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Aoi Eir - Lapis Lazuli (TV size ver.)

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tutuhaha
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年5月1日 at 23:33:56

Artist: Aoi Eir
Title: Lapis Lazuli (TV size ver.)
Source: アルスラーン戦記
Tags: Megurine Luka THE HEROIC LEGEND OF ARSLAN Senki Ending
BPM: 112
Filesize: 14674kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.42 stars, 89 notes)
  2. Hard (3.01 stars, 269 notes)
  3. Insane (4.13 stars, 299 notes)
  4. Luka's Hard (2.47 stars, 162 notes)
  5. Normal (1.82 stars, 116 notes)
Download: Aoi Eir - Lapis Lazuli (TV size ver.)
Download: Aoi Eir - Lapis Lazuli (TV size ver.) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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画个公主非要说是王子系列
Beautiful ed and Beautiful princess prince
Click here to find OP
Thankyou for Luka's GD
Thankyou for Shad0w1and's video help and mp3 help
Megurine Luka
:)

hao jiu mei you qiang ni de sha fa le ne
Topic Starter
tutuhaha
lou shang ni xiang shuo de zhi you zhe xie me
la me jiu mei jian ni jiu xiang shuo zhe ge
da ni o!
cmn_891127
- 好久没有抢你的沙发了呢~(~ ̄▽ ̄)~
- 楼上你想说的只有这些么(¬_¬) 辣么久没见你就想说这个(╰_╯)# 个打你哦(。_°☆╲(- – )

[Hard]
01:26:419 (1,2,1,2) - clap, clap, clap, finish+clap
00:05:794 (4,1) - 00:06:865 (3,1) - 同样的排列,不同的节奏,容易误解啦~把NC下到00:05:794 (4) - 这个上面会比较好
00:14:365 (4,1) - 这里也是啦
01:04:722 (3,1,2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2999161
01:17:312 (4) - 这个需要用到sampleset normal么?

[Insane]
00:18:785 (x) - 可以加一个note,不过不加也无所谓啦
01:19:321 (2) - hard里面是用的normal sample的

[Nomral]
太胖了,CS3吧
01:22:267 (1) - 我觉得还是结束到01:26:419 (1),最后可以再加note嘛

[Easy]
00:52:133 (1,2,1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2999211,https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2999213
AIR
sibushizhinengyongping音啊,我还是好好说话吧
[Easy]
  1. 01:10:347 (3) - 这个位置尾部大白总觉得不太爽啊,妮可以试下上3/4折返或者直接这样过渡
[Normal]
  1. 00:40:347 (3) - 略别扭,可以右弯对着下个圈
  2. 00:47:847 (1) - 和这部分挺像00:52:133 (1) - ,建议上1/2
[Hard]
  1. 00:15:437 (5,1) - 这俩读起来有点昏,建议一样的ds
  2. 00:18:785 (3) - 可以添个圈在下个条头部
  3. 01:17:178 (3,4) - 4头部音效挪3
  4. 开启dt直接爆炸orz
[Insane]
  1. 00:18:919 (1) - 改跳表现力好些,好像也差不多
  2. 美丽
Zero__wind

cmn_891127 wrote:

- 好久没有抢你的沙发了呢~(~ ̄▽ ̄)~
- 楼上你想说的只有这些么(¬_¬)辣么就没见你就想说这(╰_╯)#个打你哦(。_°☆╲(- – )
General
S:C2的clap感觉不是很合曲啊 而且有点轻了 考虑换一个

Easy
00:44:633 (2) - 把第二个红点调到00:45:437 - 这个时间?更合曲一些
01:22:133 (1) - 这个不需要调音量啊 降到10%反而太违和了 就60%从头到尾我觉得就不错

Normal
OD最好调到4 spread好一些
这diff明显做太简单了 坐等被QAT们打死 你好歹要放一些连续的二分拍circle啦 不然让人如何直视Hard里面的串子 友情建议把Normal修到2.0星左右以保证人身安全 可以的话把CS调到3
00:37:133 (1,2,3) - 感觉摆得不太流畅 2和3应该一起往上来一些 打起来会更舒服一些
当下没太多可说的 在Normal自创节奏也不是很稳妥吧

Hard
OD最好调成6因为毕竟Insane用的8
00:15:169 (4,5) - 这种串子之后原地stack放在Hard感觉非常不人道 扔到(488,96)附近自然些
00:15:705 (1,2,3,1) - 这样各种叠在一起的放在Hard也是有点难读图的 或许把后面的1挪开
00:26:955 (1) - 可以考虑删掉这个note降低点难度
01:11:017 (3) - 用normal合曲噢
01:21:062 (1,2,3) - 这个梗 怎么说呢 我一开始看到这里觉得是没什么问题的 但当我看完了Insane 什么 怎么比Insane还难 这简单不科学。强烈建议你把Insane和Hard里这个地方的梗互换一下。 Hard的滑条从里往外 Insane从外往里
01:26:419 (1,2,1,2) - 怎么没加音效呢>_<

