1. there's 2 spaces between your three and Highschool DxD tags please delete one space lol

1. 00:05:243 (2) - : the clap and vocal sound start on 00:05:085 - so highly recommended to move this slider and make it 1/1 and add clap to both tail and head
2. 00:16:769 (1) - : add finish to make consistency of your previous finish pattern? and it supported the music too
3. 00:31:454 (1) - : well since this is the easiest diff with bpm 190 and all of your previous pattern is nonstop slider (which i can say it's a bit hard for easy player), how about revert this one to 1 circle on 00:31:927 - ? i meant come on its easy ;-;
4. 00:43:769 (3) - : this slider plays awkward for me, it didn't followed your pattern and music very well. change this into 1 circle on 00:43:927 - and add clap would support both music and vocal better! also it's easy diff so adding some rest would be good~
5. 00:46:296 (3) - : same as this one, but since there's 2 drum sound there so how about rearrange like this? (just start the slider on 00:46:454 - and add clap on both sides)
   

1. 00:25:612 (4) - : the music is pretty quiet here so remove whistle would be good! adding whistle is too loud for me u_u"
2. 01:00:980 (3) - : how about copy slider on 00:59:717 (1) - and paste it here? it'll make good flow imo
3. 01:08:401 (3) - : add finish would support music and vocal better
4. 01:13:454 (3) - : ^

1. 00:07:454 (3) - : plays awkward for me to play up-down-up flow like (2) (3) (1) (specially (3) to (1)). so how about rearrange slider (3) like this?
   
2. 00:12:348 (3) - : what's the point to make this 1,51x ds? o3o i think put this on 72 304 would make better flow (it'll make good blanket for (2) too owo" and ofc you need to rearrange next note)
3. 00:49:612 (1) - : ctrl+< ?
4. 01:08:401 (1) - : same as normal
5. 01:13:454 (1) - : ^

1. 00:05:401 - : add drum-clap? it'll support the music better if you listened to 50% playback :3
2. 00:10:296 (1) - : add finish to support the music?
3. 00:17:875 (1) - : ^
4. 00:23:875 (4) - : ctrl+g would make better jump
5. 01:08:401 (1) - : same as normal
6. 01:13:454 (1) - : ^

2. 01:08:401 (1) - : same as normal
3. 01:13:454 (1) - : ^
4. 01:10:612 - : add whistle like you did on 01:07:769 (2,3) -
5. 01:17:085 (1,2,1) - : how about rearrange like this? it'll make more challenging lol current flow plays awkward imo ><" (and you can ctrl+h slider (2) 01:17:717 - and put on 376 344)
   
   SPOILER

   

Kinshara wrote:

Can I make extra

/me runs

10nya wrote:

from your queue

[General]

1. there's 2 spaces between your three and Highschool DxD tags please delete one space lol lol k

[Easy]

1. 00:05:243 (2) - : the clap and vocal sound start on 00:05:085 - so highly recommended to move this slider and make it 1/1 and add clap to both tail and head nah this sound is stronger
2. 00:16:769 (1) - : add finish to make consistency of your previous finish pattern? and it supported the music too k
3. 00:31:454 (1) - : well since this is the easiest diff with bpm 190 and all of your previous pattern is nonstop slider (which i can say it's a bit hard for easy player), how about revert this one to 1 circle on 00:31:927 - ? i meant come on its easy ;-; not rly
4. 00:43:769 (3) - : this slider plays awkward for me, it didn't followed your pattern and music very well. change this into 1 circle on 00:43:927 - and add clap would support both music and vocal better! also it's easy diff so adding some rest would be good~ did smthing
5. 00:46:296 (3) - : same as this one, but since there's 2 drum sound there so how about rearrange like this? (just start the slider on 00:46:454 - and add clap on both sides) this one is fine.
   

[Meyrink's Normal]

1. 00:25:612 (4) - : the music is pretty quiet here so remove whistle would be good! adding whistle is too loud for me u_u"
2. 01:00:980 (3) - : how about copy slider on 00:59:717 (1) - and paste it here? it'll make good flow imo
3. 01:08:401 (3) - : add finish would support music and vocal better
4. 01:13:454 (3) - : ^

[Hard]

1. 00:07:454 (3) - : plays awkward for me to play up-down-up flow like (2) (3) (1) (specially (3) to (1)). so how about rearrange slider (3) like this? circular flow.
   
