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EGOIST - The Everlasting Guilty Crown -TV Edit-

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Yauxo
1,622 posts
Joined June 2011
Topic Starter
Yauxo
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Mittwoch, 6. August 2014 at 03:33:54

Artist: EGOIST
Title: The Everlasting Guilty Crown -TV Edit-
Source: Guilty Crown
Tags: samah ryo supercell chelly opening frostings karia
BPM: 172
Filesize: 15564kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,47 stars, 93 notes)
  2. Frostings' Insane (4,5 stars, 314 notes)
  3. Insane (3,94 stars, 285 notes)
  4. Karia's Insane (4,54 stars, 344 notes)
  5. Normal (1,84 stars, 115 notes)
  6. Samah's Hard (3,21 stars, 243 notes)
Download: EGOIST - The Everlasting Guilty Crown -TV Edit-
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Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Easy - by me
Normal - by me
Samah's Hard - by Samah
Insane - by me
Frostings' Insane - by Frostings
Karia's Insane - by Karia

Guilty Crown Opening

Special Thanks
Samah, Frostings and Karia for their GDs :3
pishifat for that beginner hitsound-mod
LunarSakuya for bubble <3
captin1 for rank <3

re-rank because apparently it's -TV Edit- and not (TV Size)
Last edited by Yauxo , edited 82 times in total.
Ringating
717 posts
Joined August 2013
Ringating
from my bg modding queue:

this mod wasn't really much, considering you provided me a really high quality image to work with (thanks for making my life easier :P). I cropped the image to get it to a 16:9 aspect ratio, then downscaled it to osu's max bg image size of 1366x768. I saved the new image as a png 'cause there is a somewhat noticeable loss in sharpness when this particular image is saved as a high quality jpeg. The difference in size is about 600 kb, but it's worth the extra data, imo. Here is the new image:
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Yauxo
1,622 posts
Joined June 2011
Topic Starter
Yauxo

Ringating wrote:

from my bg modding queue:

this mod wasn't really much, considering you provided me a really high quality image to work with (thanks for making my life easier :P). I cropped the image to get it to a 16:9 aspect ratio, then downscaled it to osu's max bg image size of 1366x768. I saved the new image as a png 'cause there is a somewhat noticeable loss in sharpness when this particular image is saved as a high quality jpeg. The difference in size is about 600 kb, but it's worth the extra data, imo. Here is the new image:
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Thanks :3
DrawdeX
786 posts
Joined December 2012
DrawdeX
Hello!
I just wanna suggest more info for the beatmap. ;)

[General]
• Source is Guilty Crown
• Tags like "ryo supercell"

That's all! :D
Good luck~
Yauxo
1,622 posts
Joined June 2011
Topic Starter
Yauxo

DrawdeX wrote:

Hello!
I just wanna suggest more info for the beatmap. ;)

[General]
• Source is Guilty Crown
• Tags like "ryo supercell"

That's all! :D
Good luck~
I left them open till every diff was mapped. Added the tags and the source

Is that kdworthy though? ._.
AsprikaQ
AsprikaQ
omg nice map

random mod. All suggestion.

[General]

- Put more of hitsounds please. I feel it lacks the power as the song is so powerful

[Easy]

00:00:174 (1) - In Normal, you mapped this part so in Easy you should as well
00:19:011 (3) - Remove Whistle at tail
00:21:801 (3) - Whistle at head
00:34:708 (2) - Add whistle
00:42:034 (1) - how about this http://puu.sh/90BNa.jpg
01:00:871 (3) - Remove clap at head
01:15:522 (1) - Whistle head
01:23:894 (1) - End with 5% audio ?

[Normal]

Try to put some elements in half-beat line would be good.

00:10:639 (3) - Remove Whistle a tail
00:14:127 (1,2) - 1/3
01:26:947 (1) - End spinner here with 5% audio?

[Hard]

00:00:174 (1) - Remove finish
00:12:557 (4) - Violin sound actually starts at 00:12:732
00:26:685 (6) - Replace with spinner?
00:46:918 (1,2,3) - Too far in Hard.
00:48:313 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:04:011 (9,10) - ^
01:11:336 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Too much stream for Hard
01:21:104 (1) - Better start spinner here and put element to replace the space

[Insane]

00:00:174 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This part looks like Hard to me. Add more note and if you do you should add clap to some of missings
00:06:104 (3) - Make it symmetric?
00:14:127 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - They are 1/3
00:21:104 (4) - Add note
00:21:801 (7) - ^
00:22:325 (10) - Start at 00:22:499 ?
00:26:685 (5) - Improve blanket a bit
00:38:546 (6) - Whistle to both part
00:49:011 (1,2,3) - use 30% for these 3 elements with whistle
01:05:755 (1) - Whistle to tail
01:13:604 (2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - Whistle missing
01:23:894 (1) - End with 5% audio ?

Sorry I don't know any German :o GL
Yauxo
1,622 posts
Joined June 2011
Topic Starter
Yauxo
SPOILER

AsprikaQ wrote:

omg nice map thanks :3

random mod. All suggestion.

[General]

- Put more of hitsounds please. I feel it lacks the power as the song is so powerful I'll try to, but I find it rather difficult to hitsound normal and easy diffs w/o using slidertick hitsounds

[Easy]

00:00:174 (1) - In Normal, you mapped this part so in Easy you should as well I will consider doing so. I had the problem that I didnt map anything good there, so I left that part on easy
00:19:011 (3) - Remove Whistle at tail
00:21:801 (3) - Whistle at head
00:34:708 (2) - Add whistle
00:42:034 (1) - how about this http://puu.sh/90BNa.jpg like that idea, applied
01:00:871 (3) - Remove clap at head
01:15:522 (1) - Whistle head
01:23:894 (1) - End with 5% audio ? applied all the hitsound mods

[Normal]

Try to put some elements in half-beat line would be good.

00:10:639 (3) - Remove Whistle a tail changed
00:14:127 (1,2) - 1/3 changed combo in general
01:26:947 (1) - End spinner here with 5% audio? yup

[Insane]

00:00:174 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This part looks like Hard to me. Add more note and if you do you should add clap to some of missings added some notes. the hitsounds are the same though, they're supposed to be like this
00:06:104 (3) - Make it symmetric? i assume it is?
00:14:127 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - They are 1/3 each slider starts on the bass-y sound so I guess its fine
00:21:104 (4) - Add note
00:21:801 (7) - ^
00:22:325 (10) - Start at 00:22:499 ? added the 2 notes and also changed the combo in general. you gave me an idea there
00:26:685 (5) - Improve blanket a bit did so
00:38:546 (6) - Whistle to both part changed
00:49:011 (1,2,3) - use 30% for these 3 elements with whistle sounds good, changed
01:05:755 (1) - Whistle to tail yep
01:13:604 (2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - Whistle missing added where I think they should be
01:23:894 (1) - End with 5% audio ? yup

Sorry I don't know any German :o GL

Thanks :3 Notes inside
Samah
423 posts
Joined May 2010
Samah

AsprikaQ wrote:

[Hard]
00:00:174 (1) - Remove finish
Sure.
00:12:557 (4) - Violin sound actually starts at 00:12:732
I think it's ok.
00:26:685 (6) - Replace with spinner?
Nah.
00:46:918 (1,2,3) - Too far in Hard.
Moved them a bit closer.
00:48:313 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
^
01:04:011 (9,10) - ^
Got rid of the jump.
01:11:336 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Too much stream for Hard
I think it's ok. If more people comment on it I'll think about changing it, but for now I like it as it is.
01:21:104 (1) - Better start spinner here and put element to replace the space
Sure.
SPOILER
osu file format v12

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 49009
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.4
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.3

[Metadata]
Title:The Everlasting Guilty Crown (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:The Everlasting Guilty Crown (TV Size)
Artist:EGOIST
ArtistUnicode:EGOIST
Creator:Yauxo
Version:Samah's Hard
Source:Guilty Crown
Tags:samah ryo supercell chelly opening
BeatmapID:418630
BeatmapSetID:173234