Insane
00:13:026 (2) - 我一般都是不挑滑条形状的不过这个实在是画的… orz
00:18:919 (1,2) - 尾巴上用normal跟鼓吧 两个都是
00:27:624 (2) - 有点难打= = 考虑往右挪点 间距稍微小一些 比如跟3和4摆个等边三角形啥的
00:58:294 (4,1) - 感觉很卡手 考虑把1重新摆一下?
01:00:705 (1) - 这个也是有点难…我就miss这一个地方 不过算是可以接受吧

就这些吧 spread堪忧
xxdeathx
M4M from your queue 22haha! Nice song, I like it~

[General]
  1. Are you using Chinese simplified characters for the artist name? 藍井エイル is the Japanese one, but your 蓝 is different
  2. How come romanized title has tv size ver but not title? Check this, idk i'm bad at japanese http://www.arslan.jp/products/music.html
  3. Romanized japanese anime name is Arslan Senki, add to tags
[Easy]
good

[Normal]
good

[Hard]
  1. 00:14:365 (4,1) - Mistaken stack?
  2. 00:15:169 (4,5) - This stack is hard to read, I suggest separating
  3. 00:15:705 (1,2,3,1) - This overlap is really hard to read, it's best to change this pattern
  4. 01:00:705 (1,2,3,4) - Use DS or NC (4) suggested
  5. 01:22:267 (1,1) - The post-spinner gap is a little small for a hard imo. 1/2 beat at 112 bpm is equivalent to 1 beat at 224 bpm, but that's high enough bpm that there should be more time.
[Insane]
  1. 00:05:526 (2,3,1) - I suggest either using consistent DS, stacking two of them, or making the 1/4 jump much bigger because as it stands right now it's hard to read different gaps but same spacing
  2. 00:56:419 (1,2) - These vocals are pretty strong, I think they'd be better as circle jumps. And maybe change 00:56:151 (5,6) - to slider since this is weaker.
Good diffs but the spread between Normal and Hard is too big. Hard has quite a bit of 1/4 rhythms and circles while Normal is all 1/2 and 1/1. You'll need to add more 1/4 rhythms to a significant amount of places in Normal (or a new diff between N and H). If you fix the spread I'll be willing to recheck when map has enough SP.
Owntrolf
00:12:490 (2) - Maybe add finish on the head
Untick widescreen support for Easy Normal Hard?

  • Easy

    00:35:526 (2,3) - Better blanket?
    00:46:776 (2) - Maybe move to the right a little bit more so that it purple1 to purple 2 is better
    00:52:133 (1) - Maybe rotate this so that blue4 goes to pink1 better, (rotate about -55deg clockwise)

  • Normal

    00:23:205 (2) - Maybe move this to the right a little bit
    00:40:347 (3,4) - Maybe angle snap 4
    00:56:687 (1) - Maybe move this up by about 2 px so that its the sme height as yellow3
    01:18:919 (2) - Maybe angle snap with purple1

  • Hard

    I dont really like the short stacking because I keep thinking that its a double like 00:06:865 (3,1) - or it feels faster than it is like 00:44:365 (3,1) -
    01:26:419 (1,2,1,2) - NOOOOO end spinner notes :d my feels http://puu.sh/h0zAp/3c3f2d6c3b.mp4
    01:02:044 - and pink1,2,3,4 Maybe change to this because a note for yozora and I dont think theres sound at 01:02:446 (2) -

  • Insane

    00:41:151 (2,3,1) - Perfect triangle?
    01:01:776 (1) - Maybe change it so that we can click yozora

    my feels for notes after final spinners
Topic Starter
tutuhaha

Owntrolf wrote:

00:12:490 (2) - Maybe add finish on the headhmmm...nope
Untick widescreen support for Easy Normal Hard?fix

  • Easy

    00:35:526 (2,3) - Better blanket?FIX
    00:46:776 (2) - Maybe move to the right a little bit more so that it purple1 to purple 2 is betterFIX
    00:52:133 (1) - Maybe rotate this so that blue4 goes to pink1 better, (rotate about -55deg clockwise)hmmm....I think is ok now

  • Normal

    fix
    00:23:205 (2) - Maybe move this to the right a little bit
    00:40:347 (3,4) - Maybe angle snap 4
    00:56:687 (1) - Maybe move this up by about 2 px so that its the sme height as yellow3
    01:18:919 (2) - Maybe angle snap with purple1

  • Hard

    fix
    I dont really like the short stacking because I keep thinking that its a double like 00:06:865 (3,1) - or it feels faster than it is like 00:44:365 (3,1) -
    01:26:419 (1,2,1,2) - NOOOOO end spinner notes :d my feels http://puu.sh/h0zAp/3c3f2d6c3b.mp4
    01:02:044 - and pink1,2,3,4 Maybe change to this because a note for yozora and I dont think theres sound at 01:02:446 (2) -

  • Insane

    00:41:151 (2,3,1) - Perfect triangle?fix
    01:01:776 (1) - Maybe change it so that we can click yozora fix

    my feels for notes after final spinnersfix

xxdeathx wrote:

M4M from your queue 22haha! Nice song, I like it~

[General]
  1. Are you using Chinese simplified characters for the artist name? 藍井エイル is the Japanese one, but your 蓝 is different
  2. How come romanized title has tv size ver but not title? Check this, idk i'm bad at japanese http://www.arslan.jp/products/music.html
  3. Romanized japanese anime name is Arslan Senki, add to tags
[Easy]
good

[Normal]
good

[Hard]fix
  1. 00:14:365 (4,1) - Mistaken stack?
  2. 00:15:169 (4,5) - This stack is hard to read, I suggest separating
  3. 00:15:705 (1,2,3,1) - This overlap is really hard to read, it's best to change this pattern
  4. 01:00:705 (1,2,3,4) - Use DS or NC (4) suggested
  5. 01:22:267 (1,1) - The post-spinner gap is a little small for a hard imo. 1/2 beat at 112 bpm is equivalent to 1 beat at 224 bpm, but that's high enough bpm that there should be more time.
[Insane]
  1. 00:05:526 (2,3,1) - I suggest either using consistent DS, stacking two of them, or making the 1/4 jump much bigger because as it stands right now it's hard to read different gaps but same spacingfix
  2. 00:56:419 (1,2) - These vocals are pretty strong, I think they'd be better as circle jumps. And maybe change 00:56:151 (5,6) - to slider since this is weaker.
fix
Good diffs but the spread between Normal and Hard is too big. Hard has quite a bit of 1/4 rhythms and circles while Normal is all 1/2 and 1/1. You'll need to add more 1/4 rhythms to a significant amount of places in Normal (or a new diff between N and H). If you fix the spread I'll be willing to recheck when map has enough SP.dont wrong, I already call luka help me to make another normal :D

Zero__wind wrote:

cmn_891127 wrote:

- 好久没有抢你的沙发了呢~(~ ̄▽ ̄)~
- 楼上你想说的只有这些么(¬_¬)辣么就没见你就想说这(╰_╯)#个打你哦(。_°☆╲(- – )
General
S:C2的clap感觉不是很合曲啊 而且有点轻了 考虑换一个

Easy
00:44:633 (2) - 把第二个红点调到00:45:437 - 这个时间?更合曲一些FIX
01:22:133 (1) - 这个不需要调音量啊 降到10%反而太违和了 就60%从头到尾我觉得就不错恩估计也是,换了换了

Normalfix
OD最好调到4 spread好一些
这diff明显做太简单了 坐等被QAT们打死 你好歹要放一些连续的二分拍circle啦 不然让人如何直视Hard里面的串子 友情建议把Normal修到2.0星左右以保证人身安全 可以的话把CS调到3
00:37:133 (1,2,3) - 感觉摆得不太流畅 2和3应该一起往上来一些 打起来会更舒服一些
当下没太多可说的 在Normal自创节奏也不是很稳妥吧

Hardfix
OD最好调成6因为毕竟Insane用的8
00:15:169 (4,5) - 这种串子之后原地stack放在Hard感觉非常不人道 扔到(488,96)附近自然些
00:15:705 (1,2,3,1) - 这样各种叠在一起的放在Hard也是有点难读图的 或许把后面的1挪开
00:26:955 (1) - 可以考虑删掉这个note降低点难度
01:11:017 (3) - 用normal合曲噢
01:21:062 (1,2,3) - 这个梗 怎么说呢 我一开始看到这里觉得是没什么问题的 但当我看完了Insane 什么 怎么比Insane还难 这简单不科学。强烈建议你把Insane和Hard里这个地方的梗互换一下。 Hard的滑条从里往外 Insane从外往里
01:26:419 (1,2,1,2) - 怎么没加音效呢>_<

Insane
00:13:026 (2) - 我一般都是不挑滑条形状的不过这个实在是画的… orzfix
00:18:919 (1,2) - 尾巴上用normal跟鼓吧 两个都是fix
00:27:624 (2) - 有点难打= = 考虑往右挪点 间距稍微小一些 比如跟3和4摆个等边三角形啥的fix
00:58:294 (4,1) - 感觉很卡手 考虑把1重新摆一下?fix
01:00:705 (1) - 这个也是有点难…我就miss这一个地方 不过算是可以接受吧fix
就这些吧 spread堪忧

cmn_891127 wrote:

- 好久没有抢你的沙发了呢~(~ ̄▽ ̄)~
- 楼上你想说的只有这些么(¬_¬) 辣么久没见你就想说这个(╰_╯)# 个打你哦(。_°☆╲(- – )

[Hard]fix
01:26:419 (1,2,1,2) - clap, clap, clap, finish+clapfix
00:05:794 (4,1) - 00:06:865 (3,1) - 同样的排列,不同的节奏,容易误解啦~把NC下到00:05:794 (4) - 这个上面会比较好
00:14:365 (4,1) - 这里也是啦
01:04:722 (3,1,2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2999161
01:17:312 (4) - 这个需要用到sampleset normal么?这个...倒是不怎么需要我觉得

[Insane]
00:18:785 (x) - 可以加一个note,不过不加也无所谓啦嘛..这个就算了
01:19:321 (2) - hard里面是用的normal sample的Hard的改了一下

