1. Hard (2.83 stars, 428 notes)
2. Normal (1.55 stars, 251 notes)

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

kill u

1. 00:23:177 (4) - 00:29:578 (4) - 白线吉他顿一下好些，剪半加圈
2. 01:01:178 (4) - whistle挪尾
3. 01:30:778 (6) - whistle
4. 02:29:178 - 02:32:378 - 能填就填
5. 03:31:778 (4) - 剪短后移蓝线

1. 01:54:678 - 有点漏
2. 02:46:978 (7) -
3. 02:53:178 (5,6) -
   02:59:578 (7,8) - 类似
4. 03:34:778 (5) -
   03:38:178 (7) - 03:44:578 (6) - 同
5. 04:06:378 - 这里的whistle真奇怪，Easy一样

Its Depths wrote:

:3

Normal

00:17:978 (2) - I think you should have the tail point up instead of down i think the current version is better.

00:41:178 maybe add something in this space here? you could follow the vocal, maybe try this rhythm here i just wanna follow vocal track.
http://puu.sh/h4R8D/bfde575f7f.jpg

02:16:378 (2) - I feel like this should arch downward to flow with 02:16:978 (3) - better hmm ok changed.

02:32:378 space here? you could add another slider well, here i just follow piano track w.

02:36:178 (2) - could make the blanket a little neater fixed a bit.

02:37:978 (1) - curve this a little more? it's fine now imo.

Hard

00:44:778 there's a guitar beat you miss here make 00:44:378 (7) - a repeat, it sounds really nice hmm i think there's no beats at that tick orz.

00:56:778 (3,4) - make theses into a slider? I think it highlights the vocals better there's two lyric words for those two notes... so i wanna insist the current rhythm style here.

01:55:578 (5,6) - make sure these are stacked correctly, also I feel like 01:55:844 (6) - is offbeat, I can hear it in the music but I feel like you are off a little stack bugs happened here, fixed thou. and rhythm's correct i'm sure.

02:59:844 (8) - same as earlier feels a little off same as above.

good song and set, good luck with rank~ you are welcome to call me back if you feel the need to www

AIR wrote:

[Normal]

1. 00:23:177 (4) - 00:29:578 (4) - 白线吉他顿一下好些，剪半加圈 这个vocal存在感太强了，不舍得分开。
2. 01:01:178 (4) - whistle挪尾 nope.
3. 01:30:778 (6) - whistle nope.
4. 02:29:178 - 02:32:378 - 能填就填 这段主要跟钢琴。
5. 03:31:778 (4) - 剪短后移蓝线 可以，改了。

[Hard]

1. 01:54:678 - 有点漏 这个我就不跟了。
2. 02:46:978 (7) - nope.
3. 02:53:178 (5,6) - nope.
   02:59:578 (7,8) - 类似
4. 03:34:778 (5) - nope.
   03:38:178 (7) - 03:44:578 (6) - 同
5. 04:06:378 - 这里的whistle真奇怪，Easy一样

CrystilonZ wrote:

Hello
M4M from your queue

Relaxing and calm nice :3

[Normal]
Beware of spacing .0x can make a different due to short gap between notes differences below 0.02 is acceptable imo.
such as 00:54:778 (3) - distance between 2 is noticeably shorter than between 4
01:06:778 (3) - etc. unsnap from grid and fix them well, due to your mod is a bit nazi, i'll just reply what i've fixed. regard the rest as no change.

01:23:578 (3,4) - Overlap a bit, how about point 4 a bit downwards? fixed.
02:01:178 (5) - point it a bit downwards for easier reading, if you are worrying about getting out of screen, it wouldn't
02:10:378 (2,4) - they shouldn't overlap
02:13:978 (2,1) - blanket them maybe?
02:19:178 (2) - 427/246 fix stack
02:36:178 (2) - fix the blanket here
02:46:778 (3) - make it slightly curved
03:12:378 (4,5,1) - make them parallel each other will be nice
04:05:978 (3,1) - fix the stack here fixed.

[Hard]
01:01:578 (7,8) - this turn is a bit too sharp it needs to.
01:05:978 (3,4) - fix blanket
01:06:778 (4,5,6,7) - how about making some pattern here ?
01:12:378 (1,2) - and 01:13:178 (3,4) - make there 'exactly' same, angle and DS, ds is fine now but the angle isn't changed a bit.
01:24:378 (4,6) - blanket them
01:49:978 (3,4) - fix the blanket here
01:57:778 (4,5,6,1) - make the circles circle around tail of the slider, like blanketing, it should be better
02:06:778 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - make them into some pattern maybe ? (check the image, like some kind of ray) current version is better to me.