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:1

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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
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220,229,47092,1,8,0:0:0:0:
335,303,47267,1,8,0:0:0:0:
376,154,47615,5,4,0:0:0:0:
339,146,47702,1,0,0:0:0:0:
310,123,47789,1,0,0:0:0:0:
293,90,47876,1,0,0:0:0:0:
275,48,47964,2,0,L|198:70,1,75,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,230,48313,5,2,0:0:0:0:
172,237,48400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
201,260,48487,1,0,0:0:0:0:
218,293,48574,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,49011,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,49708,5,10,0:0:0:0:
256,192,50406,6,0,P|181:181|134:109,1,150,4|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
225,107,50929,1,0,0:0:0:0:
313,122,51104,2,0,P|343:178|315:259,1,150,2|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
230,279,51627,1,0,0:0:0:0:
166,215,51801,2,0,P|137:177|88:157,1,75,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,78,52150,1,8,1:0:0:0:
225,107,52325,2,0,P|258:169|339:191,1,150,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
318,102,52848,1,8,1:0:0:0:
400,138,53022,5,0,0:0:0:0:
400,138,53197,2,0,P|417:197|364:274,1,150,0|8,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
373,268,53720,1,0,0:0:0:0:
285,284,53894,2,0,P|222:262|143:283,1,150,2|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
143,282,54418,1,0,0:0:0:0:
86,213,54592,2,0,P|108:177|117:129,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,66,54941,2,0,P|121:57|170:77,1,75,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
202,132,55290,2,0,P|223:107|234:54,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
321,42,55639,1,8,1:0:0:0:
392,96,55813,1,0,0:0:0:0:
453,161,55987,6,0,P|379:187|309:132,1,150,4|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
321,154,56511,2,0,L|279:238,1,75,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
237,295,56860,1,0,0:0:0:0:
147,306,57034,1,8,1:0:0:0:
84,241,57208,1,0,0:0:0:0:
34,165,57383,2,0,P|103:153|165:208,1,150,0|8,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
161,200,57906,2,0,L|236:136,1,75,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
281,87,58255,1,0,0:0:0:0:
370,95,58429,1,8,1:0:0:0:
429,163,58604,1,0,0:0:0:0:
469,244,58778,6,0,L|383:278,1,75,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,306,59127,1,8,1:0:0:0:
316,306,59301,2,0,P|276:238|186:226,1,150,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,309,59825,1,8,1:0:0:0:
316,306,59999,1,0,0:0:0:0:
398,268,60174,2,0,P|412:233|440:203,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
390,128,60522,1,8,1:0:0:0:
324,66,60697,1,0,0:0:0:0:
87,196,61220,5,8,1:0:0:0:
87,196,61394,1,0,0:0:0:0:
87,196,61569,2,0,P|156:232|181:322,1,150,4|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
358,256,62267,2,0,P|315:329|235:346,1,150,2|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
182,296,62790,1,0,0:0:0:0:
262,256,62964,2,0,P|278:213|303:184,1,75,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
358,256,63313,1,8,1:0:0:0:
383,169,63487,2,0,P|328:109|256:111,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
182,149,64011,1,8,1:0:0:0:
129,222,64185,1,0,0:0:0:0:
182,296,64360,6,0,L|366:322,1,150,4|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
329,89,65057,2,0,L|181:69,1,150,4|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
60,201,65755,2,0,L|85:289,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
177,169,66104,2,0,L|185:250,1,75,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,168,66453,2,0,L|294:261,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
425,195,66801,2,0,L|393:296,1,75,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
334,326,67150,6,0,P|257:319|199:274,1,150,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,184,67848,2,0,P|363:258|334:326,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
213,190,68546,2,0,P|282:163|353:185,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
243,326,69243,2,0,P|205:264|214:191,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,240,69941,2,0,P|312:299|244:327,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,171,70639,2,0,P|308:184|357:240,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,327,71336,6,0,L|188:311,3,37.5,2|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,304,71685,1,8,0:0:0:0:
141,283,71772,1,0,0:0:0:0:
114,256,71859,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,225,71946,1,0,0:0:0:0:
79,189,72034,2,0,L|79:136,3,37.5,2|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,114,72383,1,8,1:0:0:0:
99,80,72470,1,0,0:0:0:0:
122,51,72557,1,0,0:0:0:0:
149,31,72644,1,0,0:0:0:0:
187,26,72732,6,0,P|234:78|333:76,1,150,4|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
388,40,73255,1,0,0:0:0:0:
310,86,73429,2,0,P|281:153|332:238,1,150,2|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
369,153,73953,1,0,0:0:0:0:
309,221,74127,2,0,P|288:306|213:343,1,150,2|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
222,249,74650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
309,221,74825,2,0,P|253:166|179:168,1,150,2|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
98,191,75348,1,0,0:0:0:0:
131,274,75522,6,0,P|189:333|274:328,1,150,4|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
252,336,76046,2,0,L|298:273,1,75,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
374,231,76394,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,141,76569,1,8,1:0:0:0:
398,59,76743,1,0,0:0:0:0:
307,66,76918,2,0,P|277:103|268:150,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
181,108,77267,2,0,P|184:152|205:189,1,75,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
119,223,77615,2,0,P|151:251|196:265,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
146,346,77964,2,0,P|193:349|252:326,1,75,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
302,305,78313,6,0,P|356:246|437:247,1,150,4|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
390,326,78836,1,0,0:0:0:0:
390,326,79011,2,0,P|345:244|336:177,1,150,2|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
258,142,79534,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,97,79708,2,0,P|261:54|178:100,1,150,2|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
258,142,80232,1,0,0:0:0:0:
258,142,80406,2,0,P|222:228|167:268,1,150,2|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,81104,12,0,83894,0:0:0:0:
Garven
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Garven
Why would you overmap the intro aaaaa :(
Yauxo
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Topic Starter
Yauxo

Garven wrote:

Why would you overmap the intro aaaaa :(
Whelp, following mods I suppose. I guess I might take a look over it again and might revert it.
Iam still inexperienced ;w;
Come[Back]Home
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Joined October 2011
Come[Back]Home
Easy
00:22:499 (1) Make this more curvy
00:25:290 (1) ^
00:42:732 (2) Move it to x:256 y:136

Normal
00:14:127 (1) Maybe like this
SPOILER
00:30:871 (1) Whistle here?
00:33:662 (1) ^
00:36:453 (1) ^
00:39:243 (1) ^
00:44:825 (1) ^
01:09:592 (4) Add Clap

Samah's Hard
00:00:174 (1) Maybe like this
SPOILER
00:02:964 (1) ^

Insane
00:22:150 (4,5) Why did you change the Distance here? I don't think its necessary


A very nice map :3
Good luck with it :)
Yauxo
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Yauxo
SPOILER

Come[Back]Home wrote:

Easy
00:22:499 (1) Make this more curvy
00:25:290 (1) ^ i think they're fine like this
00:42:732 (2) Move it to x:256 y:136 that'd mess up the spacing. I'd say its fine like this

Normal
00:14:127 (1) Maybe like this I had it like this before, the problem here is that there's a 1/3 beat and a 1/4 after that, which is not possible to map out in a repeatable slider
00:30:871 (1) Whistle here?
00:33:662 (1) ^
00:36:453 (1) ^
00:39:243 (1) ^
00:44:825 (1) ^
01:09:592 (4) Add Clap applied all of them

Insane
00:22:150 (4,5) Why did you change the Distance here? I don't think its necessary i (re)mapped it like this so that it a: feels like a speed-build-up so that the following combo (00:22:848 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ) doesnt appear so sudden


A very nice map :3 Thanks :3
Good luck with it :)

Thanks alot :3 (also ty for the kd :3)
pishifat
osu! Paragon
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pishifat
m4m from your queue. you updated the map while i was modding, so there may be some overlaps :/

Easy

  1. i'd consider moving this down to circle size 2 since there's normal and hard also use CS3
  2. all of the other difficulties start at the offset marker while this difficulty starts a bit later. it's not necessarily a problem but inconsistency is kind of weird

    Yauxo wrote:

    I am rather unsure about the Easy and Normal hitsounds so feel free to point mistakes out.
    hitsounds: i'm assuming a lot about the patterns you're going with, so if it doesn't follow it exactly, feel free to ignore stuff.

    section 1: 00:05:755 (1) - to 00:28:080 (1) -
  3. 00:08:546 (1) - should have a whistle on head
  4. 00:10:639 (3) - unnecessary whistle on tail
  5. 00:14:127 (1,2) - follow what you did with 00:15:522 (3,4) -
  6. 00:16:918 (1) - whistle on reverse and tail
  7. 00:19:708 (1) - whistle on all the stuffs
  8. 00:25:290 (1) - on reverse
  9. 00:26:685 - i'd make hitsound volume slightly lower here since the song gets rid of the backbeat drums (something like 40-50%), then keep 00:27:383 (2) - hitsound-less

    section 2: 00:28:080 (1) - to 00:50:406 (1) -
  10. 00:34:708 (2) - should be a clap instead of a whistle
  11. 00:49:011 - i think when you transfered from insane to easy, you deleted a tick here that lowered hitsound volume since it originally had an SV change. because of that, hitsounds in the area right before climax are really loud and should be lowered. i thought 45% sounded good but you've got 30% in insane so do what you want

    section 3: 00:50:406 (1) - to 01:23:894 (1) -
  12. 00:50:406 (1) - missing the whistle on tail
  13. 00:53:197 (1) - whistle on head
  14. 00:58:778 (1) - whistle on everything
  15. 01:06:453 (3) - whistle on head
  16. if you're feeling like doing extra work, you could make hitsounds steadily get louder for 01:21:104 (1,2,3,4) - so one new green tick per object, starting at like 60% and going up by 5. would follow the sort of build up to nothing that the song has at that section.

    non-hitsound stuff:
  17. 00:08:546 (1) - not that it's important, but you could stack the reverse part of this under 00:05:755 (1) -
  18. 00:10:639 (3) - you could make this curve into the next note a bit better, since the slight offset doesn't seem intentional
    curvezor
  19. 00:11:336 (1) - the middle of the slider here leaves the grid a bit too much. i believe you're supposed to keep at least 1/2 of the width in the grid at all times, since you can't place circles past 1/2 diameter outside the grid either. it also overlaps the key binding stuff in 4:3
    4:3sadness
  20. 01:23:196 (4) - apparently this isn't snapped (ty aibot)
  21. 01:27:034 - no reason to have a new inherited section here

Normal



  • hitsounds:

    section 0: 00:00:174 (1) - to 00:04:360 (3) -
  1. having the clap on the reverses of those sliders doesn't fit too well i think. it sounds like you put it onto the circles because the guitar went lower pitch there, so i'd say put the claps on the slider tails since the same sound is present there.

