Hi! From mod queue o/
d - Small don
D - Big don
k - Small kat
K - Big kat
Black means something that I think needs changed
Orange is just a suggestion
[General]
Add HimemiyaChikane to tags because of their guest diff
You need to make the audio file 192kps instead of what it is now. If you don't know how to do this, shoot me a pm and I can do it for you! ^^
[Kantan]
There are a lot of 4/1 breaks in your Kantan. While this isn't a bad thing, you might want to add a few more notes in some places to liven it up a bit. For example, you could at d's at 01:03:874 - and 01:04:227 - to fill this section up without leaving a 6/1 gap
Change the SV to 1.2
00:11:109 (10) - Move this note forward one tick so it lands on the white line before it, it's a bit awkward where it is for a Kantan. If you want to make this part a bit more full, all d's at 00:10:580 - and 00:10:933 -
00:56:462 (60) - Move this note back to 00:56:109 -, that way it lands on a beat and is not syncopated
00:57:168 (61) - Change this to a K
01:25:403 (88) - Change this to a K
01:57:697 (31) - Move this note forward a tick so it lands on the white line and maybe add another k at 01:57:168 -?
02:27:521 (62) - Change this to a D and also maybe add a d at 02:27:168 - ?
02:53:286 (1) - Extend this slider to 02:57:168 -
[Futsuu]
00:00:698 (2) - Make this a D
00:56:462 (103,104) - ctrl+g this, it fits the rhythm of the song closer as k d k K
01:19:756 (145) - Change this to a K, there is a crash here in the music
01:29:286 (162) - Move this note forward half a tick so it lands on the white line on 01:29:286 -
02:53:242 (98) - Move this note to 02:53:286 - and change it to a K since it's the last note of the song!
[Muzukashii]
Capitalize the "M" in Muzukashii
00:22:227 (67) - Change this to a k and 00:22:933 (72) - to a d, this pattern is a bit hard for the intro of a muzu diff. You could also change 00:23:109 (73) - to a d if you want to make it flow a bit better
00:46:028 (184) - Move this note to 00:46:050 - looks like you accidentally placed it on a 1/16th beat for some reason
00:46:050 (184) - Remove the finish on this note If you want to keep it, I suggest putting it on 00:45:874 (183) - instead because that's where the crash is in the song
01:19:756 (341) - Change this to a K
02:52:712 (31) - Move this note to 02:52:697 -
02:52:977 (32) - Move this note to 02:52:933 -
02:53:286 (33) - Move this note to 02:53:286 - and change it to a D.
The last three notes were is very awkward places and they fit just fine on 1/3 notes if you are that way inclined! Good muzu though, very fun
[Oni]
00:00:698 (3) - Change this to a D
00:56:197 (344) - Change this note to a k, kdddkkk is a bit out of place here
00:59:639 (369,370) - Change these two to k's? I think the double kkd works quite well here
01:09:345 (442,443) - ctrl+g this, it follows the beat closer as d k
02:52:462 (1127) - Move this note to 02:52:462 -
02:52:712 (1128) - Move this note to 02:52:697 -
02:52:992 (1129) - Move this note to 02:52:933 -
02:53:227 (1130) - The end of this slider isn't snapped, add a little more to it so it ends on 02:55:756 -
Didn't have time to go over the Inner Oni and Chikane's Oni, sorry I quickly opened them up and scanned through them though, this is just a few small things.
[Inner Oni]
You have two notes on the same beat here 02:05:991 (946) - Delete one of them.