[Nomral]fix
太胖了,CS3吧
01:22:267 (1) - 我觉得还是结束到01:26:419 (1),最后可以再加note嘛

[Easy]
00:52:133 (1,2,1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2999211,https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2999213FIX
Thankyou for mod
Topic Starter
tutuhaha
Add Luka's light Hard, and I get permission to help her fix the mod
yeah~
Megurine Luka
cmn卖萌天赋已点满
Ipas
Hi!~
M4M from #modreqs xDDD
I like the song :3

Let's Go~

Easy:
  1. 00:02:312 (1) - I think if this putted on the left side should be more better :3
  2. 00:11:419 (1,2) - Not symmetry? I prefer symmetry
  3. 00:44:633 (2) - Try this :3 *Pointed by my cursor* : http://puu.sh/haGnn/450f67289c.jpg
All is good :3 Just personal preferences at this xD

Normal:
Umm, I want to ask question first. If the BPM of the song is higher than this song, could I use the same DS like this song?
Just that :3
  1. 00:30:705 (1,2) - I prefer not to use this sliderstyle at here though . I think it will be interfere your flow preferences
  2. 01:15:705 (1) - After looked at this, this sliderstyle seems to be like doesn't fits with the song . I think you should change this but, you also can keep it
  3. 01:21:463 (3) - Is this okay? What I know is you can't put circle at blue tick on Normal & Easy difficulties . If this okay you may keep this but I prefer to change it into a slider since this map has low BPM
All is good too :3

Luka's light Hard:
  1. 00:02:847 - Start at here, please . If you want to keep it, please change the slider to the circle so you can put NC at 00:02:847 -
  2. 00:09:276 (1) - For consistency, remove NC at here because the previous rhythm using 6 combos
  3. 00:15:705 (3) - Move NC to here then remove NC on 00:15:169 (1) -
  4. 00:26:419 (1,2) - I think you can make the slider more reversed
  5. 00:29:901 (3,1) - How about blanket?
  6. 00:47:847 (1,2) - Please, don't overlap these notes
  7. 01:01:776 (2,3) - You can put up NC at these notes
  8. 01:15:437 (1,2) - Swap NC
  9. 01:22:133 (6) - NC?

Your Hard and your Insane seems to be hard to mod because of its flow .-.

Okay :3
Good Luck :3
Please, tolerance with my English .-. I'm bad at experienced English .-.
Shushan
from your m4m queue!
easy
00:21:062 (2,1) - fix blanket
00:25:347 (3,1) - blanket those?
00:30:705 (1,2) - swap nc?
00:37:133 (1,2) - blanket those?
00:57:490 (3,1) - fix blanket?
01:02:847 (1,2) - http://prntscr.com/6sqiyj for better flow?
01:10:347 (3) - if you click on this anchor with the right click of the mouse http://prntscr.com/6sqj6l and then curve more this anchor to the left http://prntscr.com/6sqji3 ull have a nice blanket! http://prntscr.com/6sqjmp
normal
00:25:347 (2,1) - fix blanket
00:28:294 (4) - maybe fix :?: ds with the last one? i think its to high (the prev)
00:30:437 (3) - ^^
00:37:937 (2,3) - fix blanket
00:40:347 (3) - curve the other way for better flow?
00:59:633 (3) - 50 44 for better symmetry
01:04:990 (1,2) - blanket fix pls
01:08:205 (2,1) - ^^
01:10:347 (3,1) - ^^
01:12:490 (3) - ds fix pls
01:14:097 (2,3) - fix blanket
01:16:508 (2,3) - ^^
light hard
00:04:722 (4,5) - fix blanket
00:20:526 (2,3) - ^^
00:22:133 (1,2) - ^^
00:26:419-its actually http://prntscr.com/6sqloe
00:28:294 (4,1) - fix blanket
00:38:205 (3,4,1) - blanket them?
00:58:294 (2,3) - fix blanket
01:03:651 (2,3) - ^^
01:10:080 (4,5) - ^^
01:17:580 (7,1) - ^^ pls
hard
01:07:803 (4,1) - blanket them?
01:17:312 (4) - x+4 stack?
01:25:615 and 01:25:883 you missed a beats
insane
00:11:419 (1,2) - fix blanket
00:41:285 (3,1) - swap nc?
00:48:249 (4) - 173 199?
01:12:490 (1,2) - fix blanket
gl!
Megurine Luka
01:27:490 (1) - 这里帮我加个note~我忘记啦
-Lemons
Hiyo, from your M4M queue
t/312198 My map

Easy
[General]
I only really noticed some minor aesthetic issues
[Modding Stuff]
00:14:633 (3) - Blanket
00:36:062 (3) - ^
00:38:205 (2) - ^
00:47:847 (1) - You could probably blanket 00:46:776 (2) - slider end with this slider
00:58:562 (1) - Blanket
00:59:633 (2) - I would use this slider to blanket 01:00:705 (1) -
01:10:347 (3) - I would touch up the blanket that you have on 01:11:955 (1) -
01:14:633 (2) - Straighten this up

Normal
[General]
I literally only found 1 issue with this map and it was extremely minor, good map
[Modding Stuff]
01:21:062 (2) - Blanket with 01:19:990 (1) - and then you'll have to fix your DS

