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nika mika

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nika mika 2014-11-29T13:01:16+00:00

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HimemiyaChikane

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Joined November 2013

HimemiyaChikane 2014-12-03T11:18:24+00:00

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nika mika

397 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

nika mika 2014-12-03T20:05:55+00:00

Gd submitted.
多谢师父;w;

HimemiyaChikane

196 posts

Joined November 2013

HimemiyaChikane 2014-12-04T02:18:17+00:00

nikachyan wrote:
Gd submitted.
多谢师父;w;

没事，只是想做而已;w;

Grimbow

424 posts

Joined February 2012

Grimbow 2014-12-12T06:48:16+00:00

Hi! From mod queue o/

d - Small don
D - Big don
k - Small kat
K - Big kat

Black means something that I think needs changed
Orange is just a suggestion

[General]

Add HimemiyaChikane to tags because of their guest diff
You need to make the audio file 192kps instead of what it is now. If you don't know how to do this, shoot me a pm and I can do it for you! ^^

[Kantan]

There are a lot of 4/1 breaks in your Kantan. While this isn't a bad thing, you might want to add a few more notes in some places to liven it up a bit. For example, you could at d's at 01:03:874 - and 01:04:227 - to fill this section up without leaving a 6/1 gap

Change the SV to 1.2
00:11:109 (10) - Move this note forward one tick so it lands on the white line before it, it's a bit awkward where it is for a Kantan. If you want to make this part a bit more full, all d's at 00:10:580 - and 00:10:933 -
00:56:462 (60) - Move this note back to 00:56:109 -, that way it lands on a beat and is not syncopated
00:57:168 (61) - Change this to a K
01:25:403 (88) - Change this to a K
01:57:697 (31) - Move this note forward a tick so it lands on the white line and maybe add another k at 01:57:168 -?
02:27:521 (62) - Change this to a D and also maybe add a d at 02:27:168 - ?
02:53:286 (1) - Extend this slider to 02:57:168 -

[Futsuu]

00:00:698 (2) - Make this a D
00:56:462 (103,104) - ctrl+g this, it fits the rhythm of the song closer as k d k K
01:19:756 (145) - Change this to a K, there is a crash here in the music
01:29:286 (162) - Move this note forward half a tick so it lands on the white line on 01:29:286 -
02:53:242 (98) - Move this note to 02:53:286 - and change it to a K since it's the last note of the song!

[Muzukashii]

Capitalize the "M" in Muzukashii

00:22:227 (67) - Change this to a k and 00:22:933 (72) - to a d, this pattern is a bit hard for the intro of a muzu diff. You could also change 00:23:109 (73) - to a d if you want to make it flow a bit better
00:46:028 (184) - Move this note to 00:46:050 - looks like you accidentally placed it on a 1/16th beat for some reason
00:46:050 (184) - Remove the finish on this note If you want to keep it, I suggest putting it on 00:45:874 (183) - instead because that's where the crash is in the song
01:19:756 (341) - Change this to a K
02:52:712 (31) - Move this note to 02:52:697 -
02:52:977 (32) - Move this note to 02:52:933 -
02:53:286 (33) - Move this note to 02:53:286 - and change it to a D.

The last three notes were is very awkward places and they fit just fine on 1/3 notes if you are that way inclined! Good muzu though, very fun

[Oni]

00:00:698 (3) - Change this to a D
00:56:197 (344) - Change this note to a k, kdddkkk is a bit out of place here
00:59:639 (369,370) - Change these two to k's? I think the double kkd works quite well here
01:09:345 (442,443) - ctrl+g this, it follows the beat closer as d k
02:52:462 (1127) - Move this note to 02:52:462 -
02:52:712 (1128) - Move this note to 02:52:697 -
02:52:992 (1129) - Move this note to 02:52:933 -
02:53:227 (1130) - The end of this slider isn't snapped, add a little more to it so it ends on 02:55:756 -

Didn't have time to go over the Inner Oni and Chikane's Oni, sorry

I quickly opened them up and scanned through them though, this is just a few small things.

[Inner Oni]

You have two notes on the same beat here 02:05:991 (946) - Delete one of them.
01:55:756 (864,865,866,867,868,869,870,871,872,873,874,875,876) - I know this is an Inner Oni, but this part is a bit spammy for a 1/6th. You might want to make it a bit more mono-coloured if you are going to have it straight after a bunch of 1/4 notes
02:52:462 (1268) - Move it to 02:52:462 -
02:52:697 (1269) - Move it to 02:52:697 -
02:52:933 (1270) - Move it to 02:52:933 -
02:53:242 (1271) - Move it to 02:53:227 -

Sorry about not being able too give a proper look to the two inner oni's

It's a lovely song and I wish you all the best with getting it ranked!

nika mika

397 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

nika mika 2014-12-12T13:19:13+00:00

Grimbow wrote:
Hi! From mod queue o/

d - Small don
D - Big don
k - Small kat
K - Big kat

Black means something that I think needs changed
Orange is just a suggestion

[General]

Add HimemiyaChikane to tags because of their guest diff
You need to make the audio file 192kps instead of what it is now. If you don't know how to do this, shoot me a pm and I can do it for you! ^^
when i dl the file it was already 320k... i can tackle with this, so it's fine

[Kantan]

There are a lot of 4/1 breaks in your Kantan. While this isn't a bad thing, you might want to add a few more notes in some places to liven it up a bit. For example, you could at d's at 01:03:874 - and 01:04:227 - to fill this section up without leaving a 6/1 gapat first i did add but i found that it may be too difficult for a kantan

Change the SV to 1.2
00:11:109 (10) - Move this note forward one tick so it lands on the white line before it, it's a bit awkward where it is for a Kantan. If you want to make this part a bit more full, all d's at 00:10:580 - and 00:10:933 - if i do that i think the melody would be lost..., and maybe too difficult for kantan
00:56:462 (60) - Move this note back to 00:56:109 -, that way it lands on a beat and is not syncopated change to another pattern, and i think it's better now ;w;
00:57:168 (61) - Change this to a Kadd a finish but is a D
01:25:403 (88) - Change this to a Kfixed
01:57:697 (31) - Move this note forward a tick so it lands on the white line and maybe add another k at 01:57:168 -? i don't like that, otherwise the beat would be lost. maybe your suggestion is a choice but that's just increasing the difficulty for a kantan
02:27:521 (62) - Change this to a D and also maybe add a d at 02:27:168 - ?fixed
02:53:286 (1) - Extend this slider to 02:57:168 -fixed

[Futsuu]

00:00:698 (2) - Make this a Dfixed
00:56:462 (103,104) - ctrl+g this, it fits the rhythm of the song closer as k d k Kdidn't make a kdkk, but you remind me of the rhythm here
01:19:756 (145) - Change this to a K, there is a crash here in the musicfixed
01:29:286 (162) - Move this note forward half a tick so it lands on the white line on 01:29:286 -fixed
02:53:242 (98) - Move this note to 02:53:286 - and change it to a K since it's the last note of the song!errrr.... should it be a little quiet rather than a noisy K at the end?

[Muzukashii]

Capitalize the "M" in Muzukashiifixed

00:22:227 (67) - Change this to a k and 00:22:933 (72) - to a d, this pattern is a bit hard for the intro of a muzu diff. You could also change 00:23:109 (73) - to a d if you want to make it flow a bit betterrearranged the objects here in a similar pattern
00:46:028 (184) - Move this note to 00:46:050 - looks like you accidentally placed it on a 1/16th beat for some reasonfixed... it was a mistake
00:46:050 (184) - Remove the finish on this note If you want to keep it, I suggest putting it on 00:45:874 (183) - instead because that's where the crash is in the songi used a ctrl G here so this took place... now fixed ;w;
01:19:756 (341) - Change this to a Kfixed
02:52:712 (31) - Move this note to 02:52:697 -
02:52:977 (32) - Move this note to 02:52:933 -
02:53:286 (33) - Move this note to 02:53:286 - and change it to a D.

