1. Easy (1.16 stars, 73 notes)
2. Hard (2.77 stars, 187 notes)
3. Normal (1.65 stars, 121 notes)

1. 00:05:116 (1) - better delete this note, hard to catch and the beat is not that strong.
2. 00:13:788 (7) - won't hurt much if move one grid down, somehow it is obviously soft-error spacing.
3. 00:22:695 (9,1) - Better swap NC.
4. 00:31:601 (4) - this is hardest diff so I think you can spread this into two circles to fit with vocal more.
5. 00:34:765 (4) - use 1/2 slider instead (end on blue tick) and that will be fit with vocal.
6. 01:12:382 (5) - blanket please.

1. 00:08:163 (1) - no need to NC here, the thing it did is just make newbie player confuse. (you know that newbie still play normal diff and some are skip easy to play normal first)
2. 00:10:976 (1,2) - swap NC.

1. 00:54:101 (1,2) - swap NC and so on (NC just at big white tick) like you did on 01:00:195 (1,2).
2. 01:12:851 (1) - perfect stack.
3. 01:20:820 - add something would be great, it's too empty. you can add one slider that start on 01:20:820 and end on 01:22:226

P A N wrote:

feel so lonely here, where is everyone?

[Hard]

1. 00:05:116 (1) - better delete this note, hard to catch and the beat is not that strong. Done !
2. 00:13:788 (7) - won't hurt much if move one grid down, somehow it is obviously soft-error spacing. Done !
3. 00:22:695 (9,1) - Better swap NC. Done !
4. 00:31:601 (4) - this is hardest diff so I think you can spread this into two circles to fit with vocal more. I'm not sure about that since the vocal is so weird here, too faint for circle perhaps !
5. 00:34:765 (4) - use 1/2 slider instead (end on blue tick) and that will be fit with vocal. Done !
6. 01:12:382 (5) - blanket please. Done !

[Normal]

1. 00:08:163 (1) - no need to NC here, the thing it did is just make newbie player confuse. (you know that newbie still play normal diff and some are skip easy to play normal first) Done !
2. 00:10:976 (1,2) - swap NC. Still so new to NCing Done !

[Easy]

1. 00:54:101 (1,2) - swap NC and so on (NC just at big white tick) like you did on 01:00:195 (1,2). Done !
2. 01:12:851 (1) - perfect stack. Done !
3. 01:20:820 - add something would be great, it's too empty. you can add one slider that start on 01:20:820 and end on 01:22:226 Done !

you really did nice job here, not so hard to make this rank. already good, try your best and good luck. THANK YOU SO MUCH !!!

1. 00:05:116 - Unused timing point
2. 00:10:038 (4) - Minor blanket:
   
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3. 00:37:460 - Unused timing point
4. 00:37:695 (1) - Remove the slider clap and make the clap on the head / tail. Applies for other notes in KIAI
5. 00:43:320 (4,1) - Minor blanket:
   
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6. 00:45:663 (2) - ^

1. 00:05:116 - Unused timing point
2. 00:12:382 - Feels like not needed for hitsounds here
3. 00:13:788 - ^
4. 00:17:070 - ^
5. 00:17:538 - ^ They're silent part, with only bass
6. 00:36:991 - Prefer a note here and 00:37:460 - for the constant vocal
7. 00:37:460 - Unused timing point
8. 00:37:695 (1) - Remove the slider clap and make the clap on the head / tail. Applies for other notes in KIAI
9. 00:42:851 (3) - Try to stack it perfectly with tail of 00:40:976 (1) - , or not to stack too close with it
10. 01:05:820 (1) - As mentioned, for the slider clap, the claps don't sound at all when playing
11. 01:22:226 (2) - Remove Clap, sounds extra

1. 00:05:116 - Unused timing point
2. 00:07:695 (1) - Sounds different volume with other heavy hits
3. 00:56:445 (3,4,5) - Could be a better triangle better like this (rotate 120* each):
   
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4. 01:20:820 (7) - NC for consistency
5. 01:22:226 (8) - Remove clap

Rakuen wrote:

( =`･ω･´) Rakuen's Modding Queue (NM/M4M)

Default = Normal mods
Opt. = Optional / Minor / Nazi
Blue = Strongly recommended
Red = Unrankable issue

[General]
:3
Exorcist~

There could be an Insane imo, c'mon it's a TV size Hmm...I'm not too sure about this, since the low BPM kinda suggests is shouldn't have one, because if I do make one, then it'll probably be really overmapped !

[Lead In]
Maybe can put a bit audio lead in, like 1000 ~ 2000 cuz the song starts quickly Done !

[Preview Point]
Prefer to place at 00:37:460 - for including the vocal led to chorus Done !

And place make it same for all diffs

[KIAI Time]
Try not to abuse the use of KIAI even tho you might want more flash effects, might be the cause unrankable issues.

imo 1 flash at 00:52:695 - for the whole KIAI is enough I guess you're right, there's no need to blind the players

[Hitsound Volume]
There's no need 100% volume for all the heavy clash like 00:00:195 (1) - , maximum 80% could work well Done !

[Easy]

1. 00:05:116 - Unused timing point Removed.
2. 00:10:038 (4) - Minor blanket: Done !
   
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3. 00:37:460 - Unused timing point Removed.
4. 00:37:695 (1) - Remove the slider clap and make the clap on the head / tail. Applies for other notes in KIAI My apologies, but I don't really understand this, since as far as I can see the clap is on the head and tail !
5. 00:43:320 (4,1) - Minor blanket: Fixed.
   
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6. 00:45:663 (2) - ^ ^

[Normal]

1. 00:05:116 - Unused timing point Removed !
2. 00:12:382 - Feels like not needed for hitsounds here Mistake lol removed
3. 00:13:788 - ^ ^
4. 00:17:070 - ^ ^
5. 00:17:538 - ^ They're silent part, with only bass Removed.
6. 00:36:991 - Prefer a note here and 00:37:460 - for the constant vocal I think the vocals here are too soft, however, I will keep this in mind.
7. 00:37:460 - Unused timing point Removed.
8. 00:37:695 (1) - Remove the slider clap and make the clap on the head / tail. Applies for other notes in KIAI My apologies, but I don't really understand this, since as far as I can see the clap is on the head and tail !
9. 00:42:851 (3) - Try to stack it perfectly with tail of 00:40:976 (1) - , or not to stack too close with it Stacked !
10. 01:05:820 (1) - As mentioned, for the slider clap, the claps don't sound at all when playing Added, must've forgotten them.
11. 01:22:226 (2) - Remove Clap, sounds extra Done !

[Hard]

1. 00:05:116 - Unused timing point Removed.
2. 00:07:695 (1) - Sounds different volume with other heavy hits Does it? Changed the volume then.
3. 00:56:445 (3,4,5) - Could be a better triangle better like this (rotate 120* each): Done !
   
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4. 01:20:820 (7) - NC for consistency Done !
5. 01:22:226 (8) - Remove clap Done!

The mapset is nicely mapped, just need a little more improvements on hitsounds~ Thank You ! Still so new...

FlobuFlobs wrote:

Just quick look, no KD

You should add Audioleadin of 2000, it starts too fast

And you should check AImod, the previewtime is off in other diffs

Inyuschan wrote:

M4M, if I'm not mistaken.

