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DJ Mass MAD Izm* - Red. by Full Metal Jacket
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5's Extreme
5's Extreme
Topic Starter
xxdeathx
xxdeathx wrote:
m4m.
[General][Normal]
- the start of your uninherited timing section (the red line on your timeline) should be at the same time as the first note in your map.ok
- 00:04:828 (1,2,3,4) - you can blanket these better ok
- 00:24:005 (2,3) - don't do these kind of stacks in easy/normal'
- 00:27:043 (2,3) - ^
- 00:48:879 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - i don't like how some parts are empty so it's up to the player to guess which part of the rhythm is mapped. I'm considering
- 01:32:170 (5,1) - blanket ok
- sliders are much easier than circles; in easy/normal you should have more sliders and less circles. I'm considering
[Advanced][Extreme]
- 00:48:879 (1,2) - don't overlap ok
- 00:55:714 (3,4) - make them parallel ok
- 01:21:157 (3,4,5,6) - stacking circles on the slider front after the sliders is hard to read But I want to keep it
- 01:58:752 (1,2) - these can be parallel too ok
good luck!
- 00:04:069 (9) - the music keeps going so repeat the slider more I know, but I arranged it specially.
- 00:05:018 (2,4) - make these parallel Actually, it is symmetrical with 00:07:107 (4) -
- 00:29:132 (1,2,3) - you can blanket these ok
- 01:00:651 (1) - only need 3 points to make a circle https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1732089 I don't think so
- 01:35:588 (1,1,2,3) - can blanket ok
- 01:52:486 (8,1) - ^ ok
- this map is very hard, definitely harder than what you can play, but it's your first map so you'll get better
Thx
Hellooooo from my Queue
[General]
[Medium]
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Honestly I don't like the song and many objects issues such as not snapped properly please fix that through AiMod
Good luck~
[General]
- I think you need at least 3 diffrent custom combo colors, so please add 1 more
- You should use Distance Spacing consistent on Easy or Normal diff, and please prevent any big jumps example this 00:07:866 (1,2) - That's a jump
- 00:10:904 (1) - Make It a bit straight, http://puu.sh/9Dy7Q/4de632e665.jpg
- 00:12:423 (3,1) - That overlap not look good
- 00:48:119 (4,1) - As for basic, I think that one too hard to follow please reconsider to prevent that one
- 01:26:094 (4,1) - That overlap not look good
[Medium]
- 00:13:566 (4) - Add clap
- 00:15:085 (3) - Prevent to use that kind of slider, because the rules say so "You can't manipulated slider speed by put red nodes (anchors)" Please reconsider that
- 00:32:364 (2,3) - Not symetrical enough
- 00:42:047 (6,2) - Bad overlap, maybe you can CTrl+H (2) http://puu.sh/9DyYJ/78fb47154c.jpg
- 01:14:706 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - A bit hard to be a Medium, maybe can make some people confuse because of the slider repeat, please reconsider that
- 01:21:161 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same ^
- 01:53:630 (7) - Prevent to use that kind of slider, because the rules say so "You can't manipulated slider speed by put red nodes (anchors)" Please reconsider that
- 00:20:022 (1,2,3,4) - Make them a bit farther so It'll prevent from overlap each others http://puu.sh/9Dzkn/b36221607d.jpg
- 00:15:077 (5) - Prevent to use that kind of slider, because the rules say so "You can't manipulated slider speed by put red nodes (anchors)" Please reconsider that
- 00:15:457 (1,2) - Delete? not fit the song imo
- 00:44:318 (1) - Same ^
- 01:12:419 (7) - Same ^
- 01:53:622 (3) - Same ^
- 01:00:650 (1) - Make It a better circle, the current is not symetric enough
[]
Honestly I don't like the song and many objects issues such as not snapped properly please fix that through AiMod
Good luck~
Hello
From my modding queue
Well, good luck on the ranking
I really love this song <3
Oh, hi there Mako Sakata ~~~~
From my modding queue
[General]
- Consider about adding more tags such as "Bemani" or other tags
- Inconsistency in Tags
- Inconsistency in Preview Time : 5's Extreme with other diff
- Inconsistency in Red Timing Section : 5's Extreme with other diff
- It's heavily recommended to use Beatmania IIDX Diff Spread as listed here
- Background images must be at a maximum of 1024x768 pixels for 4:3, 1366x768 pixels for 16:9. Consider resizing the Background size
[Basic]
I loved this <3
[Medium]
- 01:13:187 (1,2,3,4) - Do not stack more than 2 circles in this diff, consider change it
[Advanced]
This diff is very well mapped <3
[Extreme]
- AR 9 OD 8 suits this diff better
[5's Extreme]
- OD 8 and HP 8 suits this diff better
- 00:33:688 (1,1,1) - This slider is weird, consider fixing it
- Consider about adding more tags such as "Bemani" or other tags
- Inconsistency in Tags
- Inconsistency in Preview Time : 5's Extreme with other diff
- Inconsistency in Red Timing Section : 5's Extreme with other diff
- It's heavily recommended to use Beatmania IIDX Diff Spread as listed here
- Background images must be at a maximum of 1024x768 pixels for 4:3, 1366x768 pixels for 16:9. Consider resizing the Background size
[Basic]
I loved this <3
[Medium]
- 01:13:187 (1,2,3,4) - Do not stack more than 2 circles in this diff, consider change it
[Advanced]
This diff is very well mapped <3
[Extreme]
- AR 9 OD 8 suits this diff better
[5's Extreme]
- OD 8 and HP 8 suits this diff better
- 00:33:688 (1,1,1) - This slider is weird, consider fixing it
Well, good luck on the ranking
I really love this song <3
Oh, hi there Mako Sakata ~~~~
Topic Starter
Mako Sakata's MOD
Mako Sakata wrote:
Hellooooo from my Queue
[General][Basic]
- I think you need at least 3 diffrent custom combo colors, so please add 1 more
Too many issues at spacing, and the hitsound is not consisntent enough. You can check on AiMod (Ctrl+Shift+A) to make sure your spacing is ok
- You should use Distance Spacing consistent on Easy or Normal diff, and please prevent any big jumps example this 00:07:866 (1,2) - That's a jump
- 00:10:904 (1) - Make It a bit straight, http://puu.sh/9Dy7Q/4de632e665.jpg
- 00:12:423 (3,1) - That overlap not look good
- 00:48:119 (4,1) - As for basic, I think that one too hard to follow please reconsider to prevent that one
- 01:26:094 (4,1) - That overlap not look good
[Medium]Basic and Medium I have remapped the DS and blanket before your mod. All of these were fixed after I checked my map according to your mod
- 00:13:566 (4) - Add clap
- 00:15:085 (3) - Prevent to use that kind of slider, because the rules say so "You can't manipulated slider speed by put red nodes (anchors)" Please reconsider that
- 00:32:364 (2,3) - Not symetrical enough
- 00:42:047 (6,2) - Bad overlap, maybe you can CTrl+H (2) http://puu.sh/9DyYJ/78fb47154c.jpg
- 01:14:706 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - A bit hard to be a Medium, maybe can make some people confuse because of the slider repeat, please reconsider that
- 01:21:161 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same ^
- 01:53:630 (7) - Prevent to use that kind of slider, because the rules say so "You can't manipulated slider speed by put red nodes (anchors)" Please reconsider that
[Adavance]YES, but I use another way
- 00:20:022 (1,2,3,4) - Make them a bit farther so It'll prevent from overlap each others http://puu.sh/9Dzkn/b36221607d.jpg
[Extreme]Too many issues on weeble slider I think EZ and NM are too many issues
- 00:15:077 (5) - Prevent to use that kind of slider, because the rules say so "You can't manipulated slider speed by put red nodes (anchors)" Please reconsider that I don't know, i'm communicating with BAT
- 00:15:457 (1,2) - Delete? not fit the song imo ^
- 00:44:318 (1) - Same ^ ^
- 01:12:419 (7) - Same ^ ^
- 01:53:622 (3) - Same ^ [color=#F0000FF]^[/color]
- 01:00:650 (1) - Make It a better circle, the current is not symetric enough ok
[]
Honestly I don't like the song and many objects issues such as not snapped properly please fix that through AiMod
Good luck~
thx for your modding
Topic Starter
Kasuga's mod
Kasuga wrote:
Hello
From my modding queue[General]
- Consider about adding more tags such as "Bemani" or other tags Nice advice
- Inconsistency in Tags I'm trying
- Inconsistency in Preview Time : 5's Extreme with other diff I'm trying
- Inconsistency in Red Timing Section : 5's Extreme with other diff I'm trying
- It's heavily recommended to use Beatmania IIDX Diff Spread as listed here I got it!
