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yuikonnu - Natsu no Owari, Koi no Hajimari

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xChippy
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Topic Starter
xChippy
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on maandag 29 september 2014 at 19:48:25

Artist: yuikonnu
Title: Natsu no Owari, Koi no Hajimari
Tags: Utaite nico nico douga cover GUMI Icemixxa
BPM: 186
Filesize: 6323kb
Play Time: 04:03
Difficulties Available:
  1. Insane (4,95 stars, 812 notes)
  2. Normal (1,9 stars, 319 notes)
  3. xChipmixx's Hard (3,57 stars, 583 notes)
Download: yuikonnu - Natsu no Owari, Koi no Hajimari
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#13
Yay~ omg not a tv size
Insane by me
Hard by Icemixxa and xChippy
Normal by me
Hard parts
Begin untill 00:42:628 - Icemixxa
00:42:628 - untill 03:22:627 - xChippy
03:22:627 - to the end Icemixxa
Last edited by xChippy , edited 55 times in total.
Ujimatsu Chiya
2,480 posts
Joined December 2013
Ujimatsu Chiya
1st!!

Ganbare. baka. >w<
captin1
osu! Alumni
2,607 posts
Joined February 2011
captin1
SPOILER
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240845,857.142857142857,4,2,1,25,1,0

try this out
xChippy
1,941 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
xChippy
Cool works great! thanks captin 8-)
AppLoad
AppLoad
:idea: Hi, it's my small random modding! All tips is just my opinion. Go~
Normal

00:25:531 - Maybe add Circle here?
00:50:047 - Maybe add Circle here?
00:55:854 - Maybe add Circle here?
01:21:015 - Maybe add Circle here (x:352 y:64)?
02:33:273 - Maybe... mmm... add Circle here?
Insane

Why this diff is so awesome? I can't modding this diff, because it's so awesome diff.
Sorry, my mod so small, >:( because your map well done. :D I hope see this ranked soon! Good Luck!
Agorate
73 posts
Joined August 2013
Agorate
Normal
00:43:918 (3) - Please, change it!
01:25:208 (1) - Remove NC.
Hard
00:03:757 (1) - Is not it better to x:332 y:384 ?
00:28:434 (1) - Remove NC D:
00:58:112 (1) - Remove finish. Whistle is ok.
01:02:144 (1) - x:300 y:128 ?
01:49:725 (1) - Ctrl + G
02:19:402 (1) - Remove NC
02:35:531 (3) - Ctrl + G
02:35:854 (4) - ^
Insane
00:25:854 (1) - Remove NC
01:07:144 (1,2,3,4,1) - This is very confusing in my opinion, change it.
Okay, that's it from from my side. :D
xChippy
1,941 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
xChippy

[AppLoad] wrote:

:idea: Hi, it's my small random modding! All tips is just my opinion. Go~
Normal

00:25:531 - Maybe add Circle here?
00:50:047 - Maybe add Circle here? done
00:55:854 - Maybe add Circle here?
01:21:015 - Maybe add Circle here (x:352 y:64)?
02:33:273 - Maybe... mmm... add Circle here?
Insane

Why this diff is so awesome? I can't modding this diff, because it's so awesome diff.
Sorry, my mod so small, >:( because your map well done. :D I hope see this ranked soon! Good Luck!
Sorry didn't do the others they don't fit with that I want to do ><

GanMineTMPL wrote:

Normal
00:43:918 (3) - Please, change it! nah I see no problem
01:25:208 (1) - Remove NC. why it ruins the consistency ><
Hard
00:03:757 (1) - Is not it better to x:332 y:384 ? did something else
00:28:434 (1) - Remove NC D: lol why, I see no reason as it will ruin the NCing
00:58:112 (1) - Remove finish. Whistle is ok. nah cymbal in music so nope
01:02:144 (1) - x:300 y:128 ? prefer the stack
01:49:725 (1) - Ctrl + G No, bad flow ><
02:19:402 (1) - Remove NC same reason as before
02:35:531 (3) - Ctrl + G nope prefer jump
02:35:854 (4) - ^ Would end up having bad flow so nope
Insane
00:25:854 (1) - Remove NC nope consistency reasons
01:07:144 (1,2,3,4,1) - This is very confusing in my opinion, change it. should be fine
Okay, that's it from from my side. :D
Thanks for modding both!
Star Stream
2,037 posts
Joined June 2010
Star Stream
From queue.. ok

[General]
the timings at last, a few fixes
SPOILER

[Normal]
00:04:563 (2) - pretty hard to guess the next notes, add a circle at 00:05:047 - or like this
SPOILER
00:24:886 (2) - same, add a circle at 00:25:370 - or at least whistle on 00:25:854 (3) -
00:58:434 (1) - fill this part with circles and sliders. it's great to express how the song goes, not with one spinner
01:22:628 (1) - nazi thing but you could make it to don't touch the slider
01:25:208 (1) - how about put this to the right a bit? would play better
02:11:983 (1) - same as 00:58:434 (1) -

[Hard]
00:03:757 (1,2) - start the combo from 2, not 1 like you did on 00:02:467 (5,1) -
00:39:725 (4,5,1) - start the combo from 4, it's pretty dizzy to read
00:42:305 (4) - i'd like to put this on near (182,68) to jump to '5'. would make better sense with the next 3 hits
02:08:918 (3) - mistake?
02:17:305 (2) - try put in on (230,145), not that good to see but better to play
02:28:434 (1) - curve, it feels too hard to play with 02:28:112 (4) -

[Insane]
00:43:596 (4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - cool, haha
00:46:821 (2,3,4) - my way, how about this? (clap on 1's end, 3457, whistle on 26)
SPOILER
00:49:886 - clap?
02:20:208 (4) - i could hardly see this note, i guess you'd better add NC on 3
02:51:983 (2) - ctrl+g (if you do, on 4 too)
03:07:144 (1) - ^, it breaks the flow
03:08:757 - 5%, mute here please
03:31:659 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - as i see the pattern, you'd better combo in this way (way better to read)
SPOILER
03:47:788 (2,3,4,5) - stack 2 on 1 to express the music, would be great if you NC on 2 too
03:59:988 (1) - ctrl+g, this big spacing isn't really good with this slow and calm mood


Really cool map, nice work. xChippy
xChippy
1,941 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
xChippy

Star Stream wrote:

From queue.. ok

[General]
the timings at last, a few fixes
SPOILER

[Normal]
00:04:563 (2) - pretty hard to guess the next notes, add a circle at 00:05:047 - or like this
SPOILER
did this one
00:24:886 (2) - same, add a circle at 00:25:370 - or at least whistle on 00:25:854 (3) - This one should be okay as it is a normal 1/1 gap
00:58:434 (1) - fill this part with circles and sliders. it's great to express how the song goes, not with one spinner I want to follow the rapid drum with the spinner >< I also did this in Hard
01:22:628 (1) - nazi thing but you could make it to don't touch the slider
01:25:208 (1) - how about put this to the right a bit? would play better
02:11:983 (1) - same as 00:58:434 (1) - same

[Hard]
00:03:757 (1,2) - start the combo from 2, not 1 like you did on 00:02:467 (5,1) -
00:39:725 (4,5,1) - start the combo from 4, it's pretty dizzy to read
00:42:305 (4) - i'd like to put this on near (182,68) to jump to '5'. would make better sense with the next 3 hits
02:08:918 (3) - mistake? hmm? if you mean the Distance it's intentional for a little jump
02:17:305 (2) - try put in on (230,145), not that good to see but better to play
02:28:434 (1) - curve, it feels too hard to play with 02:28:112 (4) -

