AlexaBM wrote:

hi~ M4M

[Normal]
That diff is too hard for normal. Let's see..
00:08:080 (5) - Delete - I will fix this when it is mentioned again
00:09:330 (3) - Make one circle instead of slider - Sry, i keep mine
01:10:330 (5) - Delete - Why?
02:00:830 (3,4) - Make better blanket
03:20:330 (1,2,3,4,1) - Don't make jumps in Normal diff - I will fix this when it is mentioned again

[Hard]
00:18:580 (3,5) - Better blanket
01:06:830 (1,2,3) - ^

[Insane]
Sry, can't say anything

Nice map. GL~

[ Karen ] wrote:

안녕하세요~ 모딩 잘하시는 않지만..
열시미 했습니다!

[Normal]

00:51:580 (5) - 뉴콤
00:56:330 (5) - ^
01:04:330 (4) - ^
01:40:580 (4) - ^
01:48:830 (5) - ^
03:08:580 (5) - ^
00:15:580 - 이부분 박자 수정이요

00:19:080 (5) - 박자 수정 이요 - 다음에도 같은 내용이 나오면 수정해보도록 하겠습니다! 죄송합니다.

00:20:330 - 박자 수정이요 - ^

00:38:330 ~ 00:42:080 - 까지 박자 수정이요

01:25:330 (1) - 이부분 스핀으로 바꿔보시는게? - 노말 난이도에는 일부러 스핀을 많이 안넣으려고 생각하서 이렇게 만든거라.. 죄송합니다.
02:05:830 (5) ~02:08:080 (5) - 까지 박자 수정해보시는게..?


[Hard]
02:05:830 (5) - NC
02:09:830 (7) - ^
02:15:830 (7) - NC 하고 02:16:330 - 여기있는 슬라이드도 NC 그뒤 02:17:580 - 여기있는 반복슬라이드 에서 NC
03:04:330 (1) - 여기서 부터 03:06:080 - 여기까지 같은색으로 해주세요

[Insane]
00:21:580 (3) 랑 00:21:830 (4) 이거 거리가 너무 머네요..
X:72 Y:144 ////// X:280 Y: 44 로 해보세요
00:27:080 - 00:27:330 - 여기 서클 겹쳐보시는게?.. - 다음에도 같은 내용이 나오면 수정하겠습니다 ㅎㅎ
01:04:455 (6) - NC
01:23:080 ~ 01:24:830 - 다시 생각해보시는게..
02:01:455 (6) - NC
02:09:330 ~ 02:09:830 - 여기도 다시 생각해보시는게 어떠세요..?
02:46:330 ~ 02:54:080 - 여기 스트림 부분.. 조절해보심이..? - 음.. 괜찮다고 생각되는데 ㅇㅁㅇ; 이것도 역시 다음에 같은 내용이 나오면 수정하겠습니다 ㅎㅎ


킁킁..
이지랑 노멀밖에 안건들여봐서
하드나 인센은 박자를 잘 못잡겠네요..

음.. 처음 매핑이신데 잘하신..
그리고 노래하나는 좋네요 ㅋ.ㅋ

captin1 wrote:

hi

try offset 6324 (-6), sounds a bit better to me

good luck!

Ethercastle wrote:

From my queue~

[General]
Pretty sure you need a easy diff that's below 3.5 stars.

Really need hitsounds... current hitsounding is way too random and lacking.. Will suggest that you start experimenting with the basics: clap on 2/4 white line and whistles on the red lines. Try soft hitsounds when following the vocals.

And you really need to follow the rhythm more... Slow the music down to 50% and listen might be a good idea.

[Insane]
00:07:949 (8) - this should start at the previous white line to follow the guitar - I will fix this when it is mentioned again
00:08:324 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - pretty sure this stream follows nothing. Suggest that you rework this part. - ^
00:10:949 (4) - somewhere around (232,112) for better flow. Current one plays kinda awkward.
00:11:199 (5) - well don't like this slider. To long and the whistle sound it's following isn't even that noticeable - i keep mine
00:12:324 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - well this also doesn't follow the drums, which are mainly on the blue line - This diff is Insane. i think it is ok
00:13:699 (1) - vocal strarts at the previous red line so imo if you are following the vocal later on you'd better follow it here too
00:16:324 (1) - make this curved or move to somewhere around (424,268) for better flow - I will fix this when it is mentioned again
00:17:574 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - here the vocal is clearly repeating the same thing for three times so I guess your can do similar things with the patterns. Current pattern is a bit random - ^
00:38:324 (1,2) -
00:40:824 (1) - Cool, but I think this is probably unrankable as the speed is been manipulated too much by the anchors. - Ok, i consider it.
00:44:324 (5,6,7) - ctrl+G for 6? Anyway don't really like this pattern - i think it is ok.
00:48:574 (1) - certainly unrankable as it's impossible to tell the direction of the slider - Ok, i consider it.
01:09:824 (2) - strong beat is on the blue line so I guess replacing this with a circle? - i keep mine. sorry.
01:11:199 - missing circle - I think that it becomes even without
01:13:449 (2) - nothing strong here so delete this?
01:13:574 (3) - again vocal emphasizes on the blue line so this slider does not fit well
01:16:574 (2,3) - ctrl+G to follow the previous pattern?
01:45:824 (1) - unrankable I guess - consider it. thx :3
01:56:074 (2,3,4) - using slider end for vocal doesn't fit that well I guess. Strong beats should be clickable
02:06:574 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - stream doesn't fit - i think it is ok. but, i will fix this when it is mentioned again
02:17:574 (1,2,3) - such arrangements with a triangle in the middle is...meh... really akward to play... - ^
02:46:324 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - guess you should improve this stream...
02:50:574 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - ^ And I feel that the guitar solo part needs rework..

Skipping hard and normal.