- Background images must be at a maximum of 1024x768 pixels for 4:3, 1366x768 pixels for 16:9. Consider resizing the Background size
[Basic]
I loved this <3 thx
[Medium]
- 01:13:187 (1,2,3,4) - Do not stack more than 2 circles in this diff, consider change it ok
[Advanced]
This diff is very well mapped <3 thx
[Extreme]
- AR 9 OD 8 suits this diff better ok
[5's Extreme]
- OD 8 and HP 8 suits this diff better ok, but I think HP need't change
- 00:33:688 (1,1,1) - This slider is weird, consider fixing it I'll inform him
Well, good luck on the ranking
I really love this song <3
Oh, hi there Mako Sakata ~~~~
THX for your modding!!
我来摸图了..
新人摸图，可能很没用..
Well, good luck on the ranking!
新人摸图，可能很没用..
mod
Basic
00:12:423 (3) - 总感觉遮住不太好，但我也没想到什么解决方法
00:15:461 (3) - 感觉这个note可以删除 ？
00:24:195 (2,3) - 最好不要叠
00:27:233 (2,3) - 同上
00:48:119 (4) - 最好不要遮挡，毕竟是EZ啊
00:59:892 (3) - 为什么这个没有加上自定义clap音效呢
01:35:967 (1,2,3) - EZ最好不要放三连串，可以改成滑条
01:37:486 (1,2,3) - 同上
01:39:005 (1,2,3) - 同上
01:40:524 (1,2,3) - 同上
Mediem
00:45:845 (1,2,3) - 00:45:845 (1)从（48,104）移动到（64,88）；00:46:604 (2) - 从（256,104）移动到（256,72）；00:47:364 (3) - 从（464,104）移动到（448,88）。我感觉这样会好看一点
Advanced
nice!
Extreme
对不起我无法pass...
5's Extreme!
同上
00:12:423 (3) - 总感觉遮住不太好，但我也没想到什么解决方法
00:15:461 (3) - 感觉这个note可以删除 ？
00:24:195 (2,3) - 最好不要叠
00:27:233 (2,3) - 同上
00:48:119 (4) - 最好不要遮挡，毕竟是EZ啊
00:59:892 (3) - 为什么这个没有加上自定义clap音效呢
01:35:967 (1,2,3) - EZ最好不要放三连串，可以改成滑条
01:37:486 (1,2,3) - 同上
01:39:005 (1,2,3) - 同上
01:40:524 (1,2,3) - 同上
Mediem
00:45:845 (1,2,3) - 00:45:845 (1)从（48,104）移动到（64,88）；00:46:604 (2) - 从（256,104）移动到（256,72）；00:47:364 (3) - 从（464,104）移动到（448,88）。我感觉这样会好看一点
Advanced
nice!
Extreme
对不起我无法pass...
5's Extreme!
同上
Well, good luck on the ranking!
Topic Starter
还是谢谢了damian_q wrote:
我来摸图了..
新人摸图，可能很没用..damian_q's modBasic
00:12:423 (3) - 总感觉遮住不太好，但我也没想到什么解决方法 这个应该没事
00:15:461 (3) - 感觉这个note可以删除 ？ 不删除,节奏在那里呢
00:24:195 (2,3) - 最好不要叠 ok
00:27:233 (2,3) - 同上01:35:967 (1,1) -
00:48:119 (4) - 最好不要遮挡，毕竟是EZ啊 ok
00:59:892 (3) - 为什么这个没有加上自定义clap音效呢 本来就不需要
01:35:967 (1,2,3) - EZ最好不要放三连串，可以改成滑条 ok
01:37:486 (1,2,3) - 同上ok
01:39:005 (1,2,3) - 同上ok
01:40:524 (1,2,3) - 同上 01:35:967 (1,1) - ok
Mediem
00:45:845 (1,2,3) - 00:45:845 (1)从（48,104）移动到（64,88）；00:46:604 (2) - 从（256,104）移动到（256,72）；00:47:364 (3) - 从（464,104）移动到（448,88）。我感觉这样会好看一点 符合snap我没改
Advanced
nice! :)
Extreme
对不起我无法pass...
5's Extreme!
同上
Well, good luck on the ranking!
别打开
===============================我个人觉得，禁用的是使用红描点变速导致滑条速度不一的情况，所以其中的一些slider还是rankable的
另外，我说一句，那个规定是皮皮搞的，他也不做图，还有原来的人基本上也都黑了，所以这个就拖来拖去。。。。
另外，我说一句，那个规定是皮皮搞的，他也不做图，还有原来的人基本上也都黑了，所以这个就拖来拖去。。。。
MOD：
[General]
就两个combo color？
Uncheck Widescreen Support
把做GD的id加到tag里面
[Basic]
1.http://puu.sh/9EDkK/4443a1db19.png
2.00:01:790 (1) - 结束在00:04:448 ，00:04:827 处加一个1/1滑条。
3.00:10:904 (1) - 把他伸展一点，就像：http://puu.sh/9EDM3/f40c415359.jpg
4.00:24:195 (2) - 向前或向后1/2
5.00:27:233 (2) - ^
6.00:33:689 (1) - 可以做一个音量渐增。
7.00:56:854 (3,4) - 这个blanket还需在修一下
8.01:28:373 (2) - DS，Basic搞这么大。。。。
9.01:57:233 (1,2) - 用1包2的头啊
[Medium]
00:23:055 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/9HMAF/9c62b7bd13.jpg 修一下blanket blanket可以用AR圈检查。。。下面还有几处就不说了
00:25:334 (3,1) - ^
01:47:549 (5) - 这里的DS检查一下
01:52:676 (5,6,7) - 感觉有些空
[Advanced]
00:12:043 (4) - 移动到65|121，叠好。
00:20:017 (1,2,3,4) - 建议变SV要NC
00:31:030 (2,3) - 包好
00:33:688 (1) - 有的难度是Finish，有的是clap，建议统一一下
00:43:182 (2) - 容易快按1/2，突然缺了这么一块
00:58:372 (2,3,4) - 这个Flow感觉不算太好。
01:00:271 (7) - 移动到181|160，叠好。
01:00:650 (1) - 加一个音效吧qwq
01:14:701 (1) - 放到和01:13:941 (3) - 的对称位置，然后调整一下后续note的位置。
01:47:549 (7) - 变SV要NC。
02:00:081 (5) - 各难度音效统一。
[Another]
00:20:017 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 正三角形w
00:54:195 (9) - NC
01:47:549 (7) - NC
[Extreme]
00:33:688 (1,1,1) - 这三个有点危险
01:12:802 (7) - 折返次数与前面不一，建议NC。
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没了Good Luck！
Stars~ Fighto!~
Topic Starter
Atrue wrote:
Stars~ Fighto!~
thx, I‘m trying
谢谢啦,我在努力!