General

1. Why not adding some different combo colours? Actually you have the default ones, and we're not used to see maps with that case. Consider changing them and adding colours which fit with the BG.
2. Add 黒木 メイサ at Romanised Artist, also maybe I consider necessary adding Satsuki Shimabukuro and 島袋 さつき to tags since it's the artist's real name.
3. Please, remove Ao No Exorcist from tags, it's already in Source. You can add 青のエクソシスト instead.
4. Remove the second "exorcist" you added from tags, it's not necessary adding the same word twice.
5. I've read what you think about adding Insane, but at least you should try adding one. You can also ask someone to make it!
6. 00:00:195 - I suggest to NOT start mapping here. It's only one note, doesn't fit really well imo, you can dispense with it. Make all diffs start here 00:07:695 - instead.
7. Little suggestion: I prefer if you start kiai at 00:37:460 because it's the beginning of chorus. Rhythm doesn't change so much so you don't have any reason for start kiai where it is now.

Easy

1. 00:50:820 (3) - Why not clap sound here? You've been adding claps all the time. Done ! (Check this in all diffs)
2. Anyway, I think you are abusing of claps. I'd add them only each two white lines. (Please, consider doing this in all diffs) I think they're fine ! I'll wait for some more modding on hitsounds then, since I've already got two that say the hitsounds are bad
3. 00:52:695 (1,2,1,2,1,1,2) - Please, continue adding NC each two stanzas. This is really inconsistent. Do it in all cases. Fixed !
4. 01:22:695 (1) - That Normal sampleset doesn't really fit here imo. (Check this in all diffs) Oh noes, it's for the normal hitsound clap, I think the clap from normal fits very, just maybe not the normal hit.
5. 01:23:163 (1) - Maybe finishing this at 01:28:202 - fits better. (Check this in all diffs) No thanks.

Normal

1. 00:18:945 (1) - !nazi - Move this 1 grid down for a better blanket with 00:17:538 (4) - >< Okay lol
2. 00:19:413 (2,3,4) - This pattern looks a bit weird if you ask me because 00:20:351 (3) - is almost touching those sliders and destroys completely the flow. ;w; Consider curving a bit the sliders I guess the flow is bad here, well, I haven't curved them but I've spaced them out a bit more.
3. 00:24:570 (1) - Inconsistency. Remove this NC. Done ~ !
4. 00:27:382 (1,2,1,2,3) - Please, try to keep a consistency, I don't consider vocals a reason to add a new NC. Just add NC each two stanzas. I believe I've fixed now !
5. 00:35:585 (3,4,5) - This flow can be improved for sure! Try this. Done !
6. 00:39:101 (3) - !nazi - Move the slider's end 1 grid down for a better blanket with 00:40:038 (4). Done lol
7. 00:53:632 (3,1,2,3,1,2) - Try to avoid this kind of overlaps... They are a bit annoying for beginner players. Really? I think they're fine, I think they go with the vocals well.

Hard

1. 00:11:210 (1,2) - Swap NC, it should be added on stanza. Done !
2. 00:16:601 (1,2) - More inconsistency. :/ Fix this in all diffs. I don't really understand. with NCs?
3. 00:25:507 (6) - In case you wanted to make a symmetrical pattern, this slider is not symmetrical, improve this a bit. Done.
4. 00:31:601 (4) - Ctrl+G this, actually it follows an opposite direction from 00:32:304 (5) - I think. I don't understand? lol my reply to your mod is full of i dont understand xD
5. 00:32:890 (7,1) - This overlap looks a bit ugly if you ask me. >: Try to avoid it. Oh, just noticed that. Done !
6. 00:33:945 (1,4) - About symmetry again: if your idea was making a symmetrical pattern, you can copy and paste 00:33:945 (1) - to 00:34:765 (4) - Also, I just noticed they aren't perfectly symmetrical. ;w; Fix this stuff, please. Hmmm...maybe it wasn't. Fixed !
7. 01:10:507 (5,2) - !nazi - Fix this stack. Wow lol that really is !nazi, fixed ! xD
8. 01:22:695 (3) - NC, I guess you added it in E and N. Done !

Overall, this needs more work imo. But not bad, just keep improving! Thanks ! Also, I fixed some the General.

Good luck.

Momochikun wrote:

Hi, as requested :3

[General]
As Aimod says, more than 1/2 of your song length is kiai. Consider reducing this if possible ?
Um,, personally i dislike how your hitsounding on first kiai time, is just feels out of place and too loud.. i'd just make it soft like other parts or atleast reducing the volume of the section. Hmmm, Okay then I'll make sure to sort this out, I may add new, softer hitsounds or just make them not so much.

[Hard]
00:11:445 (1) - Personally i feel weird to see red node slider here, i'd just use straight or simple curve instead Done.
00:18:945 (1) - I'd make this slider kind of symmetrical with previous slider, would create more sense imo Done.

SPOILER

00:19:648 (3) - Ctrl J for neater flow ? True, it's better like that.
00:21:991 (8) - Drum clap would fit perfectly on this stream.. Hmm, alright added.
00:22:695 (1) - Missing finish Added.
00:34:648 (3,4) - Very minor stuffs, seems they're not perfectly stacked >_> Done !
00:31:601 (4) - How about more following the vocal ? changing this into a note then triplet should work nice to emphasis it, here's kind of rhythm and pattern that you could use to make this part more catchy Done !

SPOILER

00:37:460 - I'd start kiai here instead, feels plain to see a burst at slider slide ? if you would like to keep it.. then why not adding note at the part instead just like other diffs. Okay I've changed it to a 1/2 slider.
00:47:070 (9,1) - Swap NC's ? Done !
00:50:820 (6) - I'll add Nc here because the rhythm is changing into other phase Done !
01:05:585 (7) - ^ Done !
00:58:788 (1) - Missing clap at slider end Added !
01:18:007 (5) - Hm.. i don't really like how they're flow, how about another rhythm ? make (4) a slider reverse then adding note would create better transition here imo, something like below could make sense :3

SPOILER

Added triplet instead !

[Normal]
00:13:788 (4) - How bout make this straight slider just like 00:15:663 (2) - to create smooth contact between them ? Hmm, I'll have to decline on this one, since I think the two being different shapes gives a more kind of new combo feel.
00:30:195 (1) - I don't like how this part flow, making this one at the opposite way should make the circular flow become better.. try this

SPOILER

Changed the whole section ~
00:59:023 (2) - the start of this slider is almost inaudible.. i'd increase the volume a bit for this.. Increased.
01:14:023 (2) - ^ same stuffs, also this slider looks a bit cramped for me, consider reducing the curve point a bit ? Done !
01:16:132 (3,1) - ah.. also this plays awkwadly during gameplay, try straight instead for neater transition..

SPOILER

Used it !
01:23:163 (1) - End this spinner on the same point with Hard diff

[Easy]
00:14:726 - Hm.. are you sure to skip the snare drum here ? you've been emphasized it until now that make it like inconsistency stuffs Okay I've added it.
00:56:445 (1) - Why this single slider NC ? i'd make this a bit longer because it would ruin the HP drain system >_> Must've been an accident
01:23:163 (1) - Same as Normal
Massive blankets.. can't say much apart from the stuffs i say at general

GL ~ Thanks for the mod !! The best so far ~

Come[Back]Home wrote:

Easy
00:00:195 (1) Delete this one Nah, It's a really strong beat so I'd like to keep it that way.
00:11:913 (2,1) Im not sure about this overlap here. Maybe you should change it I can't really see the overlap you're talking about, unless it's the one at 14: 726 which I can't change.
00:14:726 Why no Hitcircle? Why no hitcircle? There is a hitcircle there, sorry, I am slightly confused.
00:26:445 Add Hitcircle I think it is fine like this, I skipped this one out because there were a lot of 1/1 slider before, and I thought I'd give them a break, since this diff is for real beginners.
00:40:976 (1,2) This could be confusing for beginners i think Okay, changed.

