1. Extra (4.89 stars, 419 notes)
2. Insane (5 stars, 297 notes)
3. Mochi's Hard (4.95 stars, 254 notes)
4. Normal (4.32 stars, 155 notes)
5. Sekai's Easy (2.76 stars, 101 notes)

1. So let's see the BG. In the left side, a kissing couple. In the right side, a girl with a very revealing (and suggestive) clothing... Seriously, get something more SFW.

1. Okay, I know this song's rhythm is kinda complex to map, but the rhythm of the map itself could be made easier to read... Just saying.
2. 00:03:563 - 00:06:375 - Well, first remove the repeat from 00:02:781 (3), then make the rhythm here look like this? ((4) is at 00:03:563, and 00:05:750 (1) (the pink slider) ends at 00:06:375, as a guide). This rhythm is far easier to read for beginners.
3. 00:21:063 - 00:22:625 - Make 00:21:063 (4) end at 00:21:375, and 00:21:844 (1) to start at 00:21:688? Again, this is so the rhythm will be easier to follow. You may want to add a finish to emphasize the vocal and music at 00:21:375 if you did this.
4. 00:31:063 (3) - Move this to (220,88) so the vertical gap between 00:28:875 (1,2) and 00:30:438 (2,3) are equal? Looks more tidy, IMO.
5. 00:36:063 - I believe a finish at 35% volume or so will fit the instrument here very well. Try it? It feels kinda empty, currently.
6. 00:40:594 (2,1,2) - I'm sure it's possible to make a better blanket. Won't give examples because I'll probably just show my own mapping style, which would be... useless?
7. 00:55:125 (2,3) - Not blanketed like 00:53:875 (1,2). Try to make a perfect blanket pattern by making sure the two sliders are spaced equally to the circle? (In an easier wording, make the blanket here look like 00:53:875 (1,2)?)
8. 01:00:750 (1) - Extend the slider to 01:01:375 so the rhythm will be easier to follow?

1. 00:21:219 - Use a finish at 50% to emphasize the vocal and music here?
2. 00:42:625 (5) - Flip this vertically for a better flow?
3. 00:52:938 (2,3) - The pattern would look neater if you moved (2) to (268,44) and (3) to (148,44).

• !switch-language (mostly-)Indonesian
  also: Mochi, Mochi everywhere

1. 00:03:250 (3,1) - Coba gedein spacing jadi 1,5x gitu? Terasa lebih natural aja sih. Mungkin karena jarak di sini satu ketukan, sedangkan dari tadi 1/2 terus.
2. 00:04:813 (4,5) - ^
3. 00:06:844 (2,3) - ^
4. 00:12:625 (1,2) - Jump di sini kegedean dibandingkan dengan atmosfir lagunya yang masih agak calm... 2,0-2,3x udah cukup ah.
5. 00:17:312 (3) - Kenapa overlap gini lol. Sengaja? Kalau bisa coba bikin seperti yang di awal kiai time... Kalau bisa.
6. 00:20:124 - 00:21:296 - Object di sini kurang... audible, jadi terasa "dipaksa" buat nge-hit object di sini. Coba volume 45%?
7. 01:08:875 (1,2) - Coba bikin (1) melengkung mengikuti lengkungan (2) biar tampak lebih rapi?
8. 01:15:750 (3,4) - ^ ((3) ngikutin (4)... atau bisa dibilang: Blanket di sini bisa lebih bagus.)

1. I think this diff is very hard compared to average Insane diffs (even osu!'s new difficulty calculation system declares this diff as an Extra diff), and it actually has quite a gap of difficulty compared to Mochi's Hard (which is already slightly harder than average Hard diffs). You may want to make an easier Insane diff to make a better difficulty curve.
2. 00:08:797 (6,1) - I know the spacing is consistent in terms of the value, but since the SV changed, it's inaccurate. As you can see, 00:08:563 (3,4,5,6,1) is inconsistently spaced, visually, and this can confuse players. Please make the stream spaced consistently visually, by using 0.9x DS when working with 00:08:875 (1) (it equals with 1.2x DS at 0.75x SV/BPM).
3. 00:39:031 (3,4) - Select the two of them, then move to (148,56) so the spacing at 00:38:563 (2,3,4) will look equal, and thus neater?
4. 01:23:250 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Having stacked notes and smaller spacing here kills the flow and makes players feel forced in their cursor movement. Avoid stacking and use larger spacing (and more importantly, make a considerable jump between 01:23:719 (4,5) to follow the strong instrument)?

Saten wrote:

BG is l-lewd~

Sonnyc wrote:

Insane:
00:24:500 (2) - Don't you think the flow of (1,2,3) isn't that nice? Suggesting this order. hmm I don't like how (7)'s spacing is so short, it will ruin the flow.
00:27:313 (1,1,1) - This 1/4 doesn't needs an NC in reading. Imo this NC spams look bad, but it's you to select. then I will keep it first, let's see another opinion.
00:32:313 (1,1,1) - ^ ^
00:39:344 (4) - Mind rotating to make a rounder flow with (3)? I think if I keep it like this, it will more flow to (1)

xxdeathx wrote:

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Overall slider speed is a bit fast for normals nah I think it's ok
When hit circles are 1/2 beat from something, like 00:12:313 (3,4,5,6) - they should stack on the other object because spacing them apart a little strangely makes them look a lot harder. If I stack them, the player who play with HD mods we confuse.
00:56:375 (1,2,3) - #2 and 3 are off the rhythm of the lyrics, use the same rhythm you did in the beginning like 00:01:375 (1,2,3) I use this rhythm because I want to make my normal easier.
01:06:375 (1,2,3) - same as above ^
01:18:875 (3) - move the end of the slider closer to the next item and make the slider repeat one more time so the extra half beat will correspond with the an unmapped syllable of the lyrics same reason as above, I want to make it easier and many reverse can make the player confuse and combo break.