m4m
第二次摸图啊/\
00:04:068 (9) - 后面觉得应该继续有连打，在9的前面加上几个note：00:04:068 (9,10,11,12,13) -
00:09:574 (1,2,3,4) - 叠起来觉得更贴音乐一点
00:20:587 (3,1) - 00:21:346 (3,1) - 00:22:106 (3,1) - 这里跳的间距觉得还是和
00:37:486 (7,8,9) - 这里感觉节奏不对
00:51:346 (10) - 滑条时间长度不变，改成折返滑条怎么样
00:51:916 (1,2) - 这里空拍惹，弄个跳或者是补一拍吧。
00:54:005 (7,8) - 这里也空拍惹。
01:11:663 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里节奏不对
00:09:574 (1,2,3,4) - 叠起来觉得更贴音乐一点
00:20:587 (3,1) - 00:21:346 (3,1) - 00:22:106 (3,1) - 这里跳的间距觉得还是和
00:37:486 (7,8,9) - 这里感觉节奏不对
00:51:346 (10) - 滑条时间长度不变，改成折返滑条怎么样
00:51:916 (1,2) - 这里空拍惹，弄个跳或者是补一拍吧。
00:54:005 (7,8) - 这里也空拍惹。
01:11:663 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里节奏不对
Topic Starter
谢谢啦Deliay wrote:
m4m第二次摸图啊/\00:04:068 (9) - 后面觉得应该继续有连打，在9的前面加上几个note：00:04:068 (9,10,11,12,13) - 考虑过这个问题 我正在想
00:09:574 (1,2,3,4) - 叠起来觉得更贴音乐一点 是的, 但是我在想方法
00:20:587 (3,1) - 00:21:346 (3,1) - 00:22:106 (3,1) - 这里跳的间距觉得还是和
00:37:486 (7,8,9) - 这里感觉节奏不对 这个特意的
00:51:346 (10) - 滑条时间长度不变，改成折返滑条怎么样ok
00:51:916 (1,2) - 这里空拍惹，弄个跳或者是补一拍吧。ok
00:54:005 (7,8) - 这里也空拍惹。补了一个
01:11:663 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里节奏不对2,3之间1/8音 我觉得整体就是1/4 不影响
[5]
00:06:916 (1) - remove NC, unnecsessery imo.
00:09:289 (2) - remove this note is sounds better imo and the stream jump on 00:09:764 (7) is weird to play, maybe use just normal spacing that you use.
00:15:081 (1) - remove NC.
00:16:600 (1) - ^
00:28:562 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - just make the spacing balance is playable imo since the music on this part is not stronger so..
01:05:301 (5,6,7) - the stream with very low volume is really insane imo, remove these note is really more fit.
01:08:339 (5,6,7) - ^
01:11:662 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - really weird sound here but I don't have any idea either.
01:29:795 (12,1) - wtf, really.
01:38:245 (1,2,3) - make it different with the first one, ctrl+g them like that. do this on the other two triangle also but maybe you can leave the last one since that is the forth triangle so it will come back to the first triangle.
01:43:561 (1,2,3,4,5) - make these spacing properly.
[Extreme]
00:04:068 (9) - remove one reverse and add note instead since it's really a strong beat.
00:12:422 (1) - unstack, really hard to read.
00:18:498 (1) - ^ and fix it in the whole diff :X it's really hard..
00:38:815 (6,7,8,9,10) - make this star properly.
[Advanced]
00:03:119 (5,1,2,3,4) - really too hard and the pattern looks random.
00:42:043 (3) - hmm double reverse? I think it's hard to realize.
01:22:866 (2,3) - why the spacing is suddenly too close.
01:40:524 (1) - ^
[Med]
00:20:777 (1,1,1) - don't NC spam.
01:16:220 (1,3) - swap NC.
01:47:549 (1) - remove NC.
[Beginner]
01:35:967 (1,1,1,1) - don't spam the NC, beginner may confuse.
GL :3
00:06:916 (1) - remove NC, unnecsessery imo.
00:09:289 (2) - remove this note is sounds better imo and the stream jump on 00:09:764 (7) is weird to play, maybe use just normal spacing that you use.
00:15:081 (1) - remove NC.
00:16:600 (1) - ^
00:28:562 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - just make the spacing balance is playable imo since the music on this part is not stronger so..
01:05:301 (5,6,7) - the stream with very low volume is really insane imo, remove these note is really more fit.
01:08:339 (5,6,7) - ^
01:11:662 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - really weird sound here but I don't have any idea either.
01:29:795 (12,1) - wtf, really.
01:38:245 (1,2,3) - make it different with the first one, ctrl+g them like that. do this on the other two triangle also but maybe you can leave the last one since that is the forth triangle so it will come back to the first triangle.
01:43:561 (1,2,3,4,5) - make these spacing properly.
[Extreme]
00:04:068 (9) - remove one reverse and add note instead since it's really a strong beat.
00:12:422 (1) - unstack, really hard to read.
00:18:498 (1) - ^ and fix it in the whole diff :X it's really hard..
00:38:815 (6,7,8,9,10) - make this star properly.
[Advanced]
00:03:119 (5,1,2,3,4) - really too hard and the pattern looks random.
00:42:043 (3) - hmm double reverse? I think it's hard to realize.
01:22:866 (2,3) - why the spacing is suddenly too close.
01:40:524 (1) - ^
[Med]
00:20:777 (1,1,1) - don't NC spam.
01:16:220 (1,3) - swap NC.
01:47:549 (1) - remove NC.
[Beginner]
01:35:967 (1,1,1,1) - don't spam the NC, beginner may confuse.
GL :3
Topic Starter
P A N's mod
P A N wrote:
[5]
00:06:916 (1) - remove NC, unnecsessery imo. ok
00:09:289 (2) - remove this note is sounds better imo and the stream jump on 00:09:764 (7) is weird to play, maybe use just normal spacing that you use. ok
00:15:081 (1) - remove NC. keep it
00:16:600 (1) - ^
00:28:562 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - just make the spacing balance is playable imo since the music on this part is not stronger so.. ok
01:05:301 (5,6,7) - the stream with very low volume is really insane imo, remove these note is really more fit. ok
01:08:339 (5,6,7) - ^ ok
01:11:662 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - really weird sound here but I don't have any idea either. ok
01:29:795 (12,1) - wtf, really.
01:38:245 (1,2,3) - make it different with the first one, ctrl+g them like that. do this on the other two triangle also but maybe you can leave the last one since that is the forth triangle so it will come back to the first triangle. ok
01:43:561 (1,2,3,4,5) - make these spacing properly. ok
[Extreme]
00:04:068 (9) - remove one reverse and add note instead since it's really a strong beat. I'm considering
00:12:422 (1) - unstack, really hard to read. I wanna keep it
00:18:498 (1) - ^ and fix it in the whole diff :X it's really hard.. I wanna keep it
00:38:815 (6,7,8,9,10) - make this star properly. ok ok
[Advanced]
00:03:119 (5,1,2,3,4) - really too hard and the pattern looks random. I think not
00:42:043 (3) - hmm double reverse? I think it's hard to realize. ok
01:22:866 (2,3) - why the spacing is suddenly too close. ok
01:40:524 (1) - ^ ok
[Med]
00:20:777 (1,1,1) - don't NC spam. ok
01:16:220 (1,3) - swap NC. ok
01:47:549 (1) - remove NC. ok
[Beginner]
01:35:967 (1,1,1,1) - don't spam the NC, beginner may confuse. ok
GL :3 thx
REALLY thx your modding
chaee
[Normal]
00:43:941 (3) - Move away from 00:43:182 (2) - they're too close together
01:32:169 (5) - I think this should be rotated by 33 to make a better blanket with 01:32:929 (1) -
00:43:941 (3) - Move away from 00:43:182 (2) - they're too close together
01:32:169 (5) - I think this should be rotated by 33 to make a better blanket with 01:32:929 (1) -
[Advanced]
00:31:030 (2) - Curve a bit more to make the perfect blanket with 00:30:650 (1) -
00:43:182 (2) - Replace with a duplicate of either of one these > 00:43:562 (3,4) -
00:52:866 (3) - 288x
nice map i really like the hard diff. good luck ^^00:31:030 (2) - Curve a bit more to make the perfect blanket with 00:30:650 (1) -
00:43:182 (2) - Replace with a duplicate of either of one these > 00:43:562 (3,4) -
00:52:866 (3) - 288x
Topic Starter
chaee's mod
chaee wrote:
[Normal]
00:43:941 (3) - Move away from 00:43:182 (2) - they're too close together ok
01:32:169 (5) - I think this should be rotated by 33 to make a better blanket with 01:32:929 (1) - ok[Advanced]nice map i really like the hard diff. good luck ^^
00:31:030 (2) - Curve a bit more to make the perfect blanket with 00:30:650 (1) - ok
00:43:182 (2) - Replace with a duplicate of either of one these > 00:43:562 (3,4) - ok
00:52:866 (3) - 288x I didnt geit it
thank you very much!
