Come[Back]Home wrote:

Easy
00:23:187 (1,2) Move (2) a bit the left? Just straight up seems boring to me i think it`s fine :3
00:28:085 (1,2) Improve blank
00:37:881 (5) Add NC
00:47:677 (5) ^
01:07:269 (3) ^


Hard
00:03:595 (1,2) Improve blank i`m trying ;w;
00:10:636 (2,3) ctrl+g
00:10:483 (1,2,3) Try to do a perfect triangle
00:22:116 (5) Move the middle sliderpoint too 312/88
00:46:759 (5) Slider till 00:46:912 cause it feels like youre missing a vocal there ok,consider this


Nice map :3
Good luck o/
Chilli con carne > < > <

1. try more add tag? so, it's sweden group. so, add 'sweden'? also, album title 'Nothing but the Real Group' add.
   also, member (Emma Nilsdotter,Katarina Henryson,Anders Edenroth,Morten Vinther,Anders Jalkéus)
2. your BG 1280x720. try change 1366x768 or 1024x768.

1. 00:08:493 (1) - it's spinner not fit imo. end time 00:10:024 - better.
2. 00:28:085 (1) - why this only slider start whistle? maybe, switch slider start and slider end whistle.
3. 00:52:575 (1) - doesn't fit clap hitsound imo. i recommend delete it.

1. remove widescreen support!
2. 00:42:014 (1) - add circle here. bit strong sound. so, if added, more good imo.
3. 00:45:075 (5,1) - please perfect stack.
4. 00:48:595 (2,3) - ^ (it's bug?)

1. seems fine.

P o M u T a wrote:

hi!

[General]

1. try more add tag? so, it's sweden group. so, add 'sweden'? also, album title 'Nothing but the Real Group' add.
   also, member (Emma Nilsdotter,Katarina Henryson,Anders Edenroth,Morten Vinther,Anders Jalkéus)
2. your BG 1280x720. try change 1366x768 or 1024x768.

[Easy]

1. 00:08:493 (1) - it's spinner not fit imo. end time 00:10:024 - better.
2. 00:28:085 (1) - why this only slider start whistle? maybe, switch slider start and slider end whistle.
3. 00:52:575 (1) - doesn't fit clap hitsound imo. i recommend delete it.

[Hard]

1. seems fine.

great song haha.
good luck!

1. the Real Group shouldn't be in the tags. It's already mentioned as the artist. (Yes, I do realize that it's a part of the album's name).
   Note: the tags are a little bugged. Frst of all, remove the comma in ,Anders . Secondly, add HabiHolic to the tags.
2. Make sure to keep kiais consistent, at least through non-guest diffs. Consistency should be kept for the sake of set's quality.

1. 00:08:493 (1,1) - sorry, but this is too soon after the spinner. Try to leave at least 1 more white tick of empty space.
   Note: in this case, it's better to replace this spinner with a slider. Same applies for 00:32:983 (1,1) - this one.
   
   Just the spinners. I'd work on replacing them or making them more playable for beginners. Everything else looks safe.

1. Due to BPM and SV specifics AR 5 would fit better. Also, I'd set OD and HP to 4 to fix up the balance.
2. Personally, I'd set CS 3,5. 3 looks too big and makes the patterns a little awkward to me.
3. I find the clap you use rather unfitting. Pobably you should look for a custom replacement or different sampleset.
4. 00:06:351 - we can clearly hear that voice stops at this point, so it'd be logical to finish a slider here as well. Then, the whole pattern would sound more like this.
5. 00:10:330 (4) - replace with two circles? Making the strong beat with vocals (00:10:636 ) not clickable (players can't click there, this is just a tail of a slider) makes the rhythm weak. It's a good idea to make players feel evry strong beat by making them clickable.
6. 00:17:524 (3) - the circle here follows practically nothing and is based on polarity. Why don't we re-work your rhythm here, so, it'd make more sense with the music? Example
7. 01:03:289 (3) - I'd rather stress the vocals. Try to start slider at the red tick, (don't worry, it plays nicely thanks to polarity) Example
   
   I disagree with the copypasted patterns here as the song is really short and using copypaste makes it look lazymapped. But, well, it's your right to keep it. On another note, claps are really confusing me and so do your diff settings. I'd recommend to get some more assistance with this diff as it can be improved more.

