DJ Genericname - Dango Dango Daikazoku (Drum and Bass Remix) · forum

Shirayuki

Joined June 2013

Shirayuki 2014-07-29T04:00:54+00:00

Hello my friend,

I found your maps from Xellie, gotta say you make better insane diff than me lol.

Anyway, here are my suggestions:

[Insane]
00:01:098 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I really like this kind of jumps, and they kinda fit in with the high pace of the song, maybe you should change some of your square jumps to be like this? xD
00:08:345 (3) - Add Whistle imo
00:09:525 (7) - Add Whistle to the slider's end imo
00:15:761 (6) - Add the same hitsound as 00:15:087 (4) - to keep up with the consistency of the music, yes?
00:35:312 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I like this xD
00:47:447 (1,2) - Ctrl - G on them imo, so the flow from 00:46:772 (6,7,8) - to slider (1) will be a curve instead of a sudden drop (like what you did to 00:59:413 (5,1) - )
01:00:930 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Should change the order of them, so the jump from 01:00:593 (8) - will then drop down, it's more natural for me I guess, something like

this

So it flows from the slider to (1) drop down to 2 and continue on with the oval flow inside the star (more like this is how I draw a star in this case lol). You can add 6 7 8 into 1 2 3 respectively.
01:06:997 (1,2,3,4) - This patern is getting a bit repetitive, and since the song is going into the first kiai, maybe you can change them around a bit? xd
01:08:514 (1,2,3,4,5) - This patern is being used too many times xd
01:10:031 (2) - Ctrl - G for a better flow imo, since it flows exactly as 01:10:368 (1,2)
01:12:727 (3) - Ctrl - G to keep the oval flow, and maybe move them around a bit like

this

01:17:784 (1,2,3,4,1) - This back and forth jumps is being overused too
01:27:390 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I like this xD
01:34:300 (2,3) - These two can be a bit better, but I'd say why don't you copy 01:33:963 (1) - then use Ctrl - Shift - R and tilt each of them -20 degree from the previous one, like

this

it looks a little bit better xD

Overall a nice difficulty, it flows really nice xD

Moo-Chan

418 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Moo-Chan 2014-07-29T04:49:29+00:00

Xellie wrote:
I LUB YOU <3

[Insane]
00:13:739 (4) - dis overlaps the 10 some
00:33:963 (8) - this overlaps the 3 some
00:50:143 (1) - you could blanket the 2 c:
I would move 00:52:840 (1) - so that the slider end was on top of where 00:51:660 (2) - is, and move the pattern accordingly fixed
01:00:930 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - idk if i'd use a star here, maybe a square?
01:11:885 (9) - this slightly overlaps 01:12:727 (3) -

There wasn't much I could say, the map is really solid c: Good luck getting it ranked tori bby~ LOL

Sorry for the one little fix xD and ty~

Moo-Chan

418 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Moo-Chan 2014-07-29T05:00:48+00:00

Shirayuki wrote:
Hello my friend,

I found your maps from Xellie, gotta say you make better insane diff than me lol.

Anyway, here are my suggestions:

[Insane]
00:01:098 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I really like this kind of jumps, and they kinda fit in with the high pace of the song, maybe you should change some of your square jumps to be like this? xD
00:08:345 (3) - Add Whistle imo okay
00:09:525 (7) - Add Whistle to the slider's end imo okay
00:15:761 (6) - Add the same hitsound as 00:15:087 (4) - to keep up with the consistency of the music, yes? fixed
00:35:312 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I like this xD
00:47:447 (1,2) - Ctrl - G on them imo, so the flow from 00:46:772 (6,7,8) - to slider (1) will be a curve instead of a sudden drop (like what you did to 00:59:413 (5,1) - )
01:00:930 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Should change the order of them, so the jump from 01:00:593 (8) - will then drop down, it's more natural for me I guess, something like
this
So it flows from the slider to (1) drop down to 2 and continue on with the oval flow inside the star (more like this is how I draw a star in this case lol). You can add 6 7 8 into 1 2 3 respectively.
01:06:997 (1,2,3,4) - This patern is getting a bit repetitive, and since the song is going into the first kiai, maybe you can change them around a bit? xd
01:08:514 (1,2,3,4,5) - This patern is being used too many times xd
01:10:031 (2) - Ctrl - G for a better flow imo, since it flows exactly as 01:10:368 (1,2)
01:12:727 (3) - Ctrl - G to keep the oval flow, and maybe move them around a bit like okay
this
01:17:784 (1,2,3,4,1) - This back and forth jumps is being overused too
01:27:390 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I like this xD
01:34:300 (2,3) - These two can be a bit better, but I'd say why don't you copy 01:33:963 (1) - then use Ctrl - Shift - R and tilt each of them -20 degree from the previous one, like
this

it looks a little bit better xD
Overall a nice difficulty, it flows really nice xD

Thank you~~~~~

Kibbleru

osu! Alumni

5,846 posts

Joined August 2013

Kibbleru 2014-07-31T03:50:50+00:00

the kd theif is here

SPOILER

23:24 Moo-Chan: psst
23:25 Kibbleru: psst
23:25 Moo-Chan: can you mod my new map? ;w;
23:25 Moo-Chan: its better than the last
23:25 Moo-Chan: (i think)
23:25 Kibbleru: np
23:27 Moo-Chan: https://osu.ppy.sh/b/467603
23:29 Kibbleru: 400 circles 100 sliders
23:30 Kibbleru: 00:28:406 (7) - this is going off screen
23:30 Kibbleru: or off grid
23:30 Kibbleru: put it back
23:31 Moo-Chan: fixed
23:31 Kibbleru: u still have NC inconsistencies
23:32 Kibbleru: 00:28:574 - starting aroudn here ish
23:32 Kibbleru: around*
23:32 Kibbleru: 00:55:540 (9) - and try to put nc on the downbeats
23:32 Kibbleru: not the beat after
23:33 Kibbleru: 00:40:709 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - this pattern isn't very intuitive to the music
23:33 Kibbleru: the music is in 4s not 3s
23:33 Kibbleru: 00:40:709 - 1234
23:33 Kibbleru: 00:41:383 - 1234
23:33 Kibbleru: 00:42:057 - 1234
23:34 Kibbleru: 4 1/2s i mean
23:34 Kibbleru: anyway
23:34 Kibbleru: following the music
23:34 Kibbleru: an NC pattern like this would make better sense
23:34 Kibbleru: http://puu.sh/ayk9v/62650f8b21.png
23:34 Moo-Chan: mhm
23:35 Kibbleru: 01:11:720 - try having something clickable here
23:35 Kibbleru: 01:13:068 - nc inconsistency
23:36 Kibbleru: just put ur nc to every downbeat >_> not hard
23:37 Kibbleru: well
23:37 Kibbleru: there isn't any big problems
23:37 Kibbleru: just needs some polishing
23:37 Moo-Chan: alright ;w;
23:38 Moo-Chan: is it
23:38 Moo-Chan: better than my last?
23:38 Kibbleru: i would say so yes
23:38 Moo-Chan: alright c:
23:39 Kibbleru: now what seperates a map by a newbie and a pro mapper
23:39 Kibbleru: is
23:39 Kibbleru: well
23:39 Kibbleru: if you're a good mapper
23:39 Kibbleru: you would try to
23:39 Kibbleru: how do i explain this
23:39 Kibbleru: in ways change the difficulty of play
23:39 Kibbleru: according to the song
23:39 Kibbleru: so like
23:39 Kibbleru: it gets harder at kiai
23:40 Kibbleru: and easier at calmer parts
23:40 Kibbleru: there are mainly 2 ways to establish difficulty
23:40 Kibbleru: rhythm
23:40 Kibbleru: and distance
23:40 Kibbleru: so u can make ur jumps smaller
23:40 Kibbleru: at calm parts
23:40 Kibbleru: and bigger jumps at kiai
23:40 Kibbleru: or you can just generally make ur rhythm easier
23:40 Kibbleru: by utilizing more sliders
23:40 Kibbleru: and less 1/2 patterns
23:41 Kibbleru: and ofc u can do this by altering SV as well
23:41 Kibbleru: and what makes jumps fun
23:41 Kibbleru: well just in my opinion
23:41 Kibbleru: is having a variety of distances
23:42 Kibbleru: like what fycho does <3<3<3
23:42 Kibbleru: so stronger beats get bigger jumps
23:42 Kibbleru: and vice versa
23:43 Moo-Chan: but you see, im not a pro mapper xD
23:43 Kibbleru: yeah ik
23:43 Kibbleru: just a mapping lesson q:
23:43 Kibbleru: for future reference
23:43 Kibbleru: cuz thats something missing with the map
23:43 Kibbleru: cuz it basically feels the same throughout teh song
23:43 Kibbleru: the*
23:44 Kibbleru: thats essentially the major issue with the map
23:44 Kibbleru: but i guess its rankable
23:44 Kibbleru: oh
23:44 Kibbleru: right
23:45 Kibbleru: what are u hitsounding to
23:45 Kibbleru: cuz ur claps make no sense
23:45 Kibbleru: ur clap pattern is off
23:46 Kibbleru: it should be 2/4
23:46 Kibbleru: ur doing 1/3
23:46 Kibbleru: sry
23:46 Kibbleru: 2,4
23:46 Kibbleru: as in
23:46 Kibbleru: 2nd and 4th white tick
23:46 Kibbleru: couning from the downbeat
23:46 Moo-Chan: mhm
23:46 Kibbleru: listen to the snare drum
23:46 Kibbleru: when u hitsound
23:47 Kibbleru: 00:14:754 - which is this drum thing right here
23:47 Kibbleru: well thats all
23:47 Kibbleru: 2 lazy to do a full mod :<
23:47 Moo-Chan: alright lol
23:47 Moo-Chan: its okay
23:47 Moo-Chan: c:
23:47 Moo-Chan: and, thank you o:
23:47 Kibbleru: hard diff is decent
23:48 Moo-Chan: im still waiting for smallboat to give me his normal diff
23:48 Moo-Chan: ;w;
23:48 Kibbleru: 00:24:529 (1,2) - tell him that i said don't do double repeats they're hard to expect
23:48 Kibbleru: for hard
23:49 Moo-Chan: i did
23:49 Kibbleru: oh use hard diff as a reference for hitsounding btw
23:49 Moo-Chan: alright

Moo-Chan

418 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Moo-Chan 2014-07-31T05:43:48+00:00

Kibbleru wrote:
the kd theif is here

SPOILER
23:24 Moo-Chan: psst
23:25 Kibbleru: psst
23:25 Moo-Chan: can you mod my new map? ;w;
23:25 Moo-Chan: its better than the last
23:25 Moo-Chan: (i think)
23:25 Kibbleru: np
23:27 Moo-Chan: https://osu.ppy.sh/b/467603
23:29 Kibbleru: 400 circles 100 sliders
23:30 Kibbleru: 00:28:406 (7) - this is going off screen
23:30 Kibbleru: or off grid
23:30 Kibbleru: put it back
23:31 Moo-Chan: fixed
23:31 Kibbleru: u still have NC inconsistencies
23:32 Kibbleru: 00:28:574 - starting aroudn here ish
23:32 Kibbleru: around*
23:32 Kibbleru: 00:55:540 (9) - and try to put nc on the downbeats
23:32 Kibbleru: not the beat after
23:33 Kibbleru: 00:40:709 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - this pattern isn't very intuitive to the music
23:33 Kibbleru: the music is in 4s not 3s
23:33 Kibbleru: 00:40:709 - 1234
23:33 Kibbleru: 00:41:383 - 1234
23:33 Kibbleru: 00:42:057 - 1234
23:34 Kibbleru: 4 1/2s i mean
23:34 Kibbleru: anyway
23:34 Kibbleru: following the music
23:34 Kibbleru: an NC pattern like this would make better sense
23:34 Kibbleru: http://puu.sh/ayk9v/62650f8b21.png
23:34 Moo-Chan: mhm
23:35 Kibbleru: 01:11:720 - try having something clickable here
23:35 Kibbleru: 01:13:068 - nc inconsistency
23:36 Kibbleru: just put ur nc to every downbeat >_> not hard
23:37 Kibbleru: well
23:37 Kibbleru: there isn't any big problems
23:37 Kibbleru: just needs some polishing
23:37 Moo-Chan: alright ;w;
23:38 Moo-Chan: is it
23:38 Moo-Chan: better than my last?
23:38 Kibbleru: i would say so yes
23:38 Moo-Chan: alright c:
23:39 Kibbleru: now what seperates a map by a newbie and a pro mapper
23:39 Kibbleru: is
23:39 Kibbleru: well
23:39 Kibbleru: if you're a good mapper
23:39 Kibbleru: you would try to
23:39 Kibbleru: how do i explain this
23:39 Kibbleru: in ways change the difficulty of play
23:39 Kibbleru: according to the song
23:39 Kibbleru: so like
23:39 Kibbleru: it gets harder at kiai
23:40 Kibbleru: and easier at calmer parts
23:40 Kibbleru: there are mainly 2 ways to establish difficulty
23:40 Kibbleru: rhythm
23:40 Kibbleru: and distance
23:40 Kibbleru: so u can make ur jumps smaller
23:40 Kibbleru: at calm parts
23:40 Kibbleru: and bigger jumps at kiai
23:40 Kibbleru: or you can just generally make ur rhythm easier
23:40 Kibbleru: by utilizing more sliders
23:40 Kibbleru: and less 1/2 patterns
23:41 Kibbleru: and ofc u can do this by altering SV as well
23:41 Kibbleru: and what makes jumps fun
23:41 Kibbleru: well just in my opinion
23:41 Kibbleru: is having a variety of distances
23:42 Kibbleru: like what fycho does <3<3<3
23:42 Kibbleru: so stronger beats get bigger jumps
23:42 Kibbleru: and vice versa
23:43 Moo-Chan: but you see, im not a pro mapper xD
23:43 Kibbleru: yeah ik
23:43 Kibbleru: just a mapping lesson q:
23:43 Kibbleru: for future reference
23:43 Kibbleru: cuz thats something missing with the map
23:43 Kibbleru: cuz it basically feels the same throughout teh song
23:43 Kibbleru: the*
23:44 Kibbleru: thats essentially the major issue with the map
23:44 Kibbleru: but i guess its rankable
23:44 Kibbleru: oh
23:44 Kibbleru: right
23:45 Kibbleru: what are u hitsounding to
23:45 Kibbleru: cuz ur claps make no sense
23:45 Kibbleru: ur clap pattern is off
23:46 Kibbleru: it should be 2/4
23:46 Kibbleru: ur doing 1/3
23:46 Kibbleru: sry
23:46 Kibbleru: 2,4
23:46 Kibbleru: as in
23:46 Kibbleru: 2nd and 4th white tick
23:46 Kibbleru: couning from the downbeat
23:46 Moo-Chan: mhm
23:46 Kibbleru: listen to the snare drum
23:46 Kibbleru: when u hitsound
23:47 Kibbleru: 00:14:754 - which is this drum thing right here
23:47 Kibbleru: well thats all
23:47 Kibbleru: 2 lazy to do a full mod :<
23:47 Moo-Chan: alright lol
23:47 Moo-Chan: its okay
23:47 Moo-Chan: c:
23:47 Moo-Chan: and, thank you o:
23:47 Kibbleru: hard diff is decent
23:48 Moo-Chan: im still waiting for smallboat to give me his normal diff
23:48 Moo-Chan: ;w;
23:48 Kibbleru: 00:24:529 (1,2) - tell him that i said don't do double repeats they're hard to expect
23:48 Kibbleru: for hard
23:49 Moo-Chan: i did
23:49 Kibbleru: oh use hard diff as a reference for hitsounding btw
23:49 Moo-Chan: alright

thanks c:

guineaQ

1,588 posts

Joined December 2013

guineaQ 2014-08-01T10:21:50+00:00

I cri everytiem

May I do a normal GD

Gaia

2,808 posts

Joined May 2013

Gaia 2014-08-04T06:00:57+00:00

my giving back queue
Hi! You've modded my maps not once but twice <3
feel free to call me back again(another mapset?) so i can give back to u twice c:

[General]
So i have the other ranked version of this song,

SPOILER

I didn't do much research regarding which is the right name but just keep it in mind?

01:12:226 - why remove kiai here? try 01:14:922 - here instead

you need a diff below 2.0 stars for this to be ranked

[Smug's Hard]

AIMod

00:06:158 (2,3,4) - distance between these 2 should remain the same
00:09:529 (4) - 00:11:046 (1) - stack
00:27:900 (4) - this is boring compared to the rhythms u had previously
00:59:585 (1) - 01:01:271 (2) - stack
01:01:608 (3) - 01:02:956 (3) - ^
01:21:158 (1) - 01:22:844 (6) - ^

[Insane]

AIMod

snap everything; happens when u change offset/sv so i feel u dw

00:00:256 (1) - uneven shape/ for starters make the beg and end share the same y coordinate
00:06:495 (6) - nc
00:28:406 (7) - ctrl + G
00:32:619 - random kiai here ???
00:38:349 (2) - move up a bit the overlap doesnt look very appealing and u can jump a bit too
00:43:406 - kiai o_o??
00:45:765 (2) - u should stress this more so jump a bit
00:51:158 (4) - ctrl + G and then fix shape to look better -> for a little emphasis
00:51:495 (1) - 00:53:181 (2) - not stacked, on purpose? if not then here u go
00:51:833 (3) - 00:53:349 (3,4,5) - ^
01:01:776 (6,7,8) - imo u shouldn't stack these, confusing & hard to read
01:16:945 (8) - nc mebe
01:31:945 (1) - you can hear the music is getting quieter and softer, so u should reduce ur jumps starting here
and also simplifying ur rhythms i.e. no need for 01:37:591 (2,3) - 01:38:939 (5,6) - etc
01:47:113 (1) - end 01:48:125/ looks short but it's 1 measure long + its insane so should be ok

rip

Good luck from now!~

Fizz

275 posts

Joined September 2013

Fizz 2014-08-04T12:05:42+00:00

Gaia wrote:
[Smug's Hard]
AIMod
00:06:158 (2,3,4) - distance between these 2 should remain the same done
00:09:529 (4) - 00:11:046 (1) - stack done
00:27:900 (4) - this is boring compared to the rhythms u had previously I'm mapping the second piano here to transition into the next part easily
00:59:585 (1) - 01:01:271 (2) - stack done
01:01:608 (3) - 01:02:956 (3) - ^ since I moved it with the above stack I won't stack these
01:21:158 (1) - 01:22:844 (6) - ^ done

ty for mod~

Moo-Chan

418 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Moo-Chan 2014-08-04T12:50:51+00:00

Gaia wrote:
my giving back queue
Hi! You've modded my maps not once but twice <3
feel free to call me back again(another mapset?) so i can give back to u twice c:

[General]
So i have the other ranked version of this song,
SPOILER
I didn't do much research regarding which is the right name but just keep it in mind? Uh, I'll have a look

01:12:226 - why remove kiai here? try 01:14:922 - here instead fixed

you need a diff below 2.0 stars for this to be ranked I have an easy and a normal on the way

[Smug's Hard]
AIMod
00:06:158 (2,3,4) - distance between these 2 should remain the same
00:09:529 (4) - 00:11:046 (1) - stack
00:27:900 (4) - this is boring compared to the rhythms u had previously
00:59:585 (1) - 01:01:271 (2) - stack
01:01:608 (3) - 01:02:956 (3) - ^
01:21:158 (1) - 01:22:844 (6) - ^

[Insane]
AIMod

snap everything; happens when u change offset/sv so i feel u dw
00:00:256 (1) - uneven shape/ for starters make the beg and end share the same y coordinate
00:06:495 (6) - nc ok
00:28:406 (7) - ctrl + G ok
00:32:619 - random kiai here ???
00:38:349 (2) - move up a bit the overlap doesnt look very appealing and u can jump a bit too alright
00:43:406 - kiai o_o??
00:45:765 (2) - u should stress this more so jump a bit fixed
00:51:158 (4) - ctrl + G and then fix shape to look better -> for a little emphasis I'm gonna keep this the same
00:51:495 (1) - 00:53:181 (2) - not stacked, on purpose? if not then here u go yea, it was on purpose
00:51:833 (3) - 00:53:349 (3,4,5) - ^ ^
01:01:776 (6,7,8) - imo u shouldn't stack these, confusing & hard to read meh
01:16:945 (8) - nc mebe no
01:31:945 (1) - you can hear the music is getting quieter and softer, so u should reduce ur jumps starting here
and also simplifying ur rhythms i.e. no need for 01:37:591 (2,3) - 01:38:939 (5,6) - etc semi-fixed
01:47:113 (1) - end 01:48:125/ looks short but it's 1 measure long + its insane so should be ok
rip

Good luck from now!~

Thanks for the mod c:

Squigly

449 posts

Joined August 2013

Squigly 2014-08-04T19:22:10+00:00

more moe background

kds pls

Julie

1,416 posts

Joined March 2013

Julie 2014-08-07T04:53:31+00:00

^ Squigly please!! now call chii chan for avatar post

!!!

no kds yet might mods it, requested by xelewd~

I found S.Boat owo

Moo-Chan

418 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Moo-Chan 2014-08-07T05:00:22+00:00

Julie wrote:
^ Squigly please!! now call chii chan for avatar post !!!

no kds yet might mods it, requested by xelewd~

I found S.Boat owo

8^) S.Boat too gud

kakifly

940 posts

Joined April 2014

kakifly 2014-08-07T19:26:50+00:00

hello~ m4m from my queue ^^

S.Boat's Normal

Make AR 4 or 5
00:27:563 (2) - move tail point to x233 y72 for better blanket
00:38:349 (2) - tailpoint to x249 y106
01:22:507 (3) - tail point to x145 y190 (sorry blanket nazi lol)
01:46:439 (3) - end this at 01:46:776

nice diff :3

Smug's Hard

00:21:158 (1) - i dont think a SV change is necessary here
01:03:630 (1) - ^
00:21:158 (1,2) - personally i dont like these sliders, i think you should map the same way you did with 00:21:833 (1,2,3,4) -
00:40:709 (1,2) - ^
00:32:619 (1,2) - try this rhythm, i think it matched the music better

00:35:316 (1,2) - ^
00:38:012 (1,2) - ^
00:59:585 (1,2) - ^
01:06:664 (2) - tailpoint to x381 y154
01:10:372 (1,2) - fix blanket a bit, especially with 2
01:38:686 (1,2) - try this

01:44:080 (1,2) - ^
01:47:113 (2,3,4) - i feel that these should be a slider or something

sorry i only modded 2 diffs (since you modded 2 diffs of my map)
the mapset looks great so far, good luck :3

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

smallboat 2014-08-08T00:19:13+00:00

kakifly wrote:
hello~ m4m from my queue ^^ Hi

S.Boat's Normal

Make AR 4 or 5 Sure,adjust 4.
00:27:563 (2) - move tail point to x233 y72 for better blanket fixed.
00:38:349 (2) - tailpoint to x249 y106 Move a bit.
01:22:507 (3) - tail point to x145 y190 (sorry blanket nazi lol) Fixed,nothing
01:46:439 (3) - end this at 01:46:776 Keep it,follow vocal.

nice diff :3 Thanks.

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Tags:chata ed ending dango daikazoku remix guineaq smallboat smug-
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Lanturn

osu! Alumni

3,912 posts

Joined March 2012

Lanturn 2014-08-08T00:42:38+00:00

Just a small info mod because the title was bugging me.

DJ Genericname (real name Adam Whitton)
https://soundcloud.com/adam-whitton
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCMy2KN ... gvURvKl9eQ
http://www.last.fm/music/DJ+GenericName

The only sources of this song I could find was on his YouTube channel and Newgrounds.

Title: Dango Dango Daikazoku (Drum and Bass Remix)
Source: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4IBzjoW5uxU

There is also http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/509639 which is titled as you have it, but it was released after. I recommend using the YouTube video source because it was the original title. Don't understand why he never uploaded this to SoundCloud. Oh well though. If you want to keep the title as is, then it should be fine for consistency with Moway's map, and because he has it named so many different ways on various sites which all have equal priority.

Add Adam Whitton to the tags.
Also add liquid and DNB to it as well, since he classifies this as liquid dnb

No KD please. I'm just snooping around.

Moo-Chan

418 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Moo-Chan 2014-08-08T01:16:27+00:00

Lanturn wrote:
Just a small info mod because the title was bugging me.

DJ Genericname (real name Adam Whitton)
https://soundcloud.com/adam-whitton
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCMy2KN ... gvURvKl9eQ
http://www.last.fm/music/DJ+GenericName

The only sources of this song I could find was on his YouTube channel and Newgrounds.