The last three notes were is very awkward places and they fit just fine on 1/3 notes if you are that way inclined! Good muzu though, very fun i still wanna keep them, because they are at the very right time point where medoly goes

[Oni]

00:00:698 (3) - Change this to a D
00:56:197 (344) - Change this note to a k, kdddkkk is a bit out of place here
00:59:639 (369,370) - Change these two to k's? I think the double kkd works quite well here
01:09:345 (442,443) - ctrl+g this, it follows the beat closer as d k
02:52:462 (1127) - Move this note to 02:52:462 -
02:52:712 (1128) - Move this note to 02:52:697 -
02:52:992 (1129) - Move this note to 02:52:933 -
02:53:227 (1130) - The end of this slider isn't snapped, add a little more to it so it ends on 02:55:756 -

Didn't have time to go over the Inner Oni and Chikane's Oni, sorry I quickly opened them up and scanned through them though, this is just a few small things.

[Inner Oni]

You have two notes on the same beat here 02:05:991 (946) - Delete one of them.
01:55:756 (864,865,866,867,868,869,870,871,872,873,874,875,876) - I know this is an Inner Oni, but this part is a bit spammy for a 1/6th. You might want to make it a bit more mono-coloured if you are going to have it straight after a bunch of 1/4 notes
02:52:462 (1268) - Move it to 02:52:462 -
02:52:697 (1269) - Move it to 02:52:697 -
02:52:933 (1270) - Move it to 02:52:933 -
02:53:242 (1271) - Move it to 02:53:227 -

all fixed except last several objects for inner oni/oni

Sorry about not being able too give a proper look to the two inner oni's It's a lovely song and I wish you all the best with getting it ranked!

thank you for your mod

rew0825

1,290 posts

Joined March 2013

rew0825 2015-01-04T05:15:45+00:00

Hi from my mod requeue

[

Kantan]

00:47:639 (46) - k , high sound
00:50:462 (51) - k , high sound
00:51:874 (54) - k , high sound
00:53:286 (56,57) - ctrl+g , change (56) to k and (57) to d - (56) is high sound than (57)
00:54:697 (59) - k , high sound
00:56:815 (62) - k , high sound
01:14:109 (79) - change to D , it's high sound if K is high sound to much
01:19:756 (84) - change to D , it's high sound if K is high sound to much
01:35:992 (4) - k , be consistent 01:41:286 (11,12,13)
01:43:050 (14) - k , be consistent 01:35:639 (3,4,5,6)
02:10:580 (48) - D , high sound
02:16:227 (54) - D , high sound
02:26:109 (63,64,65,66) - This pattern is hard in Kantan should Delete 02:27:168 (65)
02:38:815 (77) - D , high sound

[

Futsuu]

00:09:168 (16) - d , low sound
00:11:992 (21) - D , high sound
00:21:874 (40,41,42,43,44) - I think change to KKDDK it's better
00:23:992 (45,46) - ctrl+g , (45) is low sound than (46)
00:42:521 (79) - move to 00:42:697 , I think it's will be good rhythm
00:45:874 - Add note D
00:47:639 (87) - k , high sound
00:51:874 (95) - k , high sound
00:53:286 (97,98) - ctrl+g , (97) it's high sound than (98)
00:55:403 (101) - k , high sound
00:56:286 (103) - d , low sound
00:56:639 - you can Add note d and 00:56:815 (104) - k , for opposite 00:56:109 (102,103)
00:57:168 (106) - D , it's high sound a little not too much
00:58:580 (108,109) - ctrl+g , (108) is low sound than (109)
01:01:403 (112) - d , low sound
01:04:933 (118,119) - d , it's low sound all
01:07:756 (122) - d , low sound
01:33:874 (1,2) - ctrl+g , (1) it's low sound than (2)
01:36:697 (8,9) - ^ , (8) it's low sound than (9)
01:40:227 (17,18) - ^ , (17) it's high sound than (18)
01:41:286 (20) - d , low sound
01:42:345 (22) - d , low sound
01:43:756 (26) - k , high sound
02:32:639 (62) - move to 02:32:815 , for good rhythm

[

Muzukashii]

00:00:698 (3) - Add Finish (D) , high sound and in Futsuu you Add
00:04:933 (11,12,13,14) - change to ddkd , I think ddkd it's better
00:11:639 (29,30,31) - ddk , (29,30) it's low sound than (31)
00:16:227 (40,41,42,43) - ddkd, opposite 00:17:109 (44,45,46,47)
00:19:933 (54,55) - ctrl+g , (54) it's lowsound than (55)
00:21:874 (64,65,66) - ddd , low sound all
00:22:227 (67) - k , high sound
00:22:756 (71) - Delete and 00:22:403 (68,69,70) - move to 00:22:580 , for some easy and have break
00:23:286 (73) - D , I think D it's better than k
00:27:521 (93,94,95,96) - ddkd , it's will better than kkdd
00:29:903 (106) - move to 00:29:727 , if 00:29:815 (105,106,107) - it's will hard in Muzukashii
00:30:168 (108) - Delete , for some break
00:30:697 (109,110) - ctrl+g , (109) it's high sound than (110)
00:32:815 (113,116) - ctrl+g , (113) it's high sound than (116)
00:33:521 (118,119) - k all , It's high sound all
00:38:815 (142,143,144,145) - ddkd , it's will better
00:43:050 (163) - d , low sound
00:44:462 (170,172) - ctrl+g , (170) it's low sound than (172)
00:46:403 (182) - d , low sound
00:46:933 (184,185) - ctrl+g , (184) it's high sound than (185)
00:47:639 (187,188) - ctrl+g , (187) it's high sound than (188)
00:48:521 (193) - k , high sound
00:48:874 (194) - move to 00:48:697 and change to d , it's will be good rhythm
00:49:933 (199) - d , low sound
00:50:639 (202,203,204) - d , low sound all
00:51:168 (206) - k , high sound
00:51:521 (207,209) - ctrl+g , (207) it's low sound than (209)
00:52:756 (213) - d , low sound
00:53:109 (214,215) - ctrl+g , (214) it's low sound than (215)
00:54:168 (221) - move to 00:54:345 , for good rhythm
If you Fixed ^ change that to ddkd , (223) it's highest sound in that
00:56:109 (230,231) - ctrl+g , (230) it's high sound than (231)
00:56:639 (232,233) - ctrl+g , (232) it's low sound than (233)
00:59:286 (245,247) - ctrl+g , (245) it's low sound than (247)
01:02:109 (259,261) - ^
01:03:874 (268,269) - ^
01:04:227 (270) - Delete , for some break
01:04:403 (270,271) - ctrl+g , (270) it's low sound than (271)
01:04:933 (273,275) - ^
01:05:639 (276) - D , it's high sound a little not too much
01:07:227 (279) - d , low sound
01:09:345 (288,289) - ctrl+g , (288) it's low sound than (289)
01:09:874 (290) - d , low sound
01:10:227 (291,292,293,294) - change to kd dk , it's will better
01:11:639 (296) - k , high sound
01:12:168 (300,301) - ctrl+g , (300) it's low sound than (301)
01:12:697 (302,303,304,305) - ddkd , it's will be better
01:13:933 (308,309) - d all , low sound
01:14:815 (314) - Delete , for some break
01:15:521 (316) - d , low sound
01:15:874 (317,318) - ctrl+g , (317) it's high sound than (318)
01:17:815 (326) - d , low sound
01:18:345 (328,329,330,331) - ddkd , it's will be better
01:19:756 (335) - D , it's high sound a little not too much
01:20:109 (336,338) - ctrl+g , (336) it's high sound than (338)
01:20:727 (340) - move to 01:20:550 and 01:20:815 (341) - k , for good rhythm
01:21:521 (344,345,346,347) - kd dk , for good rhythm
01:22:580 (348) - d , low sound
01:24:345 (356,357,358,359) - change to k d k D , it's will be better
01:25:756 (360,363) - ctrl+g , (360) it's high sound than (363)
01:31:756 (386,387,388,389,390,391,392,393) - change to ddkkddkd , it's will be better
01:35:109 (402) - Delete , for some break
01:37:933 (415) - Delete , for some break
01:40:756 (428) - ^
01:43:580 (441) - ^
01:46:403 (455) - ^
01:49:227 (468) - ^
01:52:050 (481) - ^
02:22:756 (611,612) - ctrl+g , (611) it's low sound than (612)