m4m
瞎摸=A=
[extreme]
00:28:182 (4,5,6) - 建议垂直摆放与00:27:802 (1,2,3) - 对应
00:30:081 (5,6,7) - 建议角度与00:29:701 (2,3,4) - 对应 且00:29:701 (2,3,4) - 没有摆成直线，00:29:701 (2) - 向左偏了一点
00:43:182 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 连打不是一条直线 综合上一条应该是开着GS的结果 建议关闭GS
01:01:030 (1) - 如果从01:00:840 - 开始可能会更好
01:32:833 (10,1) - 连打的走向，01:32:833 (10) - 向上偏了一点
[another]
00:06:157 - 我认为应该有个circle 这里有一个鼓点 如果空着的话flow一下就断了
00:12:422 (1) - 建议放在00:12:043 (5) - 的下面
00:13:562 (5) - 这个slider如果全红点会不会好一点
00:15:081 (5) - 最后两个点没有设为红点注意 如果是故意的当我没说
00:18:498 (1) - 同00:12:422 (1) -
00:46:600 (3) - 同上
00:48:119 (3) - 同上
01:00:650 (1) - 换成spin可能会更自然一些
01:12:422 (7) - 还是红点问题
01:53:625 (3) - 同上
01:57:422 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 8slider的摆放角度与前面的连打不在一条直线上的感觉
02:00:271 - 这里结尾可以放一个spin
[advanced]
00:03:119 (5,1) - 比较难受的摆位，00:03:119 (5) - 是否需要和00:03:309 (1) - 呈一定角度以与00:03:309 (1) - 和00:03:688 (2) - 对应？
00:13:562 (4) - 红点 不再赘述
瞎摸=A=
[extreme]
00:28:182 (4,5,6) - 建议垂直摆放与00:27:802 (1,2,3) - 对应
00:30:081 (5,6,7) - 建议角度与00:29:701 (2,3,4) - 对应 且00:29:701 (2,3,4) - 没有摆成直线，00:29:701 (2) - 向左偏了一点
00:43:182 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 连打不是一条直线 综合上一条应该是开着GS的结果 建议关闭GS
01:01:030 (1) - 如果从01:00:840 - 开始可能会更好
01:32:833 (10,1) - 连打的走向，01:32:833 (10) - 向上偏了一点
[another]
00:06:157 - 我认为应该有个circle 这里有一个鼓点 如果空着的话flow一下就断了
00:12:422 (1) - 建议放在00:12:043 (5) - 的下面
00:13:562 (5) - 这个slider如果全红点会不会好一点
00:15:081 (5) - 最后两个点没有设为红点注意 如果是故意的当我没说
00:18:498 (1) - 同00:12:422 (1) -
00:46:600 (3) - 同上
00:48:119 (3) - 同上
01:00:650 (1) - 换成spin可能会更自然一些
01:12:422 (7) - 还是红点问题
01:53:625 (3) - 同上
01:57:422 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 8slider的摆放角度与前面的连打不在一条直线上的感觉
02:00:271 - 这里结尾可以放一个spin
[advanced]
00:03:119 (5,1) - 比较难受的摆位，00:03:119 (5) - 是否需要和00:03:309 (1) - 呈一定角度以与00:03:309 (1) - 和00:03:688 (2) - 对应？
00:13:562 (4) - 红点 不再赘述
Topic Starter
[box=KaedekaShizuru's mod[quote="KaedekaShizuru":1337:1337]m4m
瞎摸=A=
[extreme]
00:28:182 (4,5,6) - 建议垂直摆放与00:27:802 (1,2,3) - 对应 ok
00:30:081 (5,6,7) - 建议角度与00:29:701 (2,3,4) - 对应 且00:29:701 (2,3,4) - 没有摆成直线，00:29:701 (2) - 向左偏了一点 ok
00:43:182 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 连打不是一条直线 综合上一条应该是开着GS的结果 建议关闭GS ok
01:01:030 (1) - 如果从01:00:840 - 开始可能会更好 ok
01:32:833 (10,1) - 连打的走向，01:32:833 (10) - 向上偏了一点 ok
[another]
00:06:157 - 我认为应该有个circle 这里有一个鼓点 如果空着的话flow一下就断了 ok
00:12:422 (1) - 建议放在00:12:043 (5) - 的下面 难道没在下面么 - -
00:13:562 (5) - 这个slider如果全红点会不会好一点 会改变长度
00:15:081 (5) - 最后两个点没有设为红点注意 如果是故意的当我没说 ok
00:18:498 (1) - 同00:12:422 (1) -
00:46:600 (3) - 同上
00:48:119 (3) - 同上
01:00:650 (1) - 换成spin可能会更自然一些 我想保留
01:12:422 (7) - 还是红点问题 ok
01:53:625 (3) - 同上 ok
01:57:422 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 8slider的摆放角度与前面的连打不在一条直线上的感觉 ok
02:00:271 - 这里结尾可以放一个spin 3个重音还是挺合适的
[advanced]
00:03:119 (5,1) - 比较难受的摆位，00:03:119 (5) - 是否需要和00:03:309 (1) - 呈一定角度以与00:03:309 (1) - 和00:03:688 (2) - 对应？ok
00:13:562 (4) - 红点 不再赘述ok
瞎摸=A=
[extreme]
00:28:182 (4,5,6) - 建议垂直摆放与00:27:802 (1,2,3) - 对应 ok
00:30:081 (5,6,7) - 建议角度与00:29:701 (2,3,4) - 对应 且00:29:701 (2,3,4) - 没有摆成直线，00:29:701 (2) - 向左偏了一点 ok
00:43:182 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 连打不是一条直线 综合上一条应该是开着GS的结果 建议关闭GS ok
01:01:030 (1) - 如果从01:00:840 - 开始可能会更好 ok
01:32:833 (10,1) - 连打的走向，01:32:833 (10) - 向上偏了一点 ok
[another]
00:06:157 - 我认为应该有个circle 这里有一个鼓点 如果空着的话flow一下就断了 ok
00:12:422 (1) - 建议放在00:12:043 (5) - 的下面 难道没在下面么 - -
00:13:562 (5) - 这个slider如果全红点会不会好一点 会改变长度
00:15:081 (5) - 最后两个点没有设为红点注意 如果是故意的当我没说 ok
00:18:498 (1) - 同00:12:422 (1) -
00:46:600 (3) - 同上
00:48:119 (3) - 同上
01:00:650 (1) - 换成spin可能会更自然一些 我想保留
01:12:422 (7) - 还是红点问题 ok
01:53:625 (3) - 同上 ok
01:57:422 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 8slider的摆放角度与前面的连打不在一条直线上的感觉 ok
02:00:271 - 这里结尾可以放一个spin 3个重音还是挺合适的
[advanced]
00:03:119 (5,1) - 比较难受的摆位，00:03:119 (5) - 是否需要和00:03:309 (1) - 呈一定角度以与00:03:309 (1) - 和00:03:688 (2) - 对应？ok
00:13:562 (4) - 红点 不再赘述ok
已经很好了，没什么可摸的
host 的整体音量可以上调20
02:00:271 - 这个位置可以加个圈并finish
00:04:827 - 00:23:055 - 00:36:726 - 00:39:764 - 00:42:802 - 00:45:840 - 00:48:878 - 00:51:916 - 00:54:954 - 00:57:992 - 01:14:701 - 这些加上finish吧
[Basic]
00:12:423 (3) - 还是不要overlap吧，放到下面
01:26:854 (1) - 右移一些，尾巴遮一半
[Medium]
00:27:612 (2) - flow不好，左移包3的头
01:51:157 (1) - 移到5的右上
01:52:676 (4,5,6) - 这三个节奏莫名，若果觉得不好搞可以用滑条带过
01:55:714 - 试试这样
[Another]
00:17:549 (3,4) - 上翘一点，不要平行了
host 的整体音量可以上调20
02:00:271 - 这个位置可以加个圈并finish
00:04:827 - 00:23:055 - 00:36:726 - 00:39:764 - 00:42:802 - 00:45:840 - 00:48:878 - 00:51:916 - 00:54:954 - 00:57:992 - 01:14:701 - 这些加上finish吧
[Basic]
00:12:423 (3) - 还是不要overlap吧，放到下面
01:26:854 (1) - 右移一些，尾巴遮一半
[Medium]
00:27:612 (2) - flow不好，左移包3的头
01:51:157 (1) - 移到5的右上
01:52:676 (4,5,6) - 这三个节奏莫名，若果觉得不好搞可以用滑条带过
01:55:714 - 试试这样
[Another]
00:17:549 (3,4) - 上翘一点，不要平行了
Topic Starter
liangv587‘s mod
liangv587 wrote:
已经很好了，没什么可摸的
host 的整体音量可以上调20 ok 但是我上调了10
02:00:271 - 这个位置可以加个圈并finish 我觉得不用把
00:04:827 - 00:23:055 - 00:36:726 - 00:39:764 - 00:42:802 - 00:45:840 - 00:48:878 - 00:51:916 - 00:54:954 - 00:57:992 - 01:14:701 - 这些加上finish吧 ok
[Basic]
00:12:423 (3) - 还是不要overlap吧，放到下面 ok
01:26:854 (1) - 右移一些，尾巴遮一半ok
[Medium]
00:27:612 (2) - flow不好，左移包3的头ok
01:51:157 (1) - 移到5的右上ok
01:52:676 (4,5,6) - 这三个节奏莫名，若果觉得不好搞可以用滑条带过ok
01:55:714 - 试试这样
[Another]
00:17:549 (3,4) - 上翘一点，不要平行了ok
非常感谢~~
Topic Starter
Regraz's mod
Regraz wrote:
MOD：
[General]
就两个combo color？
Uncheck Widescreen Support ??