Good luck ^ ^

• 1. Consider adding 'Toyosaki Aki, Chihara Minori, Hirano Aya & Hisaka Youko' to Artist since they also sing the song. Some maps nowadays have multiple names in Artist, so i suppose it's fine (like https://osu.ppy.sh/s/122658) . If you follow my suggestions, here's the kanji (i hope it's correct) '豊崎 愛生, 茅原 実里, 平野 綾 & 日笠 陽子
  
  2. Remove 'anime' from Tags, it will be added to Genre. And i still don't know the meaning of breast milk in Tags ._.
  
  3. Your easiest diff has 4.06 stars, while the rule said that the easiest diff must have star difficulty around 2.5-3 stars, see this https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria#Mapset . You should make your normal easier or make a new Easy diff
  
  4. It would be better if you spice the map more with hitsounds like http://puu.sh/5LWEj.wav or http://puu.sh/5LWKI.wav, or you can find another hitsound which suit your preference, it's up to you

• 00:06:324 (1,2,3,4,5) - rhythm suggestion
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:12:324 (1,2,3,4) - it's really hard to read. Please use distance snap and rearrange the positions
  00:13:574 (1,2) - switch nc
  00:16:324 (4) - with the relatively slow AR, this hidden circle might really hard to see for beginners. Consider placing it somewhere else as long as it's not hidden
  00:19:074 (5) - the rhythm and vocal is quite familiar with 00:17:574 (1,2,3) - , making it a long slider is kinda awkward to me. My suggestion
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:28:324 (1) - add finish
  01:11:324 (3) - nc this, it's the beginning of a new kiai
  01:16:074 (5) - same suggestion like 00:19:074 (5) -
  01:25:324 (1) - there's no particular beat in 01:25:824 - 01:26:324 - 01:26:824 - so it sounds really awkward. i suggest to change it into spinner which starts from 01:25:324 - end at 01:27:324 -
  01:35:324 (1) - add finish
  02:12:574 (3) - same suggestion like 00:19:074 (5) -
  02:17:574 (3) - how about making it a reversed slider? fits the vocal more. and also rhythm suggestion
  
  SPOILER

  
  02:21:324 (2) - same suggestion like 00:19:074 (5) -
  02:22:324 (1) - add finish
  02:56:324 (5) - only suggestion. make sure the slider's tail won't touch previous slider's body
  
  SPOILER

  
  02:58:324 (1) - finish at slider's head?
  03:00:074 (3) - same like 02:56:324 (5) -
  03:10:574 (4) - nc?
  03:30:324 (3) - nc this, it's the beginning of the kiai/chorus
  03:34:574 (4) - same like 00:19:074 (5) -
  03:43:074 (1) - finish at slider's tail
  03:44:324 (1) - finish

• 00:08:074 - add a note?
  00:12:324 (1) - add one more reversed slider, so it will end at 00:12:699 - and make it easier to read 00:12:949 (2) -
  00:17:324 - add a note here? it feels empty
  00:18:574 (3) - only rhythm suggestion, since it's actually awkward to have a long slider when the vocal urge you to click on the beat, not to hold the slider
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:22:324 (1) - add a note?
  00:27:324 (5) - add finish
  00:28:324 (1) - ^
  00:56:074 (5) - add a note here would be great, keep the flow running
  01:00:324 (5) - nc this? try not to make the combo too long here
  01:11:324 (4) - nc, it's the beginning of a new kiai
  01:11:324 (4) - add a note?
  01:15:324 (3) - add finish
  01:16:074 (1) - add finish at slider's tail
  01:20:324 - add a note. even though you're following the vocal, but there's a beat here
  01:22:324 - ^
  01:26:074 - while there's no beat here, the reversed slider sounds really awkward. Consider changing it into spinner
  01:37:824 (1) - i'm not really good at making slider, but try to lower the slider's head point a little bit (one grid), both ends will be balanced
  
  SPOILER

  
  01:56:824 (4) - really hard to read. consider making it visible like 01:58:824 (3,4) -
  
  SPOILER

  
  01:58:824 (3,4) - add a note. i hear a drum here
  02:08:324 (3) - nc, it's the beginning of a new kiai
  02:08:324 (3) - add a note?
  02:15:824 (1,2) - switch nc
  02:19:324 - add a note?
  02:22:324 (1) - add finish
  02:57:574 (7) - add finish at slider's tail
  03:02:824 (2,3,4) - nazi, not stacked properly
  03:10:574 (3,4,5) - ^
  03:30:324 (1) - add a note?
  03:40:324 (1,2,3) - also nazi, not stacked properly
  03:44:324 (1) - add finish

• 00:28:324 (1) - only suggestion
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:22:324 (3) - add finish at slider's head
  00:40:824 (1) - usually slider like this is the cause of unrank, since it's categorized as Burai Sliders. maybe you should ask a BAT about this slider
  00:48:574 (1) - ^, this one is more confusing though lol
  00:51:324 (1,2,3,4) - imo, the pattern is a bit loose to me when most of the other patterns are really dense like 00:49:574 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - . consider adding notes 00:52:199 - 00:51:949 -
  01:45:824 (1) - same like 00:40:824 (1) -
  02:08:324 (1) - add finish at slider's head
  02:22:449 (1) - add finish
  03:04:324 (1,2,3,4) - why not make the combo like 02:56:324 (1,1,1,1) - ?
  03:20:324 (4,1,2,3,4) - really hard to read x.x
  03:44:449 (1) - add finish

AlpacaCokelat wrote:

Hi~ trying to m4m. haven't mod for more than a month, i hope it's still fine. and sorry for grammar error -.-

[General]

• 1. Consider adding 'Toyosaki Aki, Chihara Minori, Hirano Aya & Hisaka Youko' to Artist since they also sing the song. Some maps nowadays have multiple names in Artist, so i suppose it's fine (like https://osu.ppy.sh/s/122658) . If you follow my suggestions, here's the kanji (i hope it's correct) '豊崎 愛生, 茅原 実里, 平野 綾 & 日笠 陽子
  
  2. Remove 'anime' from Tags, it will be added to Genre. And i still don't know the meaning of breast milk in Tags ._.
  
  3. Your easiest diff has 4.06 stars, while the rule said that the easiest diff must have star difficulty around 2.5-3 stars, see this https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria#Mapset . You should make your normal easier or make a new Easy diff
  
  4. It would be better if you spice the map more with hitsounds like http://puu.sh/5LWEj.wav or http://puu.sh/5LWKI.wav, or you can find another hitsound which suit your preference, it's up to you

[Normal]

• 00:06:324 (1,2,3,4,5) - rhythm suggestion
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:12:324 (1,2,3,4) - it's really hard to read. Please use distance snap and rearrange the positions - I will fix this when it is mentioned again
  00:13:574 (1,2) - switch nc
  00:16:324 (4) - with the relatively slow AR, this hidden circle might really hard to see for beginners. Consider placing it somewhere else as long as it's not hidden
  00:19:074 (5) - the rhythm and vocal is quite familiar with 00:17:574 (1,2,3) - , making it a long slider is kinda awkward to me. My suggestion
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:28:324 (1) - add finish
  01:11:324 (3) - nc this, it's the beginning of a new kiai
  01:16:074 (5) - same suggestion like 00:19:074 (5) -
  01:25:324 (1) - there's no particular beat in 01:25:824 - 01:26:324 - 01:26:824 - so it sounds really awkward. i suggest to change it into spinner which starts from 01:25:324 - end at 01:27:324 -
  01:35:324 (1) - add finish
  02:12:574 (3) - same suggestion like 00:19:074 (5) -
  02:17:574 (3) - how about making it a reversed slider? fits the vocal more. and also rhythm suggestion
  