2. 00:12:348 (3) - : what's the point to make this 1,51x ds? o3o i think put this on 72 304 would make better flow (it'll make good blanket for (2) too owo" and ofc you need to rearrange next note) why not o/
3. 00:49:612 (1) - : ctrl+< ? k
4. 01:08:401 (1) - : same as normal sounds awkward to me
5. 01:13:454 (1) - : ^

[Insane]

2. 01:08:401 (1) - : same as normal
3. 01:13:454 (1) - : ^
4. 01:10:612 - : add whistle like you did on 01:07:769 (2,3) - k
5. 01:17:085 (1,2,1) - : how about rearrange like this? it'll make more challenging lol current flow plays awkward imo ><" (and you can ctrl+h slider (2) 01:17:717 - and put on 376 344) nah its okay imo
   
   SPOILER

   

sorry for the poor mod and good luck

ohad1881 wrote:

hi there!
from my m4m queue! https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/304087/start=75
easy
00:04:138 (1) - fix DS this is readable.
00:34:454 (5) - remove nc and start nc here 00:36:033 (7) - that breaks my nc pattern of every 2 measures
00:56:559 (1,3) - overlap these are perfectly readable
00:58:138 (3,2) - ^^

hard- ar 8? ok
00:29:401 (1) - 391 106 better flow? flow break for emphasis :3
sorry i suck

insane
00:12:190 (2,4) - make them the same? yeh but this looks good too
00:45:190 (1) - remove nc? uhh this follows my w/e messed up nc pattern i have
00:50:559 (4,1) - blanket? don't like it.
sorry for the bad mod
ill send you my map in PM
gl and nice map!

zj0924 wrote:

Hi!M4M From your queue

Default = Normal mods
Blue = Strongly recommended
Red = Unrankable issue

[General]

• 
  Fine~

[Easy]

1. Sound effects:
   1. 00:14:243 (1) - add clap? ye
   2. 00:31:927 (1) - maybe add finish on tail can make a good transition？cuz 00:31:927 (1) -to 00:32:243 (2) - is unatural when playing due to the rhythm.so add a finish can reduce the weird feeling imo eh don't hear one
   3. 01:08:470 (2) - sampleset-normal maybe duang"ding" is more suitable here imo ^
   4. 01:09:190 (3) - remove "ding"(sampleset-auto) but i hear a ding :C
   5. 01:10:927 (3) - ding same VVVV
   6. 01:13:491 (2) - ding
   7. 01:14:875 (1) - ding on the head
2. 00:42:033 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - rhythm a little confusing here,maybe following vocal is more clickable? fix both
   
3. 01:19:927 (1,2) - confusing rhythm imo,try this?
   

[Hard]

1. 00:12:664 (4) - remove ding on tail fits music tho
2. 00:04:138 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I know you want to make special patterns to fit rhythm but flows here are weird imo,suggest ehh i don't see the problem with mine
   
3. 00:06:033 (3) - suggest to keep consistency with 00:06:348 (4) - to fit the rhythm wat? i hear stream on 4 tho
4. 00:31:927 (1) - suggest follow vocal here cuz the rhythm here is hard to acknowledge here its okay imo
   
5. 00:42:348 (2) - if you follow bass here,I don't think circular flow is suitable when playing,players will consider it to drum not bass,so I suggest ok
   
6. 00:43:769 (3) - maybe make an adjustment? ok
   
7. 01:19:612 (4,1) - flow here is uncomfortable but idk how to improve it... bleh
8. 01:28:769 (1,2,3,4) - i like the square :X
   
   This diff is fine for me,but I think sv is kinda slow and the arrangement could be much tidier...

[Insane]

1. 00:59:875 (2,3) - ctrl+g? ill prefer the square
   Great diff!nothing else to say

Here's my map :
p/4025559
Good Luck~

monstrata wrote:

Hey. M4M .

[Insane]

00:05:875 (3) - Try putting the circle at 216||216. Feels more natural to me, plus it improves the flow going into the slider. did smthing like that
00:11:717 (1) - 85||187 maybe? Perfect stack under the slider. too mainstream
00:13:296 (3,4) - Ctrl+G this rhythm cuz i really feel 00:13:612 - Should be mapped to something clickable lol. ^
00:16:138 (3) - Ctrl+G would improve the flow from 2>3 and also make the angle going into the stream less sharp. ^
00:28:612 (2) - Rotate this 90 degrees anti-clockwise from selection center. Nice up and down motion with the pattern here. ^
00:37:454 (4,5,6) - I feel like having larger ump from 5>6 fits better than from 4>5. 6 is a stronger note, cuz there's also a drumbeat there. my pattern wud be fked up
00:52:769 (1,2,3) - I don't really get this rhythm x___x. I know you aren't mapping to vocals, but there is a (bell? idk) instrument at 00:53:401 - that you could have mapped to. Sliders on red-ticks are generally weaker and in this case, since something exists on the white tick, it might be better to have the sliders start on white ticks instead. generally yes, but i hate mainstream B)
00:56:559 (1,2) - These totally look like normal 1/2 spaced sliders even tho they are actually 1/4 apart. Bring them closer together? ok
01:03:822 (2,3) - Zzzz. So much up/down motion with the jumps and suddenly a pause. Jump please T___T" ok
01:17:085 (1,2,1) - You could try something like this if you want ;o Fun to play. i like mine.