Normal
00:00:195 (1) Delete this one Nah, It's a really strong beat so I'd like to keep it that way.
00:25:507 (1) Delete NC Done.
00:27:382 (3) Add NC Done something similar by NCing the object before it.
00:27:851 (1) Delete NC Done.
00:36:991 Add Hitcircle Nah, this part is too hard to map and I think leaving it plane feels better.
00:38:163 Add a clap Done.
00:43:788 (6) ^ Done.
00:50:351 Add Hitcircle Done.

Hard
00:17:538 (3) Make it curvy or something else, but not straight Okay, changed, but there's absolutely nothing wrong with candlesticks !
01:14:726 (4,2) I think this overlap is weird. Fixed.



Nice Map.
I loved the map from tutuhaha but this one is really nice too :3
Good Luck ) Thank you ~ !

kajiyatta wrote:

M4M
[General]
The BG's aspect isn't 16:9 neither 4:3, so it looks Unrankble. So try to use this, it's 16:9 format.
BG
Inconsistence Widescreen Support, delete this check because there is no SB.
Delete letterbox? if it's intensional,it's no problem.
There are 7 combo colors but I suppose it looks too many because this song is TV version. And looks like similar color, so delete some of them better.
Overall, NC pattern is a bit odd for me. Put NCs to follow the music or vocal better.
[Easy]
I just suppose OD1 is too low, maybe OD2 better for diff spreading. 1.5
Placement
00:48:476(1) Liner slider isn't good flow for newbie I suppose, it is a bit difficult for the easiest diff. So more seamless flow, maybe like this?

SPOILER

Thank you for the suggestion, I've added it.
00:56:445(1) Is this NC really necessary? I don't like to spam NCs for the easiest diff. Okay, removed, I was adding them in quantity for consistency with the other diffs.
01:13:788(1) ^ ^
Rhythm
00:35:820 Same as Normal, I don't suppose it is better to place a brank here. So put a 2/1 slider here?

SPOILER

Added.
Hit Sound
Same as Hard about adding normal-finish sound. Okay.
[Normal]
Placement
00:15:663(2) I supose down curved slider looks nicely to be symmetrical with previous (4).

SPOILER

Done.
00:30:195(1-5) This flow looks a bit odd and not good for newbie I suppose, just move the direction of slider better. e.g.)

SPOILER

Added.
01:22:695(1) Not stacking better. Fixed.
Rhythm
00:36:523 Is this blank really necessary? The gap of spacing looks difficult for newbie, and this part has vocal and instrumental enough to place notes. So adding circles of slider better. Okay, I've added a slider there.
Hit Sound
Same as Hard about adding normal-finish sound. Added.
00:43:788(6) Missing claps? Added.
[Hard]
Placement
00:08:632(3) Just flow suggestion, try to use this placement it would be better than current one.

SPOILER

Used.
00:09:570(5) ^ I'll pass on this one.
00:36:054(2) ^ It would cause a lot of conflict with the following notes so I'd rather not, but thanks!

SPOILER

Used.
01:03:476(1,2,3) It's a bit odd placement due to stack, I suppose no stacking looks better flow than current one. e.g.)

SPOILER

Thanks, used.
Rhythm
00:20:585(5) This 1/1 slider doesn't follow vocal, instrumental and sounds weird.Just pick the white line of center better for Hard. e.g.)

SPOILER

Used.
01:23:163(1) The end of spinner isn't consistent compared with other diffs. Should be 01:28:085. THANK YOU FOR GOING TO THE LENGHTHS OF POINTING IT OUT, YOU HAVE SAVED ME SO MUCH TRUBBLE *SNIFFLES*
Hit Sound
00:22:695(1) Add normal-finish at head, it sounds really nice. Done.
00:37:460(1) ^ ^
00:52:695(1) ^ ^
01:07:695(1) ^ ^
00:32:304(5) Missing hitsounds at end. Added.
01:23:161) The spinner vonus sound soiunds loudly, so reduce volume better. Apply to all diffs. Okay done.

Good luck. Thanks so much for the star !!

-Mo- wrote:

Hey, Mod4Mod from your queue.

Easy
- This blanket could be slightly improved [00:11:327]. If you look from that timestamp, you can see how the blanket compares with the approach circle. Too lazy xD I mean, It's really hard to do this particular one.
- 00:40:976 (1,2) - I think this is a little confusing for beginners to play, since the first slider ends on the downbeat, and the second note starts on a red tick. Perhaps use something like a repeating slider instead? Changed.
- 01:17:070 (1) - This blanket could be improved [01:16:718]. Fixed.
- 01:17:070 (1,1,2) - These notes aren't quite inline. If having them offset was the intention, then try and make the incline more distinct.I don't see anything wrong with one, but I fixed two.

Pretty clean difficulty. :3 TY

Normal
- 00:30:195 (1) - This blanket could be improved [00:29:843]. Switched that part completely.
- 00:40:038 (4) - As above [00:39:687]. Fixed.
- 00:53:632 (3) - As above [00:52:812]. Try and make blankets circular rather than parabolic, since personally paradolic blankets aren't very good. Okay.
- 00:55:507 (3) - As above [00:54:804]. Fixed.
- 01:14:023 (2) - I think the flow is kind of ruined by this slider, since the curve is so sharp. I would adjust this slider so the curve isn't as sharp so that the combo flows a bit better. That or move the circles around. Changed.
- 01:16:132 (3) - This blanket could be improved [01:15:077]. Ahem lol no, thats not a blanket.

Hard
- 00:30:195 (1,2,3) - The spacing here is inconsistent, and in my opinion too close. I would personally use x0.6 spacing for these.Done.
- 00:34:648 (3,4) - These aren't perfectly stacked. They are now >:)
- 00:43:788 (5) - This blanket could be slightly improved [00:43:378]. It's fine; I follow the last stage of the approach circle for my blankets.
- 00:52:695 (1,2,3) - These don't make a perfect equilateral triangle. Whether that's intentional or not, I'm not sure. If you select 2, you can see how the spacing between them is inconsistent. Fixed.
- 00:56:913 (4,6) - These aren't perfectly stacked. They seem fine to me.
- 01:05:820 (1) - New combo, since the current combo spans over too many measures in my opinion. Okay.
- 01:12:382 (5) - This blanket could be improved [01:12:968]. Fixed.
- 01:17:070 (3) - As above [01:17:362]. Ah, these two aren't properly meant to be blankets.

Very nice mapset overall. I'll drop a star. Good luck Thanks for the star (and luck) ! ^^

remiliuh wrote:

hi!!! m4m from your queue!
im not good at modding at all sorry!!!!

General:
-i personally think the hit sounds are too quiet except during the chorus which is confusing for me. Hmm, I think it's okay like this.
-too much kiai time in my opinion! its for over half the song! if u got rid of some kiai time starting from 00:52:695 - ending at 01:07:711 - i think that would be fine ? too much kiai time might prevent this map from being ranked i think. Okay, I'll consider this.

Easy:
00:41:679 (2) - this might confuse a newbie who isnt all that good at osu yet, it messed me up a bit ha this isnt a big deal though. thats all i could find Okay removed ~

Normal:
00:36:991 - i feel like there could be something here like a short slider YOU READ MY MIND

Hard:
couldnt find anything! mwahaaha >:))

overall this map has a really nice flow which makes it not too difficult but still fun!
sorry if i wasnt much help im very new to this !! Thank you very much for the mod, greatly appreciated !