Luka's light Hard
[General]
Good stuff, didn't notice much to fix
[Modding Stuff]
00:57:222 (5,6) - I think there should be a note in between these two sliders, really this is up to you how you want to do it
00:59:633 (5) - I don't see a reason for this slider kink, you should just do a blanketing slider of 00:59:365 (4) -
01:10:347 (5) - curve the slider more for a better blanket

Hard
[General]
Not much to say
[Modding Stuff]
01:00:705 (1,2,1,2) - These two look very similar while one of them is a 1/3 and the other is supposed to be a 1/2, I'd make the 01:01:508 (1,2) - either smaller or make it into a precision jump
01:17:044 (2) - I don't like having this stacked on 3

Insane
[General]
Some rhythm inconsistency here and there but I tried to point them out, give a quick aesthetics check for the rest of the map as I may have missed something
[Modding Stuff]
00:33:249 (2) - I don't know if the overlapping is the same on this note, it stood out to me but I might just be crazy
00:40:883 (1) - Move this slider so it's not touching 00:40:615 (2) -
00:42:222 (4,5) - Have these lead into the slider better
00:44:365 (3,1) - Don't have these overlap or have them stack, because you'll be prompted to do the same rhythm as the previous overlapping (like at 00:33:249 (2,3) - , except that there is the pause, so people will sliderbreak more than likely or press 1 too quickly thinking its the same rhythm
00:47:847 (1) - Same goes with this note
00:52:133 (1) - ^
00:59:901 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Clean this up
01:01:776 (1,2) - NC on both of these.
01:11:687 (2,3) - Clean these up
Mafumafu
Hi! There is Regraz's mod! :)
There is a few points of my mod:

  1. Thank you for requesting a mod from me! Mod is just a kind of suggestion, so feel free if you dont want to make change.
  2. I am still learning modding skills so I am sorry if I cannot provide much help.
  3. Same issues won’t be repeated unless they are in a GD.

General

  1. BG is 1365X768. Better to make it 1366X768.
  2. MP3 180kbps?

Easy

  1. 都是一分之一有点无聊啊,Kiai可以适当跟一下vocal的
  2. (Nazi) 00:35:526 (2,3) – Blanket. This is a little obvious, so I just point it out. Same at 00:57:490 (3,1) – and 00:59:633 (2,1) -.


Normal

  1. 00:05:526 (2) -3/4 seems a little weird, following the vocal or just using 1/2 is better imo. Same at 00:14:097 (2) -


Luka’s Hard

  1. 00:02:312 (1) – Leaving the vocal at 00:02:580 unmapped is a little weird, especially the vocal is apparent (coz there’re no instrument in this section). So I’d recommend take this reverse slider apart and map that vocal.
  2. 00:03:919 (3) – Add whistle on head.
  3. 00:04:722 (4) – Add whistle on reverse point.
  4. 00:21:062 (3) – Add whistle on head.
  5. 00:45:035 (1,1) – I think it is not necessary to NC at every note ;w;.
  6. 00:48:383 (2,3,4) – Try this? http://puu.sh/hdHl2/3a077fd684.jpg
  7. 01:01:106 (1,1,2) – NC at 01:01:776 (2) – instead of 01:01:508 (1) – to tell the rhythm change.
  8. 01:03:651 (2,3) - Blanket. This is a little obvious, so I just point it out.
  9. 01:10:347 (5) – NC here coz you changed into 3/4 rhythm here, also keep consistent with former sections.
  10. Uncheck wide-screen support.

Hard

  1. 00:07:535 (2) - Curve it
  2. 00:15:705 (1,2) - This spacing is a little hard to catch. Better to keep regular ds as former parts.
  3. 00:26:419 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Hmm this is a little...Err...Maybe you can make the stream DS lower. This is still too hard.
  4. 00:44:097 (1,2,3) - 1/4 jumps. Also too hard for Hard diff, though the star difficulty/BPM is not high.

Insane

  1. Nothing to say. The gap between Hard and Insane is a little big imo but I am not sure.

Good Luck!
Topic Starter
tutuhaha

Regraz wrote:

Hi! There is Regraz's mod! :)
There is a few points of my mod:

  1. Thank you for requesting a mod from me! Mod is just a kind of suggestion, so feel free if you dont want to make change.
  2. I am still learning modding skills so I am sorry if I cannot provide much help.
  3. Same issues won’t be repeated unless they are in a GD.

General

  1. BG is 1365X768. Better to make it 1366X768.
  2. MP3 180kbps?
mp3在128~192之间就行

Easy

  1. 都是一分之一有点无聊啊,Kiai可以适当跟一下vocal的......我努力过!
  2. (Nazi) 00:35:526 (2,3) – Blanket. This is a little obvious, so I just point it out. Same at 00:57:490 (3,1) – and 00:59:633 (2,1) -.