Title: Dango Dango Daikazoku (Drum and Bass Remix)
Source: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4IBzjoW5uxU

There is also http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/509639 which is titled as you have it, but it was released after. I recommend using the YouTube video source because it was the original title. Don't understand why he never uploaded this to SoundCloud. Oh well though. If you want to keep the title as is, then it should be fine for consistency with Moway's map, and because he has it named so many different ways on various sites which all have equal priority.

Add Adam Whitton to the tags.
Also add liquid and DNB to it as well, since he classifies this as liquid dnb

No KD please. I'm just snooping around.

I'll probably fix the title to Dango Dango Daikazoku (Drum and Bass Remix) then, and I'll fix the tags.
Thank you Lanturn for the title help :3

Fizz

275 posts

Joined September 2013

Fizz 2014-08-08T02:44:12+00:00

Smug's Hard

00:21:158 (1) - i dont think a SV change is necessary here
01:03:630 (1) - ^ they may not be necessary but they emphasize the transition into the next part of the song
00:21:158 (1,2) - personally i dont like these sliders, i think you should map the same way you did with 00:21:833 (1,2,3,4) -
00:40:709 (1,2) - ^ changed here, but not for the above
00:32:619 (1,2) - try this rhythm, i think it matched the music better this would ruin the consistency with the entire song
00:35:316 (1,2) - ^
00:38:012 (1,2) - ^
00:59:585 (1,2) - ^
01:06:664 (2) - tailpoint to x381 y154 fixed blanket
01:10:372 (1,2) - fix blanket a bit, especially with 2 fixed
01:38:686 (1,2) - try this
01:44:080 (1,2) - ^ breaks consistency
01:47:113 (2,3,4) - i feel that these should be a slider or something done

sorry i only modded 2 diffs (since you modded 2 diffs of my map)
the mapset looks great so far, good luck :3

ty for the mod~

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Title:Dango Dango Daikazoku (Drum and Bass)
TitleUnicode:Dango Dango Daikazoku (Drum and Bass)
Artist:DJ Genericname
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Creator:Moo-Chan
Version:Smug's Hard
Source:Clannad
Tags:chata ed ending dango daikazoku remix guineaq smallboat smug- Adam Whitton liquid DNB
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Rirakusu

218 posts

Joined November 2013

Rirakusu 2014-08-08T09:48:28+00:00

From my queue. Since you requested me to mod the Insane I will only mod the Insane == But first I'm not a good insane modder. But anyway I will try my best.

1. 00:02:619 (2,3) - Blanket is not nice enough. Try to use the slider's follow circle to guide you in drawing perfect blankets.

2. You can try to slow down the sliders and lower the distance snap from 01:31:945 onwards because the music is getting away. That will reduce some difficulty but for the overall feeling I think it's worth it.

3. 00:46:608 (5,6) - Not sure if you need a blanket here but if yes, please fix it.

4. 00:51:158 (4) - About this...it looks strange because it rotates quite much compared to 00:50:147 (1,2,3) - try to keep them rotating at the same degree. If you have problems with this because the last object goes off-screen, try changing the first slider. It might helps.

(Hope you understand what I'm saying :/)

5. 01:11:215 (7,8) - If you're trying to create fitting sliders you will need to fix this. It should look like this. (The screenshot looks strange because I changed the AR to get this)

6. 01:44:754 (1,2,3) - You can try doing some rotation like you did in 00:50:147 (1,2,3)

7. One last thing - I think you can speed up the sliders during Kiai? Something like from x1.0 to x1.2.

Done

Hope my mod helps. Please reply my mod because I need experience in modding Insane diffs.

P/s: Suggestions in SV changes require you to remap the part. Think twice before doing the changes. Thanks!

Sample

Moo-Chan

418 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Moo-Chan 2014-08-08T16:17:14+00:00

jinhang_ang wrote:
From my queue. Since you requested me to mod the Insane I will only mod the Insane == But first I'm not a good insane modder. But anyway I will try my best.

1. 00:02:619 (2,3) - Blanket is not nice enough. Try to use the slider's follow circle to guide you in drawing perfect blankets. It looks fine to me

2. You can try to slow down the sliders and lower the distance snap from 01:31:945 onwards because the music is getting away. That will reduce some difficulty but for the overall feeling I think it's worth it. Did that already

3. 00:46:608 (5,6) - Not sure if you need a blanket here but if yes, please fix it. ok

4. 00:51:158 (4) - About this...it looks strange because it rotates quite much compared to 00:50:147 (1,2,3) - try to keep them rotating at the same degree. If you have problems with this because the last object goes off-screen, try changing the first slider. It might helps. I think I fixed it. Tweaked the blanketing too

(Hope you understand what I'm saying :/)

5. 01:11:215 (7,8) - If you're trying to create fitting sliders you will need to fix this. It should look like this. (The screenshot looks strange because I changed the AR to get this) Fixed it some what

6. 01:44:754 (1,2,3) - You can try doing some rotation like you did in 00:50:147 (1,2,3) ok

7. One last thing - I think you can speed up the sliders during Kiai? Something like from x1.0 to x1.2.

Done Hope my mod helps. Please reply my mod because I need experience in modding Insane diffs. Thanks~

P/s: Suggestions in SV changes require you to remap the part. Think twice before doing the changes. Thanks!
Sample

Thank you for the mod~

Pho

1,785 posts

Joined November 2013

Pho 2014-08-09T15:22:25+00:00

Mod from modding queue~

Disable letterboxes (you have no pauses in the song) and wide-screen support (only you want to make SB in this one).

[guineaQ's Easy]
01:04:979 (1,2) - I'm sure this slider's can be shaped better

[Smug's Hard]

00:15:934 (2,3) - the small jump would be better at 00:16:102 (3,1) -
00:21:833 (1,2,3,4) - equal distances throughtout the combo would be better
00:32:282 (3,1) - small jump here would be good
01:09:024 (1,2,3,4,1) - better shape: http://puu.sh/aLgnT/381eac4917.jpg
01:41:046 (3,1) - for consistency, stack 1 on 3 or do some similar stack since you're doing this the whole passage

[Insane]
Ugh, this is still messy at many parts and needs some better flow overall.

00:02:282 (1,2,3) - something like this is bettter http://puu.sh/aLgDx/bfefeb5a66.jpg
00:06:495 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - for consistency and because it looks better: http://puu.sh/aLgKj/0e5390c1be.jpg
00:14:080 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - this is close to random jumps, better rework this
00:20:147 (4,5) - flow break, doesn't fit the song
00:21:495 (10) - delete, there's no sound here.
00:36:327 (7,8) - flow break, doesn't fit the song
00:42:394 (1) - why not putting this a bit above 00:41:889 (1) - , works much better
00:43:068 (3,4) - too big jump, considering that the flow still goes on after this. make it smaller.
00:59:417 (5) - reposition at x:132 y:264 for pentagon shape, looke better and is better to play
01:03:462 (6) - feels out of place, reposition at, x:288 y:332
01:04:136 (5,6) - be consistent, make this a triple as well
01:05:653 (5,1) - why these big jumps, they don't fit at all
01:05:821 (1,2,3) - stacking doesn't work well here.
01:08:181 (8,1,2,3,4) - this needs flow improvement, mostly because the transition from red to yellow combo is kind of awkward.

Nice beaty song, maps are fine too; the Insane map is the biggest problem, so fix it up as fast as you can.
Many good wishes to get this ranked!

Greetings,
paseli

Fizz

275 posts

Joined September 2013

Fizz 2014-08-09T16:52:49+00:00

paseli wrote:
[Smug's Hard]

00:15:934 (2,3) - the small jump would be better at 00:16:102 (3,1) - changed in my own way
00:21:833 (1,2,3,4) - equal distances throughtout the combo would be better partially changed
00:32:282 (3,1) - small jump here would be good done
01:09:024 (1,2,3,4,1) - better shape: http://puu.sh/aLgnT/381eac4917.jpg done
01:41:046 (3,1) - for consistency, stack 1 on 3 or do some similar stack since you're doing this the whole passage done

ty for mod~

updoot

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PreviewTime: 64304
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SampleSet: Soft
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Creator:Moo-Chan
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guineaQ

1,588 posts

Joined December 2013

guineaQ 2014-08-09T18:56:08+00:00

paseli wrote:
Mod from modding queue~

Disable letterboxes (you have no pauses in the song) and wide-screen support (only you want to make SB in this one). <3

[guineaQ's Easy]
01:04:979 (1,2) - I'm sure this slider's can be shaped better Arghhh, I know I need to fix the shape, but I don't really have a solution atm, I'll change it at future mods. <3

Nice beaty song, maps are fine too; the Insane map is the biggest problem, so fix it up as fast as you can.
Many good wishes to get this ranked! <3

Greetings,
paseli

Moo-Chan

418 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Moo-Chan 2014-08-09T19:16:41+00:00

paseli wrote:
Mod from modding queue~

Disable letterboxes (you have no pauses in the song) and wide-screen support (only you want to make SB in this one).

[Insane]
Ugh, this is still messy at many parts and needs some better flow overall. Am bad mapper ><

00:02:282 (1,2,3) - something like this is bettter http://puu.sh/aLgDx/bfefeb5a66.jpg I think I fixed it?
00:06:495 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - for consistency and because it looks better: http://puu.sh/aLgKj/0e5390c1be.jpg Made it into a star
00:14:080 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - this is close to random jumps, better rework this meh
00:20:147 (4,5) - flow break, doesn't fit the song
00:21:495 (10) - delete, there's no sound here. Would be empty without it
00:36:327 (7,8) - flow break, doesn't fit the song
00:42:394 (1) - why not putting this a bit above 00:41:889 (1) - , works much better
00:43:068 (3,4) - too big jump, considering that the flow still goes on after this. make it smaller.
00:59:417 (5) - reposition at x:132 y:264 for pentagon shape, looke better and is better to play ok
01:03:462 (6) - feels out of place, reposition at, x:288 y:332 ok
01:04:136 (5,6) - be consistent, make this a triple as well Alright
01:05:653 (5,1) - why these big jumps, they don't fit at all Fixed?
01:05:821 (1,2,3) - stacking doesn't work well here. ^
01:08:181 (8,1,2,3,4) - this needs flow improvement, mostly because the transition from red to yellow combo is kind of awkward. Fixed? Idk ;w;

Nice beaty song, maps are fine too; the Insane map is the biggest problem, so fix it up as fast as you can.
Many good wishes to get this ranked!

Greetings,
paseli

Thanks <3

BBB

141 posts

Joined January 2014

BBB 2014-08-10T01:25:04+00:00

Hallo o/

mod request from a couple of buddies

guineaQ's easy
/me wraps in blankets
The beginning is a little boring; I know there is not much going on in the song at first but I think that it would be more fun if you added some more notes. The beginning has 4 sliders in a row with the same rhythm; that is a long time to do the same thing!

00:00:260 (1) - Don't start with a repeat slider, please >.<; It means you are having the player start by doing the same thing twice... Maybe change to this or similar:

SPOILER

00:01:945 (3) - put circle here, turning 2-3-4 into easy triple, matching vocals
00:04:304 (2) - change this to a bent slider like this:

SPOILER

This breaks symmetry, but it also makes it more interesting and more fun to play.
00:05:653 (1) - Add connecting circles like this?

SPOILER

00:43:406 (3) - This is where the music picks up, so I think you should have more circles here, rather than another repeat slider.

SPOILER

00:46:102 (1) - You can make this whole section much more interesting, in fact, if you just put bends on all the slider ticks:

SPOILER

etc.

00:55:877 (3) - Break DS here and make this a little farther away, since it looks like it should come earlier than it does (It is very hard to read) Might be because I am used to reading faster maps though
01:03:967 - There is nothing here in the music, but I think you should put a circle in anyway since it feels so empty here.
01:24:529 (1) - Strange place for spinner

I think you should map this part >.<
01:29:248 (3) - Ummmm you might need to redo this part, this slider is very very long
01:46:102 (1) - Make it just a little bit longer, extend it to the bookmark ^w^

s boat's Normal
This map already looks good, a couple of little things, I think bump up to CS3.4, since this diff is already kinda easy and the circles are almost as big as guinea's.
00:19:136 (5) - Use a curved slider here, rather than a bent one, more variety
00:27:563 (2) - blanket is a little off, move middle anchor to x:160 y:52
00:38:349 (2) - fix blanket
01:13:068 (5) - Consider changing the angle here, this might flow better:

SPOILER

01:22:507 (3) - fix blanket, the slider path is too close to 2

Hard and Insane are difficult for me to mod since they are very different from my mapping style and also I suck at mapping. So I'll try to give some pointers but I don't know how useful they will be >.<;

smug-'s Hard
00:10:035 (5) - take this out? it feels a little odd to me lol
00:19:473 (4) - This doesn't flow too well into 1, consider blanketing it with 1
01:06:158 (4) - flow is odd here, maybe put 4 on the other side
01:47:113 (2) - nothing here in song, so i think take this out

Insane
Highly highly recommend AR8.6, makes it much smoother to read and a lot more fun IMO
Personally I this map is a lot of fun, but the big problem is that there some oddly placed triples.
00:32:619 (1) - remove kiai fountain
00:37:675 (2) - whistle
00:38:012 (1) - remove whistle
00:39:024 (1) - whistle
01:07:675 (5) - remove triple and extend slider
01:21:411 (2) - same
01:22:170 (7) - definitely definitely want to remove this triple and slider, I suggest change it to something like:

SPOILER

01:26:552 (1) - remove triple and extend slider
01:29:248 (1) - same

It's not that I don't like sliders into triples, they just play oddly in some cases

Good luck on your rank o/

Fizz

275 posts

Joined September 2013

Fizz 2014-08-10T02:30:15+00:00

binaryfruit wrote:
smug-'s Hard
00:10:035 (5) - take this out? it feels a little odd to me lol assumed snare beat here; for completeness. It sort of ends "abruptly" without the circle though
00:19:473 (4) - This doesn't flow too well into 1, consider blanketing it with 1 bad flow isn't a bad thing
01:06:158 (4) - flow is odd here, maybe put 4 on the other side it's a mini jump triangle thingy here + same reason as ^
01:47:113 (2) - nothing here in song, so i think take this out there's a fading out drum beat going here and this lands on the two snare beats.

Sorry for not implementing anything in your mod binary but it's okay I still love you ;_________;

EDIT: I did some changes on my own

updoot

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: DJ Genericname - Dango Dango Daikazokou DnB.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 64304
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 41046,64975,86548,91941,97334,108121
DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Dango Dango Daikazoku (Drum and Bass)
TitleUnicode:Dango Dango Daikazoku (Drum and Bass)
Artist:DJ Genericname
ArtistUnicode:DJ Genericname
Creator:Moo-Chan
Version:Smug's Hard
Source:Clannad
Tags:chata ed ending dango daikazoku remix liquid DNB Adam Whitton guineaq smallboat smug-
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Moo-Chan

418 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Moo-Chan 2014-08-10T02:32:53+00:00

binaryfruit wrote:
Hallo o/

mod request from a couple of buddies

Insane
Highly highly recommend AR8.6, makes it much smoother to read and a lot more fun IMO
Personally I this map is a lot of fun, but the big problem is that there some oddly placed triples.
00:32:619 (1) - remove kiai fountain ok
00:37:675 (2) - whistle kay
00:38:012 (1) - remove whistle kay
00:39:024 (1) - whistle ok
01:07:675 (5) - remove triple and extend slider nuu
01:21:411 (2) - same ^
01:22:170 (7) - definitely definitely want to remove this triple and slider, I suggest change it to something like: I tried
SPOILER
01:26:552 (1) - remove triple and extend slider ok
01:29:248 (1) - same ^

It's not that I don't like sliders into triples, they just play oddly in some cases

Good luck on your rank o/

Thank you<333

guineaQ

1,588 posts

Joined December 2013

guineaQ 2014-08-10T09:00:13+00:00

binaryfruit wrote:
Hallo o/

mod request from a couple of buddies

guineaQ's easy
/me wraps in blankets
The beginning is a little boring; I know there is not much going on in the song at first but I think that it would be more fun if you added some more notes. The beginning has 4 sliders in a row with the same rhythm; that is a long time to do the same thing! 4 seconds so long desu!

00:00:260 (1) - Don't start with a repeat slider, please >.<; It means you are having the player start by doing the same thing twice... Maybe change to this or similar:
SPOILER
you got me on the "don't start with a repeat slider"
00:01:945 (3) - put circle here, turning 2-3-4 into easy triple, matching vocals me only want a note on every 2 white ticks on beginning nuuuuu
00:04:304 (2) - change this to a bent slider like this:
SPOILER

This breaks symmetry, but it also makes it more interesting and more fun to play. parallel is EASY desu
00:05:653 (1) - Add connecting circles like this?
SPOILER
same reason as 00:01:945 (3) -
00:43:406 (3) - This is where the music picks up, so I think you should have more circles here, rather than another repeat slider.
SPOILER
remember, easy diff. You should also notice higher note density around that part
00:46:102 (1) - You can make this whole section much more interesting, in fact, if you just put bends on all the slider ticks:
SPOILER
etc.
not to be rood or anything but does it really add something to gameplay itself other than aesthetics? ;w;
00:55:877 (3) - Break DS here and make this a little farther away, since it looks like it should come earlier than it does (It is very hard to read) Might be because I am used to reading faster maps though NOOOOO BREAKINGGGG DS IN EASY DIFFFFF
01:03:967 - There is nothing here in the music, but I think you should put a circle in anyway since it feels so empty here. NOOOOO OVERMAPU IN EASY DIFFFFF
01:24:529 (1) - Strange place for spinner I think you should map this part >.< End of kiai time, but I'll take note of this.
01:29:248 (3) - Ummmm you might need to redo this part, this slider is very very long not sure about this either, will take note.
01:46:102 (1) - Make it just a little bit longer, extend it to the bookmark ^w^ the sound effect i was mapping to endz there desu

Remember, Eazy Diff huehuehuehue

Good luck on your rank o/ <3

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Indeed_old_1

114 posts

Joined September 2013

Indeed_old_1 2014-08-10T20:14:11+00:00

Hello Tori, my bb <3 Keep in mind, all of these are suggestions. You do not have to implement any of these changes.

[General]

There are some letterbox issues with your guest difficulties. Open AiMod to see.
Your Kiai times differ in two of your difficulties, you should notify your Guest mappers of this.

[Insane]

Your preview point could be placed at a different point in the song since it's at the beginning, maybe you could place it here? 00:43:406
00:00:260 (1) - this shape is okay, but you only use it once in the entire song. You could use it more to create consistency.
00:02:619 (5,1) - Any reason why you didn't blanket these? You could easily move the 4 and 5 up to blanket it together and it would look nice.
00:04:642 (7) - You could make this a new combo, but it's not really needed. Up to you
00:05:316 (10,1) - I think just making these curved sliders would look better. If you are going to keep them this shape, at least make them parallel.
00:06:495 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - check you distance spacing here, if you were trying to keep it consistent
00:10:372 - Why the slider velocity change here? I would just delete it and keep SV at .75 until the part of the song that starts to get faster. The way you have it now seems a little unnecessary.
00:11:552 (3) - I would move this so that the beginning of the slider is at x:248 y:360, it just makes a nice pattern that, in my personal opinion, looks better.
00:16:439 (1) - No need for new combo.
00:20:316 (5,6) - These sliders here start on red ticks and feel more awkward to play, did you mean to make them passive? If so, then keep it, but I suggest moving them both to start on white ticks and changing the 5 to a new combo.
00:21:158 (8) - Move to x:116 y:320
00:21:495 (10,11) - move to x:112 y:244
00:22:844 (6) - move to x:48 y:244
00:23:012 (7) - NC
00:25:709 (7) - ^
00:31:439 (2,3,4) - not sure the triplet is needed, but it fits.
00:33:293 (4) - could blanket with one of the sliders surrounding it.
00:33:799 (6) - NC
00:33:967 (1) - No NC
00:37:170 (9) - NC
00:37:338 (1) - No NC
00:38:349 (2,4) - could blanket these
00:42:394 (3,4) - I would move these further apart to make for a nice jump, maybe move the 4 down?
00:43:406 - random Kiai time?
00:50:147 (1,2,3,4) - I would have made these 1,2 jump combos, it would make a nice effect.
00:52:170 (4) - NC
00:58:068 (3,4) - these sliders are passive, and they disrupt the flow of the song for this part, move them to start on white ticks.
01:12:394 (2,3,4) - I would have separated these to make them nice back and forth jumps.
01:16:776 (7) - NC
01:17:788 (1) - No NC
01:21:411 (2) - delete this, triplet isn't really needed.
01:32:113 (2,3,4) - triplet not needed, the song is starting to slow down and get calmer, so the triplet seems a little overkill.
01:35:316 (6,7,8) - ^
01:37:338 (1,2,3) - these triplets you can keep because you kept using them, so it's better to keep them for consistency.
01:47:113 (1) - not sure if the spinner is needed or not, but if you do keep it, make the spinner end with a 5% audio because the music ends.

Moo-Chan

418 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Moo-Chan 2014-08-10T20:49:04+00:00

Indeed wrote:
Hello Tori, my bb <3 Keep in mind, all of these are suggestions. You do not have to implement any of these changes.

[General]

There are some letterbox issues with your guest difficulties. Open AiMod to see. Fixed
Your Kiai times differ in two of your difficulties, you should notify your Guest mappers of this.

[Insane]

Your preview point could be placed at a different point in the song since it's at the beginning, maybe you could place it here? 00:43:406 What
00:00:260 (1) - this shape is okay, but you only use it once in the entire song. You could use it more to create consistency. ;w;
00:02:619 (5,1) - Any reason why you didn't blanket these? You could easily move the 4 and 5 up to blanket it together and it would look nice. This one spot, I swear
00:04:642 (7) - You could make this a new combo, but it's not really needed. Up to you I'll keep it how it is
00:05:316 (10,1) - I think just making these curved sliders would look better. If you are going to keep them this shape, at least make them parallel.
00:06:495 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - check you distance spacing here, if you were trying to keep it consistent
00:10:372 - Why the slider velocity change here? I would just delete it and keep SV at .75 until the part of the song that starts to get faster. The way you have it now seems a little unnecessary. You know, I have no idea why I put that there
00:11:552 (3) - I would move this so that the beginning of the slider is at x:248 y:360, it just makes a nice pattern that, in my personal opinion, looks better. Alright
00:16:439 (1) - No need for new combo. Removed
00:20:316 (5,6) - These sliders here start on red ticks and feel more awkward to play, did you mean to make them passive? If so, then keep it, but I suggest moving them both to start on white ticks and changing the 5 to a new combo. I'm gonna keep them
00:21:158 (8) - Move to x:116 y:320 ok
00:21:495 (10,11) - move to x:112 y:244 ^
00:22:844 (6) - move to x:48 y:244 ^
00:23:012 (7) - NC done
00:25:709 (7) - ^ ^
00:31:439 (2,3,4) - not sure the triplet is needed, but it fits. I like it
00:33:293 (4) - could blanket with one of the sliders surrounding it. fixed
00:33:799 (6) - NC ok
00:33:967 (1) - No NC ^
00:37:170 (9) - NC ^
00:37:338 (1) - No NC ^
00:38:349 (2,4) - could blanket these fixed
00:42:394 (3,4) - I would move these further apart to make for a nice jump, maybe move the 4 down? I did
00:43:406 - random Kiai time? Meh, removed
00:50:147 (1,2,3,4) - I would have made these 1,2 jump combos, it would make a nice effect. No
00:52:170 (4) - NC ok
00:58:068 (3,4) - these sliders are passive, and they disrupt the flow of the song for this part, move them to start on white ticks. Wouldnt fit then
01:12:394 (2,3,4) - I would have separated these to make them nice back and forth jumps. Was thinking of doing that but never did
01:16:776 (7) - NC ok
01:17:788 (1) - No NC ^
01:21:411 (2) - delete this, triplet isn't really needed. I like it
01:32:113 (2,3,4) - triplet not needed, the song is starting to slow down and get calmer, so the triplet seems a little overkill. Meh
01:35:316 (6,7,8) - ^ ok
01:37:338 (1,2,3) - these triplets you can keep because you kept using them, so it's better to keep them for consistency.
01:47:113 (1) - not sure if the spinner is needed or not, but if you do keep it, make the spinner end with a 5% audio because the music ends. If you look, its already 5%

Thanks bae~ <3

sheela

2,651 posts

Joined October 2011

sheela 2014-08-11T15:56:03+00:00

Hey Moo-Chan.