    section 1: 00:05:755 (1) - to 00:28:080 (1) -
  2. 00:08:546 (1) - missing the whistles on head/reverse
  3. 00:14:127 (1,2) - missing whistles on heads
  4. 00:16:918 (1) - whistle on tail
  5. 00:18:313 (3) - whistle on head
  6. 00:19:708 (1) - whistle on the everythings
  7. 00:21:801 (3) - head
  8. 00:22:499 (1) - head/reverse
  9. 00:25:290 (1) - tail
  10. 00:26:685 - i'd make hitsound volume slightly lower here since the song gets rid of the backbeat drums (something like 40-50%), then keep 00:26:685 (3,4) - hitsound-less

    section 2: 00:28:080 (1) - to 00:50:406 (1) -
  11. 00:36:453 (1) - missing the whistle on reverse
  12. 00:40:639 (3) - whistle on tail
  13. 00:43:778 (2) - clap should not be there
  14. 00:46:569 (2) - ^
  15. 00:47:615 (1) - whistle on tail
  16. 00:48:662 (3) - clapzor
  17. 00:49:011 - same thing as in easy. i'd not include any hitsounds there too

    section 3: 00:50:406 (1) - to 01:01:569 (1) -
  18. i'm not sure if keeping the whistles off during this first kiai time was intentional, so i won't say you need to add them. if you do want to add them, you should know where already
  19. 01:00:871 (4) - needs clap on tail

    section 3.5: 01:01:569 (1) - to 01:23:894 (1) -
  20. 01:01:569 (1) - whistle on reverse/tail
  21. 01:04:360 (1) - whistle on tail
  22. 01:05:755 (3) - ^
  23. 01:09:593 (4) - clap
  24. 01:12:732 (1) - whistle on reverse/tail
  25. 01:14:825 (3) - whistle
  26. 01:15:522 (1) - ^on head
  27. same thing i said about extra work in easy with steady volume increase could apply here too
  28. 01:23:894 (1) - whistle

    non-hitsound stuff:
  29. 00:07:848 (4,1) - flow here seems kind of weird. same sort of idea as this from easy:
    differentobjectstho
  30. 00:14:127 (1,2) - spacing here seems intentional, but it's probably not necessary. as far as i know, normals should have the same spacing throughout without exception :/
  31. 00:27:383 (4,1) - ^similar, but this jump is slightly higher (1.2x instead of 1.1x). i'd actually rotate 3 and 4 clockwise so that the blanket with next combo's 2 is nicer
    x
  32. 00:28:080 (1,2,3) - current layout of these makes for a bad blanket. i'd move 2 and 3 to do something like this
    z
  33. 01:07:150 (1,2,3) - seems like these would be better if symmetrical
  34. 01:20:406 (3) - i think it would be better to have this curved, since the next section is supposed to be different as indicated by the song and your straight sliders

Samah's Hard



  • dayum. fancy. hopefully easy becomes CS2
  1. kiai time is inconsistent with yauxo's (although i like this one better :3)
  2. might want to end at the same point as yauxo's difficulties
  3. 00:27:557 (7,8,9,1) - these play pretty weirdly since 00:26:685 (6) - is on a white tick and 00:27:557 (7) - is on a red tick. there's nothing indicating it needs to start on the red tick, so i'd say start that on one of 7's surrounding white ticks (i prefer the 1st one)
    hur

  4. 00:38:546 (1,2,3) - dat jump. most likely too much for a "hard" difficulty. you've got a similar jump later on with 1.8x DS and i think that may be better, but i really don't think that quiet guitar line justifies something so intense. my opinion is that you should get rid of the jump completely, but i doubt that's convincing enough for you since your map is sort of stylized with the fancy circle size (the guitar thing is also at 00:37:848 (1,2,3) - accompanied by the piano line, but it's not emphasized in the mapping)
  5. 00:46:918 (1,2,3) - really don't see anything to indicate jumps like these here. musically, it sounds exactly the same as the rest of this section.
  6. 00:47:267 (3,1) - only applies if you keep these^ jumps: reading between these two circles can be pretty confusing. it seems like 1 could be a part of the previous jump section due to spacing being almost exactly half that of the jumps. stacking it like you did with the previous jump thing would be best
  7. 00:47:615 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 01:11:336 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - yeah
  8. 01:21:104 (1) - would be better to have the hitvolume on this be extremely quiet at 01:23:894 - since it's way louder than the piano stuff there

Insane

  1. i won't comment on specific hitsounds, but they're kind of messy in the section before the claps come in at 00:28:080 (1) - that first guitar intro section is also really weird sounding. using some of samah's custom hitsounds may be better, or it could just be their placement.
  2. 00:21:453 - feels rather empty here. there's some bass drum thing repeating on every whole # beat, so there shouldn't be any white ticks ignored (which this one is). i'd just make 5 into a 1/2 slider. if you do that, you might want to reconsider the way you have combos set up so that it resembles 00:18:139 (5,1,2,3,4,1) -
  3. 00:48:662 (2) - SV should be 1x instead of 0.75x here since the "slower" section comes after this
  4. 01:09:591 (4) - apparently this isn't snapped either.
  5. 01:13:604 (2,3,1) - spacing here should be equal. linear pattern where circle in between is closer to one slider than the other looks and plays weirdly
kbai
Yauxo
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Yauxo
SPOILER

pishifat wrote:

m4m from your queue. you updated the map while i was modding, so there may be some overlaps :/

Easy

  1. i'd consider moving this down to circle size 2 since there's normal and hard also use CS3 good point, but I really dislike cs2 on it (not only since it looks really messy
  2. all of the other difficulties start at the offset marker while this difficulty starts a bit later. it's not necessarily a problem but inconsistency is kind of weird

    Yauxo wrote:

    I am rather unsure about the Easy and Normal hitsounds so feel free to point mistakes out.
    hitsounds: i'm assuming a lot about the patterns you're going with, so if it doesn't follow it exactly, feel free to ignore stuff.

    section 1: 00:05:755 (1) - to 00:28:080 (1) -
  3. 00:08:546 (1) - should have a whistle on head changed
  4. 00:10:639 (3) - unnecessary whistle on tail i dont actually think so as the piano(?) has a sound there as well
  5. 00:14:127 (1,2) - follow what you did with 00:15:522 (3,4) - changed
  6. 00:16:918 (1) - whistle on reverse and tail changed
  7. 00:19:708 (1) - whistle on all the stuffs changed
  8. 00:25:290 (1) - on reverse changed
  9. 00:26:685 - i'd make hitsound volume slightly lower here since the song gets rid of the backbeat drums (something like 40-50%), then keep 00:27:383 (2) - hitsound-less isnt it?

    section 2: 00:28:080 (1) - to 00:50:406 (1) -
  10. 00:34:708 (2) - should be a clap instead of a whistle changed
  11. 00:49:011 - i think when you transfered from insane to easy, you deleted a tick here that lowered hitsound volume since it originally had an SV change. because of that, hitsounds in the area right before climax are really loud and should be lowered. i thought 45% sounded good but you've got 30% in insane so do what you want probably, changed that

    section 3: 00:50:406 (1) - to 01:23:894 (1) -
  12. 00:50:406 (1) - missing the whistle on tail changed
  13. 00:53:197 (1) - whistle on head changed
  14. 00:58:778 (1) - whistle on everything changed
  15. 01:06:453 (3) - whistle on head changed
  16. if you're feeling like doing extra work, you could make hitsounds steadily get louder for 01:21:104 (1,2,3,4) - so one new green tick per object, starting at like 60% and going up by 5. would follow the sort of build up to nothing that the song has at that section. added that, i like that idea :3

    non-hitsound stuff:
  17. 00:08:546 (1) - not that it's important, but you could stack the reverse part of this under 00:05:755 (1) - didnt even think about that
  18. 00:10:639 (3) - you could make this curve into the next note a bit better, since the slight offset doesn't seem intentional changed
    curvezor
  19. 00:11:336 (1) - the middle of the slider here leaves the grid a bit too much. i believe you're supposed to keep at least 1/2 of the width in the grid at all times, since you can't place circles past 1/2 diameter outside the grid either. it also overlaps the key binding stuff in 4:3 16:9 masterrace, changed it with the change above (i think)
    4:3sadness
  20. 01:23:196 (4) - apparently this isn't snapped (ty aibot) ok.png I literally have no idea why this "isnt snapped". its a copy paste from the sliders before
  21. 01:27:034 - no reason to have a new inherited section here true

Normal



  • hitsounds:

    section 0: 00:00:174 (1) - to 00:04:360 (3) -
  1. having the clap on the reverses of those sliders doesn't fit too well i think. it sounds like you put it onto the circles because the guitar went lower pitch there, so i'd say put the claps on the slider tails since the same sound is present there.

    section 1: 00:05:755 (1) - to 00:28:080 (1) -
  2. 00:08:546 (1) - missing the whistles on head/reverse changed
  3. 00:14:127 (1,2) - missing whistles on heads changed
  4. 00:16:918 (1) - whistle on tail changed
  5. 00:18:313 (3) - whistle on head changed
  6. 00:19:708 (1) - whistle on the everythings changeds
  7. 00:21:801 (3) - head changed
  8. 00:22:499 (1) - head/reverse changed
  9. 00:25:290 (1) - tail changed
  10. 00:26:685 - i'd make hitsound volume slightly lower here since the song gets rid of the backbeat drums (something like 40-50%), then keep 00:26:685 (3,4) - hitsound-less same as in easy, I think it is?

