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Perfume - MY COLOR

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fm4a93au04
129 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
fm4a93au04
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年8月22日 at 上午 09:49:21

Artist: Perfume
Title: MY COLOR
Tags: JPN Japanese Perfume
BPM: 132
Filesize: 4952kb
Play Time: 02:58
Difficulties Available:
  1. Colorful (2.83 stars, 347 notes)
  2. Easy (1.69 stars, 172 notes)
  3. Normal (1.83 stars, 229 notes)
Download: Perfume - MY COLOR
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
Remap a short one here : https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/3295245#p3295245 . I don't know if it better or not , but just give it a try .
重製了短一點的版本... : https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/3295245#p3295245 . 我不知道這樣有沒有比較好 , 就試看看吧 ......
Last edited by fm4a93au04 , edited 33 times in total.
Lusy_old
69 posts
Joined January 2013
Lusy_old
hi.. this is my first time to hear Perfume's song..

Easy & Hard
Check your AiMod .. there's some object that isn't snap.
Maybe you can change your song from 320kbps to 128kbps.
fm4a93au04
129 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
fm4a93au04
Hello Lusy,hope you like it ~~~~ !

I had fixed it,thank you very much. ;)
Rad-
595 posts
Joined June 2011
Rad-
Hello!

You got the difficulties wrong, make normal to easy, hard to normal and insane to hard.
Also the maps are noticeable that are repeating, basically you copy-pasted the first half and flipped horizontally on the second half.

A great advice i would give to you is play more often to know how the maps should be played, which will help in future mapping, and as soon as you play well insanes, you can do that last difficulty :P

I would give more advice on how the map should be but you REALLY need to play osu more often to know how to map properly, sorry :\
fm4a93au04
129 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
fm4a93au04
I'm a lazy man ~~~~

Sure,I think so =.=.

More play,more experience,is a good way to know how to map a map.

Thanks 8-) .
rhalp10
579 posts
Joined September 2013
rhalp10

rhalp's Modding Queues [ForEver OPEN]


Hello from this queues !!
Perfume - MY COLOR
[Colorless]
02:02:796 (3) - REMOVE ??

[Colored]

00:12:114 (1) - MOVE !! x: 480 y: 36 prev: 1.12x next: 0.00x
00:12:569 (2) - MOVE !! x: 487 y: 96 prev: 0.00x next: 1.19x
00:30:070 (1,2) - REMOVE !!
00:37:797 (3) - MOVE !! x: 204 y: 324 prev: 1.50x next: 0.00x
00:38:024 (4) - MOVE !! x: 204 y: 324 prev: 0.00x next: 1.61x
00:38:251 (5) - MOVE !! x: 120 y: 276 prev: 1.61x next: 1.99x
00:38:933 (6) - MOVE !! x: 244 y: 92 prev 1.99x next:2.03x
00:39:615 (7) - MOVE !! x: 460 y: 2.03 prev: 2.03x next: 2.59x

[Colorful]
Information !!
Stack leniency is larger than 0.9 or smaller than 0.3.



GOOD LUCK !! :D
fm4a93au04
129 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
fm4a93au04

rhalp10 wrote:

rhalp's Modding Queues [ForEver OPEN]


Hello from this queues !!
Perfume - MY COLOR
[Colorless]
02:02:796 (3) - REMOVE ?? Why @v@ ? If I remove it , it will be no sound.... SO empty @v@" .

[Colored]

00:12:114 (1) - MOVE !! x: 480 y: 36 prev: 1.12x next: 0.00x Thank you , I fix it .
00:12:569 (2) - MOVE !! x: 487 y: 96 prev: 0.00x next: 1.19x @.@" fixed .
00:30:070 (1,2) - REMOVE !! In the last part of this song , I do the same thing . I think it is proper since it match the vocal .

The green word is what I've seen .