[Insane]
00:43:596 (4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - cool, haha =w=b
00:46:821 (2,3,4) - my way, how about this? (clap on 1's end, 3457, whistle on 26) I'll consider I kinda like how mine flows and not sure about the triplet, I want to follow beats that are loud when possible
SPOILER
00:49:886 - clap? hmm can't hear one so nope
02:20:208 (4) - i could hardly see this note, i guess you'd better add NC on 3 did a little bit reworking on the pattern so the approach circle is more visible
02:51:983 (2) - ctrl+g (if you do, on 4 too) yea it flows nice but, not what I intended here ><, I'll change if more mention
03:07:144 (1) - ^, it breaks the flow
03:08:757 - 5%, mute here please
03:31:659 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - as i see the pattern, you'd better combo in this way (way better to read)
SPOILER
03:47:788 (2,3,4,5) - stack 2 on 1 to express the music, would be great if you NC on 2 too imo the stack doesnt really fit ><, so prefer to keep as is
03:59:988 (1) - ctrl+g, this big spacing isn't really good with this slow and calm mood


Really cool map, nice work. xChippy
Thanks! =w=b
Thanks for modding! 8-)
ValPyen
ValPyen
This is my first Mod Beatmap
I Maybe not very professional
You Beatmap great!
I Very Like :)
#modreqs
My English is very bad, sorry :(
Many come from Google Translate: P
[Normal]
00:25:531 - add Circle
00:43:918 (3) - This cool !
01:02:789 (1,2) - I feel a little too hard
01:08:434 (3,4) - ^
01:54:402 (2) - End point 01:54:886 Change to 01:54:725
03:04:563 (1) - I think it does not need to change color ...
03:16:176 (3,4) - I feel a little too hard
[Hard]
00:48:757 (3,1) - I think it is not very smooth
01:21:338 (1,2,3) - ^ Make a cleaner triangle
Examples
SPOILER
01:24:402 (2) - Change direction
SPOILER
[Insane]
00:58:596 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5) - Circle too much, try to change the Slide or change the arrangement
03:04:563 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
03:20:692 (1,2,3) - Ctrl + G
03:37:304 (1,2) - Replaced to Circle
03:45:853 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Try a more interesting arrangement

My personal view :)
Very Great Map , I Very Like :D Nice
xChippy
1,941 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
xChippy

ValPyen wrote:

This is my first Mod Beatmap
I Maybe not very professional
You Beatmap great!
I Very Like :)
#modreqs
My English is very bad, sorry :(
Many come from Google Translate: P
[Normal]
00:25:531 - add Circle nah prefer as it is now
00:43:918 (3) - This cool ! Thanks :3
01:02:789 (1,2) - I feel a little too hard it's fine, this is no easy but normal.
01:08:434 (3,4) - ^ ^
01:54:402 (2) - End point 01:54:886 Change to 01:54:725 Ending it on the place now will play more comfortable
03:04:563 (1) - I think it does not need to change color ... I think it does need to change, cuz of the stanza
03:16:176 (3,4) - I feel a little too hard same
[Hard]
00:48:757 (3,1) - I think it is not very smooth should be fine
01:21:338 (1,2,3) - ^ Make a cleaner triangle not triangle intention so keep it
Examples
SPOILER
01:24:402 (2) - Change direction Ok
SPOILER
[Insane]
00:58:596 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5) - Circle too much, try to change the Slide or change the arrangement nah I see no problem here
03:04:563 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ ^
03:20:692 (1,2,3) - Ctrl + G bad flow so nope
03:37:304 (1,2) - Replaced to Circle This plays better for the calm emphasize imo
03:45:853 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Try a more interesting arrangement I see no problems with this, if you got any suggestions feel free to poke me and I'll consider

