Kinshara wrote:

Hi! Thanks for the M4M!

Here's my mod!

General

I think offset is 1979 (ask others before changing it though)
You will have to move stuff around on the timeline because of new offset.
Also, use grid size 4 for precise placement of objects.
01:26:854 - Kiai ends here fixed

Easy

Use 1/2 beat snap divisor!

AR to 3
OD to 2
CS to 3
HP to 2
yes, fixed

Use 1.0x distance snap

00:01:979 - start slider no
00:07:486 (4,1,2,3) - 2 & 3 break the flow. In easy, you want good flow. I'm sorry, I don't understand what you mean, it snap??
00:12:423 (3,1) - don't overlap nicely; consider separating them and blanketing them nicely. fixed
00:20:018 (1) - don't do this; this is confusing for new players. fixed
00:29:132 (1,2) - blanket nicely I'm trying
00:29:132 (1,3) - blanket nicely I'm trying
00:36:727 (1,2) - blanket nicely I'm trying
00:45:081 (4,1) - don't hide so many objects; it will be hard for new players. fixed
00:48:119 (4,1) - ^ fixed
01:18:499 (2,3) - move 3; the overlap with 2 does not sound nice fixed
01:25:335 (3,1) - move 1...see how it overlaps with 2? Doesn't look nice fixed
01:36:727 (3,1) - please please DO NOT do jumps in Easy and Normal!! fixed
01:38:246 (3,1) - ^ Use Distance Snap!! fixed
01:46:980 (3,4) - this doesn't flow nicely fixed
01:59:512 (3) - try not to do 3/4 sliders like this fixed

Normal

Use 1/2 Beat Snap Divisor!!

CS to 3
OD to 4
:) fixed

00:13:183 (3,4) - Don't do jumps! ): This breaks the flow too. Use Distance Snap!!!!!!!!! I know...... fixed
00:15:081 (3) - good use of slider art to fit the music! Thx
00:15:841 (4) - don't hide objects in easy or normal...or try not to. It breaks flow at times like: 00:17:740 (2) - and 00:19:259 (2) - spacing! It's very irregular
00:31:411 (4,2) - try to place them in a way so they don't overlap like this. fixed
00:45:081 (5,1) - try not to do 1/2 reverse sliders with more than 1 reverse...it's awkward. Also 1 is hidden. fixed
01:16:221 (1,2,3) - this doesn't look nice I don't think so -_-|||
01:30:651 (3) - only 1 reverse please fixed

Advanced

CS to 4
AR to 7
fixed

Maybe use 1.1 DS

00:56:474 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - use distance snap here fixed

Actually hard isn't that bad. I would suggest working on your spacing! It's very irregular!

Hyper

OD to 7 or 7.5
01:02:930 - why is this blank after this? map this out
01:04:449 - ^
01:06:062 - ^
01:07:486 - ^I delete these part, thx
01:35:588 (1,1) - try to blanket this I don't know how to do

I am impressed! Insane's pretty good!

Good song!

Good luck!

Indeed wrote:

Hello, from my Queue~

[General]

If you're going to use "Advanced" and "Hyper", shouldn't you use "Basic" for Easy and "Medium" for Normal? Your preview point doesn't really give a preview to your song, consider changing it to here 00:36:727

[Easy]

• Watch your distance spacing! In some parts it's very consistent, but in other parts, it's way too close. I'll provide examples in the mod.
  Change HP to 3 √
  Change CS to 2 √
  Change AR to 3 √
  Change OD to 2 √
  You'll have to resnap your notes accordingly to account for the change in CS
  00:13:942 (1) - this is way to close to your previous slider, move it to x:200 y:256 √
  00:15:081 (2) - move this to x:48 y:104√
  00:29:132 (1,2) - blanket these better, like this√
  00:39:385 (3) - move to x:260 y:192√
  00:39:765 (1,2) - blanket these better, like this√
  00:56:094 (2) - not sure this needs to be a 1/1 reverse slider, you could change it to a 1/1 slider and a circle, so the rhythm would look like this√
  01:19:259 (3) - watch your distance spacing here, move it to x:110 y:245 √
  01:33:309 (1,2,3) - watch spacing here √
  01:39:005 (1,2,3) - these are too far spaced apart √
  01:40:524 (1,2,3) - same as above √
  02:00:081 (4) - move this over just a little bit √