00:37:797 (3) - MOVE !! x: 204 y: 324 prev: 1.50x next: 0.00x x: 221 y: 337 prev: 1.20x next: 0.00x
00:38:024 (4) - MOVE !! x: 204 y: 324 prev: 0.00x next: 1.61x x: 221 y: 337 prev: 0.00x next: 1.20x
00:38:251 (5) - MOVE !! x: 120 y: 276 prev: 1.61x next: 1.99x x: 163 y: 294 prev: 1.20x next: 1.21x
00:38:933 (6) - MOVE !! x: 244 y: 92 prev 1.99x next:2.03x x: 296 y: 196 prev 1.21x next:1.19x
00:39:615 (7) - MOVE !! x: 460 y: 2.03 prev: 2.03x next: 2.59x x: 422 y: 293 prev: 1.19x next: 0.00x

[Colorful]
Information !!
Stack leniency is larger than 0.9 or smaller than 0.3. Oh no ...... Thank you I fix it .




GOOD LUCK !! :D
Something wrong with my map ...... Maybe I should upload it again . Anyway , thank you very much !
KUURAhoshi
585 posts
Joined January 2014
KUURAhoshi
Mod Request From Kazamastar’s Modding Queue
Hello, fm4a93au04 !
Thank’s for calling me to mod your beatmap 
Let’s get started..

Colorless
Is that Easy diff ? You must keep the Distance Snap on !,
The CS was too large, use 2,
02:53:250 (1,1,1) – Q, you don’t need that New Combo.
Colored
Use CS4 and AR6,
No problem with chart 
Colorful
Use HD6, AR8, OD7,
Same as Colored, no problem with chart 
That’s All fm4a93au04 ! Good luck !

Special Notes : i mod before you update your beatmap
Last edited by KUURAhoshi , edited 1 time in total.
fm4a93au04
129 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
fm4a93au04

Kazamastar11 wrote:

Mod Request From Kazamastar’s Modding QueueThe link was strange ......
Hello, fm4a93au04 !
Thank’s for calling me to mod your beatmap 
Let’s get started..

Colorless
Is that Easy diff ? You must keep the Distance Snap on !,
The CS was too large, use 2,
02:53:250 (1,1,1) – Q, you don’t need that New Combo.00:45:523 (2) - here and 02:41:887 (2) - here , right ? prev : 1.5x ? Okey , I fix it up . Sorry for my careless .
Colored
Use CS4 and AR6,
No problem with chart I think CS4 is too small to me @.@" , that was so hard . but I will use AR6 , that was more ... fleeting now , thank you very much.
Colorful
Use HD6, AR8, OD7,
Same as Colored, no problem with chart OK , I fix it up.
That’s All fm4a93au04 ! Good luck !

Special Notes : i mod before you update your beatmap
Thank you for modding my map , it was helpful for me @v@+ .

By the way , my English is not so good , so plz ignore the mistake words -- unless you can't understand my words.

Thank you , once again .
KUURAhoshi
585 posts
Joined January 2014
KUURAhoshi
Your welcome :)
If it's not helping, feel free to tell me.. I'll shoot Kudosu star..

What do you think about my Modding Skills ?
Vote now ! :)
fm4a93au04
129 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
fm4a93au04

Kazamastar11 wrote:

Your welcome :)
If it's not helping, feel free to tell me.. I'll shoot Kudosu star..

What do you think about my Modding Skills ?
Vote now ! :)
How funny it is ! I have vote a "great" on it .
XinCrin
2,846 posts
Joined January 2012
XinCrin
Hi From my modding queue ~

I think you can improve your map a lot!. There are a lot of things that needs to be fixed.
I'll save you a ticket from my modding queue, when you improve your map. Call me again when you do this! :)
Good luck!
fm4a93au04
129 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
fm4a93au04

XinCrin wrote:

Hi From my modding queue ~

I think you can improve your map a lot!. There are a lot of things that needs to be fixed.
I'll save you a ticket from my modding queue, when you improve your map. Call me again when you do this! :)
Good luck!
That is why I need someone's help to mod . Because whatever I check , I can't find anything to improve now ...