Good luck

I think Oni it's Good

nika mika

397 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

nika mika 2015-01-07T04:18:01+00:00

rew0825 wrote:
Hi from my mod requeue

[ Kantan]
00:47:639 (46) - k , high sound
00:50:462 (51) - k , high sound
00:51:874 (54) - k , high sound
00:53:286 (56,57) - ctrl+g , change (56) to k and (57) to d - (56) is high sound than (57)
00:54:697 (59) - k , high sound
00:56:815 (62) - k , high sound
01:14:109 (79) - change to D , it's high sound if K is high sound to much
01:19:756 (84) - change to D , it's high sound if K is high sound to much
01:35:992 (4) - k , be consistent 01:41:286 (11,12,13)
01:43:050 (14) - k , be consistent 01:35:639 (3,4,5,6)
02:10:580 (48) - D , high sound
02:16:227 (54) - D , high sound
02:26:109 (63,64,65,66) - This pattern is hard in Kantan should Delete 02:27:168 (65)
02:38:815 (77) - D , high sound

[ Futsuu]
00:09:168 (16) - d , low sound
00:11:992 (21) - D , high sound
00:21:874 (40,41,42,43,44) - I think change to KKDDK it's better
00:23:992 (45,46) - ctrl+g , (45) is low sound than (46)
00:42:521 (79) - move to 00:42:697 , I think it's will be good rhythm
00:45:874 - Add note D
00:47:639 (87) - k , high sound
00:51:874 (95) - k , high sound
00:53:286 (97,98) - ctrl+g , (97) it's high sound than (98)
00:55:403 (101) - k , high sound
00:56:286 (103) - d , low sound
00:56:639 - you can Add note d and 00:56:815 (104) - k , for opposite 00:56:109 (102,103)
00:57:168 (106) - D , it's high sound a little not too much
00:58:580 (108,109) - ctrl+g , (108) is low sound than (109)
01:01:403 (112) - d , low sound
01:04:933 (118,119) - d , it's low sound all
01:07:756 (122) - d , low sound
01:33:874 (1,2) - ctrl+g , (1) it's low sound than (2)
01:36:697 (8,9) - ^ , (8) it's low sound than (9)
01:40:227 (17,18) - ^ , (17) it's high sound than (18)
01:41:286 (20) - d , low sound
01:42:345 (22) - d , low sound
01:43:756 (26) - k , high sound
02:32:639 (62) - move to 02:32:815 , for good rhythm

[ Muzukashii]
00:00:698 (3) - Add Finish (D) , high sound and in Futsuu you Add
00:04:933 (11,12,13,14) - change to ddkd , I think ddkd it's better
00:11:639 (29,30,31) - ddk , (29,30) it's low sound than (31)
00:16:227 (40,41,42,43) - ddkd, opposite 00:17:109 (44,45,46,47)
00:19:933 (54,55) - ctrl+g , (54) it's lowsound than (55)
00:21:874 (64,65,66) - ddd , low sound all
00:22:227 (67) - k , high sound
00:22:756 (71) - Delete and 00:22:403 (68,69,70) - move to 00:22:580 , for some easy and have break
00:23:286 (73) - D , I think D it's better than k
00:27:521 (93,94,95,96) - ddkd , it's will better than kkdd
00:29:903 (106) - move to 00:29:727 , if 00:29:815 (105,106,107) - it's will hard in Muzukashii
00:30:168 (108) - Delete , for some break
00:30:697 (109,110) - ctrl+g , (109) it's high sound than (110)
00:32:815 (113,116) - ctrl+g , (113) it's high sound than (116)
00:33:521 (118,119) - k all , It's high sound all
00:38:815 (142,143,144,145) - ddkd , it's will better
00:43:050 (163) - d , low sound
00:44:462 (170,172) - ctrl+g , (170) it's low sound than (172)
00:46:403 (182) - d , low sound
00:46:933 (184,185) - ctrl+g , (184) it's high sound than (185)
00:47:639 (187,188) - ctrl+g , (187) it's high sound than (188)
00:48:521 (193) - k , high sound
00:48:874 (194) - move to 00:48:697 and change to d , it's will be good rhythm
00:49:933 (199) - d , low sound
00:50:639 (202,203,204) - d , low sound all
00:51:168 (206) - k , high sound
00:51:521 (207,209) - ctrl+g , (207) it's low sound than (209)
00:52:756 (213) - d , low sound
00:53:109 (214,215) - ctrl+g , (214) it's low sound than (215)
00:54:168 (221) - move to 00:54:345 , for good rhythm
If you Fixed ^ change that to ddkd , (223) it's highest sound in that
00:56:109 (230,231) - ctrl+g , (230) it's high sound than (231)
00:56:639 (232,233) - ctrl+g , (232) it's low sound than (233)
00:59:286 (245,247) - ctrl+g , (245) it's low sound than (247)
01:02:109 (259,261) - ^
01:03:874 (268,269) - ^
01:04:227 (270) - Delete , for some break
01:04:403 (270,271) - ctrl+g , (270) it's low sound than (271)
01:04:933 (273,275) - ^
01:05:639 (276) - D , it's high sound a little not too much
01:07:227 (279) - d , low sound
01:09:345 (288,289) - ctrl+g , (288) it's low sound than (289)
01:09:874 (290) - d , low sound
01:10:227 (291,292,293,294) - change to kd dk , it's will better
01:11:639 (296) - k , high sound
01:12:168 (300,301) - ctrl+g , (300) it's low sound than (301)
01:12:697 (302,303,304,305) - ddkd , it's will be better
01:13:933 (308,309) - d all , low sound
01:14:815 (314) - Delete , for some break
01:15:521 (316) - d , low sound
01:15:874 (317,318) - ctrl+g , (317) it's high sound than (318)
01:17:815 (326) - d , low sound
01:18:345 (328,329,330,331) - ddkd , it's will be better
01:19:756 (335) - D , it's high sound a little not too much
01:20:109 (336,338) - ctrl+g , (336) it's high sound than (338)
01:20:727 (340) - move to 01:20:550 and 01:20:815 (341) - k , for good rhythm
01:21:521 (344,345,346,347) - kd dk , for good rhythm
01:22:580 (348) - d , low sound
01:24:345 (356,357,358,359) - change to k d k D , it's will be better
01:25:756 (360,363) - ctrl+g , (360) it's high sound than (363)
01:31:756 (386,387,388,389,390,391,392,393) - change to ddkkddkd , it's will be better
01:35:109 (402) - Delete , for some break
01:37:933 (415) - Delete , for some break
01:40:756 (428) - ^
01:43:580 (441) - ^
01:46:403 (455) - ^
01:49:227 (468) - ^
01:52:050 (481) - ^
02:22:756 (611,612) - ctrl+g , (611) it's low sound than (612)

Good luck I think Oni it's Good

Ty for the mod!
that was a very long one ... I accepted many f them except those ddkds, because i think it sounds fine.
also i made some changes based on your suggestions, so thx a lot

wasonz

714 posts

Joined July 2013

wasonz 2015-03-04T10:08:11+00:00

hello do you still accept mod or nor ? ask for sure if you not abandon this
pm to me accepted

02:52:227 - add new timing on here with 120 BPM and see what you got

also here are my diff for some example

: http://puu.sh/guhRb/266ca56331.rar
Feel free to copy anything on my diff

[Kantan]
00:09:168 - d : D doesn't fit much with relax part

00:28:933 - d : the note not strong enough
00:30:345 - ^
00:37:403 - ^

00:54:697 - change to k : i found it fit more than d

02:04:933 - D : :OOO you may missed it
02:10:580 - ^

02:17:639 - remove finish : :/ doesn't fit
02:19:050 - ^
02:35:992 - ^

[Futsuu]