Normal

  1. 00:05:526 (2) -3/4 seems a little weird, following the vocal or just using 1/2 is better imo. Same at 00:14:097 (2) -


Luka’s Hard

  1. 00:02:312 (1) – Leaving the vocal at 00:02:580 unmapped is a little weird, especially the vocal is apparent (coz there’re no instrument in this section). So I’d recommend take this reverse slider apart and map that vocal.
  2. 00:03:919 (3) – Add whistle on head.这个我觉得还是..算了
  3. 00:04:722 (4) – Add whistle on reverse point. 这个也是
  4. 00:21:062 (3) – Add whistle on head.
  5. 00:45:035 (1,1) – I think it is not necessary to NC at every note ;w;.
  6. 00:48:383 (2,3,4) – Try this? http://puu.sh/hdHl2/3a077fd684.jpg
  7. 01:01:106 (1,1,2) – NC at 01:01:776 (2) – instead of 01:01:508 (1) – to tell the rhythm change.
  8. 01:03:651 (2,3) - Blanket. This is a little obvious, so I just point it out.
  9. 01:10:347 (5) – NC here coz you changed into 3/4 rhythm here, also keep consistent with former sections.
  10. Uncheck wide-screen support.

Hard

  1. 00:07:535 (2) - Curve it
  2. 00:15:705 (1,2) - This spacing is a little hard to catch. Better to keep regular ds as former parts.
  3. 00:26:419 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Hmm this is a little...Err...Maybe you can make the stream DS lower. This is still too hard.
  4. 00:44:097 (1,2,3) - 1/4 jumps. Also too hard for Hard diff, though the star difficulty/BPM is not high.

Insane

  1. Nothing to say. The gap between Hard and Insane is a little big imo but I am not sure.
这个应该不是啥大问题

Good Luck!
Then fix all

-Lemons wrote:

Hiyo, from your M4M queue
t/312198 My map

Easy
[General]
I only really noticed some minor aesthetic issues
[Modding Stuff]
00:14:633 (3) - Blanket
00:36:062 (3) - ^
00:38:205 (2) - ^
00:47:847 (1) - You could probably blanket 00:46:776 (2) - slider end with this slider
00:58:562 (1) - Blanket
00:59:633 (2) - I would use this slider to blanket 01:00:705 (1) -
01:10:347 (3) - I would touch up the blanket that you have on 01:11:955 (1) -
01:14:633 (2) - Straighten this up

Normal
[General]
I literally only found 1 issue with this map and it was extremely minor, good map
[Modding Stuff]
01:21:062 (2) - Blanket with 01:19:990 (1) - and then you'll have to fix your DS

Luka's light Hard
[General]
Good stuff, didn't notice much to fix
[Modding Stuff]
00:57:222 (5,6) - I think there should be a note in between these two sliders, really this is up to you how you want to do it
00:59:633 (5) - I don't see a reason for this slider kink, you should just do a blanketing slider of 00:59:365 (4) -
01:10:347 (5) - curve the slider more for a better blanket

Hard
[General]
Not much to say
[Modding Stuff]
01:00:705 (1,2,1,2) - These two look very similar while one of them is a 1/3 and the other is supposed to be a 1/2, I'd make the 01:01:508 (1,2) - either smaller or make it into a precision jump
01:17:044 (2) - I don't like having this stacked on 3

Insane
[General]
Some rhythm inconsistency here and there but I tried to point them out, give a quick aesthetics check for the rest of the map as I may have missed something
[Modding Stuff]
00:33:249 (2) - I don't know if the overlapping is the same on this note, it stood out to me but I might just be crazy
00:40:883 (1) - Move this slider so it's not touching 00:40:615 (2) -
00:42:222 (4,5) - Have these lead into the slider better
00:44:365 (3,1) - Don't have these overlap or have them stack, because you'll be prompted to do the same rhythm as the previous overlapping (like at 00:33:249 (2,3) - , except that there is the pause, so people will sliderbreak more than likely or press 1 too quickly thinking its the same rhythm
00:47:847 (1) - Same goes with this note
00:52:133 (1) - ^
00:59:901 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Clean this up
01:01:776 (1,2) - NC on both of these.
01:11:687 (2,3) - Clean these up
fix some blanket

ohad1881 wrote:

from your m4m queue!
easy
00:21:062 (2,1) - fix blanket
00:25:347 (3,1) - blanket those?
00:30:705 (1,2) - swap nc?
00:37:133 (1,2) - blanket those?
00:57:490 (3,1) - fix blanket?
01:02:847 (1,2) - http://prntscr.com/6sqiyj for better flow?
01:10:347 (3) - if you click on this anchor with the right click of the mouse http://prntscr.com/6sqj6l and then curve more this anchor to the left http://prntscr.com/6sqji3 ull have a nice blanket! http://prntscr.com/6sqjmp
normal
00:25:347 (2,1) - fix blanket
00:28:294 (4) - maybe fix :?: ds with the last one? i think its to high (the prev)
00:30:437 (3) - ^^
00:37:937 (2,3) - fix blanket
00:40:347 (3) - curve the other way for better flow?
00:59:633 (3) - 50 44 for better symmetry
01:04:990 (1,2) - blanket fix pls
01:08:205 (2,1) - ^^
01:10:347 (3,1) - ^^
01:12:490 (3) - ds fix pls
01:14:097 (2,3) - fix blanket
01:16:508 (2,3) - ^^
light hard
00:04:722 (4,5) - fix blanket
00:20:526 (2,3) - ^^
00:22:133 (1,2) - ^^
00:26:419-its actually http://prntscr.com/6sqloe
00:28:294 (4,1) - fix blanket
00:38:205 (3,4,1) - blanket them?
00:58:294 (2,3) - fix blanket
01:03:651 (2,3) - ^^
01:10:080 (4,5) - ^^
01:17:580 (7,1) - ^^ pls
hard
01:07:803 (4,1) - blanket them?
01:17:312 (4) - x+4 stack?
01:25:615 and 01:25:883 you missed a beats
insane
00:11:419 (1,2) - fix blanket
00:41:285 (3,1) - swap nc?
00:48:249 (4) - 173 199?
01:12:490 (1,2) - fix blanket
gl!
fix some blanket