1. Unrankable issue, the video on all diff is not playing. To fix that, you can open .osu on notepad for each diff, and replace the code on Events with the code below:
   

   [Events]
   //Background and Video events
   Video,-210,"Kuroki meisa - wired life (tv size).avi"
   0,0,"BG Easy.jpg",0,0
   //Break Periods
   2,395,6135
   //Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
   //Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
   //Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
   //Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
   //Storyboard Sound Samples
   //Background Colour Transformations
   3,100,163,162,255

2. It'll be better if all the diff BG have same dimension 1366x768
3. The video and mp3 seems not sync for me, it's a bit absurd on the end while the mp3 still playing but the video is suddenly end
4. Delete that soft-hitnormal? The sound on that one is too quite which I don't know I hit or miss the notes when playing. You can use default soft-hitnormal instead that have same sound and more audible
5. And for consistency on silent silderslide, you can also add Normal and Drum-sliderslide
6. Tbh I'm not sure with that kiai time
7. Actualy you can add some green lines to reduce the spinner sound, because the song is like to fadding away start that part

1. 00:18:945 (1) - It touch the hp bar, consider to move it bit down
2. 00:37:695 (1) - Almost out of screen if I say
3. 00:42:382 (3) - That one too
4. 00:37:695 (1) - Add finish on head? I hear cymbal sound faintly
5. 00:52:695 (1) - Add finish too
6. 01:17:070 (1) - Add whistle on end of slider? It's a bit odd while the previous have one

1. 00:13:788 (4,1,2) - Move that three to x:312 y:156 to make more symetric with vertical
2. 00:16:601 (3) - Make that slider something like this for better flow and stack this 00:17:538 (4) - on this slider's tail 00:15:663 (2) - http://puu.sh/dy38V/fae96c9736.jpg
3. 00:19:413 (2) - I'm sure that one is flow better with a curve slider and you can arrange the next note 00:19:413 (2,3,4) - something like this http://puu.sh/dy3lb/0440fec8d9.jpg
4. 00:21:757 (6) - Somehow I don't like how that slider goes. How about change that into 1/1 slider? and make it something like this http://puu.sh/dy3Kx/da61702e7a.jpg
5. 00:31:601 (3) - A bit nazi thing, move to x:372 y:224 and move this 00:31:835 (4) - to x:392 y:180
6. 00:31:835 (4) - Add clap on slider tail
7. 00:37:695 - Why you use D:C1 sampleset on that part? it make the hitsound not consistent on Easy and Hard which use N:C1
8. 00:37:695 (1) - Add finish on tail
9. 00:40:976 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Somehow I don't like that patern, especialy when (2) goes back downward to (3) might make some players confused
10. 00:50:820 (1,1) - Can be stacked better
11. 00:52:695 (1) - Add finish

1. 00:26:445 (1) - Ctrl+H and rotate -3 degree and make a blanket with previous slider http://puu.sh/dy4rx/0615ca6ba0.jpg
2. 00:30:195 (1,2,3) - I think that rhythm not fit with the song, you better to have this rhythm instead http://puu.sh/dy4Bw/f1b99e9fec.jpg
3. 00:32:890 (10) - That slider will be better if a 1/2 slider on 00:33:007 - and put a circle here 00:32:890 - the rhythm should be like this http://puu.sh/dy4Gm/1be0349bd7.jpg
4. 00:34:648 (3,4,5) - That rhythm is a bit tricky if I say, I think the rhythm should be like this http://puu.sh/dy4ON/9b00d5ccfb.jpg
5. 00:37:929 (1) - NC
6. 00:56:445 (3,4,5) - Make it neater please, http://puu.sh/dy56X/655a0e13db.jpg if needed you can use the code below:
   

   320,92,56445,2,0,P|360:80|392:88,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   343,215,56913,2,0,P|313:197|296:168,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   444,148,57382,2,0,P|444:176|420:220,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

7. 01:14:726 (4) - Add clap on head
8. 01:15:195 (1,2,3) - Might be better if that a curve something like this http://puu.sh/dy56X/655a0e13db.jpg

Jemmmmy wrote:

[easy]
00:11:913 (2,4) - didn't snap well Fixed.
00:32:538 (2,3) - Fixed.
01:05:820 (5) - Fixed.
01:17:070 (1) - cancel NC Done.
[normal]

00:16:601 (3) - Applied.
00:45:663 (2) - decrease it's angle Okay...?
01:16:132 (3) - increase it's angle This was from Momochikun's previous mod, he said to fix the flow here so I'll have to decline.
[hard]
00:13:788 (6) - move down a little \ Okay.
00:37:460 (5) - NC Done.
01:05:585 (1) - cancel NC I think the NC here is fine.
00:49:648 (5) - decrease it's angle Done.


good job Thanks! One of my fav. mods so far ~ !

Mako Sakata wrote:

Edit: Done

Hellooo M4M from your queue

[General]

1. Unrankable issue, the video on all diff is not playing. To fix that, you can open .osu on notepad for each diff, and replace the code on Events with the code below:
   

   [Events]
   //Background and Video events
   Video,-210,"Kuroki meisa - wired life (tv size).avi"
   0,0,"BG Easy.jpg",0,0
   //Break Periods
   2,395,6135
   //Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
   //Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
   //Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
   //Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
   //Storyboard Sound Samples
   //Background Colour Transformations
   3,100,163,162,255

   Okay Thanks ~
2. It'll be better if all the diff BG have same dimension 1366x768 Changed
3. The video and mp3 seems not sync for me, it's a bit absurd on the end while the mp3 still playing but the video is suddenly end If you watch closely there's still credits there and in the anime it is like that.
4. Delete that soft-hitnormal? The sound on that one is too quite which I don't know I hit or miss the notes when playing. You can use default soft-hitnormal instead that have same sound and more audible Okay done.
5. And for consistency on silent silderslide, you can also add Normal and Drum-sliderslide No
6. Tbh I'm not sure with that kiai time Changed
7. Actualy you can add some green lines to reduce the spinner sound, because the song is like to fadding away start that part No

[Easy]

1. 00:18:945 (1) - It touch the hp bar, consider to move it bit down Ok
2. 00:37:695 (1) - Almost out of screen if I say In play time it's not
3. 00:42:382 (3) - That one too Moved
4. 00:37:695 (1) - Add finish on head? I hear cymbal sound faintly Ok
5. 00:52:695 (1) - Add finish too Ok
6. 01:17:070 (1) - Add whistle on end of slider? It's a bit odd while the previous have one Ok

Good, nothing much to say here but maybe you can prevent use overlap and stack on Easy diff

[Normal]

1. 00:13:788 (4,1,2) - Move that three to x:312 y:156 to make more symetric with vertical I cant - DS is on
2. 00:16:601 (3) - Make that slider something like this for better flow and stack this 00:17:538 (4) - on this slider's tail 00:15:663 (2) - http://puu.sh/dy38V/fae96c9736.jpg Ok
3. 00:19:413 (2) - I'm sure that one is flow better with a curve slider and you can arrange the next note 00:19:413 (2,3,4) - something like this http://puu.sh/dy3lb/0440fec8d9.jpg No thanks this is for variation
4. 00:21:757 (6) - Somehow I don't like how that slider goes. How about change that into 1/1 slider? and make it something like this http://puu.sh/dy3Kx/da61702e7a.jpg No thanks, this is for consistency in the other diffs.
5. 00:31:601 (3) - A bit nazi thing, move to x:372 y:224 and move this 00:31:835 (4) - to x:392 y:180 Ok
6. 00:31:835 (4) - Add clap on slider tail Okay
7. 00:37:695 - Why you use D:C1 sampleset on that part? it make the hitsound not consistent on Easy and Hard which use N:C1 wut this is NC1
8. 00:37:695 (1) - Add finish on tail done
9. 00:40:976 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Somehow I don't like that patern, especialy when (2) goes back downward to (3) might make some players confused Tweaked
10. 00:50:820 (1,1) - Can be stacked better Done.
11. 00:52:695 (1) - Add finish Done