The most problem i only found is finish sound :/

00:34:580 - add finish
01:08:462 - ^
01:25:403 - ^
01:59:286 - ^
02:04:933 - ^
02:10:580 - ^
02:16:227 - ^
02:27:521 - ^
02:33:168 - ^
02:38:815 - ^

02:21:521 (43,44) - Ctrl+G and then add finish to 02:21:521 -

02:53:639 - add spinner until 02:57:227 - ;_;

[Muzukashii]

you can apply Futsuu mods on this diff

00:20:109 (61,62) - Ctrl+G

consistency

00:31:050 (119,120,121) - remove finish and then

00:55:933 (240) - k , high pitch and consist with 00:54:521 (234,235,236) -

01:32:109 (403) - add more note after here :/ it's feel too blank

reason for this mods section : better 1/2 flow
01:34:933 (417) - k
01:41:286 (449) - k
01:43:403 (459) - k
01:48:521 (485) - k
01:49:227 (489) - d
01:51:521 (500) - k
01:55:050 (518,521) - Ctrl+G

01:59:992 - d

02:07:050 (574,575,576) - you don't need to use finish : not strong enough

02:12:697 - add d :

02:23:992 - add d

02:35:286 - add d

02:45:697 - d , low pitch and move to 02:36:874 -

02:48:521 - add d , piano here

you can improve muzukashii by add more note on the blank space don't follow only single instrumental. The song
and don't make the space longer than

on kiai part it's better with player feeling

[Oni]
00:19:227 (75,76,77,78,79) - Ctrl+G
00:56:286 (331,332) - d ~~nerf pls~~
01:56:462 (764) - d
01:56:815 (765,766) - k

and you still can apply Futsuu and Muzukashii mods to this diff

[Chikane's Inner Oni]
00:28:580 (91,95) - Ctrl+G please
00:39:874 (180,184) - again ^

02:24:786 - delete
02:27:609 - delete
02:29:021 - delete
02:33:256 - delete the stream should stop on 02:33:168 -
02:38:903 - delete
02:40:315 - ^

1/6 seem not fine to me since i think it's kind of over-mapped
except some of them like 01:08:109 -

could you please change all whistle sound to Clap ?

Last edited by wasonz 2015-03-10T09:47:38+00:00, edited 6 times in total.

Mwallx

222 posts

Joined April 2014

Mwallx 2015-03-06T10:42:32+00:00

..还以为你不管这图了，~~路过赚点kudosu~~

tag里加 "神楽ノ花" "HimemiyaChikane"
Title改成Nanatsu Hiragimizuhiraki
那个い是长音写罗马音不要打出来的
不知道你还想rank么，想rank去投queue啊 :3
这图真挺棒的

nika mika

397 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

nika mika 2015-03-07T06:05:02+00:00

Mwalls Ho wrote:
..还以为你不管这图了，~~路过赚点kudosu~~

tag里加 "神楽ノ花" "HimemiyaChikane"
Title改成Nanatsu Hiragimizuhiraki
那个い是长音写罗马音不要打出来的
不知道你还想rank么，想rank去投queue啊 :3
这图真挺棒的

都改了，多谢ww
其实我这图坟掉的原因是因为……我太懒最近作业太多没什么时间（说这话谁信啊
queue的话……找了半天也没什么人来看……然后PM给一票modder也是石沉大海，所以没啥信心了……

nika mika

397 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

nika mika 2015-03-11T10:21:01+00:00

[I]MMoRTal[S] wrote:
hello do you still accept mod or nor ? ask for sure if you not abandon this
pm to me accepted

02:52:227 - add new timing on here with 120 BPM and see what you got Great! I haven't thought about changing BPM :3 but this fits very well!

also here are my diff for some example : http://puu.sh/guhRb/266ca56331.rar
Feel free to copy anything on my diff
applied some changes at the beginning of oni, but i'm not sure how you put those streams ~~looks irregular to me ;w;~~

[Kantan]
00:09:168 - d : D doesn't fit much with relax part

00:28:933 - d : the note not strong enough
00:30:345 - ^
00:37:403 - ^

00:54:697 - change to k : i found it fit more than d

02:04:933 - D : :OOO you may missed it
02:10:580 - ^

02:17:639 - remove finish : :/ doesn't fit
02:19:050 - ^
02:35:992 - ^
applied all

[Futsuu]

The most problem i only found is finish sound :/

00:34:580 - add finish
01:08:462 - ^
01:25:403 - ^
01:59:286 - ^
02:04:933 - ^
02:10:580 - ^
02:16:227 - ^
02:27:521 - ^
02:33:168 - ^
02:38:815 - ^

02:21:521 (43,44) - Ctrl+G and then add finish to 02:21:521 -

02:53:639 - add spinner until 02:57:227 - ;_;
applied all

[Muzukashii]

you can apply Futsuu mods on this diff

00:20:109 (61,62) - Ctrl+G consistency

00:31:050 (119,120,121) - remove finish and then

00:55:933 (240) - k , high pitch and consist with 00:54:521 (234,235,236) -

01:32:109 (403) - add more note after here :/ it's feel too blank

reason for this mods section : better 1/2 flow
01:34:933 (417) - k
01:41:286 (449) - k
01:43:403 (459) - k
01:48:521 (485) - k
01:49:227 (489) - d
01:51:521 (500) - k
i didn't take some of them, but i changed some patterns based on your ideas
01:55:050 (518,521) - Ctrl+G

01:59:992 - d

02:07:050 (574,575,576) - you don't need to use finish : not strong enough

02:12:697 - add d :

02:23:992 - add d

02:35:286 - add d

02:45:697 - d , low pitch and move to 02:36:874 -

02:48:521 - add d , piano here
nearly applied all except the 1/2 ones
you can improve muzukashii by add more note on the blank space don't follow only single instrumental. The song
and don't make the space longer than on kiai part it's better with player feeling
made some changes and added some triplets

[Oni]
00:19:227 (75,76,77,78,79) - Ctrl+Gmade changes based on your ideas
00:56:286 (331,332) - d ~~nerf pls~~applied
01:56:462 (764) - dapplied
01:56:815 (765,766) - kdon't like it, hmm

and you still can apply Futsuu and Muzukashii mods to this diff

Thanks for the mod and star ;w;
exactly I am adding finishes randomly on wherever i want... thanks again for pointing out all the D and K, i think i'm kind of get what's your technique for finishes

mliencheng

460 posts

Joined November 2010

mliencheng 2015-03-16T18:44:55+00:00

短mod~

廢話不多說，簡單易懂 (?)

[

Kantan]

OD或許能-1 ?

[

Futsuu]

01:29:992 可刪可不刪
02:09:168 kantan你放d, 所以改為d比較妥當. 這裡也相對是低音

[

Muzukashii]

建議不要放ddd 和 kkk 以外的1/4音 , 為了讓muzukashii和futsuu不差太多
01:32:462 - 01:32:815 - 01:33:168 - 大圓放在1/4串中間和開頭是禁止的, 就算是放在最後面也得跟前面的音符相反. 建議改小圓
02:20:462 這只是muzukashii, 建議改小圓
有許多地方與futsuu相差太大, 這樣很難rank ...

[

Oni]

01:37:756 這一串改為 kddkk 和 01:37:050 一樣
這oni感覺有點難 (?

[

Chikane's Inner Oni]

那些1/6感覺沒有必要放 ... 有的根本沒有聲音;w; , 01:08:109 可以保留 , 其他在BN眼中可能就是overmap了 = =
其他應該沒什麼問題

nika mika

397 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

nika mika 2015-03-18T23:03:19+00:00

remapped Muzu and Oni,added Inner Oni

Last edited by nika mika 2015-03-21T11:00:55+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

nika mika

397 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

nika mika 2015-03-21T10:20:15+00:00

mliencheng wrote:
短mod~

廢話不多說，簡單易懂 (?)

