M4M (See
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00:13:969 (13969|2,14302|0,14635|2,14969|0,15302|2,15635|0) - Map through the guitar here, better to play than drums (since its normal)
00:16:635 (16635|1,16969|3,17302|1,17635|3,17969|1,18302|3) - Map through the guitar here, better to play than drums (since its normal)
00:19:302 (19302|2,19635|0,19969|2,20302|0,20635|2,20969|0) - Map through the guitar here, better to play than drums (since its normal)
00:24:469 (24469|2,24469|0,24802|0,25135|2,25135|0,25469|0,25802|0,25802|2,26135|0,26469|0,26469|2) - Here i woul like more variety, first to make it more interesting (currently its a bit boring), second to avoid this jacks here.
The same for this:
00:26:802 (26802|3,27135|3,27135|1,27469|3,27802|1,27802|3,28135|3,28469|1,28469|3,28802|3) -
and this:
00:29:802 (29802|0,29802|2,30135|0,30469|2,30469|0,30802|0,31135|2,31135|0,31469|0,31802|0,31802|2) -
00:37:469 (37469|0) - shorten to 00:37:802 - and add a hit at this point to follow the coice here better
SPOILER00:57:802 (57802|3,57802|2,58135|0,58469|3,58469|2,58802|0,59135|2,59135|3,59469|0,59802|2,59802|3,60135|1,60469|3,60469|2,60802|1,61135|3,61135|2,61469|1,61802|2,61802|3) -
the same as above that it has no varieties...
SPOILER01:02:802 (62802|3,63135|0,63135|1,63469|3,63802|1,63802|0,64135|3,64469|0,64469|1,64802|3,65135|0,65135|1,65469|2,65802|1,65802|0,66135|2,66469|0,66469|1) -
here too
SPOILER01:08:469 (68469|1,68469|3,68802|0,69135|3,69135|1,69469|0,69802|3,69802|1,70135|0,70469|1,70469|3,70802|2,71135|1,71135|3,71469|2,71802|3,71802|1,72135|2,72469|1,72469|3) -
the same...
What i want to say is that its ok to repeat a pattern, but not the whole map long. In this case its in each diff some oarts which are just boring like this...
In other points the map is ok, but this... ^^
HD
00:10:469 - Add note
00:22:469 (22469|2,22552|1,22635|2,22719|1) - Map with 1/8 divisor here
00:34:219 (34219|2,34302|1) - 1/8 here (but im not sure if this is correct)
00:34:219 (34219|2,34302|1) - Add Note here
00:34:219 (34219|2,34302|1) - Add Note here
00:34:219 (34219|2,34302|1) - Remove one note here
00:34:219 (34219|2,34302|1) - Add Note here
00:34:219 (34219|2,34302|1) - Add Note here
00:34:219 (34219|2,34302|1) - Add Note here
00:34:219 (34219|2,34302|1) - Add Note here
00:34:219 (34219|2,34302|1) - Remove one note here
00:34:219 (34219|2,34302|1) - Add note here
00:34:219 (34219|2,34302|1) - Add note here
00:13:635 (13635|2,13802|0,13969|2,14135|0,14302|2,14469|0,14635|2,14802|0,14969|2,15135|0,15302|2,15469|0) - And the following... repeats as in normal mentioned
MX
SPOILER00:13:802 (13802|3,13969|0,13969|2,14135|3,14302|0,14302|2,14469|3,14635|0,14635|2,14802|3,14969|2,14969|0,15135|3,15302|0,15302|2,15469|3) -
See above...
00:44:885 - Add Note (faster piano)
00:45:052 - Add Note (faster piano)
The repeats: I dont say they didnt fit the music, i just say they re boring to play in my opinion ^^
Make the marked one kiai i would say ^^