[Insane]
00:20:125 (1,2,1) - These sliders are separated by 1/4 beats (no breaks in between), so the spacing is a little far. Usually multiple repeating 1/4 sliders directly next to each other on the timeline will also be touching each other in the map. this kind of pattern are usually see in ranked map it's not that hard. so I would keep it.
00:21:375 (1) - the singing starts 1/2 a beat earlier at 00:21:219, but you're probably aware of that and are using the 00:20:750 (1) slider to cover the instrument sound. the later placement of 00:21:375 (1) might confuse some people who might try to hit it early (and break their combo) because they expect it to start at the same time as the lyrics yes but I follow the whistle sound there and it ends on 00:21:375 so I prefer to use slider 1/2 there to help hold their combo
01:24:188 (1,2) - they don't look like they're snapped that part I follow the whistle sound again and they are 1/3 so I would keep it

Okoratu wrote:

Yooo

[General]
Nice BG *-*

[Extreme]
I love your 1/8 sliders..!

1. 00:15:750 (3,4,5,6,7) - looking at the spacings of the other streams and the way this whole thing flows, this stream just somehow doesn't fit in here or your style at all and creates an awkward hold I suggest you'd do something else with that I think this stream is fine since many people testplay and don't have a problem there, if looks carefully the flow from 3 to 7 and 7 to 8 and 1 is flow well.
   
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   Maybe something like that would fit there, just give it some thought
2. 00:42:313 (4,5) - you might want this one to sound the same as 00:40:594 (3,4) - I'm consider about this so many time, well I will try it, let's see how can this go. I do this on Normal and Insane too.
3. 01:05:125 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Are the whilstles that loud in the song, dunno they simply annoy me for some reason (maybe they're too loud) nah I think it's fine, let's see other opinion.

(This map is awesome!)

[Insane]

1. 00:30:438 (6) - I think this one would look nicer if you'd move it a tiny bit to the right: It's a star pattern and that note is blanket with the 2 slider on the left and above.
   
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2. 00:56:375 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - In the Extreme you did a new combo party for the vocals, might consider doing this here aswell I didn't add NC for this because it's just a normal pattern/spacing.
3. 01:16:844 (2) - I just noticed that this one doesn't stack properly with 01:17:469 (4) - in the editor, might consider just moving them so that they snap to the grid? It's already stack imo.
4. 01:26:922 (1) - You might do the same thing as you did in the Extreme here. letting this spinner end half a note earlier and placing a circle in the middle doesn't really increase the difficulty does it? I want the Expert diff to be special (have the thing that another haven't.

The Hitsound suggestions for the Extreme apply here aswell, btw.

Overall I only had to point out like really minor things, sorry D:

Cheers,
~oko.

1. Sonnyc wrote:

   The rhythm of this map is too complexed. Usage of red tick objects felt inappropriate and not fitting nicely with the song...

   I agree, in my opinion you should follow over the vocals in this song, because they are more dominant, and better for a easy difficult: make it more easier to read.
2. Here are some things you could change:
3. 00:14:500 (1,2) - Try this rhythm, to combine with the vocals
   
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4. 00:20:750 (3,4,1,2,3) - this may confusing for the beginners, try simplify
   
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5. 00:30:438 - 00:32:000 - Change this part, it looks like is not following the rhythm
6. 00:38:875 - 00:41:063 - Same, my suggestion to fix this:
   Delete: 00:39:813 (1) > extend 00:38:875 (4) - to 00:39:813 > add a circle here 00:40:125 and here 00:40:750
7. 00:55:438 (3) - Decrease this to 00:55:750
8. 00:56:375 - 01:06:063 - here I also do not understand what you follow, Try remap following the vocals.
9. 01:18:563 (1) - What about this rhythm
   
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1. What do you think
   
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   Just copy 00:16:844 (2) - Rotate 90º clockwise, invert horizontally and move to 108, 260.
2. 00:35:438 - Add a circle?
3. 01:15:751 (3) - Blanket it better
4. 01:25:438 (2) - Move to 408,200?
5. Try end the spinner here 01:28:563 , and add a circle 01:28:719 - in the middle.