1. Try AR 7,5? It might match nicely with your SV and BPM of the song.
2. 00:06:504 (2,3,4,5,6) - personally, I find the way you stack 1/2s and 1/1 object in the same combo a little misleading. Players might feel confused while reading them.
   Note: 00:28:085 (1,2,7,8) - 00:33:136 (2,3,4,5,6) - and so on - same.
3. 00:15:228 (7) - minor - try another shape which would go better with your flow? Rough example. The reason why is because the loop is rather agressive and it doesn't feel quite matching with the nature of this song.
4. 00:56:095 (6) - try to use an 1/2 slider here instead? Vocals and music on the white tick are pretty strong, it's betteer if we stress them.
   
   Refrshing and light Hard, I like it. Just some stacks make it a little tricky, but the rest is okay.

I still have a feq questions about the Normal diff, but the other diffs are ready. It needs just a little more mods.

-Bakari- wrote:

Yo, as requested.

[General]

1. the Real Group shouldn't be in the tags. It's already mentioned as the artist. (Yes, I do realize that it's a part of the album's name).
   Note: the tags are a little bugged. Frst of all, remove the comma in ,Anders . Secondly, add HabiHolic to the tags.
2. Make sure to keep kiais consistent, at least through non-guest diffs. Consistency should be kept for the sake of set's quality.

[Easy]

1. 00:08:493 (1,1) - sorry, but this is too soon after the spinner. Try to leave at least 1 more white tick of empty space.
   Note: in this case, it's better to replace this spinner with a slider. Same applies for 00:32:983 (1,1) - this one.
   
   Just the spinners. I'd work on replacing them or making them more playable for beginners. Everything else looks safe.

[Hard]

1. Try AR 7,5? It might match nicely with your SV and BPM of the song.
2. 00:06:504 (2,3,4,5,6) - personally, I find the way you stack 1/2s and 1/1 object in the same combo a little misleading. Players might feel confused while reading them.
   Note: 00:28:085 (1,2,7,8) - 00:33:136 (2,3,4,5,6) - and so on - same.
3. 00:15:228 (7) - minor - try another shape which would go better with your flow? Rough example. The reason why is because the loop is rather agressive and it doesn't feel quite matching with the nature of this song.
4. 00:56:095 (6) - try to use an 1/2 slider here instead? Vocals and music on the white tick are pretty strong, it's betteer if we stress them.
   
   Refrshing and light Hard, I like it. Just some stacks make it a little tricky, but the rest is okay.

I still have a feq questions about the Normal diff, but the other diffs are ready. It needs just a little more mods.

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Best of luck!

Rokkea wrote:

wow 2nd time lol
anyway

[General]
The sound file, there's a sharp sound in the end, is it ok if you edit that part out?

[Easy]
00:37:881 (1) - Minor, move this to (132,328).
01:10:942 (2) - Rotate this by -40 degrees for a clean curve.

Simple, maybe the 3 relatively fast spinners in the 1st kiai is a lil tough for beginners.

[Hard]
00:10:942 (1,2,3,4) - Minor thing, move (2) to (396,208), (3) to (368,136) and (4) to (188,160).
00:22:116 (5) - I feel like the 1.3 spacing does not affect anything at all, how about making this 1.2 instead? Example, rotate it by -5 degrees and place it at (356,132).
00:33:749 (4) - Another minor thing, move it to (40,76).
01:01:912 (5) - this is prob the most naziest thing I've ever done. Anyway, rotate this by -2 degrees.

The diff is fine, it's great without any significant changes.