[Hard]

1. 00:26:445 (1) - Ctrl+H and rotate -3 degree and make a blanket with previous slider http://puu.sh/dy4rx/0615ca6ba0.jpg Okay
2. 00:30:195 (1,2,3) - I think that rhythm not fit with the song, you better to have this rhythm instead http://puu.sh/dy4Bw/f1b99e9fec.jpg Done something similar
3. 00:32:890 (10) - That slider will be better if a 1/2 slider on 00:33:007 - and put a circle here 00:32:890 - the rhythm should be like this http://puu.sh/dy4Gm/1be0349bd7.jpg I think this rhythm is wrong, since there is barely a sound on the white tick.
4. 00:34:648 (3,4,5) - That rhythm is a bit tricky if I say, I think the rhythm should be like this http://puu.sh/dy4ON/9b00d5ccfb.jpg Same as above.
5. 00:37:929 (1) - NC Okay
6. 00:56:445 (3,4,5) - Make it neater please, http://puu.sh/dy56X/655a0e13db.jpg if needed you can use the code below:
   

   320,92,56445,2,0,P|360:80|392:88,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   343,215,56913,2,0,P|313:197|296:168,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   444,148,57382,2,0,P|444:176|420:220,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

   Ok thankz
7. 01:14:726 (4) - Add clap on head Done
8. 01:15:195 (1,2,3) - Might be better if that a curve something like this http://puu.sh/dy56X/655a0e13db.jpg No thanks variety

[]
Good luuck~
I love your Hard and Easy diff Thank you

Saut wrote:

yo, as requested (nazimod incoming)

• 
  [General]

1. more than 1/2 of the map is kai time- it should be less than 1/3 Be my bad boy be my man
2. 00:52:695 (1) - 01:22:695 (1) - the kaisection isn't really necessary, since the voice reduces and the music gets calmer than in the previous section
3. not a fan of different bgs, but they should be atleast all scaled to 1366x768 (tell me if u get some problems with cropping them)
   some suggestions if the bg's get too pixeled

   http://www.zerochan.net/1625719#full
   http://www.zerochan.net/1555510
   http://www.zerochan.net/1402437
   http://www.zerochan.net/1391034
   http://www.zerochan.net/1356482
   http://www.zerochan.net/1168611
   - you can find some more here: http://www.zerochan.net/Ao+no+Exorcist?d=2&p=1
   Okay thanks used one dennis the penace

• 
  [Easy]

1. 00:08:163 (2) - that sound es very quiet - maybe rise the volume a bit (probably because of the loud sound here 00:07:695 (1) - ) Ok.
2. 00:11:913 (2) - slightly crooked blanket + 1.05x ds - fix to 1.0 Fixed
3. 00:15:195 (1,2,3) - blankets could also get slightly improved here Improved
4. 00:18:945 (1) - probably a bit too high Fixed
5. 00:28:320 (2,1) - try to stack them somehow otherwise the overlap disturbes me :s
6. 00:37:695 (1) - finish sounds good
   
7. 00:54:570 (1) - remove nc here Its emphasis so sorry
8. 00:56:445 (3) - and add a nc here dunn
9. 01:02:070 (1,3) - ^ Okkeee
10. 01:09:570 (1) - ^ OKKKKKKKKE
11. 01:17:070 (1) - very quiet sound
12. 01:20:351 (3) - bit too far down Fixed.
13. 01:23:163 (1) - spinner should end here But it just started

• 
  [Normal]

1. 00:16:601 (3) - rotate and rise a bit for a fluent movement - http://prntscr.com/5hv1yh Done
2. 00:15:663 (2) - also 2 is very far down - could be a problem later on It may be far down but it's still in the screen during playtime
3. 00:50:820 (1,1) - stack them Done
4. 00:58:085 (4) - http://prntscr.com/5hv301 how bout this since the 4 is too far up (need to fix the following ds ofc) Okay
5. 01:03:710 (1) - slightly to the right for a curved movement Okay
6. check the nc's as already mentioned in the easy diff Ok

• 
  [Hard]

1. 00:09:570 (5,7) - stack for sexiness Okay
2. 00:16:601 (4) - remove nc I think it should be here ^^
3. 00:37:460 (5) - nc for emphasize the kai time Ok
   cant find anything else here

pretty cool mapset - good luck with ranking! THANK YOU, AND THANK YOU FOR THE SIGNATURE !!


Saut

neonat wrote:

Easy

00:18:945 (1,2,3) - with these shapes you can't make them perfect, but you can still make them curve around each other better:

SPOILER

Okay
00:28:320 (2) - shift to x: 237 y: 144 Wow nazi lol
00:29:257 (3) - shift to x: 323 y: 171 Done
00:30:195 (1) - shift to x: 391 y: 113 Done
00:52:460 - the change here to soft hitsounds is too weird, further more the volume here is too soft, you can't hear the hitsounds here properly, which isn't good, at least some audible soft default claps instead of the claps used right now. It doesn't fit because here onwards it's still the same tune and level as the kiai time Wut..? Hmm, I'm not sure about that since I think the claps used now are strong enough...
01:10:976 (2,2) - stack nicely Fixed
01:20:820 (4) - the last bend/red node of this slider doesn't look great, the angle is too acute Fixed

Normal

00:17:538 (4,1) - blanket is imperfect I think it's fine
00:21:757 (6) - the last curve doesn't look great, if you still want something along the lines of that shape, make it like this, with a more noticeable end:

SPOILER

Used
00:37:695 (1) - remove the finish at the end of the slider, place it on the start of the slider instead Done
00:52:460 - the change here to soft hitsounds is too weird, further more the volume here is too soft, you can't hear the hitsounds here properly, which isn't good, at least some audible soft default claps instead of the claps used right now. It doesn't fit because here onwards it's still the same tune and level as the kiai time As in easy

Hard

00:52:460 - the change here to soft hitsounds is too weird, further more the volume here is too soft, you can't hear the hitsounds here properly, which isn't good, at least some audible soft default claps instead of the claps used right now. It doesn't fit because here onwards it's still the same tune and level as the kiai time Same as easy
00:54:570 (3) - NC here instead of 00:54:101 (1) Y-you're right...what happened to me, ficksed
00:56:445 (3) - NC here instead 00:55:976 (1) ^
00:58:320 (8) - NC ^
01:02:070 (3) - NC here instead of 01:01:601 (1) ^
01:03:945 (3) - ^ ^
01:09:570 (3) - ^ ^
01:11:445 (3) - ^ ^
01:13:320 (7) - NC here instead of 01:13:788 (1) ^
01:18:945 (9) - NC ^

Fixed all NC mod

Good Luck Thank You!

1. I liked your old background better.
2. Your current background is not 1366x768. I found an HD version of your previous background and changed it to support 1366x768. Use it if you want~
   
   
   ~
3. The osu! ranking criteria allows 720p video, so I suggest that you use it. It will make many players happy playing with HD video. Because the Ending Video is simple (i.e: no complex animations involved), you should be able to make it really HD while keeping a low file size. If you don't know how to do this, I suggest asking Lanturn for video help. p/2895355
4. I strongly suggest that you add kiai to 00:52:695 - and 01:07:695 - because it marks a new emphasis part of the song. Burst kiai would fit well here IMO. For reference burst kiai ends immediately after it starts to cause a fountain effect. An example is in this screenshot > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2436315

1. 00:13:788 - Don't do this in Easy because Circle 4 starts to appear under the tail before Slider 2 is finished. Such pattern may be considered unrankable.
2. 00:41:913 (2) -, 00:42:382 (3) - The hitsounding here feels a bit off. I suggest that you add something to it like clap somewhere.
3. 01:12:851 (2,3) - x:412 y:152 to stack consistently and maintain your current pattern.