  SPOILER

  
  02:21:324 (2) - same suggestion like 00:19:074 (5) -
  02:22:324 (1) - add finish
  02:56:324 (5) - only suggestion. make sure the slider's tail won't touch previous slider's body
  
  SPOILER

  
  02:58:324 (1) - finish at slider's head?
  03:00:074 (3) - same like 02:56:324 (5) -
  03:10:574 (4) - nc?
  03:30:324 (3) - nc this, it's the beginning of the kiai/chorus
  03:34:574 (4) - same like 00:19:074 (5) -
  03:43:074 (1) - finish at slider's tail
  03:44:324 (1) - finish

[Hard]

• 00:08:074 - add a note?
  00:12:324 (1) - add one more reversed slider, so it will end at 00:12:699 - and make it easier to read 00:12:949 (2) -
  00:17:324 - add a note here? it feels empty
  00:18:574 (3) - only rhythm suggestion, since it's actually awkward to have a long slider when the vocal urge you to click on the beat, not to hold the slider
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:22:324 (1) - add a note? - hmm.. why?
  00:27:324 (5) - add finish
  00:28:324 (1) - ^
  00:56:074 (5) - add a note here would be great, keep the flow running
  01:00:324 (5) - nc this? try not to make the combo too long here
  01:11:324 (4) - nc, it's the beginning of a new kiai
  01:11:324 (4) - add a note? - Sorry...
  01:15:324 (3) - add finish
  01:16:074 (1) - add finish at slider's tail
  01:20:324 - add a note. even though you're following the vocal, but there's a beat here
  01:22:324 - ^
  01:26:074 - while there's no beat here, the reversed slider sounds really awkward. Consider changing it into spinner
  01:37:824 (1) - i'm not really good at making slider, but try to lower the slider's head point a little bit (one grid), both ends will be balanced
  
  SPOILER

  
  01:56:824 (4) - really hard to read. consider making it visible like 01:58:824 (3,4) -
  
  SPOILER

  
  01:58:824 (3,4) - add a note. i hear a drum here - Sorry.
  02:08:324 (3) - nc, it's the beginning of a new kiai
  02:08:324 (3) - add a note? - Sorry.
  02:15:824 (1,2) - switch nc
  02:19:324 - add a note?
  02:22:324 (1) - add finish
  02:57:574 (7) - add finish at slider's tail
  03:02:824 (2,3,4) - nazi, not stacked properly
  03:10:574 (3,4,5) - ^
  03:30:324 (1) - add a note? - Sorry.
  03:40:324 (1,2,3) - also nazi, not stacked properly
  03:44:324 (1) - add finish

[Insane]

• 00:28:324 (1) - only suggestion - Sorry, I don't know what you mean ;w;
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:22:324 (3) - add finish at slider's head
  00:40:824 (1) - usually slider like this is the cause of unrank, since it's categorized as Burai Sliders. maybe you should ask a BAT about this slider
  00:48:574 (1) - ^, this one is more confusing though lol
  00:51:324 (1,2,3,4) - imo, the pattern is a bit loose to me when most of the other patterns are really dense like
  00:49:574 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - . consider adding notes 00:52:199 - 00:51:949 - - fix something
  01:45:824 (1) - same like 00:40:824 (1) -
  02:08:324 (1) - add finish at slider's head
  02:22:449 (1) - add finish
  03:04:324 (1,2,3,4) - why not make the combo like 02:56:324 (1,1,1,1) - ?
  03:20:324 (4,1,2,3,4) - really hard to read x.x - I keep mine :3
  03:44:449 (1) - add finish

ok i hope it helps
good luck~

OstrichSupreme wrote:

Hello! M4M here!

Normal

00:06:824 (2) - I would shorten this note by a tick...
00:07:574 (3) - and bring this slider back a tick!
00:12:324 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern is nice, but in a normal diff? You may want to make it easier for the not as adept players
00:20:074 (8) - new combo
01:48:574 (4) - ^
02:15:407 (4) - I would move this to x300 and y76 to be symmetrical with 02:15:824 (5) - - Sorry, i keep mine
02:20:074 (3) - Make this one symmetrical also - ^
03:06:324 (1) - fix the nodes on this slider to look more appealing - I will fix this when it is mentioned again
03:10:574 (1) - ^ - ^

Hard

00:11:949 - New combo
00:12:199 (1) - remove new combo
01:10:574 (1,2,3) - Give these clap - it seems a little awkward
01:16:574 (2) - shorten this note to half of what it currently is, and make it repeat back. Adjust rest of this area for flow - Ok, i consider it.
01:25:449 (1) - give this finish - Umm.. why?
01:45:824 (1) - fix these nodes up a bit - I will fix this when it is mentioned again

That's all I got, couldn't find much in insane. Anyways, good luck with your map!

[ Raphael ] wrote:

[Insane]

00:28:324 (1) - only suggestion - Sorry, I don't know what you mean ;w;

SPOILER

Spudgy wrote:

Hello, m4m here!

Easy
00:24:324 (4) - Try to match the same shape as 00:22:324 (1) -
00:39:324 (2,3) - I wouldn't overlap these - I will fix this when it is mentioned again
00:41:574 (5) - Start a new combo here to match the vocals
00:54:824 (1,2,3) - Blanket better
01:02:324 (1) - and 01:02:824 (2) - should be same distance as 01:02:824 (2) - and 01:03:824 (3) -. And try to make same shape. Here is a pic to show you what I mean:

pic

It's a really small detail. And I might be wrong.
01:09:074 (4) - Slider matches vocals better here? - I will fix this when it is mentioned again
02:06:074 (3) - ^ - ^
02:44:324 (1,2) - Started these sliders on red ticks sounds funny here. Consider moving them back a tick to start on white ticks. - OK, i consider it.
03:16:324 - Finish hitsound - no, sorry.
03:24:324 (2) - ^ - ^
03:26:324 (3,4,5) - Don't overlap
03:31:574 (2) - Better blanket if you move to x:259 y:77

Normal
00:12:949 (3,4) - Two hit circles next to each other on blue ticks is weird. Try this instead: - i consider it.

pic

00:23:324 - Hit circle here - sorry.
01:24:574 (3) - ctrl + g this and move 01:25:074 (4) - to x:276 y:188. Makes it flow better.
02:54:324 (1,2,3,4) - If you put all of these at an angle, it would look cool. - consider it.
03:14:324 (1,2,3,4) - Overlapping all these is kinda boring =/
03:22:324 (1,2,3,4) - ^
03:29:574 (1,2) - Combo too short? - it's the beginning of a new kiai