    section 2: 00:28:080 (1) - to 00:50:406 (1) -
  11. 00:36:453 (1) - missing the whistle on reverse changed
  12. 00:40:639 (3) - whistle on tail changed
  13. 00:43:778 (2) - clap should not be there changed
  14. 00:46:569 (2) - ^ changed
  15. 00:47:615 (1) - whistle on tail changed
  16. 00:48:662 (3) - clapzor changz0r
  17. 00:49:011 - same thing as in easy. i'd not include any hitsounds there too 30%'d

    section 3: 00:50:406 (1) - to 01:01:569 (1) -
  18. i'm not sure if keeping the whistles off during this first kiai time was intentional, so i won't say you need to add them. if you do want to add them, you should know where already
  19. 01:00:871 (4) - needs clap on tail

    section 3.5: 01:01:569 (1) - to 01:23:894 (1) -
  20. 01:01:569 (1) - whistle on reverse/tail changed
  21. 01:04:360 (1) - whistle on tail changed
  22. 01:05:755 (3) - ^ changed
  23. 01:09:593 (4) - clap changed
  24. 01:12:732 (1) - whistle on reverse/tail changed
  25. 01:14:825 (3) - whistle changed
  26. 01:15:522 (1) - ^on head changed
  27. same thing i said about extra work in easy with steady volume increase could apply here too did so
  28. 01:23:894 (1) - whistle changed

    non-hitsound stuff:
  29. 00:07:848 (4,1) - flow here seems kind of weird. same sort of idea as this from easy: changed (a bit)
    differentobjectstho
  30. 00:14:127 (1,2) - spacing here seems intentional, but it's probably not necessary. as far as i know, normals should have the same spacing throughout without exception :/ changed, happened as i applied a change to the combo there. probably scrolled up without noticing
  31. 00:27:383 (4,1) - ^similar, but this jump is slightly higher (1.2x instead of 1.1x). i'd actually rotate 3 and 4 clockwise so that the blanket with next combo's 2 is nicer changed, nice find for sure (iam dumb)
    x
  32. 00:28:080 (1,2,3) - current layout of these makes for a bad blanket. i'd move 2 and 3 to do something like this I'll think about it
    z
  33. 01:07:150 (1,2,3) - seems like these would be better if symmetrical theyre fine imo
  34. 01:20:406 (3) - i think it would be better to have this curved, since the next section is supposed to be different as indicated by the song and your straight sliders changed

Insane

  1. i won't comment on specific hitsounds, but they're kind of messy in the section before the claps come in at 00:28:080 (1) - that first guitar intro section is also really weird sounding. using some of samah's custom hitsounds may be better, or it could just be their placement. for the one in the intro; if you take away the hitsounds you'll hear some sort of silent clapping -> whats what ive hitsounded
  2. 00:21:453 - feels rather empty here. there's some bass drum thing repeating on every whole # beat, so there shouldn't be any white ticks ignored (which this one is). i'd just make 5 into a 1/2 slider. if you do that, you might want to reconsider the way you have combos set up so that it resembles 00:18:139 (5,1,2,3,4,1) - ill put it on the to do list >< I really dont want to change the combo after it, so finding a way to fix this (at 2:30 am) is not so easy
  3. 00:48:662 (2) - SV should be 1x instead of 0.75x here since the "slower" section comes after this ugh, this one is difficult to fix for me as i dont want to touch any other combo
  4. 01:09:591 (4) - apparently this isn't snapped either. dont ask me why, i just cant get rid of it for some reason
  5. 01:13:604 (2,3,1) - spacing here should be equal. linear pattern where circle in between is closer to one slider than the other looks and plays weirdly changed, probably a leftover from moving either combo
kbai kkthybaihavesumkdndtksforone

Thanks alot, notes inside (fuk yes hitsounds) (I will m4m tomorrow)
Samah
423 posts
Joined May 2010
Samah

Come[Back]Home wrote:

Samah's Hard
00:00:174 (1) Maybe like this
SPOILER
00:02:964 (1) ^
Looks good, thanks.

pishifat wrote:

Samah's Hard



  • dayum. fancy. hopefully easy becomes CS2
  1. kiai time is inconsistent with yauxo's (although i like this one better :3)
  2. might want to end at the same point as yauxo's difficulties
  3. 00:27:557 (7,8,9,1) - these play pretty weirdly since 00:26:685 (6) - is on a white tick and 00:27:557 (7) - is on a red tick. there's nothing indicating it needs to start on the red tick, so i'd say start that on one of 7's surrounding white ticks (i prefer the 1st one)
    hur

    Deleted the first one instead.
  4. 00:38:546 (1,2,3) - dat jump. most likely too much for a "hard" difficulty. you've got a similar jump later on with 1.8x DS and i think that may be better, but i really don't think that quiet guitar line justifies something so intense. my opinion is that you should get rid of the jump completely, but i doubt that's convincing enough for you since your map is sort of stylized with the fancy circle size (the guitar thing is also at 00:37:848 (1,2,3) - accompanied by the piano line, but it's not emphasized in the mapping)
    Changed slightly.
  5. 00:46:918 (1,2,3) - really don't see anything to indicate jumps like these here. musically, it sounds exactly the same as the rest of this section.
    ^
  6. 00:47:267 (3,1) - only applies if you keep these^ jumps: reading between these two circles can be pretty confusing. it seems like 1 could be a part of the previous jump section due to spacing being almost exactly half that of the jumps. stacking it like you did with the previous jump thing would be best
    ^
  7. 00:47:615 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 01:11:336 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - yeah
    I cut this back a lot.
  8. 01:21:104 (1) - would be better to have the hitvolume on this be extremely quiet at 01:23:894 - since it's way louder than the piano stuff there
    I silenced it.
Thanks folks.
Iceskulls
1,612 posts
Joined February 2012
Iceskulls
Hi
Coming from my maps to mod your map :)

[General]
Uncheck widescreen support because you didn't do SB
Suggest Kiai time 00:50:406 - to 00:56:685 - and 01:01:569 - to 01:07:150 -

[Easy]
00:26:685 - Suggest add spinner 00:26:685 - to 00:27:732 -
00:37:848 (2) - Suggest move to x=80 y=220
00:39:941 - Suggest rhythm http://puu.sh/9bQSn/c21641aa26.jpg
01:04:360 - Suggest rhythm http://puu.sh/9bQCJ/af88114cb5.jpg
01:05:755 - Suggest https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1669806

[Normal]
00:05:755 (1) - Head remove finish add clap ( This is first time I mod hitsounds my hitsounds opinion might not useful)
00:49:011 - Change 00:49:011 (1) - to one repeat slider remove 00:49:708 (2) -

[Samah's Hard]
00:17:964 (5) - Ctrl+H better flow
00:22:848 - Suggest rhythm http://puu.sh/9bS5I/bd08ea788d.jpg

[Insane]
00:14:127 (1,2) - Overlap looks bad
00:25:987 - end of 00:25:987 (3) - stack end of 00:26:336 (4) -
00:34:011 (2,3) - Blanket

Good luck
EGOIST <3
Yauxo
1,622 posts
Joined June 2011
Topic Starter
Yauxo
SPOILER

CelsiusLK wrote:

Hi
Coming from my maps to mod your map :) awesome :3

[General]
Uncheck widescreen support because you didn't do SB i thought about adding the video, might do that
Suggest Kiai time 00:50:406 - to 00:56:685 - and 01:01:569 - to 01:07:150 - i talked to samah, we'll keep the kiai as it is now

[Easy]
00:26:685 - Suggest add spinner 00:26:685 - to 00:27:732 -
00:37:848 (2) - Suggest move to x=80 y=220 the way it is mapped right is so that it flows into 2 more. i'll think about a change though
00:39:941 - Suggest rhythm http://puu.sh/9bQSn/c21641aa26.jpg i want to avoid 1/2 hits on easy
01:04:360 - Suggest rhythm http://puu.sh/9bQCJ/af88114cb5.jpg changed
01:05:755 - Suggest https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1669806 fine imo

[Normal]
00:05:755 (1) - Head remove finish add clap ( This is first time I mod hitsounds my hitsounds opinion might not useful) the finish is there because there's a loud sound that fits the finish more than it would fit the clap. (finish is less audible/silent = match)
00:49:011 - Change 00:49:011 (1) - to one repeat slider remove 00:49:708 (2) - having it like this is fine imo

[Samah's Hard]
00:17:964 (5) - Ctrl+H better flow
00:22:848 - Suggest rhythm http://puu.sh/9bS5I/bd08ea788d.jpg

[Insane]
00:14:127 (1,2) - Overlap looks bad i like it though
00:25:987 - end of 00:25:987 (3) - stack end of 00:26:336 (4) - I really like those half overlapping patterns so I'd prefer to keep it
00:34:011 (2,3) - Blanket blanketing this would create a weird flow (even more than it was). changed 00:34:534 (4) - though

Good luck
EGOIST <3 :3

Thanks notes inside :3
Samah
423 posts
Joined May 2010
Samah

CelsiusLK wrote:

[Samah's Hard]
00:17:964 (5) - Ctrl+H better flow
I disagree, sorry.
00:22:848 - Suggest rhythm http://puu.sh/9bS5I/bd08ea788d.jpg
That doesn't follow the music.
Pandiar
391 posts
Joined February 2012
Pandiar
Hi ~ from my Q :D

[General]
  1. uncheck the widescreen sup in Easy,Normal and Hard

[Insane]
AR+1
00:10:813 (4) - x292 y20
00:19:360 (3) - how about x384 y348?
00:23:197 (3,4) - more jump example:x308 y344 and x248 y292
00:26:336 (4) - overlap is not beautiful
00:33:313 (5) - ^
00:34:534 (4) - ^
00:39:767 (3) - ^
01:07:848 (1,2,3,4) - how about this?
SPOILER
(2) - x404 y132
(3)(4) is copy of 01:07:848 (1,2)

01:09:243 (3) - x208 y56?