But , I will give it a try . Thank you .
Mortem
694 posts
Joined July 2013
Mortem
Hi, as requested.
Colorless
00:08:705 - Try to put here circle or something.
00:27:114 (1) - Move to 00:26:887
01:13:250 (2,3) - This is a bit of confusing for "Easy" players. My suggestion is, make a reverse slider.
01:36:432 (1,2) - Improve design of the sliders.
02:00:069 (3) - Reverse Slider.
02:19:614 (1) - Move it little bit closer to (2) to make at least some symetry.

Colored

Seems fine to me.

For your first beatmap it's cool actually
Hope that helps
If not, then sorry
Good Luck!
fm4a93au04
129 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
fm4a93au04
Pjecoo's mod ( thank you ~~ )

Pjecoo wrote:

Hi, as requested.
Colorless
00:08:705 - Try to put here circle or something. I put a circle there .
00:27:114 (1) - Move to 00:26:887 Sorry for my careless , I have fixed it .
01:13:250 (2,3) - This is a bit of confusing for "Easy" players. My suggestion is, make a reverse slider. Yes , that's better , thanks .
01:36:432 (1,2) - Improve design of the sliders. Done , and also change some compose around that 2 sliders .
02:00:069 (3) - Reverse Slider. 0.0
02:19:614 (1) - Move it little bit closer to (2) to make at least some symetry. Yeah , that looks better .

Colored

Seems fine to me.

For your first beatmap it's cool actually
Hope that helps
If not, then sorry
Good Luck![/color]
Thank you for modding my map , and also " good luck " to your map ~~ .
HootOwlStar
765 posts
Joined May 2014
HootOwlStar
Hihi! :oops:
我就用华文来mod吧（逼不得已我就会混合一些英文
这首歌好好听<3

[Colorless]
我都是以1/4 beat snap divisor来做mod的。
试试0.8x的 distance spacing
00:01:887 (1) - 试看与过后的note一样，把它弄成占据7个small tick（小点？）的slider，而且建议不要把它放在那个位置
00:09:159 (2) - 把它弄成占据7个小点的slider
00:12:796 (2,3) - 因为（2）和（4）是flip horizontally (Ctrl+H) 的clone，所以建议这两个note弄成reverse slider
00:17:341 - 加circle
00:19:159 - ^
00:20:978 (2) - 换成两个circle
00:21:887 (3,1,2) - 不够好，换换它们的位置看看
00:26:887 (1) - 这个spinner 应该往后到从 00:27:341 开始比较好，在这个时间点添加一个circle
00:31:887 - 加一个circle
00:34:614 (1) - 为了避免破坏过后的pattern，并解决太空洞的问题，我建议把它延长变成占据7小点的slider
00:39:159 - 如00:31:887
00:43:250 (4,5) - 太难了些
01:07:341 - 总觉得应该从这里开始第二段
01:15:523 - 加circle
01:19:159 - ^
01:29:159 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这边好怪，全都挤在下方
01:58:250 (1) - 建议把它移到 x:340 y:240
02:00:069 (3) - 建议把它移到 x:172 y:240
02:03:705 (4) - 建议把它移到 x:216 y:60
02:01:432 (1,2,3,4) - 不够好，换换它们的位置看看
02:23:023 (1) - 应该往后到从02:23:705，这个时间点应该要放一个占据5个小点的reverse slider
02:28:250 - 加circle
02:31:887 - ^
02:35:523 - ^
02:39:613 (4,5) - 如00:43:250 (4,5)
有一点太注重pattern了，不过整体来说还好

总觉得有许多东西可以再改进，而且其他diff还不错，所以就先到这里。
希望你的图能快点被ranked 吧~ :D
KuroSenpai112
114 posts
Joined December 2013
KuroSenpai112
Hi there from queue!

[General]
- The easier difficulties need to have "Easy" or Normal". Only the hardest difficulty can have a completely different name.

[Colorful]
00:04:821 ~ 00:55:978 - Add a clap for every second white ticks.
01:58:705 ~ 02:22:341 - Same as above.

Please do the same in all other difficulties!

