Okay here's the mod! May ask for M4M later (like in mid July maybe) if you don't mind
Easy and Fortune seems pretty good to go, rest needs more work though. Stack things properly and avoid overlaps!
[General]
Inconsistency in kiai. Some kiai starts and/or ends in different spot. For example, one of the kiai in Easy ends at at 02:26:114 while the same kiai ends at 02:26:803 on Normal. Try finding all the inconsistency and figure out a good spot to end all of them
There are too many unnecessary kiai such as the one at 01:09:562 - 01:19:907. It's not the critical part of the music imo and doesn't feel any need to emphasize the section with kiai. Only use kiai in a very crucial part part of the music. If you use too much kiai, the sections won't feel special and highlighted. I suggest only using kiai on either "Come and get it one more time, if you want to lose your mind" part or the wub part right after, (I would use the wub part because 1. that's what the ranked nightcore one used, 2. you have preview point on it, and 3. That part is the hardest part in the Insanes).
Keep your kiai consistent. If you use it for one part, add it to the same repeating parts. Adding to 02:48:872 part and not putting one at 00:58:527 is bad, for example.
End the last spinner on the same place on every difficulty
Inconsitencies on combos on all difficulties. The downbeat is a great place to look for for new combos. Put new combos every 1 or 2 downbeat and only break that pattern when you really need to emphasize on that part of music.
The difficulty name Fortune is unrankable because it's a difficulty name relating to username. All custom diff name must not relate to username (Skystar, 0108, Rin difficulties are not rankable anymore, for example) and can only be used in hardest difficulty, which isn't a problem in this map. Rename it to Fort's Insane/Extra or something else not relating to username.
Add "and" to tags because this map doesn't show up in search when you search for "come and get it" instead of "come & get it", more convenient.
Add "fort" to tags for guest difficulty
Remove "krewella get it" from tags because that's already in artist/title. You only need to add something not in any other field.
don't forget to add all tag on all diff! I do that all the time
Inconsistency in kiai. Some kiai starts and/or ends in different spot. For example, one of the kiai in Easy ends at at 02:26:114 while the same kiai ends at 02:26:803 on Normal. Try finding all the inconsistency and figure out a good spot to end all of them
There are too many unnecessary kiai such as the one at 01:09:562 - 01:19:907. It's not the critical part of the music imo and doesn't feel any need to emphasize the section with kiai. Only use kiai in a very crucial part part of the music. If you use too much kiai, the sections won't feel special and highlighted. I suggest only using kiai on either "Come and get it one more time, if you want to lose your mind" part or the wub part right after, (I would use the wub part because 1. that's what the ranked nightcore one used, 2. you have preview point on it, and 3. That part is the hardest part in the Insanes).
Keep your kiai consistent. If you use it for one part, add it to the same repeating parts. Adding to 02:48:872 part and not putting one at 00:58:527 is bad, for example.
End the last spinner on the same place on every difficulty
Inconsitencies on combos on all difficulties. The downbeat is a great place to look for for new combos. Put new combos every 1 or 2 downbeat and only break that pattern when you really need to emphasize on that part of music.
The difficulty name Fortune is unrankable because it's a difficulty name relating to username. All custom diff name must not relate to username (Skystar, 0108, Rin difficulties are not rankable anymore, for example) and can only be used in hardest difficulty, which isn't a problem in this map. Rename it to Fort's Insane/Extra or something else not relating to username.
Add "and" to tags because this map doesn't show up in search when you search for "come and get it" instead of "come & get it", more convenient.
Add "fort" to tags for guest difficulty
Remove "krewella get it" from tags because that's already in artist/title. You only need to add something not in any other field.
don't forget to add all tag on all diff! I do that all the time
[Easy]
Leave more space after spinner for recovery. Beginners have hard time relocating their cursor after the spinner and a single beat is not enough. I suggest mapping something instead of using spinner for parts like 00:51:631 (1) - and 01:02:665 (1) -
I don't think you should change the distance snap for the entire map. Pick a distance (I suggest 1.0x because they are beginner friendly with distance being the same size as slider, letting you play in same cursor speed the entire map) and stick to it the entire map, unless there's a big space to it enough to fit a break like 03:02:665 (1,2)
Though the 3/2 sliders create unique beat and is fun pressing, avoid using it so often. When you use it, use it in consistent manner.