My personal view :)
Very Great Map , I Very Like :D Nice
Thanks for modding!
Unsfamiliar
540 posts
Joined May 2013
Unsfamiliar
It's a heart!
2014-09-06 23:38 xChippy: Unsfa best maid #2014 =w=b
2014-09-06 23:38 Unsfamiliar: ;w;
2014-09-06 23:38 Unsfamiliar: Anyway!
2014-09-06 23:39 Unsfamiliar: 03:05:047 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - 
2014-09-06 23:39 Unsfamiliar: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/486613 yuikonnu - Natsu no Owari, Koi no Hajimari [Insane]]
2014-09-06 23:39 Unsfamiliar: I totally just noticed this was a heart!!!!
2014-09-06 23:39 Unsfamiliar: omfg
2014-09-06 23:39 xChippy: :OOOOOO
2014-09-06 23:39 Unsfamiliar: I thought it was just random stuff while playing it
2014-09-06 23:39 xChippy: orz TwT
2014-09-06 23:40 Unsfamiliar: noooo, but when I noticed
2014-09-06 23:40 Unsfamiliar: it's simply beautiful~
2014-09-06 23:40 Unsfamiliar: heheh... so please
2014-09-06 23:40 xChippy: Yaaay \:D/
2014-09-06 23:41 Unsfamiliar: well I hope you don't mind if I just say some minor things irc, do you?
2014-09-06 23:41 xChippy: Sure go ahead owo
2014-09-06 23:42 Unsfamiliar: not very substantive, but some things I noticed and remember from when I first played it
2014-09-06 23:42 Unsfamiliar: 03:47:143 (1,2) - this for example
2014-09-06 23:42 Unsfamiliar: I feel maybe you should make the anti-jump more obvious
2014-09-06 23:42 Unsfamiliar: or NC accordingly
2014-09-06 23:43 Unsfamiliar: totally put me off, when I tried HD
2014-09-06 23:44 xChippy: Hmm aight I removed NC from (1) put it on (2) instead and moved it a bit away also
2014-09-06 23:44 xChippy: should be okay now I think owo
2014-09-06 23:44 Unsfamiliar: ok cool
2014-09-06 23:45 Unsfamiliar: 00:11:579 (5) - is there anything here to map to?
2014-09-06 23:45 Unsfamiliar: I don't believe so, unless you prove me wrong!
2014-09-06 23:46 Unsfamiliar: For me, just that one 1/2 note would suffice
2014-09-06 23:46 Unsfamiliar: maybe further away too
2014-09-06 23:47 xChippy: hmm aight owo
2014-09-06 23:48 Unsfamiliar: 00:06:499 (1) - replace whistle with clap on head?
2014-09-06 23:48 Unsfamiliar: for consistency
2014-09-06 23:48 Unsfamiliar: you can hear the bass guitar change notes
2014-09-06 23:49 xChippy: Good catch
2014-09-06 23:49 xChippy: done
2014-09-06 23:50 Unsfamiliar: 00:21:176 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't know about you, but I kind of dislike the drum sampling here
2014-09-06 23:50 Unsfamiliar: lol
2014-09-06 23:50 xChippy: hmm
2014-09-06 23:50 Unsfamiliar: the default drum hit normal is just... horrid
2014-09-06 23:50 Unsfamiliar: haha
2014-09-06 23:51 Unsfamiliar: for the triplet anyway
2014-09-06 23:51 Unsfamiliar: just my opinion
2014-09-06 23:51 xChippy: aight done
2014-09-06 23:51 Unsfamiliar: I guess leaving it on 00:21:660 (5) - might be ok
2014-09-06 23:51 xChippy: went with nothing instead owo
2014-09-06 23:52 xChippy: yea did owo
2014-09-06 23:54 Unsfamiliar: 01:03:918 (1,2,3) - you ought to check the timing of these
2014-09-06 23:54 Unsfamiliar: well (1) and (2)
2014-09-06 23:54 Unsfamiliar: they don't seem to be snapped to 1/4 to me!
2014-09-06 23:55 Unsfamiliar: in fact, (2) doesn't seem to be there at all...
2014-09-06 23:55 xChippy: Oh snap I got caught
2014-09-06 23:55 xChippy: ACTION runs
2014-09-06 23:56 Unsfamiliar: well, it does play ok i guess haha
2014-09-06 23:56 Unsfamiliar: making 1/6 would be really confusing
2014-09-06 23:56 xChippy: Hmm well idk how to make it play comfy instead orz
2014-09-06 23:56 xChippy: yea dat^
2014-09-06 23:56 Unsfamiliar: and not mapping (2) would make peeps rage
2014-09-06 23:56 Unsfamiliar: and spaz out
2014-09-06 23:56 Unsfamiliar: so yeah
2014-09-06 23:56 Unsfamiliar: just keep it in mind for future mods
2014-09-06 23:56 Unsfamiliar: and when BATs serve you your cake
2014-09-06 23:57 xChippy: yeah aight :P
2014-09-07 00:00 Unsfamiliar: 01:54:402 (3,1) - blanket could be improved, if you're going for one :P
2014-09-07 00:01 xChippy: aight owo
2014-09-07 00:04 Unsfamiliar: flow is very well executed in this map
2014-09-07 00:04 Unsfamiliar: bar maybe this 02:27:950 (4,5) - 
2014-09-07 00:05 Unsfamiliar: but in terms of playability, it's absolutely fine
2014-09-07 00:05 Unsfamiliar: I just like nitpicking on weird circle>slider angles :3
2014-09-07 00:06 xChippy: Yeah I'm usually like dat aswell :P
2014-09-07 00:06 xChippy: but I wanted to try this aswell a bit owo
2014-09-07 00:07 Unsfamiliar: yeah i know what you mean. Like sometimes there's a weird angle and you're like no way that could work!
2014-09-07 00:07 Unsfamiliar: but then you test it
2014-09-07 00:07 Unsfamiliar: and it's brilliant
2014-09-07 00:07 xChippy: Yeah xD that :P
2014-09-07 00:07 Unsfamiliar: smiles all round :)
2014-09-07 00:07 xChippy: Also
2014-09-07 00:07 xChippy: Blaaaaaankettt this way
2014-09-07 00:08 xChippy: owo
2014-09-07 00:08 Unsfamiliar: pls
2014-09-07 00:08 Unsfamiliar: 02:27:144 (1,5) - not even
2014-09-07 00:09 xChippy: hue
2014-09-07 00:09 Unsfamiliar: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2007613
2014-09-07 00:09 Unsfamiliar: that is perfection
2014-09-07 00:09 Unsfamiliar: heheh
2014-09-07 00:10 xChippy: huehuehue :P
2014-09-07 00:10 xChippy: done =w=
2014-09-07 00:10 Unsfamiliar: 02:27:144 (1,3) - make sure (3) is stack properly on (1) end
2014-09-07 00:11 Unsfamiliar: default skin hides nothing!
2014-09-07 00:12 xChippy: fixed ww
2014-09-07 00:13 Unsfamiliar: 02:29:079 (3,4) - pls remove the whistles on the slider bodies, unless you really intended to put them here
2014-09-07 00:13 Unsfamiliar: the default one is just eww
2014-09-07 00:13 xChippy: oh woops owo
2014-09-07 00:13 Unsfamiliar: yeah, can't tell in editor
2014-09-07 00:14 Unsfamiliar: but it's pretty obvious when you play
2014-09-07 00:16 Unsfamiliar: i was sure there was 1 more someone
2014-09-07 00:16 Unsfamiliar: but I can't seem to find it
2014-09-07 00:16 xChippy: owo
2014-09-07 00:16 xChippy: you mean a whisle on the body?
2014-09-07 00:17 Unsfamiliar: yeah
2014-09-07 00:17 xChippy: idk I did some self modding before i went to camp
2014-09-07 00:17 I mean *somewhere btw orz
2014-09-07 00:17 xChippy: maybe it was there idk
2014-09-07 00:17 Unsfamiliar: mmk
2014-09-07 00:17 Unsfamiliar: 02:43:273 (1,2,3,4) - these jumps are pretty big!
2014-09-07 00:17 Unsfamiliar: and irregular because of the pattern you used
2014-09-07 00:18 Unsfamiliar: as in, the diagonal jumps are greater 
2014-09-07 00:18 Unsfamiliar: was slightly uncomfortable for me
2014-09-07 00:19 Unsfamiliar: 02:43:596 (3,4) - especially this one because you need to hit the triplet stack on (4)
2014-09-07 00:19 xChippy: hmmm
2014-09-07 00:21 xChippy: Well I reduced the scale of the jump atlast, but Idk I kinda like this one owo
2014-09-07 00:21 xChippy: it fits with the intensity of the music imo
2014-09-07 00:22 Unsfamiliar: ah i see
2014-09-07 00:22 Unsfamiliar: cool then
2014-09-07 00:23 Unsfamiliar: forget the first pattern for now, I'd personally do something like 
2014-09-07 00:23 Unsfamiliar: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2007678
2014-09-07 00:23 Unsfamiliar: for the 2nd pattern. just saying
2014-09-07 00:23 Unsfamiliar: mush easier to hit that triplet
2014-09-07 00:23 Unsfamiliar: and I don't feel intensity 'drop' per say
2014-09-07 00:25 Unsfamiliar: 03:03:918 (5,6) - might as well blanket here =w=
2014-09-07 00:25 Unsfamiliar: 03:05:047 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - <3
2014-09-07 00:26 Unsfamiliar: (now that I know it's a heart lol)
2014-09-07 00:26 xChippy: wwwwww
2014-09-07 00:26 xChippy: done the blanket btw
2014-09-07 00:26 xChippy: also trying out the pattern you send me
2014-09-07 00:27 Unsfamiliar: oh ok, it's no big deal though
2014-09-07 00:27 Unsfamiliar: 03:11:402 (1) - Must see firework here, or I'll cry
2014-09-07 00:27 xChippy: Must slap a SBer or I'll cry ;w;
2014-09-07 00:28 Unsfamiliar: if you slap the SBer, I'm sure they'll be the one to cry
2014-09-07 00:28 xChippy: Let them!
2014-09-07 00:28 xChippy: if they won't make one, let them cry! www
2014-09-07 00:29 Unsfamiliar: hahaha
2014-09-07 00:29 Unsfamiliar: hidoi ;w;
2014-09-07 00:29 xChippy: hmm I'll consider the patter nowo
2014-09-07 00:30 xChippy: owo*
2014-09-07 00:30 xChippy: Doubting the fall in spacing of (1) so hmmm yeah idk
2014-09-07 00:30 Unsfamiliar: yeah, that's why I mentioned to forget about the first pattern for the time being
2014-09-07 00:30 xChippy: aaah owo
2014-09-07 00:31 xChippy: overread that
2014-09-07 00:31 xChippy: ow
2014-09-07 00:31 xChippy: My keyboard is derping TwT
2014-09-07 00:31 Unsfamiliar: i'm derping
2014-09-07 00:31 Unsfamiliar: getting late
2014-09-07 00:32 Unsfamiliar: 03:20:127 (2,2,2,2) - oh chippy ww
2014-09-07 00:32 xChippy: aight
2014-09-07 00:32 xChippy: hueheuehu
2014-09-07 00:32 Unsfamiliar: it's fine to play
2014-09-07 00:32 Unsfamiliar: but
2014-09-07 00:32 Unsfamiliar: 03:20:046 (1,2,3) - 
2014-09-07 00:32 Unsfamiliar: forces me to change finger arrrrggggghhh
2014-09-07 00:32 xChippy: lol xD
2014-09-07 00:33 Unsfamiliar: because it's even..
2014-09-07 00:36 Unsfamiliar: ahh you mapped the piano bit~
2014-09-07 00:36 Unsfamiliar: <3
2014-09-07 00:36 xChippy: :3
2014-09-07 00:37 Unsfamiliar: 03:56:172 - can you reduce the vol on this maybe?
2014-09-07 00:37 xChippy: oh right
2014-09-07 00:38 Unsfamiliar: since it's just not in the song and it's a quiet part so it's really obvious
2014-09-07 00:38 Unsfamiliar: 03:58:122 - and here
2014-09-07 00:38 xChippy: yep
2014-09-07 00:39 Unsfamiliar: phew
2014-09-07 00:39 Unsfamiliar: annnnd done
2014-09-07 00:39 Unsfamiliar: excellent diff
2014-09-07 00:39 xChippy: \:D/
2014-09-07 00:39 Unsfamiliar: i've told you this many times before
2014-09-07 00:39 xChippy: Thanks =w=b!
2014-09-07 00:39 Unsfamiliar: even after you only mapped until after the first kiai
2014-09-07 00:40 Unsfamiliar: heheh
2014-09-07 00:40 xChippy: lol xD
2014-09-07 00:40 xChippy: Well post it~~ and be BAT unsfa
2014-09-07 00:40 Unsfamiliar: I can probably take a look at the other diffs, especially the collab hard, sometime later though
2014-09-07 00:40 xChippy: It's fine lol
2014-09-07 00:40 xChippy: if you have time would be cool
2014-09-07 00:41 xChippy: But if your busy its cool
Good luck :3
xChippy
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Thanks Unsfa =w=b
kakifly
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kakifly
m4m from your queue