[Hard]

looks good


[Normal]
00:35:057 (3) - add whistle
01:12:732 (1) - ^
00:54:592 (3) - add whistle to start and end points
00:58:080 (3) - add whistle start point
01:01:569 (1) - ^


[Easy]
00:10:639 (3) - remove whistle from end point
00:22:499 (1) - add whistle to start point
01:00:871 (3) - ^
01:14:127 (2) - ^


good luck ! >3<
Yauxo
1,622 posts
Joined June 2011
Topic Starter
Yauxo
SPOILER

Pandiar wrote:

Hi ~ from my Q :D

[General]
  1. uncheck the widescreen sup in Easy,Normal and Hard

[Insane]
AR+1 I like to have this AR8 for DTability
00:10:813 (4) - x292 y20 changed
00:19:360 (3) - how about x384 y348? yup
00:23:197 (3,4) - more jump example:x308 y344 and x248 y292
00:26:336 (4) - overlap is not beautiful I had to explain it to others too, i really like this kind of overlaps (there are more of these (as the next few points indicate) no change to them
00:33:313 (5) - ^
00:34:534 (4) - ^
00:39:767 (3) - ^
01:07:848 (1,2,3,4) - how about this? yup

(2) - x404 y132
(3)(4) is copy of 01:07:848 (1,2)

01:09:243 (3) - x208 y56? I think that one's fine, as it's supposed to have about the same spacing as the square before it


[Normal]
00:35:057 (3) - add whistle
01:12:732 (1) - ^
00:54:592 (3) - add whistle to start and end points
00:58:080 (3) - add whistle start point
01:01:569 (1) - ^ changed all


[Easy]
00:10:639 (3) - remove whistle from end point i like to have one there as there's a beat that should have a whistle there (for me)
00:22:499 (1) - add whistle to start point changed
01:00:871 (3) - ^ changed
01:14:127 (2) - ^ changed


good luck ! >3<
thanks :3
Thanks, notes inside :3
Mao
Elite Mapper II
2,963 posts
Joined December 2012
Mao


We've fixed some placement and rhythm as well as an unsnapped object and an unneeded inherited point. Good luck~