1. 
   i don't found something very important here, it is very fun to play

LucyS wrote:

Hello, M4M <3

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1. 00:26:844 (4) - Extend to 00:27:156 ? ok let's try
2. 01:25:125 (1) - Try this rhythm sounds nice, but a bit different (just note instead of slider on (2))
   
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1. 00:02:781 (3) - First off. I would highly suggest removing the the reverse on this, and possibly try a pattern like this as it follows the rhythm/vocals a lot better. | http://puu.sh/86uSE.jpg
2. 00:04:344 (1,2,1,2,3) - This whole section feels a bit unfomfortable with all the off red ticks that you use. If I could suggest anything it would be to follow the vocals better. For now. I believe you should consider 00:06:688 (2,3) - in a pattern like this: http://puu.sh/86vdS.jpg | as it feels much more natural. The first part would work better adjusted to the vocals as well, though no matter what you try, it'll still sound strange. For that I don't really have much to offer.
3. 00:14:500 (1,2) - Simple 1/1's would work best here as it'll fit the vocals and rhythm much better. | I came up with this, but of course feel free to reject this as it changes the rhythm quite a bit. | http://puu.sh/86vvn.jpg | The seeker bar is at 00:14:500 -
4. 00:17:938 (2) - Same thing here. Keeping a simple 1/1 structure would be best for this. Especially with the vocals starting at 00:18:250 -
5. 00:24:500 (4) - nudge over the red node left one grid for better symmetry within the slider.
6. 00:31:063 (3) - I don't really find the purpose in this 3/2 slider. I might be repeating myself a bit too much but I personally feel that 1/1 sliders do more than enough justice here.
7. 00:35:594 (1) - This little crack. would people actually follow it? or would they go for the vocals? I suppose more or less you can do what you feel is best. I personally think it would sound better starting 1/2 later to match the vocals.
8. 00:38:875 (4,1,2) - This is where I believe the 3/2 reverse sliders would come in handy. | Delete (1,2) and shorten the (4) by 1/2, then a reverse. Add another slider at 00:40:125 - the same as the last one. | http://puu.sh/86wl6.jpg
9. 00:55:438 (3) - Shorten this by 1/2? The strong beat is at 00:55:750 - so it should be mapped to.
10. 01:05:125 (2) - are these whistles intentional? sounds like you might need to use the soft additions to get the soft whistles.

1. 00:00:750 (1,2) - Care to change this to a slider? The first two notes are actually harder to hit than one might realize.
2. 00:04:344 (1) - Try ending this at 00:05:125 - and adding two circles after | http://puu.sh/86x62.jpg
3. 00:08:250 (7) - Little curve in this would be nice, http://puu.sh/86wTz.jpg | It doesn't need to be blanketed. It'll flow and feel much better this way.
4. 00:09:813 (3) - Move the middle node to x478 y137 for a perfect blanket
5. 00:12:313 (3) - Another thing that might look better with a curve to improve on the flow. | http://puu.sh/86xbI.jpg
6. 00:13:875 (1) - How about shortening this one as well? | Try ending at 00:14:500 - and then adding a 1/1 slider (since you have lots of circles coming up) | This properly catches the end of the held vocal while maximizing gameplay.
7. 00:17:313 (3) - Middle node: x441 y53 (2 nudges left) for a slightly better blanket.
8. 00:21:219 (6) - Control+g? the flow seems to prefer the top side of the slider instead of the lower side.
9. 00:29:344 (5) - Simple idea to keep more rhythm in your map. Remove the reverse on this, and add a circle where it used to end to 00:30:438 - which is a clap note. | http://puu.sh/86xCT.jpg
10. 00:56:375 (1,2,3,4) - This would make it harder, but it'd make more sense since it's just sliders. | http://puu.sh/86xN9.jpg I believe heavily emphasizing on the vocals here would help out a great ton and even with that many 1/2's together it'd still be easy to play since players would naturally follow the vocals.
11. 00:59:344 (1) - Basically the same suggestion as the other long sliders. Either you've used them or not. This time end the slider at 01:00:125 - and add two circles or a slider after
12. 01:06:375 (1,2,3) -You can do the same as 56 secs here if you used the mod.
    
    Overall a pretty solid difficulty. I like it
    Some of the sliders might be a bit too long, and I've posted a few suggestions for them, but overall the map is nice.
    http://puu.sh/86yiM.jpg

1. 00:07:470 (3,1) - The (1) is really awkward to hit. It'd play and feel much better if they were joined as a single slider.
2. 00:40:751 (3) - More curve? | http://puu.sh/86zcR.jpg | So this flows better into (4)
3. 01:01:844 - Why the skip on such an important vocal note?
4. 01:06:376 (3) - NC should definitely be on the start of this Kiai. Maybe NC further back at 01:05:125 - and get rid of the one at 01:05:750 - for consistency.
5. 01:08:876 (1) - Middle node: x433 y156 | Tail node: x432 y84 | for a slightly better blanket.
6. 01:15:751 (3) - Blanket? | http://puu.sh/86zrG.jpg
7. 01:23:251 (4) - how about placing the tail end of this where the upcoming (3) will be? | Also try moving the two as well to fit more naturally | Example: http://puu.sh/86zFk.jpg

1. 00:05:750 (2) - NC here to eliminate any confusion and give more of an idea that you are back to your original SV.
2. 00:13:250 (5) - Add a whistle to the tail end of this for consistency with the previous pattern
3. 00:50:750 (7) - Just to shorten the combo, I would suggest an NC here as well since it's a huge stream XD.
4. 01:22:938 (2) - I'd remove the whistle from the tail end of this to be consistent with 01:21:375 (1,2,3) -