把做GD的id加到tag里面
[Basic]
1.http://puu.sh/9EDkK/4443a1db19.png
2.00:01:790 (1) - 结束在00:04:448 ，00:04:827 处加一个1/1滑条。
3.00:10:904 (1) - 把他伸展一点，就像：http://puu.sh/9EDM3/f40c415359.jpg
4.00:24:195 (2) - 向前或向后1/2
5.00:27:233 (2) - ^
6.00:33:689 (1) - 可以做一个音量渐增。
7.00:56:854 (3,4) - 这个blanket还需在修一下
8.01:28:373 (2) - DS，Basic搞这么大。。。。
9.01:57:233 (1,2) - 用1包2的头啊
[Medium]
00:23:055 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/9HMAF/9c62b7bd13.jpg 修一下blanket blanket可以用AR圈检查。。。下面还有几处就不说了
00:25:334 (3,1) - ^
01:47:549 (5) - 这里的DS检查一下
01:52:676 (5,6,7) - 感觉有些空
[Advanced]
00:12:043 (4) - 移动到65|121，叠好。
00:20:017 (1,2,3,4) - 建议变SV要NC
00:31:030 (2,3) - 包好
00:33:688 (1) - 有的难度是Finish，有的是clap，建议统一一下
00:43:182 (2) - 容易快按1/2，突然缺了这么一块
00:58:372 (2,3,4) - 这个Flow感觉不算太好。
01:00:271 (7) - 移动到181|160，叠好。
01:00:650 (1) - 加一个音效吧qwq
01:14:701 (1) - 放到和01:13:941 (3) - 的对称位置，然后调整一下后续note的位置。 keep it
01:47:549 (7) - 变SV要NC。
02:00:081 (5) - 各难度音效统一。
[Another]
00:20:017 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 正三角形w
00:54:195 (9) - NCkeep it
01:47:549 (7) - NC
[Extreme]
00:33:688 (1,1,1) - 这三个有点危险
01:12:802 (7) - 折返次数与前面不一，建议NC。keep it
==========================
Good Luck！
其他的问题都修改了!! 谢啦~
M4M.
Its a bit interesting song. xD
[Basic]
Its a bit interesting song. xD
[Basic]
- 00:12:423 (3) - This slider is longer like the previous ones. Make it same as 00:10:904 (1)
- Nothing to do here~
- 00:12:043 (4) - Move this to x:120 y:64
- 00:59:891 (6) - Move this to x: 360 y:144
- 01:03:037 - Its the hard diff. Dont take break here.
- 00:38:815 (6,7,8,9,10) - Erm, its very ugly for stream...
- 01:03:141 - Dont take break!
- Its really extra, I failed it when I tried to play this diff. xD
- 00:59:511 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - These sliders... Move them somewhere.
- 01:37:485 (1) , 01:39:004 (1) , 01:40:523 (1) - These short spinners are annoying. Try something else.
- I cant say a lot of things, bcoz I cant play this diff. >.>
mark. will mod soon
Hi! m4m
[5's Extreme]
Your thought is good, but you should notice some nazis.
Try to make the hitsounds more, not only the normal-hitnormal
00:03:309 (1,2) - this is your standard distance, but 00:04:828 (1,3) - these two looks too close. Make them like this
00:06:346 (1,3) - same problem. And if you fix them, don't forget these two 00:06:916 (3,4) -
00:09:764 (6,7,8) - About these three, you can copy one of them and use ctrl+shit+R to rotate it by 120°
00:11:853 - here you should add a note
00:12:802 (2,4) - same problem
00:14:321 (3,4) - blanket them well
00:17:359 (2,3) - ^
00:28:846 (10,11) - check the distance
00:33:498 (7,8,1) - make the distance equal
00:42:897 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - looks ugly
00:54:195 (1,2,3) - make it as a triangle
00:55:239 (3,4) - these two are too close imo, since here are some large jumps 00:54:195 (1,2,3) -
00:55:619 (5,6) - ^
00:57:423 (10,1,1) - too close imo
01:26:473 (1,1) - ^
01:34:637 (2,3) - ^
It seems too boring after 01:36:726 . 01:36:726 (1,2,3) - for example, you have used this triangle many times. try new patterns
01:46:789 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - check the distance
[Another]
思路不错 排列也挺整洁的
00:03:119 (8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这个圆弧没摆好, 到后面 00:03:783 (6,7,8,9) - 这里的时候
00:09:764 (3,4,5) - 等距,现在这种似等非等的实在不好
00:12:612 (2,3,4) - ^
00:14:131 (2,3) - 现在这两个看起来太近了.. 这两个00:13:941 (1,2) - 逆时针转一点就行了
00:39:764 (1,2,3,4,5) - 圆弧摆好
00:43:182 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^ 4,5,6有些偏
01:00:650 (1,1) - 那个圆拉的再大点, 再把后面的圈放到中间会比较好..
别的没什么了 剩下的难度由于我实在累的不行了明天再摸...
[5's Extreme]
Your thought is good, but you should notice some nazis.
Try to make the hitsounds more, not only the normal-hitnormal
00:03:309 (1,2) - this is your standard distance, but 00:04:828 (1,3) - these two looks too close. Make them like this
00:06:346 (1,3) - same problem. And if you fix them, don't forget these two 00:06:916 (3,4) -
00:09:764 (6,7,8) - About these three, you can copy one of them and use ctrl+shit+R to rotate it by 120°
00:11:853 - here you should add a note
00:12:802 (2,4) - same problem
00:14:321 (3,4) - blanket them well
00:17:359 (2,3) - ^
00:28:846 (10,11) - check the distance
00:33:498 (7,8,1) - make the distance equal
00:42:897 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - looks ugly
00:54:195 (1,2,3) - make it as a triangle
00:55:239 (3,4) - these two are too close imo, since here are some large jumps 00:54:195 (1,2,3) -
00:55:619 (5,6) - ^
00:57:423 (10,1,1) - too close imo
01:26:473 (1,1) - ^
01:34:637 (2,3) - ^
It seems too boring after 01:36:726 . 01:36:726 (1,2,3) - for example, you have used this triangle many times. try new patterns
01:46:789 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - check the distance
[Another]
思路不错 排列也挺整洁的
00:03:119 (8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这个圆弧没摆好, 到后面 00:03:783 (6,7,8,9) - 这里的时候
00:09:764 (3,4,5) - 等距,现在这种似等非等的实在不好
00:12:612 (2,3,4) - ^
00:14:131 (2,3) - 现在这两个看起来太近了.. 这两个00:13:941 (1,2) - 逆时针转一点就行了
00:39:764 (1,2,3,4,5) - 圆弧摆好
00:43:182 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^ 4,5,6有些偏
01:00:650 (1,1) - 那个圆拉的再大点, 再把后面的圈放到中间会比较好..