Hard
00:49:949 (2) - Remove
01:10:574 (1,2,3) - Its more fun if you spread these out, maybe at like a 1.5x distance snap?
01:47:324 (4) - Slider shouldn't end on a blue tick. Shorten this slider by a tick and then move 01:47:699 (5) - back to the blue tick here 01:47:699 (5) -
02:08:699 (2) - Remove this hit circle. Move this slider02:08:824 (3) - back to the blue tick, and also lengthen the slider by a tick. So it looks like this:

pic

02:46:574 (1) - Shouldn't end on blue tick.
03:16:324 (1) - Finish hitsound - no

Insane
Sorry, I won't be too helpful at modding this one, because it is above my skill level.
00:28:199 (3) - Remove - Why?
00:44:324 (5,6,7) - These don't go well with the vocals.Try putting a 1/2 slider here 00:44:324 - , here 00:44:699 -, and here 00:45:074 - - Sorry, i keep mine
01:37:824 (1) - Make this a 1/1 slider, so it ends on a white tick
03:20:324 (4) - Slider maybe? to match vocals
Sorry, that's all I see with this difficulty.

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As a side note, there are areas where your hitsounds are too quiet, and I can barely hear them. Look for that and fix it.
Anyways, I hope my mod helps. Good luck, and message me anytime if you have any questions!!

vahn10 wrote:

Dear, Modders
Read This before posting something here in this thread!. The beatmap title is too long. As you save it, rename it to random ones but shorter than the one stated in the osz file like 012345 or abcdef etc.. If you do not read this, you will end up this beatmap not loaded into osu! just like in this map. OR extract this one manually using 7-zip or WinRar
I made the text larger so everybody can see it

1. 이지에 태그 ending breast milk 추가해주세요, 이지만 빠져있네요
2. 그리고 제목에 squall은 대문자로 S가 들어가야 되지 않나요? 대부분의 노래가 그래서 ㅋㅋ 저도 잘은 모르겠네요

1. 대체로 뉴콤보가 좀 정신없이 들어가있는거 같은데, 00:38:324 (1) - 이파트나 01:35:324 (1) - 이파트에서는 뉴콤보를 긴 흰색 틱에만 넣으셔서 일관성 지켜주시는게 좋을꺼같아요
2. 00:07:949 (8) - 이부분은 리듬에 안맞는거 같은데 이것처럼 바꿔보시는게 어때요?
3. 00:11:199 (5) - 이 슬라이더도 좀 뜬금없는거 같은데, 슬라이더 지우시고 음에 맞게 오브젝트 재배치 해보심이
4. 00:13:574 (1) - 뉴콤보 지워주세요,
5. 00:24:324 (1) - 역시 뉴콤보 지워주세요, 쓸모없어 보이네요
6. 00:27:074 (1) - 이 뉴콤보도 지워주세요
7. 00:28:324 (1) - 피니시 빼먹으신듯 하네요
8. 00:54:324 - 여긴 샘플셋 소프트로 해두시는게 음악과 어울려보여요 00:54:824 - 여기나 00:55:824 - 이런곳에는 샘플셋 노말로 직접 설정해주시구요
9. 01:12:324 (1) - 뉴콤보 지워주세요 역시 불필요해요.
10. 01:23:074 (1) - 여기 뉴콤보도 지워주시고 01:24:074 (4) - 여기에다 뉴콤보 넣어주세요
11. 01:51:324 - 이전 파트하고 같은 의견이에요, 소프트 샘플셋 추천드려요
12. 02:07:574 (1) - 뉴콤보 지워주세요, 일관성 지켜주시는게 나을듯
13. 03:15:574 (2) - 여긴 강조때문에도 그렇고 리듬도 좀 바껴서 뉴콤보 넣으시는게 좋을꺼같아요
14. 03:18:074 (1) - 이건 어울리지 않으니 뉴콤보 지워주시구요

HelloSCV wrote:

쿠도스 안주셔도 돼요

[General]

1. 이지에 태그 ending breast milk 추가해주세요, 이지만 빠져있네요
2. 그리고 제목에 squall은 대문자로 S가 들어가야 되지 않나요? 대부분의 노래가 그래서 ㅋㅋ 저도 잘은 모르겠네요

[Insane]

1. 대체로 뉴콤보가 좀 정신없이 들어가있는거 같은데, 00:38:324 (1) - 이파트나 01:35:324 (1) - 이파트에서는 뉴콤보를 긴 흰색 틱에만 넣으셔서 일관성 지켜주시는게 좋을꺼같아요
2. 00:07:949 (8) - 이부분은 리듬에 안맞는거 같은데 이것처럼 바꿔보시는게 어때요?
3. 00:11:199 (5) - 이 슬라이더도 좀 뜬금없는거 같은데, 슬라이더 지우시고 음에 맞게 오브젝트 재배치 해보심이
4. 00:13:574 (1) - 뉴콤보 지워주세요,
5. 00:24:324 (1) - 역시 뉴콤보 지워주세요, 쓸모없어 보이네요
6. 00:27:074 (1) - 이 뉴콤보도 지워주세요
7. 00:28:324 (1) - 피니시 빼먹으신듯 하네요
8. 00:54:324 - 여긴 샘플셋 소프트로 해두시는게 음악과 어울려보여요 00:54:824 - 여기나 00:55:824 - 이런곳에는 샘플셋 노말로 직접 설정해주시구요
9. 01:12:324 (1) - 뉴콤보 지워주세요 역시 불필요해요.
10. 01:23:074 (1) - 여기 뉴콤보도 지워주시고 01:24:074 (4) - 여기에다 뉴콤보 넣어주세요
11. 01:51:324 - 이전 파트하고 같은 의견이에요, 소프트 샘플셋 추천드려요
12. 02:07:574 (1) - 뉴콤보 지워주세요, 일관성 지켜주시는게 나을듯
13. 03:15:574 (2) - 여긴 강조때문에도 그렇고 리듬도 좀 바껴서 뉴콤보 넣으시는게 좋을꺼같아요
14. 03:18:074 (1) - 이건 어울리지 않으니 뉴콤보 지워주시구요

아직까진 더 많은 경험이 필요하신듯하네요, 그래도 이정도면 꽤 나쁘지 않으니 힘내세요!

Avishay wrote:

Hey, M4M!