[ Kantan]

OD或許能-1 ?
[ Futsuu]

01:29:992 可刪可不刪
02:09:168 kantan你放d, 所以改為d比較妥當. 這裡也相對是低音
[ Muzukashii]

建議不要放ddd 和 kkk 以外的1/4音 , 為了讓muzukashii和futsuu不差太多
01:32:462 - 01:32:815 - 01:33:168 - 大圓放在1/4串中間和開頭是禁止的, 就算是放在最後面也得跟前面的音符相反. 建議改小圓
02:20:462 這只是muzukashii, 建議改小圓
有許多地方與futsuu相差太大, 這樣很難rank ...
[ Oni]

01:37:756 這一串改為 kddkk 和 01:37:050 一樣
這oni感覺有點難 (?

~~最近作业太多……我会在下周左右reply~~
都改了，但是我把muzu remap了一次，在原来muzu的基础上做了一张oni，现在的oni改成inner oni了
难度曲线应该会平缓一点

Konpaku Sariel

778 posts

Joined October 2010

Konpaku Sariel 2015-03-24T11:42:13+00:00

to snap Drum sounds => [D]
to snap Melody => [M]

chikane's inner

00:01:756 (4,5) - d[M]
00:05:992 (18,19) - ctrl + G[M]
00:07:404 (21,22) - ^
00:09:874 (27) - delete[M]
00:10:227 (28) - d[M]

00:10:756 (30,31,32) - dkk or ddk[M]
00:11:639 (1) - d[M]

00:18:698 (24,25) - ctrl + G[M]

00:19:580 (27) - k
00:19:756 (28) - delete
00:19:933 (29) - d[M]

00:20:286 (29,30) - dk[M]
00:20:815 (31) - d
00:21:168 (33) - k
00:21:874 (37,38,39,40) - KdKd[D,M]

00:22:933 (45) - ~ 00:23:286 (49) - 1/6 ddddddk or kkkkkkk or kdddddk
[D]

-------------
00:24:521 (58) - d
00:25:227 (63) - ~00:25:580 (66) - dddkd or dkdkd or dd_kd
00:26:639 (73) - 00:26:903 (76) - ctrl g
00:27:962 (85) - add k
00:28:580 (91) - k[D]

00:34:227 (135,136) - dd[D]

--------------
00:45:874 ~ 01:06:874
melody graph
→↗↗↗→↗↗↗
→↗↗↗→↘↘↘
→↗↗↗→↗↗↗
→↗↗↗→↘↘↘

→↗↗↗→↗↗↗
→↗↗↗→↘↘↘
→↗↗↗→↗↗↗
→↗↗↑　→↘↘//00:56:992

→↗↗↗→↗↗↗
→↗↗↗→↘↘↘
→↗↗↗→↗↗↗
→↗↗↗↘↘↘↘

→↗↗↗→↗↗↗
→↗↗↗→↘↘↘
→↗↗↗→↗↗↗
↗↓→↗↓↘→↗

make 1/6notes simple by refer to this

-------------------
01:57:521 (878,879,880) - ddk
01:58:404 (881,882,883) - ^
01:58:756 (884,885,886,887,888) - ddkdk[D]

Backfire

3,204 posts

Joined February 2010

Backfire 2015-03-25T22:25:07+00:00

Oni -
00:01:756 - Could be a kat here, I feel the piano is more prevelant than the drums, plus, you did this later on in repeating sections. I think it's good if you change it

00:13:050 - here too, if you apply above
01:08:639 - probably add a don here, it makes this section flow better
01:33:874 - 01:56:462 - this section felt super difficult for the "oni". Your other diffs can have stuff like this, but I suggest toning it down a lot for a better spread.
01:56:815 - k, this is the same sound as the others.

I dunno what to say for this diff, I felt it was very unbalanced and felt overall amateur. I felt in some parts you understood the essence, and in other parts, you were mapping to something completely different than what I was hearing. I suggest a little bit of looking at this diff for yourself and saying "is this not necessary?". I don't like to mod with stuff like that, I would rather leave it to your jurisdiction. Also, please dont feel any contempt for me, I am only trying to help <3

Inner-
01:18:168 - I dont like the kkk here, it works better as dkd.
02:02:639 - starting here, do something like ddkdddk
02:21:168 - this probably needs to be a kat, idk why it is not?
02:21:521 (1004,1005,1006,1007) - kkkkd ? It plays better
02:30:345 - unnecessary finisher imo

Chikane's Inner Oni
I really like this diff, there is not much I can say except the 1/6 parts, all of them, are quite bad. Please remove them and the diff is much better. You can leave the ones by themselves, or at the end of a stream, but when they are in the middle of a stream, it becomes less fun and more confusing especially when it does not fit the music.

I felt like the only things in this set that need a lot of good changes are the oni's. Overall, it is nice on the lower difficulties.

nika mika

397 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

nika mika 2015-03-25T22:31:24+00:00

HimemiyaChikane is quite busy doing TWC stuffs so he let me to do the changes. Reply should be done by the weekend. BTW thanks for mods~

nika mika

397 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

nika mika 2015-03-26T00:04:53+00:00

Konpaku Sariel wrote:
to snap Drum sounds => [D]
to snap Melody => [M]

chikane's inner
00:01:756 (4,5) - d[M]fixed
00:05:992 (18,19) - ctrl + G[M]fixed
00:07:404 (21,22) - ^fixed
00:09:874 (27) - delete[M]moved to 00:09:697 (29) -
00:10:227 (28) - d[M]fixed

00:10:756 (30,31,32) - dkk or ddk[M]fixed
00:11:639 (1) - d[M]

00:18:698 (24,25) - ctrl + G[M]fixed

00:19:580 (27) - kfixed
00:19:756 (28) - delete^
00:19:933 (29) - d[M]^

00:20:286 (29,30) - dk[M]fixed
00:20:815 (31) - d^
00:21:168 (33) - k
00:21:874 (37,38,39,40) - KdKd[D,M]fixed

00:22:933 (45) - ~ 00:23:286 (49) - 1/6 ddddddk or kkkkkkk or kdddddkfixed
[D]

-------------
00:24:521 (58) - d
00:25:227 (63) - ~00:25:580 (66) - dddkd or dkdkd or dd_kd
00:26:639 (73) - 00:26:903 (76) - ctrl g
00:27:962 (85) - add k
00:28:580 (91) - k[D]fixed

00:34:227 (135,136) - dd[D]fixed

--------------
00:45:874 ~ 01:06:874
melody graph
→↗↗↗→↗↗↗
→↗↗↗→↘↘↘
→↗↗↗→↗↗↗
→↗↗↗→↘↘↘

→↗↗↗→↗↗↗
→↗↗↗→↘↘↘
→↗↗↗→↗↗↗
→↗↗↑　→↘↘//00:56:992

→↗↗↗→↗↗↗
→↗↗↗→↘↘↘
→↗↗↗→↗↗↗
→↗↗↗↘↘↘↘

→↗↗↗→↗↗↗
→↗↗↗→↘↘↘
→↗↗↗→↗↗↗
↗↓→↗↓↘→↗

make 1/6notes simple by refer to thisneed to discuss with Himemiya

-------------------
01:57:521 (878,879,880) - ddkfixed
01:58:404 (881,882,883) - ^fixed
01:58:756 (884,885,886,887,888) - ddkdk[D]fixed

nika mika

397 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

nika mika 2015-03-28T01:26:08+00:00

Backfire wrote:
Oni -
00:01:756 - Could be a kat here, I feel the piano is more prevelant than the drums, plus, you did this later on in repeating sections. I think it's good if you change it
00:13:050 - here too, if you apply above
01:08:639 - probably add a don here, it makes this section flow better
01:33:874 - 01:56:462 - this section felt super difficult for the "oni". Your other diffs can have stuff like this, but I suggest toning it down a lot for a better spread.
01:56:815 - k, this is the same sound as the others.
All take into consideration
I dunno what to say for this diff, I felt it was very unbalanced and felt overall amateur. I felt in some parts you understood the essence, and in other parts, you were mapping to something completely different than what I was hearing. I suggest a little bit of looking at this diff for yourself and saying "is this not necessary?". I don't like to mod with stuff like that, I would rather leave it to your jurisdiction. Also, please dont feel any contempt for me, I am only trying to help <3
I remapped Oni again.....maybe this time could be better :3
Inner-
01:18:168 - I dont like the kkk here, it works better as dkd.K
02:02:639 - starting here, do something like ddkdddk K
02:21:168 - this probably needs to be a kat, idk why it is not?i was thinking that could sounds better, but yours make more sense
02:21:521 (1004,1005,1006,1007) - kkkkd ? It plays betterK
02:30:345 - unnecessary finisher imo