IRC
2014-06-05 21:02 Mao: WARTE MAL
2014-06-05 21:02 Mao: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/418630 EGOIST - The Everlasting Guilty Crown (TV Size)]
2014-06-05 21:02 Mao: die map ist von dir?
2014-06-05 21:02 Mao: die hat mir mein bruder vorgestern gezeigt
2014-06-05 21:02 Mao: random
2014-06-05 21:02 Mao: als wir maps durchgescrollt haben
2014-06-05 21:03 Yauxo: yup
2014-06-05 21:04 Yauxo: bis auf die hard ofc
2014-06-05 21:05 Mao: hm, die ist sogar recht gut
2014-06-05 21:05 Mao: xD
2014-06-05 21:05 Mao: auch wenn 1/2 overlaps meist scheiße aussehen imo
2014-06-05 21:05 Yauxo: möchte ich hoffen D: soll die erste ranked werden~
2014-06-05 21:05 Mao: jaaaa, rankable auf jeden
2014-06-05 21:05 Yauxo: ich weiß nicht was jeder dagegen hat
2014-06-05 21:06 Mao: sieht ein wenig random aus
2014-06-05 21:06 Mao: unstrukturiert
2014-06-05 21:06 Mao: weil das spacing teilweise nicht konstant dadurch ist
2014-06-05 21:06 Mao: ich hab nicht gegen alle was
2014-06-05 21:06 Yauxo: sollte es aber sein
2014-06-05 21:07 Yauxo: bzw, alle sind so gemappt wie die sein sollen* Ich mag die halben overlaps
2014-06-05 21:07 Mao: naja, ich find den stil ganz interessant
2014-06-05 21:07 Mao: 00:32:964 (4,5) - find das hier aber hässlich
2014-06-05 21:07 Mao: den flow auch nicht so gut
2014-06-05 21:07 Yauxo: okay, bei dem stimm ich zu
2014-06-05 21:08 Mao: wegen dem übergang von 4 -> 5
2014-06-05 21:08 Yauxo: yep
2014-06-05 21:08 Yauxo: der wurd wir auch öfters mal rausgesucht, didnt bother changing yet
2014-06-05 21:08 Mao: 00:34:185 (3,4) - ich find ich den flow gut, aber den overlap scheiße
2014-06-05 21:09 Yauxo: der ist wegen 00:35:755 (4) - so
2014-06-05 21:09 Yauxo: was hälst du von nem triangle? http://puu.sh/9guc7/66cf0994b7.jpg
2014-06-05 21:10 Mao: huh website offline
2014-06-05 21:10 Mao: http://puu.sh/9gu9U/1a80934265.jpg
2014-06-05 21:10 Mao: das hier wäre meine suggestion
2014-06-05 21:10 Mao: http://puu.sh/9guhT/9d11b9ce5d.jpg
2014-06-05 21:10 Yauxo: dann müsst ich eben mal schauen wie ich den rest umbauen würde
2014-06-05 21:10 Mao: oh jetzt gehts
2014-06-05 21:11 Yauxo: yep
2014-06-05 21:11 Mao: http://puu.sh/9gukG/973dc1e76a.jpg
2014-06-05 21:11 Mao: bisschen noch spacing anpassen
2014-06-05 21:11 Mao: dann geht das
2014-06-05 21:12 Mao: 00:55:115 (2,3) - dat overmap
2014-06-05 21:12 Yauxo: wobei der übergang jetzt leicht weird ist http://puu.sh/9guqu/8e6e66ea7b.jpg
2014-06-05 21:12 Yauxo: so overmap find ich das jetzt nicht D:
2014-06-05 21:12 Mao: es hört sich total scheiße an
2014-06-05 21:12 Mao: das ist mir im testplay aufgefallen
2014-06-05 21:12 Mao: xD
2014-06-05 21:13 Mao: die drums auf dem weißen tick sind so laut
2014-06-05 21:13 Yauxo: 00:55:115 (2) - langes mo, 00:55:464 (3) - mono (wenns mono ist)
2014-06-05 21:13 Mao: und auf dem blauen ist nix
2014-06-05 21:13 Mao: naja, stimmt
2014-06-05 21:13 Mao: aber der weiße tick
2014-06-05 21:13 Mao: das fühlt sich komisch an
2014-06-05 21:13 Mao: :/+
2014-06-05 21:14 Yauxo: hum
2014-06-05 21:14 Mao: triplet wär vielleicht besser
2014-06-05 21:14 Yauxo: ich weiß was du meinst
2014-06-05 21:14 Mao: oder halt 2 1/2 Slider
2014-06-05 21:14 Yauxo: white blue red triplet?
2014-06-05 21:14 Mao: yep
2014-06-05 21:14 Yauxo: http://puu.sh/9guEN/eca72b0bce.jpg
2014-06-05 21:15 Mao: joa, sieht gut aus
2014-06-05 21:15 Yauxo: das passt
2014-06-05 21:15 Yauxo: :3
2014-06-05 21:15 Mao: naja, aber viel glück beim ersten rank ;b
2014-06-05 21:16 Mao: wär ich BAT würd ichs wahrscheinlich bubblen wenn du noch ein paar mods suchen würdest und die anderen diffs der selben qualität entsprechen
2014-06-05 21:16 Yauxo: war schon was, passt :3 posts einfach rein, kleine irc mod ist auch ne mod
2014-06-05 21:16 Mao: nee, das ist nix wofür ich nen kudo brauche
2014-06-05 21:17 Yauxo: nagut :3
2014-06-05 21:17 Yauxo: trotzdem danke
2014-06-05 21:17 Mao: naja obwoooohl
2014-06-05 21:17 Mao: lass mich nochmal durchschauen
2014-06-05 21:17 Mao: xD
2014-06-05 21:19 Mao: sag mal, was ist dein triplet spacing?
2014-06-05 21:19 Mao: 1,0?
2014-06-05 21:19 Yauxo: uh
2014-06-05 21:19 Yauxo: yep
2014-06-05 21:19 Yauxo: anscheinend :D
2014-06-05 21:20 Mao: weil ich sehe hier variation zwischen 0,90 und 1,10
2014-06-05 21:20 Mao: bitte halte das konstant
2014-06-05 21:20 Mao: das wirkt total komisch
2014-06-05 21:20 Mao: 00:11:162 (5,6,1) - 1,10
2014-06-05 21:20 Mao: 00:11:860 (3,4,5) - 0,90
2014-06-05 21:20 Mao: ich seh hier wirklich keinen grund dafür
2014-06-05 21:21 Yauxo: true
2014-06-05 21:21 Yauxo: fixed
2014-06-05 21:22 Mao: 00:17:615 (3,4) - Durch den hold der vocals von weiß zu weiß wär hier ein 1/1 Slider besser imo
2014-06-05 21:22 Mao: betonung vom weißen würde auch stimmen, weil der slider auf dem roten danach mehr betont ist und somit die clickable/not clickable verteilung passt
2014-06-05 21:23 Yauxo: meinst du so? http://puu.sh/9gvpI/a0c9500ebe.jpg
2014-06-05 21:23 Mao: joa
2014-06-05 21:24 Yauxo: hum, ich hab eher dran gedacht 00:18:139 (4) - zu ändern
2014-06-05 21:24 Mao: nee
2014-06-05 21:24 Mao: der ist okay
2014-06-05 21:24 Mao: der followt den vocals gut
2014-06-05 21:24 Mao: und dem piano
2014-06-05 21:25 Yauxo: das war auch der eigentliche grund warum ich das so gemappt habe, nach ner zeit gefällt mir der aber irgendwie nichtmehr
2014-06-05 21:25 Yauxo: wegen den zwei random sounds mitten auf dem slider
2014-06-05 21:25 Mao: huh
2014-06-05 21:25 Mao: ich finds okay
2014-06-05 21:26 Yauxo: gut, dann muss ich ne shape für 3 finden
2014-06-05 21:26 Mao: lemme see
2014-06-05 21:26 Mao: ich hab auch keine richtige suggestion grade
2014-06-05 21:27 Yauxo: sowas sieht halt irgendwo weird aus http://puu.sh/9gvJl/c7ff827f14.jpg
2014-06-05 21:27 Yauxo: wobei
2014-06-05 21:27 Mao: ich finds eigentlich okay
2014-06-05 21:28 Yauxo: eben :D
2014-06-05 21:28 Mao: 00:21:278 (5,1) - die lücke hier wirkt komisch wegen den vocals, 1/1 würde passen
2014-06-05 21:28 Yauxo: ich pass den noch an
2014-06-05 21:28 Mao: das problem hier wäre placement
2014-06-05 21:28 Mao: da müsstest du alle umbauen
2014-06-05 21:28 Yauxo: yep, der war auch in ner mod
2014-06-05 21:28 Mao: wollte es aber nur mal anmerken
2014-06-05 21:28 Yauxo: habs bis heute noch nicht gechanged
2014-06-05 21:29 Mao: ist aber recht wichtig
2014-06-05 21:29 Mao: weils echt scheiße ist
2014-06-05 21:29 Mao: xD
2014-06-05 21:29 Yauxo: bin dabei
2014-06-05 21:30 Yauxo: ich machs einfach full 1.2
2014-06-05 21:30 Mao: 00:39:156 (5) - der Circle ist nicht intuitiv, hört sich blöd an
2014-06-05 21:30 Yauxo: wobei, nvm. habs
2014-06-05 21:31 Mao: 00:43:429 (1,2,3,4,5) - >Die Kurve kriegst du aber besser hin :V
2014-06-05 21:31 Mao: mit convert slider to stream
2014-06-05 21:31 Mao: so, dass 5 auch der kurve folgt
2014-06-05 21:31 Mao: für besseren flow
2014-06-05 21:32 Yauxo: ich habs so mit diesen halbscharfen kurven, wie hier auch 00:21:627 (1,2,3,4,5) -
2014-06-05 21:32 Yauxo: but a point is a point
2014-06-05 21:32 Mao: da find ich sie ja auch gut
2014-06-05 21:33 Mao: aber die, die ich dir aufgelistet hab find ich recht schlecht
2014-06-05 21:33 Mao: vor allem wegen dem flow von 4 in 5
2014-06-05 21:33 Yauxo: yep
2014-06-05 21:34 Yauxo: btw, zu der einen placement geschichte; http://puu.sh/9gwle/74aa56836e.jpg ?
2014-06-05 21:34 Mao: 00:52:325 (2) - 347|204 für gleichseitiges dreieck
2014-06-05 21:34 Mao: sieht gut aus
2014-06-05 21:35 Mao: 00:55:987 (5) - weiter runter für besseren flow von der 4 in die 5
2014-06-05 21:35 Mao: damits von der 3 aus kurviger ist
2014-06-05 21:35 Yauxo: hab die 1 beim dreieck geändert. würde sonst den rest abfucken
2014-06-05 21:35 Mao: http://puu.sh/9gwre/112cf37635.jpg
2014-06-05 21:36 Yauxo: habs n bisschen runter
2014-06-05 21:36 Mao: 01:16:220 (3,4) - Hier find ich den overlap scheiße
2014-06-05 21:36 Mao: nicht vom aussehen
2014-06-05 21:36 Mao: sondern aus nem anderen Grund
2014-06-05 21:36 Mao: consistency
2014-06-05 21:37 Mao: 01:15:522 (1,2) - = 01:16:220 (3,4) -
2014-06-05 21:37 Mao: imo
2014-06-05 21:37 Mao: deshalb sollte das spacing zwischen den noten auch gleich sein imo
2014-06-05 21:37 Yauxo: hum
2014-06-05 21:38 Mao: also es ist nicht das gleiche
2014-06-05 21:38 Mao: aber nicht so ein großer unterschied, dass das spacing gerechtfertigt ist
2014-06-05 21:38 Yauxo: die sache ist, wie würde ich das fixen wollen
2014-06-05 21:38 Yauxo: die combo besteht ja eigentlich nur weil ich die overlaps mag
2014-06-05 21:38 Yauxo: D:
2014-06-05 21:39 Yauxo: ich meine, nach unten ist ne option ... hmp
2014-06-05 21:39 Yauxo: f
2014-06-05 21:39 Mao: http://puu.sh/9gwMQ/3830b8b459.jpg
2014-06-05 21:39 Yauxo: ja eben D: ... whelp, der consistency halber
2014-06-05 21:40 Mao: ich finds wichtig an der stelle :/
2014-06-05 21:40 Yauxo: ist leider wahr
2014-06-05 21:40 Yauxo: sadface
2014-06-05 21:41 Mao: 00:49:011 (1,2) - 3/2 Slider please
2014-06-05 21:41 Mao: hört sich cooler an find ich
2014-06-05 21:41 Mao: wegen vocals
2014-06-05 21:41 Mao: und dem geräusch da
2014-06-05 21:42 Mao: http://puu.sh/9gx6i/a4b96c9814.jpg
2014-06-05 21:43 Yauxo: ich versuch grade nen passenden nicht-runden slider hinzubekommen
2014-06-05 21:43 Mao: runde slider sind aber toll q-q
2014-06-05 21:43 Mao: und der passt da
2014-06-05 21:43 Mao: wegen diesem geräusch
2014-06-05 21:44 Mao: was anderes passt da imo garnicht wegen der musik xD
2014-06-05 21:44 Yauxo: ich versuch so wenige runde slider wie möglich zu benutzen, i disliekz roundnezz D:
2014-06-05 21:44 Yauxo: http://puu.sh/9gxfc/078d1790ab.jpg hard auf dem tick
2014-06-05 21:45 Mao: ja gut, mach, was du willst xD
2014-06-05 21:45 Yauxo: :D
2014-06-05 21:45 hauptsache der 3/2 slider ist da *^*
2014-06-05 21:45 Mao: weil der da hingehört
2014-06-05 21:45 Yauxo: is it :3
2014-06-05 21:45 Mao: lemme check your hitsounding xD
2014-06-05 21:47 Mao: hm, gut
2014-06-05 21:47 Mao: normaler upbeat clap pattern
2014-06-05 21:47 Mao: anscheinend keine vergessen, sieht consistent aus
2014-06-05 21:47 Mao: 01:27:034 (1) - was macht der inherited point hier? xD
2014-06-05 21:47 Yauxo: whistle auf "ding" whoop
2014-06-05 21:47 Yauxo: der lebt noch von alten zeiten
2014-06-05 21:48 Yauxo: rip
2014-06-05 21:48 Mao: 01:09:591 (4) - OBJECT'S END NOT SNAPPED
2014-06-05 21:48 Yauxo: ICH WEI?
2014-06-05 21:48 Yauxo: ABER DER GEHT NICHT WEG
2014-06-05 21:48 Yauxo: KEWKEW
2014-06-05 21:48 Mao: verschieben
2014-06-05 21:48 Mao: wieder hin verschieben
2014-06-05 21:48 Mao: speichern
2014-06-05 21:48 Mao: aus map raus
2014-06-05 21:48 Mao: wieder rein
2014-06-05 21:48 Mao: bei mir gehts dann xD
2014-06-05 21:49 Mao: http://puu.sh/9gxE6/84630c0594.png
2014-06-05 21:49 Yauxo: hab ich schon mehrmals probiert, wollte nicht D: hab einfach 3 kopiert und neu gesetzt
2014-06-05 21:49 Mao: btw, dein stream spacing ist total falsch :/
2014-06-05 21:49 Mao: 00:47:615 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
2014-06-05 21:49 Mao: das variiert zischwn 0,94 und 1,08
2014-06-05 21:49 Yauxo: ?
2014-06-05 21:49 Mao: bei sogut wie allen streams
2014-06-05 21:50 Mao: nimm convert slider to stream für konstantes spacing
2014-06-05 21:50 Yauxo: gridsnap op
2014-06-05 21:50 Mao: mach
2014-06-05 21:50 Mao: für
2014-06-05 21:50 Mao: streams
2014-06-05 21:50 Mao: grid
2014-06-05 21:50 Mao: snap
2014-06-05 21:50 Mao: aus
2014-06-05 21:50 Mao: bitte
2014-06-05 21:50 Mao: oder
2014-06-05 21:50 Mao: mappe
2014-06-05 21:50 Mao: ohne
2014-06-05 21:50 Mao: grid
2014-06-05 21:50 Mao: snap
2014-06-05 21:50 Mao: ich benutzt nur für slider shapes grid snap tiny
2014-06-05 21:50 Mao: sonst komplett ohne
2014-06-05 21:50 Mao: xD
2014-06-05 21:51 Yauxo: fixd
2014-06-05 21:51 Mao: das ist auch bei all den anderen streams, ne?
2014-06-05 21:51 Mao: das solltest du auch fixen xD
2014-06-05 21:51 Yauxo: erste map, da macht man halt gridsnap an D:
2014-06-05 21:51 Yauxo: schon dabei
2014-06-05 21:51 Mao: aber wave slider machen sich gut mit gridsnap
2014-06-05 21:51 Mao: und symmetrische
2014-06-05 21:51 Mao: dafür braucht mans xD
2014-06-05 21:52 Mao: das ist deine erste map?
2014-06-05 21:53 Yauxo: eigentlich 2, aber die, die als erstes ranked soll
2014-06-05 21:53 Mao: 00:13:080 (4,5) - das hir ist vom rhythm her komisch, fällt mir grade auf. Das ist im Prinzip das selbe wiue 00:11:685 (2,3,4,5) -
2014-06-05 21:53 Mao: map das bitte auch so
Arlecchino
1,240 posts
Joined October 2013
Arlecchino
[Easy]
so tired.. just open aimod..
01:23:196 (4) - unsnap :3