SPOILER

02:20:778 (5,6,7) - hard to read, (for hard diff) it's easy.
02:54:778 (2) - make it slightly more curve to blanket 3 ?
03:20:378 (2) - move the tail a bit right, at the middle of 03:19:978 (1,3) -
02:56:378 (5,1) - from the consistency of distance of 1/4 around this part, you should make them further apart here's following the lyric's emotions.
03:43:578 (4,5) - ^
03:44:578 (6,1) - ^
04:12:278 - remove this brake or add it to normal, to be consistence

GL

Litharrale wrote:

Hi M4M from your queue <3

[General]
Disable letterbox during breaks. fixed.
2 combo colours seems like too little
Great song!
4:20 length huehuehue

[Hard]
00:16:378 (6,3) - I think these sound better with whistles. (feel free to ignore this) i may rarely change my hs settings.
00:21:778 (4,1,2) - Shift 4 up and blanket 1 and 2 on 3? nope, that's not necessary imo.
00:35:978 (3,4) - in a really awkward spot down there for a hard, consider rotating it it's ok in hard level difficulty.
00:56:378 (2,5) - stack? nope.
01:05:978 (3) - move slider end to (208,304) to fix blanket fixed a bit.
01:20:378 (6,7) - imo the big space should be between the 5 and 6 not between 6 and 7 hmm right, changed.
01:26:778 (9) - ctrl-j for blanket? nope.
02:03:578 (3,4) - shift 4 to the right to blanket? nope.
02:27:978 (6,7,1,2,3) - I loved your spaced streams in higan torrent, don't think they belong here though it's ok to set ds shifting patterns in hard diff. besides, here's not stream.
02:31:178 (8,9,1,2,3) - ^ ^
03:22:378 (3,4,5,1) - Stacks after one another with different timing is hard to read well, i think that's not too difficult in reading the pattern.
04:10:778 (1) - turn into a 1/8 return slider to fit in better with guitar ahh that's not necessary for a hard diff thou.

[Normal]
00:13:978 (1) - turn into slider? the note on the red tick needs something thou your advice is a good idea, idk why i set the rhythm like this but it do is the perfect one to me.
00:25:178 (2,3) - blanket nope.
00:49:178 (1) - This is mistimed. If you're mapping the guitar it should be earlier, if you're mapping the lyrics it comes a bit later. there do has guitar beat at the white tick.

All from me! Really great mapset and lovely song. ww

ken2010123 wrote:

m4m =w=

[Hard]

1. 01:26:778 (9,1) - blanket？ 不。
   02:25:178 (1,2) - blanket？ 不。
   02:31:578 (1,2,3,4) - 這四個都向左移一點會flow好點 现在这样更好。
   02:34:644 - 漏鼓音，02:33:978 (2) - 改成類似這樣
   SPOILER

   
   02:47:578 - 這裡有琴音，應該放滑條頭，前面02:46:978 (7) - 就拉到02:47:378 - 停 不，不是所有音都需要用tap tick去表现的。
   02:53:978 - 這裡和上面一樣，02:53:378 (6) - 拉到02:53:778 - ，然後02:53:978 - 補上滑條 同上。
   03:00:378 - ^放滑條頭 同上。
   03:09:978 (6) - 換1/4滑條 不。
   03:12:778 (4,5) - 換1/4滑條，然後03:13:178 - 放1/4滑條同上。
   03:21:178 - 有鼓音，加1/4滑條 同上。
   03:25:778 (4) - 同樣換單個note，然後03:25:978 - 放1/4滑條 同上。
   03:33:978 (4) - 擋血條了 没挡。
   03:56:778 (5,6) - 可以blanket一下 不。
   
   
2. DS怪怪的，不過你的圖本來就這樣吧XD

[Normal]

1. 其實normal建議跟vocal，跟其他的音比較怪的感覺 不打算都跟vocal。
   00:57:978 (3,1) - blanket 不。
   02:13:978 (2,1) - ^ 不。
   02:29:178 - 這段到02:29:778 - 不跟vocal在normal真的有點怪…… 还行吧，为何一定要跟vocal，我作图很少跟vocal。
   02:42:378 - 02:43:978 - 02:48:778 - 02:50:378 - 02:55:178 - 02:56:778 - ^一樣有點怪，建議加上，後面那個kiai那段也一樣加上吧，不多說了 同上。
   03:05:978 (5) - 擋血條了 没挡。
   04:11:578 - 這裡hard加了break，normal也加上吧 fixed.

美麗

nadapan wrote:

Hello M4M form your modding queue

[Normal]

1. 00:33:178 (4) - I think it would be better if you curved this to the right. hmmm i still prefer the current version.
   