Everything I've done is all touch-ups, the whole mapset's nice to play and is of good quality too.
Good luck!

nikachyan wrote:

Ticket used--------

[General]
No need to double the bpm, use 96 is fine
Combo colours can be more edible better

[Hard]
I suggest you get the rid of that distance snap and make it an easy insane, also the SV you’ve chosen makes some of the sliders not so clear and neat
00:02:218 (5) –NC
00:04:667 (3) -^
00:07:116 (3) -^
00:15:228 (7) –try fit a reversed slider here consider this
00:19:208 (5) –put it at 136,140?
00:19:820 (8) –delete, add a whistle on 00:19:667 (7) –
00:35:279 (4) –delete, make 3 overlapping with 1 and 2
00:42:014 (3,4,6,1) –fit them in a square? consider this
00:55:942 (5) –delete
00:58:391 (3) -^
01:00:381 (4) -^
01:03:442 (6) –NC
01:03:595 (7) – put it further if you wanna make it as an easy insane….. or overlap them if you make it as a hard yup
01:13:238 (6,7) -^

[Easy]
00:16:300 (1,2) –fit them here 00:16:300 –, and stretch 2 until 00:17:677 –
No other problems.

Nice song.

[AppLoad] wrote:

Hi, small mod from me, thx for you mod) Sorry for my bad english

Easy
00:08:493 (1) - I think this spinner should be slightly longer. I think, that end of spinner should be on 00:10:330 sorry, it's unrankable, other spinner suggestion is same
00:11:555 (2,3) - Don't like this, i think it will be better.ok
00:37:881 (1) - Maybe it should be corrected? Make it a bit prettier.
00:42:779 (1) - I think this spinner should be slightly longer. I think, that end of spinner should be on 00:44:616
00:52:575 (1) - I think this spinner should be slightly longer. I think, that end of spinner should be on 00:54:412

Hard
Nice diff)
00:01:453 (2,3) - I don't like, that these objects are in the same place. In my opinion, it's not very good looks. hmm, i think it's fine
00:40:024 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe try this?sorry ;w;

Okay, all suggestions is just my opinion. Good Luck

toybot wrote:

Request from queue!~

Man it would be nice if you got a drum hitsound for those drums in the beginning yup,consider this

[Hard]
00:04:055 (2) - the blanket could be curved less to be perfect i'm trying ;w;
00:35:432 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Rhythm's awkward here, as it sounds off-time. It should be this: http://puu.sh/guv5Q/981e7b5de3.jpg To get this, just delete (7), move (3,4,5,6) forward 1/2, and add circle on 00:36:351 - . cool
00:46:147 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^

[Easy]
00:28:085 - at here, you switch the whistle pattern to downbeats. Since I think having whistle on 1 and 3 sounds better, I recommend moving the whistles in the section 00:19:514 - 00:27:473 - to 1 and 3, downbeats. I think it was just an accident on hitsound placement =w= consider this
01:04:820 (1) - this slider looks really weird lol, just saying i'd change it sorry, it's fine i think

Great mapset, good luck!

Arcubin wrote:

hi.. o/ from mod q

[General]

1. shutt... >.< i'm a member of an acapella group... i'll try this with my group afterward good :3

[Easy]

1. 00:06:044 (1) - imo try something like http://puu.sh/guAdc.jpg for better flow. your current is.. quite awkward sry, i want now
2. 00:08:493 (1) - suggest to extend it by 1/1 cause the sound there is a bit stronger sry,it's unrankable
3. 00:40:330 (1,2) - this is quite surprising imo cause you only use 2/1 beats before ><
4. 00:44:616 - add object? unrankable too
5. 00:50:126 (1,2) - same as 00:40:330 (1,2) -

sorry.. i'm not into symmetrical flow >.<

[Hard]

1. 00:10:483 (1,2,3) - could be whistle consider this
2. 00:21:198 (2,4) - that little overlap isn't neat >.> i think it's fine
3. 00:36:351 (3,4,5) - i feel offbeat here :3 maybe just the hitsound but... fixed before :3
4. 00:46:147 (3,4,5) - ^
5. 00:48:136 - imo here a clickable object will work good
6. 00:52:728 (1) - don't be lazy... map them :3 sorry, i want more spinner
7. 00:57:473 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - inb4 the structure is weird... make the curve more curve a bit imo consider this