[Normal]
00:08:546 - make this slider more curved, so you can makes 00:10:290 (2) - blanket
00:34:708 (2,3) - blanket ?

[Samah's Hard]
fine i guess :3

[Insane]
00:26:685 (1) - remove reverse ? and add 1/2 slider 00:27:208 ?
1
00:26:685 (1,2,3,4) - suggest use 1.2x DS here.. but 1.0x it's not bad.. :3
2
00:29:825 (1,2) - how about blanketing.. :3 and 00:30:522 (3) - move to (232|240) ?
3

Hope this helped..

good luck with your map!~
FuFuLu
FuFuLu
Hi~ Here's my modding!

[Easy]

Imo, it's perfect.
01:19:360 - suggestion: add a circle here and add "clap"

[Normal]

Perfect.

[Samah's Hard]

00:11:336 (1,2,3,4,5) - change like this
01:08:546 (3) - NC
01:09:941 (5) - NC

[Insane]

00:26:685 (1) - cancel reverse, slider ends at 00:27:208
00:38:894 (4) - add "clap"
00:49:708 (2) - change the slider into two circles

Imo, your map is nearly perfect. Hope my modding can help you. :D
Yauxo
1,622 posts
Joined June 2011
Topic Starter
Yauxo
fufulu

FuFuLu wrote:

Hi~ Here's my modding!

[Easy]

Imo, it's perfect.
01:19:360 - suggestion: add a circle here and add "clap" I kinda want to keep it like this to support song's loud .. what is that even? piano? D:

[Normal]

Perfect. :3

[Insane]

00:26:685 (1) - cancel reverse, slider ends at 00:27:208 This is supposed to fit to the vocals as well as that building/raising sound
00:38:894 (4) - add "clap" oops, fixed
00:49:708 (2) - change the slider into two circles I think its fine like this

Imo, your map is nearly perfect. Hope my modding can help you. :D thanks :3

asuna

-[ Asuna ]- wrote:

[Easy]
so tired.. just open aimod..
01:23:196 (4) - unsnap :3 fixed

[Normal]
00:08:546 - make this slider more curved, so you can makes 00:10:290 (2) - blanket changed
00:34:708 (2,3) - blanket ?

[Insane]
00:26:685 (1) - remove reverse ? and add 1/2 slider 00:27:208 ? its like this to support the buildup and the second slider is to help the slightly differently pitched buildup (if you know what i mean with that)

00:26:685 (1,2,3,4) - suggest use 1.2x DS here.. but 1.0x it's not bad.. :3 1.0 to be more consistent

00:29:825 (1,2) - how about blanketing.. :3 and 00:30:522 (3) - move to (232|240) ? nice idea, but this map was mapped to have such sliders like this (00:32:964 (4,5,1) - for example)


Hope this helped..

good luck with your map!~

Thanks :3
zinsser
52 posts
Joined December 2013
zinsser
M4M from #modreqs!
https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/199977

seems that I can't give a lot of mods since the map itself is pretty good now.


To be honest, I don't think Easy & Normal are different xD look almost the same. Nvm

[Easy]
  1. 01:01:569 (1) - overlap with HP bar. Try to solve the problem by changing the blanketing...if i were you, I might remap this part...
  2. 01:07:150 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - I might put them like this (just refer to the position in the screenshot) chorus changes at 01:09:941 - so give the flow an angle here will be good.
  3. 01:26:816 - the very last spinner should ends here
[Normal]
  1. 00:28:080 (1,3) - shapes are not seemed that good looking to me. maybe change to something like this
  2. 01:26:816 - the very last spinner should ends here
[Hard]
Idk whether you intentionally mute some hitsounds, but it's kind of confusing to me when playing, because I often decide whether I miss click a note by listening to the sound.
  1. 00:00:174 (1) - curvy in the other way
  2. 00:20:929 (4,5) - this really kills the consistency and flow. To solve it, at least 5 NC.
  3. 00:27:732 (7) - delete this note
  4. 00:47:615 (1,2,3) - reduce DS to 0.8. I don't really like triples with high DS (should be lower than the DS through the map which is 1.2 here) 00:48:313 - same here and in Insane diff.
  5. 01:07:150 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I love it!
[Insane]
AR+1 (though you reject previous mod, but I agree that AR should be 9)

Reduce Triples' DS
  1. 00:11:162 -
  2. 00:11:860 -
  3. 00:12:557 -
  4. 00:13:255 -
  5. 00:13:953 -
  6. 00:27:906 - this one should be changed. Presently the shapes are messy
  7. 00:39:069 -
  8. 00:57:911 -
Other things to mention
  1. 00:19:011 (1,2,3,4) - kind of confusing now. 1-2 should be parallel to 3-4. For example:
  2. 00:50:057 - this stream is quite confusing. I'll just change 2 to the same length of 1 to follow vocal
  3. 01:11:336 (1) - rotate clockwise 21°
  4. 01:26:816 - the very last spinner should ends here

These are things I may change if I were you. Just take it as a reference xD
Yauxo
1,622 posts
Joined June 2011
Topic Starter
Yauxo
SPOILER

zinsser wrote:

M4M from #modreqs!
https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/199977

seems that I can't give a lot of mods since the map itself is pretty good now.


To be honest, I don't think Easy & Normal are different xD look almost the same. Nvm

[Easy]
  1. 01:01:569 (1) - overlap with HP bar. Try to solve the problem by changing the blanketing...if i were you, I might remap this part... changed
  2. 01:07:150 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - I might put them like this (just refer to the position in the screenshot) chorus changes at 01:09:941 - so give the flow an angle here will be good. changed as well
  3. 01:26:816 - the very last spinner should ends here dont think so, theres a bright sound just where it end
[Normal]
  1. 00:28:080 (1,3) - shapes are not seemed that good looking to me. maybe change to something like this i think theyre fine as they function as a blanket and as a .. how would I call that .. throw to the next circle?
  2. 01:26:816 - the very last spinner should ends here
[Hard]
Idk whether you intentionally mute some hitsounds, but it's kind of confusing to me when playing, because I often decide whether I miss click a note by listening to the sound.
  1. 00:00:174 (1) - curvy in the other way
  2. 00:20:929 (4,5) - this really kills the consistency and flow. To solve it, at least 5 NC.
  3. 00:27:732 (7) - delete this note
  4. 00:47:615 (1,2,3) - reduce DS to 0.8. I don't really like triples with high DS (should be lower than the DS through the map which is 1.2 here) 00:48:313 - same here and in Insane diff.
  5. 01:07:150 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I love it!
[Insane]
AR+1 (though you reject previous mod, but I agree that AR should be 9) ar8 for lightinsane and dtability, so iam still not intending to change this

Reduce Triples' DS
  1. 00:11:162 -
  2. 00:11:860 -
  3. 00:12:557 -
  4. 00:13:255 -
  5. 00:13:953 -
  6. 00:27:906 - this one should be changed. Presently the shapes are messy shape is fine for me http://puu.sh/9jvMr/f38c3ceb77.jpg
  7. 00:39:069 -
  8. 00:57:911 -
Other things to mention
  1. 00:19:011 (1,2,3,4) - kind of confusing now. 1-2 should be parallel to 3-4. For example: no change here, stylerelated (same goes for below)
  2. 00:50:057 - this stream is quite confusing. I'll just change 2 to the same length of 1 to follow vocal
  3. 01:11:336 (1) - rotate clockwise 21°
  4. 01:26:816 - the very last spinner should ends here

thanks :3
Samah
423 posts
Joined May 2010
Samah

FuFuLu wrote:

Hi~ Here's my modding!
[Samah's Hard]
00:11:336 (1,2,3,4,5) - change like this
I don't really like that rhythm as it'll miss out on the guitar at 00:12:906.
01:08:546 (3) - NC
Hmm... ok.
01:09:941 (5) - NC
^

zinsser wrote:

[Hard]
Idk whether you intentionally mute some hitsounds, but it's kind of confusing to me when playing, because I often decide whether I miss click a note by listening to the sound.
There are no muted hitsounds.
  1. 00:00:174 (1) - curvy in the other way
    Ehhh I like it how it is.
  2. 00:20:929 (4,5) - this really kills the consistency and flow. To solve it, at least 5 NC.
    Ok.
  3. 00:27:732 (7) - delete this note
    Ok, and I reorganised the sliders before it so I can still stack in the same spot.
  4. 00:47:615 (1,2,3) - reduce DS to 0.8. I don't really like triples with high DS (should be lower than the DS through the map which is 1.2 here) 00:48:313 - same here and in Insane diff.
    Ok.
  5. 01:07:150 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I love it!
    Ty XD <3
Done, took most suggestions.
Timorisu
771 posts
Joined November 2012
Timorisu
'Allo

[Easy]

00:05:755 (1) - Snap to grid (for better overlay with 00:08:546 (1) - )

00:25:290 (1) - I don't think anti jumps in Easies are too good, they might confuse a new player (they could see the slider underneath and click immediately)

[Normal]

00:11:336 (1) - Snap to grid (for better overlay with 00:12:732 (3) - )

00:21:801 (3) - Really nazi but this blanket is off (the end of it)

00:26:947 (1) - ^

00:39:243 (1) - ^

00:41:336 (4) - ^

00:50:406 (1) - ^

01:04:360 (1) - ^

01:08:546 (3,4,1) - I'm just gonna guess you went for a straight line, but it's kinda really not one lol. I'd make a new slider, start it at the end of 3, drag it all the way through the start of 1 to the end of the grid (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1710313), and then readjust 4 and 1's sliderbody (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1710317). Don't forget to adjust the following sliders!

01:20:406 (3) - Stupid personal opinion, but maybe rotate this by like 10 degrees?

[Samah's Hard]

00:00:871 (4) - Nazi, but blanket is off

00:01:394 (5) - ^ since copy paste

00:13:778 (8) - ^

00:14:127 (1) - ^

00:14:825 (3) - A curvier curve would do better imo (why not just a direct copy paste of 00:14:127 (1) - )

00:16:918 (1) - Blanket is off again

00:19:708 (1) - Move the end up a bit

00:20:232 (2) - Move the end left a bit

00:20:929 (4,1) - This antijump is quite confusing, might want to re-place 4 (easier than chosing a new position for 1)

00:32:267 (5) - Move the middle inwards a bit

00:40:464 (4) - ^ but outwards

00:42:034 (1) - Blanket is really off

00:42:557 (2) - Again, a curvier curve would be better, why not just copy paste 00:42:034 (1) -

00:55:290 (8,9,10,1) - Although this looks neat it has questionable flow, might want to place 1 a bit further left and down for a more circular movement when getting out of 8

01:18:313 (1) - Blanket is kinda off

[Insane]

I suggest you to read up on active/passive sliders and hitsounding (although I'm still doing this myself I'd like to advise this to you . _.)

00:08:546 (1) - End is off, blanket-wise

00:09:069 (2) - Middle part is currently further away than the beginning

00:10:115 (2) - CTRL+G, place on 1's head, CTRL+G again

00:11:336 (1) - ^

00:21:627 (1,2,3,4) - If you're going for a square and not a diamond you should re-position 2 and 3 further to the right

00:39:767 (3) - Unneeded and kinda ugly overlap with 1 . _.

00:40:115 (4) - Blanket is off

00:46:918 (3) - ^

00:53:546 (2) - Unneeded overlap again

01:02:964 (1,2,3,4) - ^ This is an Insane, spacing them a bit further won't hurt anyone :P

01:06:278 (3) - Blanket is off
Yauxo
1,622 posts
Joined June 2011
Topic Starter
Yauxo
Timorisu

Timorisu wrote:

'Allo

[Easy]

00:05:755 (1) - Snap to grid (for better overlay with 00:08:546 (1) - ) changed

00:25:290 (1) - I don't think anti jumps in Easies are too good, they might confuse a new player (they could see the slider underneath and click immediately) true. Couldnt cope up with a "new" fix, so I copy pasted 00:22:499 (1) -

[Normal]

00:11:336 (1) - Snap to grid (for better overlay with 00:12:732 (3) - ) changed

00:21:801 (3) - Really nazi but this blanket is off (the end of it) changed

00:26:947 (1) - ^

00:39:243 (1) - ^ changed

00:41:336 (4) - ^ changed

00:50:406 (1) - ^ changed

01:04:360 (1) - ^ changed (i think)

01:08:546 (3,4,1) - I'm just gonna guess you went for a straight line, but it's kinda really not one lol. I'd make a new slider, start it at the end of 3, drag it all the way through the start of 1 to the end of the grid (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1710313), and then readjust 4 and 1's sliderbody (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1710317). Don't forget to adjust the following sliders! I wasnt actually going for a straight line. Sometimes I like to use straight slider combos out of a curved singletap combo. This is probably supposed to be one, but it's messed up, so I'll give you that one. I'll think about fixing it/redoing this part, but I assume that I wont

01:20:406 (3) - Stupid personal opinion, but maybe rotate this by like 10 degrees? changed

[Insane]

I suggest you to read up on active/passive sliders and hitsounding (although I'm still doing this myself I'd like to advise this to you . _.) Ikr, it just happened :x I've adjusted most of it from the first finalized map and I actually think thats its fine atm

00:08:546 (1) - End is off, blanket-wise changed

00:09:069 (2) - Middle part is currently further away than the beginning changed

00:10:115 (2) - CTRL+G, place on 1's head, CTRL+G again changed

00:11:336 (1) - ^ changed

00:21:627 (1,2,3,4) - If you're going for a square and not a diamond you should re-position 2 and 3 further to the right

00:39:767 (3) - Unneeded and kinda ugly overlap with 1 . _. I basically build this diff with these in mind, so I'll keep these (I like them)

00:40:115 (4) - Blanket is off changed

00:46:918 (3) - ^

00:53:546 (2) - Unneeded overlap again

01:02:964 (1,2,3,4) - ^ This is an Insane, spacing them a bit further won't hurt anyone :P a tiny bit .. I guess D:

01:06:278 (3) - Blanket is off changed

Thanks :3
Samah
423 posts
Joined May 2010
Samah

Timorisu wrote:

[Samah's Hard]
00:00:871 (4) - Nazi, but blanket is off
It's fine.
00:01:394 (5) - ^ since copy paste
^
00:13:778 (8) - ^
^
00:14:127 (1) - ^
^
00:14:825 (3) - A curvier curve would do better imo (why not just a direct copy paste of 00:14:127 (1) - )
^
00:16:918 (1) - Blanket is off again
^
00:19:708 (1) - Move the end up a bit
^
00:20:232 (2) - Move the end left a bit
^
00:20:929 (4,1) - This antijump is quite confusing, might want to re-place 4 (easier than chosing a new position for 1)
^
00:32:267 (5) - Move the middle inwards a bit
^
00:40:464 (4) - ^ but outwards
^
00:42:034 (1) - Blanket is really off
^
00:42:557 (2) - Again, a curvier curve would be better, why not just copy paste 00:42:034 (1) -
^
00:55:290 (8,9,10,1) - Although this looks neat it has questionable flow, might want to place 1 a bit further left and down for a more circular movement when getting out of 8
^
01:18:313 (1) - Blanket is kinda off
^
If you're going to spend an entire mod just picking blankets, give me slider code. Blankets don't have to maintain a perfect radius. As long as the start and end circles are the same distance, close enough is good enough. Players won't notice or care.
Thanks for your other suggestions, but I think it plays fine as it is. If you can give me some screenshots of the kind of thing you think would play well, then I'll give it a shot and let you know what I think.
On the other hand, if you're going to mostly mod blankets for my diff, I'll take it as a compliment! ;)

No change.
No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
No_Gu
M4M from my queue
sry for the delay
I prefer GUILTY CROWN as source as logo shows
no video?

[Easy]
00:27:383 (2) - add a whistle
fine

[Normal]
00:00:174 (1,3,1,3) - I don't think claps fit here
00:26:685 (3,4) - add whistle
00:54:592 (3,4,1) - why not symmetry them?
hmm...it's more like a harder easy than normal.

[Samah]
why big circles...
1 downbeat 1 NC maybe..
00:00:871 (4) - ctrl+g better flow
00:17:964 (5,6) - maybe sth like this.plays better imo http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1716116
01:04:011 (9) - 164，128 looks better
more like a harder normal than hard
hmm..big circles and no jumps make this look really in a mess

[Insane]
00:27:034 - no sound here
00:48:662 (2) - it should be a slider like 1
00:55:377 (3) - wired..aha
it will be better if you put some jumps since this is an insane diff..but aha,still ok

hmm...I think it will be better if you can make Normal a little harder like a normal diff
Samah
423 posts
Joined May 2010
Samah

No_Gu wrote:

[Samah]
why big circles...
Because I think a map's difficulty should be based on its flow than on the size of its circles.
1 downbeat 1 NC maybe..
00:00:871 (4) - ctrl+g better flow
Ok, I like the loop idea.
00:17:964 (5,6) - maybe sth like this.plays better imo http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1716116
No.
01:04:011 (9) - 164，128 looks better
That's bad spacing.
more like a harder normal than hard
Not really.
hmm..big circles and no jumps make this look really in a mess
You're entitled to your opinion.
One small change.

http://puu.sh/9umra/a2e2c1ea7f.osu
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