General

Some words in the tags aren't need to put, such as:
- "dango daikazoku remix": These words are already in the title.
(Who is Adam Whitton? Just something out of my curiosity.)

guineaQ's Easy

00:02:956 (1) - Nazi stuff, but move the 2nd point to x:168 y:266 and the last to x:179 y:226 to perfect the blanket with the previous note.
00:09:024 (2,3) - The flow doesn't get well because the slider shoots to the tail. Also, the distance between this slider and the next slider is 0.86x, and your distance snap is 1.0x. I suggest to move 00:09:024 (2,3) to x:364 y:115 to get the flow better.
00:15:091 (1) - Remove the new combo and add it to 00:16:439 (2) . It follows with the music and rhythm better. Also, after adding a new combo to 00:16:439 (2) , add remove a new combo to 00:17:788 (1) .
00:20:484 (1) - Remove the new combo.
00:27:900 (2) - Better if it's curved up?:
SPOILER
The slider can shoot better to the next object.
00:35:316 (1) - Move the slider to x:211 y:239, then move the last point to x:138 y:344. It'll indicate where is the next object, which is up.
00:40:709 (3) - Add a new combo. A beat is introduced.
00:43:406 (3) - ^. It's because of the new beat.
~~00:47:788 (2,3,4) - The triangle pattern breaks the flow. Same thing as 00:50:484 (2,3,4) .~~
00:46:102 to 00:52:844 - The rhythm is different than 00:54:192 to 01:04:979 . The rhythm at 00:54:192 follows the clap, while 00:46:102 follows another instrument, which makes the rhythm inconsistent. So, for 00:46:102 to 00:52:844 , make the rhythm as you put to 00:54:192 .
00:59:585 (1) - In my opinion, slider with curve that are too curved are ugly. Try loosen the curve:
SPOILER
01:04:304 (2,3,1) - In my opinion, the flow is broken when 01:02:282 (1) shoots to the next object due to the vertical line that made for 01:04:304 (2,3) . No suggestions though.
01:06:327 (2) - Four point slider can be enough to make a wave slider. Yours was a bit ugly, in my taste.
SPOILER
```
260,240,66327,2,0,B|202:298|146:215|85:269,1,180
```
01:09:361 (3) - Try loosen the curve. In my taste, it was a bit ugly.
01:14:417 (1) - Remove the new combo, and add one to 01:14:417 (1) , then remove it to 01:17:113 (1) .
01:42:731 (1) - I don't like when it shoots to the tail, which breaks the flow, it doesn't flow well. For 01:43:743 (2) , move the second point to x:468 y:117. For a better flow.

Smug's Hard

00:08:855 (2) - I suggest that you stack it with the next object. It creates a jump, but too sudden, and players may fail because of this.
00:27:900 (4) - This slider suddenly follows another instrument, while 00:27:226 (1,2,3) and 00:21:833 (1,2,3,4) and 00:24:529 (1,2) follows the main instrument. It creates an inconsistent rhythm. Create a rhythm mentioned in the image below:
SPOILER
00:28:574 - ~~Why not making the same rhythm as you did with 00:23:181 (1) and 00:25:877 (1) ?~~ Actually, it follows the main instrument, so I thought putting 00:28:574 (1) to a slower slider velocity as you did to 00:25:877 (1) .

Insane

00:33:125 (3) - I was thinking of putting it to x:159 y:282, next to 00:32:619 (1) 's head. When it test it, I didn't know that the object was there, due to the stack which made a little unreadable.
01:22:507 (1) - Switch the head with the tail? In my opinion, it better for the flow.

I really like this mapset. I hope it gets bubbled/ranked earlier. Any question can be ask via PM in forum or in-game. Good Luck on ranking this map, it deserves two stars.

guineaQ

1,588 posts

Joined December 2013

guineaQ 2014-08-11T16:48:33+00:00

sheela901 wrote:
Hey Moo-Chan.
General
Some words in the tags aren't need to put, such as:
- "dango daikazoku remix": These words are already in the title.
(Who is Adam Whitton? Just something out of my curiosity.) the real name of DJ Genericname
guineaQ's Easy
00:02:956 (1) - Nazi stuff, but move the 2nd point to x:168 y:266 and the last to x:179 y:226 to perfect the blanket with the previous note. I liek nazi aesthetics mods owo
00:09:024 (2,3) - The flow doesn't get well because the slider shoots to the tail. Also, the distance between this slider and the next slider is 0.86x, and your distance snap is 1.0x. I suggest to move 00:09:024 (2,3) to x:364 y:115 to get the flow better. yhes
00:15:091 (1) - Remove the new combo and add it to 00:16:439 (2) . It follows with the music and rhythm better. Also, after adding a new combo to 00:16:439 (2) , add remove a new combo to 00:17:788 (1) .goes against my recent rule of NC at downbeat but ok, makes sense
00:20:484 (1) - Remove the new combo. kk
00:27:900 (2) - Better if it's curved up?: wtf was i thinking
SPOILER
The slider can shoot better to the next object.
00:35:316 (1) - Move the slider to x:211 y:239, then move the last point to x:138 y:344. It'll indicate where is the next object, which is up. i was trying to blanket but then i realized players won't see it anyways in play lol
00:40:709 (3) - Add a new combo. A beat is introduced. oh god, I have sinned
00:43:406 (3) - ^. It's because of the new beat. /me prays for mercy
~~00:47:788 (2,3,4) - The triangle pattern breaks the flow. Same thing as 00:50:484 (2,3,4) .~~ so you want me to fix it or not if you strike it? OwO
00:46:102 to 00:52:844 - The rhythm is different than 00:54:192 to 01:04:979 . The rhythm at 00:54:192 follows the clap, while 00:46:102 follows another instrument, which makes the rhythm inconsistent. So, for 00:46:102 to 00:52:844 , make the rhythm as you put to 00:54:192 . Not really sure about this one, I perfectly understand your reasoning but same pattern for basically 10% of the map would be boring (I thought) Noted.
00:59:585 (1) - In my opinion, slider with curve that are too curved are ugly. Try loosen the curve: Not exactly fixed like that but nerfed the curve
SPOILER
01:04:304 (2,3,1) - In my opinion, the flow is broken when 01:02:282 (1) shoots to the next object due to the vertical line that made for 01:04:304 (2,3) . No suggestions though. Tried to fix it
01:06:327 (2) - Four point slider can be enough to make a wave slider. Yours was a bit ugly, in my taste. I just killed the wave
SPOILER
260,240,66327,2,0,B|202:298|146:215|85:269,1,180
01:09:361 (3) - Try loosen the curve. In my taste, it was a bit ugly. Don't really see why it would be ugly but done it anyways cus it's not hard to fix :3
01:14:417 (1) - Remove the new combo, and add one to 01:14:417 (1) , then remove it to 01:17:113 (1) . You mean remove the NC at 01:14:417 - and 01:17:113 - and finally add NC at 01:16:102 - , if so, you made a typo sir /me runs
01:42:731 (1) - I don't like when it shoots to the tail, which breaks the flow, it doesn't flow well. For 01:43:743 (2) , move the second point to x:468 y:117. For a better flow. kill me.
I really like this mapset. I hope it gets bubbled/ranked earlier. Any question can be ask via PM in forum or in-game. Good Luck on ranking this map, it deserves two stars. <3

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vrrt

53 posts

Joined September 2013

vrrt 2014-08-11T18:07:58+00:00

Im here cause of xellie ._.

And i suck at modding hard, normal, and easy
Gomenasai~~~ orz
Just suggestions ofc :3
Insane

00:12:731 (3,4) - I think it'd feel better as a slider
Like this? http://puu.sh/aO7yM/e8fb2aed64.jpg
00:14:080 (2,3) - ^ http://puu.sh/aO7CO/150d44882b.jpg
00:21:664 (11) - Its ok there, but i think it plays better without it
00:33:125 (3,4) - Ctrl+g here? Feels better like this to me
00:36:495 (8) - take the clap off. Sounds weird there
01:02:451 (2,4) - Triple? Cause.. idk? :3
Not much sry.
Good mapset, good map. Heh.

Hope it get ranked

Moo-Chan

418 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Moo-Chan 2014-08-11T18:18:24+00:00

sheela901 wrote:
Hey Moo-Chan.
General
Some words in the tags aren't need to put, such as:
- "dango daikazoku remix": These words are already in the title.
(Who is Adam Whitton? Just something out of my curiosity.) He's DJ Genericname c:
[Insane]
00:33:125 (3) - I was thinking of putting it to x:159 y:282, next to 00:32:619 (1) 's head. When it test it, I didn't know that the object was there, due to the stack which made a little unreadable. done
01:22:507 (1) - Switch the head with the tail? In my opinion, it better for the flow. done
I really like this mapset. I hope it gets bubbled/ranked earlier. Any question can be ask via PM in forum or in-game. Good Luck on ranking this map, it deserves two stars. thank you so much <3

c:

Moo-Chan

418 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Moo-Chan 2014-08-11T18:24:14+00:00

FrozenSakura wrote:
Im here cause of xellie ._.

And i suck at modding hard, normal, and easy
Gomenasai~~~ orz
Just suggestions ofc :3
Insane
00:12:731 (3,4) - I think it'd feel better as a slider
Like this? http://puu.sh/aO7yM/e8fb2aed64.jpg fixed
00:14:080 (2,3) - ^ http://puu.sh/aO7CO/150d44882b.jpg ^
00:21:664 (11) - Its ok there, but i think it plays better without it It feels empty without
00:33:125 (3,4) - Ctrl+g here? Feels better like this to me s:
00:36:495 (8) - take the clap off. Sounds weird there okay
01:02:451 (2,4) - Triple? Cause.. idk? :3 nuu
Not much sry.
Good mapset, good map. Heh.

Hope it get ranked

Thank you~

Fizz

275 posts

Joined September 2013

Fizz 2014-08-12T02:18:18+00:00

sheela901 wrote:
Smug's Hard
00:08:855 (2) - I suggest that you stack it with the next object. It creates a jump, but too sudden, and players may fail because of this. done
00:27:900 (4) - This slider suddenly follows another instrument, while 00:27:226 (1,2,3) and 00:21:833 (1,2,3,4) and 00:24:529 (1,2) follows the main instrument. It creates an inconsistent rhythm. Create a rhythm mentioned in the image below:
SPOILER
00:28:574 - ~~Why not making the same rhythm as you did with 00:23:181 (1) and 00:25:877 (1) ?~~ Actually, it follows the main instrument, so I thought putting 00:28:574 (1) to a slower slider velocity as you did to 00:25:877 (1) . It's a transition into the next part of the song - the slider I would be slowing down wouldn't make much sense at all and the slider before it slows the map down

ty for mod~

updoot

osu file format v13

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RasmusOlle

RasmusOlle 2014-08-12T14:47:56+00:00

easy: i dont see anything wrong, just that its wrong catcher.
normal: this bugged out, so i couldnt even play it
hard: i dont see anything wrong, however, some fruits can be too hard to catch, just do harder catching in insane and higher
insane: cheez, i didnt mean so much, even auto cant catch all, if you want this ranked, fix the insane

and take AImod too!

guineaQ

1,588 posts

Joined December 2013

guineaQ 2014-08-12T15:56:02+00:00

RasmusOlle wrote:
easy: i dont see anything wrong, just that its wrong catcher.
normal: this bugged out, so i couldnt even play it
hard: i dont see anything wrong, however, some fruits can be too hard to catch, just do harder catching in insane and higher
insane: cheez, i didnt mean so much, even auto cant catch all, if you want this ranked, fix the insane

and take AImod too!

You do realize that this is Standard Osu mapset, not catch the beat?

Moo-Chan

418 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Moo-Chan 2014-08-12T19:25:17+00:00

RasmusOlle wrote:
easy: i dont see anything wrong, just that its wrong catcher.
normal: this bugged out, so i couldnt even play it
hard: i dont see anything wrong, however, some fruits can be too hard to catch, just do harder catching in insane and higher
insane: cheez, i didnt mean so much, even auto cant catch all, if you want this ranked, fix the insane

and take AImod too!

Yea, this is osu standard. Not ctb

AutoMedic

1,166 posts

Joined April 2014

AutoMedic 2014-08-12T22:26:36+00:00

RasmusOlle wrote:
easy: i dont see anything wrong, just that its wrong catcher.
normal: this bugged out, so i couldnt even play it
hard: i dont see anything wrong, however, some fruits can be too hard to catch, just do harder catching in insane and higher
insane: cheez, i didnt mean so much, even auto cant catch all, if you want this ranked, fix the insane

and take AImod too!

oh my god

Mod CTB only maps, not standard

Nines

392 posts

Joined May 2013

Nines 2014-08-14T02:09:59+00:00

Yahello~! It's been a while since I've modded and I apologize for the wait.

From the modding queue---

[Insane]

01:03:630 (1) - This clap feels kinda lonely. It also feels out of place, maybe follow up with another one the next similar beat, or remove it.
01:20:484 (1,2,3,4) - It feels odd in my opinion that, even though it sounds the same (drum wise, beat wise, etc.) you chose to make this the only combo with 4 claps in a row like this. Maybe it's because it was towards the end of the map, but still. I stand true to my statement

[Smug's Hard]
No issues!

[S.Boat's Normal]

00:02:956 (5) - Try not to let combo's go to big numbers. Make this a NC.
00:08:349 (5) - NC
00:13:743 (5) - NC
00:19:136 (5) - NC
01:07:675 (5) - NC
01:13:068 (5) - NC
Basically, everything in the Kiai time, every 5th in the combos, make them NC.
01:48:799 - I would make this a little bit quieter. Maybe lower it by a MAX of 15% in decrease.

[guineaQ's Easy]
No issues!

I will also apologize for such a... skimpy mod. You're mapset... it's quite refined. You have 4 pages of mods, so I should expect it to be hard to mod. Well, that's all! Good luck with ranked! I'm sure you can do it~

Moo-Chan

418 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Moo-Chan 2014-08-14T03:08:04+00:00

Tsuchimikado wrote:
Yahello~! It's been a while since I've modded and I apologize for the wait.

From the modding queue---

[Insane]
01:03:630 (1) - This clap feels kinda lonely. It also feels out of place, maybe follow up with another one the next similar beat, or remove it. I added one after
01:20:484 (1,2,3,4) - It feels odd in my opinion that, even though it sounds the same (drum wise, beat wise, etc.) you chose to make this the only combo with 4 claps in a row like this. Maybe it's because it was towards the end of the map, but still. I stand true to my statement I think I fixed it?
I will also apologize for such a... skimpy mod. You're mapset... it's quite refined. You have 4 pages of mods, so I should expect it to be hard to mod. Well, that's all! Good luck with ranked! I'm sure you can do it~ Thank you c:

<3

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

smallboat 2014-08-14T07:52:14+00:00

To binaryfruit : Fix some ,thank mod !

Tsuchimikado wrote:
Yahello~! It's been a while since I've modded and I apologize for the wait.

From the modding queue---

[S.Boat's Normal]
00:02:956 (5) - Try not to let combo's go to big numbers. Make this a NC. Well,I consider for a while,then I decided to fix it.
00:08:349 (5) - NC ^
00:13:743 (5) - NC ^
00:19:136 (5) - NC ^
01:07:675 (5) - NC ^
01:13:068 (5) - NC ^
Basically, everything in the Kiai time, every 5th in the combos, make them NC. Okay,added.
01:48:799 - I would make this a little bit quieter. Maybe lower it by a MAX of 15% in decrease. Have a 5% volume here? Keep it.

Thanks mod ~ !

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IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2014-08-16T06:10:33+00:00

Let's have a random mod!

General

Your BG size is a bit strange, take this of dimension 1366*768 instead please.
SPOILER
Inconsistent combo colors of Insane.
Only smallboat's Normal has a different kiai time, it would be nice to unify all the kiai times.
Adding an audio-leadin of 1500 ms is recommended in order to give players preparation time.
I got a little concern over your title, coz the song is originally a Japanese song. So, I wonder if the song name is:
```
だんご大家族 (Drum and Bass Remix)
```
Ask a Japanese BAT about this please!

Insane

Tbh, your SV is a bit low imo. It doesn't reflect the excitements of this song. Well, it's hard to convince you to change it so I just mention this point softly.
00:21:495 (10) - You better put this at 00:21:664 coz the drum there is much more obvious and heavy. It serves the same halting effect.
00:25:035 (4) - Better don't stack it because it sacrifices movement. The drum here is quite weighty, keep moving instead of staying at one place fits the ambient more imo. Same applies on 00:27:731 (4).
00:31:439 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I got a suggestion about the rhythm, which makes piano sounds on those white ticks more outstanding:
SPOILER
00:45:428 (1) - This NC is really redundant though I understand you want to highlight the piano.
00:47:788 (2,6) - Stack these two.
01:25:877 (1) - Seems your NC pattern becomes chaotic near the end of the song. Since ur mapping style is quite consistent and repetitive, I recommend using one and only NC pattern throughout the whole diff like what u did in the prelude, e.g. 00:00:260 (1,1) - NC every white tick or NC which helps raise readability - 00:02:282 (9) like what u did at the back. It would make ur diff much neater.
And for the hitsounds, I am quite surprising u place the claps on 1st and 3rd ticks from 00:11:046 (1) to 00:21:495 and 00:51:495 to 01:12:057. o_o It's an unusual way because we normally place them at 2nd and 4th ticks lol You may take a look at this:
BeatofIke wrote:
For Finish hitsounding, I like to add them in parts where I can hear the cymbal crashes (like a loud "pssshh" sound) in the music. The finish hitsounding is often the easiest to do, since most of the time you just add finishes for cymbal crashes or just any loud prominent sound your hear in the music.

For clap hitsounding, almost ANY type of music (other than those with complex beats, break rhythms, guitar riffs, and what not such as in dnb, metal, etc.) will sound good if you add claps on every 2nd and 4th beats in respect with a 4/4 measure (4 beats per measure). More often, you will hear a constant percussion (drum) sounds on every 2nd and 4th beats. This is also considered to be relatively easy to hitsound if used carefully. Again, you can use any type of clap hitsound you like (soft-clap is often my personal preference, but I sometimes use normal-claps and drum-claps if I feel that it sounds better on some parts of the music). And lastly, they the whistle hitsounding.

Whistle hitsounding is often the hardest to hitsound and often easy to get inconsistent with them, because there are SO MANY ways to use whistles. You can use whistles for keysounds (piano for example), synths, vocals, guitar, finger snaps, and any other melodic sounds out there. You can even use whistles as the same for claps (every 2nd and 4th beats for example), usually for softer parts of the music. There are obliviously many other ways to use whistles, but for now....only focus on the softer parts of the music since this is instrumental (non-vocal) music with no keysounds in it. It may helpful to look at other ranked mapsets to discover other ways you can use whistles. Anyways, that's all I can really help you with. Hope this advice helps and good luck!
Based on Ike's useful information on hitsounding, I draw some suggestions below:
00:23:012 (1) - Whistle on head? Same for 00:25:709 (1) - 00:28:406 (7) - 00:33:967 (3) - 00:36:495 (8) -
00:30:344 - S:C2 claps really don't fit the song imo.
01:04:979 (1) - Remove the whistle and clap and place finish on head instead. Same for 01:15:765 (1) - 01:26:552 (1) -

Smug's Hard

00:12:394 (5) - You may need a NC here for consistency.
00:51:495 (1,3,1) - Whistles for the high pitch pianos? I mean slider head.
01:19:810 (4) - NC for similar reason. Same for 01:22:507 (4) - 01:33:293 (4) - 01:35:821 (4) -
01:39:192 (2,3) - This rhythm feels a bit awkward, coz the drums are on the two white ticks, so try this, same applies on 01:41:889 (2,3) and 01:44:585 (2,3):
SPOILER
01:45:428 - I suggest replacing these sliders by a spinner so that you can stagger the score.
Really nice diff <3

S.Boat's Normal

00:18:798 (4) - 之前的clap放1,3我感覺有點奇怪,還是2,4比較好,不然只有whistle也可以
00:45:428 - S:C6的slidertick也是吵,然後我不明白為何這裡突然轉回S:C1
00:52:170 (3,4,5) - Slider heads can have some whistles
00:55:877 (5) - S:C6也是吵;01:36:327 (4)

guineaQ's Easy

Snap these kiai time green lines: 01:04:975 to 01:04:979 and 01:15:761 to 01:15:765.
Delete these redundant green lines: 00:46:439 and 00:47:113.
00:00:260 (1) - Finish on head as you can hear an obvious cymbal sound.
00:47:788 (2,3,4) - This is rather difficult to read for newbies because they cramp together. I suggest altering the shape of these three or combining 00:48:125 (3,4) into a slider.
00:50:484 (2,3,4) - ^
01:24:529 (1) - Finish
01:29:248 (3) - Try your best to make it symmetric and use CTRL+H for checking.

I hope some of these help! Good luck!

guineaQ

1,588 posts

Joined December 2013

guineaQ 2014-08-16T06:50:06+00:00

IamKwaN wrote:
Let's have a random mod! <3
General
Your BG size is a bit strange, take this of dimension 1366*768 instead please.
SPOILER
Inconsistent combo colors of Insane.
Only smallboat's Normal has a different kiai time, it would be nice to unify all the kiai times.
Adding an audio-leadin of 1500 ms is recommended in order to give players preparation time. ooookay
I got a little concern over your title, coz the song is originally a Japanese song. So, I wonder if the song name is:
だんご大家族 (Drum and Bass Remix)
Moway's version had it in english
Ask a Japanese BAT about this please!
guineaQ's Easy
Snap these kiai time green lines: 01:04:975 to 01:04:979 and 01:15:761 to 01:15:765. Kill me.
Delete these redundant green lines: 00:46:439 and 00:47:113. Slider tick hitsounding, I found one mistake thanks to this notice lol
00:00:260 (1) - Finish on head as you can hear an obvious cymbal sound.WHOOOOPS
00:47:788 (2,3,4) - This is rather difficult to read for newbies because they cramp together. I suggest altering the shape of these three or combining 00:48:125 (3,4) into a slider. I'll change the pattern entirely to one suggested in earlier mod
00:50:484 (2,3,4) - ^ ^^
01:24:529 (1) - Finish shoot me
01:29:248 (3) - Try your best to make it symmetric and use CTRL+H for checking. itz symmetric now
I hope some of these help! Good luck!
<3

ts8zs wrote:
[guineaQ's Easy]
00:47:788 (2,3,4) - a reverse slider fixed in another way
00:50:484 (2,3,4) - ^ ^^ same desu~
01:04:304 (2,3) - slder? why not
01:27:900 (1,2) - too narrow hmm made it more curvy :S
Needs more work on this diff XD kill me pls

EDIT:

UPDATE POWA

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Last edited by guineaQ 2014-08-16T10:55:38+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Fizz

275 posts

Joined September 2013

Fizz 2014-08-16T06:54:36+00:00

IamKwaN wrote:
Smug's Hard
00:12:394 (5) - You may need a NC here for consistency. done
00:51:495 (1,3,1) - Whistles for the high pitch pianos? I mean slider head. Sure, I like it
01:19:810 (4) - NC for similar reason. Same for 01:22:507 (4) - 01:33:293 (4) - 01:35:821 (4) - Applied for all but the last one
01:39:192 (2,3) - This rhythm feels a bit awkward, coz the drums are on the two white ticks, so try this, same applies on 01:41:889 (2,3) and 01:44:585 (2,3): I think the rhythm fits how it is
SPOILER
01:45:428 - I suggest replacing these sliders by a spinner so that you can stagger the score. done
Really nice diff <3 Thanks <3

updoot

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Moo-Chan

418 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Moo-Chan 2014-08-16T07:48:53+00:00

IamKwaN wrote:
Let's have a random mod!
General
Your BG size is a bit strange, take this of dimension 1366*768 instead please.
SPOILER
Inconsistent combo colors of Insane.
Only smallboat's Normal has a different kiai time, it would be nice to unify all the kiai times.
Adding an audio-leadin of 1500 ms is recommended in order to give players preparation time.
I got a little concern over your title, coz the song is originally a Japanese song. So, I wonder if the song name is:
だんご大家族 (Drum and Bass Remix)
Ask a Japanese BAT about this please!
Insane
Tbh, your SV is a bit low imo. It doesn't reflect the excitements of this song. Well, it's hard to convince you to change it so I just mention this point softly. Upped it from 1.5 to 1.7
00:21:495 (10) - You better put this at 00:21:664 coz the drum there is much more obvious and heavy. It serves the same halting effect. meh
00:25:035 (4) - Better don't stack it because it sacrifices movement. The drum here is quite weighty, keep moving instead of staying at one place fits the ambient more imo. Same applies on 00:27:731 (4). the stacking is fine imo
00:31:439 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I got a suggestion about the rhythm, which makes piano sounds on those white ticks more outstanding: fixed
SPOILER
00:45:428 (1) - This NC is really redundant though I understand you want to highlight the piano. took it out
00:47:788 (2,6) - Stack these two. ok
01:25:877 (1) - Seems your NC pattern becomes chaotic near the end of the song. Since ur mapping style is quite consistent and repetitive, I recommend using one and only NC pattern throughout the whole diff like what u did in the prelude, e.g. 00:00:260 (1,1) - NC every white tick or NC which helps raise readability - 00:02:282 (9) like what u did at the back. It would make ur diff much neater. i hope i fixed it
And for the hitsounds, I am quite surprising u place the claps on 1st and 3rd ticks from 00:11:046 (1) to 00:21:495 and 00:51:495 to 01:12:057. o_o It's an unusual way because we normally place them at 2nd and 4th ticks lol You may take a look at this: fixed these
BeatofIke wrote:
For Finish hitsounding, I like to add them in parts where I can hear the cymbal crashes (like a loud "pssshh" sound) in the music. The finish hitsounding is often the easiest to do, since most of the time you just add finishes for cymbal crashes or just any loud prominent sound your hear in the music.