NewIpas wrote:

Hi!~
M4M from #modreqs xDDD
I like the song :3

Let's Go~

Easy:
  1. 00:02:312 (1) - I think if this putted on the left side should be more better :3
  2. 00:11:419 (1,2) - Not symmetry? I prefer symmetry
  3. 00:44:633 (2) - Try this :3 *Pointed by my cursor* : http://puu.sh/haGnn/450f67289c.jpg
All is good :3 Just personal preferences at this xD

Normal:
Umm, I want to ask question first. If the BPM of the song is higher than this song, could I use the same DS like this song?
Just that :3
  1. 00:30:705 (1,2) - I prefer not to use this sliderstyle at here though . I think it will be interfere your flow preferences
  2. 01:15:705 (1) - After looked at this, this sliderstyle seems to be like doesn't fits with the song . I think you should change this but, you also can keep it
  3. 01:21:463 (3) - Is this okay? What I know is you can't put circle at blue tick on Normal & Easy difficulties . If this okay you may keep this but I prefer to change it into a slider since this map has low BPM
All is good too :3

Luka's light Hard:
  1. 00:02:847 - Start at here, please . If you want to keep it, please change the slider to the circle so you can put NC at 00:02:847 -...I think it still work
  2. 00:09:276 (1) - For consistency, remove NC at here because the previous rhythm using 6 combos
  3. 00:15:705 (3) - Move NC to here then remove NC on 00:15:169 (1) - I think it should be fine....
  4. 00:26:419 (1,2) - I think you can make the slider more reversed
  5. 00:29:901 (3,1) - How about blanket?
  6. 00:47:847 (1,2) - Please, don't overlap these noteshmmm...keep it
  7. 01:01:776 (2,3) - You can put up NC at these notes
  8. 01:15:437 (1,2) - Swap NC
  9. 01:22:133 (6) - NC?

Your Hard and your Insane seems to be hard to mod because of its flow .-.

Okay :3
Good Luck :3
Please, tolerance with my English .-. I'm bad at experienced English .-.
and then fix some blanket and NC stuff
Axey
<3 我也挺想做这歌的 2ha开坑就是效率:D
xxdeathx
recheck

[General]
  1. Capitalize Light Hard?
  2. i don't think title is right because of parentheses, somebody who knows japanese will need to see what this says:
[Easy]
  1. 00:32:847 (1) - extra slider point?
[Hard]
  1. 01:01:508 (1,2,1) - all swap nc
  2. 00:26:419 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - just a little too much for a hard diff imo. it's a long 112 bpm stream or a lot of 224 bpm single tap 1/2 circles. i really want to change some of these to sliders to make it easier
  3. 01:06:330 - 01:05:928 i strongly suggest removing these claps, since it sounds out of place and isn't in the music.
  4. 01:07:535 (3,5) - i also don't think claps belong here for the same reason.
  5. 01:08:606 - ^ this section should follow the same 2-and-4 clap hitsounding pattern that you had earlier in kiai. clap should be on 01:08:740
  6. 01:09:008 (3) - also remove clap
  7. 01:14:499 (1,2) - ^
  8. 01:16:106 (2,3,4) - ^ clap should be on 01:16:240
  9. 01:21:062 (1,2,3) - blanket?
if you have similar clap patterns in other diffs, please change them too. i remembered let me hear being dqed for hitsounding so i'm being extra careful ;A;

[Insane]
  1. 00:31:776 (1,2,3,4,5) - 4 1/4 circles in a row is really hard for the slow part of the song imo
  2. 00:40:883 (1) - i think ctrl-g makes it more fun to play this pattern
  3. 00:42:222 (4,5,1) - 01:11:687 (2,3,4) - this spacing looks like 1/8, maybe stack or separate more?
  4. 01:08:606 - i strongly suggest removing clap from head, since it sounds out of place and isn't in the music. the clap belongs at 01:08:740 tbh
  5. most of insane hitsounding follows music, but i wrote in hard diff some more that you can apply
Hmm I still think Hard is a little too far from light hard in difficulty spread. Hard has a lot of 1/4 rhythms and circles, so you should remove/simplify some rhythms that aren't really strong in the music. things like 00:29:231 (3) - 00:30:035 (3) - 00:32:044 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 00:43:963 (2,1,2,3) - change to sliders or something. just a little.
Topic Starter
tutuhaha

xxdeathx wrote:

recheck

[General]
  1. Capitalize Light Hard?
  2. i don't think title is right because of parentheses, somebody who knows japanese will need to see what this says:
I will ask somebody come to check title