[Normal]

• Change CS to 3 √
  Change AR to 4 √
  Change OD to 4 √
  You'll have to resnap your notes accordingly to account for the change in CS
  00:13:752 (4) - having this on a red tick is a little too hard for a Normal difficulty, move it to here 00:13:562 √
  00:30:651 (1,2) - change this to a 1/2 slider √
  00:45:081 (5) - change this to a 1/1 slider √
  01:14:702 (1,2,3) - check spacing here √
  01:16:221 (1,2,3) - same as above √
  01:21:157 (2,3,4,5,6) - same as above √
  01:26:474 (7) - I wouldn't stack this under the 6 √
  01:27:613 (3) - make this a 1/1 repeating slider, but I see the pattern you were going for √
  01:34:069 (3,4,5,6) - check spacing √
  01:39:765 (3,1,2) - same as above √
  01:43:562 (1,2,3) - same as above √
  01:46:980 (4,5) - change to 1/2 slider √
  01:48:119 (1,2,3,4,5) - having the circles stack is a little too hard for a normal difficulty, consider spacing them out √
  01:50:018 (6,7) - check spacing √
  01:54:955 (3,1,2) - same as above √
  01:58:752 (1,2,3) - same as above √

[Advanced]

• Change AR to 7 √
  00:09:005 (5) - this slider isn't symmetrical, consider changing that √
  00:13:562 (4) - I would make this a triplet I didn't understand - -
  00:16:980 (1,2,3) - check spacing √
  00:19:069 (2,3) - same as above
  00:20:018 (1,2,3,4) - same as above
  00:24:765 (6,7) - same as above
  00:32:170 (1,2) - same as above I made some changes, so these problems are corrected
  00:45:081 (4,5,6,7) - this pattern doesn't really fit here, maybe you should make it a square instead? √
  00:46:600 (4,5,6,7) - same thing here √
  00:54:575 (5) - I wouldn't stack this under the 4 √
  00:56:474 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - check spacing √
  01:20:778 (1,2) - same as above √
  01:21:537 (4) - stack this under the end of the slider, not the beginning no
  01:22:107 (6) - same as above no
  01:30:841 (4,1) - check spacing √

[Hyper]

• This difficulty is more considered an "Another" or "Extreme" in my opinion, because of the streams in it. For me to mod it now would mean a lot of unnecessary changes, so I suggest you change the name of the difficulty and up the AR/HP/OD to make it an "Another" or "Extreme". I’m considering

xxdeathx wrote:

m4m.

[General]

1. the start of your uninherited timing section (the red line on your timeline) should be at the same time as the first note in your map.ok

[Normal]

1. 00:04:828 (1,2,3,4) - you can blanket these better ok
2. 00:24:005 (2,3) - don't do these kind of stacks in easy/normal'
3. 00:27:043 (2,3) - ^
4. 00:48:879 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - i don't like how some parts are empty so it's up to the player to guess which part of the rhythm is mapped. I'm considering
5. 01:32:170 (5,1) - blanket ok
6. sliders are much easier than circles; in easy/normal you should have more sliders and less circles. I'm considering

[Advanced]

1. 00:48:879 (1,2) - don't overlap ok
2. 00:55:714 (3,4) - make them parallel ok
3. 01:21:157 (3,4,5,6) - stacking circles on the slider front after the sliders is hard to read But I want to keep it
4. 01:58:752 (1,2) - these can be parallel too ok

[Extreme]

1. 00:04:069 (9) - the music keeps going so repeat the slider more I know, but I arranged it specially.
2. 00:05:018 (2,4) - make these parallel Actually, it is symmetrical with 00:07:107 (4) -
3. 00:29:132 (1,2,3) - you can blanket these ok
4. 01:00:651 (1) - only need 3 points to make a circle https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1732089 I don't think so
5. 01:35:588 (1,1,2,3) - can blanket ok
6. 01:52:486 (8,1) - ^ ok
7. this map is very hard, definitely harder than what you can play, but it's your first map so you'll get better

good luck!