1. 00:08:632 (3,4) - The sliders here need to be re-copy/pasted. They aren't the same when you Ctrl+H them.
2. 00:13:788 (4) -, 00:15:663 (2) - Make these symmetrical with the Y-axis.
3. 00:15:663 (2) - This object is too low on the grid. The Slider Follow Circle is cut off the screen, which should not occur in Normal. You must fix this.
4. 00:21:757 (6) - This slider is really cool. It goes well with the music.
5. 00:30:898 (2,3,4) - Flow here is somewhat confusing. The Slider 2 and Circle 3 aim towards the left yet Slider 4 is positioned at the right. Because this is one of the first complex 1/2 patterns of the map, you should make it as seamless as possible for the player to play. For 00:31:835 (4) -, use x:336 y:192. Re-adjust your next pattern as necessary.
6. 00:37:460 - I strongly suggest that you add a circle here as there is a strong emphasis of vocal here.
7. 00:48:476 (1,2,3,4) - Instead of several straight sliders repeatedly, try giving Slider 3 some curve here, like so. I also think it plays a bit nicer. Kind of like what you did at 00:59:023 (2) -.
   
   
   ~
8. 00:53:632 (3,2) - Just a heads up that some people might complain about this. I think it's fine for a Normal. The Normal needs to introduce patterns with lower SV that will be featured in the Hard.
9. 01:22:226 (2,1) - You should not stack here because there is no introduction to the stack during the song. It is unfair to give the Normal player a new pattern at the end of the song, this will usually cause them to miss it. For a simple fix, I suggest that you space the circles out instead.

1. Some of your New Combos do not match your Combo Pattern? You really should fix this, as right now it looks a bit inconsistent. Example: 00:11:445 - you follow every two downbeats here so there should be a New Combo at 00:15:195 - and not at 00:16:601 -. On the start of the kiai and after, it looks like you use every 1 downbeat. Variation is fine, but I'm making sure that you don't have any accidental mistakes.
2. 01:18:945 (1) - Ctrl+J this slider so it flows downward into the next Slider 2.

Project Railgun wrote:

Hi as requested, sorry for late!
testing http://waa.ai/46ff
[General]

1. I liked your old background better.
2. Your current background is not 1366x768. I found an HD version of your previous background and changed it to support 1366x768. Use it if you want~
   
   
   ~
3. The osu! ranking criteria allows 720p video, so I suggest that you use it. It will make many players happy playing with HD video. Because the Ending Video is simple (i.e: no complex animations involved), you should be able to make it really HD while keeping a low file size. If you don't know how to do this, I suggest asking Lanturn for video help. https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/2895355
4. I strongly suggest that you add kiai to 00:52:695 - and 01:07:695 - because it marks a new emphasis part of the song. Burst kiai would fit well here IMO. For reference burst kiai ends immediately after it starts to cause a fountain effect. An example is in this screenshot > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2436315

[Easy]

1. 00:13:788 - Don't do this in Easy because Circle 4 starts to appear under the tail before Slider 2 is finished. Such pattern may be considered unrankable. Okay, fixed.
2. 00:41:913 (2) -, 00:42:382 (3) - The hitsounding here feels a bit off. I suggest that you add something to it like clap somewhere. Ooh, sorry I forgot to replace the claps after I changed the object there.
3. 01:12:851 (2,3) - x:412 y:152 to stack consistently and maintain your current pattern. Oops, minor error, fixed.

[Normal]

1. 00:08:632 (3,4) - The sliders here need to be re-copy/pasted. They aren't the same when you Ctrl+H them. Okay, done.
2. 00:13:788 (4) -, 00:15:663 (2) - Make these symmetrical with the Y-axis. Okay.
3. 00:15:663 (2) - This object is too low on the grid. The Slider Follow Circle is cut off the screen, which should not occur in Normal. You must fix this. It's fine now.
4. 00:21:757 (6) - This slider is really cool. It goes well with the music. Lol xD credit to...Mako was it?
5. 00:30:898 (2,3,4) - Flow here is somewhat confusing. The Slider 2 and Circle 3 aim towards the left yet Slider 4 is positioned at the right. Because this is one of the first complex 1/2 patterns of the map, you should make it as seamless as possible for the player to play. For 00:31:835 (4) -, use x:336 y:192. Re-adjust your next pattern as necessary. RIP Pattern ;~;
6. 00:37:460 - I strongly suggest that you add a circle here as there is a strong emphasis of vocal here. Okay.
7. 00:48:476 (1,2,3,4) - Instead of several straight sliders repeatedly, try giving Slider 3 some curve here, like so. I also think it plays a bit nicer. Kind of like what you did at 00:59:023 (2) -. Okay.
   
   
   ~
8. 00:53:632 (3,2) - Just a heads up that some people might complain about this. I think it's fine for a Normal. The Normal needs to introduce patterns with lower SV that will be featured in the Hard. Yea Thanks buddy !
9. 01:22:226 (2,1) - You should not stack here because there is no introduction to the stack during the song. It is unfair to give the Normal player a new pattern at the end of the song, this will usually cause them to miss it. For a simple fix, I suggest that you space the circles out instead. Okay.

[Hard]

1. Some of your New Combos do not match your Combo Pattern? You really should fix this, as right now it looks a bit inconsistent. Example: 00:11:445 - you follow every two downbeats here so there should be a New Combo at 00:15:195 - and not at 00:16:601 -. On the start of the kiai and after, it looks like you use every 1 downbeat. Variation is fine, but I'm making sure that you don't have any accidental mistakes. Okay I fixed the inconsistency, thanks !
2. 01:18:945 (1) - Ctrl+J this slider so it flows downward into the next Slider 2. Okay.

Overall cool mapset, can't wait to see it ranked! Thank you darling :3

Gray Veyron wrote:

Hello, requested via PM.

This would be my direct mod to you... sorry, in a rush >_>

[> General <]

1. - The background dimension is not meeting the criteria's recommendations, i think i agree with Project Railgun. I guess you should use his suggested background to keep your beatmap file to the ranking process.
2. - The combos are lack of colours than dark/light blue or cyan, it might blend with the video since most of it's frame is coloured blue. So using a different than this one might avoid this problem.
3. - The custom hitsounds are likely quiet. Try raising it's gain, or increase the volume on the inherited points.
4. - Spread is fine, file sizes are fine, great!

[> Easy <]

1. 00:11:913 (2,4,1) - Overlapping like this would make confusion to beginners. Because they're too new and not ready for stacks yet. Fixed.
2. 00:28:320 (2,1) - Better not overlap the repeat arrow, even if slider (2) disappeared on time to show up the repeat arrow. I think this is fine, because after two they still have to drag three, then they see one, all sparkly with a big white reverse arrow
3. 00:37:695 (1) - This slider's tail point is out of grid and almost off-screen. Okay.
4. 00:42:382 (3) - Add clap? Okay.
5. 00:48:476 (4) - ^ on tail or head. Okay.
6. 00:49:413 (5) - Add NC, a bit long. Okay.
7. 01:10:976 (2,1,2) - The spacing got a bit differed here, try utilizing it. Fixed.
8. - Nothing to say here.