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- maybe remove 00:04:563 (2) - and extend 00:04:725 (3) - by 1/2 and move it to 00:04:563 ? personally i just dont think mapping the vocals here is needed it sounds weird imo; you can do something other than i suggested and keep a consistent beat tho
- 00:25:531 - add note
- 00:28:434 (4,1) - not perfectly stacked; move 00:29:725 (1) - to y295
- 00:31:983 (6) - add note here; the sound is just as strong as 00:31:337 (4,5) - so idk why you leave this unmapped
- 00:34:563 (5,1) - blanket
- 00:36:015 (3,1) - not stacked properly move 00:37:467 (1) - to x166 y213
- 00:41:660 (3) - move it up a bit; it looks better
- 00:43:918 (3) - would this be a bit hard to read for normal ??
- 01:02:789 (1,2,3,4) - the rhythm is a bit too inconsistent for normal; maybe just not map this part?
- 01:11:015 (3,1) - stack.. move 01:12:305 (1) - to x161 y128
- 02:51:660 (1) - line this up with 02:51:015 (4) - to avoid slight overlap ? make adjustments to next few notes
- 03:00:692 (3) - even out spacing; just a tiny bit off
- 03:47:143 (5) - move y=111 for perfect stack

xChipmixx's Hard

- 00:36:821 (3) - move a bit to the right; it just slightly overlaps;
- 00:38:112 (2) - stack on 00:36:821 (3) - if u do that ^
- 00:39:886 (2,3) - i suggest switching the places of 2 and 3 so its less confusing and more readable
- 00:45:208 (1) - 00:46:176 (4) - not perfect stack, move 00:46:176 (4) - to y=111
- 00:49:079 (1) - 00:50:370 (1) - ^ move 00:50:370 (1) - to x271 y163
- 00:50:370 (1) - 00:51:337 (4) - another stack that should be fixed.. getting lazy finding the xy now lo u_u move 00:51:337 (4) - to x147 y182
- 01:13:596 (1,5) - stack
- 01:20:047 (1,3) - ^
- 02:25:854 (1,6) - ^
- 02:38:434 (1,4) - ^
- 03:04:886 (1) - i suggest ending this at 03:07:144 and starting another spinner 1/4 after it since this spinner gets really long; same with all diffs; and even though i only mention this one there are a few other long spinners too which can be changed
- stack tail of 03:15:530 (2) - onto 03:13:918 (2) - ??
- 03:35:208 (5,2) - stack
- 03:37:304 (1,2,3) - maybe just not map this part; it feels empty when you do and i think a nice short rest for the player is nice


nice mapset ~ good luck !!
xChippy
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kakifly wrote:

m4m from your queue

Normal

- maybe remove 00:04:563 (2) - and extend 00:04:725 (3) - by 1/2 and move it to 00:04:563 ? personally i just dont think mapping the vocals here is needed it sounds weird imo; you can do something other than i suggested and keep a consistent beat tho
- 00:25:531 - add note did something else.
- 00:28:434 (4,1) - not perfectly stacked; move 00:29:725 (1) - to y295
- 00:31:983 (6) - add note here; the sound is just as strong as 00:31:337 (4,5) - so idk why you leave this unmapped Left this unmapped to emphasize the next beat, also the previous note has a high pitched instrument supporting it therefore it would fit to give it a small blank after it.
- 00:34:563 (5,1) - blanket not my intention, if I were to blanket it would give the slider an ugly curve which would ruin the flow.
- 00:36:015 (3,1) - not stacked properly move 00:37:467 (1) - to x166 y213
- 00:41:660 (3) - move it up a bit; it looks better
- 00:43:918 (3) - would this be a bit hard to read for normal ?? nah should be fine, there is a clear pattern
- 01:02:789 (1,2,3,4) - the rhythm is a bit too inconsistent for normal; maybe just not map this part? Nope prefer to map this, leaving this blank is weird imo.
- 01:11:015 (3,1) - stack.. move 01:12:305 (1) - to x161 y128
- 02:51:660 (1) - line this up with 02:51:015 (4) - to avoid slight overlap ? make adjustments to next few notes
- 03:00:692 (3) - even out spacing; just a tiny bit off
- 03:47:143 (5) - move y=111 for perfect stack

xChipmixx's Hard

- 00:36:821 (3) - move a bit to the right; it just slightly overlaps; it doesn't overlap o-o,
- 00:38:112 (2) - stack on 00:36:821 (3) - if u do that ^ ~
- 00:39:886 (2,3) - i suggest switching the places of 2 and 3 so its less confusing and more readable
- 00:45:208 (1) - 00:46:176 (4) - not perfect stack, move 00:46:176 (4) - to y=111
- 00:49:079 (1) - 00:50:370 (1) - ^ move 00:50:370 (1) - to x271 y163
- 00:50:370 (1) - 00:51:337 (4) - another stack that should be fixed.. getting lazy finding the xy now lo u_u move 00:51:337 (4) - to x147 y182
- 01:13:596 (1,5) - stack
- 01:20:047 (1,3) - ^
- 02:25:854 (1,6) - ^
- 02:38:434 (1,4) - ^
- 03:04:886 (1) - i suggest ending this at 03:07:144 and starting another spinner 1/4 after it since this spinner gets really long; same with all diffs; and even though i only mention this one there are a few other long spinners too which can be changed I don't like using 1/4 spinners. As those imo don't make much sense music wise. They start at a place with no beat mostly (same case here). So they will be annoying for other modes sometimes. So prefer to keep it as-is
- stack tail of 03:15:530 (2) - onto 03:13:918 (2) - ??
- 03:35:208 (5,2) - stack
- 03:37:304 (1,2,3) - maybe just not map this part; it feels empty when you do and i think a nice short rest for the player is nice


nice mapset ~ good luck !!
No Comment: Fixed
Thanks for modding!
HabiHolic
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HabiHolic
Sorry for late. your IRC Request

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00:27:789 (3) - This is my suggestion. 00:28:434 (4) - of the beginning of this blanket?
00:58:434 (1) - I think the spinner is inappropriate in this part. The beginning of the spinner 01:00:692 - here. Spinners End 01:01:821 - here.
00:58:434 ~ 01:00:370 - If we fix the details if you're over. This part shall mapping.
02:11:983 (1) - same 00:58:434 (1)
03:37:304 - i don't understand this green line need. your use this green line?
03:38:111 (1,2) - This seems not good rhythm. I will suggest here a rhythm.
SPOILER

03:43:595 - add note here. It sounds like the drum sound here.
03:47:143 (5) - NC? I think it needs to be highlighted.