Mako Sakata wrote:

Hellooooo from my Queue

[General]

1. I think you need at least 3 diffrent custom combo colors, so please add 1 more

[Basic]

1. You should use Distance Spacing consistent on Easy or Normal diff, and please prevent any big jumps example this 00:07:866 (1,2) - That's a jump
2. 00:10:904 (1) - Make It a bit straight, http://puu.sh/9Dy7Q/4de632e665.jpg
3. 00:12:423 (3,1) - That overlap not look good
4. 00:48:119 (4,1) - As for basic, I think that one too hard to follow please reconsider to prevent that one
5. 01:26:094 (4,1) - That overlap not look good

Too many issues at spacing, and the hitsound is not consisntent enough. You can check on AiMod (Ctrl+Shift+A) to make sure your spacing is ok

[Medium]

1. 00:13:566 (4) - Add clap
2. 00:15:085 (3) - Prevent to use that kind of slider, because the rules say so "You can't manipulated slider speed by put red nodes (anchors)" Please reconsider that
3. 00:32:364 (2,3) - Not symetrical enough
4. 00:42:047 (6,2) - Bad overlap, maybe you can CTrl+H (2) http://puu.sh/9DyYJ/78fb47154c.jpg
5. 01:14:706 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - A bit hard to be a Medium, maybe can make some people confuse because of the slider repeat, please reconsider that
6. 01:21:161 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same ^
7. 01:53:630 (7) - Prevent to use that kind of slider, because the rules say so "You can't manipulated slider speed by put red nodes (anchors)" Please reconsider that

Basic and Medium I have remapped the DS and blanket before your mod. All of these were fixed after I checked my map according to your mod

[Adavance]

1. 00:20:022 (1,2,3,4) - Make them a bit farther so It'll prevent from overlap each others http://puu.sh/9Dzkn/b36221607d.jpg

YES, but I use another way

[Extreme]

1. 00:15:077 (5) - Prevent to use that kind of slider, because the rules say so "You can't manipulated slider speed by put red nodes (anchors)" Please reconsider that I don't know, i'm communicating with BAT
2. 00:15:457 (1,2) - Delete? not fit the song imo ^
3. 00:44:318 (1) - Same ^ ^
4. 01:12:419 (7) - Same ^ ^
5. 01:53:622 (3) - Same ^ [color=#F0000FF]^[/color]
6. 01:00:650 (1) - Make It a better circle, the current is not symetric enough ok

Too many issues on weeble slider I think EZ and NM are too many issues

[]
Honestly I don't like the song and many objects issues such as not snapped properly please fix that through AiMod
Good luck~

Kasuga wrote:

Hello

From my modding queue

[General]
- Consider about adding more tags such as "Bemani" or other tags Nice advice
- Inconsistency in Tags I'm trying
- Inconsistency in Preview Time : 5's Extreme with other diff I'm trying
- Inconsistency in Red Timing Section : 5's Extreme with other diff I'm trying
- It's heavily recommended to use Beatmania IIDX Diff Spread as listed here I got it!
- Background images must be at a maximum of 1024x768 pixels for 4:3, 1366x768 pixels for 16:9. Consider resizing the Background size I'm trying

[Basic]
I loved this <3 thx

[Medium]
- 01:13:187 (1,2,3,4) - Do not stack more than 2 circles in this diff, consider change it ok