别的没什么了 剩下的难度由于我实在累的不行了明天再摸...
No KD
Uninherited timing points conflict with 5's Extreme! diff.
Another的CS不应该比EX的小吧...（我个人认为）
Uninherited timing points conflict with 5's Extreme! diff.
Another的CS不应该比EX的小吧...（我个人认为）
其实我也是中国人也是英语渣……yf_bmp wrote:
Hi! m4m
[5's Extreme]
Your thought is good, but you should notice some nazis.
Try to make the hitsounds more, not only the normal-hitnormal
00:03:309 (1,2) - this is your standard distance, but 00:04:828 (1,3) - these two looks too close. Make them like this
00:06:346 (1,3) - same problem. And if you fix them, don't forget these two 00:06:916 (3,4) -
00:09:764 (6,7,8) - About these three, you can copy one of them and use ctrl+shit+R to rotate it by 120°
00:11:853 - here you should add a note
00:12:802 (2,4) - same problem
00:14:321 (3,4) - blanket them well
00:17:359 (2,3) - ^
00:28:846 (10,11) - check the distance
00:33:498 (7,8,1) - make the distance equal
00:42:897 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - looks ugly
00:54:195 (1,2,3) - make it as a triangle
00:55:239 (3,4) - these two are too close imo, since here are some large jumps 00:54:195 (1,2,3) -
00:55:619 (5,6) - ^
00:57:423 (10,1,1) - too close imo
01:26:473 (1,1) - ^
01:34:637 (2,3) - ^
It seems too boring after 01:36:726 . 01:36:726 (1,2,3) - for example, you have used this triangle many times. try new patterns
01:46:789 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - check the distance
如果不能十分理解我的意思那我下次重新用中文说一遍吧 以及其他diff的mod.
这两天考试 暂时没空
这两天考试 暂时没空
to 爱抚
我操 你有时间写英文mod不来给我好好做gd 我要打爆你yf_bmp wrote:
如果不能十分理解我的意思那我下次重新用中文说一遍吧 以及其他diff的mod.
这两天考试 暂时没空
好 之前的request 抱歉来晚了
sp这么多我就挑点有意义的看看了啊废话什么的就少说点了
[General]
01:26:853 - 我建议kiai在这里结束 在长白线结束会让kiai感觉完整一点
[Basic]
低难度里最好全程ds保持一致如果没有什么特别需要的话 感觉一下1.1x一下1.2x有点乱
而且00:54:574 (4,1,2) - 这里好像有点遮挡有点丑可以考虑稍微移开一点
00:45:081 (4) - 好像没包好可以修一下o.o
[Medium]
01:47:549 (5) - 和ez里一样也是不建议忽然让ds变大好多.-.
01:33:688 (2,3) - 弄一下blanket
没啥
[Advance]
01:00:650 - 这里建议可以把01:00:271 (7) - 加一个折返然后在这里加上个whistle之类的音效后面接上转盘感觉好一点
01:22:296 (7,1) - 交换nc?
[Another]
00:50:207 (4) - 这里感觉也可以nc因为前后都是4拍左右一组combo这样可以看起来统一一点
00:53:245 (5) - ^
[5s]
00:05:777 (4,5) - 可以考虑交换一下位置因为5和下一个滑条空了一拍距离这么近感觉不太好
00:13:562 (5) - 考虑reverse selection一下可以顺flow感觉会好些
01:26:473 (1) - 可以不要让滑条尾碰到前面的滑条身不然感觉不太好看
01:43:562 (1,2,3,4,5) - 可以往左上移一点和01:44:321 (1) - 摆整齐一些好看点
美丽 摸得有点水因为感觉没啥可说的good luck .-.01:26:853 - 我建议kiai在这里结束 在长白线结束会让kiai感觉完整一点
[Basic]
低难度里最好全程ds保持一致如果没有什么特别需要的话 感觉一下1.1x一下1.2x有点乱
而且00:54:574 (4,1,2) - 这里好像有点遮挡有点丑可以考虑稍微移开一点
00:45:081 (4) - 好像没包好可以修一下o.o
[Medium]
01:47:549 (5) - 和ez里一样也是不建议忽然让ds变大好多.-.
01:33:688 (2,3) - 弄一下blanket
没啥
[Advance]
01:00:650 - 这里建议可以把01:00:271 (7) - 加一个折返然后在这里加上个whistle之类的音效后面接上转盘感觉好一点
01:22:296 (7,1) - 交换nc?
[Another]
00:50:207 (4) - 这里感觉也可以nc因为前后都是4拍左右一组combo这样可以看起来统一一点
00:53:245 (5) - ^
[5s]
00:05:777 (4,5) - 可以考虑交换一下位置因为5和下一个滑条空了一拍距离这么近感觉不太好
00:13:562 (5) - 考虑reverse selection一下可以顺flow感觉会好些
01:26:473 (1) - 可以不要让滑条尾碰到前面的滑条身不然感觉不太好看
01:43:562 (1,2,3,4,5) - 可以往左上移一点和01:44:321 (1) - 摆整齐一些好看点
for m4m
好久没听过这么带感的歌了this map too good i can‘t tell any problems
[Basic]
00:12:421 (3,1) - ez不是说不让碰撞么
01:26:094 (4,1) - idk
01:43:562 (2,3,4) - ds貌似不一样
very nice easy
[Advanced]
ar建议8
[Another]
01:09:764 (2) - 建议ctrl+g
01:14:701 - kial 应该加大ds和节奏密度，反而觉得这个kial比前面简单
02:00:081 (8) - 感觉不适合finish
[5's Extreme!]
00:15:555 (1,2) - 还是太难
01:26:473 (1) - 建议滑条尾不碰到滑条
01:29:511 (9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5) - ds
01:56:663 (1) - 同2
Topic Starter
yf’s mod
Hi! m4m
[5's Extreme]
Your thought is good, but you should notice some nazis.
Try to make the hitsounds more, not only the normal-hitnormal
00:03:309 (1,2) - this is your standard distance, but 00:04:828 (1,3) - these two looks too close. Make them like this Image
00:06:346 (1,3) - same problem. And if you fix them, don't forget these two 00:06:916 (3,4) -
00:09:764 (6,7,8) - About these three, you can copy one of them and use ctrl+shit+R to rotate it by 120°
00:11:853 - here you should add a note
00:12:802 (2,4) - same problem
00:14:321 (3,4) - blanket them well
00:17:359 (2,3) - ^
00:28:846 (10,11) - check the distance
00:33:498 (7,8,1) - make the distance equal
00:42:897 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - looks ugly
00:54:195 (1,2,3) - make it as a triangle
00:55:239 (3,4) - these two are too close imo, since here are some large jumps 00:54:195 (1,2,3) -
00:55:619 (5,6) - ^
00:57:423 (10,1,1) - too close imo
01:26:473 (1,1) - ^
01:34:637 (2,3) - ^
It seems too boring after 01:36:726 . 01:36:726 (1,2,3) - for example, you have used this triangle many times. try new patterns
01:46:789 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - check the distance
基本上改正了, 但保留了5的某些意图
[Another]
思路不错 排列也挺整洁的
00:03:119 (8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这个圆弧没摆好, 到后面 00:03:783 (6,7,8,9) - 这里的时候 ok
00:09:764 (3,4,5) - 等距,现在这种似等非等的实在不好 ok
00:12:612 (2,3,4) - ^ ok
00:14:131 (2,3) - 现在这两个看起来太近了.. 这两个00:13:941 (1,2) - 逆时针转一点就行了 ok
00:39:764 (1,2,3,4,5) - 圆弧摆好 ok
00:43:182 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^ 4,5,6有些偏 ok
01:00:650 (1,1) - 那个圆拉的再大点, 再把后面的圈放到中间会比较好..Image ok
别的没什么了 剩下的难度由于我实在累的不行了明天再摸...
[5's Extreme]
Your thought is good, but you should notice some nazis.