00:26:114 (1) - Move this closer to center. In Easy/Normal difficulties, try putting the notes after spinner as close to center as possible. They're easier to hit for beginners.
00:30:941 (1) - This would look better being blanketed by 00:29:562 (6) like
It would create ugly overlap with 00:32:321 (2) - though.. but I also have suggestion for that v v v
00:32:321 (2) - Stack this note with 00:29:562 (6). It's close enough (it would still overlap a bit so I guess rotate like 10 degrees? >.< assuming you apply the first one)
00:46:114 (6) - Make this more parallel? It just looks like a random squiggly line right now
00:58:183 (7,1) - Stack with 00:56:114 (5)
01:18:527 (2) - I would avoid this overlap, doesn't look that clean
02:07:493 (1,2) - The sudden change in rhythm doesn't feel great. The problem with this rhythm is that they skip 02:08:872, an important downbeat for this part considering you are mapping to the drums. Try this instead:
02:11:286 (3) - Avoid this 1/2 slider. It may confuse beginners.
02:15:079 (1) - Closer to center for same reason as I said in previous one
03:02:665 (1) - The song here doesn't sound edgy, more calming and slow, so this slider doesn't fit this part. I suggest using some thing more curvy.
03:16:458 (5) - Huge jump of 1.86x distance snap! This is very hard for Easy players
03:19:217 (1) - Spinner is way too long. Spinners are hardest part of the map for all beginners, so take caution whenever you use them in early difficulties.
Leave more space after spinner for recovery. Beginners have hard time relocating their cursor after the spinner and a single beat is not enough. I suggest mapping something instead of using spinner for parts like 00:51:631 (1) - and 01:02:665 (1) -
I don't think you should change the distance snap for the entire map. Pick a distance (I suggest 1.0x because they are beginner friendly with distance being the same size as slider, letting you play in same cursor speed the entire map) and stick to it the entire map, unless there's a big space to it enough to fit a break like 03:02:665 (1,2)
Though the 3/2 sliders create unique beat and is fun pressing, avoid using it so often. When you use it, use it in consistent manner.
00:26:114 (1) - Move this closer to center. In Easy/Normal difficulties, try putting the notes after spinner as close to center as possible. They're easier to hit for beginners.
00:30:941 (1) - This would look better being blanketed by 00:29:562 (6) like
It would create ugly overlap with 00:32:321 (2) - though.. but I also have suggestion for that v v v
00:32:321 (2) - Stack this note with 00:29:562 (6). It's close enough (it would still overlap a bit so I guess rotate like 10 degrees? >.< assuming you apply the first one)
00:46:114 (6) - Make this more parallel? It just looks like a random squiggly line right now
00:58:183 (7,1) - Stack with 00:56:114 (5)
01:18:527 (2) - I would avoid this overlap, doesn't look that clean
02:07:493 (1,2) - The sudden change in rhythm doesn't feel great. The problem with this rhythm is that they skip 02:08:872, an important downbeat for this part considering you are mapping to the drums. Try this instead:
02:11:286 (3) - Avoid this 1/2 slider. It may confuse beginners.
02:15:079 (1) - Closer to center for same reason as I said in previous one
03:02:665 (1) - The song here doesn't sound edgy, more calming and slow, so this slider doesn't fit this part. I suggest using some thing more curvy.
03:16:458 (5) - Huge jump of 1.86x distance snap! This is very hard for Easy players
03:19:217 (1) - Spinner is way too long. Spinners are hardest part of the map for all beginners, so take caution whenever you use them in early difficulties.
[Normal]
There's a lot of issues with overlapping notes in this map. Don't unnecessarily overlap. They almost never look good.
Almost every notes are in constant 1/1 beats, making this map very dull to play. This song offers a lot of different rhythm, make good use of them.
Same problem as Easy, keep distance snap constant. Avoid changing it depending on parts of map
Also same problem as Easy, too little break between spinner and a note. Map parts like 01:35:769 (1)
Lots of stacking problem. I might've missed some, so look for them on your own
AR-1, OD + 1. It evens out the difficulty setting spread:
AR: 3 -> 6 -> 8 -> 9 to 3 -> 5 -> 7 -> 9
OD: 2 -> 3 -> 5 -> 8 to 2 -> 4 -> 6 -> 8
Increase slider velocity, to bridge to Hard better (.7 -> .9 -> 1.8, It's too close to Easy) try 1.1 - 1.2
00:15:424 (3) - Blanket 00:16:458 (4)? It would look better
00:38:183 (3) - Stack with 00:36:458 (1) -
00:38:872 (2) - Avoid unnecessary overlap like this
00:39:907 (4) - Overlapping here too.