1. 00:04:344 (1,2,3) - I'd say this is almost too much coming off a slow slider. Also NC on (2) like insane. Try Control+g on (2,3) so players will be able to get their momentum back up.
2. 00:11:063 (9) - Stack on (4)?
3. 01:01:375 (1,3) - Could you blanket this slightly better? http://puu.sh/86B5j.jpg
4. 01:15:281 (3) - Following your patterns, NC here

Lanturn wrote:

1. 00:00:750 (1,2) - Care to change this to a slider? The first two notes are actually harder to hit than one might realize. ok let's try
2. 00:04:344 (1) - Try ending this at 00:05:125 - and adding two circles after | http://puu.sh/86x62.jpg hmm I'm try to end on 00:05:438 instead and add one note, to follow the vocal.
3. 00:08:250 (7) - Little curve in this would be nice, http://puu.sh/86wTz.jpg | It doesn't need to be blanketed. It'll flow and feel much better this way. I want it to be straight because there already have so many curve i guess..
4. 00:09:813 (3) - Move the middle node to x478 y137 for a perfect blanket hm y137? I think you give me wrong coordinates
5. 00:12:313 (3) - Another thing that might look better with a curve to improve on the flow. | http://puu.sh/86xbI.jpg same as above.
6. 00:13:875 (1) - How about shortening this one as well? | Try ending at 00:14:500 - and then adding a 1/1 slider (since you have lots of circles coming up) | This properly catches the end of the held vocal while maximizing gameplay. I will reconsider, let's look for an other opinion, that slider I use for follow the whistle sound too.
7. 00:17:313 (3) - Middle node: x441 y53 (2 nudges left) for a slightly better blanket. hmm ok.
8. 00:21:219 (6) - Control+g? the flow seems to prefer the top side of the slider instead of the lower side. nice, I move a bit down too for improve the flow.
9. 00:29:344 (5) - Simple idea to keep more rhythm in your map. Remove the reverse on this, and add a circle where it used to end to 00:30:438 - which is a clap note. | http://puu.sh/86xCT.jpg
10. 00:56:375 (1,2,3,4) - This would make it harder, but it'd make more sense since it's just sliders. | http://puu.sh/86xN9.jpg I believe heavily emphasizing on the vocals here would help out a great ton and even with that many 1/2's together it'd still be easy to play since players would naturally follow the vocals. since many people told me this so I will try to change it like you mention, change.
11. 00:59:344 (1) - Basically the same suggestion as the other long sliders. Either you've used them or not. This time end the slider at 01:00:125 - and add two circles or a slider after end later than you and add one note instead to follow the vocal.
12. 01:06:375 (1,2,3) -You can do the same as 56 secs here if you used the mod. change
    
    Overall a pretty solid difficulty. I like it
    Some of the sliders might be a bit too long, and I've posted a few suggestions for them, but overall the map is nice.
    http://puu.sh/86yiM.jpg

1. 00:05:750 (2) - NC here to eliminate any confusion and give more of an idea that you are back to your original SV. ok let's try
2. 00:13:250 (5) - Add a whistle to the tail end of this for consistency with the previous pattern the last pattern is 1/1 but this one is 1/2, but I still add it since it's sounds cool.
3. 00:50:750 (7) - Just to shorten the combo, I would suggest an NC here as well since it's a huge stream XD.
4. 01:22:938 (2) - I'd remove the whistle from the tail end of this to be consistent with 01:21:375 (1,2,3) hmm I don't know what did you mean here, I added whistle on previous 2's tail too so not remove.

1. 00:04:344 (1,2,3) - I'd say this is almost too much coming off a slow slider. Also NC on (2) like insane. Try Control+g on (2,3) so players will be able to get their momentum back up. mm I think it's fine since many people testplay it and pass it well, I also a bit agree with you too, I have try it but it will also ruin my pattern.
2. 00:11:063 (9) - Stack on (4)? hmm no, try I a bit different pattern there.
3. 01:01:375 (1,3) - Could you blanket this slightly better? http://puu.sh/86B5j.jpg ok
4. 01:15:281 (3) - Following your patterns, NC here hmm I'm afraid the NC will too short, so I will keep it.

CrystilonZ wrote:

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ไอสไลเดอร์กลมดิ๊กใหญ่ๆ เยอะๆ มันไม่ค่อยสวยอะ ยิ่งพวกเกือบหลุดๆจอ แบบ 00:59:344 (1)
แก้ได้กะดี
00:20:125 (3) - เลื่อนมาที่ 52 192 สวยกว่า เอิ่มม ก็ได้
00:20:906 (5,6) - ระหว่าง 5 กับ 6 เปลี่ยนเป็นสไลเดอร์ แล้วปลายหกเป็นวงกลมเข้ากว่า หรือไม่ก็สไลเดอร์เดียวย้อนกลับไปเลย เก็บไว่ก่อนละกัน พี่ว่าของเดิมก็เข้าอยู่
มันอาจจะยากไปนิด ? ด้วยมั้ง ไม่นะ

StarForYou wrote:

Hello M4M

[Normal]
Nice :3
Nothing can mod thanks :3

[Insane]
00:28:875 (1) - Exchange the NC to 00:29:344 (2) - I think it's already fine
Nice Insane <3

[Expert]
00:15:750 (3,4,5,6,7) - The stream quite strange and difficult to play...Try to make the distance of this stream more far or use other pattern ahaha its fine

Your map so good and fun to play!:D
Good luck~

Endemic wrote:

From #modreqs

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00:36:375 (2) - to 00:41:375 - it would be really nice if you had spinners and a spinner at 00:42:625 - to 00:43:563 and replace the notes after it with this http://puu.sh/87ELA.jpg . In the gap between the spinners ( 00:41:375 - 00:42:625 ) you can map something like this http://puu.sh/87Exv.jpg this diff has two spinner already, one is a long one too, so I want to keep it like this :3 fit more than spinner imo.