[Advanced]
This diff is very well mapped <3 thx

[Extreme]
- AR 9 OD 8 suits this diff better ok

[5's Extreme]
- OD 8 and HP 8 suits this diff better ok, but I think HP need't change
- 00:33:688 (1,1,1) - This slider is weird, consider fixing it I'll inform him

Well, good luck on the ranking

I really love this song <3 thx

Oh, hi there Mako Sakata ~~~~

P A N wrote:

[5]

00:06:916 (1) - remove NC, unnecsessery imo. ok
00:09:289 (2) - remove this note is sounds better imo and the stream jump on 00:09:764 (7) is weird to play, maybe use just normal spacing that you use. ok
00:15:081 (1) - remove NC. keep it
00:16:600 (1) - ^
00:28:562 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - just make the spacing balance is playable imo since the music on this part is not stronger so.. ok
01:05:301 (5,6,7) - the stream with very low volume is really insane imo, remove these note is really more fit. ok
01:08:339 (5,6,7) - ^ ok
01:11:662 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - really weird sound here but I don't have any idea either. ok
01:29:795 (12,1) - wtf, really. ok
01:38:245 (1,2,3) - make it different with the first one, ctrl+g them like that. do this on the other two triangle also but maybe you can leave the last one since that is the forth triangle so it will come back to the first triangle. ok
01:43:561 (1,2,3,4,5) - make these spacing properly. ok

[Extreme]

00:04:068 (9) - remove one reverse and add note instead since it's really a strong beat. I'm considering
00:12:422 (1) - unstack, really hard to read. I wanna keep it
00:18:498 (1) - ^ and fix it in the whole diff :X it's really hard.. I wanna keep it
00:38:815 (6,7,8,9,10) - make this star properly. ok ok

[Advanced]

00:03:119 (5,1,2,3,4) - really too hard and the pattern looks random. I think not
00:42:043 (3) - hmm double reverse? I think it's hard to realize. ok
01:22:866 (2,3) - why the spacing is suddenly too close. ok
01:40:524 (1) - ^ ok

[Med]

00:20:777 (1,1,1) - don't NC spam. ok
01:16:220 (1,3) - swap NC. ok
01:47:549 (1) - remove NC. ok

[Beginner]

01:35:967 (1,1,1,1) - don't spam the NC, beginner may confuse. ok

GL :3 thx

chaee wrote:

From:
chaee's queue [NM 2/2] [M4M 1/3] Status: CLOSED

THANKS FOR THE MOD

[Normal]

00:43:941 (3) - Move away from 00:43:182 (2) - they're too close together ok

01:32:169 (5) - I think this should be rotated by 33 to make a better blanket with 01:32:929 (1) - ok

[Advanced]

00:31:030 (2) - Curve a bit more to make the perfect blanket with 00:30:650 (1) - ok

00:43:182 (2) - Replace with a duplicate of either of one these > 00:43:562 (3,4) - ok

00:52:866 (3) - 288x I didnt geit it

nice map i really like the hard diff. good luck ^^

liangv587 wrote:

已经很好了，没什么可摸的

host 的整体音量可以上调20 ok 但是我上调了10
02:00:271 - 这个位置可以加个圈并finish 我觉得不用把
00:04:827 - 00:23:055 - 00:36:726 - 00:39:764 - 00:42:802 - 00:45:840 - 00:48:878 - 00:51:916 - 00:54:954 - 00:57:992 - 01:14:701 - 这些加上finish吧 ok


[Basic]

00:12:423 (3) - 还是不要overlap吧，放到下面 ok
01:26:854 (1) - 右移一些，尾巴遮一半ok


[Medium]

00:27:612 (2) - flow不好，左移包3的头ok
01:51:157 (1) - 移到5的右上ok
01:52:676 (4,5,6) - 这三个节奏莫名，若果觉得不好搞可以用滑条带过ok
01:55:714 - 试试这样还是不改了