Other than the missing hitsounds, all the note placements look fine to me. Good luck with your map!
smallbeans
297 posts
Joined February 2012
smallbeans
逆豪，我是路過的。

[General]
背景圖片大小不對，換成1024*768或是1366*768大小的圖片。
設置Audio leadin為1500？

[Colorful]
00:59:481 這裡要不要加圓圈？
01:26:205(3) 滑條尾的錨點移到 x:192 y:284
01:40:069(1) 這個圓圈不要和後面的連擊擠在一起，容易誤讀。
02:05:978(3) 移到 x:348 y:132
02:08:478(1) 把New Combo拿掉？
02:09:614(2,3) 這兩個物件沒有完全和02:08:478(1)的尾巴疊好。
02:10:978(6) 滑條尾的錨點移到 x:240 y:252
02:26:432(1,2) 其實我覺得可以擺成四個距離很近的圓圈，然後直接接到下一個滑條這樣。
02:56:205 這裡要不要加圓圈？

另外兩個難度應該沒什麼大問題。
加油！
pandorawindy
312 posts
Joined December 2013
pandorawindy
Hi from my modding queue..我不知道你是否能看得懂簡體，所以特意轉換成繁體又來post的。

其實我的queue已經關掉了,,原因有很多，在我的queue page上有寫，不過不久應該會重開的，但是我很尊重m4m request的發起者..所以特地趕來mod一下 ;w;


  • [colorful]
  1. 唱歌的時候跟著vocal，伴奏的時候跟drum beats..效果不錯，但是意圖太明顯了= =。你試著盡量去捕捉歌詞下的樂器節奏，然後下notes。
  2. 00:08:705 (1,2) - 其實關於jump的間距，要有目的性，一般間距大小都是來表達感情的強烈程度。比如你這個大跳，就有點莫名其妙的感覺，明明是隸屬一個combo，卻跳好遠，而且節奏上也沒有明顯的高漲情緒..
  3. 00:26:659 (1) - 這個轉盤，很不合理，前面跟的人聲，到這裡直接變轉盤，多看別人的圖是怎麼合理放spinner的。。
  4. 00:33:705 (3,4) - 這裡最好不要和前面兩個slider形成combo，不合曲子
  5. 00:40:523 (2,3) - 絲毫沒有flow的感覺。。
  6. 01:21:887 (1,2,3) - 避免這種似blanket非blanket的pattern。
  7. 後面的擺放還不錯。
    [normal&easy]
    hard能做好，這兩個diff那就是量產...不用擔心。
我有看到XinCrin給你的回復，他是一個很好很有經驗的mapper，他的每一首rank曲都有較高的評分。他說你可以提高質量，其實意思是讓你remap.不必過多擔心，每個新人都是這樣過來的。不重做不可能的，另外要積累pc。多打圖就像多讀書，道理一樣的,ps:建議把歌減成1.30分鐘左右，一是不用太費精力去想更多梗，二是bat不至於以為太懶而直接因為drain time太長ignore掉。

best luck with you ! 不要放棄哦~再見~
fm4a93au04
129 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
fm4a93au04
正在更新圖譜中 ...... 完成 。

Updating my map now ...... done .

HootOwlStar's mod

HootOwlStar wrote:

Hihi! :oops:
我就用华文来mod吧（逼不得已我就会混合一些英文
这首歌好好听<3

[Colorless]
我都是以1/4 beat snap divisor来做mod的。
试试0.8x的 distance spacing
00:01:887 (1) - 试看与过后的note一样，把它弄成占据7个small tick（小点？）的slider，而且建议不要把它放在那个位置 Ok , fixed .
00:09:159 (2) - 把它弄成占据7个小点的 slider fixed .
00:12:796 (2,3) - 因为（2）和（4）是flip horizontally (Ctrl+H) 的clone，所以建议这两个note弄成reverse slider fixed .
00:17:341 - 加circle I change it into " 7 small ticksed-slider " , hope it will be better .
00:19:159 - ^ I change it into " 7 small ticksed-slider " , hope it will be better .
00:20:978 (2) - 换成两个circle fixed .
00:21:887 (3,1,2) - 不够好，换换它们的位置看看 I make a now combo here ......
00:26:887 (1) - 这个spinner 应该往后到从 00:27:341 开始比较好，在这个时间点添加一个circle Move spinner , but for Easy diff , I think the circle is unnecessarily .
00:31:887 - 加一个circle I change it into " 7 small ticksed-slider " , hope it will be better .
00:34:614 (1) - 为了避免破坏过后的pattern，并解决太空洞的问题，我建议把它延长变成占据7小点的slider Yes , It's better now .
00:39:159 - 如00:31:887 I change it into " 7 small ticksed-slider " , hope it will be better .
00:43:250 (4,5) - 太难了些 Change into a slider now @v@" .
01:07:341 - 总觉得应该从这里开始第二段 But I want to fallow the piano-like sound to start second part .
01:15:523 - 加circle I think new players need a short break time to watch out for next 5 continuous circle . So I change the previous slider .
01:19:159 - ^ ^
01:29:159 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这边好怪，全都挤在下方 Make now combo now ......
01:58:250 (1) - 建议把它移到 x:340 y:240 Make a new combo now .
02:00:069 (3) - 建议把它移到 x:172 y:240 Make a new combo now .
02:03:705 (4) - 建议把它移到 x:216 y:60 Make a new combo now .
02:01:432 (1,2,3,4) - 不够好，换换它们的位置看看 Make a new combo now .
02:23:023 (1) - 应该往后到从02:23:705，这个时间点应该要放一个占据5个小点的reverse slider Just move the spinner .
02:28:250 - 加circle Fixed.
02:31:887 - ^ Fixed.
02:35:523 - ^ Fixed.
02:39:613 (4,5) - 如00:43:250 (4,5) Fixed.
有一点太注重pattern了，不过整体来说还好 What is patterm @v@" ?

总觉得有许多东西可以再改进，而且其他diff还不错，所以就先到这里。
希望你的图能快点被ranked 吧~ :D
Thank you , also hope your map can be rank soon ~~ .

謝謝你，路人
逆豪，我是路過的。

[General]
背景圖片大小不對，換成1024*768或是1366*768大小的圖片。 改成1024X768的了。
設置Audio leadin為1500？嗯。

[Colorful]
00:59:481 這裡要不要加圓圈？加了。
01:26:205(3) 滑條尾的錨點移到 x:192 y:284～
01:40:069(1) 這個圓圈不要和後面的連擊擠在一起，容易誤讀。～
02:05:978(3) 移到 x:348 y:132～
02:08:478(1) 把New Combo拿掉？～
02:09:614(2,3) 這兩個物件沒有完全和02:08:478(1)的尾巴疊好。～
02:10:978(6) 滑條尾的錨點移到 x:240 y:252～
02:26:432(1,2) 其實我覺得可以擺成四個距離很近的圓圈，然後直接接到下一個滑條這樣。～
02:56:205 這裡要不要加圓圈？～

另外兩個難度應該沒什麼大問題。
加油！一開始太菜，還以為放在這邊就有人回。現在真的有人回了～感覺好神奇～

pandorawindy

pandorawindy wrote:

Hi from my modding queue..我不知道你是否能看得懂簡體，所以特意轉換成繁體又來post的。

其實我的queue已經關掉了,,原因有很多，在我的queue page上有寫，不過不久應該會重開的，但是我很尊重m4m request的發起者..所以特地趕來mod一下 ;w;