Try to make the hitsounds more, not only the normal-hitnormal
00:03:309 (1,2) - this is your standard distance, but 00:04:828 (1,3) - these two looks too close. Make them like this Image
00:06:346 (1,3) - same problem. And if you fix them, don't forget these two 00:06:916 (3,4) -
00:09:764 (6,7,8) - About these three, you can copy one of them and use ctrl+shit+R to rotate it by 120°
00:11:853 - here you should add a note
00:12:802 (2,4) - same problem
00:14:321 (3,4) - blanket them well
00:17:359 (2,3) - ^
00:28:846 (10,11) - check the distance
00:33:498 (7,8,1) - make the distance equal
00:42:897 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - looks ugly
00:54:195 (1,2,3) - make it as a triangle
00:55:239 (3,4) - these two are too close imo, since here are some large jumps 00:54:195 (1,2,3) -
00:55:619 (5,6) - ^
00:57:423 (10,1,1) - too close imo
01:26:473 (1,1) - ^
01:34:637 (2,3) - ^
It seems too boring after 01:36:726 . 01:36:726 (1,2,3) - for example, you have used this triangle many times. try new patterns
01:46:789 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - check the distance
基本上改正了, 但保留了5的某些意图
[Another]
思路不错 排列也挺整洁的
00:03:119 (8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这个圆弧没摆好, 到后面 00:03:783 (6,7,8,9) - 这里的时候 ok
00:09:764 (3,4,5) - 等距,现在这种似等非等的实在不好 ok
00:12:612 (2,3,4) - ^ ok
00:14:131 (2,3) - 现在这两个看起来太近了.. 这两个00:13:941 (1,2) - 逆时针转一点就行了 ok
00:39:764 (1,2,3,4,5) - 圆弧摆好 ok
00:43:182 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^ 4,5,6有些偏 ok
01:00:650 (1,1) - 那个圆拉的再大点, 再把后面的圈放到中间会比较好..Image ok
别的没什么了 剩下的难度由于我实在累的不行了明天再摸...
zzhboy' mod
好 之前的request 抱歉来晚了
sp这么多我就挑点有意义的看看了啊废话什么的就少说点了
[General]
01:26:853 - 我建议kiai在这里结束 在长白线结束会让kiai感觉完整一点 ok
[Basic]
低难度里最好全程ds保持一致如果没有什么特别需要的话 感觉一下1.1x一下1.2x有点乱
而且00:54:574 (4,1,2) - 这里好像有点遮挡有点丑可以考虑稍微移开一点 没啥大碍吧
00:45:081 (4) - 好像没包好可以修一下o.o ok
[Medium]
01:47:549 (5) - 和ez里一样也是不建议忽然让ds变大好多.-. ok
01:33:688 (2,3) - 弄一下blanket ok
没啥
[Advance]
01:00:650 - 这里建议可以把01:00:271 (7) - 加一个折返然后在这里加上个whistle之类的音效后面接上转盘感觉好一点 ok
01:22:296 (7,1) - 交换nc? ok
[Another]
00:50:207 (4) - 这里感觉也可以nc因为前后都是4拍左右一组combo这样可以看起来统一一点ok
00:53:245 (5) - ^ok
[5s]
00:05:777 (4,5) - 可以考虑交换一下位置因为5和下一个滑条空了一拍距离这么近感觉不太好 ok
00:13:562 (5) - 考虑reverse selection一下可以顺flow感觉会好些 ok
01:26:473 (1) - 可以不要让滑条尾碰到前面的滑条身不然感觉不太好看 ok
01:43:562 (1,2,3,4,5) - 可以往左上移一点和01:44:321 (1) - 摆整齐一些好看点 ok
美丽 摸得有点水因为感觉没啥可说的good luck .-.
sp这么多我就挑点有意义的看看了啊废话什么的就少说点了
[General]
01:26:853 - 我建议kiai在这里结束 在长白线结束会让kiai感觉完整一点 ok
[Basic]
低难度里最好全程ds保持一致如果没有什么特别需要的话 感觉一下1.1x一下1.2x有点乱
而且00:54:574 (4,1,2) - 这里好像有点遮挡有点丑可以考虑稍微移开一点 没啥大碍吧
00:45:081 (4) - 好像没包好可以修一下o.o ok
[Medium]
01:47:549 (5) - 和ez里一样也是不建议忽然让ds变大好多.-. ok
01:33:688 (2,3) - 弄一下blanket ok
没啥
[Advance]
01:00:650 - 这里建议可以把01:00:271 (7) - 加一个折返然后在这里加上个whistle之类的音效后面接上转盘感觉好一点 ok
01:22:296 (7,1) - 交换nc? ok
[Another]
00:50:207 (4) - 这里感觉也可以nc因为前后都是4拍左右一组combo这样可以看起来统一一点ok
00:53:245 (5) - ^ok
[5s]
00:05:777 (4,5) - 可以考虑交换一下位置因为5和下一个滑条空了一拍距离这么近感觉不太好 ok
00:13:562 (5) - 考虑reverse selection一下可以顺flow感觉会好些 ok
01:26:473 (1) - 可以不要让滑条尾碰到前面的滑条身不然感觉不太好看 ok
01:43:562 (1,2,3,4,5) - 可以往左上移一点和01:44:321 (1) - 摆整齐一些好看点 ok
美丽 摸得有点水因为感觉没啥可说的good luck .-.
- D a s z x -'s mod
for m4m
好久没听过这么带感的歌了
[Basic]
00:12:421 (3,1) - ez不是说不让碰撞么 不知道哎.. 我先没改 改了要变化很多
01:26:094 (4,1) - idk 我先没改 改了要变化很多
01:43:562 (2,3,4) - ds貌似不一样 ok
very nice easy
[Advanced]
ar建议8 ok
[Another]
01:09:764 (2) - 建议ctrl+g ok
01:14:701 - kial 应该加大ds和节奏密度，反而觉得这个kial比前面简单 ok
02:00:081 (8) - 感觉不适合finish ok
[5's Extreme!]
00:15:555 (1,2) - 还是太难 保持了5的意图吧 - -
01:26:473 (1) - 建议滑条尾不碰到滑条 ok
01:29:511 (9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5) - ds ok
01:56:663 (1) - 同2 ok
this map too good i can‘t tell any problems
好久没听过这么带感的歌了
[Basic]
00:12:421 (3,1) - ez不是说不让碰撞么 不知道哎.. 我先没改 改了要变化很多
01:26:094 (4,1) - idk 我先没改 改了要变化很多
01:43:562 (2,3,4) - ds貌似不一样 ok
very nice easy
[Advanced]
ar建议8 ok
[Another]
01:09:764 (2) - 建议ctrl+g ok
01:14:701 - kial 应该加大ds和节奏密度，反而觉得这个kial比前面简单 ok
02:00:081 (8) - 感觉不适合finish ok
[5's Extreme!]
00:15:555 (1,2) - 还是太难 保持了5的意图吧 - -
01:26:473 (1) - 建议滑条尾不碰到滑条 ok
01:29:511 (9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5) - ds ok
01:56:663 (1) - 同2 ok
this map too good i can‘t tell any problems
liaoxingyao‘s advice
Uninherited timing points conflict with 5's Extreme! diff. 哦!
Another的CS不应该比EX的小吧...（我个人认为）改成一样了
Another的CS不应该比EX的小吧...（我个人认为）改成一样了
非常感谢啊!!!
from m4m
sorry for late!
[General]
looks fine.
[5's Extreme]
推荐去掉感叹号,看起来怪怪的;w;
00:01:790 (1,2,3) - 开头这样子会看不清楚节奏啊,容易开门杀
00:03:119 (8,9,1) - 这三个物件之间DS保持一致吧,表现节奏
00:15:081 (1,1,2,3,4) - lol...对于1/4这个梗有点太难了
00:36:916 (2) - NC
01:08:625 (1,2,3) - 推荐这样
01:10:144 (1,2,3) - ^
[Another]
整体来说,形似这样的梗挺难读也比较卡手 00:12:043 (5,1) - 我的建议是00:29:321 (2,3) - 没有对称;w;
00:30:650 (5,1) - blanket
00:42:327 漏音
00:52:106 (2,3) - blanket?
01:02:549 (1) - 个人认为有点突兀,建议去掉这个 把break拉到这里
01:29:131 (7) - 最后一个点改成circle?