[> Normal <]

1. 00:16:601 (3) - Add whistle/clap on slider head? Oops, forgot that one
2. 00:31:601 (3,4) - The rhythm here sounds off, you'll need to follow the vocals here instead. Yuthuil doez not tink zo !
3. 00:37:460 - Unused inherited point, remove this one. Okay.
4. 00:43:788 (5) - Add clap on slider tail. Okay.
5. 00:50:351 (4) - Add clap. Okay.
6. 01:23:163 (1) - This spinner is unbalanced with other diffs since they end on 1/2 beat, but this one in Normal ends on 1/4 beat... x''D LOL fixed
7. - Some nazi mods, not bad.

[> Hard <]

1. 00:15:195 (7,1) - Swap NC, new track. Okay.
2. 00:27:382 (3,4,5,6,7) - Recorrect this Claw by making a diamond formation inside. O.o sorry m8 a dont quat ge da wun
3. 00:34:648 (3,4) - Stack perfectly. Aren't they?
4. 00:40:976 (1,2) - Swap NC, same reason. Okay.
5. 01:04:648 (2,3) - I don't think this jump make sense with the song track. It isn't intense enough either the vocals. Huh? It's emphasis !
6. - Same comment as before.

Well-mapped, but some i didn't mention is that the downbeats of the rhythm are not intended for the slider's tail on long white tick, but this is just my opinion...
Sometimes, short songs (like this map) would make modder's mods small, so this is the results XD Anyway, Good Luck!Thank u darling

1. The video fades out too soon, by the time you finish the spinner you can see the BG again, so I suggest finding a better video file.
2. 00:52:460 - Why is there a green point here that makes the hitsound abnormally quiet? This is part of the music too, nothing suggests such a major volume decrease, so I suggest getting rid of it and making the volume here normal.

1. 00:11:913 (2,1) - Not a fan of this overlap, beginners could have trouble reading this, so I suggest finding another way to do this without overlapping. Overlaps like this are also unsightly for the short period where both are on screen, so I'd advice against it.
2. 00:37:695 (1,2,3) - The thing I don't like about this rhythm is that an important downbeat is getting skipped, meaning that it sounds unfaithful to the music and random. I have a better rhythm you can use, which goes with the music a bit better:
   
3. 01:00:195 (1,2,1) - This 90° flow plays very bland, I would try some more interesting angles and curves, because right now; it is pretty boring.
4. 01:17:070 (3) - Why is there a whistle on the start of this slider as well? It is just inconsistent, because nothing in the music is really asking for it, so the whistle feels out of place and unneeded. I'd remove it.

1. 00:33:945 (1) - It would flow better if you were to curve this, because right now, it seems pretty jagged and linear, so the transition from 00:33:476 (6) - won't play very well.
2. 00:47:070 (4,5,1) - Much like my above suggestion, these straight sliders flow poorly and they look bland, so I suggest curving them to improve aesthetics and flow.
3. 01:20:820 (1,2,1) - Not too fond of the 90° flow, seems a bit boring and jagged to play. I suggest you make things more interesting by adding a larger variety of angles in this last pattern.

1. 00:15:195 (1,2,3) - This straight, horizontal line is a bit of a boring flow, wouldn't it look more interesting if you made something like a triangle instead, because straightforward lines lines can bore players,
2. 00:21:991 (9,1) - Poor spacing here, I suggest moving (1) to it's appropriate place on 1.2x distance snap. Otherwise the pattern with the repeat will look odd, inconsistent, and cramped. Although this seems minor, players will notice this, and when they do it's not going to look nice.
3. 00:30:663 (3,4) - I don't like how this is directly stacked, it seems like you did this just so the slider doesn't go up to the top of the screen. Either way, I suggest you find another way round it, because stacks like these look cramped imo, and would look a lot nicer if it was an overlap at the correct distance spacing.
4. 00:37:226 (4,1) - This jump would flow better if these two were perfectly aligned, either move (1) to a place like x:240 y:222 or change the angle of the slider. Either method, the cursor has to make a perfectly straight line through the middle of the slider.

Pjecoo wrote:

//pant pant im here finally....sorry for delay.

Easy
00:00:195 (1) - I quite don't understand why are you placed the note here. I would leave it blank (same in Normal and Hard. I think it's really unnecessary). (just suggestion) Everyone seems to dislike this note, I'll wait for a few more mods on it cus I love it
01:07:226 (6,2,2) - About this. This is really confusing for Easy players. Make it less confusing by removing the stacks and rearranging this part. Sorry, I don't really understand this one, you are the first person to pick on it and I don't really see what's wrong here xD
01:20:820 (4) - Remove the second red square. You can make a perfect blanket by adjusting the other grey squares after removing the red one. Done.
01:23:163 (1) - End spinner at 01:28:320 - (same in Normal & Hard) Okay.

Normal
00:15:195 (1) - Move it little bit to the right. Okay.

Hard
Seems fine.

Hope that helps.
If not, then sorry. Ah, it did, all mods are helpful, thanks !
Good luck.

Divinius2613 wrote:

From your queue!

Sorry it isn't much, your map is so damn good made it hard for me to find things to fix... I had to be reaaaally picky

My Mod!

General

Combo colors 2 and 4 look almost the same... maybe remove one or change the color? Not a massive deal. 2 & 4? WUT they're completely different ! perhaps you meant three...

Since the background image stretches across the entire screen, i think it would be appropriate if you check Widescreen Support in all of your difficulties.
Another thing, i check your BG image file, and it seems like a weird resoulution. 1097x768? Might want to look into that, for a 4:3 aspect ratio i think it 1024x768, but i'm just being picky. Nah, widescreen support is only for storyboards, which I don't have, and I'll resize my BG soon.

Hard

00:00:195 (1) - Is this supposed to be there? I assume it is because I'm sure the other mods would mention it, but it seems odd that just a single note is there, and then nothing else until the song starts. You could always just remove it and make sure "Countdown" is unchecked? T_T after 1000 mods saying they hate this, it is time for us to depart. Me & my beloved note

00:12:616 (3) - Maybe this circle would look better at X:440 or X:444 Moved.
00:13:554 (5) - If you do that above, then this note would need moving too., and perhaps this one 00:13:788 (6) Moved 5.

00:18:945 (1,2) - I think these should me moved a liiiittle to the left, to even out that triangle shape that it makes. T-triangle? what triangle? xD

00:23:632 (3) - Personally, I would angle that ever so slightly, to fit with that slope made with 00:22:695 (1,2), that is up to you however. Actually, nice idea, done.

00:22:695 (1,2) - I think this circle is not exactly centered with 00:25:273 (5), i think the end point of that slider should move down 1 grid space, assuming the grid is on 4 (Most Precise) Done...I think.

Not much i could find here, this map is impeccable.

Normal

I think the OD could be upped one notch. I'm not sure, it wouldn't fit the diff of the map >.>

Again with that first note, haha. *sniff sniff* done


Easy

00:33:945 (1) - That looks a tad out of line... perhaps it would be better if you moved that up so it was in line with the previous slider? Ah this was on purpose

00:42:382 (3,4) - These two would look better if they were perfectly horizontal. One has y:360 while the other has y:356 (These co-ordinates can be seen at the top right, just incase) I-I'll wait for more opinions on that one :s

1. Move timing point to 00:07:695 since you don't have any objects before then.
2. Don't think the title, artist, and source are right. According to http://www.ao-ex.com/tv/music/, the title should be Wired Life （TV size） (copy/paste it into title field) and romanized title would be Wired Life (TV size). Artist should be 黒木メイサ without the space. Source I have no idea at all; the website seems to have 青の祓魔師 a lot but they must also spell "Exorcist" with katakana somewhere.
3. Your drum-hitclap.wav has a delay, and sounds too similar to the clap sound heard in the music. I recommend you don't use drum sampleset in any difficulty and switch to soft or normal.
4. Most of your other hitsounds have delays like normal-hitclap, normal-hitfinish, normal-slidertick2, soft-hitfinish. You need to remove delays.
5. Inconsistency in combo colors. Make sure all combo colors in difficulties are the same.
6. Add a silent normal sliderslide?
7. 00:22:695 - Volume is too quiet, increase it to around the other sections of similar volume. Also as I said earlier this timing section should be soft sampleset maybe. Seriously get rid of drum sampleset.
8. Kiai time choice is weird to me, I feel it should start from 00:52:695 and end at 01:20:820 or 01:22:695. If you don't want to change that, then at least end kiai time at 00:52:695 because there's no reason to not end it on a downbeat.