  • [colorful]
  1. 唱歌的時候跟著vocal，伴奏的時候跟drum beats..效果不錯，但是意圖太明顯了= =。你試著盡量去捕捉歌詞下的樂器節奏，然後下notes。
  2. 00:08:705 (1,2) - 其實關於jump的間距，要有目的性，一般間距大小都是來表達感情的強烈程度。比如你這個大跳，就有點莫名其妙的感覺，明明是隸屬一個combo，卻跳好遠，而且節奏上也沒有明顯的高漲情緒..
  3. 00:26:659 (1) - 這個轉盤，很不合理，前面跟的人聲，到這裡直接變轉盤，多看別人的圖是怎麼合理放spinner的。。
  4. 00:33:705 (3,4) - 這裡最好不要和前面兩個slider形成combo，不合曲子
  5. 00:40:523 (2,3) - 絲毫沒有flow的感覺。。
  6. 01:21:887 (1,2,3) - 避免這種似blanket非blanket的pattern。
  7. 後面的擺放還不錯。
    [normal&easy]
    hard能做好，這兩個diff那就是量產...不用擔心。
我有看到XinCrin給你的回復，他是一個很好很有經驗的mapper，他的每一首rank曲都有較高的評分。他說你可以提高質量，其實意思是讓你remap.不必過多擔心，每個新人都是這樣過來的。不重做不可能的，另外要積累pc。多打圖就像多讀書，道理一樣的,ps:建議把歌減成1.30分鐘左右，一是不用太費精力去想更多梗，二是bat不至於以為太懶而直接因為drain time太長ignore掉。

best luck with you ! 不要放棄哦~再見~改了很多地方謝謝你摟　還特意幫我轉碼 尚在糾結要不要乾脆砍掉 ......


TheForgotten5

TheForgotten5 wrote:

Hi there from queue!

[General]
- The easier difficulties need to have "Easy" or Normal". Only the hardest difficulty can have a completely different name.

[Colorful]
00:04:821 ~ 00:55:978 - Add a clap for every second white ticks.
01:58:705 ~ 02:22:341 - Same as above.

Please do the same in all other difficulties!

Other than the missing hitsounds, all the note placements look fine to me. Good luck with your map! Hold something and change something , thank you every you very much~
[ Nyx ]
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Joined January 2014
[ Nyx ]
Hey doing M4M

These sliders are so sexy...

[Easy]

00:49:159 (1) - Why not move this note here x:276 y:348. I think it would work here because you get a triangle shape. Since 00:48:705 (7) is in the path of 00:49:614 (2) I think it may confuse new players.

00:50:978 (3) - Move this note here x:117 y:233 so spacing is more even between the previous and next note.

02:47:341 (3) - Move this note to here x:395 y:151 just so the spacing is more even between the previous and next note.

[Normal]

01:35:297 (5) - Add a clap to the tail.

[Colorful]

01:40:296 (1,2,3) - Not stacked properly (unless this is intentional)

Honestly this is all I can find, this is a well made map in my opinion and these slider, they're sooo sexy! I wish I could make sliders like you! Good job, keep it up!

Little note*
I've also taken a look at your short ver. of this song, and hard is not finished, so if you do finish it, I can take a look at it, if this mod isn't worth the M4M.
fm4a93au04
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Z3R0Xx wrote:

Hey doing M4M

These sliders are so sexy...

[Easy]

00:49:159 (1) - Why not move this note here x:276 y:348. I think it would work here because you get a triangle shape. Since 00:48:705 (7) is in the path of 00:49:614 (2) I think it may confuse new players.

00:50:978 (3) - Move this note here x:117 y:233 so spacing is more even between the previous and next note.

02:47:341 (3) - Move this note to here x:395 y:151 just so the spacing is more even between the previous and next note.

[Normal]

01:35:297 (5) - Add a clap to the tail.

[Colorful]

01:40:296 (1,2,3) - Not stacked properly (unless this is intentional)

Honestly this is all I can find, this is a well made map in my opinion and these slider, they're sooo sexy! I wish I could make sliders like you! Good job, keep it up!

Little note*
I've also taken a look at your short ver. of this song, and hard is not finished, so if you do finish it, I can take a look at it, if this mod isn't worth the M4M.
Sorry for late , since I'm checking others' map ......

It seems like my careless . I fixed all of them and change combo color .

Anyway , thanks a lot ~~ !

Goooooood luck to your map !! <- He just want to say , " I love H.M. very much ~~~~~~ !!! "
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