Chikane's Inner Oni
I really like this diff, there is not much I can say except the 1/6 parts, all of them, are quite bad. Please remove them and the diff is much better. You can leave the ones by themselves, or at the end of a stream, but when they are in the middle of a stream, it becomes less fun and more confusing especially when it does not fit the music.He rejects all the 1/6 changes......:#

I felt like the only things in this set that need a lot of good changes are the oni's. Overall, it is nice on the lower difficulties.

thanks for your modding

nika mika

397 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

nika mika 2015-04-06T07:07:13+00:00

New update on Chikane's Inner Oni which most of the 1/6 patterns have changed to 1/4

KUURAhoshi

585 posts

Joined January 2014

KUURAhoshi 2015-04-19T05:03:36+00:00

From Kazamastar's Queue

[General]
1. Metadata

I think, it's correct. I'm trying to search for it on web but i found nothing

2. Design

Resize the BG

3. BG

Nice BG, but resize it to 1366x768, your BG is 1365x768

4. Timing / BPM

Ok

5. Difficulty

Muzukashii : HP 4.5/5
Oni : HP 6 is better imo

d : don, red circle without additional hitsound;
k : kat, blue circle with clap / whistle;
D : Big Don, Big Red circle with finish;
K : Big Kat, Big Blue circle with finish + clap / whistle;
Drumrolls : Slider;
Shaker : Spinner.

[Kantan]
00:00:698 (1) - D
01:29:286 (92) - Huh ? You don't need this, remove
01:35:639 (3) - Remove this, it may decrease Star Difficulty
01:38:462 (6) - ^
01:41:286 (9) - ^
01:46:933 (17,21) - ^
01:52:580 (23) - ^
01:55:050 (26) - Change it to Shaker
02:00:697 (32) - d, but i recommend you to remove this
02:27:168 (65) - Remove, but it's up to you
02:31:756 (70) - d
02:34:580 (73) - ^

[Futsuu]
00:10:580 (18) - d ? It's low pitch
00:17:992 (32) - Remove, you don't need this
00:19:403 (35) - ^
00:19:580 - Add d here
00:24:697 (45) - d
00:33:521 - Add d ?
00:49:050 (89,90,91,92,93) - I think, it must be k.......k.......k...d...k
00:59:286 (108,109) - Ctrl+G
01:24:697 (159,160) - ^
01:32:462 (1) - Change to Drumrolls ?
01:55:756 (1) - Remove this, add d on 01:55:756 and 01:56:462
02:09:168 (24) - k
02:14:815 (32) - ^
02:34:580 (65) - d
02:39:345 (74) - Remove
02:46:933 (87) - k, higher pitch
02:49:756 (92) - k

[Muzukashii]
00:01:933 (6) - Remove, you don't need this
00:05:109 (15) - ^
00:05:286 (16) - k
00:05:815 (18) - Remove
00:08:992 (29) - ^
00:17:286 (60,61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78) - Hmm.. Bad pattern, i suggest you to "self-modding" this one
01:33:874 (411,412,413,414,415,416,417,418,419,420,421,422,423,424,425,426,427,428,429,430,431,432,433,434,435,436,437,438,439,440,441,442,443,444,445,446,447,448,449,450,451,452,453,454,455,456,457,458,459,460,461,462,463,464,465,466,467,468,469,470,471,472,473,474,475,476,477,478,479,480,481,482,483,484,485,486,487,488,489,490,491,492,493,494,495,496,497,498,499,500,501,502,503,504,505,506,507,508,509,510,511,512,513,514,515,516) - ^
01:59:286 (542) - D

[Oni]
00:01:756 (5) - d
00:01:933 (6) - Remove
00:08:462 (27) - k
00:31:756 (151) - d
00:35:992 (177) - ^
00:36:345 (180) - ^
00:54:521 (292,293,294,295,296,297,298,299,300,301,302,303,304,305,306) - I think it's overmap
01:55:756 (691,692,693,694,695,696,697,698,699) - Change to Shaker/Drumrolls ? I'm unsure about this on Oni diff :v
02:44:197 (1019,1020,1021) - Remove this ? Make it a bit easier
02:53:227 (1) - Remove, just put k on it

Nice song~ Good luck ^^

Feedback about my mod :

<here>

Kankri

192 posts

Joined June 2014

Kankri 2015-04-24T05:03:25+00:00

d = normal don

D = larger don (hitfinish)

k = normal kat

K = larger kat (hitfinish)

[Kantan]

00:25:227 (25) - d

00:26:109 (26) - k

00:30:345 (30) - ^

00:33:697 (33) - D

00:34:580 (34) - K

00:40:227 (40) - D

00:43:403 (43) - Add new note (D)

00:51:521 (53) - ^

00:51:874 (54) - k

00:52:580 (55) - ^

Everything else looks good!

[Futsuu]

00:06:345 (12) - D

00:11:992 (22) - K

00:13:933 (25) - d

00:20:462 (38) - k

00:24:697 (46) - ^

00:26:109 (49) - D

00:59:992 (110) - K

01:03:345 (116) - k

looking good

00:02:109 (7) - k

00:13:403 (44) - ^

00:14:109 (46) - I suggest that you remove this note, but it's totally up to you if you want to or not, sounds better imo.

00:11:992 (39) - D

00:24:697 (100) - k

00:39:344 (162) - ^

00:45:874 (190) - D

00:47:109 (196) - d

00:49:756 (209) - k

02:04:933 (567) - D

looks really good!

[Oni]

00:01:756 (6) - k

00:02:109 (7) - ^

00:02:639 (8) - d

00:05:462 (19) - k

01:35:903 (561) - d

looks awesome! ^^

[Inner Oni]

00:02:109 (9) - k

00:05:462 (23) - ^

00:26:727 (150) - ^

00:26:992 (153) - ^

00:33:609 (198) - I suggest that you add an extra don

00:36:609 (217) - k

00:36:874 (220) - ^

00:42:256 (255) - ^

00:56:374 (357) - ^

00:56:550 (359) - d

00:56:639 (360) - k (so much kat lol)

Looks good!

Good luck!

Last edited by Kankri 2015-05-03T17:28:45+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

nika mika

397 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

nika mika 2015-04-24T05:53:03+00:00

Kazamastar11 wrote:
From Kazamastar's Queue

[General]
1. Metadata
I think, it's correct. I'm trying to search for it on web but i found nothing
2. Design
Resize the BG
3. BG
Nice BG, but resize it to 1366x768, your BG is 1365x768
fixed
4. Timing / BPM
Ok
5. Difficulty
Muzukashii : HP 4.5/5accepted
Oni : HP 6 is better imo
my impression for this oni is like star7 in taiko no tatsujin... HP6 may be to difficult

d : don, red circle without additional hitsound;
k : kat, blue circle with clap / whistle;
D : Big Don, Big Red circle with finish;
K : Big Kat, Big Blue circle with finish + clap / whistle;
Drumrolls : Slider;
Shaker : Spinner.

