________________________________________________________[/b]

Kasha wrote:

from mod queue

[General]

Everything looks good!


[Kantan]

00:28:045 (7) - k d sounds better here

01:05:342 (5) - K D sounds better here


[Futsuu]

00:28:045 (13) - D I think the finisher is not needed here

00:40:410 (37) - k No change



[Muzukashii]

00:16:288 (55) - k no change

00:53:586 (101) - ^ no change

01:11:119 (34) - ^ no change



[Oni]

01:10:917 (54) - k Fixed. Applied this on 01:23:890 (132) too

01:11:221 (56) - k No change



Inner Oni looks good, gl getting this map ranked

Backfire wrote:

Kantan -
Damn this kantan is really good, no comments here.

Futsuu -
00:00:478 (1,3,5) - maybe all kat? d is better though
01:06:153 (9) - since the one before is a don, maybe make this one a kat. changed
01:28:045 - here maybe do what I asked at the beginning? same reason as above

Muzu -
00:38:180 - Perhaps a kat here? Theres a kat sound, for me at least. Changed

Oni -
Holy shit this is good, nothing to comment here.

General -
There is hardly anything to comment, mapset is perfect. Rank where? Maybe I'll find BN now?

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[Oni]
00:07:572 (31,32,33) - I think this should be 'ddd', 00:09:396 (41,42,43) - and this should be dkd to fit nicer overall.
00:10:815 (48,49,50) - then this would be 'ddd' to not spam dkd
For the other similar parts (00:14:059 (65,66,67) - ) those can keep the dkd since you change the patterns after. It doesn't stale 'dkd'
I'll keep the dkd for now

00:34:025 (56) - make 'k' so it's not always dk? No change. For consistency with 00:32:403 (50,51)
01:24:092 (133) - k, to vary it up? feels right too Changed

GJ too!
[Muzukashii]
00:42:640 (63,64,65,66,67,68) - kkk dkk, so it's not ddk kdk twice in a row? I changed ddk to kdk

[Futsuu]
00:27:234 (12) - k, to change it up? Changed
00:43:451 (43,44) - k k, to make it k k k, and NOT d d k again? made it k d k
01:16:288 (29,36) - change to 'k' to vary it a bit? we're in kiai after all, should be interesting. No change

Changing a note in a repetitive part helps make a map not look quickly thrown together without making the map any harder. Consider it at parts with (d k d d k d d k d) over and over. I'm sure you can think of changes in such a simple difficulty! Well, I'll try

[Kantan]
00:19:126 (16) - d? The pattern seemed to be dkd ddd dkd ddd. Fixed
00:49:126 (27,33) - make these 'k'? dkd dkd dkd aaaaah, simple variation is good for new players Fixed
01:04:937 (4,5) - Don't recommend these finishers being there. Big notes are one of the hardest things for the fingers of new players. Plays fine without them. This applies to the others in the kiai. Okay
01:04:937 (4,12,24) - making these into 'd' should vary the map, and keep it simple. No change

Good set, just felt deja vu a lot, heheh. GL!

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[Nardo's Inner Oni]
00:47:910 (292,293,294,295,296,297) - d d k d d d? 00:47:910 (292,297) - are mapped as k because of the relatively high-pitched vocal.
00:52:167 (309,310) - k d? fits the song way better similar to ^ , k k d d at 00:51:559 (306,307,308,309) - could emphasize the pitch change there.
01:18:518 (473,474,475) - to kkd so 01:19:734 (482,483,484) - can be kdk? Keeping the pattern as kdk would help emphasize the vocal at 01:21:761 (494,495,496) -

Nice job!

Good set, just felt deja vu a lot, heheh. GL!

Flying Pan wrote:

Hi, from my queue. here's your order~

Futsuu

00:24:396 - add k here?
00:27:640 - add d
00:30:883 - add k
No change on Futsuu

Muzukashii

00:58:248 (116) - change to d Changed

Oni

00:03:518 (14) - change to k for variation? Changed
00:15:883 (75,76,77,78) - should be dk dk Fixed
00:19:126 (91) - change to d Changed
00:52:369 (156) - ^ No change, but I changed 00:52:673 (157) to k
00:53:383 (160,161,162) - if you follow the drum i think it should be kkd Okay
00:57:032 (174,175,176) - and this is ddd Changed, but I deleted 175
01:26:626 (147,148,149,150,151,152) - change to kkd kkd? the drums sounds like that Okay
01:32:707 (177) - change to k if you applied the first one for consistency I'm sure you mean 01:31:086 (170)

That's all. Hope it's helpful. Can't say much, its a good mapset. Good luck~

Surono wrote:

`_J` ......... :V;v:;v:V:;V:V:V::V ew `L_`
no colour: suggest
blue: recommend

[Oni]
00:18:619 (89) - how be k? to variations from before *and this have flute pitch, boring if ddk again lol No change. It doesn't fit imo
00:19:532 (95) - k? bcuz this 00:19:937 (98) - low pitch.. so change to k for feel better =w= No change.
00:27:336 (27) - this not have pitch.. so please move to here 00:27:437 (27) - and change don *feels more fits imo or not move and change don Changed
01:27:640 (155) - voice pitch high.. so kat No change, it will break the consistency on 01:14:667 (77)
nice lel

[Muzukashii]
00:00:782 - aww i feels this empty and boring for muzu .. so add some note.. like don.. in other too *awalannya tu enaknya di add aja.. di tick biru kan boleh di muzu.. #Plak# ini cocoknya di futsuu kalau tanpa tick biru, nah di muzunya itu tinggal tambah 00:00:782 (2) - don disetiap lanjutannya hihi, di akhiran sama kan? di tambah juga Added
okay just it.. already nice ;w; lel

dah segini aja.. diff low pasti udah bagus2.. dan malas ngeliat2nya XD

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• Let's try a Nardo style mod!!