[General]
Tags are not the same in all of the diffs.
Also, how breast milk is related here? o.O Is it the name of the anime?
You use more than 3 Slider Velocities and it makes the map unrankable, if you aren't sure that it is true, read it here:
http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria

[Insane]
00:15:574 (5,6) - I think making those sliders curvier will flow better and will look much better - sorry, i'll keep mine
00:22:949 (5) - Intead of stacking it on 6 put it between 4 and 6
00:24:324 (4) - CTRL + G flows better in my opinion
00:44:324 (5,6,7) - I am not sure if you're trying to follow the vocal or the rhytm here, it just felt weird to me in a testplay
01:14:324 (5,6,7,8) - This stream doesn't fit at all, there's no vocal and it feels realllly wierd. My suggestion is adding a 1/2 beat slider at 01:14:574
01:53:324 (5,6) - Make better flow here, one of the possible things is this:

SPOILER

02:00:949 (4) - I don't think it fits, I like this part more when this circle is removed
02:56:699 (2,2) - Make both of those 1/2 beat repeated slider, it fits with the drum in the background - sorry
03:16:324 (3) - Add finish here as well (on other diffs as well)
03:22:949 (3,4) - Be more creative and don't stak them on 2, try placing them like that:

SPOILER

03:35:574 (3) - Why is the pattern different from 03:35:074 (1,2) ? You didn't ignore the drum in the previous pattern, so why you do in this one?

[Hard]
00:25:074 (4) - Change it to a slider and extend it until 00:25:324
00:45:574 (1) - The slider starts on a red line (mid beat) and it doesn't fit that good, make it longer and start it at 00:45:324
01:04:574 (4) - Remove it, create a slider at 01:04:449 and extend it until 01:04:574 - sorry.
01:10:074 (4) - Change it to 1/4 beat reversed slider, there's a drum there
01:54:324 (6) - Try moving this slider to X:396 Y:176 - no
02:14:074 (4) - The slider doesn't fit neither with the vocal / rhytm, put a circle in his place then start the slider at 02:14:324
02:46:074 (6) - There's a drum in the middle of the slider, change it to a 1/4 beat reversed slider
02:50:324 (1,2,3,4) - It is hard to know when the sliders 1 and 3 will stop, so don't make them reversed and just add an other slider, like this:

SPOILER

and here's the pattern I did:

SPOILER

(it is the same on both)
03:04:324 (1,2) - The flow is bad with the timing, either make their metting closer or make them curvier - ok, i consider it. thx

[Normal]
00:12:324 (1,2,3,4) - The spacing here is really confusing betwen 2 and 3, consider changing it
00:13:574 (5) - Add a clap here? The vocal starts but it sounds rather weird without a proper hitsounds there
Just a note, this diff is sometimes confusing with the spacing and since it is a Normal diff I'm asking you to go over the diff and think if it is good for beginners - fix, but not your suggestion

[Easy]
Seems good to me (I suck at modding Easy / Normal mostly ._.)


Good luck!

Park-Hyun wrote:

Hi, M4M. Here are a few suggestions:

Easy
00:06:324 - You should start mapping here like in the other difficulties. - ok, i consider it. thx
00:23:824 (3) - Move slider end to x:452, y:96
00:24:324 (4) - Move slider start to x:476, y:148
=> http://puu.sh/6nmxV
00:25:574 (1) - Move start to x:336, y:248
00:27:074 (2) - Move start to x:432, y:312
00:28:074 (3) - Move to x:328, y:360
=> http://puu.sh/6nnfi
01:09:074 (4,5) - Here's my suggestion: http://puu.sh/6nnOm
03:22:324 - Remove Kiai - Why?

Normal
01:25:074 (4) - Move to x:324, y:256
03:12:324 (1,2,3,4,1) - Inconsistent spacing. Set beat snap divisor to 1/2, then create a pentagon with 1.4 distance snap and change the circles order so to have something like this:
=> http://puu.sh/6npye
03:14:324 - Remove Kiai - Why??
03:20:324 (1,2,3,4,1) - Same as above. Create pentagon with 1.4 distance snap and rotate by 54°, then change the order:
=> http://puu.sh/6np6W
03:22:324 - Remove Kiai

Hard
00:48:199 (5) - This is not very smooth. Try this http://puu.sh/6nq0b
01:17:574 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I find it a bit weird. Here's my suggestion: - sorry, i keep mine
=> http://puu.sh/6nsmo
=> http://puu.sh/6nsq6
03:14:324 - Remove Kiai
03:22:324 - ^
03:28:324 (1) - I'd make it end at 03:29:824 - - Sorry.

Insane
00:28:324 (1) - Add a circle and make spinner start at 00:28:574 - like this: - Sorry.
=> http://puu.sh/6nqJV
03:14:324 - Remove Kiai
03:22:324 - ^

I hope this helps and don't hesitate to contact me if anything's not clear.
Good luck!

Spring Roll wrote:

hello,mod from my queue~

General

1. the artist you type in song setup is 'Fujimura Ayumi',but the romanised artist you write is 'Ayumi Fujimura',i don't know if it is ok..maybe you can ask others who is more experienced
2. use an empty hitsound for sliderslide
3. hitsound is far from enough,spend more time on it plz

Easy

1. 02:44:574 (1) - i think it can start at02:44:324 - ,end at02:45:074 - - Sorry.
2. 00:25:574 (1) - one reverse is more comfortable when playing .of course add a note at 00:26:324 -
3. 01:22:574 (1) - ^
4. 01:54:574 (4) - ^
5. 01:58:574 (5,1) - yeah,this is comfortable! - >w<
6. 00:28:324 (1) - spinner can start at00:28:574 - and add a note at 00:28:324 - - Sorry.
7. 01:25:324 (1) - ^
8. 02:22:324 (1) - ^
9. 03:44:324 (1) - ^
10. 00:39:324 (2,3) - don't stack .i think its a little hard for a fresh player - I will fix this when it is mentioned again. thx.
11. 03:28:324 (5) - move to (280.132)will make the distance a little comfortable

Normal

1. harder than normal i think,maybe you can change the diff name to 'Normal+' - ok, i consider it.
2. 00:10:824 (3) - slider can end at00:11:199 - - fix, but not your suggestion.
3. 00:12:949 (3) - end at00:13:324 - ,and 00:13:574 (4) - start from00:13:449 - end at00:14:074 - ,just a suggestion - Sorry.
4. 00:28:324 (1,1,1,1) - the same as Easy diff
5. 03:12:324 (1) - distance

Hard

1. 00:08:074 (5) - try thishttp://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1256740
2. 00:48:199 (5) - move to (192.268)
3. 01:12:324 (3,1) - snap the distance
4. 01:14:324 - add a note
5. 01:25:324 (1,1,1) - the same as Easy diff
6. 01:53:324 (4) - Ctrl+G
7. 02:07:324 - add a note
8. 03:11:199 (4,5) - they will stack with each other when you are playing,,and looks not so good.so don't stack like this ,even a small gird movement looks better
9. 03:30:324 (1) - ^