[Kantan]
00:00:698 (1) - Daccpeted
01:29:286 (92) - Huh ? You don't need this, remove
01:35:639 (3) - Remove this, it may decrease Star Difficultyaccepted
01:38:462 (6) - ^
01:41:286 (9) - ^
01:46:933 (17,21) - ^lemme think about it
01:52:580 (23) - ^
01:55:050 (26) - Change it to Shaker
02:00:697 (32) - d, but i recommend you to remove thisput a d
02:27:168 (65) - Remove, but it's up to youaccepted
02:31:756 (70) - daccepted
02:34:580 (73) - ^^

[Futsuu]
00:10:580 (18) - d ? It's low pitch
00:17:992 (32) - Remove, you don't need this
00:19:403 (35) - ^
00:19:580 - Add d here
00:24:697 (45) - d
00:33:521 - Add d ?increases difficulty and doesnt fit the previous pattern
00:49:050 (89,90,91,92,93) - I think, it must be k.......k.......k...d...k
00:59:286 (108,109) - Ctrl+G
01:24:697 (159,160) - ^dont like it
01:32:462 (1) - Change to Drumrolls ?
01:55:756 (1) - Remove this, add d on 01:55:756 and 01:56:462i think it doesnt fit
02:09:168 (24) - kits the same with 02:08:815
02:14:815 (32) - ^
02:34:580 (65) - d
02:39:345 (74) - Remove
02:46:933 (87) - k, higher pitch
02:49:756 (92) - k
fixed all except replied ones
[Muzukashii]
00:01:933 (6) - Remove, you don't need thisi prefer keeping it
00:05:109 (15) - ^removed 00:04:756 but not this
00:05:286 (16) - kdont like
00:05:815 (18) - Remove
00:08:992 (29) - ^
00:17:286 (60,61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78) - Hmm.. Bad pattern, i suggest you to "self-modding" this one
01:33:874 (411,412,413,414,415,416,417,418,419,420,421,422,423,424,425,426,427,428,429,430,431,432,433,434,435,436,437,438,439,440,441,442,443,444,445,446,447,448,449,450,451,452,453,454,455,456,457,458,459,460,461,462,463,464,465,466,467,468,469,470,471,472,473,474,475,476,477,478,479,480,481,482,483,484,485,486,487,488,489,490,491,492,493,494,495,496,497,498,499,500,501,502,503,504,505,506,507,508,509,510,511,512,513,514,515,516) - ^i was trying to follow the melody here and it seems to be a failure i will keep it before i have any new ideas
01:59:286 (542) - D
accpeted all except the relied ones
[Oni]
00:01:756 (5) - d
00:01:933 (6) - Remove
00:08:462 (27) - kdont like it
00:31:756 (151) - d
00:35:992 (177) - ^change this but not 180 because i want to have some diversity
00:36:345 (180) - ^
00:54:521 (292,293,294,295,296,297,298,299,300,301,302,303,304,305,306) - I think it's overmap
01:55:756 (691,692,693,694,695,696,697,698,699) - Change to Shaker/Drumrolls ? I'm unsure about this on Oni diff :vif could i wanna make this oni harder...
02:44:197 (1019,1020,1021) - Remove this ? Make it a bit easier^
02:53:227 (1) - Remove, just put k on itdont like it

Nice song~ Good luck ^^
thx for the mod ^^

Manimani_old_1

Manimani_old_1 2015-04-25T16:04:15+00:00

先射颗星马克一下回头摸www

nika mika

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nika mika 2015-04-30T13:51:43+00:00

Kasha wrote:
Can I please do a GD (Ura Oni) this song is so good! ;A;

d = normal don

D = larger don (hitfinish)

k = normal kat

K = larger kat (hitfinish)

[Kantan]

00:25:227 (25) - d

00:26:109 (26) - k

00:30:345 (30) - ^

00:33:697 (33) - D

00:34:580 (34) - Kchanged to a D

00:40:227 (40) - D

00:43:403 (43) - Add new note (D)

00:51:521 (53) - ^increasing difficulty

00:51:874 (54) - k

00:52:580 (55) - ^

Everything else looks good!

[Futsuu]

00:06:345 (12) - D

00:11:992 (22) - Kchanged to a D

00:13:933 (25) - d

00:20:462 (38) - k

00:24:697 (46) - ^

00:26:109 (49) - D

00:59:992 (110) - K

01:03:345 (116) - k

looking good

I think you maybe want to mod Muzu here ;w;
00:02:109 (7) - kaccepted

00:13:403 (44) - ^^

00:14:109 (46) - I suggest that you remove this note, but it's totally up to you if you want to or not, sounds better imo. kept

00:11:992 (39) - D

00:24:697 (100) - kaccepted

00:39:344 (162) - ^

00:45:874 (190) - Daccepted

00:47:109 (196) - d

00:49:756 (209) - k

02:04:933 (567) - D

looks really good!

[Oni]

00:01:756 (6) - k

00:02:109 (7) - ^6 and 7 changed

00:02:639 (8) - d

00:05:462 (19) - k

01:35:903 (561) - dchanged

looks awesome! ^^

[Inner Oni]

00:02:109 (9) - k

00:05:462 (23) - ^

00:26:727 (150) - ^

00:26:992 (153) - ^

00:33:609 (198) - I suggest that you add an extra donto a D

00:36:609 (217) - k

00:36:874 (220) - ^

00:42:256 (255) - ^

00:56:374 (357) - ^

00:56:550 (359) - d

00:56:639 (360) - k (so much kat lol)self modded based on ur ideas

Looks good!

Good luck!

Thanks for your modding ;w;

nika mika

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nika mika 2015-04-30T13:52:33+00:00

-H a y a- wrote:
先射颗星马克一下回头摸www

囍

Manimani_old_1

Manimani_old_1 2015-05-18T09:15:05+00:00

-H a y a- wrote:
先射颗星马克一下回头摸www

[muzukashii]
00:35:374 (144) - move to 00:35:727 - 三连改成kkk
00:42:609 (176) - move to 00:42:786 -
01:58:227 (527) - k?
还有muzu和oni开头结尾总觉的好像呢欸多...

[oni]
00:25:933 - 这里鼓点有kkd欸,所以建议删掉00:26:727 (118) - 做成kkd kdk d d
00:34:668 (166) - k better,00:34:580 (165) - 这个音感觉有1/2长度
00:37:227 (182,183,184) - 听起来好像kkd
01:06:874 (367,368,369) - ^
01:09:433 (386) - move to 01:09:609 -
01:24:345 (482,483,484) - kkd
01:47:639 (639) - d?
01:56:109 (697,698,699,700,701) - kkkkd?
01:56:903 (703) - delete
01:58:050 (710) - kkd? 这里应该有个音比较好
02:03:697 (748,749,750) - kkd?
02:06:609 (767) - d?
02:32:286 (937) - d?
最后吐槽一句kdddk怎么这么多啊掀(
还有01:23:286 (476) - 01:31:580 (532) - 总觉的remap一下比较好(runs

[Inner oni]
推荐od5.5
00:12:697 (58) - 最好delete
00:22:933 (122,123,124,125,126,127) - kk(kkkk)d ?前两个四分后四个六分
00:27:609 (161) - d
00:27:962 (165) - add k
上面两条(ddkdkkdkd)适用于其他这个音的地方此外ddkdkdkkd ddkkdkkkd也可以试试后面省略
00:39:962 (247) - add k 补成五连
00:43:050 (265,266,267,268,269,270) - k ddk d
00:56:286 (360) - d?
00:57:521 (370,371) - k d?
01:13:933 (494,495,496) - kkd
01:35:903 (672,673) - dk
01:55:756 (856,857,858,859,860,861,862,863,864) - 改成1/4?
01:56:903 (871) - delete
01:58:050 (877) - add patterns 理由和oni一样
02:26:903 (1115) - delete
02:44:109 (1258,1259,1260) - 换成1/4的dk

[Chikane's Inner Oni]
吐槽:开头一会whistle一会clap闹哪样啊掀
00:22:580 (76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85) - 76和80的音音高不一样换色强调一下?
00:39:874 (216) - k?
00:56:903 (357) - k?
01:23:285 (595) - k?
01:50:815 (851) - k?
02:03:697 (965,966,967) - 推荐kdk 02:03:874 (967,968) 这两个音适合k d (依旧是后面省略
02:10:403 (1027) - k?
02:21:521 (1129,1130,1131,1132,1133) - kkkkd?
02:42:698 (1339) - k ?
02:43:139 (1344) - d?