[Hard]

00:11:717 (1,2,4) - This is a nice patter, but 3 just feels kind of out of place x__x. How about this?. Make 3 on the same line as 1.
00:17:243 (2,3) - Yea i feel these sliders should begin on white-ticks too. Like 00:17:085 - Is a good place to have an object begin.
01:14:875 (1,2) - Doesn't really flow well imo... Something like this would be better imo..
01:25:296 (2,3) - Okay this part, a rhythm like This would play better imo. The red ticks work since thats where the drum beats land.


[Easy]

Uncheck Widescreen Support~ oop yeah

I don't see any other issues~



Okay good luck Kibb .

Aldwych wrote:

Hi m4M req from your queue.

Since both of us (me and you) want to be fair, i'll gonna mod normal, hard, and Insane (yours). Both of our maps have the same Draining time (~10 sec).

[General]

Well i'm not fan of the grey colour here, since it's a bit hidden on complet patter on hard and +. i love my grey :C


[Hard]

00:07:769 : Well even if it's correct, i'm not fan of the position since the flow could be much better when placed on the right side (of the previous slider). how does this flow bad

00:12:190 : How about making something like : changed this part alrdy form previous mod

example

Imo the flow is much more interesting and we get 2 blanket, more elegant way. :>

01:14:875 : I'm not fan for the stack you did here, because i consider this is a 1/2 whole spacing and not 1/4. how?

01:20:085 : Since it's the same kind of pattern like the 2 next ones, you should have the same kind of slider. unecessary

01:22:927 : Why not curving this one like the same? I love consistent pattern. :> i want this sorta, symmetry?

Nothing found much since i'm more flexible about my criteria on hard.

[Insane]

00:04:138 : I thought you would go for a tornado pattern, muuuuh T_T. Imo the problem is your reversing your pattern, i mean sometimes you go on the clock way, and after on the reverse way, it's a but confusing imo. well. since this is the harder of the insanes i suppose it's more fun for some flow break

00:08:480 : Why this sudden jump? Oo, imo it's more wise to get a fluid spacing along your little stream. this is a jump?

00:12:664 : Why not the same slider as before? :< why not?

00:13:769 : Same thing, it's confusing imo. :< not really..

00:15:348 : How about reverse-it? Imo the flow with before will be interesting without so much changing with the next object. i think it flows well as it is though;;

00:41:559 : Switch 2 - 3 - 4 in order to get a better flow. eh?

00:55:612 : WHy not make a simple pentagon with ctrl - shift + d? pentagony enough for my tastes

Nothing else for to me.

Anyway that's all i can say. Gl hf for rank

Aldwych wrote:

Damn nothing has been changed, i've to mod easy and The second insane. ToT

At least take teh star xD

Aerous wrote:

best lee sin na bro pfft

General : Change to a NSFW background plz its DxD

Insane :
00:12:190 (2) - CTRL + G ?
00:13:769 (5) - 284 / 320 position? I like it lower , and then it goes to the stream next
00:16:138 (3) - CTRL +G
00:17:875 (1) - Use 3 circles instead of a slider ?
00:19:612 (3,3,3,3) - personal preference but delete these? idk but i like the pause
00:25:612 (1,2,3) - Maybe ? http://puu.sh/h5zdQ/fa691e1e5a.jpg
00:28:138 (5) - CTRL + G ?
00:32:243 (3,1) - Stackku ? k
00:34:454 (1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/h5zk1/5d55af4c9b.jpg maybbuu
00:43:769 (1,1) - Stack these? http://puu.sh/h5znA/5b91f72e0b.jpg k
01:07:769 (2,3,4) - new position ? http://puu.sh/h5zqN/db0d1ef87b.jpg
01:12:033 (4,5,1) - http://puu.sh/h5zsX/8509c0b7b0.jpg
01:17:243 (2) - CTRL + G
Nice diff !
everything else no fix cuz its too mainstream B)


Hard :
00:07:769 (1) - I just don't like that curve slider =w= http://puu.sh/h5A7p/163718bf33.jpg my eyes. the straight diagonal sliders.
00:07:769 (1) - mayb ? http://puu.sh/h5A9X/9bd6b143f9.jpg
00:32:243 (3,4) - 4 should be the same slider shape as 3 ! reason beingg..?
00:36:348 (3) - Add a bit more distance to this ? ok senpi
00:36:348 (3) - iddk ? http://puu.sh/h5AfN/d8e68e4f18.jpg
01:08:085 (3) - 173 / 227 ?
01:08:085 (3) - More distance here ? k
01:14:796 (6,1) - Dont stack these ? i don't get every1's problems with this lol

Easy :
Nothing much ;w;
01:19:927 (1) - Whistle head and end ? i already have them tho?