   Like this

   
2. 01:51:578 (4,5) - blanket is off fixed a bit.
3. 02:28:778 (2) - It feels a bit uncomforble to have this slider to end on a blue tick and then a short break after it. That's why I want you to add a circle here 02:29:178 nope for only wanna follow piano beats here.
4. 03:09:978 (1) - slider is too low fine enough.
5. 03:51:578 (1,2) - Blanket nope.
6. 03:54:778 (1) - X:20 Y:172 nope.

[Hard]

1. 00:36:778 (4) - note is too low fine enough.
2. 01:05:978 (3,4) - blanket nope.
3. 01:07:578 (6,7,8) - The spacing is different on the play field even though they're the same on the timeline. Even if (6) and (7) are in a jump but not (8) so is it still confusing for the player since the player will thing the spacing between them in the time line is different and not the same between all the 3 notes and the player will miss. no change for it's just a hard level pattern.
4. 01:13:978 (5,6,1) - ^ ^
5. 01:49:978 (3) - NC ^
6. 01:49:978 (3,5) - blanket ^
7. 03:35:578 (1,2,3) - instead of stacking them use them and make a triangle. It's funnier to play if you get to move a bit and not stay on the same place (it's my opinion though) i insist stack stuff here.

It's a good mapset and a sad song (I was actually about to cry while modding xD) Good luck ranking this beatmap ww k

liangv587 wrote:

[General]
whistle2太吵了，用短点的好些，默认的就不错 纠结过这点，最终还是选了这个。

[Normal]
00:51:978 (4,5) - 为什么是两个圈，滑条多好 其实是为了爆星。
01:20:378 (4) - 圈，01:20:778 - 1/2折返，01:21:178 (1) - 不然这个你就要用1/1把节奏补齐 “一盏”和“烛火”我真心觉得得俩滑条，即使这边音再怎么变都是如此，况且最后一个字还拖了很长的音并且变得很厉害。
01:55:778 (5) - 貌似是1/3 对的，牛逼。

[Hard]
03:22:578 (4,5) - 有点不好打 都在说这个，哎好吧，ds改小了一些。

美丽

Streliteela wrote:

asdfghjkl;

[General]
其实dl你这张图的时候我在喝茶，嗯，就是那种颜色很深很浓很苦的东西。然后下好了，提示我F5。粗线了bg；再然后，嗯，我擦了半小时屏幕，真的。
求求……能不能把线条再改柔和一点，就……稍微柔和一点点点……
顺便好想吐槽一下note的颜色啊。。黑白bg配果绿note……
另外hitnormal和whistle的声音感觉都有点大，再稍稍降一点厚么 hs纠结了很久，bn不说改我就不改了。

[Hard]
总体没什么问题，有几个个人见解，可能有主观因素，仅供参考

01:13:179 (3,4,5,6) - 这四个音是越来越低的，然而从排列上看却有上扬的趋势；你试试这样？ 一般表现这种我都用ds的，和方向什么的关系不是太大（虽然也有）所以就不改了。

SPOILER

http://puu.sh/h68Md/1cd6cacf85.jpg

后面微调一下就行，改动不会很大
02:18:778 (1) - x6|y224，后面跟着微调 不要，那种三角我是不到逼不得已是不会去摆的。
02:49:178 (4) - x360|y115 我喜欢这种，头贴着头的感觉。
03:04:378 (2) - ctrl+g，再转一转调调角度 这个可以有。
04:10:778 (1) - 我觉得你可以换个短的折返；当然也可以不换，无关痛痒 嗯，不换。

[Normal]
由于视力不佳，以下坐标仅供参考，具体细节请酌情微调 s爷爷老眼昏花）简单来说就想让我多点blanket是吧，我是故意不想blanket的所以不改啦。
00:58:778 (1) - x472|y216
02:15:578 (1) - x388|y72
02:36:178 (2) - x235|y19
03:17:978 (2) - x327|y274

说来我个人觉得，这种慢歌真的不适合你，我还是喜欢你做的猎奇图，虽然确实如你所说我摸不动 什么图我都要做的，然而你只能摸这种，那么只能给你摸这种了，要么下次你帮我摸猎奇噗。
GL~

Guu wrote:

虽然排列上想吐槽的地方好多……
还是强行无视好丽>.>

[Normal]
00:34:378 (1) - 加往返 不。
00:51:978 (4,5) - 不如合并成滑条吧 爆星。
02:31:177 (5,6) - ^ ^
02:29:778 - 加个节奏 不。
02:33:778 - 加，4拖成滑条 不。
03:30:178 - 加 不。

[Hard]
00:37:911 (7) - 这个音是从00:37:928 - 开始的，用滑条吧 不，就这么普通的放就行。
01:21:378 (8,9) - 感觉连音上放点击物件不太合 嗯，合并成了滑条。
02:06:178 (1,2) - ^ ^
02:30:578 - 加节奏 不。
02:34:578 - 三连？ 不了吧。
04:10:778 (1) - 也做成滑条吧 ^

厚，良心水摸完成-w- 让我改了2个，有没有破纪录。

NolanM wrote:

最好听!
For M4M, sorry for late mod! ;w;
This map is really good , so this mod will be picky :3

02:41:178 (1) - Make preview point here? don't wanna change preview point.
01:30:778 (6) - If you want, you can add a spinner here? OwO (Both difficulties), right before break no i don't, that part's really quiet and relax.