For clap hitsounding, almost ANY type of music (other than those with complex beats, break rhythms, guitar riffs, and what not such as in dnb, metal, etc.) will sound good if you add claps on every 2nd and 4th beats in respect with a 4/4 measure (4 beats per measure). More often, you will hear a constant percussion (drum) sounds on every 2nd and 4th beats. This is also considered to be relatively easy to hitsound if used carefully. Again, you can use any type of clap hitsound you like (soft-clap is often my personal preference, but I sometimes use normal-claps and drum-claps if I feel that it sounds better on some parts of the music). And lastly, they the whistle hitsounding.

Whistle hitsounding is often the hardest to hitsound and often easy to get inconsistent with them, because there are SO MANY ways to use whistles. You can use whistles for keysounds (piano for example), synths, vocals, guitar, finger snaps, and any other melodic sounds out there. You can even use whistles as the same for claps (every 2nd and 4th beats for example), usually for softer parts of the music. There are obliviously many other ways to use whistles, but for now....only focus on the softer parts of the music since this is instrumental (non-vocal) music with no keysounds in it. It may helpful to look at other ranked mapsets to discover other ways you can use whistles. Anyways, that's all I can really help you with. Hope this advice helps and good luck!
Based on Ike's useful information on hitsounding, I draw some suggestions below:
00:23:012 (1) - Whistle on head? Same for 00:25:709 (1) - 00:28:406 (7) - 00:33:967 (3) - 00:36:495 (8) - added
00:30:344 - S:C2 claps really don't fit the song imo. i think they do
01:04:979 (1) - Remove the whistle and clap and place finish on head instead. Same for 01:15:765 (1) - 01:26:552 (1) - done

Thanks so much <3

Moo-Chan

418 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Moo-Chan 2014-08-16T08:00:11+00:00

guineaQ wrote:
IamKwaN wrote:
Let's have a random mod! <3
General
Your BG size is a bit strange, take this of dimension 1366*768 instead please.
SPOILER
Inconsistent combo colors of Insane.
Only smallboat's Normal has a different kiai time, it would be nice to unify all the kiai times.
Adding an audio-leadin of 1500 ms is recommended in order to give players preparation time. ooookay
I got a little concern over your title, coz the song is originally a Japanese song. So, I wonder if the song name is:
だんご大家族 (Drum and Bass Remix)
Moway's version had it in english
Ask a Japanese BAT about this please!
guineaQ's Easy
Snap these kiai time green lines: 01:04:975 to 01:04:979 and 01:15:761 to 01:15:765. Kill me.
Delete these redundant green lines: 00:46:439 and 00:47:113. Slider tick hitsounding, I found one mistake thanks to this notice lol
00:00:260 (1) - Finish on head as you can hear an obvious cymbal sound.WHOOOOPS
00:47:788 (2,3,4) - This is rather difficult to read for newbies because they cramp together. I suggest altering the shape of these three or combining 00:48:125 (3,4) into a slider. I'll change the pattern entirely to one suggested in earlier mod
00:50:484 (2,3,4) - ^ ^^
01:24:529 (1) - Finish shoot me
01:29:248 (3) - Try your best to make it symmetric and use CTRL+H for checking. itz symmetric now
I hope some of these help! Good luck!
<3
Update code for this diff will arrive today sometime, since I was going out right atm I saw this mod.

Gimme nao ;_;

ts8zs

2,123 posts

Joined May 2011

ts8zs 2014-08-16T09:11:06+00:00

irc mod?not really likes irc mod XD

16:17 ts8zs: Can i do a irc mod for you?
16:18 Moo-Chan: uhm
16:18 Moo-Chan: sure
16:19 ts8zs: 00:01:945 (8) - i think make this a 1/2 slider is better
16:19 ts8zs: fit vocal and make it not feels so empty
16:20 ts8zs: 00:03:967 (4,5) - swap these two to keep flow from 1
16:20 Moo-Chan: alright
16:20 ts8zs: 00:06:158 (2) - move this to 1's end
16:21 ts8zs: 00:07:338 (8) - same
16:21 ts8zs: make slider too
16:22 Moo-Chan: 00:07:338 (8) - make into a slider?
16:22 ts8zs: yes
16:22 Moo-Chan: alright
16:23 ts8zs: 00:13:068 (4) - move to 464,228 to have a better from 3 and a better jump to 5
16:24 ts8zs: 00:14:080 (2,3) - this shift from 2 to 3 will break flow
16:24 ts8zs: 00:15:765 (1) - this sound should be together with 00:15:091 (7,8) -
16:25 ts8zs: 00:15:934 (2) - then you can move this to 208,180 to keep flow
16:26 Moo-Chan: okay
16:27 ts8zs: 00:17:451 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - after these jump,it will have a flow to below
16:28 ts8zs: 00:18:462 (1) - so try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1932070
16:29 ts8zs: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1932072
16:29 ts8zs: 00:21:664 - missed a big sound
16:30 Moo-Chan: ive had so many problems with that spot ><
16:31 ts8zs: may be i have same or more expectation to this song with the ranked one

16:31 Moo-Chan: i just made it into a 1/2 slider ;w;
16:31 Moo-Chan: 00:21:495 (10) -
16:32 ts8zs: 00:21:495 - how about make here empty?
16:32 ts8zs: 00:21:833 (1) - then put a note same position at 00:21:664 -
16:33 ts8zs: 00:22:338 (4) - 184,200?if don't have a big stop in music i perfer this
16:33 ts8zs: 00:25:035 (4) - 152,240?
16:34 Moo-Chan: alright
16:34 ts8zs: 00:28:406 (7) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1932086 this will have a better hint to player
16:35 ts8zs: 00:32:619 (1) - Ctrl+G to have a better flow from 00:32:282 (6) - ?
16:37 ts8zs: 00:32:956 (2,3,4) - If upon changed will needs this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1932090
16:37 Moo-Chan: fixed
16:38 ts8zs: 00:34:642 (4) - 312,256 is better?
16:39 ts8zs: 00:37:844 (6) - 444,240 to creat a better flow for 00:38:012 (1) - ?
16:40 ts8zs: 00:43:237 (6,1) - same reason upon, I think make 1 Ctrl+j is better?
16:41 ts8zs: 00:44:922 (2,3,4,5) - how about https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1932102 this flow?
16:42 ts8zs: 00:47:113 (7,8) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1932104 also decrease the shift from 6 to 7
16:44 ts8zs: 00:50:147 (1,2,3,4) - i think Ctrl+H&Ctrl+G fits more
16:45 ts8zs: 01:06:664 (6) - 300,76 fits vocal more
16:46 ts8zs: 01:06:327 (5) - try rotate -20? and move back?
16:47 ts8zs: 01:09:698 (1,2) - swap will make jump from 7 to 1 smaller and a better flow
16:49 ts8zs: um...then need to move 2 to give 01:10:372 (1) - a better flow.....how about 156,24?
16:50 ts8zs: 01:14:585 (6) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1932124 get a better flow from 01:14:080 (2,3,4,5) -
16:53 ts8zs: 01:16:776 (1) - 188,216 01:16:945 (2) - 316,128 will not make 01:16:439 (5,6,1,2) - a such long line
16:53 ts8zs: can you reply me some no sense reply?i'm afraid of be slienced XD
16:54 ts8zs: 01:18:293 (9) - 248,256 will get a better flow to 1
16:55 Moo-Chan: yea, sorry ><
16:55 ts8zs: 01:22:507 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1932135 small fix:D
16:56 ts8zs: 01:31:271 (1) - move to01:30:597 (4,5) - reason is same with...upon one XD
16:56 ts8zs: 01:33:967 (1) - jumped too far from 12
16:57 ts8zs: 01:32:788 (7) - Need a nc i think
16:57 ts8zs: 01:44:754 (1) - jumped too far from01:44:417 (3) -
16:58 ts8zs: ok,then I think these were most flow problem i could seen:D
16:58 Moo-Chan: alright :3
16:58 Moo-Chan: so thats it~?
17:00 ts8zs: maybe there are some sample problems too XD
17:01 Moo-Chan: like? o:
17:01 ts8zs: 00:53:181 (2) - such as this clap
17:01 ts8zs: I didn't found why this clap appeared
17:01 Moo-Chan: i removed it ;w;
17:02 ts8zs: Maybe there are some more but I deal hard with samples too,I usually use tools to put it to avoid error XD
17:03 Moo-Chan: ahh
17:03 ts8zs: and except flow and samples i think this map could be more neat
17:04 Moo-Chan: alright
17:05 ts8zs: 01:20:484 (1,2,3,4) - these claps were badly used XD
17:06 Moo-Chan: removed
17:06 ts8zs: What is you reason to change S:C1 and S:C2?
17:08 Moo-Chan: just sounded better to me
17:08 Moo-Chan: i'll probably fix them though
17:08 ts8zs:

17:09 Moo-Chan: :3
17:09 ts8zs: and some small problem you could checked yourself:D such as 00:19:642 (1,2) - swap NC
17:10 ts8zs: I think thats all :3

star!
[Smug's Hard]
00:37:507 (4) - didn't see why a wistle
01:25:877 (1) - can we move it away from 6
[S.Boat's Normal]
一直连到底……没问题:D
[guineaQ's Easy]
00:47:788 (2,3,4) - a reverse slider
00:50:484 (2,3,4) - ^
01:04:304 (2,3) - slder?
01:27:900 (1,2) - too narrow
Needs more work on this diff XD

Last edited by ts8zs 2014-08-16T09:21:17+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

Moo-Chan

418 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Moo-Chan 2014-08-16T09:14:39+00:00

ts8zs wrote:
irc
16:17 ts8zs: Can i do a irc mod for you?
16:18 Moo-Chan: uhm
16:18 Moo-Chan: sure
16:19 ts8zs: 00:01:945 (8) - i think make this a 1/2 slider is better
16:19 ts8zs: fit vocal and make it not feels so empty
16:20 ts8zs: 00:03:967 (4,5) - swap these two to keep flow from 1
16:20 Moo-Chan: alright
16:20 ts8zs: 00:06:158 (2) - move this to 1's end
16:21 ts8zs: 00:07:338 (8) - same
16:21 ts8zs: make slider too
16:22 Moo-Chan: 00:07:338 (8) - make into a slider?
16:22 ts8zs: yes
16:22 Moo-Chan: alright
16:23 ts8zs: 00:13:068 (4) - move to 464,228 to have a better from 3 and a better jump to 5
16:24 ts8zs: 00:14:080 (2,3) - this shift from 2 to 3 will break flow
16:24 ts8zs: 00:15:765 (1) - this sound should be together with 00:15:091 (7,8) -
16:25 ts8zs: 00:15:934 (2) - then you can move this to 208,180 to keep flow
16:26 Moo-Chan: okay
16:27 ts8zs: 00:17:451 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - after these jump,it will have a flow to below
16:28 ts8zs: 00:18:462 (1) - so try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1932070
16:29 ts8zs: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1932072
16:29 ts8zs: 00:21:664 - missed a big sound
16:30 Moo-Chan: ive had so many problems with that spot ><
16:31 ts8zs: may be i have same or more expectation to this song with the ranked one
16:31 Moo-Chan: i just made it into a 1/2 slider ;w;
16:31 Moo-Chan: 00:21:495 (10) -
16:32 ts8zs: 00:21:495 - how about make here empty?
16:32 ts8zs: 00:21:833 (1) - then put a note same position at 00:21:664 -
16:33 ts8zs: 00:22:338 (4) - 184,200?if don't have a big stop in music i perfer this
16:33 ts8zs: 00:25:035 (4) - 152,240?
16:34 Moo-Chan: alright
16:34 ts8zs: 00:28:406 (7) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1932086 this will have a better hint to player
16:35 ts8zs: 00:32:619 (1) - Ctrl+G to have a better flow from 00:32:282 (6) - ?
16:37 ts8zs: 00:32:956 (2,3,4) - If upon changed will needs this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1932090
16:37 Moo-Chan: fixed
16:38 ts8zs: 00:34:642 (4) - 312,256 is better?
16:39 ts8zs: 00:37:844 (6) - 444,240 to creat a better flow for 00:38:012 (1) - ?
16:40 ts8zs: 00:43:237 (6,1) - same reason upon, I think make 1 Ctrl+j is better?
16:41 ts8zs: 00:44:922 (2,3,4,5) - how about https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1932102 this flow?
16:42 ts8zs: 00:47:113 (7,8) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1932104 also decrease the shift from 6 to 7
16:44 ts8zs: 00:50:147 (1,2,3,4) - i think Ctrl+H&Ctrl+G fits more
16:45 ts8zs: 01:06:664 (6) - 300,76 fits vocal more
16:46 ts8zs: 01:06:327 (5) - try rotate -20? and move back?
16:47 ts8zs: 01:09:698 (1,2) - swap will make jump from 7 to 1 smaller and a better flow
16:49 ts8zs: um...then need to move 2 to give 01:10:372 (1) - a better flow.....how about 156,24?
16:50 ts8zs: 01:14:585 (6) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1932124 get a better flow from 01:14:080 (2,3,4,5) -
16:53 ts8zs: 01:16:776 (1) - 188,216 01:16:945 (2) - 316,128 will not make 01:16:439 (5,6,1,2) - a such long line
16:53 ts8zs: can you reply me some no sense reply?i'm afraid of be slienced XD
16:54 ts8zs: 01:18:293 (9) - 248,256 will get a better flow to 1
16:55 Moo-Chan: yea, sorry ><
16:55 ts8zs: 01:22:507 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1932135 small fix:D
16:56 ts8zs: 01:31:271 (1) - move to01:30:597 (4,5) - reason is same with...upon one XD
16:56 ts8zs: 01:33:967 (1) - jumped too far from 12
16:57 ts8zs: 01:32:788 (7) - Need a nc i think
16:57 ts8zs: 01:44:754 (1) - jumped too far from01:44:417 (3) -
16:58 ts8zs: ok,then I think these were most flow problem i could seen:D
16:58 Moo-Chan: alright :3
16:58 Moo-Chan: so thats it~?
17:00 ts8zs: maybe there are some sample problems too XD
17:01 Moo-Chan: like? o:
17:01 ts8zs: 00:53:181 (2) - such as this clap
17:01 ts8zs: I didn't found why this clap appeared
17:01 Moo-Chan: i removed it ;w;
17:02 ts8zs: Maybe there are some more but I deal hard with samples too,I usually use tools to put it to avoid error XD
17:03 Moo-Chan: ahh
17:03 ts8zs: and except flow and samples i think this map could be more neat
17:04 Moo-Chan: alright
17:05 ts8zs: 01:20:484 (1,2,3,4) - these claps were badly used XD
17:06 Moo-Chan: removed
17:06 ts8zs: What is you reason to change S:C1 and S:C2?
17:08 Moo-Chan: just sounded better to me
17:08 Moo-Chan: i'll probably fix them though
17:08 ts8zs:
17:09 Moo-Chan: :3
17:09 ts8zs: and some small problem you could checked yourself:D such as 00:19:642 (1,2) - swap NC
17:10 ts8zs: I think thats all :3
star!

Thank you <3

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

smallboat 2014-08-16T10:44:14+00:00

IamKwaN wrote:
Let's have a random mod!

S.Boat's Normal
00:18:798 (4) - 之前的clap放1,3我感覺有點奇怪,還是2,4比較好,不然只有whistle也可以恩，放了1,3了。
00:45:428 - S:C6的slidertick也是吵,然後我不明白為何這裡突然轉回S:C1 如果合併的話會讓S:C1有tick聲，所以不動這裡。
00:52:170 (3,4,5) - Slider heads can have some whistles 好，加了開頭
00:55:877 (5) - S:C6也是吵;01:36:327 (4) 還好

謝了君媽和包子神的check!

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Modem

3,013 posts

Joined February 2014

Modem 2014-08-17T03:58:12+00:00

This beatmap is so kawaiiiiii (> w <)
Here's the mod from me

guineaQ's Easy
00:00:260 add whistle + finish so it will fit the music
00:02:956 add whistle
00:05:653 add finish
00:07:001 whistle there
00:09:024 whistle there to follow the vocal
00:09:361 how about change it into a smaller slider from 00:09:361 ~ 00:09:529 ? And add a whistle at 00:09:361.
00:09:866 add a note at x : 472 and whistle , y : 48
00:11:720 whistle there to follow the piano
00:13:068 ^
00:13:743 ^
00:14:417 ^
00:15:091 ^
00:15:765 ^
00:16:349 How about turn the volume into 60% ?
00:17:113 whistle there
00:18:462 whistle there
00:25:877 whistle there to follow the piano
00:28:574 ^
00:29:922 ^
00:31:271 ^
00:30:597 ^
00:31:608 ^
00:31:945 ^
00:32:282 ^
00:45:428 ^
00:51:495 ^
00:52:170^
00:52:844 ^
01:33:967 ^
01:34:642 ^
01:44:754 add a note at x : 432 , y : 268 and whistle there
01:45:091 add a clap there
01:45:428 add a whistle
01:46:102 add a note + whistle but don't change the combo colour and put at x : 196 , y : 272
Remove a slider from 01:46:102 into 01:46:439 at x : 196 , y : 272

S.Boat's Normal
00:15:091 whistle there to support the piano
00:15:765 ^
00:16:102 remove the whistle hit sound and stay with clap
00:17:113 whistle there
00:18:462 ^
01:23:181 ^
01:23:855 ^

Smug's Hard
00:18:462 whistle there
00:18:799 clap there
00:19:136 whistle there
00:22:170 ^
00:22:507 ^
00:22:844 ^
00:24:529 ^
00:24:866 ^
00:25:540 ^
00:27:226 ^
00:27:563 ^
01:48:126 end the slider at 01:48:126 so it will fit the music
There's no problem at Insane
This beatmap is so cute!!!!! Hope it can get ranked soon and good luck! (^ w ^)

Fizz

275 posts

Joined September 2013

Fizz 2014-08-17T04:42:36+00:00

ts8zs wrote:
[Smug's Hard]
00:37:507 (4) - didn't see why a wistle
01:25:877 (1) - can we move it away from 6
no changes

Modem wrote:
Smug's Hard
00:18:462 whistle there
00:18:799 clap there
00:19:136 whistle there
00:22:170 ^
00:22:507 ^
00:22:844 ^
00:24:529 ^
00:24:866 ^
00:25:540 ^
00:27:226 ^
00:27:563 ^ done for most of the above
01:48:126 end the slider at 01:48:126 so it will fit the music no change

ty for mods~

updoot

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smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

smallboat 2014-08-17T06:18:20+00:00

Modem wrote:
This beatmap is so kawaiiiiii (> w <)
Here's the mod from me

S.Boat's Normal
00:15:091 whistle there to support the piano Added
00:15:765 ^ Added
00:16:102 remove the whistle hit sound and stay with clap Feel nothing,keep it.
00:17:113 whistle there Added
00:18:462 ^ Added
01:23:181 ^ Feel nothing,keep it.
01:23:855 ^ Added

Thanks mod ~ !

code

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guineaQ

1,588 posts

Joined December 2013

guineaQ 2014-08-18T06:54:38+00:00

Modem wrote:
This beatmap is so kawaiiiiii (> w <)
Here's the mod from me

guineaQ's Easy
00:00:260 add whistle + finish so it will fit the music MOOOOO-CHANNNN
00:02:956 add whistle
00:05:653 add finish
00:07:001 whistle there
00:09:024 whistle there to follow the vocal
00:09:361 how about change it into a smaller slider from 00:09:361 ~ 00:09:529 ? And add a whistle at 00:09:361. not gonna use red ticks in this easy ;w;
00:09:866 add a note at x : 472 and whistle , y : 48
00:11:720 whistle there to follow the piano
00:13:068 ^
00:13:743 ^
00:14:417 ^
00:15:091 ^
00:15:765 ^
00:16:349 How about turn the volume into 60% ?
00:17:113 whistle there
00:18:462 whistle there
00:25:877 whistle there to follow the piano
00:28:574 ^
00:29:922 ^
00:31:271 ^
00:30:597 ^
00:31:608 ^
00:31:945 ^
00:32:282 ^
00:45:428 ^
00:51:495 ^
00:52:170^
00:52:844 ^
01:33:967 ^
01:34:642 ^
01:44:754 add a note at x : 432 , y : 268 and whistle there
01:45:091 add a clap there
01:45:428 add a whistle
01:46:102 add a note + whistle but don't change the combo colour and put at x : 196 , y : 272
Remove a slider from 01:46:102 into 01:46:439 at x : 196 , y : 272

Fixed hitsounding...most of them
I'll say no to the outro mods since I'm following the bass there -_-

There's no problem at Insane
This beatmap is so cute!!!!! Hope it can get ranked soon and good luck! (^ w ^)

UPDATEEEE PLS

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idodgebull3ts

76 posts

Joined January 2013

idodgebull3ts 2014-08-19T01:42:32+00:00

M4M with Smug

All the diffs look and play well as they are, and I'm not a very experienced modder, so my suggestions are mostly going to be minor aesthetic stuff.

Couldn't find anything to say about Easy.

[S.Boat's Normal]

Starting of with some nazi mods... sorry

00:01:271 (2,3) - Move 2 to x255y283 and 3 to x320y342 for even spacing (1px off currently)
00:06:664 (2) - Move it to x125y320 so its spaced evenly between the sliders (2px off currently)
00:12:394 (3) - x157y211
01:03:630 (3) - Add a whistle, it's hitting with the same instrument as 4 and 5 which both have whistles
01:19:809 (3) - So I like what you did having the first kiai use exclusively linear sliders with hard angled turns, then having curved sliders exclusively in the second. Or at least it would be exclusively curved if not for this one linear slider. Consider adding a slight curve and adjusting its position accordingly.
01:21:158 (1,2) - Blanket is slightly off at 3's endpoint. 4 and 1 will also need to be adjusted as fixing 3 will break the blanket with 1.

[Smug's Hard]

00:23:181 (1) - Could be extended until the next white tick, it's fine as it is though. (This would make it more consistent though if you use the following suggestion)
00:25:877 (1) - It works fine as it is, but you do have a pretty heavily stressed note on the slider end which is then held until the next white tick. Maybe map it like 00:28:574 (1,2,3) - except using a slider instead of two circles for 2 and 3.
00:37:001 (2,3,4,5) - The whistle on 4 feels out of place considering that the note that the whistle is following is on the unmapped beat prior. Consider changing up your rhythm here so it fits. Maybe something like this?
SPOILER
00:58:743 (3,4,5) - Similar to above, but missing whistles. Consider adding some in. (rhythm is fine here though as there are different instrumentals)

Insane looks good as it is.

Good luck with your map

Fizz

275 posts

Joined September 2013

Fizz 2014-08-19T03:42:24+00:00

idodgebull3ts wrote:
M4M with Smug

[Smug's Hard]
00:23:181 (1) - Could be extended until the next white tick, it's fine as it is though. (This would make it more consistent though if you use the following suggestion) done
00:25:877 (1) - It works fine as it is, but you do have a pretty heavily stressed note on the slider end which is then held until the next white tick. Maybe map it like 00:28:574 (1,2,3) - except using a slider instead of two circles for 2 and 3. changed in my own way
00:37:001 (2,3,4,5) - The whistle on 4 feels out of place considering that the note that the whistle is following is on the unmapped beat prior. Consider changing up your rhythm here so it fits. Maybe something like this? decided to remove the whistle
SPOILER
00:58:743 (3,4,5) - Similar to above, but missing whistles. Consider adding some in. (rhythm is fine here though as there are different instrumentals)
Good luck with your map ty~

updoot

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smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

smallboat 2014-08-19T16:45:16+00:00

idodgebull3ts wrote:
M4M with Smug

[S.Boat's Normal]

Starting of with some nazi mods... sorry Nothing.
00:01:271 (2,3) - Move 2 to x255y283 and 3 to x320y342 for even spacing (1px off currently) Okay,fixed.
00:06:664 (2) - Move it to x125y320 so its spaced evenly between the sliders (2px off currently) Okay,fixed.
00:12:394 (3) - x157y211 Okay,fixed.
01:03:630 (3) - Add a whistle, it's hitting with the same instrument as 4 and 5 which both have whistles Added.
01:19:809 (3) - So I like what you did having the first kiai use exclusively linear sliders with hard angled turns, then having curved sliders exclusively in the second. Or at least it would be exclusively curved if not for this one linear slider. Consider adding a slight curve and adjusting its position accordingly.Is say adjust to become curve slider? Fixed.
01:21:158 (1,2) - Blanket is slightly off at 3's endpoint. 4 and 1 will also need to be adjusted as fixing 3 will break the blanket with 1.Adjust some,fixed.
Thanks nazi mod ~ !