[Insane]
And put a note at the end after the slider like expert I want to make Expert a special one so I will keep this, but if many people mention this again again again and again, I will add it someday.

[Expert]
00:03:563 (6) - Shorten this slider by 1/4 to make it a 1/2 I think it's already fit there, let's other opinion.

No Dap wrote:

BG so ecchi :>

Endemic wrote:

LOLOLOLOLOL

1. Going to skip this since it seems you haven't updated your diff :3
   But Please fix those rhythm issues previous modders mentioned. It was really not following the music at all.

1. 00:00:750 (1) - Try this NC. It follows your NC pattern (which seems to be every 2 stanza)
   
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2. 00:21:687 (1) - s:c2 whistle here? since there's the piano
3. 00:28:875 (4) - Consider NC here, isn't following your NC pattern, and is really long
4. 00:32:000 (5) - Consider deleting this note, or making it 1/2 slider like 00:27:313 (1) -
5. 00:34:343 (1,2) - Add finish? sounds good imo
6. 00:35:750 (1) - Shouldn't NC be like this?
   
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7. 00:58:875 (7) - NC should start here
8. 01:01:375 (4) - NC
9. 01:02:938 (1) - Delete NC
10. 01:18:875 (3) - NC should start here, not 01:17:625 (1) - according to your pattern
11. 01:24:188 (4) - NC should start here, not 01:25:125 (1) -

1. I don't know what happened to your diff but all of your timing sections are +1ms :3 (except offset)
2. 00:10:281 (4) - Shouldn't NC start here since 00:10:281 (4,1,2) - is all the same drum
3. 00:16:296 (6) - I think it plays better if this is deleted
4. 01:02:000 (2,3) - How about 1/2 slider here? I think 2 circles make it confusing because of 1/1 vocal here

1. 00:36:063 (3,4,5) - how about anti jump like mochi did? I think it fits very well here
2. 00:42:000 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - spacing got smaller here, but I'd prefer if they are the same as others :3 But they fit anyway \:D/

1. 00:15:750 (3,4,5,6,7) - lol!
2. 00:37:703 (5) - Consider deleting this note.. I think it's ruining the calmness here.
3. 00:39:031 (3,4) - I don't this these passive sliders fit
4. 00:49:188 (3,4) - Swap these? this jump flow felt sort of awkward :3
5. 01:09:500 (6,7) - Swap these? I think zigzag would be more intuitive here
6. 01:06:063 (1) - Delete NC?
7. 01:19:344 (4) - Nice shape here, but consider stacking this on 01:18:250 (3) - head. I think it will make 01:19:188 (3,4,5) - this jump much more fun

No Dap wrote:

Hi P A N~

[General]
Move offset to 00:00:125 - ? let's see for BAT's opinion
00:01:375 - This should be the big white tick

[Normal]

1. 00:28:875 (4) - Consider NC here, isn't following your NC pattern, and is really long I think it's fit with vocal and 6 isn't too long imo so I will keep this first.
2. 01:24:188 (4) - NC should start here, not 01:25:125 (1) I'm not NC there because that part is just piano after the vocal, so I decide to add NC on vocal instead.-

[Insane]

1. 00:36:063 (3,4,5) - how about anti jump like mochi did? I think it fits very well here I think it's fine and it will more comfortable to play with DT mods too imo (easy to catch a beat without hesitate)

[Expert]

1. 00:37:703 (5) - Consider deleting this note.. I think it's ruining the calmness here. let's see other opinion for this, since it's an extra diff so I want to make all of rhythm (even some part are miss without notice.
2. 00:49:188 (3,4) - Swap these? this jump flow felt sort of awkward :3 I think mine are more flow D:
3. 01:09:500 (6,7) - Swap these? I think zigzag would be more intuitive here change in different way.
4. 01:06:063 (1) - Delete NC? spacing are change there.
5. 01:19:344 (4) - Nice shape here, but consider stacking this on 01:18:250 (3) - head. I think it will make 01:19:188 (3,4,5) - this jump much more fun change in different way.

Nice job with the Expert diff! Very fun to play :>

Good luck!!

1. dat bg lol
2. you should add about 1500 ms of audio lead in, so that there are more than two seconds before the map starts
3. in all diffs, move the first red line to 00:00:750 - and then add a red line at 00:01:375 - to reset the metronome and nightcore mod correctly. don't forget to add another green line too if you have sv changes

1. 00:25:750 (1) - try lowering to x264 y364, makes the curve from 1 to 2 a bit smoother

1. 00:06:063 (3,1) - I would remove whistle from 3 and put it on head of 1, since 1 is the start of the vocal phrase
2. 01:05:437 - couple unnecessary green lines here

1. 01:10:125 (2,3,4,5,1) - not totally sure about this star, it looks a bit uneven to me :<

1. 00:15:438 (2) - remove finish, it doesn't fit :< even if there might be a very soft cymbal in the background the hitsound is too loud

1. 00:08:251 (2,3,4) - the way this is placed it makes it look like a very uneven triangle, if you're going for that then that's fine, but think it would look nicer at x160 y360, if you adjust the blanket with 4 as well
2. 00:37:782 (1,2) - seems like a bad stack here

1. hitsounding is good, but I would really recommend raising volume overall by about 10%, it's very soft for the whole map

1. 00:17:859 (4,5) - while i get this is correct with the music, it felt really awkward to play, so maybe try this rhythm?
   