1. 01:19:734 (482,483,484) - kkk would fit the vocal well as it is relatively high compared to 01:18:518 (473,474,475) - .
   
   Ok, I'm not good at Nardo's pro mod style...especially on a Nardo map...

1. 00:36:964 (74,75,76,77) - k dkd plays and sounds very nice here. Really recommend it.
2. 00:52:167 (155,156) - You can swap these to follow vocals better. Won't affect following drums much since it's mainly bass kicks.
3. 00:58:451 (181) - d? Gives a bit of emphasis and flow to this little section, unless you want to avoid so much d k d k d k d k d.

1. 00:19:228 - Maybe add a k to match the density increase in Oni at this part?
2. 00:40:410 (57,58) - Deleting these would make a for a nice muzu break, in the sense that Oni has 1/2 breaks throughout this part, but Muzu doesn't have any 1/1 breaks to match with it. Only one should be needed along this string of notes.
3. 01:05:748 (14,15) - and 01:18:721 (64,65) - Maybe swap these, so that it can alternate between d d k and d k d into the d k d ddd k d pattern?

1. 00:53:180 (59) - Would be a nice note to delete to minimize continuous 1/1 mapping a bit.

1. 00:08:586 (6) - and 00:15:072 (12) - Maybe change to k to map to the high guitar chords? Then the last one can be its own d k d instead of showing twice in a row.

OzzyOzrock wrote:

Hey!

[General]

1. Preview point is unsnapped. fixed

[Nardo's Inner Oni]

• Let's try a Nardo style mod!!

1. 01:19:734 (482,483,484) - kkk would fit the vocal well as it is relatively high compared to 01:18:518 (473,474,475) - . Yeah, but kdk would help emphasize the cymbal at 01:19:734 (482) - and the instrument at 01:19:937 (484) - in a way better.
   
   Ok, I'm not good at Nardo's pro mod style...especially on a Nardo map...

Difficulty gaps are consistent, so spread checks out (I hope). Call me back!

OzzyOzrock wrote:

Hey!

[General]

1. Preview point is unsnapped. Fixed

[Oni]

1. 00:36:964 (74,75,76,77) - k dkd plays and sounds very nice here. Really recommend it. Fixed
2. 00:52:167 (155,156) - You can swap these to follow vocals better. Won't affect following drums much since it's mainly bass kicks. Fixed
3. 00:58:451 (181) - d? Gives a bit of emphasis and flow to this little section, unless you want to avoid so much d k d k d k d k d. No change

Rest looks good!
[Muzukashii]

1. 00:19:228 - Maybe add a k to match the density increase in Oni at this part? Triplet here is not fit imo
2. 00:40:410 (57,58) - Deleting these would make a for a nice muzu break, in the sense that Oni has 1/2 breaks throughout this part, but Muzu doesn't have any 1/1 breaks to match with it. Only one should be needed along this string of notes. Deleted these notes
3. 01:05:748 (14,15) - and 01:18:721 (64,65) - Maybe swap these, so that it can alternate between d d k and d k d into the d k d ddd k d pattern? Fixed

[Futsuu]

1. 00:53:180 (59) - Would be a nice note to delete to minimize continuous 1/1 mapping a bit. Deleted

[Kantan]

1. 00:08:586 (6) - and 00:15:072 (12) - Maybe change to k to map to the high guitar chords? Then the last one can be its own d k d instead of showing twice in a row. Make them both k k d

Difficulty gaps are consistent, so spread checks out (I hope). Call me back!

shionelove wrote:

from queue
already bubbled=i should BN check
Artist is not Sano Gaku?if you have some source or confirm with QAT or etc put plz then i qf easily I think so. This will be considered by Meow2 though.
BG mp3 nothing
Source ok
no custom hitsounds ez

[Nardo's Inner Oni]
01:32:910 (557) - D? Retained to follow the high-pitched vocal. I used d at 00:05:342 - because ddkkkkd could emphasize the drums more.

one of the maps EZ Qualify
and EZ PP

shionelove wrote:

from queue
already bubbled=i should BN check
Artist is not Sano Gaku?if you have some source or confirm with QAT or etc put plz then i qf easily Fixed
BG mp3 nothing
Source ok
no custom hitsounds ez
[Kantan]
nothing breaks patterns enough
[Futsuu]
00:01:288 (2,4,6) - k(free to change or not) Changed. This also applied for the same part
[Muzu]
00:15:072 (52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59) - make same as 00:08:586 (26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33) - ? No change, I want to try a variation here
00:19:126 (69,70,71,72) - d kkk d i think(if you need break ignore this plz) Definitely need break here
[Oni]
nothing

one of the maps EZ Qualify
and EZ PP