Insane

1. 00:07:199 (7,8) - i don't think 3.0X jump is suitable here
2. 00:09:949 (6,1) - ^ - Sorry.
3. 00:22:949 (5) - remove the note
4. 00:59:824 (5,6,7) - the same as the hard - Sorry.
5. 01:20:199 (6,1,2,3) - i think the rhythm is strange when i play this diff
6. 00:28:324 (1,1) - the same as Easy diff

hope this helps

sjoy wrote:

M4M from my queue
[Easy]
00:20:074 (4) - stack it perfectly
00:28:074 (3) - delete it spinner start from here.it seems to be easy for newbie - I will fix this when it is mentioned again. thx.
01:17:074 (5) - stack it perfectly
01:25:074 (4) - the same as 00:28:074 (3)
02:06:074 (3,4) - conbine into a slider? - no, sorry.
02:19:574 (1,2) - ^
02:22:074 (5) - the same as 00:28:074 (3)
02:58:324 (1) - add a fin
03:14:324 I suggest break this part .only a few notes is not good to play
03:41:574 (1,2) - conbine into a slider
[Normal]
00:24:324 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/6tXTX.jpg - fix
00:25:574 (1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/6tXW8.jpg - sorry.
00:41:074 (6,7) - delete them
01:08:324 (2) - change into 1/1slider - ok, i consider it.
01:16:574 (6,7) - delete - fix, but not your suggestion
01:18:324 (3) - start on 01:18:574 - no
01:52:074 (2) - delete
02:06:574 (1) - ^
02:12:574 (3) - ^ - I will fix this when it is mentioned again. thx.
03:03:574 (3) - ^
03:35:824 (2) - ^
03:37:074 (4,5) - http://puu.sh/6tYcl.jpg - sorry.
[Hard]
00:48:074 (5,6) - http://puu.sh/6tYoQ.jpg - fix
00:59:449 (3) - delete because of follow the vocal
01:23:574 (4) - ctrl+g
02:00:199 (2) - delete
02:05:324 (2,4) - ctrl+g
02:17:949 (2) - delete and add a note on02:18:074
[Insane]
00:07:824 (8) - too far from 00:07:199 (7) - ,maybe cause a misunderstand - I will fix this when it is mentioned again. thx.
00:21:574 (2,3,4) - imo,it's not suitable for jump
01:18:574 (2,3,4) - ^
01:18:574 (2) - too close with 01:17:324 (1) - - because this circle is follow distance
01:22:074 (6) - ctrl+g - no
01:36:824 (5) - too hard for play..I suggest delete 01:36:699 (4) - - I will fix this when it is mentioned again. thx.
02:00:324 (2) - ctrl+g
02:15:574 (2,3,4) - the same as 00:21:574 (2,3,4) - sorry.
03:12:699 there is a obvious stream.why not set?
good luck with your map ~

Rakuen wrote:

( =`･ω･´) AIRakuen 愛楽園 (Mod/GD/M4M)

[General]
Good

[Easy]
00:14:324 (2) - Feel like first hit of KIAI should be NC, consider removing 00:13:574 (1) - or so (optional)
00:21:324 (6) - How bout' placing it on 00:21:574 - , helps to fill up vocal at 00:22:074 -
00:27:074 (2) - Put on left top of mapping area, and try to face left side, may help on reading after 00:25:574 (1) -
00:28:074 (3) - Remove this? May be easier
00:38:324 - Add note here to fit drum cover
00:39:574 - Circle - I think this is too hard.
00:42:324 (2) - This is a little sticked to 00:40:824 (5) - , move it for a little
00:45:574 (7) - This pattern will be hard to read, both sliders are facing the same direction making it look like 1/2 continuing hits - i consider it.
00:54:824 - Try not to slow down Easy diffs next time, may affect the gameplay for newbies
^ You can try to space more between timing of each note - ^
01:08:324 - Don't speed it up here, try on 01:09:324 - or 01:10:324 -
01:25:074 (4) - Remove? - nope.
01:51:324 (5) - Don't suggest to stack this, cuz 01:50:824 (4) - is timed far from 01:49:324 (3) - and it's slowed down here 01:51:824 (1) -
02:05:324 - Same as previous, try speeding up on 02:06:324 - or 02:07:324 -
02:18:074 - Circle
02:22:074 (5) - Remove? May be easier
02:43:824 - Something is missing here
02:53:824 (4) - Stack on tail of 02:51:324 (2) - , may help players to hit at place where they memorized
03:18:324 (3,4,5) - Space or NC them...DS is strict for Easy diff tho, not sure it's rankable or not
03:26:324 (3,4,5) - ^
03:28:824 (1) - If possible make this 0.9x DS by adjusting 03:28:324 (5) -
03:43:074 (4) - Put it on middle line

[Normal]
00:13:574 - Since Easy diff starts here, I suggest to make it same for Normal
00:27:074 (1) - Blanket? - yes
00:41:574 (8) - ^
00:54:824 - Same as Easy, I dont suggest to slow it down tho cuz it's not really a very fast song - i consider it.
01:02:324 (5) - NC for SV change
01:08:324 (2) - Should NC here due to SV change, or follow Easy mods for the timing
01:18:324 (3) - Flow stopped here cuz many reverses
01:25:074 (4) - Remove and add reverse on 01:24:574 (3) - , the stacks are too close timed
01:59:324 (6) - NC for SV change
02:05:324 (4) - ^ or follow Easy's timing mods
02:06:824 (2) - Try not to use blue ticks, but you can keep this
02:09:574 (2) - A little bad flow here - I will fix this when it is mentioned again.
02:13:324 (5,1) - Swap NC
02:42:324 - Try louder volume
03:12:324 (1) - DS? owo

[Hard]
00:21:574 (4) - NC for SV change
00:54:324 - Make here 1.0 SV still, then DS 00:54:324 (3) -
01:08:324 (5) - NC or follow Easy timing mods
01:51:324 - Make here 1.0 SV and DS 01:51:324 (5) -
02:57:449 - Circle - no, sorry.