2. 00:26:063 (2) - try a ctrl+g here, will keep circular flow going while opening up spacing a bit more
3. 00:29:344 (2,3,4) - check your pattern here, I think 3 should be adjusted a bit
4. 00:50:750 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - seems really hard compared to the rest of the diff, maybe replace the first 4 with a repeat slider?
5. 00:55:750 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^
6. 01:02:469 (4) - try rotating about 30 degrees and putting around x408 y360, I think bringing out the vocal here will play well

1. 00:00:750 - seems a bit loud in this section, maybe try 50%?

1. omg the stream XD I would have broken up some of it into 1/4 sliders just to give them a break from streaming so long but it works
2. 00:17:859 (4,5) - same as insane, the double just doesn't play well :<
3. 00:20:750 (1) - why sv change lol
4. 00:46:531 (2,2) - move these to x420 y24 for a better star
5. 00:59:344 (4,5,6,7,8) - omg the star patterns pls ;;
6. 01:20:125 (1,2) - seems odd to me that you would keep using close distance when the vocal is at the strongest, I would expect this section to have the highest spacing

1. same as insane about the beginning

captin1 wrote:

hi

[General]

1. dat bg lol cute
2. you should add about 1500 ms of audio lead in, so that there are more than two seconds before the map starts I tried it and I think 0 is already fit.

[Sekai's Easy]
Placement/Rhythm/Nazi Patterning

1. 00:25:750 (1) - try lowering to x264 y364, makes the curve from 1 to 2 a bit smoother fix in different way since the coordinates you gave me is a bit too far from the middle of spinner.

[Normal]
Placement/Rhythm/Nazi Patterning

1. 01:10:125 (2,3,4,5,1) - not totally sure about this star, it looks a bit uneven to me :< :(

Hitsounding

1. 00:15:438 (2) - remove finish, it doesn't fit :< even if there might be a very soft cymbal in the background the hitsound is too loud I decrease the volume instead.

Hitsounding

1. hitsounding is good, but I would really recommend raising volume overall by about 10%, it's very soft for the whole map

[Insane]
Placement/Rhythm/Nazi Patterning

1. 00:17:859 (4,5) - while i get this is correct with the music, it felt really awkward to play, so maybe try this rhythm? after I follow you and test player misunderstand it to 1/2 spacing because it was a slider, so I change it back. will see on other opinion too. also I added NC for that.
2. 00:29:344 (2,3,4) - check your pattern here, I think 3 should be adjusted a bit I think it's ok
3. 00:50:750 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - seems really hard compared to the rest of the diff, maybe replace the first 4 with a repeat slider? I think it's fine, I found some player in youtube played that part very well.
4. 00:55:750 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^ ^

[Expert]
Placement/Rhythm/Nazi Patterning

1. omg the stream XD I would have broken up some of it into 1/4 sliders just to give them a break from streaming so long but it works no I'm devil.
2. 00:17:859 (4,5) - same as insane, the double just doesn't play well :< let's see for other opinion, I want the rhythm to different with Insane.
3. 00:20:750 (1) - why sv change lol because the slider will too short and hard to click.
4. 00:46:531 (2,2) - move these to x420 y24 for a better star 26 instead.
5. 00:59:344 (4,5,6,7,8) - omg the star patterns pls ;; why
6. 01:20:125 (1,2) - seems odd to me that you would keep using close distance when the vocal is at the strongest, I would expect this section to have the highest spacing remapped a bit on this part

once you fix the red lines and the audioleadin (and the useless green lines aasdklf) you should be good to go! good luck~

[Minakami Yuki] wrote:

Request from #multiplay
Bubbled

PAN~ Good luck with the map~
Give you a star >~<

-Yuzuriha-inori- wrote:

Insane

00:03:250 Slider It piles up.

00:16:062 Finish Recommendation

00:17:859 Rhythm change

00:29:656 Repetition

00:30:125 Slider

Hard

00:05:437 change

00:12:859 Repetition

01:09:968 Circle

I am poor at English.

You good mapper

do your best.

1. ~

• - 00:33:875 (3) - New como here?

• - 00:20:125 (3) - My suggestion here is replace this whistle for a finish

• - 01:03:875 (1) - nazi* Move the second point to x:162, y:251, to make a good blanket with (3)

• - 00:36:375 (4) - New como perhaps?