01:35:017 (5,6,7,1) - 间距可以拉大点
01:56:093 (3) - 最后一个点改成circle
01:56:663 (4,1) - NC互换?
[Advanced]
没啥问题 不太会摸这种style的(?)
[Medium]
00:19:638 (3) - 最后的点改成circle,有重音
00:43:941 (3) - 感觉这个没压到什么音啊 长白线最好circle
01:13:182 (1,2,3,4) - stack太难了
[Basic]
00:24:195 (2,3) - 替换成一个slider?
00:50:018 (2,3) - blanket
01:28:373 (2) - DS不一致 (check AiMod)
01:35:967 (1,2,3,4) - 其实可以一个note一个NC?
good luck!
sorry for late!
[General]
looks fine.
[5's Extreme]
推荐去掉感叹号,看起来怪怪的;w;
00:01:790 (1,2,3) - 开头这样子会看不清楚节奏啊,容易开门杀
00:03:119 (8,9,1) - 这三个物件之间DS保持一致吧,表现节奏
00:15:081 (1,1,2,3,4) - lol...对于1/4这个梗有点太难了
00:36:916 (2) - NC
01:08:625 (1,2,3) - 推荐这样
01:10:144 (1,2,3) - ^
[Another]
整体来说,形似这样的梗挺难读也比较卡手 00:12:043 (5,1) - 我的建议是00:29:321 (2,3) - 没有对称;w;
00:30:650 (5,1) - blanket
00:42:327 漏音
00:52:106 (2,3) - blanket?
01:02:549 (1) - 个人认为有点突兀,建议去掉这个 把break拉到这里
01:29:131 (7) - 最后一个点改成circle?
01:35:017 (5,6,7,1) - 间距可以拉大点
01:56:093 (3) - 最后一个点改成circle
01:56:663 (4,1) - NC互换?
[Advanced]
没啥问题 不太会摸这种style的(?)
[Medium]
00:19:638 (3) - 最后的点改成circle,有重音
00:43:941 (3) - 感觉这个没压到什么音啊 长白线最好circle
01:13:182 (1,2,3,4) - stack太难了
[Basic]
00:24:195 (2,3) - 替换成一个slider?
00:50:018 (2,3) - blanket
01:28:373 (2) - DS不一致 (check AiMod)
01:35:967 (1,2,3,4) - 其实可以一个note一个NC?
good luck!
http://puu.sh/9UwyZ/0b01b046af.osu[_Crystal] wrote:
from m4m
[5's Extreme]
推荐去掉感叹号,看起来怪怪的;w; 和ExtrA一个道理啦 恶趣味大家都懂
00:01:790 (1,2,3) - 开头这样子会看不清楚节奏啊,容易开门杀 Fixed
00:03:119 (8,9,1) - 这三个物件之间DS保持一致吧,表现节奏 Fixed
00:15:081 (1,1,2,3,4) - lol...对于1/4这个梗有点太难了 Fixed. This is Bug.
00:36:916 (2) - NC Fixed
01:08:625 (1,2,3) - 推荐这样 Fixed
01:10:144 (1,2,3) - ^ Fixed
no kd now, will continue soon
Topic Starter
_Crystal's mod
[_Crystal] wrote:
from m4m
sorry for late!
[General]
looks fine.
[Another]
整体来说,形似这样的梗挺难读也比较卡手 00:12:043 (5,1) - 我的建议是 ok00:29:321 (2,3) - 没有对称;w; ok
00:30:650 (5,1) - blanket ok
00:42:327 漏音 ok
00:52:106 (2,3) - blanket? ok
01:02:549 (1) - 个人认为有点突兀,建议去掉这个 把break拉到这里 这样挺好
01:29:131 (7) - 最后一个点改成circle? 这个后面的对应
01:35:017 (5,6,7,1) - 间距可以拉大点 ok
01:56:093 (3) - 最后一个点改成circle ok
01:56:663 (4,1) - NC互换?没有, 我把那两部分看成整体, 没按小节来
[Advanced]
没啥问题 不太会摸这种style的(?)
[Medium]
00:19:638 (3) - 最后的点改成circle,有重音 ok
00:43:941 (3) - 感觉这个没压到什么音啊 长白线最好circle嗯 这里不用
01:13:182 (1,2,3,4) - stack太难了 ok
[Basic]
00:24:195 (2,3) - 替换成一个slider?
00:50:018 (2,3) - blanket
01:28:373 (2) - DS不一致 (check AiMod) 都是1.2x 没问题
01:35:967 (1,2,3,4) - 其实可以一个note一个NC?
其他的在你指出之前我自己测试的时候就已经改正了
good luck!
非常感谢~~
咦
才想起来忘射星了
宋颗性
才想起来忘射星了
宋颗性
[General]
可能是曲子本身的节奏太过平稳，你的图的节奏和排列也显得很平稳，打起来有点闷。并且会有
点在节奏上偷懒的感觉。可以试着用不同的梗安排同一个旋律来增加变化。
offset方面，我个人的感觉是谱比曲要稍微慢了一点一点，也就是offset应该往前调。
[Advanced]
排列比较单调，大部分都是在用1/4长条。
00:59:891 (6,7) - 不是很清楚这个遮挡放在hard难度可不可以。
01:50:397 (3,4,5) - 这三个NOTE还是挺有迷惑性的，可能比较难读。
[Another]
说几句总体排列方面的。根据我的理解，这首曲子你是想以直线滑条为主的，因为节奏比较硬朗
。但实际上你所用的滑条是直弯各半，而且弯的滑条没有规律，都是随意拉出来的，弧度看着也
不怎么舒服。建议重新调整一下滑条的安排。
00:15:081 (5) - 这个地方滑条的结尾处有待商榷，我感觉应该在红线上结束。
00:29:891 (3) - 这里开始的半拍长度的滑条都可以考虑换成1/2拍的折返滑条，中间明显有一个
重拍，这样节奏感更强些。
00:37:486 (7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5) - 这里的排列有点乱来。
00:47:359 (1,2) - 这个梗前面就想说，比较迷惑，第一个是折一下，第二个是折两下，也许很容
易断。不过节奏是对得上的。
01:26:853 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 这一段安排得不好，可以用连打+滑条的形式来做。
[5's Extreme!]
这个图的节奏变化就多很多了，挺不错的。
00:28:562 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - 没排直
00:33:119 (5,6) - NOTE排歪了
就这么多，拖了两个月才给MOD不好意思！
可能是曲子本身的节奏太过平稳，你的图的节奏和排列也显得很平稳，打起来有点闷。并且会有
点在节奏上偷懒的感觉。可以试着用不同的梗安排同一个旋律来增加变化。
offset方面，我个人的感觉是谱比曲要稍微慢了一点一点，也就是offset应该往前调。
[Advanced]
排列比较单调，大部分都是在用1/4长条。
00:59:891 (6,7) - 不是很清楚这个遮挡放在hard难度可不可以。
01:50:397 (3,4,5) - 这三个NOTE还是挺有迷惑性的，可能比较难读。
[Another]
说几句总体排列方面的。根据我的理解，这首曲子你是想以直线滑条为主的，因为节奏比较硬朗
。但实际上你所用的滑条是直弯各半，而且弯的滑条没有规律，都是随意拉出来的，弧度看着也
不怎么舒服。建议重新调整一下滑条的安排。
00:15:081 (5) - 这个地方滑条的结尾处有待商榷，我感觉应该在红线上结束。
00:29:891 (3) - 这里开始的半拍长度的滑条都可以考虑换成1/2拍的折返滑条，中间明显有一个
重拍，这样节奏感更强些。
00:37:486 (7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5) - 这里的排列有点乱来。
00:47:359 (1,2) - 这个梗前面就想说，比较迷惑，第一个是折一下，第二个是折两下，也许很容
易断。不过节奏是对得上的。
01:26:853 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 这一段安排得不好，可以用连打+滑条的形式来做。
[5's Extreme!]
这个图的节奏变化就多很多了，挺不错的。
00:28:562 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - 没排直
00:33:119 (5,6) - NOTE排歪了
就这么多，拖了两个月才给MOD不好意思！
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