[xChipmixx's Hard]

00:09:402 (2) - not bad 1/1 slider. but I suspect there is a vocal're gone along
00:30:854 (1) - Delete NC. i think don't need NC here
00:32:950 (2) - flow is bad >_>. ctrl + g? Notes are easily handled
00:42:305 (4) - This spacing is bad. the full schedule
SPOILER

00:58:434 (1) - same normal diff
01:25:208 (4) - NC?

I'm laze modding >_> sorry :o
xChippy
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Topic Starter
xChippy

HabiHolic wrote:

Sorry for late. your IRC Request

[Normal]

00:27:789 (3) - This is my suggestion. 00:28:434 (4) - of the beginning of this blanket? Flow not very good than :/
00:58:434 (1) - I think the spinner is inappropriate in this part. The beginning of the spinner 01:00:692 - here. Spinners End 01:01:821 - here. it is following the drum, but I'll rethink if more mention this
00:58:434 ~ 01:00:370 - If we fix the details if you're over. This part shall mapping.
02:11:983 (1) - same 00:58:434 (1) same
03:37:304 - i don't understand this green line need. your use this green line?
03:38:111 (1,2) - This seems not good rhythm. I will suggest here a rhythm.
SPOILER

03:43:595 - add note here. It sounds like the drum sound here.
03:47:143 (5) - NC? I think it needs to be highlighted.

[xChipmixx's Hard]

00:09:402 (2) - not bad 1/1 slider. but I suspect there is a vocal're gone along For Ice
00:30:854 (1) - Delete NC. i think don't need NC here for consistency
00:32:950 (2) - flow is bad >_>. ctrl + g? Notes are easily handled For Ice
00:42:305 (4) - This spacing is bad. the full schedule For Ice
SPOILER

00:58:434 (1) - same normal diff same
01:25:208 (4) - NC? nah it's fine owo

I'm laze modding >_> sorry :o
Thank you Habi-chan wwww
Lust
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IRC modded with xChippy

Log
16:07 xChippy: Yo Lust o/ owo
16:07 Lust: heya 
16:09 xChippy: Can i request a mod wwww?
16:10 Lust: sure
16:10 xChippy: I want my 1st non tv size out there www
16:10 xChippy: tho I probably already requested this map o-o
16:10 *xChippy is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/486651 yuikonnu - Natsu no Owari, Koi no Hajimari]
16:10 Lust: >.< yuiko
16:11 Lust: alright if you have time we can do this right now in irc
16:11 xChippy: oh sure
16:11 Lust: shouldnt there be two nico's before douga in the tags? xD
16:12 xChippy: oh snap
16:12 xChippy: but uuh
16:12 xChippy: idk
16:12 xChippy: double tags owo?
16:12 xChippy: won't affect I think but okay owo
16:12 Lust: i would add it for search string purposes
16:13 Lust: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/3119526
16:13 xChippy: okie
16:16 *Lust is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/486613 yuikonnu - Natsu no Owari, Koi no Hajimari [Insane]]
16:16 xChippy: o/
16:16 Lust: 01:03:918 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this stream is a bit overmapped, delete all the objects and play it back at 25% and you can hear that some objects arent needed
16:16 Lust: in fact since there arent a lot of sounds to accent the stream, the play becomes a little awkward
16:16 xChippy: yeah I discussed this with someone else aswel
16:17 xChippy: hmm..
16:17 Lust: players wont be able to stream here consistently if there isnt anything in the music to back it up
16:17 Lust: i understand you are going off of an "implied rhythm" but tbh it doesnt really work here
16:17 xChippy: than I suppose the violin is no option
16:17 xChippy: aight going with the drums
16:18 Lust: please do =A=
16:19 xChippy: oh how about dis http://puu.sh/bIp1E/fd30beb561.jpg
16:19 Lust: perfect, exactly what i had
16:23 Lust: 02:54:079 (7,8,1) - i would move this down, it touches the HP bar and thats a guideline and tbh you can avoid this 
16:23 xChippy: aight fixed
16:26 Lust: hmmm my main gripe are these 3/4 sliders, getting 100s on all of these sliders orz
16:27 xChippy: yeah I intentionally mapped it like this tho
16:28 Lust: 01:05:208 (3,4,2,3) - stuff like this can work so much better as 1/2 sliders
16:28 Lust: the hold effect doesnt really work well
16:29 Lust: 01:09:402 (7,1) - this is great, because it serves as a nice transition
16:54 xChippy: bleh my internet is failing atm
16:55 Lust: did you get my messages before you dc'd
16:55 xChippy: the last what I have is...
16:55 xChippy: the one where I last said something
16:57 Lust: http://puu.sh/bIsqS/0fd0a05ee6.png
16:58 xChippy: yeah and after that I said smth right
16:58 Lust: nope
16:58 xChippy: uh dafuq lol
16:59 xChippy: shit inet lol
16:59 xChippy: Yeah I know what you mean there but I intentionally mapped it 3/4 fitting it with the holding vocal
16:59 xChippy: at most places
16:59 xChippy: need tor echeck those again lol
17:00 Lust: i understand you intended to have a hold there, but tbh its not really playing as well as i hoped
17:00 xChippy: Tho I kinda like how they play
17:00 Lust: please consider to shorten at least some of them
17:00 xChippy: I'll ask a bit around
17:00 xChippy: Was planning to anyways lol first time using so many 3/4s
17:00 Lust: alright, ask around and then call me back sometime

What we fixed:
  1. Removed a stream that clashed too much with the music
  2. Moved an object that was touching the hp bar
  3. Discussed about the usage of extended 3/4 sliders

I want you to go ask around more about those sliders, to me they feel a bit unnatural and I get 100s all over the place with them. Call me back after you gather some more opinons
CXu
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give up your kds
xChippy
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hereee dem kds
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20:08 CXu: 01:05:208 (3) - I think this one should be 1/2, since "ga" ends at 01:05:370 -
20:08 xChippy: oh right also dat drum
20:08 CXu: 01:05:531 (4,2) - are fine, since there is that "hi" and "fu"
20:08 CXu: 01:09:402 (7) - is fine too since long vocal
20:09 CXu: 01:17:144 (5) - shorten this to 1/2 as well imo
20:09 CXu: since ro ends at red tick
20:10 CXu: 02:18:112 (1,2) - idk I feel like this should be 1/2 then 3/4 xd
20:11 xChippy: hmm true owo
20:11 CXu: 02:29:725 (1) - 1/2, and possibly 3/4 for next slider as well (and I gues sfor similar parts in last kiai if you feel like consistency)
20:12 xChippy: Tho about this one 01:17:144 (5) - the ro seems to go a little further than the red tick tho owo
20:12 xChippy: or rip my ears
20:13 CXu: I think it's just because of vocals being not 100% on-beat
20:13 CXu: 01:19:241 (2) - like the tsu being late here
20:13 CXu: 03:17:143 (7) - 1/2 cuz "i"
20:13 CXu: 03:19:724 (4,1,2,3) - pls stillhard ;;
20:14 xChippy: heuehuehu
20:14 xChippy: 03:17:143 (7) - Tho this one is consistent with the rest ;w;, hmmm 
20:14 xChippy: Gonna check which plays more comfy first owo
20:15 CXu: yeah I know it's consistent xd
20:15 CXu: but she sings differently so o3o
20:15 xChippy: yeah owo
20:16 CXu: the last kiai is different already
20:16 xChippy: yeah pitch change
20:16 CXu: so i think it's fine to change it up a bit
20:16 xChippy: so aight owo
20:16 CXu: anyhow, other 3/4's are fine o3o
20:16 xChippy: aight owo
20:16 xChippy: get kds ahuheeuh
Lust
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Lust
Finished our modding via IRC