Sorry late,the code at this here.

CODE

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Atsuro

1,290 posts

Joined January 2013

Atsuro 2014-08-19T21:21:26+00:00

M4M from queue

This map will be hard for me to mod since it's too polished already x.x. Oh well...

Insane
Only one suggestion

01:19:979 (3,4) - Delete 3 to make it more consistent with 01:09:024 (6,7) -

This difficulty is fun

Smug's Hard

Only some suggestions here

00:24:529 (1,2) - Make this into three sliders, i think it plays better like this
00:26:889 (2,1,2) - Move the first one farther away or stack it with 1 to avoid confusion
01:03:630 (1) - This is unexpected and can be confusing, and in my opinion it doesn't fit too well

Nice diff

Easy

This has nothing wrong but you repeat some patterns far too much (like this 00:51:158 (3,1) - )
It gets boring fast, try to make it more varied

I couldn't find anything wrong with the normal
Good luck with your map and sorry for the short mod

guineaQ

1,588 posts

Joined December 2013

guineaQ 2014-08-20T09:58:00+00:00

atsuro0 wrote:
M4M from queue

This map will be hard for me to mod since it's too polished already x.x. Oh well...

Easy
This has nothing wrong but you repeat some patterns far too much (like this 00:51:158 (3,1) - )
It gets boring fast, try to make it more varied
I couldn't find anything wrong with the normal
Good luck with your map and sorry for the short mod

I tried to make it varied, some people thought it was too tricky for newbies >_<

Don

218 posts

Joined December 2012

Don 2014-08-23T22:46:53+00:00

[Insane]
Generally quite sloppy with spacing. And with sloppy I mean very sloppy. Take a look at spacing numbers and try to keep them consistent! Also, the background image doesn't look related to whatever clannad is after a google image search. Correct me if I'm wrong.

00:00:260 (1) - This slider would be better off with the red tick in the middle
00:04:979 (8) - NC to accentuate the change in rhythm.
00:07:338 (8) - Fix the blanket here.
00:08:012 (10) - Copy 9 and rotate it 180 degrees to make it not sloppy, the shape is the same but it's almost different.
00:11:046 (1) - Control G to make 9>10>11 not a straight line, also to make 1>2 a bigger jump, which is in sync with the music.
00:17:956 (5) - Why is the jump from 4>5 bigger than from 5>6? This doesn't make any sense, listening to the music. Pattern-wise it does, but you're mapping to the music here.
00:18:799 (2) - Control G, and then control G the selection of 00:19:136 (3,4) to make the jump 4>5 satisfying, fitting with the music and the entire thing flow better. You might also want to reconsider 5's position.
00:20:990 (6,8) - These notes are too close together and not visually satisfying. I'd suggest moving 8 a bit more down, to tie in with the next suggestion.
00:21:664 (9,1) - This stack is meh, so if you move around 9, it'll unstack and play better. Be sure to make the spacing less than the spacing between 1 and 2, though. Maybe put 9 on x:304 y:72?
00:27:226 (1,2,3,4) - The sudden increase in spacing doesn't make sense if you compare it to the music. You might want to lower the spacing. The difficulty curve makes sense, but once again, you're mapping to the music. The level of the hard part was already set in the beginning. This applies to the rest of this segment that has 'vocals', ending at 00:32:619
00:33:967 (3) - Lowering the sliderspeed on this slider doesn't make sense. The music gets more intense, so the sliderspeed should go up here as well. Same goes for similar sliders later, I won't name them again.
00:37:675 (5,1) - This is an unnecessary overlap. Either stack the notes (which I would dislike), or control H 1, so it ties in to the later point even better.
00:39:529 (5,6,7,8) - A straight line pattern doesn't fit here. Also, it feels very uninspired. You might want to add some cool stuff like a cross or z sort of pattern
00:40:035 (8) - NC to accentuate the new rhythm of 1/4's
00:43:237 (6) - I get what you're doing here, but I feel like the jump is too harsh for what happens in the music.
00:44:754 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I would change the pattern like in the picture. This would fix a couple of things:

pattern

1. This creates a jump from 1>2, which accentuates the strong part in the music.
2. This creates a nice flow between 5 and 6
3. Straight lines suck to play. 90 degree angles are nicer to play.

00:48:462 (5) - Move this note down to make the jump of 4>5 bigger than 5>6 so it gets more fitting with the music.
00:54:698 (4) - This jump doesn't fit here at all. It's the note after a strong beat in the music. You unfortunately mapped the strong tick as the end of a triple, which I can accept, but this jump feels very weird. I'd consider lowering the spacing. 7 should be a jump, because it's the strong tick in the music. Try to consider this.
00:55:709 (2,3,4,5) - A pattern that would be 3>2>4>3 would play much better here.
01:07:001 (1,2,3,4) - A straight line doesn't fit the song.

Actually, I'm going to stop here. I might sound like a dick, but I've named all the issues in the map so far, and it applies to the rest as well. I could point all of them out myself, but I feel like that would be a waste of time. If you're angry at me for not doing so, be sure to send me a PM, and I might consider finishing this.

Moo-Chan

418 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Moo-Chan 2014-08-24T03:28:09+00:00

Don wrote:
[Insane]
Generally quite sloppy with spacing. And with sloppy I mean very sloppy. Take a look at spacing numbers and try to keep them consistent! Also, the background image doesn't look related to whatever clannad is after a google image search. Correct me if I'm wrong.

00:00:260 (1) - This slider would be better off with the red tick in the middle ok
00:04:979 (8) - NC to accentuate the change in rhythm. ok
00:07:338 (8) - Fix the blanket here. what is there to fix
00:08:012 (10) - Copy 9 and rotate it 180 degrees to make it not sloppy, the shape is the same but it's almost different. meh
00:11:046 (1) - Control G to make 9>10>11 not a straight line, also to make 1>2 a bigger jump, which is in sync with the music. dont see the need to
00:17:956 (5) - Why is the jump from 4>5 bigger than from 5>6? This doesn't make any sense, listening to the music. Pattern-wise it does, but you're mapping to the music here. fixed somewhat
00:18:799 (2) - Control G, and then control G the selection of 00:19:136 (3,4) to make the jump 4>5 satisfying, fitting with the music and the entire thing flow better. You might also want to reconsider 5's position. no
00:20:990 (6,8) - These notes are too close together and not visually satisfying. I'd suggest moving 8 a bit more down, to tie in with the next suggestion. no
00:21:664 (9,1) - This stack is meh, so if you move around 9, it'll unstack and play better. Be sure to make the spacing less than the spacing between 1 and 2, though. Maybe put 9 on x:304 y:72? its fine
00:27:226 (1,2,3,4) - The sudden increase in spacing doesn't make sense if you compare it to the music. You might want to lower the spacing. The difficulty curve makes sense, but once again, you're mapping to the music. The level of the hard part was already set in the beginning. This applies to the rest of this segment that has 'vocals', ending at 00:32:619 meh
00:33:967 (3) - Lowering the sliderspeed on this slider doesn't make sense. The music gets more intense, so the sliderspeed should go up here as well. Same goes for similar sliders later, I won't name them again. ^
00:37:675 (5,1) - This is an unnecessary overlap. Either stack the notes (which I would dislike), or control H 1, so it ties in to the later point even better. they play well
00:39:529 (5,6,7,8) - A straight line pattern doesn't fit here. Also, it feels very uninspired. You might want to add some cool stuff like a cross or z sort of pattern it fits with the tone of the music
00:40:035 (8) - NC to accentuate the new rhythm of 1/4's ok
00:43:237 (6) - I get what you're doing here, but I feel like the jump is too harsh for what happens in the music. not really
00:44:754 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I would change the pattern like in the picture. This would fix a couple of things: nty
pattern
1. This creates a jump from 1>2, which accentuates the strong part in the music.
2. This creates a nice flow between 5 and 6
3. Straight lines suck to play. 90 degree angles are nicer to play.

00:48:462 (5) - Move this note down to make the jump of 4>5 bigger than 5>6 so it gets more fitting with the music. alright
00:54:698 (4) - This jump doesn't fit here at all. It's the note after a strong beat in the music. You unfortunately mapped the strong tick as the end of a triple, which I can accept, but this jump feels very weird. I'd consider lowering the spacing. 7 should be a jump, because it's the strong tick in the music. Try to consider this. moved it down a bit
00:55:709 (2,3,4,5) - A pattern that would be 3>2>4>3 would play much better here. meh
01:07:001 (1,2,3,4) - A straight line doesn't fit the song. fixed

Actually, I'm going to stop here. I might sound like a dick, but I've named all the issues in the map so far, and it applies to the rest as well. I could point all of them out myself, but I feel like that would be a waste of time. If you're angry at me for not doing so, be sure to send me a PM, and I might consider finishing this.

ty

Fuuyu

856 posts

Joined September 2013

Fuuyu 2014-08-25T04:41:51+00:00

From . . Miramono's Modding Team

Mod Starts Here

[

Easy]

00:15:091 (4) - Why not move it at ( x:260 y:188 ) then your slider tilt is not good . . How about like this :

00:29:585 (3) - Why not start the NC here instead of 00:29:922 (1)

00:31:608 (3) - You have a bad tilt here .. how about do it like this :

00:32:619 (1) - Improve the curve . . sorta like this too :

00:35:316 (1) - Curve this like ^

00:38:012 (1) - ^

00:38:012 (1) - Tilt this by 45°

01:37:675 (1,2,3,4) - Why not form this like a star . . For Example :

[ Normal]

00:32:619 (1) - Have a equal spacing in here ( x:32 y:128 )

brb . . that only, diff seems ready already . . for me

[

Hard]

00:17:451 (3) - Why tilt this? flatten this instead

LOL . . That only . .

guineaQ

1,588 posts

Joined December 2013

guineaQ 2014-08-25T09:34:00+00:00

xLoupGarou wrote:
From . . Miramono's Modding Team
o~
Mod Starts Here
[ Easy]

00:15:091 (4) - Why not move it at ( x:260 y:188 ) then your slider tilt is not good . . How about like this :

errr I'm pointing this towards the slider end of (3) and slider beginning of (1), fixed the tilt a bit thou

00:29:585 (3) - Why not start the NC here instead of 00:29:922 (1) fixed and more extra fixes for consistency

00:31:608 (3) - You have a bad tilt here .. how about do it like this :

Supposed to be symmetry with 00:29:922 -

00:32:619 (1) - Improve the curve . . sorta like this too :

Meant to overlap the slider end of 00:29:922 - and I don't think it really matters playability wise >w<

00:35:316 (1) - Curve this like ^ done

00:38:012 (1) - ^ it's already curved >w<

00:38:012 (1) - Tilt this by 45° I made symmetry with this

01:37:675 (1,2,3,4) - Why not form this like a star . . For Example :

As much as I really want to do it like that :c I need to keep DS consistent >w<

EDIT: holy mackarels I forgot to give the code

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Kyshiro

Elite Mapper

1,642 posts

Joined January 2011

Kyshiro 2014-08-25T21:55:08+00:00

Haelo

So basically I think this map needs more work, specially the insane which feels rather messy while playing and could just be a lot better than this

Insane

00:06:495 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - This star pattern partly overlaps itself which looks rather messy, try using CTRL+SHIFT+D, this will allow you to make a circular pattern (If you need help with this feel free to pm me)
00:07:338 (8,9,10) - You could make this feel like it's 1 pattern, right now it feels randomly placed, for example try copying 1 slider and rotating it by 120 degrees http://puu.sh/b7M0h/4971dc0e05.jpg
00:09:529 (5,6) - Call me a nazimodder, but blankets like this could be so much better http://puu.sh/b7M7n/e3d69d78ac.jpg (Use the approach circle)
00:10:877 (10,1) - This flows rather bad(and the blanket needs work) Try to make it so you don't have to move in a straight line on multiple objects, for example http://puu.sh/b7MkL/40fb83e16a.jpg (You'll have to move stuff around for the next part to work if you do this)
00:14:080 (2) - This actually feels odd because of the vocals here, it'd play better if you had note>slider here, http://puu.sh/b7Mvy/c9a7eaa337.jpg
00:14:585 (4,5,6,7) - Try and keep the spacing more consistent
00:16:776 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This feels really randomly placed, I'm sure you can come up with a pattern that's been put a bit more effort into
00:20:990 (6,7,8) - How about making a proper triangle here?
00:21:664 (9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Spacinggggggg and try not to overlap them like this
00:24:529 (1,2,3,4,5) - You could use the CTRL+SHIFT+D tool here to make a nice looking star pattern instead
00:31:608 (4,5,6) - This plays incredibly easy for an insane, I suggest to use more spacing for these
00:33:462 (5) - This slider ends on a stronger beat than it starts at, either place it 1/2 earlier or later
00:33:967 (3) - This slowdown is kind of unnecessary, unless you make it consistent with the whole part because similar sounding parts in the song are also mapped with x1.0
00:39:024 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Spacingggggggg, use distance snap
00:44:417 (6,7,1) - I'd make a higher spaced triangle here and try to prevent it from overlapping with the slider
00:50:147 (1,2,3,4) - Same as earlier
00:56:383 (6) - Another slider that ends on a stronger beat, same as before
01:16:945 (2) - ^
01:18:799 (3,4,5) - You go from 1/2 to 1/1 keeping almost the same spacing with no indications of any sort, either increase the spacing or make sure it's better to read
01:25:372 (2) - Another slider that ends on a stronger beat, same as before

The biggest problem with this diff is that it feels randomly put together. I want you to go through this whole diff again and tidy up the spacing, blankets and overlaps using the tips and suggestions i just listed, right now it feels really messy

Smug's Hard

00:06:158 (2,3,4,1) - Snap this to x1.8 spacing like you did with the rest of the intro
00:21:158 (1) - There's a sound on the red tick before this blue tick, decrease this slider's length by 1/4
00:26:889 (2,1,2) - This is very confusing for hard players, it even got me the first time tbh, it needs a ton more spacing
00:46:271 (2,3) - It feels awkward to randomly stop here to click 2 notes, there's nothing in the music that indicates a change or whatever, I suggest you space this normally
01:03:630 (1) - Same as earlier, however they might be a sound on the blue tick, it would make a lot more sense to end it 1/4 earlier

S.Boat's Normal

00:14:753 (2) - Would play and look better if you'd make a triangle form with 00:13:405 (4,1,2) - If you do this you can simply move the next 2 sliders a bit down and everything would be fine http://kshro.s-ul.eu/0gptfGxf
00:39:360 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - This is all just straight, would be more fun if there were some curves
01:01:270 (5) - this slider is REALLY close to going out of the screen, I'd suggest to move it up a little
01:36:327 (4) - There's a slidertick hitsound here which sounds really off and unfitting
01:46:439 (3) - This is the only 1/2 you've used in the whole difficulty which is rather weird, I suggest putting a note where this slider is right now, followed by a 1/1 slider 1/1 later, followed by the spinner which you'll have to place a bit further into the timeline (Don't forget to move the timeline)

guineaQ's Easy

The intro lacks hitsounds imo, try adding a few whistles here and there, try to create a pattern (For example every new measure (big white line))
01:04:979 (1,2) - Would be cool if you could move this a bit down so it would look like a continuing line, right now it has a bump every new slider http://kshro.s-ul.eu/ZTK3kvbX Don't forget to fix the spacing if you do this
01:18:799 (3,1) - Same as before

That's all for now

Moo-Chan

418 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Moo-Chan 2014-08-25T23:11:43+00:00

Kyshiro wrote:
Haelo

So basically I think this map needs more work, specially the insane which feels rather messy while playing and could just be a lot better than this

Insane
00:06:495 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - This star pattern partly overlaps itself which looks rather messy, try using CTRL+SHIFT+D, this will allow you to make a circular pattern (If you need help with this feel free to pm me)
00:07:338 (8,9,10) - You could make this feel like it's 1 pattern, right now it feels randomly placed, for example try copying 1 slider and rotating it by 120 degrees http://puu.sh/b7M0h/4971dc0e05.jpg
00:09:529 (5,6) - Call me a nazimodder, but blankets like this could be so much better http://puu.sh/b7M7n/e3d69d78ac.jpg (Use the approach circle) its already blanketed
00:10:877 (10,1) - This flows rather bad(and the blanket needs work) Try to make it so you don't have to move in a straight line on multiple objects, for example http://puu.sh/b7MkL/40fb83e16a.jpg (You'll have to move stuff around for the next part to work if you do this)
00:14:080 (2) - This actually feels odd because of the vocals here, it'd play better if you had note>slider here, http://puu.sh/b7Mvy/c9a7eaa337.jpg ok
00:14:585 (4,5,6,7) - Try and keep the spacing more consistent alright
00:16:776 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This feels really randomly placed, I'm sure you can come up with a pattern that's been put a bit more effort into ehh, I kinda fixed it? idk, I suck with patterns
00:20:990 (6,7,8) - How about making a proper triangle here? ok
00:21:664 (9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Spacinggggggg and try not to overlap them like this fixed
00:24:529 (1,2,3,4,5) - You could use the CTRL+SHIFT+D tool here to make a nice looking star pattern instead I think I did
00:31:608 (4,5,6) - This plays incredibly easy for an insane, I suggest to use more spacing for these ok
00:33:462 (5) - This slider ends on a stronger beat than it starts at, either place it 1/2 earlier or later I did
00:33:967 (3) - This slowdown is kind of unnecessary, unless you make it consistent with the whole part because similar sounding parts in the song are also mapped with x1.0 eh, I get what you mean, but I don't really want to remove them
00:39:024 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Spacingggggggg, use distance snap I used DS and kind of re-arranged what I had going on
00:44:417 (6,7,1) - I'd make a higher spaced triangle here and try to prevent it from overlapping with the slider ok
00:50:147 (1,2,3,4) - Same as earlier fixed
00:56:383 (6) - Another slider that ends on a stronger beat, same as before fixed
01:16:945 (2) - ^ fixed
01:18:799 (3,4,5) - You go from 1/2 to 1/1 keeping almost the same spacing with no indications of any sort, either increase the spacing or make sure it's better to read increased the spacing
01:25:372 (2) - Another slider that ends on a stronger beat, same as before fixed

The biggest problem with this diff is that it feels randomly put together. I want you to go through this whole diff again and tidy up the spacing, blankets and overlaps using the tips and suggestions i just listed, right now it feels really messy yea, I hate my mapping ;w;
That's all for now thank you <3

guineaQ

1,588 posts

Joined December 2013

guineaQ 2014-08-26T16:54:05+00:00

Everything mentioned in Kyshiro's mod were applied

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smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

smallboat 2014-08-26T17:42:20+00:00

Sorry late mod reply >_>

Kyshiro wrote:
Haelo Hi ~o /

S.Boat's Normal
00:14:753 (2) - Would play and look better if you'd make a triangle form with 00:13:405 (4,1,2) - If you do this you can simply move the next 2 sliders a bit down and everything would be fine http://kshro.s-ul.eu/0gptfGxf Okay,move a bit.
00:39:360 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - This is all just straight, would be more fun if there were some curves Sure,keep a bit curve at this here
01:01:270 (5) - this slider is REALLY close to going out of the screen, I'd suggest to move it up a little Sure,move up a bit this here.
01:36:327 (4) - There's a slidertick hitsound here which sounds really off and unfitting Sure,I use a S:C5 (20%) mute this slidertick sound.
01:46:439 (3) - This is the only 1/2 you've used in the whole difficulty which is rather weird, I suggest putting a note where this slider is right now, followed by a 1/1 slider 1/1 later, followed by the spinner which you'll have to place a bit further into the timeline (Don't forget to move the timeline)
Fixed the 1/2 slider to change a note,but the spinner feel fine,so keep it.
That's all for now

Thanks Kyshiro~ !

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Fizz

275 posts

Joined September 2013

Fizz 2014-08-27T14:29:12+00:00

Kyshiro wrote:
Smug's Hard
00:06:158 (2,3,4,1) - Snap this to x1.8 spacing like you did with the rest of the intro done
00:21:158 (1) - There's a sound on the red tick before this blue tick, decrease this slider's length by 1/4 this isn't the effect I was going for
00:26:889 (2,1,2) - This is very confusing for hard players, it even got me the first time tbh, it needs a ton more spacing done
00:46:271 (2,3) - It feels awkward to randomly stop here to click 2 notes, there's nothing in the music that indicates a change or whatever, I suggest you space this normally done
01:03:630 (1) - Same as earlier, however they might be a sound on the blue tick, it would make a lot more sense to end it 1/4 earlier

thanks for the mod~

updoot

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Mortem

694 posts

Joined July 2013

Mortem 2014-08-28T08:05:59+00:00

Hello.

Easy:
00:04:304 (2) - Replace it with two circles. Fits better to the rhythm imo.
01:48:125 - What about, try to end the slider here?

Normal:
00:50:484 (5) - Make this slider more curvier. (I mean, remove the red point, and replace it with normal.)
00:55:877 (5) - ^

Also, check AIMod. There are some errors/warnings.
Hope that helps.
If not, then sorry.
Good Luck!

Wafu

1,703 posts

Joined June 2011

Wafu 2014-08-28T11:25:21+00:00

Red - Unrankable
Blue - Highly recommended
Black - Suggestion

General

The source is supposed to be ゲーム as we put only original source, not romanised or translated. Clannad belongs to tags.
Add 茶太 to tags. You added Chata, so her original name should be there too.
Change song title to だんごだんご大家族 (Drum and Bass Remix). Current song name was romanised. Dango Dango Daikazoku belongs to tags.
Fix inconsistency with colors, either make them same as on insane or make it same on insane as on other difficulties. I don't see a reason of chaning the colors in insane diff. Background didn't change, storyboard didn't change, simply nothing visually changes only colors, they should definitely be same within all the diffs unless others are taiko, or there is bg/storyboard change.
Change AudioLeadIn to 0 on guineaQ's Easy so it is consistent. You shouldn't even touch the AudioLeadIn, since you cannot change it in editor, you cannot even edit .osu file to change it. And after all AudioLeadIn is not needed now, the map now automatically gives you enough time to get ready to play.

guineaQ's Easy

Fix the kiai consistency with other diffs. This is the only one which ends 1st kiai on 01:13:068. It should end on 01:14:922.
01:04:979 (1,2,1) - I'd say these three sliders are not looking smooth if they are all the same shape and the 2nd slider is additionally non-symmetrical. I'd use this pattern to improve the flow and so it doesn't lack the perfect design.
SPOILER
01:46:102 (1) - The slider's end connects with slider's body, what might feel a bit confusing for new players. I recommend to simply blaket it with the slider body, instead of covering the slider with slider's end. Like this.
SPOILER

This difficulty is quite fine. Few problems were just the inconsistence (audio lead in and kiai) and another problem is that it's probably a bit harder than regular easy. You used too many objects and some rhythms (like placing 2 cicles, then space) are quite difficult for newbies.

S.Boat's Normal

To fit the rhythm, you should move 01:46:945 (1) on 01:47:113, it feels really early now, since the fading sound which spinner should follow is not hearable on 01:46:945, but on 01:47:113, I think it's insensible to follow nothing. Just look on insane, it fits the sound perfectly.
I really like hot you kept your whole map consistent in spacing, but these straight sliders have right spacing, but the visual gap is inconsistent - Everywhere else it is consistent, so I'd consider wasting a minute to fix this minor visual issue. On 01:02:956 (2,3) and 00:42:057 (5,6). It would be best if you'd make even just the visual gap same as distance snap. Just look and compare the distance between the slider bodies and between 00:42:731 (6,1). It looks a bit inconsistent, and it would look more professional if you fixed these gaps so the map would be whole consistent.

Nice rhythm, patterns and flow, maybe just harder than regular normal, but after Easy is harder than regular easy it is clearly okay!