Chaoslitz wrote:

[Easy]

1. 00:01:147 (1,1,1) - i dont think these new combo colour is needed :3 i think it's fine
2. 00:32:983 (1,2) - cursor is in upward movement but then 00:34:208 (2) is going down, i think you need to fix the flow here
3. 00:55:024 (1,2) - fix the flow here, cursor is moving left when players hit the slider
4. 00:57:473 (1) - the reverse slider dont fit the rhythm imo, suggest:hmm..consider this
5. 01:07:269 (3) - ^ ^

[Hard]

1. 00:30:381 (9,1) - stack is not needed since it is a new combo i think it's fine too
2. 00:51:657 (2) - should place 00:51:580 instead

clean mapset o3o
good luck ww

Leorda wrote:

Hi there...

[Easy]
* Since BPM were fast, I think whole spinner were too short for beginners. Please extend it as possible or replace it with slider agree that, but if now is ok, i want neglect this, i'll fix that if have more point out about that

[Hard]
00:55:024 (1) - Since the default spinner is colored blue, it might be this apporach circle would be blended with spinner and players would unable to see. Consider to change the color by click the right-arrow beside NC and choose it ok, fixed that

That's all I got.. good luck

Alex Li wrote:

hope i didn't mod the wrong map
from my ticket

[Easy]

1. 00:16:453 (1,2) - I dont think its good for here because in this diff you kinda 1/1 spam and followed the music not the vocal, it have no instrument sound here and 00:17:065 (2) - would sounds offbeat, i recommend you to delete it ok
2. 01:07:269 (3) - weird slider hmm,i think it's fine. but so many point out that. so try this

[Hard]

1. 00:17:524 (4) - there is no music to support your overmap here, not a good idea i think it's fine
2. 00:51:350 (1,2,3) - might be confused for people who play hard, reverse slider for this? sorry, i want put just circle this part, but consider this
3. 00:56:095 (6,7) - I think 1/1 fits the music more http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2908673 i want make more hard ><
4. 01:03:442 (6,7) - nc and jump here? btw I dont think jump at 01:03:289 (5,6) - its a good idea consider this
5. 01:05:891 (6,7) - same as 00:56:095 (6,7) - sorry
6. 01:13:085 (5,6,7) - same as 01:03:442 (5,6,7) - same

gl

• 
  00:15:840 (1) - Maybe have the slider at 00:14:616 (3) shorter and have a circle here
  00:15:840 (1) - http://puu.sh/gMqhk/06f8d5b92a.jpg I also think this might be nice here since the current notes are not really falling on any hearable sounds so you might as well follow the lyrics here or put a break
  00:18:289 (1) - 70% still seems a bit loud in this section (maybe just stick with 50)
  01:04:820 (1) - Make the bump a little smaller so it lands on exactly 1/2 of the slider to match the music
  Not much else to note here, prety simple map.

• 
  00:37:881 (1) - Like in easy, make the end of the bump land on exactly 1/2 of the slider
  00:06:044 (1) - Return slider feels better here
  00:10:024 (4) - Make slider a little shorter and put a circle at the end, sounds really good imo
  00:10:483 (1) - And maybe instead put a little return slider here instead of the weirdly starting slider (http://puu.sh/gMrxj/66273b6595.jpg)
  00:15:840 (1) - Replace this with the same pattern as 00:20:738 (1,2)
  00:19:361 (3) - Make a return slider and remove 00:19:973 (4) as it feels weird
  00:23:187 (1) - Also use the same as 00:25:636 (1,2) here and remove 00:24:106 (3)
  00:51:351 (4) - http://puu.sh/gMw4G/9e12c51b3d.png like this maybe
  00:59:157 (4) - Use a slider here followed by a circle at 00:59:616 (5) Same on the next section at 01:08:953 (4,5)

