1. Hard (4,36 stars, 142 notes)
2. Normal (1,62 stars, 72 notes)

pimpG wrote:

finalmente minha musica favorita do fmp com um mapping style mais recente Miniiiinu quanto tempo e sim, é minha música favorita de fmp tbm rsrs

geral

offset -14 Ok
source > "Full Metal Panic! The Second Raid" Consertado!
desabilite countdown e letterbox during breaks. a musica nao tem tempo suficiente pro countdown aparecer e tambem nao tem breaks Uguuh "--" esquecí totalmente de desabilitar isso
widescreen support nao é necessário e esta ativado apenas na normal Ok
algumas sugestões de tags: fmp tsr kaname chidori sagara sousuke mecha tessa teletha testarossa Ok

normal

od e hp +1 ... essa dificuldade é basicamente uma easy. com as settings atuais + 80 bpm e ritmo 1/2 fica muito fácil tirar SS na 1a tentativa Ok, mas essa diff foi projetada pra ser uma easy mas ao mesmo tempo um normal...tlvz n tenha dado mto certo.

00:00:406 (1) - finish combina perfeitamente aki (você adicionou na hard) lol como é q eu pude esqueçer ><
00:24:406 (1) - ^ (finish do drum sampleset) add
00:27:406 (3) - ^ added

00:27:406 (3) - new combo e remove o da próxima nota ? (imagino que esta tentando dar mais destaque aos instrumentos nessa parte, pra isso o melhor seria adicionar new combo nos dois sliders e isso seria ainda mais estranho e inconsistente a sua lógica de new combo)
e tambem, voce esta usando essa lógica na hard ok

01:09:406 (1,1) - dois spinners longos juntos com ritmos e sentimentos ( nao achei palavra melhor pra descrever o: ) diferentes.
eu acho que voce deveria usar apenas um spinner aqui e mapear o outro. ate porque não muitas notas depois já tem o "spinner do final do map" e ter 3 spiners assim faz o final perder o efeito "WOW *-*" Ok

01:19:531 - remove whistle? eu acho que assim ficaria autentico Ok
01:20:656 - add um whistle junto com o clap e remover whistle na próxima nota? (a ultima nota deveria ser um som baixo de acordo com a musica) Ok

Aitai

od+1

sua lógica de new combo não funciona bem nessa musica na minha opinião. eu preferia q vc tentasse algo similar ao que fez na normal Vou revisar os combos e mudar para algo melhor ^^

00:00:373 (1) - unsnapped Ok
00:24:406 (1) - add finish do drum sampleset Ok
00:27:406 (3) - ^ Ok
00:35:093 - eu mudaria essa inherit pra soft custom 1, o barulho de estalo de dedos não soa muito realista quando usado tantas vezes assim nessa velocidade Entendo...devo ter conseguido concertar
00:35:281 (2,3,4,5,1) - o slider esta mirando pra parte inferior esquerda mas os circles querem ir pra direita o:
o flow estava parecendo bem natural ate essa parte Sim, acho q o flow aquí ficou mto bom ><

00:36:218 - remove whistle? era pra ser um som baixo aki, de acordo com a musica Ok
01:20:656 - add um whistle junto com o clap e remover whistle na próxima nota? (a ultima nota deveria ser um som baixo de acordo com a musica) Ok

otimo map, uns 5 mods obrigatórios já seriam o suficiente na minha opinião

starz

Evil_Twilight wrote:

[Aitai]
00:10:892 (2) - drum Ok
00:35:267 (2,3,4,5,1) - Fixed

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00:55:142 (2,3,4) - Fixed

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01:17:829 (4) - remove it or move to 01:18:204 (5) - ? Fixed

[Normal]
00:44:642 (2,1,2,3) - try this Good, but i think my pattern here fits better with the diff spread and song.

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01:12:392 (1) - I think my slider here is better

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i like this song and map Thanks <3

RatedNC17 wrote:

Hello~ (M4M)

[Normal]2
00:00:392 (1) - whistle at slider end Kay
00:28:892 (2) - remove whistle and add drum hitsound No, because instrumental here makes more a soft sound here, drum hitsound here really doesn't fit with the map.
00:30:017 (3) - remove whistle Kay
01:05:267 (2) - remove the middle point of the slider Flow, a straight slider here doesn't goes well with the flow granted here, current slider goes very well here too so don't fixed.