[Normal]
00:50:378 (2) - This could be moved to a nicer place, x:267 y:130 I think is nicer i don't wanna make all of jumps in fluent flow, the current version is the best one to me.
01:10:778 (3) - Move this and the few beats after it down a little bit, because here is seems odd when corresponding with 01:09:978 (2) . there's a 2/1 gap, so that is fine imo.
01:59:578 (1) - Very picky, but move this and the rest up a little bit, it looks lopsided i see no issue here orz.
02:09:178 (1) - Correct DS, right now it looks too close ds do is correct now.
02:36:178 (2) - ^ (And of course fix some stuff after it after changing this) ^
03:32:378 (1) - More curvy, it looks straight i did that on purpose.
04:05:978 (3) - DS and hitsound doesn't feel right here, it feels like it should be here 04:03:578 (3) - at the head, or 04:05:178 (2) - basically somewhere earlier it do is right here.

[Hard]
00:15:578 (4) - Maybe move to x:320 y:209? nope.
00:20:778 (2) - Move this down instead of up (your choice) hmmm nope.
00:21:778 (4) - 不好看, move to the end of the slider with the same direction i think that's in good fashion.
00:41:978 (4) - Again, move so it fits with the flow. Maybe to x:278 y:240 nope.
00:56:778 (3,4) - I think this would be better if stacked nope.
01:18:378 (2) - move to X:325 Y:299 nope.
01:21:378 (8,9) - Make it a small slider nope.
02:02:778 (1) - I think it would be better off with a nice bass hitsound and 1 circle it do has bass hs there, and that special piano beat should be followed by a short slider imo.
02:09:178 (1) - ^ similar as above.
02:27:978 (6,7) - Spread these two further apart, just a little bit so they just touch nope, ds just increasing here.
02:31:178 (8,9) - ^ ^
03:05:178 (3) - Maybe move to x:98 y:82 nope, too far away from the previous obj.
03:44:378 (5) - Move a little closer to the head of 03:44:578 (6) - it's fine imo (with same ds setting here)


I hope you thought this was helpful
It was an amazing song and amazing mapping ;_; I almost cried too lolol
Good luck!

1. 02:29:178 - 這裡空著怪怪的啦 你可以把前面那兩個1/4合成一個1/2 然後在改成這樣
   
   (02:31:578 (1,2,3) - 這裡也可以跟著^改)
2. 04:06:378 - 這裡下whistle好詭異..音樂裡也沒鋼琴呀 建議你改下再(2) (hard同理)

1. 01:14:378 (6,1) - 做個跳? vocal變大聲尖句應該變大點吧 你可以(5,6)一起往下移
2. 01:19:978 (5,6,7) - 我感覺(6,7)的間距好小啊明明音樂挺highpitch的 (6)往下一點吧 x:280, y:160附近
3. 01:29:978 (6,1) - 1.1x
4. 02:59:578 (7,8) - 這還是疊起來好 畢竟這節奏本身就不好讀

Flask wrote:

Preview time可以下在副歌頭 我比较习惯放曲子最前面233

[Normal]

1. 02:29:178 - 這裡空著怪怪的啦 你可以把前面那兩個1/4合成一個1/2 然後在改成這樣 可是，，，这里我真的是只想跟钢琴的，那个vocal跟了感觉反而怪怪的233.。。
   
   (02:31:578 (1,2,3) - 這裡也可以跟著^改) 同上
2. 04:06:378 - 這裡下whistle好詭異..音樂裡也沒鋼琴呀 建議你改下再(2) (hard同理) 好吧，音效是有点随意，这边是跟vocal的。

[Hard]

1. 01:14:378 (6,1) - 做個跳? vocal變大聲尖句應該變大點吧 你可以(5,6)一起往下移 好的，改了。
2. 01:19:978 (5,6,7) - 我感覺(6,7)的間距好小啊明明音樂挺highpitch的 (6)往下一點吧 x:280, y:160附近 间距改了一下，不过我觉得这里还是要放钝角跳的，所以还是摆在了上面。
3. 01:29:978 (6,1) - 1.1x fixed.
4. 02:59:578 (7,8) - 這還是疊起來好 畢竟這節奏本身就不好讀 改了。

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