• 
  00:09:871 (4) - maybe have this at like 1.5x from the previous to go nicely with the music build-up
  00:32:983 (1) - Remove this and move 00:33:136 (2,3) - to that time
  00:41:249 (4) - Make this another one of those small sliders
  00:41:555 (1) - I think a slider here seems nice there and starts 00:41:861 (2,3,4) better: http://puu.sh/gMxmh/e1875d9b5b.jpg
  00:42:626 (6) - Having this one curve down instead of up flows better imo
  00:51:351 (1) - see previous suggestion of slider and move 00:51:657 (2) onto the white tick, feels much better
  00:55:024 (1,2) - Feels better as a slider
  01:01:759 (4,5) - Flows bad, this would work http://puu.sh/gMyJt/da83fcb9f2.jpg

Tenderz wrote:

Hey ranger, sorry I'm a little late with the M4M response

Easy

• 
  00:15:840 (1) - Maybe have the slider at 00:14:616 (3) shorter and have a circle here quite match music, but i want leave now, sorry ;w;
  00:15:840 (1) - http://puu.sh/gMqhk/06f8d5b92a.jpg I also think this might be nice here since the current notes are not really falling on any hearable sounds so you might as well follow the lyrics here or put a break ^ same reason
  00:18:289 (1) - 70% still seems a bit loud in this section (maybe just stick with 50) changed 60
  01:04:820 (1) - Make the bump a little smaller so it lands on exactly 1/2 of the slider to match the music ok
  Not much else to note here, prety simple map.

Hard

• 
  00:09:871 (4) - maybe have this at like 1.5x from the previous to go nicely with the music build-up just consider this
  00:32:983 (1) - Remove this and move 00:33:136 (2,3) - to that time hmm...sorry
  00:41:249 (4) - Make this another one of those small sliders
  00:41:555 (1) - I think a slider here seems nice there and starts 00:41:861 (2,3,4) better: http://puu.sh/gMxmh/e1875d9b5b.jpg consider this too
  00:42:626 (6) - Having this one curve down instead of up flows better imo ok
  00:51:351 (1) - see previous suggestion of slider and move 00:51:657 (2) onto the white tick, feels much better consider this too
  00:55:024 (1,2) - Feels better as a slider sorry, i want to make this only circle
  01:01:759 (4,5) - Flows bad, this would work http://puu.sh/gMyJt/da83fcb9f2.jpg cooool

The background made me really hungry, agree that XD
good luck with this

sheela901 wrote:

Hey Ranger! heeeeey o/

General

1. You can remove the second word Anders in the tags, since there's already one. it's group member's name(Anders Edenroth and Anders Jalkeus). is correct remove this?
2. I suggest you use a blank sliderslide sound. The sliders are noisy, especially the long sliders used in Easy. Here's a file. Don't forget changing the sampleset to S:C1, which is Custom 1.

Easy

1. 00:18:902 to 00:28:085 - The whistles go on the downbeats in the middle, but other objects that land on the big downbeats has whistles, so it sounds a bit weird to me. I think you should with the same pattern, as used in the beginning and later of this section.
2. 00:44:004 (5) - Make a curve to the down-left direction so it doesn't overlap a little 00:45:840 (2) ?

Hard

1. 00:10:330 - I think you should add an object on that tick, because it doesn't correct to me, and players might not notice that 00:10:483 (1) is actually on the red tick, so it's a bad polarity. i want follow vocal in this part
2. 00:15:840 to 00:18:289 - Maybe you can reduce the distance or the slider velocity for this section. I think it would fit with the music, since there's only the vocals, which seems not joyful like the rest of the music.
3. 00:51:044 (4) - I don't think the players could catch this rhythm and pattern. I suggest you try this rhythm with its pattern (of course, you can make your own): to be honest, i want to only put the circle i n this part, but two point out already, so it have a problem, so i fixed that
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   .
4. 00:52:728 (1) - Reduce the spinner to 00:54:412 ? It would let a 1/1 gap between this and the following object, so the player could get back on track easily.just consider this

This should be it from me. Good luck with the map! Nothing was problematic to me. Don't hesitate if you have questions.