Nice mappuu , more dxd plz

Aerous wrote:

blankeuu

NolanM wrote:

For M4M, or ticket because I want you to check something for later owo

[Insane]
00:06:348 (1,2,3,4) - These thangs look 2 messy ;w; Make it pretty like this i tried to make a wave lol.
00:08:480 (3,4) - Oh bejeezus I think this jump is too big (It has to be touching like this for me to not fail) wtf? there are many harder jumps than that
00:13:927 (6,7,8,9) - Sowwy I'm used to being picky ;w; Chouchochocuchcochcochcochcoch my stream is sexy :C
00:16:454 (4,5,6,7) - My OCD WILL KILL MEEEE make these things look pretty like the BG girlz <3 my wavvee thoo
00:56:559 (1,2) - Make like this, Remember I can't read ;w; i nerfed it already i don't think i need to nerf it anymore


[Hard]
01:13:927 (2,3,4) - Nice flow, maybe you can try going with the vocals? no this is fine
01:27:033 (1,1) - This jump is way too big for hard diff, I think... I like how you do 01:27:980 (1,2) - with the music (flows so beautifully ;w;) but I would like it if you put a circle 01:27:664 (1) - before here as well :3 okay fixed then with rhythm change
00:14:243 (1) - Before this maybe two double reverse slider thingies? Idk like thisor something? Ew that was a bad suggestion eh?
Maybe 3.5 CS?

[Easy]
00:19:296 (1) - Maybe for this section do something like this wit da reverse sliders ill change if more ppl complain, but i feel like some 1/2 wud be good for the spread.

00:43:769 (3) - You take note on the part of the song here with a reverse slider like this but not here: 00:45:822 (3,4) - uhh?
Okay these suggestions for easy diff are so stupid ;w;




Okay just I hope you think this was at least a little bit helpful ;w;
I suck at modding, especially things that are so good that I can't even be picky for...
good luck

No Dap wrote:

my message was too short apparently

CloudSplash16 wrote:

We added high school to tags.
Qualified.

1. Disqualified for too complex rhythm in the Easy difficulty, as you can see below. The structure and flow of the Insane difficulty could also be improved a bit, it's listed under Additional Modding though since the issues are no must-fixes.

1. 00:19:296 (1,2,1,2,3) - 1/2-sliders are not appropriate for an Easy on 190 BPM, atleast when used without a repeat, since the short hold they require can confuse newbies.
2. 00:56:559 (1,2,3) - The 3/2-rhythms read like 2/1 here (due to the circle surrounded by two 3/2-gaps) and the overlap of (1) and (3) is unnecessary (since head and repeat overlap instead of just head and track, so it looks a bit cramped for an Easy difficulty), consider to chose a more simple rhythm and placement here.
3. 01:26:875 (4,1,2) - This is clearly too difficult rhythm, the 1/2-sliders combined with 3/2-gaps are a deadly combo.

1. Hitsound volumes could be higher in Easy / Hard / Insane, they felt a bit low when playing.

1. 00:42:033 (1,2,3,1,2) - It is quite hard to get this rhythm right with those 3/2-gaps and objects starting on red ticks, I would recommend you to find a more simple rhythm but it's not as major as the disqualify reasons.

1. 00:04:138 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - This looks and plays like a random circle pattern, which is NCd as if they were sorted in groups of three. Try to make that clearer by using for example lower spacings between three circles and then a jump as a transition, to give this pattern more structure.
2. 00:09:506 (3,4) - The flow is pretty bad here, after this jump (4)'s slideshape is weird to play. Try to change the slidershape so it fits the movement coming from the previous circles.
3. 00:34:454 (1,2,3,4) - Broken flow again, the transition between (3) and (4) is way too sharp. I know it's meant to be sharp to stress (4) but it's a bit too much here.
4. 01:02:243 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Same as 00:04:138
5. 01:28:769 (1,2,3,4) - This looks random and a bit ugly, it would better to use a pattern with equal spacing here because the sounds are all equally intense.