01:55:756 (864,865,866,867,868,869,870,871,872,873,874,875,876) - I know this is an Inner Oni, but this part is a bit spammy for a 1/6th. You might want to make it a bit more mono-coloured if you are going to have it straight after a bunch of 1/4 notes
02:52:462 (1268) - Move it to 02:52:462 -
02:52:697 (1269) - Move it to 02:52:697 -
02:52:933 (1270) - Move it to 02:52:933 -
02:53:242 (1271) - Move it to 02:53:227 -
Sorry about not being able too give a proper look to the two inner oni's It's a lovely song and I wish you all the best with getting it ranked!
d - Small don
D - Big don
k - Small kat
K - Big kat
Black means something that I think needs changed
Orange is just a suggestion
[General]
Add HimemiyaChikane to tags because of their guest diff
You need to make the audio file 192kps instead of what it is now. If you don't know how to do this, shoot me a pm and I can do it for you! ^^
[Kantan]
There are a lot of 4/1 breaks in your Kantan. While this isn't a bad thing, you might want to add a few more notes in some places to liven it up a bit. For example, you could at d's at 01:03:874 - and 01:04:227 - to fill this section up without leaving a 6/1 gap
Change the SV to 1.2
00:11:109 (10) - Move this note forward one tick so it lands on the white line before it, it's a bit awkward where it is for a Kantan. If you want to make this part a bit more full, all d's at 00:10:580 - and 00:10:933 -
00:56:462 (60) - Move this note back to 00:56:109 -, that way it lands on a beat and is not syncopated
00:57:168 (61) - Change this to a K
01:25:403 (88) - Change this to a K
01:57:697 (31) - Move this note forward a tick so it lands on the white line and maybe add another k at 01:57:168 -?
02:27:521 (62) - Change this to a D and also maybe add a d at 02:27:168 - ?
02:53:286 (1) - Extend this slider to 02:57:168 -
[Futsuu]
00:00:698 (2) - Make this a D
00:56:462 (103,104) - ctrl+g this, it fits the rhythm of the song closer as k d k K
01:19:756 (145) - Change this to a K, there is a crash here in the music
01:29:286 (162) - Move this note forward half a tick so it lands on the white line on 01:29:286 -
02:53:242 (98) - Move this note to 02:53:286 - and change it to a K since it's the last note of the song!
[Muzukashii]
Capitalize the "M" in Muzukashii
00:22:227 (67) - Change this to a k and 00:22:933 (72) - to a d, this pattern is a bit hard for the intro of a muzu diff. You could also change 00:23:109 (73) - to a d if you want to make it flow a bit better
00:46:028 (184) - Move this note to 00:46:050 - looks like you accidentally placed it on a 1/16th beat for some reason
00:46:050 (184) - Remove the finish on this note If you want to keep it, I suggest putting it on 00:45:874 (183) - instead because that's where the crash is in the song
01:19:756 (341) - Change this to a K
02:52:712 (31) - Move this note to 02:52:697 -
02:52:977 (32) - Move this note to 02:52:933 -
02:53:286 (33) - Move this note to 02:53:286 - and change it to a D.
The last three notes were is very awkward places and they fit just fine on 1/3 notes if you are that way inclined! Good muzu though, very fun
[Oni]
00:00:698 (3) - Change this to a D
00:56:197 (344) - Change this note to a k, kdddkkk is a bit out of place here
00:59:639 (369,370) - Change these two to k's? I think the double kkd works quite well here
01:09:345 (442,443) - ctrl+g this, it follows the beat closer as d k
02:52:462 (1127) - Move this note to 02:52:462 -
02:52:712 (1128) - Move this note to 02:52:697 -
02:52:992 (1129) - Move this note to 02:52:933 -
02:53:227 (1130) - The end of this slider isn't snapped, add a little more to it so it ends on 02:55:756 -
Didn't have time to go over the Inner Oni and Chikane's Oni, sorry I quickly opened them up and scanned through them though, this is just a few small things.
[Inner Oni]
You have two notes on the same beat here 02:05:991 (946) - Delete one of them.
01:55:756 (864,865,866,867,868,869,870,871,872,873,874,875,876) - I know this is an Inner Oni, but this part is a bit spammy for a 1/6th. You might want to make it a bit more mono-coloured if you are going to have it straight after a bunch of 1/4 notes
02:52:462 (1268) - Move it to 02:52:462 -
02:52:697 (1269) - Move it to 02:52:697 -
02:52:933 (1270) - Move it to 02:52:933 -
02:53:242 (1271) - Move it to 02:53:227 -
Sorry about not being able too give a proper look to the two inner oni's It's a lovely song and I wish you all the best with getting it ranked!