Log
16:43 xChippy: Yo Lust~
16:43 Lust: herro
16:43 xChippy: I got some opinions owo and did an IRC with CXu owo
16:43 xChippy: majority said it played fine tho
16:43 xChippy: but I removed some to fit it exactly with the vocal
16:48 Lust: gimme a few moments
16:51 xChippy: aight owo
16:57 Lust: much better so far
16:57 xChippy: cool
17:00 Lust: definitely more confident about bubbling this now
17:01 xChippy: :)
17:02 *Lust is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/486613 yuikonnu - Natsu no Owari, Koi no Hajimari [Insane]]
17:03 Lust: 00:52:628 (6,7) - i suggest you arrange these more in a straight forward manner so that players wont end up getting 100s on these sliders
17:03 Lust: 00:52:467 (4,5) - the stacks here stop the momentum
17:03 Lust: so the player will not continue onwards to 00:52:628 (6,7) - 
17:04 xChippy: aight
17:05 Lust: http://puu.sh/bJOaZ/22f200b5b4.jpg something like this maybe? make it more like a stream play
17:06 xChippy: I did this if its fine http://puu.sh/bJOhk/c128a0eaad.jpg
17:06 Lust: even better
17:07 Lust: i was hoping for a similar effect as 01:08:596 (2,3,4,5) - 
17:07 Lust: but that works too
17:09 Lust: 02:26:983 (8) - touches the HP bar, its a guideline and in this instance it can be avoided
17:10 xChippy: fixed
17:14 Lust: 03:08:273 (1) - i would lower the volume of the slider tick here, it gets in the way of the effect you are trying to make
17:16 Lust: 03:32:627 (1) - this is a nice pattern and all, but 03:31:821 (2,2) - 's hitbursts are in the way and thus making 03:32:627 (1) - more difficult to see (slider body-wise)
17:17 xChippy: Whilst playing it's fine tho
17:18 Lust: http://puu.sh/bJPf1/afc2a8bac0.jpg do you think players will be able to see this
17:18 Lust: http://puu.sh/bJPht/811f723a38.jpg again, a little further on, pretty hard to read tbh
17:19 Lust: even during the slider is being played
17:19 xChippy: oh snap I forgot that I have an invisible 300
17:19 xChippy: forgot that that wasnt standard LOOL
17:19 xChippy: hmm ok.. lemme see
17:19 Lust: always remember to check things with the default template skin
17:19 Lust: especially when modding things for bubble or rank
17:21 xChippy: I removed 03:32:869 (4) - and switched the pattern to this http://puu.sh/bJPrC/e220b179b6.jpg
17:21 Lust: yeah thats looking good
17:23 Lust: other than that diff is good to go
17:23 *Lust is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/488643 yuikonnu - Natsu no Owari, Koi no Hajimari [xChipmixx's Hard]]
17:23 Lust: 00:58:434 (1) - awww kinda disappointed you went with a spinner here xD
17:24 xChippy: well yeah ;w;
17:24 xChippy: idk it fits with the drums tho
17:24 xChippy: but ehh I can map it if it's really a problem
17:24 Lust: nah i dont really care haha, wouldve like to see it mapped out though personally
17:27 Lust: alright this diff looks good too
17:27 xChippy: cool~
17:27 xChippy: oh snap just noticed
17:28 xChippy: 1367x768 BG XD
17:28 Lust: yeah i am aware
17:28 Lust: i was going to tell you at the end
17:28 Lust: i can resize it for you
17:28 xChippy: it's fine I'm on it now
17:29 Lust: 00:43:918 (3) - ehhh i wouldn't recommend you keep this slider shape, its pretty confusing especially for newer players who cannot interpret when to let go and when to hit 1
17:29 Lust: also they could get confused on how it plays
17:29 *Lust is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/486651 yuikonnu - Natsu no Owari, Koi no Hajimari [Normal]]
17:29 Lust: normal btw
17:30 xChippy: ;w; popular demand bleh
17:30 xChippy: aight changed
17:30 Lust: i mean its cool, but its just not going to fly in the easiest diff xD
17:31 Lust: 03:04:563 (1) - i suggest you move this to another location, since this is the same spacing from 03:03:273 (3) - as is 03:04:241 (4) - players can be confused which one to hit with the AR
17:32 xChippy: aight
17:32 xChippy: 256|300 I did
17:32 Lust: perfect

We fixed quite a bit, mostly includes changing confusing patterns and moving objects that touch the hp bar

Call me back after you are satisfied with everything
xChippy
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Topic Starter
xChippy

Lust wrote:

Finished our modding via IRC

Log
16:43 xChippy: Yo Lust~
16:43 Lust: herro
16:43 xChippy: I got some opinions owo and did an IRC with CXu owo
16:43 xChippy: majority said it played fine tho
16:43 xChippy: but I removed some to fit it exactly with the vocal
16:48 Lust: gimme a few moments
16:51 xChippy: aight owo
16:57 Lust: much better so far
16:57 xChippy: cool
17:00 Lust: definitely more confident about bubbling this now
17:01 xChippy: :)
17:02 *Lust is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/486613 yuikonnu - Natsu no Owari, Koi no Hajimari [Insane]]
17:03 Lust: 00:52:628 (6,7) - i suggest you arrange these more in a straight forward manner so that players wont end up getting 100s on these sliders
17:03 Lust: 00:52:467 (4,5) - the stacks here stop the momentum
17:03 Lust: so the player will not continue onwards to 00:52:628 (6,7) - 
17:04 xChippy: aight
17:05 Lust: http://puu.sh/bJOaZ/22f200b5b4.jpg something like this maybe? make it more like a stream play
17:06 xChippy: I did this if its fine http://puu.sh/bJOhk/c128a0eaad.jpg
17:06 Lust: even better
17:07 Lust: i was hoping for a similar effect as 01:08:596 (2,3,4,5) - 
17:07 Lust: but that works too
17:09 Lust: 02:26:983 (8) - touches the HP bar, its a guideline and in this instance it can be avoided
17:10 xChippy: fixed
17:14 Lust: 03:08:273 (1) - i would lower the volume of the slider tick here, it gets in the way of the effect you are trying to make
17:16 Lust: 03:32:627 (1) - this is a nice pattern and all, but 03:31:821 (2,2) - 's hitbursts are in the way and thus making 03:32:627 (1) - more difficult to see (slider body-wise)
17:17 xChippy: Whilst playing it's fine tho
17:18 Lust: http://puu.sh/bJPf1/afc2a8bac0.jpg do you think players will be able to see this
17:18 Lust: http://puu.sh/bJPht/811f723a38.jpg again, a little further on, pretty hard to read tbh
17:19 Lust: even during the slider is being played
17:19 xChippy: oh snap I forgot that I have an invisible 300
17:19 xChippy: forgot that that wasnt standard LOOL
17:19 xChippy: hmm ok.. lemme see
17:19 Lust: always remember to check things with the default template skin
17:19 Lust: especially when modding things for bubble or rank
17:21 xChippy: I removed 03:32:869 (4) - and switched the pattern to this http://puu.sh/bJPrC/e220b179b6.jpg
17:21 Lust: yeah thats looking good
17:23 Lust: other than that diff is good to go
17:23 *Lust is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/488643 yuikonnu - Natsu no Owari, Koi no Hajimari [xChipmixx's Hard]]
17:23 Lust: 00:58:434 (1) - awww kinda disappointed you went with a spinner here xD
17:24 xChippy: well yeah ;w;
17:24 xChippy: idk it fits with the drums tho
17:24 xChippy: but ehh I can map it if it's really a problem
17:24 Lust: nah i dont really care haha, wouldve like to see it mapped out though personally
17:27 Lust: alright this diff looks good too
17:27 xChippy: cool~
17:27 xChippy: oh snap just noticed
17:28 xChippy: 1367x768 BG XD
17:28 Lust: yeah i am aware
17:28 Lust: i was going to tell you at the end
17:28 Lust: i can resize it for you
17:28 xChippy: it's fine I'm on it now
17:29 Lust: 00:43:918 (3) - ehhh i wouldn't recommend you keep this slider shape, its pretty confusing especially for newer players who cannot interpret when to let go and when to hit 1
17:29 Lust: also they could get confused on how it plays
17:29 *Lust is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/486651 yuikonnu - Natsu no Owari, Koi no Hajimari [Normal]]
17:29 Lust: normal btw
17:30 xChippy: ;w; popular demand bleh
17:30 xChippy: aight changed
17:30 Lust: i mean its cool, but its just not going to fly in the easiest diff xD
17:31 Lust: 03:04:563 (1) - i suggest you move this to another location, since this is the same spacing from 03:03:273 (3) - as is 03:04:241 (4) - players can be confused which one to hit with the AR
17:32 xChippy: aight
17:32 xChippy: 256|300 I did
17:32 Lust: perfect