[Easy]
  1. 00:32:847 (1) - extra slider point?
how can you find it 23333 fix

[Hard]
  1. 01:01:508 (1,2,1) - all swap nc
  2. 00:26:419 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - just a little too much for a hard diff imo. it's a long 112 bpm stream or a lot of 224 bpm single tap 1/2 circles. i really want to change some of these to sliders to make it easier
  3. 01:06:330 - 01:05:928 i strongly suggest removing these claps, since it sounds out of place and isn't in the music.
  4. 01:07:535 (3,5) - i also don't think claps belong here for the same reason.
  5. 01:08:606 - ^ this section should follow the same 2-and-4 clap hitsounding pattern that you had earlier in kiai. clap should be on 01:08:740
  6. 01:09:008 (3) - also remove clap
  7. 01:14:499 (1,2) - ^
  8. 01:16:106 (2,3,4) - ^ clap should be on 01:16:240
  9. 01:21:062 (1,2,3) - blanket?
hmm....they are not..actually around the slider so.......
if you have similar clap patterns in other diffs, please change them too. i remembered let me hear being dqed for hitsounding so i'm being extra careful ;A;
fix all
[Insane]
  1. 00:31:776 (1,2,3,4,5) - 4 1/4 circles in a row is really hard for the slow part of the song imo fix
  2. 00:40:883 (1) - i think ctrl-g makes it more fun to play this patterneh....I dont think so _(:зゝ∠)_...
  3. 00:42:222 (4,5,1) - 01:11:687 (2,3,4) - this spacing looks like 1/8, maybe stack or separate more?fix
  4. 01:08:606 - i strongly suggest removing clap from head, since it sounds out of place and isn't in the music. the clap belongs at 01:08:740 tbhfix
  5. most of insane hitsounding follows music, but i wrote in hard diff some more that you can apply
Hmm I still think Hard is a little too far from light hard in difficulty spread. Hard has a lot of 1/4 rhythms and circles, so you should remove/simplify some rhythms that aren't really strong in the music. things like 00:29:231 (3) - 00:30:035 (3) - 00:32:044 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 00:43:963 (2,1,2,3) - change to sliders or something. just a little.
xxdeathx
Title: ラピスラズリ(TV size ver.)

http://www.sonymusic.co.jp/artist/aoiei ... /SECL-1675 (Thanks Lanturn!)

Bubbled!!

To next BN: try to get official/japanese BN/QAT's confirmation on romanized title, since all the official sites we found only have the katakana title
blueloniess
yoho~~
来摸图啦~
luka
00:00:705 - 00:02:044 - 这里到这里空着?感觉这里可以放点东西啊
00:02:312 (1) - 这个滑条在这里开头好别扭啊,移动到这里如何?00:02:044 -
00:58:562 (3,4,5) - 做个闭合的环吧?
01:07:669 (2,3) - 平行一下?
01:09:008 (4,4) - 可以考虑叠在一起
图很不错啊,没什么问题的说~O(∩_∩)O :D
Kodora
CS 4.0 (or at least 3.5) on Normal would work better imo, and I's suggest increase HP Drain & OD by 1 for better spread. Also, please consider previous mod for Luka's Hard. I'll try out to help with title.

Call me back when you're ready~
Topic Starter
tutuhaha

Kodora wrote:

CS 4.0 (or at least 3.5) on Normal would work better imo, and I's suggest increase HP Drain & OD by 1 for better spread. Also, please consider previous mod for Luka's Hard. I'll try out to help with title.

Call me back when you're ready~
fix all _(:зゝ∠)_
baobao _(:зゝ∠)_
Megurine Luka
baobao _(:зゝ∠)_
Megurine Luka
我的难度里

00:09:276 (4,5) - 拉歪了



00:11:151 (1) - 有点危险,稍微往上抬一格或者两格
00:48:785 (3) - 往右一格

=,= 辛苦了
Topic Starter
tutuhaha

Megurine Luka wrote:

我的难度里

00:09:276 (4,5) - 拉歪了



00:11:151 (1) - 有点危险,稍微往上抬一格或者两格
00:48:785 (3) - 往右一格

=,= 辛苦了
自己给自己的diff nazi是几个意思啦
fix
IamKwaN
hi there, metadata check as requested.
Unicode Title: ラピスラズリ (TV size ver.)
Romanised Title: Lapis Lazuli (TV size ver.)
Unicode Artist: 藍井エイル
Romanised Artist: Aoi Eir
Kodora
<3
Topic Starter
tutuhaha
yeah!
meii18
Congratz tutuhaha :3

EDIT: New page \o/
Topic Starter
tutuhaha

ByBy_ChAn wrote:

Congratz tutuhaha :3

EDIT: New page \o/
\o/thanks
HabiHolic
Gratz tutuhahahahahahahahahahaha
Starfall9908
Congrats :3

Nevermind the Fact that the first thing I thought when I saw the title of the song was Minecraft
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