Smug's Hard

00:21:158 (1) - You should decrease the slider's lenght by 1/4 as you mapped it to empty place - There is nothing. If you find this creative and did it on purpose - No it's not. The real drum in music is on 00:21:664, so the slider is also supposed to end here. It doesn't even play that well and overmapping is not the thing that would improve the map's quality, but decrease.
00:24:529 (1,2) - It looks really lazy to use that much repeats on 1/2 slider. I don't fine any creativity here, just lazines or no idea. If you want the repeats, use for example 1/2 slider with 1 repeat, circle, 1/2 slider with repeat, circle, so it would not look that boring.
00:42:057 (3) - You might map it so it has some flow and move it on 271;170 or similar, actually it forces player to go against the current flow. Mentioning this, because you mapped the whole map in this flow.
Increase AR to 8. I really felt the approach circles are moving really slowly, what's a bit weird to play. Hard on this BPM should definitely have a bit higher AR.

Fine diff, through I didn't like the wrong rhythm on the slider I mentioned above, else there are just minor issues, I'd say there is nothing specially wrong.

Insane

Increase HP by 1 since the gap between hard is quite low and additionally, it is good when OD and HP is balanced. OD is currently requiring quite a good accuracy, but if you don't hit the note accurately and get 100, it drains almost nothing. OD and HP are that well designed, so having them the same increased the difficulty more efficiently than increasing one more than the second one.
00:21:833 - 00:43:068 - This part is mapped so insensibly. The map is same jumpy/lively as the rest of the map, but the hack, where's the logic? Song is actually much calmer than the rest, it deserves to have less jumps than the rest, or eventually you can decrese the spacing here, but this no-change doesn't really fit the song.
01:06:327 (5,6) - Your jumps are really missing the flow or sensibility. This pattern is just really much random, at least follow the flow when you want to make a random pattern, but you really followed nothing sensible.
01:27:900 - 01:46:945 - This part should be also calmer than the rest of the map, it is just same jumpy as the rest, what makes really no-sense. Follow the suggestion I gave you a little higher.
Also I noticed one, quite critical thing. You are using slider velocity changes randomly. For example 00:33:967 (3), 00:36:495 (8) etc. There's no reason to change the SV, keeping it normal would be clearly fine, use it only in parts where the music is really calmer - not for one slider.

Conclusion: Rankable, but needs some improvement

There is really a lot of random things (jumps, SV changes), you don't follow the music properly - map is just still same through the whole song, even if the song is calmer, your map is still the same lively. Additionally I really missed the flow in your map. Sometimes there was something "like" a flow, but the jumps from nowhere ruined it always, so the flow wasn't really there. You should improve your flow, jumps and if you want to be creative, don't make random things, but listen to the music, that's only thing you need for creativity, following the music will be creative, but sensible together. You might also use more hitsounds in this map, you put really many of custom hitsounds to your map, but you are not using them much. Also the sliderslider and slidertick were both not audiable in some parts of the map. It might maybe be considered as unrankable if you don't increase the volume of some ticks a bit, so they are at least barely hearable. For example 00:18:125 on easy - Cannot here sliderslider or slidertick = Unrankable, while using 30% volume as normal, it is clearly hearable, solving the issue easily. That's probably all I'd want to say. You have to solve the issue with these hitsounds and insane needs some more improvement. If you need any help or didn't understand something, feel free to PM me in-game.

Edit: Now I noticed Kyshiro modded this map. I realized you don't even know what the blanket is. You didn't fix the blanket which he said is wrong, but you said it is blanket. If you cannot see the blanket by eye. Just click on the slider that should make blanket and check distance to the circle/slider you blanket. If it is for example 1.20x, remember the number. Then slick again on the slider that should make the blanket and press CTRL+G and check the distance again. If it states for example 1.22x or 1.18x, your blanket is wrong - it's not the same distance from the start and the end. And Kyshiro was right, had the same opinion as I had - the map looks random and messy. Don't take it offensive, we want to help you.

Last edited by Wafu 2014-08-28T11:39:56+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

guineaQ

1,588 posts

Joined December 2013

guineaQ 2014-08-28T11:30:55+00:00

Pjecoo wrote:
Hello.

Easy:
00:04:304 (2) - Replace it with two circles. Fits better to the rhythm imo. imo, consistency
01:48:125 - What about, try to end the slider here? ehhh nope :3

Also, check AIMod. There are some errors/warnings.
Hope that helps.
If not, then sorry.
Good Luck!

guineaQ

1,588 posts

Joined December 2013

guineaQ 2014-08-28T11:43:48+00:00

Wafu wrote:
General

The source is supposed to be ゲーム as we put only original source, not romanised or translated. Clannad belongs to tags.
Add 茶太 to tags. You added Chata, so her original name should be there too.
Change song title to だんごだんご大家族 (Drum and Bass Remix). Current song name was romanised. Dango Dango Daikazoku belongs to tags.
Fix inconsistency with colors, either make them same as on insane or make it same on insane as on other difficulties. I don't see a reason of chaning the colors in insane diff. Background didn't change, storyboard didn't change, simply nothing visually changes only colors, they should definitely be same within all the diffs unless others are taiko, or there is bg/storyboard change.
Change AudioLeadIn to 0 on guineaQ's Easy so it is consistent. You shouldn't even touch the AudioLeadIn, since you cannot change it in editor, you cannot even edit .osu file to change it. And after all AudioLeadIn is not needed now, the map now automatically gives you enough time to get ready to play. holy shat kill me

guineaQ's Easy

Fix the kiai consistency with other diffs. This is the only one which ends 1st kiai on 01:13:068. It should end on 01:14:922.
01:04:979 (1,2,1) - I'd say these three sliders are not looking smooth if they are all the same shape and the 2nd slider is additionally non-symmetrical. I'd use this pattern to improve the flow and so it doesn't lack the perfect design. Didn't really take the first slider into account for symmetry, I used diagonal symmetry for (2) and the 01:07:675 (1) -
SPOILER
01:46:102 (1) - The slider's end connects with slider's body, what might feel a bit confusing for new players. I recommend to simply blaket it with the slider body, instead of covering the slider with slider's end. Like this. true.
SPOILER
This difficulty is quite fine. Few problems were just the inconsistence (audio lead in and kiai) and another problem is that it's probably a bit harder than regular easy. You used too many objects and some rhythms (like placing 2 cicles, then space) are quite difficult for newbies.hmmmmmmmmmmmmm well I don't think it's that hard D: but I can DT HD hard diffs so I have no right to talk about it /me runs

Conclusion: Rankable, but needs some improvement

There is really a lot of random things (jumps, SV changes), you don't follow the music properly - map is just still same through the whole song, even if the song is calmer, your map is still the same lively. Additionally I really missed the flow in your map. Sometimes there was something "like" a flow, but the jumps from nowhere ruined it always, so the flow wasn't really there. You should improve your flow, jumps and if you want to be creative, don't make random things, but listen to the music, that's only thing you need for creativity, following the music will be creative, but sensible together. You might also use more hitsounds in this map, you put really many of custom hitsounds to your map, but you are not using them much. Also the sliderslider and slidertick were both not audiable in some parts of the map. It might maybe be considered as unrankable if you don't increase the volume of some ticks a bit, so they are at least barely hearable. For example 00:18:125 on easy - Cannot here sliderslider or slidertick = Unrankable, while using 30% volume as normal, it is clearly hearable, solving the issue easily. That's probably all I'd want to say. You have to solve the issue with these hitsounds and insane needs some more improvement. Essay mods ftw

updoot

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damn it double post

Fizz

275 posts

Joined September 2013

Fizz 2014-08-29T02:43:52+00:00

Wafu wrote:
Smug's Hard

00:21:158 (1) - You should decrease the slider's lenght by 1/4 as you mapped it to empty place - There is nothing. If you find this creative and did it on purpose - No it's not. The real drum in music is on 00:21:664, so the slider is also supposed to end here. It doesn't even play that well and overmapping is not the thing that would improve the map's quality, but decrease. | since so many people have modded this slider I'll finally cave in and change it ;w;
00:24:529 (1,2) - It looks really lazy to use that much repeats on 1/2 slider. I don't fine any creativity here, just lazines or no idea. If you want the repeats, use for example 1/2 slider with 1 repeat, circle, 1/2 slider with repeat, circle, so it would not look that boring. | got mods about this too so I'll change it
00:42:057 (3) - You might map it so it has some flow and move it on 271;170 or similar, actually it forces player to go against the current flow. Mentioning this, because you mapped the whole map in this flow. | yup, changed
Increase AR to 8. I really felt the approach circles are moving really slowly, what's a bit weird to play. Hard on this BPM should definitely have a bit higher AR. | only changed by .2 but did it to make it clean

Fine diff, through I didn't like the wrong rhythm on the slider I mentioned above, else there are just minor issues, I'd say there is nothing specially wrong.

ty for the mod~

guineaQuQ stole my updoot theme

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Moo-Chan

418 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Moo-Chan 2014-08-29T06:04:53+00:00

Wafu wrote:

Red - Unrankable
Blue - Highly recommended
Black - Suggestion
General

Fix inconsistency with colors, either make them same as on insane or make it same on insane as on other difficulties. I don't see a reason of chaning the colors in insane diff. Background didn't change, storyboard didn't change, simply nothing visually changes only colors, they should definitely be same within all the diffs unless others are taiko, or there is bg/storyboard change. Ok, I fixed them

Insane

Increase HP by 1 since the gap between hard is quite low and additionally, it is good when OD and HP is balanced. OD is currently requiring quite a good accuracy, but if you don't hit the note accurately and get 100, it drains almost nothing. OD and HP are that well designed, so having them the same increased the difficulty more efficiently than increasing one more than the second one. Ok
00:21:833 - 00:43:068 - This part is mapped so insensibly. The map is same jumpy/lively as the rest of the map, but the hack, where's the logic? Song is actually much calmer than the rest, it deserves to have less jumps than the rest, or eventually you can decrese the spacing here, but this no-change doesn't really fit the song. If more people tell me to change this section, then I will
01:06:327 (5,6) - Your jumps are really missing the flow or sensibility. This pattern is just really much random, at least follow the flow when you want to make a random pattern, but you really followed nothing sensible. Ok, fixed (I hope)
01:27:900 - 01:46:945 - This part should be also calmer than the rest of the map, it is just same jumpy as the rest, what makes really no-sense. Follow the suggestion I gave you a little higher.
Also I noticed one, quite critical thing. You are using slider velocity changes randomly. For example 00:33:967 (3), 00:36:495 (8) etc. There's no reason to change the SV, keeping it normal would be clearly fine, use it only in parts where the music is really calmer - not for one slider.

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pregnant_man

2,494 posts

Joined August 2012

pregnant_man 2014-08-29T08:01:32+00:00

[Insane]
You should increase volum at beginning a bit (10-15%) because hitsounds it's kinda difficult to audible them
00:04:304 (6) - NC because of downbeat + it will be help with reading that anti-jump
00:15:091 (7) - same
00:17:788 (4,5) - i'm really dislike that you killing all the movement wich you made before with this stack. You should make a jump here (you could try something like that)

SPOILER

00:19:810 (1,2,3,4,5) - doesn't flow well, doesn't look well. Also i do not get why you reduced spacing here 00:20:316 (4,5) - music don't calls for this. Soo some suggestions :

SPOILER

00:21:158 (7,8) - try to increase spacing here and make the jump bigger, it'll be more fitting because of music

SPOILER

00:24:529 (1,2,3,4,5) - that star looks messy
00:26:889 (5,1) - waay too close, well it's still playable, tho, but not really enjoyable if you ask me. Better stack them or increase the spacing
00:35:990 (5,6,7,8) - flows kinda bad. Actually something like this :

SPOILER

will flow better and more intuitive. You could try something like this if you want add someBIGTASTYjumps :

SPOILER

00:38:686 (3,4,5,6) - huum try to make a better rhomb because current pattern looks kinda messy :

SPOILER

00:48:799 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - justapatternsuggestion :

SPOILER

00:51:495 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - increase spacing between these "triangles" because it feels kinda ant-ijupmy
01:09:024 (6) - NC again
01:19:136 (5) - this tic should be mapped.
01:37:001 (3,4) - consider deleting theese notes it'll make rhytms more interesting. Moreover, music "stops" here
01:37:338 (1) - 01:46:945 (9) - you should start decreasing spacings from 01:37:338 (1) - because music actually starts to calm down here

Well, this diff not really bad, but needs some improvement.

[Smug's Hard]
00:28:574 (1) - should be 1/2. 1/1 sounds not really good because these dilidilidongdong sounds way to strong to be unmapped

SPOILER

00:28:574 (1) - well, you still can make sv change here like you did earlier, because it's sounds same with other moments
00:34:979 (3) - you overloading calm part with these hitsounds, please remove them
00:43:406 (1) - now hitsounds sounds weak for much faster part

00:49:473 (3) - nonononono. You should map downbeat with circle or start slider on that thing, because new music part starting here and it should be emphazed stronger
01:03:630 (1) - it will be much cooler if you increase sv a bit, you did great with emphazing this moment but it's not really enjoayble ingame. Use something around 0.75. Also remove clap from tail and use softsample for this
01:04:304 (1) - soft finish sounds much better
01:45:428 (1) - add circle on downbit and start spinner at blue tic.

I love that your diff pretty neat and way how you emphazing music changes. This diff almost ready, but sv at end too slow and it's not really enjoyabe, try to increase it a bit.

[S.Boat's Normal]
00:47:787 (5) - hitsound on slidertic without any reason to do this, remove it please
00:55:877 (5) - same
00:58:574 (5) - same
tbh these slidertics just don't fits with song

Well, no real problems with this diff except it's really boring. Try to add some 1/2s it will help.

[guineaQ's Easy]
00:43:406 (1,1,1) - Downbeats should be hitable, because leaving them without good emphasize making your rhytms awkward to play it
00:50:821 (3) - add a note here because music sounds kinda strong here
00:58:237 (3) - things about downbeats

CHECK DOWNBEATS PLEASE

Still needs work.

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

smallboat 2014-08-30T04:47:39+00:00

Pjecoo wrote:
Hello.

Normal:
00:50:484 (5) - Make this slider more curvier. (I mean, remove the red point, and replace it with normal.)
00:55:877 (5) - ^

Sorry,will keep it,but I will notice the Normal rhythm in next map,thank suggestion~ !

Good Luck!

Wafu wrote:
S.Boat's Normal

To fit the rhythm, you should move 01:46:945 (1) on 01:47:113, it feels really early now,
since the fading sound which spinner should follow is not hearable on 01:46:945, but on 01:47:113,
I think it's insensible to follow nothing. Just look on insane, it fits the sound perfectly. Okay,spinner haed move to 01:47:113 here.
I really like hot you kept your whole map consistent in spacing,
but these straight sliders have right spacing, but the visual gap is inconsistent - Everywhere else it is consistent,
so I'd consider wasting a minute to fix this minor visual issue. On 01:02:956 (2,3) and 00:42:057 (5,6).
It would be best if you'd make even just the visual gap same as distance snap. Just look and compare the distance between the slider bodies and between
00:42:731 (6,1). It looks a bit inconsistent, and it would look more professional if you fixed these gaps so the map would be whole consistent. Move a bit.
Nice rhythm, patterns and flow, maybe just harder than regular normal, but after Easy is harder than regular easy it is clearly okay! Okay,Thanks mod ~ !

EvilElvis wrote:
[S.Boat's Normal]
00:47:787 (5) - hitsound on slidertic without any reason to do this, remove it please Fixed
00:55:877 (5) - same Fixed
00:58:574 (5) - same Fixed
tbh these slidertics just don't fits with song Indeed have a bit bored..then I will notice the Normal rhythm in next map,thank suggestion~ !

Thanks EvilElvis ~ !

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guineaQ

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guineaQ 2014-08-30T07:16:46+00:00

EvilElvis wrote:
[guineaQ's Easy]
00:43:406 (1,1,1) - Downbeats should be hitable, because leaving them without good emphasize making your rhytms awkward to play it
00:50:821 (3) - add a note here because music sounds kinda strong here
00:58:237 (3) - things about downbeats

CHECK DOWNBEATS PLEASE YES SIR

Still needs work. I also believe that every downbeats should hitable, but I had to make a compromise between difficulty vs design, I added hitable objects to downbeats where possible or seemed necessary

updoot powa

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Moo-Chan

418 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Moo-Chan 2014-08-30T20:14:08+00:00

EvilElvis wrote:
[Insane]
You should increase volum at beginning a bit (10-15%) because hitsounds it's kinda difficult to audible them ok
00:04:304 (6) - NC because of downbeat + it will be help with reading that anti-jump fixed
00:15:091 (7) - same ^
00:17:788 (4,5) - i'm really dislike that you killing all the movement wich you made before with this stack. You should make a jump here (you could try something like that) alright, I took your idea
SPOILER
00:19:810 (1,2,3,4,5) - doesn't flow well, doesn't look well. Also i do not get why you reduced spacing here 00:20:316 (4,5) - music don't calls for this. Soo some suggestions : took them all
SPOILER

00:21:158 (7,8) - try to increase spacing here and make the jump bigger, it'll be more fitting because of music fixed
SPOILER
00:24:529 (1,2,3,4,5) - that star looks messy made it more neater
00:26:889 (5,1) - waay too close, well it's still playable, tho, but not really enjoyable if you ask me. Better stack them or increase the spacing stacked them
00:35:990 (5,6,7,8) - flows kinda bad. Actually something like this : ok
SPOILER
will flow better and more intuitive. You could try something like this if you want add someBIGTASTYjumps :
SPOILER
00:38:686 (3,4,5,6) - huum try to make a better rhomb because current pattern looks kinda messy : cleaned it up
SPOILER
00:48:799 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - justapatternsuggestion : I think it fixed it
SPOILER
00:51:495 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - increase spacing between these "triangles" because it feels kinda ant-ijupmy ok
01:09:024 (6) - NC again alright
01:19:136 (5) - this tic should be mapped. ok
01:37:001 (3,4) - consider deleting theese notes it'll make rhytms more interesting. Moreover, music "stops" here eh, it feels empty without them
01:37:338 (1) - 01:46:945 (9) - you should start decreasing spacings from 01:37:338 (1) - because music actually starts to calm down here fixed

Well, this diff not really bad, but needs some improvement. yea i know ;w;

Still needs work.

Ty <3

Fizz

275 posts

Joined September 2013

Fizz 2014-08-31T03:59:19+00:00

EvilElvis wrote:
[Smug's Hard]
00:28:574 (1) - should be 1/2. 1/1 sounds not really good because these dilidilidongdong sounds way to strong to be unmapped okay, changed
SPOILER

00:28:574 (1) - well, you still can make sv change here like you did earlier, because it's sounds same with other moments
00:34:979 (3) - you overloading calm part with these hitsounds, please remove them
00:43:406 (1) - now hitsounds sounds weak for much faster part I hope i fixed the hitsounds
00:49:473 (3) - nonononono. You should map downbeat with circle or start slider on that thing, because new music part starting here and it should be emphazed stronger done
01:03:630 (1) - it will be much cooler if you increase sv a bit, you did great with emphazing this moment but it's not really enjoayble ingame. Use something around 0.75. Also remove clap from tail and use softsample for this yup, done
01:04:304 (1) - soft finish sounds much better I prefer clap
01:45:428 (1) - add circle on downbit and start spinner at blue tic. started spinner at red tick

I love that your diff pretty neat and way how you emphazing music changes. This diff almost ready, but sv at end too slow and it's not really enjoyabe, try to increase it a bit. thanks <3, but I like it being slow at the end because I think it's a good "you did it!" kinda section

thanks for mod~

updoot

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Squigly

449 posts

Joined August 2013

Squigly 2014-09-01T05:09:10+00:00

ey babe
i gotchyo mod rite heer

dis is onli insaen as requeztd

00:17:113 (7) - make this spacing consistent to the others, it looks like you accidently moved it
00:17:282 (1,2,3,4,5) - this could be a bit prettier considering most similar combos are nice even shapes this looks lik a house, maybe square it a bit more?
00:19:979 (2) - maybe move over to the right and try to make a sexy triangle
00:19:136 (3,4,5,6) - maybe smoother curve?
00:21:833 (1,2,3,4,5) - maybe a bit neater, i honestly am too tired to think of a way S;
00:23:181 (1) - have it lead into the other notes
00:27:226 (1,2,3,4) - more symmetrical to its self? owo
00:31:608 (4,5,6) - i was thinking it would be cool to have the sliders decrease in slider velocity hear a little bit more for each, so that way it has more of an effect coming into the next section. the notes are also descending in tone so it would match that as well.
00:39:361 (1) - to stay consistent to the previous patterns this would need to be longer but thats up to you i suppose it just doesnt look very good when you see 2 long sliders played over beats and then in a similar sounding section you map it to break the consistency already upheld.

im tired, the rest coming after looks much more solid, maybe some little things would look better neater but you know im exhausted ;w;

aigoh

398 posts

Joined February 2014

aigoh 2014-09-01T09:15:30+00:00

Hi from modding queue! This was hard to mod b/c it was already good XD

[Insane]
change volume for timing point to 30%
00:55:203 (7,8,1) - ovemapping? maybe delete 00:55:456 (8)

[Hard]
00:10:035 (5) - move to 00:10:203
01:01:271 (2,3) - DS
01:26:552 (1) - why NC?
01:27:394 (3) - ^ NC here instead
01:26:552 (1,2,3) - ^
00:21:158 (1,1) - DS here is off just a little bit
01:45:597 (1) - whistle. In insane difficulty, there's a whistle.

[normal]
01:25:202 (3) - whistle
01:47:113 (1) - whistle.
01:46:776 (3) - add note/slider here

[notice][Easy]
01:46:102 (1) - whistle
[/noctice]

Moo-Chan

418 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Moo-Chan 2014-09-01T18:09:43+00:00

Squigly wrote:
ey babe
i gotchyo mod rite heer

dis is onli insaen as requeztd
00:17:113 (7) - make this spacing consistent to the others, it looks like you accidently moved it fixed
00:17:282 (1,2,3,4,5) - this could be a bit prettier considering most similar combos are nice even shapes this looks lik a house, maybe square it a bit more? I'll keep it how it is ><
00:19:979 (2) - maybe move over to the right and try to make a sexy triangle ok
00:19:136 (3,4,5,6) - maybe smoother curve? alright
00:21:833 (1,2,3,4,5) - maybe a bit neater, i honestly am too tired to think of a way S; I shall keep it how et is
00:23:181 (1) - have it lead into the other notes ok
00:27:226 (1,2,3,4) - more symmetrical to its self? owo sure
00:31:608 (4,5,6) - i was thinking it would be cool to have the sliders decrease in slider velocity hear a little bit more for each, so that way it has more of an effect coming into the next section. the notes are also descending in tone so it would match that as well. I dont wanna mess with the SV anymore than I already have
00:39:361 (1) - to stay consistent to the previous patterns this would need to be longer but thats up to you i suppose it just doesnt look very good when you see 2 long sliders played over beats and then in a similar sounding section you map it to break the consistency already upheld. I'll keep
im tired, the rest coming after looks much more solid, maybe some little things would look better neater but you know im exhausted ;w; its okay~

mangocurry wrote:
Hi from modding queue! This was hard to mod b/c it was already good XD

[Insane]
change volume for timing point to 30% I'll keep it where it is
00:55:203 (7,8,1) - ovemapping? maybe delete 00:55:456 (8) fixed

Thanks guys <3

arronchu1207

805 posts

Joined December 2012

arronchu1207 2014-09-10T07:53:17+00:00

Hi M4M from queue

[Easy]
00:07:001 (2,1) - How about do a blanket here？
00:15:091 (4,1) - blanket better
00:25:203 (2,1) - ^
01:10:372 (1) - I think this slider is weird
01:14:417 (3) - ^
01:46:102 (1) - ^
[Normal]

00:39:360 (3) - How abou Ctrl+J and place it to x220 y116 ?
00:53:518 (5) - make it curve

[Hard]
I think AR7 is enough (or 7.5)
00:55:203 (3,1,2) - Try this ↓

this

[Insane]
HP-1 ?
00:05:653 (3,1) - Try blanket better
00:33:967 (3) - ^
00:18:799 (2) - How about Ctrl+H and place it to original place ?
00:38:349 (2) - How about Ctrl+J and place it to original place ?
00:42:731 (4) - ^
01:36:158 (10) - ^

[]

sorry for my poor English ;w;;;;
Good Luck >w<~

Fizz

275 posts

Joined September 2013

Fizz 2014-09-10T10:32:28+00:00

arronchu1207 wrote:
[Hard]
I think AR7 is enough (or 7.5) the song is fast enough for AR8
00:55:203 (3,1,2) - Try this ↓ I don't see any noticeable difference, so I don't know what you mean
this

thank you for the mod, anyway~

I did some changes on my own

updoot

osu file format v13

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AudioFilename: DJ Genericname - Dango Dango Daikazokou DnB.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 64304
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 41046,64975,86548,91941,97334,108121
DistanceSpacing: 1.6
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Dango Dango Daikazoku (Drum and Bass Remix)
TitleUnicode:Dango Dango Daikazoku (Drum and Bass Remix)
Artist:DJ Genericname
ArtistUnicode:DJ Genericname
Creator:Moo-Chan
Version:Smug's Hard
Source:Clannad
Tags:chata ed ending liquid DNB Adam Whitton guineaq smallboat smug-
BeatmapID:467603
BeatmapSetID:196813

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

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guineaQ

1,588 posts

Joined December 2013

guineaQ 2014-09-10T11:30:06+00:00

arronchu1207 wrote:
Hi M4M from queue

blue - applied
purple - consideration will be given/unsure
red - NOPE

[Easy]
00:07:001 (2,1) - How about do a blanket here？(2) blankets beginning of 00:04:304 (2) -
00:15:091 (4,1) - blanket better ? it's fine
00:25:203 (2,1) - ^ derp
01:10:372 (1) - I think this slider is weird I think it plays fine desu
01:14:417 (3) - ^ it would be boring if we don't have stuffs like those
01:46:102 (1) - ^ let's have some eye candies for newbies

sorry for my poor English ;w;;;;
Good Luck >w<~

update

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Kinomi

1,229 posts

Joined August 2012

Kinomi 2014-09-12T03:15:35+00:00

General
rhythm is anyway tedious in the beginning. insane

Insane

12345678

00:05:316 (3,1) - a bit ugly....

