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[General]
-Combos are really weird. Both on Normal and Hard many of them are waaay to long, I will point out some of them but you should really make them shorter.
-Add spinners. Kinda boring when there's no score difference on the leaderboards lol
-Your map needs hitsounding. But I'm terrible at that, sorry.[Normal]
Settings are a bit high for a normal...-AR -1
-OD -1-I kinda understand you're mapping the voice, but I don't really like the song starting on a red tick rather than the obvious downbeat in 00:15:945 , consider starting the song there.
-00:18:945 (6,7,8) How about making a blanket for 6 and 7?
Also, there should be a NC here due to the lyrics. Notice how a new line of lyrics start.
-00:20:945 (1,2) Same here, similar as above.
-00:22:945 (5) NC
-00:30:945 (3) NC
-00:39:695 (3) NC-00:45:945 (3) I really feel some beats are missing due to the drum in the song, try this rhythm or something with more repeating sliders:
-00:47:945 (8) NC, the kiai starts here and not having a new combo its... weird. Yeah I think a lot more of NC's are missing but if you got the idea from my previous ones I don't need to point them all. For example the combo starting on 00:49:195 (1) is waay to long, so cut it with a NC somewhere in-between, I would use 00:52:195 (6) for a NC.
-01:03:945 (7) And this again, don't use kiai fountains without NC's...-01:17:945 A spinner would be nice from here to 01:19:945
-01:39:945 (2,3) Blanket 2 and 3?
-02:03:945 (2,3,4,5,6) This is what I'm suggesting on 00:45:945 (3)
-02:07:945 The Kiai start should be clickeable, how about using three circles or a circle and a slider instead of the repeating slider?
In fact I would suggest this a bit more since you can't hear any beats on 02:07:695, therefore nothing should go in there.
The rest seems really nice, really nice beat placement, follows the song really good, but check those NC's in the rest like I suggested to. Also:
-A spinner from 03:44:195 to 03:51:945 would be nice as well. (Kinda common to end songs with spinners)
[Hard]
Repetitive. Needs more 1/4 beats.Same thing with the NC's.-00:43:945 (1,1,1,1) I remember seeing this once, but I believe it's not allowed anymore. (Unfair HP recovery) To be on the safe side, delete the NC on the three last beats.
-Why not use a stream in 00:46:070 ? The song is begging for it! And besides, its Hard so you can do that.
-00:47:945 (3) Make sure to NC this. Delete the NC on 00:47:445 (1) because a half beat combo would be way too short.-00:52:570 Add a circle here?
-00:55:820 Add a circle here-01:03:445 Use a 1/4 repeating slider to follow the drums or separated circles, the slider seems more fun to me!
-01:11:820 Add a circle here-Breaks should be consistent between difficulties. Either map normal to begin the break on 01:19:945 or delete some beats in Hard to start the break on 01:17:945(either way, try to add a spinner like I suggested in normal)
-02:06:070 A stream should go here too, like I suggested before. Notice the drums in this part.
-02:08:945 (7,8,9) How about two circles and then the slider? Idea:
-02:15:820
Add a circle here
-02:23:570 ^
-02:23:820 ^
-02:31:820 ^Yeah this is getting a bit repetitive. My only complain here is that there are few notes on blue ticks, I suggest you listen to the drum then add circles and make small streams where they are needed.
--A spinner from 03:44:195 to 03:51:945 would be nice as well.
Other than that, this map is really good! I wouldn't be surprised if only a few more mods are needed. Good luck!
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