[Another]

00:17:549 (3,4) - 上翘一点，不要平行了ok

Regraz wrote:

MOD：
[General]
就两个combo color？
Uncheck Widescreen Support ??
把做GD的id加到tag里面
[Basic]
1.http://puu.sh/9EDkK/4443a1db19.png
2.00:01:790 (1) - 结束在00:04:448 ，00:04:827 处加一个1/1滑条。
3.00:10:904 (1) - 把他伸展一点，就像：http://puu.sh/9EDM3/f40c415359.jpg
4.00:24:195 (2) - 向前或向后1/2
5.00:27:233 (2) - ^
6.00:33:689 (1) - 可以做一个音量渐增。
7.00:56:854 (3,4) - 这个blanket还需在修一下
8.01:28:373 (2) - DS，Basic搞这么大。。。。
9.01:57:233 (1,2) - 用1包2的头啊
[Medium]
00:23:055 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/9HMAF/9c62b7bd13.jpg 修一下blanket blanket可以用AR圈检查。。。下面还有几处就不说了
00:25:334 (3,1) - ^
01:47:549 (5) - 这里的DS检查一下
01:52:676 (5,6,7) - 感觉有些空
[Advanced]
00:12:043 (4) - 移动到65|121，叠好。
00:20:017 (1,2,3,4) - 建议变SV要NC
00:31:030 (2,3) - 包好
00:33:688 (1) - 有的难度是Finish，有的是clap，建议统一一下
00:43:182 (2) - 容易快按1/2，突然缺了这么一块
00:58:372 (2,3,4) - 这个Flow感觉不算太好。
01:00:271 (7) - 移动到181|160，叠好。
01:00:650 (1) - 加一个音效吧qwq
01:14:701 (1) - 放到和01:13:941 (3) - 的对称位置，然后调整一下后续note的位置。 keep it
01:47:549 (7) - 变SV要NC。
02:00:081 (5) - 各难度音效统一。
[Another]
00:20:017 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 正三角形w
00:54:195 (9) - NCkeep it
01:47:549 (7) - NC
[Extreme]
00:33:688 (1,1,1) - 这三个有点危险
01:12:802 (7) - 折返次数与前面不一，建议NC。keep it
==========================
没了
Good Luck！

yf_bmp wrote:

如果不能十分理解我的意思那我下次重新用中文说一遍吧 以及其他diff的mod.
这两天考试 暂时没空

[_Crystal] wrote:

from m4m
sorry for late!

[General]
looks fine.

[Another]
整体来说,形似这样的梗挺难读也比较卡手 00:12:043 (5,1) - 我的建议是 ok

SPOILER

00:29:321 (2,3) - 没有对称;w; ok
00:30:650 (5,1) - blanket ok
00:42:327 漏音 ok
00:52:106 (2,3) - blanket? ok
01:02:549 (1) - 个人认为有点突兀,建议去掉这个 把break拉到这里 这样挺好
01:29:131 (7) - 最后一个点改成circle? 这个后面的对应
01:35:017 (5,6,7,1) - 间距可以拉大点 ok
01:56:093 (3) - 最后一个点改成circle ok
01:56:663 (4,1) - NC互换?没有, 我把那两部分看成整体, 没按小节来

[Advanced]
没啥问题 不太会摸这种style的(?)

[Medium]
00:19:638 (3) - 最后的点改成circle,有重音 ok
00:43:941 (3) - 感觉这个没压到什么音啊 长白线最好circle嗯 这里不用
01:13:182 (1,2,3,4) - stack太难了 ok

[Basic]
00:24:195 (2,3) - 替换成一个slider?
00:50:018 (2,3) - blanket
01:28:373 (2) - DS不一致 (check AiMod) 都是1.2x 没问题
01:35:967 (1,2,3,4) - 其实可以一个note一个NC?
其他的在你指出之前我自己测试的时候就已经改正了

good luck!