00:44:390 (3) - Stack with 00:43:010 (1) -
00:50:596 (2,1) - Blanket each other?
01:00:596 (6) - Stack with 01:01:286 (1) -
01:03:010 (2) - Missing note at 1:03:183. Use this rhythm instead
01:19:217 (3) - Stack with 01:17:838 (1) -
01:23:700 (2) - Stack with 01:22:665 (3) -
01:30:252 (1) - Stack with 01:28:872 (1) -
02:07:321 (6) - Avoid 1/4
02:30:941 (3,1) - Use proper polarity
02:37:838 - 02:46:114 - Map this part like any other wub parts, unnecessary spacings will just confusing the beginners on when to press the notes.
02:44:562 (1) - Avoid the 1/4
There's a lot of issues with overlapping notes in this map. Don't unnecessarily overlap. They almost never look good.
Almost every notes are in constant 1/1 beats, making this map very dull to play. This song offers a lot of different rhythm, make good use of them.
Same problem as Easy, keep distance snap constant. Avoid changing it depending on parts of map
Also same problem as Easy, too little break between spinner and a note. Map parts like 01:35:769 (1)
Lots of stacking problem. I might've missed some, so look for them on your own
AR-1, OD + 1. It evens out the difficulty setting spread:
AR: 3 -> 6 -> 8 -> 9 to 3 -> 5 -> 7 -> 9
OD: 2 -> 3 -> 5 -> 8 to 2 -> 4 -> 6 -> 8
Increase slider velocity, to bridge to Hard better (.7 -> .9 -> 1.8, It's too close to Easy) try 1.1 - 1.2
00:15:424 (3) - Blanket 00:16:458 (4)? It would look better
00:38:183 (3) - Stack with 00:36:458 (1) -
00:38:872 (2) - Avoid unnecessary overlap like this
00:39:907 (4) - Overlapping here too.
00:44:390 (3) - Stack with 00:43:010 (1) -
00:50:596 (2,1) - Blanket each other?
01:00:596 (6) - Stack with 01:01:286 (1) -
01:03:010 (2) - Missing note at 1:03:183. Use this rhythm instead
01:19:217 (3) - Stack with 01:17:838 (1) -
01:23:700 (2) - Stack with 01:22:665 (3) -
01:30:252 (1) - Stack with 01:28:872 (1) -
02:07:321 (6) - Avoid 1/4
02:30:941 (3,1) - Use proper polarity
02:37:838 - 02:46:114 - Map this part like any other wub parts, unnecessary spacings will just confusing the beginners on when to press the notes.
02:44:562 (1) - Avoid the 1/4
[Hard]
This difficulty can also use some variety in rhythm too. Lots of 1/2 slider spams and things
Reduce slider velocity. The jump is high (.9 -> 1.8 -> 1.8). Try 1.5 - 1.6 at least.
AR - 1, OD + 1 same reason as Normal
00:30:769 (3) - This jump is somewhat random, the music doesn't have any spike here and doesn't suggest any jumping.
00:37:148 (3,4,1,2) and 00:39:217 (1,1,2,3) - not sure why they have the 1/1 rhythm in these, add notes to all the red tick in between
01:04:734 (3) - Stack
01:05:769 (2) - Overlap
01:42:148 (1) - This spinner doesn't map to anything in music. I think it's better of removed like Insane difficulty.
02:20:079 (6) - ctrl+g, sudden jump unfitting for the song.
02:31:114 (7) - This note is actually on 02:31:200.
02:49:907 (1) - Bad overlapping.
This difficulty can also use some variety in rhythm too. Lots of 1/2 slider spams and things
Reduce slider velocity. The jump is high (.9 -> 1.8 -> 1.8). Try 1.5 - 1.6 at least.
AR - 1, OD + 1 same reason as Normal
00:30:769 (3) - This jump is somewhat random, the music doesn't have any spike here and doesn't suggest any jumping.