We fixed quite a bit, mostly includes changing confusing patterns and moving objects that touch the hp bar

Call me back after you are satisfied with everything
Thanks Lust!
dammit bg
Lust
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Alright, looking good to me. Bubbled!
xChippy
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Lust wrote:

Alright, looking good to me. Bubbled!
Coooool 8-) Thanks Lust!
captin1
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shoot I was looking through this to rank and i realized there's a spot near the end that was off timing wise orzz i suck sorry
SPOILER
233473,454.545454545455,4,2,2,20,1,8
234377,491.803278688525,4,2,2,25,1,0
235851,428.571428571429,4,2,2,25,1,8
236280,476.190476190476,4,2,2,25,1,0
237713,545.454545454546,4,2,2,25,1,8
238258,576.923076923077,4,2,2,25,1,0
238834,545.454545454546,4,2,2,25,1,0
239379,612.244897959184,4,2,2,25,1,0
239988,857.142857142857,4,2,2,25,1,8
240845,857.142857142857,4,2,2,25,1,0
replace the ending red lines with this and it should work out better, gomenasaiiiiii

[Normal]
  1. 00:23:273 (3) - clap on end
  2. 00:25:854 (3,4) - ^ for both
  3. 00:56:176 (2) - finish might work here too, since it's in the music
  4. 01:22:628 (1) - try a clap on the head, sounds nice
  5. 02:02:628 (2) - surprised you didn't end this 1/2 earlier and have a circle on 02:03:757 - , would fit the music better imo
  6. 02:49:079 (1) - move middle white point to the left a bit for a nicer curve w
  7. 03:38:595 (2) - not seeing the reason for this note, kinda breaks most of your patterns
  8. 03:47:788 (2) - wao symmetry pls :D
[xChipmixx's Hard]
  1. 00:05:692 (4) - whistle on head?
  2. 00:23:918 (3) - clap on head
  3. 00:28:434 (1) - clap on end
  4. 00:30:370 (4) - ^
  5. 00:38:918 (2) - ^
  6. 00:40:692 (6) - ^
  7. 00:41:337 (1) - clap on head
  8. 00:41:821 (2) - clap on end
  9. 01:52:950 (3) - whistle on head
[Insane]
  1. 00:41:337 (1) - clap on head
  2. 00:41:821 (2) - clap on end
  3. 01:22:628 (2) - clap on head with the finish sounds better to keep your pattern
  4. 03:32:950 (1) - ^
should work out better after this, let me know
xChippy
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all fixed~~ owo
captin1
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owo
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(/OwO)/ tyyyy \(OwO\)
zhengyuanhang
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zhengyuanhang
Hi, M4M

xChipmixx's Hard
1. Change AR into 8.
2. 00:32:950 (2,4) - I think the overlap is bad in Hard.
3. 01:21:338 (1,3) - ^

Insane
1. Change OD into 8.
2. 02:10:370 (1,2) - Swap them.
3. 02:42:628 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I think it is a bad pattern. Consider changing it into another pattern.
4. 02:48:434 (3,4,5,6) - I think changing them into a 1/8 kick slider wil be better.
xChippy
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zhengyuanhang wrote:

Hi, M4M

xChipmixx's Hard
1. Change AR into 8. nah doesnt fit
2. 00:32:950 (2,4) - I think the overlap is bad in Hard. its fine
3. 01:21:338 (1,3) - ^ ^

Insane
1. Change OD into 8. nah
2. 02:10:370 (1,2) - Swap them. intentional did it like this so no
3. 02:42:628 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I think it is a bad pattern. Consider changing it into another pattern. what's bad about it?
4. 02:48:434 (3,4,5,6) - I think changing them into a 1/8 kick slider wil be better. nah seems fine as-is
Uuuh idk where you get it, but I'm not accepting M4M atm lol
Thanks for modding anyways
Umi
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Umi
We did a little IRC, Fixed some patterns/rythms/NCs