• -- Looks fine

I'll mod this tomorrow

1. I feel the two redlines are not necessary and this can work nicely just adding one with offset 00:00:125 -, but ask for more opinions about this

1. 00:07:938 (1,2,3) - this doesn't play comfortable IMO, since the pattern is going to straight, what about to move 2 a bit up to improve the cursor movement following the curve of previous slider, like:
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:07:938 also I don't think you need this NC, since you're using them every 2 stanzas, is better if you remove this one for consistency
3. 00:15:750 (3,4,5,6,7) - Pan so evil, but I like this
4. 00:17:859 (1,2) - this play really weird IMO, since clicking that double starting in a bluetick is really hard, I keep getting 100 or 50 there, I preffer if you add a triplet there, just add a circle in 00:17:781 -, also it will follow the music better
5. 00:20:125 (1,2) - use a stream instead?, since is an extra diff the repeats slider doesn't feel challenging IMO
6. 00:26:688 (2) - 2 circles fit better the vocals lines instead of the slider IMO
7. 00:27:313 (1,2,3) - consider lowering the volume in the slider tails at least to 20%, since sound a bit noise in game
8. 00:50:593 (11,1) - well, the cursor movement here is really forced IMO, since is really uncomfortable to get the stream in 00:50:750 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -, I guess you should try to rearrange stuff to improve the flow here
9. 00:51:375 (1,3) - stack this properly
10. 00:56:375 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - combo spam is not really necessary it just mess up the overall HP drain of the whole diff, I suggest you to remove all the unnecessary combos, since they are not helping to make this part readable or something
11. 01:03:875 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - similar as above, just keep the one at 01:03:875 (1) -
12. 01:06:375 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - ^ check others similars parts if you agree with me

1. 00:04:343 this slider is inconsistent with the one in the Extra diff, I mean in Extra this end in 00:05:593 - but in the Insane it end in 00:05:437
2. 00:05:750 remove NC, again this is not consistent with your extra diff
3. 00:14:813 (5,1,2,3,4) - I have two issues with this, first 00:14:813 (5,2) - are to close and doesn't look nice, second 00:15:750 (3) - this NC look really spammy I understand you're using it for the spacing change, but you can get the same way without spamming combos, just moving 00:15:438 (2,3) - like:
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:21:375 this green line is not necessary
5. 00:35:281 remove NC and add NC in 00:36:375 - for consistency with the change in the music and your extra diff
6. 00:41:219 (8,2) - stack them properly
7. 00:53:875 (1,5) - ^ hue
8. 01:05:125 (1,2,3,4) - this slider jumps play nice, but I feel the spacing is to big, consider to reduce at least to 2.0
9. 01:19:500 (5,6,1) - use an equal spacing between them, just move (6) a bit

1. you have some unsnapped objects:
   
   SPOILER

   00:01:845 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   00:02:314 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
   00:04:189 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
   00:04:345 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   00:04:814 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   00:05:439 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
   00:06:220 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
   00:06:845 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   00:07:470 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
   00:08:564 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   00:09:345 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   00:09:814 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   00:10:439 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
   00:10:595 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
   00:11:064 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   00:11:845 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   00:12:314 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   00:13:564 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
   00:13:720 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
   00:14:345 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
   00:14:814 (4) -Unsnapped slider (start).
2. 00:00:750 consider start mapping from here, since this is the only diff who doesn't start there, having consistent is a good thing when mapping
3. 00:08:407 (3,4) - this jump is kinda surprising there, consider using the same distance between 00:08:251 (2,3,4) - since they are in the same combo plus they have the same gap in the timeline
4. 00:19:188 (2,3,4) - the jump is not to big for a hard diff in this bpm? I guess some players will have problems with this in the first play
5. 00:26:843 (2,3) - I prefer a single slider here followijng better the vocal line, also will be consistent with 00:26:376 (1) -
6. 00:29:813 (4,1) - spacing~, the objects are too close each other, use 1.20 like you was doing in the whole diff
7. 00:41:376 (1,2,3) - use the same distance between them? this will play more comfortable in the slow part IMO
8. 00:45:751 (3,4) - fix this blanket pls, it look really vadly done IMO
9. 00:46:688 (2,3) - similar as above, not sure if you're aiming for a blanket here, thought
10. 00:53:875 (1) - I really don't like this spinner, maybe you should map it properly as the others diffs, but then again just my opinion
11. 01:26:376 - 01:26:687 Is better if you map that beats properly and then start the spinner in 01:26:843 - like the others diffs, also it make more sense with the vocals lines

1. 00:04:344 (2) - same as Insane, if you ask me I prefer this rhythm over the one in extra
2. 00:45:750 (5) - this 1/2 repeat slider doesn't fit the music, since there is not a prominent sound at 00:45:906 -, I feel using a 1/1 slider will represent better the vocals and music in this point.
3. 00:48:875 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this look really hard to play, consider to at least convert 00:49:344 (2,3) - in a slider, just to give a players less stress in this part
4. 01:26:375 (2) - this circle alone doesn't fit the music, use a 1/1 slider instead, also will be consistent with the others diffs

1. 00:20:125 (2,3) - consider to avoid 1/2 gaps in easy diffs
2. 00:21:531 you're clearly following vocals, will be a nice idea adding a circle here
3. 01:26:844 the spinner should start here, consider to map the previous part properly

Natsu wrote:

I'll mod this tomorrow

General:

1. I feel the two redlines are not necessary and this can work nicely just adding one with offset 00:00:125 -, but ask for more opinions about this

Extra:

1. 00:26:688 (2) - 2 circles fit better the vocals lines instead of the slider IMO it have vocal both head and tail but next two note aren't so I want to make them a bit different, just my feeling nah can't explain, also it would ruin my pattern too uhuu
2. 01:03:875 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - similar as above, just keep the one at 01:03:875 (1) - I delete but some part example like this part, I think add NC is a bit more fit with not imo.
3. 00:20:125 (1,2) - use a stream instead?, since is an extra diff the repeats slider doesn't feel challenging IMO after I check of this part again, I think this stream is not that strong to be circle-streams, better fit with slider imo.
   