SPOILER

00:15:765 (1) - do what you do like 00:40:035 (1,2,1) - , i think it fits the song better, of course you should change the next pattern if you decide to change

SPOILER

00:27:057 this empty is a bit tricky the drum is obviously continuous, adding a note here is better
00:51:833 (3,1) - it's better to separate them to avoid misreading. you can try some ctrl g like this
00:48:462 (5,6) - their spacing should be bigger since the piano tone is higher and higher.
00:58:911 an empty here can show the piano better, so you can remove 00:58:911 (3) - and stack 00:59:080 (4) - on tail of 00:58:574 (2) - than adjust the placement of 00:59:248 (5,6) -
01:28:574 (7,8) - i think they are not perfectly paralleled

00:11:046 (1) - this finish doesn't fit, try sc2 whistle
00:29:922 (1) - remove whistle on tail, and whistle on its head than add whistle on 00:30:597 (3) - head, 00:31:271 (1,4,5,6) - whistle each white line.
when you don't know how to use whistle , you can follow the piano or other tracks.
00:36:664 you miss a downbeat here, kinda confusing

SPOILER

00:44:080 (5,6) - whistle on white lines as you do 00:46:608 (5,6,7,8) -
00:21:833 - 00:29:585 lack of whistle, follow the piano and add some whistle
i can't catch all hitsound problems, remember that good hitsound can fit one or more tracks in music, or it can create its own track.
than mod your hitsounds yourself

guineaQ's Easy
00:09:361 (3) - whistle on head
00:54:192 (1) - finish
00:43:406 after this the diff lacks of whistle
01:37:675 (1) - after this the song still has 2,4 clap, i think you should add clap then
rhythm is a bit hard in some last parts

S.Boat's Normal
一开始的前奏阶段其实不用24白线都下whistle,像00:00:260 (1,2,3,4) - 这两小节一样只在第4条白线下whistle就够了，24whistle很吵，而且有些滑条带过了第二根白线，突然少了音效感觉别扭。
后面音效和easy一样，whistle美丽，跟着钢琴多加点
01:46:776 (1) - 这应该大白线开始转啊

Smug's Hard
00:02:451 (2) - unnecessary jump i think
00:07:675 (2,1,2) - same spacing but different empties, which leads to misreading
00:21:158 (1) - 00:23:181 (1) - 00:25:877 (1) - add whistle can help people read the sv change more easier, and whistle sounds good here
01:23:855 (1) - whistle on head is better
01:31:945 - 01:37:338 though the music is not so fierce here， the piano is still easy to hear, at least add some whistle on sownbeats
00:20:821 (3,1) - separate them, kinda hard to read the empty and sv change

that's all

Last edited by Kinomi 2014-09-12T06:03:06+00:00, edited 5 times in total.

Moo-Chan

418 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Moo-Chan 2014-09-12T03:34:53+00:00

Tsukuyomi wrote:
General
rhythm is anyway tedious in the beginning. insane

Insane
00:05:316 (3,1) - a bit ugly.... made it neater
SPOILER
00:15:765 (1) - do what you do like 00:40:035 (1,2,1) - , i think it fits the song better, of course you should change the next pattern if you decide to change i think ill keep it how it is
SPOILER
00:27:057 this empty is a bit tricky the drum is obviously continuous, adding a note here is better i feel like it wouldn't fit because the part before this doesn't have a note either
00:51:833 (3,1) - it's better to separate them to avoid misreading. you can try some ctrl g like this fixed
00:48:462 (5,6) - their spacing should be bigger since the piano tone is higher and higher. done
00:58:911 an empty here can show the piano better, so you can remove 00:58:911 (3) - and stack 00:59:080 (4) - on tail of 00:58:574 (2) - than adjust the placement of 00:59:248 (5,6) - keep how it is
01:28:574 (7,8) - i think they are not perfectly paralleled think its fixed

have a rest. it's too far from my last mod, i even don't know how to mod now

thanks~

Narcissu

1,744 posts

Joined August 2012

Narcissu 2014-09-12T09:25:24+00:00

Xelie‘s request

BG ：1366*768 better than now……

why not use custom color …… i suggest ↓↓↓

SPOILER

Combo1 : 255,255,128
Combo2 : 0,255,255
Combo3 : 128,128,255
Combo4 : 255,128,255

[insane]

HP - 2 …… play whit Hard Rack will fail if player can't get 98~100% ACC

00:21:327 (8,9) - music stop here …… so i suggest you stack note , not jump …… and …… about insane diff , i suggest you use consistent rhythm only if music stop . it's mean use 1/2 slider or 3/4 slider instead note like 00:00:765 (2) - 00:03:462 (2) - 00:04:304 (1,2) - …… .

00:24:192 (5,1) - too close …… maybe player can’t judge it's 1/1 here

00:33:967 - i dislike 0.75*SV …… It is not obvious , and 00:39:192 - is same , use same way if you wish 0.75*SV in 00:33:967 (3,8) -

00:40:372 (2) - NC …… point antijump

01:48:799 - delete whistle …… i think music need fade out

that's all …… star ~

Moo-Chan

418 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Moo-Chan 2014-09-13T01:43:42+00:00

Narcissu wrote:
Xelie‘s request

BG ：1366*768 better than now…… ok ill resize

why not use custom color …… i suggest ↓↓↓ sure

SPOILER
Combo1 : 255,255,128
Combo2 : 0,255,255
Combo3 : 128,128,255
Combo4 : 255,128,255

[insane]

HP - 2 …… play whit Hard Rack will fail if player can't get 98~100% ACC im gonna keep it where it is

00:21:327 (8,9) - music stop here …… so i suggest you stack note , not jump the piano gets higher in tune, and if i were to make it scak, it wouldnt flow with what i had before …… and …… about insane diff , i suggest you use consistent rhythm only if music stop . it's mean use 1/2 slider or 3/4 slider instead note like 00:00:765 (2) - 00:03:462 (2) - 00:04:304 (1,2) - …… . i feel like adding sliders here would make the map seem overmapped

00:24:192 (5,1) - too close …… maybe player can’t judge it's 1/1 here fixed

00:33:967 - i dislike 0.75*SV …… It is not obvious , and 00:39:192 - is same , use same way if you wish 0.75*SV in 00:33:967 (3,8) - took away the 0.75*SV and did some things of my own

00:40:372 (2) - NC …… point antijump fixed

01:48:799 - delete whistle …… i think music need fade out fixed

that's all …… star ~ thank you~

Thanks!

Midge

475 posts

Joined December 2012

Midge 2014-09-13T03:09:47+00:00

m4m <3

[Easy]

00:34:642 - add a note here, there's a piano sound
00:45:765 (2,1) - idk about this pattern. it works, but it's confusing. i'd strongly recommend following the piano, but it seems you're already set on the drums
00:51:495 (1,2,3,4) - make these parallel http://puu.sh/bwKqT/3b61dcbd50.jpg
00:55:203 (2,3,4) - looks wonky, move 4 to x:360 y:80
01:04:304 (2) - move to x:196 y:84 (looks neater)
01:17:113 (2) - should follow the drums instead of the slider
01:39:698 (5,1) - swap nc
01:41:046 (3) - nc

[Normal]

00:08:349 (1) - blanket instead of usign a red anchor
00:09:697 (3,4) - not parallel (proof: http://puu.sh/bwKFb/90d80b0c56.jpg)
00:35:652 (2) - sorry, nazi mod, move red anchor to x:428 y:356 http://puu.sh/bwKLH/cc3cabe79d.jpg
01:34:642 (1,2) - blanket looks off
01:47:113 (1) - start at 01:46:439

[Hard]

first dt runthrough and replay

http://puu.sh/bwL3w/39d9732961.osr

00:07:001 (1) - move to x:184 y:304 (semi-blankets 4)
00:17:788 (1,2,3) - stack 2 and 3 on 1?
00:19:810 (1) - rotate this a little bit http://puu.sh/bwLmh/df824ecc44.jpg
01:25:372 (5,6,1) - eeehh i wouldn't have these stack

[Insane]

first runthrough and replay

http://puu.sh/bwLfS/6b35bfc831.osr

00:01:608 (6) - nc?

eh, i think this map is fine

Good set mate o/

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

smallboat 2014-09-14T12:57:06+00:00

Sorry very late reply this time x_x"

To mangocurry : Sounds like fine,so no change it.
To arronchu1207 : 第一項改了
Thanks mod ~ !

Tsukuyomi wrote:
General

S.Boat's Normal
一开始的前奏阶段其实不用24白线都下whistle,像00:00:260 (1,2,3,4) - 这两小节一样只在第4条白线下whistle就够了，24whistle很吵，而且有些滑条带过了第二根白线，突然少了音效感觉别扭。恩，前面調了點音效
后面音效和easy一样，whistle美丽，跟着钢琴多加点是指哪裡?
01:46:776 (1) - 这应该大白线开始转啊好，fixed.

感謝BBQ了~ !

Midge wrote:
m4m <3

[Normal]

00:08:349 (1) - blanket instead of usign a red anchor fixed
00:09:697 (3,4) - not parallel (proof: http://puu.sh/bwKFb/90d80b0c56.jpg) Copy (3) and fixed.
00:35:652 (2) - sorry, nazi mod, move red anchor to x:428 y:356 http://puu.sh/bwKLH/cc3cabe79d.jpg Nothing,fixed.
01:34:642 (1,2) - blanket looks off Move a bit.
01:47:113 (1) - start at 01:46:439 NO

Thanks mod ~ !

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Fizz

275 posts

Joined September 2013

Fizz 2014-09-16T07:54:18+00:00

Midge wrote:
[Hard]

first dt runthrough and replay

http://puu.sh/bwL3w/39d9732961.osr

00:07:001 (1) - move to x:184 y:304 (semi-blankets 4) done
00:17:788 (1,2,3) - stack 2 and 3 on 1? nah
00:19:810 (1) - rotate this a little bit http://puu.sh/bwLmh/df824ecc44.jpg done
01:25:372 (5,6,1) - eeehh i wouldn't have these stack done

Good set mate o/

Tsukuyomi wrote:
Smug's Hard
00:02:451 (2) - unnecessary jump i think changed
00:07:675 (2,1,2) - same spacing but different empties, which leads to misreading changed
00:21:158 (1) - 00:23:181 (1) - 00:25:877 (1) - add whistle can help people read the sv change more easier, and whistle sounds good here
01:23:855 (1) - whistle on head is better
01:31:945 - 01:37:338 though the music is not so fierce here， the piano is still easy to hear, at least add some whistle on sownbeats don't like the whistle
00:20:821 (3,1) - separate them, kinda hard to read the empty and sv change hard to move

thanks for the mods, I'm slow at replying to them >_<

updoot

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Maruyu

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Joined July 2013

Maruyu 2014-09-23T11:42:13+00:00

Hello!~ here from Strawberry Mousse modding queue~

Let's get it started, shall we?~

Guinea Pig's Easy

00:00:260 (1) - The movement on 00:00:260 (1,2,3,1) - seems a bit weirdish to me, mostly because of the angle on that triangle with the tail and 2 circles on 00:00:260 (1,2,3). I'd solve this issue by just placing 00:00:260 (1) like this, what this does is allowing a better curve, which ends up in relieving a bit the cursor at 00:02:956 (1) because of the upward movement:
Example
00:09:024 (2,3) - I would advise against the usage of this 1/2 rhythm. You can easily simplify this into a 1/1 repeating slider starting at 00:09:024 (2) and ending at 00:10:035, it feels much better at least to me.
00:40:035 (2) - Consistency!~ Either remove this circle or add one at 00:37:338 and 00:34:642. I'd personally have you remove it for simplicity's sake
I feel like the way you mapped the pre-kiai section is a bit questionable; not because of the 1/2 density that shows up because of the song (which is OK), but because of some patterns. Some to point out would be:
00:49:810 (2,1,2,1,2) - This feels a bit too clumped up together. But the pattern with 00:51:495 (1,2,3,4) - is what I really dislike. it feels a bit too sudden as a movement change for an easy difficulty.
00:59:585 (1,2,3,1) - There's also no reason for your density to go down so much at this point, the song is exactly the same as before and this time you fill it with a big 1/1 reverse for no sudden change in the song. As I said before, consistency!~
I'm gonna take up on the suggestion above this one: your kiai time should usually be the hardest part in your diff, with a more highlighted and noticeable rhythm. The fact that you just fill it up with sliders feels wrong to me, and I'd simply advise you to go through it again and make sure if you want to keep it or not. I advise you not to.
01:39:698 (5,3) - This is a very confusing stack due to the 180º cursor movement change. I'd change it by just reorganizing the following notes around a bit.

smallyacht's Normal

hi smallboat ~w~

I believe this diff is missing the slidertick hitsound present on the other diff(s), is this intentional? D:
00:17:451 (2,3) - You should totally take these and move it a bit downwards: avoids the overlap with 00:15:765 (4,2), gives you a triangle with 00:15:765 (4,1,2) (4's head) and makes 00:17:788 (3,4,1) that much more smooth~ do it!
***NAZI ALERT*** Move 00:20:146 (2) to X:348 Y:321, the triangle is slightly off~
01:46:776 - No note here?

Nice diff!~

Smoge's Hard

00:02:451 (2,3) - If anything, you'd want to keep this snapped with 00:01:608 (1), though keeping increased spacing between 00:02:619 (3,1) would be fine. The reason would be that the jump is felt between 00:02:619 (3,1), but not really between 00:01:608 (1,2), at least the way I see it. But since you don't use increased spacing in the next couple objects, I'd just snap everything because consistency~ Same for 00:11:046 (1). And while you would think that it IS consistent, take a look at 00:05:653 (1), 00:13:743 (1), 00:15:091 (1), 00:16:439 (1). The drum hit is the same! Of course, you can always choose to increase spacing on all cases; in that case go for it, it looks great!~
01:07:170 (3,4) - First off, you need to invert the rhythm here, meaning it's circle then slider. Then I'd advise you to stack 3 and 4, like this. It looks really good~:
Example
01:07:675 (1,2,3) - Hmm, try something like this suggestion, I feel like it improves this section a bit. Right now I don't really like the movement at 01:07:675 (1,2)
Example

I actually just went ahead and searched for your name on the beatmap page. I'm not quite sure for how long you've been mapping, or if the mods the set currently has boosted the difficulty's quality this much, but this looks good. I'd like to leave a word of encouragement, good work!~

Insane

00:00:765 (2) - Ehh, this feels a bit meh... I don't have any suggestions for this, so you should just keep it I don't really like that stack, just wanted to point that out~
00:05:316 (3) - This spacing is a bit illogical, considering that the song has no changes between 00:05:147 (2,3). The spacing increase should be used if anything between 00:05:316 (3,1), otherwise change 00:05:147 (2,3)'s spacing to 1.5x, same as 00:04:979 (1,2).
00:05:653 (1,2) - Same as first~ ;w;
00:08:012 (10,1) - ^
01:07:507 (4) - try this at X:212 Y:100, feels great~
01:17:788 (5) - Feels a bit off place to me because of 01:17:451 (4) - 's curve. Try something like this and see if you like it:
Example

Looks great overall, good job~

If you have any question, or if you think I was a bit rude, or you just have feedback on my modding, let me know! Good luck with ranking this!~

Fizz

275 posts

Joined September 2013

Fizz 2014-09-23T14:23:33+00:00

Yuzu- wrote:
Hello!~ here from Strawberry Mousse modding queue~

Let's get it started, shall we?~ yes we shall

Smoge's Hard
00:02:451 (2,3) - If anything, you'd want to keep this snapped with 00:01:608 (1), though keeping increased spacing between 00:02:619 (3,1) would be fine. The reason would be that the jump is felt between 00:02:619 (3,1), but not really between 00:01:608 (1,2), at least the way I see it. But since you don't use increased spacing in the next couple objects, I'd just snap everything because consistency~ Same for 00:11:046 (1). And while you would think that it IS consistent, take a look at 00:05:653 (1), 00:13:743 (1), 00:15:091 (1), 00:16:439 (1). The drum hit is the same! Of course, you can always choose to increase spacing on all cases; in that case go for it, it looks great!~ moo-chan is a lazy butt and hasn't updated this to my latest version, which changed this to your suggestion anyway :3
01:07:170 (3,4) - First off, you need to invert the rhythm here, meaning it's circle then slider. Then I'd advise you to stack 3 and 4, like this. It looks really good~: yes, i agree
01:07:675 (1,2,3) - Hmm, try something like this suggestion, I feel like it improves this section a bit. Right now I don't really like the movement at 01:07:675 (1,2) I switched up 3, but I kept the flow the same

I actually just went ahead and searched for your name on the beatmap page. I'm not quite sure for how long you've been mapping, or if the mods the set currently has boosted the difficulty's quality this much, but this looks good. I'd like to leave a word of encouragement, good work!~ hey, thanks a lot~ <3

EDIT

updoot

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P A N

2,354 posts

Joined December 2011

P A N 2014-09-24T07:01:04+00:00

SPOILER

12:37 Moo-Chan: hey pan?
12:37 P A N: hey moo moo
12:37 P A N: what is it
12:38 Moo-Chan: hey >< i was just gonna see if you would be able to mod my map or do a m4m with me
12:39 P A N: can I look at your map?
12:39 P A N: I mean which map
12:40 *Moo-Chan is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/472674 DJ Genericname - Dango Dango Daikazoku (Drum and Bass Remix)]
12:40 Moo-Chan: ;w;
12:41 P A N: btw how can you know me?
12:41 Moo-Chan: ive talked to you before o:
12:41 Moo-Chan: i asked you to map an easy for me on this map
12:44 P A N: yea
12:44 P A N: I remember
12:45 Moo-Chan: mhm ;w;
13:03 P A N: irc possible?
13:03 Moo-Chan: yea, irc is fine
13:08 P A N: woops sorry
13:08 P A N: did I mod it before?
13:13 Moo-Chan: uhm
13:13 Moo-Chan: i dont believe so
13:13 Moo-Chan: let me look
13:13 P A N: I already looked
13:13 P A N: don't have my post
13:14 Moo-Chan: alright
13:14 P A N: but I think I suggested you about flow
13:14 P A N: well let's start
13:14 P A N: I heard from death
13:14 Moo-Chan: oh god
13:14 P A N: she said this map is not bubble qualified yet?
13:14 Moo-Chan: how many people did he tell?
13:14 P A N: he told me because
13:14 P A N: I'm modding your map
13:14 Moo-Chan: usw said it wasnt bad
13:15 Moo-Chan: and ahh
13:15 Moo-Chan: uws*
13:15 P A N: yea I know
13:15 P A N: wasn't bad
13:15 P A N: first thing is 00:07:675 (9) - 
13:15 P A N: really not flow well
13:16 Moo-Chan: have any suggestions? ive seen this part show up before, but i cant seem to think of a way to fix it
13:16 P A N: ok believe in me
13:17 Moo-Chan: hm?
13:18 P A N: http://puu.sh/bLGJg/9112a479a7.jpg
13:18 P A N: like here
13:21 P A N: hm
13:21 P A N: don't like it?
13:21 Moo-Chan: i was trying it
13:21 Moo-Chan: so like this?
13:21 Moo-Chan: http://gyazo.com/15f558e984360b86dfff6464373240de
13:22 Moo-Chan: wait
13:22 P A N: ctrl+g the slider
13:22 Moo-Chan: http://gyazo.com/543e18903c8faa40f4bf449e430af6fa
13:22 Moo-Chan: yea, that works c:
13:22 P A N: yea
13:22 P A N: that's right
13:22 P A N: what about it
13:22 P A N: the flow
13:23 P A N: is it flow well?
13:23 Moo-Chan: its nice ^^
13:23 Moo-Chan: yea, it does
13:23 Moo-Chan: so then would i move 00:08:349 (1) -  below 00:08:012 (10) - ?
13:23 P A N: yea below
13:23 P A N: if above it will force the flow
13:23 Moo-Chan: alright
13:25 P A N: and some of your pattern
13:25 P A N: looks not neater
13:25 P A N: but it flow
13:25 Moo-Chan: like what?
13:26 P A N: sec
13:26 Moo-Chan: okay
13:26 P A N: seems like you are really serious about spacing symmetry
13:27 Moo-Chan: i didnt intend to ><
13:28 P A N: I mean 00:13:068 (4,1) - 
13:29 Moo-Chan: hm?
13:30 P A N: not neater
13:30 P A N: but that's not the problem
13:30 P A N: because it still flow well
13:30 Moo-Chan: so should i make it neater? since it flows well
13:31 P A N: if possible
13:31 Moo-Chan: alright
13:32 P A N: any part that most modder complain?
13:32 P A N: or BAT
13:33 P A N: I will help you
13:33 Moo-Chan: does this look any better?
13:33 Moo-Chan: http://gyazo.com/b030425cb56e9c8a42cf2e1a32bf7164
13:34 P A N: wait
13:34 Moo-Chan: and i dont think there was anything inparticuar
13:36 *Moo-Chan is waiting
13:36 P A N: >_>
13:36 Moo-Chan: ;w;
13:37 P A N: http://puu.sh/bLHrC/b4d7fce1c9.jpg there
13:37 P A N: 5 blanket with 3 and 1's tail blanket with 3
13:38 Moo-Chan: alright
13:41 Moo-Chan: like this?
13:41 Moo-Chan: http://gyazo.com/420b8998f34611407f54143ada6d415f
13:41 P A N: kind of
13:42 P A N: make sure 5 blanekt with 3 and 1's tail blanket with 3
13:42 P A N: but you can avoid that too
13:42 P A N: not that problem
13:42 Moo-Chan: thats the part i dont understand ;w;
13:42 P A N: I see
13:42 P A N: maybe my english too suck
13:43 P A N: http://puu.sh/bLHFA/42753f8028.jpg
13:43 Moo-Chan: nah, your english is fine, i just understand the placements of the sliders
13:43 P A N: here
13:43 P A N: like this
13:43 P A N: 5 blanket with 3
13:45 Moo-Chan: better?
13:45 Moo-Chan: http://gyazo.com/78ccf074c6a087d8c69c624775ec305b
13:45 P A N: nice
13:46 Moo-Chan: c:
13:50 P A N: this part is hard to fix by chat
13:50 Moo-Chan: which?
13:50 P A N: 00:19:136 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 
13:51 Moo-Chan: uhm
13:51 Moo-Chan: evilelvis suggested that part
13:53 P A N: may you save, update and copy this code http://puu.sh/bLI2b/1718f2ed4f.txt ?
13:53 P A N: so if you don't like you can update to revive your old one
13:53 Moo-Chan: so, update the map then try it?
13:54 P A N: submit
13:54 P A N: and try this code
13:54 Moo-Chan: okay
13:54 P A N: lol I mention all part that people complain? XD
13:54 P A N: even BAT
13:55 Moo-Chan: i think so ;w;
13:56 Moo-Chan: oh wow
13:56 Moo-Chan: it looks nice
13:56 P A N: oh really?
13:56 Moo-Chan: mhm :3
13:57 P A N: I still keep your rhythm and spacing way so don't worry
13:57 P A N: I just make it neater
13:57 Moo-Chan: yea, it looks a lot better
13:57 P A N: well try to check it for the whole diff
13:57 P A N: make them neater
13:57 P A N: if have any question you can ask me
13:58 Moo-Chan: alright c:
13:58 P A N: I will check again
13:58 Moo-Chan: thank ypu <3
13:58 Moo-Chan: you*
13:58 P A N: you are lucky that I'm in a good mood today XD
13:58 Moo-Chan: are you gonna post to thread? or
13:58 P A N: I will
13:59 Moo-Chan: okay, and yes i  am lucky :P
13:59 P A N: already 11pm for you?
13:59 P A N: so maybe you will off soon?
13:59 Moo-Chan: uhmm
14:00 Moo-Chan: yea, in like 1 hour
14:00 P A N: I post first then