[Insane]
00:21:574 (3) - NC
00:22:074 (1) - Remove NC
00:22:324 (3) - NC
00:28:324 - Put something here and move spinner to 00:28:449 -
01:17:199 - Circle
01:18:574 (2) - NC
01:37:824 (8) - NC
02:03:199 - Circle - nope.
02:15:574 (2) - NC
03:37:574 (3) - ^
03:38:074 (1) - Remove NC
03:38:324 (2) - NC here

Lolicore_Komari wrote:

Hi :3
From M4M Your Queue

[Easy]
00:14:324 (1) - 다음 슬라이더와 같이 놓고 봤을때 썩 좋아보이는 모양은 아닙니다. 곡선슬라이더로 바꾸시는걸 추천 - 고려해보겠습니다
00:25:574 (1) - 이지에서 리피트 두번은 별로 추천드리지 않습니다.
01:11:324 (2) - 처음에 00:14:324 (1) - 여기서와 똑같이 NC를 넣어주거나, 아니면 둘다 빼주거나 해주세요
01:11:324 (2,3) - DS
01:06:824 (2,3) - ^
01:14:574 (1,2,3) - 배치를 각자 떨어뜨려 놓거나 리피트슬라이더로 바꾸는걸 추천 - 고려해보겠습니다
01:20:574 (2) - 음악이랑 어울리는 슬라이더는 아닌듯 하네여. 리피트 하나 추가해보시는게..?
01:52:824 (2,3) - 완전히 겹쳐주세요
01:58:574 (5) - DS
02:06:074 (3) - ^
02:12:824 (4) - 노트 추가..? - 죄송합니다.
03:08:324 (3) - 이지에서 리피트 두번은 별로 추천드리지 않습니다. - 한 번 더 언급되면 고칠게요
03:13:824 (4) - 노트 추가..? - 죄송합니다.

[Insane]
HP드레인 1 낮춰주세요
00:15:824 (6) - 이 슬라이더를 00:15:324 (4,5) - 번 배치처럼 해주면 Playable한 패턴이 되지 않을까여
00:44:324 (5,6,7,8,9) - 약간 구곡느낌나는 배치네요
00:53:824 (3,4) - 꼬리에 클랩 제거
01:10:449 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - 음악이랑 약간 안어울리는 노트네요 - 한 번 더 언급되면 수정하겠습니다
01:12:949 (9) - 노트 제거
01:37:824 (1) - 이런 슬라이더 쓰면 언랭요소입니다. 룰 바뀌었어요

하드랑 노말은 잘 못봐서 패스할게요
Good Luck

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello, mod as requested o̿ ̭ o̿

[General]
*BG needs to be1024x768 or 1366x768
[Easy]
00:38:324 (1,2,3,4) - This rhythm might be too complicated for new players to red. Instead, try using these objects at 00:38:574 - 00:40:324:

00:57:824 (5) - Using mini-sliders is highly discouraged in this diff, since in all honesty you can't really tell when it will finish. Try removing notes 00:57:574 (4,5) - , and extend the tail of 00:56:324 (3) - to 00:58:324 like this:

It can actually work here, since it follows the long hold on the words 'o'
01:03:824 - 01:05:824:

Where 01:03:824 hits the 'tsu' in hitotsu. And the long slider will follow the vocals long hold on the ni
01:14:574 (1,2,3) - Yikes! Try turning this into a 1/2 slider with 2 reverse?
01:53:324 (3,4) - Same suggestion as 00:57:824 (5) -
01:58:574 (5,1) - Don't stack! >///< - I will fix this when it is mentioned again.
03:10:324 - 03:14:324 Another rhythm suggestion:

Because 03:08:324 (3,4) - Doesn't look very nice side by side, and :S and adding a 1/1 slider at 03:13:824 will help cover the words drum rolls heard in the background music.
03:36:324 (5) - Add finish on the head.

Overall, I'd say the flow is pretty neat, and there's consistency in the rhythm - but, the rhythm might be a bit to challenging for Easy, since there are many hit circles and mini-sliders that are being placed 1/2 beats apart

[Normal]
00:06:324 - 00:12:324 Indeed, this is a very complex rhythm
Sicne it's a Normldiff, I suppose it'd be alright to simply remove all the objects here, and have the playtime start at 00:12:324 instead.
00:39:824 (5) - Doesn't sound quite right here. I found a way to fix this, but it involves changing the entire rhythm between 00:39:324 - 00:40:824:

The note at 00:40:074 will hit the 'i', and the slider at 00:40:199 will follow the long hold on the 'te' in zawameite
00:48:074 - 00:49:324 New rhythm suggestion: - fix, but not your suggestion.

03:12:324 (1,1) - Forgot finish here.

The rhythm could still use a bit bit of work. Some of the blankets you've made with your objects still needs some work (eg. 00:43:324 (2,3) - 01:08:324 (1,2) - ), but overall this diff is so-so.

[Hard]
Ar - 1?
00:06:324 - 00:12:324 New rhythm suggestion:
-
00:39:824 (3) - Shrink it's tail to 00:40:074, and at a note at 00:40:199. The rhythm here in this diff shouldn't be easier then the one in the Normal diff.
00:57:199 - 00:58:074 Rhythm suggestion:

01:01:199 - 01:02:074 ^
01:17:574 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Very wrong jumps in the circle format. Have them on the opposite sides:


This diff is ok.

10crystalmask wrote:

3 ~ 4 minutes = 3 diffs

Hope this helps.

al2e10 wrote:

Sorry for my big late mod
By AL2 modding queue
==General==

==Insane==
-- Combo Problem --
00:40:199 (7) - Change the combo here but not 00:40:324 (1) - sorry.
01:19:949 (5) - Change combo here and remove 01:19:324 (1) because of the spacing change
02:07:574 (8) - NC for jumping
02:54:074 (6) - New combo here is better
03:21:824 (5) - new combo and remove 03:22:324 (1)
-- Sound --
-- Spacing --
02:20:699 (4,1,2) - A fake spacing 1.remove new combo for 1. 2. move a bit far for 2 - sorry, i don't understand what you mean.
-- Other(S) --
00:10:949 (4) - Better change it as a note instead of a slider

==Hard==
-- Combo Problem --
00:12:949 (6) - better new combo
00:22:324 (1) - no point to nc
-- Sound --
-- Spacing --
00:49:574 (1,2,3) - Mind yuor sapcing
01:01:199 (3,4,5,6) - ^
-- Other(S) --
00:39:824 (3,4) - better not cover the note if it change the timing for 1/4
00:42:699 (3) - Change it to 00:42:574 nad add a note in 00:42:824 is better for hard
In hard difficulty, it is better not change the timing section. As your timing line change some slider to x1.2. But im wondering 2 things:
1. Why it is x1.2 but Insane is slower?
2. Is that rankable for so many timing change in the timing section?

==OVERALL==
LIKE :
IMPROVEMENT : Better use more sounding :3

No Dap wrote:

헉 잘만드셨네요. 스타드리고 도망

[Easy]
00:28:074 (4,1) - 4 를 삭제하고 아예 4부터 스피너를 시작하는게 더 좋을거같습니다.
01:25:074 (4,1) - ^
01:50:824 (4,5,1) - 뭔가 흐름이 이상한 느낌이 드네요 왼쪽 밑에 흐릿하게 보이는 3이 슬라이더입니다..