Ranger wrote:

sheela901 wrote:

General

1. You can remove the second word Anders in the tags, since there's already one. it's group member's name(Anders Edenroth and Anders Jalkeus). is correct remove this?

It's okay to remove the second one. We don't want to find a duplicate tag in the tags.

sheela901 wrote:

Ranger wrote:

General

1. You can remove the second word Anders in the tags, since there's already one. it's group member's name(Anders Edenroth and Anders Jalkeus). is correct remove this?

It's okay to remove the second one. We don't want to find a duplicate tag in the tags.

ok, fixed that XD

-Bakari- wrote:

Poke me when it's bubbled <3

1. No custom colours? Come on, I'm sure you can add some of them fitting with the BG.

1. 00:42:779 (4) - Missing NC.
2. 00:52:575 (4) - Same.
3. 00:57:473 (1) - Are you sure you prefer this like a bit empty? I miss a whistle at the beginning.
4. 01:07:269 (4,1) - I miss a NC in (4) so better swap them for consistency.

1. 00:17:524 (3) - I can't hear anything here o.o This should be removed though you will have to move 00:17:677 (4) - as well.
2. 00:41:555 (1) - This NC breaks the current consistency so I suggest to remove it.
3. 00:45:228 (2) - Finish doesn't fit here, just remove it.
4. 00:55:024 (1) - Same here, what about using whistle instead?
5. 01:04:820 (1) - Same.

1. 00:17:524 (4) - Same as Normal, there's nothing here so you don't need to map it :< You might have to fix distance later, btw.
2. 00:59:463 (1,3) - You are breaking the consistency while you're not swapping them D:
3. 01:09:259 (1,3) - Same here, the NC doesn't fit with vocal or even music where it is now, I hope you understand what I say.

Inyuschan wrote:

[General]

1. No custom colours? Come on, I'm sure you can add some of them fitting with the BG.

[Easy]

1. 00:42:779 (4) - Missing NC.
2. 00:52:575 (4) - Same.
3. 00:57:473 (1) - Are you sure you prefer this like a bit empty? I miss a whistle at the beginning.
4. 01:07:269 (4,1) - I miss a NC in (4) so better swap them for consistency. and add whistle at the beginning

[Habi's Normal]

1. 00:17:524 (3) - I can't hear anything here o.o This should be removed though you will have to move 00:17:677 (4) - as well. same hard diff
2. 00:41:555 (1) - This NC breaks the current consistency so I suggest to remove it.
3. 00:45:228 (2) - Finish doesn't fit here, just remove it.
4. 00:55:024 (1) - Same here, what about using whistle instead?
5. 01:04:820 (1) - Same.

[Hard]

1. 00:17:524 (4) - Same as Normal, there's nothing here so you don't need to map it :< You might have to fix distance later, btw. i know, but if remove this. i feel little empty. so i want retain this. but it's seriously wrong, i'll change it
   
2. 00:59:463 (1,3) - You are breaking the consistency while you're not swapping them D:
3. 01:09:259 (1,3) - Same here, the NC doesn't fit with vocal or even music where it is now, I hope you understand what I say.

Call me back.

Inyuschan wrote:

Cool stuff.

1. You don't have a 192 kbps mp3?
2. Video has an audio track. I know it's silent but the audio track must be removed.
3. Easy and Hard aren't GD's so they need to have the same kiai.

xxdeathx wrote:

Random bubble check!

[General]

1. You don't have a 192 kbps mp3? yup
2. Video has an audio track. I know it's silent but the audio track must be removed.lol,sorry. fixed
3. Easy and Hard aren't GD's so they need to have the same kiai. ok

Also, spread between Easy and Normal is questionable. Easy is all mapped in 2/1 rhythm and Normal has mostly 1/1 and 1/2. You can add more 1/1 rhythms to easy to close the difficulty gap between them. (or a new difficulty but that would take much more time) is a big deal? i think it's fine because star rating proper enough. and new diff....sorry i'm really don't have a time ;3;

Call me back after fixing