irc mod

Natsu

8,076 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2014-09-25T00:50:43+00:00

some suggestions in IRC

SPOILER

2014-09-24 16:49 Moo-Chan: hey natsu?
2014-09-24 16:49 Natsu: Hello
2014-09-24 16:50 Moo-Chan: hai, uhm, do you think you could take a look at my map? it doesnt have to be a mod
2014-09-24 16:50 Natsu: ok wait me a bit
2014-09-24 16:52 Moo-Chan: alright
2014-09-24 17:38 Natsu: you still there xD?
2014-09-24 17:38 Moo-Chan: yes :3
2014-09-24 17:38 Natsu: what is your map
2014-09-24 17:39 Moo-Chan: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/472674 DJ Genericname - Dango Dango Daikazoku (Drum and Bass Remix)]
2014-09-24 18:36 Natsu: there are not much things to point out though
2014-09-24 18:36 Moo-Chan: so, does that mean the map isnt bad?
2014-09-24 18:37 Natsu: is not bad, but there are few things like combo spam and not consistent comboing, plus some missing hitsounds
2014-09-24 18:37 Natsu: 00:04:979 (1) -  I don't think this combo is necesary
2014-09-24 18:38 Moo-Chan: i didnt have it nc'd before but people were saying to
2014-09-24 18:38 Moo-Chan: oh well, i removed the nc
2014-09-24 18:38 Natsu: 00:05:653 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) -  in this part your combing is not consistent IMO, since you have some following every 1 stanza before, but here you suddenly changed to 2
2014-09-24 18:39 Natsu: 00:11:046 (1) -  finish and whistle sound a bit not good IMO, maybe remove the whistle here >:
2014-09-24 18:39 Moo-Chan: huh, i never noticed that and alright
2014-09-24 18:40 Natsu: 00:15:765 (1) -  same with the combos, spamming them just mess up the HP drain
2014-09-24 18:40 Natsu: 00:29:922 (1) -  in parts like this you are missing whistles following the instrument
2014-09-24 18:40 Natsu: 00:30:597 (3) -  ^
2014-09-24 18:41 Natsu: 00:40:035 (1,1,1) -  same with combos here, I can read this without the spam tho
2014-09-24 18:42 Moo-Chan: so make those 3 one combo?
2014-09-24 18:42 Natsu: yeah 
2014-09-24 18:42 Moo-Chan: alright
2014-09-24 18:42 Natsu: 00:48:799 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) -  here you are overusing whistles, and doesn't sound good imo
2014-09-24 18:43 Natsu: 01:21:748 - should be a triplet here also
2014-09-24 18:44 Natsu: oh HP 8 is kinda evil in this kinds of maps, reduce it to 7
2014-09-24 18:45 Moo-Chan: would i remove the triple before it then?
2014-09-24 18:45 Moo-Chan: and alright
2014-09-24 18:45 Natsu: nah both are fine, since this song have a lot of triplets, idk if you played the ranked version before
2014-09-24 18:45 Moo-Chan: yea, i have
2014-09-24 18:46 Natsu: well that's all for now, I guess you need to find some hitsound mods
2014-09-24 18:47 Moo-Chan: okay
2014-09-24 18:47 Natsu: but yeah this have potencial, maybe I'll do a ull mod when I finish my other request
2014-09-24 18:48 Moo-Chan: yay c: i hope so~

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

smallboat 2014-09-25T03:49:08+00:00

Yuzu- wrote:
smallyacht's Normal

hi smallboat ~w~ o /

I believe this diff is missing the slidertick hitsound present on the other diff(s), is this intentional? D: Well,feel sounds fine,s okeep it now...xD
00:17:451 (2,3) - You should totally take these and move it a bit downwards: avoids the overlap with 00:15:765 (4,2), gives you a triangle with 00:15:765 (4,1,2) (4's head) and makes 00:17:788 (3,4,1) that much more smooth~ do it! Okay..fix this overlap and change this slider curve.
***NAZI ALERT*** Move 00:20:146 (2) to X:348 Y:321, the triangle is slightly off~ Move a bit.
01:46:776 - No note here? Feel nothing
Nice diff!~ Thanks Yuzu-

Code

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Moway

1,143 posts

Joined January 2012

Moway 2014-09-25T04:09:28+00:00

Hi.

[General]

I think it was determined that the name of this should be Dango Dango Drum and Bass (according to Newgrounds.)

[guineaQ's Easy]

Seems like we have a lot of unsnapped inherited sections.
00:11:483 - snap to 00:11:552
00:13:506 - snap to 00:13:574
00:14:180 - snap to 00:14:248
00:16:876 - snap to 00:16:945
00:18:225 - snap to 00:18:293
00:19:573 - snap to 00:19:642
00:43:843 - snap to 00:43:911
00:54:629 - snap to 00:54:698
00:57:326 - snap to 00:57:394
01:00:022 - snap to 01:00:091
01:00:697 - snap to 01:00:765
01:02:719 - snap to 01:02:788
01:03:393 - snap to 01:03:462
01:05:416 - snap to 01:05:484
01:06:764 - snap to 01:06:833
01:08:112 - snap to 01:08:181
01:10:809 - snap to 01:10:877
01:12:157 - snap to 01:12:226
01:15:528 - snap to 01:15:597
01:17:551 - snap to 01:17:619
01:18:225 - snap to 01:18:293
01:20:247 - snap to 01:20:316
01:20:921 - snap to 01:20:990
01:29:685 - snap to 01:29:754
01:30:359 - snap to 01:30:428
01:31:034 - snap to 01:31:102
01:31:708 - snap to 01:31:776
01:33:730 - snap to 01:33:799
00:10:709 - The break here is awkward because there's a lot of music happening, and no object to hit. I would suggest a circle here to match the drum beat.
00:20:484 (4) - whistle on the head and end, clap on the repeat
00:29:585 (1,2) - the NC should be switched here for consistency.
00:31:271 (1) - remove this NC, inconsistent with the rest of your comboing
00:43:406 - Beginning at this section until the end of the map, I think there is a lot more you can do with the hitsounding. In earlier sections, you used the hitwhistle to highlight piano parts, which sounds great. I think you can continue to use them here to highlight the piano parts and vocals, which stick out a lot even with all of the drum beats.
It would make this section sound a lot more interesting.
00:43:406 - from here to 00:51:495 you seem to overcombo. Halve the combos in this section to remain consistent with the rest of the difficulty.
00:47:451 (1) - clap on the end
00:51:495 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern is a bit awkward for an Easy. Here's my suggestion for this part.
00:54:192 (1) - Finish on the head
00:55:203 (2,3,4) - I don't really like these three circle things in an Easy difficulty, so I would suggest turning (3,4) into a slider.
00:57:900 (2,3,4) - same with these I think
01:13:068 (1,2) - This feels better to me if you put the 2/1 slider first, and then the circle. This emphasizes the strong sound with a slider, and the circle fits the music better as a transition to the slider at 01:14:417 (3) IMO.
01:14:417 (3,1) - I think it would play better to have (3) end at 01:15:428 and have 01:16:102 (1) begin at 01:15:765. This would put strong emphasis on the finish where the kiai fountain occurs, which would feel really strong.
01:18:799 (3,1) - NC should be swapped here for consistency
01:21:495 (2,1) - ^
01:29:248 (3) - Missing a finish on the sliderend.
01:35:990 (2) - could use a finish on the sliderend.
01:37:338 - I said this before, but most definitely here you need to be using more hitsounds. This part is way too empty without them. Hitwhistles work well to match strong musical elements for parts like this.
01:37:675 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - This section should be split up by sliders. Too many circles, especially ones in different rhythms like this, can be tricky for an Easy player.
01:40:035 (1,2,3,4) - If you happen to not take the previous suggestion, I would recommend something else for this part. Having the Easy player go in a straight line back from (1,2) to (3) is awkward because it is so counter to the flow.
01:42:731 (1,2,3,4) - I would suggest changing this part. Right now, we're missing out on the strong vocal at 01:44:754, and the two circles are kind of funky to play because there's the 1/1 break before the 1/2 circle rhythm, if that makes any sense. I would suggest something like this.

[S. Boat's Normal]

00:00:260 (1,3) - add a whistle to the tail of these, I think this a strong point
00:02:619 (4) - and remove this whistle, this part seems weaker than the previous, so I would remove this one.
00:04:304 (3,4) - add a whistle to the head of both of these, and remove the whistle on the tail of (4). This matches the music better.
00:05:653 (1,3) - whistles to the tails here
00:08:012 (4) - and remove this whistle, again, stronger sounds for those other two than here.
00:09:697 (3,4) - whistle on the heads of these.
00:29:248 (1) - remove the NC here, and
00:29:922 (3) - add it here for consistency
00:40:034 (1) - remove the NC here and
00:40:709 (3) - add it here for consistency
00:43:406 - Beginning at this section until the end of the map, I think there is a lot more you can do with the hitsounding. In earlier sections, you used the hitwhistle to highlight piano parts, which sounds great. I think you can continue to use them here to highlight the piano parts and vocals, which stick out a lot even with all of the drum beats.
00:43:406 - From here to here until the kiai, you use the same rhythm for most of this. There is a lot of stuff happening in the music which I think should be mapped, rather than sticking to one rhythm. For example, 00:45:091 (5). There is a piano part that occurs in the middle of the slider, so I would prefer either a circle and a 1/1 slider, or a repeating 1/1 slider here. Listen to the music, mainly the piano parts which are different, to help you create more interesting rhythms.
00:45:428 - silence the slidertick here
01:15:765 (1) - add a finish here

[Smug's Hard]

Some unsnapped inherited sections.
.
0:00:593 - snap to 00:00:597
00:11:042 - snap to 00:11:046
00:11:379 - snap to 00:11:383
00:21:154 - snap to 00:21:158
00:21:829 - snap to 00:21:833
00:23:177 - snap to 00:23:181
00:24:525 - snap to 00:24:529
00:25:873 - snap to 00:25:877
00:27:222 - snap to 00:27:226
01:03:626 - snap to 01:03:630
01:04:300 - snap to 01:04:304
01:31:941 - snap to 01:31:945
01:37:334 - snap to 01:37:338
Check your kiai, seems like we have an inconsistency with the other diffs (01:14:754 versus 01:14:922)
00:08:686 - I don't really like this break here because there's a pretty prominent vocal, which you seem to be following pretty well. I suggest adding a circle here to fill the empty space.
00:18:799 (2) - Seems like this is an accidental clap? It's inconsistent with the rest of the section.
00:21:158 (1,1) - I think you should decrease the spacing here. Because the slider is slowed down, that jump is kind of awkward because there is little motion going into it.
00:28:574 (1) - I would put a slowdown here to match the other two piano sliders in this section.
00:37:001 (2,3,4,5) - I think these circles miss out on some nice music, mainly the piano. This section feels like it should be more flowy, so I would like to see this mapped out some more.
00:42:057 (3) - NC here and possibly remove the NC at 00:41:383 (1). This would be for consistency, but if you like the NC at 00:41:383 (1), I still recommend NC at 00:42:057 (3). It makes sense musically to do so.
00:42:731 (5,6) - I would add whistles to the starts of these, and remove that clap.
00:43:406 - Kind of the same with the other difficulties. I think you can use more whistles and finishes to compliment the vocals, piano, and other strong points in the music. This would make the hitsounding a lot more fleshed out, and would sound really nice.
00:45:259 (2) - I think you should separate this into a circle and a 1/2 slider to provide an object for that piano.
00:58:237 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as 00:37:001 (2,3,4,5), but even more so here since there is even more music happening.
01:26:215 (2) - add a clap at the end of this I think

[Insane]

I think you could afford to bump up the volume a bit in the intro. At first, I thought you didn't hitsound the intro at all, so I think you can bump it up some.
As a general thing, I think you could go back through this map and add more hitsounding, particularly to match the piano and vocal parts. It sounds really nice to fill out the hitsounding instead of just having a clap every 2nd and 4th beat. See what you can do on your own, since I think that would be really helpful for you to better hitsound this and all future maps.
00:08:686 - I think you could add an object here in order to match the vocal.
00:16:776 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern is a little sloppy. Right now, the spacing between (5,6,7) is kind of erratic, and looks kind of off compared to the uniform spacing of (2,3,4).
00:42:394 (3,4) - I think you should remove the claps here, don't really hear what these would match in the music.
00:43:406 - Your whistle use in this section, is a bit much, funnily enough. Focus on using the hitsounds with strong piano or vocals, and other higher pitched sounds that stick out above the rest of the music.
00:48:125 (3,4,5,6,1) - Use some distance snap here, right now the spacing is kind of erratic. 1.9-2.0 seems to be what you were going for.
00:50:147 - I think this volume decrease shouldn't be here. The whistles should be very present for this piano, which sticks out way above the rest of the music.
00:54:445 - for consistency with how you've been mapping these, you should add a circle here.
00:59:838 - and here. Keep consistent with your main mapping idea for these, which is the 1/2 slider+two 1/4 circle triplet thing.
00:58:911 (3,4,5,6) - same thing as the other volume decrease.
01:07:001 (1,2,3,4) - I think you could tidy up the spacing changes here, they don't seem to be matching to the music a lot, so I think uniform spacing looks cleaner here.
01:09:024 (1,2) - I don't really like these circles because they break a lot of the flow you built up. I think they work well when you use the breaks to match the vocals, but for a spot like this, I don't think these pauses and stops work too well.
01:12:394 (4,5,1) - These would look a bit better if you made the spacing uniform, not only in distance between the ends and heads of sliders, but the distance between the slider bodies themselves.
01:19:136 (5,6,7,8) - I think uniform spacing works well here, right now you're just a bit off it, and it looks a bit sloppy as a result.
01:27:394 (1) - remove this NC
01:27:900 (4) - add an NC here, more consistent with your comboing.
01:34:642 (3) - NC here
01:35:821 (9) - NC here also, this combo is too long, and comboing like this separates this into musical ideas.
01:38:012 (5,6,7,8) - Would be nice to make this into a perfect square.
01:44:754 (1) - remove the NC
01:45:428 (3) - NC here
01:47:113 (1) - This spinner kind of ends at an awkward spot, not sure what the end is matching in the music.
I do worry about the use of triplets in this difficulty. It seems like some of them aren't really mapped to anything in the music. If I were you, I would go back through this map and pick out the triplets, turn down the sample volume, and see if the music behind them supports that. I'm not going to point out every instance of this, but I do recommend doing this as it will help your mapping overall.

Sorry guys, I lost most of this mod and had to try to redo it. I probably missed out on some things I said before, but hope this helps. Good luck!

UnitedWeSin

891 posts

Joined July 2012

UnitedWeSin 2014-09-25T04:44:38+00:00

fck you Moway
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[General]

Your mp3 has an audio bit rate of 128kbps, so it's not as high quality as it could be. Check the one in this map https://osu.ppy.sh/b/190043. Not a big deal but maybe you'd consider upgrading it. Although it would entail hitsound volume increases.
I don't think you are using the files soft-hitclap3, soft-sliderslide3, and soft-slidertick3. If so these files need to be removed from the folder.
Fix the unsnapped timing sections in Hard and Easy.
What Moway said.

[Insane]

00:08:012 (5) - Curve this slider less to make a proper blanket on the 4.
Example
00:09:024 (3) - This slider is slightly curved while the 00:09:529 (5) is not. On purpose?
00:11:046 (1) - Ctrl+G is better flow here imo.
00:12:394 (1,2) - I'd place 1 in a triangle with the previous pattern and place 2 so that there is curved flow into 3 with even spacing. Maybe you can try this:
Example
00:17:282 (5,6,7,1) - Use more even spacing here? Strange how spacing gets smaller after the 5 when the player was pushing to the right.
00:21:833 (1,2,3,4,5) - Don't be afraid to spread the notes out. More even/flowing and beautiful placements.
Example
00:27:226 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe you can try an arrangement like this, it might play nicer for you than your back and forth pattern:
Example
00:27:057 (6) - I recommend to delete this note, it makes too much 1/2 and jumping for the slow section and is consistent with 00:24:361.
00:30:934 (4,5) - Try Ctrl+G? I'd really like a direction/pattern change onto the 00:31:271 (1). Maybe spacing is too large then, you can experiment.
00:34:473 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I felt there was too much continuous 1/2 for this slow section. Maybe you'd consider replacing 00:34:979 (5,6) with a 1/2 slider. Imo it's more comfortable if the 1/2 starts again on the downbeat.
00:50:147 (1) - Imo this slider is more comfortable to hit after the jump pattern if it's placed to the right of 9 like this:
Example

It messes up your slider pattern a bit though, maybe you can experiment and see what you think about it.
00:52:170 (1,2,3) - Make it a reflection of 00:51:495 (1,2,3). Use even spacing.
00:56:720 (7,1,2,3,4) - Try a direction change onto the triplet, feels much better for me:
Example
I moved the triplet further down and left and the 5 upwards. Also rotated the 00:57:563 (1).
00:57:563 (1) - NC seems extra here. You didn't have one at 00:54:866.
00:59:922 (2,3,4,5,6) - Try more even curvature here so that the curve can fit with that of the 01:00:597 (6).
Example
01:02:282 (1,2,3,4) - To simulate some build-up here I suggest to reduce the spacing between 1 and the triplet.
01:04:642 (3,4) - How about a larger jump here? It would echo the 00:43:068 (5,6) pattern since that's the same music there. You can try moving 4 further down and right, maybe (280,304). Just an idea, maybe you'd like it.
01:07:001 (1,2,3,4,5) - Use more even spacing? Spacing seems pretty random here.
01:07:675 (5) - I think NC is better here on the 5 than the 01:08:012 (1).
01:10:372 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I felt like a direction change into 01:11:215 (7,8) would feel better here. You can try moving 01:10:540 (2,3,4) more down and trying an arrangement like this:
Example
I just felt it had a nicer flow after 01:10:035 (4) and the jump to 01:11:215 (7) is great with the vocals.
01:13:743 (1) - Remove NC? Consistent with 01:24:529 (5).
01:19:136 (5,6,7,8,1) - Too much back and forth left and right flow feels stiff. Maybe you can try an arrangement more like this:
Example
01:22:338 (9,1) - Try stacking the 9 on the 7 and rotating the 2 a bit to avoid this linear flow to the left you have. I think it might feel nicer for you, try it:
Example
01:35:316 (6) - Missed NC is seems.
01:43:574 (4,1) - Switch NC? Seems more consistent like with 01:27:394 (1) or 01:32:788 (1).

Hitsound Suggestions

00:00:260 (1) - Finish on head seems nicer.
00:08:349 (1) - Whistle.
00:21:664 (9) - Missed a S:C1 clap here?
00:23:181 (1) - Missed clap on end?
00:24:529 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Why not use whitles along with your claps like you did at 00:21:833 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7). Same at 00:27:226 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) and so on.
00:40:709 (1) - Whistle.
00:42:057 (1) - Whistle.
00:50:147 (1,2,3,4) - Missed claps/also whistles fit here.
00:58:068 (3) - Maybe whistle is nice.
00:58:574 (2) - Clap.
01:02:956 (5) - Whistle on the head is nice.
You use more whistles in the second kiai than the first. Maybe you'd consider adding more to the first kiai.

[Smug's Hard]

00:18:799 (2) - Don't you just want a whistle here? This is the only clap you used in the section.
00:21:158 (1) - Maybe whistle or clap on the end. Seems nice.
00:43:068 (6) - Clap on the purpose here? Really stands out, I would have expected a whistle.
01:14:922 - Maybe you want to end the kiai here to be consistent with all the other diffs.
01:36:664 (5) - Consider a clap on the first repeat and the end to fit the music.

[Smallboat's Normal]

I suggest OD 4 for better spread.
00:13:742 (1,2,3,4) - Too many whistles in this pattern, I recommend remove some. You didn't add whistles to follow this sound at other places such as 00:11:720 - 00:13:068 - so it sounds off. I recommend remove the the end of 3 and 4.
01:23:854 (1) - Remove whistle from the head? It's the only one in the kiai so doesn't seem to fit.

[guineaQ's Easy]

00:09:024 (2,3) - Doesn't really fit the music very closely. I suggest more simple like this:
Example
00:20:484 (4) - Clap on repeat?
00:43:406 to 00:51:495 - NC's are too frequent in this section, I recommend to NC every other downbeat to be consistent with your patterns later on.
01:07:675 (1) - How about end this 1/1 earlier and move the 2-3 back 1/1. This way fits better with the vocals and creates a gap in play at 01:09:698 which is what you want for an Easy diff.
Example
01:13:068 (1,2) - Switch these on the timeline will fit nicer with the music.
01:16:102 (1) - Consider to remove this and replace with a circle on 01:16:439.
01:17:113 (2,3) - Consider to end the 2 one or two beats earlier to you can have the 3 fall on the downbeat here.
01:19:810 (1,2) - Same as above about the downbeats.

Placements are pretty nice, but keep in mind it's not always great to put slider starts on the offbeats and slider ends on the downbeats. In the kiai it becomes a problem. Then it feels like I'm playing along with the BPM, not along with the music itself. Don't be afraid to miss some claps, you just want the player to click along with the music.

Definitely a lot of great potential but I'd like to see more work put into Insane and Easy. I didn't check Moway's mod for overlap with mine btw.
Star~

Fizz

275 posts

Joined September 2013

Fizz 2014-09-25T05:29:40+00:00

Moway wrote:
Hi.

[Smug's Hard]
Some unsnapped inherited sections.
.
0:00:593 - snap to 00:00:597
00:11:042 - snap to 00:11:046
00:11:379 - snap to 00:11:383
00:21:154 - snap to 00:21:158
00:21:829 - snap to 00:21:833
00:23:177 - snap to 00:23:181
00:24:525 - snap to 00:24:529
00:25:873 - snap to 00:25:877
00:27:222 - snap to 00:27:226
01:03:626 - snap to 01:03:630
01:04:300 - snap to 01:04:304
01:31:941 - snap to 01:31:945
01:37:334 - snap to 01:37:338
fixed
Check your kiai, seems like we have an inconsistency with the other diffs (01:14:754 versus 01:14:922) fixed
00:08:686 - I don't really like this break here because there's a pretty prominent vocal, which you seem to be following pretty well. I suggest adding a circle here to fill the empty space. the only thing I can hear is a small breath, so I'd prefer to keep this empty.
00:18:799 (2) - Seems like this is an accidental clap? It's inconsistent with the rest of the section. yup, fixed
00:21:158 (1,1) - I think you should decrease the spacing here. Because the slider is slowed down, that jump is kind of awkward because there is little motion going into it. okay
00:28:574 (1) - I would put a slowdown here to match the other two piano sliders in this section. it's a smaller length slider and it immediately transitions into the next part of the song
00:37:001 (2,3,4,5) - I think these circles miss out on some nice music, mainly the piano. This section feels like it should be more flowy, so I would like to see this mapped out some more. changed it up to make it feel less stoppy
00:42:057 (3) - NC here and possibly remove the NC at 00:41:383 (1). This would be for consistency, but if you like the NC at 00:41:383 (1), I still recommend NC at 00:42:057 (3). It makes sense musically to do so. okay yeah, this makes sense
00:42:731 (5,6) - I would add whistles to the starts of these, and remove that clap. yep
00:43:406 - Kind of the same with the other difficulties. I think you can use more whistles and finishes to compliment the vocals, piano, and other strong points in the music. This would make the hitsounding a lot more fleshed out, and would sound really nice.
00:45:259 (2) - I think you should separate this into a circle and a 1/2 slider to provide an object for that piano. alrighty
00:58:237 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as 00:37:001 (2,3,4,5), but even more so here since there is even more music happening. done
01:26:215 (2) - add a clap at the end of this I think done

UnitedWeSin wrote:
[Smug's Hard]
00:18:799 (2) - Don't you just want a whistle here? This is the only clap you used in the section. fixed in Moway's
00:21:158 (1) - Maybe whistle or clap on the end. Seems nice. put a whistle
00:43:068 (6) - Clap on the purpose here? Really stands out, I would have expected a whistle. fixed
01:14:922 - Maybe you want to end the kiai here to be consistent with all the other diffs. yup, fixed
01:36:664 (5) - Consider a clap on the first repeat and the end to fit the music. done

phew, thanks for the mods~ ^w^

updoot

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