00:37:148 (3,4,1,2) and 00:39:217 (1,1,2,3) - not sure why they have the 1/1 rhythm in these, add notes to all the red tick in between
01:04:734 (3) - Stack
01:05:769 (2) - Overlap
01:42:148 (1) - This spinner doesn't map to anything in music. I think it's better of removed like Insane difficulty.
02:20:079 (6) - ctrl+g, sudden jump unfitting for the song.
02:31:114 (7) - This note is actually on 02:31:200.
02:49:907 (1) - Bad overlapping.
[Insane]
Don't use all those 1/4 sliders on the wub part. I think eliminating all those 1/4 and making streams lighter to make this insane easier in general will be better for this mapset. Make this light insane and Fortune an Extra/Hard Insane. The spread will even out a lot better this way.
00:21:286 (1,2,3,4) - Make this perfect square? It's visibly off and doesn't look that good
00:24:734 (1,2,3) - Avoid random jumps like these, the song is constant and doesn't call for a jump.
00:35:079 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Making streams this wobbly is not good. It's hard to follow and is not aesthetically good either.
00:43:355 (1) - ctrl+g flows better
00:49:562 (5) - Stack, still one pixel off (nazi)
00:59:907 (1) - ^ You really need to check the coordinates at top
02:21:286 (1) - Blanket?
02:32:320 (1,2) - Unrankable sliders. You cannot slow down the slider through using bunch of red points anymore.
Don't use all those 1/4 sliders on the wub part. I think eliminating all those 1/4 and making streams lighter to make this insane easier in general will be better for this mapset. Make this light insane and Fortune an Extra/Hard Insane. The spread will even out a lot better this way.
00:21:286 (1,2,3,4) - Make this perfect square? It's visibly off and doesn't look that good
00:24:734 (1,2,3) - Avoid random jumps like these, the song is constant and doesn't call for a jump.
00:35:079 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Making streams this wobbly is not good. It's hard to follow and is not aesthetically good either.
00:43:355 (1) - ctrl+g flows better
00:49:562 (5) - Stack, still one pixel off (nazi)
00:59:907 (1) - ^ You really need to check the coordinates at top
02:21:286 (1) - Blanket?
02:32:320 (1,2) - Unrankable sliders. You cannot slow down the slider through using bunch of red points anymore.
[Fortune]
Like I stated in General, the diff name Fortune is unrankable.
Inaudible hitsounds are unrankable. Only hitsounds you can silence are spinners, slider body or slider tick, and end of slider. Everything you click must be audible.
Very nicely made diff. Really fun! There's really nothing to say to this diff.
00:24:045 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This stream is hard to follow, maybe change the end to something like this?
All I did was rotated 00:24:734 (1,2,3,4) - by 180, ctrl+g, and arranged the notes like the picture there.
00:32:493 (2,3) - Can be blanketed
01:39:907 (3) - Blanket so close but off
03:10:941 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - >.<
Like I stated in General, the diff name Fortune is unrankable.
Inaudible hitsounds are unrankable. Only hitsounds you can silence are spinners, slider body or slider tick, and end of slider. Everything you click must be audible.
Very nicely made diff. Really fun! There's really nothing to say to this diff.
00:24:045 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This stream is hard to follow, maybe change the end to something like this?
All I did was rotated 00:24:734 (1,2,3,4) - by 180, ctrl+g, and arranged the notes like the picture there.
00:32:493 (2,3) - Can be blanketed
01:39:907 (3) - Blanket so close but off
03:10:941 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - >.<
The total spinning time in these consecutive spinners are about 15 seconds, twice the amount guideline suggests. It's as long as one of the spinner in augoEidEs by happy30. Though it doesn't have as much problem as that one because it has multiple spinners, giving small break + HP recovery, it's still tedious.Ranking criteria wrote:
Make sure that your spinners are a reasonable length. Aim for a maximum spinning time of about 5-7 seconds; any longer can cause the player's wrist to get sore. If your spinner must be longer, then check with a BAT to see if it's acceptable.
Easy and Fortune seems pretty good to go, rest needs more work though. Stack things properly and avoid overlaps!
udah di fix berkali-kali tetep gak berubah.Jadi aku biarin aja ^^'
I recommend you to use Grid Level 4 for a more precise placement 