   Insane:
   
   
   1. 00:04:343 this slider is inconsistent with the one in the Extra diff, I mean in Extra this end in 00:05:593 - but in the Insane it end in 00:05:437 yes I will hesitate about this but if extend this slider, it will ruin my pattern and make it harder so I decide to end there and lucky that the vocal also breathing on that part so maybe fit hm? lol
   2. 00:05:750 remove NC, again this is not consistent with your extra diff hmm maybe NC can help the player to more realize that it's a 1/1 spacing beat? maybe look for more opinion to reconsider this :3
   3. 01:05:125 (1,2,3,4) - this slider jumps play nice, but I feel the spacing is to big, consider to reduce at least to 2.0 no! I think it's ok ok decrease to about 2.55x
   Normal
   
   
   1. 00:04:344 (2) - same as Insane, if you ask me I prefer this rhythm over the one in extra hmm maybe it's ok since the normal diff and extra diff are too different.
   Easy:
   
   
   1. 00:20:125 (2,3) - consider to avoid 1/2 gaps in easy diffs I think it's fine, I saw many rank map did this ';..;' and I think it's not that hard.. but it's ok if you suggest some rhythm instead 0.0 since I don't have any idea on this rhythm lol
   2. 00:21:531 you're clearly following vocals, will be a nice idea adding a circle here hmm I think it sound a bit weird to spin suddenly after clicking note on Easiest diff.

GL PAN nice mapset

captin1 wrote:

just gonna say in response to natsu, don't add the red line before the music starts, since this will cause nightcore mod to start playing before the music does (i've talked with a few bats about this and how i gave it is how they've decided it should be done)

Lanturn wrote:

Also "No" is a particle and should be written in lowercase.

KSHR wrote:

By the way, "Seiken nante Iranai". No need to capitalize "nante".

1. 00:11:375 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern can follow the vocals better. Try this: (This change will not affect spacing)
   
   Image/Code

   
   

   416,342,11375,6,0,P|448:314|452:230,1,120,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   332,190,12312,2,0,P|300:218|296:302,2,120,6|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   373,266,13562,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   416,342,13875,1,6,0:0:0:0:

2. 00:14:500 (1) - Change this slider into a 1/1 reverse slider (or just a plain 2/1 slider). It goes well with the main beats. Here is an example of what you can do: (Again, this will not affect spacing)
   
   Image/Code

   
   

   492,184,14500,6,0,P|504:124|440:52,1,160
   360,76,15437,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   416,140,15750,1,8,0:0:0:0:

   00:36:375 - 00:43:875: You could reduce the hitsound volume (20~25%) at this part, since the music is softer here. It sounds a bit loud imo. You may want to do the same thing on the other difficulties as well.

1. Missing video. Please add one and make sure the video offset is consistent.
2. 01:01:843 (2) - Could add a note (or slider here) to follow the vocals better. If suggested, I recommend deleting 01:02:001 (3) since it doesn't go with the vocals or any prominent notes.
3. 01:03:875 (1) - Improve this blanket. It currently looks too flat. Here's a better approach:
   
   Image/Code

   
   

   98,234,63875,6,0,B|136:256|184:240|204:204|204:204|232:220,2,144,4|0|0,3:2|1:0|3:2,0:0:0:0:

BeatofIke wrote:

Modding Time!
[Bakai's Easy]

1. 00:11:375 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern can follow the vocals better. Try this: (This change will not affect spacing)
   
   Image/Code

   
   

   416,342,11375,6,0,P|448:314|452:230,1,120,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   332,190,12312,2,0,P|300:218|296:302,2,120,6|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   373,266,13562,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   416,342,13875,1,6,0:0:0:0:

2. 00:14:500 (1) - Change this slider into a 1/1 reverse slider (or just a plain 2/1 slider). It goes well with the main beats. Here is an example of what you can do: (Again, this will not affect spacing)
   
   Image/Code

   
   

   492,184,14500,6,0,P|504:124|440:52,1,160
   360,76,15437,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   416,140,15750,1,8,0:0:0:0:

   00:36:375 - 00:43:875: You could reduce the hitsound volume (20~25%) at this part, since the music is softer here. It sounds a bit loud imo. You may want to do the same thing on the other difficulties as well.

[Moechi's Hard]

1. Missing video. Please add one and make sure the video offset is consistent.
2. 01:01:843 (2) - Could add a note (or slider here) to follow the vocals better. If suggested, I recommend deleting 01:02:001 (3) since it doesn't go with the vocals or any prominent notes.
3. 01:03:875 (1) - Improve this blanket. It currently looks too flat. Here's a better approach:
   
   Image/Code

   
   

   98,234,63875,6,0,B|136:256|184:240|204:204|204:204|232:220,2,144,4|0|0,3:2|1:0|3:2,0:0:0:0:

That's it. Call be back!

BeatofIke wrote:

Bubbled!