竹子和梅花就不摸了最近低难度没灵感(趴

nika mika

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nika mika 2015-08-25T11:28:39+00:00

-H a y a- wrote:
-H a y a- wrote:
先射颗星马克一下回头摸www
[muzukashii]
00:35:374 (144) - move to 00:35:727 - 三连改成kkk keep
00:42:609 (176) - move to 00:42:786 - keep
01:58:227 (527) - k?改改改
还有muzu和oni开头结尾总觉的好像呢欸多...我改了改变简单了

[oni]
00:25:933 - 这里鼓点有kkd欸,所以建议删掉00:26:727 (118) - 做成kkd kdk d d不喜欢……我自认为是按着乐句下的，你那样节奏不太对
00:34:668 (166) - k better,00:34:580 (165) - 这个音感觉有1/2长度其实这个音远远不止1/2……不过改了
00:37:227 (182,183,184) - 听起来好像kkd改改改
01:06:874 (367,368,369) - ^按着自己的想法改了
01:09:433 (386) - move to 01:09:609 - 同上
01:24:345 (482,483,484) - kkd改改改
01:47:639 (639) - d?keep
01:56:109 (697,698,699,700,701) - kkkkd?改改改，不过是kkkkk
01:56:903 (703) - delete改改改
01:58:050 (710) - kkd? 这里应该有个音比较好按着自己的想法改了
02:03:697 (748,749,750) - kkd?改改改
02:06:609 (767) - d?改改改
02:32:286 (937) - d?按着自己的想法改了
最后吐槽一句kdddk怎么这么多啊掀(
还有01:23:286 (476) - 01:31:580 (532) - 总觉的remap一下比较好(runs
结果还是remap了

[Inner oni]
推荐od5.5什么鬼
00:12:697 (58) - 最好deletekeep
00:22:933 (122,123,124,125,126,127) - kk(kkkk)d ?前两个四分后四个六分改改改
00:27:609 (161) - d 仅这里按着自己的想法改了
00:27:962 (165) - add k
上面两条(ddkdkkdkd)适用于其他这个音的地方此外ddkdkdkkd ddkkdkkkd也可以试试后面省略恕我不用梗（
00:39:962 (247) - add k 补成五连keep
00:43:050 (265,266,267,268,269,270) - k ddk d按着自己的想法改了
00:56:286 (360) - d?改改改
00:57:521 (370,371) - k d? k k
01:13:933 (494,495,496) - kkdkeep
01:35:903 (672,673) - dkkeep
01:55:756 (856,857,858,859,860,861,862,863,864) - 改成1/4?按着自己的想法改了
01:56:903 (871) - delete改改改
01:58:050 (877) - add patterns 理由和oni一样改改改
02:26:903 (1115) - deletekeep
02:44:109 (1258,1259,1260) - 换成1/4的dk按着自己的想法改了

[Chikane's Inner Oni]
吐槽:开头一会whistle一会clap闹哪样啊掀
00:22:580 (76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85) - 76和80的音音高不一样换色强调一下?
00:39:874 (216) - k?
00:56:903 (357) - k?
01:23:285 (595) - k?
01:50:815 (851) - k?
02:03:697 (965,966,967) - 推荐kdk 02:03:874 (967,968) 这两个音适合k d (依旧是后面省略
02:10:403 (1027) - k?
02:21:521 (1129,1130,1131,1132,1133) - kkkkd?
02:42:698 (1339) - k ?
02:43:139 (1344) - d?
等师父看看愿不愿意回坑……
竹子和梅花就不摸了最近低难度没灵感(趴

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Skeuddy

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Skeuddy 2015-08-28T11:18:26+00:00

Hi, Nika Mika and Chikane, from my queue

Inner Oni

00:23:021 (123,124) - dk or kd (for normal played)
01:33:609 (647,648) - ^
00:28:050 (164) - k
00:33:521 (199) - d
00:51:697 (325,330) - k, 00:52:933 (334) - d
01:59:286 - Start kiai
02:52:050 - Start 120 BPM

Chikane's Inner Oni

01:08:462 (465) - k
02:52:050 - Start 120 BPM

Other good, but set in Kantan, Futsuu, Muzu and Oni 01:59:286 - Start 2th kiai and 02:52:050 - Start 120 BPM
Bye

nika mika

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nika mika 2015-08-29T22:32:13+00:00

Skeuddy wrote:
Hi, Nika Mika and Chikane, from my queue

Inner Oni
00:23:021 (123,124) - dk or kd (for normal played)changed to all 1/6 patterns
01:33:609 (647,648) - ^^
00:28:050 (164) - k
00:33:521 (199) - d
00:51:697 (325,330) - k, 00:52:933 (334) - d
01:59:286 - Start kiaidone for all diffs
02:52:050 - Start 120 BPM

Other good, but set in Kantan, Futsuu, Muzu and Oni 01:59:286 - Start 2th kiai and 02:52:050 - Start 120 BPM
Bye

thanks for the mod~
chikane is recently offline so changes may be done later

Raiden

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Raiden 2015-09-02T16:48:52+00:00

Hey there.. m4m as requested

[

General]

BPM is somewhat low. Maybe stick to 1.4 both in Kantan and Futsuu? The low BPM and low scroll speed may cluster the notes together too much and thus make it unreadable for newer players.
Muzu and Futsuu shouldn't have the same OD I think, hit window should be more strict in higher difficulties. Maybe change to 4,5 or similar?

[

Kantan]

00:24:697 (24) - Sounds rather like a drum hit. Change to d? Also would be nice to contrast with 25
00:35:992 (35) - Similar issue as above. Also, check other diffs (all diffs have a d here)
00:43:050 (42) - I think this rather sounds like a deep drum hit. Change to d? I also think it isn't emphasizable enough for a finisher, like in the rest of the difficulties.
00:45:874 - Missing the strong downbeat might be a bit confusing for newer players... I beg you to add a note. If you want to add a break, then delete the note right after at 00:46:227 -
01:01:403 (59) - Sounds more like a drum hit I think. Change to d perhaps?
01:09:874 (65) - Hm. Pitch is reasonably high (even if it's a drum hit). Maybe change to k? Also note that all difficulties have a k here.
01:12:697 (68) - I guess you wanted to follow piano in all difficulties, except this one? I beg you to reconsider
01:14:109 (70) - Considerable higher pitch. Maybe switch to K?
01:19:756 (75) - This looks like it emphasizes a tone uprise. Maybe change to k? Also I've seen that all diffs use k, except this one
01:21:168 (76) - k perhaps, to emphasize flute note?

[

Futsuu]

00:51:874 (95) - Hmm. I think this should be rather a k. It's an audible snare hit. Also, you used k in all difficulties.
00:54:697 (100) - Similar issue. Sounds like a snare to me
01:02:109 (111) - Drum hit, I think it should be a d
01:02:815 (113) - Looks more like a tone uprise to me, could be a K I think

[

Muzukashii]

00:00:698 (3) - Missed the finisher I think, like the other difficulties
00:23:286 (78) - Hm? Shouldn't this be a K? Check other difficulties
00:54:697 (223) - Similar as in Futsuu
00:57:256 (234) - I don't hear any clear 1/4 sound here... maybe remove? Also, consider making 00:57:168 (233) - a finisher.
01:02:109 (260) - Same as Futsuu
01:16:933 (324) - This sounds more like a drum hit to me. Maybe change to d?

[

Oni]

00:24:697 (104) - Similar issue as in Kantan. In Muzu and Futsuu, these notes are dons
00:57:256 (306) - Similar issue as in Muzu
01:01:403 (332) - Same as Kantan
01:02:109 (337) - Same as Futsuu
01:16:933 (431) - Similar to Muzu

I skipped Inner Onis because those are the most subjective to me......

[Overall opinion]

I think you could work some more on consistency. Pick something that you want to follow: and stick with it. Use variations only when the song asks for them, and make sure transitions are smooth to ensure correct playability.

Also, don't be afraid to use lower diffs as a main structure for higher difficulties. They make a good main base rhythm to build higher density on!

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That is all... I'm very tired zz

Good luck!

nika mika

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nika mika 2015-09-07T10:31:27+00:00

have changed based on raiden's ideas
reply will be posted 2 weeks later due to school exams :c

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