SPOILER

01:58:574 (5,1) - 음 이지에서 이런겹놋은 추천 드리고싶지 않네요.
02:06:574 (1) - 뉴콤
02:22:074 (3,1) - 전에 말씀드린것처럼 4삭제하고 스피너
02:46:324 (3,4) - 담요가 약간 빗나간거 같네요. 다듬어 주실수 있으시면 다듬어주세요~
03:08:324 (3) - 이지 난이도에서 반복2번이상 하는거는 추천하지 않아요.
03:43:074 (2) - 슬라가 이상하네요 그냥 펴주시는게 좋을거같습니다
03:44:074 (3,1) - 3삭제하시고 스피너

전부 수정했습니다!

[Normal]
00:12:324 (1,2,3) - 보기도 이상하고 블루틱이라서 치기도 힘들거 같습니다 초보들에게는 - 블루틱이 아니면 박자도 안맞고 해서요 ;w;


짧은모딩 죄송 ㅠㅠ 파이팅!!

DexFrild wrote:

Hi~ M4M from your queue.

[General]
• Remove Widescreen support. It's for SB and you don't use it.
• bg.jpg is 960x768, which differs from the recommended size of 1024x768.

[Easy]
• 01:10:574 (6) - NC
• 01:14:574 (1) - Don't make more repeats on Easy diffs. It's hard for begginers. Change to 2 sliders.
Example1 >>> http://puu.sh/761NU.png
Example2 >>> http://puu.sh/761Q7.png
• 01:18:574 (7) - NC
• 01:46:574 (6) - ^
• 01:50:824 (4) - ^
• 01:59:324 (1) - Remove NC here or add NC here 02:03:324 (6) But I recommend Remove on 01:59:324 (1)
• 02:09:574 (2,3) - Stacks in Easy is too bad idea. More begginers don't know how to pass stacks. Think how you can make a better. - I will fix this when it is mentioned again.
• 02:10:324 (1) - Look, you have set NC here, but here not: 02:18:324 (5) Why? Remove on 02:10:324 (1)
• 03:14:324 - 03:16:324 - 03:18:324 - Insert Break Time.
• 03:22:324 - 03:24:324 - 03:26:324 - ^

[Normal]
• OD -1 And it's more Hard than Normal (AiMod accepted with me ). Make patterns more easy and don't use blue ticks in normal.
• 00:43:574 (3) - Make blanket of 00:43:324 (2) more correctly. Like 00:42:324 (1) Example >>> http://puu.sh/763m1.png
• 00:47:574 (3) - ^
• 01:19:324 (1) - ^
• 01:24:574 (3) - ^ etc.. check all blankets, pls :3
• 01:45:824 (5) - Slider end to 01:46:324
• 03:14:324 - 03:16:324 - 03:18:324 - Insert Break Time.
• 03:22:324 - 03:24:324 - 03:26:324 - ^

Not bad, but need more work.. Check flow, DS, blankets and make slider more better.

[Hard]
• Rename to Hard+ - I will consider it.
• 02:55:699 (2,3) - Hard to read this jump.
• 03:01:074 (2) - Stack it was bad idea. Move it more apart. - I will fix this when it is mentioned again.
• 03:12:324 (1,2,3,4,5) - Move apart of 03:11:324 (5) - ^
• 03:14:324 - 03:16:324 - 03:17:574 - Insert Break Time.
• 03:22:324 - 03:24:324 - 03:25:574 - ^
• 03:26:574 (4) - Ctrl+G
• 2'nd anchor point move to 248:168

Generally, not bad. Check flow and DS. Respecting these two points, map looks mooore better. Don't forget it.

[Insane]
• AR 9 too fast for this slider velocity. Change to AR 8 - I will consider it.
• 00:44:824 (7,8,9) - Are you sure? May be you'll make same other pattern? it's unreadable.
• 02:06:949 (4) - You can add here slider with repeat. Change Beat Snap Divisor to 1/8 and here is example>>> http://puu.sh/7679o.png - oops, error occurred in puush... i can't see image ;w;
• 02:14:324 (1) - Ugly a few.. Try to make more beautiful.

Nice song. Mapable, but you need more practice. You have a potential.
Symmetry in some pattern will not interfere :3
Good luck~

Mei wrote:

hi
I am too lazy to mod NM and EZ QAQ but I tried to give you some advices on the other 2 diffs

[Insane]

• * 00:08:449 (1,2,3) - I suggest you to make a it a little jumpy there like this
  
  Picture

  
  
  * 00:07:199 (7) - nc or change the parttern. ... this is kind misleading for me
  
  * 00:14:699 (2) - no vocal for this note
  
  * 00:16:324 (1,2,3) - kind of weird..... I suggest you to use 25% playback to check your rythmn. This is what I got
  
  Picture

  
  the lyrics is " ka ka yai te" the first slder correspond to 'ka ka' , the second slider coreespond to "yai", and the third one correspond to "te". make sure your notes always follow your song
  
  * 00:18:074 (4,5) - i suggest you to change the slider to 3 1/4 notes and remove (5)
  
  * 00:19:449 (2) - remove this
  
  * 00:24:949 also missed somthing there
  
  * 00:43:699 (1,5) - swap nc
  
  * 00:52:574 misseed some vocal there
  
  * 00:58:574 (2) - you can remove this note
  
  * 01:20:199 (6,7) - this jump is kind ridiculus. it may mis lead people hit 01:20:574 (1) - earlier
  
  well I just found this there's a lot work need to be done if you want this ranked x_x. those jump are too randomly and the whole mapset seems not really clean. Maybe you need to learn more tricks from those ranked maps :3

[hard]

• 
  In my mind symmetric in hard is really not a good choice when it isn;t the last diff. I suggest you to kepp "distace snap" open when you placing notes and sliders.
  And one thing is that blanket is not really necessary. Some times it may break the flow. For example, 00:07:824 (3,4,5) - . you dont have to force it to blanket pattern but you can do like this
  
  Picture

  
  
  Also if it is a hard od should not be 7. It should be reduce 1 or 2
  
  * 00:50:324 (3,4) - rythmn problem. It should be like this
  
  Picture

  
  
  * 01:44:824 (4) - change to
  
  Picture

  
  
  * 02:21:574 (2,3) - maybe you forget blanket

well in honest I think you need more practice ._. You map doesn't have have enough quality to be ranked (sorry I am not going to be too mean

Anyway good luck to you and the song is nice ww