Log
2014-09-29 17:45 Umi: wanna irc ?
2014-09-29 17:45 xChippy: oh sure owo
2014-09-29 17:45 Umi: ok then :3
2014-09-29 17:46 Umi: the settings of normal diff aren't a bit too high considering it's the easiest difficulty ?
2014-09-29 17:47 Umi: I'd reduce AR/HP/OD by 1
2014-09-29 17:48 xChippy: hmm yeah true
2014-09-29 17:48 xChippy: going HP and OD plus 1
2014-09-29 17:48 xChippy: AR idk yet
2014-09-29 17:48 xChippy: lemme try
2014-09-29 17:48 Umi: ok i'm testplaying atm and it play good imo
2014-09-29 17:49 xChippy: okie
2014-09-29 17:50 Umi: 01:15:531 (2,3,4) - this might be consused for newbies
2014-09-29 17:51 xChippy: fixed
2014-09-29 17:51 Umi: bpm is quite high it make the pattern even more ahrd to read
2014-09-29 17:51 Umi: k good
2014-09-29 17:53 Umi: 02:07:789 (2,1) - nazi but this blanket can be improved a bit :3
2014-09-29 17:53 Umi: 02:18:757 (5,6,1) - oh, same as before
2014-09-29 17:54 xChippy: Hmm this one should be fine I think
2014-09-29 17:54 xChippy: as it is more clear
2014-09-29 17:54 xChippy: as the previous one
2014-09-29 17:54 Umi: u think, it's pretty much the same imo, but well as u want
2014-09-29 17:55 Umi: 02:43:112 (2,3) - how about delete 3 and extend 2 to 02:43:596 -
2014-09-29 17:55 Umi: feel better, there is too much 1/2 successively
2014-09-29 17:56 xChippy: okie
2014-09-29 17:57 Umi: a personal opinion here
2014-09-29 17:58 Umi: 03:12:305 (1,2) - / 03:22:627 (1,2) - this kind of pattern doesn't play good at all imo
2014-09-29 17:58 Umi: a simple rythm would fit and play better > http://puu.sh/bSIn3/10cef0fb19.jpg
2014-09-29 17:58 xChippy: hmmm
2014-09-29 17:59 Umi: i know u're trying to follow the voice here
2014-09-29 17:59 Umi: but kinda meh D:
2014-09-29 17:59 xChippy: I did those cuz of the pitch change therefore a diffrent rythm for this kiai, hmm...
2014-09-29 18:00 xChippy: orz idk
2014-09-29 18:01 Umi: it's up to u but i'd love u to fix it
2014-09-29 18:01 Umi: ACTION runs
2014-09-29 18:02 xChippy: it´s also for making the diff harder www
2014-09-29 18:02 xChippy: since the hard is pretty hard uuh lol
2014-09-29 18:02 xChippy: meh lemme try some magic
2014-09-29 18:02 Umi: ahah k
2014-09-29 18:03 xChippy: oh btw I added a note here 03:30:046 (3) -
2014-09-29 18:03 xChippy: 03:30:046
2014-09-29 18:03 xChippy: for consistency o/o
2014-09-29 18:03 Umi: ah yean nice
2014-09-29 18:04 Umi: u should add one here too so ?
2014-09-29 18:04 Umi: 03:28:756 -
2014-09-29 18:04 xChippy: nope look other kiais owo
2014-09-29 18:04 Umi: ah no nvm
2014-09-29 18:04 Umi: yep it's okay
2014-09-29 18:05 Umi: 00:09:402 (2) - is this your part ?
2014-09-29 18:05 Umi: hard diff
2014-09-29 18:06 xChippy: I can fix for him owo
2014-09-29 18:06 Umi: kay
2014-09-29 18:06 Umi: rrythm feel awkward
2014-09-29 18:07 Umi: he is mostly following the voice here, but suddenlyhe skip it
2014-09-29 18:07 Umi: try this rythm
2014-09-29 18:08 Umi: http://puu.sh/bSJ0P/f7b9051e67.jpg
2014-09-29 18:10 xChippy: He´s sitting next to me atm actually
2014-09-29 18:10 xChippy: he wanted this http://puu.sh/bSJak/24f913d5e4.jpg
2014-09-29 18:10 xChippy: o.o
2014-09-29 18:10 Umi: hum
2014-09-29 18:11 xChippy: better pic owo http://puu.sh/bSJel/1dc32c1fd5.jpg
2014-09-29 18:11 Umi: well yeah it's still better
2014-09-29 18:11 Umi: yeah yeah good :3
2014-09-29 18:12 Umi: 00:30:854 (1,2) -
2014-09-29 18:12 Umi: Exchange them, i mean
2014-09-29 18:13 Umi: http://puu.sh/bSJlX/183314667c.jpg
2014-09-29 18:13 Umi: so u don't skip the beat at 00:31:015 -
2014-09-29 18:13 Umi: about the pattern u can just stack (5) with (1)
2014-09-29 18:14 xChippy: done
2014-09-29 18:14 Umi: http://puu.sh/bSJqs/695031d1fb.jpg
2014-09-29 18:14 Umi: k :3
2014-09-29 18:14 Umi: 00:39:725 (1,3) - switch NC
2014-09-29 18:16 xChippy: yeah
2014-09-29 18:16 Umi: 01:06:660 (3,1) - stack perfectly
2014-09-29 18:16 xChippy: done
2014-09-29 18:18 Umi: 01:21:015 (4,1,2,3) - hmm confused
2014-09-29 18:18 xChippy: yeah I ran out of ideas xD
2014-09-29 18:18 xChippy: hmmm
2014-09-29 18:18 Umi: try this ?
2014-09-29 18:18 xChippy: ACTION Uses magic
2014-09-29 18:18 Umi: http://puu.sh/bSJHW/cc66c6ba89.jpg
2014-09-29 18:20 xChippy: I switched 2 and 3 instead
2014-09-29 18:20 xChippy: for jump with 4 owo
2014-09-29 18:20 xChippy: if its fine owo
2014-09-29 18:21 Umi: lemme see
2014-09-29 18:21 Umi: hum can u screen ?
2014-09-29 18:21 Umi: it's actually weird for me xD
2014-09-29 18:21 xChippy: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2084673
2014-09-29 18:22 Umi: yup nice
2014-09-29 18:23 Umi: 03:27:143 (8,1) -
2014-09-29 18:23 Umi: i'd stack them instead
2014-09-29 18:23 Umi: easier to understand
2014-09-29 18:23 xChippy: omg what dis guy doi
2014-09-29 18:23 xChippy: fixed lol
2014-09-29 18:23 Umi: lol
2014-09-29 18:24 Umi: ok go for insane now :3
2014-09-29 18:26 Umi: 00:54:886 (4) -
2014-09-29 18:26 Umi: ctrl g ?
2014-09-29 18:27 Umi: flow way better
2014-09-29 18:30 xChippy: hmmm
2014-09-29 18:31 xChippy: okie
2014-09-29 18:31 xChippy: I moved 00:54:886 (4,6) - 369, 97 also
2014-09-29 18:32 Umi: 01:07:144 (1) - i think i already told ut this
2014-09-29 18:32 xChippy: for distance and triangle
2014-09-29 18:32 Umi: but this 1/1 gap feel weird, really ><
2014-09-29 18:33 xChippy: did a 3/4 and 1/2 afterwards
2014-09-29 18:33 xChippy: to fit with the rest of the map
2014-09-29 18:33 xChippy: www
2014-09-29 18:33 Umi: K cool
2014-09-29 18:36 Umi: 02:02:789 (2,3,4) -
2014-09-29 18:36 Umi: awkward flow
2014-09-29 18:36 Umi: i'd put it in this way
2014-09-29 18:36 Umi: http://puu.sh/bSKXW/d45eaa71e3.jpg
2014-09-29 18:38 xChippy: hmm it doesn´t flow that awkward for me :<,
2014-09-29 18:38 xChippy: it does look awkward but eeeh
2014-09-29 18:38 Umi: the mouvement of the mouse feel froced
2014-09-29 18:39 Umi: wait i'll draw something for u xD
2014-09-29 18:39 xChippy: yeey owo
2014-09-29 18:40 Umi: look
2014-09-29 18:40 Umi: http://puu.sh/bSLh2/c2f8cee42a.jpg
2014-09-29 18:41 Umi: u go up and then directly down
2014-09-29 18:42 xChippy: hmmm okie
2014-09-29 18:42 xChippy: wouldnt stacking it fix it owo?
2014-09-29 18:42 xChippy: oh wait hmm
2014-09-29 18:42 Umi: screen
2014-09-29 18:43 xChippy: did something else owo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2084758
2014-09-29 18:44 Umi: oh yeah look good
2014-09-29 18:44 Umi: 03:15:853 (3) - improve the blanket and also ctrl G
2014-09-29 18:45 xChippy: fixed
2014-09-29 18:46 Umi: and that's it
2014-09-29 18:46 xChippy: owo/
2014-09-29 18:47 Umi: well i'm not a pro at timing but it seems that captin1 already checked it, look fine to me
2014-09-29 18:47 xChippy: yeah it should be good now
2014-09-29 18:47 Umi: upload
2014-09-29 18:47 Umi: and and we can go
2014-09-29 18:47 xChippy: Aye o7
2014-09-29 18:47 xChippy: done


Qualified!
xChippy
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Thanks Umi~~!! =w=b
Skystar
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Grats, yuikonnu <3
alacat
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Umippy :3

gz, Chippy!
Aka
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i feel bad that i couldnt get there in 2+ weeks XmX

congratz anyways, fun fun ;~;
Dainesl
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Dainesl
why is there no Japanese artist/title for this ;w;

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2084888 other maps had that...
Umi
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Umi
Orz my bad.. well i guess we will have to fix this.

Summon QAT.

Artist : ゆいこんぬ

Tittle : 夏の終わり、恋の始まり
Asphyxia
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Asphyxia
Disqualified because missing Japanese artist & title, should be a quick fix!

Fixed, here's your heart back!
xChippy
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Thanks Asphyxia! =w=b

Sorry for the inconvenience!
Umi
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xChippy wrote:

Sorry for the inconvenience!
Dainesl
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re-congrats~
Lust
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Congratulations!
se-no
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congratz

nice yuikonnuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
Unsfamiliar
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ome! :)
HabiHolic
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Gratz Chippy!
Rakuen
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Rakuen
Grats
Zero__wind
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not a bad one, congratz~
it'd be better if you pay more attention on the hitsound consistency when you decided to do some custom stuff which is not in the music
talking about things like 01:36:499 (4) - with 01:41:660 (4) - and some others
Oyatsu
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Congratz!! xChippy :D
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