1. 00:30:195 (1) - Fill in the slidertick claps at 00:30:663 and 00:31:601
2. 00:33:945 (1) - 00:36:288 (2) - ^
3. 01:03:945 (3) - ^
4. 01:09:570 - remove finish, doesn't belong in music
5. 01:11:445 - ^
6. 01:12:382 - ^
7. 01:15:195 - ^
8. 01:17:070 - ^
9. 01:20:820 - whistle

1. 00:22:460 - clap
2. 00:28:788 - ^
3. 00:34:413 - ^
4. 00:57:851 - ^
5. 00:59:257 - slidertick clap?
6. 01:14:257 - ^
7. Add some more 1/2 rhythms at places like 00:54:335 - 00:56:210 - 01:01:835 - 01:20:116, etc. (i just listed a few, need more) because it's a bit lacking in 1/2 after kiai.
8. 01:20:820 (1) - same thing as hard

1. 00:23:632 - remove clap
2. 00:30:663 - add clap
3. 00:31:601 ^
4. 00:37:226 (4,1) - This jump is way too big and looks like a 1/1 gap, I don't think you should have a jump here or at least make it intuitive.
5. 01:20:820 (1) - You have a clap on the sliderbody, not sure what does. Should whistle on slider head and tail.

xxdeathx wrote:

m4m from my queue

Hitsound suggestions apply to the same time all difficulties, check every difficulty.

[General]

1. Move timing point to 00:07:695 since you don't have any objects before then.
2. Don't think the title, artist, and source are right. According to http://www.ao-ex.com/tv/music/, the title should be Wired Life （TV size） (copy/paste it into title field) and romanized title would be Wired Life (TV size). Artist should be 黒木メイサ without the space. Source I have no idea at all; the website seems to have 青の祓魔師 a lot but they must also spell "Exorcist" with katakana somewhere.
3. Your drum-hitclap.wav has a delay, and sounds too similar to the clap sound heard in the music. I recommend you don't use drum sampleset in any difficulty and switch to soft or normal.
4. Most of your other hitsounds have delays like normal-hitclap, normal-hitfinish, normal-slidertick2, soft-hitfinish. You need to remove delays. I don't really understand...more like, how can I remove them...?
5. Inconsistency in combo colors. Make sure all combo colors in difficulties are the same.
6. Add a silent normal sliderslide? I kind of like how it is :/
7. 00:22:695 - Volume is too quiet, increase it to around the other sections of similar volume. Also as I said earlier this timing section should be soft sampleset maybe. Seriously get rid of drum sampleset.
8. Kiai time choice is weird to me, I feel it should start from 00:52:695 and end at 01:20:820 or 01:22:695. If you don't want to change that, then at least end kiai time at 00:52:695 because there's no reason to not end it on a downbeat.

[Easy]

1. 00:30:195 (1) - Fill in the slidertick claps at 00:30:663 and 00:31:601
2. 00:33:945 (1) - 00:36:288 (2) - ^
3. 01:03:945 (3) - ^
4. 01:09:570 - remove finish, doesn't belong in music
5. 01:11:445 - ^
6. 01:12:382 - ^
7. 01:15:195 - ^
8. 01:17:070 - ^
9. 01:20:820 - whistle

[Normal]

1. 00:22:460 - clap
2. 00:28:788 - ^
3. 00:34:413 - ^
4. 00:57:851 - ^
5. 00:59:257 - slidertick clap?
6. 01:14:257 - ^
7. Add some more 1/2 rhythms at places like 00:54:335 - 00:56:210 - 01:01:835 - 01:20:116, etc. (i just listed a few, need more) because it's a bit lacking in 1/2 after kiai.
8. 01:20:820 (1) - same thing as hard

[Hard]

1. 00:23:632 - remove clap
2. 00:30:663 - add clap
3. 00:31:601 ^
4. 00:37:226 (4,1) - This jump is way too big and looks like a 1/1 gap, I don't think you should have a jump here or at least make it intuitive.
5. 01:20:820 (1) - You have a clap on the sliderbody, not sure what does. Should whistle on slider head and tail.

I spent a lot of time modding hitsounds, so as I said earlier, please make sure that you apply suggestions to all difficulties at the same time. For example, if I say remove a finish at 01:11:445 in Easy, you go to Normal and Hard and remove it too if it's there!

I'll leave the star since I think this map can get ranked after you fix up hitsound mistakes.

xxdeathx wrote:

Open the file in audacity, zoom in to the first 10 ms where you can see where the delay is apparent. Move your cursor to right before the first big wave starts.



Edit -> Select -> Cursor to track end
Edit -> Remove Audio or labels -> Trim audio

Export as wav file and replace your existing one.

Repeat this for all the hitsounds that have delays. I've done this for your normal-hitclap.wav http://puu.sh/gvvPK/df71028c4d.wav as an example; you can figure out the others.

1. May be faster slider velocity:3? I'm not sure about that but may feel more comfortable

1. 01:03:476 (2) - may be a circle instead?
2. 01:18:476 (1) - ^

1. 00:11:445 (3) - may be a curve instead? to match the song
2. 00:21:757 (6) - end at 00:22:226
3. 00:28:788 (2) - move to 00:28:554
4. 00:30:195 - may change to this form?
5. 00:31:835 (1) - the slider may add like 00:32:773 (2) to match the song

1. 00:24:335 - add circle
2. 00:25:507 (6) - may use straight instead, it sound alike 00:23:632 (3) and 00:24:570 (4)
3. 00:31:015 (4) - a circle instead
4. 00:31:366 - add circle
5. 00:32:304 (10) - may be a curve instead?
6. 01:06:991 (2) - may change to this form?

yuruyuri wrote:

Hi~m4m from your queue

[General]

1. May be faster slider velocity:3? I'm not sure about that but may feel more comfortable

Ah I think it's fine how it is ty

[Easy]

1. 01:03:476 (2) - may be a circle instead? I don't want to make it too hard >.<
2. 01:18:476 (1) - ^^

[Normal]

1. 00:11:445 (3) - may be a curve instead? to match the song Nice idea but I kind of wanted variety here, so as not to keep spamming curvy sliders
2. 00:21:757 (6) - end at 00:22:226 It's supposed to be following the drum sound :/
3. 00:28:788 (2) - move to 00:28:554 Sorry no change
4. 00:30:195 - may change to this form?
5. 00:31:835 (1) - the slider may add like 00:32:773 (2) to match the song ^

[Hard]

1. 00:24:335 - add circle Done.
2. 00:25:507 (6) - may use straight instead, it sound alike 00:23:632 (3) and 00:24:570 (4) No change
3. 00:31:015 (4) - a circle instead Using a slider follows both vocal and instruments so I'd like to keep it as it is
4. 00:31:366 - add circle No change
5. 00:32:304 (10) - may be a curve instead? Done something else here
6. 01:06:991 (2) - may change to this form?

Modem wrote:

(> w <)

Nice blanket
Nice flow
Nice pattern
I
can't
mod
this
perfect
mapset
Here's a star and good luck on rank~~!