[Aitai]
00:01:892 (3) - whistle at slider start. also remove the middle point of the slider Fixed the whistle at slider start, but i don't removed the middle point here because of the same reason at last suggestion in normal diff.
00:04:892 (1) - remove NC I think will keep this for now, because of drum sound...
00:11:079 (1) - ^ ^
00:16:892 (1) - ^ ^
00:22:892 (1) - ^ ^ but now is because of a new sound here.
00:22:892 (1) - move slider whistle to slider end and I think a whistle fit better with the instrumental sound here
00:23:267 (2) - remove whistle at start ^
00:36:392 (1) - remove NC Because this part makes a sound that sounds like a "end" sound, i decided to put a nc here, but if more persons point this i will change
01:03:392 (1) - whistle at slider start there's a finish sound here in instrumental...

Nice map. placement and flow seem nice Thanks for the mod!

-APXH wrote:

M4M

[General]
Could you change the Audio Lead In to 2.5-3 seconds? If it doesn't show up in the setting in Osu editor, you can change this by opening the files with notepad.

01:15:392 to 01:15:767 - What's with the random Kiai?

[Aitai]
00:23:267 (2) - Move this closer to the previous end, most of the combos have this spacing Ok
00:41:079 (3,4) - Could you move these two somewhere else besides where that are right now? I think they will look better stacked...
00:48:204 (6,1) - Do either of the two following if you feel like it could be changed: Move these two combos farther so that it's not confusing, or space all them out with the same distance This patterns plays fine, i think isn't confusing...

00:50:079 (4,5) - ^ ^
01:01:517 (5,1,2) - Try lining them up in a straight lined arrangement if you would like I think flow will mess up here if make a straight line here.
01:09:392 (1) - Move the point before the red point so that the curve looks are circular Ok, fixed i think...

[Normal]
00:00:392 (1) - Instead of having whistle on the hold slider, actually click the endings of the sliders and then have whistle on them. I have a skin that has a very audiable "soft-slidewhistle", so I can usually tell when someone is being lazy or not with their soft-slidewhistle's. Fix

01:12:392 (1) - Try making the curve look are circular I think this slider looks better...
01:15:392 (1) - There's no hitfinish, like Aitai Fixed
Yeah I can't mod non-insane difficulties, but I always try my best. ^^

Personally, I would have never created a map in devotion to someone dear in my life. Hope this will get ranked in the foreseeable future. Thanks!

ritsu-tanaika wrote:

m4m

NORMAL

00:32:642 (3) - Try to stack this underneath the slider tail of 00:30:392 (1) - to make the pattern look nicer Ok

00:45:392 (1) - See if adding finish at 00:45:392 (slider head) works well No, there's a soft sound here so whistle is better.

01:06:392 (1) - Make this in the same position as 01:04:142 (1) - Ok

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01:07:517 (1) - The pattern would flow better if this note was at (328,64) Made another thing..

AITAI

00:16:517 (2) - I think the stream would look better if this was placed at (48,200) to make the stream straight I like this way, flow looks better for me.

00:19:892 (3) - Stack this on top of the head of 00:18:392 (1) - Ok

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00:35:267 (2) - Ctrl + H but keep this slider in the same position, and it'll look good This way makes flow looks better.

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Thats all, this is a very good beatmap so I didnt spot a lot of things that could be improved, good job. Good luck and I hope I helped Thanks~

aonkub555 wrote:

Hello~ m4m plz

general
audio preview time conflict with other diff , you must fix it

normal

00:26:642 - add whistle Ok
00:32:642 (3) -^ Ok
not find problem more~


Aitai

00:24:392(1) add whistle at tail slider Nah, doesn't sounds good...
00:41:642 (4) add whistle at tail Sounds better without
00:44:267 (5) -^
00:45:392 (1) maybe try to move a bit to x 312 y 224 for perfecr stack with 00:44:267 (5) tail slider I think this already better stacked..
00:50:267 (5) add whistle at tail slider same reason as 44:267
00:51:392 (1) -^ ^
00:53:267 (4) -^ ^
01:00:017 (1) remove whistle , i think it not consistant previous Ok

good placement~
hope it useful for you Thanks~